Tot Black Books

[wreckone.]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jul 3 2005, 05:05 PM
runci is like in the middle line between "toy" and "non toy".. more twards the "non toy" :lol: .. i cant wait to see his shit in a year or 2.
So, where would let's say, Fula fall under?

[phr3ak]

did fula stop showing any sketches?

[Nazel]

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9130/assssdf0019fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5448/assssdf0020ni.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9510/assssdf0030sl.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9793/assssdf0069le.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8110/assssdf0055wi.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3985/assssdf0071ur.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5140/assssdf0085mp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7572/assssdf0105fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1665/assssdf0114ut.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/949/assssdf0124ix.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6646/assssdf0130sm.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
I know my shit sucks, so plz only helpful comments. thxs

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by phr3ak@Jul 3 2005, 07:33 PM
did fula stop showing any sketches?
if so who's complaining? :lol:

[phr3ak]

i was jsut curious...cuz he used to enter alot of battles

[StoL]

Originally posted by StoL@Jul 3 2005, 06:17 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6334/picture0031mi.jpg

Just a little sketch I did. Not really much of, anything. Just gimme some feedback and I was thinknig of doing this on a canvas.
Bump. Tell me what you think.

[skech]

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00525680f00000006.jpg

heres a sketch i did .. give me some feed back pleeze

[funky monky]

heres a sketch i did not too long ago
gimme comments and tips??

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/8974/haze8zo.th.jpg (http://img107.imageshack.us/my.php?image=haze8zo.jpg)

[StoL]

Originally posted by skech@Jul 4 2005, 11:41 AM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00525680f00000006.jpg

heres a sketch i did .. give me some feed back pleeze
I don't know much about ciriticing graffiti, but, you got WAY too many arrows comming off that. Cut down on the arrows....

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

:ph34r: o raost get him back for that but yea cut down the arrows kid

[GABB]

:huh:

[SEROKID]

ehh i dunno bout this one man...make your letters bigger and in the center of the page to start out with....

[das one]

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6117/dsc005952fl.th.jpg (http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc005952fl.jpg)

this is a design for a banner some firneds asked if i would do for them for the WEMF in orangeville ... WEMF stands for World Electronic Music Festival so ive been told


tell me what ya think???

[C H E N Z O]

is that ment to be like a piece cos it looks more like just a normal tag.

[das one]

more of a handstyle then a peice your right but, thats kinda my style!

im thinkin im gonna do it anyways

[SEROKID]

some quick shithttp://img301.imageshack.us/img301/6996/uglyasssero8bu.jpg

[SEROKID]

GELO!http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2793/geloarrow7hf.jpg

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by Nazel@Jul 4 2005, 02:01 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9130/assssdf0019fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5448/assssdf0020ni.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9510/assssdf0030sl.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9793/assssdf0069le.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8110/assssdf0055wi.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3985/assssdf0071ur.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5140/assssdf0085mp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7572/assssdf0105fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1665/assssdf0114ut.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/949/assssdf0124ix.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6646/assssdf0130sm.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
I know my shit sucks, so plz only helpful comments. thxs
Yo, is your name JAY?

[SpAdE]

seems like it

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by das one@Jul 4 2005, 12:36 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6117/dsc005952fl.th.jpg (http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc005952fl.jpg)

this is a design for a banner some firneds asked if i would do for them for the WEMF in orangeville ... WEMF stands for World Electronic Music Festival so ive been told


tell me what ya think???
yo homie no offence but Dont enter that if its gonna be someones banner... i dont wanna sound fucked, but in a couple years you'll understand me

[cutslikedrugs]

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y212/cutslikedrugs07/Julia.jpg
Feedback, please? The name is Julia. Hopefully no overly vague comments like "work on your letter structure" or "practice." I already know I need to continue to do this.

Thanks!

[SEROKID]

ok..im gonna be specific...start off with just basic block letters and not the extra squiggly shit youve got on there. and you forgot to shade it...i dunno if you noticed that...but other than that its not that bad

[cutslikedrugs]

Yeah, I didn't do any 3-d, coloring, shadows, fill, etc. because I wanted to concentrate solely on the letters. I've been doing simple stuff for a while now, but this is kind of what it has evolved into. I feel the piece has decent repetition though, carried out through the top and bottoms portions of the letters. They are all, also, roughly the same width and carry similarities with the curves. Thanks for the advice though!

[SEOR_NM]

You should sart off simple with no add on's.

http://www.mrwigglesonline.com/8b2900b0.jpg

[Nazel]

yea, my name is jay

[SpAdE]

i think that julia would look much better w/ shade n such!


ppeace

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

ha ur good shade it in like my lil ***** serokid says and ull b alright and yea start of with bloack letters no google gas throw this here and there shit ight

[wreckone.]

I suggest Cutslikedrugs should lose the extentions and connections. I also suggest that you should make an effort to make your lines more parallel to one another.
just a suggestion, no offence.

[das one]

Originally posted by Kayone707+Jul 4 2005, 06:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Kayone707 @ Jul 4 2005, 06:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-das one@Jul 4 2005, 12:36 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6117/dsc005952fl.th.jpg (http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc005952fl.jpg)

this is a design for a banner some firneds asked if i would do for them for the WEMF in orangeville ... WEMF stands for World Electronic Music Festival so ive been told


tell me what ya think???
yo homie no offence but Dont enter that if its gonna be someones banner... i dont wanna sound fucked, but in a couple years you&#39;ll understand me [/b][/quote]
why is that??? my buddy asked me to do one up for the side of his car???

what is the big deal???
help me understand

[Kayone707]

^ the deal is that u aint that good.. if u do something for your homies car ya your friends might think its "cool" but all the real writers are jus gonna laugh when it rolls by... im sayin wait a year or 2 or 3 if u wanna do serious stuff like painting cars/rooms/ and stuff for companies.. trust me on this.

*i said this before and i&#39;ll say it again.. i&#39;ll even bet you &#036;50... in 3 years your gonna Wish you never did the stuff your doing now. *no offence, thats how everyone starts off

[GABB]

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7827/gbb7fw.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)


Criticism pleaz

[Enemy]

lose the copyright sign&#33;

[C H E N Z O]

the G and A don really seem to b in the same style as the B&#39;s, if u made them more chunky or blocky they would look much better.

[das one]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jul 5 2005, 02:04 AM
^ the deal is that u aint that good.. if u do something for your homies car ya your friends might think its "cool" but all the real writers are jus gonna laugh when it rolls by... im sayin wait a year or 2 or 3 if u wanna do serious stuff like painting cars/rooms/ and stuff for companies.. trust me on this.

*i said this before and i&#39;ll say it again.. i&#39;ll even bet you &#036;50... in 3 years your gonna Wish you never did the stuff your doing now. *no offence, thats how everyone starts off
no offense taken but, if someone remebers a single banner three years down the road they have bigger issues to worry about&#33;&#33;&#33; lol :lol:

but thx for the input neways

[SpAdE]

i think u should listen to kay man..^^

[C H E N Z O]

http://img278.imageshack.us/img278/5341/oldyin5ji.th.jpg (http://img278.imageshack.us/my.php?image=oldyin5ji.jpg)

a wee sketch a dun a while ago a cant get piks of ma new stuff cos a lost ma phone. just a wee simple thing man nuffin 2 comples. any suggestions or anyhin &#33;?&#33;?

** a dont know y its jist a wee thumbnail click it an it&#39;ll go bigger a think.

[StoL]

Originally posted by StoL@Jul 3 2005, 06:17 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6334/picture0031mi.jpg

Just a little sketch I did. Not really much of, anything. Just gimme some feedback and I was thinknig of doing this on a canvas.
Bump. AGAIN. Jsut gimme some feedback and I&#39;ll shuttup :ph34r:

[SEROKID]

its a pretty good cartoon man...what more do you want us to say?

[SpAdE]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1594/spade00010bd.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

give me some feedback on wut i should change&#33;&#33;

[StoL]

Just that. :D That&#39;s fine.

[SEROKID]

spade. that ones not too bad, your E looks a little &#39;&#39;iffy&#39;&#39; though...work on that then its fine

[SpAdE]

ight thanx

[DREAMS]

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7333/1434341img6tk.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
that is what i got , it sucks but i am working on it .
Give me some feedback.
PEACE

[levity]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/levity22/IMG_3200.jpg

new bomb says ace
comments?

[wreckone.]

So... What&#39;s the difference between Toy Sory and Tot Black Books? They seem the same now.

[SEROKID]

ok...DREAMS...the W and the I arnt that bad...but the Z has got to go..and no offence, but WIZ is a pretty gay name...so you might wanna change it

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

uhhh spade no offence i like it but the e is the only thing decent on that peice fix up your ;etters bruh ull b cool

[Nazel]

Originally posted by Nazel@Jul 4 2005, 03:01 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9130/assssdf0019fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5448/assssdf0020ni.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9510/assssdf0030sl.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9793/assssdf0069le.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8110/assssdf0055wi.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3985/assssdf0071ur.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5140/assssdf0085mp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7572/assssdf0105fx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1665/assssdf0114ut.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/949/assssdf0124ix.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6646/assssdf0130sm.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
I know my shit sucks, so plz only helpful comments. thxs
Bump for comments and things i should work on. and any ideas?

[Ume]

Originally posted by SEROKID@Jul 5 2005, 08:30 PM
ok...DREAMS...the W and the I arnt that bad...but the Z has got to go..and no offence, but WIZ is a pretty gay name...so you might wanna change it
ok, they look bad, if your a toy, please dont help other toys out. :( (notice i dont say anything lol :lol:)

and i&#39;m guessing you haven&#39;t been doing this for too long or seen many things on it?....ever heard of Iz The Wiz?

[SpAdE]

ace no offence but i think the whole thing needs to go
start of letter by letter and it doesn&#39;t like any better w/ a smilie face in the middle of the letter..

[SpAdE]

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2770/word3qp.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

gunna be painting somehting like this so i need to no wut to change

[SpAdE]

i fucked up the s but w/e

[blondeshady2001]

keep the bottoms of the letters all on the same plane, and if its gonna be any bigger than this here, you best use a roller to get real straight edges.

[blondeshady2001]

id say try some more sketches till ya get one ur happy wit

[SpAdE]

well that was just a quick little sketch i wanted to gwt up before i left

[Jughead]

this is my shit from last summer
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8195/10000078oh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
heres a lil later of a sketch
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9640/ye4ae.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
some advice would be apprectiated ^_^

[skateparadise]

Looks like you hae improved ALOT.

[cess!]

damn


that first one made me laugh

[Tails0nE]

Originally posted by acer1@Jun 15 2005, 12:06 PM
epod....the last 2 or 3 look kinda like car2ns with that extension though the whole piece...but hey who the hell cares..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v651/klep05/resized-acer.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v651/klep05/Picture-031.jpg
not finished yet...im planning to get some copic or prismas soon



im feelin that bottom one....






just dont fuck it up with the fill....

[JaystreetsA4]

any suggestions for a good graff book? please respond AZSAP

[das one]

head down to your local micheals and get one of the hardcover black ones... they run for about &#036; 20- &#036;25

[SpAdE]

ya those r nice^^

[das one]

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9007/tattoosforsarah0018xt.th.jpg (http://img102.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tattoosforsarah0018xt.jpg)

tribal design for a friend what do ya think???

[funky monky]

i did this one last nite tell wat ya think?????
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1199/copyof07072005104513am7tr.th.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=copyof07072005104513am7tr.jpg)

[funky monky]

tell wat u think???

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5104/copyof07072005104513am0hu.th.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=copyof07072005104513am0hu.jpg)

[Jughead]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Jul 7 2005, 12:38 AM
damn


that first one made me laugh
ya man thats from back in 04 when i first started ahaha it makes me laugh to ahhahahaha

[Jughead]

heres another sketch of mine i just did thats a little bit different with colour, opinions would be apreciated
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/9569/mace6mw.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Jughead]

i actually liek my first more

[JadedSketches]

fuck edit

[JaystreetsA4]

ight anybody know the name of a hardcover black book? and anybody know if there is a micheals in manhattan? if not where cna i get this black book?

[Nazel]

any art and crafts store will have them or even a art store

[JadedSketches]

edit

[JadedSketches]

dont you find your old posts embarassing?

[epod]

Originally posted by runci@Jun 15 2005, 01:21 PM
just thought i would post some of my more recent stuff..

http://img280.echo.cx/img280/8271/picture478nw.jpg

http://img280.echo.cx/img280/7127/picture505br.jpg

http://img280.echo.cx/img280/267/picture568sh.jpg

http://img280.echo.cx/img280/3466/picture572ug.jpg

http://img280.echo.cx/img280/1517/picture613ip.jpg
latest sketch for a girl..
cant wait to see your newer shit.

[SpAdE]

i agree that shit will be tight^^


zoky those throws suck

[JadedSketches]

edit

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

dude zoky gay ass name and that shit needs fixed big time now that iv seen what uv done kid u cant talk shit about ne one on here dman u suck but hey it takes time ull get better :)

[ideal]

tell me wut u think :?:
also tell me wut colors i should use. i wuz thinking like bright colors.
like limegreen, yellow, orange, light blue.

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/2627/newstyle8qs.th.jpg (http://img288.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newstyle8qs.jpg)

[dash_takc]

feedback pls

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2276/dash7ls.th.jpg (http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dash7ls.jpg)

[Nazel]

why dont i get feedback :&#39;( :P

[staller]

my first pic wot u reckon?
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3723/scan00013id.jpg

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

Originally posted by ideal@Jul 8 2005, 03:33 AM
tell me wut u think :?:
also tell me wut colors i should use. i wuz thinking like bright colors.
like limegreen, yellow, orange, light blue.

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/2627/newstyle8qs.th.jpg (http://img288.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newstyle8qs.jpg)
:huh: i think ur good and all but some one already writes deal so u mgiht have to think of somthing else kid

[staller]

did my link work?

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

Originally posted by dash_takc@Jul 8 2005, 04:01 AM
feedback pls

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2276/dash7ls.th.jpg (http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dash7ls.jpg)
:blink: ur good i like the colors and how u made them flow so good

[staller]

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6665/scan00020ca.jpg
my second one&#33;

[staller]

wot u all rekon of me first attempts?
plz tell me wot u fink would make them better and what u like(if u like it)

[SEROKID]

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/2209/requerjfjfjfjfjfjfjfrjfjfrrrrr.jpg
my homie REQUIER

[SEROKID]

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9301/fatdonsbattlepiece8rq.jpg

[phr3ak]

staller u totally bit tare&#33; on the second 1

[JadedSketches]

edit

[SEROKID]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Jul 7 2005, 02:10 PM
k,on a trip back from montreal,I decided to change my name to Zoky,so in the car I did a couple of throws,feedback please http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/2815/graffz0274xi.th.jpg (http://img281.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz0274xi.jpg)
http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/8945/graffz0176zx.th.jpg (http://img281.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz0176zx.jpg)
these throws arnt that bad man.......zoky is a pretty lame though no offence...but other than that...yea id just use zok

[funky monky]

yeah those throwies arent that bad but they need a bit of work id say. keep practisin tho man

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

change the whole thing kid its a gay name from the start try lurk or somthing jsut practice with diff letters ull get it and that requer kid isnt that good matter of fact hes gay lol jk requ u my *****

[dash_takc]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo+Jul 8 2005, 11:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (crazy*****drizzleisgelo @ Jul 8 2005, 11:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dash_takc@Jul 8 2005, 04:01 AM
feedback pls

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2276/dash7ls.th.jpg (http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dash7ls.jpg)
:blink: ur good i like the colors and how u made them flow so good [/b][/quote]
thanx for the feed, the colors are roseart markers that are fading out&#33; so yea, but if ya got more feedback lemme know&#33;

[cess!]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo+Jul 8 2005, 12:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (crazy*****drizzleisgelo @ Jul 8 2005, 12:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ideal@Jul 8 2005, 03:33 AM
tell me wut u think :?:
also tell me wut colors i should use. i wuz thinking like bright colors.
like limegreen, yellow, orange, light blue.

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/2627/newstyle8qs.th.jpg (http://img288.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newstyle8qs.jpg)
:huh: i think ur good and all but some one already writes deal so u mgiht have to think of somthing else kid [/b][/quote]
dont compliment stuff that doesnt deserve it

[das one]

^^^ jus try something more simple like throwups, bubble letters, or even block letter

[SEROKID]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9043/postthisspener7my.jpg

REQUIER

[REQUIER2]

i hate my damn hand style but comment on the 3 pics i have up

[SEROKID]

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9766/anothyerrequier9tq.jpg

[SEOR_NM]

I don&#39;t know what it says, start more simple. ^

[metro 519]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/3515/metrotag0096cb.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

hence forth das one is now deemed "metro 519"

still needs colour but what do you think???

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 9 2005, 04:21 PM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/3515/metrotag0096cb.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

hence forth das one is now deemed "metro 519"

still needs colour but what do you think???
That is pretty fucking good. ;)

[metro 519]

thx

[DOUK or DIE]

eww , try to keep your lines parelell

[metro 519]

what do you mean???

[funky monky]

i find that sketch awsome but by the parelle lines i think he means like some of ur letters are thicker at some places and thiner at others so keep t all the same but i like it that way B)

[DOUK or DIE]

^exactly^

[funky monky]

please tell me wat u guys think of this&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/7185/copyof07072005104513am3iq.th.jpg (http://img55.imageshack.us/my.php?image=copyof07072005104513am3iq.jpg)
its a pretty simple style but i dunno

[cess!]

umm i dont relly like it

[anza]

what&#39;s the deal with the whoosh-woah?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v629/anza/graff/100_1518small.jpg
new name and style. HOAKS. starting to fuck around with extentions, additions, caonnections and the like.
feedback appreciated.

[phat]

Originally posted by anza@Jul 9 2005, 11:17 PM
what&#39;s the deal with the whoosh-woah?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v629/anza/graff/100_1518small.jpg
new name and style. HOAKS. starting to fuck around with extentions, additions, caonnections and the like.
feedback appreciated.
its pretty good

[phat]

Originally posted by SEROKID@Jul 9 2005, 03:13 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9043/postthisspener7my.jpg

REQUIER
damn my ***** requ is killen it he got better but hes right those hands are not that bad but he could work on them i mena i could work on mine two witch im doin but hes goten a lot better

[metro 519]

Originally posted by funky monky@Jul 9 2005, 08:31 PM
i find that sketch awsome but by the parelle lines i think he means like some of ur letters are thicker at some places and thiner at others so keep t all the same but i like it that way B)
yeah i can see where you get that from but if you mean on the extensions thats because it was ment to look like a handstyle with a chisel tip marker so it looks thinner and thicker in other places... but thanks ill keep it in mind

[metro 519]

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6406/metrotagz27qv.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

so should i keep the handstyle or not????

[Ume]

keep it, but lose the crown and the " things. you arent a king yet and both things are played out now, can you do it fast and with a marker, cause i keep thinking that you sat there drawing it and then filled it in, i dunno why though.

[metro 519]

Originally posted by Ume@Jul 10 2005, 02:06 AM
keep it, but lose the crown and the " things. you arent a king yet and both things are played out now, can you do it fast and with a marker, cause i keep thinking that you sat there drawing it and then filled it in, i dunno why though.
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6407/metrotag0095zy.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)


lol well its certainly no secret considering this was on the previous page :lol:

[cess!]

it looks cool though...its like a handstyle that wants to be a piece
or sumthin

[metro 519]

that was kinda what i was goin for... i just gotta think what to colour it with

[REQUIER2]

phat step your game up or i am slaping you i know i hate my hand its shity lik mad shity

[REQUIER2]

I don&#39;t know what it says, start more simple. ^




are you talk ing about me ?

[Ume]

Originally posted by metro 519+Jul 10 2005, 09:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (metro 519 @ Jul 10 2005, 09:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ume@Jul 10 2005, 02:06 AM
keep it, but lose the crown and the " things. you arent a king yet and both things are played out now, can you do it fast and with a marker, cause i keep thinking that you sat there drawing it and then filled it in, i dunno why though.
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6407/metrotag0095zy.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)


lol well its certainly no secret considering this was on the previous page :lol: [/b][/quote]
oh ahahaha :lol: i didn&#39;t see that, if its a handstyle, don&#39;t do any outline and colour it, just do it with a marker or whatever your gonna use to see if you can actually do it.

[JadedSketches]

edit* i dont want to start shit,fine i&#39;ll change the name.

[epod]

that green one^... put u letters together more, make them thiker. i think it looks too spaced out and sloppy. kill the drips.

metro519, what city u from?

[anza]

Originally posted by epod@Jul 10 2005, 09:30 PM
that green one^... put u letters together more, make them thiker. i think it looks too spaced out and sloppy. kill the drips.
yeah, i didn&#39;t like the drips, i only put them in because the deco i used for the forcefield leaked and sort of pooled so i hade to do that to preserve the look of the piece.
you know how we do.

[metro 519]

Originally posted by epod@Jul 10 2005, 09:30 PM
that green one^... put u letters together more, make them thiker. i think it looks too spaced out and sloppy. kill the drips.

metro519, what city u from?
:) london, ontario

[phat]

Originally posted by REQUIER2@Jul 10 2005, 04:26 PM
phat step your game up or i am slaping you i know i hate my hand its shity lik mad shity
umm no its not just practice drawen other people stuff and i like your hand its ok just try doin some different hands with some different style and we up for wendsay still haller

[SEROKID]

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/4299/morelameshit9vw.jpgehhhhhhh

[metro 519]

^^^ not a bad effort... but what used to help me is to study how other proffesional artists do there letters and that often gives you perspective on how to properly form your letters and keep practising....

*NOTE* DO NOT BITE THE PROFESSIONALS *NOTE*

[cess!]

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 11 2005, 03:00 PM
*NOTE* DO NOT BITE THE PROFESSIONALS *NOTE*
^yo i think we gut that 1 hah

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by SEROKID@Jul 11 2005, 12:00 PM
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/4299/morelameshit9vw.jpgehhhhhhh
I f i were to change one thing bout&#39; this piece, I would most definitely lose the add on the slash on the O.

[Ume]

well can someone give me some pointers on mine? i can&#39;t post the pic cause its a .bmp <_<

shitty ass sketch (http://www.lemonparty.org)

[ILL]

Originally posted by Ume@Jul 12 2005, 12:15 AM
well can someone give me some pointers on mine? i can&#39;t post the pic cause its a .bmp <_<

shitty ass sketch (http://www.lemonparty.org)
make all your letters more closer together, there too spaced apart

[metro 519]

Originally posted by Ume@Jul 11 2005, 11:15 PM
well can someone give me some pointers on mine? i can&#39;t post the pic cause its a .bmp <_<

shitty ass sketch (http://www.lemonparty.org)
good god your sick&#33;

[Ume]

dude? what are you talking about? i&#39;m still a toy, i&#39;m not that good....

[phat]

sero that looks like the thing u did in my book plusthe added things u gto from yours truly lol cya kid

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

srry bout that i was logged in on phat srry bout that

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by Ume@Jul 11 2005, 10:15 PM
well can someone give me some pointers on mine? i can&#39;t post the pic cause its a .bmp <_<

shitty ass sketch (http://www.lemonparty.org)
http://mk31.image.pbase.com/u44/adamflath/small/34351929.jordanthrowup.jpg

[Ume]

:lol:

[Revive]

this is me in 2004... i tagged ACE and sucked massive hairy monkey balls...
http://img324.imageshack.us/img324/3508/scan1qm.jpg

these sketches are 6/23/05, 6/24/05, and 6/25/05 in that order....
http://img324.imageshack.us/img324/487/scan00018vh.jpg
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/8926/scan00026xv.jpg
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/1817/scan00033qz.jpg

i haven&#39;t been tagging for a year, btw... last year i wasn&#39;t serious about graff, i only sketched like 3 times that year, then stopped until mid-june, when i came back. any constructive criticism, comments, etc are welcome.

[Ume]

start out simple.

[REQUIER2]

why in the hell do peopel say tagging it writeing damn but yourall right you neer to start with easyer stuff dont all of a sudden try like crazy start with stright leters like sero or some one

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

gelo and perk killen it http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/2610/gelo2hh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us) http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/8405/perk0zq.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Ume]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo@Jul 12 2005, 04:32 PM
gelo and perk killen it
yeah man you like sooo killed that paper. :rolleyes: :lol:

[SEROKID]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo@Jul 12 2005, 04:32 PM
gelo and perk killen it http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/2610/gelo2hh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us) http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/8405/perk0zq.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
the gelo is tight...not the perk though...i dont like the coloring on that one...

[SEOR_NM]

Who writes GELO?

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

i do and serokid wirtes sero

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo@Jul 13 2005, 12:54 AM
i do and serokid wirtes sero
Oh, now I see. :o

So, do you guys have your little crew?

[SEROKID]

yea, we&#39;ve sorta got one, but we just dont have a name.....we cant agree on a good one

[Revive]

thanks for the comments, Ume and REQUIER2.

[REQUIER2]

no problem i just wish i had some people helpig me out then i started thjats why pe helping peopel out

[staller]

herez another version of one of my pics
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3776/tare7oi.jpg

[metro 519]

^^^ its ok you just need to work on making your letters flow abit more and your work will improve ten fold&#33;&#33;&#33; only check your spelling cause i believe it says " GRAFFI is art" ??? unless im out of the new slang you kids use nowadays...


http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/1455/tare7oi2bh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

one of mine (rest suck coz they&#39;re in crayon lol
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/6666/0714127ny.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0714127ny.jpg) ;)

[metro 519]

well for staters your 3d needs alot of work...
bring the "N" down with the rest of your letters and give the "R" a little more body to it if you catch my drift

http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/2000/0714127ny3zl.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[JadedSketches]

yo metro when can i see that handtyle without the crown?

[metro 519]

soon soon i havent had much time of late i had to help re-roof my buddies house so ive been too tired to draw, but now the job is done so you&#39;ll see more stuff from me soon enough

[phr3ak]

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 14 2005, 01:14 AM

http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/1455/tare7oi2bh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
staller y the fuck do u keep biting tare, not only did u copy his name, u tried to copy his style but u failed big TIME

[Rollout714]

Whatup everyone...I only started sketchin a few months ago, but I been at it alot. Here are some sketches I done, I know they aren&#39;t anythin special but I&#39;m still a rookie. Let me know what you like, don&#39;t like, or any suggestions. THnks&#33;

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0219.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0217.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0213.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0218.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0223.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0215.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0244.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0240.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0239.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0238.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0224.jpg

This last one is done wit ballpoint, an its on its side, u gotta rotate ur head to the right to see it upright...check the letters inside.

[Revive]

The last one is sick. PW, it says? I also like "wish", i think you should do simpler styles like that one. "Hustler" is really awkward on a whole, the H epecially. Keep practicing.

(you don&#39;t have to listen to me, I&#39;m just another toy)

[Rollout714]

Yeah I gotta work on the word flow a lil more. My letters don&#39;t always seem to blend or follow the same form.

[phr3ak]

some of them are real bad but the wish and the last 1 was good, 1 more thing, try to come up with 1 name only lol

[Ume]

maybe he&#39;s just starting and trying to choose a name? so he&#39;s doing different thinks to see what they look like....durrrrrrr

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

yo metro, what you think for a 1st try?

[phr3ak]

Originally posted by Ume@Jul 15 2005, 01:54 AM
maybe he&#39;s just starting and trying to choose a name? so he&#39;s doing different thinks to see what they look like....durrrrrrr
ya, but isn&#39;t it better if he used the method of writing the alphabet and choosing the letters hes good at?

[SEOR_NM]

Originally posted by Rollout714@Jul 14 2005, 07:07 PM
Whatup everyone...I only started sketchin a few months ago, but I been at it alot. Here are some sketches I done, I know they aren&#39;t anythin special but I&#39;m still a rookie. Let me know what you like, don&#39;t like, or any suggestions. THnks&#33;

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0219.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0217.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0213.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0218.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0223.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0215.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0244.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0240.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0239.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0238.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0224.jpg

This last one is done wit ballpoint, an its on its side, u gotta rotate ur head to the right to see it upright...check the letters inside.
Yo, Rollout714... your sketches are pretty good for someone who barley started drawing a few months ago. Those pics are better then some of the ones I have seen. Keep up the good work. ;)

BTW, the last pic you drew is fucking sick. I believe the I see P and W in the pic.

[Rollout714]

Thx for the input y&#39;all, like I said I just started out a few months ago so I know some aren&#39;t much 2 look at, but I&#39;m workin on it...Yea thats a PW its my initials, that one was a biatch to make took me forever wit that thin ass ballpoint. And phr3ak, naw those aren&#39;t names I just practice with random words/letters they dont mean shit. Thx tho any input is welcome, specially if it is advice on how to improve my shit. I don&#39;t have a name yet, just thinkin it over, I like Perk or Swerv but I think Perk is taken.

[SEOR_NM]

You should try blocked lettering. ;)

[skech]

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00525680f00000016.jpg
heres my latest skech .. give me some feedback ... whats good and bad about it :blink:

[duker]

requ is killin it&#33;&#33;

[metro 519]

well i think its not a bad attempt at some thing more complicated but it really brings down you piece cause your letters are all over the place, try and build extensions on your letters instead of making letters out of extensions...but at least you kept your lines parallel except for the tail on the "S" and thats a not too shabby arrow, nice shape

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

heres some more ive done
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/8308/07152005060058pm4fb.th.jpg (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07152005060058pm4fb.jpg)
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/6965/07152005060509pm4tv.th.jpg (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07152005060509pm4tv.jpg)
http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/2648/07152005060716pm1wd.th.jpg (http://img350.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07152005060716pm1wd.jpg)


Say what you think metro, i wen t for a cleaner style on theses, see how it works.

lmao

Hope you like em.


What you think metro??

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

u need help bad kid start off wiht making r lines straight dont do all taht bull shit stuff ur colors are cool think of a diff name to y ur at it but keep ur stuff up kid

[metro 519]

first one... not a bad throw up style but you might want to lose the yellow in the middle or fill it in entirly yellow or else it makes it look a little un organized.

the second one... the "R" looks really similar to the "A" but your 3d at the bottom is pretty good, you might want to lose the jagged edges on the out side and do 3d on the letters in stead... if you want to keep the jagged look try and pick a focal point in the middle and have the points move out from there.

the third one... maybe one to many bends in the "T" same thing with the jagged edges

just make sure to take your time with your drawings the last on looks really rushed

pm me if you have any questions about what ive said

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

ye lol,

last one rushed because i did it in class in school (rebel lol)
nearly got caught so i had to rush it lol. I&#39;ll keep workin on them tho. Me and my mate (he just started graff) are makin an A3 large piece so ill pake a picccy of that and post it lter.

l8tr

p.s il pst more of my piccys later when ive done some.




edit**Im only 12 so i think im doin ok**

[flclnaruto1213]

that last one that roller did was fucking awesome
one question, where the fuck did you start?
lol and i saw a m and a d..

[flclnaruto1213]

oh and trance you remind me of me when i just started.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

/|&#092; lol

[metro 519]

Originally posted by &#045;=AgA=&#045;TrAnCe@Jul 15 2005, 02:49 PM
ye lol,

last one rushed because i did it in class in school (rebel lol)
nearly got caught so i had to rush it lol. I&#39;ll keep workin on them tho. Me and my mate (he just started graff) are makin an A3 large piece so ill pake a picccy of that and post it lter.

l8tr

p.s il pst more of my piccys later when ive done some.




edit**Im only 12 so i think im doin ok**
lol oh my man for a twelve year old id say its pretty decent... man if you stick with it by the time your my age you&#39;ll be sick

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

fnx metro, i was inspired by a recent trip to paris, france.
All bridges walls, covered with the most amazing art.
Im stickin with it. I hope to return to paris one day, leave my mark.

lol

[skech]

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 15 2005, 11:05 AM
well i think its not a bad attempt at some thing more complicated but it really brings down you piece cause your letters are all over the place, try and build extensions on your letters instead of making letters out of extensions...but at least you kept your lines parallel except for the tail on the "S" and thats a not too shabby arrow, nice shape
i asume ur talking to me .. so thanx man .. input is alwayse good ill work on those things ... i dont no anyone else who rites so its hard ta get advice on things

[phr3ak]

something i came up with last night like 2:30 am fucking coffee.....not done, dont know how to color it yet
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/aspek3.jpg

[metro 519]

blown away as always phr3ak, that is tight

are you painting walls yet???

[phr3ak]

heh nope....im practicing sometimes at my backyard. i dont have supplies yet hopefully b4 summer ends i would paint in our park

[Rollout714]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Jul 15 2005, 03:34 PM
that last one that roller did was fucking awesome
one question, where the fuck did you start?
lol and i saw a m and a d..
Thanks man, but yea I did it a while ago so I don&#39;t remember where I started it. Pretty sure it was somewhere in the middle an just worked my way out from there. Look at the letters the other way, its a P an a W, but if u look upside down I can see how it looks like a M and a lower d. Man that fuckin thing took a long time to finish by the time I did I was sick of workin on it. I got another one I&#39;ll try to post but its w/ straight lines w/ camouflaged words inside.

[cess!]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0224.jpg
that one is nuts

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

I had the idea for this one late last night, watch do you think metro,

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/6353/07162005080543am0no.th.jpg (http://img323.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07162005080543am0no.jpg)

this one was this mornin
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/9964/07162005103512am5la.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07162005103512am5la.jpg)

I hope u like em...... :rolleyes:

[Shrink]

EW.

No. No. No. No. That shit is horrible. Round your letters, take out the fills and the 3D.

[duker]

definitely lose the 3d and work on your letter structure

[stef1]

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/2734/picture534ul.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture534ul.jpg)
its simple and toy but its new, tell me what u think *****s

[cess!]

trance pllease practice for about 10 more months before you post somethin up...graffiti takes time..that stuffs ameteur

[Rollout714]

Yo whatup all, I did these 2 over the last few days. The first I don&#39;t know how I feel bout it, and the second one is basic but can someone let me know a good method for shadowing behind letters? I think its aright but its not perfect. Lemme know what u guys like or dont like so I can improve.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0248.jpg


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a126/RollThru415/DSCF0250.jpg

Any feedback is welcome as long as its helpful...Thank U and Goodnite.

[cess!]

ui barely even read that thing you sed
but i guess there ok
just practice every day ok

[Rollout714]

Ok what about anything u like or dislike in particular? It would help alot more to get some real feedback, no offense.

[metro 519]

not bad rollout but, the first one i kind like you just need to make your letters a little more prominent... i like the design and colour and it deifenatly shows some creativity... but hole in the "A" is off center thats about it for that one,

the second one, im not so sure i like the letter structure the style you chose for the letters, looks wobbly, and lacking some flow to the letters... also when you do extensions on the letters try not to have it just stick out on a 90 degree angle, learn to make it look like the letter will flow like that naturally by bending the leg back in a back wards "C" shape then bend the extension upwards

this is just my opinion, if any one disagreees or you want me to explain further pm me

[Enemy]

hey all what do u think of this plz comment
http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/8080/uker3sf.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[JadedSketches]

you should change your name to Ikea and start talking like that swedish guy

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

new ahit from yours truly gelo tell ma what cha think kidz pls jadedsketches stop writng grafftit u suck horribly u are the wakest writer in this time lol jk kid hope u get better but dont hope for a mirricle

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5269/gelo54ql.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5787/gelo13ra.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4034/gelo47cj.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/2852/gelo65lr.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us) :ph34r:

[Rile1]

^^ dude they&#39;re all teh same concept switch it up a bit and use bubbles or sumthing and look at other stuff cuz really thats sorta wack lol..jsut keep practicing man

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

idk what to thing of this one, like or hate:

http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/1470/07182005053028pm4hl.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07182005053028pm4hl.jpg)

[Outaner]

Hey, just wondering what you guys think of my sketches? Let me know any criticism :)

http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/5360/dsc016682au.th.jpg (http://img328.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc016682au.jpg)


http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/9638/dsc016695vv.th.jpg (http://img328.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc016695vv.jpg)


http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/8766/dsc016705ki.th.jpg (http://img328.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc016705ki.jpg)


http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/9771/dsc016712yw.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc016712yw.jpg)

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

lol ur cool ging the right way but aner no to close to anal lol but write what u want kid i liek the first one tahts good just dont make u n connect to your e

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

Originally posted by Rile1@Jul 18 2005, 09:17 AM
^^ dude they&#39;re all teh same concept switch it up a bit and use bubbles or sumthing and look at other stuff cuz really thats sorta wack lol..jsut keep practicing man
jsut trying to get a style kid thats all were still toys kid im sure u got some stuff to show me not calling u out or ne thing nor am i mad :D and bubbles are gay straight letters are the way to go

[Outaner]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo@Jul 18 2005, 12:33 PM
lol ur cool ging the right way but aner no to close to anal lol but write what u want kid i liek the first one tahts good just dont make u n connect to your e
um..thanks :) ..i think?

whats anyone else think? I think i prefer the third one up there of mine ^^^ im not sure though. And yes, aner..anal, i know, and i dont care haha :blink:

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

an improvemnent of my last post:
http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/5413/07182005053028pm8nb.th.jpg (http://img284.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07182005053028pm8nb.jpg)

[Rollout714]

Yo Aner I like the first one, the purple looks sik wit the green. One thing tho I think it would look better if the green bubbles went over the outline instead of behind it...just my opinion.

[Outaner]

Originally posted by Rollout714@Jul 18 2005, 03:22 PM
Yo Aner I like the first one, the purple looks sik wit the green. One thing tho I think it would look better if the green bubbles went over the outline instead of behind it...just my opinion.
thanks, I am starting to think that as well, but oh well, ill try that next time. All bout the experimentin...

[JadedSketches]

you guys all prefer the first one? really? i like the second one the most,its fuckindg sick

[kronikbomber]

aner i think ur stuff is a little too simple but its good for simple stuff all ur lines seem to be straight and kayone if u see this i really need to know if u used to throw koz thats wut ur old sketches look like i do koz to and i need to no cuz if u did i dont want to use that name

[cess!]

yo trance that shits badddddd

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

got new pens and markers now so i should, should be posting a new piece soon....

[kronikbomber]

trance dont even bother u suck fat dick go get some skills and post something when ur good. aner u should put after the n ap it would be ancer like answer u no. im gonna post some shit when my scanner starts woking or when i finally get unlazy and figure out my damn digital camera.

[wreckone.]

^You know what? Let&#39;s keep things positive in here, we&#39;re all just learning. If all you&#39;re going to do is dis the kid, you should just shut up.
No offence. Just none of that.

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by kronikbomber@Jul 18 2005, 07:30 PM
aner i think ur stuff is a little too simple but its good for simple stuff all ur lines seem to be straight and kayone if u see this i really need to know if u used to throw koz thats wut ur old sketches look like i do koz to and i need to no cuz if u did i dont want to use that name
ya i used to write koz a while back... go ahead use it i dont use it any more :lol:
____________

*and trance.... go simpler.. look back to the last page or so and do the same thing i told someone else... copy the letters on the comic book

** EDIT... i thought this was toy story :lol:... uah check in the toy story topic for the comic thing

[kronikbomber]

im extremely sry wreck one ill be more posotive trance try going through tha montreol or however u spell it and look at some of there stuff mabye get some ideas of wut u could do dont copy there stuff just get some ideas flowin throught ur head and start simple like kayone said. one other thing keep ur lines straighter and color inside the lines also i noticed that u did that in alot of ur pieces just a suggestion

[Outaner]

Thanks for the reply&#39;s guys, good to see some positive critics (and some not so positve... <_< ). I dont really think its too simple, but at the moment i&#39;m just gonna stick to sketching and piecing these simples then hopefully my style will progress. :ph34r:

[crazyniggadrizzleisgelo]

Originally posted by wreckone.@Jul 19 2005, 02:15 PM
^You know what? Let&#39;s keep things positive in here, we&#39;re all just learning. If all you&#39;re going to do is dis the kid, you should just shut up.
No offence. Just none of that.
i agree thats shits not as good but u keep telling him it is and hes never gonna get better keep your lines straigth trance start of simple and not all that wavy shit kid jsut try straigth lette3rs

[runci]

heres teh first page of my new blackbook...

still not finished but not sure on what color the 3d should be..
any suggestions

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/6480/picture875nj.jpg

[Jugga]

I would put red where the light blue is at, and fade it out to pink as the blue gets darker...

I&#39;ve always loved how red looks with light blue...

[runci]

yeh mate i fink that would look dope.. but ive not got any pink..

maybe jus red or somethin..

[wreckone.]

How toy of me, but Kay/fable/Beanr, can i make a painted tots thread?

[HASE_NM]

Originally posted by runci@Jul 19 2005, 03:35 PM
heres teh first page of my new blackbook...

still not finished but not sure on what color the 3d should be..
any suggestions

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/6480/picture875nj.jpg
Nice... I like tha fading look. ;)

[SEROKID]

some new shithttp://img296.imageshack.us/img296/9879/backwardse8pa.jpg

[SEROKID]

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/9005/springfieldkillas0md.jpgany feedback?

[metro 519]

getting better sero

[runci]

http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/4965/picture891qk.jpg

my green died on me so its unfinished for now...
an the fade doesnt look that good in th epic...

any comments?????

[SEROKID]

that fade is sweet...i dont like that top color though,,but other than that is pretty tight

[skateparadise]

it&#39;s good/. i like it

[JadedSketches]

serokid i like that second one,i like the little bar thing in the S

[HASE_NM]

Originally posted by runci@Jul 20 2005, 10:32 AM
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/4965/picture891qk.jpg

my green died on me so its unfinished for now...
an the fade doesnt look that good in th epic...

any comments?????
Damn runci you should post that in blackbook section. BTW I like your fading. ;)

[Myner]

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3071/image0599uw.jpg

[metro 519]

cool throwie&#33;

everything flows real well right up till the "S"
maybe try and get rid of the gap

[Myner]

yea i noticed i clean it up

[HASE_NM]

Originally posted by Myner@Jul 21 2005, 03:02 PM
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3071/image0599uw.jpg
Yo, what is that in the left hand corner? Is it a character?

[longislandtagster]

its your mom





jk

[metro 519]

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7416/metrostuff0016xs.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ the throwie style i was gonna do soon

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/470/metrostuff0027pp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ a piece that i did... not as good as the other one though

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/4337/metrostuff0033dr.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ same tag style as the other one but i added some shadow but i screwed up on the bump again sorry guys&#33;

[HASE_NM]

Nice throwie...

Nice piece...

Nice tag...

;) ;) ;)










I am bored. :lol:

[metro 519]

lol and i thought i was the only one lonely enough to be on the computer at 2 am&#33;&#33;&#33;

you know... cept for the insomniacs and porn freaks :P

[HASE_NM]

LOL :lol: ^ It&#39;s only 12:00 here in New Mexico.

Yippee... I found some batteries for ma camera. I&#39;m gonna post some of my pics I drew in my blackbook.

[metro 519]

word ill see em t/m im goin to bed before i burn myself with this hot soup im eating, i always spill the soup :blink:

[HASE_NM]

I&#39;ll post them tomarrow.

[C H E N Z O]

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 22 2005, 12:56 AM
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7416/metrostuff0016xs.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ the throwie style i was gonna do soon

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/470/metrostuff0027pp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ a piece that i did... not as good as the other one though

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/4337/metrostuff0033dr.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ same tag style as the other one but i added some shadow but i screwed up on the bump again sorry guys&#33;
the dub(throwie as u yanks call it) is well gd a like the simple style it has an all the letters seem to flow. the piece is OK but a don like the wee cubes comin off the T they arent reely necessary, same with the arrow. the tag is gd but y bother drawin out a tag wen u can jist get a chunky marker an do the same thing in about 4 seconds ?

[metro 519]

thanks for the input chenzo ill keep it in mind&#33;&#33;&#33; and if youre wondering about the tag thats just the kinda style i like to draw, i just like they way they look over the regular peices and i think im better at it, so you gotta stick to what you know right???

[C H E N Z O]

aye man this is troo an if u like it u draw then keeep doin it.

[cess!]

wicked dope


and chenzo where are you from you talk weird

[Myner]

yeah metro that throw is clean as fuk, here is a lil thing i just got done doin
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2371/image0679aw.jpg

[Myner]

yeah blury as fuk

[kronikbomber]

myner u should have used different colors its really dark and i cant see the letter outline very well just a thought i like the throwies on there too those r tight

[HASE_NM]

Damn the batteries are dead. Anyways I drew a subway train with a throwie and a character on it.

[kronikbomber]

well that sux man. im real sry to hear about that mabye u should change them i dont mabye just a suggestion

[HASE_NM]

Naw don&#39;t have any more batteries. Plus I hate running to the fucking store. ;)