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[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 04:30 PM
I went with the bars people. I did one bar sketch so tell me if ya happy or not...nothin excitin just a plain old shitty bar sketch...thank you

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/101_0285.jpg also here is a char i came up with awhile ago its and appendage lacking penguin named...happy
still workin on him http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture023.jpg
and some retarded quick lil one min char disregard the bullet and the drool
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture012.jpg

sketch3
06-09-2007, 04:32 PM
i write sketch,


and those simples are lookin good keep it up

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 04:34 PM
haha mah bad mane im a fuckin dumbass lol umm jus so ya kno i suck at t's and c's and h's and k's hahaha!!

sketch3
06-09-2007, 04:36 PM
lol i suck at as and ms, i dont mind, also theres no rush

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-09-2007, 04:37 PM
ante and sketch imma do a piece for both yall.

dizzle_d
06-09-2007, 04:38 PM
;783709']
also here is a char i came up with awhile ago its and appendage lacking penguin named...happy
still workin on him http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture023.jpg


yo I would chill with that, you bit the whole idea from filler bunny by jhonen vasquez. its the same shit but with a penguin. http://www.answers.com/topic/fillerbunny
woowww.
...

spag
06-09-2007, 04:38 PM
;783709']
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture012.jpg

that one's cool, but i dun really do karaks, so i dunno how much my opinion's worth.
good job one the simple. once you get the hang of it start modifying it a bit.

sketch3
06-09-2007, 04:39 PM
ante and sketch imma do a piece for both yall.


wat u write ill hit u up

drek10
06-09-2007, 04:40 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/drek001.jpg

first post and new to forums ......anyone down to give some feedback?

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 04:43 PM
im gonna do same, sketch, an teze on tha same page if it fits... CCC

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 04:46 PM
THANK YOU...Sketch I like your exchance for ante just clean it up and fatten some of the bars on the S and the E just a litttlle bit

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 04:50 PM
yo I would chill with that, you bit the whole idea from filler bunny by jhonen vasquez. its the same shit but with a penguin. http://www.answers.com/topic/fillerbunny
woowww.
...
damn man :/ i thought it was original for real...thx for tellin me tho I dun wan people to start thinkin im bitin n shit bro. I rele based the penguin of kenny from southpark tho XD

dizzle_d
06-09-2007, 04:52 PM
haha its alright man I didn't mean to start any beef, keep up those simples :D

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 04:56 PM
naw i know you just tryna help bro and ya im just gonna fill a whole page or simple bars tonight hahaha just for the hell of it

*Wing*
06-09-2007, 05:23 PM
Can I get any feedback?

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 05:34 PM
wing fatten the first part of the W dont bend the N so much it looks like a K and the G u need to fix the lip part its to small and it shouldnt touch the rest of the G i think and dont use color pencils the coloring isnt that great bro

Robbie P
06-09-2007, 05:42 PM
Gets some flicks up in this bitch.

Older Exchange:
http://a.photos.cx/REAGENKILLS-b98.PNG

sketch3
06-09-2007, 05:45 PM
dont make the letters jaged like that

AVID1
06-09-2007, 05:50 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/drek001.jpg

first post and new to forums ......anyone down to give some feedback?
good, however I'm not too fond of that 'Siray' thing at the right end of the piece.
add some shadow/outlines/3d.. I wouldn't colour it though you might ruin it.. (whenever I colour my good pieces I ruin them :()

AVID1
06-09-2007, 05:57 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3129/hpim0219se0.jpg
took me like 10 minutes but wtv lol.

whoarethereal evil
06-09-2007, 06:07 PM
What does it say?Lose the lumps and bumps and keep your letters smooth.Use the barring method and don't bend your letters too much.Some of the throws look alright from what I can make out.

New piece from me:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Image002-1.jpg

it says delt

thanks anyway

sex without condoms
06-09-2007, 06:11 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010019-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010015-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010013-4.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-09-2007, 06:20 PM
make it cleaner..tidy it up.

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 06:23 PM
ya sex some of it is to bunched together and its to squigly in some of them make em a lil straighter and cleaner and theyll start comin together also ur 3D isnt good either fix that to

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 06:27 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0818.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0819.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0820.jpg
Not done

Tight shit homie.

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 06:42 PM
sume could u give me sum input, cuz u always give gud tipshttp://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0016.jpg

WolfBurrns
06-09-2007, 07:03 PM
well i actually think people say that to be cool lol umm i guess ur e isnt very diff from ur c

I think your retarded. Sezer explained what structure is a couple posts later. Check it out, you might learn some things.

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 07:53 PM
its a joke calm ur dumbass down
edit: how bout u show me wat structure is... haha fuckin dumbass
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solepinkgreen.jpg

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 08:07 PM
Ante-the "S" and "E" are pretty good, I just think it's kinda weird how the "E" points upward. The "A" and "M" are not very good though, work on those a bit. I like it how they kind of mold into each other. It could be a good style when it's perfected. Keep it up.

On another note, I said I was gonna do these for a few hours, which I didn't. However, I just finished the big one ten minutes ago.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/160/5/5/Bigger____by_SUMOE.jpg

WolfBurrns
06-09-2007, 08:08 PM
its a joke calm ur dumbass down
edit: how bout u show me wat structure is... haha fuckin dumbass
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solepinkgreen.jpg

Perfect example of good structure. See, your gettin it.

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 08:10 PM
That handy needs mad work.

nickstix
06-09-2007, 08:17 PM
anteup, its pretty good but i would mabye try doing something with the bottom of the 's'

sume...nice karaks, did you ever finish that exchange with me? b/c i know you said you were goin to do it soon a little while back.

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 08:20 PM
Oops! Sorry, I will do it though...just not feelin' letters lately, that's why I been doin' stickies.

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 08:21 PM
are u talkin bout the purple thing that i said "you teach me structure fuckin dumbass?" cuz that aint mine...

an wolburrns if thas perfect structure then i NEVER wanna have perfect structure

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 08:22 PM
Nah, I was talkin' about the other (red) one.

AnteUp
06-09-2007, 08:23 PM
Ante-the "S" and "E" are pretty good, I just think it's kinda weird how the "E" points upward. The "A" and "M" are not very good though, work on those a bit. I like it how they kind of mold into each other. It could be a good style when it's perfected. Keep it up.

On another note, I said I was gonna do these for a few hours, which I didn't. However, I just finished the big one ten minutes ago.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/160/5/5/Bigger____by_SUMOE.jpg
bump for sume

Casa45
06-09-2007, 08:59 PM
Sume those are cool, but it would be better if it didnt say your name in the grill.... but i still like em. they weatpastes???

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 09:02 PM
these ones are just some stickies...prolly gonna make some wheat pastes though...

and yeah, I'm thinkin' of just putting the name inside the mouth instead of on the teeth.

[biohazard]
06-09-2007, 09:03 PM
sume...dude those chars are so clean and sick man

here some more simple bars woooo

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/101_0288.jpg

C3ZR ONE
06-09-2007, 09:20 PM
Sume- Those stickers are hot. I like the way you put your name on the grill personally. I did that a year back on some stickers, but they were simple black and white faces with blood dripping from the teeth and I colored one tooth gold.



" So whatcha been up to Cezr?"

"Gettin bizzy y'all..."

Okizoo crew. Working today for a crunker tommorow...
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2879/im000708un4.jpg

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/7110/im000710ac7.jpg

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 09:23 PM
dope...just wonderin', how long did it take to do those?

C3ZR ONE
06-09-2007, 09:38 PM
each one takes about 15-20 minutes to draw and 15-20 to ink... so about 30-40 minutes. I did the big vinyl on the crapper. hahaha..

glass
06-09-2007, 09:42 PM
you just buy that sticker paper at staples or someplace right?

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 09:50 PM
each one takes about 15-20 minutes to draw and 15-20 to ink... so about 30-40 minutes. I did the big vinyl on the crapper. hahaha..

Aight, good to know, because I thought 20-30 minutes was too long to spend on one stickie.

Zep0
06-09-2007, 09:55 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0818.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0819.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0820.jpg
Not done

Bro, on the first one make that a capitol S by coming out from behind the W ontop of what you have exactly like you did on the top right bar of your K...I hope you understand what I mean, I think it would look sick. Looks good either way, all of your shit does.

ODonthesetrees
06-09-2007, 10:03 PM
What does it say?Lose the lumps and bumps and keep your letters smooth.Use the barring method and don't bend your letters too much.Some of the throws look alright from what I can make out.

New piece from me:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Image002-1.jpg
haha the one youre ripping on looks just as good as the one you posted...give the man a break

Sole-fix the center bar of the E to move out more, it needs the center bar, cant just slightly curve out, i personally think lowercase E's lok better most of the time, but its all up to you

MUSEone
06-09-2007, 10:07 PM
Sume- Those stickers are hot. I like the way you put your name on the grill personally. I did that a year back on some stickers, but they were simple black and white faces with blood dripping from the teeth and I colored one tooth gold.



" So whatcha been up to Cezr?"

"Gettin bizzy y'all..."

Okizoo crew. Working today for a crunker tommorow...
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2879/im000708un4.jpg

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/7110/im000710ac7.jpg

Can I ask wat u used to make these?

Hask420
06-09-2007, 10:13 PM
Did this last night on paper, crits please.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11111-2.jpg

by any chance are u in NLA and live on long island?

Bazer
06-09-2007, 10:13 PM
dont tell anyone muse but i think he used marker..

MUSEone
06-09-2007, 10:16 PM
WOW! REALLY!?!?!

............I knew that, im talking about wat he put them on

Vice
06-09-2007, 10:19 PM
good response muse.

MUSEone
06-09-2007, 10:20 PM
Uhh... thnx? lol

YouBetrayedTheLawl
06-09-2007, 10:45 PM
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e246/xxTONiC/lawl.gif

its a first. trying to get beter, all criticism accepted.

Math3_b3ans
06-09-2007, 10:46 PM
first crtique...don't write lawl

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-09-2007, 10:48 PM
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e246/xxTONiC/lawl.gif

its a first. trying to get beter, all criticism accepted.
simple block letters.
a throwie and a P.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture196.jpg

C3ZR ONE
06-09-2007, 10:51 PM
Pretty fresh Sezer..








You guys quit with the random chatting and stick to flicks and crits in this thread please. Questions about materials and such should be PM'ed. We don't want to trash out the thread. Also, I don't understand why every time someone posts there first flick and asks for a crit, someone has to say, "first crit- don't write____" It's unneseccary.









Thx.

Vice
06-09-2007, 10:53 PM
sorry master...

i like the karek in the J

Math3_b3ans
06-09-2007, 11:02 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z299/evanatorx/n637615615_165188_8695.jpg

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z299/evanatorx/n637615615_149426_9324.jpg
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6857/dsc03331vs5.jpg

Math3_b3ans
06-09-2007, 11:03 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z299/evanatorx/n637615615_71503_4141.jpg
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z299/evanatorx/n637615615_165189_8937.jpg

Sumoe
06-09-2007, 11:08 PM
Math3_b3ans-Forget about everything you think you know about graffiti...learn structure, use bars and please chill with the extensions. If you don't know what any of that means go check out the "New 2 Graff" thread.

Math3_b3ans
06-09-2007, 11:15 PM
besides that...anything else?

Bazer
06-09-2007, 11:17 PM
do simple handstyles to and take off from there.

Rogue
06-09-2007, 11:27 PM
Your not in 666, and start with simples. Simples are always good no matter what.

Samp1e
06-09-2007, 11:35 PM
Ante-the "S" and "E" are pretty good, I just think it's kinda weird how the "E" points upward. The "A" and "M" are not very good though, work on those a bit. I like it how they kind of mold into each other. It could be a good style when it's perfected. Keep it up.

On another note, I said I was gonna do these for a few hours, which I didn't. However, I just finished the big one ten minutes ago.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/160/5/5/Bigger____by_SUMOE.jpg

real nice stuff sumoe. just noticed that the big one's right eye doesn't have some of the shading like the small ones do. just thought you should know ;)

glass
06-09-2007, 11:37 PM
yeah dude, they are INSANELY helpful even though they are boring so just keep at it.

in any case i think these need some work but im progressing. crit please since nobody does anymore :P

http://i11.tinypic.com/4tgu9m0.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-09-2007, 11:38 PM
that bottom joint wold look nice with some 3d and colored work on the top one more.

Sluts_r_us
06-10-2007, 12:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/060607_1431.jpg

Chulo
06-10-2007, 01:57 AM
These are some pages in my bbook that were done by some otha writers round my place

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/bbpage22.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/bbpage.jpg

sex without condoms
06-10-2007, 02:06 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010019-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010015-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010013-4.jpg

bump and grind.

AMansNotACamel
06-10-2007, 02:31 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5940/dorksau3.jpg

whynot?
06-10-2007, 02:58 AM
dork

not bad i see your letters have some structure in them work on gettin your own flow and not seperating them so much

[breakout]-azer
06-10-2007, 03:55 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5940/dorksau3.jpg



dork- i like the d,o,k but i dnt liek the r the top is 2 squashed in my view. all you need to do now is get the flow right get the letters closer n add a fill

amk
06-10-2007, 04:29 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled.jpg
delete the shit in the circles

i didnt want to " delete the shit " what you circled anyway...i like " the shit in the circles "..
Zep0...thanks mate...i did finish it off yesterday..its my best one yet..ill have flicks soon..painted thread like..

Sex...i like the way your style is going...its like a coccon ready to burst into a cute butterfly

sylvan18
06-10-2007, 07:18 AM
This is probely one of my decent pieces so what u guys think?

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/4483/picture001iu3.jpg

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 09:53 AM
not bad...whatd cic? and probably change the dot on the I so it flows a little better

Vice
06-10-2007, 09:58 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5940/dorksau3.jpg

i would say now try to over lap the letters so that there isnt as much space between each letter.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 10:31 AM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9386/satq5.th.jpg (http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=satq5.jpg)

bored felt like not doing simples...crits?

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 10:34 AM
i really hate my A alot...

WolfBurrns
06-10-2007, 10:38 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/060607_1431.jpg

Bumpin this shit. New Jersey represent.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 10:46 AM
.

amk
06-10-2007, 11:19 AM
Yes Ues yaallll..
Pesk niuceeeeee..
Saton...drop colours...drop everything..and do block ..like..

umm..For Sir.Edward...i decided to go back to teh old skool letters / charac for this one..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/22sadas.jpg

anddd..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

udpate..
ill finish tonightttt

Casa45
06-10-2007, 11:31 AM
pesk- i dont like the "K"
Amk- the "Z" in TEZE looks like shit
and the mtn can in the other one looks cheesey

glass
06-10-2007, 11:35 AM
AMK: i love that paint can on the second one, looks sick


yeah dude, they are INSANELY helpful even though they are boring so just keep at it.

in any case i think these need some work but im progressing. crit please since nobody does anymore :P

http://i11.tinypic.com/4tgu9m0.jpg

bump because nobody gives crit anymore

Tri1
06-10-2007, 11:36 AM
Amk- second ones great but like casa said the z screwd on the first one.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 11:37 AM
Yes Ues yaallll..
Pesk niuceeeeee..
Saton...drop colours...drop everything..and do block ..like..

umm..For Sir.Edward...i decided to go back to teh old skool letters / charac for this one..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/22sadas.jpg

anddd..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

udpate..
ill finish tonightttt
everything looks good..except im not loving the can so much the cap is bigger then it

trashhh
06-10-2007, 11:39 AM
Yes Ues yaallll..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

udpate..
ill finish tonightttt


This is banginnn.. 3d gives a real nice effect and the piece itself is realy good.. and the can and cap look class........:p

amk
06-10-2007, 11:40 AM
Satoen..duh..cuz the cap is coming towards you..:rollseyes:
ugh..
Casa dont waste your breath critting me..
Glas..i spose the bottom simple is aight..

also..i didnt want crits on the one for Edarwrd..its up to him to crit it..seeing as its for him

thwanks twash...you know i wove your work !

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:08 PM
saton : what does that say?

amk: lol nothing i can say better than mee :):)


and witch of theese do you guys think is best?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures004.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures005.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures006.jpg

MUSEone
06-10-2007, 12:09 PM
none of them....

Deadpoolzer0
06-10-2007, 12:12 PM
sorry...its been a while scince I have posted...
amkah....I really like that new style of yours instead of your old one...cant wait to see it finished...
Glass....I really dont care for the top glass but the gottom one isnt bad...if only the s's ends were a lil more wide....
and here is something of mine...nothing amazing though...
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u78/deadpoolzer0/DSC048702.jpg
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u78/deadpoolzer0/DSC04857.jpg
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u78/deadpoolzer0/DSC04856.jpg

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:12 PM
thanks ur really helpful. x|

*Edit: to museone

-ShAmEE-
06-10-2007, 12:13 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

bump knock out piece..killa shit.

reppin tng.

Deadpoolzer0
06-10-2007, 12:16 PM
Wow....anyways the ABC ones....just work on structure is all i can say man..

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:17 PM
Why double post.? :S


its the same page

Deadpoolzer0
06-10-2007, 12:18 PM
Why double post.? :S


its the same page
Relax Killer when I posted the first one it didnt show up on the page i was on so i thought i refresjed faster than it posted...relax man..

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:21 PM
lol im relaxed i was just asking why would post the same flix on the same page.

MUSEone
06-10-2007, 12:22 PM
i smell beef...

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:25 PM
then u smell wrong my friend :D

Linkzone1
06-10-2007, 12:29 PM
I haven't posted on here in a while so I thought I'd post something up.http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9160/esam1vk2.jpg

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 12:29 PM
dope!

edit: To Linkzone1.

Linkzone1
06-10-2007, 12:34 PM
Oh haha thanks man, I am a fan of your work. I also tried to go to the deviantart link in your signature but it didn't direct me there. You might wanna check that.

mind.or.matter
06-10-2007, 12:37 PM
14Nick - why abc?? im sure you can think of something a bit more creative than that.... but anyways, youre letters are all the same size, thats good, youve gotta work on your 3d, google how to use vanishing points or something....

Deadpoolz - i like the metal, i think the t looks a bit too isolated, i think it should be moved a bit so it has some 3d..... just a suggestion :)...... still all three are looking pretty good

AMK - dammmmm yo thats haawwt, colour it and post it!!!!

havnt sketched in a while but here's a couple new things
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/DSCF2710.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/DSCF2711.jpg

14nick
06-10-2007, 12:38 PM
saton : what does that say?

amk: lol nothing i can say better than mee :):)


and witch of theese do you guys think is best?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures004.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures005.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures006.jpg


BUMP. :( witch is best. im not asking for crits....


Edit: mind o matter. abc cuz its a battle word. lol :P i write BRI2. i jus got bored of writting it so i checked up comming battles.

Linkzone1
06-10-2007, 12:38 PM
I'm gonna say what anyone else would say. Go back to the basics. Find some structure

mind.or.matter
06-10-2007, 12:43 PM
Edit: mind o matter. abc cuz its a battle word. lol :P i write BRI2. i jus got bored of writting it so i checked up comming battles.



oooohhh sorry, i havnt been on b.s in a while, i dint know it was a battle word :D

Drakula
06-10-2007, 12:48 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Image006-1.jpg

2 new sketches.The bottom one has lower case r.

knewsince.
06-10-2007, 01:01 PM
try to make all of them the same case like upper n lower. and dontmake them different widths like the d is really fat and then the RAK is real skinny

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 01:07 PM
saton : what does that say?

amk: lol nothing i can say better than mee :):)


and witch of theese do you guys think is best?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures004.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures005.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/nickypictures006.jpg
what does which one say ?

Drakula
06-10-2007, 01:15 PM
try to make all of them the same case like upper n lower. and dontmake them different widths like the d is really fat and then the RAK is real skinny

That's good advice thanks.The height looked okay before I did the 3D.Is that a sort of unspoken rule that all the letters have to be the same case?I thought it could be anything.

[breakout]-azer
06-10-2007, 01:17 PM
abc- i dont like any of them you should throw them a way and start simple, forget fill n 3d n just practice the simples. edward sezer hands did a good example of simples 2 start ill find that for you .

knewsince.
06-10-2007, 01:18 PM
it could. but when you're first startin out its better to keep them the same case

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 01:30 PM
^nope.

Case is pretty much irrelevant...dunno where you got that idea from.

-GEKS-
06-10-2007, 01:35 PM
heres some new sketches
crits
nothin on this page, so im not givin any
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0986.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0985.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0984.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0982.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0981.jpg

Drakula
06-10-2007, 01:39 PM
^they get better as they go down,just clean them up a little bit and you'll have some good simples.

Nem
06-10-2007, 01:50 PM
geks, your color schemes are decent, but definitely work on your blending. the 4th one down has a bit of potential in my opinion. keep sketching.

enue, the structure on that second one is horrendous. way too many unneeded bars. keep working on it.

linkzone, i think its beautiful. cant read it. that could just be me being the toy i am though. ha.

nick, try to clean up your lines.

drakula, move your letters closer together in the first one. or at least construct your A differently so it doesn't look so seperated from the R. i love that D though.

still tryin to evolve.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs8.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs7.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs6.jpg

DragonK4
06-10-2007, 01:58 PM
scab, like the second, the third is to skinny, fatten up the lines, idk. the first one u can get more glare and shadows idk

whatever..

Nem
06-10-2007, 02:00 PM
thanks bra. ill fatten that one up and post a pic later today. thanks.

alive
06-10-2007, 02:07 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03236.jpg




so fucking bored.

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:08 PM
i write valen now............... not really.. anything?...
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_06_001.jpg

Math3_b3ans
06-10-2007, 02:11 PM
Your not in 666, and start with simples. Simples are always good no matter what.


I go to school with Recon, i did that piece for him, he seemed to like it...

10 Ton
06-10-2007, 02:17 PM
scab beleive it or not i kinda like your idea on the first one althought id just work alot more on cleaning your lines. 2nd throwie isnt to bad, and the third is alright, although again, keep it clean. its good that your taking everyones advice on doing simples first to get your lettes and lines clean. keep it up.


TODAY"S PIECES

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P8060312.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P8060313.jpg

Those lyrics or Dr. Dre FYI

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 02:22 PM
Cezr...I kinda took your speech bubble and the gold tooth thing, hope you don't mind bro.

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/161/8/8/Black_and_White____by_SUMOE.jpg

alive
06-10-2007, 02:24 PM
i write valen now............... not really.. anything?...
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_06_001.jpg


this looks so much like fula. im not saying its a bite or ne bullshit, it just struck me. something abt the picture itself to, the brownness of the lines. wierd. umm. im not really being helpful. tell me ur not actually from japan? thats freaking me out. haha. so yeahh.

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:24 PM
hahaha// sume i like that.. what if yoy give one a missing tooth? or chipped. or corn in between it..

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:26 PM
this looks so much like fula. im not saying its a bite or ne bullshit, it just struck me. something abt the picture itself to, the brownness of the lines. wierd. umm. im not really being helpful. tell me ur not actually from japan? thats freaking me out. haha. so yeahh.


the browness is just my printer being too "high quality" and makin gray lines brown.. why does japan frak you out?

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 02:27 PM
haha, yeah, I'ma make a lot of these, only take 5-10 minutes to make...

I'll probably do some missing teeth and shit like that.

edit: as for your piece, it kinda does look like Fula did it; not the letters though, just the overall look...weirdddd.
looks messy and the lines could be cleaner but the letters themselves are pretty decent, just make sure the bars don't get too fucked up, lose those arrows too.

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:31 PM
its just in pencil dude. lol. itll be cleaner. and i dont know what fulas stuff looks like can you show me?

Nem
06-10-2007, 02:32 PM
scab beleive it or not i kinda like your idea on the first one althought id just work alot more on cleaning your lines. 2nd throwie isnt to bad, and the third is alright, although again, keep it clean. its good that your taking everyones advice on doing simples first to get your lettes and lines clean. keep it up.

ha. isnt that what advice is for?

i guess im just not an idiot like most toys.

do you think that throw is worthy of painting at all? i have some interesting ideas for fills.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 02:34 PM
i write valen now............... not really.. anything?...
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_06_001.jpg
looks good, clean it up and ink it

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 02:35 PM
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3461/needsworkct5.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=needsworkct5.jpg)
does the "s" match the a and the n?... crits so far

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:36 PM
you clean it up and ink it... haha.. sorry.. no saoten

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 02:40 PM
haha allright i didnt think so, thanks man

alive
06-10-2007, 02:40 PM
bump. all of asia scares me.

sume ya dope. umm. i cant remember who else was there. alrdy talked abt u baze. i like it in a wierd way.

caer one line grime. nyc

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03236.jpg

Bazer
06-10-2007, 02:42 PM
you forgot the I on teh 2nd img

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 02:49 PM
Cezr...I kinda took your speech bubble and the gold tooth thing, hope you don't mind bro.

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/161/8/8/Black_and_White____by_SUMOE.jpg
your fills look so solid what are you using for them?

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 02:51 PM
thats just a sharpie and a couple paint markers.

amk
06-10-2007, 03:03 PM
how big is that thing...isit like Grafeild..a fat cat ?..i hate cats...you shud do a cute doggy

Nem
06-10-2007, 03:03 PM
still tryin to evolve.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs8.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs7.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs6.jpg

new page bap.

alive, i dunno. i guess i just can't appreciate that kind of style. its not appealing to my eye at all. maybe if it was cleaned up a bit. it just looks like a bunch of swirly lines to me around the third letter area.

baze, thats pretty sick. i like the jaggedness of it. cant wait to see it inked.

sume, i want to see more of your handstyles. theyre awesome.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 03:08 PM
i thought sumes karak was a dog..

10 Ton
06-10-2007, 03:09 PM
scab beleive it or not i kinda like your idea on the first one althought id just work alot more on cleaning your lines. 2nd throwie isnt to bad, and the third is alright, although again, keep it clean. its good that your taking everyones advice on doing simples first to get your lettes and lines clean. keep it up.


TODAY"S PIECES

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P8060312.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/Exp10s10n/P8060313.jpg

Those lyrics are Dr. Dre FYI

no love?

Bazer
06-10-2007, 03:10 PM
no. you overlooked mine... what ever happened to the people with "give crits before asking them" in their sigs? did they all leave?

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 03:13 PM
how big is that thing...isit like Grafeild..a fat cat ?..i hate cats...you shud do a cute doggy

It looks nothing like Garfield, lol...I dunno what it is, I just drew something I thought looked good.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 03:13 PM
10 ton- for the 1st pece make it way less squigilley, thats pretty much it

HuntingLOLs
06-10-2007, 03:20 PM
how big is that thing...isit like Grafeild..a fat cat ?..i hate cats...you shud do a cute doggy

cats > dogs all day. only pussies love dogs :p

amk
06-10-2007, 03:34 PM
ugh Dogs are so kool..cats look at yah all creepy and shit..theyre so unpredictable..

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 03:49 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/8652/ankks5.th.jpg (http://img104.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ankks5.jpg)
leave as ANK or finish it and do SANKENT ???

alive
06-10-2007, 04:01 PM
use bars damnit. and then erase them damnit. haha. ur A looks like n H cuz u didnt erase. but use bars. bars.

amk
06-10-2007, 04:12 PM
Ank..Amk..this will b a right bitch..
Listen to Alive also..
Bars are like god..
you need them / him blah

updateee
howzit lookz

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/213ds.jpg

whota

Dizzze
06-10-2007, 04:14 PM
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/3573/yodadizyl0.jpg

10 Ton
06-10-2007, 04:24 PM
no. you overlooked mine... what ever happened to the people with "give crits before asking them" in their sigs? did they all leave?

i left a crit wise guy. either tell me something about my pieces or shut the fuck up.

-ShAmEE-
06-10-2007, 04:27 PM
Ank..Amk..this will b a right bitch..
Listen to Alive also..
Bars are like god..
you need them / him blah

updateee
howzit lookz

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/213ds.jpg

whota

this shit is the shizzang. tng tng tng yeh. nice one ras u bad mo fo.

www.myspace.com/thenextgeneration9 (http://www.myspace.com/thenextgeneration9) check that shit out.

diz yeh nice.

alive
06-10-2007, 04:28 PM
shamee is a fool. umm. it was better before u inked fill.

amk
06-10-2007, 04:29 PM
i left a crit wise guy. either tell me something about my pieces or shut the fuck up.


WooooOOOOW:confused: Have some courtsesy..atleast say please..damn..where is everyone manners..
Here my crit for you
Dont talk shit to people who can burn you by 10000000000 miles adult

i was thinkin the same aliveee

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 04:34 PM
Ank..Amk..this will b a right bitch..
Listen to Alive also..
Bars are like god..
you need them / him blah

updateee
howzit lookz

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/213ds.jpg

whota
fill looks good, and i didnt even noticed the ank and amk thing till you said it not trying to bite or anything sorry man ill finishit then

amk
06-10-2007, 04:34 PM
haha I dont care mate..do what ever the hell you want

glass
06-10-2007, 04:35 PM
haha nice amk, that sketch looks like it's coming along sick too

bouncingsoul
06-10-2007, 04:40 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0821.jpg

knewsince.
06-10-2007, 04:46 PM
BOUNCING I LOVE YOU!!!

hehe reversable :D
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/HEHEHAHAA.jpg

amk
06-10-2007, 04:48 PM
oooh shit..how the hell you work that out..damn..that is fucking dope

Nem
06-10-2007, 04:48 PM
bouncing, ive seen way better characters from you. good though.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 04:49 PM
i seriously can not figure out how to do bars...im retarted, anyone have an easy explanation?

alive
06-10-2007, 04:51 PM
somewhere, but finding it would take time. and i could make another, but that would take time. fuck. typing this is taking time. n i gotta go walk my dog, but if no one has answered u by the time i do that, and i do the dishes, then ill get it done.

amk
06-10-2007, 04:52 PM
i found it hard at first..
basically..
take each part of what makes a letter..
sepreate it..then make bars..
like an A

> A

take that part away..you have this ... /

A <

take that part away you have this..\

A
^

take that part away you have this ... -

then its just a case of fatting them up a lil..
hope i helped yah..
an i just typed this whole post without looking at the keybaord..whoa

bouncingsoul
06-10-2007, 04:56 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0822.jpg

Dial.on
06-10-2007, 04:57 PM
http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/4763/picture43432435ld2.jpg

Dial.on
06-10-2007, 05:02 PM
my bad on the last post...knews dope characs..but ye i agree i think ur other ones were better...a qwik sketch.. hate the "R"..but owell...crits?

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture43432435.jpg

Sumoe
06-10-2007, 05:03 PM
You bit SMUG's "G"...

swingforblood
06-10-2007, 05:05 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/img064.jpg

*Wing*
06-10-2007, 05:11 PM
BOUNCING I LOVE YOU!!!

hehe reversable :D
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/HEHEHAHAA.jpg

How the hell did you figure this out? :D Great eye you have :)

Amk: I like the fill, it's goin' to be a burner!

10 Ton
06-10-2007, 05:16 PM
WooooOOOOW:confused: Have some courtsesy..atleast say please..damn..where is everyone manners..
Here my crit for you
Dont talk shit to people who can burn you by 10000000000 miles adult

i was thinkin the same aliveee

i wasnt talkin shit to the whole thread, just the dude that thought it was equally cool to call me out for not giving crits when i did.

bouncingsoul
06-10-2007, 05:20 PM
How the hell did you figure this out? :D Great eye you have :)

Yeah for real, what the fuck? Hahaha

This reversible shit is fun

"dylan" upside down and right side up

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0823.jpg

Nem
06-10-2007, 05:28 PM
now thats talent.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 05:49 PM
i found it hard at first..
basically..
take each part of what makes a letter..
sepreate it..then make bars..
like an A

> A

take that part away..you have this ... /

A <

take that part away you have this..\

A
^

take that part away you have this ... -

then its just a case of fatting them up a lil..
hope i helped yah..
an i just typed this whole post without looking at the keybaord..whoa
haha thanks so much man that will help me alot, now it actually make sence

Bomber444
06-10-2007, 05:55 PM
dam bouncingsoul that shit is crazy. I have no idea how u fucking did that.

~Saoten154~
06-10-2007, 05:59 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/294/ank2ic3.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ank2ic3.jpg)

pece i was working on before...didnt really take much time on it so easy on the crits and im aware that the A looks like and H

Vice
06-10-2007, 06:01 PM
yeah ill admit it. that reversable thing was dope.

Cyto Aka Son1c
06-10-2007, 06:10 PM
I messed up on a couple things but.

Crits?

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/306/kresyellownb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mojost
06-10-2007, 06:23 PM
started about 3 months ago
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0665.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0677-1.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/errorr.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0855.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0866.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0833.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0811.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0799.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0722.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0822.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0800.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0688.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0788.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0755.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0711.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0777.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0766.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0744.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0733.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0700.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0699.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b134/morgasim69/picz0677.jpg

crits?

[biohazard]
06-10-2007, 06:25 PM
Dude ^^^ they are pretty much all gonna tell u to do simple straight bars like this "ALIEN" so thats pretty much it then evolve the bars from there bro

Cyto Aka Son1c
06-10-2007, 06:30 PM
Krits for my piece KRES plz...

dizzle_d
06-10-2007, 06:32 PM
saoten- work on those simples
cyto- get rid of those unnecessary extensions, its hard to tell thats a K. keep doin simples.
mojost- simples.... like block letters, like what you've got on that snoop one, but thicken them up.

okkkkk...
yeah so I started drawing my pieces bigger, I'm still trying to get my simples down.
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2271/img1234ng7.jpg
constructive crits? I could use some

mojost
06-10-2007, 06:32 PM
your R kinda looks like a B to me

mojost
06-10-2007, 06:32 PM
thats was for the kres guy

whahappen?
06-10-2007, 06:33 PM
fucking idiot^
haha nevermind thought u meant merk

[biohazard]
06-10-2007, 06:40 PM
Merk- i like it bro cept i think the first part of the M is curved jus a lil to much looks awkward to me. other than that its find and you should color it probly and give it a lil 3d

whahappen?
06-10-2007, 06:45 PM
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/3573/yodadizyl0.jpg
BUMP

ODonthesetrees
06-10-2007, 06:45 PM
ugh Dogs are so kool..cats look at yah all creepy and shit..theyre so unpredictable..
only the shitty kinds of cats do that...my cat is bomb, way better than any dog...

AyteYourCookies
06-10-2007, 06:49 PM
that 3d peice is dope, so is the character, i wish i could do 3d.

knewsince.
06-10-2007, 07:44 PM
How the hell did you figure this out? :D Great eye you have :)

Amk: I like the fill, it's goin' to be a burner!

i dunno. it made me turn my head and i saw another face

ESKE one
06-10-2007, 07:57 PM
that 3d peice is dope, so is the character, i wish i could do 3d.
not really its iight he got potential but if you were to save it and rotate it you would see its not all its pumped up to be

edit with a pic
wat chu guys think

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs055.jpg

glass
06-10-2007, 08:05 PM
i don't really like those connections or the extensions/arrows. have you done anything with bars yet? maybe you should try those or blockbusters for a bit, or try and keep your stuff cleaner/more simple. but just to clarify, your letters don't look too bad. if you work more with them they could look better. hope that helps dude.

alive
06-10-2007, 08:07 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03239.jpg


for bouncing

knewsince.
06-10-2007, 08:15 PM
i dont really like the s but everything else looks good

rayseone
06-10-2007, 08:21 PM
eske, i think that the connections connecting lil bits of letters together arewnt working so ditch them commpletely, work on the top of your E it looks like you have a few differents styles like kinda imixed in to one. try and make your lines flow too because they look reallyforced and shakey, basically lose the extensisons the just pop out in the middle of a bar because they hardly ever work unless they are done right, once you realise where extensions look good you will think why the hell did i put that there but that why u gotta learn structure. so juts kepp rocking the simpler letters and you will progress

ESKE one
06-10-2007, 08:21 PM
alive i agree with knewsince

and im pretty lost in this shyt man writersblock is a bitxh and its making me mad like everything i do is just garbage. i though i would have developped a style by now and i just cant find i cant tap into it. its like i do a piece and then i look at it and i think it looks pretty good but wen i post it and take a long look i relize that i dont know wat the fuck i was thinking and i do simplier letters and it just looks so boring so i try to spice it up and i end up fucking up

idont know man sorry for the novel i just need so major advice

wiserism
06-10-2007, 08:27 PM
Cezr...I kinda took your speech bubble and the gold tooth thing, hope you don't mind bro.

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/161/8/8/Black_and_White____by_SUMOE.jpg
fresh shit homie im lovein the characta

wiserism
06-10-2007, 08:34 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img044.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img048.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img046.jpg
i did the bottom piece "ske3"

belo dia
06-10-2007, 08:42 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5875/scan0001ho4.jpg

glass
06-10-2007, 08:53 PM
yeah eske i know what you mean, writers block is a bitch. whever i get it i always just do stuff like this over and over working with one letter of my name. it's faster and i can practice more types of letters if i want.

http://i14.tinypic.com/6euz7fo.jpg

bloodlandmoney
06-10-2007, 09:16 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img044.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img048.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/img046.jpg
i did the bottom piece "ske3"

all thats way dope... maybe even non toy dope;)

wiserism
06-10-2007, 09:37 PM
thankz man i was going for not toy when i did them lol

glass
06-10-2007, 09:37 PM
i didn;t like the middle one too much but the first and last were awesome

belo dia
06-10-2007, 09:49 PM
whatchu guys thinkin' on this...
highlighters suck

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1695/42rdv6.jpg

wiserism
06-10-2007, 10:01 PM
i love it shit is sexy....... but wats it say??

AnteUp
06-10-2007, 10:04 PM
naw mane, lukks like u tryna jump straight ta tha 666 crew homes

belo dia
06-10-2007, 10:05 PM
thanks bro

says DEFENDR

belo dia
06-10-2007, 10:06 PM
ha.

no where near gesus and them

uhhh
06-10-2007, 10:13 PM
comes off kind of tight.
but the letter structure really lacking.
and ante, there not the first to do that style.
and theres a bunch of people in 666 anyays, most dont have that style..

AnteUp
06-10-2007, 10:17 PM
it jus reminds me of them :)

belo dia
06-10-2007, 10:20 PM
thanks for the crit everyone.

IwriteNASR
06-10-2007, 10:29 PM
belo i like that style on the last page
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2110/chgfhis0.jpg
crits

Bazer
06-10-2007, 10:32 PM
i left a crit wise guy. either tell me something about my pieces or shut the fuck up.

battle me.

freakeenyc
06-10-2007, 11:00 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8590/cimg6789uh3.jpg
real quick sketch..

freakeenyc
06-10-2007, 11:07 PM
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/3573/yodadizyl0.jpg
turn this shit 90 degrees counterclockwise.....fuking bumped cuz i think its great

10 Ton
06-10-2007, 11:15 PM
battle me.

thats ok. id get beat. although i kinda blew up and i apologize, just dont be a dick to me when i already gave a crit like your some god.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-10-2007, 11:16 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8590/cimg6789uh3.jpg
real quick sketch..
i like for a quick pen sketch
do it pencil next teim and tweek it up a bit and i think it'd look pretty dope.

Big_Pimpin
06-10-2007, 11:45 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h192/etniesbmx/Hink.jpg


Crits please..

Bazer
06-11-2007, 12:04 AM
lol.. how bout outlining your letters wih a thin black marker? it helps.. work on your k though it looks funny.

Big_Pimpin
06-11-2007, 12:08 AM
Alright lol...The "K" has been giving me trouble for awhile now. But im stuck at doing simples..I cant seem to grip a style, Ive been doing this for just about 6 months haha...I suck.

Bazer
06-11-2007, 12:15 AM
Alright lol...The "K" has been giving me trouble for awhile now. But im stuck at doing simples..I cant seem to grip a style, Ive been doing this for just about 6 months haha...I suck.


really the only wrong thing is the part on the right. work on the pink circled part and and some flave to you letters like i did to the k. the different colors are differe ways of extending and progressing ith simples. just keep workin dude. it takes time.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/jkhjkhjk.jpg

Bazer
06-11-2007, 12:18 AM
god i hate wide ass pages. damn you freak....... :)

Big_Pimpin
06-11-2007, 12:37 AM
ahhh ic...

Thanks man that helped alot haha.

AnteUp
06-11-2007, 12:40 AM
mah newest shit... i like it but in reality it could suck ass... TEZE,SKETCH,SAME, CCC...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0019-1.jpg
crits pleasse

Big_Pimpin
06-11-2007, 12:44 AM
shit man thats pretty dope.


And 1nonly that "K" is pretty basic eh? Mind if I use it??Or would that be considered biting haha?

Bazer
06-11-2007, 12:50 AM
no go ahead. the four elemtents wouldn't be where theyre at if it wasn't for biting. i wouldn't consider it a bite anyway. its pretty basic stuff.

Kayone707
06-11-2007, 01:26 AM
ante. i like the way that "Sketch" flows. cept for the C, its a little bit hidden.see what i mean?
but all of em would make some crazy ass rollers

AnteUp
06-11-2007, 01:30 AM
in mah peice "same" i cant get tha fuckin a and m ta flow >:(

edit: on the sketch peice the reason the c is hidden is cuz i couldnt fit it on the page if i made it the desired length

Kayone707
06-11-2007, 01:35 AM
paint them with rollers!

AnteUp
06-11-2007, 01:40 AM
im not allowed to paint...illegal for toys in 35 states...

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-11-2007, 02:33 AM
imma have yours tomorrow homeboy.

dizzle_d
06-11-2007, 07:10 AM
Big Pimpin- thats a nice simple, you should outline it

Anteup- I love your style man, they all look good but I like the sketch one the most. the colors on the Same one are nice....

sane4life
06-11-2007, 07:14 AM
jus started, what should i improve n work on
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/06-11-07_0802.jpg

dizzle_d
06-11-2007, 07:37 AM
Sane4life Read This-


i found it hard at first..
basically..
take each part of what makes a letter..
sepreate it..then make bars..
like an A

> A

take that part away..you have this ... /

A <

take that part away you have this..\

A
^

take that part away you have this ... -

then its just a case of fatting them up a lil..
hope i helped yah..
an i just typed this whole post without looking at the keybaord..whoa

G - Wahl
06-11-2007, 07:48 AM
im not allowed to paint...illegal for toys in 35 states...
best thing said in this thread so far

SEEK_ONE
06-11-2007, 08:01 AM
get rid of crown
fix your shadowing
just damn it fix everything

SEEK_ONE
06-11-2007, 10:11 AM
im having a hard time with Rs
can someone post a bunch of Rs halfway thru words

Fluffy Bunnies
06-11-2007, 10:40 AM
no. you overlooked mine... what ever happened to the people with &quot;give crits before asking them&quot; in their sigs? did they all leave?

We all have writers block so we don't post a lot so we don't care anymore :)

Casa45
06-11-2007, 12:50 PM
mah newest shit... i like it but in reality it could suck ass... TEZE,SKETCH,SAME, CCC...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0019-1.jpg
crits pleasse

I like em but they're kinda of boring.... but i guess its a step up from your old stuff....

Bomber444
06-11-2007, 12:51 PM
yea I had some bad writers block last night, u just gott work through it, i actually made something i really like, ill post it later.

uhhh
06-11-2007, 12:52 PM
anyone wanna exchange?
piece or tag?
some one decent pleaseee.

OH,
knews and caer(if you still write that?)
i have pieces for both of you.
but my camera battery just started charging, so later today maybe?

Bomber444
06-11-2007, 01:35 PM
here is the peice i did last night, one of my best yet i think
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/nyce.jpg

and 1 i did for my friend a while ago
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/cor.jpg
crits?

-ShAmEE-
06-11-2007, 01:51 PM
dont waste ur time on ur fill. work on them letters. blocked letters. kno ur stucture.

amk
06-11-2007, 01:58 PM
Listen to Shhamee Bomber44

okay
if your wonering..
why the fill is crazy
i basically..
closed my eyes...and whatever colour i picked up..i worked with..

aha

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

cwits

sketch3
06-11-2007, 01:59 PM
dont pick ya colors like that again,jk

enigmatic
06-11-2007, 02:00 PM
lose the spray can and the black blobs. this ones paintworthy for sure. the letters are the shit.

trashhh
06-11-2007, 02:01 PM
very nice amkah id say its ur best

-ShAmEE-
06-11-2007, 02:07 PM
Listen to Shhamee Bomber44

okay
if your wonering..
why the fill is crazy
i basically..
closed my eyes...and whatever colour i picked up..i worked with..

aha

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

cwits


who eva tells u to lose the can should be a dead man.

fills kool. but i think you should fill the hole letter the same, dont make every bar different...nice one captain.

AnteUp
06-11-2007, 02:08 PM
I like em but they're kinda of boring.... but i guess its a step up from your old stuff....

how do i make them... ummm... unboring?

Vice
06-11-2007, 02:10 PM
yeah do NOT get rid of the can it looks great. although i would say that you should get rid of the black blobs, i think it takes away from it.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-11-2007, 02:11 PM
anyone wanna exchange?
piece or tag?
some one decent pleaseee.

OH,
knews and caer(if you still write that?)
i have pieces for both of you.
but my camera battery just started charging, so later today maybe?

I will... I will post it tomorrow, cuz I am getting home late tonight and when I get home I will do it..

What do you write?

I write KILS now... Cynik got annoying.. you can only do so much with C's