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Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-18-2007, 01:52 PM
edit ... no beef ... ill crit you properly ShIfTeD...the flow of the peice is pretty good...its cleaan..i just dont like the structure...although its a fairly good concept...but im not feeling the white line thru it

and Stim..just please..

Stim
04-18-2007, 02:01 PM
Shut your fucking hole with the beef... What the fuck is wrong with you?

React!
04-18-2007, 02:05 PM
he's on tha piff manzz yeroo 4/20 comin woot woot

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-18-2007, 02:06 PM
uugh..wha...React..PM me what im getting back for this karak you want me to do..

sorry..if i sounded an ASSSS....i kept getting the MBS bill shit coming up..and it twas seriously annoying.. :( :angry:

Dream Creation
04-18-2007, 02:07 PM
shifted dnt do blocks! i think it will kill ur style! erm more trile and error and er plan!

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 02:09 PM
Amt I love that pen sketch, I can't get over that style!

Some from today, I'm bad at color schemes.
Exchange with naruto-
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9027/img1567kz1.jpg

Exchange with fluffybunnies- sorry, I did most of this on the bus so it doesn't look so good
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/232/img1569hh9.jpg

critss please

ShIfTeD
04-18-2007, 02:09 PM
yeah i know i wasnt planning on it, i was just experimenting with a new style...i didnt feel like doing my 3D style this time

trashhh
04-18-2007, 02:14 PM
AMTWO i like that bad boy oh yeaa
Dizzle D not much to say bout it just keep working on it
Not feelin it shifted

flclnaruto1213
04-18-2007, 02:14 PM
hey dizzle thats dope thanks man. My thing for the exchange didnt come out so well so i just pmed it to dizzle :[

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 18 2007, 02:09 PM
Amt I love that pen sketch, I can't get over that style!

Some from today, I'm bad at color schemes.
Exchange with naruto-
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9027/img1567kz1.jpg

Exchange with fluffybunnies- sorry, I did most of this on the bus so it doesn't look so good
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/232/img1569hh9.jpg

critss please
:lol:
new page, crits please

flclnaruto1213
04-18-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Apr 17 2007, 05:46 PM
Sume thats tight as hell

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/408/pblj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
bump fr crits

Dizzle id try to use straighter more parallel lines especially on your k and c. On the first thing work on more parallel lines on the top bar of the F. Good overal

ShIfTeD
04-18-2007, 02:20 PM
i think id be pretty cool if you put cracks or did a cool fill thing

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 02:20 PM
thanks naruto- I love that color scheme and that drawings pretty sick

emokid
04-18-2007, 02:23 PM
flc, i like the f and the u, the n is ok and the e is a bit warped/ weird

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2484/dscn6391ji6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you'll have to excuse the sloppiness, after all it is only 5cm long and 1 and half cm high... smallest sketch i ever did do.

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 02:25 PM
Pear that sketch is fire
dammnn
I love the orange comin off the sides

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-18-2007, 02:29 PM
Trassshhhh...you havin a visual orgasm over my new styler...ill exchnage with you you sexy ooooocheiiee

Pear..looks..grimaaayyyyyyyy

FLFC...why didnt you do that shit when we battled...your hella easy beat me...its coming out good..im starrtin to like the grimeness...keep it up

Dizzle to the wizzle on a wednesday afternooooon ... uugh ...thats pretty good...work on cleaner lines mate...and remeber to keep your block sizes constitent or what ever the word is

anie 1
04-18-2007, 03:12 PM
pretty kool emo kid :)

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 03:12 PM
alright so I just did this. I'm mad bored
I need some new color schemes.
crits would be appreciated
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5062/img1570vq9.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-18-2007, 03:17 PM
dont have that extension on the P at the bottom. for S, the best way to help is look at other people S and see how they have structured theres, then get down and make as many S as possible until u like one which is good.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-18-2007, 03:23 PM
Originally posted by dizzle_d@Apr 18 2007, 03:12 PM
alright so I just did this. I'm mad bored
I need some new color schemes.
crits would be appreciated
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5062/img1570vq9.jpg
dat better not be a pink prisma... or I am gonna have to punch you in the face! I have been looking for some pink one's but I looked everywhere and they are like pussy... playing hard to get.

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 03:24 PM
yeah I'm having trouble with my S, no matter how many times I draw it, I always wind up doing that one.
can anyone help me with my S?
oh, and besides the extension on the bottom of the P and the S are my other letters alright?

Fluffy Bunnies
04-18-2007, 03:26 PM
you forgot my question... IS THAT A PINK PRISMA?!?!!

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 03:30 PM
yep. check yo messages

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 03:30 PM
ill have flix up later.
im telling you people this bc. i havent posted in awhile and im excited.
word.
peace niggs

Albert Fish
04-18-2007, 03:37 PM
cant wait kovergirl.

attention members of the toy forum... i've been doing simples for a year and a half, you don't see me crying:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/cheurok.jpg
hang in there and keep up the simples... this has been a message from dr.fish

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 03:40 PM
I love that Cheu

-ShAmEE-
04-18-2007, 03:41 PM
F TO U TO N TO K TO Y!...mutha fuckin funkay!!...looks DOPE

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 03:42 PM
I love you albert, but i hate those Rs and Ks
they kill it in my opinion, but thats me.

<3 you bby

Casa45
04-18-2007, 03:51 PM
pretty cool FISH~&#33;~&#33;~&#33;~

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 03:59 PM
And as promised, a buttload of pictures.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-1.jpg
Cum loads&#33; i know i switched up the shadow on the L oh L

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010008.jpg
cover backwards and upside down cept for da V
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010007.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010006-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010004.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003-1.jpg

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 04:03 PM
My nukkah funeral came over and did some throws awhile back, yesmam
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010002.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001-1.jpg

first vinyl ive ever done. some parts are fucked but i thought it came out decent.
the E fucking sucks.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010012-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010013-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010014-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010015-1.jpg

some suck ass canvas backrounds
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010016-1.jpg

this looks like barf
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010.jpg

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 04:04 PM
That Shit is Nice&#33;&#33;&#33;^

-ShAmEE-
04-18-2007, 04:05 PM
ur shit shouldn&#39;t be on lined paper.

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 04:06 PM
i hate using books.
i like having a hardsurface underneath it and i love the lightness of lined paper.
all blank paper i hate, it doesnt feel the same. and i do all my drawing in school

any more questions? ill get back to you later i gotta go play dragonball z budaki 2 right now.
fucking cell is being an asshole peace.

G.SMooth
04-18-2007, 04:14 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture027-1.jpg shud i color this?
crits please?
shud i color this?


i know i messed up the e

Casa45
04-18-2007, 04:25 PM
the canvas will come out good, like the background&#33;

MainEvent
04-18-2007, 04:32 PM
ayo generally i try to be nice with crits and be nurturing with advices (no homo) but ayte, that shits disgusting. tutorials thread

sabe2
04-18-2007, 04:51 PM
welcome mone likin it pretty sick

what u think??

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture10.jpg

sacwacko
04-18-2007, 05:21 PM
from what i see ....it looks decent....
but you mite wanna simple it up a bit?

the extension on the "s" made me say that

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 05:33 PM
Sabe lose that extension on the top of the S




I just copped the 48 prisma settt

G.SMooth
04-18-2007, 06:58 PM
nice
prismas are cool

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 07:00 PM
yeah man B)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5062/img1570vq9.jpg
crits please

D E M O
04-18-2007, 07:12 PM
feedback, crits appreciated&#33;

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1949/demo8qt1.jpg

dizzle_d
04-18-2007, 07:14 PM
I&#39;m likin that a lot Demo
shits fresh

capitol
04-18-2007, 07:26 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Apr 18 2007, 11:06 AM

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg

yeh dis game is okay. not the most amazing thing.
Some fag rights "Atrane" in my city, he writes it everywere and takes it way to seriously..i fucknig hate that faggot.

G.SMooth
04-18-2007, 07:29 PM
someone in my city used to write "trane".





http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture045.jpgshud this be inked after i fix the 3d on the y that i just noticed?

crits?

Untracked21
04-18-2007, 07:30 PM
thats a sick peice demo

BIGel
04-18-2007, 07:42 PM
i like that style demo, very minimal

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/108/0/a/not_quite_dead___by_bigel.jpg

Sumoe
04-18-2007, 07:48 PM
dayyyyum.

sank one
04-18-2007, 07:49 PM
sticker thread is dead so id figure id post this here

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0582.jpg


big el thats the best ive seen from you.

wanna exchange?

levans
04-18-2007, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by levans@Apr 18 2007, 07:13 AM

havent inked it yet just wait for crits / suggestions before i touch it all up and ink it for the battle?
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9250/djfsjdbf014vz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumb got no crits

TricksForKids
04-18-2007, 07:52 PM
Sumoe wheres my sketch you hillbilly?

*looking for team members for the next team battle, holla if youre worthy*

Sabe, keep it simpler, less blocks and twists in your letters, theyre not needed

Dsil, keep everything nice and simple like that "i"

Demo, you colour well, but, you either gotta go even crazier ( which i dont reccommend) or switch up your style back to the basics, cuz i cant stand the interlocking letters

Gsmooth, keep workin with that, aint half bad

and Bigel, the colours aint my fave, but that shits poppin regardless

*eidt* sank, colour that homie&#33; the n and K are horribly fresh and levans, throw a dark outline on that badboy

Sumoe
04-18-2007, 08:02 PM
sorry man, get it to you pretty soon...

sex without condoms
04-18-2007, 08:17 PM
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 18 2007, 04:03 PM
And as promised, a buttload of pictures.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-1.jpg
Cum loads&#33; i know i switched up the shadow on the L oh L

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010008.jpg
cover backwards and upside down cept for da V
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010007.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010006-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010004.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003-1.jpg
My nukkah funeral came over and did some throws awhile back, yesmam
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010002.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001-1.jpg

first vinyl ive ever done. some parts are fucked but i thought it came out decent.
the E fucking sucks.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010012-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010013-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010014-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010015-1.jpg

some suck ass canvas backrounds
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010016-1.jpg

this looks like barf
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010.jpg
bumpskidoodlesforfeedingthebacks

stroke
04-18-2007, 08:29 PM
^^ dope throws, epecialy that green and yellow one

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7159/stroke021sv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

best flick i could get, any crits??

MainEvent
04-18-2007, 08:37 PM
good shit dude. i like all the letters alot except for that R. character is cool though

AnteUp
04-18-2007, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by D E M O@Apr 18 2007, 07:12 PM
feedback, crits appreciated&#33;

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1949/demo8qt1.jpg
are those colored pencils? :huh: i likeyyyy :D

Stonk
04-18-2007, 09:13 PM
sex those throws are soo nice. i really like them especially the one with hate me in the "O" .. so good

Demo its really good but theres to much going on on the left side but not as much on teh right. maybe try and keep them both looking more like the left side.

haven&#39;t posted in forever not much improvement <_<

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new080.jpg

and a new name i have been working on i really like the tik, but not so sure about the name "tike". whatever. o and i know i keep effing up on the e too.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new081.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new079.jpg

and ignore the terrible shading its just the only one with a decent "E"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new082.jpg

tame345
04-18-2007, 09:35 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/200000007499b2a/1/29/nslpkkjZ3z_7aCnyf4pt9fDyRrfWMtbS.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/ml1G_qwu5z_pye_vM9oKjpSNajOmtmLl?referrer=hlnk)

improvement?

shifty!
04-18-2007, 09:41 PM
tike its looking pretty good, i would just take off that random circle above the T and I. heres some throws that i cant really choose to work with.

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/4867/ak001qn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8651/ak002qi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/3708/ak003wc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

feedback or which one you liek best, thanks

peace

Concentration
04-18-2007, 09:41 PM
Tame345********


Yeaaa Go Basic
Do a Straight Letter..
Dont Go Ahead Of Your Mind...
Basic Comes First..

Concentration
04-18-2007, 09:43 PM
Yo Shifty..
uh Do A Straight Letter
Show What U Got

Concentration
04-18-2007, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by stroke@Apr 18 2007, 08:29 PM
^^ dope throws, epecialy that green and yellow one

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7159/stroke021sv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

best flick i could get, any crits??
Put 3D On It..
And Dont Think About Coloring...
Make It Simple..
Do a 2 Color thing..

sank one
04-18-2007, 10:01 PM
way to triple post and all i see you do is giving crits and ive never seen anything from you.

shifty!
04-18-2007, 10:13 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/5134/ak004qq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres your simple...still want crits on those throws...peace

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:21 PM
CrITTZ PLEASE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i13.tinypic.com/33cx3sl.jpg

Casa45
04-18-2007, 10:30 PM
i like it, but do something with the bottom of the S. and throw something on it so it doesnt look blocky.

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:31 PM
its only a simplee....im new at it so i didnt wanna put anything on itt really..i need help wit the exstensions and what not

AnteUp
04-18-2007, 10:32 PM
sick-ummmm im not a fan of the s&#39;s wit out a tail buuuttt...it lukks iight...
ok well suggestion is to make a tail go at this angle &#092; comin off of tha straight tail and put a little straight line like you did on the first part of the S... i think i confused mahself...do you understand? :blink: :wacko:

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:36 PM
lol i think i gett u ima try n fix it right now...any suggestions for practicingg exstentions?

popshots
04-18-2007, 10:37 PM
too sick skillz: u dont need to do extencions yet jus do relly symples

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:39 PM
wus the "s" i did ok for a simple??

Casa45
04-18-2007, 10:40 PM
i would try a totally different S. make it rounder. give it some shape, ya know?

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:42 PM
ight

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:54 PM
some "A&#39;s" i did earlierr

Critz ??..which ones the best

http://i18.tinypic.com/2zp2lvt.jpg

d_g
04-18-2007, 10:56 PM
Bottom one, would be better if the left leg didn&#39;t &#39;flare&#39; out if you know what I mean.

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 10:57 PM
yeaa...i always see my mistakes soon as i postt :angry: lol....i see what you mean tho

Casa45
04-18-2007, 10:59 PM
this is something i did awhile back messing around with colors. the letters are just thrown together and look like shit, but check out the A and the S TOOSICKSKILLS

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6793/testingcolors2vl9.jpg

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 11:01 PM
i like that casa&#33;&#33;

i think i got my basic letters downn&#33;

Casa45
04-18-2007, 11:04 PM
now you know what i mean by shapes. these are basic and plane but also look kinda cool. lol i guess. :P

toosickskillz
04-18-2007, 11:06 PM
yeaa thanks for showin me&#33;&#33;

in school tomorrow im gonna practice and post some more S&#39;s and A&#39;s

Sumoe
04-18-2007, 11:13 PM
the "A"s and "S" aren&#39;t too bad but the "C" sucks ass.

Casa45
04-18-2007, 11:14 PM
yah just a quicky C. :)

levans
04-18-2007, 11:17 PM
what do u guys think i should do 4 colour???????i got a bunch of blues and greens any ideas?
and sume if u enter the toy battle im gonna kill u&#33; if u enter any battle its gotta be the advanced sketch battle :)
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/4499/djfsjdbf015xe9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mask_cib
04-18-2007, 11:18 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/digitalcamera077.jpg
not colored yet ill post it colored tomorrow

levans
04-18-2007, 11:31 PM
not bad mask^^^^^^work on some parts of your letters ie how the left of your a gets thin and goes thick again try keep it consistant

Samp1e
04-18-2007, 11:55 PM
mask -- looks alright, I really like that M in particular. I notice how you flattened the top of the piece to make it level, but it&#39;d look better if the A and S weren&#39;t so constricted by it.

levans -- dope. I dunno about you, but that just screams blues + dark purple to me.

casa -- nice n clean. same thing sumoe said about the C.

playing around with connections and whatnot:
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/922/20070418demigodeq9.jpg

AnteUp
04-19-2007, 12:13 AM
shame-duuuddddd u gotta do tha s and h&#39;s outline in dark blue then tha inside light blue and do a dark green outline on the a and light on the inside :D
casa-actually tha best from you but the c does suck ass
mask-purtyyy tight
samp1e- i always like ur shit...nice and clean like tha homie amtwo&#33; :)

hungr
04-19-2007, 12:15 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00228.jpg

Stim
04-19-2007, 12:20 AM
Levans - cool letters, clean the lines a little.

Mask - Good style, needs a tad more form to it though

Samp1e - Awesome

Hunger - fix the H but sick either way.

Pen sketch: http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9944/pic1011qa4.jpg

flclnaruto1213
04-19-2007, 01:56 AM
not bad. Work on your tag

sky 5
04-19-2007, 03:22 AM
Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 18 2007, 07:42 PM
i like that style demo, very minimal

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/108/0/a/not_quite_dead___by_bigel.jpg
every night i check in big el is gettimg busy while everyone else is catching zzz&#39;s . . .

inkbits
04-19-2007, 03:31 AM
:lol: I was bumping that, pressed quote looked down and you&#39;d beat me to it man. Real nice shit bigel. ..and agreed you&#39;re a busy lad, props on consistantly bringing the shit.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 08:54 AM
Its good that Bigel comes in here with his stuff...its so dope

Samplie...thats a purrty good simplish style there...great cleaness...keeep keeep keep it up

MainEvent
04-19-2007, 09:20 AM
samp1e- shits dope.

hungr- shits lookin better man.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 10:02 AM
uugh shi
Hungr..i like your style..keep it up

EDIT: by SUMOE...

wrong thread for you&#39;re ebay shit...and how many accounts do you have?

Fluffy Bunnies
04-19-2007, 10:48 AM
Whoa... hunger, I like the twirly thing... I unno but I am upsessed with those now :lol:

Fluffy Bunnies
04-19-2007, 10:52 AM
Yeah I got liek some new-ish kinda stuff...

like my dopeness to the maxX pen freestyle&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/freestyletothemaxXexXtremeDopeness.gif

my toyness... it shows&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Toy.gif

Yea wuteva
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Throwed.jpg

Some euro type ish I was trying out
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Toy.jpg

When I was doing the I, I pumped the pen and then a big mess of paint went on it...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Sinyk.jpg

I tried to blend but green was like dead
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/ForceFieldToTheMaxX.jpg

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 11:33 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4248/dsc0742xo4.jpg

I&#39;m so sorry BAWK...

I have to say this is probably my worst sketch in a couple months, I hate it, I&#39;ll color it if you want though...

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 12:28 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eas2.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eas.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/EARI.jpg
sume-last time you did that a fade i liked it, but not on this one for some reason. Over all its still good though.


cynic- bottom one is the best, the others are ok too but i really like the bottom one.

dizzle_d
04-19-2007, 12:36 PM
fluffybunnies- I like those, 3rd and 4th are fresh

Sume- that shit is hot man, as always

Garbage down tha way- I like the colors on the first one






anyone want to exchange?
I&#39;m mad bored.
:huh:

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 12:47 PM
id be down. what you write?

dizzle_d
04-19-2007, 12:52 PM
I write Psilo
what you write?

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 12:54 PM
eas or eari, whateva you prefer. ill get started now but i cant scan that shit til after school

dizzle_d
04-19-2007, 12:54 PM
yeah same

Stonk
04-19-2007, 01:02 PM
Originally posted by Stonk@Apr 18 2007, 09:13 PM
sex those throws are soo nice. i really like them especially the one with hate me in the "O" .. so good

Demo its really good but theres to much going on on the left side but not as much on teh right. maybe try and keep them both looking more like the left side.

haven&#39;t posted in forever not much improvement <_<

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new080.jpg

and a new name i have been working on i really like the tik, but not so sure about the name "tike". whatever. o and i know i keep effing up on the e too.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new081.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new079.jpg

and ignore the terrible shading its just the only one with a decent "E"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new082.jpg
bump because of only one unhelpful comment does no one get crits anymore unless its by sumoe, sky5, trash, etc. anymore? no disrespect to them they deserve all the positive comments they get, but other people deserve shit too.

Garbage hmm i dont like the e or s at all and the a is ok i guess for an extremely simple letter. just make all the letters kinda similar. the bottom one is ok though just maybe fatten it up a bit.

Sumoe i love it, the a is sooooooo good, and i really like the k as well. i think you should color it in.

Fluffy the simple is decent, the I seems kinda outta place. I really like the "Kill". work on the throws though

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 01:22 PM
keep that shit up ^ ..them simples are nice...keep using bars..i fucking love the bottom 2...whao..:wub:..that bottom is orgasmic

Dinan 3er
04-19-2007, 01:23 PM
working on my letters. My letter "b" sucked and I didnt have any that I liked so here is the A and C page.
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/a.jpg
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/c.jpg
any advice is very much appreciated.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-19-2007, 01:40 PM
For some reason, all those letters don&#39;t work but you got the idea of morphing ur letters... just keep at it and I bet you will get it some day... or if ur emo, I don&#39;t think you&#39;ll be around for long haha

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 02:01 PM
i hope you aint emo..aahahhahahahaaaaaaaaa

Samp1e
04-19-2007, 02:05 PM
dinan -- reason why your more complex letters aren&#39;t working is because you&#39;re trying to make a huge leap in a short amount of time. your simple letters don&#39;t look so good themselves and because you&#39;re trying to build off of a weak starting structure your addons will suffer, and won&#39;t look good either.

stonk -- solid simples, and keep working on your E. with some tweaking I could see them as a purty eurostyle

garbage -- not really feeling the first or second one, the letters just feel wierd. i think the third&#39;s got potential with tweaking and some more consistency.

sumoe -- piece isn&#39;t bad at all, it&#39;s just not as tricked out as your other pieces are.

fluffy -- sick pen freestyle, haha. solid stuff, keep doing your thing.

bigel -- that. is. hot. love the colors and everything. what&#39;d you use to do the white wings/clouds?

stim -- solid. i dig the M and its forceshield.

hungr -- i like, i like. the swirly on the H doesn&#39;t fit with the rest of the piece though.

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/922/20070418demigodeq9.jpg
just looking for more feedback.

Thor_tfm
04-19-2007, 02:09 PM
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8286/img0062rt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shifty!
04-19-2007, 02:42 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 18 2007, 09:41 PM
tike its looking pretty good, i would just take off that random circle above the T and I. heres some throws that i cant really choose to work with.

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/4867/ak001qn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8651/ak002qi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/3708/ak003wc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

feedback or which one you liek best, thanks

peace
crits? which on you like better...peace

dim
04-19-2007, 02:45 PM
shifty that first one is sick i rele like it

Thor_tfm
04-19-2007, 02:45 PM
Originally posted by Thor_tfm@Apr 19 2007, 02:09 PM
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8286/img0062rt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like the top one the best.
bump for bottom of the page.

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 02:50 PM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Apr 19 2007, 02:05 PM
dinan -- reason why your more complex letters aren&#39;t working is because you&#39;re trying to make a huge leap in a short amount of time. your simple letters don&#39;t look so good themselves and because you&#39;re trying to build off of a weak starting structure your addons will suffer, and won&#39;t look good either.

stonk -- solid simples, and keep working on your E. with some tweaking I could see them as a purty eurostyle

garbage -- not really feeling the first or second one, the letters just feel wierd. i think the third&#39;s got potential with tweaking and some more consistency.

sumoe -- piece isn&#39;t bad at all, it&#39;s just not as tricked out as your other pieces are.

fluffy -- sick pen freestyle, haha. solid stuff, keep doing your thing.

bigel -- that. is. hot. love the colors and everything. what&#39;d you use to do the white wings/clouds?

stim -- solid. i dig the M and its forceshield.

hungr -- i like, i like. the swirly on the H doesn&#39;t fit with the rest of the piece though.

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/922/20070418demigodeq9.jpg
just looking for more feedback.
dope piece and name(excpet for the m)
thor the middle of the h is strange
shifty do the k on the sharp looking one its better and i like the first throw excpet since the o doesnt flow very well making it the biggest letter isnt a good idea

Dinan 3er
04-19-2007, 02:53 PM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1-1.jpg

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 03:02 PM
No one here gives crits like they used to.. :(

Diann 3r..go simple..like...blocks..pwwesse
Thor..with sum fine tweak and such...shittll be dope..post it in the Pen Freestyles Thread..
Shifty....the top on is okay..but cum up with sumthing more ORIGINAL..that K is the most used throwie K in the world of throws..and iv seen that D before cuz i used it for nsperation when i wrote Dub

why doesnt Tricks , Fosale , Sky , Pesk and Uuuuh post here as much as they used too.. :( :( :( :( :(

NewbyTJ
04-19-2007, 03:03 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ+Apr 18 2007, 01:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NewbyTJ @ Apr 18 2007, 01:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NewbyTJ@Apr 18 2007, 12:22 PM
I havnt posted in a long time been working on simples and shit but heres some shit i did a week ago i found alying around tell me wat u think
My throwie
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture5.jpg
Another one
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture9.jpg
i wrote monica for my friend
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture6.jpg
was writin revolution but ran out of room
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture7.jpg
I kn theyre all sketchy and shit but wat u think i think i on right track for simples now and how u like my throwie style?
bump for more crits [/b][/quote]
Last time bump i been told do do blocks but arnt these basically blocks and i really need feedback on my throwy i like it but what u guys think

Fluffy Bunnies
04-19-2007, 03:07 PM
like omg I got a new name...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DRagonstyle.jpg
I think it&#39;s my best one yet.. cuz you know, I am cool like that.

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 03:07 PM
:lol:

nice shit fluffy. :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thor_tfm
04-19-2007, 03:08 PM
NewbyTJ - yeah they are blocks but they still aint good. fuck the 3d for the moment dont even bother with it just concentrate on the letters. work on each individual letter say give space between them you can work on how they go together when the structure is good. basically do what your doing but try and make em look as much like the letters on yopur keyboard as possible.
Dinan - get rid of all those connections now again look at your keyboard and draw those letters or look at different fonts on word etc and copy em.

Samp1e
04-19-2007, 03:09 PM
oh man that&#39;s hot. :lol:

Aska.
04-19-2007, 03:10 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 19 2007, 03:07 PM
like omg I got a new name...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DRagonstyle.jpg
I think it&#39;s my best one yet.. cuz you know, I am cool like that.
you should get something happening under that D.. like the rest of your peice

Captain
04-19-2007, 03:13 PM
thor- I like it, but not as much as some of your other stuff.
samp1e- everthing but the m seems pretty good.
stonk- looks good, nothing much to say but to keep at it.

I haven&#39;t sketched for a month or two, and i know i&#39;ve gotta go back to simples, bit i&#39;ve gotta ask, how does everyone here get clean lines when they do a final tracing? look at this:

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/2662/sinsketchui2.jpg

when i go in to ink on a different piece of paper it just seems 10 times less clean:

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/8886/inksinyl4.jpg

oh and an idea for the shame battle:

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6651/shamesketchmr7.jpg

[edit] goddamnit, sorry i forgot to resize those. won&#39;t happen next time.]

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 03:14 PM
For Psilo, obviously.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/psilo.jpg
Trying stuff.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eriespeice.jpg

Newbtj- The sec is ugly. I don&#39;t like the daggers on the top of the letters. However, monica looks good as does revolut...? cept for the t in revolut(ion). dont let it go all over the place like that. Atleast you can do block letters unlike some people on here.

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 03:15 PM
the pics are too big...

it looks like your press down hella hard on the paper don&#39;t do it and you should be fine.

NewbyTJ
04-19-2007, 03:16 PM
i like the sin one loose the lil addon on the I but im not feeling the shame peice although the m a lil chillen
Crits my throwie plzzzzzzzzzzz
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture5.jpg

DeproOne
04-19-2007, 03:22 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00021.jpg

trying to get a style goin..

Thor_tfm
04-19-2007, 03:22 PM
wtf man dont cry thats hardly ebeef hahaha.
[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8286/img0062rt4.jpganyway once more see if i can get some help with this.

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 03:24 PM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 19 2007, 03:22 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00021.jpg

trying to get a style goin..
ZOMFGZ DEWD THERS A C&#33;+Y IN 0HI0 N4MED AKRON LERN JOO HISTORY BITUR+0y&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
on the real....your R is awkward the lower right leg is and the u or o or w/e is huge
sec change the lower portion of your s its...bad and wide

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 03:25 PM
nice shit Thor the "T" is semi-wack though, It&#39;s not too bad but could definately use some work, the "R" is ill though.

FunkSoul
04-19-2007, 03:31 PM
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5702/oasti0.jpg

New letter style I&#39;m trying out. Hope you like

Fluffy Bunnies
04-19-2007, 03:32 PM
Smooth it out... I uno how to explain it but smoothness is key

DeproOne
04-19-2007, 03:37 PM
what. it says AKRON. no s, no t. is it really that bad? and no im not emo, where the fuck did u get that from?? and since "THERS A C&#33;+Y IN 0HI0 N4MED AKRON", should i change my name??

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00011-1.jpg

i know i mest up on the second N, so i just focused on the shadowing on this 1

-Sinn-
04-19-2007, 04:13 PM
Depro1 - I like that ninja thing i rly like that style of simples to

Funksoul - i dont know im not a big fan of sharp stuff

heres somethin i got kicked outta art for
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture208.jpg

crits?

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 04:14 PM
lmao&#33;...howd it feel??


its a nice piece though...i dont really like the I

virtuallynameless
04-19-2007, 04:14 PM
nice stuff thor

flclnaruto1213
04-19-2007, 04:14 PM
work on the 3d it looks shabby

ASB_ONE
04-19-2007, 04:17 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 19 2007, 11:33 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4248/dsc0742xo4.jpg

I&#39;m so sorry BAWK...

I have to say this is probably my worst sketch in a couple months, I hate it, I&#39;ll color it if you want though...
smokers jokers ravers tokers, im bak after a brief hiatus (??*?*?)

sume how the hell u get so good dood&#33;&#33; haha i aint got any sketches right now, shit i aint even got a pencil sharpener but ill post up soon

this page needs to look at the proportions of its letters part from thor im kinda liking that style.

sume get at me my man&#33;&#33;

GUEST&#33;

(hello all the BSC heads sorry i left ya i want ya back in my life baby)

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 04:19 PM
YEY....GUEST IS BACKK &#33;&#33;&#33; :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 04:29 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Apr 19 2007, 04:17 PM
smokers jokers ravers tokers, im bak after a brief hiatus (??*?*?)

sume how the hell u get so good dood&#33;&#33; haha i aint got any sketches right now, shit i aint even got a pencil sharpener but ill post up soon

this page needs to look at the proportions of its letters part from thor im kinda liking that style.

sume get at me my man&#33;&#33;

GUEST&#33;

(hello all the BSC heads sorry i left ya i want ya back in my life baby)
I thought you was dead negro...ha, nice to see you back though...thnx, but was I a lot worse before? haha, I didn&#39;t think I got too much better but now lookin&#39; back at my shit when you posted I realize I did get better...haha, I still owe you a GUEST sketch...

alive
04-19-2007, 04:33 PM
rep bsc&#33;

word sume, ur dope, but i fuckin hated ur style. i second asb&#39;s crits.

we gotta get a BSC battle going.

Bazer
04-19-2007, 04:33 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 19 2007, 11:33 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4248/dsc0742xo4.jpg

I&#39;m so sorry BAWK...

I have to say this is probably my worst sketch in a couple months, I hate it, I&#39;ll color it if you want though...
this is one of the worst things ive seen you do dude... the arrow on the k... cmon man&#33;&#33;

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-19-2007, 04:34 PM
Fuck you Poopie Pants.. :P :P :lol: ..although i do agree with you...i like the B

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 04:35 PM
:lol:

I know...I just couldn&#39;t get into BAWK&#39;s name...I ain&#39;t gunna color it, maybe I&#39;ll do him a better one someday.

Bazer
04-19-2007, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 19 2007, 04:34 PM
Fuck you Poopie Pants.. :P :P :lol: ..although i do agree with you...i like the B
dude, dont call me that. on bombing science im bazer seis(6)...... :ph34r: no everbodys gonna call me poopie pants.

alive
04-19-2007, 04:37 PM
nah chill, its dope, the only thing that really bothers me is the bottom of the B. i think it woulda been better without the wierd extension, and connecting it instead of leaving it on top.

Bazer
04-19-2007, 04:46 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 19 2007, 04:35 PM
:lol:

I know...I just couldn&#39;t get into BAWK&#39;s name...I ain&#39;t gunna color it, maybe I&#39;ll do him a better one someday.
do kinda like this. but make the furthest left side of the b about as tall as the part of the k on the very right.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/bawk.jpg

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 04:58 PM
just a mess aroundd i did in school

CriTz??

http://i17.tinypic.com/43wukok.jpg

Jroc1993
04-19-2007, 05:03 PM
i like the bottom left one best, is yur sig a real place?

Jroc1993
04-19-2007, 05:07 PM
oh well watever if it is it looks pretty sweet

alive
04-19-2007, 05:08 PM
looks dope as fuck. but the graff is wack

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 05:20 PM
I used to write sik too until I realized I wasn&#39;t sik so I stopped. But whatever you wanna do.

Deadpoolzer0
04-19-2007, 05:35 PM
Old stuff that has color on 1 2 4...3 is pen and recent with new tag...
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6453/dsc03660pa7.th.jpg (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03660pa7.jpg)
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4792/dsc03674ok3.th.jpg (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03674ok3.jpg)
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5800/mmmvb8.th.jpg (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mmmvb8.jpg)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5003/dsc03723tu7.th.jpg (http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03723tu7.jpg)

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 05:40 PM
read the NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD. ;)

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 05:46 PM
any more critzzz??

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 05:58 PM
try a new name? or make the c flow better and dont do the addons on the i.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5714.jpg
haha got bored last night^
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5715.jpg
will finish^

Bazer
04-19-2007, 06:02 PM
doooooood...overlap your letters a little&#33; just try it&#33;

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:04 PM
haha ok... next time :) bt is it good?

G.SMooth
04-19-2007, 06:08 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture047.jpg i did this for burst, am i doing simples right?

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:13 PM
partially, go simpler on the r and the s but it seems like youve got the rest down structure wise

shifty!
04-19-2007, 06:15 PM
i would just do block, no curves and shit...new throw

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/5241/ak005fo3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
feedback?? you know the deal

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:23 PM
nice, but id only have 1 drop thingy but thats me

AnteUp
04-19-2007, 06:23 PM
shifty-lukks ok jus dont like the pointy shit on the o and e (but i can see why you did it, so it would kinda take on the same style as the d) lukks good othr than that...
burst-get ur structure down
mr.pegasus- nice toes... :ph34r: and the letters need to be moved closer...but othr than that it lukks good

CRITS ON SIMPLE FROM CLASS

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/notes-1.jpg

.Auro.
04-19-2007, 06:30 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 19 2007, 05:58 PM
try a new name? or make the c flow better and dont do the addons on the i.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5714.jpg
haha got bored last night^
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5715.jpg
will finish^
i love the second one i&#39;m intrested in what your gonna do with the background

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:33 PM
i can see the relevance of the graffiti and the subject but good xept 4 the r.... but good structure and yes, i try to keep them clean by having other ppl put my foot in their mouth haha
edit: im thinkin light blue to dark lue with a green outline

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 06:38 PM
lol on my desk...my mom is gonna kill me :D

CriTzz PLeAseE



http://i16.tinypic.com/43ms4s0.jpg

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:40 PM
better thatn your past ones and ever heard of a rubber?

dim
04-19-2007, 06:41 PM
ante up i rele like your simple styles keep it up

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 06:48 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3778/picture045bw4.jpg
+
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
=
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/663/picture047cv1.jpg
:)
sik make all your letters the same size

dim
04-19-2007, 06:50 PM
yo i love that blue one i like the bottom part how all the letters coil

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 06:51 PM
lol....yeaa i erased itt

but i got my "S" down now i need to work on my other letters

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 06:52 PM
not feelin the bars but the middle 1 is good

shifty!
04-19-2007, 06:53 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6485/ak006fa5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

took out the pointy things on my O and E and rounded the top of the D, which one you like better?

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 19 2007, 06:48 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3778/picture045bw4.jpg
+
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
=
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/663/picture047cv1.jpg
:)
sik make all your letters the same size
yea bump
doe dope throw i reaaaaly like it

AnteUp
04-19-2007, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 19 2007, 06:23 PM
shifty-lukks ok jus dont like the pointy shit on the o and e (but i can see why you did it, so it would kinda take on the same style as the d) lukks good othr than that...
burst-get ur structure down
mr.pegasus- nice toes... :ph34r: and the letters need to be moved closer...but othr than that it lukks good

CRITS ON SIMPLE FROM CLASS

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/notes-1.jpg
new page&#33;&#33; CRITSSSSS PLEEEEAAAZZZ
whahappen-blue one is tight
and heres another simple nyuuhhhgggrrrr
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz-1.jpg

edit:tha flash fucked it up :angry: <_< :) <_< ;) <_< :angry: its all gud...ill fuck that bitch up later -_-

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 07:14 PM
i dont know wat to think.... the idea and colurs and some letters are good but... the others are strange... im sorry but i dont like your r&#39;s theyre too curvy.

shifty!
04-19-2007, 07:17 PM
first ones pretty dope, second one kinda looks like hot dogs with mustard on it, no beef intended. some of the letters are to curvey for me though. but the first one is dope.

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 07:23 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 19 2007, 07:17 PM
first ones pretty dope, second one kinda looks like hot dogs with mustard on it, no beef intended. some of the letters are to curvey for me though. but the first one is dope.
haha spot on, no beef tho ante, its just too curvy lol but shifty is right, the first one is better :D
but no beef :ph34r:

AnteUp
04-19-2007, 07:23 PM
yea...the last one is based on my love for hotdogs... :( im sooo hurt...i couldnt find a color for the relish :( <_< :lol: :lol: :lol: thanks for opening my eyes :lol: didnt see that

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 07:33 PM
haha well your eyes are open now :) but post up more pics&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

AnteUp
04-19-2007, 07:43 PM
ummm ok im still toy as fuck but hurr ya goe...didnt get many crits on this...(did get one from mr.bigel&#33;&#33;)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/kraez.jpg
throwie...crits pleaz
edit: i kno its sloppy...if yall think its gud then ill redo it nice and clean like krispie kreme... :blink: umm sorry for the gay rhyme...jus had to say it :lol:

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 07:45 PM
BumP.....

Shud I ColOr??

& CriTz pleaseeee

http://i14.tinypic.com/30dl4bb.jpg

bouncingsoul
04-19-2007, 07:47 PM
Pooooooooooooooooooooooooooop

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0730.jpg

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by toosickskillz@Apr 19 2007, 07:45 PM
BumP.....

Shud I ColOr??

& CriTz pleaseeee

no, you don&#39;t need to worry about color or 3D for a while.

Mr. Knewsta-not feeling it as much as some of your other characters.

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 07:50 PM
nice bouncing soul and dont colour i sik, now work on your i and k

ThrowItUP
04-19-2007, 07:51 PM
whats with all the HUGE ass pictures?

-Sinn-
04-19-2007, 07:55 PM
I already posted this in the tag thread but nothins happenin there

anteUP- I like that hot dog one pretty neat and i love ur style on the vertical one
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture209.jpg

sketch13
04-19-2007, 07:55 PM
Originally posted by stroke@Apr 18 2007, 08:29 PM
^^ dope throws, epecialy that green and yellow one

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7159/stroke021sv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

best flick i could get, any crits??
love the character....

sex without condoms
04-19-2007, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?+Apr 19 2007, 03:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Wutchoogonnadoo? &#064; Apr 19 2007, 03:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>why doesnt Tricks , Fosale , Sky , Pesk and Uuuuh post here as much as they used too.. :( :( :( :( :([/b]
more new flicks&#33;&#33; and a bumpp
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003-2.jpg
pen freebie 420&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010002-1.jpg
pencil junk
Tommorow is420 KIDDIES&#33; fuckin smoke blunts *****s&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001-2.jpg


Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 18 2007, 08:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sex without condoms@Apr 18 2007, 04:03 PM
And as promised, a buttload of pictures.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-1.jpg
Cum loads&#33; i know i switched up the shadow on the L oh L

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010008.jpg
cover backwards and upside down cept for da V
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010007.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010006-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010004.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003-1.jpg

first vinyl ive ever done. some parts are fucked but i thought it came out decent.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010015-1.jpg
this looks like barf
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010.jpg
bumpskidoodlesforfeedingthebacks[/quote]

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 08:18 PM
mmmm i love u sex without condoms

dim
04-19-2007, 08:22 PM
sex without condoms your throws are fuckin illll and the record is dope to

prank
04-19-2007, 08:22 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/4423/image120um7.jpg
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8342/image121du9.jpg
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4364/image122ug4.jpg

malfunktion in yer junktion&#33;

ESKE one
04-19-2007, 08:23 PM
yea 420 im smoking

nuthin

shifty!
04-19-2007, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 19 2007, 06:53 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6485/ak006fa5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

took out the pointy things on my O and E and rounded the top of the D, which one you like better?
no feedback, other then whahappen, thanks man...

so could i get some feedback, anything??

peace

ThrowItUP
04-19-2007, 08:45 PM
if your gunna do those squirts/drips only do them on one side, looks retarded IMO.

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 08:59 PM
doe maybe try to incorporate the left side of your d where its sharp into the o or e somehow
i can draw you up an example, if you dont get me, tomrow if you want..

capitol
04-19-2007, 08:59 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5640/graf154ej2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Ionno if this is simples..but anyways..(top one was done with a dried up marker..)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5681/graf155ka1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Shifty&#33;:Its lookin alright..try doin a better fill though.Like..without crayons/pencil crayons
Prank: i may be incredibly toy but i dont like the randomness of your backgrounds.

dim
04-19-2007, 09:04 PM
yo envoy if i were you i wouldnt color your stuff yet and you might want to work on your simples, dont do arrows until your good

toosickskillz
04-19-2007, 09:08 PM
i need help with my " I" ....i need ideas for it

shifty!
04-19-2007, 09:09 PM
nah, i get what you mean whahappen...i will draw one up later. thanks for the advice though...

dim
04-19-2007, 09:21 PM
shifty i like your "d"

neuk
04-19-2007, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by capitol@Apr 19 2007, 08:59 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5640/graf154ej2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Ionno if this is simples..but anyways..(top one was done with a dried up marker..)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5681/graf155ka1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Shifty&#33;:Its lookin alright..try doin a better fill though.Like..without crayons/pencil crayons
Prank: i may be incredibly toy but i dont like the randomness of your backgrounds.
you do realize envoy is a suv right? it&#39;s gravy tho baby.

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 09:35 PM
no it&#39;s not...

work on the first two, but forget about the third for now...

in the first two your "E"s are fine but you need to work on "Y"s, and in the first one you need to work on your "N"s and "V"s...just keep practicing.

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 19 2007, 05:58 PM
try a new name? or make the c flow better and dont do the addons on the i.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5714.jpg
haha got bored last night^
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5715.jpg
will finish^
envoy- WORK ON YOUR 3D&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
Shifty&#39;- do the bubble things on one side only plz....
bump for crits plz : mainly on 2nd one

BIGel
04-19-2007, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 19 2007, 05:58 PM
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5715.jpg

ah i wish you had better grasp of your letters cuz your style is honestly one of my favorites. i love the extensions and the flow of the piece, but i cant see well put together letters. i think you&#39;re putting too much effort into the final product and not enuf into each individual part, if that makes any sense. CONCENTRATE on getting those letters more solid and that&#39;ll make one hell of a piece. good work though.

Sumoe
04-19-2007, 09:37 PM
yeah, the overall look is nice, but each individual letter isn&#39;t...

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 09:39 PM
i dont mind the e and o

TricksForKids
04-19-2007, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze+Apr 19 2007, 04:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (1nOnly Baze @ Apr 19 2007, 04:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 19 2007, 11:33 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4248/dsc0742xo4.jpg

I&#39;m so sorry BAWK...

I have to say this is probably my worst sketch in a couple months, I hate it, I&#39;ll color it if you want though...
this is one of the worst things ive seen you do dude... the arrow on the k... cmon man&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
Aw muffin face :rolleyes: lol, aint bad at all, i want your hot colours on it, but i guess i can wait till another day, whats all this BSC talk goin on? update the bawkster&#33;

capitol
04-19-2007, 09:48 PM
Originally posted by neuk@Apr 19 2007, 09:29 PM
you do realize envoy is a suv right? it&#39;s gravy tho baby.
Yea i was thinkin of makin a sketch similar to the symbol for it..it might be corny but it would be kinda funny,

Stonk
04-19-2007, 10:23 PM
pegasus the first one really isn&#39;t that good at all and def work on your hand. the bottom though looks good, i cant really make out the letters though.hmm

bored..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new083.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new084.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new085.jpg

i think i messed it up with teh forcefield. critz please?

<~ReSiN~>
04-19-2007, 10:26 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/nuclearresin.jpg

:blink: cartooney&#33;&#33;

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 10:29 PM
nice, dont like the tope of the i or the bend in it, but well structured utha wise, and thats justplayin around, my hands better than that

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 10:33 PM
not feelin it as much as usual resin.....

dormnt
04-19-2007, 10:50 PM
hey everyone this would be my first post here at bombing science.
fist some crits

tike: im feelin those letters

resin: pretty hot

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h312/moncef/2311120.jpg

thats a work in progress, any crits would be very much appreciated

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 10:53 PM
good pverall, nice simples, but not feeling the d and ..... i think its and r. but good simples.
edit: yay 100th post :D

garbage down tha way
04-19-2007, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 19 2007, 03:37 PM
what. it says AKRON. no s, no t. is it really that bad? and no im not emo, where the fuck did u get that from?? and since "THERS A C&#33;+Y IN 0HI0 N4MED AKRON", should i change my name??

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/IMG_00011-1.jpg

i know i mest up on the second N, so i just focused on the shadowing on this 1
Don&#39;t worry, akron is a fucking shitty ass town and you can write it&#39;s name all you want.

dormnt
04-19-2007, 10:56 PM
yeah the r is fucked haha i think the d looks to similar to the o

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 11:01 PM
recognising your faults is the first step to fixing them :)

hungr
04-19-2007, 11:11 PM
random stuff
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00232.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00233.jpg

dormnt
04-19-2007, 11:14 PM
that u on the first one is pretty cute hungr

reka one
04-19-2007, 11:37 PM
im still doin stuff but w.e

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/04-20-07_0030.jpg

crits?

Pegasus
04-19-2007, 11:37 PM
nice bloks but leave that extension thing on the k and finish the k down the bottom

dormnt
04-19-2007, 11:39 PM
im not quite feeling the r reka but the rest is solid

hungr
04-19-2007, 11:42 PM
im gonna say change what u write for one reason.

toronto legend writes recka ..and it is the same word except for that u dont have a c ..but yeh i dont know where u live im saying this man is a legend and has a crazy style that no one can really touch.

that is all

reka one
04-19-2007, 11:48 PM
fuck, guess im changin it then


but yeah after i stepped back i noticed the r sucked and k was brought down i just didnt go over it

sky 5
04-20-2007, 12:35 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8672/1242414pv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that sketch i did for the team battle . . the lower left part of the S was a bad decision . .

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2763/1222235br6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old simples i found . .

Pegasus
04-20-2007, 12:40 AM
love the 1st one&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

sky 5
04-20-2007, 12:41 AM
Originally posted by <~ReSiN~>@Apr 19 2007, 10:26 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/nuclearresin.jpg

* :blink:* cartooney&#33;&#33;
pretty cool, like that bbook too

edit: t his is my 852nd POST&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; yahooooo

editedit: is it april 20th? 4/20 today? fuck i missed it&#33;

TESTER
04-20-2007, 12:47 AM
resin i like the tounges

Pegasus
04-20-2007, 12:49 AM
ok ima ruin this page in advance, just so it isnt fully ill :lol:

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5718.jpg

gonna do a light-dark blue fade for background, no idea on other colours.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 05:47 AM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 19 2007, 11:23 PM

CRITS ON SIMPLE FROM CLASS

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/notes-1.jpg
where has this shit been..have you been hiding it or sumthing..?...aha..shits niiiceeee
Resin....i dont really like that style...but FUCK...its a fucking good concept..keep that shit uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup &#33;
Oh Sky...how do you fade like that....i mean...with every single detial also.. :o :o :D the letters look great...especially the M..and i think the bottom of teeh S looks fine

Sumoe
04-20-2007, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Apr 20 2007, 12:35 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8672/1242414pv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that sketch i did for the team battle . . the lower left part of the S was a bad decision . .

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2763/1222235br6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old simples i found . .
It&#39;s dope...but I wish you would outline with a thinner pen, It would probably look a lot better, I need to learn how to place my arrows correctly, cause fuck, if I put that many arrows on my shit it would look toy as hell. Simples are nice too.

virtuallynameless
04-20-2007, 10:31 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0092.jpg

crits please&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

nice shit sky 5:)

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 10:58 AM
Feeling that E..

so i spent the last 2 days doing a quick alpahbet of letters...to see with ones would flow the greatest with this bar structure...i came up with a T , A , M n H...and i made up the name Amtah....it sounds kool..heres a first sketch under that name...and its also a wall plan..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/88.jpg

Crits thaaaaanksssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Apoc
04-20-2007, 12:30 PM
sky i&#39;m glad u still post here... U inspire us. That piece has a really nice fill too.

Virtual what does it say? Reno? Go simple.

Wutcho, That doesn&#39;t look like "amtah" more like "Amcah"... fix ur T and it looks good.



http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/untitled.jpg

My first attempt at a character, stolen from the game "Worms Armageddon"

My letters are weak. I need new ones. Time to go to work.

krazzie_ammo
04-20-2007, 02:23 PM
ras - you know what i think mate.

aon - nice worm :)

i wish i hadnt filled this,
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1199/120jk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

Sumoe
04-20-2007, 02:24 PM
I wish you hadn&#39;t put the letters inside of the piece.

whahappen?
04-20-2007, 02:34 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 20 2007, 10:58 AM
Feeling that E..

so i spent the last 2 days doing a quick alpahbet of letters...to see with ones would flow the greatest with this bar structure...i came up with a T , A , M n H...and i made up the name Amtah....it sounds kool..heres a first sketch under that name...and its also a wall plan..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/88.jpg

Crits thaaaaanksssssssssssssssssssssssssss
i love this almost has a throwy feel to it

React!
04-20-2007, 02:38 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 20 2007, 10:58 AM
Feeling that E..

so i spent the last 2 days doing a quick alpahbet of letters...to see with ones would flow the greatest with this bar structure...i came up with a T , A , M n H...and i made up the name Amtah....it sounds kool..heres a first sketch under that name...and its also a wall plan..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/88.jpg

Crits thaaaaanksssssssssssssssssssssssssss
this shit is hot would love to see it on a wall and lmfao the karak lookin like my cousin

nase7
04-20-2007, 02:51 PM
Krazzie ammo, i love that shit, unique and tasty.

Amtah, thats the opposite of shit. :P

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 03:00 PM
well..i got enuff for 4 cans to buy tomorrow..i dunno if ill have enuff paint..as when i painted a peice before i only used two colours...ima buy a white a black a green and a light green...or i might lust go with the white fill...black drop..and red forcefiled..

Krazzi..you know what i think mate :P :P B) ..


and Sume..i think he shud keep those letters in there...i think it adds more flavah to the style...but iv always liked that typa shit

whahappen?
04-20-2007, 03:30 PM
amtah maybe put the t&#39;s upper bar higher so you can fit the other half so it dont look like a c
aon the a is wiide and the n is skinny i really dont like your style though..
nameless make al the letters the same size
kraer and sky i love the letters
no one looks at toy tagz...
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8652/picture048nf3.jpg
i liie this one except my s

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 03:36 PM
aha..yeah..im havin trouble with tha T..
Well done Sume deleting that pointless post ;)
ugh..i ain shit for tags wappen so i wont know how to help..but it looks pretty basic..i like it...looks very NY ...

no..whos Ras..?

nero122
04-20-2007, 03:37 PM
yo amtah u aint ras are u ?

whahappen?
04-20-2007, 03:47 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 20 2007, 03:36 PM
aha..yeah..im havin trouble with tha T..
Well done Sume deleting that pointless post ;)
ugh..i ain shit for tags wappen so i wont know how to help..but it looks pretty basic..i like it...looks very NY ...

no..whos Ras..?
yea ive been looking at alot of name lately

anie 1
04-20-2007, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by virtuallynameless@Apr 20 2007, 10:31 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h280/v35k/DSCF0092.jpg

crits please&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

nice shit sky 5:)
try simpilar letters and try and ease up on the three d til you get a little better but other wise i lik it :)

whahappen?
04-20-2007, 04:02 PM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8652/picture048nf3.jpg
i liie this one except my s

krazzie_ammo
04-20-2007, 04:18 PM
zerssss - i like your name.

but that tag looks like normal letters written really fast. you should make up a tag writing it slowly then build up how fast you write it.

this is what i would do, (in paint :P)
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/6465/untitledgd6.png (http://imageshack.us)
we have might have different styles but i prefer more squarish tags.

hope it helped.