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AnteUp
06-13-2007, 05:49 PM
is the last one rick ross or ice cube or who is it?

HoodRichSucka
06-13-2007, 05:55 PM
Rick Ross

AnteUp
06-13-2007, 05:59 PM
yeeeeaaaauhhhh!!!!! i win!! lol it lukks really gud mane

HoodRichSucka
06-13-2007, 06:19 PM
^appreciate it man, now can u guess who the first pic is of (dude smoking)

snub-0
06-13-2007, 06:19 PM
yeah

nice man. i really like what you did with the little markings on the insidae of the letters. letter structure is nice too.

Sumoe
06-13-2007, 06:32 PM
^appreciate it man, now can u guess who the first pic is of (dude smoking)

hmmm...T-Kid.

I know because I've seen you say it before.

:)

Looks good, the letters need work but I like the portraits.

HoodRichSucka
06-13-2007, 07:03 PM
thanks for the 'constructive' critizism. appreciate it man. big fan of ur work

-d

whahappen?
06-13-2007, 07:08 PM
2 throws i did faster than usual
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2405/picture121hf1.jpg
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/729/picture123il1.jpg
better version of my tall hand
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/879/picture122eh6.jpg

bountyhunter113
06-13-2007, 07:09 PM
Eh?

Ehh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0828.jpg
yea man looks like u ran outta room for the "K",imo ur bending ur "n" to the point where it can be another letter.............but freakin dope nonetheless

dizzle_d
06-13-2007, 07:29 PM
hoodrich- those are nice. Rick Ross ohhh shiittttt
whahappen- those throws are fucking NICEE. damn

so I went simpler again. didn't bother too much on the fill, at my stage it doesn't matter, and thats not what I need to work on. Also I've been doing my pieces a lot bigger now. instead of small quarter pagers I'm actually using almost the whole page...
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/846/img1264im3.jpg
constructive crits...

Sumoe
06-13-2007, 07:41 PM
Dope shit, bouncin'...

glass
06-13-2007, 08:33 PM
got really bored, practiced letter structure. crits?

http://i8.tinypic.com/4t67ujp.jpg

dizzle: i like that E, the whole piece has pretty good flow to it, except maybe move that K to the left a really little bit.

capitol
06-13-2007, 08:35 PM
I went cheap and bought some really bright lookin sharpies at wal mart, they look alright to me.
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8620/graf287zm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/8995/graf286ls9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CriitZ?

Bouncing:Dope shit monn
DizzleD:i like it, but the E looks alittl off to me.

AnteUp
06-13-2007, 08:40 PM
dizzle-the m is better the r's leg needs to be down like the k's leg keep it up
glas- i like em' the a is kinda too regular
envr-u HAVE to go to bars no bending or nuthin, you see how ur style isnt goin anywhere? thats cuz ur refusing to do simples, if you do simples thats startin from the bottom, work ur way to the top an ull find a style that works for you and one that everyone likes

Robbie P
06-13-2007, 08:51 PM
Listen to Ante Envr, do bars or simple shit because right now your stuff sucks; alot. Heres like a 90 second computer simple that should help.
http://a.photos.cx/COCK-964.JPG

capitol
06-13-2007, 09:04 PM
Serious?i ythought it looked fairly good.

ESKE one
06-13-2007, 09:07 PM
exchange with morn wat chu think

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs061.jpg

glass
06-13-2007, 09:08 PM
capitol: they are a bit messy, you want to try and keep the lines even and clean. once you progress enough you can take more liberties with length and width as you get better

uhhh
06-13-2007, 09:11 PM
rask!
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-022S.jpg

ESKE one
06-13-2007, 09:14 PM
ok cool ill have it to ya in 24 hours k? remember no colour

lol hasnt post since then

HoodRichSucka
06-13-2007, 09:18 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/DSCN2185.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/DSCN2183.jpg

older..

IwriteNASR
06-13-2007, 09:25 PM
uhh- i like it
hoodrich- i like the s alot not so much the m
i cant fucking color
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2725/nasr6es3.jpg
crits

HoodRichSucka
06-13-2007, 09:28 PM
uhhh- not seeing improvment..
nasr- keep it up

capitol
06-13-2007, 09:44 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/1543/graf288ah3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
is this betteR?:S(I need an R)
Hoodrich:looks like some hippi stuff..nice
Nasr:Nice The R kinda looked like a K at first though.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-13-2007, 09:45 PM
hoodrich sucka- work on that s. stick with the simples on top thats some nice ish.
nasr- make your stuff bigger you have a full page left man use it. But work on your letters more specifically the R.
Envr- not bad but still sloppy clean it up.
some permanent marker freestyles.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0529.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0530.jpg

goneroner
06-13-2007, 09:50 PM
crits?



http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1349/544814454_1d0fd3ed14.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1278/544948693_c5088cc9b6.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1187/544948595_30668758f8.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1326/544948571_d264009de8.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1361/544830276_4b7a4b7bd9.jpg

bloodlandmoney
06-13-2007, 09:57 PM
great throwups but work on handstyle

RFI. SPit
06-13-2007, 10:00 PM
yea man looks like u ran outta room for the "K",imo ur bending ur "n" to the point where it can be another letter.............but freakin dope nonetheless

I love it, so funky mang

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-13-2007, 10:00 PM
hoodrich sucka- work on that s. stick with the simples on top thats some nice ish.
nasr- make your stuff bigger you have a full page left man use it. But work on your letters more specifically the R.
Envr- not bad but still sloppy clean it up.
some permanent marker freestyles.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0529.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0530.jpg
bottom of page
perk work on your throwies pretty generic and your handstyle looks like some regular ish to me.

Casa45
06-13-2007, 10:07 PM
dude your handstyle is so dope.. like yours and cezrs the most... and krooks

Jroc1993
06-13-2007, 10:09 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/967/mornepieceed4.jpg
heres some randomness i put together when i was watchin style wars
crits?

Sumoe
06-13-2007, 10:11 PM
trash it and do straight letters for now...

StraySaint
06-13-2007, 10:13 PM
My first Post :D
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1306/543531570_848dfde620.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1175/534148004_2aab634319.jpg

ESKE one
06-13-2007, 10:14 PM
exchange with morn wat chu think

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs061.jpg
teze love your simples

malne911
06-13-2007, 10:20 PM
eske to many unnecessary arrows extensions letters are good though..
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5007/cinean1.jpg
crits

mas$
06-13-2007, 10:26 PM
k all the entries have been Pm'd to misfit(dont vote here wait for the poll, this jus showed who entered wit wat), thers
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00533.jpg
^^Huntinglols
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-021S.jpg
^^Uhhh
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4541/pic065vs2.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pic065vs2.jpgMine

EasyMac
06-13-2007, 10:30 PM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w35/easymac156/chumpbattle.jpg
malne - i like the fill..3d seems off though
I did this for a battle ...any crits maybe?

StraySaint
06-13-2007, 10:33 PM
eske to many unnecessary arrows extensions letters are good though..
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5007/cinean1.jpg
crits

leak the curve at the top of the C into the I
as well as the N into the E

knewsince.
06-13-2007, 10:43 PM
teze those r sexy.
morne, listen to sume.
saint, the emily is good. the grotesque isnt so good. dont make the bubbles have so many dents.
cine, make them going in a straight line n not curved and make the dominat bar the same on all
easy mac, that is dyn0-mite!!

i saw people doing the 1 letter thing, so i tried it not for the battle. 1.5 minute pen sketch ( i put the light lines for no appearant reasons on purpose).

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Tbytch.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-13-2007, 10:49 PM
nice T.

AnteUp
06-13-2007, 10:58 PM
my battle entry...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0023.jpg
knew- thas a nice tea mane :)
easy- that shits tight
uhhh- i like the r the best
teze- thas sum badass shit

sex without condoms
06-13-2007, 11:11 PM
rask!
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-022S.jpg

your S kida looks like the fuckin' illest G bby

Chalk
06-14-2007, 12:10 AM
Edward"Sezer"Hands (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=22996) - i've always been a fan of the somewhat dirty look of your stuff. letters are getting there too.

new from me
simplified the C and i think i finaly got my K :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_redgblack.jpg

Casa45
06-14-2007, 12:16 AM
not feeling the "C" or the "K" but its still good. love the colors.

Bazer
06-14-2007, 12:18 AM
chalk. how bout you work on the middle top part of the k? like this maybe:

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/ffffffffffffffffffff.jpg

Casa45
06-14-2007, 12:20 AM
its the lower part that branches out that doesnt look good...

Roolete
06-14-2007, 12:20 AM
really feelin it, great job on the k..
have u tried it without the notch in thefar left side of the c?

Chalk
06-14-2007, 12:22 AM
sooo just make it a bit taller?

roolete - was just looking at it and thinking that...
thanks for the great feed back keep it comin.

mas$
06-14-2007, 12:26 AM
nice piece chalk..lovin the fills nice n clean..i agree wit Baze tho

StraySaint
06-14-2007, 12:36 AM
looks like i lost haahaha


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1216/543531576_ff4b87f3b6.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 01:28 AM
Edward"Sezer"Hands (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=22996) - i've always been a fan of the somewhat dirty look of your stuff. letters are getting there too.

new from me
simplified the C and i think i finaly got my K :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_redgblack.jpg
bump.
my karak for the dino battle.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0532.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0529.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0530.jpg

Kayone707
06-14-2007, 01:31 AM
Chalk, Sezer Hands. good letters you guys. props

AnteUp
06-14-2007, 01:34 AM
Chalk, Sezer Hands. good letters you guys. props
senyor kay i added you on myspace, im a little white boy okkk?

simonwuzere
06-14-2007, 01:37 AM
nice work on the chalk peice yo

Kayone707
06-14-2007, 01:38 AM
senyor kay i added you on myspace, im a little white boy okkk?

that dont help. haha, send me a message on myspace :cool:

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 01:40 AM
that dont help. haha, send me a message on myspace :cool:
I added you a minute ago too.

Chalk
06-14-2007, 01:40 AM
woah woah woah wait. there is a dino battle?
where? i want in.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 01:42 AM
hurry up and do it homeboy.
PM it to me.

trashhh
06-14-2007, 05:59 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41091.jpg

Tezer that middle one with pink 3d is banginnn!

SLEDGEHAMMER
06-14-2007, 06:37 AM
YES TRASH you sexy fucking beast thats illll, i like the smooth flow of the letter instead of your old blocky ones , props for the 3d, handsteez is dope, get outta this thread and into the big guns!

Chalk- on the K the structure looks weak, dont get me wrong the rest is solid man maybe try and give it a backbone something more like http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/40000000ad10677/1/44/tsTGhGQD7j8gBHE8lfmTgorMI-mG_KJ0.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/IAKYG-6j1D_5MZKCoxF42UrBmmXD_Rl3?referrer=hlnk).

Sezer- keep bangalanging out those cool sketches im fond of them and that dinos ill.

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 07:41 AM
Teze, Same, Knewsince, chalk, and Trash all niceee

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/846/img1264im3.jpg

crits

uhhh
06-14-2007, 08:08 AM
your S kida looks like the fuckin' illest G bby
dayum.
never thought of it that way.
that would be pretty tight.

Dial.on
06-14-2007, 08:24 AM
edward.. diggin dat charac

G - Wahl
06-14-2007, 09:27 AM
[QUOTE=trashhh;789583]http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41091.jpg

holy shit...

simonwuzere
06-14-2007, 10:13 AM
awesome work trashhh the shading was wack, did you use that blue pe at the side for all that ??

SLEDGEHAMMER
06-14-2007, 10:33 AM
"wack" means shit.

simonwuzere
06-14-2007, 10:36 AM
yeh i know,imeant nice work but didnt really like the shading man -_-

BORG
06-14-2007, 11:07 AM
teze love your simples
decent man, what do you write, i didn't get a pm or nuthin, lemme know and i'll slam one down

2ref
06-14-2007, 11:34 AM
im writing now for 6 months...
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2393/s6000416wc3.th.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/8849/s6000411wh2.th.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/9924/s6000356rr8.th.jpg
any tips??

nero122
06-14-2007, 11:53 AM
no its just randomly there post flicks and then crit im sick of toys sayin shits wack when theyr piece is some rainbow dioreah with arrows
im shit but atleast iv progressed

*i was talkin bout that wasere dude
, n 2ref the only nice one is the last one looks nice keep

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 12:00 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41091.jpg

Tezer that middle one with pink 3d is banginnn!
bump.

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 12:08 PM
Teze- all those are fire man. keep 'em comin
Trash- thats hot as hell man but the T seems to small although it does flow with the H's bar....
Ref- last ones pretty nice, colors kindof remind me of Esk's though

OKAY. so I didn't get many crits so here we go
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6438/img1265po5.jpg
crits on the letters

MakeĽ
06-14-2007, 12:20 PM
trash- that shit is fucking nice. I know your supposed to keep the letters all one size but that style is fine I don't mind the size difference... everything from that 3D to that handstyle is on point man.

merk- that looks good, I think the colors do alot for it though. it looks like your best letter is the E. I don't know if it's just me but the R is a bit awkward, keep at it though.

Vice
06-14-2007, 12:32 PM
i think the R and the K are the strongest but the E and the M dont fit...

Bazer
06-14-2007, 12:34 PM
simonwuzere why dont you post some work?

nero122
06-14-2007, 12:38 PM
the m looks outa place n the top of the 'e' looks a bit shit
other than that its niceeeee

panduh
06-14-2007, 12:41 PM
crits? (iv'e only benn doing this for 3 days so be gentle) :p

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k119/hahaimapanda/panduhtaggr.jpg

Casa45
06-14-2007, 12:42 PM
Trash that is hot.. but the "S" doesnt look good.

Casa45
06-14-2007, 12:44 PM
Teze- all those are fire man. keep 'em comin
Trash- thats hot as hell man but the T seems to small although it does flow with the H's bar....
Ref- last ones pretty nice, colors kindof remind me of Esk's though

OKAY. so I didn't get many crits so here we go
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6438/img1265po5.jpg
crits on the letters

sorry for double post... but MERK i think its much better.. but i would make your letters a little rounder.. they look too stiff... kna what i mean...

emokid
06-14-2007, 12:54 PM
trash, thats proper nice, the shading sets it offfff

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6519.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6520.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6521.jpg

them three are just titles in my art books, basically the only sketches i've done in a while.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6518.jpg

and i hope amk doesnt mind but i found myself writing his name, and then i thought i should ink it, and then i thought i might as well colour between the lines.

trashhh
06-14-2007, 12:56 PM
cheers for all the good commentss

Merk keep workin on it its lookin good.

yea casa the S is the worst letter i dont know how to do them half the time

edit: thanks emokid, really liking the 'designer' sketch and the Amkah is well nice

Casa45
06-14-2007, 12:59 PM
Yah "S"s do suck sometimes...

Deadpoolzer0
06-14-2007, 01:04 PM
Edit..Panduh....use proportional bars and stick to keyboard stuff...just dont stop trying...and alos dont take chunks out of the letters yet..just use bars..
Ok so here is my entry for the ABC battle...seriously done in about 2 hours lol it wsa the cards behind it that took time...basically games for a 52 card deck are on the bottom of the letters to tie it into a theme....but the letters dont really match or flow well....
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u78/deadpoolzer0/DSC04923.jpg

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 01:16 PM
thanks for the crits...

emokid- those are all real nice, I love em
deadpoolzer- It looks like the letters are from best to worst- like the A is good, B is alright and the C is horrible... the cards look proportioned well

:rolleyes:

alive
06-14-2007, 01:21 PM
its a throw battle. . . . .

Bazer
06-14-2007, 01:45 PM
poolzer your b and c need some work man.. it looks like you took more time on the a and then just did the b and see to finish up.

near
06-14-2007, 01:47 PM
trash the only thing i dont like about your pieces is how some of the letters "borrow" part of the other letters without attaching to them...it doesnt look right, you used to do it to your R all the time now your fixed that and did it to your S, if you fixed that up i think it would look better...

Bazer
06-14-2007, 01:50 PM
rockin old school.... iono why it just came out like that..
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_14_001.jpg

near
06-14-2007, 01:53 PM
^^ whats it say?

Bazer
06-14-2007, 01:53 PM
its a Q and an F

AnteUp
06-14-2007, 01:55 PM
lol, its a b and an a

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 01:57 PM
neverrminnddd
Ante beat me to it. :)

Bazer
06-14-2007, 01:58 PM
nevermind..

AnteUp
06-14-2007, 02:01 PM
hehe i win :) ayo merk u got a myspace ninja man? (insert old ninja smiley here)

tonentink
06-14-2007, 02:07 PM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5781/pacabetp2.jpgabc

bountyhunter113
06-14-2007, 02:20 PM
haha,that pacman stuff would make a kewl throwiee if u fixed it up

i'ma draw some more n den i'll post flix later

glass
06-14-2007, 02:20 PM
trash, thats proper nice, the shading sets it offfff

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6519.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6520.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6521.jpg

them three are just titles in my art books, basically the only sketches i've done in a while.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6518.jpg

and i hope amk doesnt mind but i found myself writing his name, and then i thought i should ink it, and then i thought i might as well colour between the lines.

bump because i love emo's letters

whahappen?
06-14-2007, 02:26 PM
shit emoid thats the best ive seen from you nice letters
tonetink submit the first throw at the top of the page the bottom ones kinda dumb since its fruit THEN the pacman, idk its just weird, original though
baze the top hole in the b is too small
throws i did faster than usual
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2405/picture121hf1.jpg
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/729/picture123il1.jpg
better tall hand
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/879/picture122eh6.jpg
reposts

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 02:29 PM
now we're talkin' turkey. those are some nice throws whahappen

ras
06-14-2007, 02:30 PM
Emokid....dope letters....and i hope you aint gonne write AMKAH..:( cuz you beat me hands down ... hehehe...why did you do it for me..?..

im supposed to banned...ooooops...
ugh but thanks EMO !

alive
06-14-2007, 02:33 PM
ooo wad u get banned 4 and by who?

ras
06-14-2007, 02:44 PM
i dont know who by..
and i got banned for...
talking about football..

Caer...care to exchange ?..
but i crnt do R's..
itll be a challenge !

Sumoe
06-14-2007, 02:49 PM
For the record, I have never banned any of your accounts...

-ShAmEE-
06-14-2007, 02:54 PM
sorry for double post... but MERK i think its much better.. but i would make your letters a little rounder.. they look too stiff... kna what i mean...

post a flick of your USED paint then

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 03:20 PM
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4649/001hn4.jpg
crits on the blocks?

sketch3
06-14-2007, 03:28 PM
keep the bars the same width, speciliy the e

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 03:33 PM
didnt really do bars i just used a ruler and did the lines. im horrible with bars

Dial.on
06-14-2007, 03:37 PM
morne..dont put ur letters so far apart.. put em closer together..

revolt92
06-14-2007, 03:38 PM
but bars are easy, and to be frank, those letters arn't even very good. And there's no point colouring yet either, get your letters down first. Don't do gay block simples either....lemme give you a tip

Don't listen to people on here (apart from sume c3zr ras trash etc) when they say simple because half the time when people say that they only say it cos everybody else does. Bars not simples, fuck simples what have they ever done for you?

Captain
06-14-2007, 03:48 PM
but bars are easy, and to be frank, those letters arn't even very good. And there's no point colouring yet either, get your letters down first. Don't do gay block simples either....lemme give you a tip

Don't listen to people on here (apart from sume c3zr ras trash etc) when they say simple because half the time when people say that they only say it cos everybody else does. Bars not simples, fuck simples what have they ever done for you?

usually when people say simple they mean to use bars. Because if we just said bars, sure kids'd go and use bars, but they'd use thousands.

Casa45
06-14-2007, 03:53 PM
post a flick of your USED paint then


Prob gunna go bombing this weekend... hope i have my camera.. then ill post some jibberis..

Casa45
06-14-2007, 03:56 PM
Saw baze post some old stuff. so thought i would too...



http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2500/elmobu2.jpg

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/2082/colortestingck8.jpg

ras
06-14-2007, 04:00 PM
why not..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t.jpg

seeing as im on the RAS account..why not sume old skool RAS !

HAHA..
THATS WHY YOU SHOULD DO SIMPLES ^

sketch3
06-14-2007, 04:01 PM
cuss its horrible.lol

HoodRichSucka
06-14-2007, 04:01 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/DSCN3085.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/DSCN3087.jpg

i dunno.

Casa45
06-14-2007, 04:05 PM
cuss its horrible.lol

WORD!!! lol

-ShAmEE-
06-14-2007, 04:09 PM
^^post a flick of your USED paint then

Casa45
06-14-2007, 04:11 PM
^^^
WTF are you talking about shamee?

whahappen?
06-14-2007, 04:12 PM
cuss its horrible.lol
LOL SUREEZLY????!?!?!!?!!!?!?1?1/1/!??!??

BORG
06-14-2007, 04:25 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9863/dscf1309dw5.jpg
bored in room
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6477/dscf1310xc3.jpg
for teze...enjoy

daisyface
06-14-2007, 04:30 PM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2500/elmobu2.jpg

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/2082/colortestingck8.jpg

i really like these and i like the last one's colors

ras
06-14-2007, 04:35 PM
LOL SUREEZLY????!?!?!!?!!!?!?1?1/1/!??!??

iv improved..;)

Casa45
06-14-2007, 04:37 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/170/pumpnqn9.jpghttp://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2995/swok2zj1.jpg
i really like these and i like the last one's colors

Thanks.. heres some new stuff..

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/913/swoe2rz7.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-14-2007, 04:38 PM
^^^
WTF are you talking about shamee?


u sed u get up so, i wanna see u painted piece.

Casa45
06-14-2007, 04:40 PM
I just said iam going out this weekend... can you read???

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9387/swoe1gh1.jpg

BOKAone
06-14-2007, 04:55 PM
new stuff i drew up in the airport to florida, inking it kinda ruined it....crits...
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/329/0000002ut0.jpg

sketch3
06-14-2007, 04:59 PM
naa the wack structer ruined it

Ackrite
06-14-2007, 05:16 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture.jpg

quick throwie idea
not so clean it was quick
any ideas

dizzle_d
06-14-2007, 05:21 PM
whats it say......
koe?

BOKAone
06-14-2007, 05:26 PM
yea i know eh ur one to talk eh....with those beauty throws you grace this forum with...if u know anything about structure why dont u show us something a tad more complex than a throw

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 05:37 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9863/dscf1309dw5.jpg
bored in room
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6477/dscf1310xc3.jpg
for teze...enjoy
bump.
I hope you saw mine.
Hood rich sucka make the letters all the same size drop the extensions.
Bokaone- work on your letters some more.
casa45- we needa do an exchange bastard.

knewsince.
06-14-2007, 05:40 PM
yea boka, ur strusture sucks

BOKAone
06-14-2007, 05:46 PM
yea well i know the structure on my other shit is a lot nicer i was just trying out something different while i was waiting its for my gf neways so i tried to ask her what she wanted it to look like...obviously those series of bends dont go well together.

sketch3
06-14-2007, 05:52 PM
yea i know eh ur one to talk eh....with those beauty throws you grace this forum with...if u know anything about structure why dont u show us something a tad more complex than a throw


was that directed at me?

eso239
06-14-2007, 06:00 PM
couple new styles
casa45- ur pretty good all can say is work on the o of the last peice it looks like a u
boka- drop it all except the o and go from there

Vice
06-14-2007, 06:02 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9863/dscf1309dw5.jpg
bored in room
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6477/dscf1310xc3.jpg
for teze...enjoy

your work and room is fucking godly... i <3 you... secks me please?

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 06:08 PM
well thats awkward
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/4103/mornethrowsnewkr2.jpg
new throwie im workin on its still rough
crits?

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:10 PM
y are ur m and e much thicker than the rest?

-ShAmEE-
06-14-2007, 06:11 PM
dude. make it clean...just have it in pencil...

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 06:11 PM
did u not read! it says ROUGH!
it was just a quick thing ive perfected it now
ps i like workin in marker

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:13 PM
the fucks goin on with the shaddow?

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 06:15 PM
i dunno im confused on how to do that part
could u help me???

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:19 PM
yea, go read the new to graff thread, if i remember correctly theres a perfetc tutorial

kastuh
06-14-2007, 06:31 PM
...i know it's not that great:(

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 06:32 PM
i couldnt find the tutorial so if u wanna point me in the rite direction thatd be great
i never did get crits either yall just asked questions

Kayone707
06-14-2007, 06:32 PM
Saw baze post some old stuff. so thought i would too...



http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2500/elmobu2.jpg

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/2082/colortestingck8.jpg

you might wanna tone town the cezr influence.i actually thought it was him till i saw the name. but its lookin aight.

the second one is bad. the C looks like a blob. dont even match the other letters.

kastuh
06-14-2007, 06:35 PM
i couldnt find the tutorial so if u wanna point me in the rite direction thatd be great
i never did get crits either yall just asked questions
^^^crits?
The first one's the best
just on the last one try to make them all the same size
i know im not really one to talk im just tryin to help ya out

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:42 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
there u go jroc,
keep all ur letters the same thickness,
also just keep doin ur thing

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 06:45 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/654/mornethrowsnew2sv2.jpg
thanks for the crit i think i fixed the drop shadow
crits?

kastuh
06-14-2007, 06:47 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/tr4sh3d4ndsc4ttered/tn-1.jpg
Crits?

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:48 PM
if ur throw dosnt have jaged corners then ur shadow shudnt either(talkin bout the shadoww on the m)

Kode
06-14-2007, 06:49 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Kode-2.jpg

Crits? Its my first attempt at a peice.

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:52 PM
try tto keep all of ur letters the same height

kastuh
06-14-2007, 06:52 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Kode-2.jpg

Crits? Its my first attempt at a peice.
its alright
just the 'o' doesn't flow
you cant have jagged letters and then a round O

Kode
06-14-2007, 06:55 PM
Yeah, I thought the same thing, but I don't know how to make an "O" that isn't round.

And thanks for the tip Sketch3, I'll keep this in mind tomorrow in class when im re-doing it.

kastuh
06-14-2007, 06:59 PM
Yeah, I thought the same thing, but I don't know how to make an "O" that isn't round.

And thanks for the tip Sketch3, I'll keep this in mind tomorrow in class when im re-doing it.
just make it like a square
idk im just tryin to help out :D

sketch3
06-14-2007, 06:59 PM
also lose the lil bumps for now, atleast until u rockin a decent simpel,
good to see sumone useing bars tho

IlikePie
06-14-2007, 07:02 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags024.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00233.jpg
Fucked up the N hard

Kode- Get rid of all those little block add ons.
Casa- I like 'em except the C on the second one like Kayone said.

kastuh
06-14-2007, 07:04 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags024.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00233.jpg
Fucked up the N hard

Kode- Get rid of all those little block add ons.
Casa- I like 'em except the C on the second one like Kayone said.
On the first one try to keep it from slanting down
but other than that it looks great

sketch3
06-14-2007, 07:05 PM
i hate ur ns, they cud be dope, thicken the midle bar and shortn the extennsion

MESN[905]
06-14-2007, 07:06 PM
kode- deff lose the little block addons
ran- i like the r in the 2nd one and the a in the 1st... the n's are wack though...





http://bay01.imagebay.com/_upload/img/16/111.jpg
http://bay01.imagebay.com/_upload/img/16/1111.jpg

some new letters... gonna throw em up friday night hopefully.

Stim
06-14-2007, 07:08 PM
Casa- the letters are cool, almost cute. but in a good way
Jroc- Try to use speed more, be creative too. dont feel hindered by your own limitations
Kastuh-Work on your stuff before coloring
Kode-your heading in the right direction
Pie-The letters almost seem elegant, which is cool.

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8058/pic1084ht7.jpg

IlikePie
06-14-2007, 07:13 PM
Hah, I've never heard them called elegant, but yeah, I need work on my N's :D

Mesn- Make your E's less like P's and your N's less like M's....
Intoxi- Your T is a bit too hidden, and the second I is too big. I don't really like the fuzzy circles either, but that's personal taste.

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 07:17 PM
why the hell does Stim keep tellin me to use speed? i think hes told me that like 4 times now
explain why?

IlikePie
06-14-2007, 07:21 PM
'Cuz it looks like you're trying take too much time with your lines and they end up not as crisp. If you move faster, the lines come out a lot nicer.

Roolete
06-14-2007, 07:39 PM
it makes your lines smoother, like Czar said. morne, i would make ur letters taller, take away that curve fro mthe top left of the "r", and make the shadow match the shape of the letters.

Vice
06-14-2007, 07:39 PM
jroc: hes saying that you should write the tag faster. not that you should use speed. he phrased it incorectly haha...

glass
06-14-2007, 07:45 PM
im really bad at throwies so i need some crit guys, what do you think? it's just an idea but i think i can make it work.

http://i18.tinypic.com/4l8xbaf.jpg

MESN[905]
06-14-2007, 07:48 PM
;790216']
http://bay01.imagebay.com/_upload/img/16/111.jpg
http://bay01.imagebay.com/_upload/img/16/1111.jpg

some new letters... gonna throw em up friday night hopefully.

bumpp

glass: the a doesnt fit with the rest of the letters...it bends over itself but the others dont

ESKE one
06-14-2007, 08:02 PM
BORG I WRITE PLEX LOL AND CHANGE PM OPTION CUASE I CANT SEND YOU PM'S AT ALL

BORG
06-14-2007, 08:05 PM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8784/june14001vk7.jpg
i'm not to sure about the extensions, ohh well fuck it

vice- u wanna "secks"?haha glad u like the living space
teze- deff saw the exchange u did for me, shits sick man

BORG
06-14-2007, 08:07 PM
ohh shit, i have it on dont receive pms from people not on buddylist, my bad, new sites got my shit all fucked up, i was wonderin y i wasn't gettin none

Sick!
06-14-2007, 08:15 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000ad8aea5/1/74/tI-0dn2m4D_9qXFrjX77q3n8SSeQAb31.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/CJ_nCrMh6j-W_F813X1ikEnkrkSMfwEO?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000ad8b4ab/1/11/H9kGhUj_7j-o9i4_LlSMJ8l9fJf_mxYd.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/SAPWQPapsz8L0hB0F_otqqGRd5X9OsoP?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/20000000ad8b7b4/1/102/IDGudwdT5D9TKoyJ4xZ_1xIPGX-aDvQ8.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/Z3cTB3rV6T_Njz-Kh359CcQeGAh5e_EF?referrer=hlnk)

~Saoten154~
06-14-2007, 08:19 PM
sick in the 1st and last pece the "c"`s look like E`s try and do blockletters

~Saoten154~
06-14-2007, 08:35 PM
some of my old shit from maybe 4 or 5 months ago

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/9913/0614072122hh2.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0614072122hh2.jpg)
^stoked
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6577/0614072124xg5.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0614072124xg5.jpg)
^ripped up asom pece
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6360/0614072125qd8.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0614072125qd8.jpg)

an S from a stoked pece
not really askin for crits just thought id post some of my old shit

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-14-2007, 08:35 PM
some ish.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0533.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0535.jpg

Jroc1993
06-14-2007, 08:40 PM
im really bad at throwies so i need some crit guys, what do you think? it's just an idea but i think i can make it work.

http://i18.tinypic.com/4l8xbaf.jpg
i dunno if this would be considered a throw but i like it

Casa45
06-14-2007, 08:42 PM
you might wanna tone town the cezr influence.i actually thought it was him till i saw the name. but its lookin aight.

the second one is bad. the C looks like a blob. dont even match the other letters.

See how it says OLD on it...????

Ackrite
06-14-2007, 08:44 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture.jpg

quick throwie idea
not so clean it was quick
any ideas

it says KMR
from komir

capo93
06-14-2007, 08:52 PM
i dont like it i dont see the letters really

Bazer
06-14-2007, 08:53 PM
it jus looks like a bunch of circles..

MakeĽ
06-14-2007, 09:06 PM
Tezer... dope shit! The only letter that I would say you should work on is R but other then that its on point.

KMR.. not really feeling it.

Sick... Scrap the top and bottom and stay at the simples in the 2nd one

Saoten... I don't like any of them. I really don't like the fill on the first one. but I don't see there to be much point to posting one you drew 5-6 months ago?, wouldn't it be better to show progress. go simples and barsss.

Morn... you got your own unique style and I like it alot. nice color choices, the extensions are a bit odd though, lol.

Glas... It is ok, it's definitaly not the worst throw I have seen, my tip for you is to work on consistancy.

Mesn... is that supposed to say mesn? I see your going for consistancy but it's not working out, work on them because I'm really not feeling em!

popshots
06-14-2007, 09:09 PM
glass your throw stands out

BORG
06-14-2007, 09:21 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9692/june14fj8.jpg
alright plex, here it is, i know i didn't take much time, but its decent

Vice
06-14-2007, 09:37 PM
hahaha your welcome borg. my room is a ball of dung compared to yours.

edit: oh and borg, the morn piece you posted looks great.

glass
06-14-2007, 09:50 PM
haha thanks pop

Ack: idk dude, try and define those letters a bit more, make 'em a bit more obvious.

Tezer: i like that first one except the leg of that R, looks kind of weird to me. I like the R on the second one more.

so i went back and tweaked my throw a bit more and think it looks neat. tell me what you guys think

http://i13.tinypic.com/5yagod2.jpg

lazystraw
06-14-2007, 10:01 PM
this isnt wat i write just sumthing i did while i was bored...
http://s189.photobucket.com/albums/z38/pens_1/?action=view&current=Picture036.jpg

if the pic pic doesnt work then heres the link...
http://s189.photobucket.com/albums/z38/pens_1/?action=view&current=Picture036.jpg
http://s189.photobucket.com/albums/z38/pens_1/?action=view&current=Picture036.jpg
http://s189.photobucket.com/albums/z38/pens_1/?action=view&current=Picture036.jpg

Fube
06-14-2007, 10:04 PM
feelin it glass, make your s round at the bottom like the rest of your letters. but i like it.

darthbaker
06-14-2007, 10:28 PM
yo that plex is clean..looks like pear's style..not calling bite or anything just sayin it's fresh

Bazer
06-14-2007, 11:08 PM
fackin gay.. writers cock..http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_14_002.jpg

Samp1e
06-14-2007, 11:26 PM
gritty ish following sezer's lettering tut:

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6341/untitleduo4.png

BORG
06-14-2007, 11:34 PM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8784/june14001vk7.jpg


sampl- the letters got lots of potential to grow into greater styles, clean it up a bit and fuck around with it

bump for crits

AnteUp
06-14-2007, 11:39 PM
colors arent gud, the orang an red go gud but the green forcefeild and that kind of pink jus dont go, the drips are off, the m is pretty bad, and the n lukks like a p

Samp1e
06-14-2007, 11:40 PM
BORG -- I like the rounded flow and overall balance of the piece. not too kin to the thin, long extenstions, work on those. Right side of the M seems kinda wierd, the joint that juts back seems out of place. the O had lots of positive space moreso than the other letters, maybe the hole needs to be bigger? looks good though.

Chalk
06-14-2007, 11:53 PM
Borg i like the colors just fine. but i feel like your lower case N is bring you down some make it a capital and should be fly.

and my entry for this dino battle that i still know nothing about...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/dino-rawr.jpg

BORG
06-14-2007, 11:56 PM
chalk- shits sick son....got my vote

capitol
06-15-2007, 12:56 AM
Morn:likeing the R
Chalk sick shit mann,
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6053/graf290xp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits would be nice..i need tot ry and fix this...

bouncingsoul
06-15-2007, 01:01 AM
Bleh
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0832.jpg

BORG
06-15-2007, 01:02 AM
fix the e and the r, they got potential but dont follow the height of the nv, try a lowercase e and let the connection of the r happen twords the v, not the end of the r, try that and see how it looks, other than that is straight

Eskimo33
06-15-2007, 01:30 AM
Bleh
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0832.jpg

Not bad, Clean it up alittle and throw some color on it.

knewsince.
06-15-2007, 02:03 AM
i like that borg. nice colors.
that character is awesome chalk. u shuld enter the battle.
knews...well you already know.
envr make them strait up and down and use some bendy bars

well heres my sketch i did at 3 am and reall high. enjoy
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lhead.jpg

ESCO1
06-15-2007, 05:48 AM
Right, i'm very new and was told to post in here by ALIVE for some advice from you guys!

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4194/dejawt5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-ShAmEE-
06-15-2007, 06:35 AM
fackin gay.. writers cock..http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_14_002.jpg

reali not feeling this one....and i dont think the E is working.

amk
06-15-2007, 06:47 AM
well..
Baze.. like the style your going for...i love the Z...but i dont like the E..
Knewsince...i like that bottom simple....but the LEMON peice is a no no..
Chalk...dope dope dope...but the spray effect looks like a puff of wind..

and VICE....do you ever post pictures?..

ugh...work in progress..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/21edqw.jpg


ALL CRITS WELCOME..
IM AT THE STAGE OF TOUCHING IT UP !

IlikePie
06-15-2007, 07:00 AM
The bottom two fingers don't really match up with the rest of the character, too undetailed. I like the rest.

whahappen?
06-15-2007, 08:27 AM
haha thanks pop

Ack: idk dude, try and define those letters a bit more, make 'em a bit more obvious.

Tezer: i like that first one except the leg of that R, looks kind of weird to me. I like the R on the second one more.

so i went back and tweaked my throw a bit more and think it looks neat. tell me what you guys think

http://i13.tinypic.com/5yagod2.jpg
the g is a bite of an NY bomber jon156
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b16/foraclos/jon-156.jpg
maybe not a bite but theres a resemblance
eh you probabaly didnt bite it, just sortve looks like it

whahappen?
06-15-2007, 08:30 AM
it says KMR
from komir
this is nice just make the m more defined
wtf why wont the new site dbl qoute and showpics?

WolfBurrns
06-15-2007, 09:45 AM
Rough outline.. Should I finish it or burn it?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/soleex3.jpg

acidconceptone
06-15-2007, 09:51 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8760/m001xk2.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-15-2007, 11:01 AM
nice dont like the middle bit of the m...

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/quick.jpg

quick one...says stephy..well i've done the STEP so nearly there...need help on the p!

Casa45
06-15-2007, 11:23 AM
^^^
Whats that say???
Cant make it out...

-ShAmEE-
06-15-2007, 11:43 AM
read under the pic.

TAZM
06-15-2007, 12:52 PM
acid i dont like the middle point in the M

shamee i cant make out any letters.


Now this is just a piece to get the feel of the blender which i just picked up yesterday from michaels. I know the letters arent great.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm002.jpg

jersOneTIC
06-15-2007, 01:38 PM
it's kinda crooked but what the hell...
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/7151/003035us0.jpg

ICER
06-15-2007, 02:13 PM
any critz?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civ.jpg

amk
06-15-2007, 02:29 PM
well..
Icer...LOSE EVERYTHING...STRIP IT...untill you get to the bare bones of them letters....thy look hot..but all the extensions are hiding em away..

Jers...i was feeling you other stuff more...this is like...too complicated...but hey

Tazm...keep that up...gurd fade...buuuuuuuuuuuut !....id say drop the colours for the time being yah mean...you dont need em...like..dont waste em my freind....KEEP UP THEM SIMPLES !

ACID....basic..nice..

Shamee....god damn...but sum ink....quit posting pencil sketches...clean them up....with INK INK INK..then post..and maybe i can crit you !...hehehehehe :p

god damnit...
my huge massive crit !

hahaha..
well heres the finished product..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg

hahahah...
ugh

CRITS !

jersOneTIC
06-15-2007, 02:31 PM
well..
Icer...LOSE EVERYTHING...STRIP IT...untill you get to the bare bones of them letters....thy look hot..but all the extensions are hiding em away..

Jers...i was feeling you other stuff more...this is like...too complicated...but hey

Tazm...keep that up...gurd fade...buuuuuuuuuuuut !....id say drop the colours for the time being yah mean...you dont need em...like..dont waste em my freind....KEEP UP THEM SIMPLES !

ACID....basic..nice..

Shamee....god damn...but sum ink....quit posting pencil sketches...clean them up....with INK INK INK..then post..and maybe i can crit you !...hehehehehe :p

god damnit...
my huge massive crit !

hahaha..
well heres the finished product..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg

hahahah...
ugh

CRITS !
nice...but your tags need some work...

alive
06-15-2007, 02:44 PM
fuckkkkk, summer vacation. i only ever really sketch during class.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03240.jpg

panduh
06-15-2007, 02:50 PM
i like it amk, especially the blue you used.

i think im getting better at basic letters:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k119/hahaimapanda/pletters.jpg

Ginsu
06-15-2007, 02:52 PM
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/Valgus666/S4010085.jpg

shamee, dont mesh the letters too much i cant make out the mid section.

dizzle_d
06-15-2007, 03:29 PM
well..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg



BUMPPPPP! freakin fresh bro
keep that shit comin I love it.
;)

enigmatic
06-15-2007, 04:53 PM
im looking at that two pager. id go ahead and cover the whole thing up with some black, theres like no letters in there.

amkah the simple looks hella good.


alive those letters have gotten olld on me. i dunno, keep sketching though.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2220.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-15-2007, 05:03 PM
acid i dont like the middle point in the M

shamee i cant make out any letters.


Now this is just a piece to get the feel of the blender which i just picked up yesterday from michaels. I know the letters arent great.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm002.jpg
beautiful simples.

Vice
06-15-2007, 06:12 PM
agreed. but not so hot handstyle... not that mine is very good or anything but thats another topic...

Bazer
06-15-2007, 06:25 PM
why dont you post work?

bouncingsoul
06-15-2007, 06:32 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0833.jpg

dizzle_d
06-15-2007, 06:36 PM
nice n fresshhh bouncin

Hester
06-15-2007, 06:52 PM
knews - thats the sickest thing i ever saw from you

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011543.jpg
are my simples doing ok ?

mrtickels
06-15-2007, 07:09 PM
Hester: only thing i dont like about it is the S looks kinda like a J to me

MakeĽ
06-15-2007, 07:13 PM
^well I guess if you look at it backwards.....

well anyway bouncingsoul that is fucking dopeeeee
hester: imo your T looks great along with the other letters, it has a great flow:D

Hester
06-15-2007, 07:20 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011544.jpg new simple

-ShAmEE-
06-15-2007, 07:27 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/quick.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/quick-1.jpg

not finshed..says step at the moment..soon to say stephy

uhhh
06-15-2007, 07:54 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0833.jpg
alright,
so im gonna come out to cali,
AND PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE!
thats too tight.

Fube
06-15-2007, 08:24 PM
heh, how u get an "s" out of that i have no idea man. went a tad wild on it. put it a tad more simple. but still an ok sketch dude. i like it.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-15-2007, 08:42 PM
knews - thats the sickest thing i ever saw from you

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011543.jpg
are my simples doing ok ?
bump nice.
trying some arrows out.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0547.jpg

BORG
06-15-2007, 09:20 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5415/june15yy1.jpg
new throwie- decent?
tag?

MakeĽ
06-15-2007, 09:28 PM
^morn thats a really nice throw and handy but the handy seems like it might take a little too much time to write.

what do you guys think, I did this last night:
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n238/woahbehbeh/Makepeiceuncolored.jpg
this is before I colored it but it came out horrible, I'm bad at coloring my stuff lol

mrtickels
06-15-2007, 11:53 PM
Borg : Like that throw up, really feeling the M and the N
Make: i think that could look sick w/ the right colors

this is a throw that i thought up in class just got done tewaking it but the colors didnt come out like i wanted them to, not very orignal though =\

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v708/mrtickels/P6150001.jpg
crits?
EDIT: says JnK btw

Bazer
06-15-2007, 11:55 PM
jyk?

mrtickels
06-16-2007, 12:00 AM
JnK i extended the right leg of the N to be abstract but i guess it does look way to much like a y

Roolete
06-16-2007, 12:11 AM
looks like a y or an h

syrup2
06-16-2007, 12:15 AM
I tryed to do some euro kinda shit I figured Id post it in here cuz its garbage

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/3829/waster004ia2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BORG
06-16-2007, 12:17 AM
syrup-might wanna trash the camera before the sketch
clean it up, try a lighter pink to give the letters more emphasis

Roolete
06-16-2007, 12:20 AM
its garbage so you post it "here"? whats wrong with "here"?

god damn i oughta smack a ho

syrup2
06-16-2007, 12:24 AM
borg thanks for the tips
the cameras actually really good im just retarded and cant figure it out

and roolete this is the toy thread toy stuff goes here so hush those lips sailor
go make some wine napa boy

BORG
06-16-2007, 12:25 AM
man i didn't call it garbage, i told u ur cam was and told u how to fix your shit, i post here because i havent got the super skills to post most my shit in the big boys

sane4life
06-16-2007, 12:34 AM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/06-16-07_0130.jpgwhat should i improve on or work on

BORG
06-16-2007, 12:36 AM
try replacin the black highlights witha color

sane4life
06-16-2007, 12:38 AM
Alrite thanks borg,i look up to you, you got some nice stuff

syrup2
06-16-2007, 12:42 AM
man i didn't call it garbage, i told u ur cam was and told u how to fix your shit, i post here because i havent got the super skills to post most my shit in the big boys

I wasent being sarcastic i was seriosu thanks for the tip lmao