Blackbooks

[knewsince.]

mr. soul...
this is kinda hard for me but...
can i touch you?
its just...so beautiful..

cinik, go simple with bars.
fluffy, i love you.

heres what i did today. im just trying to practice with this style

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/bms.jpg

[Chalk]

tried to rework that last piece a little i feel like i fucked up the K more
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat_2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg

[knewsince.]

give crits b4 u get crits
law of the forum

[true21]

true - you cannot rush this stuff. take your time. i spend almost the same amount of time on my simples as i do my other stuff. here is a simpe i did a few days ago as an example and something i did last night.

if it still isn't making sense i'll can whip you up something when i get back from work later.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg

wats do u think i should improve or wat

[glass]

love that coloring chalk

[Vice]

love everything about it hahaha

[sketch3]

just relised how clean u are chalk

[Captain]

chalk, i'd say to variate your letters a bit more, and start from scratch with the 'k'.

[AnteUp]

CRITS EXCHANG WIT SOCRATES/ENSR
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0014.jpg
chalk-nice an cleeeaaannn, work on tha k, an wat do u use for the highlights?
knewsince-lukks gud keep usin blocks

[Chalk]

true - just do some really simple letters like that blue one i did
i only used a ruler to make sure all the bottoms are all aligned you should be able to draw really nice rectangle letters before contorting them any.

[rayseone]

chalk - clean as fuck good work mate, work on your k tho

ante - s is best letter, ifluenced by sume maybe, not saying a bit im just saying i see some influence there, work on the R.

bouncing - fresh as always - loving the characters

knewsinse - be cleaner and lose the extension on the right of the S

random school simple cuz i was bored
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/2161/chumpylt6.jpg

[sketch3]

fix the flow on ur a, dont know why but the top bit sets the whole peice off, or maybe juss cuss its the only lower case letter

[~Saoten154~]

does anyone know where the casa and amkah battle is ? i wanted to see it

[knewsince.]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2554

[Chalk]

fix the flow on ur a, dont know why but the top bit sets the whole peice off, or maybe juss cuss its the only lower case letter

I think it's his R. it's small in comparison to the rest of the letters.

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000a6f81e9/1/40/XEHIaayR6j_kNBsAASoQD-3-YxicjbJF.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/n4c2MSNK6z9sNAukktxm81tAvLYkS2c4?referrer=hlnk)


crits?
chalk...i love da coloring and letters dat shit is clean

[glass]

more: dude go back and work on simple letters and slowly progress to bars. best advice i can give you.

[~Saoten154~]

i cant figure out how to make an s with bars...any hepl its annoying the shit outa me

[sketch3]

sick get a match, ignite it and bring that 'peice' into contact with the flame, wait until it is completly burnt. thermol decomposition is a bitch i know.

[kosher]

did this in class in about 5 min. crits please.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0006.jpg

[knewsince.]

SICK, YOU SORRY DISGRACEFUL FRACTION OF A MAGGOT!
heres the best advice anyone can give you,
dont bite graffiticreator.net
just dont.

[BORG]

this is a simple piece i did yesterday for my friend who passed away 2 days ago, if you don't like it please don't say a thing

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6686/ripnickay0.jpg

[sketch3]

did this in class in about 5 min. crits please.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0006.jpg
make all ur letters the same size, then sort out the difference thickness of ur s

[kosher]

make all ur letters the same size, then sort out the difference thickness of ur s

i'm not going for consistency

[sketch3]

yea but that s jusy looks deformed, if ur gunna swich ur ish up do it properly

[dizzle_d]

Morn- I'm sorry about your friend. I really like that piece

[BORG]

thanks dizzle, really appreciate it for hard times like these

[Bazer]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000a6f81e9/1/40/XEHIaayR6j_kNBsAASoQD-3-YxicjbJF.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/n4c2MSNK6z9sNAukktxm81tAvLYkS2c4?referrer=hlnk)


crits?
chalk...i love da coloring and letters dat shit is clean
You'se a beat biter
graff creator style taker
I'll tell you to face, you ain't nothing shit but a faker

[dizzle_d]

anytime man, I know how you feel, just had two of my friends pass within the past couple of months. R.I.P

[MUSEone]

Ya bro, srry to hear about that. Nice piece though. And I just noticed ur from NC? Where at man?

[sketch3]

You'se a beat biter
graff creator style taker
I'll tell you to face, you ain't nothing shit but a faker


get out the way yo geat yo, a lili bitter just got clocked, ***** we hit em up

[Vice]

yeah feel better, im sure everything will be fine and in all honesty, that piece is very good. im sure everything will work out just fine. my best wishes.

[BORG]

apex, you from here also?

[MUSEone]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000a6f81e9/1/40/XEHIaayR6j_kNBsAASoQD-3-YxicjbJF.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/n4c2MSNK6z9sNAukktxm81tAvLYkS2c4?referrer=hlnk)


crits?
chalk...i love da coloring and letters dat shit is clean

Damn dude, u bit the shit outta this one, u basically just permanently ruined ur graff. image.

Yea man, im from the norf cack area lol Around where is that at?

[BORG]

i'm from apex, surrounding raleigh

my friend is the guy who died in the cary pond
not much detail have been released about it though because he had a seizure/heart attack, fell over the bridge, hit his head on a rock, and drowned

shits fucked up

[MUSEone]

Ya know where Asheville is? Damn dude i actually heard about that. :\ I know how ya feel, about a yr ago my friend died in a car crash because some dumbass tourist going to fast and looking at the fucking trees changing colors instead of the road. Sucks man. I feel ya.

[BORG]

thanks everyone for your support, really appreciated, im out for tonight

[MUSEone]

Yo man, one question b4 u leave? Wat markers are u using in all of ur pieces?

[Vice]

omg thats terrible. my sister not that long ago last a friend too. she was snow tubing and hit a rock, fell off the tube. probobly broke her neck.if im only making it worse im sorry just tell me to stop and i will. well feel better dude.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

this is a simple piece i did yesterday for my friend who passed away 2 days ago, if you don't like it please don't say a thing

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6686/ripnickay0.jpg
I like.

[Sick!]

muse
if ur asking me i use touch twins and sharpies

[Vice]

hahaha no hes not... hes asking borg.

[kosher]

question for chalk what pens do YOU use cause i'm liking the cleanness of your pieces

[spag]

BORG, that's a real nice piece. simplicity.
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9666/img0221am1.jpg
ignore that ugly blob on the c. whiteout ftw.
crits on cert?

[~Saoten154~]

allright i still havent figured out how everyone makes the lighting lines, you know the white ones i dont get how they make them white with all these fills...answeres???

[~Saoten154~]

its not bad, its really simple but i mean theres nothin really wrong with it

[spag]

allright i still havent figured out how everyone makes the lighting lines, you know the white ones i dont get how they make them white with all these fills...answeres???


i've heard people say meanstreaks but i'm not positive. maybe a white paint marker? experiment dat shitt.

[ESKE one]

got some wall plans
need advice

gonna paint this one outside
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs055.jpg

and this on in my bed room
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs056.jpg

way cha think really need some crits

[sketch3]

dont paint those, specily if u gotta live with it, get better first

[Samp1e]

little bit early to be painting, methinks.

[bouncingsoul]

lol

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0802.jpg

[BORG]

allright i still havent figured out how everyone makes the lighting lines, you know the white ones i dont get how they make them white with all these fills...answeres???

for all those out there like me, no cash for nice white paint pens, draw out the portions of the pieces where you'd like the white to be, color the pice and leave those untouched, erase pencil marks, and it just is

muse1- i use a shitty set of 50 markers from crayola actually, highlighters, colored ball point and jel pens, and the few paint markers i have

[ESKE one]

borg now and days people dont need cash to get fancy white paint pens wen we have hand and pockets lol but wat ever suits you

and not to be a smartass but i wasnt gonna paint the piece were everyone was gonna see it; me and my crew got a spot no one knows about i was gonna paint it there

[Seek139]

shouldnt paint in your house or near your house...famous words you should live by dont shit where you sleep

[hhhhhhh]

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/PDRM0185.jpg

first sketch of some what of a wild style? crits plzz

I know the letter size is wack

[BORG]

borg now and days people dont need cash to get fancy white paint pens wen we have hand and pockets lol but wat ever suits you


man, i've been homebound for the past year due to anxiety, no job, ect.
drunk driver hit my car man

[Bomber444]

hhhhhh- Work on simples. You arent ready for color or anything else yet. Im sure this is what everyone else will tell you. Simples...

[Vice]

ouch.

[BOKAone]

make all ur letters the same size, then sort out the difference thickness of ur s
firstly the s is prolly the best part of the sketch, and secondly ur not one to be giving tips on flow and consistency, the last few things u posted are lackluster in both areas at best....which is part of the problem with the crits system in this board.....people who can hardly form bars and rip off graf creator are trying to give hints to people who dont need their help, im not specifically saying i dont need help but we need some of the obviously less toy writers in here trying to encorage those people showing potential to be greater, and if u cant post something as good if not better than a sketch ur gunna trash on shut ur mouth

[Chalk]

question for chalk what pens do YOU use cause i'm liking the cleanness of your pieces

i use a micron #1 and prisma markers.

[Seek139]

firstly the s is prolly the best part of the sketch, and secondly ur not one to be giving tips on flow and consistency, the last few things u posted are lackluster in both areas at best....which is part of the problem with the crits system in this board.....people who can hardly form bars and rip off graf creator are trying to give hints to people who dont need their help, im not specifically saying i dont need help but we need some of the obviously less toy writers in here trying to encorage those people showing potential to be greater, and if u cant post something as good if not better than a sketch ur gunna trash on shut ur mouth

You should take everything on here with a grain of salt bro..

[role]

tried to rework that last piece a little i feel like i fucked up the K more
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat_2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_splat.jpg

i really love where your going with this stuff, these look a lot like where my simples are going....
just some observation, it looks like you're great at the CHAL, the c+l and h+a pair up very nicely, but it seems like the K throws of the symmetry and the consistency - the way you do the top bar on the K makes sense completely, but it just doesn't look like it fits right with everything else in the sketch
props though, i love your sketches. paint them everywhere!

[Sumoe]

Nice shit, Chalk...your "K"s are a little fucked up though.

[Sumoe]

lol

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0802.jpg

lol...that's my name!

[inkbits]

your parents named you hell yeah?. Chalk that green one is nice man.

[bouncingsoul]

your parents named you hell yeah?. Chalk that green one is nice man.

Hahahaha

[FenoneTdB]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/liams025.jpg


definatly feelin that style^^bouncing

[Sumoe]

your parents named you hell yeah?. Chalk that green one is nice man.

No, douche.

:)

[true21]

is this simple enuff
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/simple.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

not really.

[true21]

why isnt

[spiller]

^^^^yesh it is.

now practice.

[true21]

the same style of letter

[true21]

............n wat next

[Chulo]

do this for about 2 years then maybe u can start addin arrows and shiftin the letters

[inkbits]

............n wat next

It's a decent simple, T is abit overweight though. Start bending the letters slightly would be next man.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11088605.jpg

[~Saoten154~]

i've heard people say meanstreaks but i'm not positive. maybe a white paint marker? experiment dat shitt.
allright thanks dude

[dim]

got some wall plans
need advice

gonna paint this one outside
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs055.jpg

and this on in my bed room
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs056.jpg

way cha think really need some crits
your lines are a little shakey

[-ShAmEE-]

is this simple enuff
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/simple.jpg

try and move letters around and making a simple style. that u like...like bounce has a simple style.

[d_g]

True, nice simples, that's a good place to start. Teaches you a lot about letter structure, proportion, bar/stroke proportion. Watch the bottome of the 'U', it gets a little thin there when it turns from the left arm to the right, at the bottom. Try and make the horizontal bars of your 'E' all the same, to match the rest of your letters. You're on the right track, inkbits example is a good next step up.

[sketch3]

true thicken the bottom of ur u



http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7163/crespqq0.jpg
sum quick pen freezy for another forum,


CRITS

[-ShAmEE-]

nice P...work on that S...

[14nick]

-kash i dont like that A
-More. go back to simples.. keyboard letters like this M O R E

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00278.jpg

I might add some more things later.Crits?

[spag]

BORG, that's a real nice piece. simplicity.
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9666/img0221am1.jpg
ignore that ugly blob on the c. whiteout ftw.
crits on cert?

drakula, move the letters closer. or if not put somethin like a karak in between the r and a. or angle them together.

[[breakout]-azer]

drak- great 3d but i think u should put the letters closer together . also keep the angle of all the letters the same.

spag- i like it. not sure bout the outline tho i dont think it goes


crits?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/1175980207a4617205394l.jpg



http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/1175980207a4617205759l.jpg

[sketch3]

u have to give crits if u want them

[GAUGE]

how do you add pic to you profile

[Degausserr x]

gauge stop fuckin posting in these threads to figure shit out. correct me if im wrong but that doesnt relate to toy black books. figure shit out just go to USER CP!

[ChRoMa 11820]

-azer;782221']drak- great 3d but i think u should put the letters closer together . also keep the angle of all the letters the same.

spag- i like it. not sure bout the outline tho i dont think it goes


crits?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/1175980207a4617205394l.jpg



http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/1175980207a4617205759l.jpg
Ur 3d is all fucked up i think u should trace those letters and practice the 3d
even if u practice one at a time

keep all lettrs the same size too

[[breakout]-azer]

cheers 4 the crits. i do regret putting the 3d on they looked alot better with out the 3d. any constructive crits on da letters at all?

[amk]

Breakout aZER...dont listen to Chromo...you dont need 3d at this stage...you shud be looking at your letters hard...drawing them with no colours / bump bits blah all that shit..

ima do a fully blown peice soon..
i aint sketched for awhile...

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

drakula, move the letters closer. or if not put somethin like a karak in between the r and a. or angle them together.
Spag-Don't make the 3D go over the letters and work on your letters a tad more.
Drak- Simpler man.
Breakout azer- straighter lines adn use bars to form your letters.

[[breakout]-azer]

Breakout aZER...dont listen to Chromo...you dont need 3d at this stage...you shud be looking at your letters hard...drawing them with no colours / bump bits blah all that shit..

ima do a fully blown peice soon..
i aint sketched for awhile...


i know me letters kind of all different sizes u got any tips 2 stop that? and with the letters how could best improve them?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

ill give you an example in a minute.
i'm uploadin it right now.

[[breakout]-azer]

okay cheers

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

here ya go kind of sloppy but you get the point.
Use bars to create your letter practice this repeatedly and than eventually you can bend you bars give em curves the whole 9 yards but for now do this.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture.jpg

[5yn]

yo homie i still think your d's lookin like and s, mabey its just me but i swear u could fux that by makin your letters a bit wider know what i mean? cause the rest is pretty fly, could totaly use a boss fill tho 3d is pretty down too i like it just fix that d

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSC00278.jpg

I might add some more things later.Crits?

[5yn]

any crits on this shit totaly difrent style then mine
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture4.jpg

[~Saoten154~]

any crits on this shit totaly difrent style then mine
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture4.jpg
yo man i allready know someone writin tome, and hes got ups so not the best idea

[AnteUp]

rise- seze did a gud example so do that ok?
NEW STUFF
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0015.jpg
CRITS PLEASE

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

here ya go kind of sloppy but you get the point.
Use bars to create your letter practice this repeatedly and than eventually you can bend you bars give em curves the whole 9 yards but for now do this.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture.jpg
:confused:
EVERYONE OF YOU DO LETTERS LIKE THIS.

[5yn]

some times
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture003-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture002.jpg
not for throwies and hallows tho haha

[AnteUp]

NEW STUFF
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0015.jpg
CRITS PLEASE

[~Saoten154~]

thought of an idea for the white lighting marks, what if you took a skinny white deco(paint pen/marker) and flipped the tip

[amk]

damn..

ill crit later

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/.jpg

ima finish fill when iv showered..

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

ante- Work on that e try a lower case. I actually like the A. Try to keep the width of the letters consistent through the piece. Keep it up kid.

[[breakout]-azer]

here ya go kind of sloppy but you get the point.
Use bars to create your letter practice this repeatedly and than eventually you can bend you bars give em curves the whole 9 yards but for now do this.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture.jpg


my attempt at simples

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/STA60029.jpg

[near]

thought of an idea for the white lighting marks, what if you took a skinny white deco(paint pen/marker) and flipped the tip
thats what i use im pretty sure....not sure what deco is but i got this white paint marker for highlights and it works good here is a pic of it

http://www.artsuppliesonline.com/prodimg/8600.jpg

AMKAH i like those letters :D put er up when its coloured

[amk]

ahaha thanks Near :D ...

[AnteUp]

amkaaahhhh!! crit me tit!! :D nice letters by the way lukks like it would be gud on a wall, but on the bottom of the leg or the k u added a little extension which doesnt match wit tha others cuz its not on the others

[00-made-00]

yeah amkah nicee, i like the A looks dope.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00893.jpg

I tried to bring my letters closer together.
Crits?

[whahappen?]

your r is bad work on it^, like the widths are just messed up and make where the two bttom leg bars where they meet make it higher, and make the part where the dot is go out more
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/985/picture110la7.jpg
new throw style

[amk]

i love that ^

[Snot]

thats what i use im pretty sure....not sure what deco is but i got this white paint marker for highlights and it works good here is a pic of it

http://www.artsuppliesonline.com/prodimg/8600.jpg

AMKAH i like those letters :D put er up when its coloured

I fucking hate painters markers with a passion, use sharpie paints.. they're easy to rack too.

[tonentink]

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/5339/img6206aj6.jpg

its actually on a sticker!!!

[AnteUp]

snot u like sharpie poster paint?

[dizzle_d]

rise- simples decent, now keep workin on em :D
00- looks better, now just thickin up the main bar of the E to kindof fill in the space between the L and E... also I just noticed how the R bar is smooth and the E and L aren't, try and make them consistent.
whahappen- freaking nice man, I don't like the N though...
tonentink- D looks good, work on the O and L a lot, B's alright. keep the main bars the same thickness..

School sketches...
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3861/img1230bv7.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3131/img1232pq6.jpg
Tried fixing it up on the second one, straightend out the letters a bit and fixed up the M.
constructive crits?...

[~Saoten154~]

dude ill post pictures of the tome i know, im tellin you theres allready a tome

[sketch3]

merk sort out the rigt leg of ur r

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

ahaha thanks Near :D ...
exchange with amk.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture192.jpg

[amk]

thats dope..damn i sitll need to do yours..
math cousrework is a right biatch..
ill have it by sunday babes

[Casa45]

sezer do me a favor...

Buy a sketch pad or some computer paper....

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

sezer do me a favor...

Buy a sketch pad or some computer paper....
I can't afford that.
I need a sketch book.
I have so much random notebooks and loose pieces of paper in my room.

[Casa45]

you cant afford a sketch pad but you afford the internet?

[sketch3]

may be if he got a sketch pad he couldnt afford to pay the bill for the internet?

[dizzle_d]

thats fresh as hell Teze

[Drakula]

I can't afford that.
I need a sketch book.
I have so much random notebooks and loose pieces of paper in my room.

I feel your pain.Black books are so god damn expensive,and I hate having loads of loose paper around your room.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Sarcasm, It never works over the internet.

[sketch3]

NO SHIT....





guses it dose

[Sumoe]

c'mon guys shut the fuck up and post flix.

[sketch3]

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7163/crespqq0.jpg
sum quick pen freezy for another forum,


bump cuss sume told me too, and im scared hell beat me again,

edwerd not really feeling ur a

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

rise- simples decent, now keep workin on em :D
00- looks better, now just thickin up the main bar of the E to kindof fill in the space between the L and E... also I just noticed how the R bar is smooth and the E and L aren't, try and make them consistent.
whahappen- freaking nice man, I don't like the N though...
tonentink- D looks good, work on the O and L a lot, B's alright. keep the main bars the same thickness..

School sketches...
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3861/img1230bv7.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3131/img1232pq6.jpg
Tried fixing it up on the second one, straightend out the letters a bit and fixed up the M.
constructive crits?...

Nice colors.
Work on your letters some more. Space the E a little farther from the M. stick with the top one for now and develop it i dont like the bumpy things coming out of the R AND M though lose those. Start to bend your letters more. Do bigger pieces you got a whole piece of paper use it. Keep it up.

[pez ss]

damn..

ill crit later

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/.jpg

ima finish fill when iv showered..
shit thats sick. its nice to see u changed it around a bit cant what to see it colourd

[*Wing*]

It has nice flow, can't wait to see it finished :)

[Bazer]

oo amkah youre doin entensions now. sweet.

[amk]

may aswell..
seein as my letters are being " repetive "

i remeber when my letters got called that when i did simples..
hint hint

[revolt92]

sep- the handstyle stickies look cool
drakula- The letters are decent, i'm not really feeling the character though
jersOne- Carnage is one of my favorite stories in all of the spiderman comics, I think that looks pretty awesome too
whahappen- is that a green crayon you used for that handstyle?

Alright so, no dicks, no pentegrams, no 3 ft spaces between my letters. That doesn't mean they don't suck but. crits?

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6106/pic1075gx8.jpg


ooooh where have i seen that background before...let me think!!...errr maybe the battle forum TWICE both times by people who could burn yo' ass

so...errrr








Bite!!

[WolfBurrns]

I've been fuckin up lately.. Crits?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solepinkgreen.jpg

Im frusterated.

[cwazy]

I've been fuckin up lately.. Crits?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solepinkgreen.jpg

Im frusterated.
are you one of martin or maya s friend?

[WolfBurrns]

No.

[sketch3]

that e looks like a c, also crit meeee

[rayseone]

sole - make a middle bar on your E

dizzle - your getting so much beter , just fix up the leg on the r nice colors too btw

sketch make yo bars the same size

sezer - fresh shit man

latest sketch crits?
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4697/2pagecopyma5.jpg

[AnteUp]

NEW STUFF
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0015.jpg
CRITS PLEASE
bump cuz this is gonna be on the first page in my new blackbook need help on the fill, outline, 3-d color...PLEASEEE!!!
seyar- it really lukks gud except for the blending on the fill, an i like how it lukks like the r is resting on the a, but the leg of the r got skinny

[kosher]

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0007.jpg

crits please

[AnteUp]

kosh give sum fuckin crits before you get em

[kosher]

i don't like criticizing people who are better than me cause i don't think you should criticize work if it's better than your own

[sketch3]

at least comment on it or it makes u look like a jerk

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Kosh- use bars i gave an example acouple pages back.
Seyar- you are gettin better, fast, but lose the extensions and try to make your letters not so blocky other than that good job.
ante-your pic was small so it was hard to make my lines nice.
Work on your s some more. Dont make the A so lopsided Fix the way the M is leaning and try a new E.
heres a horrible example.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/ghgfh.jpg

[AnteUp]

yea teze i guess i see wat u mean... the reason the e and the m lukk bad is cuz i was tryna make it flow wit the same bars...
any ideas on the fill, 3-d color, and outline?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

outline a black sharpie a small tip if ya got one.
try a bright green for the fill and a red for the 3d

[AnteUp]

yea i got that, after i change everything ill do tha fill n shit, thanks mane

[BORG]

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6607/picture008px4.jpg
style bomb my friend does, gave a shot at it
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4407/picture009cj5.jpg
crayola super tips, 8 bucks at walmart
need some touch twins

[amk]

BORG..Every time you post..your style is different...its annpying..bcuz it takes writers years to develop one style..and years and years and years to develop more than one style...and it seems to me our just drawing different graffiti styles and cheating them...without taking into consdieration what you have to actually do to acheive a style..its is shows iny our work..yes its clean...but the letters are hadrly ever decent..the only decent letters you did was the Slut ones..pick one damn style...and go from there..

and bump..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/.jpg

[sketch3]

thats bom

[WolfBurrns]

outline a black sharpie a small tip if ya got one.
try a bright green for the fill and a red for the 3d

Reminds me of christmas. I hate using green and red together.

[BORG]

amkah- finally, your shit don't look the same, thats a great thing

stop taking graffiti so serious, especially to the point that you think your goin international or some shit, the chances of me or you goin that big are slim to none, so try new styles all the time, have fun with graffiti, if its not what u like to do fine, but get off my dick, not tryin to impress you or anyone else for that matter

[AnteUp]

ey man u gotta take graffiti seriously cuz u come up an write sum gay ass shit on a wall then theres gonna be people who take it seriously if u fuck up their wall

[amk]

if you aint taking graffitit serious then why the fuck are you doing it...the whole point of graffiti is commitment..so if you aint commited..then dont carry on..simple as

you have the wrong attitude..
and i aint on your dick..im just telling you things you need to take in...if you dont like it..then carry on doing what yah doing..itll catch up with you..but i really seriously couldnt give 5 flyying fucks..

and my shit looked the same cuz it was simple..
maybe you shud take it up sometime..

im out..peace..

[BORG]

i deff take graffiti serious like that, but we got about 11 writers in my area (3 crews), i run diff styles everytime as well as everyone else here bc its just more interesting, same shit repetition is boring, gotta spice it up a bit

[[biohazard]]

Borg-I like the bomb but not I think there are just to many drops...thats just me...other that that its sickk
Amk-everytime i see your shit round here i love it...cant wait to see this next one finished


here are some rele shitty lil 10-15 min ones i did...yes i know they arent simple block letters but i was only tryin on the top center one the rest were just kinda either to fill up the page or curiousity but w.e crit away...thankss

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/101_0282.jpg

[amk]

i deff take graffiti serious like that, but we got about 11 writers in my area (3 crews), i run diff styles everytime as well as everyone else here bc its just more interesting, same shit repetition is boring, gotta spice it up a bit

oh my god..ahaha..LOL

[Bazer]

sounds like hes talkin bout umm.......... http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/jerkit.gif .....

[Fube]

damn theres a lot of bitching here. do u guys ever paint? i mean do u ever go out and just bomb? i see a lot of fools with sick ass books and pen skills but when u hit the streets u see where they spent all there time. morn, im really feelin that bottom one. fuck what these kids are saying. people learn from what they see. and if your bitein u will get no respect and its gunna catch up to u. theres nothing wrong with haveing a lot of styles.

amk i think your letters are so so. but thats me. this last bump u did is the best ive seen u do. but i never see any painted shit from any of u. its like u guys read up on the rules and start to spit like u know whats going on. i could give a fuck about rules, sence when did graffiti become defined with following rules? and who made u the graffiti dictionary? i respect writers that are better then me. but thats about it. i could give a fuck if they approve what i do week in and week out. how the fuck did they get where they are? everyone learns one way or another, but when u get down to it, experance is the key. go get some. start painting. get your name out.

i never dis another writer. they love the same shit i do. if u know me by this forum i have never talked shit to anyone that didnt have it comin. your coming off with this "know it all" with post like u just said. who are u to dis some others style? close the rule book for a min and just do your own thing. let the morons do what they want to.

anyway, ive had a bad day today if u cant tell. things will be better once nightfall hits and can get lost in Dallas.. btw, amk u have gotten a lot better, u used to write ras right?

biohazard, simples simples simples. u think your doing simples but they are not. i mean the strict basis of the letters. like the font here. not that u cant advance doing what your doing. but in my experance it happens faster. dont ever stop writing. if u love it, u wont.

[[biohazard]]

^^^ ya i feel what your sayin in that whole post bro...and ima start doin simple block letters i just hate blocks haha but thx bro

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

damn theres a lot of bitching here. do u guys ever paint? i mean do u ever go out and just bomb? i see a lot of fools with sick ass books and pen skills but when u hit the streets u see where they spent all there time. morn, im really feelin that bottom one. fuck what these kids are saying. people learn from what they see. and if your bitein u will get no respect and its gunna catch up to u. theres nothing wrong with haveing a lot of styles.

amk i think your letters are so so. but thats me. this last bump u did is the best ive seen u do. but i never see any painted shit from any of u. its like u guys read up on the rules and start to spit like u know whats going on. i could give a fuck about rules, sence when did graffiti become defined with following rules? and who made u the graffiti dictionary? i respect writers that are better then me. but thats about it. i could give a fuck if they approve what i do week in and week out. how the fuck did they get where they are? everyone learns one way or another, but when u get down to it, experance is the key. go get some. start painting. get your name out.

i never dis another writer. they love the same shit i do. if u know me by this forum i have never talked shit to anyone that didnt have it comin. your coming off with this "know it all" with post like u just said. who are u to dis some others style? close the rule book for a min and just do your own thing. let the morons do what they want to.

anyway, ive had a bad day today if u cant tell. things will be better once nightfall hits and can get lost in Dallas.. btw, amk u have gotten a lot better, u used to write ras right?

biohazard, simples simples simples. u think your doing simples but they are not. i mean the strict basis of the letters. like the font here. not that u cant advance doing what your doing. but in my experance it happens faster. dont ever stop writing. if u love it, u wont.
your in Dallas, damn i live there.

[sketch3]

you may hate them but there the best way to lern the basics of constructing letters, after u get that down then tweak them, its a slow procesce but if u put the work in the rewards are worth it

[BORG]

thanks fube, atleast someone in this forum doesn't mind diff styles

[sketch3]

i dont mind diff styles, but i would like to see u work on ur letters for a bit more

[[biohazard]]

you may hate them but there the best way to lern the basics of constructing letters, after u get that down then tweak them, its a slow procesce but if u put the work in the rewards are worth it

ya i understand that and im all for workin from the bottom and improvin...i just like to mess around but im gon start doin blocks until told other wise bro

[Drakula]

I completely agree Fube.Nice post.

[sketch3]

;782804']ya i understand that and im all for workin from the bottom and improvin...i just like to mess around but im gon start doin blocks until told other wise bro

then ull go far,

fuck im still doin simpels

[[biohazard]]

HAHA just gotta keep in ya mind that in the end all that practice will be worth it in the end right?

[sketch3]

word, lets stop the chit chat tho, this is a pic thread

[true21]

would this be a nice piece
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/060807_1830.jpg

[Vice]

damn theres a lot of bitching here. do u guys ever paint? i mean do u ever go out and just bomb? i see a lot of fools with sick ass books and pen skills but when u hit the streets u see where they spent all there time. morn, im really feelin that bottom one. fuck what these kids are saying. people learn from what they see. and if your bitein u will get no respect and its gunna catch up to u. theres nothing wrong with haveing a lot of styles.

amk i think your letters are so so. but thats me. this last bump u did is the best ive seen u do. but i never see any painted shit from any of u. its like u guys read up on the rules and start to spit like u know whats going on. i could give a fuck about rules, sence when did graffiti become defined with following rules? and who made u the graffiti dictionary? i respect writers that are better then me. but thats about it. i could give a fuck if they approve what i do week in and week out. how the fuck did they get where they are? everyone learns one way or another, but when u get down to it, experance is the key. go get some. start painting. get your name out.

i never dis another writer. they love the same shit i do. if u know me by this forum i have never talked shit to anyone that didnt have it comin. your coming off with this "know it all" with post like u just said. who are u to dis some others style? close the rule book for a min and just do your own thing. let the morons do what they want to.

anyway, ive had a bad day today if u cant tell. things will be better once nightfall hits and can get lost in Dallas.. btw, amk u have gotten a lot better, u used to write ras right?

biohazard, simples simples simples. u think your doing simples but they are not. i mean the strict basis of the letters. like the font here. not that u cant advance doing what your doing. but in my experance it happens faster. dont ever stop writing. if u love it, u wont.

woohoo! fube so sexy! i dont have a camera so i cant post any pics of tags... but how about this?

http://media.urbandictionary.com/image/large/zomg-46380.jpg

[sketch3]

try to make ur lretters from bars, not just squares,
take F for example, have one vetical bar | and 2 horizontal bars _
_
|-

EDIT, THIS IS FOR U TRUE

[[biohazard]]

true fix the shadow on the T dont make it at both sides, make your lines a little straighter and your R is horrible make the second leg a lil more diagonal and move the hole towards the middle a little more and slightly enlarge it. oh also make the middle bar of ur E a lil shorter maybe?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6607/picture008px4.jpg
style bomb my friend does, gave a shot at it
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4407/picture009cj5.jpg
crayola super tips, 8 bucks at walmart
need some touch twins
nice coloring.
Work on your letters a tad bit.

[BORG]

yeah, i'm still in the process of fixin up the m and the n, any ideas on how to do the "v" part in the middle of the m

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

just dont round it and keep it the same width as the rest of the M.

[Saeo1]

fuck go simple.


Saeo Wunner.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00196.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00196.jpg

[Saeo1]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

[BORG]

i'm down for goin big, seao i like it, it diff then whats normally done, gotta throw a nice fill in them bitches though

[Bazer]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg
finally someone thinkin for themselves n not going by others ways of progression.

[Vice]

everything works differently for each individual. for some it helps to start simple but for some its better to jump right into it.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg
But that shit's hideous.

[tonentink]

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/8403/helper2ko2.jpg

quickie throw up!!!

[Bazer]

But that shit's hideous.
swhy ppl progress.....

[Vice]

mmmmhmmmm...

[what_one]

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/8403/helper2ko2.jpg

quickie throw up!!!
thats not quite a throwie, even tho im drunk , thats garbaadge. nice coloring but work o your letter structure. i dont have n e thing on tis site yet cuz i dont have a cameria but i will, n e watys . make akll ur letters the same size mmmmk. good uck

[what_one]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg
i like the S but work on the other letterwss maby a capital A woul d b eyser 4 u idk, the E cool butloose the extra shit it could work

[AnteUp]

saeo1-fuck simples? haha fuck ur graffiti career
toten-u kno thas not a quickie throw :D
CRITS....
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0016.jpg
ALREADY IN THE BLACK BOOK, WAT COLOR SHUD THE 3-D BE?

[Chalk]

true - i had to do it... haha. i lost my good outlining pen so please excuse the shitty as black lines. so 10 min later we have some simples not that great i will admit and a wack ass hand style. sorry for the shitty pic can't find my cam anywhere...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/Photo97.jpg

[AnteUp]

chalk how fukin old are u? u have ape arms... :O!!
and it would be nice to get sum crits from you... on the sketch and wat to color the 3-d :D

[tonentink]

actually it was a quickie throw up !!!

chalk your ''k'' is bammer the chal is sick wid it!!!

[true21]

true - i had to do it... haha. i lost my good outlining pen so please excuse the shitty as black lines. so 10 min later we have some simples not that great i will admit and a wack ass hand style. sorry for the shitty pic can't find my cam anywhere...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/Photo97.jpg

thats some simple n complex shit TRU3 DAT TRU3 DAT

[meetermaid]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

buddy that shit is pretty simple, just cause you added some like breaks and shit in your letters, doesn't make them complicated. the letter structures pretty sweet apart from the e, which is weird but kinda works, and the a's ugly, it doesn't really fit with the other capital letters. The s and o are great, work on the a, maybe make it capital or something.

[Chalk]

i am ashamed to say i'm going to be 22 in a few weeks i got into graff way late. but i've been stenciling for about 5 years now only been writing for one. so i am trying to learn as fast as possible.

and yes that K blows hard. i'm workin on it i think i got a new one that will Kick some ass hah.

Anteup - your S and i think A have the most potential the S is ok the A? is hurting some but good efforts your M and E i don't like at all to be honest. your E is just wayyyyy to solid looking compared to the other letters. what i mean by this is. your S and A have some 'hollow' spots in them and your M has the gap in the top your E has that tiny pin prick which is making feel really heavy. if that makes any sense.

i wouldn't make your 3d as deep as well but then agian i'm a fan short stout looking 3ds or the middle 3d. fills you have a simple thing going on there . so just do a solid color maybe even a solid black. then don't forget your forcefield that.s what pulls it together.

when i color mine recently i have been really into complemting colors.

red fill green force vs green fill red force
blue - orange
yellow - purple

red and green can be tricky because they are so close in value. blue and orange is a good place to start. blue letters then orange force for the punch off the page.

[AnteUp]

lol im 14 an i bin in graff for 2 years jus started hard in feb...
but i love my e?!?! i cant find a way to make it fit tho... :(
thanks tho man ur really helpful

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

16, been really into graff since november.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture194.jpg
leanin like a kick stand
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture195.jpg

[true21]

im 16 n i got into graffiti like a month ago after rolling wit ma cuzin who was hitting up walls

[true21]

16, been really into graff since november.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture194.jpg
leanin like a kick stand
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture195.jpg

i see how doing letters helps out wit progression in letters

[Sumoe]

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/160/0/5/____by_SUMOE.jpg

morning shizzle.

[CaMa]

Sumoe - Your shits is fresh! Get out of the Toy Forum man.

I bumped this together just before. Crits? I think I need help with my Z's!!
(Sorry for the crap image quality)
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3539/imgp0423sc8.jpg

[amk]

damn theres a lot of bitching here. do u guys ever paint? i mean do u ever go out and just bomb? i see a lot of fools with sick ass books and pen skills but when u hit the streets u see where they spent all there time. morn, im really feelin that bottom one. fuck what these kids are saying. people learn from what they see. and if your bitein u will get no respect and its gunna catch up to u. theres nothing wrong with haveing a lot of styles.

amk i think your letters are so so. but thats me. this last bump u did is the best ive seen u do. but i never see any painted shit from any of u. its like u guys read up on the rules and start to spit like u know whats going on. i could give a fuck about rules, sence when did graffiti become defined with following rules? and who made u the graffiti dictionary? i respect writers that are better then me. but thats about it. i could give a fuck if they approve what i do week in and week out. how the fuck did they get where they are? everyone learns one way or another, but when u get down to it, experance is the key. go get some. start painting. get your name out.

i never dis another writer. they love the same shit i do. if u know me by this forum i have never talked shit to anyone that didnt have it comin. your coming off with this "know it all" with post like u just said. who are u to dis some others style? close the rule book for a min and just do your own thing. let the morons do what they want to.

anyway, ive had a bad day today if u cant tell. things will be better once nightfall hits and can get lost in Dallas.. btw, amk u have gotten a lot better, u used to write ras right?

biohazard, simples simples simples. u think your doing simples but they are not. i mean the strict basis of the letters. like the font here. not that u cant advance doing what your doing. but in my experance it happens faster. dont ever stop writing. if u love it, u wont.

ahah Thanks Fube Babes..
and i do peice..
like evry 3 weeks..
and bomb too..
i have sum flicks of boming sprees..
but not many
and a matter of fact..
IM PAINTING TODAY !...DAMNIT..ahaha..like my 3rd edit

peaace !

[amk]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

OSRRY DOUBLE POST..

but this is a straight up bite you fucking lil bitch..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/000_0218.jpg

and its the fact thats its Mente aswell..
damn..
you bacially took his whole letter form..and chnaged them around..
thats almost his god damn style..
so now yall know why you liked that S from him so much
cuz its Mente's..

Sume..nice colouring...i dont get why the cat has an arrow on him tho ?..

[Sumoe]

The "S" is a bite...but not the "E"

his looks nothing like Mente's.

[sketch3]

u can allways tell if someones bitten one letter, its allways much better than the rest of them

[dizzle_d]

damn Sume, those cats are illl

[amk]

im sorry Sume and all the other mods...but im about to go paint..
and there is hardly any action in toy painted thread..
so ..

do you guys think i shud carry on with this..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics328.jpg

( there you go fube )

or do this peice..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/.jpg

and start all over again..?..
quick guys !

[sex without condoms]

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/160/0/5/____by_SUMOE.jpg

morning shizzle.
what kind of markers do you use for stickers bc. you know if those are prismas theyll just fade in the sun and stuffs.
but if theyre for trades well hehheh hit me up bby <3

[Sumoe]

yeah...these one's are probably just gonna be for trades...but one's I'm gunna actually put up, I'll use deco's or something.

[HuntingLOLs]

wow ras, you've improved! been a while since i've checked the toys forum and saw that last sketch - its nice. i wish i could improve at that rate

[alive]

U all say go simple, fuck simple

Saeo Wunner, Peace.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00199.jpg


mente

[~Saoten154~]

woohoo! fube so sexy! i dont have a camera so i cant post any pics of tags... but how about this?

http://media.urbandictionary.com/image/large/zomg-46380.jpg
if you have a camera phone take it with that and send it to your email...

[14nick]

Latley in my black book all ive been doing is bubble letters and evrey 1 always said bars and i used bars but how the fuck do i use bars for a B? evreytime i do it it looks fucked. ill show u some of my old flicks of attempts

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypics003.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypics002.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypics001.jpg


can somebody help me out?

[HuntingLOLs]

bars can be round as well but be careful and make the width the same size

[~Saoten154~]

dude bars dont need to be straigh, i just figured them out but they can deffintly be bent and round

[dim]

sume those are some sick stickers
tezer nice letters
amk great use of connections
bri dont worry about colour or 3d just worry about getting ur letters down with bars
cama i dont rele like the spaces in between the z

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled.jpg
delete the shit in the circles

[Stylz]

i was waiting to see the characters that sume was going to make and i like it...
you use those markers so good that it look s like you colerd with color pencils..

[~Saoten154~]

bri- by the way, your doing 2 diffrent types of 3d, that takes away the whole idea of 3d

[Zep0]

im sorry Sume and all the other mods...but im about to go paint..
and there is hardly any action in toy painted thread..
so ..

do you guys think i shud carry on with this..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics328.jpg

( there you go fube )

or do this peice..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/.jpg

and start all over again..?..
quick guys !

Your can control has gotten alot better but your still drippin with montana, you really got to speed your hands up, I follow the path I want to spray a few times then spray one straight line real fast. The piece you got up, finish unless your money situation is tight...but just a tip unless you are doing a black fill not just throwups but on pieces too it helps to do fill first bro. I'd say do both of them unless you cant get out alot or have only a little paint left and have only like one day to do it...

[ODonthesetrees]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/rogan181/Gee.jpg

I finally took a picture of my shit, i need a thinner outlining pen though casue i used a standard sharpie and the peice is only as long as my finger so it loosk all shaggy, but you get the main idea

[uhhh]

you kids with your super fine markers.
draw bigger stupidface.

that sume karak last page was real nice.
really crisp and such,
ive yet to get anything near that crisp with prismas.

[ODonthesetrees]

yeah ill draw bgiger next time, i didnt have any paper this time so i had to draw that small on scrap paper

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/160/0/5/____by_SUMOE.jpg

morning shizzle.
bump.

[*Wing*]

http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1181408771_f.jpg

Shitty colour pencils...

[Bazer]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled.jpg
delete the shit in the circles



i think its too late. i watched him color it up to the middle then he saw somethin shiney and stopped.

[whoarethereal evil]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3789/p1000065pk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Drakula]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3789/p1000065pk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

What does it say?Lose the lumps and bumps and keep your letters smooth.Use the barring method and don't bend your letters too much.Some of the throws look alright from what I can make out.

New piece from me:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Image002-1.jpg

[Bomber444]

Drak- I like the character and the colors are ok, but im not feeling the letter structure so much. I think the bottom of the D is too fat, and the right leg of the R is wack. Besides that ok.

[dim]

drak your K looks like an H

[glass]

looks like you've got the 3-D down for the most part though

[sketch3]

drak follow ur own advice

[~Cent~]

Did this last night on paper, crits please.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11111-2.jpg

[sketch3]

use bars to construct ur letters, that way it insures ur letters a proportinet

[~Cent~]

Okay, thanks.

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0818.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0819.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0820.jpg
Not done

[AnteUp]

knews- on the second one i can see ur socks :D i really cant wat tilll u get up on a wall or sumthin, shits gonna be tight ninja!!! (insert old smiley tha lukks like a ninja here)

[*Wing*]

http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1181408771_f.jpg

Shitty colour pencils...

Comment anyone?

[spag]

new name: ceas.
someone already writes cert it d.c. so fuck it.

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9263/img0358fk7.jpg


wing- i think it's good just fix up the w and n a bit.
bouncing- like usual looks good.
cent- don't bother coloring yet. as said use straight bars first, then start modifying them like bending, etc.

[sketch3]

move the lil bar in the e up a lil and u need to werk on ur a nd s, but obviously its a new name so its bound to be a bit sucky

[WolfBurrns]

Ceas- Work on your structure homie.

[spag]

can you define what you mean by structure? people say that and i never understand.

and yeah the a got like fat or whatever and the s is smaller than it should be.

[AnteUp]

well i actually think people say that to be cool lol umm i guess ur e isnt very diff from ur c

[sketch3]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/8353/sameqj0.jpg

exchange for ante, crits please

[*Wing*]

Well, his work looks okay to me, although he might have changed the S, which is the weakest link...

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/8353/sameqj0.jpg

exchange for ante, crits please
you got the right idea. But try to keep the width of the letters for now the same size. Don't worry bout 3d get basic structure down and than you can move on to 3d.