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syrup2
06-16-2007, 12:43 AM
haha is napa really that famous for that? and i dont know how anyone can take "i oughta smack a ho" as a serious insult.

lmao u changed it to north bay now hahaha

panduh
06-16-2007, 12:44 AM
i like your stuff edward (and i have the same phone as you :p)

i just drew this, believe its the best i've done so far..crits welcome:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k119/hahaimapanda/panda.jpg

mrtickels
06-16-2007, 12:46 AM
just a quick fix on the n
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v708/mrtickels/P6150001-1.jpg
this make it more readable
JnK

BORG
06-16-2007, 12:58 AM
Alrite thanks borg,i look up to you, you got some nice stuff

^^this is straight but u gotta pay respect to those above me u know
syrup- sorry i thought u were roolete for a second there, i know u were serious
panda- try workin on the width of your letters, let them bond a bit, each individual letter standin by itself is bad, feel free to overlap a bit
mrtickles- make the j more know, looks like a t/j mix

messin round with new throwie style
quick m-n
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/7001/june15005fg5.jpg

syrup2
06-16-2007, 01:12 AM
yeah, nobody lives in napa besides me. most people dont even know where the hell that is

im from the east bay hyphy nation so I know where it is

is there even a graff scene there ..no offense

Roolete
06-16-2007, 01:14 AM
i like that one, wasnt feelin ur other new throws as much, but thats cust cause ur old style was so hot

*edit* syrup- not really.. and none taken, not my choice where i live..at least for now.

BORG
06-16-2007, 01:16 AM
my old style is set aside for now, need to master some letters before i start exchanging in that style............i am feelin the new style though

capitol
06-16-2007, 01:37 AM
only two colors i have right now.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2350/graf294qw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
BORG:Ivhaeard somewere of a crew called nighshift vdals were u from?

Sumoe
06-16-2007, 01:47 AM
Didn't you post that a couple days ago?...

anyways just do straight letter simples for now, use bars etc. Does it say "OVUR" or "eVUR"" either way the first letter needs the most work.

capitol
06-16-2007, 01:58 AM
Didn't you post that a couple days ago?...

anyways just do straight letter simples for now, use bars etc. Does it say "OVUR" or "eVUR"" either way the first letter needs the most work.
It says envr..the n is kinda hiding behind the overlarged E
But i did it last night..and flicked it about an hour ago,

panduh
06-16-2007, 02:26 AM
thanks for the crits borg, i tried overlapping:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k119/hahaimapanda/oltag.jpg

amk
06-16-2007, 02:28 AM
my old style is set aside for now, need to master some letters before i start exchanging in that style............i am feelin the new style though

YOUR old style..

im 99.99 % sure somebody else has done all of those styles...
i think you need to resaerch the whole aspect of style.

AnteUp
06-16-2007, 02:31 AM
amkah hates mah cuntry ass :(

amk
06-16-2007, 02:35 AM
why do i .. ? ... haha

Randa......dont bend your letters...keep em straight..
Mr.tickles...i dont know alot about throws...but id say start basic..look at some of JA's , FOE's , SANE's shit....theyre throws are really basic...but dont bite

Anteeeeee...i like teh S...but what is that last letter..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg

crits....?.....

AnteUp
06-16-2007, 02:44 AM
(crying in a corner) :(... recycled ish so i dont get kicked out :)
edit: im jus kiddin neeeegrow :) ima add u on myspace
rask battle
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0023.jpg
finished, but i moved it off my scanner when i was scannin it so it lukks choppy
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0018.jpg

nero122
06-16-2007, 03:40 AM
rescan it looks quite nice

00-made-00
06-16-2007, 05:03 AM
Amkah babe, look sik but im too sure about the extenion leaveing the left bar of the "h" other than that looks good and that character is nang mann.

AnteUp
06-16-2007, 05:30 AM
why do i .. ? ... haha

Randa......dont bend your letters...keep em straight..
Mr.tickles...i dont know alot about throws...but id say start basic..look at some of JA's , FOE's , SANE's shit....theyre throws are really basic...but dont bite

Anteeeeee...i like teh S...but what is that last letter..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg

crits....?.....
its an e but i fuckin bumped tha bbook off tha scanner, an it warped tha e

Sou - Mvd
06-16-2007, 05:52 AM
why do i .. ? ... haha

Randa......dont bend your letters...keep em straight..
Mr.tickles...i dont know alot about throws...but id say start basic..look at some of JA's , FOE's , SANE's shit....theyre throws are really basic...but dont bite

Anteeeeee...i like teh S...but what is that last letter..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1w3wefcsw.jpg

crits....?.....

The left leg extention on the m and h are throwing it out of balance, they make the right sides of your a's look like the extentions are almost attached to them. Other than that, I'd say lengthen the right leg of your a's a bit and space your m out a bit more, it looks squished in there. The character is dope, looks like del, but I could be wrong, its 7 in the morning and I haven't slept yet.

amk
06-16-2007, 06:05 AM
it is Del..ahhahaha...and the little legs on each of my letters makes my style..really

inkbits
06-16-2007, 06:20 AM
needs some kind of detail on the top finger man, sorta looks like he has a 12 inch thumb.

-ShAmEE-
06-16-2007, 08:58 AM
yeh that thumb is massive...

syrup2
06-16-2007, 09:14 AM
take away the white highlight
style is kinda played out the del charcter is still dope though

ante you should get a thinner pen because the sharpie makes the letters to stubby I like the letters on that second one though

syrup2
06-16-2007, 09:27 AM
hard to see i know
but crits anyone ?

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1789/l67dc059b7d0350feb4cfdeol7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6226/lb64cbd73e2ad5987247c3ezn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MakeĽ
06-16-2007, 09:46 AM
syrup.. you need some letter structure!! I can't even make out what it says, ditch those ugly colors and stay with outlines for now

amkah... that shit is tight, I just feel like you squished the M in a bit. really clean nonetheless.

ante... I like the colors on the 2nd one. the S is definitally your best letter. I'm not feeling the way that you distort the other letters though, the E seems like it would be pretty good if didn't get screwed up with the scanner. I definitally suggest working on the A and M.

envr... you really need to work on letter structure just use bars all the same size and ditch the thing coming from the bottom right of the E!

panduh... I see your going for consistancy but like I said for envr you need to keep your bars the same size.


^morn thats a really nice throw and handy but the handy seems like it might take a little too much time to write.

what do you guys think, I did this last night:
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n238/woahbehbeh/Makepeiceuncolored.jpg
this is before I colored it but it came out horrible, I'm bad at coloring my stuff lol

could I get some crits please, I fell behind a few pages back.

syrup2
06-16-2007, 09:54 AM
dope but lose the dots also the a and k look unfinished

amk
06-16-2007, 09:59 AM
take away the white highlight
style is kinda played out the del charcter is still dope though


was you talkin to me about my style being played...
ugh..
EDIT : for being deluded

syrup.....oh shit i just seen your shit Syrup....damn....you have no room at all to be tellin peoples shit is played...and also telling people what not to lose and what to...
go to the damn " new 2 graff " thread...

im having a really shit day :mad:

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 10:03 AM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percz.jpg

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 10:03 AM
i tried for something a lil bit more complicated crits anyone?

Sumoe
06-16-2007, 10:05 AM
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/167/4/e/Cuzzo_by_SUMOE.jpg

For my cuzzo... says "Bianca." Letters aren't the best but w.e...

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/167/2/4/Handstyle_Exchange_by_SUMOE.jpg

and some shitty ass hands.

amk
06-16-2007, 10:12 AM
you left the bottom blank...?..
it looks bare..
but who cares about the background..

the letters are nice...i could work it out after reading it says Bianca...i think the extensions are skinny and long..not my thing..

its your graffiti tho...do what you wannnttttttttttttttt

syrup2
06-16-2007, 10:25 AM
was you talkin to me about my style being played...
ugh..
i aint seen letter forms like it before..

syrup.....oh shit i just seen your shit Syrup....damn....you have no room at all to be tellin peoples shit is played...and also telling people what not to lose and what to...
go to the damn " new 2 graff " thread...

im having a really shit day :mad:

I can tell your having a shit day because your a dick for no reason

I was saying those white highlights are played out on those plain jain bubble letters the other shits fine i even said your charec was dope

And dont tell me to go to the new to graff thread , although my shits lookin kinda weak cuz I did most of it on airplane in extreme turblance, chances are got waaay more ups and am better then you think sailor

amk
06-16-2007, 10:48 AM
Syrup...sory....maybe you shud of stated what was played....style to me is the letters of graffiti....
and those " plain jane " letters...got every single dope writer in the world dope..
so why dont you try those " plain jane " letters instead of havin the competely wrong attitude !

fuck your " z0mgzs MarC 3ck0 HeV3n Sp0t " ( i need whappen to help me out on that letter jibberish ahahahah ) ..ups..
i aint gonna see them..
congrats

uhhh
06-16-2007, 10:48 AM
this just makes me want to kill myself.
no reason?
ras is getting upset because you have absolutely no room to talk/think/have an opinion.
andddd,
being up doesnt matter if you suck.
and theres really no need to bring it into an ONLINE conversation anyways.

regardless of all that,
that really isnt my favorite from you (ras)
i have seen better, ive seen some stuff that i actually really dig.
idk, some of your stuff i like a lot, some of it just seems like your trying to hard or something.

Sumoe
06-16-2007, 10:50 AM
AMK...your letter forms aren't as original as you think them to be, not saying mine are that original either. But, it sounds as if you think yours are completely different then anything else. They are pretty much just simples with little feet things, bent in a place or too.

Not saying they're bad just saying they're not as original as you think they are.

amk
06-16-2007, 10:51 AM
im actually running out of ideas for my graffiti ... haha ... ima go back to blocks and work on extensions etc.

oh and sorry Syrup for flippin out on yah..
:(

and Sume...
thanks man

my e-ego is gettin the better of me..

PEACE !

oh shit im sooo tired..
Sume..
can i do you an O & E please ?

syrup2
06-16-2007, 10:55 AM
percoset fun : sick like aids

sumoe : savage

its okay amk I love you anyway

amk
06-16-2007, 10:57 AM
noooo....i was onabout those " plain jane " letters....read my post..

becuz those plain jane letters got every dope writer dope..
maybe you shud just have a lil read in the new 2 graff thread..

no beef or anythin Syrup..im just tryna help you out..

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 10:59 AM
anycrits for c-money?

syrup2
06-16-2007, 10:59 AM
oh fo sho its all good amk beef has been squashed

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 11:01 AM
word good lookin syrup. it looks like shit cuz i colored it but il post it up anyway.

btw. im c-money

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-16-2007, 11:04 AM
bump nice.
trying some arrows out.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/DSCF0547.jpg
sume- great colors.

syrup2
06-16-2007, 11:05 AM
yhey its c mone

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 11:09 AM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percs.jpg

ESKE one
06-16-2007, 11:09 AM
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/167/4/e/Cuzzo_by_SUMOE.jpg

For my cuzzo... says "Bianca." Letters aren't the best but w.e...

bump for sume shit is fire

WolfBurrns
06-16-2007, 11:13 AM
perc- way to many arrows. go a little more simple

My new ish. Critzz

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/soledoesthebodygood.jpg

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 11:16 AM
throw is nice. but you should also go a little more simple with your piece

uhhh
06-16-2007, 11:28 AM
sume- great colors.

damn sezer.
that shits ill as fuck.
reminds me of sky,
but in a not biting just somehow going down the exact same path way.
ya mean?

nero122
06-16-2007, 11:28 AM
detail the face more amk it would look nicer maby photoshop the gradients or summin

nero122
06-16-2007, 11:32 AM
true lol n percoest you sayin go simpler made me piss my self lughin lol lmao
dude if any one needs simpler its u (n amk that was to ure character on the last page)

freakeenyc
06-16-2007, 12:05 PM
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/8366/cimg6812xt3.jpg:D:D

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 12:14 PM
UGH IM SO SNAPPY TODAY SORRY !



i thought C-Money was better :(


i told yall it was wack. i experimented thats not my style. my shit is waaaay more simple than that.
i liked it alot more when it was just pencil. anyway.

repsSDN
06-16-2007, 12:18 PM
Freak that don't look to bad, but with more work it could look better.
Some of mine:
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/582/saypeiceas9.jpg
"SAY" peice, colouring a bit rushed with fineline pens.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6296/eurostylesketchig2.jpg
"EMAC" euro style, emac/emack/emak is what i write.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3562/blockbuster1rx8.jpg
Simple blockbuster.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6906/blackpeiceot1.jpg
And some quick sketches ignore the throwies.
Crits? I need some descent markers

tonentink
06-16-2007, 12:21 PM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6457/1000987mx6.jpg
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/4773/1000988cy0.jpg

all done penstyle !!!

amk
06-16-2007, 12:21 PM
why you carrying it on Sume..you are a mod..
i knew he wasnt accsuing me..
thus i clearly stated..

I DONT MEAN THIS IN A MALICUOUS WAY

just let it drop man

champ
06-16-2007, 12:25 PM
its an e but i fuckin bumped tha bbook off tha scanner, an it warped tha e

ayo what type of pens/ink you use for the red in the word 'spray'

amk
06-16-2007, 12:28 PM
you talkin to me..
i think you bumped the wrong guy

Sumoe
06-16-2007, 12:30 PM
You misunderstood me. I was just tellin' nero what I meant because he thought I was talking about him accusing you.

champ
06-16-2007, 12:37 PM
you talkin to me..
i think you bumped the wrong guy

yeh sorry i expected the piece to come up with the quote so you would know i was talkin to you but it didnt....anyway same question??

nero122
06-16-2007, 12:39 PM
damn im confused i just wanned to tell amk if he wants to add more detail use a sharpie ultra fine i knew he was nt acusin me of acusin him of usin photoshop n i said he should maby try usin

tonentink
06-16-2007, 12:59 PM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6457/1000987mx6.jpg
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/4773/1000988cy0.jpg

all done penstyle !!!

aot

amk
06-16-2007, 01:12 PM
yeh sorry i expected the piece to come up with the quote so you would know i was talkin to you but it didnt....anyway same question??


nero..its finished..

anddd..
champ..i use the 60 set of touchtwins and a correction pen for highlights

revolt92
06-16-2007, 01:31 PM
How much did that set you back?

freakeenyc
06-16-2007, 01:55 PM
toser not feeling the letters structure/extensions to much....

heres a finished batman theme peice i did...
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7765/cimg6814ri4.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
06-16-2007, 02:10 PM
http://picturemessaging.rogers.com/mmps/RECIPIENT/001_011f1f7ec2d80022_1/2.jpg?partExt=.jpg&outquality=56&rand=5417723972640353447&ext=.jpg&limitsize=600,800&inviteToken=BEsr44Ju87a118Ma7oK0

amk
06-16-2007, 02:27 PM
FREAK NYC

OMG ITS BATMAN...
ahahah
that shit made me chuckle !..
keep up the work freekeeee..
yo got MSN..
hit me up with yah address ..
we can talk dirty

percoset fun
06-16-2007, 02:38 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percz.jpg

i like no color alot more

Samp1e
06-16-2007, 02:56 PM
ooh, found some older work i never posted. i'm in a sketching mood now!

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/3315/spa0014nc0.jpg

nero122
06-16-2007, 03:10 PM
old s was much nicer not feelin this as much actually the older letters where much nicer

whahappen?
06-16-2007, 03:14 PM
toser not feeling the letters structure/extensions to much....

heres a finished batman theme peice i did...
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7765/cimg6814ri4.jpg
OMG ITS...BATMAN
haha nice

Sou - Mvd
06-16-2007, 03:36 PM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/5944/007va4.jpg
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/8344/008so8.jpg
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1310/009hj3.jpg
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2103/010hs1.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/972/011qa7.jpg
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9566/012ru5.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/762/013we8.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8633/014vt2.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9758/015ol5.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/3020/016kx0.jpg
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/5928/resurafcepictures004ey7.jpg
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/7250/resurafcepictures005jc6.jpg
http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/4696/resurafcepictures006us5.jpg
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/290/resurafcepictures007vh9.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4365/bbq005hp4.jpg

amk
06-16-2007, 03:54 PM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/7250/resurafcepictures005jc6.jpg




the S in this is so dope..
the inhlaer shit is pretty gay
and the bottom stuff is too gothic..
but
nice coloruing..

00-made-00
06-16-2007, 04:01 PM
asma- thts the illllllllist shit ive seen in ages, i love the first pic and them crazy pens sketches.

repsSDN
06-16-2007, 04:43 PM
Freak that don't look to bad, but with more work it could look better.
Some of mine:
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/582/saypeiceas9.jpg
"SAY" peice, colouring a bit rushed with fineline pens.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6296/eurostylesketchig2.jpg
"EMAC" euro style, emac/emack/emak is what i write.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3562/blockbuster1rx8.jpg
Simple blockbuster.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6906/blackpeiceot1.jpg
And some quick sketches ignore the throwies.
Crits? I need some descent markers

My pics got lost at the bottom of the page 2605, crits? please.
Sou - Mvd those asma throws are clean, good work.

IlikePie
06-16-2007, 04:54 PM
http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/4696/resurafcepictures006us5.jpg
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/290/resurafcepictures007vh9.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4365/bbq005hp4.jpg

You use the ink from a broken pen in this?

Sou - Mvd
06-16-2007, 04:56 PM
Nope, this ghetto ass fountain pen and my finger

meetermaid
06-16-2007, 05:28 PM
sou that shit's amazing. love it.
reps i love the first 2 pics, third and fourth suck, except for the throwies on the fourth they're actually pretty good

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9380/picture31xb7.jpghttp://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4640/picture33uq1.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/870/picture34yw3.jpghttp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6507/picture35cz7.jpg
hate the swirlies i added in but whatever. tome and vapour TDB

Lamure
06-16-2007, 05:37 PM
That pen and ink work is really fresh. That last one is my favorite. Reminds me of "The Wall".

whahappen?
06-16-2007, 06:00 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8264/1000803sw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ive been trying to post this for 3 day.
fucking bump

freakshow
06-16-2007, 06:08 PM
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/5168/eatenqndyg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6522/makepageqw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for make
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8292/tandanf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new t and a
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/8651/eatnewerstylegreenwy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
newer style thing i did in the car

meet i really like your stuff

and whahappen, i was just gunna bump that lol

rayseone
06-16-2007, 06:28 PM
sou mvd nice trows good pen work too

freakshow i like that one whappen bumped other ones are nice too

meet i like the bottom left the most

so im not flickelees crits befoor i ink it

http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/4965/woocopysd1.jpg

BORG
06-16-2007, 06:32 PM
nice seyar, are those extensions on the bottoms of the e and a?

amk
06-16-2007, 06:32 PM
make the S n R the same hight as he other letters my buddy

rayseone
06-16-2007, 06:35 PM
they were origonally the same size but it looked kindaaa fooked, so i made them a bit smaller , yes they are out of the E and a

BORG
06-16-2007, 06:37 PM
the piece looks good with the s and r a bit lower, dont listen to amk, he's just a bitter little ****** always tellin everyone pure shit, the style is your own, glad your doin your OWN thing

amk
06-16-2007, 06:40 PM
exactly..dont listen to me..its your own graffiti....do what the hell you want with it...you have basic blocks down..go from there..

and BORG..i canot be arsed to beef with you...its the internet...therefore...no point...if you dont like ym opinion on your stuff....then just get over it

HoodRichSucka
06-16-2007, 06:45 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/Picture4-1.png

i dunno..

Lamure
06-16-2007, 06:52 PM
That cloud thing is rad.
I dig the M.
The only things I don't love are the extensions on the R.

BORG
06-16-2007, 06:55 PM
exactly..dont listen to me..its your own graffiti....do what the hell you want with it...you have basic blocks down..go from there..

and BORG..i canot be arsed to beef with you...its the internet...therefore...no point...if you dont like ym opinion on your stuff....then just get over it

notice i dont listen to your crits, never said anything about my stuff, i dont want u to fuck someone elses up, rayseone gots a sick lil piece there so leave it be, how cliche is all the letters same size, fuckin lame n boring

Vice
06-16-2007, 07:00 PM
word.

*does b-boy stance*

rayseone
06-16-2007, 07:06 PM
not to be a dick but vice post up some work or stop making fucking lame comments like one word posts in every topic shits getting annoying as hell

and borg and amk, just chill man graffiti is about what you like,if i think it was a good crit ill take it if i dont i wont, no need to beef over stupid shit

Vice
06-16-2007, 07:11 PM
ive said this several times in other threads but i cant post my work yet because i dont have a camera. ive posted up a few tags with my camera phone but its expensive so i cant spend a massive amount of money. im getting a camera in less than a month so soon i will be posting some pics but at the moment im just trying to contribute.
oh and its not unreasonable of you to say that.

amk
06-16-2007, 07:22 PM
yo..
i just got a really good helpful PM off BORG..
and his opened my eyes..
like..
he told me that graffiti is about creativness..
and thats what i used to thrive oon..when i did the old skool shit ( if you was aorund )..
but now all this simple shit has like....proper gotten to me..
and its like..iv lost the whole essence of graffiti / creativenss..
so from now on..

fuck telling people to go simple..
im gonna egg people on to go better if they have down letters..

and..Vice..
i crnt wait to see your shit...im epxecting sum LABRAT type shit

Vice
06-16-2007, 07:26 PM
dont. because if by labrat you mean amazing? then yeah. dont. i crit because ive seen good work so i have an idea of how to help people. but im still comin up with my own style so yeah. dont expect great things.

BORG
06-16-2007, 07:29 PM
amkah- deff. liking the new adjustment in your attitude towards graffiti, live, paint, sketch-ect. by that and you'll see alot of improvement

hell i used to be super toy and now my shits clean and decent

Welsh_Graffer
06-16-2007, 07:36 PM
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6690/dsc00367gc0.jpg
Crits on this?
Reads 'MOME'
Was just a quick 5 min thing.

freakeenyc
06-16-2007, 07:56 PM
yo..
i just got a really good helpful PM off BORG..
and his opened my eyes..
like..
he told me that graffiti is about creativness..
and thats what i used to thrive oon..when i did the old skool shit ( if you was aorund )..
but now all this simple shit has like....proper gotten to me..
and its like..iv lost the whole essence of graffiti / creativenss..
so from now on..

fuck telling people to go simple..
im gonna egg people on to go better if they have down letters..

and..Vice..
i crnt wait to see your shit...im epxecting sum LABRAT type shit
i noticed taht 2 amk...after coming on 12 oz and every1 saying go simple...and shit....its def helped out somewhat....but i feel like ive lost my creative edge a lil 2 cuz of it....

meetermaid
06-16-2007, 08:03 PM
when people (me anyway) say 'go simple', like it doesn't mean go simple and stay that way. it means sketch simples to get an understanding of how letters are formed, because if you just start out with some crazy random shit, it may look good and creative, but not have any resemblance to the letter you're trying to make. after you have a grasp of proper letter structure, then you can add shit and bend the letters and make em look nuts.

*thanks freakshow, i love your shit too.

pez ss
06-16-2007, 08:13 PM
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs18/i/2007/167/4/e/Cuzzo_by_SUMOE.jpg

For my cuzzo... says "Bianca." Letters aren't the best but w.e...

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/167/2/4/Handstyle_Exchange_by_SUMOE.jpg

and some shitty ass hands.
this is soo sik how long it take u

See-one
06-16-2007, 08:14 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/SEE2.jpg


http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/see3.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-16-2007, 08:23 PM
when people (me anyway) say 'go simple', like it doesn't mean go simple and stay that way. it means sketch simples to get an understanding of how letters are formed, because if you just start out with some crazy random shit, it may look good and creative, but not have any resemblance to the letter you're trying to make. after you have a grasp of proper letter structure, then you can add shit and bend the letters and make em look nuts.

*thanks freakshow, i love your shit too.
MeeterMaid, will you marry me?

meetermaid
06-16-2007, 08:41 PM
only if you take care of the dowry ;)

the funny thing is, i'm not popular at all in real life :\

BIGel
06-16-2007, 08:51 PM
welsh you in big need of some simples

sumoe thats heat bud!love the new direction man, definately heading more wild and west coast.

some old some new some in progress..
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260107006.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260106875.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260106798.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/258417890.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260106682.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260106570.jpg

whahappen?
06-16-2007, 08:53 PM
entry
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/4442/picture124hf4.jpg
hahahahahh the marker sucks

The_Sheep
06-16-2007, 09:19 PM
sup first post here, been writing for bout 2 weeks now, tell me what you think:
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1350/dsc00006rl1.jpg
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/6917/dsc00005lc2.jpg
Edit: Some More Stuff, Sorry if my shit isn't filled, I'm still new and I'm not sure how to fill my pieces
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6586/dsc00007gr3.jpg
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7338/dsc00009gw1.jpg

Roolete
06-16-2007, 09:20 PM
bigel all of the stuff is AMAZING as always!

is second pic microsoft word "impact" font? well its amazing anyways

*edit* tonentink those kinda sucks compared to your other stuff. and wrong thread

fredom-writer
06-16-2007, 10:27 PM
hgggggggggggggggg

BIGel
06-16-2007, 10:47 PM
thanks fredom yea i have a few, nothing very good

still gotta add a background.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/260127336.jpg

ShIfTeD
06-16-2007, 10:48 PM
the sheep- fucking fire!

freedom writer- lookin nice, just try to clean it up

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9247/dscn0995pl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

Captain
06-16-2007, 11:06 PM
i noticed taht 2 amk...after coming on 12 oz and every1 saying go simple...and shit....its def helped out somewhat....but i feel like ive lost my creative edge a lil 2 cuz of it....

People don't understand, when I say simple, I mean get the letters to flow & be readable. I've been here for just under a year almost daily (registered after a couple months, didn't really post 'till january) and I've seen kids who know what they're doing with simples, but never get creative. I've seen kids who get all this creativity, but can't flow anything and decide they aren't gonna take the time to learn to. When I say simple, I don't mean learn what the letter looks like, I mean... damn, learn it's 'essence' or something. The best stuff is never forced, It just flows to your finger tips. But until you get some kind of subconsious understanding of the letters, your stuff just ain't gonna look as good.


Sorry for the wall of text. I'm kinda missing a few marbles today.

[edit for usefulness] shifted that's nice. Keep workin' on that shit.


sup first post here, been writing for bout 2 weeks now, tell me what you think:
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1350/dsc00006rl1.jpg
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/6917/dsc00005lc2.jpg

shit for two weeks that's pretty fucking good.

reach
06-16-2007, 11:13 PM
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb305/bundy52732/IM000799.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb305/bundy52732/IM000800.jpg
any crits?

glass
06-16-2007, 11:17 PM
Sheep: love those letters dude, pretty damn good for 2 weeks. keep it up man

BigEl: nice style, pretty original as always. i like 'em.

so yeah i actually think that this one is pretty damn decent. def. want some crits on it :D

http://i9.tinypic.com/5zqfz8h.jpg

IlikePie
06-16-2007, 11:19 PM
The bottom left of the L, make it start ending before it hits the G, looks odd and I like that A other than the block on the tip of it.

And Sheep, that's really good for only 2 weeks.

reach
06-16-2007, 11:32 PM
Sheep: love those letters dude, pretty damn good for 2 weeks. keep it up man

BigEl: nice style, pretty original as always. i like 'em.

so yeah i actually think that this one is pretty damn decent. def. want some crits on it :D

http://i9.tinypic.com/5zqfz8h.jpg

nice hit that with a bright pink force field and that should explode off the page

Vice
06-16-2007, 11:34 PM
KABOOM


sorry.:(

glass that pretty good. i agree. hit it with a bright pink force field and it be hawt.

AnteUp
06-17-2007, 12:20 AM
ZZZZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB BBBBBBBB
*@*)@$#%(!*#$_*%!#($638!#@$#@#%$$#@#@%$!%$#@$%#$e# @%!$#%..... : l

The_Sheep
06-17-2007, 12:25 AM
Some Wu-Tang Inspired Shit:
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/492/dsc00011ha0.jpg

See-one
06-17-2007, 12:46 AM
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb305/bundy52732/IM000799.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb305/bundy52732/IM000800.jpg
any crits?

hmm if this is a new account then good shit the shadow is nice ... but if not some1 write's ask already

glass
06-17-2007, 12:48 AM
yeah i thought that ask sounded familliar

sheep: likin' the S and H dude

reach
06-17-2007, 12:50 AM
thats actually my first 3d and my first color and yeah i seen that some one else does ask when I got a membership i dont rep it though, besides someone is bombin mask all over my town so if I do ask he'll throw an m in front of it

See-one
06-17-2007, 01:04 AM
then write task lol thro and m infront wtf lol

Mersiii
06-17-2007, 03:21 AM
5 minute peice, positive crits please
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4683/1002809ac8.jpg

AnteUp
06-17-2007, 04:10 AM
use the same bars on each letter repeat the bar to make tha otha letter iight? see how the e and a dont match wit tha same style the i and m flow pretty gud, but the s is all alone in its style

nero122
06-17-2007, 04:22 AM
that would be quite a meen simple piece you mind if i steal the s lol jkn

uhhh
06-17-2007, 09:44 AM
5 minute peice, positive crits please
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4683/1002809ac8.jpg
this reminds me of bouncing soul a long time ago,
except with uneven widths of letters,
the m is too big, beyond that.
id say keep going, youll be kind of ehh for awhile.
but willll eventually get good.
freallll.

WolfBurrns
06-17-2007, 10:39 AM
perc- way to many arrows. go a little more simple

My new ish. Critzz

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/soledoesthebodygood.jpg

Im gonna bump this. Only feedback I got was to go simple...:rolleyes:

meetermaid
06-17-2007, 10:49 AM
sole, make the bottom of the l longer. other than that it's pretty good, the e's a little weird but i dunno what could make it better. harsh work on your handy too

Sou - Mvd
06-17-2007, 11:53 AM
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3629/002zf0.jpg

Hester
06-17-2007, 11:55 AM
whats with all the people writing sick names

asma
coma
lol whats next throat hurt

amk
06-17-2007, 12:13 PM
Hester sounds like Molester ?..

..ill crit later

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rgedsfwef.jpg

gettin creative widdit..
isit worth finalising ?..!!

Hester
06-17-2007, 12:20 PM
yea i say it is worth finishing , oh and i know hester sounds like molester or easster

TricksForKids
06-17-2007, 12:24 PM
the K's terrible, and its too bubbly, and its diagonal which pisses me off, lol, nah but for real that K sucks homie, the A and M are money though, youve come a long way


the sheep and reach go back to simples..i dont know how thats "wu tang inspired" but theyd probably slam your arm in a car door if they saw that.

and mersi, that M is nice man, and the e, keep workin in that fat sexy style, make all the letters the same size


sole, i like those letters actually, just dont connect them at the top, and keep working on that throw

amk
06-17-2007, 12:40 PM
oh yeah..i never even noticed about the K Tricks...god damn...ahaha...isit the way the K is curved..and the rest aint...and the peice is diagonol cuz i gotta fit Anroe..9Rider..Duse and Freak on...its the 12oz International Bulk Exchange started by myself...hehehehe

alive
06-17-2007, 12:47 PM
i actually really like the M-K connection. however the random shit comming out of your A and K, not so much.

fredom-writer
06-17-2007, 12:49 PM
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/IMG_2354.jpg

critrisiums plz,. i got bettr huh?!?!

amk
06-17-2007, 12:49 PM
ahah Thanks Tricks...Alive....and those bits are menna be stars...youll be able to see better when i have filled it...i was " gettin creative " .. hehehe..

im out...ill be back with the finished LOAD lateerrr

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 12:52 PM
Krispy- looks pretty crispy mannn. haha looks good.

Just tryin out a new style let me know what everyone thinks. I like it.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4558/img1281uq5.jpg
crits?

nero122
06-17-2007, 01:03 PM
edited go dooooooooooooooown

alive
06-17-2007, 01:04 PM
krisssssssspy i like it a lot, if u only took a LITTLE bit more time to make everything even, and connect the bars, theyd be dope dope simples. same for the throws actually.

dizzle. . . . . o god.

nero122
06-17-2007, 01:05 PM
tricks i agree that is shogun is shit but i think he ment its wu inspired by the word 'shogun' if it makes scense?

*this was to tricksforkids on that shogun sheep shit *

ESKE one
06-17-2007, 01:07 PM
Krispy- looks pretty crispy mannn. haha looks good.

Just tryin out a new style let me know what everyone thinks. I like it.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4558/img1281uq5.jpg
crits?

lol
but i dont get it wat is this about
got me confused

alive
06-17-2007, 01:07 PM
i can only hope and assume that its a poor attempt at humour.

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 01:10 PM
humour? jeez. I didn't know my style was that bad.
damn I geuss I'll have to go back to simples, I mean I was just trying a new style. damn

alive
06-17-2007, 01:11 PM
and it just gets funnier. . . .

ESKE one
06-17-2007, 01:13 PM
lol your pretty good at coping though
keep it up lol

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 01:13 PM
Krispy- looks pretty crispy mannn. haha looks good.

Just tryin out a new style let me know what everyone thinks. I like it.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4558/img1281uq5.jpg

crits?


yeh so dizzel....u bit ras as if he was cake...and ur the fat kid that loves it...find u own style..

nero122
06-17-2007, 01:14 PM
lol

amk
06-17-2007, 01:16 PM
haahha

aight chill guys..
he said he liked it to me on MSN
so i said that he could do a fill design for me..

so then we then agreed that he would copy it..and post it...to see what you guys would think and say

and you said what we expected ahahahahhahahaa

damn im bored..

Krispy...i actually dont like em...but iff Alive and the others doo...keep at it...just my opinion

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 01:21 PM
hahaaa....dick.

alive
06-17-2007, 01:23 PM
excuse me? i dont think anyone (except apparently shamee) was dumb enough to think that was a legit bite. i just thought he was trying to be funny. . . . and failing.

-GEKS-
06-17-2007, 01:28 PM
krispy i like em all, great simples

errrr

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1019.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1018.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1017.jpg
i was gonna enter this in the toy battle, and as soon as im done posting this im gonna go check to see if it got polled yet and if it didnt im gonna send this in and lose horribley
good bye

amk
06-17-2007, 01:35 PM
oh shit edit

glass
06-17-2007, 01:53 PM
excuse me? i dont think anyone (except apparently shamee) was dumb enough to think that was a legit bite. i just thought he was trying to be funny. . . . and failing.

hahahaha yeah dude. i read shamee's comment and what i would assume to be a perfect "are you fucking kidding me?" expression came across my face

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 01:57 PM
excuse me? i dont think anyone (except apparently shamee) was dumb enough to think that was a legit bite. i just thought he was trying to be funny. . . . and failing.


well ras sed dizzel bit me...so i sed somthin.

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 02:07 PM
sorry guys...
Geks- I like the second one work with that...

so basically now that everybody hates me. haha.
I'ma post some pics.

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6708/img1265oo6.jpg


http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7483/img1276oh5.jpg

in need of crits for the bottom one... thanks...

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-17-2007, 02:18 PM
dont take this ish seriouly
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture002-2.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 02:20 PM
nearly there just work on them letters

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/stephy.jpg

y was a killa.

tonentink
06-17-2007, 02:22 PM
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/7273/neway6.jpg

amk
06-17-2007, 02:25 PM
Look Shamee...clean them up..then ink them..then post them...noone can work anything out..

* update *

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tr543wtrw.jpg

For my man WIENOT !
im gonna fill up the space with a silluoette picture...if thats what its called..like the Del i drew..

whahappen?
06-17-2007, 02:28 PM
entry
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/4442/picture124hf4.jpg
hahahahahh the marker sucks
hai guys waht abowt meh?

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 02:28 PM
kk..not feelin the spikes...but if thats the way u want it then okay.

repsSDN
06-17-2007, 02:43 PM
AMK im liking those drawings, looks good.
some new drawings both not very good...
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5839/lexuspeicelq5.jpg
"lexus" with a crap X
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4069/emacandcharfn1.jpg
and this.
Thoughts?

tonentink
06-17-2007, 02:43 PM
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/7273/neway6.jpg
aOt!!!

amk
06-17-2007, 02:44 PM
quit bumpin your shit on the same page n00b0i3d

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 02:46 PM
Shamee- pure fire.
Amk- yo you stealin my style? haha just playin lookin good.
Zers- A looks like a K, other than that it looks aight.
Emac- work wit the second one.
Toser- maybe fix up that R and O
...any crits on my stuff at the top of the page?

bouncingsoul
06-17-2007, 02:48 PM
Wack WS, bleh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0834.jpg

repsSDN
06-17-2007, 02:48 PM
Yeah dizzle d those peices are pretty sick, top one looks better.

ToPHAT
06-17-2007, 02:49 PM
sorry guys...
Geks- I like the second one work with that...

so basically now that everybody hates me. haha.
I'ma post some pics.

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6708/img1265oo6.jpg


http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7483/img1276oh5.jpg

in need of crits for the bottom one... thanks...
yo some1 in my area writes merk he was like the king of this small town but he moved 2 hamnilton and is still holding it down to this day. he still comes bak 2 his old hometown (my town) and rips shit uo every now and then... where r u from?

Sou - Mvd
06-17-2007, 03:02 PM
Wack WS, bleh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0834.jpg

The bottom extension on the E seems a little to long to me, on it's own it's larger than the actual letter.I think if you shortened it so the bottom of it meets the edge of the letter before it, right were the 3d is sort of blocked o ff by it currently, it would flow better.

and a shameless bump for some critiques.
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3629/002zf0.jpg

glass
06-17-2007, 03:47 PM
Sou: nice simple letters, work on that M though and i don't like the diamonds that much. keep it up.


Sheep: love those letters dude, pretty damn good for 2 weeks. keep it up man

BigEl: nice style, pretty original as always. i like 'em.

so yeah i actually think that this one is pretty damn decent. def. want some crits on it :D

http://i9.tinypic.com/5zqfz8h.jpg

bumpage for more crit

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 04:05 PM
somethin about that L I don't like, but other than that nice simple

-ShAmEE-
06-17-2007, 05:03 PM
well just did this one...
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet.jpg
u wanna kno what i think of it.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet-1.jpg

meetermaid
06-17-2007, 05:36 PM
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9380/picture31xb7.jpghttp://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4640/picture33uq1.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/870/picture34yw3.jpghttp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6507/picture35cz7.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/8662/picture36ns1.jpghttp://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4122/picture37pi3.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3631/picture38ac1.jpghttp://img489.imageshack.us/img489/8883/picture39gc8.jpg

pretty simples and shitttttttttt, which is a word i say too much...

meetermaid
06-17-2007, 06:01 PM
haha i didn't write it cause i'm shit at graff, i wrote it cause it's ironic...
tha-bottom-of-tha-page-bumps

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9380/picture31xb7.jpghttp://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4640/picture33uq1.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/870/picture34yw3.jpghttp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6507/picture35cz7.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/8662/picture36ns1.jpghttp://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4122/picture37pi3.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3631/picture38ac1.jpghttp://img489.imageshack.us/img489/8883/picture39gc8.jpg

pretty simples and shitttttttttt, which is a word i say too much...

Sumoe
06-17-2007, 06:18 PM
Wack WS, bleh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0834.jpg

DOPENESS!!!

Eack
06-17-2007, 06:25 PM
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/5287/1506071925zj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3230/pict0035ih4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tips plz

meetermaid
06-17-2007, 06:29 PM
eack on the last pic the a is hott, and the k on the first one is ok, keep workin on em. all in all i like the 2nd style better.

Eack
06-17-2007, 06:39 PM
eack on the last pic the a is hott, and the k on the first one is ok, keep workin on em. all in all i like the 2nd style better.

same here, however, most ppl another forum i go to like the first one better :S

The_Sheep
06-17-2007, 06:44 PM
the K's terrible, and its too bubbly, and its diagonal which pisses me off, lol, nah but for real that K sucks homie, the A and M are money though, youve come a long way


the sheep and reach go back to simples..i dont know how thats "wu tang inspired" but theyd probably slam your arm in a car door if they saw that.

and mersi, that M is nice man, and the e, keep workin in that fat sexy style, make all the letters the same size


sole, i like those letters actually, just dont connect them at the top, and keep working on that throw
Alright I'm all for constructive criticism but that's far from it, Wu Tang would slam my arm in a door if they saw my piece? Yes thank you for the great criticism asshole

Vice
06-17-2007, 06:48 PM
yeah im gonna have to agree with sheep. all you really did was say that his k just plain sucks but yet you didnt give him any hints.

knewsince.
06-17-2007, 06:49 PM
ooooohhhhhh

AnteUp
06-17-2007, 07:15 PM
nearly there just work on them letters

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/stephy.jpg

y was a killa.
i love this

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 07:18 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet.jpg


bumppp fuckin hot Shamee

alive
06-17-2007, 07:19 PM
vice what the fuck do u know. do you have any fucking idea how long ras has been on this site, and how long we have been? tricks has given ras more helpful advice then youll give anyone im sure.
and as for the sheep thing, haha well there tricks was a dick, but i agree. lol.

MESN[905]
06-17-2007, 07:25 PM
edit

D-ELFY?
06-17-2007, 07:29 PM
Merk I Think The Bottom One Looks Firm Bro And So Does Everyone Elses .we All Know Style Comes From Time And Practice

alive
06-17-2007, 07:43 PM
i have more hate for that stupid fucking "application" then you can possibly imagine.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-17-2007, 07:49 PM
scribbles.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture-1.jpg

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 07:58 PM
^^very nice scribbles.

knewsince.
06-17-2007, 07:58 PM
oh sure teze rub it in that u got a cell phone, i dont care..:(
but, dope shit except the arrow come out from the left arm of the t

Vice
06-17-2007, 08:04 PM
alive i never said a single thing against you or anybody else on the site other than tricks and that was only because i felt that he was being an ass to sheep. what brought up the fact that i dont know how long any of you have been here? and i dont think i said anything against ras did i? no beef i just wanna know why you got so angry.

Vice
06-17-2007, 08:07 PM
oh... i see. but yeah im not one who is a fan of starting beef unless i really think theres a reason to so i said something that was out of line then please, tell me.

AliasL1A
06-17-2007, 08:14 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e292/Xperiment67/strayy.jpg

I'm extremely new, so I know it's really simple. I'm still trying to get a handle on the nuances of my own writing. I don't really have anyone around here to look up to so I gotta do this on my own... any critique is greatly appreciated.

BORG
06-17-2007, 08:16 PM
if your that new,(this is the only time i am going to say this, hopefully) go to simpler shit n try blocks

BIGel
06-17-2007, 08:18 PM
alias you got a funky 80's style going on there but it doesnt work so well for husle and flow, lose the tweak on the letters and get things symetrical and even..

for the karik battle.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/168/a/f/im_only_compensating_by_bigel.jpg

dizzle_d
06-17-2007, 08:19 PM
Your characters are always so sick El. I love em

Eack
06-17-2007, 08:21 PM
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/3333/2205071805on2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3733/2502071105ve9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AliasL1A
06-17-2007, 08:23 PM
Thanks for the feedback. :)

Yeah, I am that new... not even 2 weeks into it, lol.

BORG
06-17-2007, 08:34 PM
Got a new sketchbook last night, got the iside cover done and finished a piece, n workin on another
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8813/june17001io5.jpg
my orange paint marker fuckin exploded, just ignore the shitty mess
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2618/june17002ok1.jpg
love spraying freights, i know the karak is terrible, just a quickie

xSilencio
06-17-2007, 08:41 PM
borg-siiiick.

AliasL1A
06-17-2007, 08:58 PM
Love the one in the center of your sketchbook Borg

Vice
06-17-2007, 09:05 PM
borg... third time ive found myself saying this..... secks me please. i love all your work.

reach
06-17-2007, 09:14 PM
hai guys waht abowt meh?

your last letter looks like a penis work on that

Sumoe
06-17-2007, 09:17 PM
alias you got a funky 80's style going on there but it doesnt work so well for husle and flow, lose the tweak on the letters and get things symetrical and even..

for the karik battle.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/168/a/f/im_only_compensating_by_bigel.jpg

Dope sheyyyyit BIGel, good to someone entering the character battles.

AnteUp
06-17-2007, 09:17 PM
vice is a very horny bastard :)

reach
06-17-2007, 09:26 PM
borg i think thats one of the hottest simples i've ever seen

Vice
06-17-2007, 09:37 PM
hahaha. yes i am. sort of. but yeah. borg is god at simples. hence the desire to secks him.

alive
06-17-2007, 09:49 PM
yo vice, i wasnt really angry, i was more just trying to explain why tricks wouldnt bother to give more constructive crits. and then i guess i got carried away. haha.


REP BSC.

capo93
06-17-2007, 09:51 PM
wow maybe time for vice to quit riding dick?? hes notbad at simples but he sure as hell aint god...
but good improvement and bigel that character is hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot

pocket change
06-17-2007, 09:56 PM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1513/ak013vc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yehh you all know what to do..

Sou - Mvd
06-17-2007, 09:59 PM
Not sure about the D if thats a d but the rest of the throw is looking good. If you're going to hide the front of the top part of the e though you should do the same to the s.

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/6933/004ez9.jpg

alive
06-17-2007, 10:02 PM
alias you got a funky 80's style going on there but it doesnt work so well for husle and flow, lose the tweak on the letters and get things symetrical and even..

for the karik battle.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/168/a/f/im_only_compensating_by_bigel.jpg
Dope sheyyyyit BIGel, good to someone entering the character battles.


i feel like i should know the answer to this, but. . . . those arent straight pen freestyles are they?

Fluffy Bunnies
06-17-2007, 10:04 PM
MVD I like the second one... nice and euro!

Sou - Mvd
06-17-2007, 10:11 PM
Thanks, I'm a big fan of your characters.

hah fuck I just realized I didn't even 3d the first ugh



edit: oops new page, i'll get some flicks here in a bit
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/5094/006nn4.jpg

uhhh
06-17-2007, 10:18 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-029S-3.jpg
"re"
i dont liek the "e" all to much.
but it sort of looks like it has buck teeth.
so iw as down with that.
crits on it pretty please?!

el-that shit is dope.
i still havent sent you stickers.
and i havent gotten any either.
im work on a new pack for you.
and then pm you, kay?

ESKE one
06-17-2007, 11:14 PM
i can tell the letters apart but the r kinda looks like a m
good shit though

K(i)ng
06-17-2007, 11:38 PM
heres a very early sketch of mine, which undoubtedly you guys could dupe

http://www.sourimage.com/img/026840bb49a8a7df2668d08f908f15de/tn1222350357_30078700_5540.jpg (http://www.sourimage.com)

EKE
06-17-2007, 11:41 PM
heres a very early sketch of mine, which undoubtedly you guys could dupe

http://www.sourimage.com/img/026840bb49a8a7df2668d08f908f15de/tn1222350357_30078700_5540.jpg (http://www.sourimage.com)
Keep practicing

D E M O
06-17-2007, 11:53 PM
TOY???? looking for feedback

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4979/demoses8.jpg

Samp1e
06-17-2007, 11:57 PM
i haven't sketched anything in a long time

yuck:
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3197/spa0018ss2.jpg
where are flow? :(

EKE
06-18-2007, 12:09 AM
TOY???? looking for feedback

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4979/demoses8.jpg
Nice style
finish the outline or just dont outline it at all tho

Captain
06-18-2007, 12:26 AM
TOY???? looking for feedback

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4979/demoses8.jpg

You like cezr a bunch don't you? (not calling a bite. it's just the first thing to my mind)
It's alright, but I'd say to define the individual letters more. Oh, and finish the bubbles.

AnteUp
06-18-2007, 12:39 AM
grimey ish :)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0025-1.jpg
supposed to say swisha, like swishahouse...but i ran outta room

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-18-2007, 12:42 AM
not bad but the s's dont really fit. Try a different s or make all your letters the same size as the s.

AnteUp
06-18-2007, 01:05 AM
by same size u mean? ie height, width?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-18-2007, 01:10 AM
width . make the I a capital I.

AnteUp
06-18-2007, 01:13 AM
you, my friend are a genius...will do..

Sumoe
06-18-2007, 01:22 AM
You like cezr a bunch don't you? (not calling a bite. it's just the first thing to my mind)
It's alright, but I'd say to define the individual letters more. Oh, and finish the bubbles.

Looks nothing like C3zr's shit...lol

-ShAmEE-
06-18-2007, 06:50 AM
vice what the fuck do u know. do you have any fucking idea how long ras has been on this site, and how long we have been? tricks has given ras more helpful advice then youll give anyone im sure.
and as for the sheep thing, haha well there tricks was a dick, but i agree. lol.


goo toy oldies!! wohooo...ohh yeh!.

-ShAmEE-
06-18-2007, 06:52 AM
well just did this one...
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet.jpg
u wanna kno what i think of it.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet-1.jpg


bummp

uhhh
06-18-2007, 08:11 AM
idk shamee.
your stuff always looks like it could be super tight once its cleaned up.
but it usually doesnt.
idk,
fix that?
haha.

alive
06-18-2007, 08:13 AM
it also always gets bigger to the right. . ..

-ShAmEE-
06-18-2007, 08:37 AM
hhaaaa...i'll make them lines so i can keep it the same size

AnteUp
06-18-2007, 08:42 AM
did you actually jus cross it out and put it in the "bin"?

amk
06-18-2007, 09:46 AM
vice what the fuck do u know. do you have any fucking idea how long ras has been on this site, and how long we have been? tricks has given ras more helpful advice then youll give anyone im sure.
and as for the sheep thing, haha well there tricks was a dick, but i agree. lol.


Bump this..
Vice....i dont think you shu dpost untill you post your work...
because i dont think anyone is taking you seriously...
you have 27 posts a day
your taking the piss man..
stop riding willys...
and go get your camera
post up your graffiti..
then tell people how to crit and not crit..

Tricks told me why the K was bad...and Tricks has gotten me to where i am now....same as Alive...so please Vice...dont post...untill you get your camera....atleast not in here..

then again

do what the hell you want !

scoot
06-18-2007, 11:21 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/gen3.jpg

some new stuff im working on.. my marker started to die near the bottom right

Bazer
06-18-2007, 11:40 AM
EW!!

amk
06-18-2007, 01:09 PM
yo..
iv just had a thought
how about making an " Intermediate Thead " ... for all the writers who are at the middle stage. of writing...just breaking out of simples...gettin letters down...like
AnteUp
Dizzel
Reyesone
Krazzie Ammo
Made
Capo
Guest
Emokid
Jank
Fosale
Wapeen
Fluffy Bunnies
Baze


and all the others who still post in here but are decent..

like i say...its just a thought...i think its a good idea...then again

IF ANY MODS AGREE..
PLEASE SAY SO !
PLEASE PLEASE TAKE THIS INTO ACCOUNT

trashhh
06-18-2007, 01:12 PM
..... i agree

dizzle_d
06-18-2007, 01:12 PM
oh snap, as they say
yo bruteus lets do disssss

Fluffy Bunnies
06-18-2007, 01:19 PM
We should make rules for it..... like it has to be decent.... nothing Toy to the maxX extreme, you have to prove urself... or else

00-made-00
06-18-2007, 01:19 PM
yeah amkah i think thts a good idea, i think we should get sume to have a word.

bouncingsoul
06-18-2007, 01:23 PM
From yesterday

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0835.jpg

amk
06-18-2007, 01:25 PM
yeah...Knews could post there too!!!!...this could be soo dope !

Bazer
06-18-2007, 01:35 PM
yo..
iv just had a thought
how about making an " Intermediate Thead " ... for all the writers who are at the middle stage. of writing...just breaking out of simples...gettin letters down...like
AnteUp
Dizzel
Reyesone
Krazzie Ammo
Made
Capo
Guest
Emokid
Jank
Fosale
Wapeen
Fluffy Bunnies

and all the others who still post in here but are decent..

like i say...its just a thought...i think its a good idea...then again

IF ANY MODS AGREE..
PLEASE SAY SO !
PLEASE PLEASE TAKE THIS INTO ACCOUNT

:confused::confused::confused:

whahappen?
06-18-2007, 01:35 PM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1513/ak013vc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yehh you all know what to do..
bump

-ShAmEE-
06-18-2007, 01:36 PM
did you actually jus cross it out and put it in the "bin"?


hell yh. fuckin hated the shit.

amk
06-18-2007, 01:36 PM
look..it was just a list off my head...
Cumon some more opinions...SHOULD IT BE MADE ?

Bazer
06-18-2007, 01:37 PM
duh. its sounds like a really good idea man. nice thread for the poeple that dont leave the toy section to come to.

whahappen?
06-18-2007, 01:38 PM
:confused::confused::confused:
oh shawdawp you know your included
hey im just gonna make it k?
unless somone else has a burning desire to..