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>BERG<
04-14-2007, 02:43 PM
back to simplys kind off
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/4672/photo83tl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 02:51 PM
True Shame..but non the less..iv seen better from you Uuuuuuuuh Babay
Mesn..that simple..is like..clean..clean..clean..x3..
Berg..okay simple..just keep em the same size..widths..and dont do 3d..yet

Pen Storyz Vol 2.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/55.jpg

Crits..

uhhh
04-14-2007, 02:54 PM
everyone keeps saying theyve "seen better"
and i cant seem to do stuff that i used to.
whatever,
itll be a while before i paint a piece,
so it doesntm atter much.
and i have a decent simple style i could paitn aswell.
because when it comes down to it,
painting is what matters,
stuff in your blackbook isnt anythinggg.

>BERG<
04-14-2007, 02:55 PM
do you think i should ink it without the 3d

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 03:00 PM
Aimt thats fresh as hell man

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:01 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Apr 14 2007, 01:42 PM
tone it down a little and itll actualy be opretty nice.
unless the shitty quality is really hiding some stuff.

soo,
i dont draw that much anymore,
ive just gotten into not ever drawing,
and doing tags wherever i go.
hah.

anyyyways,
heres a piece and throw,
says relk,
i miiight change my name.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-004S-1.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-005S-1.jpg
i know the throws messed up in a few places,
but i didnt feel like wasting anymore paper.
on the first one...

without the extra extension on the bottom of the "E" it would be butta
skinny up the bottom of the "L" and work on the "R" and "K" too.

throwie&#39;s dope though.

Mr Tasty
04-14-2007, 03:01 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;+Apr 14 2007, 02:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (&#045;ShAmEE&#045; &#064; Apr 14 2007, 02:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mr Tasty@Apr 14 2007, 01:43 PM
bottom one looks dope...top 1 is whack
oh yes this is great advise this is gonna help him improve his lettering.

TWAT. [/b][/quote]
he wasnt asking for advice u TWAT

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:03 PM
stop arguin&#39; kiddies...

C3ZR ONE
04-14-2007, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 14 2007, 03:03 PM
stop arguin&#39; kiddies...
Seconded.

This is flicks and crits. Flicks and crits. No arguing. Aimo, ughh, shamee and Tasty, all good chaps, but Taste got his shit locked down in full. Don&#39;t run him off by runnin mouths.

BohemianBastard
04-14-2007, 03:11 PM
i wish i was a mod

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 03:12 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 14 2007, 07:51 PM
True Shame..but non the less..iv seen better from you Uuuuuuuuh Babay
Mesn..that simple..is like..clean..clean..clean..x3..
Berg..okay simple..just keep em the same size..widths..and dont do 3d..yet

Pen Storyz Vol 2.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/55.jpg

Crits..
Bump..overlooked by arguing i suppose.. :angry: :lol:

Cezr called me a " Decent Lad.." Whao..:wub:

Yeah..Tasty Handys Are Tasty
Wings..no .. you shudlne ink it....
Bohemian..would you want to be a mod so when you get banned you can un-ban yourself..are you able to do that...or would you want to ban me :)

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:15 PM
to tell you the truth AIMT...

I really would like to see you change your name, I dunno. It&#39;s either you aren&#39;t good or the letters are stopping you from progressing, because your letters haven&#39;t been progressing too much, and I still don&#39;t like your letters, not even your simples. You got better at characters, coloring etc. But what you haven&#39;t progressed in is the most crucial part of graffiti. Keep practicing, do what you will but I think it would be a good move to change your name

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 03:18 PM
i aint changing my name again.. :( ..you was the one who told me to right Aimo etc.

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:20 PM
okay, but you need to do something because your simples still have problems, I just can&#39;t point them out quite yet.

Jank
04-14-2007, 03:23 PM
i reckon aimo is on the right lines exactly. he&#39;s clearly got a decent level of skill, as u can see from the doodles around taht piece above. i personally like his simples, tho that last T is a bit off... i peresonally say keep going. tho obviously to be fair sume knows more than me&#33;&#33;

ah well. either way keep sketching as much as u are. it&#39;ll come bro

BohemianBastard
04-14-2007, 03:28 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 14 2007, 09:15 PM
But what you haven&#39;t progressed in is the most crucial part of graffiti.
i agree, the most crucial part being his handstyles

00-made-00
04-14-2007, 03:28 PM
i think the letters dont have that good of a flow to them.i like it tho.

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 03:29 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Apr 14 2007, 03:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne @ Apr 14 2007, 03:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Apr 14 2007, 07:51 PM
True Shame..but non the less..iv seen better from you Uuuuuuuuh Babay
Mesn..that simple..is like..clean..clean..clean..x3..
Berg..okay simple..just keep em the same size..widths..and dont do 3d..yet

Pen Storyz Vol 2.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/55.jpg

Crits..
Bump..overlooked by arguing i suppose.. :angry: :lol:

Cezr called me a " Decent Lad.." Whao..:wub:

Yeah..Tasty Handys Are Tasty
Wings..no .. you shudlne ink it....
Bohemian..would you want to be a mod so when you get banned you can un-ban yourself..are you able to do that...or would you want to ban me :) [/b][/quote]
yeh loving the BLUEPRINTS&#33;&#33;. yeh u herd blue prints, ras u do them straight from pen our pencil first? change ur name to muffin. yh the muffin man.

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 14 2007, 03:23 PM
i reckon aimo is on the right lines exactly. he&#39;s clearly got a decent level of skill, as u can see from the doodles around taht piece above. i personally like his simples, tho that last T is a bit off... i peresonally say keep going. tho obviously to be fair sume knows more than me&#33;&#33;

ah well. either way keep sketching as much as u are. it&#39;ll come bro
maybe it&#39;s me than... :lol:

ha, I&#39;m prolly just bein&#39; hard on ya AIMT, but it&#39;s good to have a good kick in the ass from time to time...

Bohemian- I was thinkin&#39; lettering in general, but yea his handstyles haven&#39;t got a whole lot better, but mine aren&#39;t that great either. :(

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 03:33 PM
it sokay Sume..i remember when i used to get a kick in the ass daily..aha..and thanks Jank...but Bohemian admitted to me he has a high opinion on ALL graff...so if he likes you graff..you fucking awesome.. :P

Mr Tasty
04-14-2007, 03:33 PM
new sketch...never tried this style before..ever

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/wild.jpg

i know its abit hard to see cos of the quality...

crits?

uhhh
04-14-2007, 03:33 PM
dont worry.
not many people here (in the toy forum, refering to people who post a lot, probably doesnt include you, so dont say nothing)
are good at handiess.
cezr&#39;s tight,
but i havent seen a new letter outta him since ive been here.

rayseone
04-14-2007, 03:34 PM
ahh im getting bored of the same letters over and over agian, whos up for an exchange?

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 03:36 PM
ive done simples for about almost an hour now...whats next??

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:37 PM
do em&#39; for another 7 months, than ask that question again...you weren&#39;t bein&#39; serious though right?

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by Mr Tasty@Apr 14 2007, 03:33 PM
new sketch...never tried this style before..ever

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/wild.jpg

i know its abit hard to see cos of the quality...

crits?
:)

React!
04-14-2007, 03:38 PM
lol things dont come that easy my dude u gotta keep workin on it trust me it works..

and wa does that say cant even read cuz quality buh shit looks tight though

rayseone
04-14-2007, 03:39 PM
trust me, youll need to do them alot longer than an hour, atleast weeks if not months, it would help also if you posted a flick sowe could see where you are at wit simples then we can help you more

Jank
04-14-2007, 03:40 PM
rays im on. i write antie. wt u write?

tasty like the look of it. still cant make much out tho&#33;

rayseone
04-14-2007, 03:42 PM
sounds good i write seyar, ill prolli have it up later on today or tomorow

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 03:45 PM
REACT CHECK THE PROGRESSION THREAD..I DID IT JUST FOR YOU &#33; :lol:

Mr Tasty
04-14-2007, 03:46 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 14 2007, 03:40 PM
rays im on. i write antie. wt u write?

tasty like the look of it. still cant make much out tho&#33;
ok plugged in my scanner...
this is the first time ive done this but im gonna sketch it acople more times and make it better(OMG JUST RELISED...HAHA ignore tht gay loop around the 2nd T...GAYY)

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/wildy.jpg



...oh and i rescanned the other one too
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/ste1234.jpg

Ekers.Two.Two
04-14-2007, 03:55 PM
is pest taken ?

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 03:57 PM
top one lookin sick. botom one has i nice E. flamign hot.

14nick
04-14-2007, 03:58 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 14 2007, 03:37 PM
do em&#39; for another 7 months, than ask that question again...you weren&#39;t bein&#39; serious though right?
Lmao. love it.

yea.. ur not guna do simples for an hour and all the sudden be doin other shit. <_<


i started at the begging of march and im still doing bars and such. but i suck at it..

anywaiz dont just say ur doin them. you can practice all you want but if ur doing them wrong it wont help at all... post flicks . get crits. work on it for a while then re-post ;)

React!
04-14-2007, 03:59 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 14 2007, 03:45 PM
REACT CHECK THE PROGRESSION THREAD..I DID IT JUST FOR YOU &#33; :lol:
WORD :) ima go chack right now

Jank
04-14-2007, 04:02 PM
tasty i love ur style. on the first one it all looks a little cramped. i dont mean space it all out altogether cos u&#39;d obviously lose ur style altogether, but maybe space it out a tiny bit, and whip on a small drop shadow to make the letters pop. nice tho mate

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 04:04 PM
LOL i aint knoo, i just got boredd doin it so i thought i wus missin sumthin i wus suppose to dooo but heres some pics of some simplez i been messin around with


http://i19.tinypic.com/4gyv63c.jpg

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 04:06 PM
ugh..i dunno SickSkillz..
Tasty..check your PM box &#33;

14nick
04-14-2007, 04:06 PM
most of ur letters are horrible. like the H ? whats up with that? and the Q. and the bottom right i cant even tell what it is. and the R is horrible :):)

but keep practicing :D:D..

use a ruler maybe? . helps .

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 04:07 PM
thanks for the help&#33;...lol i never even thought to use a ruler

Hazex
04-14-2007, 04:18 PM
one simple sketch and a throwie

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7752/dsc00016lw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/4263/dsc00018mi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits and comment that could help?

React!
04-14-2007, 04:20 PM
^ Gettin better keep at it kid & Sick juss work on the letter that are gonna be in your name juss for now so u can masta it keep at it though

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 04:22 PM
React&#33;-post some shit, I wanna see it, maybe we could help you get better.

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 04:26 PM
yeh u tell them&#33;....this is the reason y he is a mod.

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 04:35 PM
this is going to go on and on.. :P lool..

Rheal..keep up those simples..just remember to use bars to construct letters..

oh shit...who thinks this sound ace...RHEACT...sound mint.. <_< ahha

Chulo
04-14-2007, 04:35 PM
see, hazex understands the meaning of simples

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/bekz.jpg

Jank
04-14-2007, 04:46 PM
for seyar exchange. yes i realise it all went horribly horribly wrong towards the end, but i cudnt care less.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/seyarexchange.jpg


and will u lot stop fighting and whinging and bitching&#33;?if noone comments on ur shit then do anotyher one and post that rather than bumping stuff hundreds of times. dont bump ur own shit for no reason&#33;

Chulo
04-14-2007, 04:50 PM
Jank , i like the way that the &#39;e&#39; and the &#39;y&#39; come together , make the &#39;a&#39; straighter, thats bout it

Chulo
04-14-2007, 04:55 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/tags.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 14 2007, 04:46 PM
for seyar exchange. yes i realise it all went horribly horribly wrong towards the end, but i cudnt care less.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/seyarexchange.jpg


and will u lot stop fighting and whinging and bitching&#33;?if noone comments on ur shit then do anotyher one and post that rather than bumping stuff hundreds of times. dont bump ur own shit for no reason&#33;
no.no.no. that conection is bad, bad i tell ya&#33;.

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 05:06 PM
me 2. creativity.

sketch from a little bit back. (speaking of peices with 2 many arrows)

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_01221.jpg

trying to come up wit a character

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_01231.jpg

potential throwup for 2nd name

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_01241.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 05:08 PM
loose the arrows. and dont have random addons

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 05:42 PM
for shame...he wined for an S..im shit at S&#39;s...:(

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/555555.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 05:51 PM
i will let it slide. for this time.&#33;..didnt even get a karak&#33;...

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 05:58 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/Untitled-1-2.jpg

Pantalones.
04-14-2007, 06:04 PM
crits anyone?


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y268/JonnyWaffelz/sketchsharp.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y268/JonnyWaffelz/sketchtoon.jpg

sorry for the blurr guys <_<

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 06:10 PM
it looked good to me through the blur..

toy battle entry. and suggestions before i ink

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_01281.jpg

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 06:18 PM
Depro..the connection thru all the letters doesnt look right..as the A is off balance..
Shameee...looks dope..but you wrote Amit..aha

ugh..some midnight shit..after i got it down..when it came to finalising it..i couldnt be bothered at all &#33;..hence the slopyness

Pen Storyz Vol3.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/5555555.jpg

Crits..

Hazex
04-14-2007, 06:23 PM
depro:i agree with aimt dont connect your letters
aimt: i really like your simple with the blue pens and your characs are so nice&#33;

simple sketch less simple that the last simple sketch :blink:

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/669/picture005ux1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fuked up the l ...

comment on what to do beter?

rayseone
04-14-2007, 06:56 PM
rheal- make the horizontal bar of the h straight, dont bend the main bar in the e yet because it doesnt fit with the peice(non of the other bars are bent) make the top of the a straight keep the bottom bar of the l straight.

aimt, i like the character, you simple looks good, qork on your handstyle though,

depro, lose the connection through the letters

exchange with antie not really satisfied but whatever, crits?
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/1494/dsc00240wk7.jpg

also the one you did for me didnt show up for some reason? just said user posted image

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 7 2007, 06:34 AM
bump that bastardoooo

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/52.jpg
extra sloppy for yaaa&#39;s
damn i love your work and your throws were soooo nice
rheal the e is thick, and dont angle the h&#39;s middle bar like you did, rayse youve improved alot i like that, except the i&#39;s lower bar is too thick

C3ZR ONE
04-14-2007, 07:12 PM
Aimo- What&#39;s Pen Stories about? Makin a comic?

General crit---- Pretty reasonable letter structure with everything on this page. I don&#39;t see anything repulsive. :)

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/4465/im000665ol6.jpg
I like to doodle on my workshirts. :) The one on the right says RIP 12 on the back (I&#39;m not jockin his name or nothin)

Just started a wack canvas. :(
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/1156/im000666du9.jpg

alive
04-14-2007, 07:19 PM
o shit, can i pay you to make me one? not kidding. ill pm u?

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 07:21 PM
No..not really Cezr :) ..im just naming every decent pen freestyle under the name of Pen Storyz Vol. what ever..:) .. whut you rekon to my simples ?...Sume thinks im degressing...hope i dont sound like im whining...nice stuff by the way..very nice style...i crnt wait o see it progress to its maximum...itll be fresh..&#33;&#33;&#33;

React,,,keep your bars straight...not all bendy
That Gerk is fuckign dope grimey...itll look dope on a Copenhagen train..
Ryesoneariraye..im really feeling that T in the Antie sketch.. :D

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 07:24 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet4.jpg...
sweet LIKE MUTHA FUCKIN CHOCOLATE&#33;

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 07:25 PM
dam, you guyz got skillsss&#33;, im jelousssssss <_<

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 07:27 PM
and who is that 2? me ?

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 07:29 PM
all of youuuu,

ahhhh.....i just bought me a newwww black bookk&#33; ...my 1st one :D , wont be writing in it th0o until i get my stuff down good&#33;

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 07:31 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 14 2007, 07:24 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet4.jpg...
sweet LIKE MUTHA FUCKIN CHOCOLATE&#33;
bump. bottom of the page. would like some help.

Hazex
04-14-2007, 07:33 PM
shamee it looks good only the s has to mcuh stuff and try to do some 3d on it it would cool

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 07:37 PM
shame ive seen that style before idk where though..dont put that twirl one the first letter
throw with 3-d or drop shadow or w/e the fuck it is
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3894/picture039ub7.jpg
haha i got bored...caerisavegatarian i couldnt fit it all though
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3185/picture040nd3.jpg
no drop shadow throw
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5279/picture042xr2.jpg
and congratulations to all the new mods ;)

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 07:40 PM
oh shit..youve imrpved sooo much wahppen..i actually like those throws..that long one is dope...if you could paint that down the wall of china...fuckign awesome &#33;

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 07:53 PM
heres a new version of my " simple letter"

tell me wut ya think&#33;

http://i19.tinypic.com/4d6v221.jpg

Striker99
04-14-2007, 07:55 PM
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060754.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 07:57 PM
dey shit. read all of the new to graff shit.
then start to block busters. i hard for me to help u improve cuz i dont kno how unless i showed u.

Hazex
04-14-2007, 08:00 PM
striker not too bad but woth on that k

toosick for your first sketch only work on the letter in your name

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6568/picture006rc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits comments?

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 08:03 PM
ahaha..i use Touch Twins..i got the 12 set AND the 60 b set.. :P .. lol :blink:

ugh..Rheal..do the top on...but try try try to keep it clean..and move the letters closer together...

i think in order to make blocks look appealing..you GOTTA MAKE EM CLEAN...just what i think

and Stricker..do blocks..please :)

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 08:05 PM
that last part was hella uncalled for man...
rhela in the bottom the r is small on top and thick in the leg and the e is just weird
in the top the a is wiiide and the e&#39;s bars arent equalized

-ShAmEE-
04-14-2007, 08:06 PM
hazex dont like the pointy thing with ur letters.

hahaaa. i&#39;m off. bubi bs.

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 08:09 PM
no shit..i just wanted to say that line..but i dont know..

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 08:10 PM
haha i was kidding
sorta...
:P

sabe2
04-14-2007, 08:11 PM
its kind of funny how 14 nick tells other pple ok advice yet he is worse lmao nice amit im likkin it i liked youre old anme tho

AimoOne
04-14-2007, 08:13 PM
shit..wha isit with all this NAME shit...its how it looks thats wha matters...in my case..shit...but ittll look better..in 20 years :huh: .. naw..the way im sketching..and the rate..hopefully next year :( :)

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 08:28 PM
Aimt that pen storyzz 3 is freshhh
striker- try simple letters
Haze- not bad man. I like it.

Just a quick simple I did. agh I messed up
anyways crits would be appreciated. I don&#39;t know what to fix on the letters.

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8957/img1551tn8.jpg

bouncingsoul
04-14-2007, 08:29 PM
Ras... I don&#39;t like you

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0725.jpg

Fucked up O but... Whatever man

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 08:31 PM
freakin nice yo^

Pantalones.
04-14-2007, 08:32 PM
Originally posted by Pantalones.@Apr 14 2007, 06:04 PM
crits anyone?


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y268/JonnyWaffelz/sketchsharp.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y268/JonnyWaffelz/sketchtoon.jpg

sorry for the blurr guys <_<
bump for crits..

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 08:40 PM
Hazex , are you sayin to take any lettr out of my name and use it for a sketch

rayseone
04-14-2007, 08:46 PM
no hes saying take the letters in your name and only do them letters, dont do just any random letters,

emokid
04-14-2007, 08:47 PM
bouncing, obv love it

pantalones, stick with the bottom one, it looks better although cant really see shit

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4180/dscn6385cy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

neatened letters a bit, still not happy.
why the FUCK am i even awake

Hazex
04-14-2007, 08:48 PM
no only take the letter you neeed to do your anme

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 08:49 PM
Pear- ill as always &#33;

alive
04-14-2007, 09:02 PM
pear its dope, but the A feels a bit. . . . flimsy, especially on the left. i dont knowhow to say it better.

bouncingsoul, u know i love it.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03133.jpg

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 09:05 PM
alive I&#39;m really feelin that
damn

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 09:06 PM
I think colorin&#39; makes your shit looks worse, I dunno, the whole "sketchy" part of your steez is nice, letters are chill though.

emokid
04-14-2007, 09:06 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8607/dscn6386yq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump but with MORE BIRO&#33;

alive, i know whatcher mean, its thinn on the right leg of the a, duno why i made it like that. your k,o and b are niicee

reka one
04-14-2007, 09:09 PM
this is my old tag b4 i got arrested

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/04-02-07_2156.jpg

eh?

alive
04-14-2007, 09:10 PM
haha sumoe, like i dont know. . . . . . i fuckin hate it, but i dont know how to fix it, i think im getting a little better. O SHIT, i forgot, i got a good pic to put up in a sec.


pear, the left leg of the A is a bit long too. and the right leg should shouldnt go out so far too. i know ur trying to kill that dead space, but the R would be dope even not bending so much.

alive
04-14-2007, 09:11 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03136.jpg

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 09:11 PM
Reka-it&#39;s disturbing that you got arrested already and your shit isn&#39;t even nice...at least get arrested when your good. Get rid of all the extensions and arrows and concentrate on your letters.

alive-rack some prismas, outline your shit with a thin black marker/pen, do some fade for a fill and there ya go, will probably look better.

alive
04-14-2007, 09:14 PM
i fukin have prismas. i just suckkk.

dizzle_d
04-14-2007, 09:15 PM
Alive that camit sketch is nice


Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 14 2007, 08:28 PM


Just a quick simple I did. agh I messed up
anyways crits would be appreciated. I don&#39;t know what to fix on the letters.

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8957/img1551tn8.jpg
no crits- I&#39;ll fix it up and have another one up tomarow but any advice on how to fix it?

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 09:15 PM
oh. :blink: did you see my tut in the NEW 2 GRAFF thread? it could help.

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:17 PM
:ph34r:

Sumoe
04-14-2007, 09:20 PM
^nice...doesn&#39;t look like it&#39;s on paper though...kinda looks like a tat, I don&#39;t think it is though lol. :P

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:23 PM
its a fake tatoo i made from some paper i found online.

reka one
04-14-2007, 09:25 PM
i know i was the only tagger in my small town so the cops were basically stalking me and some1 gave my name out but im only gonna bomb in philly and bigger towns now

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:26 PM
:ph34r:

reka - do u have any flicks

alive
04-14-2007, 09:26 PM
your were the only WRITER.


say "WRITER WRITER WRITER"

ESKE one
04-14-2007, 09:29 PM
depro- you drew that or made it on the comp.?

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:32 PM
i found this from a while ago

:ph34r:

reka one
04-14-2007, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 14 2007, 09:26 PM

reka - do u have any flicks
yeah i posted one with my old tag a little bit ago



alive- my fault, chill

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:34 PM
where is it

ESKE one
04-14-2007, 09:36 PM
hey depro mind answerinng my question?

alive
04-14-2007, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by alive@Apr 14 2007, 09:11 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03136.jpg
bump

reka one
04-14-2007, 09:38 PM
two pages back

says foge

DIA
04-14-2007, 09:39 PM
So I just started writing a week or so ago, heres a sketch I just did, I would really appreciate any advice

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0587.jpg

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 09:40 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 14 2007, 07:37 PM
shame ive seen that style before idk where though..dont put that twirl one the first letter
throw with 3-d or drop shadow or w/e the fuck it is
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3894/picture039ub7.jpg
haha i got bored...caerisavegatarian i couldnt fit it all though
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3185/picture040nd3.jpg
no drop shadow throw
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5279/picture042xr2.jpg
and congratulations to all the new mods ;)
yep
simples^
alive the last e is thin and rigid

DeproOne
04-14-2007, 09:41 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 14 2007, 09:36 PM
hey depro mind answerinng my question?
sorry i didnt see it. it was on the computer, we&#39;re using wacom tablets in school

ESKE one
04-14-2007, 09:43 PM
ooo so you drew that on the zablet then edited it?

alive
04-14-2007, 09:47 PM
whahappen. i LOVE my throw. but its vegitarian. not vegatarian. lol. really, its great, my throws suck.

squakMix
04-14-2007, 10:14 PM
I just recently (within the last week or two) chose a new word. I had casually sketched graffiti before this, but I&#39;ve only just now started getting serious with it.

Here&#39;s a little peice I did. Simple lettering, nothing fancy, I just like the flow of it:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/squakMix/etc3.jpg

All was going pretty well until I busted out the black painter&#39;s marker. I totally screwed up the outline in several places. Oh well, next time. I may switch to my prisma for the black outlining. Any crits?

edit: Also note that my scanner is uncannily sensitive, so alot of the scratchiness of the outline isn&#39;t actually visible from a normal viewing distance; it&#39;s actually bigger on-screen than in real life.

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 10:17 PM
this is my first real sketch....i need Suggestions on what i need to fix and focuz more onn...thanks

ESKE one
04-14-2007, 10:27 PM
squakmix- what is it suppose to say?

squakMix
04-14-2007, 10:31 PM
"etc." - et cetera

Aven
04-14-2007, 10:33 PM
Originally posted by squakMix@Apr 14 2007, 10:14 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/squakMix/etc3.jpg



WIGIDY WIGIDY WAAAAAAKKKKKK

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-14-2007, 10:39 PM
i dont know what to say about those throwies, i guess i dont like em

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3417/ajaxve8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

whahappen?
04-14-2007, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by alive@Apr 14 2007, 09:47 PM
whahappen. i LOVE my throw. but its vegitarian. not vegatarian. lol. really, its great, my throws suck.
haha thanks i was just trying to incorporate a long word and someone whose cool on BS your a vegetarian though right?
also does anyone want their names done im bored and feel like doing something
etc thats really unique i like it
edit:im gonna do supercalifragulisticexpealidocious......no im not..

mind.or.matter
04-14-2007, 10:49 PM
cyto - you have too many extensions and you need to work on your letter structure, but your 3d is looking good

squak - dont make the letters so covered up, i like the style your goin in

toosick - go simple, look at your keyboard, read almost every other post in this thread and itll say "go simpler"


edit*: i hate new pages <_<

Striker99
04-14-2007, 10:50 PM
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060755.jpg






Critz

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 10:50 PM
feedback pleaseee



http://i11.tinypic.com/2yyclso.jpg

Aven
04-14-2007, 10:52 PM
STRIKER: outline in black....looks better...just in general. itll give your sketches more definition.

mind.or.matter
04-14-2007, 10:52 PM
striker - go simple&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; and try to keep your letters close to the same size, lose all those connections and the arrow too

Aven
04-14-2007, 10:54 PM
i think its simple enough, and always doing simples isnt how you learn....

striker: fatten the bottom of the K too.

dim
04-14-2007, 10:57 PM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/5166/img0101xv7.jpg
tosickskills dont color your stuff yet its just wasting ink and lose the bits and things
this is just a little somthing i drew up in class crits please

Aven
04-14-2007, 11:00 PM
DIMR IS GETTING DOPER

squakMix
04-14-2007, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by Aven+Apr 14 2007, 10:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Aven @ Apr 14 2007, 10:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-squakMix@Apr 14 2007, 10:14 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/squakMix/etc3.jpg



WIGIDY WIGIDY WAAAAAAKKKKKK [/b][/quote]
Do you have any specific criticisms or anything? What&#39;s wrong (or am I misinterpreting you?)?

Aven
04-14-2007, 11:20 PM
the top of the T is too thin...(toung twister) and the E should connect. The C needs to be the same hight

14nick
04-14-2007, 11:21 PM
yes . read the new 2 graff thread.

wtf is that supposed 2 say?&#33;?&#33;

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-14-2007, 11:27 PM
Dim- work on shadows

lol extension crazy here --&#62;

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5851/ske002vr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

unfinished crits

dim
04-14-2007, 11:29 PM
yeah i cant shade for shit with a pen
yo dont connect your letters yet

Chulo
04-14-2007, 11:32 PM
toosick, try makin tha letters more simpler...
tryin a new name
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/waek.jpg

Captain
04-14-2007, 11:32 PM
Originally posted by DIA@Apr 14 2007, 09:39 PM
So I just started writing a week or so ago, heres a sketch I just did, I would really appreciate any advice

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0587.jpg
you live in detroit metro? i swear to god i saw that tag last time i went to my (insane) grandma&#39;s house.

[edit] oh and use evenly sized bars.

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 11:36 PM
simples dont help me vizualize, tha blocks help me visualize better

Chulo
04-14-2007, 11:47 PM
what eva floats ya boat and get ya throws ta show

toosickskillz
04-14-2007, 11:48 PM
its hard as hell to get my S and C &#39;s to come out rightt tho, u have any tips for using blockz to make em??

dim
04-14-2007, 11:49 PM
DIA yo do simples please and dont color your stuff just plain old simples

Chulo
04-14-2007, 11:54 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 14 2007, 11:48 PM
its hard as hell to get my S and C &#39;s to come out rightt tho, u have any tips for using blockz to make em??
i b have problems wit tha same letters, they always come out crappy :( :ph34r:

squakMix
04-14-2007, 11:54 PM
Originally posted by Aven@Apr 14 2007, 11:20 PM
the top of the T is too thin...(toung twister) and the E should connect. The C needs to be the same hight
Mm, I disagree. The e wouldn&#39;t connect if the box wasn&#39;t there, the short t-top and smaller C is a stylistic choice. The T could stand to be a little shorter though, to create a descending look.

Aven
04-14-2007, 11:57 PM
welp....just giving you my opinion on what will make it look less "clip artish" and more "graffiti-ish"

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:01 AM
is ther some kind of tutorial for exstensions to letters, and for using block letters...do u make them straight or do they vary?

nickstix
04-15-2007, 12:02 AM
sketching with blocks dosent mean they have to be perfect rectangles, play around with them you can curve them.


Originally posted by squakMix+Apr 14 2007, 11:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (squakMix &#064; Apr 14 2007, 11:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-Aven@Apr 14 2007, 11:20 PM
the top of the T is too thin...(toung twister) and the E should connect. The C needs to be the same hight
Mm, I disagree. The e wouldn&#39;t connect if the box wasn&#39;t there, the short t-top and smaller C is a stylistic choice. The T could stand to be a little shorter though, to create a descending look.[/b][/quote]
theres no disagreeing, ok? someone thats been here longer than you gives you advice you take it...to keep your letters all the same height and keeping every part of your letter the same width will make it look alot better. and remember to keep it simple.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:16 AM
right about now, it seems as if every skecth i try and do turns out wrong wrong wrong&#33;&#33; i think i need some 1 to give me lessons

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 12:17 AM
if you ain&#39;t gunna take crits like a man, don&#39;t post your shit...

simple as that. I personally hate the sketch you posted, I&#39;d say work less on style for now and more on letters/structure.

dim
04-15-2007, 12:21 AM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 14 2007, 10:57 PM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/5166/img0101xv7.jpg
tosickskills dont color your stuff yet its just wasting ink and lose the bits and things
this is just a little somthing i drew up in class crits please
bump

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:29 AM
woul any 1 like to give me lessonsss :D

DeproOne
04-15-2007, 12:31 AM
dude. noone will give you lessons. i cant beleive u asked that

squakMix
04-15-2007, 12:33 AM
Originally posted by nickstix+Apr 15 2007, 12:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nickstix &#064; Apr 15 2007, 12:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>


Originally posted by squakMix@Apr 14 2007, 11:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Aven@Apr 14 2007, 11:20 PM
the top of the T is too thin...(toung twister) and the E should connect. The C needs to be the same hight
Mm, I disagree. The e wouldn&#39;t connect if the box wasn&#39;t there, the short t-top and smaller C is a stylistic choice. The T could stand to be a little shorter though, to create a descending look.
theres no disagreeing, ok? someone thats been here longer than you gives you advice you take it...to keep your letters all the same height and keeping every part of your letter the same width will make it look alot better. and remember to keep it simple. [/b][/quote]

welp....just giving you my opinion on what will make it look less "clip artish" and more "graffiti-ish"

Right right man, just trying to clear it up; I appreciate the advice. I don&#39;t appreciate the "LOL YOU SUCK ASS," bullshit when it&#39;s unwarrented though.

You&#39;re absolutely right about the E connection and C size I think. The small C looks out of place with a T that&#39;s full size. I fucked it up a bit; I think everything would look proportional with a slightly smaller T, or slightly larger E. Also, keeping everything uniformly thick would bring it together better. Thanks for the advice.

@nick: Man, I was trying to keep it as simple as possible. The letters look almost painfully regular to me. Maybe the box and the perspective is throwing people off - there are pieces sliding in and out of the frame, and I can see how people may get confused. Thanks for your opinion though, I didn&#39;t see that before.

edit:
if you ain&#39;t gunna take crits like a man, don&#39;t post your shit...

simple as that. I personally hate the sketch you posted, I&#39;d say work less on style for now and more on letters/structure.

Right man, I think you all are misunderstanding me. I wasn&#39;t trying to say that his comments weren&#39;t worth thinking about, trying, or considering. I wasn&#39;t saying I didn&#39;t want to listen to him. I was trying to promote discussion, maybe give him a better feel for what I was going for.

That&#39;s all. Hey, I asked for it; the last thing I expect is people to go light on me here.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:33 AM
well i really want to get way better at this

Flash
04-15-2007, 12:36 AM
wow this page sucks. i guess i cant crit on anything. the last page was ok. same with the otehr. ahha.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5879/picture087vp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sumo sent me here. so yeah ahha. Crits?


New stee.

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 12:40 AM
you guys think it&#39;s gunna come easy...

well it&#39;s not, you need to put in work like any writer who wants to get better, you&#39;re not gunna be really good after one night, I&#39;ve been writing for about one and a half years (kinda "drew" graffiti before but not knowing anything about it really) and my style still isn&#39;t how I would like it to be, stop askin&#39; for so much help and do research and read shit and try to help yourselves.

Flash-it&#39;s aight, I&#39;m only diggin&#39; the "S" everything else kinda sucks.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-15-2007, 12:41 AM
Originally posted by Cyto Aka Son1c@Apr 14 2007, 11:27 PM

lol extension crazy here --&#62;

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5851/ske002vr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

unfinished crits
bump for crits

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:42 AM
your right sum, i agree...and i will do that..lol i have only been writing for a couple of days....but it sucks bein wack at writing lol

Flash
04-15-2007, 12:43 AM
gayest saying in the graffiti bible; it sucks being whack at writing.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-15-2007, 12:43 AM
wtf do u think of my shit

DeproOne
04-15-2007, 12:44 AM
Sume. thats why u are god :)

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:44 AM
cyto,

connect it so we can see it better

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 15 2007, 12:44 AM
Sume. thats why u are god :)
:lol:

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-15-2007, 12:47 AM
well wtf should I do with it? I dont think it would look that great with 3d but im scared that I might fuck it up with shadow... what do u think

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:48 AM
yo sum,

wen you first started did u experiment with blocks or simples

Flash
04-15-2007, 12:50 AM
i know i know . we alll ride sumes jock. but you ride it too much.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:50 AM
Originally posted by Cyto Aka Son1c@Apr 15 2007, 12:47 AM
well wtf should I do with it? I dont think it would look that great with 3d but im scared that I might fuck it up with shadow... what do u think
connect It, hook it upp and dont go crazy on it...dont color or anything yet just connect

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-15-2007, 12:51 AM
the past 3 posts are ruining this thread, i need some help nuggas

Flash
04-15-2007, 12:55 AM
Originally posted by Flash@Apr 15 2007, 12:36 AM
wow this page sucks. i guess i cant crit on anything. the last page was ok. same with the otehr. ahha.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5879/picture087vp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sumo sent me here. so yeah ahha. Crits?


New stee.
since the pages were whack Bump a doodle DOOO. :rolleyes:


and how hard is it to post flciks of yer shit.

DeproOne
04-15-2007, 01:01 AM
:ph34r:

still think its garbage

Samp1e
04-15-2007, 01:03 AM
flash -- I don&#39;t know much bout throws but to me it just isn&#39;t visually appealing.

cyto -- whack. don&#39;t bother with extensions just yet.

haven&#39;t really done a piece. I haven&#39;t wanted to do anything since the cash battle since I spent way too much time on that one piece. first flick isn&#39;t freestyle, just a bunch of random stuff inked. man I need real camera to get clearer shots. haha, the fourth pic I actually was at school and just doodling on a napkin, then I got home and was screwing in my book and remembered the napkin, so I tore it up and taped it into my book. heh. my handies need workkkk
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2090/photo0032uy6.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032uy6.jpg)http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6357/photo0033um8.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0033um8.jpg)http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8411/photo0034ri8.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0034ri8.jpg)http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2305/photo0035tq5.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0035tq5.jpg)

^ I AM EXCITED FOR THAT NEW THREE 6 ALBUM (hence the "da las 2 walk" :P)

DeproOne
04-15-2007, 01:08 AM
those are dope samp1e. ur getting up there

whahappen?
04-15-2007, 01:09 AM
scrubsisacoolshow
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2718/picturemu0.jpg
its shaky at the end cause of no room

ESKE one
04-15-2007, 01:12 AM
depro you r bitting or that aint your work or something idk because about a month agot we couldnt tell and A from a Z from you and now your the god of graff himself ( no beef )but idk man

zers_nice shyt change that H alittle though

"balto"™©
04-15-2007, 01:12 AM
i might have a few flicks comin in a sec

Flash
04-15-2007, 01:41 AM
Depro you need to fucking chill . i wasnt talking to you. dont jump before you hop

meetermaid
04-15-2007, 01:45 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 14 2007, 10:09 PM
scrubsisacoolshow
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2718/picturemu0.jpg
its shaky at the end cause of no room
sweet (if a little generic) throw steez, shitty handstyle, work on that cause it looks like you got throwups down pat..

ESKE one
04-15-2007, 01:48 AM
hes right zers enough of that through you got it try progressing your pieces now

CaMa
04-15-2007, 01:50 AM
Hahaha whahappen? scrubs is a pretty cool show man. I like that shit...

I just threw down this... I really like the t and e but not the n or h...

What you guys reckon?

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3193/thensketchmw5.jpg

whahappen?
04-15-2007, 01:59 AM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 15 2007, 01:48 AM
hes right zers enough of that through you got it try progressing your pieces now
she*
haha yea...and i cant get handstyles down its so frustrating, like i dont get how that tag is soo bad
like are you supposed to have a constant shape with the letters or make it flow?
idk...but im starting to work on them like looking at lots of tags in the picture gallery and stuff
then you bit niccsacc&#39;s e, the n is to thin for your other letters, the h is too thick, and the t is awkward

CaMa
04-15-2007, 02:03 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Apr 15 2007, 01:59 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Apr 15 2007, 01:59 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Apr 15 2007, 01:48 AM
hes right zers enough of that through you got it try progressing your pieces now
she*
haha yea...and i cant get handstyles down its so frustrating, like i dont get how that tag is soo bad
like are you supposed to have a constant shape with the letters or make it flow?
idk...but im starting to work on them like looking at lots of tags in the picture gallery and stuff
then you bit niccsacc&#39;s e, the n is to thin for your other letters, the h is too thick, and the t is awkward [/b][/quote]
Im a toy, Im allowed to bite ;)

whahappen?
04-15-2007, 02:09 AM
nope

sylvan18
04-15-2007, 02:30 AM
"then" The lins are wobbley and the the E seems a bit to small

levans
04-15-2007, 02:36 AM
Originally posted by CaMa@Apr 15 2007, 01:50 AM
Hahaha whahappen? scrubs is a pretty cool show man. I like that shit...

I just threw down this... I really like the t and e but not the n or h...

What you guys reckon?

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3193/thensketchmw5.jpg
hahahah u like the e and t because you bit them from niccsacc.....from the tot beginners thread.....lol kid ur not gonna get better from biting

tompenny
04-15-2007, 03:17 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/IMG_1461.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/IMG_1460.jpg

Flash_One
04-15-2007, 03:19 AM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8743/12238271nw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I really need some advice on this blue print before I paint this, I know its pretty toy considering its my 2nd peice...

Flash

AimoOne
04-15-2007, 05:23 AM
im not condoning biting....or saying biting is okay...but we have to get our style from somewhere....if we didnt bite...or atleast take someones style in some way...or get influenced by it....we would never get better...a writer bites atleast once in his life time...i think anyways....

oh...and yeah...how do you think graffiti evolved...didnt it evolve from biting...like Chino said " newer writers are taking old skool wildstyles from back in the day and recycling them into something new " ...

i could be completley wrong..but one good writer on here told me the top part..no names <_<

oh shit..Flash..go waaaay simpler...like..BLOCK..FLASH..like letters on your keyboard..and use bars to construct your letters..

and dotn forget to post your blueprints pen freestyles what ever in the Pen Freestyle&#39;s thread &#33; :o ;)

crozzy
04-15-2007, 05:38 AM
holy shitloads of arrows batman&#33;

-ShAmEE-
04-15-2007, 07:46 AM
Originally posted by Captain+Apr 14 2007, 11:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Captain @ Apr 14 2007, 11:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DIA@Apr 14 2007, 09:39 PM
So I just started writing a week or so ago, heres a sketch I just did, I would really appreciate any advice

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0587.jpg
you live in detroit metro? i swear to god i saw that tag last time i went to my (insane) grandma&#39;s house.

[edit] oh and use evenly sized bars. [/b][/quote]
this hear is called the peacock affect.

Jank
04-15-2007, 07:53 AM
Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 14 2007, 11:56 PM
rheal- make the horizontal bar of the h straight, dont bend the main bar in the e yet because it doesnt fit with the peice(non of the other bars are bent) make the top of the a straight keep the bottom bar of the l straight.

aimt, i like the character, you simple looks good, qork on your handstyle though,

depro, lose the connection through the letters

exchange with antie not really satisfied but whatever, crits?
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/1494/dsc00240wk7.jpg

also the one you did for me didnt show up for some reason? just said user posted image
cheers mate&#33; i like it.

the other one was horrible. i took it out. did another one.. messy as fuck cos its just biro but not quite as shit as the last one&#33;
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/seyarexchange.jpg

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 09:07 AM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:48 AM
yo sum,

wen you first started did u experiment with blocks or simples
to tell you the truth...




no.

I deleted all the biting talk...the point is, don&#39;t bite.

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 09:11 AM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Apr 15 2007, 01:03 AM
flash -- I don&#39;t know much bout throws but to me it just isn&#39;t visually appealing.

cyto -- whack. don&#39;t bother with extensions just yet.

haven&#39;t really done a piece. I haven&#39;t wanted to do anything since the cash battle since I spent way too much time on that one piece. first flick isn&#39;t freestyle, just a bunch of random stuff inked. man I need real camera to get clearer shots. haha, the fourth pic I actually was at school and just doodling on a napkin, then I got home and was screwing in my book and remembered the napkin, so I tore it up and taped it into my book. heh. my handies need workkkk
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2090/photo0032uy6.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032uy6.jpg)http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6357/photo0033um8.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0033um8.jpg)http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8411/photo0034ri8.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0034ri8.jpg)http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2305/photo0035tq5.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0035tq5.jpg)

^ I AM EXCITED FOR THAT NEW THREE 6 ALBUM (hence the "da las 2 walk" :P)
your gettin&#39; there, keep doin&#39; what you&#39;re doin&#39; and you keep improvin&#39;, but please...


Three 6 Mafia&#33;?&#33;?&#33;? I know you like better music than that. :P

Samp1e
04-15-2007, 09:29 AM
haha, don&#39;t worry. I like more than just them, while they don&#39;t always have the finest lyrical content, they&#39;ve got their moments. as for their production skills? that&#39;s on a whole different level.

Jank -- I liiiiike&#33; maybe I&#39;ll do a piece today with your name, since that seems to be the thing as of late ;)

Jank
04-15-2007, 09:32 AM
ye sample go for it. i wreite antie. ill do one for u too. wot u write?

Samp1e
04-15-2007, 09:35 AM
samp1e/samp. I probably won&#39;t do it till later today, just so you know.

Thor_tfm
04-15-2007, 09:38 AM
something new and different...
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/8060/img0055kg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

00-made-00
04-15-2007, 09:43 AM
thor- yeah i like it looks sweetm try and make the T a bit clearer though other than tht its sikk man.

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 09:53 AM
HEY&#33; PEEPS WHO I OWE EXCHANGES...

I&#39;m a lazy motherfucker, but I have spring break this week so we&#39;ll see what I can whip up.

Hazex
04-15-2007, 10:01 AM
thor its dope jsut amke it cleaner

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4387/dsc00022qm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits comments?

alive
04-15-2007, 10:11 AM
sume, exchange?

popshots
04-15-2007, 10:15 AM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 15 2007, 05:23 AM
im not condoning biting....or saying biting is okay...but we have to get our style from somewhere....if we didnt bite...or atleast take someones style in some way...or get influenced by it....we would never get better...a writer bites atleast once in his life time...i think anyways....

oh...and yeah...how do you think graffiti evolved...didnt it evolve from biting...like Chino said " newer writers are taking old skool wildstyles from back in the day and recycling them into something new " ...

i could be completley wrong..but one good writer on here told me the top part..no names <_<


wise words spoken (or in this case typed)

DIA
04-15-2007, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;+Apr 15 2007, 07:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (&#045;ShAmEE&#045; &#064; Apr 15 2007, 07:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Captain@Apr 14 2007, 11:32 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-DIA@Apr 14 2007, 09:39 PM
So I just started writing a week or so ago, heres a sketch I just did, I would really appreciate any advice

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0587.jpg
you live in detroit metro? i swear to god i saw that tag last time i went to my (insane) grandma&#39;s house.

[edit] oh and use evenly sized bars.
this hear is called the peacock affect.[/b][/quote]
nah I live in Jersey....and whats the peacock effect

Thor_tfm
04-15-2007, 11:03 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6708/img0057qr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bazer
04-15-2007, 11:06 AM
thats almost good dude, try not to do so many squiggles like the line in middle of the h.

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 11:07 AM
"O" and "R" are nice...

"T" sucks, and the 3D is weird for me...nice overall though.

Aven
04-15-2007, 11:08 AM
Originally posted by nickstix+Apr 15 2007, 12:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nickstix @ Apr 15 2007, 12:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> sketching with blocks dosent mean they have to be perfect rectangles, play around with them you can curve them.


Originally posted by squakMix@Apr 14 2007, 11:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Aven@Apr 14 2007, 11:20 PM
the top of the T is too thin...(toung twister) and the E should connect. The C needs to be the same hight
Mm, I disagree. The e wouldn&#39;t connect if the box wasn&#39;t there, the short t-top and smaller C is a stylistic choice. The T could stand to be a little shorter though, to create a descending look.
theres no disagreeing, ok? someone thats been here longer than you gives you advice you take it...to keep your letters all the same height and keeping every part of your letter the same width will make it look alot better. and remember to keep it simple. [/b][/quote]
thanx for the backup

Thor_tfm
04-15-2007, 11:12 AM
yeah i thought the t and h were poo aswell ill try and fix it. cheers.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 11:16 AM
does any one have tips for add ons to letters?

dim
04-15-2007, 11:21 AM
thor you got dope coloring skills but the "T" i dont rele like the part on the right that comes thru the top its kind weird but i think the peice over all is dope keep it up

Hazex
04-15-2007, 11:26 AM
except that the letter are not all the same size any crits?


http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2341/dsc00011qf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alive
04-15-2007, 11:39 AM
the point of bars is to keep them all the same thickness. otherwise. . . u can draw bars ontop of anything

Aven
04-15-2007, 11:42 AM
yea....something just doesn&#39;t look right on that

Sumoe
04-15-2007, 11:42 AM
I&#39;m not tryna be mean but it seems like a lot of the kids that come on BS, don&#39;t really wanna write...it seems like it&#39;s just a phase for them, it seems like they played Gettin&#39; Up or w.e. and thought it was cool and they think they gunna get better just like that, I dunno. A lot of cats on here seem to come and go, they ask for help, we tell them to do simples and learn structure and they don&#39;t come back...and then other people seem to just not get it. <_<

there&#39;s some pointless rant for today.

alive
04-15-2007, 11:44 AM
no kidding. 90% leave after the first week. 98% fade away after a month.


and then theres kids u wish would fuck off, but just keep on coming. guess who?

dim
04-15-2007, 11:46 AM
Originally posted by Hazex@Apr 15 2007, 11:26 AM
except that the letter are not all the same size any crits?


http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2341/dsc00011qf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
if i where you i would chnge the e up

Bazer
04-15-2007, 11:59 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 15 2007, 11:42 AM
I&#39;m not tryna be mean but it seems like a lot of the kids that come on BS, don&#39;t really wanna write...it seems like it&#39;s just a phase for them, it seems like they played Gettin&#39; Up or w.e. and thought it was cool and they think they gunna get better just like that, I dunno. A lot of cats on here seem to come and go, they ask for help, we tell them to do simples and learn structure and they don&#39;t come back...and then other people seem to just not get it. <_<

there&#39;s some pointless rant for today.
some people just draw and dont really graff. ;)
but they love it.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:03 PM
not disagreein or anything but i think its because this forum doesnt really help us toys that much

0000
04-15-2007, 12:04 PM
Originally posted by Thor_tfm@Apr 15 2007, 11:03 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6708/img0057qr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thats dope except the weird ass extension on the t and that the h is crooked

Bazer
04-15-2007, 12:07 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:03 PM
not disagreein or anything but i think its because this forum doesnt really help us toys that much
well were not gonna fix your stuff for you. just tell u how you can fix it...and the forum not helping you part...theres alot of idiots on here tellin everyone to do blocks and do simples...i hate that....

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:10 PM
i hear what your sayin, but there are not many things on here that help you to get started....ive been trying out block letters and simples and it doesnt seem to help me visualize a letter

Apple pie
04-15-2007, 12:11 PM
Thor that things pretty hot man..
heres my new sketches. i got prismas:D
AMEN
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/1571/amenjo5.png (http://imageshack.us)
i wanna write amen but i know atesk is writing amens, but these are just for fun

HeiSk
04-15-2007, 12:11 PM
i got 1 thing to say to all the toys posting pieces that have no structure, = START SIMPLE

whahappen?
04-15-2007, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:03 PM
not disagreein or anything but i think its because this forum doesnt really help us toys that much
if you listen it will....

dim
04-15-2007, 12:19 PM
pye/amen those sketches are amazing best ive seen from you
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/1025/img0107jn8.jpg
ignor the gay character at ther top crits are appreciated

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:21 PM
yo apple pie, thats siccccc

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:23 PM
yo dim, do u call those letters simples?

G.SMooth
04-15-2007, 12:23 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture036.jpg crits?

Apple pie
04-15-2007, 12:26 PM
ayte im not a fan of the spikes all over, but it aint bad

whoarethereal evil
04-15-2007, 12:34 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/4683/dsc00089xd3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


the ts a bit shit doesnt really fit


any help in general tho

AnteUp
04-15-2007, 12:36 PM
ayte-me no likey]
dim-like it cuz its simple...the cans alright and i hate the bug
mr pye man- thas purrtyy bad ayuhs&#33;

AFTER INK... CRITS PLEASE

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/clrdgrill.jpg

alive
04-15-2007, 12:39 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:03 PM
not disagreein or anything but i think its because this forum doesnt really help us toys that much
What the FUCK?&#33;? This really, really pisses me off. First of all, you aren’t entitled to shit. We don’t have to fucking help you if we don’t want to. We help you out of the kindness of our hearts, and not everybody has people much fucking better then them analyzing their sketches. You should be on your knees thanking us, not bitching that you still suck. And if you say were to mean, or discouraging, then guess what, grow some balls, be a fucking man, and take it. If you can’t deal with this shit, how the fuck do you think your gonna be a real writer.

There’s no trick, you gotta put in the hours. I came to this forum with NOTHING. Couldn’t draw a stick figure you understand? I was shit. More toy then most of the idiots who come here now. And I took my fair share of curses, of insults, and that’s that. I stuck with it, even though my friends thought I wouldn’t, and now I’m starting to get real. It’s been two years. We don’t need you. You can’t take the heat, fuck off. No one will miss you for a second.

What more do you think this forum can do? We do all that we can, even though you sure as hell don’t deserve it, and almost all of the newcomers will leave for good before getting down simples.

For us this isn’t a hobby, a game. It’s not just something to do. It’s a life choice. And those who don’t see it that way are an insult to the real kids out there.



peace.

AimoOne
04-15-2007, 12:43 PM
that is fucking true ^^ .... well said Alive...you say things in such a true manner...i dunno how to describe it...i think i been thru some of that in the discription too...its certainly changed my life...its become a part of it...i dont think of sketching just to help me get better once a day...i see it as a chure..and priority to sketch...look at graff..get insperated..and


Alive..when you gunna post flicks in the Pen Freestyle thread...camaaaan

Ante...not bad i suppose...the hat looks like shit tho...i aint king of karaks so i carnt help..

Nosypainter
04-15-2007, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by chase one@Apr 11 2007, 08:05 PM
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/539/sketches006yi2dm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please?
not bad to cluttered for me though

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 12:57 PM
true, i will do exactly as you gguys say, becuase you dont even have to help me


thanks

Snot
04-15-2007, 12:59 PM
Found some prismas in my house, that are from 1982... i used em for a couple sketches, but i&#39;ll save them now.
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8149/dsc02572az7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Its shit I know, dont crit this.
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7356/dsc02571sk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Letters are bad, but i was trying out the prismas.
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7172/dsc02573xw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Anyone wanna do an exchange? im bored.

toosickskillz
04-15-2007, 01:02 PM
i like those, i need some prismas...i went to the art supply store yesterday to get some but they dont sell them in a pack :angry:

[breakout]-azer
04-15-2007, 01:04 PM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w16/azer123456789/STA60044.jpg

crit on a simple 3d i just tried

nickstix
04-15-2007, 01:05 PM
nex, the 3d seems to be ok exept for the middle of the &#39;e&#39; and the right side of the &#39;x&#39;. and try to keep your letters the same width, they get skinnier as they go

snot...wow those prismas are old, theyre nice though i use prismas too. i really like your throwie, and as for the other 2 pices the coloring is really nice.

chase one...that styke is really cluttered but you seem to have your letture structure pretty good, post up some simples.

anteup...that character is pretty nice but his eyes are really wierd, try to make them bigger next time.

delt...take out the little bars connecting the letters and connecting a letter to itself, and try to keep your letters the same size, structure is good.

my 2nd attept at some 3-D ish, takes a long time and i made it big so i only did &#39;RE&#39;
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/re3d.png
crits?

Snot
04-15-2007, 01:09 PM
Reakt, you should connect the top and middle pieces of your E.
Just my thoughts.

[breakout]-azer
04-15-2007, 01:11 PM
Originally posted by nickstix@Apr 15 2007, 01:05 PM
nex, the 3d seems to be ok exept for the middle of the &#39;e&#39; and the right side of the &#39;x&#39;. and try to keep your letters the same width, they get skinnier as they go

snot...wow those prismas are old, theyre nice though i use prismas too. i really like your throwie, and as for the other 2 pices the coloring is really nice.

chase one...that styke is really cluttered but you seem to have your letture structure pretty good, post up some simples.

anteup...that character is pretty nice but his eyes are really wierd, try to make them bigger next time.

delt...take out the little bars connecting the letters and connecting a letter to itself, and try to keep your letters the same size, structure is good.

my 2nd attept at some 3-D ish, takes a long time and i made it big so i only did &#39;RE&#39;
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/re3d.png
crits?
yeah the 3d on the x n e went abit but i just kinda cudnt get it to look rite at all so i went with wat i had.

nickstix- i like it just not sure the letters beings in seperate peices

Apple pie
04-15-2007, 01:15 PM
snot ill exchange

dim
04-15-2007, 01:17 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:23 PM
yo dim, do u call those letters simples?
yes

sky 5
04-15-2007, 01:20 PM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 15 2007, 12:19 PM
pye/amen those sketches are amazing best ive seen from you
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/1025/img0107jn8.jpg
ignor the gay character at ther top crits are appreciated
maybe try squishing the M in alil, looks to spreadout . . i find that squishing my lettters in or not having alot of open space inbetween my letters helps stylem up a bit . .

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6788/1242441dp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DASH mess around . .

shit i had some other shit to post but imageshack is acting retarded, good stuff there snot

trashhh
04-15-2007, 01:20 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41048.jpg

throwie againnnnn... messed up the R cba doin it again takin another flick etc

I like that S sky, i think its all a little too complicated tho.. maybe cos its a rough pencil sketch