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MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:04 PM
eh mang, go paint that shit!

Good? Bad? lol Any color ideas. thats what im trying to get at lol.

sex without condoms
05-30-2007, 04:07 PM
bumping this cause i need to know if i should redo my battle piece


i HATE this new bombingscience.
BRING BACK TEH BLACK!!

round robin rough sketch i think
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010007-4.jpg

shit throw not finished
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010011-4.jpg


bumping this cause i need to know if i should redo my battle piece

dizzle_d
05-30-2007, 04:10 PM
I think it looks real good. no need to redo imo

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:13 PM
I love when people pass right over my shit, just because im a toy. lol

dizzle_d
05-30-2007, 04:16 PM
sorry. Muse- the P and E look pretty good but the A doesn't look like you used bars, maybe make the lines thinner too.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:19 PM
Thnx man, got any color ideas for the shading, bubbles and wat not?

spag
05-30-2007, 04:23 PM
muse-i think like a v shade would be nice if you get what i mean like instead of all the letters having / / make it one big \/ so it kinda pops out. dunno about the colors. white fill and blue and green bubbles inside? then like a yellow forcefield.
dunno. i think it'd look cool.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:40 PM
Can't do the v shade, its already in ink. :\ lol i like the colors, but wat do u mean by forcefield?

Dusk07
05-30-2007, 04:41 PM
Sticker im working on. Gotta go "buy" some prismas to finish it.

http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/15516/2002244922328031711_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002244922328031711)

spag
05-30-2007, 04:43 PM
the forcefield is like the outline of the outline.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:44 PM
DUSK- Nice shading in that, where can I get prismas at? lol

Socrates
05-30-2007, 04:44 PM
bumping this cause i need to know if i should redo my battle piece

methinks you should, you can do better
but the throw is hawt

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 04:46 PM
SPAG-Ok, thats wat I was thinking. lol And by blue and green bubbles, do u mean some blue and some green? Or blue and green? Im confused..

spag
05-30-2007, 04:58 PM
some blue and some green. Just go with what you think is cool. I just thought i'd give a general description of what i thought would be cool.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 05:02 PM
this look good?


http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6240/0530071758pj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Im kinda confused on wat I should doo for the shading I have around it, and for the "v"

Hester
05-30-2007, 05:07 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/HaistaireEurau3.jpg

euro much ?

AyteYourCookies
05-30-2007, 05:09 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture198.jpg crits?

Dusk07
05-30-2007, 05:10 PM
DUSK- Nice shading in that, where can I get prismas at? lol

craftsmart.

Dream Creation
05-30-2007, 05:13 PM
why everyone reppin euro theese days?

morndomnv
05-30-2007, 05:14 PM
ayte- i like the style but the a and e need to be more defined

Hester
05-30-2007, 05:14 PM
why everyone reppin euro theese days?

cuz im europeen?

spag
05-30-2007, 05:15 PM
this look good?


http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6240/0530071758pj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Im kinda confused on wat I should doo for the shading I have around it, and for the "v"

that's what you would do, but it's too late cuz you already inked the 3d.

spag
05-30-2007, 05:15 PM
hester. honestly. i don't like it at ALL. it's like everywhere and just looks messy and crazy.


nice sex. i like the first one a lot.
and nice use of bars dizzle.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1781/img0160vt3.jpg
simple. crits?
nd let me know if the drop is off and on which letter.

anymoree crits?

AnteUp
05-30-2007, 05:21 PM
i dont like the new bs...reminds me of 12oz ALOT! cluttered jus lik 12oz too...
ayte- urs lukks more like a throwie than anythin else...i personally dont like it
hester-damn i hate euro styles...
muse-it doesnt lukk like ur consentrating on the letters as much as u shud, do letters (no color) for as long as it takes
dusk- it lukks like its gud but its kinda blurry...

DIA
05-30-2007, 05:26 PM
Sorry for the shady ass coloring

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0890.jpg

dim
05-30-2007, 05:27 PM
cert not rele feeling the "r" in the throw

Dream Creation
05-30-2007, 05:28 PM
3 thing if ur a toy doin euro

get basics down first to many euro repper wanna bies (wich u are till u made it) No arrows
And wat i like to call funk. dont do so much of to star out

and why cnt i thnk atm of a decennt euro writer *head scratch*

00-made-00
05-30-2007, 05:37 PM
Aroe hes a good euro writer, and inxs.

near
05-30-2007, 05:48 PM
i cant believe dream creation just said that....

does anyone else just see links instead of flicks

nickstix
05-30-2007, 05:54 PM
i cant believe dream creation just said that....

does anyone else just see links instead of flicks
yea i dont see flicks either just links to them...i like old bombing science better.

spag
05-30-2007, 05:56 PM
mkay guys. if you can't see images go to user cp, edit options, then check the three boxes for like avatars, sigs, and images. then you can give me crits ;)

Dream Creation
05-30-2007, 06:01 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2121/cenr0.png (http://imageshack.us)

i did this on paint lol

but wat u think?

DIA
05-30-2007, 06:10 PM
checked those boxes


excuse shading coloring

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0890.jpg

-ShAmEE-
05-30-2007, 06:14 PM
what the fuck i dont like this bs change it back chnage it back.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sw1.jpg

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 06:35 PM
So if its to late to do the whole "v" thing, should I just do the shading black?

spag
05-30-2007, 06:37 PM
yeah man go for it.

~Saoten154~
05-30-2007, 06:46 PM
i hate the new site,ugh its so confusing

d_g
05-30-2007, 06:49 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch39.jpg

~Saoten154~
05-30-2007, 06:54 PM
that looks dope man i like the color

spag
05-30-2007, 06:58 PM
i Love that.

[biohazard]
05-30-2007, 07:01 PM
Before I post and what not does anyone know if someone goes by "AMER" on here or anything cuz then Ima have to change my name :/. thanks

d_g
05-30-2007, 07:06 PM
Should really have asked that in Toy Story, but anyways, who gives a shit if anyone on here uses that name. If they live in your town or a king, different story but this is only a forum, what goes on here is insignificant.

[biohazard]
05-30-2007, 07:10 PM
Should really have asked that in Toy Story, but anyways, who gives a shit if anyone on here uses that name. If they live in your town or a king, different story but this is only a forum, what goes on here is insignificant.

ya I just wanted didnt wanna start nun wit no one n shit you know? preciate the feedback tho bro

..TwoShameFull..
05-30-2007, 07:10 PM
erm theres sum dope hed that writes amber, all i know of, jus go for it anyway, unless they get up alot in your area n you manage to make a name for yaself it really doesnt matter...

shamee. that shit is DOPE. love the style, and the kid that posted on page before this, you got sumin goin der blud

http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00068ha8.jpg
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3597/dsc00067nu7.jpg
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5773/dsc00066sa1.jpg

sum random shit i did last nite.. fuckin highlighters are shit.. dats all i got and i biro pen its wank as fuck...



o and.. imo the site is GAY like dis.. it was ghetto before.. im hatin it now.. is there a diff skin u can put on?..

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 07:15 PM
Which u guys think is better, shadding in solid black, or shading in lines?

spag
05-30-2007, 07:27 PM
depends on what look you're going for, but solid black usually looks cleaner.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 07:32 PM
Anyone got ideas on a tag for 'eskape" or "skape" Im in a major brain fart, nothings coming to me. :\

spag
05-30-2007, 07:38 PM
you just posted that in toy tagz mang. check the exchange thread out.

-ShAmEE-
05-30-2007, 07:38 PM
what the fuck i dont like this bs change it back chnage it back.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sw1.jpg

BUMP BUMP BUMP.

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 07:39 PM
Yes, I did. lol No1 listens to shit n that thread. lol

Bazer
05-30-2007, 07:41 PM
shamee... its like your afraid to let your letters overlap...

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 07:42 PM
Hmm cant find a "tag exchange" lol
all I find is blackk book and throwie.

Bazer
05-30-2007, 07:45 PM
i dont think that ones in the toy section..... unless theres a toy one... heres the non toy one.. http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=1995&highlight=handstyle+exchange

[biohazard]
05-30-2007, 07:46 PM
ya I realize the lines arent very straight and that the little add on quotation things came out shitty sorry...and I stuck to the block letters cuz that seems to be the advice given to all toys so0 here
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/101_0269.jpg

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 07:47 PM
i dont think that ones in the toy section..... unless theres a toy one... heres the non toy one.. http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=1995&highlight=handstyle+exchange

Thnx bro. I couldn't find it lol

..TwoShameFull..
05-30-2007, 07:47 PM
erm theres sum dope hed that writes amber, all i know of, jus go for it anyway, unless they get up alot in your area n you manage to make a name for yaself it really doesnt matter...

shamee. that shit is DOPE. love the style, and the kid that posted on page before this, you got sumin goin der blud

http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00068ha8.jpg
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3597/dsc00067nu7.jpg
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5773/dsc00066sa1.jpg

sum random shit i did last nite.. fuckin highlighters are shit.. dats all i got and i biro pen its wank as fuck...



o and.. imo the site is GAY like dis.. it was ghetto before.. im hatin it now.. is there a diff skin u can put on?..

bump cause other ppl bump widout feedn

[biohazard]
05-30-2007, 07:51 PM
bump cause other ppl bump widout feedn

Bro ur style is fuckin tight...wish the pics were a lil bigger tho but still tight as fuh

morndomnv
05-30-2007, 08:05 PM
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/7/dscf1143ri4.jpg

crits?

need some crits
for a battle

DIA
05-30-2007, 08:05 PM
checked those boxes


excuse shading coloring

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b292/willsonmatt/IMG_0890.jpg

bump this shiat

DIA
05-30-2007, 08:06 PM
morn that shits nasty as fuck GET OUTTA THE TOY THREAD

just kidding love it

Bazer
05-30-2007, 08:09 PM
people stop bumpin your shit. geeeeeez.
cro is it? work on your 3d and letters a bit more. dont do the little extension at the end of your letters..

enigmatic
05-30-2007, 08:10 PM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/8005/1002202lb2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dunno... i just dont know....

sex without condoms
05-30-2007, 08:17 PM
dont do pen freestyles just yet.

MainEvent
05-30-2007, 08:17 PM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/8005/1002202lb2.jpg

MainEvent
05-30-2007, 08:18 PM
motherfucker, [img] code doesnt work. that shits gay

enigmatic
05-30-2007, 08:18 PM
mkay. but why?

MainEvent
05-30-2007, 08:20 PM
new forum ish. no clue why but no me gusta

morndomnv
05-30-2007, 08:22 PM
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6420/dscf1172iu6.jpg

updated fill, hook up some crits

ASB_ONE
05-30-2007, 08:22 PM
TO GET FLIKS TO SHOW UP

go to user cp, edit options, visible post elements, tick the boxes and save the changes.

MainEvent
05-30-2007, 08:24 PM
yeah my bad, just did that.

Sumoe
05-30-2007, 08:54 PM
need some crits
for a battle

your extensions are ugly.

~Saoten154~
05-30-2007, 09:01 PM
does anyone have an easy explantantion of how to do shadow ?

~Saoten154~
05-30-2007, 09:04 PM
morn thats sick, i like the fill and all the colors look good together. whats "D.O.M" stand for?

d_g
05-30-2007, 09:16 PM
does anyone have an easy explantantion of how to do shadow ?

Check the New 2 Graff thread.

Otherwise, Imagine that you copied your sketch, coloured the entire thing in black, put it behind the original sketch, and move it.

Cherck the new 2 graff thread, that's the easiest way. There used to be a tutorial in there.

morndomnv
05-30-2007, 09:18 PM
morn thats sick, i like the fill and all the colors look good together. whats "D.O.M" stand for?

demons of mayhem

bountyhunter113
05-30-2007, 09:36 PM
morn i dont like ur "o" n some of the extensions

uhhh
05-30-2007, 09:41 PM
wtf?!
i was on this girls mac at school today,
and thought "what the hell, must just be since im on a mac."
why the change?
and why is it so sucky?
annnnd does the [IMG] code from photobucket still work?

Samp1e
05-30-2007, 09:45 PM
just go to http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/profile.php?do=editoptions scroll down and check the box that says to allow images.

for those looking to fix inline images.

bountyhunter113
05-30-2007, 09:47 PM
lmfao,nvm there is a sticky in general discussion

REMOoneSF
05-30-2007, 10:55 PM
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6420/dscf1172iu6.jpg

updated fill, hook up some crits

careful where you put some of your extensions cause they can make one letter seem like another letter. the N's extention on the right make it look like it has an extra leg

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1292/lmaodg9.jpg
any crits? just another boring day at school with some pens

Rogue
05-30-2007, 11:15 PM
careful where you put some of your extensions cause they can make one letter seem like another letter. the N's extention on the right make it look like it has an extra leg

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1292/lmaodg9.jpg
any crits? just another boring day at school with some pens

That needs a lot of work. The style looks like you took a blockbuster and cut it up into pieces, added random bars, and random arrows. Work on simple blockbusters instead, don't add a bunch of stuff that shouldn't be there. Draw us a blockbuster, and make the lines completely straight, then do it again, and again, until you have it perfect. Then work on add on's. Keep sketching man.

Stylz
05-30-2007, 11:39 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1401.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1402.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1357.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1356.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1353.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1351.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1350.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1349.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1348.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1347.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1346.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g228/becerrcm/05-27-07_1343.jpg

suggestions can anyone give me any tips.. i know i tried all types of styles but i just like doing watever.. do yall think im good.. wat do i need to do?

Robbie P
05-30-2007, 11:49 PM
I don't really think you should be focusing on style at this point, but simple clean letters that can stand on their owm. After you nail that you could adding extensions and flaring them out to your liking.

Dusk07
05-31-2007, 12:49 AM
Sorry for small size..off my phone..digitalcam is dead
Quick,basic.
Colored with sharpies.
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/17360/2006294171387094490_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2006294171387094490)

Even though simple..lmk about flowness,letters ext.

crits crits crits =]

Mersiii
05-31-2007, 12:57 AM
Make your d connect, th right sid of the u shouldnt over lap that much or at all for that matter, same with your s on the bottom part, bring over your k a bit more anddont flare your letters and make them all the same size and width

Kayone707
05-31-2007, 01:03 AM
Stylz dont worry about coloring, first worry about letter structure.

Same goes for Dusk07.

you guys see how REMOoneSF's blue piece, all letters are proportional.

As stupid as this may seem to your pride. remember in kindergarden you had them notebooks that tought you how to write?
well use that same idea and make block/bubble letters.
http://learn-how-to-draw-now.com/Lettering-2.jpg
Make sure all the parts of the letters are all the same size for now.

CaMa
05-31-2007, 02:09 AM
I cant get any better for some reason....

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9190/imgp0365vv7.jpg

nero122
05-31-2007, 04:38 AM
what the fuks with the no pics this is gay n i cba to click the link n just keep practicin cama

ordinary
05-31-2007, 04:46 AM
http://i10.tinypic.com/5xiok77.jpg
Pic is backwards.
I know my 3d sucks alot, this is the first time i ever tried it.
I know my letters are easy too but I like it that way.
any suggestions besides?

nero122
05-31-2007, 05:14 AM
just go simple
n howcome when i was signed out did the pics come up n now im signed in there not here just the img code?

Jank
05-31-2007, 06:27 AM
u gotta go to the "User CP" and then edit options or something n check the box that says ''show images in threads'' or something like that. its in thtere somewhere n the pics will come up just like before

Dusk i like that. flows nice. but ye the S looks abit off. keep it the right width throughout n make the D join itself. bt i like it

trashhh
05-31-2007, 06:58 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41083.jpg

i duno i was bored

d_g
05-31-2007, 06:59 AM
Nice bro, has a real Euro train feel to it.

meetermaid
05-31-2007, 09:18 AM
trash the first one is hella sexy, in fact i like it better than most of your other stuff

Socrates
05-31-2007, 09:44 AM
lets see if i did this right

Wutchoogonnadoo?
05-31-2007, 10:04 AM
Ensr..i know i sound stupid etc. but i love your style..i just wished you would sketch more !!!!!!!!!!

BORG
05-31-2007, 10:04 AM
socrates- like the last one the most, fuckin beautiful

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 10:26 AM
i was just gettin some structure pactise messin about so heres a collection of ideas watch ya like???
((it doeant matter about letter sizes bein different))
(or that its scibbley)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8420/cealostae9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-ShAmEE-
05-31-2007, 11:16 AM
hahhaa...looks like coursework. the sketch designs bit. hahahaa...yeh keep workin on that style until ur happy wid it.

NEOZ
05-31-2007, 12:07 PM
Morn fresh style man

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/29052007917.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/31052007922.jpg

some new from me:)

Fluffy Bunnies
05-31-2007, 12:08 PM
Some stickers yet to be stuck....

For hester
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/HESTERONE.gif
Kil
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KIL.gif
Kil
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KILICTER.gif
KILL
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KILLEEERR.gif
KILS
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Kilz-1.gif

capo93
05-31-2007, 12:12 PM
last s looks a bit like the one in that hepos tutorial iunno prob just me

Fluffy Bunnies
05-31-2007, 12:17 PM
I liked that S so I wanted to see if I can do something like it
it's a vegas style inspired kinda thing cuz it's sofa king rad there.

nero122
05-31-2007, 12:27 PM
that 's' is quite common atlas and a bunch of other writers have a simmialar style of 's'

Skesh
05-31-2007, 12:36 PM
Hestr is a bite
NEARs R (or isnt he called near?)
CHEUs E

qway
05-31-2007, 12:56 PM
http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/member/pictures/1180634776IMG_1614.jpg
i dont know if i like this q or not

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 01:08 PM
if thats a q i think it lukks pretty baddass

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-31-2007, 02:01 PM
lets see if i did this right

bump.
always loved your style.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture064.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture035.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1965.jpg

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 02:15 PM
u just posted 2 of those in the toy tag section man

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 02:17 PM
http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/6899/0531071513fa7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits?

oblivios
05-31-2007, 02:18 PM
just changed tag...trying to work out a roller (the S isnt supposed to be bigger and i ran out of room for the R :lol:)
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q254/oblivios/snearroll.jpg

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 02:23 PM
I like it, now just add some color and u'd be set

nero122
05-31-2007, 02:33 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sainenew1.jpg

yeah so w/e constructive crits please

the flicks on the a looks wrong (to oblivious) but it looks kl

dizzle_d
05-31-2007, 02:43 PM
Sezer- those handies are nice. I'm feelin that Bawks piece
Muse- I'm still thinking that A doesn't look so good. thin out the main P bar too
Oblivious- make the s smaller ( oh wait you already pointed that out... shit)
Nero- looks good but I can't really see it

something I did in school today. constructive crits(on the letters not the coloring)...?
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3355/img1178pr6.jpg

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 02:55 PM
Im working on something new already lol But thnx bro
I'll post flick some time through...

nero122
05-31-2007, 02:58 PM
looks good but i dont like it not what i like but hey its what you like brotha

Kayone707
05-31-2007, 03:01 PM
im gonna give some of you Honest crits. take em or leave em.
NEOZ the first one looks bad. as in ugly. look how some parts of the S are fat and some are thin. same with every other letter. it just does not work. on the second one All the letters are fucked up. (the S looks like the only semi-ok one) but make your letters all the same size. dont worry about thick to thin style, or add-ons, wild style for now. forget all that stuff. now worry about getting your basic letters down... you dont Run before you can crawl.


qway it looks like a G, your trying too hard.
but read the advice i gave Neoz.

oblivios you got the right idea going on. all the letters are almost the same size, good job. you just need to work on making your lines less sketchy and more precise/sharp. also lose the gaps, just make the letters regular and Slightly bend them. try an get some flow

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 03:09 PM
None for me? lol Thats cool to.

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 03:23 PM
dream-jus keep on doin wat ur doin, nun of tha ones in red lukk gud
muse-stop doin color homes
tame-nice and simple gud job
nero-wtf does that say?

new S
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0009.jpg
new throw
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0006.jpg
constructive crits please

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 03:25 PM
Can I ask why?

Fluffy Bunnies
05-31-2007, 03:31 PM
bump on these
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Kilz-1.gif
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KILLEEERR.gif
critz? cuz I am a communist!

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 03:34 PM
i aint tryna be mean im jus sayin cuz thats wat i bin doin, workin on mah letters more, then work on color, use bars, there better than block letters :) jus keep practicin

Kayone707
05-31-2007, 03:35 PM
MUSEone , the A and the P are weird. make them look/flow like the E. notice how you got shit poking out of the A? and the P/E dont .

Fluffy Bunnies try and make all the letters look like the S. it looks good.

NERO i cant make any of that out.

dizzle_d you kinda got the point. just try an make them flow smoother, make easy bends/swoops



**********Dont bump your own work if its only on the last page.

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 03:36 PM
O yea man, I knew u weren't trying to be mean or annthing, I was just asking why I shouldn't use colors for now. lol

Im working on another piece right now, I'll post pic when im done, for crits.

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 03:36 PM
DONT BUMP IF ITS ON THE LAST PAGE... really. its only a page away.

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 03:38 PM
Haha those are nice man, I like the throw. I don't really have one yet. lol

Kayone707
05-31-2007, 03:51 PM
AnteUp, i suck at throws. i cant really give advice. but finish a piece with that S then post it up

NEOZ
05-31-2007, 04:01 PM
Kayone thnx for critics will give it a try

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 04:08 PM
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/5185/0531071705bn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

This is the piece I was talking about earlier...

Crits?

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 04:13 PM
hey muse did u use the mr.wiggles way of makin a peice? tape two pencils together and do ur tag?

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 04:15 PM
Never heard of it, why?

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 04:25 PM
well it was in the new to graff thread, i couldnt find it tho, its not a bad thing its jus a way to make a peice, i think urs lukk purty gud... jus dont fuck up wit tha colors :D

dizzle_d
05-31-2007, 04:25 PM
because it looks a lot like you used that technique...http://www.mrwiggles.biz/id170.htm

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 04:30 PM
Nope, lol Ive never heard of it or seen it until ^^^

IDK wat colors im gonna do either.

Any ideas?

dim
05-31-2007, 04:52 PM
muse i think i looks to much like a tag

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 05:07 PM
Hmm... so im guessing everyone thinks it sucks? lol

I thought it'd be pretty dope when added color.

MainEvent
05-31-2007, 05:08 PM
its definately similair

for mainevent
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/149/c/c/look_at_dem_faces_by_bigel.jpg
thanks homie, shits trippy.

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 05:09 PM
AND, I don't have a good tag yet for "skape" so no, i didnt use my tag for it lol

dizzle_d
05-31-2007, 05:12 PM
Hmm... so im guessing everyone thinks it sucks? lol

I thought it'd be pretty dope when added color.

I don't think it sucks, I think you just need to make it look less taggish and fix it up a bit.

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 05:14 PM
its in pen. lol

TAGurIT
05-31-2007, 05:52 PM
epod's better than me

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 05:55 PM
uh..cool? lol

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 06:02 PM
muse nice but take each letter apart and get a good flow
NO ONE can tell u it looks too close to tag NO ONE considering nearly every up writer will tell u the piece is made from the tag so u gutta have ur tag down to piece!
u sed u dnt have a tag for ur name? GET ONE!

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 06:08 PM
Only reason I don;t have one yet is because im working w/ three diff. ones "eskape" "skape" and eske" I like "eske" the ebst but nothing coming to me for any of them. lol

EsKoNeR!!
05-31-2007, 06:10 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/SlimeROundRobin.jpg
blahhhhhhh

Fluffy Bunnies
05-31-2007, 06:12 PM
You gotta be kidding me, I seen much better from you!

Make ur fills look like fruit salad lol!!

Drakula
05-31-2007, 06:24 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/IMG_0401.jpg

I've posted this here because I wanted to know if it's good before I fill it.Does anything need improving etc...Also has anybody got any good ideas for a color scheme?I find it hard to think of good ones and I don't know if they'll turn out good enough afterwards.

TESTER
05-31-2007, 06:28 PM
drak u would lower the k but i like it.. and just find a color scheme u like on a sick piece and use that no one will care or should care

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 06:31 PM
i knows its sloppy but thats cos i only take care wen it comes to inkin it so can u crit this:::

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/5584/1046qt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


ses i like that one its cos of the colors i normally hate brite fills hmm

Drakula
05-31-2007, 06:38 PM
It's gonna be kinda hard for me to do that now cuz I've gone over the lines in hard pencil,Doh.But does it matter that much?And I'm looking around at the moment for some decent fills.

Question:Is it okay for toys to give others advice?Or does that make you more toy?I wanna comment on peoples pieces but I don't want people saying I don't know nothing about graff and shit.

d-cept
05-31-2007, 06:41 PM
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q84/el_giova/dcept3-1.jpg
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q84/el_giova/dceptfrog.jpg
im new at this preciat crits n advice

TricksForKids
05-31-2007, 06:43 PM
esk, i thoroughly dislike your S, but everything else is money, even that tiny ass M, lol, so hot, just aint a fan of the S, meh

drakula, quit using a ruler ( and dont try to tell me youre not ), and i dont say this for the reason of "its cheating", cuz it aint, but youll just get more flow with your letters if you dont use one, and lose all those random doo-dads and add ons

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 06:44 PM
post wat u think but state its an opinion not a fact

TricksForKids
05-31-2007, 06:47 PM
oh, my bas for not critting you dream, youre other shit was cleaner and simpler, the middle of the E looks sloppy, and, and that top part is way too fat and clunky, shorten the bottom bar of your C as well, and try working with more than 2 letters when pieceing, 2's just kinda awkward

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 06:59 PM
yeh i know its sloppy i want scan this better one in but will wak my parents :P

i love ur crits tricks thnx

im just happy that wat u sed ide noticed most my self
with the 2 letters theres legal issues with my old name laces i had to drop and was never to keen on the S n my L looked like Z
i was thinkin cew ut i think its too much like crew i dunno lol

Drakula
05-31-2007, 07:01 PM
I only used a ruler after I had done the first outline which was completely freestyle.I don't want my lines to come out bent if I want a clean look though so thats why I used a ruler after the first outline.I think the doodads are alright as long as you use them in moderation,my piece was a bit plain before I had added them on so I wanted to put a little more on it.

And DCEPT,The CEP are looking good,but the D and T don't really fit in with the rest of the piece.The D's hole is too large and the bit that curled round should have been at a constant size all the way through.The same with the T as well,also don't connect your letters yet.Connecting letters are always hard to master.The frog on the second piece looks good and the letters are way better,I like the perspective on the tongue aswell that came out clean.

~Saoten154~
05-31-2007, 07:02 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2575/sankentuno154ihd8.th.jpg (http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentuno154ihd8.jpg)

~Saoten154~
05-31-2007, 07:02 PM
just tryin a new style...crtis?

Drakula
05-31-2007, 07:04 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2575/sankentuno154ihd8.th.jpg (http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentuno154ihd8.jpg)

Err the image came out really small.

Dream Creation
05-31-2007, 07:10 PM
clock the image to enlarge N saoten get structure down first

Drakula
05-31-2007, 07:20 PM
clock the image to enlarge N saoten get structure down first

Still doesn't work for me.Stupid MAC.

oblivios
05-31-2007, 07:22 PM
why do my posts get deleted from hear?? am i to good or some thing lol
new tag (kaser) just workin on the KASE for now...
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q254/oblivios/KASE.jpg

~Saoten154~
05-31-2007, 07:22 PM
clock the image to enlarge N saoten get structure down first

what do you mean by the structure?

mind.or.matter
05-31-2007, 07:25 PM
I have a mac, what problems you havin??

And a couple things about your sketch, try some smoother lines, curve up some of the awkward edges, also with your letter structure maybe try to keep the thickness of the letters closer to the same size, i like the extensions on each side though.....

havnt been sketching or coming on a lot lately.....
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/DSCF2709.jpg

d-cept
05-31-2007, 07:26 PM
And DCEPT,The CEP are looking good,but the D and T don't really fit in with the rest of the piece.The D's hole is too large and the bit that curled round should have been at a constant size all the way through.The same with the T as well,also don't connect your letters yet.Connecting letters are always hard to master.The frog on the second piece looks good and the letters are way better,I like the perspective on the tongue aswell that came out clean.

yeah ur right ill work on that thx

Drakula
05-31-2007, 07:32 PM
why do my posts get deleted from hear?? am i to good or some thing lol
new tag (kaser) just workin on the KASE for now...
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q254/oblivios/KASE.jpg

First lose those arrows.Second make the letters one piece.They are all made of seperate bits right now for example the A.It's looking like a H because they're not connected.The K also looks like a lower case h because the top part of the K loops around and out through the other side,it isn't connected to the main block of the K.The S is okay but leave out the pointy bit near the top.The E is also looking alright but make the middle part stick out more cuz it's looking like an L at the moment.

Drakula
05-31-2007, 07:37 PM
I have a mac, what problems you havin??

And a couple things about your sketch, try some smoother lines, curve up some of the awkward edges, also with your letter structure maybe try to keep the thickness of the letters closer to the same size, i like the extensions on each side though.....

havnt been sketching or coming on a lot lately.....
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/DSCF2709.jpg

Well all I see is the tiny image and no hand appears when I hover over it,theres no more links.I'm sure it's not my Mac i was just kidding around because all my friends think macs are shite so "dumb mac" has a become a little phrase that we use when something on Windows works fine but on Mac it doesn't.I like macs alot more though.

glyce
05-31-2007, 07:55 PM
any crits?

dizzle_d
05-31-2007, 07:56 PM
Oblivious- definetly get rid of all those arrows, and don't make the K loop like that, but if you have to make it more defined. Right now your K and A can be a little hard to decipher if you don't know what they are...

Mind or Matter- The E is probably the best letter you have on that sketch, the N is alright, but then the V and (I can't tell what letter that is, an I maybe?) Just don't go with the other letters. Try and fix those two letters up.

Just bumping this because I didn't get all that many crits...
(Mind the colors...)
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3355/img1178pr6.jpg
constructive crits...?

~Saoten154~
05-31-2007, 08:09 PM
dizzle d your shits allways so dope simple letters and crazy fills, it what your good at haha... i like it alot

dizzle_d
05-31-2007, 08:11 PM
thanks :D
I try...

popshots
05-31-2007, 08:15 PM
glyce: dont over;ap shadow with your lettes

bouncingsoul
05-31-2007, 08:16 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0778.jpg

Drakula
05-31-2007, 08:17 PM
^Whoops,that arrow is actually meant for dizzle_d

I think you should slim the T down a bit,it's looking too fat at the moment and try and make the extensions that come out of the T longer but keep the arrow like bits at the end.For the A make the bottom "legs" stick outward cuz' it's looking a bit squished if you know what I mean.Add something to the bottom of the right leg of the R and make the bit with the hole less rounded and wobbly,make it straighter instead
(Sorry I can't be more specific,graff is hard to explain properly on the internet).
Finally for the E,make the ends go outwards more then at the end make extensions that go inwards and lose the bit at the top of the E.The fill is good but just make the letters less squished and fat.

popshots
05-31-2007, 08:18 PM
boucinsouls: thats a ill style...... you should start doin sum canvas work if u dont already

~Saoten154~
05-31-2007, 08:25 PM
bouncinsoul it looks dope...deffintly do some canvases

bountyhunter113
05-31-2007, 08:44 PM
You gotta be kidding me, I seen much better from you!

Make ur fills look like fruit salad lol!!
lmfao,ya reminds me of lego blocks..........do different fills dude

o ya n ppl tellin bouncin to do canvas,u need to kno much more besides knowin how to sketch graff b4 u start on canvases

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 08:50 PM
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/912/0531071705ye0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits? Before I start adding color....

Fube
05-31-2007, 08:50 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0778.jpg

that "n" is illllllll.

Fube
05-31-2007, 08:51 PM
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/912/0531071705ye0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits? Before I start adding color....

looks like a handstyle to me. dont know much of a fill to do with it.

ESKE one
05-31-2007, 08:56 PM
considaring(sp) a name change

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs052.jpg
crits

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 08:57 PM
...... eske..... come the fuck on.... lol

thats my tag. lol

ESKE one
05-31-2007, 08:59 PM
wow thats gay o'well i heard it on a car commercial and it just snap in my head like it was meant to be lol
crits anyway

MUSEone
05-31-2007, 09:01 PM
Haha wow thatts kinda weird. *scratches head*

O well. lol

"E" looks a little scketchy but thats about it. lol

Do u tag w/ eske?

Aska.
05-31-2007, 09:13 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/SlimeROundRobin.jpg
blahhhhhhh

^Not him^

to eske.. your both out of luck.

ESKE one
05-31-2007, 09:16 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs052.jpg
bump just so it doesnt get over looked

muse i didnt even kno what you wrote until you told me
i swear i didnt bite off you lol
idk i like the way the name flow
get over it lol(no beef)

glass
05-31-2007, 09:19 PM
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q84/el_giova/dcept3-1.jpg
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q84/el_giova/dceptfrog.jpg
im new at this preciat crits n advice

bumping this cause i love the second one down, very clean dude keep it up

Fube
05-31-2007, 09:24 PM
considaring(sp) a name change

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs052.jpg
crits

i understand your learning. but nice, sharp, clean lines would help. get rid of the wobble man.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-31-2007, 09:55 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0778.jpg

bump for knews.

Samp1e
05-31-2007, 10:20 PM
bouncing, oh so hot.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7416/photo00013sc4.jpg

sacwacko
05-31-2007, 10:25 PM
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled1-3.jpg
i think im changin dest to debt....wut u think and crits?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-31-2007, 10:28 PM
bouncing, oh so hot.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7416/photo00013sc4.jpg

look like nesk style.

bouncingsoul
05-31-2007, 10:29 PM
lmfao,ya reminds me of lego blocks..........do different fills dude

o ya n ppl tellin bouncin to do canvas,u need to kno much more besides knowin how to sketch graff b4 u start on canvases

Like...? Enlighten me

AnteUp
05-31-2007, 10:45 PM
knews-thats tight bro
esk-thas tight
samp-urs and guests style are very similar

whahappen?
05-31-2007, 11:21 PM
fuck toy tagz no one ever looks in there
attempts at a philly style sorry..
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/9261/picture108xx7.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8955/picture109le5.jpg
i have better versions of both but w/e
same its good but the m is just bad doesnt really flow at all

BIGel
06-01-2007, 01:13 AM
dcept dont make the connections on your letters so big you can read em.

reall muthafuckin g's
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/151/1/e/real_muthafuckin_gees_by_bigel.jpg

d_g
06-01-2007, 01:26 AM
Shit there's a lot of ink on those pages.

Nice shit.

TESTER
06-01-2007, 01:43 AM
damit bigel know i have to go change my boxers

d-cept
06-01-2007, 02:39 AM
bigel-dat shit is sick man

but didnt understan ur crit man

BIGel
06-01-2007, 02:44 AM
fresh page

^i mean the connections between your letters, the parts where they come together, are huge and not placed well. they take away from the actual letters, tone em down.
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/151/1/e/real_muthafuckin_gees_by_bigel.jpg

ordinary
06-01-2007, 03:10 AM
http://i8.tinypic.com/505xvzc.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/4qn808y.jpg
http://i14.tinypic.com/4peg3l2.jpg

Really new at this
any input would be cool, thanks.

nero122
06-01-2007, 03:10 AM
bigel u must spend like an hour just doin your background thats some nice shit

d_g
06-01-2007, 03:29 AM
Ord, just a heads up. Around here we generally have a 'give no crits, get no crits' policy. Even if the people who posted before you are better than you, you should still give them some constructive crits. But since you're new (and I'm reasonably drunk) I'll let it slide.

The first one has the most potential, the thing you'll be hearing for a while here is 'go simple'. That means no addons, no coloring, no shit that makes graffiti what it is. You'll need to learn the structure of the letter first and know them inside out before you start adding shit on. Open up word, type out your name, or even the whole alphabet in a font like impact. Anything simple as shit like that. Trace the letters, Trace them again and again and again. Then start doing them freehand. ANd do them freehand until you can do them with you eyes shut.

Do this for a month, or two, or three. Then you can consider bending them, twisting them, and joining them. Trust me, a lot off us here would probably agree that they've learned a lot more from doing simples in a month than getting ahead of themselves for a year.

The second one's 'o' is cute. But it doesn't flow with the rest of your letters. THat's another thing you'll have to learn, flow. I think of flow as two things. One being how the letters literraly flow together, like think of normal handwriting where all the letters join up and flow together, opposed to letters like the ones I'm typing in now, that stand solitary next to each other and don't interact. It doesn't neccessarily mean your letters haveto join in a 'script-like' way, but as you start messing around with letters you'll see what I mean.

The last one is kinda funny, but has no letter structure at all. Unless I knew what you wrote I would have no idea what it said, I would just assume it's three smily faces sitting together.

Structure is a massive thing too and helps when and where to put addons/. Think of an 'N' if you were to put an addon that was slightly too long on the right side of it, it would quickly become an 'M'. See what I'm saying?

Anyways, stay with it bro, you're gonna hate 99% of the shit you draw up, and the 1% you do like, everyone else is going to hate. But that's the game.

Sc0PE-834-TAT
06-01-2007, 05:34 AM
NE CRITZ

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g206/cubs2315/hititup1002.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-01-2007, 05:48 AM
1
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/e-2.jpg
2
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/E-1-1.jpg

which one?
and how to improve.

Dream Creation
06-01-2007, 06:46 AM
where bothe tilted to much

Synaesthesia
06-01-2007, 06:47 AM
I dunno, personally I like both, but I think the second one flows better.

ESKE one
06-01-2007, 07:11 AM
considaring(sp) a name change

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs052.jpg
crits

scope that p is a wannabe cope p see how the bottom is tilted
stop bitting

shamee I like both of them but I like the bottom one more

Saeo1
06-01-2007, 08:22 AM
Nice Shit Big El, Clean as hell.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00174.jpg

Throw up I do.

Will Paint it soon as I seem to find a day I can get paint and manage to get the time to go out.

spag
06-01-2007, 12:04 PM
love that shit saeo.
eske, dun know about that L.

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/373/img0169gw5.jpg
new R, ignore the t - it's fucked on that one.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-01-2007, 12:44 PM
^^
you two guys, you both suck! like so bad it's sad.
What I would do is like just practice on tags then throw ups then pieces... in that order.
since you both did throw ups with no experience in ever doing a throw, I would never consider painting any of it til someone says it's good to aint.


Rawr!!!
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08570.jpg

sketch3
06-01-2007, 12:47 PM
new style looks good on the k but not feelin the l

Drakula
06-01-2007, 12:53 PM
Yeah make the dot on the I bigger and maybe lose the flare at the end of the L and just and another L so it says KiLL instead of KiL.

Shamee,I like your style,very robotic.I don't know what letter the first one is though.A Z maybe?Once you outline them they will look great.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-01-2007, 01:47 PM
Rawr!

KIL
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08571.jpg

Socrates
06-01-2007, 02:21 PM
wiggidy wiggidy wack

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-01-2007, 02:38 PM
k..
Fluff.. i like the 1st style..
not the 2nd..
but the first K looks like a L as Sketch stated..

so im putting away the pretty colours..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/hgfhf.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gfdbgfdghdfgh.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111gf.jpg

Apple pie
06-01-2007, 02:48 PM
what it read? amkah?? that stuffs pretty clean, im not feelin it too much tho, its so repetitive

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-01-2007, 02:52 PM
writers block for yah

peace

what_one
06-01-2007, 03:21 PM
Rawr!

KIL
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08571.jpg



bunnies, im not diggin the I with the small dot make it bigger or the thing on the end of the k loose it and make all your letters the same size, dont do stickers yet just paper. :cool:

Casa45
06-01-2007, 03:39 PM
I like the letters in the 1st one. but other than that they aren't anything special...



k..
Fluff.. i like the 1st style..
not the 2nd..
but the first K looks like a L as Sketch stated..

so im putting away the pretty colours..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/hgfhf.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gfdbgfdghdfgh.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111gf.jpg

10 Ton
06-01-2007, 03:48 PM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P7280295.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P7280299.jpg
^^^fucked up the "E" pretty bad but w/e
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/APSE.jpg

eh... i shoudl concentrate more on making really good book entries instead of rushing through stuff :/

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 03:52 PM
k..
Fluff.. i like the 1st style..
not the 2nd..
but the first K looks like a L as Sketch stated..

so im putting away the pretty colours..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/hgfhf.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gfdbgfdghdfgh.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111gf.jpg
once again amazing, is everyone in your crew this good, and how come they dont post?

Casa45
06-01-2007, 03:56 PM
Because its a fake crew... and you shouldnt have a crew if you dont get up. its fucking stupid...



once again amazing, is everyone in your crew this good, and how come they dont post?

Bazer
06-01-2007, 04:09 PM
shut the fuck up bitch. im in one of those crews.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-01-2007, 04:14 PM
Because its a fake crew... and you shouldnt have a crew if you dont get up. its fucking stupid...


guh..damn..i fort bitch talking to Bawk was enuff..
why you gota keep talking soo much shit..

and a matter of fact
i do get up ..
i peice like evry week idiot..
and bomb when i can..
coz if you check the Toy Tagz..Painted threads..you would clearly see...
but you didnt bother to even look to see if i actually got up..
you just jumped on your high horse beefing AS PER USUAL ..
im done with you..

peace

Rogue
06-01-2007, 04:18 PM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P7280295.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P7280299.jpg
^^^fucked up the "E" pretty bad but w/e
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/APSE.jpg

eh... i shoudl concentrate more on making really good book entries instead of rushing through stuff :/

Don't worry about making big crazy pieces. Work on simples more, you need to learn a lot more. Keep sketching, and don't worry about harder stuff, stick with block busters or other simples.

sacwacko
06-01-2007, 04:49 PM
doublepost

sacwacko
06-01-2007, 04:50 PM
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled1-3.jpg
i think im changin dest to debt....wut u think and crits?
apse....do simples.

amkah-thats so sick.i luv

addicted
06-01-2007, 04:53 PM
sacwacko- Nice simple but Im not feeling the B it looks like a deformed 8.

sacwacko
06-01-2007, 04:56 PM
yea....on the b....the little slit on the left is supposed to be a chip but it ended up lookin weird.
if it wusnt there then wut?

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 05:02 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/2961/sankentun054vv3.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentun054vv3.jpg)


karak i added to it, crits ?

addicted
06-01-2007, 05:03 PM
sacwacko- If the little slit thing wasnt there, then it would look a bit better. Shorten the slit on the right so its a bit smaller.

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 05:04 PM
i agree with addicted, the slit makes it look like an 8 and if you just get rid of it, it looks fine

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 05:16 PM
case 45 i havent even seen a pece of yors up here, so personally if i was you i wouldnt be tlakin shit

bojangles
06-01-2007, 05:19 PM
work on sacwacko's handstyle is needed. . .lose the arrow coming from nowhere and lose the 'x' on the bottom of the exclamation mark. keep the letters the same size

capitol
06-01-2007, 05:24 PM
Just messing with some random ass styles.
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4564/graf245dv0.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4941/graf246wo5.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8725/graf247pz2.jpg
sacwacko:As everyone has said the B need sosme fickin, besides that i think its pretty ill.
10ton:i like first one, the rest are wack thou.

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 05:27 PM
crits on my karak???

bojangles
06-01-2007, 05:31 PM
saoten154, i like the blue and white colour scheme on the snail character it works well..not much more to say, could u get a bigger pic?

Aces One
06-01-2007, 05:32 PM
Capitol...its all just a big blob...its nothing, just do simples

10 ton...they're alll wack except the first one. its still not too great but its better then your others. just work on simples, making letters with bars and maybe one or two curves. (depending which letters) dont worry about anything else now except your letter structure.

heres one i did a couple days ago...its crap. my A doesnt fit and its a little scrunched. my problem is my a's. any pointers or tips?
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/2034/scanbt9.jpg
Man this layout is crap...i want the old style back....:(

bojangles
06-01-2007, 05:35 PM
yeah i know what u mean..the A just needs little improvement so it matches the other letters..just try and curl it

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 05:57 PM
saoten154, i like the blue and white colour scheme on the snail character it works well..not much more to say, could u get a bigger pic?
yah and ill try right now, and thanks

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 06:01 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3263/snailgi8.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=snailgi8.jpg)
thats the biggest picture i could get and it goes onto a sticker so it looks kinda sloopy ...crits?

-ShAmEE-
06-01-2007, 06:08 PM
=~Saoten154~;774858]once again amazing, is everyone in your crew this good, and how come they dont post?

bump for reppin tng and moe.

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 06:29 PM
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/5127/saontas1.th.jpg (http://img399.imageshack.us/my.php?image=saontas1.jpg)
old pece finished...crits?,

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 06:30 PM
drips kinda ruined it, they werent suppoesd to look like that but the marker i uesd was a felt tip so it moved around alot, sry

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-01-2007, 07:02 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111gf.jpg
im feeling this even if we don't get along, but please work on your handstyle.

~Saoten154~
06-01-2007, 07:06 PM
yah that pece is so dope

10 Ton
06-01-2007, 07:10 PM
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/5127/saontas1.th.jpg (http://img399.imageshack.us/my.php?image=saontas1.jpg)
old pece finished...crits?,

the actual characters dont look to bad although the spacing on the second one is a little off which makes it look out of place. But the background really kills it.


simple i did in about 10 minutes with plans to do it in spray later, which i think would look really tight even if the drawing isnt anything special at all.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P7280300.jpg

BIGel
06-01-2007, 07:15 PM
the sticker threads gont get no love soheres some shit.

thats looking good ras, i like the idea, the colors pop too.

have a good weekend kids!
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256757419.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256757416.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256757401.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256757410.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256757176.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256771746.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256771743.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/256772401.jpg

RepUrSet
06-01-2007, 07:29 PM
lol that no life one is funny

n the fuck you character is sick

heres my first sketch with this name in a brand new blackbook...try to ignore the big black blob..its from the cam..dropped it to many times i think:(


http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6575/picture281sy5.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture281sy5.jpg)