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''SCC''
04-20-2007, 04:18 PM
nothing relly do crit
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/7355/untitled1xw4.png (http://imageshack.us)
quick sketch but this is all i got to post

Captain
04-20-2007, 04:36 PM
^^^
looks like it needs a little work, but i really like it. just try to clean it up a bit and maybe work on the flow

HeiSk
04-20-2007, 05:04 PM
i love cheu's style, how do i get something cimilar ?

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 05:11 PM
aahhaha..i cannot belive your asking..^^^ .. dude..are you serious...speak to me on msn..

uugh..sorry bazer....im going to do you a better one tommoorrwwoo

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/8888.jpg

F.R.A.T.
04-20-2007, 05:12 PM
heisk how about learnin to spell first

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2007, 05:16 PM
bottom right of ur B. need to be thicker.

F.R.A.T.
04-20-2007, 05:18 PM
Wutchoogonnadoo i cant see it
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture18.jpg

critz?http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture19.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2007, 05:21 PM
dey...dey fuckin hot. looks sick.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-20-2007, 05:23 PM
i didnt really want crits..

frat...im not feeling it..there isnt any flow..the M E are huge..but the K is tiny..and like th arrow come outta no where...on the M n E they flow to the left..on the K it flows down.. :huh: ( talking about the top )

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-20-2007, 05:44 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1940.jpg

AnteUp
04-20-2007, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Apr 20 2007, 05:44 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1940.jpg
thas how we do it in texas! i think u sed u from texas right? o if not its still baddddaaasss lovin tha green, fuck im lovin everything :P :D

AnteUp
04-20-2007, 06:16 PM
sum shit in clizzzousee
M...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/m.jpg
KA...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/ka.jpg
and mr E...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/e.jpg


o by tha way... has anyone seen mr.lefty? i havent seen him in a while :(

Sumoe
04-20-2007, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk@Apr 20 2007, 05:04 PM
i love cheu's style, how do i get something cimilar ?
:lol:

lol, just practice dude, and don't bite.

AnteUp
04-20-2007, 06:26 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 20 2007, 06:16 PM
sum shit in clizzzousee
M...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/m.jpg
KA...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/ka.jpg
and mr E...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/e.jpg


o by tha way... has anyone seen mr.lefty? i havent seen him in a while :(
next page... CRITS PLEAZ

garbage down tha way
04-20-2007, 06:36 PM
M is kinda awkward how the left leg and rest of it are connected like that.

I thought I hated that K completely, but on a second glance, if you took the top right leg and extended it up and right (straight, not curved) it might look decent.

The extention on top of the A grabs your attention and makes it look like a D.

The E is good.

whynot?
04-20-2007, 06:40 PM
scc thats hot nice style
frat im feelin it i like the color scheme
edwward handstyles fresh

hears some outlines i did at school crits?

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/3558/saepzc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/258/saep1xb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2443/saep2fj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/6317/saep3uu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

F.R.A.T.
04-20-2007, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Apr 20 2007, 05:18 PM
Wutchoogonnadoo i cant see it
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture18.jpg

critz?http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture19.jpg
humpty bumpty

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2007, 07:07 PM
yh what happened to simple.

Sumoe
04-20-2007, 07:11 PM
mek-a lot worse than the other stuff you posted...still not too bad though.

aces
04-20-2007, 07:14 PM
YAY!!! I'm back after a long long break...I'm not back for being on constantly but it feels good just to be in the presence of BS!!!

I'LL GET RIGHT TO CRITS

Frat - Like the colors on the first one and the structure's really good!!! Don't get to say that too often...I don't like the second one that much though...The M is good but I don't like the rest...

Whynot? - I think you're getting a little ahead of yourself...Your structure is alright but for the most part it's lacking...Don't start with crazy add-ons without structured letters...It won't work and it just wastes time...

AnteUp - Ummmm, structure man...Make your letters look like this...
M, E, K, A
No random things...just simple keyboard letters...

Edward"Sezer"Hands - Loving that handy...It's really nice...Not much else to say!!!

Well here's some of my sketches from while I was away...In chronological order...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/143210274_469010017_0.jpg
DAN (for a friend)
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/Summer2006002.jpg
KESA/MELO (exchange with uhhh)
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/ROP.jpg
ROP (just messin with extras and shit)
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/Hosae.jpg
HOSAE (exchange on 12oz)

I REALIZE THAT I WENT OVERBOARD WITH THE CRACKS AND INDENT THINGS ON THES!!!
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/Fair.jpg
FAIR
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/fresh.jpg
FRESH
NOW I EXPECT CRITS SINCE I JUST GAVE SOME TO ALL THAT WERE ON THE PREVIOUS 10 POSTS LIST!!!

HuntingLOLs
04-20-2007, 07:40 PM
Sezer - bad ass steez. but try and make the arrow come out of one line if you know what im saying.

F.R.A.T. the extensions are abit odd (especially on the coloured M), and the 2nd e is really strange, doesn't flow with the rest. swap it for a capital e maybe, or turn it some degrees at least...

Aces - the cracks in fresh looks strange, but the letters themselves are good, very barred if you get what i mean but nice letters none the less (maybe too barred some would say)

some shizzle from today, just simples:

eks
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00460.jpg
scie(n couldnt fit :<)
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00458.jpg
Scien
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00459.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-20-2007, 07:54 PM
Aces- I don&#39;t like the letters or cracks/indents on Fair and Fresh but the rest are hot. Especially the kesa/melo, those are fresh as hell, I love those simples. Only thing is that I thought the K was an R at first.

HuntingLOLs- The overall feel of eks is nice looking but the letters would look better if they were the same size and not connected. Scie is nice, I&#39;d just unfatten the s a little bit and lighten up that e. And lastly, scien looks really good.

FRAT- (top) Looks good, I like the M more than the rest. Only thing is make the k bigger, and let it flow with the rest of your letters. On the bottom one, lose that ugly ass arrow on the K. I like them though

Whynot- The S on the second one down is decent, but that&#39;s pretty much all you have going out of those. Try to make your letters more creative.

F.R.A.T.
04-20-2007, 08:02 PM
yo huntin lols do you live in toronto?
your stuff is nice i like the simples
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture20.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture21.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture23.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture24.jpg
i messed up the orange simple with the arrows

HuntingLOLs
04-20-2007, 08:45 PM
nice colouring on the first one mek, and i kinda like the e that goes bigger but its a really bad m in the throw and the arrows on the 2nd are way to wide on the pointy parts - if you wanna do flat arrows like that do em like i did mine (just better :P) do it real fat in the start, do small lines on each side and do the connection between those close to the fat bar, but not too close ofc.
and nah, im from denmark :P

-GEKS-
04-20-2007, 08:49 PM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0834.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0836.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0837.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0843.jpg

think i&#39;ve improved a bit. w/e

garbage down tha way
04-20-2007, 08:58 PM
Bottom one looks good cept it gets too skinny in some places. Fix that up.

dizzle_d
04-20-2007, 09:07 PM
almost everything on this page is pretty good
but I dunno
I&#39;m trashed




merry twistmas bs

HuntingLOLs
04-20-2007, 09:23 PM
GEKS, you probably wanna crit before posting next time - your letter structure is off, way to thin at place (the r particular). and i dont like the symetrical bending the letters does, last one is the best tho, pretty clean colouring...

the outline of some shizzle i just did:

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00461.jpg

its pretty sloppy but wanted to try some more letters on 1 page

Sumoe
04-20-2007, 09:25 PM
nice simples.

F.R.A.T.
04-20-2007, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Apr 20 2007, 08:02 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture20.jpg
[http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture24.jpg

bump huntin i dont like the n

dormnt
04-20-2007, 11:43 PM
reposting for some crits :)

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h312/moncef/2311120.jpg

sorry aout the quality, webcam..


huntinglol&#39;s - like your style man

claro - work on your bars a bit other than that lookin good

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 12:03 AM
your a&#39;s right side is weird^
entry
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4314/picture051rv3.jpg
cartoonish characs
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8486/picture049kj1.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/6488/picture050xu6.jpg

''SCC''
04-21-2007, 12:07 AM
dormntwork i dont know,,, make them taller?
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6180/untitledks7.png (http://imageshack.us)
is this good

sabe2
04-21-2007, 12:11 AM
science nice simples im likin it what u guys think of this just meesin areound i like it it looked better in pencile tho


http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture15.jpg

capitol
04-21-2007, 12:15 AM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1663/graf156au1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Might be a fairly bug bomb i might do..

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 12:19 AM
dormnt - as said make letters taller, and more linear, if you use bars they are way too round.

seak - dont bent your letters that much and make then abit fatter (remove all extensions, basically do block simples :P)

SCC - looked better only outline the extensions are weird, hold back on those. outline is too fat for those letters, or that size of work i guess

whahappen? - i cant read the throw :(

sam.s
04-21-2007, 12:53 AM
seak dont bend the letters so much and try to keep it a bit simpler i reckon and it would probaly look a bit better

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 01:21 AM
coloured last sketch - piss tired but i couldnt be arsed to go to bed

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00463.jpg

envoy, dont make such blockbuster :P

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 01:29 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture3.jpg

ok know it sucks but only ben writing and shit for about a month so any hel pwould be appriciated&#33;&#33;&#33; http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture4.jpg






FIRST color ever just got the markers..... and i SUCKED http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture17.jpg


comment&#33;

krazzie_ammo
04-21-2007, 06:03 AM
hunting lolz- thats fresh shit man.

panik - not too bad mayte, stay up.


http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1199/120jk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hump de bump.
crits?

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 06:17 AM
Krazzie Babie...you know what i think..

Shit...Huntinglolz...i never knew you were that good.. :o :o keep zit zup

sam.s
04-21-2007, 06:43 AM
krazzie - nice letters but i dont really like how u rote the letter inside them... but its up to u

panik - that colouring isnt to bad and i like your letters



heres some shit i did on a white board preaty quickly:
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2159/whiteboardpeice1se4.jpg

tezer
04-21-2007, 06:48 AM
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t256/tezer_photos/P1010216.jpg
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t256/tezer_photos/Random003.jpg



here is some new shit ive done, lemme know what you guys think

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2007, 07:55 AM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 19 2007, 10:52 AM
Yeah I got liek some new-ish kinda stuff...

like my dopeness to the maxX pen freestyle&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/freestyletothemaxXexXtremeDopeness.gif

my toyness... it shows&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Toy.gif

Yea wuteva
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Throwed.jpg

Some euro type ish I was trying out
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Toy.jpg

When I was doing the I, I pumped the pen and then a big mess of paint went on it...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Sinyk.jpg

I tried to blend but green was like dead
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/ForceFieldToTheMaxX.jpg
Bumped&#33;
:ph34r:

P.S. I hate everyone and go fuckurselves&#33;

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 08:00 AM
THNX GUYS&#33; NEW STUFF.... kinda messed up with lttr first two dif style then last ones

Fluffy bunnies - Looks like a bullet hole ..

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture7.jpg


WHAT YALL THINK?

Crit. . . ?

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 08:14 AM
Fluffy...do you hate me...* begins to cry *

Panik..do blocks...work on flow aswell..

oooh YES...odered me sum Belton Premium...and this is whut ill be painting..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6-1.jpg

im ogin to figure out my cam so i can take flicks..

NEMR1
04-21-2007, 08:46 AM
cynik - you have simple letters, and i love that

panic - do simples


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/NEMR1.jpg
first piece with my new name

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/Mekexchange.jpg
exchange i did with mek2

ThrowItUP
04-21-2007, 09:04 AM
and your telling Panic to do simples?
obviously panic does need to do simples, but dont think your that far ahead of him.
All your lines are funky and not the same width.
The "N" and the "E" on the first one,
the "M" and the "E" on the second one
and the "K" on the second one is just plain whack.
forget about 3D for a while, stick with bars.
oh and also, learn how to color.

the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else. <_<

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 09:11 AM
nah man,

your simples are alright, just keep doing em&#39;.

some things could be touched up here and there, like your "R" but they&#39;re not too bad.

dim
04-21-2007, 09:12 AM
nemr the r on the first one needs work

NEMR1
04-21-2007, 09:13 AM
Originally posted by ThrowItUP@Apr 21 2007, 09:04 AM
and your telling Panic to do simples?
obviously panic does need to do simples, but dont think your that far ahead of him.
All your lines are funky and not the same width.
The "N" and the "E" on the first one,
the "M" and the "E" on the second one
and the "K" on the second one is just plain whack.
forget about 3D for a while, stick with bars.
oh and also, learn how to color.

the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else. <_<
you posted work? cuz i hate cocky toys like you, really


edit: the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else

you said that to me? you think you are above me, you arent, so stfu

NEMR1
04-21-2007, 09:16 AM
oh, and here is a simple throwup i just did crits?

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/NEMRTHROW.jpg

ThrowItUP
04-21-2007, 09:16 AM
Originally posted by NEMR1+Apr 21 2007, 09:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NEMR1 &#064; Apr 21 2007, 09:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ThrowItUP@Apr 21 2007, 09:04 AM
and your telling Panic to do simples?
obviously panic does need to do simples, but dont think your that far ahead of him.
All your lines are funky and not the same width.
The "N" and the "E" on the first one,
the "M" and the "E" on the second one
and the "K" on the second one is just plain whack.
forget about 3D for a while, stick with bars.
oh and also, learn how to color.

the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else. <_<
you posted work? cuz i hate cocky toys like you, really


edit: the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else

you said that to me? you think you are above me, you arent, so stfu [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m at my grandma&#39;s right now, cameraless and supplyless until sunday.
i&#39;ll post up a piece i&#39;m working on for a new name then.
better yet, wanna just do a battle? i haven&#39;t done one in ages :lol:

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 09:33 AM
Throw it up...Nemrs simples are jus as good as Paniks...if not better....Nemr has FLOW...Panik doenst...Nemrs letters are ALL the same size / widths / consistant...Paniks are not...theyre both in the same boat...jut as you are..so hop off Nemrs dick...he juts giving advice...it wasnt your advice totake..it was Paniks..so why do you feel the need to dispute this...if anyone shud dispute it it shud be Panik

FunkSoul
04-21-2007, 09:37 AM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3543/benzo6.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8679/ben3dim4.jpg

I don&#39;t like the 3D too much.

Please crits

REMOoneSF
04-21-2007, 10:18 AM
Originally posted by tezer@Apr 21 2007, 06:48 AM
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t256/tezer_photos/Random003.jpg



here is some new shit ive done, lemme know what you guys think
drips are bad so don&#39;t draw them

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 10:22 AM
uh Wtf r simples???? >nub< ):

Hazex
04-21-2007, 10:23 AM
funk soul make all your bars the same size

i jsut made this r crits?working of them R

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/254/rrrrrrsn6.png (http://imageshack.us)

REMOoneSF
04-21-2007, 10:26 AM
its nice that you&#39;re barring but the R is alittle too stiff looking

krazzie_ammo
04-21-2007, 10:32 AM
simples are blockbusters :)

quick photoshop.
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6227/untitled1copyzq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 10:32 AM
So dats a simple??? ive only ben writtign about a month now so dont know much . :-&#092;

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 10:33 AM
like your style krazzie.

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 10:47 AM
OK theys anygood as simples.... btw only ben writting for about a month ):

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture23.jpg

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture24.jpg

??????

-GEKS-
04-21-2007, 10:48 AM
top one is pretty good, bottom one i dont like so mch, and simples are like block letters, the one krazzie posted isnt that simple, letme find a good simple as an example

-GEKS-
04-21-2007, 10:49 AM
Originally posted by NEMR1@Apr 21 2007, 08:46 AM
cynik - you have simple letters, and i love that

panic - do simples


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/NEMR1.jpg
first piece with my new name

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/Mekexchange.jpg
exchange i did with mek2
here we go these are pretty decent simples, besides the r in the first and the k in the second
hope that helped

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 10:51 AM
ok THNX&#33; :D

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2007, 11:15 AM
NEMR - ur shit&#39;s weak&#33; Just don&#39;t do so many add ons and color it properly, downsize the pic, cuz it&#39;s like a fat womans ass in ur face.

krazzie_ammo
04-21-2007, 11:18 AM
panic - if you want some good simples, look at your keyboard and copy those letters.

nemr - those arent too bad, you just have a shaky hand, take a bit more time outling it,

-ShAmEE-
04-21-2007, 11:24 AM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 21 2007, 04:15 PM
NEMR - ur shit&#39;s weak&#33; Just don&#39;t do so many add ons and color it properly, downsize the pic, cuz it&#39;s like a fat womans ass in ur face.
why u b like dat. don need that shit here.
he&#39;s a toy so chill, we still learning

Captain
04-21-2007, 11:30 AM
nemr, it&#39;s actually not all that bad, if i were you though, i wouldn&#39;t use highlighters.
they smear everything and it ruins a piece. In fact if i were you, i wouldn&#39;t color anything unless i could find some decent markers (24prismas go fer about 25&#036; on ebay. not to shabby.)

some of the letters look a little off, but overall you got the right idea it looks like. just practice getting clean lines.

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 11:51 AM
pan1k - if you&#39;re serious: they are letters without extensions or weird bends, blockletters/keyboard letters usually, but can be anything, as long as its simple...

tezer: the good looks like a wizard hat, do it like a hood instead (they go down instead of up) - drips are usually drawn by gravity so its almost always straight down

Krazzie - A is way to big, make it smaller

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 11:55 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture26.jpg


ok thnx huntingLOLs



hows this ?????&#33; kind put lil thing at end but w/e

dim
04-21-2007, 12:00 PM
panik try not to make your letters so ridged and on the "P"s that you were doing i deffinetly like that second one
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/708/untitledqp4.png
this was done on paint recently not rele black book but i decided to put it in here ne ways so let me no wat you think

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 12:03 PM
Originally posted by PAN1K@Apr 21 2007, 11:55 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture26.jpg


ok thnx huntingLOLs



hows this ?????&#33; kind put lil thing at end but w/e
pan1k those are pretty good if you remove the extenting part of the extention it will look better (dotnr emove the upwards flip tho) move the first bar on the n abit closer to the next and make the A alittle bigger and its good :)

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 12:06 PM
alright cool thnx guys i did that in like 4 mins thow ima tweak it now see what u think..

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 12:23 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture28.jpg



ok that bttr ??? ima darken the rest to so its same level darkness



http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture31.jpg

k is ok now? and the A yea ill mess with it more


and thnx again for all the help guys :D :D

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 12:35 PM
still, look at the bottom of the k, you see the extension, remove the part that sticks out downwards so the becomes a part of the bar that holds it... looking abit better, the a is a bit weird tho, play around with it abit and you&#39;ll prolly figure something out

braxtons a g
04-21-2007, 12:49 PM
look at all these arrows. god im such a burner;D jk.....this was my first attempt at a wildstyle from way back.
http://i16.tinypic.com/2ziobx2.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2007, 12:52 PM
hahah... I had to laugh... but yeah, you will laugh at that when u get better too.. so don&#39;t take it the wrong way.

I don&#39;t even know what u were trying to do, but keep it up, except make it simpler.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 12:55 PM
I guess youv improved then ..?
Panik..i like that bottom simple..

so..Work in progress....a Collab peice with Flufffffaaayy

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/9.jpg

Wha..yah think..now fluffy you may have the idea i was talking about ;)

Apoc
04-21-2007, 12:58 PM
^ amtah I like that shit yo. Keep it up

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/scan002001.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/scanaoner1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/scan001001.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/owltron.jpg

nero122
04-21-2007, 01:10 PM
rite while im still pissed of bout bein arrested again i cant fukin stand seein toy after toy after toy tkeep doin block letters com on add some flaver i dont use block my shit just pops in to my head . its like were producing a generic lifestyle that anyone can do jus do block letters n ure a writer com on get letters n style in tags bomb throw ups charac n evrything then ure a writer i dont hae many of those but i aint sayin im a writer neway thats me please say what u think about that becuase i need an excuse to shoot my neighbour wiv my airrifle

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 01:15 PM
all you do is moan ^ ..

i fort exactly the same as you back in the day...but now i proved myself wrong...and you talking all this nagativity about simples..and how you dont need them...shows in your work..no offence

just cjeck the progression thread..and look how simple i started this new style..and how i evolved it...steadily..

ASB_ONE
04-21-2007, 01:19 PM
your style sucks ras - playn

apoc the pink one is fresh. keep that shit up.

alive
04-21-2007, 01:19 PM
nevamind

nero122
04-21-2007, 01:21 PM
lol i kno i aint good my style is pure randomness i hate bulky shit way too over used n i dont meen to moan just makin a point yh it works for some but damn evrytime i com on here the only desent underused style is youres n sume n a few others .

n im ginger n my parents are dead so life is just about shit for me

Apoc
04-21-2007, 01:24 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Apr 21 2007, 01:19 PM
your style sucks ras - playn

apoc the pink one is fresh. keep that shit up.
which pink one :P jk

I love pink. Seriously. Nohomo.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2007, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Apr 21 2007, 01:21 PM
lol i kno i aint good my style is pure randomness i hate bulky shit way too over used n i dont meen to moan just makin a point yh it works for some but damn evrytime i com on here the only desent underused style is youres n sume n a few others .

n im ginger n my parents are dead so life is just about shit for me
Whoa... tough luck kid.... but we didn&#39;t need to know what

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 01:31 PM
^^ .. that shits golden...you aint serious tho are yah .. ?

if not..your putting a murky black upon these forums..

ASB...thanks..get on MSN .. you cheeky biatch :P

Apoc
04-21-2007, 01:33 PM
I&#39;ve come across alot of people who talk down simples, and most of them are really toy, or just stupid. One guy saw my shit and said "yo man, thats your tag? why is it so simple? I&#39;ll show you how to tag, dude." and he pulls out some shit with gay looking arrows and no structure, it looked like a 10 year old took some crayons and wrote some shit. And thats all I have to say.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2007, 01:34 PM
yah I gots msn too... Add Fluffy_bunnies.rabbits@hotmail.com

rayseone
04-21-2007, 01:47 PM
nothing really to crit

simples are dope, also work on your handstyles peeple i find it helped my letters flow

crits i gues?
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/7404/dsc00246lg2.jpg

dim
04-21-2007, 01:50 PM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 21 2007, 12:00 PM
panik try not to make your letters so ridged and on the "P"s that you were doing i deffinetly like that second one
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/708/untitledqp4.png
this was done on paint recently not rele black book but i decided to put it in here ne ways so let me no wat you think
bump

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 01:52 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 21 2007, 05:55 PM
I guess youv improved then ..?
Panik..i like that bottom simple..

so..Work in progress....a Collab peice with Flufffffaaayy

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/9.jpg

Wha..yah think..now fluffy you may have the idea i was talking about ;)
bumpaloopadoopasuper..
Dim..thats totaally gnarly radically super duper gnarlt man clean
Rayesnon..not feeling that mate..like..i duno..kinda complex..

capitol
04-21-2007, 01:53 PM
Originally posted by capitol@Apr 21 2007, 12:15 AM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1663/graf156au1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Might be a fairly bug bomb i might do..
Bumpin for critz.

Dim:Loose the background arrows, other then that its good form
Seyar:Weird colors mann.

nero122
04-21-2007, 02:01 PM
fluffy bunnies i am bein serious can u please take it out youre sig n ras y wud i say my parents are dead to make a forum shit n im always bleak n negative i just wnned to tell ras y

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Apr 21 2007, 01:10 PM
rite while im still pissed of bout bein arrested again i cant fukin stand seein toy after toy after toy tkeep doin block letters com on add some flaver i dont use block my shit just pops in to my head . its like were producing a generic lifestyle that anyone can do jus do block letters n ure a writer com on get letters n style in tags bomb throw ups charac n evrything then ure a writer i dont hae many of those but i aint sayin im a writer neway thats me please say what u think about that becuase i need an excuse to shoot my neighbour wiv my airrifle
i bet your shit sucks ass

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by ThrowItUP@Apr 21 2007, 09:04 AM
and your telling Panic to do simples?
obviously panic does need to do simples, but dont think your that far ahead of him.
All your lines are funky and not the same width.
The "N" and the "E" on the first one,
the "M" and the "E" on the second one
and the "K" on the second one is just plain whack.
forget about 3D for a while, stick with bars.
oh and also, learn how to color.

the only reason im taking all of this out on you is because i hate when kids who are just as bad, think they have something above someone else. <_<
dude you are below toy, by saying someone who isnt better than someone shoudnt tell them what to do, you just contradicted your own statement because nemr burns you
oh and your characters are lame as hell stop puttting them on stickers and stop making the stickers thread in picture gallery look like shit no one wants your stuff

RemoZ
04-21-2007, 02:13 PM
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/7817/1000856zo0.jpg

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 02:16 PM
soo hot just make the bottom right of the n not as big
o and nemr im really feeling that simple throw you posted a few pages back
old shit so im not flcikless
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8652/picture048nf3.jpg
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/663/picture047cv1.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4314/picture051rv3.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5279/picture042xr2.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/968/picture016jo5.jpg
id appreciate crits on all those^

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 02:16 PM
I actually dig this one...

nero122
04-21-2007, 02:43 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/alpabetpage1.jpg

start of an alphabet the smudge by the d is on the screen of my scanner so isnt on the paper neway crits

ps . whappen i know it shit so here you go i crapped out a nice pile of dioria shit aids infested lepraciy(sp) letters n i know i havnt done the f still in progress

ThrowItUP
04-21-2007, 03:04 PM
that alphabet is fire :wub: (no homo)

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 03:08 PM
Thats pretty fuckin nice.... i like that

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 03:09 PM
Nero..No offence mate..but iv seen that face style soooo many times...recycled over and over..i dunno..if you like it..okay..but it aint my thang..try to come up with sumthing more fresh,,?

Wappen..your rapidly imrpving your throws...keeep zit zup

Ohno...your stuff is okay..but its unclean..and there is a OH in NY with serious ups..

ugh..so i finished the peice...FOR ALL YOU DUMBASS&#39;S...THE WHOLE POINT OF THE PEICE IS SOMEBODY HALF WAY PAINTNING..HENCE THE SLOPPYNESS...WHICH I ACTUALLY INTENDING ON DOING...AND THE SKETCHY LINES...JYST LIKE IN REAL LIFE..ETC.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/99.jpg

Im going to do the same setting again but with the peice finished..so keep a look out.. :P

Critssssss

-ShAmEE-
04-21-2007, 03:14 PM
best so far....fresh idea

nero122
04-21-2007, 03:14 PM
yh im in to teeth in the letters now so much more grimey n livley too me n lol thanks
if i do say so myself youres is lookin rather spiffy too old chap one would maby have a purple or contrasting fill .
:@ one thing i hate is the belton cans in ure pick shitest paint ive ever used all bout mtn hardcore n montana black n platinum

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 03:15 PM
GOT AHEAD OF MYSLF X_X LEARNED MY LESSON BRB THROWINGUP...


http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture32.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-21-2007, 03:17 PM
dude it just a sketch.. does it matter not like he has them.
(he got montanas, or gettin them)

nero122
04-21-2007, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Apr 21 2007, 02:43 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/alpabetpage1.jpg

start of an alphabet the smudge by the d is on the screen of my scanner so isnt on the paper neway crits

ps . whappen i know it shit so here you go i crapped out a nice pile of dioria shit aids infested lepraciy(sp) letters n i know i havnt done the f still in progress
bump bottom of the last page crits pls??ive given em in my last post

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 03:20 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 21 2007, 02:16 PM
soo hot just make the bottom right of the n not as big
o and nemr im really feeling that simple throw you posted a few pages back
old shit so im not flcikless
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8652/picture048nf3.jpg
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/663/picture047cv1.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4314/picture051rv3.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5279/picture042xr2.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/968/picture016jo5.jpg
id appreciate crits on all those^
nero nvm your pretty good but get some diversity in your letters the all look the same with different placed teeths

nero122
04-21-2007, 03:30 PM
lol thanks n yh ive just recentley devolped it so im a work on it for say .......bout 10 - 20 years lol n youre throwies are lookin hot as always n shameeeeeeeeeeeeee i just hate beltons too many bad expieriences eg. clogin up n tryin to unclog on a roof =bein arrested

trashhh
04-21-2007, 03:35 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 21 2007, 03:09 PM
Nero..No offence mate..but iv seen that face style soooo many times...recycled over and over..i dunno..if you like it..okay..but it aint my thang..try to come up with sumthing more fresh,,?

Wappen..your rapidly imrpving your throws...keeep zit zup

Ohno...your stuff is okay..but its unclean..and there is a OH in NY with serious ups..

ugh..so i finished the peice...FOR ALL YOU DUMBASS&#39;S...THE WHOLE POINT OF THE PEICE IS SOMEBODY HALF WAY PAINTNING..HENCE THE SLOPPYNESS...WHICH I ACTUALLY INTENDING ON DOING...AND THE SKETCHY LINES...JYST LIKE IN REAL LIFE..ETC.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/99.jpg

Im going to do the same setting again but with the peice finished..so keep a look out.. :P

Critssssss
I like this alot man, its a nice style... but work on ur handstyle.

krazzie_ammo
04-21-2007, 03:35 PM
dayum nero, thats that dutty hell on earth shizz.i dont really like the eyes though, the teeth have alot of definition but the eyes are just circles.

zers - i like your throws, have you ever painted them?

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9891/121wo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some quick stuff
crits?

nero122
04-21-2007, 03:40 PM
lol*blushes* thanks n yh i hate pupils my eyes are either black or white n damn your style has developed loads keep up the work btw how many posts till i become a member?in the group?

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 03:42 PM
nvm i actualy tried to figure out the letters and thats a really nice alphabet
to nero
nice read and no i havent yet mostly cuz i hate walking places since im too young for a car...:(
i will in the summer more though
edit:simples...arecool&#33;&#33;
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6564/picture052gr4.jpg
couldnt fit the one...
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5935/picture053on2.jpg
random tag :rolleyes:
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4818/picture054rg7.jpg
read maybe round the d a lil more...idk
amtah very cool idea

HuntingLOLs
04-21-2007, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by Apoc+Apr 21 2007, 01:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc @ Apr 21 2007, 01:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Apr 21 2007, 01:19 PM
your style sucks ras - playn

apoc the pink one is fresh. keep that shit up.
which pink one :P jk

I love pink. Seriously. Nohomo. [/b][/quote]
got some fav. mtn colours :) himalaya blue, monoca blue and erika, that such a lovely combination

revolt92
04-21-2007, 05:13 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 21 2007, 03:09 PM
Nero..No offence mate..but iv seen that face style soooo many times...recycled over and over..i dunno..if you like it..okay..but it aint my thang..try to come up with sumthing more fresh,,?

Wappen..your rapidly imrpving your throws...keeep zit zup

Ohno...your stuff is okay..but its unclean..and there is a OH in NY with serious ups..

ugh..so i finished the peice...FOR ALL YOU DUMBASS&#39;S...THE WHOLE POINT OF THE PEICE IS SOMEBODY HALF WAY PAINTNING..HENCE THE SLOPPYNESS...WHICH I ACTUALLY INTENDING ON DOING...AND THE SKETCHY LINES...JYST LIKE IN REAL LIFE..ETC.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/99.jpg

Im going to do the same setting again but with the peice finished..so keep a look out.. :P

Critssssss
Don&#39;t like the karak on this one, it doesn&#39;t look like he&#39;s actually painting. As for the letters the actual thing, you should do like a slideshow type thing of a piece from start to finish, might look fresh orrr it might look like shite.

peace ya&#39;ll

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by nero122+Apr 21 2007, 03:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nero122 @ Apr 21 2007, 03:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nero122@Apr 21 2007, 02:43 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/alpabetpage1.jpg

start of an alphabet the smudge by the d is on the screen of my scanner so isnt on the paper neway crits

ps . whappen i know it shit so here you go i crapped out a nice pile of dioria shit aids infested lepraciy(sp) letters n i know i havnt done the f still in progress
bump bottom of the last page crits pls??ive given em in my last post [/b][/quote]
looks kinda like Smug, Die, and Gesus&#39; old shit...mixed into one...not callin&#39; a bite just sayin&#39; you obviously took a lot of "inspiration" from them, kinda like you&#39;re a 666 wannabe, ha. Not exactly horrible, just not a style of my liking.

dim
04-21-2007, 05:20 PM
i dont rele see ne smug in there acctually the teeth are kinda like the teeth on his characters but thats bout it

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 05:21 PM
yea, just the teeth.

writer45
04-21-2007, 05:45 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2870/danknr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


this is my first piece with this word
critz?

bouncingsoul
04-21-2007, 05:58 PM
I like that nero stuff

Trying something new... I like it a bit but I can&#39;t think of a goddamn S to fit

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0731.jpg

whahappen?
04-21-2007, 06:03 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 21 2007, 03:42 PM
nvm i actualy tried to figure out the letters and thats a really nice alphabet
to nero
nice read and no i havent yet mostly cuz i hate walking places since im too young for a car...:(
i will in the summer more though
edit:simples...arecool&#33;&#33;
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6564/picture052gr4.jpg
couldnt fit the one...
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5935/picture053on2.jpg
random tag :rolleyes:
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4818/picture054rg7.jpg
read maybe round the d a lil more...idk
amtah very cool idea
simples
knews soo nice could use the bottom right part of the w maybe for the s like just move half of that half of the w upidk though...
dank nice simple the a looks weird

Zep0
04-21-2007, 06:17 PM
Whahappen...the throws are lookin the nice, the handy needs work...

bounce...really likin it, threw me off at first then in came in and I love it...

Dank...use bars man that will help you so much...if you dont know what bars are go to the new to graff section...

nero...The idea is nice, but you dont need to give every single letter teeth and eyes, they can look grimey and evil and organic without teeth and eyes...keep workin at it...

Amtah...def. feelin this style compared to your last one, just keep workin on it, that paticular sketch the T is too hidden, imo, but other than that the concept is nice...

Crits please...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/electricaeos.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/TumTum.jpg

morg
04-21-2007, 06:58 PM
aeos- thats chill. except the o kinda looks like a d. and the lines dont match up up the left side of the o.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1079.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1081-1.jpg

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 06:58 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9164/dsc0766qm8.jpg

faceless self portrait and a 5 min sketch.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 07:00 PM
Zepo..keep it up..
wappen..nice throw..

so..heres the finished product

" HOW CAN SOMETHING SO SKETCHY TURN OUT SO BEAUTIFUL "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/99.jpg

" WITH SKILL , TIME AND EFFORT ... "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/999.jpg

Note that the actualll used cans are the same colours as the peice..get it..hu ? .. aha ;)

Crits..?..Thanks

dim
04-21-2007, 07:07 PM
yo man thats sick i like wat you did to all the canns and shit keep it up
sume considering you dont normally do characters you should deffinetly do them more often because that is dope keep it up man

Snot
04-21-2007, 07:25 PM
Originally posted by morg@Apr 21 2007, 06:58 PM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1081-1.jpg
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5826/sketchgl0cv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Dont bite, gives you bad rep..
If you&#39;re going to do something so obviously biten...
Say "inspried by.." or something.
Dont try and pull it off as your own.

c0ld
04-21-2007, 07:52 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 21 2007, 06:58 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9164/dsc0766qm8.jpg

faceless self portrait and a 5 min sketch.
that self portrait is inked really good. try giving it something more distinctive. logo on the shirt, something that&#39;ll make it a lil&#39; more identifiable as you but not so much its incredibly obvious. cause its good but when i look at it all i see is "generic guy".


cant say much for the throw cause i cant see it too well but from what i can see its good so far.





http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9539/imag0003dl6.jpg

critz? tryin to get a new style.

writer45
04-21-2007, 07:55 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/6935/dankni8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

used blocks on this
critz?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-21-2007, 07:56 PM
a throw idea/
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1943.jpg

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 07:56 PM
Originally posted by c0ld@Apr 21 2007, 07:52 PM
cant say much for the throw cause i cant see it too well but from what i can see its good so far.




haha, it&#39;s not a throw...it&#39;s a quick piece.

you need to work on your letters more, learn how to use bars better and read the NEW 2 GRAFF thread if you haven&#39;t already.

AnteUp
04-21-2007, 08:17 PM
dammit amtwo...u have anotha account :angry: haha i thought u were sum really really toy dude that commented mah simples :lol:

sume- this might sound stupid but i think on ut selfportrait that u shud put SUMONE verticaly on his shirt (with the letters sidewayz..) comprende?

Gear_07
04-21-2007, 08:20 PM
wuh markers do yall use for ur black books

sank one
04-21-2007, 08:29 PM
edward take out the arrow and that thing is fire.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-21-2007, 08:29 PM
bitch ante calling meh toooyyyyy

Vile91
04-21-2007, 08:30 PM
Aight... I been doin&#39; this for bout&#39; 3 months now and i finally am wanting crits so here they are.


http://i18.tinypic.com/2a93a0x.jpg

fuckthatgame
04-21-2007, 08:32 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4155/p1010073mi0.jpg
vile-start simple....100 percent simple letters with 3d on them......arrows are gay, cityscapes are gay and hearts are deffinately gay

Vile91
04-21-2007, 08:34 PM
thanx for crits

Striker99
04-21-2007, 08:35 PM
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w248/TyGuy_2007/P1060757.jpg

CRITZ PLEASE&#33;

AnteUp
04-21-2007, 08:35 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 21 2007, 08:29 PM
bitch ante calling meh toooyyyyy
nawwwww u noe i got mucho amor for you&#33;&#33; :P i dint even see ur watugonna do posts till like right now, and i was gonna b like ey watugonnado thas a straight up amtwo bite...then i was like oh shit&#33;&#33; thats is mr. amtwo :D

writer45
04-21-2007, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by writer45@Apr 21 2007, 07:55 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/6935/dankni8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

used blocks on this
critz?
critz?

Noddles912300
04-21-2007, 08:40 PM
Vile and Striker go simple. Vile use the block method and make them simple like writer45s

Bazer
04-21-2007, 08:41 PM
why would you waste your time on saying that when you could give the crits??

straghten up your letters dude and keep workin on the simples i guess.

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 09:04 PM
Okay people...stop bitchin&#39; about gettin&#39; crits, people will give you crits if they want, don&#39;t persistently ask for them, it gets annoying, if you don&#39;t get crits, it means you&#39;re one of the people that a.) needs to go simple or b.) are hopeless...most people are option "a"...

So, if you don&#39;t get crits, read the New 2 Graff Thread, go simple or go away.

writer45
04-21-2007, 09:25 PM
or they just dont have anything to say
?

garbage down tha way
04-21-2007, 09:34 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/esur2.jpg
Writer45- D is ok (minus the thing on the top) but i don&#39;t like anything else. The A MIGHT look better if it was bigger with no extention and the horizontal line lower. The N...uh i don&#39;t know what to do about that, Ns are hard. and the k, make the top right extention start out of the beginning of the bottom right extention, if you know what I mean.

Striker- Guhhh. Do Simples. Get those letters good then add shit. but not that kind of shit.

DIA
04-21-2007, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by writer45+Apr 21 2007, 08:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (writer45 @ Apr 21 2007, 08:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-writer45@Apr 21 2007, 07:55 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/6935/dankni8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

used blocks on this
critz?
critz? [/b][/quote]
im feeling it...blocked nicely and idk for some reason that lil outline shit is doing it for me

DIA
04-21-2007, 09:40 PM
Originally posted by Gear_07@Apr 21 2007, 08:20 PM
wuh markers do yall use for ur black books
i got the 29 pack of sharpies they&#39;re def not prismas but theyll do

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 09:51 PM
NEW STUFF&#33;
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture37.jpg



How r theys simples??

striker99 - i Like it.. R is kinda big but bttr then my shit..nvm idk

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 09:53 PM
Originally posted by writer45@Apr 21 2007, 09:25 PM
or they just dont have anything to say
?
nope.

:lol:

fuckthatgame
04-21-2007, 09:56 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4155/p1010073mi0.jpg

panik, overlap the letters a little bit. dont make the k stick out so far at the end....the 3d is ok, the 3d on the left part of the a isnt connected tho.

Dank-i personally dont like it but mostly the a and the n need work

capitol
04-21-2007, 10:21 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1787/graf159ro4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3978/graf161zi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4499/graf162bb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Fuckthatgame:Nice 3d, geeky lookin charac though.
Panic:Get rid of those things stickin out the top of the p and a, but if u want to elave em i recomend that u do that kind of style on all of them.
Dank:Nice blocks, thr outline is kinda gay tho.

DIA
04-21-2007, 10:23 PM
the top one is aight
for the other two

try to keep it all even...use blocks

and deff work on the Ns...i got an N in my name and it is a bitch to get it down mine usualyl suck ass

popshots
04-21-2007, 10:24 PM
envy: dont cloler it in jus keep workin on the lettas
fuckthatgame: cant read the 1st letter.. looks alright fix some of the extencion
panik: make your bars thickerand dont do that think on the K

capitol
04-21-2007, 10:27 PM
yea the "n" and the "y" are both bitches to work with.

''SCC''
04-21-2007, 10:30 PM
panic do this with the bottom of the k its the top of ur p

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9504/untitled1sz9.png (http://imageshack.us)

''SCC''
04-21-2007, 10:32 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9271/untitled2ps5.png (http://imageshack.us)

Striker99
04-21-2007, 10:33 PM
PAN1K nice and simple

maybe a bit too long of an extension on the k

popshots
04-21-2007, 10:36 PM
kersr: wheres your maners.... dont expect crits when u havnt critetd n e 1

''SCC''
04-21-2007, 10:39 PM
was that a joke???

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by popshots@Apr 21 2007, 10:36 PM
kersr: wheres your maners.... dont expect crits when u havnt critetd n e 1
stop complain&#39; about crits.

''SCC''
04-21-2007, 10:44 PM
i did crit???
i mean i posted a picture

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 10:45 PM
yea thnx ima try an fix it


kersr - i like that alot&#33; nice

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 11:01 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture39.jpg

earlyier this week i did this one..

critz?

ThrowItUP
04-21-2007, 11:03 PM
i actually like that "P"
the "A" is really iffy tho

popshots
04-21-2007, 11:07 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 21 2007, 10:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 21 2007, 10:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-popshots@Apr 21 2007, 10:36 PM
kersr: wheres your maners.... dont expect crits when u havnt critetd n e 1
stop complain&#39; about crits. [/b][/quote]
im not complanin i jus didnt see it..... CHILL

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 11:08 PM
I am chill, just hate it when people nag for crits...B)

hungr
04-21-2007, 11:10 PM
sume throw a crisp M on that mans shirt.. cause its where the m is at. idk if u were gonna do that but u know might could be ballin

eso239
04-21-2007, 11:18 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture001.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture006.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture009-1.jpg
heres a couple of new styles

striker- use straighter stylem dont overlap 3d, go basic
writer45- the first dank peice is fresh just either round all your edges or keep em straight, maybe a different a to like a capital A :D

kersrone
04-21-2007, 11:23 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Apr 21 2007, 10:32 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9271/untitled2ps5.png (http://imageshack.us)
is this really fucking possible?


same name, letter for letter...

Zep0
04-21-2007, 11:25 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Apr 21 2007, 06:17 PM

Crits please...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/electricaeos.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/TumTum.jpg


Esole, I cant really see your stuff, That first piece, those E im not feelin at all, your second seems just simple, and the last one bring the L out, but I would work on simple just a little bit more, and if your not using bars, use em.

Panik bars and simples son, everyone says do letters on your keyboard, but do them with baaarrrrssss all same length and width then move on from there...dont freehand your letters yet.

Kersr....I love your style man, keep it up. WAIT WHAT&#33;&#33;&#33; I THOUGHT IT WAS KERSONE ITS ANOTHER KERSR&#33;&#33;&#33; AHHHH&#33;&#33; Whatever.

Crits would be nice..

Sumoe
04-21-2007, 11:28 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 21 2007, 11:10 PM
sume throw a crisp M on that mans shirt.. cause its where the m is at. idk if u were gonna do that but u know might could be ballin
I was thinkin&#39; about doing that, not sure though...thanks for the feedback anyways. :)

PAN1K
04-21-2007, 11:40 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture45.jpg
N is a lil small i think..
new stuff im a lil proud of it idk why :) i think ive gotten lil bttr sinc ei first posted




zep0 - THATS REALLY NICE I LUV DAT BOTH OF THEM I LIKE AEOS BTTR BUT BOTH ARE AWESOME GOOOD WORK&#33;&#33;

what marker annd shit did u use???? /&#092;

Zep0
04-21-2007, 11:43 PM
Elmers paint pens, for everything except the black background just a big ass marks-a-lot...and hey it looks like your using bars GOOD&#33; just for now keep em straighter and keep em the same width. Looks fairly decent though, theres no bullshit thrown onto it :P

AnteUp
04-21-2007, 11:55 PM
kersr-purty tight
aeos-dude straighten up tha fucken E&#33; please&#33;&#33; :angry: <_< :)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/kriggidy-1.jpg
crits...hmm the r got cut off... :angry: SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES...ME SO ANGREEEAAAAYYY WIT SIMPLES...did bars...earased them :)

Nem
04-22-2007, 12:25 AM
ante, if that supposed to be an "A"

i suggest making it a capital letter. And seeing how that treats you.

because i almost had it mistaken for a lowercase D of some sort.

AnteUp
04-22-2007, 12:33 AM
yep...heard that before...

Zep0
04-22-2007, 12:33 AM
Originally posted by Zep0+Apr 21 2007, 11:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Zep0 &#064; Apr 21 2007, 11:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Apr 21 2007, 06:17 PM

Crits please...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/electricaeos.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/TumTum.jpg


[/b][/quote]
Ante, its the same piece...I will next time. That a is horrible because you extended it too far, I think you know that though. Pretty much work on cleanliness...and some bar consistency...

yes, I&#39;m bumping again but&#33; I&#39;m adding a new pic...just a generic throwy...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/throw1.jpg
Crits?

AnteUp
04-22-2007, 12:40 AM
o tha throwie lukks very nice...not very clean...but nice...
hahah mah bad bout gettin on ur ass bout tha E didnt notice it was tha same peice :)

o and i have people that tell me "where have u bin hidin this, this shit is tight&#33;" when i leave tha bars on...when i erase them, whole different story...

Zep0
04-22-2007, 12:48 AM
Its def. an improvemnt from your old stuff imo and you def. have the idea done, just some bars are too thick or too thin (and not the ones that are supposed to be) other than that (and the a) the letters are nice and simple. And I know simples get boring but they do help...I was thinkin about it, and if your going to do this crazy ass pot with curves and handles (out of clay) dont you at least have to know how to make a pot first? Thats my explanation for why to do simples....but keep it up man. And that throw yeah I was doing it fast like if was teh real thing.

squakMix
04-22-2007, 12:48 AM
Take two.

New style, and a first attempt at a throwie.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/squakMix/Etcsketch2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/squakMix/etc1-1.jpg

They both say "etc."

SWIKA
04-22-2007, 12:49 AM
element piece i did in tek10s book
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/SWIKA/l_0900306798b00f152da7062b235b44f6.jpg

PAN1K
04-22-2007, 01:03 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture46.jpg


any advice b4 i make this offical?? i think its workin? def improved sinc emy first post in here thnx everone&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

zep0 - throwy is nice i like dat

braxtons a g
04-22-2007, 01:08 AM
hehe. looky at all my toy talent;]
http://i14.tinypic.com/2s67mvl.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/47uiybt.jpg
http://i19.tinypic.com/2gt1d9f.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/34jeofa.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/3y62asm.jpg
http://i17.tinypic.com/447fc77.jpg
^ok my first attemp at wildstyle.. along time ago
http://i19.tinypic.com/2ytsmzm.jpg
^forst attempt at a peice. a long time ago.
panik- looks nice;]

Just Another
04-22-2007, 02:06 AM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r242/JustAnotherChildProdigy/DSCN0821.jpg
Crits&#33;

C-money fresh!
04-22-2007, 02:36 AM
Originally posted by PAN1K@Apr 22 2007, 01:03 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture46.jpg


any advice b4 i make this offical?? i think its workin? def improved sinc emy first post in here thnx everone&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

zep0 - throwy is nice i like dat
Your definatly doing the right thing. Try bringing your letters together and making it look a little less so much like bars bring them closer where they join try rounding edges experimenting with lengths and try curving your "bars" to. do what ever you want try adding something or cleaning it up a little bit and you have a hot simple in my poinion.

<~ReSiN~>
04-22-2007, 02:50 AM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/blueresin.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/skullresin.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/deviledresn.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/rezn.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/bresin.jpg

Nem
04-22-2007, 02:57 AM
ahhh.

the first and last one are extremely nice.

i would maybe. just maybe. making the horizantal bar on the e in the last sketch a bit thicker?

nero122
04-22-2007, 03:47 AM
damn its true it is toys critin toys we need you mods lol neway sume nah i ahavnt taken any inspiration (hintin that im biting ) from em n i like doin over grown teeth yh i like die59/lust n i like gesus but doesnt meen ima bite em n 666 wannabe nah im 14 lol theyre all like 18 n shit neway yh we need good crits n zepo yh i have to give every letter teeth n shit cos i wnna so once you devolop a style then you can crit evryone until then fuck off n practice

PAN1K
04-22-2007, 04:37 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture47.jpg

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/PAN1K_01/Picture48.jpg

Can someone good show me some really nice simples to give me some ideas so mine dont look so plain..


Resin - NICE STUFF&#33;

krazzie_ammo
04-22-2007, 04:44 AM
panik - heres an example, they are just like simple :)
if you want more, check out all the different fonts on microsoft word.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/9668/118db6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9891/121wo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some quick stuff
crits?

nero122
04-22-2007, 04:44 AM
keep up the work panic u went from shit to beta in a few days keep with these n the style n shit will just com to u , use the touch twins now n colour .

PAN1K
04-22-2007, 04:55 AM
touch twins??

and thnx&#33; &#33;&#33;&#33; :D :D :D :D

trupe
04-22-2007, 05:37 AM
im just goin 2 totaly kill it now :unsure: sorry

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3278/dsc00096pu6.jpghttp://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4333/dsc00099yl2.jpghttp://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1060/dsc00100cj0.jpghttp://img80.imageshack.us/img80/3259/dsc00102gg8.jpg

Noddles912300
04-22-2007, 05:43 AM
krazzie i think ive seen that music one before. but they are nice simples and the second is pretty sweet.
trupe go simple lose all the extensions

trashhh
04-22-2007, 05:50 AM
Originally posted by Just Another@Apr 22 2007, 02:06 AM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r242/JustAnotherChildProdigy/DSCN0821.jpg
Crits&#33;
this got overlooked and it was probably th best thing on the page.... nice just

garbage down tha way
04-22-2007, 06:43 AM
Originally posted by eso239@Apr 21 2007, 11:18 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture009-1.jpg


hmm... E? Eh, I probably worry too much.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eriespeice-1.jpg

crozzy
04-22-2007, 06:43 AM
trupe dont you ever put a crown anywhere near your piece. i fucking hate people that put crowns on their shit. oh and keep sketching simples before you go inkin in.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 07:00 AM
Originally posted by PAN1K@Apr 22 2007, 09:55 AM
touch twins??

and thnx&#33; &#33;&#33;&#33; :D :D :D :D
Nero...TouchTwins...he aint ready for shit...he shud be conctrating PLAIN ON LETTERS...SIMPLES..NOTHING ELSE...Like ALIVE said..." A Good writer should be able to rock a good letter in black and white " ...

y ou dont need colour...you need to focus on your letters..

im just recycling the crits that got given to me a while back...props to you know who...

Zep0
04-22-2007, 08:58 AM
Originally posted by nero122@Apr 22 2007, 03:47 AM
damn its true it is toys critin toys we need you mods lol neway sume nah i ahavnt taken any inspiration (hintin that im biting ) from em n i like doin over grown teeth yh i like die59/lust n i like gesus but doesnt meen ima bite em n 666 wannabe nah im 14 lol theyre all like 18 n shit neway yh we need good crits n zepo yh i have to give every letter teeth n shit cos i wnna so once you devolop a style then you can crit evryone until then fuck off n practice
Ummmm, Cram it up your ass? It was a fucking crit, you twat.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 09:01 AM
why should it matter what age you are..i got most of my crits and advice when i was 14...big deal ... does it matter how old the person whos giving you crits are..no

Just Another
04-22-2007, 09:16 AM
Originally posted by trashhh+Apr 22 2007, 05:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Apr 22 2007, 05:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Just Another@Apr 22 2007, 02:06 AM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r242/JustAnotherChildProdigy/DSCN0821.jpg
Crits&#33;
this got overlooked and it was probably th best thing on the page.... nice just [/b][/quote]
Thanks man...

krazzie_ammo
04-22-2007, 09:24 AM
just - shit i must have missed that, you got some nice letters working there.

ok, so i finished off this page,
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5383/122wm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? espicially on the throw?

Just Another
04-22-2007, 09:34 AM
That middle one is sick&#33;

Sumoe
04-22-2007, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 22 2007, 09:01 AM
why should it matter what age you are..i got most of my crits and advice when i was 14...big deal ... does it matter how old the person whos giving you crits are..no
I&#39;m only 15...so yeah, it doesn&#39;t really matter how old you are, you&#39;re skill level is what&#39;s important.

nickstix
04-22-2007, 10:32 AM
damn sume your the same age as me and your so much better :( , haha

krazzie_ammo
04-22-2007, 10:58 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Apr 22 2007, 09:24 AM
just - shit i must have missed that, you got some nice letters working there.

ok, so i finished off this page,
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5383/122wm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? espicially on the throw?
bumparoo.

HuntingLOLs
04-22-2007, 11:07 AM
im 21 and im recieving crits from kids :D

G - Wahl
04-22-2007, 11:11 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 22 2007, 10:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 22 2007, 10:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 22 2007, 09:01 AM
why should it matter what age you are..i got most of my crits and advice when i was 14...big deal ... does it matter how old the person whos giving you crits are..no
I&#39;m only 15...so yeah, it doesn&#39;t really matter how old you are, you&#39;re skill level is what&#39;s important. [/b][/quote]
sume i thought you were like 25 ha

Zep0
04-22-2007, 11:12 AM
ammo, I really like the piece...the throw is amazing as well..i would just straighten out the left leg of the R maybe...

Game905
04-22-2007, 11:13 AM
everyones like 15 in here im 16

garbage down tha way
04-22-2007, 11:24 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eas2-1.jpg

Krazzie ammo- I used to hate that style of ready but I think it grew on me, I love it now.


Just another- That is sexy.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 11:29 AM
Lets turn this thread into the How Old Are You Toy B-Books

i wish i was a mod...bahahhahahaha

wel..im 38 so ....

Just Another
04-22-2007, 11:29 AM
Originally posted by Just Another@Apr 22 2007, 02:06 AM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r242/JustAnotherChildProdigy/DSCN0821.jpg
Crits&#33;
Bumpity bump

Just Another
04-22-2007, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Apr 22 2007, 10:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo @ Apr 22 2007, 10:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Apr 22 2007, 09:24 AM
just - shit i must have missed that, you got some nice letters working there.

ok, so i finished off this page,
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5383/122wm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? espicially on the throw?
bumparoo. [/b][/quote]
Define your R more it looks a lot like the A

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 11:34 AM
how the hell does the R look like a A...you shud define your J cuz it looks like a U

RavenHeiist
04-22-2007, 11:40 AM
been skeptical about posting some of my work so far.. but i guess i gotta get better some day :P my friend was pushing on me to get way super duper simple so i bit his style and did a couple pieces.. none of em are super good but the last one i think im more proud of.

btw ETC. totally not my letters. i stoled em to try out the style the way i know it then use the style to write my own letters.


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/ravenheist/HEX-1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/ravenheist/hextiger.jpg

ThrowItUP
04-22-2007, 11:43 AM
your friend sucks <_<

RavenHeiist
04-22-2007, 11:45 AM
lol. il he roams around on these forums too :P. and hes only passing on the advice.

i should mention its a style he picked up to learn simple letters. hes doin a lot better than that.


any ideas for my pieces tho? i think i got the whole simple part down a bit.

Nosypainter
04-22-2007, 12:03 PM
Originally posted by D E M O@Apr 18 2007, 07:12 PM
feedback, crits appreciated&#33;

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1949/demo8qt1.jpg
the colors made me seriously orgasm

MainEvent
04-22-2007, 12:20 PM
demo thats so dope man.

finally got a digital camera so heres some sketches

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m125/MainEvent249/100_0085.jpg

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m125/MainEvent249/100_0087.jpg

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m125/MainEvent249/100_0088.jpg

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m125/MainEvent249/100_0090.jpg

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m125/MainEvent249/100_0091.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-22-2007, 12:27 PM
dont have flow. it is too straight.

Game905
04-22-2007, 12:29 PM
Originally posted by RavenHeiist@Apr 22 2007, 11:40 AM
been skeptical about posting some of my work so far.. but i guess i gotta get better some day :P my friend was pushing on me to get way super duper simple so i bit his style and did a couple pieces.. none of em are super good but the last one i think im more proud of.

btw ETC. totally not my letters. i stoled em to try out the style the way i know it then use the style to write my own letters.


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/ravenheist/HEX-1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/ravenheist/hextiger.jpg
these need alot of work

emokid
04-22-2007, 12:33 PM
mainevent, too wild, getting a little ahead of yourself. letters need more structure before you can start playing with extensions.

MainEvent
04-22-2007, 12:45 PM
alright gotcha. appreciated, so go more simple?

trashhh
04-22-2007, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Apr 22 2007, 12:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Apr 22 2007, 12:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-D E M O@Apr 18 2007, 07:12 PM
feedback, crits appreciated&#33;

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1949/demo8qt1.jpg
the colors made me seriously orgasm [/b][/quote]
I like this style and colours but the O and some parts are kinda just a big squiggle

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 01:22 PM
could someone please kindly point out the letters in that DEMO piece..i can see an O thats all..

Raven...why would you even want to bite your freinds style..that shit aint no style..

okay..so i tried a new outline style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/9999.jpg

i pretty proud of the out come etc.

crits..thanks

ASB_ONE
04-22-2007, 01:35 PM
looking good. nice style on the outline kinda can two ish, liking it.

Just Another
04-22-2007, 01:36 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 22 2007, 11:34 AM
how the hell does the R look like a A...you shud define your J cuz it looks like a U
I was talking about the throw

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 01:38 PM
oh sorry..

ASB..yah...my charaters are mainly influnced from him

dim
04-22-2007, 01:44 PM
yeah i can see the can2 influencestill rele sick tho keep it up

eMJayBee
04-22-2007, 01:48 PM
Wutchoogonnadoo- nice outlining and good charc

Critz/

I took the advice, not adding to many arrows

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture013.jpg

somthing I did at school, same here I am trying not to use to many arrows

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture016.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-22-2007, 01:57 PM
Originally posted by garbage down tha way@Apr 22 2007, 11:24 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/eas2-1.jpg

Bump.

eMJayBee- I love those, especially the bottom one. Not so into the coloring on the top one. The inside lines make it look ridiculously complex. But the bottom one is really nice.

00-made-00
04-22-2007, 02:30 PM
garbage down tha way- 3-d looks good, not to keen on the black lines tho, and you could make the E abit clearer too and the R too.
eMJayBee- bottom piece looks fresh manz, top one the fll looks a bit complicated.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00789.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00788.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00787.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00785.jpg

Crits?

ASB_ONE
04-22-2007, 02:33 PM
aint posted up in a while tryn to come up wid some new simps, i duno jus fucn about rele.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0342.jpg

AnteUp
04-22-2007, 02:34 PM
demo-lukks gud...make the letters more distinctive
amtwo-did u change ur name to amtall? or wat does it say at tha bottom of ur karak? lukks gud i can really see the nose, i kno its there but jus make it more of a nose?
emjaybee-thats a killer ass wildstyle i kinda like it...
lek-dont do karaks yet, the e on the first on lukks ok... work on simples....like im doin...
edit: guest-always nice to see ur clean simples...i like the S G and E

crits would be nice... NOTICE- i gave crits, now i receive :) thats how it works newbies :)
the quote on this (if its gud) is gonna be "lets flip a coin...heads i get tail, tails i get head" :lol:
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/head.jpg

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 02:35 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 22 2007, 06:22 PM
could someone please kindly point out the letters in that DEMO piece..i can see an O thats all..

Raven...why would you even want to bite your freinds style..that shit aint no style..

okay..so i tried a new outline style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/9999.jpg

i pretty proud of the out come etc.

crits..thanks
oh shit..none crits me anymore.. :lol:


Hayz..keep them simples up i suppose..
Guest..so cleaaan..yet beautiful :lol:

<~ReSiN~>
04-22-2007, 03:03 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/tweekedresin.jpg

critiques?

writer45
04-22-2007, 03:20 PM
resin-i like everything but that e, clean it up a bit
anteup- i like that style, keep at it
asb_one-like those simples, the t needs a little work tho

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9883/dankhh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz?

Slushi
04-22-2007, 03:30 PM
Originally posted by <~ReSiN~>@Apr 22 2007, 03:03 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/tweekedresin.jpg

critiques?
What city are you in?

-ShAmEE-
04-22-2007, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by Wutchoogonnadoo?+Apr 22 2007, 07:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Wutchoogonnadoo? @ Apr 22 2007, 07:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Wutchoogonnadoo?@Apr 22 2007, 06:22 PM
could someone please kindly point out the letters in that DEMO piece..i can see an O thats all..

Raven...why would you even want to bite your freinds style..that shit aint no style..

okay..so i tried a new outline style..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/9999.jpg

i pretty proud of the out come etc.

crits..thanks
oh shit..none crits me anymore.. :lol:


Hayz..keep them simples up i suppose..
Guest..so cleaaan..yet beautiful :lol: [/b][/quote]
sick all of it is.
i can see cantwo is a massive influence or is it not?
u will be workin for adidas soon skip&#33;/

Wutchoogonnadoo?
04-22-2007, 03:34 PM
like i said..he is a big influence..we all need influence..
what isit with none giving crits ... this shits gone to the crap... :(
who remebers when we said
TO GET CRITS , GIVE CRITS..
ima put that shit back in my sig

ASB_ONE
04-22-2007, 03:34 PM
ante - looks ayt but the proportion aint all that kinda everywhere
writer - keep at it man they need more work than mine

resin - i cant see no e or i if it does say resin? i duno not ma sorta shit.


after that simple searching comin up wid shit stuff i went back and bit myself lol and tried to wild it up a bit but keep it legible, i duno worth inking?

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0343.jpg

writer45
04-22-2007, 03:38 PM
i wouldnt say mine needs "more" work then yours

but that one looks alot better i like it

-ShAmEE-
04-22-2007, 03:39 PM
now fill it up. loooks sick

revolt92
04-22-2007, 03:40 PM
ASB, you pull off those g&#39;s sooo nice, personally g&#39;s are my most hated letter...aswell as 25 other ones

Sumoe
04-22-2007, 03:41 PM
writer45-HELL FUCKIN&#39; YES YOUR LETTERS NEED MORE WORK THAN GUEST&#39;S...

yours are no where close to his...