Blackbooks

[La Coka Nostra]

Serk...stop trying to do wildstyles.
SIMPLE.


Either perfect simple pieces, or work throw ups, but whatever you do, don't try doing wildstyles yet.

If you've never painted before, and you go out the first time trying to do some wildstyle shit, you are gonna end up making a mess.

[sabe2]

lol i have painted before i ahve too go too court i actully went too day no joke i have 5000x4 pending wright now

[La Coka Nostra]

that sucks bro...lol
I dunno if graff is taken as seriously there as it is here but...

GOOD LUCK.

[BIGel]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Apr 16 2007, 04:58 PM
/\/\/\/\ lol, but dude may have a point.

shake - dont make the ends of the letters so pointy, try rounding them off.

self - some of those arent bad, i like :)

i know the pic i posted before was really small,
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8830/119dg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
there you go.
im in love with this. exchange with me or ill e-shank you.

[Hazex]

can you tell me which letter are good and not and crit on the whole sketch?

http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/4881/gjhgjhgge0.png (http://imageshack.us)

I know there isent any 3d and stuff but i really whant to get my lettering better...

edit:the h is too litle...why always me on new pages... <_<

[La Coka Nostra]

make all the letters the same size...use a ruler if you have to...

and don&#39;t overlap the L if you arent gonna overlap any other letters.

[sacwacko]

overlap all a little...

[dizzle_d]

Haze- The hoop on the R is a little big, the H and the E have a strange slant to them that don&#39;t match the other letters and the A overlaps the L.
looks pretty good though.


Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 16 2007, 05:10 PM
just messing around with bars. I&#39;m bored, and this is what I came up with.
crits would be appreciated.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1885/img1561gj7.jpg
bump for mo crits

[namesake]

sky - amazingness

dizzle - those letters look pretty dope..slap some color and 3d on that shit and maybe fix up that I n&#39; ur golden..



new sketch..didnt turn out as good as i was hoping but fuck it..any suggestion?
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3976/mang002zh9.jpg

[ThrowItUP]

namesake - that shits fireee.

[<~ReSiN~>]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/3dresxin.jpg

critiques???

[La Coka Nostra]

I like it MANG.
Not sure about the connection between the M and N, but the fill is definately hot.

[sex without condoms]

Originally posted by ThrowItUP@Apr 16 2007, 06:30 PM
namesake - that shits fireee.
you think everything is amazing.

that mang could use work.

1. The N sucks.
2. That connection has got to go

[dizzle_d]

name- I think thats dope
Resin- I like it but the I seems to be to thin. I dunno. my opinion

[Bazer]

and to much overlapping..

[bouncingsoul]

School is probably the best place to sketch, hands down

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0729.jpg

[DIA]

just a toy being mad simple...crits plz

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0590.jpg

the R is big

[Hazex]

try and use bars to amek the letters

[Kore123]

havent posted in a looooooooooooooooooooooooooong time...i died :unsure: . other than that heres a throwie that ive been workin on and i still dont like it and its making me mad that i cant get it right

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4018/0416071906kc3.jpg
comments and crits please...i remember the routine:

dia...keep workin on them simples use bars if you can its way easier and use lined notebook paper until you get your proportion better

bounce....i like the new style i still love your old one though but i cant give you too much advice

name...i like it nice fill. what kinda markers did you use

[hhhhhhh]

cant decide on a throw

tell me witch one you like better

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture1008-1.jpg


http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture1007-1.jpg



note they were done fast

[Kore123]

Originally posted by Kore123@Apr 16 2007, 07:17 PM
havent posted in a looooooooooooooooooooooooooong time...i died :unsure: . other than that heres a throwie that ive been workin on and i still dont like it and its making me mad that i cant get it right

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4018/0416071906kc3.jpg
comments and crits please...i remember the routine:

dia...keep workin on them simples use bars if you can its way easier and use lined notebook paper until you get your proportion better

bounce....i like the new style i still love your old one though but i cant give you too much advice

name...i like it nice fill. what kinda markers did you use
bump.. last post

hhhhh...the seconed one

[Tade]

http://i11.tinypic.com/2wbrioy.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/2wpt4jl.jpg

http://i12.tinypic.com/2hxc6r5.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/4357el2.jpg

http://i18.tinypic.com/2v3ivxt.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/2hppu9j.jpg

i figured i&#39;d post these here, since my posts keep getting deleted in the regular blackbook thread.

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 16 2007, 04:03 PM
AYTE its looking good just next time make the lines light soit wont look so sloppy

pen sketch batlle im doin with my boy(shake)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/Picture.jpg
other then the fact the letters slope down word
any other tip you guy got would be cool
kore i dont kno im not feeling it and that E doesnt flow with everything else
keep trying though

crits plz dont skip over me after the next 2 pics plz...

edit: more pics , tade lines are kinda shaky feeling the 3rd and 4th one though
make- i think ive seen tha M before not callin a bit just yet but idk

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 16 2007, 02:54 PM
I need a fuckin&#39; break from anything graffiti/art related, so I probably won&#39;t be on/post for a couple days, later people.
never mind...I can&#39;t not look at graff or not sketch for a couple days...I took a nap and now I want to sketch again. :)

[ESKE one]

YEAH&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; SUMES BACK
now crit my shyt lol dont be harsh

[Hazex]

LOL sumes :) good job

[hhhhhhh]

Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 16 2007, 07:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one @ Apr 16 2007, 07:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Apr 16 2007, 04:03 PM
AYTE its looking good just next time make the lines light soit wont look so sloppy

pen sketch batlle im doin with my boy(shake)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/Picture.jpg
other then the fact the letters slope down word
any other tip you guy got would be cool
kore i dont kno im not feeling it and that E doesnt flow with everything else
keep trying though

crits plz dont skip over me after the next 2 pics plz...

edit: more pics , tade lines are kinda shaky feeling the 3rd and 4th one though
make- i think ive seen tha M before not callin a bit just yet but idk [/b][/quote]
ye didnt bite anyones style on any of the letters but i have got that comment before.

im likein ur letters except for the A shadowing/ 3-d looks nice tho

[capitol]

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3192/graf127lz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3890/graf128il4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Done with sone broken sharpies, in the bus depot in edmonton.

[Hazex]

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/8192/yt65y5ytrf1.png (http://imageshack.us)

any crits?

edit capitol i liek your first trowie but the second i dotn really like

[Kore123]

hazex give crits before askin for em...youve been on here for not even a month and already have almost as many posts as i do? wow

[DIA]

Originally posted by Tade@Apr 16 2007, 07:19 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2wbrioy.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/2wpt4jl.jpg

http://i12.tinypic.com/2hxc6r5.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/4357el2.jpg

http://i18.tinypic.com/2v3ivxt.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/2hppu9j.jpg

i figured i&#39;d post these here, since my posts keep getting deleted in the regular blackbook thread.
pretty sick...waht did you do the last few with?

watercolors?

the one on the newspaper made me smile

[Zep0]

Originally posted by BIGel+Apr 16 2007, 03:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BIGel @ Apr 16 2007, 03:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by HuntingLOLs@Apr 15 2007, 02:38 PM

Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Apr 15 2007, 12:07 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-toosickskillz@Apr 15 2007, 12:03 PM
not disagreein or anything but i think its because this forum doesnt really help us toys that much
well were not gonna fix your stuff for you. just tell u how you can fix it...and the forum not helping you part...theres alot of idiots on here tellin everyone to do blocks and do simples...i hate that....
totally agreeing here. most of us here grew up without a forum to get help from. i live in a small country in a small town where i didnt know anybody that did graff (im 21 and still dont have any writers as friends, my own fault completly). i had to learn it all by sketching completly alone, probably one of the reasons why im still toy as fuck :P. if you dont like the community here, go sketch alone.

on the other side, to most of the people posting here there&#39;s only 2 advices to give: dont ever pick up a can and paint or do blocks.
skillz the way you talk id be thinking that graffiti never even existed before the internet did. nobodys gunna put a pen in your hand and draw for you, you gotta figure it out for yourself period.

and about this forum not helping toys, that is toooootal bullshit. this forum is easily the best on the web for toys, go to 12 oz or visualorgasm and post your shit and see if they "crit" your stuff for you, cuz they will rip you limb from limb. [/b][/quote]
Completely Agreed. I think the only thing that the internet did good, was give kids who are out in the country and suburbs where there is no graffiti to find a common place with so many other people. I mean, I&#39;m still toy, but for a long time I was the only one doing graf. in my area, a few others have picked up recently but still very few, but I thought I was pretty good, untill I came on here, and started looking at everyhting. Then I realized I suck, and I&#39;m working hard on improving. But yeah even in your sig bigel "blueprint to be a writer" I completely agree, I mean some of the people get in here and have problems with making clean lines and straight letters, but cant understand how to improve. Sometimes, your not meant to do, just to watch and enjoy, all performers need an audience, maybe that audience is you.

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 16 2007, 07:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe &#064; Apr 16 2007, 07:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 16 2007, 02:54 PM
I need a fuckin&#39; break from anything graffiti/art related, so I probably won&#39;t be on/post for a couple days, later people.
never mind...I can&#39;t not look at graff or not sketch for a couple days...I took a nap and now I want to sketch again. :) [/b][/quote]
Feel the sickness creep...

Edit: Tad, your stuff isnt that bad, but some of your letter structure is off, I&#39;d say just review your letters carefully and dont force add-ons your best piece was your simple EOAT imo.

[dizzle_d]

Haze thats much better

[Tade]

Originally posted by DIA+Apr 16 2007, 08:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DIA @ Apr 16 2007, 08:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tade@Apr 16 2007, 07:19 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2wbrioy.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/2wpt4jl.jpg

http://i12.tinypic.com/2hxc6r5.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/4357el2.jpg

http://i18.tinypic.com/2v3ivxt.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/2hppu9j.jpg

i figured i&#39;d post these here, since my posts keep getting deleted in the regular blackbook thread.
pretty sick...waht did you do the last few with?

watercolors?

the one on the newspaper made me smile [/b][/quote]
no, i used Prismas & decos. i don&#39;t use watercolors or acrylics in my book.

[Robbie P]

Tade, I&#39;d say the uppermost of those sketches is probably the worst. Too many extensions and unclean/unstable lines, but the rest are pretty good. I liked the second flick with the crazy fill.

http://c.photos.cx/nuggeta-c72.JPG
Playing around with simples and random words.

[DIA]

some sick blending there...no lines or nothing...haha i guess thats not the best crit, but i likes em

[sacwacko]

what does the top say???

[alive]

why?


and all those tade sketches are shit. hes just good at coloring. actually not even, he just uses mad colors.

back to basics kid, simples. not blocks, you are past that, but simples, bars.

[Sumoe]

some of the letters aren&#39;t half bad actually, he has a good eye for colors but the blending isn&#39;t too good...
;)

[alive]

be real, firstly, colors mean nothinggggggggggg. second, the only good letters are maybe 3 E&#39;s and the basic A. thirdly, better then the rest of the toy forum, doesnt mean decent.


maybe im just in a bad mood. but u gotta give me that it doesnt deserve all the attention its getting.

[Sumoe]

yea, it&#39;s because the toys (not sayin&#39; I&#39;m not toy, I&#39;m talkin&#39; about the TOYs, ya dig?) in here like to suck dick...

if they see something with mad colors they get all excited. The letters I was talkin&#39; about that were decent were in the 3rd and 5th sketch, and they were the "E" and "A" in both the sketches, they&#39;re not great but they aren&#39;t horrible.

[alive]

word, so we agreed. but the rest of the shit, for me, canceled those letters out, b/c it makes them seem as though they are either a.) luck or b.) bitten. or regardless, not consistant. its gotta be consistant.


ur not toy man, ur in the big boy thread now, be proud. dont gotta be modest n shit now. im still toy :( but hey&#33; by now ive actually managed to post some pics up in there, and they havent been shut down. they were actually ignored entirely. but i take that as a good thing. and the post after me once, kay came in and was like, "i deleted all u toy fuckas" but MY POST WAS STILL THERE&#33;



wat WAT?

[Zep0]

All his sketches should resemble the EOAT one untill his add-ons arn&#39;t forced and it keeps some more flow to it. I&#39;ve never used prismas, I just get some elmers paint markers...are they really great for blending? All I can do for like a fade shadow is streak the color, but its hard to do it in small spaces.

Just some stuff I&#39;ve been workin on, piece isnt finished, and the tiki is just for the outside of my bbook so I though I&#39;d throw it in.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/127_0033.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/127_0037.jpg

[toosickskillz]

yo zepo, i like that piece with tha colorz in it

[ESKE one]

i heard the nibs on elmer paint marker suck almighty asshole is it true?

[Zep0]

You have to know how to use em...they flake off a little and you cant go mad with them, has to be very methodical filling. They&#39;re a little thick for my taste (even the thin ones) but quick strokes at the right angles I get pencil thin lines...Practice practice :D ....But theyre free...and available...Wal-Mart keeps me stocked 24/7

[rayseone]

zepo - sort the highlights out, looks lights coming from like 3 different directions. maybe take out tose 3 arrows at the bottom and it will look better

[ESKE one]

yea ill stick with my deco i get those free too

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Zep0@Apr 16 2007, 09:17 PM
All his sketches should resemble the EOAT one untill his add-ons arn&#39;t forced and it keeps some more flow to it. I&#39;ve never used prismas, I just get some elmers paint markers...are they really great for blending? All I can do for like a fade shadow is streak the color, but its hard to do it in small spaces.

Just some stuff I&#39;ve been workin on, piece isnt finished, and the tiki is just for the outside of my bbook so I though I&#39;d throw it in.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/127_0033.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/127_0037.jpg
New Page...

[rayseone]

zepo, i alredy critted u on other page, but the extension on the a seems like its coming out of nowhere, maybe to make it follow the same pattern as the other letters make it follow the bar of the left side of the a.

gah my E and E always seem different to my YAR
pencil outline, crits before i ink? yeah i already made the R bigger too
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/9203/dsc00245jz7.jpg

[AnteUp]

zepo-the e jus dosent fit, dont turn it sideways, and make it longer
raysone-i cant even see it

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/kraez.jpg
krits on mah throwie, it says kraez

[AnteUp]

zepo-the e jus dosent fit, dont turn it sideways, and make it longer
raysone-i cant even see it

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/kraez.jpg
krits on mah throwie, it says kraez

[BIGel]

zep that mask is dope, personally i dont think its a great design for a tattoo though.

ante that throw is looking better, but you need to practice doing it over and over again until you have that shit down in one fluid motion.

anyway, havent posted a karik in awhile.,.
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs15/i/2007/106/a/7/sad_day_by_bigel.jpg
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/106/5/1/the_shootist_by_bigel.jpg

[Stim]

very cool El, I like the grime on the second one.

[JackJill]

Diggin the penism BigEl, mostly the first character. Good crosshatching technique, and the way you shaded the eyes on your blue skies
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8040/img0206tf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[S8nt]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/graff021.jpg
Malcom X

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/graff022.jpg
doodle from class

[AimoOne]

s8nt...that first one is pretty good..
Jane...keep working on them simples...work oncleanes tho..
BigeL is Big Dope

ugh..sum sketches..and karaks...and blah

i quick one..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66.jpg

For Sinn..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/666.jpg

So from the feedback i got off FLOW..i came up with this style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66666.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6-1.jpg

the letter structure seems to be intact..anyways..what yah thinks..

crits..thanksss

[popshots]

aimt: youre structure needs a lil work here and the.... but its always so damn clean
s8nt: that Malcolm x is ill
bigel: i like the second 1 u should put those in the pen freestyle thread
zepo: where r the arrows commin from?
rayse 1: make the E the same size and add 3d
jane: overlap your letters goin the other way

[AimoOne]

how does my structure need work ? :huh:

[popshots]

not the whole structure jus some places loo at the o in the last flick and the m in the last 1 it jus needs some work

[AimoOne]

oh yeh...i lowered the middle bar on teh M too far down and i followed thru with the bar when inking on the O by accident

[popshots]

this is kinda random but is the bsc still a crew her on bs?

[Fluffy Bunnies]

WHOAMIGAWD .... new page&#33;


Ras - like whoa&#33; awesome... but as that one guy said... needs some work here and there. I like ur style kid... and no I won&#39;t explain why I do cuz I can&#39;t... and we has this talk before&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

and everyone else on this page who is awesome... and they know it... is da bomb&#33;... cept for that toy as hell stuff :lol:

Well anyyyyyyyways, here&#39;s some doodles and stuff...

my fav Ragga artist... cuz he&#39;s so fresh&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-5.jpg

I lost this when I did a sketch for south pole.... but I found it behind my bed.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-4.jpg

Some throws influenced by big el... cuz he&#39;s sofaking rad&#33;
CYNIC
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-1.jpg

hate all you want... but whatever.

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by popshots@Apr 17 2007, 09:11 AM
this is kinda random but is the bsc still a crew her on bs?
ha, yeah, kinda a "joke" crew though, I don&#39;t think any of us actually rep it.

[AimoOne]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 01:33 PM
So from the feedback i got off FLOW..i came up with this style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66666.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6-1.jpg

the letter structure seems to be intact..anyways..what yah thinks..

crits..thanksss
Aahhaha...lmao..Fluff...liking all of them..specially that Torn peice..and the throw is like whoa

Sume..fort you was having a break..could you do me a favor..you know the Pen Freestyle thread..could you edit the Under Topic..or description to No Chit-Chat please..:wub:

[Sumoe]

the "A" doesn&#39;t flow with the other letters...because it "flows" the opposite way.

the "M" also needs some work, it&#39;s a nice lil&#39; style you got goin&#39; keep working on it.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 09:25 AM

Sume..fort you was having a break..could you do me a favor..you know the Pen Freestyle thread..could you edit the Under Topic..or description to No Chit-Chat please..:wub:
Yeah and put "No pencils up in dis piece" or "How fast cen you roll niga wut?"

[AimoOne]

thats exactly what i was thinking...

wow..i got a good lil style..:wub:..you dont know ho wmuch that means to me..:wub:..i :wub: SUME AND FLUFFY AND ALL OF BS..&#33;&#33;&#33;...Im acting a lil kid that i am now :blink: :ph34r:

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Apr 17 2007, 09:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies @ Apr 17 2007, 09:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 09:25 AM

Sume..fort you was having a break..could you do me a favor..you know the Pen Freestyle thread..could you edit the Under Topic..or description to No Chit-Chat please..:wub:
Yeah and put "No pencils up in dis piece" or "How fast cen you roll niga wut?" [/b][/quote]
kk I did it.

[HeiSk]

fluffy - i like it, but its too simple, try adding extensions or something

aimo - thats sick, i like it, just add a shadow or something ?


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/heiskonebubleblue.jpg
crits plz

[sInk.dIs.]

http://photos-198.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v74/250/73/700830511/n700830511_309198_8404.jpg

[nero122]

like i said on msn lookin sick heisk neway heres my new piece n style http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sainesquid.jpg

crits

[nero122]

oh yh i know i fuked the &#39;i&#39; workin on that

[La Coka Nostra]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 08:33 AM
s8nt...that first one is pretty good..
Jane...keep working on them simples...work oncleanes tho..
BigeL is Big Dope

ugh..sum sketches..and karaks...and blah

i quick one..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66.jpg

For Sinn..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/666.jpg

So from the feedback i got off FLOW..i came up with this style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66666.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6-1.jpg

the letter structure seems to be intact..anyways..what yah thinks..

crits..thanksss
I think the handstyle needs serious work...but the letters are coming along nicely.

[AimoOne]

Nero..that shits like a ... Half Gesus..Half DIE 59..and Half SMUG all mixed into one big chomp...but then it got rejected back to the chef as it wasnt very nice...i canr towrk out the letters at all man...try toning it down some what..non the les...keep it up..

and yeah La Coko..i need work on my handy...fucking terrible..ima ge tto work with it after i dont more on this new style

[nero122]

dont wnna start beef but thats not bitin noone its a squid in the letters n shit cos of the fact i like pirates n cos it got teeth u think i bit die59 n no its not bitin gesus n lol just finished reedin ure post thanks man u 2 u got quite a kl style now i like my letter like that i got a more toned down one in ma book post fliks 2moz

[AimoOne]

Ah..Okay then Nero.. :D

uughh..Who can PHOTOSHOP and who want to collab...no battle or anything..just outta pure fun as i think itll lookk cool on mah desktop...PM me..If A. You can Photoshop . B. If Your failry good aat peiceing nd interseted..

i have Photoshop but cannot do it..aha..

PM me anyways..im bored..

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by nero122@Apr 17 2007, 11:01 AM
like i said on msn lookin sick heisk neway heres my new piece n style http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sainesquid.jpg

crits
the overall look isn&#39;t bad...but I&#39;m pretty sure the letters suck, the reason I say pretty sure is because I cannot find them.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 17 2007, 09:17 AM
WHOAMIGAWD .... new page&#33;


Ras - like whoa&#33; awesome... but as that one guy said... needs some work here and there. I like ur style kid... and no I won&#39;t explain why I do cuz I can&#39;t... and we has this talk before&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

and everyone else on this page who is awesome... and they know it... is da bomb&#33;... cept for that toy as hell stuff :lol:

Well anyyyyyyyways, here&#39;s some doodles and stuff...

my fav Ragga artist... cuz he&#39;s so fresh&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-5.jpg

I lost this when I did a sketch for south pole.... but I found it behind my bed.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-4.jpg

Some throws influenced by big el... cuz he&#39;s sofaking rad&#33;
CYNIC
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-1.jpg

hate all you want... but whatever.
Bumped tp the maxX&#33;&#33;&#33;

only 2 people gave me critz and I got the shaft because my post went to the other page for some reason.

[BohemianBastard]

looks like a luster bite to moi

flicks in a mo

(nero&#39;s piece)

[BohemianBastard]

Fluffly bunnies
that tykal is fucking hot everything else is pretty wack
(crits would be, keep working on everything :()

my turnnn
http://i13.tinypic.com/473kkna.jpg
perffect
http://i18.tinypic.com/40c8ubl.jpg
Pye, amen

[Sumoe]

top one is illin&#39;.

[capo93]

dont you kids ever go to school?

[Sumoe]

spring break for me...and some people don&#39;t live in the U.S. therefore different hours, duh&#33;:P

[hungr]

doing some extensions and stuff
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00217.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00218.jpg

[HeiSk]

Originally posted by HeiSk@Apr 17 2007, 10:15 AM
fluffy - i like it, but its too simple, try adding extensions or something

aimo - thats sick, i like it, just add a shadow or something ?


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/heiskonebubleblue.jpg
crits plz
bump

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by capo93@Apr 17 2007, 06:13 PM
dont you kids ever go to school?
suspended

[AimoOne]

Easte Holdidays..

Molotow..you can do Photoshop..collab with me...PM me..i have ideaaass...hmmmh hmmm ahahahawwaahhhaaaar

critted Fluffy Rabbits

Hungr...pretty twrily and nnniiiccceee
Basterd Bo...you know the score..
Hiesk knows the score too

sooo..i did Then&#39;s name in my new style...uugh..i dont know what his user name is.. :(

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6666666.jpg

Wunt mind crits..?

[trashhh]

nice aimo, part from the E i dont like

[rayseone]

Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 16 2007, 10:29 PM
zepo, i alredy critted u on other page, but the extension on the a seems like its coming out of nowhere, maybe to make it follow the same pattern as the other letters make it follow the bar of the left side of the a.

gah my E and E always seem different to my YAR
pencil outline, crits before i ink? yeah i already made the R bigger too
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/9203/dsc00245jz7.jpg
bummp for crits
behemian bastard, that shits dope man

hungr - good but i dont like the swirl on the H

heisk thats a pretty good simple only make it so the middle bar of the h doesnt stick out

aimo thats pretyy good, dont like the e but i like that new style, also make the middle bar of the n abit fatter

[krazzie_ammo]

___________________________________________
TEAM BATTLE

ok, this is not he best place to put this but...its the only place you guys look.

me and molotow are up for the team battle.

anyone else?
___________________________________________

[Seti]

some peeps o here have been askin for me to bump some of my old stuff, so here goes, pretty much in the same order they were drawn,
saber
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image006.jpg
random stickers
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/stix.jpg
insane
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/i.jpg
more sticker, to scale
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image017.jpg
insyne
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image022.jpg
insane
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insane3.jpg
zeph
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image032.jpg
sane
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image030.jpg
beauty
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image049.jpg
insyne
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image046.jpg
delete
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/DELETECOLOUR.jpg
syn
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image055.jpg
saber
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/saber3.jpg
waster
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/ripwaster.jpg
insane
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image026-1.jpg
sane
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image086.jpg
race
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/race.jpg

[AimoOne]

MEEE &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

PWWWEEEESEEEEEE :o :o :o :o :o :o :o

CAN I BE WITH YOUSSS IN THE TEAMY BATTLEY

[Seti]

hmm y not, wats the theme?

[Casa45]

Originally posted by La Coka Nostra+Apr 17 2007, 11:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (La Coka Nostra @ Apr 17 2007, 11:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 08:33 AM
s8nt...that first one is pretty good..
Jane...keep working on them simples...work oncleanes tho..
BigeL is Big Dope

ugh..sum sketches..and karaks...and blah

i quick one..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66.jpg

For Sinn..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/666.jpg

So from the feedback i got off FLOW..i came up with this style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66666.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6-1.jpg

the letter structure seems to be intact..anyways..what yah thinks..

crits..thanksss
I think the handstyle needs serious work...but the letters are coming along nicely. [/b][/quote]
I really dont like your char, and your letters and style is just boring to look at, flare that shit up a little bit...

[krazzie_ammo]

seti - man, i really liked your earlier stuff man, what happened?

there is no theme, i saw your photoshopped stuff, do you mind doing the photoshopping of the pieces?

pm, if you, or anyone else wants in.

[Thor_tfm]

yeah ill be up for that team battle&#33;
Seti that shits mad nice one.
Crits:
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1790/img0060dn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Sumoe]

"O" is too fat, other than that, nice.

[Seti]

cheers for the comments, i sorta left the real 3d behind a while ago, now its more abstract shapes piled ontop of each other, an yeh im up for doin the photoshopin&#39; no probs, shld we agree on a range of coulours to work with, so it all pieces togeher nicely at the end??

[AimoOne]

Casa..its the starting of a style...its going to be basic..at least im taking the simple approach and no going all out with arrows , addons , connections , colours , crazy fills ... think about that ... and i aint really too fussed about my karaks to be honest with you

And Thore..too good

[molotow_15]

awesome as usual seti

krazzie pm what the theme is and everything so i can crack on with
the charik, is it going be digi or pencil etc
colours and stuff

[DeproOne]

aimt2 and thor - i like them alot. kudos&#33;

heres todays damage. ive developed a new love for pen sketching :wub: . and new name idea, i feel more comfortable with these letters.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00101.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00141.jpg

i know i had no business doing this, but did.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00151.jpg

really sorry about the bluriness. my cameras been being funny

[G.SMooth]

which one is better? http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture026.jpg

[Sumoe]

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4365/dsc0725oh4.jpg

I used faces...if you gunna call me on a Die59 bite, fuck you.

[ESKE one]

thor- shyts fire
akron-good simple keep going
gsmooth- sry man im not feeling it im not feeling any of the letter exspecially the A sry good luck on that
edit: OMFG&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; SUME THAT SHYT IS SO HOT I CANT WAIT TILL U LAY THE COLOR DOWN
maybe you can make the m a shark and have the u as is fin idk just throwing ideas out there

here some pen sketches that i did for some girls in my school :ph34r:
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs024.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs023.jpg
crits?

[F.R.A.T.]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 02:41 PM
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4365/dsc0725oh4.jpg

I used faces...if you gunna call me on a Die59 bite, fuck you.
haha loving the E, not liking the u left arm thingy needs work

[Thor_tfm]

Nice sume but i think the e is a bit to small.

[molotow_15]

top one

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs4/i/2004/187/6/6/Circus.jpg

set, krazzie, aimo
this is the theme, work your stuff around this
shit will be nice[

[revolt92]

Eske you mother fucking P I M P &#33;&#33;&#33; yeah its alright, not great but with a little bit of tweaking here and there it could look good.

and sume, man i&#39;ve always liked youe shit but try define the face on the s a bit more, it took me a while to spot it.


peace

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 02:41 PM
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4365/dsc0725oh4.jpg

I used faces...if you gunna call me on a Die59 bite, fuck you.
zomgz die bite&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
lawl

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 17 2007, 02:41 PM
thor- shyts fire
akron-good simple keep going
gsmooth- sry man im not feeling it im not feeling any of the letter exspecially the A sry good luck on that
edit: OMFG&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; SUME THAT SHYT IS SO HOT I CANT WAIT TILL U LAY THE COLOR DOWN
maybe you can make the m a shark and have the u as is fin idk just throwing ideas out there

here some pen sketches that i did for some girls in my school :ph34r:
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs024.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs023.jpg
crits?
bumo to next page and thanks revolt it wat i do lol
and molotow was that directed to me?
and sume i love that e its so orgasmic :blink:

[Sumoe]

*sigh*

<_<

:(

[revolt92]

Hey sume didnt you say you wouldn&#39;t be on bs for a while, or was that sky?... :blink:

[Sumoe]

it was me...I took a nap and got out of writers block.

[revolt92]

I like naps :) oh wait we&#39;re starting chit-chat again, daaamn now ras will be on our case :(

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 17 2007, 09:17 AM
WHOAMIGAWD .... new page&#33;


Ras - like whoa&#33; awesome... but as that one guy said... needs some work here and there. I like ur style kid... and no I won&#39;t explain why I do cuz I can&#39;t... and we has this talk before&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

and everyone else on this page who is awesome... and they know it... is da bomb&#33;... cept for that toy as hell stuff :lol:

Well anyyyyyyyways, here&#39;s some doodles and stuff...

my fav Ragga artist... cuz he&#39;s so fresh&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-5.jpg

I lost this when I did a sketch for south pole.... but I found it behind my bed.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-4.jpg

Some throws influenced by big el... cuz he&#39;s sofaking rad&#33;
CYNIC
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-1.jpg

hate all you want... but whatever.
bump your throws are sick
my fucking camera battery is such shit it ran out within 15 minutes...new throw up soon

[G.SMooth]

Originally posted by G.SMooth@Apr 17 2007, 02:20 PM
which one is better? http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture026.jpg
any advice?

[whahappen?]

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3778/picture045bw4.jpg
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/6066/picture046ft2.jpg
fuck i just realized that looks like eyes....grr...

[nero122]

Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 17 2007, 12:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 17 2007, 12:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nero122@Apr 17 2007, 11:01 AM
like i said on msn lookin sick heisk neway heres my new piece n style http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sainesquid.jpg

crits
the overall look isn&#39;t bad...but I&#39;m pretty sure the letters suck, the reason I say pretty sure is because I cannot find them. [/b][/quote]
thanks man n ill draw theletters sepratly (sp)((hu givesa fuk))anyway i like youre one exept the &#39;e&#39; it a bit shit n the teeth look like theyre just like comin through on a mutant baby but i like youre shit alot .i know mine all sloppy but buses arent smooth .

[Sumoe]

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3409/dsc0736be8.jpg

I&#39;ma fix shit/add shit later.

[nero122]

you bitch i hate it when you add colour more just pure sex but the teeth still kilin the piece but as always sume will make it perfect

[kemzone]

Originally posted by Albert Fish@Apr 16 2007, 12:06 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/new.jpg
baby sitters club all day everyday.
it&#39;s fucking crazy i had to go like 20 pages back to find what i posted, anyway cheu i&#39;m really feelin&#39; this one

[F.R.A.T.]

sume dont like the colours, and albert fish iuno i dont really dig that style but watever do wat you do
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture16.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture17.jpg

[Sumoe]

nice, but some of the extensions fuck it up.

[ESKE one]

yo sume the coloring is hot but im not diggin the color you should of made it like red and dark purple or something idk enless theres a specific reason you made it that color

[Sumoe]

eh, I like it...haven&#39;t used blue in a while.

[AimoOne]

The colours are perfect..geez...it loks like a freaking shark...what more you want..he does it for him not fo you..if he wanted to know what colours yall wanted hes ask..&#33;&#33;&#33;

and Mek..no beef but you kinda have an high opinion...Cheu style is dope..and you shud do that bottom one over and over..and the arrow in teh back looks like Sumes kinda shit

[ESKE one]

either way shyt fire just saying that cuz your e looks kinda demonic

[F.R.A.T.]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 04:36 PM
and Mek..no beef but you kinda have an high opinion...Cheu style is dope..and you shud do that bottom one over and over..and the arrow in teh back looks like Sumes kinda shit
high opinion? i said i didnt like that style, and ya im not to hot with simples

[ThrowItUP]

sume - that shit is fire, lovin the colors too. soooo fuckin dope.

[AimoOne]

i bit your head off sorry frat. <_< :( :( :( ..that bottom simple is nice...keep doing them.. ;)

[crater]

sume im diggin that face one. that looks really tight.

lookin for crits on a throw

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg

[Slushi]

please tell me that doesnt say "DIP"

[TENPERCENTJUICE]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/Picture049-1.jpg
not really sure where to take it from there. didnt like the look of it w/ a 3d.

[sacwacko]

Originally posted by crater@Apr 17 2007, 04:45 PM
sume im diggin that face one. that looks really tight.

lookin for crits on a throw

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg
:( omfg :(


:blink: :blink: :blink:

[ESKE one]

sacwacko your not much better

and aimo i was just stating sumething so just calm down man damn

and fluffy bunnies are you the same cyni k in jersey?

[sacwacko]

wutever....
i think i no wut im talkin about on this 1....
but im not tryin 2 start shit....
just statin my opinion....
and i was talkin about the name....
not that he sucks or anything

[DIA]

eske you from jersey?

[crater]

yo sacko whats wrong with the name? no beef, i just like to hear opinions.

and im bumpin the pic

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg

[ESKE one]

no DIA im not from nj im from philly says it in the sig

[HuntingLOLs]

Originally posted by TENPERCENTJUICE@Apr 17 2007, 04:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/Picture049-1.jpg
not really sure where to take it from there. didnt like the look of it w/ a 3d.
its becomming something, bend the top part of the k abit, the R is strange work it out, the middle bar of the hole w/e is bad - make it same width. the a should connect in the top and not overlap
If you like you can try 3d, else just keep doing block simples like that

[toosickskillz]

im from philly tooo

[Casa45]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 04:02 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3409/dsc0736be8.jpg

I&#39;ma fix shit/add shit later.
This things banging, love the colors&#33;

BUT...WTF is it with the teeth... i dont like it at all&#33;&#33;&#33;

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 17 2007, 05:22 PM
im from philly tooo
thats great&#33;&#33;&#33; lol j/k but maybe wen you get a littl e better you could come bombing with the crew or something i dont kno no promises

pen sketch i did in school i fuked up the drop shadow and the O&#39;s
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs025.jpg

[SUM]

Originally posted by Casa45+Apr 17 2007, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Casa45 @ Apr 17 2007, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 04:02 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3409/dsc0736be8.jpg

I&#39;ma fix shit/add shit later.
This things banging, love the colors&#33;

BUT...WTF is it with the teeth... i dont like it at all&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
yeah for sure. that is sick

[Sumoe]

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/4793/dsc0741pu5.jpg

I could care less if you guys like it...

[Bazer]

it looks better now.

[near]

that sumoe is fireee i think the teeth is just to fend off biters...give the letters some teeth of their own to fight back :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010007.jpg

[toosickskillz]

EsKe---- haha i gotta longgg ways to gooo

near---THATZ SIC

[AimoOne]

oh shit..the two dopest pics all night have just arroved in the forum...geeeeez :o :o :o :o

Sume...nice
Near...FREAKY DOPEY WOPEY...I WANNA EXCHANGE NOW &#33;...Pwweessee :lol:

[crater]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 05:29 PM
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/4793/dsc0741pu5.jpg

I could care less if you guys like it...
dog you for sure know how to use some prismas. the blending is sick.

[sabe2]

the k part looks al il strang but comin along

[dim]

i like it with the drop shadow sume keep it up

[flclnaruto1213]

Sume thats tight as hell

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/408/pblj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[crater]

Originally posted by crater@Apr 17 2007, 05:10 PM
yo sacko whats wrong with the name? no beef, i just like to hear opinions.

and im bumpin the pic

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg

bumpin this.

fune, i think you need to get rid of the lines going into your letter and just have a regular background.

[flclnaruto1213]

...what on earth do you mean by that?

[Casa45]

Use different colors....

[dizzle_d]

Naruto- I really like that scratchy look your doin with your letters, that shits hot

Just some pen sketches I did during school. Crits would be appreciated
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6068/img1563rc2.jpg

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6749/img1565gt4.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

^thanks.

Dizzle i think theyre pretty good, work on the S most. Other than that just keep sketching

[AimoOne]

Naruto..i dont like how unclean it is..the letters are fairly decent..
Dizzle D Whizzle...im lieking them..uugh...lose the OH tho..kinda ghay..
Dip..dip..dip..dip..dip..dip..dip..please..please. .please..please..dont..dont..dont..write..write..w rite...DIP &#33;..like go and insert your penis inside the disk hole of Marckz Eckos Gettinsz Up &#33; ... then unload your romantic explosion over all of his incrdeible different styles that only a uber graffitixz taggers * =KINGS=* could do..&#33;&#33;&#33;




ugh tho..please..change your name..and then do BLOCK letters..you know..jyst hwo TRANE starts out..then gets good..( yeah..i played the game )

[flclnaruto1213]

thanks for crits all.
Damn are my letters that un clean? i mean can you be a lil more specific?
thanks.

[AimoOne]

its like..the out line is dead..slowly done..like you can tell..as when you go to outline with the purple..you stop..let the ink bleed..then go on..and do ti again..creating a very rough unclean outline..ten again..that could be your style/...then again..i coudlnt really care...as the letters are okay..

[flclnaruto1213]

Aiight i feel ya

[BIGel]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 05:29 PM
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/4793/dsc0741pu5.jpg

I could care less if you guys like it...
the u and the m on this are not the best ive seen from you, the left half of the u (especially the top) seems to be leaning the wrong way, but that s could be my favorite yet.

i like it how you lead strong with the S and finish strong with the E in your more recent pieces. it gives your stuff a great sense of proportion and balance. i also like the extensions on this one way more then on some of your earlier pieces becuz they&#39;re not overkilled, just enuf to give it style, but not look forced.

fuckin hell for your age your unbelievably talented, if i were you id look into art school after you graduate. good work.

[dizzle_d]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 17 2007, 06:10 PM

Dizzle D Whizzle...im lieking them..uugh...lose the OH tho..kinda ghay..

already took it out :)

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 17 2007, 06:21 PM
the u and the m on this are not the best ive seen from you, the left half of the u (especially the top) seems to be leaning the wrong way, but that s could be my favorite yet.

i like it how you lead strong with the S and finish strong with the E in your more recent pieces. it gives your stuff a great sense of proportion and balance. i also like the extensions on this one way more then on some of your earlier pieces becuz they&#39;re not overkilled, just enuf to give it style, but not look forced.

fuckin hell for your age your unbelievably talented, if i were you id look into art school after you graduate. good work.
thanks a lot man, for some reason it was hard for me to do a good "U" and "M" in this one, I still got a little bit of writer&#39;s block...

but yeah, I am lookin&#39; at art colleges, but right now I&#39;m a Sophomore and next year I was thinkin&#39; of going into my art program, you pretty much take all art classes, but my dad isn&#39;t really into this art shit, he says it&#39;s hard to get a good job with art as a major and I should focus more on academic shit...anyways thanks again. How old are you?

[Torrent]

Dizzle D: Work on your flow more with the letters. Make them fit better with one another.


http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7264/p3170022fo0.jpg

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/502/p3170023hs1.jpg

Critique on my letter structure? Working on my throw up on the top flick and a "hyve" piece on the bottom.

[AimoOne]

Torrent..pretty decent

uugh..For Sir.Serbia Mr. Ensr Aka Bohemain Basterd MSE etc etc etc.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/7777.jpg

with the super kool coffee stain..and my amazing handy..and my silly gay style.. <_<

:D

[dizzle_d]

Torrent- that last ones pretty ill, except for the middle part of the E, it kind of hooks downward and makes it look funky. my opinion. and what do you mean by make it flow more, I mean I understand what your saying, but how so?

Aimo- that is fire, like always, love the style

[capitol]

I know i suck, but i hgave nothing better to do then upload a bunch of shit pics..and show the world..
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1199/graf134mm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5512/graf133ju4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I think every day i get worse.
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7992/graf132ec3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ensr:Your Fist e is really weird, And if you dont like a letter(as it seems for you "S") drop it and get a letter you can do fluently.
Hyve:Im thinkin im alittle bit too toy to say this but you should make all the letters the same size.

[AimoOne]

i aint ENSR...i did it for ENSR.. :rolleyes: ..and you need to do straight up blocks

[capo93]

Originally posted by Casa45+Apr 17 2007, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Casa45 @ Apr 17 2007, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 17 2007, 04:02 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3409/dsc0736be8.jpg

I&#39;ma fix shit/add shit later.
This things banging, love the colors&#33;

BUT...WTF is it with the teeth... i dont like it at all&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
i dont mind the teeth the piece is sick and i like the way your style has prgressed i dare say the m is wearker than the rest and i dont like the horns on the e but other than that its fire sick job on the fill as always

[AimoOne]

yeah..actaully..the middle bar structure on the M is weak..Sume..also the U..i dont like how the bottom bar undents upwards..kinda like a W..i always fort that...
BS is dead tonight

a full on hardcore hard pressed freestyle &#33;

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/77777.jpg

crits

[Hazex]

looks good but maybe do the a w and m middles bars bigger

[AbYSS~>]

i know i suck.. and i didnt go simple..but heres what i did today ...crits please

http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/15882/2003301167142099810_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003301167142099810)

This turned out like shit..just wondering what u think of the d and i if i used those two

http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/12958/2003374021688680007_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003374021688680007)


=[ =[

help meh... im strugglin.

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 17 2007, 05:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one @ Apr 17 2007, 05:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-toosickskillz@Apr 17 2007, 05:22 PM
im from philly tooo
thats great&#33;&#33;&#33; lol j/k but maybe wen you get a littl e better you could come bombing with the crew or something i dont kno no promises

pen sketch i did in school i fuked up the drop shadow and the O&#39;s
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs025.jpg [/b][/quote]
envoy- im not gonna say shyt to you anymore cuz you dont listen to shyt
abyss- chill wit all that wak shyt do simples
amtwo- good shyt i fukes with the 3d

plz crit everytime i post i always get skipped neva get anycrits plz crit

[MainEvent]

aimo- 3d&#39;s dope, letters are kinda rough though. good concept, just kinda rough execution.

sumoe- shits fresh. the shark ish is dope. stay up

envoy- the blue and black one is the best. look at the letter structure guides in the tutorials thread. use the blocks and stay simple.

[Pegasus]

shit sume&#33; that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5701.jpg
Ker^
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5700.jpg
half arsed alfabet
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5699.jpg
might finish
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5698.jpg
temet
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5695.jpg
kemos
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5693.jpg
exchange with psilo
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5638.jpg
says talia

ssorry to dump all this stuff on u but i got my camera fixed

[Noddles912300]

Abyss take every ones advice. go simple.
eske some of the letters are messed up like the B and K. I dont like the extensions either.

[Captain]

Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 17 2007, 08:08 PM

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5695.jpg
kemos

dude. fucking simples. and bars. do &#39;em.

[MainEvent]

abyss- tutorials thread. go much much simpler, keyboard letters.

eske- shits alright. the M&#39;s the best letter. just keep the bars in proportion and keep sketching

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 17 2007, 03:41 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3778/picture045bw4.jpg
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/6066/picture046ft2.jpg
fuck i just realized that looks like eyes....grr...
bump...
i just sat in bed for 4 hours because my stomach hurt and fell asleep now i have to a read a long story and shit..

[HuntingLOLs]

pegasus i know everyone tells you to go simple etc. but i like the temet and kemos although some of the extensions are way off. the first &#39;e&#39; in temet is nice

[AimoOne]

Ugh..who ever said that the concept was executed roughly was becuz it was a straight up press hard freestyle..there for i could make it look cleeaann

and Pgasus has potential..but your letter strcuture is lacking mate

[MainEvent]

then make it look clean^

[enigmatic]

whahappeend. do something other than throws. practice bars or something. i dunno, get the letters down so you can elaborate. pegasus same for you.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2001.jpg

[AimoOne]

Same for you aswell mate ^

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 17 2007, 08:08 PM
shit sume&#33; that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

umm...Why do I need to go simple? :huh:

[capitol]

Blocky enough?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7138/graf140yj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6056/graf141ka2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sacwacko]

Originally posted by crater+Apr 17 2007, 05:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (crater @ Apr 17 2007, 05:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-crater@Apr 17 2007, 05:10 PM
yo sacko whats wrong with the name? no beef, i just like to hear opinions.

and im bumpin the pic

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0041.jpg

bumpin this.

fune, i think you need to get rid of the lines going into your letter and just have a regular background. [/b][/quote]
nvm

[Captain]

Originally posted by capitol@Apr 17 2007, 09:07 PM
Blocky enough?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7138/graf140yj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6056/graf141ka2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
well, yes and no. it&#39;s not so much about the blockieness as it is about the bars, the structure. i&#39;ma post up a sketch tomarrow, i&#39;ll pm you exactly what I mean.



shit sume&#33; that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;


hilarious.

[Pegasus]

haha nah the other guy man

[Pegasus]

Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 17 2007, 08:08 PM
shit sume&#33; that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5701.jpg
Ker^

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5638.jpg
says talia

ssorry to dump all this stuff on u but i got my camera fixed
bump for crits on these

[popshots]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2083/nerm12lj5.jpg
bazer exchange
enigma: make it legible
pegesus: give crits b 4 askin 4 them
capitol: listen to captain
crater: does that say dip or aip?

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Pegasus+Apr 17 2007, 09:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Pegasus @ Apr 17 2007, 09:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Pegasus@Apr 17 2007, 08:08 PM
shit sume&#33; that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5701.jpg
Ker^

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5638.jpg
says talia

ssorry to dump all this stuff on u but i got my camera fixed
bump for crits on these [/b][/quote]
crap&#33; i forgot to give you youre exchange...ill pm it to you tomorow. sorry. :)

but uhh.. it kinda looks like youre scared to overlap your letters. give it a try dude.

[React!]

ha&#33; MainEvent&#39;s sig had me rollin&#39;

[MainEvent]

^lol yeah, saw that on another site a minute ago and jacked it. thought it was typical bombingscience sig material.

popshots- feelin that simple.

[sacwacko]

Originally posted by capitol@Apr 17 2007, 07:00 PM
I know i suck, but i hgave nothing better to do then upload a bunch of shit pics..and show the world..
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1199/graf134mm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:blink: :blink: ur fill has a disease :blink: :blink:

[BIGel]

peg i believe your the one in need of some simples. the colorings nice though.

bigel east tlw my new book

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs15/i/2007/107/3/c/east_bigel_tlw_by_bigel.jpg
and since i just got this book i redid some old shit with backgrounds..
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/107/4/a/bang_ill_kill_you_by_bigel.jpg

[React!]

them shits is str8 frshh bigel feelin how you drew bombs fallin and shit..

[Albert Fish]

thanks kemz. and its all good mek. that first sketch looks pretty sume-ish, but you already know that.

[Sumoe]

BIGel is versatile, ill at piecing, doin&#39; throwies, handies, bombs, you name it this dude has it on lock...nice shit man.

[D E M O]

feedback would be great
to see what i have to work on


http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/6585/demo2ek0.jpg

[hungr]

some shit from when i was at work.. i never have enough room for the R ..goddamn those small notepads
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00223.jpg
someone inked this when i wasnt paying attention and kinda fucked the lines up a bit
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00225.jpg

ballin near peice back a few pages
sume i think u shoulda done the peice in red, make it on devil tip.. but none the less still looks crisp

[Pegasus]

good shit demo, great fading&#33; maybe try for symmerical next time?

[flclnaruto1213]

someone..inked it when you werent looking?
You sure you didnt just do a bad job and are trying to cover it up?

[hungr]

naw... i was waiting tables and someone at the bar inked it

[sky 5]

damn big el produces, makes me feel shitty for being lazy going to pack bowl and get started on a page, thank you big el . . .

demo i realy like it but i gave up trying to follow the bars to see if they all worked cuz they seem to come from nowhere . . make all teh random bars connected while keeping true to your letter form and you got something . . .

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Apr 17 2007, 08:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Apr 17 2007, 08:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Apr 17 2007, 03:41 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3778/picture045bw4.jpg
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/6066/picture046ft2.jpg
fuck i just realized that looks like eyes....grr...
bump...
i just sat in bed for 4 hours because my stomach hurt and fell asleep now i have to a read a long story and shit.. [/b][/quote]
hungr your u is small the r&#39;s leg is awkward

[levans]

fire as usual big el
demo looks like you got ur bars down...try develop the style/sexieness of ur letters
hungr try use more structure the letter width is unpredictable in some letters

havent inked it yet just wait for crits / suggestions before i touch it all up and ink it for the battle?
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9250/djfsjdbf014vz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MainEvent]

levans- hard to see, but the letters look good from what i can see. feelin the S

hungr- shits pretty good. maybe chill with some of the connections and just do a few to begin with until the letters start flowing into the connections more or cut back into another letter easier.

demo- that shits sick. the O is hard to make out though.

bigel- shits nice.

[near]

Originally posted by hungr@Apr 17 2007, 10:41 PM
someone inked this when i wasnt paying attention and kinda fucked the lines up a bit

lol sharon or one of teh gay dudes o_O...im comin for a roy jones hold the junior

big el u should b posting on the other thread...just a thought :)

[virtuallynameless]

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0088.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0087.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0086.jpg

crits appreciated&#33;

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 17 2007, 06:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 17 2007, 06:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BIGel@Apr 17 2007, 06:21 PM
the u and the m on this are not the best ive seen from you, the left half of the u (especially the top) seems to be leaning the wrong way, but that s could be my favorite yet.

i like it how you lead strong with the S and finish strong with the E in your more recent pieces. it gives your stuff a great sense of proportion and balance. i also like the extensions on this one way more then on some of your earlier pieces becuz they&#39;re not overkilled, just enuf to give it style, but not look forced.

fuckin hell for your age your unbelievably talented, if i were you id look into art school after you graduate. good work.
thanks a lot man, for some reason it was hard for me to do a good "U" and "M" in this one, I still got a little bit of writer&#39;s block...

but yeah, I am lookin&#39; at art colleges, but right now I&#39;m a Sophomore and next year I was thinkin&#39; of going into my art program, you pretty much take all art classes, but my dad isn&#39;t really into this art shit, he says it&#39;s hard to get a good job with art as a major and I should focus more on academic shit...anyways thanks again. How old are you? [/b][/quote]
Just go to an art school... I am going to one this winter in vancouver. I am gonna take video art kinda stuff and I am gonna film and make graff movies... so look out for my shit in the later years&#33;

To everyone on this page - Rawr&#33; you need to go paint all ur stuff.. cuz it&#39;s dope&#33;
and get this game while ur at it.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Since there&#39;s a new page... here ya go...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/twirly.jpg

[dizzle_d]

thats pretty nice man^

[popshots]

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/9864/nerm13zg7.jpg
yea i did it for aimt

[Wutchoogonnadoo?]

wha that for ? ^

[popshots]

umm i was bored so i did his name......but i relly messed up on the T
fluffy bunnies: i like the throwie

[Wutchoogonnadoo?]

Oh..Thanks Pop..ima have to do you one..whut you write again ?

Fluff..feeling the Y..and C..but thw N looks like two L&#39;s or I&#39;s

[popshots]

yo aimt y u got so many acounts??? i write nerm

[Wutchoogonnadoo?]

bcuz im bored and Whutchgonnadoo is the title of a very good song by Redman

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg

yeh dis game is okay. not the most amazing thing.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 18 2007, 11:06 AM

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg

yeh dis game is okay. not the most amazing thing.
oh man... I am gonna have to punch you in the face :lol:
every toy needs this game&#33;

[virtuallynameless]

Originally posted by virtuallynameless@Apr 18 2007, 10:10 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0088.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0087.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0086.jpg

crits appreciated&#33;
bump to next page for crits :)

[Fluffy Bunnies]

nameless... this is all I can say...

niga u nasty

[virtuallynameless]

that good or bad lol:S

[mones]

Hey, i&#39;m new here and wanted to post some stuff.. Crits please :)

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4483/graffxg3.jpg

I&#39;m not happy with the N - but.. yea

[-ShAmEE-]

new? dont look new. the standard toy, tr somthing crazy and it looks shit. it looks good. work on that style.bottom right part of that N, make it curved.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Welcome DJ Silk Drop Mooney

nice sketch&#33; everything is cool about it... just not brilliantly like omg quality.
Add more color&#33;

[CokulusOne]

newer sketch. this one is a bit more clean.

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/5194/p4170168gy5.jpg

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Wow Cokulus... ur my hero&#33;
cuz i love ur K with the twirly thing.
Wanna exchange?

[CokulusOne]

Haha, thanks man&#33;
i&#39;ve been on forums and everyone was like: boooo youre a toy&#33;
your stuff is good also&#33;

[NewbyTJ]

I havnt posted in a long time been working on simples and shit but heres some shit i did a week ago i found alying around tell me wat u think
My throwie
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture5.jpg
Another one
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture9.jpg
i wrote monica for my friend
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture6.jpg
was writin revolution but ran out of room
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture7.jpg
I kn theyre all sketchy and shit but wat u think i think i on right track for simples now and how u like my throwie style?

[dizzle_d]

mones thats pretty fresh
cokulus I like that but I think you should get rid of the lines comeing upward at the bottom of the letters
NewbyTj the last ones alright but I don&#39;t like how its at a slant


anyways I&#39;m bored anyone decent want to exchange?

[mones]

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 18 2007, 11:50 AM
new? dont look new. the standard toy, tr somthing crazy and it looks shit. it looks good. work on that style.bottom right part of that N, make it curved.
I&#39;m just new on this forum.. been in the graff-game for a year.. maybe more, i don&#39;t know really..

And thanks to you and everybody else :)

Cokulus: that&#39;s pretty nice.. Like the purple color in the middle.. I just think that the small twirls on the C and S don&#39;t fit.. But good work

NewbyTJ: I think it need&#39;s some flow.. But it has potential :)

[-ShAmEE-]

seen. welll WELCOME TO THE BEST WEBSITE FOR GRAFFITI&#33;....

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 18 2007, 12:36 PM
mones thats pretty fresh
cokulus I like that but I think you should get rid of the lines comeing upward at the bottom of the letters
NewbyTj the last ones alright but I don&#39;t like how its at a slant


anyways I&#39;m bored anyone decent want to exchange?
K... I write Cynik or cynic... or psynik or psynic... or cainyk or cainik... or sighnik... whatever floats ur boat&#33;

[dizzle_d]

alright I&#39;m workin on yours now, I&#39;ll have it up once I get home from school(3:00), haha I&#39;m in the greatest high school right now. we don&#39;t do anything.




Edit- I write Psilo

[NewbyTJ]

dizzle il do an exchange

[dizzle_d]

edittt

[ShIfTeD]

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/9092/dscn0819cv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?


havnt sketched in a looong ass time

[NewbyTJ]

S needs work ohter than that looks ight bottom of e a lil 2 skinny i guess ...stay up crots on mine////?

[Wutchoogonnadoo?]

Oh shit..Shifted .. your a Veteran.. :blink: :o :huh:

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by CokulusOne@Apr 18 2007, 11:56 AM
newer sketch. this one is a bit more clean.

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/5194/p4170168gy5.jpg
Here&#39;s my attempt at a twirly thing... I got inspired to do some twirly cuz I seen one a couple pages ago.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/twirly.jpg

[Stim]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Apr 18 2007, 12:55 PM
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/9092/dscn0819cv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?


havnt sketched in a looong ass time
Cool idea, something feels a little funny about that S though.

[trashhh]

lol. i dont like the twirly thing, but the throw up is bangin.. but the N is kinda hard to know its an N if u get me.. anyone could think its 2 l&#39;s

[NewbyTJ]

Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Apr 18 2007, 12:22 PM
I havnt posted in a long time been working on simples and shit but heres some shit i did a week ago i found alying around tell me wat u think
My throwie
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture5.jpg
Another one
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture9.jpg
i wrote monica for my friend
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture6.jpg
was writin revolution but ran out of room
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture7.jpg
I kn theyre all sketchy and shit but wat u think i think i on right track for simples now and how u like my throwie style?
bump for more crits

[Wutchoogonnadoo?]

Newby..do blocks
Shifted..do blocks
Cynik..not likin the twirly thing..its unorgiginal..i fraking love the throw
Cokololou...like i said..i dont like the twrily shit

sum shit

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/7777777777777777.jpg

spilt red bull all over the basterd &#33;