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Bomber444
06-04-2007, 08:26 AM
http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/7992/casaslapswl4.jpghttp://img53.imageshack.us/img53/7859/elmomx6.jpghttp://img53.imageshack.us/img53/7159/56dj8.jpgROFL no.. some old shit

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/4126/charblobjy3.jpg

shits fuckin hot casa. Best stickers I've seen in a while. Keep it going lets see some new ones.

amk
06-04-2007, 08:56 AM
i ruin everything when i ink it. but ill keep trying!


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03227.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03229.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03230.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03231.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03232.jpg

bump...keep it up..yah improving..

also..
Casa..

Cezr anyone ?..

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 09:26 AM
me me me!!

Seti
06-04-2007, 09:51 AM
cheers, it sez sane

emokid
06-04-2007, 09:58 AM
straight to ink, i liked the shape so im workin from it...crits welcome??
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image088-1.jpg


sorry, had to bump this, i can sort of see the letters but oh my god it looks so fucking good

Aces One
06-04-2007, 10:00 AM
i dont like the way the fill looks. if he used solid colours and darker shades in the right spot it would look so much cooler. but it looks kool as it is too. and theres a writer named sane. he was pretty popular. now he's dead. R.I.P.

Casa45
06-04-2007, 10:17 AM
Just something quick for an idea i had.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/752/dsc03623zz9.jpg

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 11:01 AM
the bottom where the k kicks out lukks like the 3-ds off, maybe its jus me... but it still lukk gud

ZerO.
06-04-2007, 11:04 AM
-Casa I like the stickers!
-Caer Nice progression flicks


http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/1456/2205072133ul0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Something VERY simple, lol.
Crits anyone?

Aces One
06-04-2007, 11:09 AM
nice simple...but i dont really like the R. nice Z though

bojangles
06-04-2007, 11:13 AM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/manesketch2.jpg

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/manesketch.jpg

some sketches i did 2 week ago, nuthin special
bump for crits

Aces One
06-04-2007, 11:21 AM
first ones nice except your M needs to be bigger on the left.
and im really not feelin the M in that throw. doesnt fit the A. and a the A seems to have a bit to much goin on tih it.

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:23 AM
ay mane...u used that Mr Wiggles thing about taping to pencils together and doing a tag to make a piece on the first one didnt u

bojangles
06-04-2007, 11:27 AM
cheers aces, im unsure on the MA throw sketch , i just started writin it recently ..hahah yeah i read that mr wiggles thing a while ago and just thought of puttin it to the test

tonentink
06-04-2007, 11:31 AM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1885/helperbx8.jpg

Aces One
06-04-2007, 11:32 AM
tone - like the fill. change the H
mane - i never thought of that...thats a really good idea.
yea. i always have trouble with my A's anyways. im fine with my other letters. just the A always fucks me up.
This is kinda off topic but i put a bunch of my posters in the stickers, stencils posters etc. thread and nobody ever posts there...i dunno why, but can you guys check em out and gimme some crits?

Fluffy Bunnies
06-04-2007, 11:37 AM
I don't have much to say to anyone on this page but like zomg that green 3d thing is cookin'... damn niga damn

Bump on this http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KILLEEERR.gif

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:39 AM
sorry, had to bump this, i can sort of see the letters but oh my god it looks so fucking good
it sez sane

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:40 AM
you write sane???

Fluffy Bunnies
06-04-2007, 11:41 AM
Damn niga damnI thought he was cool... but I guess not.

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:42 AM
i wrote insane, but everytime i wrote it it always felt wierd addin the in, neva flowed right, so ive desided to write sane yeh..

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:43 AM
wow....

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:43 AM
there once was a guy who wrote Sane, very famous.

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:44 AM
yep famously dead

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:46 AM
even worse! its a dead man's name

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:46 AM
so then why u writin his name if u know?

Casa45
06-04-2007, 11:48 AM
what do you write baze?

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:49 AM
why not... im from the otherside of the world and my styles totaly different, so thers no way anyone'd get us mixed up

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:49 AM
but its disrespectful.

i write "eat pussy!!". why?

Fluffy Bunnies
06-04-2007, 11:49 AM
Smith will go to ur house and punch you in the face for what you have done... or even worse.

Casa45
06-04-2007, 11:51 AM
just havent seen any of your stuff.

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:52 AM
nah, disprespectfull would be stealing his style or handstyle

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:52 AM
ah, point.

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:53 AM
thats cuz i post work here about once a month. if you wanna see SOME stuff go to my deviant art... i post crap though. all my new stuff it gettin better.... i have a feeleng everone on this page is gonna get banned..

post work son.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/vxr.png

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:54 AM
i guess so, but i think that only goes for toy's usin writers names, ive bin writin for time now, so i think i deserve to use any name i want..

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:56 AM
why would we get banned baze

Seti
06-04-2007, 11:57 AM
lol...gettin paranoid, post some sketches...

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:57 AM
cuz theres a whole page with no flix. and seti.. just know you deserve whats comin to ya..

post more work son. you aint hip hop.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0857.jpg

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 11:59 AM
i guess i gotta whip up 5 sketches to make up for it...:)

amk
06-04-2007, 11:59 AM
damn..
Aces..chill with the crits...there always negative...remember...you aint so good yourself..

Fluuf has a hairy muff....feeelawn it..

Ante yeaw waddap hoe from another broh !

Aces One
06-04-2007, 11:59 AM
^they're not that negative...there was only two posts. and i know my stuffs not that great, i have a ways to go myself^
sane was already an artist man. http://www.graffiti.org/sane1/index.html hes dead now...
just add a three. (Sane3) [theres already a sane2]

Seti
06-04-2007, 12:03 PM
well im still taggin insane, i just write sane in my pieces so it doesnt realy matta

Fluffy Bunnies
06-04-2007, 12:07 PM
ahahahahahah.... uhhhhh... I am engaging in the posting of ze flix

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KILLEEERR.gif
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08234.jpg
For Ras

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08096.jpg
gettin it up at the arcade at some DDR... Top score on the machine I'd like to see any of you beat that!
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/IMG_0201.jpg

Bazer
06-04-2007, 12:09 PM
me to.. and i edit my other posts on the last page with some flicks into them so i might not get esmacked... and heres more..
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0856.jpg
thats the most work ive posted in one day..

knewsince.
06-04-2007, 12:19 PM
how do u spell ban?

Seti
06-04-2007, 12:20 PM
HERE YOU GO THEN...
SAVE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg
DELETE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/DELETECOLOUR.jpg
BEAUTY
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image049.jpg
RACE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/race.jpg

Casa45
06-04-2007, 12:22 PM
i love the 3D style. but never tryed it myself... looks like too much time :P

Seti
06-04-2007, 12:23 PM
TRUE, BUT IVE SORTA DEVELOPED MY STYLE TO TAKE LESS TIME, more abstract than 3d

Aces One
06-04-2007, 12:26 PM
Seti - god damn that stuffs cool...love the Save. Dont really like the colours in Beauty. Delete is badass.
Baze - those are really nice letters....i blow at A's. your B just seems a bit to small.

Casa45
06-04-2007, 12:30 PM
No the "A" is way too big.
The "B" is fine

Bazer
06-04-2007, 01:02 PM
hahahaha. exactly what i was gonna say

-ShAmEE-
06-04-2007, 01:25 PM
yeh well/ keep workin at it home boi!..

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/swe3t-1.jpg

changed my E.

sketch3
06-04-2007, 01:28 PM
seti im iin love with that delete pic, the 3d is spot on, cant reli crit u cuss ur better than me ,shameus i like it

Bomber444
06-04-2007, 01:31 PM
Seti I didnt really love the Sane on the last page but dam those last few were nice, especially the Race one.

amk
06-04-2007, 01:37 PM
Edit..not Worth The Hassle..ink..and Time For That Wanker..

Ahaha Ante Has To Be One Of The Kooliost Guy In Here Ahahahah

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 01:38 PM
yeeaaaaaaooooooo mah ssseeeerrruppppp drankin swangginnnn cadddelaacccsss nyukaaaahhhh!!!!...wats up amkah...lol

as for crits...
fluffy-that shits tha shit :) dont really like the TOW tho
bay-shitsss tighhhttt but the A... i aint feelin it...
seti-u crazy bitch :) lukks gud
shame...tell me wat it says pweeezzzz :)

-ShAmEE-
06-04-2007, 01:44 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/swe3t-1-2.jpg

Bazer
06-04-2007, 01:46 PM
how come you never overlap then dude?????????????????

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 01:46 PM
thank you senyor...i am now in love wit you too...creepy? i think so...lol

Sumoe
06-04-2007, 02:02 PM
shammee-structure still needs a bit of work...the "E" doesn't look like an "E"...and the "S" could look like a shitty "Y"

the "W" is decent though...keep workin' on it though, could be a pretty chill style once it's developed, because right now it kinda looks like it says "YWZ"

amk
06-04-2007, 02:13 PM
my peice for the battle against Casa..
if he replys..
ill add colour if he decides to...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1213.jpg

peace..
he prollly wont reply..like last time
or i might waste his time

~Saoten154~
06-04-2007, 02:15 PM
thats cuz i post work here about once a month. if you wanna see SOME stuff go to my deviant art... i post crap though. all my new stuff it gettin better.... i have a feeleng everone on this page is gonna get banned..

post work son.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/vxr.png
what do you mean there gonna get banned?

~Saoten154~
06-04-2007, 02:25 PM
my peice for the battle against Casa..
if he replys..
ill add colour if he decides to...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1213.jpg

peace..
he prollly wont reply..like last time
or i might waste his time
wait are you battiling him under this thread, or what ?

Bazer
06-04-2007, 02:30 PM
what do you mean there gonna get banned?

we had a whole page of talkin so i went back and posted some work.

amk
06-04-2007, 02:36 PM
saoten..what the fuck are you talking about..guh

Bazer
06-04-2007, 02:38 PM
saoten just go sketch buddy. hahahaha..

Slushi
06-04-2007, 02:42 PM
some super shitty blackbook flicks

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z85/SluseFA/Picture219.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z85/SluseFA/Picture221.jpg

AteskOne
06-04-2007, 02:43 PM
i'm begining to hate this forum...

edit* not because of you slushi...you just happened to post right when i did.

-ShAmEE-
06-04-2007, 02:52 PM
umm.... you dont reali help it get amazingly better do u.

Drakula
06-04-2007, 03:08 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00273.jpg

Another simple piece.

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 03:11 PM
fuck toy tagz
added some faces haha...even though thats sortve biting kadism
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6069/picture102uf0.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/9441/picture100tz8.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7458/picture101qi7.jpg

AteskOne
06-04-2007, 03:17 PM
umm.... you dont reali help it get amazingly better do u.
people like you are the reason i hate it mr."developed letters"...


why the fuck does the new skin have all these gay ass 12oz. smileys. i miss my old aggrivated smiley.

5yn
06-04-2007, 03:17 PM
the 3d on the spak is hot
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture008.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture007-1.jpg

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture006-1.jpg

Drakula
06-04-2007, 03:23 PM
the 3d on the spak is hot

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture007-1.jpg

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture006-1.jpg
Are you talking about me?It actually says DRAK lol,thanks anyway though.Your tag looks pretty cool i think you could lose the dots on top though but it's got a nice flow.I like the character and the throw aswell if the one that says Va is yours.(there's alot of them so I can't tell).

5yn
06-04-2007, 03:28 PM
va was done by my buddy vapor my throwie is TE but i dont think u can see any haha u might wana fix your extension on your d then cause the top one looks a lil like a s i thought the back on ur d was an s's extension sorry for the shit gramar haha

Drakula
06-04-2007, 03:29 PM
Yeah I was kicking myself after I saw that it looked like an S.

emokid
06-04-2007, 03:31 PM
5yn the drippy character looks cool

very flowy whahappen

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6515.jpg

mess around with acrylic on cardboard, the thing is too small i know.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6516.jpg

the a is gay but i'm working on it. and the r is too small. oops i critted it myself :/

~Saoten154~
06-04-2007, 03:37 PM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/8067/sary3.th.jpg (http://img520.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sary3.jpg)

i dont think i posted this before...i might have so sorry if i did, pear i think its that the a is bigger then everything else..the A isnt that bad looks decent and the bottom part of the R needs to be longer...

CRITS FOR ME????

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 03:45 PM
i personally think hearts in grafitti need to be drug out an shot like ol' yeller...yea...i said it...fuck ol' yeller...and those damn hearts..

nickstix
06-04-2007, 03:56 PM
saoten...take the heartsoff the bottom

pear...nice, umm seal thing and your 'R' is alittle small

quick freestyle i did in school...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/naim1.png
good?bad?

crits?

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 03:59 PM
it lukks fine witout tha adons, remeber simples young jedi <_<
WTF ur in summer school? that sucks

nickstix
06-04-2007, 04:03 PM
it lukks fine witout tha adons, remeber simples young jedi <_<
WTF ur in summer school? that sucks
no im not in summer school my school end in like a week.

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 04:08 PM
naim the upper left extension on the n is ghey
newer...
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7313/picture104uv6.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3628/picture103uo9.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-04-2007, 04:09 PM
5yn the drippy character looks cool

very flowy whahappen

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6515.jpg

mess around with acrylic on cardboard, the thing is too small i know.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6516.jpg

the a is gay but i'm working on it. and the r is too small. oops i critted it myself :/


that call self teachin, my graphic teacher loves that.

sketch3
06-04-2007, 04:24 PM
love them pear but ur right that r is hurtin, looks like a p with a bad extention

BOKAone
06-04-2007, 04:26 PM
im diggin that walrus....heres a B i threw together in 5 mins before a presentation....crits...sorry its a small pic
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1920/1000088yw9.jpg

garbage down tha way
06-04-2007, 04:29 PM
It's not a blackbook, probably more fit for the digi thread but i couldnt find it. Whatever, delete it if you want.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/amongbtw.jpg

emokid- the character is good unlike most characters, i hate characters. The pear starts out good, i like the tops of the p and e, the a's leg is too big, and the r is too small like you said.

whahappen-nice hand, philly styles dope.

Nickstix- the extentions are ok but your letters arent really ready for them.

TricksForKids
06-04-2007, 04:41 PM
nickstix, looking good boss, i dont think you need those arrows though, your letters speak for themselves

whahappen, go with the first handy and use broad tipped markers

Pear that A's sexy

Guerrilla876
06-04-2007, 04:46 PM
that call self teachin, my graphic teacher loves that.

i thought it said peap, but i like it nonetheless, and you know you need to fix that 'r' so it's no bigg-e. and your character majig looks like it has two testies for eyes. xD no offencee. i like tha background dough.

Iotyx
06-04-2007, 04:46 PM
bokaone- I can hardly see that shit.

IwriteNASR
06-04-2007, 05:00 PM
boka i like that now start on the other letters
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1143/fhdfghmg4.jpg
simple. crits...

BOKAone
06-04-2007, 05:01 PM
bokaone- I can hardly see that shit.
yea i figured that ill re-sketch it bigger...all i had on me was a pen

BOKAone
06-04-2007, 05:02 PM
shift- lose the crowns unless ur all-city

crits....? i know the 3d on the b in the last one is messed up i did it quick

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4607/1000091pq5.jpg
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/2239/1000087yw5.jpg

bump for crits.....

IwriteNASR
06-04-2007, 05:04 PM
boka i like the top one better . the bottom one is nice but dont conect the letters

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 05:11 PM
there good but the color schemes suck

bouncingsoul
06-04-2007, 05:37 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0782.jpg

Feelin that super simple shit

AnteUp
06-04-2007, 05:38 PM
i dont get how color skemes work.. :( wat colors are good together?!?!?!?

dizzle_d
06-04-2007, 05:50 PM
Nickstix- looks good, but maybe loose the extensions
whahappen- I like the first one, but they both look good
emokid- that seal manatee dolphin thing is fire, the pear looks good too, work on the A
Nasr- N and A look fine, S and R need some work
Boka- I like the first one
Bouncing- I ... love that...:D

haven't posted any sketches in a hot second...
something I worked on today at school... blechhh I need some crits.
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg
forget about the addons on either side though, those are wack sorry. and I gotta work on my R...
Crits...thanks.

uhhh
06-04-2007, 05:56 PM
ante-i try and use colors that are opposite, or close to it ,sides of the color wheel.
i.e. do a cool fill might want warm 3-d, ya mean?

sooo, i got prismas, and im still learning with them.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-014S-3.jpg
this is a kind of bad example, but my cameras to o much of a hassle. i MIGHt post something better later. but probably not.

dizzle_d
06-04-2007, 05:58 PM
that characters pretty dope uhhh

uhhh
06-04-2007, 05:59 PM
oh, and heres soemthing from my digital class..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/karakkarakkkk_copycopy.jpg
itll be on a t-shirt pretty soon here so..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/karakkarakONSHIRTcopy.jpg

popshots
06-04-2007, 06:34 PM
uhh: i liked the character when it wasnt digitalize... mainly cuz the colors

Apple pie
06-04-2007, 07:07 PM
that tee is pretty dope

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 07:10 PM
to get a good color scheme i just get scratch paper and start matching color... my fills are usually light and then a warmer outline never to dark

BOKAone
06-04-2007, 07:13 PM
there good but the color schemes suck
yea i know i have like shit colours to work with cuz im poor right now

Silly Selfish
06-04-2007, 07:27 PM
some stuff from the black book..
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/1043/watertower010vw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/2641/watertower012sk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

uhhh
06-04-2007, 07:39 PM
uhh: i liked the character when it wasnt digitalize... mainly cuz the colors

well,
for one theyre not the same.
but also, the digital one is going to be screenprinted,
to do a fade like that you have to use half tone dots or four color processing.
my parents do screenprinting and are doing it just to be nice,
so i dont want to put too much work on them.
plus theyre not set up for four color processing yet.

ghozt
06-04-2007, 07:42 PM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9378/fotos199he8.jpg
leak clean it up itll look better crits =]

Silly Selfish
06-04-2007, 08:10 PM
elks-nice style but that name is allready taken(and hes really good) nice peice.

ghozt
06-04-2007, 08:12 PM
aw man are you kidding? dammit im choosing a new name

ICER
06-04-2007, 08:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civek.jpg

Bazer
06-04-2007, 08:20 PM
wow youve been writing since 05....................................

~Saoten154~
06-04-2007, 09:00 PM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9378/fotos199he8.jpg
leak clean it up itll look better crits =]
dude im pretty sure there allready someone writing "elk" i saw in a graff movie

~Saoten154~
06-04-2007, 09:01 PM
someone allready told you that haha sorry man

[biohazard]
06-04-2007, 09:20 PM
just finished this. i know its early for me to be doin backgrounds but it seemed lk a simple one so i did it :/ and I really only lk the S and the A but Ill leave the crits to u guys. PS: i know i messed up on the shading and ANROE HOW U KEEP YOU SHIT SOOO FRESH



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/101_0278.jpg <<<<DATE IS WRONG. camera is gay :/

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 09:25 PM
it doesnt really have a bakground, work on letter structure dont connect the letters like the s its a little wierd

[biohazard]
06-04-2007, 09:27 PM
it doesnt really have a bakground, work on letter structure dont connect the letters like the s its a little wierd

ya I regreted doin that after I inked it :/. and You got any tips on the D or the E? thanks for the help

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 09:30 PM
maybe shorten the bulge on the d, for the e i would pretty much keep it the same but give it the feel of the A

[biohazard]
06-04-2007, 09:32 PM
ight cool i try that next time man preciate it.

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 09:35 PM
i like your colors there very ~~~IRIE~~~

nickstix
06-04-2007, 09:39 PM
biohazerd...the 'd' is too big(wide) and the left side of the 'e' is too fat, try to keep letter thickness the same and try to sketch using bars.

ghost...nice simples, the top right leg of the 'k' is a little too skinny and the 's' seems too far away from the other letters.

entry for my round robin battle...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/naim2.png
its similar to my earlier post but i just changed a couple little things...

crits?

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 09:43 PM
it would be way tighter if the lines were a little smoother but other than that its pretty dope

AteskOne
06-04-2007, 09:46 PM
the 'M' is bitten. where i cant quite put a finger on tho. i think it may have been one of sume's pieces. sume can you please post the picture if it is bitten from you.

nickstix
06-04-2007, 09:53 PM
the 'M' is bitten. where i cant quite put a finger on tho. i think it may have been one of sume's pieces. sume can you please post the picture if it is bitten from you.

the 'm' isnt bitten its just that sume uses those types of extensions on alot of his letters in alot of his pieces.

glass
06-04-2007, 10:02 PM
idk if it's a bite or not but it looks like a pretty generic M to me

Casa45
06-04-2007, 10:22 PM
my peice for the battle against Casa..
if he replys..
ill add colour if he decides to...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1213.jpg

peace..
he prollly wont reply..like last time
or i might waste his time

LOL. kinda funny how you already have a sketch before you even ask me to battle. and ill battle you but no color.. outline only...

But your not going to beat me with that piece brotha...

Bazer
06-04-2007, 10:24 PM
haha.. thats kinda funny. he already knew you were gonna say no color. just do color man. i think everyone deserves to see it that way or else the battle isn't gonna be worth pollin.

-Sinn-
06-04-2007, 10:41 PM
Amk- lookin good as always
Naim- lookin good nice letter structure but the dot on the I looks a lil big
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture301.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture302.jpg

Bazer
06-04-2007, 10:44 PM
sinn work on your letter proportions.. all that stuff kinda looks like scraps.. but i dont know, i haven't really seen much of your work..


blaka blaka blaka blaauw....
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0859.jpg

Sumoe
06-04-2007, 10:54 PM
the 'M' is bitten. where i cant quite put a finger on tho. i think it may have been one of sume's pieces. sume can you please post the picture if it is bitten from you.

Dunno if it's bitten...it doesn't look anything like my new shit, but it could be one of my old sketches...w.e. though.

LuStErOcKs
06-04-2007, 10:59 PM
inspired by sume..

Bazer
06-04-2007, 11:02 PM
the only thing that should metter is that i have some pretty sweet hair. dont worry about the biters guys. and if they do bite then make the bite better than the person who originaly made it. thats how breakdancing grew and nobody seems to realize it but thats how graffiti has grown.

Casa45
06-04-2007, 11:49 PM
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/530/dsc03632zf1.jpg

Something i threw together... just another idea.. still needs color and shit.

Casa45
06-04-2007, 11:55 PM
Sorry for double post. and for posting stickers in the blackbook thread, i dont think people even look in the top slay thread... lol

http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/8452/dsc03630en3.jpg

Nem
06-05-2007, 12:03 AM
(edit. i think i mighta bitten that background thing on the third one down. but i can't quite place it. sorry about that)


casa - i like your clouds. different than what i've seen around.

baze - the left bar of your B is a bit wide in my opinion. i like the colors though.

sinn - some of your S's look halfway decent. the rest is basically shitty. like baze said. proportions.

biohazard - thats a waste of ink man. keep it basic (color-wise) until you get some appreciated simples.

Well, i went in hiding for a while. tried to come out of it with a newborn style. lets see.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2190.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2191.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/Scabs3.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs5.jpg

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs-recon.jpg

Chalk
06-05-2007, 12:21 AM
nem that first one isnt bad but the others.... I would say go back to simples.

worked on a character a bit
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/character.jpg
and tried something a little different
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_corner.jpg

Nem
06-05-2007, 12:28 AM
DAMN! ha. i worked so hard too! ah well. more sketching it is. do they even have potential? like, could i work off them? or. um. down from them?

chalk - i love vertical styles. you actually pulled it off nicely too. pleasing to the eye. i dunno about the character though. i mean, don't get me wrong, it's beautifully drawn, but i dont think it fits well with graffiti. ya know?

Casa45
06-05-2007, 12:33 AM
it fits well. the thing that bugs me is that . back when people had spears and skin for clothes. they didnt have hair gel... look at the dudes hair.. LOL

Chalk
06-05-2007, 12:35 AM
thanks you are right the warrior he is more illustrative than graffish.

yours aren't to bad i would say ditch the circles you have rather randomly placed. Do bars for a while once you have bars down break them in to two bars and angle them slightly, at least thats how i work.

Nem
06-05-2007, 01:21 AM
well. i got the basic simple bar structures down. im positive of that. and doing what you said, i would probably end up with some decent letters. but i want my own recognizable style. i dunno, it just seems like if i make bars, seperate, bend, like everyone else. ill end up with some generic snap together letters. i really want to develop that style i was working on. and i know people are gonna look down upon that because its sucks right now i guess... but one of my main desire s in this game is to have a fuckin weird, sick, style.

Iotyx
06-05-2007, 05:21 AM
nem that first one isnt bad but the others.... I would
and tried something a little different
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_corner.jpg
that looks clean as hell. what markers did you use for that? prismas?

Wrekz
06-05-2007, 06:42 AM
My throwie..
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/348/billede008wc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please?

dizzle_d
06-05-2007, 06:54 AM
Nem- keep workin on simples
Chalk- that piece is amazing. I ... want it...
wrekz- T isn't fitting in with the rest, but keep working on it.
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg
Anyways I got no crits so...
constructive crits please...

Wrekz
06-05-2007, 07:26 AM
Oke thanks..
What about now ??
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8168/billede009pd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

d_g
06-05-2007, 07:42 AM
That 'T' looks better, 'a' needs a bit of work. 'Pe' isn't too bad, needs a little work.

Tri1
06-05-2007, 07:54 AM
Nem- keep workin on simples
Chalk- that piece is amazing. I ... want it...
wrekz- T isn't fitting in with the rest, but keep working on it.
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg
Anyways I got no crits so...
constructive crits please...
not sure about the bottomof the E and thoes little star things around it. but apart from that i like it.

Jank
06-05-2007, 08:39 AM
merk its real nice i think. good colours though the effects are a bit off.. like as he said those star things n the bubbles seem a bit out of place. the arrows off the M and K seem very small and piddly and scream ''TOOOYYY" so i'd get rid of them, but aside from that its promising good work. O ye the middle of the M looks a tad fat maybe?

tape the P looks alkittle hidden n the E seems odd.. not bad though.

chalk i want your babies. the C is bigger than the others... but fuck it it works. nice shit

Tri1
06-05-2007, 09:00 AM
had to do somthing to dive the boredom away so i did this.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture004.jpg
crits?

amk
06-05-2007, 09:04 AM
my peice for the battle against Casa..
if he replys..
ill add colour if he decides to...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1213.jpg

peace..
he prollly wont reply..like last time
or i might waste his time

bump..~
this was the peice i was using to battle Casa..
but..the reply back i got after offering him out..
Was a load of abuse..
which had nothing what so ever to do with a battle..
Casa thrives on talking shit to people on here..
and i just hope people pity him / her ? .. as much as i do..

even Kay shut him up in the paint thred..he still carrys on..
me and him/her are done..
so dont expect to see any more beef from him/her..

Dizzel...so good...keep it up
Chalk..is..so..so.so...soooooooo good

SLEDGEHAMMER
06-05-2007, 09:10 AM
Ahahahha nice one amk "quit yo jibba jabba" haha, your pieces are really starting to get good, nice one mate.

Stim
06-05-2007, 09:44 AM
the k in chalks piece reminds me of the k in sumes "lerk" piece.

nero122
06-05-2007, 12:04 PM
your progressin i dont like your style but thhat doesnt mean u aint progressed n how many acounts do you have now?lol

nero122
06-05-2007, 12:05 PM
thats 2 amk btw

garbage down tha way
06-05-2007, 01:15 PM
"Hyper" sketch for a bus, im getting paid to do it for a group.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hyper.jpg
Throw.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/among6.jpg

Amk-That looks great but it's look better if you wrote the ah out. I like the way your lettrs are progressing.

Dizzle- Nice letters, dope coloring.

Tape- Ok for a simple throw. Make the p fatter and the top of the a less square

Chalk- That is so clean, the letters are dope. I like how its crawling up the side of the paper, more fun to look at than ruler lined horizontal graff.

Nem- you need to learn your structure before you can evolve a style. Mess with your letter while theyre bars, then apply that style to your own unique letters. also, the bottom one is a bouncingsoul bite.

Sluts_r_us
06-05-2007, 01:33 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF1473.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/canvas.jpg
canvas i did last night...

Socrates
06-05-2007, 01:38 PM
b&w one is illing
cept i think the top of the e could be a bit fatter

Casa45
06-05-2007, 01:41 PM
Make the "E" capital pesk

And the 3D in the 1st one has way too many lines in it. even that shit out

amk
06-05-2007, 01:42 PM
yo Ensr...get you arse on MSN..

Sluts...that bottom is big boy material..
Nero..okaaaay
garbage..itsnot bad..i like it..but the throw is whack..to be honest

Casa45
06-05-2007, 01:55 PM
AMK....

If i would of know you were going to do a little 3letter name i wouldnt of spent so much time on mine... :p

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2007, 02:12 PM
hahaha haa haa....no. amk fillage?

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2007, 02:16 PM
AMK....

If i would of know you were going to do a little 3letter name i wouldnt of spent so much time on mine... :p


comin from someone who thinks ras is weak. ur spendin a lot of time...someone is tryin to act the bigger man.

Dream Creation
06-05-2007, 02:16 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9315/crieud4.png (http://imageshack.us)

sloppy until inked so dnt metion that wat ya think?

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2007, 02:21 PM
hahaa i did that style...but now i got ma own!....keep workin on ya letters.

Casa45
06-05-2007, 02:31 PM
comin from someone who thinks ras is weak. ur spendin a lot of time...someone is tryin to act the bigger man.

hehe. see the face at the end of my post? means iam kidding. iam done. but iam going to scan it later today at work, because my wife has my camera...

Oh for the same exchange... sorry for its lameness antup kinda rushed it and tried something new at the same time... :p

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/httpimg131.imageshack.usimg1317315dsc03640bl5.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 02:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF1473.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/canvas.jpg
canvas i did last night...
bump.

amk
06-05-2007, 02:40 PM
DAMN..YOU HAVE A WIFE..WTF..
YOU HAVE A WIFE..
AND YOUR ON A INTERNET FORUM..
TALKING SHIT TO 15 YEAR OLD KIDS..
DAMN..
GET A FUCKING LIFE..

gaaah
Hurry the fuck up..
im finished..

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 02:40 PM
all i see is a red X homes, ill have mine up later cuz i fucked up tha first one by tryna color in the 3-d so im jus doin outlines :)

Casa45
06-05-2007, 02:41 PM
iam only 19 fuckface... and i have a family too..

amk
06-05-2007, 02:47 PM
only...only..only is an understatement...damn...your 19....please....why do you have so much shit to say for a fully grown teenager...your basically a man..i mean..your beefin with someone 4 years younger than you...damn...get some balls..

im doing what you do now...and i really shouldnt be..
as i know..
your easilly capble of beating me in this battle..

so just PM me your entry..
and finish this

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 02:47 PM
all i see is a red X homes, ill have mine up later cuz i fucked up tha first one by tryna color in the 3-d so im jus doin outlines :)
bump so mr. house45 can change it so i can see it :)

Socrates
06-05-2007, 02:49 PM
little young for a wife, no?
anyone down for an exchange? just be quick with your answering

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 02:53 PM
im not sure if im worthy but maybe?

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2007, 02:53 PM
so ur simgle life finished at the ages of 19?

Vice
06-05-2007, 02:53 PM
i guess now would be about time to bring people back to the actual topic of the thread instead of pointless fighting hmm? ok well lets get back to crits and posting pics.

Casa45
06-05-2007, 02:56 PM
married her after she had my baby girl... but since were doing back ground checks iv also have a dog, house, work for eclipse building personal jets, attend cnm college in between work, been arrested twice when i was 17, and spent a total of 1year in the youngen jail...

ROFLLL

and fuck imageshack mother fucker never works....


http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9199/samekm6.jpg

2KoS
06-05-2007, 02:57 PM
Im 18 and I cuss people younger than me if they deserve it... stop acting like a little bitch and tryna blow shit out of proportion.

lame.

Socrates
06-05-2007, 02:59 PM
sall good, what you want me to do?
you do an enser :)

im not sure if im worthy but maybe?

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2007, 03:01 PM
dude u looka about 16...heheee. must have fun when bouncer ask for I.D.

AteskOne
06-05-2007, 03:10 PM
only...only..only is an understatement...damn...your 19....please....why do you have so much shit to say for a fully grown teenager...your basically a man..i mean..your beefin with someone 4 years younger than you...damn...get some balls..
stop....talking....shit....to...people....
that...are...

better....
than...and...older...

than...you.

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 03:12 PM
i write same an casa urs is loadin in photo bucket right now...

amk
06-05-2007, 03:12 PM
married her after she had my baby girl... but since were doing back ground checks iv also have a dog, house, work for eclipse building personal jets, attend cnm college in between work, been arrested twice when i was 17, and spent a total of 1year in the youngen jail...

ROFLLL

and fuck imageshack mother fucker never works....


http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9199/samekm6.jpg

look..we dont want your life story

is this your battle entry ? ..
hurry up

AteskOne
06-05-2007, 03:13 PM
sinn work on your letter proportions.. all that stuff kinda looks like scraps.. but i dont know, i haven't really seen much of your work..


blaka blaka blaka blaauw....
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0859.jpg
bump for pure sexiness.

Casa45
06-05-2007, 03:14 PM
no read it... its an exchange... with anteup..
my battle pics is taking for ever to load in imageshack.

Bazer
06-05-2007, 03:17 PM
baze work on you letter proportions. theyre crap. as a matter of fact you should just stop writing graff.

amk
06-05-2007, 03:18 PM
ahah Baze..
okay Casa..
Pm me with it

Bazer
06-05-2007, 03:20 PM
baze work on you letter proportions. theyre crap. as a matter of fact you should just stop writing graff.
fuck you. why dont you battle me then you lil stuck up bitch. :mad:

Casa45
06-05-2007, 03:23 PM
baze. rofl your an idiot...

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 03:24 PM
lmao ^^

casa...here it is :( im dissapointed in myself...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0013.jpg
ur exchange was fuckin tight!

amk
06-05-2007, 03:30 PM
edit..
yes....now im gonna make this post not pointless..

Ante...your improving..you gotta stop using line paper tho..the S is the best letter there...sum of the extensions are iffy too...i donnt think your ready for them JUST yet..

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 03:42 PM
thanks...i did the little extension lukkin things an i was like...shit i fugked up :(

Bazer
06-05-2007, 03:44 PM
baze. rofl your an idiot...

that lil pussy aint gonna say nothin till i forget what happened.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 03:45 PM
little young for a wife, no?
anyone down for an exchange? just be quick with your answering
im up for it.
ras, you wanna exchange?
-teze.

amk
06-05-2007, 03:49 PM
ahaha..i was seriously thinking about PMing you about exchanging..ahah damn...its like i got e-telepathic mind

yes im sure up for it..
ill go all out..
seeing as we had mad beef..
ima rustle a 11 course dinner up for yah

WITH MAYONAISE !

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 03:53 PM
i gotya.
more flicks in this bitch...

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 04:07 PM
ayo amk check ur pm box nikka nokka :)

Chalk
06-05-2007, 04:08 PM
the k in chalks piece reminds me of the k in sumes "lerk" piece.

i suppose but i have been doing that K for a bit now. before his lerk. no beef i'm just stating.

but thanks for the kind words from everyone.
here is a progression from about fallish.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_corner.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simpor2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_blue.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_bbo.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_nh.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_drag.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_cop.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_arrows_1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_po_swirl.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_pg.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_ob.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_green.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_07_5.jpg

amk
06-05-2007, 04:14 PM
you have progressed...but sum off your letters are weak..no beef..and number 3 and 4 are the worst there...i like that simple one

revolt92
06-05-2007, 04:21 PM
So ras, are you and edward sezer hands ....like...cool?

amk
06-05-2007, 04:30 PM
yes..
Casa..
damn..
your telling me that ImageShack takes 2 hours to upload..
your not going to do one of you dissapearing acts again are you..?
1 more hour..
or the battle is off..
youve done this one time too many

so i aint picless.

WHO WANTS TAH SEE SOME OLD SKOOL AMKAH ! ? ..

AHAHAAAA

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-6.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/r.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/w.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/q.jpg

if anyone says these are good..
im NEVER taking notice of your crits again
ahahahahah

Sumoe
06-05-2007, 04:35 PM
you have progressed...but sum off your letters are weak..no beef..and number 3 and 4 are the worst there...i like that simple one

in a lot of ways his letters are better than yours but, they do need some work.

Vice
06-05-2007, 04:35 PM
chalk i think all of your work is impressive. yes some of the work could use some improvement but what piece doesnt?

BOKAone
06-05-2007, 04:54 PM
i know the colour sucks thats what u get with like 7 markers lol....crits
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3422/1000092en3.jpg

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 05:01 PM
it lukks like it says bora instaead of boka pretty nice i guess ..3-ds of a little an u dont need the red boxes

Socrates
06-05-2007, 05:03 PM
here you go ante

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/257676809.jpg

oh, and sezer ill get working on it, flicks tomorrow probably

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 05:05 PM
oh fuck i havent even started lol it lukks tight as fuck tho thanks

bouncingsoul
06-05-2007, 05:24 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0783.jpg

Saaaaatire

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 05:30 PM
the R kinda lukks like it has two loops like two R's in one

AnteUp
06-05-2007, 05:32 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0013.jpg
exchange wit casa...crits please

alive
06-05-2007, 06:13 PM
ante, i like it except for where u carried the outline into the letter. i dont know whats going on there.

heres my throw, which happens to be a one-liner. not on purpose really, it just flows that way i guess.
and then a paragraph bitching about modern art, if u know mad shit abt it would make sense, if not itl sound retarded. but the point is the general handstyle

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03233.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03234.jpg



thanks

RealaNightmaren
06-05-2007, 06:15 PM
Socrates - Your shit is really hot man.
BouncingSoul - I love the letter structure on that one. The A is kinda weird though, doesn't really fit in.

I've been trying to progress my letter a bit lately, anyone got any crits or suggestions? I don't think I'm feeling the S much...
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a66/realanightmaren/blisspiece.jpg

Pantalones.
06-05-2007, 06:21 PM
boka - yeah your k looks like an r, also the o looks a little sloppy, but im not one to talk haha

same - i like it, cept the a looks weird

bouncing soul - dope

ante - your k looks like an r too, other than that i like it

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y268/JonnyWaffelz/S5000156.jpg

the "one" was a big big mistake i know. haha. also fucked up the dot shadow. crits anyone?

rayseone
06-05-2007, 06:22 PM
realnightmaren - not feeling any letters man tone it down a bit and work on structur, it will really help you

alive - dope as usual, kinda messy but i dont mind it

bouncingsoul- fresh as usaual not feeling the R tho

socratees - fucking ill man

chump battle thingy, got bored with my letters so decided id enter, kinda shity tho crits?
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/8829/chumpyjm8.jpg

d_g
06-05-2007, 06:33 PM
Alive, grimey as shit, just the way I like it.

popshots
06-05-2007, 06:47 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2892/roundrobbin2fx4fo7uf0.jpg
crits......
bokaone:dont color yet jus keep pracicen the letter
socrates: relly relly nice
alive: i like it..... is it a one liner?
realnightmare: keep tryin at it
neir1: its decent but i wouldnt use stickers yet
rayseone:cut off sum of those extencions like the one on the m

2KoS
06-05-2007, 07:23 PM
Not old....but not new either... just fuckin about... Im bored and wanna contribute....... k.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Photo-0145.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Photo-0148.jpg

MUSEone
06-05-2007, 07:25 PM
Looks like u did the top one w/ a sharpie lol nice though.

2KoS
06-05-2007, 07:28 PM
I did. It's a new canvas, havent opened on it so i thought i'd doodle on it until i figure out what im gonna plant on it.

MUSEone
06-05-2007, 07:35 PM
Ahh lol ok

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
06-05-2007, 07:59 PM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1354.jpg

littlerocky
06-05-2007, 08:00 PM
chalk i like all your shit its clean as hell some of the letter structure is a little weak at parts but other than that clean fresh.
seize...im lovin those simples.
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8461/bombsy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my bomb..may have posted it before idk
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2554/oldschooljt7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
foolin around kinda tryin to pull old school a little with no luck
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/8192/throwuppk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my scanner kidna fucekd it up but a throw up and my two letter.
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/5526/pennormaldj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
pen sketch
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3076/newyh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new shit im tryin...tell me if it has no potential cuz idont wanna waste my
time. my scanner fucked these up kinda cut out a bunch but whatever.

bloodlandmoney
06-05-2007, 08:01 PM
thats dope... 3d's off though

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
06-05-2007, 08:02 PM
;779100']http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1354.jpg
sorry, but last posts suck.
bump for crits?

popshots
06-05-2007, 08:06 PM
bump for critz...........
seiz: dont make small bars to big bars
mugz:u finally came back.... i like the bomb



http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2892/roundrobbin2fx4fo7uf0.jpg
crits......
bokaone:dont color yet jus keep pracicen the letter
socrates: relly relly nice
alive: i like it..... is it a one liner?
realnightmare: keep tryin at it
neir1: its decent but i wouldnt use stickers yet
rayseone:cut off sum of those extencions like the one on the m

bloodlandmoney
06-05-2007, 08:09 PM
seize im diggin it just smooth out the lines and u got a solid peice. popshots ... the letters are ok but that outline makes it bad i think

alive
06-05-2007, 08:13 PM
ante, i like it except for where u carried the outline into the letter. i dont know whats going on there.

heres my throw, which happens to be a one-liner. not on purpose really, it just flows that way i guess.
and then a paragraph bitching about modern art, if u know mad shit abt it would make sense, if not itl sound retarded. but the point is the general handstyle

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03233.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03234.jpg



thanks



bump. littlerocky, a throw should not have more then 3 colors TOPS. popshots, i actually like it, not 2 much to say, keep going. seize do u use bars?

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
06-05-2007, 08:14 PM
nope.

littlerocky
06-05-2007, 08:15 PM
thats dope... 3d's off though
..witch one you talkin about?..thanks for the crit tho
adn popshots..i didnt kno anyone knew i existed hahaha.. yeah i was out of it for a while..thanks tho and i agree take the outline off but other then that i like it.

Sumoe
06-05-2007, 08:18 PM
;779126']nope.

you should...

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 08:37 PM
alive_ i liek dat shit... i got cameras on my work too but they aren't on my side.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture121.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture128.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture129.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture127.jpg
a one letter throwie its a T.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture125.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture124.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture126.jpg

glyce
06-05-2007, 08:53 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soankbomb1.jpg
any crits?

Bomber444
06-05-2007, 09:05 PM
tryin out this new style. what u guys think?
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/kay.jpg

IwriteNASR
06-05-2007, 09:07 PM
give crits to get them
edward the last peice is my fav and the one letters pretty nice

freakeenyc
06-05-2007, 09:07 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3396/cimg6781av3.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 09:11 PM
^^
what i can see i like.

Feat337
06-05-2007, 09:24 PM
Bomber- Don't like the extension on the bottom of the K. Also one E is square and the other one is rounded off, might want to make them the same

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u188/Feat37/DSCN0743.jpg
crits?

glass
06-05-2007, 09:30 PM
oh man... ok so here's what i want you to do, Feat. take a look at your keyboard and work on getting those letters just right (the one's that make up your name). keep working on structure and keeping the lines nice and even and clean.

garbage down tha way
06-05-2007, 09:36 PM
"Hyper" sketch for a bus, im getting paid to do it for a group.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hyper.jpg
Throw.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/among6.jpg


Bump, is this throw really shit? i painted it twice today..

BIGel
06-05-2007, 09:40 PM
^the throw is pretty bad dude, the simple on top is much better. that throw looks like you havent done it enough, its not complete.

sezer that first one is dope like heroin, i can always tell your style without looking at the name.

bleh my round robin last minute entry with mente. in a textbook.

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/156/f/6/mente_battle_by_bigel.jpg

Eeyore
06-05-2007, 10:10 PM
alive_ i liek dat shit... i got cameras on my work too but they aren't on my side.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture128.jpg

Nice

ESKE one
06-05-2007, 10:18 PM
nice shyt bigel love that style

I'm bored as shyt anybody decent up for an piece exchange??

2KoS
06-05-2007, 10:19 PM
Tezer - that T carac has more 'life' to it when it has bigger top teeth. sounds stupid but little things like that make it look better. another little thing is with the eyebrows, dont make them rectangles like the second one, like the first one, it grows from the inwards a little bit. see what i mean?

bigel - yess feelin that work, kinda dont like the little green bigel there tho. seems completely offkey in comparison init.

feat - your f and t are skinny as fuck. fix it.


Not old....but not new either... just fuckin about... Im bored and wanna contribute....... k.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Photo-0145.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Photo-0148.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 10:22 PM
nice shyt bigel love that style

I'm bored as shyt anybody decent up for an piece exchange??
ill exchange.
Teze.
whatya write.
thanks Big, eeyore, and 2KOs
one more.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture123.jpg

IwriteNASR
06-05-2007, 10:25 PM
2KoS id push the exclamation a lil closer
ed i like that style a lot
simples for me!
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8048/thtuutyutudf4.jpg
crits

Bomber444
06-05-2007, 10:31 PM
dam teze that style is hot.

ESKE one
06-05-2007, 10:37 PM
iight ed I got chu I write plex ill try to have it up by today but my internet is fuckin up I'm on my phone right now so well see

any1 else wanna exchange??

Stylz
06-05-2007, 11:14 PM
hey TEZE I LIKE YOUR STUFF BUT I THINK IT WOULD LOOK BETTER IF YOU TOOK THOSE LINES THAT MARK LIKE EACH PART OF THE LETTE... MY OPINION BUT YOU ARE GOOD KEEP WORKING ON IT..:)

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 11:28 PM
thanks man but that was just a permanent marker freestyle.

Casa45
06-05-2007, 11:34 PM
sorry amk. i have to attend work so my family doesnt starve.. you'll learn responsability some day. dont worry...

and SEZER i thought you would be alot better than that...

For the amk battle. sorry for lameness. rushed with the anteup exchange...

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2826/battleby6.jpg

ESKE one
06-05-2007, 11:37 PM
teze exchange sorry if its not good enuff
ill do another one if not

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs_054.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2007, 11:38 PM
rofl... no shit...
haha just fuckin witya kid.