Blackbooks

[NICCSACC]

yeah cash/ aome other stuff on top i like ho the all red looks over the all blk

[levans]

i didnt relize how good the red looked....fire niick you got me in the mood to sketch...
som 1 gimme a word
ohh i did my first throwys over the past few days...i feel good ahah

[NICCSACC]

do the word PUNTANE

[STAR01]

i got a question.. im working on this piece nd i want it to say RATS or STAR
(it says rats in reflection, as in my sig, so people can dicide what they read wether they think were rats or a star, lots of rats just one star, hope i made that clear?!
i allready got my R, A nd S down pretty good(for a toy) but i have not the slightest idea what to do with the T i tried all kinds of shit but it just doesn't work...this is what i got so far, any help would be much appreciated

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1694/69ft7.png

[Skesh]

Yo maybe sumthn like this

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3496/ratstii2.jpg
MS paint..

[aeon]

sick as ever sky
renk lose the bumps
that abyss is sweet niccsacc
rats - quite nice, v clean. i would say move the star to the left a bit...
n keep real simple with the t

n some from moi...
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/7453/aner01sy9.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2182/aner02oo3.jpg

[F.R.A.T.]

Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Apr 8 2007, 10:52 PM
nothin to say above
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture12.jpg
not one of my favorites i shouldnt have done the black 3d and i need to use dif fills
Nicc love that shit, star umm its ok
any more critz i only got one

[Apple pie]

thyat mek looks a little like the nemz sketch i did like 20-40 page back..
i think it goos tho i like the ''m''

[STAR01]

Originally posted by Skesh@Apr 9 2007, 02:50 PM
Yo maybe sumthn like this

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3496/ratstii2.jpg
MS paint..
yeah i tried that before..but i wasn't statisfied i might try a t instead of T... :rolleyes:

[STAR01]

Originally posted by aeon@Apr 9 2007, 04:58 PM
sick as ever sky
renk lose the bumps
that abyss is sweet niccsacc
rats - quite nice, v clean. i would say move the star to the left a bit...
n keep real simple with the t

n some from moi...
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/7453/aner01sy9.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2182/aner02oo3.jpg
thx! i do that tonight i guess i'll do the T like skesh said, thx both

[alive]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 9 2007, 01:09 AM
my girl and i collabed on this one... im top she bottom. sry bout the quality...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture44-3.jpg

some other shit...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture42-1.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture41-1.jpg
we still on for the cavity 1v1? whens it due again?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

fucking around..
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture022.jpg

[Captain]

Originally posted by F.R.A.T.+Apr 9 2007, 10:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (F.R.A.T. @ Apr 9 2007, 10:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-F.R.A.T.@Apr 8 2007, 10:52 PM
nothin to say above

not one of my favorites i shouldnt have done the black 3d and i need to use dif fills
Nicc love that shit, star umm its ok
any more critz i only got one

[/b][/quote]
go back a couple pages i gave you one that&#39;s at the bottom of a page.

sezer- i&#39;m not sure, but it just doesn&#39;t seem to flow right to me

niccsacc- i can&#39;t really make out the top one, but the bottom two are nice.

[Murder817Worth]

Sezer-Looks great except i think it has 1 too many arrows.

Here is mine. I just went extremely simple to expirament on my letters what ya&#39;ll think(i used my camera phone so its a sucky pic sry)
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze4.jpg

[sketch3]

well ur doing wat ur suposed to, simples made from bars, keep doing wat ur doin and soon ull be getting good

[Captain]

murderworth- looks like you&#39;re sketching. don&#39;t do that. instead make one clean line. when it&#39;s made out of many lines it&#39;s difficult to keep lines parallel and curves constant.

[Apple pie]

sezer that looks sickk

heres a new steez from mee, took alot of emit inspiration
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8568/piessg5.png (http://imageshack.us)

[NICCSACC]

wow man youre shits dope.

[alive]

Originally posted by alive+Apr 9 2007, 10:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Apr 9 2007, 10:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Apr 9 2007, 01:09 AM
my girl and i collabed on this one... im top she bottom. sry bout the quality...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture44-3.jpg

some other shit...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture42-1.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture41-1.jpg
we still on for the cavity 1v1? whens it due again? [/b][/quote]
bump

[Apple pie]

i like the collab. the abyss one im not a fan of, i dont really like the repeat letters (the two ss) I like your S&#39;s tho

[moltov]

Samish style
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00606.jpg

[dizzle_d]

everything on this page is fresh as hell

just a quick simple I did for pegasus. Not really likein the E or M. crits and advice would be appreciated.
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7545/img1503fq1.jpg

[Apple pie]

mehh thats decent.. id like it if the lines were smoother

[dizzle_d]

I see what your sayin, I don&#39;t really like the 3d either, probably should&#39;ve just did some shading. I gotta keep workin on them simplesss

[hungr]

wose looks better.. u can see more of the O. kinda reminds me of some of waster12&#39;s sketches

random sketch i did this morning.. kinda fucked it up :(
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00151.jpg

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by Apple pie@Apr 9 2007, 11:22 AM
sezer that looks sickk

heres a new steez from mee, took alot of emit inspiration
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8568/piessg5.png (http://imageshack.us)
PYE the 3d on the E is off see where the tail is on the E, the 3d should come to a point like the end of the E

[aeon]

Originally posted by aeon@Apr 9 2007, 09:58 AM
sick as ever sky
renk lose the bumps
that abyss is sweet niccsacc
rats - quite nice, v clean. i would say move the star to the left a bit...
n keep real simple with the t

n some from moi...
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/7453/aner01sy9.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2182/aner02oo3.jpg
bump fer crits...

that wose is nice, i would chill on the bumps a little though, no maybe lose the extension on the top of the s. good letter shapes tho
dizzle - yr 3d looks off because youve flattened it off. it should follow the outline of the letters. n made it less deep too...

[moltov]

word thanks hungr

but does anyone wanna post a link of some of wasters sketches so I can see what ppl are talking about?

W/E thanks

I think Ima try and keep the same sorta basic layout of my pieces but mess around with little things and extentions. what do you guys think?

[aeon]

it has a similar feel to wastrs style but doesn&#39;t look that much like his work...

[NICCSACC]

considering this for the cash battle. its like the 6th one ive done. any thoughts? (i know i know, i need to get a digital cam...fuck.)
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/cashbattle666.jpg

AEON --- that top one is crazy i want to learn that style.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by AnteUp+Apr 9 2007, 12:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AnteUp &#064; Apr 9 2007, 12:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Apple pie@Apr 9 2007, 11:22 AM
sezer that looks sickk

heres a new steez from mee, took alot of emit inspiration
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8568/piessg5.png (http://imageshack.us)
PYE the 3d on the E is off see where the tail is on the E, the 3d should come to a point like the end of the E [/b][/quote]
if anythings off on the 3d its the other side of the S. other than that its kinda immaculate and innovative(not really innovative...but for this board it is.) as for how and where letters should go and be placed compared to whats always said around here on that particular aspect i think you blazed a trail that cuts deep into overused african safari vacation adventure trails. hotshit do my name again ill do more for you. ehen ya get time.

edit: if you can do NICCSACC like in that style in strate deep black n white id put it on a shirt. im going into the printshop next week to make shirts...i screenprint a bit. my guys doin it for me tho. really good pro style ya dig?im going to start making shirt designsd andf selling em. wanna support a fellow BS brutha?? ill be able to cut deep deals to my friends here. hot shit for sure. or not.... thats your opinion. holler at your caucasion god of sodomy and blasphomic audio assault.

[rayseone]

nicsacc- i like it but the left bar of the H seems just a lil bit hidden

apple pie- looks dope

2 outlines not too happy with them, crits?
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3582/seyzg8.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4857/seyarrrrrrrvg0.jpg

[REMOoneSF]

hey i&#39;m new to these forums. just a few drawings, they kinda suck so yeah.

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/6710/img0001hl8.jpg
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7902/img0002oi5.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2218/remo1rx7.jpg

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by REMOoneSF@Apr 9 2007, 01:49 PM
hey i&#39;m new to these forums. just a few drawings, they kinda suck so yeah.

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/6710/img0001hl8.jpg
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7902/img0002oi5.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2218/remo1rx7.jpg
id&#39;a put those in the character thread. pretty nice stuff hto.

[dizzle_d]

Remo those characs are so ill&#33;

[SUM]

Yo what up i&#39;m new here. I&#39;m pretty new to graff too so i&#39;m still a toy. quick sketch. i tag SUM

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2048/sumae6.jpg

[Sumoe]

Just don&#39;t add an "E", okay?

[REMOoneSF]

make sure the letters flow a little better and they&#39;re all proportioned

[moltov]

NISSACC that csh is pretty nice I like how it flows.
but as somoneelse said the H is sort of hidden but other than that it looks nice.

REMO those characs look Tight&#33; wrong thread tho ahah

[sketch3]

remo alll good but u need to work on ya throw

[SUM]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 9 2007, 02:11 PM
Just don&#39;t add an "E", okay?
didnt plan on it. what do you think i could improve on?

[REMOoneSF]

thats not really a throw kinda more like a straight but heres one of my throws and a character

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1350/img0004ss3.jpg

messy but it was jsut a quick sketch

[-ShAmEE-]

R. is kool. m ok. dunno what the other letters are.

[Stim]

Originally posted by SUM+Apr 9 2007, 02:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SUM @ Apr 9 2007, 02:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 9 2007, 02:11 PM
Just don&#39;t add an "E", okay?
didnt plan on it. what do you think i could improve on? [/b][/quote]
Your overall letter structure doesn&#39;t really make sense, and what does of it looks bitten. But thats okay, you&#39;re new. Go over to the NEW 2 GRAFF thread and build your chops for awhile. Trust me, it helps.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SUM+Apr 9 2007, 02:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SUM @ Apr 9 2007, 02:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 9 2007, 02:11 PM
Just don&#39;t add an "E", okay?
didnt plan on it. what do you think i could improve on? [/b][/quote]
mabye write SMUE?

[KAL]

sum- i would say u should experiment with shadows and 3d and definatley go to the new to graffiti thread in this section so u get a basic idea and feel for forming ur letters. keep practicing and ull improve

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/763/sketch002fr1.jpg

[REMOoneSF]

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 9 2007, 02:49 PM
R. is kool. m ok. dunno what the other letters are.
uhh it says remo i thought it looks pretty clear i&#39;ll do a cleaner one later but the o is a lil character

[alive]

its very clear, dont worry, hes just illiterate. i kind of like it.

kal go simple.

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 02:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Apr 9 2007, 02:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 02:44 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 9 2007, 02:11 PM
Just don&#39;t add an "E", okay?
didnt plan on it. what do you think i could improve on?
mabye write SMUE? [/b][/quote]
me&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?

[Stim]

lol i don&#39;t think thats what he meant sume

[SUM]

alright. Well i threw up my tag again and colored it.... i realized how shitty it was so i wrote isuck under it. didnt come out too bad imo. I know it has to be cleaned up a bit too.



http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9134/sumisuckni5.jpg

[Sumoe]

ugly as hell...stick to simples for now my man.

[Stim]

um

[SUM]

alright then. what makes it so ugly?

[dim]

the arrows coming out of no where
just learn letter structure first do letters like on your keyboard
and befor you post crit others or you wont get crits im just criting this because you are in a large need of help

[Sumoe]

still bad,

these crits apply to the one you just posted also.


Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 03:33 PM
alright then. what makes it so ugly?
a lot of things

shitty structure

badly placed arrows

lack of flow

pointless extensions

etc.

etc.

;)

just tryna help.

[SUM]

Originally posted by dim@Apr 9 2007, 03:37 PM
the arrows coming out of no where
just learn letter structure first do letters like on your keyboard
and befor you post crit others or you wont get crits im just criting this because you are in a large need of help
how can i crit others if i cant crit myself properly?

[dim]

ok ill give you an example
sume posts somthing and i say what i like or dont like then i have the right to post because i critted someone befor i put my shit up understand???

[KAL]

Originally posted by alive@Apr 9 2007, 03:05 PM
kal go simple.
iight...this better?
REMO-keep on keepin on, i love the characters
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/1356/shittythro6lu3.jpg

[SUM]

Originally posted by dim@Apr 9 2007, 03:44 PM
ok ill give you an example
sume posts somthing and i say what i like or dont like then i have the right to post because i critted someone befor i put my shit up understand???
i understand that, but i dont think you understand what i&#39;m saying. obviously, i cant tell the difference between something good and something bad. personally i thought that my piece wasn&#39;t THAT bad, especially for just starting. I post here, and everyone just says it&#39;s ugly. Well obviously my judgement is off.. so how can i properly tell sume what is good/bad if i dont even know what is good/bad. understand???

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture52-2.jpg

heres a lil better pics of the shit me and my wife did last night. me top she bottom.
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture50-2.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture51-3.jpg
i dont like the suspect euro death style too much but she tried to rock it at 36 years old from not doing anything graffitiwise for years and years. pretty good if ya ask me. what you think?

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SUM+Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SUM &#064; Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dim@Apr 9 2007, 03:44 PM
ok ill give you an example
sume posts somthing and i say what i like or dont like then i have the right to post because i critted someone befor i put my shit up understand???
i understand that, but i dont think you understand what i&#39;m saying. obviously, i cant tell the difference between something good and something bad. personally i thought that my piece wasn&#39;t THAT bad, especially for just starting. I post here, and everyone just says it&#39;s ugly. Well obviously my judgement is off.. so how can i properly tell sume what is good/bad if i dont even know what is good/bad. understand??? [/b][/quote]
dont comment on a real writers shit then. simple.
real writers will comment on yours.

edit: better yet, you can comment on how you like how sume does his S&#39;s or whatnot. tell sky you dig his steez and want tips on how he does that shuit. big el theyres a few im sure would be happy to drop a jewel here and therer. personally, i dont mind. even tho alot of you dont really deserve criutz based n the fact that you whore for attention. its pathetic. just keep doing what you doin and cream always rises to the top.

[Sumoe]

nice shit nicc...

your wifey writes to eh? that&#39;s cool...she&#39;s not half bad either.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SUM+Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SUM @ Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dim@Apr 9 2007, 03:44 PM
ok ill give you an example
sume posts somthing and i say what i like or dont like then i have the right to post because i critted someone befor i put my shit up understand???
i understand that, but i dont think you understand what i&#39;m saying. obviously, i cant tell the difference between something good and something bad. personally i thought that my piece wasn&#39;t THAT bad, especially for just starting. I post here, and everyone just says it&#39;s ugly. Well obviously my judgement is off.. so how can i properly tell sume what is good/bad if i dont even know what is good/bad. understand??? [/b][/quote]
just another thing. it seems like youd make better mods than artists scince youre more worried about whos commenting on your shit and giving and getting critz fuck... critz are a way to gain acceptance by your messageboard friends........ strictly for attention (for most of you actual toys that started within the year, month, day, hour haha..) put in work youll nerver run before you walk but alot fo you need to learn how to crawl. seriously not trying to start beef or whatever the cool net gangsters say over the internets safety today. haha thats funny too.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 9 2007, 03:54 PM
nice shit nicc...

your wifey writes to eh? that&#39;s cool...she&#39;s not half bad either.
yeah... she saw that gezus vs. whoever that was thing or whatever and said she could rock that ^^^ style or whatever (i said hahahaha who COULDNT but thats neither here nor there...) if she wanted to. she usualy does my style shit. old TC5 influenced stuff guys like you rek and bits would appreciate. hence, alot less posting of actual graffiti art blurprints (that eventually go on trains). nobody cares really unless you swab cocks with a higher-up. just my thoughts. couldnt really care less tho. i just wanna work with cats that wanna create new styles etc. lets break the fuckin mold somewhat. fuck. you my guy hto keep that REAL TRADITIONAL GRAFFITI ALIVE> lets kill that emo bullshit.

[RemoZ]

REMO, Not another. Whatever we all know Im cooler&#33; :)

[SUM]

ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg

[Bazer]

its preeeety bad.. try to keep your letters the same thickness. it a really bad habbit alot of people have. dont do arrows. theyre old. and dont do the thing with all the black like that........

[moltov]

NICCSACC: I like it but the bottom Pics fill looks to crowded and clustered but other than that it is nice

[KAL]

sum-^to be honest....yes ,but like everyones tellin me keep it simple do straight letters for now ive been working on that for a little while but just havent posted any of them.

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1584/throwyw7.jpg
quick throw i just sketched up

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:09 PM
ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg
its preeety bad...how YOU dod it.

i can show you how to do it exCTLY THE SAME with ARROWS AND ITLL LOOKS GREAT. IF I HAVE THE TIME ILL HOOK YA UP WITH AN EXAMPLE BY ME. BYE.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by moltov@Apr 9 2007, 04:16 PM
NICCSACC: I like it but the bottom Pics fill looks to crowded and clustered but other than that it is nice
HATE TO BLAME THE WEBCAM BUT THATS WHAT THE PROBLEM IS. THE FILLS ON MY BROADS STUFF IS ACTUALLY INSIGHTFUL WITH MESSAGES AND STUFF. SRRY THO.

[dizzle_d]

Sum- Try and make the letters the same width untill you get your simples down and don&#39;t make your letters all ridged, make them smooth, and make them Bars. Like this - FLOW... don&#39;t worry about shadow either, just try and get your simples down. don&#39;t get me wrong though, I&#39;m not much better.

ok so I toned it down a bit and made the I more visible. It says Psilo. any suggestions on what I should do with any of the letters would be appreciated, like I need lots of help on the S, its screwin me over . if I still need to tone it down more let me know. I&#39;ve been workin with bars and shit but I can&#39;t seem to let go of this style.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7087/img1500jy5.jpg

and then there is this which was just a simple that I threw some extensions on. ignore the shadow, its really off.
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/6797/img1501mj7.jpg
critttssss

[alive]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 04:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Apr 9 2007, 04:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-moltov@Apr 9 2007, 04:16 PM
NICCSACC: I like it but the bottom Pics fill looks to crowded and clustered but other than that it is nice
HATE TO BLAME THE WEBCAM BUT THATS WHAT THE PROBLEM IS. THE FILLS ON MY BROADS STUFF IS ACTUALLY INSIGHTFUL WITH MESSAGES AND STUFF. SRRY THO. [/b][/quote]
WUTS UP WITH THE CAPS LATELY?

[SUM]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:09 PM
ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg
its preeety bad...how YOU dod it.

i can show you how to do it exCTLY THE SAME with ARROWS AND ITLL LOOKS GREAT. IF I HAVE THE TIME ILL HOOK YA UP WITH AN EXAMPLE BY ME. BYE. [/b][/quote]
yo that would be awesome. i think i might just need someone to guide me through some things, show me the ropes.

[theprokilla]

philo- the extentions on the il make it look like an H and the stuff on the P is realy off

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0055.jpg

[KAL]

psilo-i think ur s is straight but ur I kind of looks like a 1....i like the first one alot better tho.

MEZ- nice straight letter

[BIGel]

Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM
i understand that, but i dont think you understand what i&#39;m saying. obviously, i cant tell the difference between something good and something bad. personally i thought that my piece wasn&#39;t THAT bad, especially for just starting. I post here, and everyone just says it&#39;s ugly. Well obviously my judgement is off.. so how can i properly tell sume what is good/bad if i dont even know what is good/bad. understand???
something about this thread and this forum bothers me.

im starting to really hate the mathematical approach everybody has on these forums as far as critz go. fact is, some of you shouldnt be critting because like sum said, you dont know whats good whats bad or whats what. if you see something thats bangin then you call it out and show some love, if you see something you hate then point that out too, but enough of the same ol talk..its sposed to be constructive criticism to help you get better, not an e-fame game to help your ego. thats one thing i hate about bombing science is that it takes away the hands-on part of graffiti. everybody just comes on here and gets instant answers, well the fact is that some lessons need to be learned for yourself, sometimes you just need to suck it up and find out for yourself. use the internet to help spread your shit around and make contacts, but not as your whole basis for writing.

on a diff note nicc i can tell your better half was influenced by some of the same headz as inkbits. slick stuff though.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SUM+Apr 9 2007, 04:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SUM @ Apr 9 2007, 04:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:09 PM
ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg
its preeety bad...how YOU dod it.

i can show you how to do it exCTLY THE SAME with ARROWS AND ITLL LOOKS GREAT. IF I HAVE THE TIME ILL HOOK YA UP WITH AN EXAMPLE BY ME. BYE.
yo that would be awesome. i think i might just need someone to guide me through some things, show me the ropes. [/b][/quote]
flow?
if so... i gotchu. stay online for a while ill post it for ya.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by BIGel+Apr 9 2007, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BIGel @ Apr 9 2007, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SUM@Apr 9 2007, 03:47 PM
i understand that, but i dont think you understand what i&#39;m saying. obviously, i cant tell the difference between something good and something bad. personally i thought that my piece wasn&#39;t THAT bad, especially for just starting. I post here, and everyone just says it&#39;s ugly. Well obviously my judgement is off.. so how can i properly tell sume what is good/bad if i dont even know what is good/bad. understand???
something about this thread and this forum bothers me.

im starting to really the mathematical approach everybody has on these forums as far as critz go. fact is, some of you shouldnt be critting because like sum said, you dont know whats good whats bad or whats what. if you see something thats bangin then you call it out and show some love, if you see something you hate then point that out too, but enough of the same ol talk..its sposed to be constructive criticism to help you get better, not an e-fame game to help your ego. thats one thing i hate about bombing science is that it takes away the hands-on part of graffiti. everybody just comes on here and gets instant answers, well the fact is that some lessons need to be learned for yourself, sometimes you just need to suck it up and find out for yourself. use the internet to help spread your shit around and make contacts, but not as your whole basis for writing.

on a diff note nicc i can def tell your better half was influenced by some of the same headz as inkbits. slick stuff though. [/b][/quote]
better half hahahahahahahaha i like youbraaa.

[alive]

Originally posted by theprokilla@Apr 9 2007, 04:25 PM
philo- the extentions on the il make it look like an H and the stuff on the P is realy off

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0055.jpg
ur missing shadow on the left of the Z.

[Bazer]

yeah and a little bit on the top of the m

[whoarethereal evil]

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6639/dsc00073it9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ne ideas?

[dizzle_d]

nicce^

[theprokilla]

how is the shadow messed up? its the same as these i did in paint

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/3d.jpg

[SUM]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 04:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Apr 9 2007, 04:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:24 PM

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:09 PM
ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg
its preeety bad...how YOU dod it.

i can show you how to do it exCTLY THE SAME with ARROWS AND ITLL LOOKS GREAT. IF I HAVE THE TIME ILL HOOK YA UP WITH AN EXAMPLE BY ME. BYE.
yo that would be awesome. i think i might just need someone to guide me through some things, show me the ropes.
flow?
if so... i gotchu. stay online for a while ill post it for ya. [/b][/quote]
ight for sure.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 04:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC &#064; Apr 9 2007, 04:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:24 PM

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-SUM@Apr 9 2007, 04:09 PM
ok so how bad is this one...


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9976/flowej9.jpg
its preeety bad...how YOU dod it.

i can show you how to do it exCTLY THE SAME with ARROWS AND ITLL LOOKS GREAT. IF I HAVE THE TIME ILL HOOK YA UP WITH AN EXAMPLE BY ME. BYE.
yo that would be awesome. i think i might just need someone to guide me through some things, show me the ropes.
flow?
if so... i gotchu. stay online for a while ill post it for ya. [/b][/quote]
letetrskindasqueezedbutifyouworkonthatyoucanfixith owyawantto.thatsthewholepointright?hollahopethishe lpsabit.
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/flow.jpg

[ELITE]

Heres two lil things i did recently. Ye i can see that there pretty bad lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/cornsrule/738L0026.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/cornsrule/DSC04412.jpg

crits etc

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Apple pie@Apr 9 2007, 11:22 AM
sezer that looks sickk

heres a new steez from mee, took alot of emit inspiration
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8568/piessg5.png (http://imageshack.us)
Bump...The last pie, I wasnt really feelin the P and it threw me off on the whole thing...but this beauty..Lovin it man, keep it up.

Elite- straught blocks for now man, they really will help you deveop structure...

prokilla- remember your dropping it down and to the left...so the top left of the M and the middle bar of the Z.

[ELITE]

Meh.. im jus gna focus on taggin for the time being.

Ill keep trying these on paper tho

[DynamiteBoy]

Originally posted by REMOoneSF@Apr 9 2007, 01:49 PM
hey i&#39;m new to these forums. just a few drawings, they kinda suck so yeah.

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/6710/img0001hl8.jpg
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7902/img0002oi5.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2218/remo1rx7.jpg
diggin the characters but the piece not too much.

[REMOoneSF]

thanks and the pieces i do suck i know but i&#39;ll post some new ones up soon

[rayseone]

Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 9 2007, 01:38 PM
nicsacc- i like it but the left bar of the H seems just a lil bit hidden

apple pie- looks dope

2 outlines not too happy with them, crits?
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3582/seyzg8.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4857/seyarrrrrrrvg0.jpg
buuump didnt get one crit,

elite- the first one is better than the second, losse all the lil lumps and bumps that are everywhere though and try to make ur letters the same height, it gets smaller as it goes. also sketch in bars because it will help your overall structure

niccsacc - dope as usual, i really dig the style u got man keep it up

[dizzle_d]

yo rays I like that a lot, especially the second one

[REMOoneSF]

letters are ok now you can start to build upon that and add 3d and get rid of those extensions on the end. thats just my 10 cents

[KAL]

bumpin for crits
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4215/throwgm8.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7306/shittythro6ox3.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

man. top 2 people. SUM mainly. plz plz go simples. i mean like the ones on ur keyboard. even if it dont look amazing. just do simples. IT WILL HELP SO MUCH&#33;

[REMOoneSF]

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6151/img0005po6.jpg

al;right i outlined my throwie two letter, 4 letter, and full word and a simple piece i know i messed up the 3D but thats life

[NICCSACC]

just go mega wildstyle for once. show us what ya got.

[REMOoneSF]

alright i&#39;ll show you one of my attempts at a wild style when i get my black book back from my friend

[dizzle_d]

Remo your throws are hot

[NICCSACC]

my uncles the old man from remo williams.... guess that line from what artist uill hand you a TGIF coupon for free meal.

[sank one]

heres something i did in school, i cant come up with anything that i like :angry:

fucken writers block and i know the right leg of the n is too big...

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0568.jpg

[REMOoneSF]

lose the extensions and straighten out the legs and you&#39;re fine

[dizzle_d]

looks good but I think if you made the bottom right corner of the S go down a little more it would look even better, if that makes any sense

[Hazex]

sank i really like your sketch you n is not that bad


i didint really ahve time to draw these last days i did this a quik drawing
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5229/sanstitreia3.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits? i know the m left leg is too little..

[HuntingLOLs]

sank, i like your s but your n is really off compared to the rest (not to keen on the a bending like that either)
dum, clean your lines way more, get sharpies or w/e and draw em up. and as you probably can see the bars on the d just dont fit. how can the hole start there if the bar goes throw way earlier..? :) the problem with m&#39;s is they&#39;re hard to do on bars alone, will come the more you learn to define your own letters

something i did instead of homework or sleep

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00437.jpg

fuck i hate being 4 biology papers behind and 3 books in danish, the more school work i get behind, the less i do - more sketching tho :P

fucked up shading on the extention on the b (and probably more than that), dimmer is wack and forgot aura around the extention on the c

[dim]

i like that handstyle

[uhhh]

nice ass handie man.
but the piece needs some work.
do simpler, less bubly shtuff.

[REMOoneSF]

some stickers in my blackbook so i guess it counts as a blackbook?

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5743/img0006qh6.jpg

[Bazer]

try a little more like that and loose the extensions.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/32131.jpg

[dim]

remo i rele like that character

[KAL]

Originally posted by KAL@Apr 9 2007, 07:17 PM
bumpin for crits
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4215/throwgm8.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7306/shittythro6ox3.jpg
crits?

[rayseone]

kal man youve got to give crits to get crits, dont just expect to get them, thats maybe why people dont crit you

[Robbie P]

Nice characters Remo.

KAL try to make your A share the same style as the other letters.

Mine is pretty shit, exchanged with a local.

http://c.photos.cx/digero-7b6.JPG

[dim]

robbie p the only thing i would change on that peice is some of the sharp angles on the letters like square them off more http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6605/img0101ff7.jpg
i think im going to change the outline make it a darker so it is easier to see the letters crits please

[rayseone]

dim i like that but the E is waay tooo big, maybe even if you just completely filled in the letters you would be able to make them out way better

[SUM]

Originally posted by KAL+Apr 9 2007, 09:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KAL &#064; Apr 9 2007, 09:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KAL@Apr 9 2007, 07:17 PM
bumpin for crits
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4215/throwgm8.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7306/shittythro6ox3.jpg
crits? [/b][/quote]
i think you are missing a shadow on the L. not positive though. on the top one. check that out.

[KAL]

Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 9 2007, 09:40 PM
kal man youve got to give crits to get crits, dont just expect to get them, thats maybe why people dont crit you
i do give crits, i just didnt on that post.

dim- i like it, but i think the N should be a little thinner... just a little

[KAL]

sum- do u mean on the backside of the L? cus if so ur right i just realized that on a second look.

[Murder817Worth]

phame- Pretty good keep it up&#33;

Here is mine comment plz. Still going simple hope it is good&#33;
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/untitled.jpg

[KAL]

keep doing what ur doing just erase the lines inside the letters, and practice shadows and 3d.

[glassarm]

murder - I&#39;d beef that "u" up a little, make it just as strong as the rest of the letters. Other than that, looks pretty good. Might also want to check the position of the middle "prong" of the "E". It seems a tad low to me, but idk what you were going for. Keep it up&#33;

[Mints]

Robbie - looking sweet, not liking the bit on the up top left corner of the &#39;P&#39; and use a ruler on them 3d lines and it will look super dope.
Murder - keep at it, not liking the &#39;U&#39; looks to wimpy and kinda undercase where all ur others are caps and just looks outta place
------
yeah so here bash away, isnt great drew it up while i was taking a shit


http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t279/carnophaze/minty.jpg

[-Sinn-]

Mints - That looks like a retard with epilepsy pissed and shit on a piece of paper (nah Just Kidding Homie pretty good ur gettin there)

G.W.U 4LIFE NIUKKA

[dibz]

Originally posted by dim@Apr 9 2007, 09:52 PM
robbie p the only thing i would change on that peice is some of the sharp angles on the letters like square them off more http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6605/img0101ff7.jpg
i think im going to change the outline make it a darker so it is easier to see the letters crits please
could u please tell me where you got those templates, i have a feeling that question gets asked alot but fact remains i still have no idea

["KASPER"]

http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/4968/kmkrew004ki3.jpg
KM KREW
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5821/kasper008zh5.jpg
How ya&#39;ll like this sketches?

[BIGel]

that top one needs work but i love the fact that you&#39;re even attempting that daim style. the fill looks good, the structure needs a little more thought to it.

for pills
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/244616661.jpg

[NiL]

Thats looking nice BigEL
I can see some nice style there kasper looking good
Mints keep working on the simples man you&#39;re doing good keep it up.

Can I have some crits on these tags? I don&#39;t like the &#39;N&#39; on the 2nd pic and I got some other pics too post &#39;em up later I&#39;m going for the small to big look now.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/NILZtag2.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/NILZtag.jpg

[AbYSS~>]

It was really hard for me to go simple and not use pencil im totally new to this non sketching just marker thing but here is what i got. Help Please&#33;
Went for like the ballon bubble lettering i saw some isbk guys (phoenix tag crew) write somthin like that near my house so i addapted to it and tryed somthing. i know the charecter is horrible but i drew it in the car and i hit a bump and put a huge line there soi had to turn it into something.
http://aycu29.webshots.com/image/14548/2000964680816382212_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000964680816382212)
http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/13836/2000902341034985064_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000902341034985064)

P.S. the words under neath it say "fools names and fools faces always show up in public faces" ahah heard it from my friend who got caught taggin by our principle and the principle told him that. thought it was ill so yeah.

[TESTER]

abyss not a bad tag, a lot better then your throw start off my using black and white, dont do those dark blue lines in your letters, the top of your b and your u are pushed to far to the left, try finding pre formed letters and just do the outlines and then over lap them,



ps never do that charac again even though you "had to"

[Stim]

Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 9 2007, 11:45 PM
that top one needs work but i love the fact that you&#39;re even attempting that daim style. the fill looks good, the structure needs a little more thought to it.

for pills
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/244616661.jpg
you&#39;re so awesome man.

[inkbits]

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10562246.jpg

*edit: by SUMOE

shit WTF did I do...

sorry bout that...inkbits, I tried to bump this without all the crits u did but I fucked up...

so my bad for deleting every single fuckin&#39; crit you gave...it must&#39;ve took mad long, my bad :(

I&#39;m new at this mod shit.

[Seti]

thats lush m8, its got a nice overall format and simetrical shape,lotsa developments defenatly gone into ur work....mine sez more, first sketch ive donw for a while, but i got into it.
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/more.jpg
crits welcome..

[krazzie_ammo]

inkbits - i love the way you have kinda cut the letters in half and then done stuff with it..... <3

seti - erm...i think you should go simpler. if you try to do the 3d thing, try shading the letters instead of having block colours. and make the letter a bit more obvious.

heres something i did...
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1527/116if8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ARE YOU READY?

[dizzle_d]

Krazzie I love your style&#33;


Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 9 2007, 04:21 PM
says Psilo.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7087/img1500jy5.jpg

crits ... on what I should do to the letters?

[HuntingLOLs]

Mints: cut off the 3d. to do that you pick a length on your 3d and try as much as possible to keep it while looking at the place where they start compared to the last spot. example
you pick a length of 1 inch. then you take the easiest place first, thats the top of the t. then you cut off the lines 1 inch from the letter and make the symetrical line that the t has (althought shorter, coz of the 3d has a vanishing point that makes the gap between the lines smaller). goes for all letters... this will make it look better

next you try to push the letters together and keep working on simples (getting sick of that advice :P)

[krazzie_ammo]

psilo - i suggest easing up off the wierd bits of the letters. keep &#39;em simple :)

quick photoshop thing..
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6060/untitled1rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:)

[Klone]

Originally posted by Stim+Apr 10 2007, 02:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Stim @ Apr 10 2007, 02:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BIGel@Apr 9 2007, 11:45 PM
that top one needs work but i love the fact that you&#39;re even attempting that daim style. the fill looks good, the structure needs a little more thought to it.

for pills
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/244616661.jpg
you&#39;re so awesome man. [/b][/quote]
haha i like that im diggen that foreal.

[FIN one]

this is as far as i can take this thing without completley erasing the paper away you can give me suggestions but at this point its like "ugh i want to get this part finished" i kinda got the idea for the bottom of the Y from Sumes thing a few pages back.i dont think its a bite tho. so yeah, peace

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/7518/maysa3fj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[moltov]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Apr 9 2007, 04:34 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6639/dsc00073it9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ne ideas?


looks pretty dope but take a pic from above next time cause its kinda hard to see
FIN: that is pretty dope I like the extentions

BIG EL::wub: that is soo dope I wanna see one of your throws in paint.

[anie 1]

Originally posted by Klone+Apr 10 2007, 08:00 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Klone @ Apr 10 2007, 08:00 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Stim@Apr 10 2007, 02:12 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-BIGel@Apr 9 2007, 11:45 PM
that top one needs work but i love the fact that you&#39;re even attempting that daim style. the fill looks good, the structure needs a little more thought to it.

for pills
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/244616661.jpg
you&#39;re so awesome man.
haha i like that im diggen that foreal. [/b][/quote]
lovin it maaan :D

[beastie_1989]

something new, i hate my N

http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7274/dsc00353ja9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[dizzle_d]

beastie that is fresh

[whoarethereal evil]

coz inkbits was sick with all that feedback and he asked 4 a throwie close up (its a bit shoddy but im lazy):


http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/york%20graffiti/DSC00077.jpg


i stuck a s on

coz im mint



but yeah feedback on this???

[AimoOne]

Bigel throw style is fresh..like...eggs...fresh out the box eggs...fresh from the chickens anus..but..these eggs..are fresh from the golden rooster with the golden anus...i mean..look at these throws..

Good to see WhoaretherealEVIILLLL in here..i dont think iv ever sen a peice from you matey..like the throw anyway..

Amen..im feelin them letters...very funkay..very clean..i like clean..but..the leters are kinda different sizes...YA MEEEENN

ugh..ima have a simple up soon..with a karak.. <_< ..i bringing that EMO idea back up :lol: ;)

[10 Ton]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Apr 10 2007, 11:01 AM
coz inkbits was sick with all that feedback and he asked 4 a throwie close up (its a bit shoddy but im lazy):


http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/york%20graffiti/DSC00077.jpg


i stuck a s on

coz im mint



but yeah feedback on this???
It&#39;s not horrible but it look slike you added some random stuff in just to have more things in there. Simple can still be good, infact unless you are really experienced, its better as well. To try to come out right away with real complicated stuff isnt posible, but this isnt to complicated, just a little sloppy. Even though its just a throwie, you should still take the time to visualize what you want it to look like, and if you are visualizing something you know you cant do, just practice it.

Apart from that the shading is a little off. If you want a monodirectional shading effect, all of your corners should be coming off of the characters at the same angle. On the right side you have shading going all around the letter while on the bottoms of the other ones its coming off the bottom left.

Then up top the shading is coming off the right side, when it should be the left. just try making your shading/3d effects more uniform, so it looks like an object that is physical and you can touch, like a block.


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Some crits on my stuff would be good

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Recycle.jpg
a simple block letter tag

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Demon.jpg
a simple bubble letter tag

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Chill.jpg
another simple peice with a few characters in it. started out just as me practicing characters and then decided to make a peice out of it.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/APSE.jpg
Im pretty proud of this one.



Feedback well apreciated.

:D

[AimoOne]

Take your own advice mate :(

[krazzie_ammo]

10 ton - i would just keep on keeping on with the simples :)

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1527/116if8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ARE YOU READY?
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6060/untitled1rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:)
crits?

[Noddles912300]

10 ton lose the first one do simples, use the bar method (look in the just starting out thread or the turtorial thread.)

[10 Ton]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Apr 10 2007, 12:14 PM
10 ton - i would just keep on keeping on with the simples :)

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1527/116if8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ARE YOU READY?
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6060/untitled1rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:)
crits?
yea im practicing my wildstyle, although its not going well <_<

[AimoOne]

you aint ready for wildstyle..trust me..go simple..blocks...construct letters like Noodle said..

[sketch3]

word to the max yo, seriously tho s-i-m-p-l-e-s

EDIT ahh ras tried to put pporn in his sig :lol: :lol:

[AimoOne]

LMFAO..NOOO

I PUT THAT IN MY SIG ON PURPOSE LMAOOOOOO..LMFAO..

HOW DO YOU KNOW WHUT IT SAYS..AHA..YOU TRIED PUTTING PORN IN YOU SIG BFORE..?

[10 Ton]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 10 2007, 12:23 PM
you aint ready for wildstyle..trust me..go simple..blocks...construct letters like Noodle said..
yea i dont have anything id ever want to show anyone, so far that last piece has been as complicated as ive been able to produce something good with.

[sketch3]

ya well i tried to find a picture of ur mum that wasnt filled with cock but sadly the internet is a dissapointing thing

[AimoOne]

Well..it aint all that dissapointing..fuck me..Google has 1,390 search replys when searching for your mum...fuck me..take a look..

http://images.google.co.uk/images?hl=en&q=alsation&gbv=2

[HuntingLOLs]

krazzie, why split them so far from eachother? looks stupid. not to keen on the style but w/e thats just me ya know. but at least move them closer on eachother....

some simples i did quick... dunno if there&#39;s anything to critisize, cept the colouring :P simples are, and always will be, simples - but i hope some has any ideas :)http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00440.jpg

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by 10 Ton+Apr 10 2007, 12:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (10 Ton &#064; Apr 10 2007, 12:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-whoarethereal evil@Apr 10 2007, 11:01 AM
coz inkbits was sick with all that feedback and he asked 4 a throwie close up (its a bit shoddy but im lazy):


http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/york%20graffiti/DSC00077.jpg


i stuck a s on

coz im mint



but yeah feedback on this???
It&#39;s not horrible but it look slike you added some random stuff in just to have more things in there. Simple can still be good, infact unless you are really experienced, its better as well. To try to come out right away with real complicated stuff isnt posible, but this isnt to complicated, just a little sloppy. Even though its just a throwie, you should still take the time to visualize what you want it to look like, and if you are visualizing something you know you cant do, just practice it.

Apart from that the shading is a little off. If you want a monodirectional shading effect, all of your corners should be coming off of the characters at the same angle. On the right side you have shading going all around the letter while on the bottoms of the other ones its coming off the bottom left.

Then up top the shading is coming off the right side, when it should be the left. just try making your shading/3d effects more uniform, so it looks like an object that is physical and you can touch, like a block.


-------------------------------
Some crits on my stuff would be good

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Recycle.jpg
a simple block letter tag

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Demon.jpg
a simple bubble letter tag

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/Chill.jpg
another simple peice with a few characters in it. started out just as me practicing characters and then decided to make a peice out of it.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/APSE.jpg
Im pretty proud of this one.



Feedback well apreciated.

:D[/b][/quote]
im nt really sure what ive added on at all

i said id added on an s thts like the first time, i dont paint the s

also if the light is coming from the top left hand corner the shading isnt all tht bad

and i wund class my throwie as complicated at all nd yeah its sloppy i did say it was shoddy before i posted it

and the visualise thing ive developed this throwie for quite a while tht ewas jsut a quick one jsut coz inkbits psent loads of time criting everybody n he sed hed like a close up

so yeahhh

u should go simple aswell

[10 Ton]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Apr 10 2007, 12:38 PM

im nt really sure what ive added on at all

i said id added on an s thts like the first time, i dont paint the s

also if the light is coming from the top left hand corner the shading isnt all tht bad

and i wund class my throwie as complicated at all nd yeah its sloppy i did say it was shoddy before i posted it

and the visualise thing ive developed this throwie for quite a while tht ewas jsut a quick one jsut coz inkbits psent loads of time criting everybody n he sed hed like a close up

so yeahhh

u should go simple aswell
its all good dude damn. we&#39;re all new

just because light is coming from the top left doesnt mean that we should be able to see the entire bottom edge of the "S" on the right. Yea its gonna be dark because no light is hitting it, but if its a 3 dimensional object then we should only be seeing the side that is facing us.

[Noddles912300]

10ton for your last pic dont do add ons (ex: the ribbon, arrows, cracks,) and for the 3-d they should be parrellel to each other. work on sizing cause the first one was all over the place. draw two parrellel lines a few inches apart and work on your leters in between them using block method.
also practice alot&#33; draw on any spare paper you got, when your watching tv or in school or w/e work on your letters, thats what i do to get in more practice.

[Captain]

Originally posted by HuntingLOLs@Apr 10 2007, 12:38 PM
krazzie, why split them so far from eachother? looks stupid. not to keen on the style but w/e thats just me ya know. but at least move them closer on eachother....

some simples i did quick... dunno if there&#39;s anything to critisize, cept the colouring :P simples are, and always will be, simples - but i hope some has any ideas :)http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00440.jpg
If i were you i&#39;d work on getting cleaner lines, and making the overall letters the same size (the g is like half the size of the other letters. it only fits because of the thing that comes off of it.)

but other than that, i&#39;d say to just practice a lot and just tweak around with letter thickness and whatnot.

someone wanna do an exchange? i write wisp/wysp/wyspr etc.

[FIN one]

bumps for any other crits only got one sorry for postin this a lot

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/7518/maysa3fj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[HuntingLOLs]

Originally posted by Captain+Apr 10 2007, 01:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Captain @ Apr 10 2007, 01:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HuntingLOLs@Apr 10 2007, 12:38 PM
krazzie, why split them so far from eachother? looks stupid. not to keen on the style but w/e thats just me ya know. but at least move them closer on eachother....

some simples i did quick... dunno if there&#39;s anything to critisize, cept the colouring :P simples are, and always will be, simples - but i hope some has any ideas :)
img
If i were you i&#39;d work on getting cleaner lines, and making the overall letters the same size (the g is like half the size of the other letters. it only fits because of the thing that comes off of it.)

but other than that, i&#39;d say to just practice a lot and just tweak around with letter thickness and whatnot.

someone wanna do an exchange? i write wisp/wysp/wyspr etc. [/b][/quote]
although i dont agree with the g i can see what you mean - the extension was making up for that (if i made the a and c smaller it would look akward). cleaner lines. working on that, got a shaky hand and shit, need move it faster without going out of the lines

[dim]

Originally posted by dim@Apr 9 2007, 09:52 PM
robbie p the only thing i would change on that peice is some of the sharp angles on the letters like square them off more http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6605/img0101ff7.jpg
i think im going to change the outline make it a darker so it is easier to see the letters crits please
bumppppping for crits

[AimoOne]

Dim..stop drawing on them godamn trains..fuck me..

it aint a peice but still..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3333.jpg

crits..

mood : extremely pissed off :angry:

[KAL]

FIN- i like that style, n its clean to from what ive seen.
dim- personally i would make the n a lil skinier and the e the same size as the rest of the letters. but its good

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1510/simples001qm2.jpg
im not to happy with the A or the L
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2241/simples002zt8.jpg
re drew the peice from b4 n tried make the letters the same style buut it dont look like it to me. but im still playing with it tho.

[inkbits]

Originally posted by inkbits@Apr 10 2007, 09:21 PM
*edit: by SUMOE

shit WTF did I do...

sorry bout that...inkbits, I tried to bump this without all the crits u did but I fucked up...

so my bad for deleting every single fuckin&#39; crit you gave...it must&#39;ve took mad long, my bad :(

I&#39;m new at this mod shit.
lol, I&#39;d typed a novel worth of crits there man :lol:.

[ESKE one]

captain-look iight im not feeling the g though
fin one-looks really good and symetrical and i like how everthing is equal on both sides
dim-looks like a good simple throwie just make the n capital and if your gonna keep it lower case then shorten the top line and bring the bottom one up
aimo-thats hilarious :lol: but mean <_< but more hilarious then mean :lol: :lol:
kalthere pretty good simple stay wit it but on the second make the k more smaller it looks wack like that

here my contribution
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs014.jpg
now plz...plz... can i get crits everytime i post sumthing it never gets crited

edit: wow i fucked up that shoulder bad lol

[KAL]

eske- i would change the extension on the H make it more rounded so the line is the same thickness all the way around.

[FIN one]

eske- i personally think that everyone that wants to do a carak, should take some form of figure drawing or cartooning course, or at least look into it a lot and maybe find some lessons on the internet. you being no exception. the arm is like way skinny and both legs and the arm have mad folds/buldges. yes, clothes do that, but not to the extent that you have made it. and i think you tried to make it look like he is pointing a gun at the viewer, as things get closer to you they sould appear bigger. as for the letters, i kno it gets redundant here in the toy forum, but try to go with simples. the letter structure is kinda off. the D has some potential tho. the 3D is pretty good too you missed the inside of the A and a lil line between the H and the A but it&#39;s minute. good job tho and props for postin up ur stuff. a lot of kids dont even do that, they just act like they know everything. well, thats my 2 cents

[dizzle_d]

AIMT THAT IS THE GREATEST SHIT I&#39;VE EVER SEEN hahah, I love it&#33;

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by inkbits+Apr 10 2007, 03:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Apr 10 2007, 03:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-inkbits@Apr 10 2007, 09:21 PM
*edit: by SUMOE

shit WTF did I do...

sorry bout that...inkbits, I tried to bump this without all the crits u did but I fucked up...

so my bad for deleting every single fuckin&#39; crit you gave...it must&#39;ve took mad long, my bad :(

I&#39;m new at this mod shit.
lol, I&#39;d typed a novel worth of crits there man :lol:. [/b][/quote]
my bad nukka...

sorry must&#39;ve of took you a long time to post all them crits...

AIMT your characters are alright but they have bad anatomy which throws them off...

[14nick]

^^

grats on bein a moddd ;)

[Sumoe]

thanks. :)

[revolt92]

Yeah congrats sume, but dont go all power crazy on our ass&#39;s like cezr with his kitty or one of those james bond bad guys

[14nick]

now u can help me even moreee ;)

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

messing around with different letters.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Photo001.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1935.jpg

[AimoOne]

ahaha..no shit..i dont really concentrate on anatomy tbh..besides..i only spent like..30 mins onit...it was just for kicks..and tryna give peeps on here a kinda laugh..

isit making yall laugh ? :lol: <_<

[alive]

they just made new mods, myself not included.


what the fuck.

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Apr 10 2007, 05:02 PM
messing around with different letters.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Photo001.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1935.jpg
I like that, I sketched a couple "easy" pieces and I love doing the e and y especially how you did them cause they balance eachother out nicely...I would have only done one ring on the O cause it looks too crowded to me now, but I&#39;m def, diggin both of those....and the handy...Ugh, HOT&#33;

[migotti]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f67/migotti/production.jpg
latest shit

[namesake]

miggoti..not really feeling that fill

sezer..good shit



trying out new stuff, far from being done....crits?

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1277/profit004wy9.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

Originally posted by KAL@Apr 10 2007, 02:53 PM

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1510/simples001qm2.jpg
im not to happy with the A or the L
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2241/simples002zt8.jpg
re drew the peice from b4 n tried make the letters the same style buut it dont look like it to me. but im still playing with it tho.
Do it like this.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/kal.jpg

[Murder817Worth]

Originally posted by namesake@Apr 10 2007, 05:33 PM
miggoti..not really feeling that fill

sezer..good shit



trying out new stuff, far from being done....crits?

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1277/profit004wy9.jpg
Damn i like dat G. Well it looks good keep it up boi&#33;

[dizzle_d]

-sezer that shits fresh
-migotti not liking the fill, but the letters got potential
- mang thats pretty ill

[sacwacko]

New shit
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456010.jpg
the supplies^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456009.jpg
new tags^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456008.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456007.jpg
New^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456005.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456004.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456003.jpg
semi new^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456002.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456001.jpg
new^^^

[AbYSS~>]

http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/13206/2003333956390053262_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003333956390053262)

Dropped this today in class. Thats me behind it. Added my style of art ( penicl sketching, realistic drawings) with graffit. Lmk what u think. I made that style of lettering today as well i think its a big success ..idk. I made it by just practing my letters and i noticed i write rmk the best so thats prob going to be my new tag name i just have to come up for what it stands for lol. So far i have remaking kaos but idk if i like it. Lmk what u think of the piece.

P.S. Sorry i know no arrows. lol. O and ignore the tagging around it ..it sucks so yeah. Lmk what u think of my letters.

[Sumoe]

sketch ain&#39;t half bad...the graffiti however is UGLY...why would you ruin a decent sketch?

[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 06:10 PM
New shit
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456010.jpg
the supplies^^^

is that green one a window marker? and what ink you have in the mop? or just the polish? jw. im new to the marker scene.

[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 10 2007, 06:19 PM
sketch ain&#39;t half bad...the graffiti however is UGLY...why would you ruin a decent sketch?
wow ur the first one that hasnt liked it the taggers at mt school do..odd. but uh i can crank out a sketch like that in 10min so its no bigge. drawing is my thing..check the other art thread in here to see my stuff..

[sacwacko]

no....mini bingo dabber....
kiwi has shoe crap in it still....got it yesterday....bein lazy...
i need to make some ink....i thrashed my old mop

[sacwacko]

New shit
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456010.jpg
the supplies^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456009.jpg
new tags^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456008.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456007.jpg
New^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456005.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456004.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456003.jpg
semi new^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456002.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456001.jpg
new^^^

reposting 4 crits

[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by AbYSS~>@Apr 10 2007, 06:18 PM
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/13206/2003333956390053262_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003333956390053262)

Dropped this today in class. Thats me behind it. Added my style of art ( penicl sketching, realistic drawings) with graffit. Lmk what u think. I made that style of lettering today as well i think its a big success ..idk. I made it by just practing my letters and i noticed i write rmk the best so thats prob going to be my new tag name i just have to come up for what it stands for lol. So far i have remaking kaos but idk if i like it. Lmk what u think of the piece.

P.S. Sorry i know no arrows. lol. O and ignore the tagging around it ..it sucks so yeah. Lmk what u think of my letters.
repost for more crits =p

Two other pieces im considering my name.. scrib
http://aycu32.webshots.com/image/14751/2003317430960660601_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003317430960660601)
http://aycu24.webshots.com/image/13943/2003322414599232116_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003322414599232116)
Both two diff styles of letters as well...

[Quigbert]

Mang-make it 3-d
Spie- your throwup is flat at the bottom

[Quigbert]

scrib-make it 3-d, not just one big green outline and lose the smiley face

[Quigbert]

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri34.jpg
Peri

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/iesmi.jpg
Iesmi

[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by Quigbert@Apr 10 2007, 06:30 PM
scrib-make it 3-d, not just one big green outline and lose the smiley face
what about the first one?

[SUM]

done in class today. just an abreviation for something. one doesnt mean nothing here, just added it in. i realize i shouldnt have thrown down the shadow in black but i&#39;m learnin. colors thrown in quick and last, colored pencils.

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8890/ady1em9.jpg

[SUM]

Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 06:25 PM

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456003.jpg
semi new^^
reposting 4 crits
yo i&#39;m feelin that. jumps out at ya

[Aska.]

Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 06:25 PM
New shit
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456010.jpg
the supplies^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456009.jpg
new tags^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456008.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456007.jpg
New^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456005.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456004.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456003.jpg
semi new^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456002.jpg
new^^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/jimi123456001.jpg
new^^^

reposting 4 crits
i&#39;m hoping you didnt want to get up on a church with something like this.

[HuntingLOLs]

dont do circles on the tag like that - dot at the most (for spie and everybody)

[React!]

Originally posted by inkbits@Apr 10 2007, 06:21 AM
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10562246.jpg

:o This shit is sick as fuck.. i love your mildstyle and how u do the lines in the letters and shit damn its dope..

[KEAZE]

i agree that looks sick&#33;&#33;&#33;^^^^^^
this is a piece im working on
says "mute"
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3..._19850_4372.jpg (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3trd0n386/n515691616_19850_4372.jpg)

[KrookONE]

Originally posted by namesake@Apr 10 2007, 05:33 PM
miggoti..not really feeling that fill

sezer..good shit



trying out new stuff, far from being done....crits?

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1277/profit004wy9.jpg
dope...ink it

[iownnubs]

just started ..cant really get style down...wat do u guys think?
My Webpage (http://img300.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff10uh9.jpg)
My Webpage (http://img412.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff12zh5.jpg)

[Fube]

all i can say is simples for everyone cept inky. u guys need letter structure bad. im in the same boat. ive been approched by this guy that owns a practice space for bands to paint on his wall. probably not gunna do it on account of my painting skillz but it does not stop me from sketching.

love and hate welcome.

quick pencil sketch.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/LastScan-3.jpg

[emokid]

love <3

everybody else needs to hit the blocks

*edit* except ink, obv

[BIGel]

fube have i not seen your stuff or is that a new style? whatever it is i like it, really caught my eye.

i finally inked the karik for the cosplay battle, might add digi color later
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs15/i/2007/100/d/c/the_finished_eeyore_by_bigel.jpg

[Murder817Worth]

Fube-Looks pretty good&#33;
Well cmnt mine plz :D
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze1.jpg

[dizzle_d]

Fube and Bigel, both nicee

[Fube]

hahaha holy shit big el, i really love that. i think of silence of the lambs where eyore gets master shake in the hole and puts lotion on his skin and makes a "master suit" out of him.

i have not posted any of my stuff on here really. i kinda like to look and do stuff on my own, when i want crits on stuff i post it here. thanks for the words though.

<3 emokid&#33; btw i wish my simples were your simples. i like your shit.

murder, rollin in the right direction, watch your thickness on the letters, if your gunna do 3d hit some vanishing points so it stays nice and even, i say use a ruler untill u can help not to. to me i would work on handstyles first then hit some more simples.

[Striker99]

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/821/blackbookmo1.jpg







Give me some feedback so i know what to work on

[F.R.A.T.]

striker jin photobucket hella easier
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture13.jpg
have no clue wat to do for the k cause it looks shit if i follow wat ive been doin

[zale]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010210.jpg

[Sumoe]

Mek-flow&#39;s gettin&#39; there.
RAGE-you successfully wasted a perfectly good dollar, not bad, not worthy for money yet either.

[Striker99]

thanx i&#39;ll use photobucket next time


your sketch is dece too

[F.R.A.T.]

steez in class saem situation wit the k
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture14.jpg

[Hazex]

frat that ncie just need to take off the arrow

fast fast i did to pratice my bars

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9830/gfdgfdgdfca2.png (http://imageshack.us)

and what you think of my A? crits plz?

[dim]

rage you have the right idea i acctually like it but i dont rele like the E like how it bends and such
F.R.A.T- i rele like that but i would change the bottom leg of the K maybe point it more down then out and then color it cause that would look sick and i like the second one to but the E is kinda like sumes
Bigel- lovin that character i rele like how you shade with cross hatching
fube looks pretty dope but i think you went a bit over board with all of the circles but it still looks great

[Fube]

Originally posted by zale@Apr 10 2007, 08:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010210.jpg
if it was on a 100 bill it would be much better. :P

[KnowOne]

exhange for my friend some not done yet
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/3207/picture1497vw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits would be nice

[dibz]

Originally posted by Fube+Apr 10 2007, 08:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube &#064; Apr 10 2007, 08:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-zale@Apr 10 2007, 08:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010210.jpg
if it was on a 100 bill it would be much better. :P[/b][/quote]
i agree a piece on a c-note would be ill, never though of doing that. good idea i guess theres gunna be a alot of people seeing it, cool to do top to bottoms on um haha

[Murder817Worth]

Nice doller lol
Well i think this might be the best letter structure ive ever done plz crit&#33;
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze2.jpg

[dim]

yo make your lines a little cleaner and crisper

[KnowOne]

no critz well this blows

[Murder817Worth]

Ok then i will do some more during school tomorrow well im out now

[F.R.A.T.]

Originally posted by dibz+Apr 10 2007, 09:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (dibz @ Apr 10 2007, 09:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fube@Apr 10 2007, 08:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-zale@Apr 10 2007, 08:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010210.jpg
if it was on a 100 bill it would be much better. :P
i agree a piece on a c-note would be ill, never though of doing that. good idea i guess theres gunna be a alot of people seeing it, cool to do top to bottoms on um haha [/b][/quote]
thats a toop to middle

[Deso7]

Originally posted by KnowOne@Apr 10 2007, 09:05 PM
exhange for my friend some not done yet
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/3207/picture1497vw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits would be nice
bump.
Fuckin fresh know let gets crits for know

[Zep0]

Everyone in here is making simplers really fucking difficult. They&#39;re not. Just make sure that you keep your bars even through out the letter and that your letter looks like the ones on your key board then just -bend, twist, cut, mold- when you think you have mastered basics...but make sure your using bars, and only doing add ons that are consistent with those bars its not hard, if you cant do simplers try something diff.(as in new field of law breaking or art) cause some simple straights is just the beginning its the easy part of graffiti...but necessary.

[moltov]

a outline of an unfinished piece inspired by 666 crew :wub: :P
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00615.jpg
crits?

[sank one]

looks like your tryin to pull off a waster-ish style... it aint workin

[garbage down tha way]

First of all, reverse the star. Secondly, those things on the side are a bit much. Overall, I like it though.

[sacwacko]

Originally posted by moltov@Apr 10 2007, 10:20 PM
a outline of an unfinished piece inspired by 666 crew :wub: :P
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00615.jpg
crits?
i think ur on to somthin

[AnteUp]

wose...its ok but thas the only thing that i see from u
know one...if i only knew wat tha fuck it said...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayzr.jpg
CRITTTTYYYSSS PLEASE :P

edit: its jus an outline...dun in class...if its gud ill do anotha...

[sex without condoms]

you gotta overlap them letters brah
and ditch the Z its your worst letter, never fits your style and yeah.
lose it.

[AnteUp]

any ideas on wat to change to from HAYZ?

[Zep0]

Do an alphabet mix up your fav. letters till you get sumtin.

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 10 2007, 10:34 PM
wose...its ok but thas the only thing that i see from u
know one...if i only knew wat tha fuck it said...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayzr.jpg
CRITTTTYYYSSS PLEASE :P

edit: its jus an outline...dun in class...if its gud ill do anotha...
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[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by AbYSS~>+Apr 10 2007, 06:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AbYSS~> @ Apr 10 2007, 06:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AbYSS~>@Apr 10 2007, 06:18 PM
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/13206/2003333956390053262_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003333956390053262)

Dropped this today in class. Thats me behind it. Added my style of art ( penicl sketching, realistic drawings) with graffit. Lmk what u think. I made that style of lettering today as well i think its a big success ..idk. I made it by just practing my letters and i noticed i write rmk the best so thats prob going to be my new tag name i just have to come up for what it stands for lol. So far i have remaking kaos but idk if i like it.Â* Lmk what u think of the piece.

P.S. Sorry i knowÂ* no arrows. lol. O and ignore the tagging around it ..it sucks so yeah. Lmk what u think of my letters.
repost for more crits =p

Two other pieces im considering my name.. scrib
http://aycu32.webshots.com/image/14751/2003317430960660601_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003317430960660601)
http://aycu24.webshots.com/image/13943/2003322414599232116_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003322414599232116)
Both two diff styles of letters as well... [/b][/quote]
help/crits on any of these..

[Quigbert]

Originally posted by Quigbert@Apr 10 2007, 06:32 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri34.jpg
Peri

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/iesmi.jpg
Iesmi
bump

[AnteUp]

:angry: :angry: fuckin give crits or dont ask for them

[JackJill]

Anteup- Letters are too squished. Space &#39;em out. Go simpler. Your letter structure for the S and the C are a good start. Baby steps, hun.

Quigbert- i Don&#39;t know much about throws so I can&#39;t help you on that too much, but it looks a little too repetetive and lose the addons. It looks fancy but doesn&#39;t look like anything.
Your bottom piece is clean, your style is moving forward, but holy fuck those disconnected tips of the letters are disgusting. :lol:
PS: Nice Handy :) I wish mine was improving faster.

[SpekZ]

well not quite finish yet need crits on a k that i can use
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6341/scanoc8.jpg

[dibz]

anteup- try to define the a a little more, looks identical to the a cept for that small little bar i didnt even notice at the top, and as u know jus make sure all the letters are straight, and id say lose the arrows.

quigbert- i have no idea what the throwie says but it looks tight haha, an the handy especially on the bottom piece on the scroll i am diggin very much.


brand new throwie (young rant)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1301-1.jpg

[SpekZ]

Originally posted by dibz@Apr 10 2007, 11:45 PM
anteup- try to define the a a little more, looks identical to the a cept for that small little bar i didnt even notice at the top, and as u know jus make sure all the letters are straight, and id say lose the arrows.

quigbert- i have no idea what the throwie says but it looks tight haha, an the handy especially on the bottom piece on the scroll i am diggin very much.


brand new throwie (young rant)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1301-1.jpg
SICK sHIT DUDE

[Casa45]

something i did in 03.
so ill put it in the toy fourm. :P

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3706/copck4.jpg

[muted]

Originally posted by AbYSS~>+Apr 10 2007, 11:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AbYSS~> &#064; Apr 10 2007, 11:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AbYSS~>@Apr 10 2007, 06:27 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AbYSS~>@Apr 10 2007, 06:18 PM
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/13206/2003333956390053262_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003333956390053262)

Dropped this today in class. Thats me behind it. Added my style of art ( penicl sketching, realistic drawings) with graffit. Lmk what u think. I made that style of lettering today as well i think its a big success ..idk. I made it by just practing my letters and i noticed i write rmk the best so thats prob going to be my new tag name i just have to come up for what it stands for lol. So far i have remaking kaos but idk if i like it. Lmk what u think of the piece.

P.S. Sorry i know no arrows. lol. O and ignore the tagging around it ..it sucks so yeah. Lmk what u think of my letters.
repost for more crits =p

Two other pieces im considering my name.. scrib
http://aycu32.webshots.com/image/14751/2003317430960660601_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003317430960660601)
http://aycu24.webshots.com/image/13943/2003322414599232116_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003322414599232116)
Both two diff styles of letters as well...
help/crits on any of these..[/b][/quote]
The red one is pretty good just work on the r and b not really feeling the other two but that portrait behind it is sik

[Urah]

Newest sketch, trying out some new shit. I know I went a bit over kill in spots but other wise, what do you guys think?

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/sketch5.jpg

[JackJill]

yeah man, I don&#39;t have any crits for your black and red piece because you pretty much know where you went wrong. Gotta say that is a pretty ballin Piece though. Maybe Do something about the H though? I get the impression it&#39;s smaller than the res of your letters.
And that small URAH in pink and green at teh top? A nice thin white inside outline would do wonders for making that ish pop. As well as not using a dark colour for your shiners. Or whatever the hell you people call them.