Blackbooks

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 10 2007, 03:33 PM
captain-look iight im not feeling the g though
fin one-looks really good and symetrical and i like how everthing is equal on both sides
dim-looks like a good simple throwie just make the n capital and if your gonna keep it lower case then shorten the top line and bring the bottom one up
aimo-thats hilarious :lol: but mean <_< but more hilarious then mean :lol: :lol:
kalthere pretty good simple stay wit it but on the second make the k more smaller it looks wack like that

here my contribution
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs014.jpg
now plz...plz... can i get crits everytime i post sumthing it never gets crited

edit: wow i fucked up that shoulder bad lol
bump

urah-good shyt keep it up
abyss-go simpler

[KnowOne]

ante loose the arrows id say just work on block letters dont make the edges so round and btw the thing u dont know what it says its just a letter S

[JackJill]

Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 11 2007, 12:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one @ Apr 11 2007, 12:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Apr 10 2007, 03:33 PM
captain-look iight im not feeling the g though
fin one-looks really good and symetrical and i like how everthing is equal on both sides
dim-looks like a good simple throwie just make the n capital and if your gonna keep it lower case then shorten the top line and bring the bottom one up
aimo-thats hilarious :lol: but mean <_< but more hilarious then mean :lol: :lol:
kalthere pretty good simple stay wit it but on the second make the k more smaller it looks wack like that

here my contribution
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs014.jpg
now plz...plz... can i get crits everytime i post sumthing it never gets crited

edit: wow i fucked up that shoulder bad lol
bump

urah-good shyt keep it up
abyss-go simpler [/b][/quote]
Okay sweety, here you go. I Feel bad for you.
H is fucked. Bottom right part of it to be exact. The gap in the A seems too big even though you&#39;re following the bar structure idea. Maybe make the A smaller? N is messed too, you didn&#39;t follow the bar stucture dea on that letter. And the D is Hawt.

[Robbie P]

ESKE: When you do your A, try to make the bar crossing it equal width as the 2 bars going down. The thickening of the A on the bottom looks weird and throws off the equal width of that bar. Scrap the extension on the bottom of the D, then you can make the N&#39;s bar span the entire length that it should. Scrap the little curly deal on the H too, or at least do something to it to fit the style of the other letters.

[dim]

Originally posted by AnteUp+Apr 10 2007, 11:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AnteUp @ Apr 10 2007, 11:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@Apr 10 2007, 10:34 PM
wose...its ok but thas the only thing that i see from u
know one...if i only knew wat tha fuck it said...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayzr.jpg
CRITTTTYYYSSS PLEASE :P

edit: its jus an outline...dun in class...if its gud ill do anotha...
bump to next page [/b][/quote]
i rele like the symmetry of the peice how there are the arrowws on both sides
:D

[xrevolutionx]

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9729/raseuploadvs4.jpg
Comments Please, trying this out, what do you think.

[chase one]

rase im not likin the arrow on the r and i think the letters need to b closer some how but its nice


not finished this yet but crits please?
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/9071/sketches005dw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[poepomhoog1]

rase...as chase said....maby if the arrow on the r wen&#39;t behind the letter it would look better...the rest sweet clean style

chase...I think youre using to much extensions....it looks like youre trying to build the piece with them instead of adding them to the piece...kind of hard to explain but in my opinion it&#39;s just a lil to much...I like the way you tryed to bring symetry to it with the arrows on the side...

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2496/bek1qb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
BEK....critz??

[Urah]

Bek - I really like the style, but it looks a titch lop sided. The structure/ style on all you letters is dope, but the B looks way more ballin then the rest. try doing one more, exactley the same, but balance out the K or something?

[poepomhoog1]

thanx for the critz man....I&#39;ll do that, and yeah I drew a chill b and then taught up something to join it (the EK part)....by the way what does lop sided mean...like tilting or something

[xrevolutionx]

I had the same opinion about the arrow, so i fixed it.
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/4715/rasebackarrowuploadjp5.jpg

bek - like the colours and the overall piece, only not to fond of the K, it gives me the feeling like it&#39;s going to fall in a cliff, but it doesn&#39;t want to so it desperately clings on to the E.

[poepomhoog1]

haha...nice explenation, I see what ya mean..thanx

[iwritebasic]

get rid of the arrows completelyand see how it looks

[Skesh]

I actually really like poepomhoog&#39;s K

xrevolutionx, the extensions, 3d and stars dont look good... imo

[sketch3]

ok wat dose imo mean? i guesed it ment i mean obviosly

[poepomhoog1]

thanx skesh


and imo means "in my opium"

[REMOoneSF]

bek and base i&#39;m really feelin those. nice job on the coloring nice and clean base can&#39;t wait to see it colored.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4520/popmf4.jpg

jsut a little somethin i threw together

[Nem]

um. *in my opinion?

unless it is opium. and i have no idea where i&#39;ve been all this time.

[AimoOne]

shi...that karak is pretty kool...just the neck looks dodgy..love the expression..showing grillz ?..very " dope "

[dizzle_d]

Remo I love that charac man

[poepomhoog1]

thanx remo...yeah dope char indeed....but that simple under the char sweeet...maby could have done without the extensions on the bottom of the r, but still sweet

[Skesh]

Originally posted by sketch3@Apr 11 2007, 05:24 PM
ok wat dose imo mean? i guesed it ment i mean obviosly
It means In My Opinion...

[REMOoneSF]

thanks yeah i was wondering about the extensions on the R i&#39;ll fix it later on

[sketch3]

thanks

[nase7]

Remo im feelin those simple letters at the bottom of the piece.

The characters quite nice to but not the letters in his mouth.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10c58/1/64/V_TLllyf5T9ruc-sKvR_nQUAoqcUA6qu.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/A_U_yrJ44T8Uuqze4V2eg70Skvo-UFaC?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10dc0/1/35/YatMlIN07j-SIdN8qkV1Z9R7oiFzN4Pb.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/svAfi7b-6T-XOAbIKXNNYomVIQT3p2kh?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10ece/1/121/YkoTQW4w4D9fYft0D4KM4bM7Q9qryb3N.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/YE_KC6iEuD9NVlTjCxK1bcTgkxRNpbLl?referrer=hlnk)


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e11015/1/51/axQU_3lY4j8674Evtf1nPnO69m_6vOMe.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/aBAyR9s57z9O2BWyzCIE8_AqUPW2hiHY?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e110b0/1/26/hvrYjnWt3D__b3wY_lJx3n5OO1ZYqF6k.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/z5b8llha5T8aZlVzPZQ23-Xm_pzhLaSq?referrer=hlnk)
^^girlfriend outlined and filled for me :D

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e112dd/1/96/uH7ZFGfq0T-8IkfGf63076oboVPBUavQ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/tirgUzEX1D9zF77ayOlOumDPVVJ82dcN?referrer=hlnk)
Random sticker^^

[Chulo]

im feelin yo handstyle, and the first one at the top, the character is nice

[-ShAmEE-]

looks kool. getin beta&#33;

[krazzie_ammo]

asen - man, i love that pecil outline. keep up :)

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/903/118xq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something my girl did.http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/7831/117dj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
READY :)
crits?

[TricksForKids]

remo, that chracters alright, but so is that throw/straight letter under it, keep it up

asen my favourite is the pencil, keep up those simples

and krazzie that penncil joint is damn hot, minus the weird paralelograms for the d and Y, and lose the small letters inside


andddd on the simple tip, heres some piece of shit i busted out for sumoe

Peace

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9647/sumeat3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AimoOne]

Nase7...good stuff Asen..not feeling the karaks that much..but the letters are very funkay

Tricks..are you gunna start posting more fliks in here again ?.. ;)

Krazzie...feelin that style..very nice..i like the lil letters non-the less :huh:

[dim]

tricks i rel like the 3d on that peice its siiick

[alive]

tricks its dope. rep BSC&#33;


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03114.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03120.jpg

[AimoOne]

Alive..the flciksa are kinda dark mate..uggh..i think the middle bar on the A...needs to be the same size as the middle bar on the M...and i dont really like the lil extetension on the bottom right leg of the M...and i think the back of the C is a lil to wide..unless thats the darkness playing tircks on me...i like the T tho..i think you should add a T into your name...your Ts are nice..and i crnt work out the bottom flick at all..tooooo dark.. :huh: :(

[-ShAmEE-]

top one is sick&#33;.M could look FLAMING HOT&#33;. if u made it a V in the middle like this ]v[. ohh. yeah from the toy story thing. ur a mod to me&#33;&#33;&#33;.

[alive]

haha thanks shamee, and thanks aimo tooo. actually this one light isnt working. the one that i usually take my pics under, and being too lazy to just walk to another light, i just tookem there neway. lol. i suppose ill go and get new ones.


u know, funny you say that ras (aimo for u new kids) cuz ive thought abt changing the r to a t. caet instead of caer. i dunno tho. . . .

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 11 2007, 04:35 PM
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9647/sumeat3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:wub:

thanks mr. tricks...

peeps who I owe exchanges, probably have em&#39; all done by late Friday night or Saturday afternoon...

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5426/dsc0852ij0.jpg

some colored shits...not done though...eh, flick is crooked, the actually piece is straight though.

Alive- nice simples nukka. ;)

[AimoOne]

OH SHIT .. FUCK ME. SERIUOS...UGH..FUKING HELL SUME...THAT RED...LIKE..SUM KINKY PORNO SHIT RED...WHEN I SEE IT..I WAS LIKE.." POP " .. FUCK ME..THAT RED...OOOOOOO...IM TOUCHIN MY MOUSE IN WAYS I NEVER BEFORE...OH MY GOSH...and the 3d..like..thats the CHERRY on top...oooo..shizznit..thats like...a visual porn suit..fuck me..that RED...and those letters..mke up the TITS..fucking hell Sume.. :huh: :huh: :huh: :o :o :o :o ;) ;) :D

Alive..all the wisdom youv given me has made me think like you..

[sketch3]

i really want to rob ur talent sume, like in space jam. hu remembers the theme tune, hit em high by ll cool j,cypress hill,coolio and busta rymes

[AnteUp]

damn sume that shit is bomb, ( i might be rubbing myself but not as much as aimt) :lol: lol u gunna leave tha m like dat? it lukks gud...and i dont wanna suggest anything thatll fuck it up :D

[NESone]

Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 11 2007, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe &#064; Apr 11 2007, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Apr 11 2007, 04:35 PM
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9647/sumeat3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:wub:

thanks mr. tricks...

peeps who I owe exchanges, probably have em&#39; all done by late Friday night or Saturday afternoon...

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5426/dsc0852ij0.jpg

some colored shits...not done though...eh, flick is crooked, the actually piece is straight though.

Alive- nice simples nukka. ;)[/b][/quote]
sume, lovin the piece, I just started writing NES today... thought I&#39;d give it a try in a piece... the E kind of looks like an altered, shittier version of sume&#39;s.

Here&#39;s the piece, I really hate the N, but am having troubles thinking up a style of N to fit the rest of the piece... any ideas? :D

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f221/snerkadacerca/Image042-1.jpg

help me out&#33;
and alive, diggin the simples

i&#39;m not doing any 3d or adding anything else to the piece until I figure out the N

[AimoOne]

Sume..can you put my nice crit in your sig please.. ;) .. lol :rolleyes:

Nes..ugh..i kinda like the E..but the rest is bad mate..go simple ?

ugh..sooo..Sume Tricks and Caers presence made me sketch..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/33333.jpg

Caer..you asked to see my blocks / bars...i hope this shows them :(

crits also " peeps " :lol:

[-ShAmEE-]

nesone__
try makin simple smooth curved letters. dont make it tree like (look like you got roots growing out the side of it.

[AimoOne]

i was doing it quick..as i did it with pen..i coulndt erase the lines that was left... ;) <_<

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Apr 11 2007, 04:26 PM
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/903/118xq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something my girl did.http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/7831/117dj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
READY :)

aimt - looks alright mayte, i would say to move the T a bit more out. :)

crits?

[Slushi]

Sume: You&#39;ve progressed so much but your E has not changed a bit.

[sketch3]

thats the most slopy ish iv seen from u and its still cleaner than all my graff ever
edit to ras

[alive]

ras, i like it, and im glad to see bars. you know, that left stroke of all your letters reminds me of my own. im not calling a bite, or any complete bullshit like that, just saying, i like it. haha. i like all of it, although 2 things, one is fatten up the middle of the M to make it fit more i think. at least play with that, and the other thing is to move your T farther away. I know its wierd, cuz u want to have the bottom of the letter overlap a bit like all the other letters, but with a T, u gotta give that up, and let it just overlap at the top. anyway. thats all, i like seeing your bars.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03121.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03122.jpg



peace.

[NESone]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 11 2007, 05:20 PM
Sume..can you put my nice crit in your sig please.. ;) .. lol :rolleyes:

Nes..ugh..i kinda like the E..but the rest is bad mate..go simple ?

ugh..sooo..Sume Tricks and Caers presence made me sketch..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/33333.jpg

Caer..you asked to see my blocks / bars...i hope this shows them :(

crits also " peeps " :lol:
well thank you for the crit, uhm... yea I know its pretty weird, its the first time i&#39;ve ever tried this style and this name... I can try some simples. I wanna make this ish work though hah. and nice little simple...too bad you couldn&#39;t erase the pen :D

[AimoOne]

i think most writers use that flare bar stucture on A&#39;s and M&#39;s and T&#39;s etc. Atom does..and CanTwo..i think its common..anyways..thanks for the crits Alive.. ;) :)

whoa..the flow on te I and N in the bottom is like a hurricane..dont like the E tho..i thinks thats been a problem for you..E&#39;s..id change it for a T or an I..i dunno..your T&#39;s and I&#39;s have crazy flow

[Casa45]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 11 2007, 05:02 PM
OH SHIT .. FUCK ME. SERIUOS...UGH..FUKING HELL SUME...THAT RED...LIKE..SUM KINKY PORNO SHIT RED...WHEN I SEE IT..I WAS LIKE.." POP " .. FUCK ME..THAT RED...OOOOOOO...IM TOUCHIN MY MOUSE IN WAYS I NEVER BEFORE...OH MY GOSH...and the 3d..like..thats the CHERRY on top...oooo..shizznit..thats like...a visual porn suit..fuck me..that RED...and those letters..mke up the TITS..fucking hell Sume.. :huh: :huh: :huh: :o :o :o :o ;) ;) :D

Alive..all the wisdom youv given me has made me think like you..
Jesus Fucking Christ&#33;

STFU and suck his dick already&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :lol:

[-Sinn-]

Aimo lovin that shit ur dope man

Alive that shits lookin pro keep it up

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture175.jpg

Entry for Cosplay Battle in Character battle

Crits???

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by Casa45+Apr 11 2007, 10:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Casa45 &#064; Apr 11 2007, 10:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Apr 11 2007, 05:02 PM
OH SHIT .. FUCK ME. SERIUOS...UGH..FUKING HELL SUME...THAT RED...LIKE..SUM KINKY PORNO SHIT RED...WHEN I SEE IT..I WAS LIKE.." POP " .. FUCK ME..THAT RED...OOOOOOO...IM TOUCHIN MY MOUSE IN WAYS I NEVER BEFORE...OH MY GOSH...and the 3d..like..thats the CHERRY on top...oooo..shizznit..thats like...a visual porn suit..fuck me..that RED...and those letters..mke up the TITS..fucking hell Sume.. :huh:Â* :huh:Â* :huh:Â* :oÂ* :oÂ* :oÂ* :oÂ* ;)Â* ;)Â* :D

Alive..all the wisdom youv given me has made me think like you..
Jesus Fucking Christ&#33;

STFU and suck his dick already&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :lol: [/b][/quote]
why dont you shut the fuck up..all you do is talk shit..as you can tell..i was fucking joking..talking about the porn shit etc....or are jus dumb to realise.... ? :rolleyes:

Edit...you have

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

nice charac man, im really loving it

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3838/kres001hu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/7291/kres002kc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/2429/kres003ti3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3516/kres004nb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/2993/kres005bh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1347/kres006qx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/7056/kres007za3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits

[-Sinn-]

likin the 3rd last one dope

[Sumoe]

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/673/dsc0864yw8.jpg

done...just gotta do a background.

[AimoOne]

CYTO..great to see yah using bars to construct letters buddy ^^ .. just tone it down a bit..make the bars extra straight..etc..try keeping it simple for awhile..keep it up ;)

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Originally posted by &#045;Sinn&#045;@Apr 11 2007, 06:19 PM
likin the 3rd last one dope
the 3rd to last one? or both the 3rd and last piece? which did u mean?

[-Sinn-]

the third from the bottom

[Captain]

cyto- it&#39;s great that you&#39;re usin bars, but they take a backseat to overall structure. work with slightly simpler stuff, and try not to vary line thickness quite yet.

sumoe- can&#39;t wait to see it with a background

anyone wanna exchange? (or at least give me a word to practice on?)

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/sekr.jpg

[SUM]

NOTE***-- i did use references but from MEMORY. i guess its still biting style but i&#39;m tryin to get it down. threw on my own shadow. pill is also from memory from the Slim Shady LP CD.


http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/5209/vicssc7.jpg


still workin on what to do for a fill. any ideas?

[Sumoe]

you&#39;re letters still suck.

[NESone]

since the nes piece was declared bad, I decided not to try and fix anything and just give it some color, this is how it came out hah.

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f221/snerkadacerca/Image059.jpg

[SUM]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 07:04 PM
you&#39;re letters still suck.
alright, well you can atleast give me some pointers. anything else?

NES- i like that with the exception of the dots on the fill

[-ShAmEE-]

i sed simple. smooth curved letters like the one on ur keyborad&#33;

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060740.jpg






Feedback B)

[AbYSS~>]

Guys said to keep going simpler and work with solid colors so.. heres a piece i did with my new and for sure tag name... disas. made my own style of letters again..

http://aycu17.webshots.com/image/14376/2005673126870845846_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005673126870845846)

http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/13636/2005656370462808871_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005656370462808871)

Feedback. did it fast but yeah. thought it was sick. bubbles arent perfect but..


critz please.

[WolfBurrns]

Stay simple. Yeah, That could be the best advice. Concentrate more on your structure before adding any extra curves. Try to keep the letters the same height for now and your 3d needs alot of work.

[Striker99]

Disas those r dece colors and shadowing. cool name too

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Apr 12 2007, 12:57 AM
Stay simple. Yeah, That could be the best advice. Concentrate more on your structure before adding any extra curves. Try to keep the letters the same height for now and your 3d needs alot of work.
bump this advice is perfect..you got the idea Wolf ;)

[.D.H.]

Abyss: goin simple goes for you too. round off some of those edges, they are too pointy. i wouldnt get too caught up in color, just letters and consistency.

Striker: the blobs on the ends of the letters dont look very good. just keep the letters nice and straight, but distort them a little, maybe by bending one or to of the legs. same to you about color; its not particularly (sp?) important, so i wouldnt get too attached for now.

nes: i sorta fell the &#39;e&#39; and the &#39;s&#39;, but the n doesnt flow that well the random extensions arent the best looking either

sum: lose all that shit around you latters. make them visible.

ninja out. :ph34r:

[Untracked21]

sume that peice is so sick dude.

[chase one]

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/539/sketches006yi2dm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please?

[Bartic]

Dude it looks like you got the basic structure down( c, m, a) , the r&#39;s a bit iffy tho. Try and toss some style into the letters before linking them all ridiculous like. Keep it simple but stylish man. The bottom of the r is a prime example of such rebelliousness. Keep doing all ur letters till they are as clean as the m and a, even better

[Striker99]

chase that has some decent flow

[Bartic]

So yeah haven&#39;t been around in a while used to write suki but was stuck with the U and I so i now write STD. Then and now.

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7310/suki21tf9.png

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5793/stdhe3.jpg
trying to work on letter structure left out colors / 3d
good? crits?

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Apr 11 2007, 04:46 PM
tricks its dope. rep BSC&#33;


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03114.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03120.jpg
bumpity bump goes the night.


chase if u actually want to get good, ignore those 2, theyre just dazzled by all the lines. "oooooooooooo, wildstyle&#33;"

EXTENSIONS HAVE TO COME FROM SOMEWHERE.

yes u do have letters, but then u have so much useless bullshit from nowhere that it covers them up. lose all it, focus on shaping the letters themselves.

[AteskOne]

some charcter is from today.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/624/scan0003gf0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my scanner&#39;s a peice of shit and it cut off some of the bottom character. whatever. crit em all the same.

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060741.jpg







I need some help with what i should do next. Critz PLEASE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11

[alive]

yeah, BLOCKS BLOCKS BLOCKS BLOCKS BLOCKS BLOCKS BLOCKS

[Bartic]

Define the top of the s more, hole in r i think needs changing aswell

[Striker99]

k thanx

[Striker99]

k thanx

[alive]

jesus fucking christ. a quad post? patience boy, patience.

and if u ever want crits again, give em b4 u get em.

[moltov]

same layout as usual

before BWS:
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00620.jpg

with upside down BWS:
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00621.jpg



Alive: I like those sketches. they could look nice colored in but I can really say much cause they are hot but keep that style up

[dim]

good idea

[Bartic]

Originally posted by Bartic@Apr 11 2007, 08:49 PM
So yeah haven&#39;t been around in a while used to write suki but was stuck with the U and I so i now write STD. Then and now.

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7310/suki21tf9.png

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5793/stdhe3.jpg
trying to work on letter structure left out colors / 3d
good? crits?
Bump, This got lost on the end of the last page
Then and Now

moltov, i like the flow with the wos

[flclnaruto1213]

moltov..why did you invert the colors on that?

[garbage down tha way]

Bartic-I like the letters. even though you&#39;re good it&#39;d still look better without arrows tho. also, id lower the left leg of the k a bit.

Moltov-I like that without the things on the sides a lot better. Looks good.


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/erie.jpg

drew this in school. I know I spelled "erie" wrong. it was completely intentional. Sort of a mix between "earn" and "erie". crits?

[BIGel]

^^what? i was not aware people cleveland are allowed to write? when did this happen? i like it though, a little overkill on the cracks.

playing with photoshop
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/101/f/7/fuck_your_bape_hoodie_by_bigel.jpg
fuck your bape hoodies&#33;&#33;

[AbYSS~>]

Originally posted by Striker99@Apr 11 2007, 07:57 PM
Disas those r dece colors and shadowing. cool name too
did u mean decent or did u mean like some bodys style of letters? and thanks.

And to the curve off those edges...that is what i was making my lettering my own is the style but ok yeah ill try it.

Thanks for all the crits..

Whats wrong with my 3d? im way into drawing and art and have never had this problem before and now with letters its diff... oddd.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

dude thats fucking tight bigel

heres something I did for a forum friend

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1325/daixygrafkr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Quigbert]

lake eari- there are stars on the E but not on the rest

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/iesmi.jpg

[Quigbert]

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/graff1.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/iesmi.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

crits on my stuff plz and ty

[flclnaruto1213]

outline your shit in ink

[Bartic]

Quig: I like the letters, need a bit more refining tho in my opinion. I personally think that the 3 shouldn&#39;t overlap the next letter, dive it almost too much depth, but thats up 2 you.

Cyto: Keep it simpler son, the a doesn&#39;t need to be tilted that much. Looks rushed, take your time its only gunna get better if you but ur all into it. straighter lines, sharper, pick a single vanishing pt. for the 3d it looks wack, the bottom of the y needs fixing. atleast you have the simple structure no wildness. Sorry man i feel like i cut you up

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

other then that do you like it?

[shifty!]

bored in biology...never really focused on peices...if thats what you wanna call these...tell me what you think...peace

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/3150/ak047xv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5749/ak048yb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

U got to crit other peoples work before you post your own; frankly I kinda like the first one but you gotta work on letter structure and filling i weird gaps.

btw

What do you think of mine?

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1325/daixygrafkr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bartic]

man crit shit before you post

Shifty: fatten up the letters a bit and get rid of the random bumps, work on your 3d, look at the top of the k your vanishing pts. are in 2 totally different places, and your d looks to bed at the top because of the differen vanishing pts.

Cyto: look above i edited my post to crit you

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Originally posted by Bartic@Apr 11 2007, 10:53 PM


Cyto: Keep it simpler son, the a doesn&#39;t need to be tilted that much. Looks rushed, take your time its only gunna get better if you but ur all into it. straighter lines, sharper, pick a single vanishing pt. for the 3d it looks wack, the bottom of the y needs fixing. atleast you have the simple structure no wildness. Sorry man i feel like i cut you up
ill come back with a better piece and try and follow your crits the best that I can and yeah the 3d was fucked the minute I started to finish but I didnt care and yeah it was rushed

[shifty!]

yeh sorry bout not leaving you feedback, i wanan go to bed, but it looks good, i just dont like the 3D and dont make it tilted.

ok sooo you said i need better letter sturcture, i have no clue what that means. yeh im toy i know, but you wanna just explain what letter structure is to me so i know what to work on? thanks.

[Bartic]

yeah man here somthing a drew up quick to help explain, excuse the d
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7233/helpgt1.png
Edit: yeah shit i just realized missed a line comming off the dot on the i

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

thats exactly what I needed to see, yeah thanks

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 06:21 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/673/dsc0864yw8.jpg

done...just gotta do a background.
bump.

[AnteUp]

sume i actually like it ...wat background u gonna put? o nevr mind ill jus wait n see :P
new names im throwin around...
KRAES
MISTR
hahah i dont kno why but i like mister...lol :lol:

[FuseOne]

Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 11 2007, 11:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 11 2007, 11:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 06:21 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/673/dsc0864yw8.jpg

done...just gotta do a background.
bump. [/b][/quote]
you already know everyone thinks that shits tight hah.
hmmm yea, its nice man. prismacolor markers?

[FuseOne]

Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 11 2007, 10:36 PM
^^what? i was not aware people cleveland are allowed to write? when did this happen? i like it though, a little overkill on the cracks.

playing with photoshop
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/101/f/7/fuck_your_bape_hoodie_by_bigel.jpg
fuck your bape hoodies&#33;&#33;
I love this one&#33; Hahaha were you photoshopping eeyore&#39;s colors in?

[emel]

went to michaels a few days ago and got a shitload of prismas so yeah
yeah i know the i looks like shit and i fucked up with the blue and shit but it looks good from far away haha
sume that is so fuckn awsome man i did that blending thing you posted up about the prismas but i cant do it in a fill very well, could you elaborate a bit?
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/5028/scan00012ul4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[sank one]

i think it be sick if you made the e into a face

directed towards sume.

[EsKoNeR!!]

Originally posted by FuseOne+Apr 12 2007, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FuseOne @ Apr 12 2007, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 11:36 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 06:21 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/673/dsc0864yw8.jpg

done...just gotta do a background.
bump.
you already know everyone thinks that shits tight hah.
hmmm yea, its nice man. prismacolor markers? [/b][/quote]
gotta say. i liked it better,, when the fade out was solid red instead of orange speckled.... jsut my 2

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by FuseOne+Apr 12 2007, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FuseOne @ Apr 12 2007, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 11:36 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 11 2007, 06:21 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/673/dsc0864yw8.jpg

done...just gotta do a background.
bump.
you already know everyone thinks that shits tight hah.
hmmm yea, its nice man. prismacolor markers? [/b][/quote]
Uhhh just to say something different.... nigguh, ur shits weak&#33;

haha just kidding... it&#39;s fucking dopeness to the maxX yeah 2 x&#39;s cuz I am cool like that.

[nase7]

Originally posted by nase7@Apr 11 2007, 08:13 PM
Remo im feelin those simple letters at the bottom of the piece.

The characters quite nice to but not the letters in his mouth.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10c58/1/64/V_TLllyf5T9ruc-sKvR_nQUAoqcUA6qu.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/A_U_yrJ44T8Uuqze4V2eg70Skvo-UFaC?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10dc0/1/35/YatMlIN07j-SIdN8qkV1Z9R7oiFzN4Pb.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/svAfi7b-6T-XOAbIKXNNYomVIQT3p2kh?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e10ece/1/121/YkoTQW4w4D9fYft0D4KM4bM7Q9qryb3N.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/YE_KC6iEuD9NVlTjCxK1bcTgkxRNpbLl?referrer=hlnk)


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e11015/1/51/axQU_3lY4j8674Evtf1nPnO69m_6vOMe.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/aBAyR9s57z9O2BWyzCIE8_AqUPW2hiHY?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e110b0/1/26/hvrYjnWt3D__b3wY_lJx3n5OO1ZYqF6k.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/z5b8llha5T8aZlVzPZQ23-Xm_pzhLaSq?referrer=hlnk)
^^girlfriend outlined and filled for me :D

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006e112dd/1/96/uH7ZFGfq0T-8IkfGf63076oboVPBUavQ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/tirgUzEX1D9zF77ayOlOumDPVVJ82dcN?referrer=hlnk)
Random sticker^^
Sume: Thats solid as ever, dope shit.

Bump.

[dim]

sume i think that might just be the best ive seen from you the drop shadow on it is crazy and i love how the bottom of the "m" is like releasing all of the colour and then i just fades out dope shit man

[chase one]

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/8018/sketches007aa7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tryin a different style crits?? i was quite happy with this one

[[breakout]-azer]

that is good shit there like the outline most but letter structure good 2

[-ShAmEE-]

it is ok. just need to make the K no so widly spread. and i dont like the look o that R. dunno what it is.

[Skesh]

It has potential, but its really sloppy
Your R looks shitty, its to small, you can see it next to the A if you know what I mean
and uhm your K is sloppy
but it has potential, work on it

[AimoOne]

Mark..i dunno..its kinda slppy..and the letters are different sizes..

ugh..working on my new black book..well...its a display book..a black one...there dope...you slide in your work into the pockets..so you can never go wrong and rip out a page..here are sum

http://www.ryman.co.uk/Display-books-76.asp

i reccomend them to you all.. ;)

[shifty!]

wtf does letter structure mean?

[chase one]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 11:32 AM
wtf does letter structure mean?
well now i wouldnt say i&#39;m a genius by any means but im pretty sure it means the structure of your letters......just a guess now dont hold me to it

[shifty!]

yeh i guessed the same thing, but i dont know what to do when people say "you need to work on your letter structure"
i think it would just help a lot when im trying to get better if i knew what that meant. thanks

[molotow_15]

:lol:


anyway where the fuck did niccsacc get 2 ?

[garbage down tha way]

Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 11 2007, 10:36 PM
^^what? i was not aware people cleveland are allowed to write? when did this happen? i like it though, a little overkill on the cracks.


haha yeah theres a few good writers. hek and prae are up most.





Edit: i like how you photoshopped colors in, but then the black is just with marker by hand. something about that mixture gets my attention

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by chase one+Apr 12 2007, 04:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (chase one @ Apr 12 2007, 04:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 11:32 AM
wtf does letter structure mean?
well now i wouldnt say i&#39;m a genius by any means but im pretty sure it means the structure of your letters......just a guess now dont hold me to it [/b][/quote]
i wondered this...for ages...but then it was down to common scence...i felt a tit

letter structure is how you letter is built up...using bars...like a constructing a building...you build up your letters using the bars..good use of bars equals good use of letter structure...thus meaning...good grasp on the basic knowledge of a letter...thus the importance of simples...becuz its easiest to build a letter thru a simple block letter...

take this M for an example

good structure..

( lines represent bars )

|&#092;/|

bad structure..

&#092;&#092;/|

that would be bad structure..i would do a sketch...but i cannot be bothered..

its simple...

so basically...bad use of bars..equals..bad use of structure..


:ph34r:

[WolfBurrns]

Good shit Aimo. Good way to exlain that.

New shit I did last night. I tried some differant things.. Differant kind of style and I tried blending. Crits would be great.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/soleblend.jpg

Edit: O&#39;s are really starting to piss me off........

[chase one]

looks a little messy not bad like the fill dont like the o however

[chase one]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5066/sketches008aj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just an outline not finished crits??

[krazzie_ammo]

SOZE - try extending the top bit of the Z :)

MARK - looks good, but the R is too hidden.

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5062/119gj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
woot.
crits?

[Seti]

mapk? or mark? cant realy read it, but the shapes of the letters are aight, just try drawin a dot and creatin 3d to it...if yaget me??? also dont no wat that shit goin behind the back of the a an m are, id aadd as little as possibe untill u got an overall flow goin, play with curves m8.... this sez RACE, was lastnights madness, its red blue an white jus like the union jack....but as british we are all races, all imagrants....coments welcome...its a3 an i only got a a4 scanner so its into bits. oye an the writin in the bottom bit sez insane...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/race.jpg

[WolfBurrns]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Apr 12 2007, 01:04 PM
SOZE - try extending the top bit of the Z :)

MARK - looks good, but the R is too hidden.

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5062/119gj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
woot.
crits?
It&#39;s an L. Yeah, I know in my tag it looks like a Z but I like having the little tail on top. Bad habit.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

does that say Kready? I really like it, good use of a colored pencil

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8545/kresstyle1hc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

trying to get perspective down, didnt focus to much on letter structure

[AimoOne]

Chse...That is an bad example of letter structure...you should go to simples..
Krazzie...i fucking love that style..you write ready now ?

ugh...the simple i did yesterday..with sum tweaks...its sloppy as shit also

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3333333.jpg

crits..

thanks ;)

[-ShAmEE-]

looking GOOD&#33; captain. like the fills. but purple it look good. but not very army like. ARMY TNG.UK&#33;

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 11:32 AM
wtf does letter structure mean?
*sigh.

<_<

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

what about mine?

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 12 2007, 07:53 PM
Chse...That is an bad example of letter structure...you should go to simples..
Krazzie...i fucking love that style..you write ready now ?

ugh...the simple i did yesterday..with sum tweaks...its sloppy as shit also

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3333333.jpg

crits..

thanks ;)
bump..

Sume..i fort the same..

Cyto...its kinda whack..go back to simples..you shunt be concentrating on perspective yet..

im just telling you what Alive used to tell me &#33;&#33;&#33; ;)

and why the FUCK is BS SOOO SLOW TONIGHT :( <_< :angry:

[-ShAmEE-]

lol. pink army>??...nice fills though. rock on. TNG.UK army

[RustyBurrito]

mtdjtjhdhtd

[-ShAmEE-]

lol. pink army>??...nice fills though. rock on. TNG.UK army

[dim]

aimt i rele like the barb wire goin threw the peice and that character is crazy

[tasty]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo28.jpg

rusty burrito - decent throwie .. i think yu hsould round that top of them m though

amioone - love it lol

[Murder817Worth]

Tastey-Da coloring sux&#33; Well dats what i think

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/newskool.jpg

new one. and wacked the star in becuz i fuckin did a shit R.

[popshots]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5760/nerm6av4.jpg
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/4673/nerm7ja0.jpg
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8821/nerm8bc4.jpg
crits...
Tasty: jus keep workin on your structure and if u do those lines ,ake them all the same angle
Rusty burriti: have the general idea so now jus keep practicen that but try to change it a little each time then eventually itll be ill.... and work on your droped shadow
Aimt: i love the characters and i like the choice of colors

[AnteUp]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/grillll.jpg
CRITS i had "fuck skool" on his grill until mah teach got pissed "drew in class so now it says stay in skool&#33;&#33;lol :lol: crits please

aimt- badass
rusty- ur friend did a gud throwie
tasty-nice simple
popshots-like the top one

[popshots]

ante up: fix the nose

[Chulo]

popshots: fix up ya lettering, the form is good, but it&#39;s hard to read
Ante: feelin that, just shape up tha nose like shots said

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/newpicz.jpg

[Sumoe]

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/5793/dsc0837mq3.jpg

1st attempt at 3D...

AIMT-the character is decent, not feelin&#39; the letters too much though.

[-ShAmEE-]

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 12 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/newskool.jpg

new one. and wacked the star in becuz i fuckin did a shit R.
chulo - stick to simples.

sumo. yeh that is a good start. just need to look atr other 3D for more understanding on the style of how it looks.
it abit like graphic design.perspective drawing.

BUMP>BUMP>BUMP

[TricksForKids]

aimo, not bad man, but you still gotta work on your letters, stop joining them all and quit fucking with colours so hard, get those letters down solidly,but i suppose the army themes half decent

rusty/rawr, keep that throwie uop, tweak it a bit here and there, and make sure to keep it straight and leveled


tasty, nice simple, keep rocking em :D

sumo that shits hot man, im not feelin the two little blocks coming out on the top and middle, but i think its just cuz theyre a bit shaky compared to the rest, fuck i gotta learn how to colour like you

chulo, stick with straight, clean letters

and shamee, use your own advice, and make those letters fatter, look like strands of spaghetti

and in the spirit of liquor and animal sex, heres a throwup:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5315/fuckabeatqk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alive]

dope dope&#33; stay around guys and ima post up shit. and write in more crits. sumoe and tricks + ras especially, n ne1 else around that i would want. lol. u know hu u r.


bsc.

[Sumoe]

nice shit tricks.


Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jun 15 2005, 08:27 AM
http://img215.echo.cx/img215/4159/kioskredyellow2uh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

saw this on the first page, kinda cool to see how bad you were before and how much you&#39;ve improved.

[AimoOne]

Tricks..

uugh..

damn..that W..is like..freaky nice..

...

Shame..kinda sloppy mate...make it fatter..like..wanye rooney...fat like that
Sume..thats a fresh 3d style man..i like it..thhe addons are iffy tho..wuth a new style..shunt you start it simple..anyways..its gunna look fresh like an egg outta the golden rooster

ugh..sum simple i found smelling in my book..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3.jpg

crits..oh..and its unfinished..and doesnt look like itll get finished..and its uncleany..i hate uncleany

[dim]

looks rele nice aimo but your missing the three dee on the bottom leg of the M other then that its sick

[alive]

yo kids. haha ras i saw that a page or 2 back, "what alive told me" lol. i like that simple, but the T shoulda curved out not in to balance it better.

tricks ur dope. sumoe ur dope. shamee reminds me of sky5. put in more curvessssss.

heres todays shit and my first sketch post here ever. ive been trying to add more extensions n shit. the camit is a prep sketch for the next TOY BATTLE THAT YOU SHOULD ALL JOIN.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03126.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03124.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03125.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03123.jpg

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9500/07110517445mt.jpg



peace.

[KAL]

chase- try n keep you letters proportianate, but other than that keep doing ya thing.
sumone- def something i couldnt do
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1943/bs3zo4.jpg

first time attempting to get down with markers.
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9217/bs4lb8.jpg

any crits to help improve would be ill

[dim]

on that second on dont do those blocks after the K and the L

[-ShAmEE-]

some of that fill looks like gel pens~??". and star with simple fills. one color. den 2 den some bubbles and fadouts.

[alive]

he shouldnt be doing fills. or using color. or 3d. or backgrounds. or extensions. or addons.


wanna get good?

FOCUS ON THE GODDAMN LETTERS.

[TricksForKids]

hahahha sume, i thought that sketch was the SHIT, it was for that kiosk battle remember? ( the dopest sketch battle ever held on BS, everrrryone showed up for it, entries were fucking sick ), damn i thought i was the man lol

alive i like the C and the A, the E&#39;s ok, and ditch that orange alive sketch...yikes homie;), good looks though, i love watching you improve

[BohemianBastard]

alive old boy, are we still down for teh exchange?

[KAL]

Originally posted by alive@Apr 12 2007, 05:56 PM
he shouldnt be doing fills. or using color. or 3d. or backgrounds. or extensions. or addons.


wanna get good?

FOCUS ON THE GODDAMN LETTERS.
can i at leats try shadows? :(

[alive]

you CAN do whatever the fuck u want. at your stage its pointless is all im saying. i mean, i suppose if u want to do that just to learn how to do that tho thats ok.

the thing i dont want u to do is to hide wack letters behind all that shit. good writers can rock letters hard in black and white with nothing.

[AimoOne]

i feel like iv been down this road of crits before.. ;) :lol:

[-ShAmEE-]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 12 2007, 05:34 PM
aimo, not bad man, but you still gotta work on your letters, stop joining them all and quit fucking with colours so hard, get those letters down solidly,but i suppose the army themes half decent

rusty/rawr, keep that throwie uop, tweak it a bit here and there, and make sure to keep it straight and leveled


tasty, nice simple, keep rocking em :D

sumo that shits hot man, im not feelin the two little blocks coming out on the top and middle, but i think its just cuz theyre a bit shaky compared to the rest, fuck i gotta learn how to colour like you

chulo, stick with straight, clean letters

and shamee, use your own advice, and make those letters fatter, look like strands of spaghetti

and in the spirit of liquor and animal sex, heres a throwup:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5315/fuckabeatqk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what part of ma own advise do i need to take?

[KAL]

na i get wut ur sayin n thats exaclty why i do 3d.

[BohemianBastard]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Apr 13 2007, 12:15 AM
alive old boy, are we still down for teh exchange?
boh boh

[alive]

word ur back&#33; mse got banned right? yeahh. ensy yes?

[BohemianBastard]

enser, ensr, ensah, enzeru
whatever the fuck you want to do


and yes, mse is finally banned :(

[Bastardo]

get ready for that eurostyle funk.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4073/picture090fw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/161/picture095oc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5301/picture093pw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9356/picture048og2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Brain Dead Gang 07

[AteskOne]

why&#39;d you get banned?

busy day at school today, sketchwise that is. here&#39;s a whole shit storm of 10 minute characters done throughout the day.
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/904/scan0004rd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
these are all kind of light...my scanner sucks. says "I have my own demons to worry about...dont feed me yours"
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7817/scan0005oy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dont ask about the star lol.
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/918/scan0006hr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
random
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5959/scan0007dp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i hold grudges <_< ...fucking dickhead.
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/674/scan0008xe1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
because i can...that&#39;s why&#33;&#33;&#33;

crits n-words :D

[-ShAmEE-]

why he get banned?

[Hazex]

bastardo its all good except for the fill-in can be confusing some times :blink:

quick simple sketch`

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2180/gfdgfdbk0.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[dizzle_d]

Tricks- That throw is fire yo&#33;
wordd
Haze- I can see your workin with bars like me. good shit man&#33; keep it up
alright I need help with what I should do with this P and this S. I&#39;ve been workin with bars and this is what I got, just somethin I did in school today. Crits on what I should do with the letters or whatever would be appreciated.
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1651/img1537un1.jpg
thanks

[BohemianBastard]

cause he was black&#33;


http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7817/scan0005oy6.jpg

i lolled :)


bastardo, do you repost your shizzle constantly?

[Bastardo]

ive posted them before? :huh:

[AimoOne]

ugh..shit..tone that shit down dizzle..nd i rekon you got sum funky letters under all that..

Bastardo..dope euros...would look smart as fuck on a copenhagen train..you gunna go and paint in copenhagen... ;) :lol: <_<

ugh..sum freestyle shit

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/Picture-1.jpg

crits..thanks..

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060748.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/Picture-1.jpg nice. for just in a pen. still can&#39;t find a pencil&#33;....what that tagg about?...

[AnteUp]

dizzle and brain dead luv it

aimo and atesk...already critted in tot charaks :)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/grill.jpg
crits please :) fixed tha nose...

edit: like i said i did this in skool, shud i put in pen?

[BohemianBastard]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 13 2007, 12:56 AM
ive posted them before? :huh:
probably just me then

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 12 2007, 11:56 PM
ugh..shit..tone that shit down dizzle..nd i rekon you got sum funky letters under all that..

Bastardo..dope euros...would look smart as fuck on a copenhagen train..you gunna go and paint in copenhagen... ;) :lol: <_<

ugh..sum freestyle shit

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/Picture-1.jpg

crits..thanks..
every time i post..it goes to the next page :angry:


ante..kinda kool..fix the hat thoo..its looks like a chefs hat..i like the expression too
striker..go to blocks..use bars..like the sketch iv just posted...okay...and dont do like 50 forcefeilds aound everyletter...you only need a forcefeild around the actual peice..GO TO BLOCK LETTERS LIKE ON YOUR KEYBOARD..

[shifty!]

Ante up-i would fix his hat and eyes...heres something i just pulled out of my ass.
Aimno-i like it, nothing really i can say cause i dont know to much...but it looks good
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/4555/ak049dl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Apr 12 2007, 05:47 PM
yo kids. haha ras i saw that a page or 2 back, "what alive told me" lol. i like that simple, but the T shoulda curved out not in to balance it better.

tricks ur dope. sumoe ur dope. shamee reminds me of sky5. put in more curvessssss.

heres todays shit and my first sketch post here ever. ive been trying to add more extensions n shit. the camit is a prep sketch for the next TOY BATTLE THAT YOU SHOULD ALL JOIN.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03126.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03124.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03125.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03123.jpg

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9500/07110517445mt.jpg



peace.
bump

[dizzle_d]

Aimt I love that pen sketch

Anteup looks good but I think the hats tilted to the right.. damn I don&#39;t know man ....I&#39;m mad fucked up...
shit.

Alive the first three are ill

[Kush]

:blink:
WHtcha ThInk


http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g17/futbalplaya247/Sketch.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

alive. bottom one bin. others. sick love ur style.&#33;

[shifty!]

alive-ilike every one ecept the &#39;alive&#39;...

crits on mine please?

[-ShAmEE-]

Originally posted by Kush@Apr 12 2007, 07:12 PM
:blink:
WHtcha ThInk


http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g17/futbalplaya247/Sketch.jpg
DUDE

SIMPLE BLOCKED LETTERS LIKE THE ONE ON UR KEYBOARD&#33;

dont do fills yet, u gonna waste ink. just consentrate on letter structure.

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 07:08 PM
Ante up-i would fix his hat and eyes...heres something i just pulled out of my ass.
Aimno-i like it, nothing really i can say cause i dont know to much...but it looks good
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/4555/ak049dl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeh crits?

[ras]

Yos Itz Ras...Wandin Sum Critsz oN dESE

http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3674/dsc003435xn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/4710/dsc003458he.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img330.imageshack.us/img330/3438/dsc003468qf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Yo PeAcEe

[-ShAmEE-]

yo ras where u bin long time no chatt&#33;...mate SIMPLE&#33;, LIKE THE ONE ON UR KEYBOARD.

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060750.jpg

[AimoOne]

FUCK ME RAS..YOUR SHIT IS BAAAAD...SERIOUSLY TOY..YOU SHUD QUITE...DO SIMPLES LIKE THE ONES I POSTED YOU FUCKING TERD..I WANNA BATTLE YOUR YOUR TAHT TOY &#33; :lol:

you make me sick...you fuckiong herb

BATTLE ME RAS

[dizzle_d]

shifty looks good
ras I like the homer... and thats it.

Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 12 2007, 06:53 PM
alright I need help with what I should do with this P and this S. I&#39;ve been workin with bars and this is what I got, just somethin I did in school today. Crits on what I should do with the letters or whatever would be appreciated.
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1651/img1537un1.jpg
thanks
bump, I didn&#39;t get many critsss

[dizzle_d]

me?

[AimoOne]

yeah..sorry..im kinda bored..

i critted you Dizzle to the wizzle

[shamee1991]

just got off ma suspension. man it was long. latest sketch.


http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/16-1.jpg

[dizzle_d]

word I know
but I didn&#39;t get much on whats bad and whats good.
thanks for the crit Aimt
B)

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 07:21 PM

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/4555/ak049dl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeh crits? [/quote]
didnt get anything back for this...

[Hazex]

-shamee its all good but maybe just keep your letter the same heigh
-shifty that pretty good simple letters take of the little thing at the top of the A
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8638/xvcxvcxvcxvcov6.png (http://imageshack.us)

I know my two A are fuked but neway crits?

[-ShAmEE-]

bit of a copy. wid the one thing, form sumeone.

[alive]

haha, u think he just thought of that?

[Sumoe]

:lol:

[AimoOne]

Do you realise..that you only put a ONE , 1 next to your name if you the only ONE to write that name ?...i know millions of AK&#39;s past and present..get that ONE outta there..you aint no ONE..maybe 400..

[-ShAmEE-]

kk. well. ma bad&#33;...neva seen another graffer who has one init apart form sumone. so everytime i see it i&#39;m gonna think of him. sounds gay i kno.

[Kush]

:blink:
WHtcha ThInk
FEEDBACK PLEEZ :blink:

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g17/futbalplaya247/Sketch.jpg

[alive]

simples. . . . new 2 graff thread. lose the color. lose the crown. fuck. lose it all. blocks&#33;

[zale]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010210.jpg

kush although this advice is rather overused, it helped me out. you need to do simples especially if your a beginner, a month of simples was enough to get me to where i wanna be.

[Hazex]

Originally posted by Hazex@Apr 12 2007, 07:33 PM
-shamee its all good but maybe just keep your letter the same heigh
-shifty that pretty good simple letters take of the little thing at the top of the A
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8638/xvcxvcxvcxvcov6.png (http://imageshack.us)

I know my two A are fuked but neway crits?
bump no crits :( and yea kush go back to simple bloc letters

[AimoOne]

Haex..good to see you sing bars...but keep em stright
Alive..you makeme laugh with your crits..aha
Zale..wow...you hard bastard..you drew on a doller note w.e it is...how hard..
WASTE OF FUCKING MONEY..WHYYY

anyways...my B-book cover

front

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/333333333333333333.jpg

inside front

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3333333333333333.jpg

inside back

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/333333333.jpg

back

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/3333333333.jpg

wouldnt mind some crits on them..thanks..ima add more soon ;)

[Hazex]

ahhh ncie bbook stikers and when u talk bout strigh line u mean really squares letters?

[alive]

that aimt, though not without flaw, is the best ive ever seen from u.

[neza]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 12 2007, 07:56 PM

Zale..wow...you hard bastard..you drew on a doller note w.e it is...how hard..
WASTE OF FUCKING MONEY..WHYYY


ive written my name on money before and have spent it just another way of getting up i spose coz it gets give to customers as change then they spend it and the cycle continues

although when i did it it wernt that obvious

[zale]

aimo good shit, but why irrelevantly crit me for writing on a dollar bill? waste of a dollar? i spent it the next day and i dont doubt that by now its been through and seen by various people, who knows it might even be out of state by now.

[morg]

morg.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP0989.jpg

and I KNOW THIS GOES IN STICKERS but i wanted to post it her because im too lazy to switch forums. my school is cracking down on people who are tagging and luckily i havent gotten caught yet. i made this to harrass them a little bit:

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP0986.jpg

[AimoOne]

oh my gosh..you are seriously gay ^

TRY ND STOP THE MORGSTAH

<_<

And Zale..i just think its dumb writing on money..unless your fucking dope..then yeah..and whut..you can actually spend money you wrote on in the states..?..uuugh..shi..the USA sure loves is money..fuck...you get locked up for drawin on the queens head here... :blink:

[alive]

people who are WRITING.


say "WRITING WRITING WRITING"

[AimoOne]

wha you onabout Alive :blink:

[morg]

sorry.
writing.

[zale]

unless im repetatively spending pieced cash at the same place i dont think i have any more to worry about then the next person who spends that dollar. 2/3rds of the us currency in circulation is in foreign countrys, thats how widespread that dollar is.

[shifty!]

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7222/ak050yy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alive]

ras i was talking abt morg&#39;s post. read it carefully. hes all like "theyre craking down all the taggers, that r tagging all around."


fuck that.



zale, ur safe, ur just wack. keep in notebooks for now. sry

[Striker99]

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060751.jpg

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 12 2007, 06:50 PM
get ready for that eurostyle funk.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4073/picture090fw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/161/picture095oc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5301/picture093pw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9356/picture048og2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Brain Dead Gang 07
Bump, you kids must be blind for not sayin wuttup to these sketches again, hot shit you bastard, keep up the euro funk, your Handstyle needs a little more and or less funkiness though :D

[AimoOne]

Quit being an idiot ras

[morg]

ok. once again.
sorry i used the wrong word.
lets make a big deal about it.
and its not all writing.
its slaps too.

[fredom-writer]

ill just giva advice to everyone.
pen sketches help alot. cause there like when your doing your first out line painting.... plus they show how good you are w/o erasing. pluz there quick. get like 10 peices done in one class period...

New ish. plz tell me better???
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/7692/img2279rk0.jpg

[dim]

sick man i rele like that

[Hazex]

Originally posted by Striker99@Apr 12 2007, 08:22 PM
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060751.jpg
dude in all your post you never give crits to others...but you dotn ask for some...so but ill tell to you to so simple keyboards letters...

[Sumoe]

my favortie green ran out...I&#39;m so pissed :angry:

and I wasted it on this shitty 3D shizzle... :(

remember it&#39;s my first attempt so don&#39;t hate too much, lol, actually I don&#39;t care, hate as much as you want.

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8996/dsc0846fz9.jpg

half-assed "S", "U" and "E". <_<

[zale]

Sekr. just because their rounded/bubbles doesnt mean you cant construct them outta blocks. thats what id be doin if i were you. id also learn 3d or shadow.

[dim]

holy shit sume goin 3d

[Kush]

FEEDBACK PleEz&#33; :blink:

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g17/futbalplaya247/Sketch2.jpg

[dizzle_d]

Sume&#33; your amazing man

that 3d shit is ill&#33;
damn

[Sumoe]

just tryin&#39; something different, bored with the whole "flat" stuff I been doing lately...don&#39;t worry lol I&#39;ll still be doin&#39; normal shit.

kush-listen to everybody else, who&#39;s gunna tell you the same thing.

[alive]

same thing = go simple, lose all that shit, lose the fuckin arrow, haha, n check the new 2 graff thread



peace all, sume ur dope, im going to beddd

[Kush]

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g17/futbalplaya247/Sketch.jpg


AND WHT WUD THAT BE?

[dim]

kush no arrows no ink no connections no bits no 3d trust me write kush like how its looks on your key board stright and simple and once you get good at that you start adding shit in trust thats how you star graffiti

[alive]

i alrdy fuckin told u kush. gnight.

[Hazex]

lol kush alot of ppl all ready told you what to do lisend to them they know what there talking about&#33;

[Kush]

man im gettin pretty basic whtelse u want

[dim]

not pretty basic just plain BASIC

[Stim]

write the word kush with a pencil like you see the letters on your computer keyboard 100 times as cleanly as you can.

[KAL]

THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD IS IN THE TOP OF THE TOY SECTION LOOK FOR IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
kush 4 real listen to what everybody is tellin u, start S-I-M-P-L-E trust me man itll help.
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/579/simples5yy1.jpg

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 12 2007, 08:21 PM
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7222/ak050yy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumppp bitchesss

[Rigon]

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/6949/picture003og3.jpghttp://img265.imageshack.us/img265/3134/picture001gi9.jpg

[Bastardo]

Shifty&#33; - Take off those weird bits.
Rigon - Nice R on the throw up. take the square bit off the i n round it.
look at ghost from nycs G on his throw its the basis of basically any throw up G.


http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/5973/picture096qm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Hot off the press.
Brain dead gang 07