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Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 12:45 AM
sounds good to me man, I like your name swoe. good basic letters.
Teze.

near
06-06-2007, 01:41 AM
here i added some more stuff to the piece i do...i wanna paint this one
edit: looks particularily shitty in this pic for some reason...maybe the angle i held the book
SAYS NEAR

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010071.jpg

Casa45
06-06-2007, 01:42 AM
WTF does it say

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 01:54 AM
here i added some more stuff to the piece i do...i wanna paint this one
edit: looks particularily shitty in this pic for some reason...maybe the angle i held the book

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010071.jpg
that shits fucking burning throught the page near.
some quick rough draft shit for casa45.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture130.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture131.jpg

Aces One
06-06-2007, 01:57 AM
thats pretty nice. dont like the drips on the "o" though.

hungr
06-06-2007, 02:05 AM
near steals granola bars from small children

Stim
06-06-2007, 02:19 AM
that joint is hard casa, good letter bending.

Stim
06-06-2007, 02:27 AM
yoooo

inspired by tequila tonight.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/232/pic1055qs3.jpg

Stim
06-06-2007, 02:28 AM
posty posty post.

Stim
06-06-2007, 02:31 AM
yoooo

inspired by tequila tonight.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/232/pic1055qs3.jpg
JESUS ASSFUCKER... BOTTOM OF THE PAGE.

Dusk07
06-06-2007, 03:17 AM
http://aycu15.webshots.com/image/17054/2004309006562182371_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004309006562182371)

bleh. crits. uber simple.

true21
06-06-2007, 03:57 AM
wat u think....tips......comments
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/true1.jpg

Seti
06-06-2007, 05:37 AM
its alright m8, just re sketch it and try gettin all the bars that make the letters the same width, if ya get me, the u's much fatter that the rest...and also lay off tryin to add addons for now, likeon the t and r, once uve got all your letters lookin the same then you can start conectin em together...
heres a quik outline, cant be asked to colour it as its just a development sketch for a slightly more wildstyle 3d im goin for....crits wld be welcome
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image089.jpg

Chulo
06-06-2007, 06:10 AM
seti, put more definition into your letters
true, go simpler, no bubble, just straight, boring letters
stim, that is fresh
dusk, i would fix up that "k" and the "s" some

i actualy got two of the same: one wit arrrows and shyt
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/taek1.jpg

and one without

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/taek2.jpg


crits......

Seti
06-06-2007, 06:20 AM
leaveout the arrows man, atleast for now...and sketch constantly, u need it, no offence but practice is wat u need...

Chulo
06-06-2007, 06:27 AM
yea i know...

Aces One
06-06-2007, 06:34 AM
yea man, just lose the arrows and go simple
seti, i like that weird lookin cube up on the top. what markers do you use for that look?
the sketch is nice, kinda hard too see but you'll see it shitloads better when you fill and shade it.

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 07:00 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1181126307_f.jpg
Some europish style...

zWizart
06-06-2007, 07:03 AM
olright.. here are my first posts on this forum.. please give me some comments so i can go on and improve myself.

http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/5215/kzsvm0.jpg


http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/3060/sayop5.jpg

Aces One
06-06-2007, 07:07 AM
the second is a nice simple, just lose the character behind it. the first is nicely drawn but i dont really like the K or the flames. not bad though

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 07:12 AM
Leave out the arrows on the first one, and keep the letters simple and a bit fatter... Second one is okay, I like the Y.

Stim
06-06-2007, 11:57 AM
I really like the way this came out
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4339/pic1070ab3.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
06-06-2007, 12:01 PM
^^yeah like crap... don't make ur letters get bigger then small until you get better... or just don't do that all together.

Stim
06-06-2007, 12:14 PM
thats cool man, I'd really like to see your tow piece a 15th time. Or maybe you can show me how good you are at dance dance revolution.

Untracked21
06-06-2007, 12:25 PM
thats a nice dusk...

Fluffy Bunnies
06-06-2007, 12:26 PM
yeah sure, I will be glad to!
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08068.jpg
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t234/ohemgeeNinjas/screen00147.jpg
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t234/ohemgeeNinjas/screen00135.jpg
and a sticker! just so I can say I posted something graff related.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08441.jpg

near
06-06-2007, 12:33 PM
that growing piece looks like fecies...the A on its own is alright but the other letters are :S...also the pen in the fill (all the black writing) looks particularily bad...sry to be so negative

normally dont do this but i doubt ppl check back pages and i didnt get anything on it...also for the record i dont steal granola bars from infants....often
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010071.jpg

Stim
06-06-2007, 12:36 PM
thats alright, it's not like i respect your opinion anyway.

Stim
06-06-2007, 12:39 PM
alright bbys, time for me to head out. Keep leaving love <333

tonentink
06-06-2007, 12:43 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2500/savage1yq7.jpg

aOt

near
06-06-2007, 12:56 PM
thats alright, it's not like i respect your opinion anyway.

then why do you post on here and ask for crits if you dont listen to what other people say, its not like your stuff is eye candy...leave that shit at home if you arent looking for crits i sure as fuck dont wanna see it

savage your S 3d is off at the bottom i think but i never do 3d so what do i know, now that i look more parts may be off....i like your G and E though

hungr
06-06-2007, 01:10 PM
near fights grizzly bears for fun

littlerocky
06-06-2007, 01:13 PM
savage i liek that jsut try keeping all the letters the same size.


bump. littlerocky, a throw should not have more then 3 colors TOPS. popshots, i actually like it, not 2 much to say, keep going. seize do u use bars?

.....umm that throw doesnt have more then 3 colors alive?..unless your calling the outline a color?

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8461/bombsy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3076/newyh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
quote]

and can i get some crits on that bottom pencil sketch one?...should i continue with it or does it have no potential??...i really dont wanna waste my time so. thanks

Eeyore
06-06-2007, 01:22 PM
you suck stim

i love how you wrote gay little shit in your letters, like kill kill kill and HELP ME


how fuckin gay

ticonderoga
06-06-2007, 01:26 PM
stim are u serious?.......learn some respect man

near
06-06-2007, 02:12 PM
you suck stim

i love how you wrote gay little shit in your letters, like kill kill kill and HELP ME


how fuckin gay

lol someone else caught that eh...he's so metal....

littlerocky i think what he is trying to say about the throw is that normally you wouldnt do a fill on a throw (like i mean the circles) and that if you were to use 3 colours it would be fill-colour, outline, forcefield...but its your book so do what u want o__O also that pencil sketch im gonna say doesnt have potential as there is a lack of structure and to be honest cant really make out a letter :( try "building" letters out of shapes then erasing the overlaps you will get a much cleaner look and your letters will be cute (with time)...ive seen like 8 tutorials on this already floating around the toy forum...i think sume or tricks did one that was ill have a look for it...

Fluffy Bunnies
06-06-2007, 02:14 PM
Some stuff I was doing at school<P>
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08648.jpg
<P>
I was gonna stick them after but then Wet was coming from the sky :(

amk
06-06-2007, 02:16 PM
thats alright, it's not like i respect your opinion anyway.

wanker..

Near...dope..
Fluffy...whack..:p:p:p

Socrates
06-06-2007, 02:35 PM
it is wack isnt it?

Drakula
06-06-2007, 02:40 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0076.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0077.jpg

New sketch.I think the character is alright but I'm going to fill it with one solid color soon.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 02:41 PM
that shits fucking burning throught the page near.
some quick rough draft shit for casa45.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture130.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture131.jpg
bump...

Stim
06-06-2007, 02:42 PM
you guys are so cute, sarcasm lies thick in the air. <333

P.S.- I didn't ask for crits

amk
06-06-2007, 02:43 PM
stop taking the piss...if you carnt take critisism get out...you obviously was fishing for comments or why the fuck didyou post it in the first place .??. ..

revolt92
06-06-2007, 02:43 PM
sezer - Don't like the bottom right, on the 'e' but apart from that it looks pretty solid

Drakula
06-06-2007, 02:44 PM
^Great stuff.The T character is very creative and swoe is plain but dope.Good style.

jersOneTIC
06-06-2007, 02:44 PM
i'm new here so...
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9893/003020rn2.jpg

jersOneTIC
06-06-2007, 02:45 PM
anybody have any tips on reducing the size of the pic???

Drakula
06-06-2007, 02:49 PM
If there is a resizing tool on imageshack(I don't know I've never used it)then use that.There is usually a message board size.

nero122
06-06-2007, 02:58 PM
eddi seeeeeezer hands my my my u have progressed lookin good n resize that shit dude in blk n red

Stim
06-06-2007, 03:05 PM
I'm super sorry guyz, I just take it so serious and then i get shot down and i feel so bad.

can you crit this plz?
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5113/pic1074ew1.jpg

Sumoe
06-06-2007, 03:13 PM
it is wack isnt it?

yes.

Bazer
06-06-2007, 03:19 PM
stim dont be afraid t let your letters overlap dude.

Vice
06-06-2007, 03:20 PM
thats alright, it's not like i respect your opinion anyway.

yeah i just wanted to join the quote and beat on stim crew.

NEOZ
06-06-2007, 03:24 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06062007926-001.jpg

This is one of my latest )

near
06-06-2007, 03:24 PM
that dick burns most of your other letters

syko my first piece of advice, dont write syko...or kaos...or kore...or anything played out like that

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 03:41 PM
that dick burns most of your other letters

syko my first piece of advice, dont write syko...or kaos...or kore...or anything played out like that

yah ... the whol dick things kinda weird, i say get rid of that and over lap the letters

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 03:53 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2422/domentttppcfj0.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=domentttppcfj0.jpg)

my freindds pece says doment critss?

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 03:54 PM
the pece doesnt looks bad in person but my camera make its look pretty shitty, oh well you get the basic idea odf it anyways

Stylz
06-06-2007, 03:56 PM
HEY GUYS I WAS JUST GOING THRU THE INTERNET AND I FOUND THIS COOL WEBSITE THAT TEACHES YOU HOW TO TAG IT HAS GOOD TECHNICS AND ALL OF THAT STUFF SO YEAH GO CHECK IT OUT!!:):):)

learngraffiti.net

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 03:58 PM
grab a razor blade and kill yo self.

Socrates
06-06-2007, 04:05 PM
word

glass
06-06-2007, 04:05 PM
hahahahaha wow that pretty much sums up bombingscience right there

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 04:06 PM
hey i was thinking of posting these in the stickers forum but decided not to. Crits?
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s10.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s3.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s6.jpg



http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s1.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s5.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/s8.jpg

Drakula
06-06-2007, 04:07 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0076.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0077.jpg

New sketch.I think the character is alright but I'm going to fill it with one solid color soon.

Any crits for this?

Kayone707
06-06-2007, 04:11 PM
^^ looks like you were the only one who took notes... looks good
__

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 04:11 PM
lose all the extensions.
you got apretty steady hand and i'm glad your using bars but try simpler letters for now. you style will progress man but go simpler. The karak aint that bad.

littlerocky
06-06-2007, 04:19 PM
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3076/newyh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
quote]

can i please get some crits on this??..is it wack or?...my scanner kinda cut out some of the pencil but whatever..not finished yet still have to finish the g and the s

Drakula
06-06-2007, 04:19 PM
Yeah,after the first comments I grudgingly started from the ground up.I started using bars and I think I've improved my style.I'll lose the boxes next time and keep everything attached to the piece.

Drakula
06-06-2007, 04:23 PM
The handstyles are alright but lose the entire piece completely.It looks like you've tryed doing that thin line wildstyle style but you just need to work on simple bar letters first.

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 04:35 PM
yah pretty much i couldnt tell but what ever, everything else isnt gay haha
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2422/domentttppcfj0.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=domentttppcfj0.jpg)

crits for my freind? click on it and itl get bigger

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 04:47 PM
yah pretty much i couldnt tell but what ever, everything else isnt gay haha
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2422/domentttppcfj0.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=domentttppcfj0.jpg)

crits for my freind? click on it and itl get bigger


Lose the fill. Ur friend isnt ready for it and it sucks anyways. The letters are ok though. Work on the letters and maybe try 3d. Just mt 2 cents

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 04:50 PM
haha allright tnaks man ill let him know

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 04:53 PM
haha allright tnaks man ill let him know

If he wants to use that fill tell him to get rid of those weird drips, and have the orange make more sense in its shape and placing. Right now some of those orange blobs on the inside are in places that they like obstruct the view of the letter.

jersOneTIC
06-06-2007, 05:13 PM
here's my sketch...again, but now resized(any crits)
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/545/003020tj7.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-06-2007, 05:16 PM
hahaha sick!!! is that toxin? or the other one.

amk
06-06-2007, 05:19 PM
Jers...your pretty good..but throw some nice bright colours in that..its all dark and gothic...yuuuk..and it makes your letters look a lil bad...those letters would look nice with sum pretty greens and blues.. !

keep it up anyways..stay around too

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 05:23 PM
here's my sketch...again, but now resized(any crits)
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/545/003020tj7.jpg
it's carnage.
i dont like the E. Lose all the extensions. From what ican see of the handstyle it's nice.

whahappen?
06-06-2007, 05:26 PM
bobmer dont do those type of drips on the sep
new tag
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2258/picture105fp5.jpg

BIGel
06-06-2007, 05:26 PM
HEY GUYS I WAS JUST GOING THRU THE INTERNET AND I FOUND THIS COOL WEBSITE THAT TEACHES YOU HOW TO TAG IT HAS GOOD TECHNICS AND ALL OF THAT STUFF SO YEAH GO CHECK IT OUT!!:):):)

learngraffiti.net

go die now.

-ShAmEE-
06-06-2007, 05:28 PM
he will neva appear on bs agen...bigels has got the power!

ZerO.
06-06-2007, 05:34 PM
Jerse the carnage character is pretty dope
whahappen - pretty dope handstyle, I'd lose the face at the end though
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6452/0606071720ec2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my first real attempt at doing a straight letter / burner.. crits? any help on what I can do with my O?

Stim
06-06-2007, 05:35 PM
sep- the handstyle stickies look cool
drakula- The letters are decent, i'm not really feeling the character though
jersOne- Carnage is one of my favorite stories in all of the spiderman comics, I think that looks pretty awesome too
whahappen- is that a green crayon you used for that handstyle?

Alright so, no dicks, no pentegrams, no 3 ft spaces between my letters. That doesn't mean they don't suck but. crits?

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6106/pic1075gx8.jpg

[breakout]-azer
06-06-2007, 05:36 PM
zero- like it bar the o i just aint feelign it.

stim i liek it except the red thing going throught the middle

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 05:39 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1181126307_f.jpg
Some europish style...

Comments?

whahappen?
06-06-2007, 05:43 PM
g sucks^
better ones
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/5527/picture107nf5.jpg
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/9081/picture106vq5.jpg

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 05:48 PM
I can't do anything with G :/ I hate that letter...

Bazer
06-06-2007, 05:49 PM
then change it to another letter. duh.

Stim
06-06-2007, 05:49 PM
think of it like a "C", then add a little extention to it. Maybe that helps?

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 05:51 PM
sep- the handstyle stickies look cool
drakula- The letters are decent, i'm not really feeling the character though
jersOne- Carnage is one of my favorite stories in all of the spiderman comics, I think that looks pretty awesome too
whahappen- is that a green crayon you used for that handstyle?

Alright so, no dicks, no pentegrams, no 3 ft spaces between my letters. That doesn't mean they don't suck but. crits?

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6106/pic1075gx8.jpg
it looks a hundred times better id say try some 3d but im not good do i dunno

amk
06-06-2007, 05:51 PM
-azer;780171']zero- like it bar the o i just aint feelign it.

stim i liek it except the red thing going throught the middle

you shudlnt be concentrating on that Red Thing going thru the middle..
it shud be the LETTERS you conecntrate on..

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 05:51 PM
here's my sketch...again, but now resized(any crits)
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/545/003020tj7.jpg
looks sick...

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 05:53 PM
Well, that's what I do, but I need way more practice with the g...

Stim
06-06-2007, 05:56 PM
it doesn't take much concentration to put a pink thing through it.

amk
06-06-2007, 06:09 PM
Stim..you beggining to get annyoing..i was talking to Breakout Azer..who ebelive it or not..didnt do that sketch...he said that he didnt like the red thing...so i said...fuck the red thing..and look at the letters in your peice...so what im basically saying .. is do what i was told ... drop your markers..lock them away..and concetrate on your letters...and quit being a cockey cunt..thank you

Shouts too..
Tricks..
Teze..
Near
Alive
Bigel
Jank
Whappen
Jers
Shamee
Trash
Socrates
Eske


im out peace...

glass
06-06-2007, 06:11 PM
I can't do anything with G :/ I hate that letter...

haha yeah G's can be a real bitch

Stim
06-06-2007, 06:15 PM
Ras

A.) I misunderstood what you said

B.) Don't have a little fit for no reason, i'm not even going to start beefing with you.

sketch3
06-06-2007, 06:15 PM
Stim..you beggining to get annyoing..i was talking to Breakout Azer..who ebelive it or not..didnt do that sketch...he said that he didnt like the red thing...so i said...fuck the red thing..and look at the letters in your peice...so what im basically saying .. is do what i was told ... drop your markers..lock them away..and concetrate on your letters...and quit being a cockey cunt..thank you

Shouts too..
Tricks..
Teze..
Near
Alive
Bigel
Jank
Whappen
Jers
Shamee
Trash
Socrates
Eske


im out peace...


wat..wat about meeeeee? im hurt

AteskOne
06-06-2007, 06:15 PM
honestly, why does it matter if the kid wants to color his shit...let him. he's not hurting himself or anyone else. in fact, he's learning better methods of coloring, shading, and learning color schemes, which if you ask me are improtant. he should concentrate on letters...but not so much that he blocks out everything else that is necessary to graffiti.

whahappen?
06-06-2007, 06:16 PM
K REPOST FOR CRITS
better ones
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/5527/picture107nf5.jpg
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/9081/picture106vq5.jpg

*Wing*
06-06-2007, 06:26 PM
These are quite unreadable...

amk
06-06-2007, 06:26 PM
honestly, why does it matter if the kid wants to color his shit...let him. he's not hurting himself or anyone else. in fact, he's learning better methods of coloring, shading, and learning color schemes, which if you ask me are improtant. he should concentrate on letters...but not so much that he blocks out everything else that is necessary to graffiti.

wow..
this seriously could be one of the wisest things you ever said on here..:o:o:rolleyes::eek::)
just a shame you dont have the graffiti intself to back it up...:(
no beef Atesk..im just saying..
you exams are over right..?..
upload some of your graffiti..

i was supposed to be out..
but what Atesk said shocked me in a good way..:eek::cool:

PEACE

oh and a one-off shout to Sketch

Vice
06-06-2007, 06:41 PM
lets stop all this unnecessary childish bickering and get back to the topic of this thread please. no point in continuing all this...

bouncingsoul
06-06-2007, 06:52 PM
I read "G's are a bitch"

I love G's- that is all

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0785.jpg

urge
06-06-2007, 07:04 PM
that growing piece looks like fecies...the A on its own is alright but the other letters are :S...also the pen in the fill (all the black writing) looks particularily bad...sry to be so negative

normally dont do this but i doubt ppl check back pages and i didnt get anything on it...also for the record i dont steal granola bars from infants....often
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010071.jpg

Everything in that piece is dope near, i tried finding something i dont like and well make its the X in the E but even that iam pretty down with. nice colours

dizzle_d
06-06-2007, 07:12 PM
Jers- Thats pretty nice, its hard to see the letters though when its all black. imo...
whahappen- thos handies look pretty nice, maybe get rid of the star though...
bouncing- that bottom piece is insanely nice.

First ones a few days old, the rest are new.(got rid of the shit extensions)
thanks for the crits Jank, and Amk...
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg
something^
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8025/img1217hw8.jpg
guhh.^
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8606/img1221en0.jpg
no colors, no 3d... I'll color it soon.
constructive crits...? thanks

rayseone
06-06-2007, 07:16 PM
your getting alot better man, good work

dizzle_d
06-06-2007, 07:18 PM
thanks, I've been workin on it. :)

BIGel
06-06-2007, 07:51 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/157/a/8/my_towing_bill_from_the_party_by_bigel.jpg

dizzle_d
06-06-2007, 07:57 PM
thats mad hot Bigel..

eMJayBee
06-06-2007, 08:02 PM
Bouncingsoul- nice
Dizzle-d-The coloring is very good, your 'e' looks a lil weird, maybe make the middle smaller than the top and bottom
Bigel- Very nice

I dont know if I should post this here, but can I get some critz on this
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture005.jpg

sex without condoms
06-06-2007, 08:08 PM
bored in english
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg

Total Eclipse of the heart.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010023-2.jpg

random doodles
new K for throwie?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010022-3.jpg

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 08:13 PM
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5298/sankentducepece1fn4.th.jpg (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentducepece1fn4.jpg)
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1108/sankentducepece2tc0.th.jpg (http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentducepece2tc0.jpg)

just some bars ...i think???the pictures make the colors look really bad, it says ank wich is just part of sankent

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 08:16 PM
Bouncingsoul- nice
Dizzle-d-The coloring is very good, your 'e' looks a lil weird, maybe make the middle smaller than the top and bottom
Bigel- Very nice

I dont know if I should post this here, but can I get some critz on this
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture005.jpg
looks good, but like everyone says to me keep the thicknes relativly the same

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 08:25 PM
eMJayBee thats really nice. Everything about it. I know these letters are completely bitten from some random graffiti alphabet, but it started as a joke and i liked the way i did it. Crits?(and dont say the letters are bitten, i already know)
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/spec.jpg

ESKE one
06-06-2007, 08:27 PM
teze exchange sorry if its not good enuff
ill do another one if not

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs_054.jpg
bump

so far thos page is sick shout to everyone

Stim
06-06-2007, 08:28 PM
All the work so far has been good, I like emjaybees alot. I never saw any stuff from you before.

So I spent like 4 minutes on one letter.
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/417/pic1080pn7.jpg
I thought it came out pretty good, I could be wrong though. I'm trying to learn letter structure and stuff.

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 08:32 PM
nice work stim. That is simple, clean.
Esk idk about that exchange with Teze mayb u should change the T and the first E, they look sloppy.

dizzle_d
06-06-2007, 08:33 PM
stim I actually like that A a lot. nice.
everything on this page is pretty sick.

capo93
06-06-2007, 08:34 PM
bored in english
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg

Total Eclipse of the heart.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010023-2.jpg

random doodles
new K for throwie?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010022-3.jpg

dam bumpin on the same page whatever im lovin this new style man looks hot not digging the new k for the trow all that much tho your other looked better

Captain
06-06-2007, 08:35 PM
stim, it's good but.... it has cancer...

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 09:06 PM
quick outline. I think i need to fix the E.
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/specoutline.jpg

something my friend did i thought i would share
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/Untitled-1.jpg

kosher
06-06-2007, 09:10 PM
sketched this just a minute ago. took about 5 minutes simiple pencil. i can do stuff like this decently but i can't learn how to diversify (add ons, fills, interesting shit in my 3d when i do 3d) if anyone was ever at this stage, what should i learn next and how should i learn it most effectively? anyways here's my sketch. crits please.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0001.jpg

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 09:18 PM
eMJayBee thats really nice. Everything about it. I know these letters are completely bitten from some random graffiti alphabet, but it started as a joke and i liked the way i did it. Crits?(and dont say the letters are bitten, i already know)
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/spec.jpg
it looks good but the letters have alot of space in between them loose that and itll look sick

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 09:20 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1108/sankentducepece2tc0.th.jpg (http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentducepece2tc0.jpg)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5315/sankentducepece1xp9.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sankentducepece1xp9.jpg)

2 questions... 1)are those bars, and 2) ctrits?


i knowthe fill doesnt look good but its the camera it looks alot better in my black book

glass
06-06-2007, 09:27 PM
Saoten:yeah i guess those are a more complex version or bar letters, if you look at mine it is the bare bones of bar lettering. in any case i think their pretty decent, nice and simple with a little flare. keep it up.

just messing around with G's. what do you guys think about the structure?

http://i18.tinypic.com/6bb9glf.jpg

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 09:32 PM
it looks good but the letters have alot of space in between them loose that and itll look sick

haha yea i couldnt fix that i just basically copied and pasted the letters from a picture and made them lighter, so wen i tried to like overlap it didnt work the letter b4 it just disappeared. That sketch isnt for real just testing out like 3d styles and backgrounds.

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 09:41 PM
haha yea i couldnt fix that i just basically copied and pasted the letters from a picture and made them lighter, so wen i tried to like overlap it didnt work the letter b4 it just disappeared. That sketch isnt for real just testing out like 3d styles and backgrounds.
hahah i like the 3d it looks good, and the back rounds not bad...id ditch the little like spikey things though

Bomber444
06-06-2007, 09:59 PM
hahah i like the 3d it looks good, and the back rounds not bad...id ditch the little like spikey things though

Yea I dnt like those alot. Dam Bigel thats sick. All ur shit is. Color that

ZerO.
06-06-2007, 10:00 PM
.

TESTER
06-06-2007, 10:02 PM
i heart you bigel thats beautiful

BIGel
06-06-2007, 10:04 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/257941214.jpg

kosher
06-06-2007, 10:04 PM
i sketched these during school this past week, they're all kinda sloppy, didn't put much time into them. crits? p.s i seem to be in a funk where all my stuff looks the same over and over, any suggestions on what i can do to diversify my stuff a bit? anyway here they are...
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0005.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0004.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0003.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0002.jpg

acidconceptone
06-06-2007, 10:09 PM
KOSHER: its sick
GLASS: i like it.

Sumoe
06-06-2007, 10:11 PM
first off, it's not a burner...and I used to have an "O" on my name, and trashed it because I hate "O"'s, so I can't help you with that...

basically, use bars, learn your letter strucure, which isn't all that bad right now, and just practice, practice, practice.

Edit: directed at ZerO.

BORG
06-06-2007, 10:27 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture005.jpg
Don't worry about the thickness of your letters, if its all the same thickness your shits gunna look funky, emjb, keep that shit up man, real clean

~Saoten154~
06-06-2007, 10:28 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/257941214.jpg
dude seriously how long have ou been writing cause your ridaculass

urge
06-06-2007, 10:40 PM
zero, it looks ok just work on making the letters straighter and more level, also fill out the letters a little more they look really skimpy. also dont try and rock that type of 3D right now, do a simple side shade.

bloodlandmoney
06-06-2007, 10:45 PM
thats tight add some color and 3d and your in there ... its pretty unique

sex without condoms
06-06-2007, 11:04 PM
bored in english
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg

Total Eclipse of the heart.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010023-2.jpg

random doodles
new K for throwie?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010022-3.jpg
yet again.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 11:09 PM
liked the old k better.
always liked your style except the end of the r looks like a deflating balloon.

Aces One
06-06-2007, 11:10 PM
BigEl - god damn
sex - i like your letters in "toatal eclipse of the heart"....what a fucking name....

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-06-2007, 11:13 PM
sorry for the double post.\
bigel- god damn. you have such a style of your own i cant even crit it. Keep it up kid.

Aces One
06-06-2007, 11:25 PM
sorry for the double post as well...but i just got these pictures cause i dont have a camera and i scanned em at my friends...personally i think they both kidna suck..but what do you guys think?

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8453/deansgraf001eb1.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/6205/deansgraf002dt3.jpg

Sumoe
06-06-2007, 11:31 PM
same as you...gettin' there though.

bouncingsoul
06-07-2007, 12:52 AM
Some throwies, a character, and some highlighter boredom

K's kinda funky in my throw... I like it a bit though. My W needs work and my S... Oh god my S

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0792.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0793.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0795.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0796.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 01:15 AM
nice shit cept the K.
some more t throwies.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture184.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture185.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture187.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture188.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture190.jpg
a handy
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture189.jpg
a piece for my homeboy.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture191-1.jpg

freakeenyc
06-07-2007, 01:32 AM
bigel..emjay..effin awesome shit..
blood stick to that last pic..and work on it...
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5247/cimg6785vr8.jpg
work in prg for exchange

Chalk
06-07-2007, 01:34 AM
bigEl - dope as usual
bouncingsoul - really likin that throw you got goin on. but i would say make the last two letters the same size.
edsezhands - i think the 3rd one up from the bottom is best of the lot.

and fresh from me. what a capital H? and a two color fill woah i went crazy.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg
oh yeah and ran out of room for K as usual. I really gotta start drawing smaller.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 01:36 AM
bigEl - dope as usual
bouncingsoul - really likin that throw you got goin on. but i would say make the last two letters the same size.
edsezhands - i think the 3rd one up from the bottom is best of the lot.

and fresh from me. what a capital H? and a two color fill woah i went crazy.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg
oh yeah and ran out of room for K as usual. I really gotta start drawing smaller.
a different K and you have yourself a nice little burner.

true21
06-07-2007, 02:28 AM
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/true.jpg
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/true2.jpg

Chulo
06-07-2007, 02:30 AM
aye true, do bars with your simple stuff, i think u should scrap ya whole style and start from the bottom, unless u already at the bottom........ bars wit ya simples, dont do throws unless u got ya simple letters down...etc

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 02:31 AM
restart
simple basic block letters.
use a pencil eraser ruler and than you can move on to markers.
look at your letters on your keyboard do those exact ones over and over and over and over.
you kno whad im sayin?

true21
06-07-2007, 02:40 AM
chulo wat u mean bars with simples
edwaerd sezer hands after i got simple block letters wat next can u show me a progression sample plz!!!

fanominon
06-07-2007, 02:48 AM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5446/img0355nr4.jpghttp://img77.imageshack.us/img77/2976/img0357ip0.jpghttp://img292.imageshack.us/img292/8840/img0354xo6.jpg
tell me whatcha think

fanominon
06-07-2007, 02:49 AM
oh sorry bout the size my first post haha

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 02:49 AM
go to the new to graff thread man.
look through there.

Chulo
06-07-2007, 02:53 AM
I don't like the "f" in ne of the posts, except for that, everything else is dope

true, here's a quick and crappy example

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/truexp.jpg

Bazer
06-07-2007, 02:53 AM
true21 simples means dont do one letter wildstyles like Funk Dokta bazer6.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/l.jpg

nah im kiddin man.. just do normal letters with a little more flava nahmean?
like this
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0670.jpg
fagnominon edit your stupid post those flicks are to big!

true21
06-07-2007, 02:58 AM
wats wrong wit the ones i posted their simple

fanominon
06-07-2007, 02:59 AM
im a noob bro how you make em smaller?

Chulo
06-07-2007, 03:00 AM
If done wit the bars u gonna have more understanding of how the letters can bend to look right

Bazer
06-07-2007, 03:01 AM
umm........ id rather go to sleep right now than show u.. but if nobody tells you by tonight then pm me and ill show you how by tomorow morning.

fanominon
06-07-2007, 03:03 AM
i got school in the mornin fool

spiller
06-07-2007, 03:04 AM
wats wrong wit the ones i posted their simple


theres nothing "wrong" with them.

the structure and basic form is just kinda fucked.

youll get better though.

practice practice practice.

true21
06-07-2007, 03:05 AM
who u talkin to 1nOnly Baze

Chulo
06-07-2007, 03:05 AM
i got school in the mornin fool
haha u still got school:p

true21
06-07-2007, 03:10 AM
spiller wat should i do to improve cus i wanna hit up a wall already and i cant hit it up wit sum wack shit

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 03:13 AM
NOOO!!!!! no walls for you senyor!! if ur gonna do walls jus get ur tag down and tag but u aint gonna put sum blocks on a wall

spiller
06-07-2007, 03:15 AM
when i first started i did alot of bubble letters.

basic throwies arent too hard.

another thing is just work on keeping all your letter symetrical(same size/distance apart, all that shit)

spiller
06-07-2007, 03:17 AM
and you might want to wait a while to do a wall.

you dont want to put something up and then have people think your total shit for the rest of your days.

fanominon
06-07-2007, 03:18 AM
http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0362ge3.jpg

http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0362ge3.jpg

http://img514.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0030gh3.jpg

last one is from a previoius name "fade"

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 03:19 AM
ok this is wat u need to be doin, this is 3 mo. ago when i wrote hayz in the begining... nice and simple
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz317.jpg

fanominon
06-07-2007, 03:21 AM
oh and ya im still in school chulo i think most people in this thread are

true21
06-07-2007, 03:22 AM
i could do simple but den wat

fanominon
06-07-2007, 03:22 AM
you talkin to me?

spiller
06-07-2007, 03:25 AM
keep it simple man!

thats how you get better.

block letters can be fire if you do em right.

heres something to kinda show you what i mean about staying simple.http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m40/returnofthefly138/Xsimple.jpg

Dusk07
06-07-2007, 03:26 AM
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/16800/2005933058743681784_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005933058743681784)

Got the main style of letters down now just tunning them to make them right.

crits...

p.s extentions are wack i know they acutally say S on one side and L on the other for sielnt but loud....im still really weak on extentions.

fanominon
06-07-2007, 03:29 AM
yo dusk work on your k and take out the extensions and you got a good simple piece homie

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 03:30 AM
dusk-dont do the crazy ass addons yet...

true- ive bin doin straight simples for 4 mo.
MY VERY FIRST SKETCH
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz315.jpg
AND THE LATEST
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0013.jpg
its all about progression... do straight simples nuthin else ok?

Dusk07
06-07-2007, 03:35 AM
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/16800/2005933058743681784_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005933058743681784)
i know i was just bored lol. like i said ignore the weak ass extentions..do u like the letters? and also can some one help me out with a dam k..

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 03:42 AM
i wrote kraer for a while and wat i did wit tha k's is extend the bottom leg of the k up towards the top of the k and drop it, comprende?

true21
06-07-2007, 03:59 AM
ok heres simple block letters
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/060707_0050.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 04:01 AM
now make them better by making them straighter.
than keep adding curves and angles slowly but surely this is not an overnight process.

spiller
06-07-2007, 04:02 AM
^^^better.

keep on doing those for a while, then add soem bends and overlap and stuff.

true21
06-07-2007, 04:02 AM
yep i know

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 04:05 AM
haha teze ur sig is so griiiiimmey

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 04:09 AM
thank you.

true21
06-07-2007, 05:10 AM
heres a kwik n simple progression piece
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/prog.jpg

Chalk
06-07-2007, 08:21 AM
true - you cannot rush this stuff. take your time. i spend almost the same amount of time on my simples as i do my other stuff. here is a simpe i did a few days ago as an example and something i did last night.

if it still isn't making sense i'll can whip you up something when i get back from work later.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg

trashhh
06-07-2007, 08:32 AM
both very nice chalk.. maybe work on the K on the 2nd one but theyre nice

sketch3
06-07-2007, 11:21 AM
dymm i didnt relise u were quite so illin chalk

dizzle_d
06-07-2007, 11:28 AM
Dusk- work on that S and K
anteup- Looks good
True- keep working on those simples
Chalk- thats so fresh, keep it up

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8025/img1217hw8.jpg

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8606/img1221en0.jpg


constructive crits...? thanks

[breakout]-azer
06-07-2007, 11:29 AM
true - you cannot rush this stuff. take your time. i spend almost the same amount of time on my simples as i do my other stuff. here is a simpe i did a few days ago as an example and something i did last night.

if it still isn't making sense i'll can whip you up something when i get back from work later.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg


chalk- i like t he 1st one nice simple with realy good fill and 3d and the secound one is equaly as good i just dont like the fill but that is just my preferance all good tho.

00-made-00
06-07-2007, 11:30 AM
Yeah Chalk that second one is dope mann.
One of my newer sketchizzles.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00890.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
06-07-2007, 11:30 AM
reading a book and I decided to do a character for some reason... coulda been better but I was tired and hungry.... it's suppose to be a yellow guy in a bunny suit
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KAR.jpg

I am lovin that chalk... the simple yet sophisticated look. looks like you got ur inspiration from Sume... I would say not to copy a lot of ideas, but just play around with the idea and then morph ur letters to the shape of ur mind.BE CREATIVE!!

Dizzle - keep it up bro, lovin the fills, maybe just make ur letters more wavey and less jaggy.

dizzle_d
06-07-2007, 11:32 AM
yoo 00- thats nice man,if theres a way to make the letters closer without making them look cramped try it
fluffy- that bunny is sexy...:)

00-made-00
06-07-2007, 11:36 AM
Chalk- just noticed tht ur c look more complex than your other letters.
Dizzle- i like they way the colours go up in stages, tht second sketchs is hot, and ill try and get my letters closer together. ill play around with em and see whats i gets.

bojangles
06-07-2007, 12:10 PM
Dusk- work on that S and K
anteup- Looks good
True- keep working on those simples
Chalk- thats so fresh, keep it up

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7555/img1214dp2.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8025/img1217hw8.jpg

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8606/img1221en0.jpg


constructive crits...? thanks

lovin these sketches! not sure about the starts/crosses on the 1st sketch though, thats it...

bojangles
06-07-2007, 12:10 PM
stars*/crosses

Fluffy Bunnies
06-07-2007, 12:16 PM
I don't think this was gonna get polled so I am just gonna post it here again...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Chump.gif
Chump

garbage down tha way
06-07-2007, 12:51 PM
Exchange with dizzzzzlllleeeee D.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/merkexchange.jpg

fluffy i usually like your style, but not feeling that one. when you look at it you just see the m.

capo93
06-07-2007, 12:58 PM
fluffy- you lost me on tht c the other letters arent bad though
garbage- it looks okay a bit weird with the erk part
made- work on your letter structure more
chalk- those are dope how about an exchange?

Sumoe
06-07-2007, 01:12 PM
Some throwies, a character, and some highlighter boredom

K's kinda funky in my throw... I like it a bit though. My W needs work and my S... Oh god my S

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0792.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0793.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0795.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0796.jpg

bump for my negro Knews.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-07-2007, 01:26 PM
damn where did you bump that... looks mad old... but props to him!

amk
06-07-2007, 02:12 PM
Garbage down the way..that E is bascially the same one that Dizzle did..
Fluffy,,,you seriosuly need to define the letters more..they look like fullstops..bars..and lil bars..

gah..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-8.jpg

any sugestions before i finalise this...i know i need to work on the K big leg..
anything else ?..

Bazer
06-07-2007, 02:14 PM
make the left bar on zee K as tall as all the othe rletters.
that side--->K

amk
06-07-2007, 02:15 PM
edit..
oh shit i know what you mean

Fluffy Bunnies
06-07-2007, 02:16 PM
I was confused when i seen that K, but now I get it... maybe try a different style, I am not likin this one.

sketch3
06-07-2007, 02:17 PM
also the leg on the m that over laps the k looks like its part of the k if ya get me

garbage down tha way
06-07-2007, 02:24 PM
Garbage down the way..that E is bascially the same one that Dizzle did..


Only mines lowercase.. I just used the same fading out concept because i couldnt think of anything else to do with it, plus its his name, not like im biting him.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-07-2007, 02:47 PM
nice shit cept the K.
some more t throwies.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture184.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture185.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture187.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture188.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture190.jpg
a handy
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture189.jpg
a piece for my homeboy.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture191-1.jpg
bump bitches.

sketch3
06-07-2007, 02:56 PM
i normally hate faces in throws but i like tha edwerd, matby cuss he looks lik elephent man

WolfBurrns
06-07-2007, 03:04 PM
I didnt even bother to finish it because the fill is so bad. Crits on the letters would be great though.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Sole.jpg

Slushi
06-07-2007, 03:24 PM
BLOOD, the structure is really poopy around the center of the B

garbage down tha way
06-07-2007, 03:25 PM
Sole- The letters are great, I like them a lot. The flame things kill the fill though. Fo sho. Add some 3d from the sides and itd look raw as hell.

Chalk
06-07-2007, 03:40 PM
I am lovin that chalk... the simple yet sophisticated look. looks like you got ur inspiration from Sume... I would say not to copy a lot of ideas, but just play around with the idea and then morph ur letters to the shape of ur mind.BE CREATIVE!!

look i don't want to start beef but this is the 2nd comment i have gotten about me lookin too much at sume. i DO like sumes shit. but i don't try to make it my own. the only thing i did 'take' from sume is the drop shadow. but the rest is all me.

amk
06-07-2007, 03:42 PM
but at the end of the day..Sume's stuff is basic wildstyle...all wildstyles look like each other

~Saoten154~
06-07-2007, 03:54 PM
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/16800/2005933058743681784_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005933058743681784)

Got the main style of letters down now just tunning them to make them right.

crits...

p.s extentions are wack i know they acutally say S on one side and L on the other for sielnt but loud....im still really weak on extentions.
get ridda all the swigally shit in the backround

Drakula
06-07-2007, 04:21 PM
Finished that last piece:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00276.jpg

And here's my latest piece:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00274.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00275.jpg

sketch3
06-07-2007, 04:40 PM
i wouldnt bother peiceing yet, just do quick pen freestyles with a ball point pen, to practice ur letters, lose all that spikey shit and the extentions..

the word for today is simpels

dizzle_d
06-07-2007, 04:40 PM
Teze- those are real nice, blood piece is good too
Sole- those are some nice simples
Drak- looking pretty good

ok so I can't seem to figure out what to do with the m. I must have drawn at least 20 of these, and the M's have all come out horrible(yeah, I've tried doing a lot of different ones...)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6420/img1227ct3.jpg
oh and forget about the extension on the bottom right corner of the M.
Any suggestions on what I should do to the M?
constructive crits...

c.n.k
06-07-2007, 04:40 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0154.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0148.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0138.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0084.jpg

c.n.k
06-07-2007, 04:41 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0184.jpg

c.n.k
06-07-2007, 04:41 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0181.jpg
even if they did lose

sketch3
06-07-2007, 04:42 PM
ur from cypher tyles right?

Socrates
06-07-2007, 04:42 PM
some wackness from yours truly
love the colors :)

drakula go simpler, just a teencie bit simpler and it might look good

glyce
06-07-2007, 04:47 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank.jpg
any crits?

WolfBurrns
06-07-2007, 04:50 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/100_0181.jpg
even if they did lose

Anaheim whooped that ASS. Haha. Sorry. To crit the piece, though, I like kinda like the letters. Could definately use some touching up though structure-wise. The Ottawa guy is so so.. The duck is just ugly.

amk
06-07-2007, 04:59 PM
lmao

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11ds.jpg

trying a philly approach

Captain
06-07-2007, 05:01 PM
Http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture188.jpg

This is hot.

cnk, Go a little simpler and try to make the basic letters flow.

glyce, Drop the arrows and background and work with bars.

drakula, work on porportion and flow before using addons.
keep practicing charachters, that bee looks like it has a little potential.

wolfburns, Keep it up. Keep practicing. you're getting there. play with different thicknesses and styles. Play with a new style every time if you can, it forces you to learn to adjust.

ras, Wrong thread, I dunno anything about philly style, but from what I've seen you've got a lot of practicing to do.

sketch3
06-07-2007, 05:18 PM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7163/crespqq0.jpg
sum quick pen freezy for another forum,

14nick
06-07-2007, 05:28 PM
this new layout is fucking confusing :S

heres something i did . i uno kinna weird. lol cirts?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypicsbri011.jpg

more buble
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypicsbri009.jpg

i got bored :P

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypicsbri013.jpg

dizzle_d
06-07-2007, 05:32 PM
Cinik..? try some simples. that first one looks alright, but I don't like the rest.
sketch- that P is hot, fix the bottom of the S. the extension at the end is to big and doesn't fit.
Bri- keep working on those.

ok so I can't seem to figure out what to do with the m. I must have drawn at least 20 of these, and the M's have all come out horrible(yeah, I've tried doing a lot of different ones...)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6420/img1227ct3.jpg
oh and forget about the extension on the bottom right corner of the M.
Any suggestions on what I should do to the M?
constructive crits..

sketch3
06-07-2007, 05:40 PM
try makeing parts of the bars in ur m thicker at one end and thiner at the other,
also my s normally looks better but i runed out of space

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 05:46 PM
dizzle- on the legs of the m dont put the little bars on the bottom facin tha same way and bring the leg of the k down, and make the length of the end of the E shorter so its the same height as the other letters
bri-ditch tha style
sketch-shorten up the tail of the S
teze- lukks tight but the hat lukks like an asshat lol

CRITS EXCHANG WIT SOCRATES/ENSR
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0014.jpg

revolt92
06-07-2007, 05:48 PM
Am i the only one that see's sume's s?

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 05:51 PM
yea cuz i never lukk at sume's s

Fluffy Bunnies
06-07-2007, 05:52 PM
more like bigels E

not worthy enough for toy thread cuz it sucks
<p>
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/DSC08650.jpg

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 05:53 PM
thas sum bullshit, show me a pic of big els E lukkin like that ok? thas right u cant find one cuz there aint one

c.n.k
06-07-2007, 05:55 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0245.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0247.jpg

dizzle_d
06-07-2007, 05:56 PM
anteup- I like it. that E is fire. work on the left side of the R, like make it go with the other letters. thanks for the crits

glyce
06-07-2007, 06:06 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank.jpg
any crits?
bump, i need some crits

freakeenyc
06-07-2007, 06:07 PM
bigel..emjay..effin awesome shit..
blood stick to that last pic..and work on it...
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5247/cimg6785vr8.jpg
work in prg for exchange
any critz?

-ShAmEE-
06-07-2007, 06:16 PM
umm...loooks. gd. just make it more tidy...and work on them letter have potenuial.

bouncingsoul
06-07-2007, 06:18 PM
true21 simples means dont do one letter wildstyles like Funk Dokta bazer6.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/l.jpg

nah im kiddin man.. just do normal letters with a little more flava nahmean?
like this
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0670.jpg
fagnominon edit your stupid post those flicks are to big!

Bump that dope simple from that one dude... Hahaha. Really though, I liked that L... It's an L right?

Characters- The second one is a bit old and I forgot about it when I did it... Finally took a flick. The first one (with the mustache) has a sign coming out of his head saying "For hire!" Yeah, I don't know

Also some "killah!" Beginning to like that word- I'll do more

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0797.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0798.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0799.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0800.jpg

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 06:29 PM
no offence but why dont u ever crit anyone?

bouncingsoul
06-07-2007, 06:32 PM
no offence but why dont u ever crit anyone?

Laziness

AnteUp
06-07-2007, 06:41 PM
haha...coooooollll...lol ummmmmm i like ya killah work, an i like the first karak, but the second one i dont like cuz i dont kno wat the concept is

knewsince.
06-07-2007, 06:55 PM
mr. soul...
this is kinda hard for me but...
can i touch you?
its just...so beautiful..

cinik, go simple with bars.
fluffy, i love you.

heres what i did today. im just trying to practice with this style

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/bms.jpg

Chalk
06-07-2007, 07:18 PM
tried to rework that last piece a little i feel like i fucked up the K more
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat_2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg