Blackbooks

[amk]

Right then..Motherly duties

Ezone...its aiight...i dont know much bout throws...bu ti don know you need to start simple and evelop from there with htme..look at sum old skool Sane , Ja throws...theyre basic bubble letters..whic are both kool and funkay

Stim...your right..but there aint that much symmetry


Esco....do straight up SIMPLES...when i say SIMPLES i mean like this

ESCO

no shit up and down side to side
straight up blocks..
and use bars to consturct your letters
go to the new to graff thread to see what i mean by bars

Breakout Azer....god damn....no offence...but its pretty baaad...drop everything...3d , colours the lot....focus on your letters only...do what i told ESCO..

Oh and

Ez....that bottom karak freestyle is aight..not my style but aight

sooo..page one of the 12oz International Bulk Exchange is done !!

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

Wienot
Amk

be prepared for more !

[00-made-00]

amk- hs sik man i like the 3d i think you should of kept i the same colour tho, other than tht i think its sik man.

[dizzle_d]

Right then..Motherly duties
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg




ohh shit man thats so fresh! I'm at camp right now on tha comp hahaha.
keep that work comin looks so good.I TOLD YOU those colors are like gushers.

freshhh
keep it comin

[krazzie_ammo]

ezone - make block letters

amk = dont really like the letters, tehy are too overshadowed by the colours, if that makes sense.

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5280/147jx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i havent done anything in ages, so i did this quick before i go out :)

[amk]

Thanks Dizzle , Krazzi , Made

so you ca see the leeters

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dsfcwe.jpg

..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

Krazzie..its simple ?

[krazzie_ammo]

ezone - make block letters

amk = dont really like the letters, tehy are too overshadowed by the colours, if that makes sense.

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5280/147jx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i havent done anything in ages, so i did this quick before i go out :)
bump :)

[Jroc1993]

yur R is too small compared to the rest of the letters but i like it overall

[exhale]

krazzie maybe make the top left arm of the y flat like the right?

amk i like it but what did you use for the keyline and the highlights?

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00125.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00123.jpg

[ESCO1]

Right AMK, is this better?
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3585/image013mediumlc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[bouncingsoul]

"Caer" for... Caer

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0848.jpg

[EKE]

Right AMK, is this better?
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3585/image013mediumlc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
its a good start but the A looks rounded compared to the other letters and it kinda looks inconsistant try to keep your letter either mostly rounded or mostly angled

[EKE]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l114/NotoriusSnL/Graffa144.jpg
Crits please

[Nem]

Eke, beautiful blending work. but the structure is really bad. says Aesop? i do like the handstyle though.

deja, use bars to make the letters.

bouncingsoul, the graf gods will definitely smile the day you finally decide to paint. XD

exhale, in the SEWR sketch the letters go from thin to thick bars. i would say try to keep them all as thick as the W.

still cant find a good way to make a closed C. stickin with this one till then. fucked up the A as well.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs12.jpg

[scoot]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/uhm.jpg

NEM.. u "a" isent too to bad it just needs as much attitude as ur "S" and "C" have.. same with ur "B"

[EKE]

Scoot the E is ok but the C is kinda weird you should connect it and as for the N its ok but its really hard to make a really good N u should try other letters

[EKE]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l114/NotoriusSnL/Graff143.jpg
heres a sketch i did about a week ago slightly more simple...

[exhale]

krazzie maybe make the top left arm of the y flat like the right?

amk i like it but what did you use for the keyline and the highlights?

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00125.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00123.jpg

bump crits pls

eke the e isnt looking to good

[amk]

Thanks Dizzle , Krazzi , Made

so you ca see the leeters

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dsfcwe.jpg

..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

Krazzie..its simple ?

boomp

Exhale..like...iono...there simples..which is good...but use bars..

Atesk..no beef man...but post some of your work..

like i said..im a beef free kid now !

[tense]

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_0976.jpg

[tense]

it looks like a solid peice
































with cancer
how can i improve on it?

[Bazer]

mah... i dont think im gonna color it...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Jun_22_001.jpg

[Nem]

holy shite baze. the symmetry of that is beautiful. color it!

[EKE]

nice bayse the only thing that could be improved prolly is if it was straight up and down the whole thing is at a bit of a slant and the middle is not even with the line other than that its sick

[alive]

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03243.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03246.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03247.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03248.jpg

[amk]

edit

[glass]

alive: i like those A's

baze: nice symmetry, i like the B the most

idea for a decent throwie, crits?

http://i12.tinypic.com/4ka9g89.jpg

[tense]

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_0959.jpg

[tense]

once again, old^^

[sketch3]

much better, now just diss conect all the leters and lose the 3d

[glass]

bumping off the bottom of the page


alive: i like those A's

baze: nice symmetry, i like the B the most

idea for a decent throwie, crits?

http://i12.tinypic.com/4ka9g89.jpg

[Roolete]

fix the a. and you should try messign around with letter sizes.

[afek]

yeah glas its nice just get the a
alive- the last photo !!!!
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/100_0929.jpg

[hungr]

crayons are crisp!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00484.jpg
kinda ghetto sharpie (on a table)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00487.jpg

[emokid]

nice simples hungr

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6549.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6548.jpg

two pictures cos it looks shit if you only see one. in fact, it looks shit anyway but....

if anyone says 'your old style was better' i will have a seizure, this is just EXPERIMENTZ.

[Bazer]

emokid why are just doing your simples like this? they look way better. :)

[emokid]

whaddya mean baze? sorry its 2am over here n im super slow :)

[alive]

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03243.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03246.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03247.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03248.jpg



yeah bump. pear, hungr i love.

[AnteUp]

this made me chuckkle..thanks mate...ill do you one..i forgot wat yah write :(

and Sheep
props for giving that big crit
thats what we need more of in here from the newbies..more contribution
Chalk..clean fills man..im just not a fan of your K...
i write same onahhhhhhhh:)

[BIGel]

^love your letters pear, the shading is really good, especially on your characters. inspired by the kay.

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/261378112.jpg

[Jroc1993]

do i see a kay bite? no offense

[Soner_603]

the following are exchanges
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/kason7.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/kason1.jpg

the next two are of my name done by me
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/kason6.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/Picture058.jpg

[alive]

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03249.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

soner-603- i see mad potential. On the amkah piece your bars tend to go from big to small (ex: m and k) try to keep em the same size. Your a's only need one ending point on top it makes em look funny with two bars coming out, also your letters grow as the pice goes on notice the size of the first A and the H. use the Amkah sketch as a refrence and go a tad bit simpler.
Alive- Throwie is dope but hard to make out the letters, but that goes with being grimey. You should start sketching with a pencil. your extensions are looking alot cleaner and flow more with each letter.
emokid- dope style but the extension the p and a need work use one of the extensions that you did on your amkah piece. the top of the E the rounder part doesn't fit the piece all together.
Hungr- great style like the some what euro fill. Nice simple letters but the N seems bigger than the rest probably intentional but good stuff none the less.
afek- go simpler man dont concentrate on 3-d right now worry bout your letters. try basic keyboard letters, may seem like it doesn't help but it does.
Glas- not that bad seems like somewhat of a fezat style work on your G a and L more though, i see you keep trying to evole those same letters try differnet ones though they a lower case g.
Tense- nice simples but the N is hurting try to make it wider. I see you saw dajams sketches and got inspired?

[AnteUp]

teze a fuckin mod :)

[Make•]

hungr- CLEANNNNNNNN simples really feeling them bro.

[TAZM]

soner i like that. it looks like good simples to me but im a toy so hey.

alive im not sure what to say about those.

hungr im diggin the crayons. and that thing on the table has nice colors.

and for me...
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm009.jpg
crits please.

[meetermaid]

tazzzzzzm. try to make your letters more equal, like the letters all look uneven , it's not too bad but it could be improved upon (like i'm one to talk ahha)

bigel i was about to call you out till i read your post properly haha, what does it say?

pear, hot shit! same to you hungr. feelin the styles up in this bitchhhhhhhh.

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/953/picture42sl5.jpghttp://img529.imageshack.us/img529/8086/picture43hz5.jpg
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5852/picture45fl3.jpghttp://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2189/picture47xb6.jpg

critsss....been posting a ton of shit (for me) that's actually coloured and done nicely and barely heard a peep about em! :(

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

tazm- not bad simple but work on keepin your letters the same width grab a ruler if you have too.
meeter maid- i like the bottom 2 the best. nice simples, weird styles.

[bouncingsoul]

Another "Asek" sketch for the battle. The bar in the A I just made a little circle- no idea why... Probably would have looked better as a normal bar, oh well. I gotta work on filling up that space under/to the right of the EK (the bottom-right of the piece hah). Wack K but oh well... Yeah, here it is

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0849.jpg

...Hah, upside-down knews sketch from earlier today worked its way into the flick too

[tense]

soner-603- i see mad potential. On the amkah piece your bars tend to go from big to small (ex: m and k) try to keep em the same size. Your a's only need one ending point on top it makes em look funny with two bars coming out, also your letters grow as the pice goes on notice the size of the first A and the H. use the Amkah sketch as a refrence and go a tad bit simpler.
Alive- Throwie is dope but hard to make out the letters, but that goes with being grimey. You should start sketching with a pencil. your extensions are looking alot cleaner and flow more with each letter.
emokid- dope style but the extension the p and a need work use one of the extensions that you did on your amkah piece. the top of the E the rounder part doesn't fit the piece all together.
Hungr- great style like the some what euro fill. Nice simple letters but the N seems bigger than the rest probably intentional but good stuff none the less.
afek- go simpler man dont concentrate on 3-d right now worry bout your letters. try basic keyboard letters, may seem like it doesn't help but it does.
Glas- not that bad seems like somewhat of a fezat style work on your G a and L more though, i see you keep trying to evole those same letters try differnet ones though they a lower case g.
Tense- nice simples but the N is hurting try to make it wider. I see you saw dajams sketches and got inspired?
no offense, but who is dajam?, and do u have a sample of his sketch?,

[MAST]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/OMNI-1.jpg

fucked up the N in the bottom left and in the main. bottom right i was just fucking around with a one liner. pretty simple though

[Nem]

mast, top one is good, but then gets crowded near the end. way crowded. bottom stuff and character not too original.

meetermaid, would that be considered euro?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs15.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs14.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs13.jpg

[[breakout]-azer]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/STA60009.jpg

(bad picture the camera was being gay so used my phone)
crits?




mast- i like it but not sure on thelast cuple of letters

[nero122]

block letters none of that from the last 3 people is good so just like evry ones going to tell you do the letters from your keyboard but after a year or 2 you should develop a style but i doubt youlll be into graff for a year

[MrMaze]

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5337/griw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just mesin

[TAZM]

base ... keep working. the letters look very uneven. try making them all the same size

scab ... i like the last pic. the pink throw with all the faces. looks nice.


now dont be too harsh cus this is the first time i tried anything this style.
and i ran out of room for the M...
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm014.jpg
and it looks even worse cus for some reason my camera made it look all choppy.

[00-made-00]

tazm- i think the letters would look good if you striped them off all the add ons and little extentions, just get your letters perfectly formed the way you want them to look like then started addig bits to them.

[Mr Tasty]

Another "Asek" sketch for the battle. The bar in the A I just made a little circle- no idea why... Probably would have looked better as a normal bar, oh well. I gotta work on filling up that space under/to the right of the EK (the bottom-right of the piece hah). Wack K but oh well... Yeah, here it is

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0849.jpg

...Hah, upside-down knews sketch from earlier today worked its way into the flick too
thats dope...i might enter the battle now...i just dont have any colors to do a full color lol

EDIT:heres wat i just did quikly...not final ...crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/asek.jpg

[ESKE one]

you also need a better camera shot taste lol but it looks good but i cant see much
knews- fire like usual
tazm- do simples
mr maze- do simples
everyone else keep doing wat your doing but try to make it look better

heres something i just went with quickie like 5 minutes
its garbage but ill probably take my time next time and make it look better
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs064.jpg

[Nem]

eske, if that third letter is supposed to be an E. it really doesnt look like one. the P had a shred of hope, but it kinda just goes downhill from there. Take your time with the next one. and i would suggest trying some new bar combinations for that S.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

tense heres dajam.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/PICT0256.jpg

eske one- i cant make out what the third letters is. For now try to keep your bars the same size i have seen better from you.
Mr. tasty- thats pretty ill, id like to see it all cleaned up.
tazm- what happened you had some pretty decent simples a page ago and now this. go back to what you were doing work on those letters more.
mrmaze- simple basic letters, use your keyboard as a refrence.
base- the same for you man.
scab- not really feeling the throwie.
mast- on the top piece the o and m are decent nice simple ish but the rest is not that good. simpler letters.
example:
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture.jpg

[Cali]

http://i8.tinypic.com/4zdydqp.jpg
Quick sloppy Little throw...C+C appreciated

[AnteUp]

ok...needin sum help... im doin a sketch for tha asek battle, the fill on mah letters is an avacado green, for the 3d im thinkin of fadin purple ta a dark pink...wat should the forcefield be?

[amk]

Ligggght Blue
or..
Orange around the 3d areas
violoet like colour round the letter area

hehe

[tense]

tense heres dajam.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/PICT0256.jpg

eske one- i cant make out what the third letters is. For now try to keep your bars the same size i have seen better from you.
Mr. tasty- thats pretty ill, id like to see it all cleaned up.
tazm- what happened you had some pretty decent simples a page ago and now this. go back to what you were doing work on those letters more.
mrmaze- simple basic letters, use your keyboard as a refrence.
base- the same for you man.
scab- not really feeling the throwie.
mast- on the top piece the o and m are decent nice simple ish but the rest is not that good. simpler letters.
example:
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture.jpg
fukin nice man thanks, congrats for becomin a mod too:cool:

[amk]

Edward..god helpful crits man !!! congrats on MOD too !..keep up the good work !! :p

Mast....do simples...no letters going into themselves or shit like that yeah

Breakout Azr.....it looks pretty clean etc.....just work on basic letering etc.....i like the stars .... theyre very well drawn

Dajam ... has the BEST BLOCK LETTERS IN THE WOOOOOORLD

ESKE...fort you wasnt posting ne more...hehe..i kind hve to agre.the curly things ruind it...keep up the barism tho matey :)

Tasty....get a better pic man...i can see you using blocks which is good..from what i see it looks nice...get a better pic !!! ahah :p

Tamz...resize that thing

MrMaze...you gonn be told this over and over

drop your colours
pick up your pencil
get out a ruler
mark out two parrelel horizontal lines
draw BLOCKS inbetween them
use bars for each letter
look in the new 2 graff thread for help on bars
and then ittl look nice and simplelike this
MRMAZE

its boring..but it will help you

Cali...do what i told MRMAZE to do

damn..big ass crit..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

hehe..bump cuz it took me a looooooong time
iv done another page but i carnt scan in right now..

crits welcome

ideas on the next pages ?
etc.
etc.

Peaceee

[-ShAmEE-]

nice one ras...need to work on them stars...

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet1214.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

thats dope...i might enter the battle now...i just dont have any colors to do a full color lol

EDIT:heres wat i just did quikly...not final ...crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/asek.jpg

Bump, I don't have colors either lol. I'm probably just going to send it in with some filled in 3d. Also, unrelated but, I love your characters too dude.

Alright, planning on doing this handie in between to fill up that space "True to your roots" Kinda sloppy and the letters need a biiiit work. Oh well

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0850.jpg

Putting it in between here by the way

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0846.jpg

[aefx-one]

http://i8.tinypic.com/52ao9qq.jpg

[Chalk]

shamee-
your E's are slightly different shapes, and your letters also get slightly larger as you go. but you gotta love the simples! keep it.
oh and a final though i think you should do your W with a point in the middle instead of that flipped back E look you have goin on there. just my 2 cents.

and you aefx - learn from shamee.

[amk]

the worst thing ever is when you bump sumthing.....do a huge crit...and its at the bottom of the damn fucking page

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

last bump
like i say
any other ideas for the next page etc ?

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/SWEET123214.jpg

[aefx-one]

http://i18.tinypic.com/6fkgccw.jpg

[AnteUp]

Ligggght Blue
or..
Orange around the 3d areas
violoet like colour round the letter area

hehe
wat do u mean? its a forcefield kneegrow...u can have two diff. colors on a force field?:confused:

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet12thone.jpg

soo far...this will look good. i hope. just takin ma time.

[bouncingsoul]

"Asek" finished. Wack K, oh well

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0852.jpg

[The_Sheep]

Alright time for some more crits for everyone

Glas- Nice and simple, i like all the letters except for the G, can't really tell its a G, L could be confusing maybe not, love the A and the S, add some drop shadow

Afek- the 3d is on point, just work on getting it cleaner, the letters are somewhat dull but the structure is good, i would just say start cleaning your stuff up, like do a trace over with nice clean straight lines

Hungr- I would say incorporating the bar lines from your sketch into the actual piece is a pretty bad idea, it doesn't really flow and it just looks awkward, the letters are nice and simple, but the crayons im not feeling, and yes pink is very cute, also try to map out your pieces before you sketch them, unless you meant to have Hun and gr separate. The second piece is fire, the G and R are out of proportion to the piece though, and the R needs some work, get rid of the little penis sticking out of the rounded part

emokid- the letter style and flow is nice man, but blend the cross bar on the A, and the R looks like a K, very nice though

Alive- idk, i really don't like this whole extremely messy style thing you got going on, it just doesn't look good, and i don't see why you freestyle with markers...but the letters is nice, maybe do a trace over and then post it, can barely make out the structure when you post the marker freestyle

Soner- The Amkah piace, lots of unnecesary looking add ons and stuff, also the K just looks extremely off i think its that little middle penis thing on the main bar, and your bubbles need more randomness, vary the sizes more, but i really like the "gentle" look of that piece. The Wienot piece, the top one is fresh, i would say add something to the I, it looks out of place and too plain. The bottom one though is not too good, the faces look bad, and the letters are kind of ugly, and the dropshadow on the T is way off, work on your handy as well. The next piece, get rid of that cigarette looking thing sticking out of the S it looks retarded, the O looks nothing like an O, theres some weird shit goin on with the N but it looks nice, the E is nice, except for that thing sticking out the top, at least blend it man. Next, the top one, the S is nice, the O looks dumb with the blackness, the N is nice, the E looks out of place, and again the blackness looks dumb. The Second, the S is nice, the O again has horrible letter structure, study how bars intersect and all that and youll see the flaws in your Os, the N is nice but again BLEND, that E im definitely feeling, nice 3d as well, prob the best piece of all you posted.

Tazm- nice simple, cool colors, my only complaint is the 3D is off, try doing some more difficult stuff now, it looks like your ready

Meeter Maid- let me first say that your sig literally makes me sick, i wish you would change it cause its not even funny, just gross. Anyway, top left, bleh, too out there for my taste its like trying to make the two extremes work together, im sorry but huge fat bars with tiny little skinny bitch bars together looks dumb. Top right, M needs alot of work, the E needs shortening in the middle bar department, and the pink E looks weird as hell, if your gonna try and pull one of those don't pull it on a letter thats repeated, thought that would be obvious, the T is stylish and nice. The bottom left, the top piece looks good i guess, reminds me of squidward from spongebob though with all those things sticking out of the letters, i dont like the face. The bottom one, not gonna crit cause i cant even begin to read it. THe last one, like what your trying to do eith the fill but you should come up with some nice letters first at least, looks lazy. All in all i would say go back to simples or simpler shit, your sttempting to do all this stuff but you dont have the basics down yet.

Bouncing- can't see much but from the looks of it it looks nice, cant wait for the darkened piece

Mast- cant read it, but looks like you got some original ass shit going on keep it up

Nem- first one, work on spacing your letters, and cmon i know you can come up with a better fill than that. The second one, looks good, but the drop shadow looks more like an outline? The last one, really like it man, the skulls or whatever look cool with the pink, although i don't think skulls are shiny, unless you polished them i guess, anyway yeah my favorite.

Breakout Azer- Downsize the A, Beef up the S and fix the E, drop the stars as well, looks kind of fruity in my opinion

Mr Maze- looks awkward for some reason, i like the darker one better, work on making your letters flow and compliment eachother

Tazm again- very nice man, dont really have much to say except for that

Mr Tasty- i think if your gonna post a sketch like that at least post a bigger pic, hard to see anything

Eske one- the handy says Ples, but the piece looks like PLBS, i would beef up the P, and fix that letter, looks nothing like in the english language man...

Cali- indeed it is sloppy, the L is way off, i would say try simples man

Shamee- not sure why your doing simples now but work on straightness and steadiness

Bouncing again- no offense but it seems like this piece is a lost cause doesnt seem like its gonna end up to be much, i would ditch it, you will probably prove me wrong though

Aefx- Nice letters, fix the X though, looks a bit overdone

Shamee again- simples is loookin nice man

Aefx again- the 3d is way off, also the F has horrid structure, study simples and youll see why, and for some reason the X looks underdone now

Shamee once again- not sure what it is but it looks like fuckin fire

Bouncing once again- WOW, probably about as clean of a freestyle as Ive ever seen, simply beautiful, i cant even begin to decipher how you get letters to flow so well so ill just appreciate it man, fuckin DOPE, i wish you would do full pieces though

Wow that was fucking long, hopefully ill have my camera back soon and i can post some of my own shit, prob be back for another crit sess on Monday, see you all then peace

[rayseone]

shit son we need more people on these forums like you, good work.

bouncing im really feeling the sek but not the a so much maybe you shoulda made a straight bar

shame the s looks good but id say redo the W it juts seems awkward

aefx dont connect your letters,

[sank.]

wow bs has changed alot. i see knews is still bringin that fire with those pen sketches.

anywho heres some shit simples done by yours truly.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0691.jpg

[spag]

Please crit the actual letters, not the size or cleanness.

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/3688/img0380jf3.jpg


sheep pretty much got it.
sank- i think your a looks a bit like a r. the n seems a bit weirdish to me too tho. overall nice.

[MAST]

original of what i posted before
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/OMNI.jpg

putting together a simple
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/OMNI3.jpg

simple finished
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/OMNI2.jpg


got a new charac from it too

[Synaesthesia]

spag- i think the letters are good, but i dont like the add on at the top of the C. Maybe smooth that out a bit and it will be sweet.

[BIGel]

the idea's pretty tight but the execution is weak.

bouncin you ever tried coloring those sketches?

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/174/f/4/taum_by_bigel.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/261589247.jpg

[Degausserr x]

http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667722_9177.jpgwell i fucked up that line on the S and then just made it worse and worse so i quit

but besides that crits?

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=667723&id=883910653

[kelio]

BIGel: i dont think you belong in the toy forums. lol. i love all of your stuff though.

MAST: keep it simple.

spag: keep working on it. i like the c

sank: i dont like the addons on the a and k but nice simple besides that.

amk: fuck thats nice.


kinda messed up. but this is my throw so far. and some characters.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/a22c4b42.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

bigel- love the style always have very distinct .
mast- im glad you took my advice to go simpler but go simpler than that.
spag- not really feeling that throw.
sank- ive watched you progress so much you actually have taken peoples advice and used it. your letters flow very well but the top of the n on the right side is a bit akward same with the top of the s. Keep it up.
shamee- not really feeling the w.
aefx-one- go simpler gave an example a page back or so.
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*asek battle*
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture222.jpg
steze
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture223.jpg
some rattatouile inspired sketches.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture224.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture225.jpg

[WolfBurrns]

"Asek" finished. Wack K, oh well

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0852.jpg

You should make your K's like your S. Just an idea.

[Bazer]

bullshit. that wasn't chitchat those were crits...

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0897.jpg

[WolfBurrns]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/fuckers.jpg

Yeah that was gay. But anyway, I meant the bottom part of the K.


fuckers...... :D

[C3ZR ONE]

Sezer- I like your handyrock alot. You've got a fantastic hold on flow.

El- I can't even crit you properly holmes.. I can only be inspired. I'm rocking a big piece tommorow downtown on a legal wall. I'll get a flick. You can see I've been inspired by your work.

Bouncing- I like your letters and your natural flow has really progressed alot since you started.

Shammee- I really like where you're going with that. You're progressing nicely. I can't read it, but I like it anyway. haha

Sank- You've got a solid foundation to build off of. Now it's time to start building, cuzz I'm not seeing alot of progression. Your use of bar method is on point. I'd continue to really dig in and focus on the natural flow of the letters. It looks a little forced and uptight. Loosey goosey baby... Loosey goosey. haha.

Degassuer X- Give crits= get crits. The new mods are doing a great job of pushing that. Props to them.

Keelio- I dunno really. I guess it looks fun, but I think beginners are alot better off starting on a solid letter foundation than a throwie style. Learn flow first to really down a throwie. I think throwies are very difficult to do well personally. Keep at it tho.

Mast- 1st pic= not even feeling it. Looks like a roller that went wrong. 2nd pic has alot of potential, but lost out on it in the final pic. It's origional tho. Respect for that.

Spag- Same crit as Keelio only I really stress it more for you. It's shakey and has no flow. An emulation of something you just aren't ready for. Get a foundation and build of that.

aefx- You need to go back to blocks. You're all over the place. It's really begginner shit, but we all start somewhere. Have you looked thru the new2graff thread? That's where you need to be.

[BIGel]

the idea's pretty tight but the execution is weak.

bouncin you ever tried coloring those sketches?

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs16/i/2007/174/f/4/taum_by_bigel.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/261589247.jpg

bump for new flix. :)

edit-thanks cezr good luck with the wall send me some flix i wanna see how the graff king of the great north is rollin!

[C3ZR ONE]

Oops.. Baze- lovin that new style.


Sezer- I highly reccomend not deleting another mods posts. Good keeping up, but it's just bad form bee.

[Bazer]

c3zr, i rock alot of styles.. i just talk alot so not many people notice...
kinda rockin this now..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Jun_22_001.jpg

eh.. heres a handy for sole.. should i be posting it here? oh wel.. hell see it. i hope.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0898.jpg

[afek]

bigel-- awesome

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/100_0930.jpg

worker for cleanerrr
it may look like going from small to big but its really not

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

degausser-x- go simpler man. basic letters use bars.
kelio- not a bdad throwie idea keep playing wit it.
baze- i like the ras piece good concept work on the round part of the r though.
afek- great simples everyone i told to go simpler look at those.
bump.


*asek battle*
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture222.jpg
steze
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture223.jpg
some rattatouile inspired sketches.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture224.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture225.jpg

[Bazer]

baze- i like the ras piece good concept work on the round part of the r

says ars. :(

[BIGel]

inspired

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/174/c/4/666_by_bigel.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

says ars. :(
word, well that r would make a great a. maybe switch them?
bigel- chill as always.
wolfburns- messy karak it's alright.
also
for uhhhh
rela.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001-2.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

Alright time for some more crits for everyone

Glas- Nice and simple, i like all the letters except for the G, can't really tell its a G, L could be confusing maybe not, love the A and the S, add some drop shadow

Afek- the 3d is on point, just work on getting it cleaner, the letters are somewhat dull but the structure is good, i would just say start cleaning your stuff up, like do a trace over with nice clean straight lines

Hungr- I would say incorporating the bar lines from your sketch into the actual piece is a pretty bad idea, it doesn't really flow and it just looks awkward, the letters are nice and simple, but the crayons im not feeling, and yes pink is very cute, also try to map out your pieces before you sketch them, unless you meant to have Hun and gr separate. The second piece is fire, the G and R are out of proportion to the piece though, and the R needs some work, get rid of the little penis sticking out of the rounded part

emokid- the letter style and flow is nice man, but blend the cross bar on the A, and the R looks like a K, very nice though

Alive- idk, i really don't like this whole extremely messy style thing you got going on, it just doesn't look good, and i don't see why you freestyle with markers...but the letters is nice, maybe do a trace over and then post it, can barely make out the structure when you post the marker freestyle

Soner- The Amkah piace, lots of unnecesary looking add ons and stuff, also the K just looks extremely off i think its that little middle penis thing on the main bar, and your bubbles need more randomness, vary the sizes more, but i really like the "gentle" look of that piece. The Wienot piece, the top one is fresh, i would say add something to the I, it looks out of place and too plain. The bottom one though is not too good, the faces look bad, and the letters are kind of ugly, and the dropshadow on the T is way off, work on your handy as well. The next piece, get rid of that cigarette looking thing sticking out of the S it looks retarded, the O looks nothing like an O, theres some weird shit goin on with the N but it looks nice, the E is nice, except for that thing sticking out the top, at least blend it man. Next, the top one, the S is nice, the O looks dumb with the blackness, the N is nice, the E looks out of place, and again the blackness looks dumb. The Second, the S is nice, the O again has horrible letter structure, study how bars intersect and all that and youll see the flaws in your Os, the N is nice but again BLEND, that E im definitely feeling, nice 3d as well, prob the best piece of all you posted.

Tazm- nice simple, cool colors, my only complaint is the 3D is off, try doing some more difficult stuff now, it looks like your ready

Meeter Maid- let me first say that your sig literally makes me sick, i wish you would change it cause its not even funny, just gross. Anyway, top left, bleh, too out there for my taste its like trying to make the two extremes work together, im sorry but huge fat bars with tiny little skinny bitch bars together looks dumb. Top right, M needs alot of work, the E needs shortening in the middle bar department, and the pink E looks weird as hell, if your gonna try and pull one of those don't pull it on a letter thats repeated, thought that would be obvious, the T is stylish and nice. The bottom left, the top piece looks good i guess, reminds me of squidward from spongebob though with all those things sticking out of the letters, i dont like the face. The bottom one, not gonna crit cause i cant even begin to read it. THe last one, like what your trying to do eith the fill but you should come up with some nice letters first at least, looks lazy. All in all i would say go back to simples or simpler shit, your sttempting to do all this stuff but you dont have the basics down yet.

Bouncing- can't see much but from the looks of it it looks nice, cant wait for the darkened piece

Mast- cant read it, but looks like you got some original ass shit going on keep it up

Nem- first one, work on spacing your letters, and cmon i know you can come up with a better fill than that. The second one, looks good, but the drop shadow looks more like an outline? The last one, really like it man, the skulls or whatever look cool with the pink, although i don't think skulls are shiny, unless you polished them i guess, anyway yeah my favorite.

Breakout Azer- Downsize the A, Beef up the S and fix the E, drop the stars as well, looks kind of fruity in my opinion

Mr Maze- looks awkward for some reason, i like the darker one better, work on making your letters flow and compliment eachother

Tazm again- very nice man, dont really have much to say except for that

Mr Tasty- i think if your gonna post a sketch like that at least post a bigger pic, hard to see anything

Eske one- the handy says Ples, but the piece looks like PLBS, i would beef up the P, and fix that letter, looks nothing like in the english language man...

Cali- indeed it is sloppy, the L is way off, i would say try simples man

Shamee- not sure why your doing simples now but work on straightness and steadiness

Bouncing again- no offense but it seems like this piece is a lost cause doesnt seem like its gonna end up to be much, i would ditch it, you will probably prove me wrong though

Aefx- Nice letters, fix the X though, looks a bit overdone

Shamee again- simples is loookin nice man

Aefx again- the 3d is way off, also the F has horrid structure, study simples and youll see why, and for some reason the X looks underdone now

Shamee once again- not sure what it is but it looks like fuckin fire

Bouncing once again- WOW, probably about as clean of a freestyle as Ive ever seen, simply beautiful, i cant even begin to decipher how you get letters to flow so well so ill just appreciate it man, fuckin DOPE, i wish you would do full pieces though

Wow that was fucking long, hopefully ill have my camera back soon and i can post some of my own shit, prob be back for another crit sess on Monday, see you all then peace

if this person too the time to crit then. i'm gonna bump it.

[Run .]

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/9002/scan0005pd8.jpg

crits would be appreciated :)

thnx

[-ShAmEE-]

run...right, what u wanna do is go simple do block letters, like the letters on ur keyboard. keep the letters the same thickness, and same height. dont fill and dont do shadows, or 3d. just keep it to basic letters. keep doind this until u kno ur STUCTURE or your letters. now go a sketch usin this info.

[-ShAmEE-]

yeh but that is alot to read.


http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001-2.jpg

yeh i like this nice basic/developed letters. the reason i say basic has no addons, or connextions and shit like dat. does remind me of sky, i reali want him back, it bin a while. but i aint sayin ur biting or anything. cuz people sed i bit sky, but u got it nicely goin, just need to keep it like that for a while then put a bit of ya flavour in to it, then you have ur own style, and you will be rockin the joint.

[-ShAmEE-]

"Asek" finished. Wack K, oh well

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0852.jpg

u kno what this piece mean. that u dont need good fills to make a a sick piece. just hardcore letters.

[amk]

god damn..
Pics anyone ?..
ppsfff

new charatcer style v developed over the past week or so..i got more lined up

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/trgtr.jpg

come stand under my umberella - ella - ella - yei - yei aha..song is classic

[Lamure]

Nice shading...How do you pull that off?

[Captain]

amk- something seems off about the caraks.

bouncing- Goddamn man. I remember back when you did simples. Just, goddamn.


I've been busy as hell so I had ten minutes to do it, and I know it's for shit.
I kinda gave up after the 'mo'.

http://img471.imageshack.us/img471/4735/mornbd5.jpg

comments anyway?

[amk]

captain..i thought you was better ... clean coloruing..

and for the kid who asked bout shading
iono..i just do it where i think itll look right..haha

[Drakula]

I kind of like it in a weird way,but yeah this is far from your best work.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0001.jpg
My new piece.I can change the case of the a if everyone wants me too.

[Drakula]

What should I tone down?Colors or letters?

The thing in my sig is too big for an avatar I tried.I wouldn't mind you having it but it is my work,i made the gif.Cheech Wizard FTW!

[rayseone]

you should tone down your letters im pretty sure lots of more of the advanced heads on the toy forums have told you that alredy, take the advice or dont its up to you, but i suggest you listen to them. i cant even tell what that fist letter is i know its supposed to be a D but lowercase or uppercase? learn your structure first man, then you will see major improvements in your work

[AnteUp]

drak-it flows horribly, drop tha jagged edges, do block, fuck wat ya heard bout graffiti, and do blocks

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0002.jpg

I went simple.Happy now!Lol JK

[Lamure]

Keep your letters the same size...
The forcefield is kind inconsistent and should probably be thiner.

[amk]

blah blah

work in progress

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ffweser.jpg

watcha thinkay..tryna add wierd shit to my stuff...but i aint succedding..ah well..any weird ideas ?

[nero122]

ras i thinku should study anatomy again i like all ure shit with the hands cos it looked quite real but like just draw the human body in pencil without prisma colourin em

[trashhh]

i dont think so at all its supoosed to be exaggerated as its a graffiti charcter..
altho yea work on the hand, but dont make it look relaistic

[ESKE one]

you guys got any crits for me
would be appreciated
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs065.jpg

[Drakula]

Really?What did it look like?

Anyway heres my new piece:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0002_1.jpg

[what_one]

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/1633/314rs9.jpg


what do ya guys think... crits?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Quit with the chit chat bring that ish to toy chat.
No more thats ill or thats dope type post, they will be deleted.
Don't post here just to say thank you either.
we get the point.
Only quality crits.
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Drak- go simpler than that, the r or d really don't dit. Fix the leg of the r. go to the new to graff thread.
Eske one- i like the e and s, the p and r are hurtin the top of the p is off and same with the p lose all your extensions, you should make your letters shorter they would look better instead of long and skinny.
Amkah- not really feeling that, looks like frankenstein, but with colors you will make it look ok.
captain- goood coloring but your letters still need work.
what- not bad simples at all fix the bar connecting the h and the t and it's on point the throwie is ok but the W is to skinny compare to the h. work on your handy some and keep doing simples.

[HuntingLOLs]

amk - the hand, work on it and the torso - i dont do characters so i cant tell ya what to fix, just that it looks strange

[HuntingLOLs]

do yall think i shud make it look real...i dotn understand..i want a weird shaped body etc. coz its cartoony....but yall telling me to make it look real....should i just do what i wann doo?.

im out

correct anatomy will help you understand how you can alter the body to make it look cartoonish and still good. its like learning how to do wild styles, you gotta know the basics of letter structure before going advanced.

[amk]

WhatOne...i like the W in that throw...its pretty nice...the simple isaight too....but i dont think it reaaaally flows...as you have bars bent in differ directtions....id say..bend all the bars...but keep it fairly simple...yaaaah

Hunting...thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank or the crits mate

Drak...that 2nd simple..the DRAK is good...but remeber...keep your bar sizes the same width throughout the peice like

good crits Edward..

oh and ESKE...its pretty shakey...but i actually like that S..its pretty eurolific....lol....i dont know...worj with that style of S on all of your letters...its good....

aight so im out for a few days..
keep up the good crits ed , sheep , etc.
and most of all
keep up the good work !

Peace ! and much love !

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0092.jpg

I know I was meant to do simples but I couldn't resist.I will get back to simples but I just love how this came out.

[AnteUp]

here she is...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/IMG_0236.jpg
crits pweeeez
drak, simple are lukkin gud, but that ish u doin now is like michael jackson
what, i like that simple shit, lukks gud
amk, i think u shud try an draw a girl? call me crazy!!!!111111111111111

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0093.jpg

Improved the R.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

drak-the a is to small and the k and d are to big. the r is just right.
don't think your gonna progress real fast this isnt an overnight process.
Im glad to see some heart though.
ante nice 3-d shading but the pink forcefield is wack. your a needs work stop making your letters so flexible and weird looking make em more jagged especially with the style you are doing. Over all pretty good.

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Photo-0092.jpg

I know I was meant to do simples but I couldn't resist.I will get back to simples but I just love how this came out.

D is nice. adn ur K above u should of kept it the way in pencil..and akest shup.

[Kore123]

first sketch in a loooong time its for a battle against avid what ya think
dracula....keep workin those simples
ante............what does it say?
what....those are some dope simples
eske...get crackin on them simples
amk...fire

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/56/0624071408fr9.jpg

[dizzle_d]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ffweser.jpg


bumpp lookin fresh Amk

[Vice]

amk i would say that the only thing i dont like abut it is that it looks like there are far too many wrinkles at the elbow. that and those wrinkles look sharp. other than that its great. oh and i would say that you might want to draw at least some of the other arm. it looks like its missing.

right now i am in a post deprivation state. its painful. but im down to 20 posts a day avg when it was 27... its a slow... slow... thing to fix. but whatever.

[d_g]

Quit with the chit chat bring that ish to toy chat.
No more thats ill or thats dope type post, they will be deleted.
Don't post here just to say thank you either.
we get the point.
Only quality crits.


Yup, we're gonna try and clean this shit up real good. Flix and good crits only please, don't be surprised if your post gets deleted.

[kelio]

amk: i think the character is good. maybe add some wild hair?
Drakula: your progressing alot.
AnteUp: looks good. different color force field. and bring it closer to the letters.
what_one: i like it. keep it up. looking good so far. add a drop shadow and tht shit will be dank.


heres what i got so far.
my first try with block letters. trying to keep it simple.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/3fb9cda4.jpg
and heres my throw. still working on it though.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/91fb6d3e.jpg

critz please.

[d_g]

Shamee's advice below is good, I also find the font Impact on word is a good one to copy to help learn structure.

[-ShAmEE-]

when u make ur letters simple the thing u wanna do is make it a nice width not to skinny, then u wanna try as hard as u can to make them look as the same as the letters on your keyboard.

ohh yeh. try and keep neigative space to a min...make the overall look, look better.

[Genetic]

amk- the face is awesome, really like the style


was messing around tonight and sketched this up
http://a14.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/116/l_d0077b16e1611a8cea5939673d88cc55.jpg
still trying to figure out the flow of more complex letters

[Sou - Mvd]

Go so much simpler, it looks like you didn't pick up on the use of bars very well although it does have some potential. Make your letters proportionate to each other, loose the add ons and work on getting some good base letters before you star moving onto more complex styles.

[Bazer]

first sketch in a loooong time its for a battle against avid what ya think
dracula....keep workin those simples
ante............what does it say?
what....those are some dope simples
eske...get crackin on them simples
amk...fire

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/56/0624071408fr9.jpg

you write ket or your just doing it? there's a pretty up ny writer that goes by ket.. but if you dont just work on the way your letters overlap dude.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

for uhhhhhhh
rela
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001-2.jpg
for nero
saine
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture228.jpg
for the battle
asek
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture222.jpg
kore 123- you use to do some good simples what happen? your lines are real shaky go back to what you use to do.
Genetic- new 2 graff thread.
Blah- use a ruler to forn your letters also go to the new 2 graff thread.

[what_one]

rela- that e is wack fix it, make it straighter, it doesn't fit in...


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6337/312xu8.jpg

how do ya like this one.. what and them 3

[AnteUp]

nah who tha fuck deleted mah post? a person aksed wat mah sketch sed an i told him, tha fucks wrong wit that?
teze-rela peice is crazy homie, tight shit, saine peice is tight, aint feelin tha asek sketch

[00-made-00]

Blah- i made a step by step guide that you might find useful...

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00937.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00938.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00939.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00940.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00941.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00942.jpg

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00943.jpg

[Fube]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1175.jpg

black book? maybe not but whatever.

what one- sweet simples but work on that force field.

sezer- always feeliln your shit. that asek is ill.

[kelio]

Edward"Sezer"Hands: i love them all.
what_one: glad you added a shadow really good simples.
00-made-00: thanks so much for taking the time to write the guide it will help out alot. i will defiantly use it. going to start working on my simples right now.
Fube: your have the hottest shit. thats it.

sorry i post so much. i just have all day to do this shit. so yeah. and i think i am progressing. if theres a problem with me posting so much just let me know ill stop posting so much.

heres my throw. i messed with the a. this picture sucks sorry.
critz please.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/c1b8e326.jpg

[Kore123]

for uhhhhhhh
rela
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001-2.jpg
for nero
saine
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture228.jpg
for the battle
asek
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture222.jpg
kore 123- you use to do some good simples what happen? your lines are real shaky go back to what you use to do.
Genetic- new 2 graff thread.
Blah- use a ruler to forn your letters also go to the new 2 graff thread.

i know thanks for tellin me that this was my first sketch in like 6 months and i dont know it coulda been the fact that i was in a car doin it......or that i was slightly intoxicated lol but yeah i was just lookin at my old ish and imma go back to that...thanks it means alot you and a few other people on here are the ones that inspired me and i took all your guys advice to get better....so thanks for that (you, bounce, sume, and shiit he keeps changin his names i think it mnk or somethin now use to be amio)

[emel]

here she is...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/IMG_0236.jpg
crits pweeeez
drak, simple are lukkin gud, but that ish u doin now is like michael jackson
what, i like that simple shit, lukks gud
amk, i think u shud try an draw a girl? call me crazy!!!!111111111111111

wow ante youve gotten much better man i just think the real thin part on the bottom of the A looks kinda weird and it just looks sketchy cause you let the prisma bleed like that on the inside but yeah you should paint that sheet

[Casa45]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ffweser.jpg

This is looking good. but the hand and lower lip needs some work...

Are people on this site getting worse... or am i getting better? LOL

[tense]

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_0684.jpg

old^^^ ill be posting new shit after i get my toy stuff outta the way. Bumps and Crits please

[Cali]

The first E is whack it looks like scribbles the second one could use a lil work too....the rest looks aight though...i wouldnt go with yellow..but thats just my opinion..It just doesnt look crisp unless you use like prismacolor markers..

[siZo]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4774/picture006ag9.jpg

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1011/picture007wb4.jpg

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5134/picture008lc1.jpg

They are pretty shit, ill do some more later!

[d_g]

Keep the chat to PMs please guys.

Cheers.

[MAST]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/IMG_0255-1.jpg

says MIA

i don't really ever color pieces unless i'm trying to decide what colors would look good to paint, so i'm not really used to it, so coloring skills definitely aren't a factor here. and i ran out of turquoise.

[Big_Eazy]

I did this a while ago...

[-ShAmEE-]

sizo - big easy- tense - u wanna go simple yeh. u wanna like keep ya letters level, same thickness and height. because u need to kno your stucture in your letters. just loose the addons and arrows and shit like that. putting addons done make no ones work better. cuz most of all ur guys work is not amazin, basic shit.yeh well someone had to tell yah. so it has to be me. well now u kno all u can do is get betta.

your simples should be lookin like this.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/SWEET123214.jpg


mast - your work looks like inks. well reminds me of it. i aint sayin that they bit u. but it all good. i think you should go alot simpler like make look like letters first that havin wavey lines. so you should go simple as well reli...

crit from a king.....yeh right.

[HuntingLOLs]

Blah- i made a step by step guide that you might find useful...

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/DSC00943.jpg
first of, no need to post the whole process of colouring simples - waste of space on here.. its just simples theres nothing special there.
2nd. dont use a small L for blocks when rest are capital letters
and 3rd ;) check the 3d on the b, the bottom of the round part is wrong because the line is longer than the other ones which determine the size of 3d. you have to find the point where it spawns from and make it same length as the rest, its one of the more tricky parts of 3d but with practice it will come out good

[amk]

Made...nice fading man....you shud work on your straight lines...
Mast...do blokcs like Made demeonstrated with the Blah block
Sizo...same for you ...do simples...

coloured in

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/bgf.jpg

peace

[-ShAmEE-]

ras looks niceer now...but the hand...killed it. and everyone that was RAS looks like,

[dim]

amk- i like how u put only one blue dot out of all the red ones i think you are rele starting to find your way around shading and showing dimension in your characters.
mast- you need to find some letter structure go simple.
tense- block letters.
sizo- block letters.

[-ShAmEE-]

yeh that blue dot..contain all the flavour..trust me.

[AteskOne]

your simples should be lookin like this.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/SWEET123214.jpg

no they shouldnt...these simples are all wrong. when doing simples you should first- try and keep them straight and not slanting down like yours, and second- all the same thickness. the only letters that are the same thickness are the E's. and besides doing your simples without spaces inbetween the bars like this is better practice for learning a throwy than learning how to peice. space the bars in your letters out so you can better understand the structure of the letter. for examples the S should consist of 5 bars total. 2 vertical and 3 horizontal. the vertical bars are practically non exsistant. like i said try spacing them out.

[nero122]

IF YOU ARE NEW TO GRAFFITI MEANING IF YOU HAVE NOT BEEN DOIN IT FOR MORE THAN A WEEK THEN DO NOT POST IN HERE GO TO THE GETTING STARTED THREAD AND READ AND STUDY UP ON SIMPLES AND CHOOSING A NAME .

AFTER YOU UNDERSTAND GRAFFITI AND WHAT IT IS ABOUT N HOW TO DO SIMPLES THEN POST IN HERE DOING WHAT IVE SAID MAY POSSIBLY IMPROVE YOU OR GIVE YOU A HEAD START .

[what_one]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7118/313ti4.jpg

another one.. crits?

[[breakout]-azer]

what-one : like bottom one. but not sure about bent t and h but apart from that its good

[D E M O]

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/5966/demo6py6.jpg

[Drakula]

DOPE!

But maybe get rid of the interlocking lines or just get rid of one or two,they're obstructing the view of the letters.Rest is good.

[cerex89]

Dome-i like the colors u choose nice stuff
amk-thats dope but y is the finger so fat
here a little pice i tried
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0156.jpg

[JackJill]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8384/janezt5.png (http://imageshack.us)

[jersOneTIC]

what - like your throw
demo - nice but try not to hide your letters too much
cerex - lookin good
jackjill - pretty good for a simple
did this yesterday...
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/342/003009lj7.jpg

[JackJill]

On a newspaper or mag? I love that look it's so grimey, and cheap! Your letters seem to shrink as you go along...And I'm not sure I would have put the vert part of the arrow so far away from the J. I like the colours though. I don't much like the negative space. Bottom negative of hte E is too angular compare But yeah over all ( because I cant crit the rest of your work, I gotta go) It's bomb. Go paint it. gogo!

[pez ss]

jers i love how u did that on a news paper and i like that e alot to

[Drakula]

So,I think I've improved my new style...

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/draknewstyle184.jpg

[MESN[905]]

drak im feelin those letters but make the top right bar of the K go out instead of in

[HuntingLOLs]

you will notice that if you're gonna use top bar on the k like an upward thingie without the < in it (k like that and not like a straight bar on top of the bottom bar) that it should be alot closer to the main bar) very cryptic explanation, damn i miss a termology for letters

[unify260]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7118/313ti4.jpg

another one.. crits?

the top im not feelin the A or the T kinda looks like an R

[Stim]

good job to everyone on this page so far! keep it up ^_^

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/193/pic1107dt7.jpg

[Drakula]

Like it alot Stim.It's like a fat tag.Some of the proportion needs fixing though.

[BORG]

jers- that shits looking real fresh man, nice coloring
stim- lookin good, take away the lines at the bottom of the lettering though

droppin this piece for baze
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/75/scan0004hl5.jpg

[AnteUp]

damn borg that pink outline makes that shit pop

[Stim]

Thanks for the crits guys. very clean borg, reminds me of that guy trashes work as far as cleanliness goes.

Sloppy ADD at work
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4685/pic1109ea9.jpg

[Casa45]

There already is a SAME anteup...


http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b346/madeone/enuf010.jpg

[Fube]

asek

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture222.jpg



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1175.jpg

think im gunna try a new trend here see if it catches. if u want to bumb your shit. cool, but bump somone elses shit too. something u like pages back that might have been overlooked or that u just feel. what yall think, deal? kinda a way to give props to another writer and get some crits at the same time. just try not to bump something on the same page. take it back and look and see if u can actually help some shit instaid of lookin selfish only bumpin your own shit.:D

sezer im really feelin this. i think your letters are progressing well.

[ODonthesetrees]

yo asek, that shit fube bumped...thats hott, would make a tight ashell hollow simple next time your painting

[EsKoNeR!!]

blah. my blender ran out, heh. for the round robin, but not happy with it so im gunna redo it
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/nokroundrobin.jpg

[Fube]

yo asek, that shit fube bumped...thats hott, would make a tight ashell hollow simple next time your painting

that was an exchange of sorts by sezer.

EsKoNeR!!- if u were going for semitry your off a bit. me personaly i dont like the extentions eather. draw it again?

[EsKoNeR!!]

naw, not going for as symetric as many of mine have been in the past, the only symetry i wanted was for the two arrows and the two thin things on either ends to be comming off at the same spot.

[nickstix]

eskoner...looks good to me, the new should be sick

fube...that throw is really nice

stim...the letters are too squished together

borg...thats so clean, good letters and good color

i havent been sketchin much lately and finally did today...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/war.png
^war battle piece, not too happy with the outcome but i have no time to do another:(
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/ret3.png
^and an old one 'RET' that i really like

crits?

[Bazer]

if you like that style then you should run it for a while.
do it over and every time you do a new one change it up a little bit: the location, direction or your arrows, the way your letters are shaped and different ways of doing the 3d. im sure there's other stuff you can change but those are just some basics.



For you guys that like going on vandalsquad.com:
im hosting bi weekly battles that you do on there so check the battle callouts and rules.

[ESKE one]

fube - i bumped your piece but i guess it got deleted so watever really like your style though
nickstix- your progressing nicely keep sketching

here something of mine nice and simple
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs066.jpg

[dim]

eske the curved bar on the s the right line of it is shakey and isnt rele flowing with the left line but the P R E are good

[BORG]

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/75/scan0004hl5.jpg

bumpin this shit for freshness
crits welcome

[Bomber444]

shits really nice borg, only thing i dont like is the e for some weird reason.. looks to small..idk mayb just me

o yea and it only has one green highlight and the rest of the letters have more, i would change that

[mask_cib]

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/hang041-1.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/hang039-1.jpg
pres :try makin your letters the same fattness
bazer :it looks good but you should have made your E liek your a but it stilll looks good and pry would have changed much anyways.

top one is too dark and the 2nd the flash kinda messed soe of it up but you guys get the idea.

could i get some crits?

[SEKT]

^ I really like the tree idea Mask

Hello everybody,
im new to bombing science but ive been writing for about 6 months

my most recent stuff

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/rabbs-1.jpg
any advice is greatly appreciated

[Samp1e]

sekt -- it's clean and crisp, but your letter structure isn't good. simplify get to be more familiar with your letters and their build, the way they work with each other. keep the style on the back burner cause with better letters and being able to apply that, I think you got some sick potential.

mask -- lookin alright, work on your A, looks a lot like an O to me. 3d is a bit strange, work on that. balance the focus of your letters, your M looks real tricked out, but the K in comparison doesn't have the same feeling to it. like it's off, or something.

[SEKT]

yeah, i see what your saying samp1e,
the only one i really like is the "i" but the rest could use a move back toward the simples

[EsKoNeR!!]

blah. my blender ran out, heh. for the round robin, but not happy with it so im gunna redo it
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/nokroundrobin.jpgsome crits maybe?

[kelio]

SEKT: i love it. so clean.
BORG: shits dope.
ESKE one: love tht simple maybe make all of the letters the same size.

new character idea and working on my bombs. critz please.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/e296c335.jpg

[snorky]

Give us some tips please i just started writing ant this is my first sketch.

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb11/novmone/100_0943-1.jpg

If any one could give me tips on how to improve this throw up that would be sick.http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb11/novmone/100_0940.jpg

[*Wing*]

http://sp9.fotologs.net/photo/25/21/23/keep_sba/1182862497_f.jpg
An exchange between me and my crew mate...

[siZo]

If any one could give me tips on how to improve this throw up that would be sick.http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb11/novmone/100_0940.jpg

IMO thats pretty sweet!

That would look good with a light blue fill and florescent pink outline and darker blue bubbles... it sounds a bit gay but works great.

well done mate!

[Eack]

Id really like to have comments on this one, its not SUPER clean and well done but i did it in a car and it was shaking alot, so i did my best
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8633/img0193le1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[JackJill]

Style reminds me of AMKAH
Very clean. keep it up.Capital E would have looked beter though

[BoRe-719-]

ive always been a fan of lower caes e's, looks gow it is....i think the a should be lower case though, gives it more flow. the c should be about the same size as the other letters to help tie it together.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

nikstix- I actually like it, i like where your going with it also. The war piece is neice and clean but work on the w it's just too big. On the ret piece lean the top of the E to the right it will make it flow better, for now lose the extensions but your getting there. just clean em up now.
Eske one- nice simple letters. the E and S are too big compared to the rest the S really doesn't sit lose the little nub thing on the E. But your in the right direction just keep doing simples.
Borg- Good coloring but some of your letters are hurting. The B and r are suppose to be tha same size? well their not. and th R just looks weird to me for some reason, Try to make all your letters the same size i know you did that intentionally but i personlaly don't like it, your gettin better just tone it down a bit and go simpler.
Mask-cib- good concept but horrible letters. drop everything do simples like eske and nikstix, please.
sekt- it reminds me of a toy version of trash take the same advice i gave mask-cib.Go simpler.
Eskoner- great coloring but your piece is leaning too much to the right and the O is wierd. Fix that o and make it more symetrical.
kelio- try changing up your throwie make it better, not really feeling the karak.
Snorky- go to the new 2 graff thread now and not really feeling that throwie.
Wing- not that bad at all. the bottom piece has some flow to it but lose the nub things coming out of the e and on the left side of the r. Drop the wing piece and work with the reep piece because thpose letters are nice and simple behind the coloring.
Eack- it looks like your trying to progress too fast, drop the extensions on the bottom of the e they look outta place anyways. make your c the smae size as the rest of the letters and not so blocky. lose the connection of the E to the A.
fix the top of the K it's too skinny. not bad though.

[siZo]

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3083/picture012cd3.jpg

[tense]

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_1012.jpg

[Bazer]

Give us some tips please i just started writing ant this is my first sketch.

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb11/novmone/100_0943-1.jpg
how bout you work on not biting mr wiggles? that would be a good start. also try doing your stuff in black and white cuz right now youre wasting your markers on coloring in those crappy letters.

[sketch3]

eske one, big improvment
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=802387&posted=1#post802387

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/drakns187.jpg

New piece.Ignore the size of the D.

[sketch3]

u badly need to fix that k

[Drakula]

What,the top right part or all of it?The top right needs to be as fat as the other side now that i think about it.

[uhhh]

im sure ive already posted this.
asek battle yo.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-037S-2.jpg

[sketch3]

uhhhhhhhhhh thats hot. and yes, u get extra h's for iy being so nice

and drak, right now it looks like a bad h, u need to make the top right leg diagonal, like this /

[bountyhunter113]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/drakns187.jpg

New piece.Ignore the size of the D.
huge improvement since i last saw ur stuff bro! keep going in this direction ,also sweet handstyle
but major work on the "K" as said

[siZo]

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/2928/picture013pr7.jpg

Should i continue with this?? What do you think of it?

[Bazer]

nah dont. your letters look like you couldn't decide what you wnated it to look like. on the w half is roundish and half had a more solid shape to it.



some bullshit.. this thread is moving kinda slow today.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jun_26_001.jpg

[siZo]

if i straightened it up so its all edges.. ??

[Bazer]

make the rest of the letter like the right side or the left side of the W. however you prefer.

[The_Sheep]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/drakns187.jpg

New piece.Ignore the size of the D.
Beef up the D please, make the R smaller and move the extended bar more in the empty space looks horrid, beef up the A slightly, and fix ur K by slanting the bars in different directions than the main bars, looks like a cracked out H, and all the skinny bars you have, beef them up ever so slightly, idk it might be hard to understand my post, its easier to show you than try to explain it in words, but yeah redo it trust me itll be worth it

[tesfortis]

Drak; you're getting better with every sketch. Just add some 3-d to it to beef it up.

[Nem]

drak, i think you should separate the left bar of the A into two straighter bars, but still bending the left half of the A the same direction. if you get what i mean by that.

( into /
\

just seems like it would fit into everything better.

[Ginsu]

http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa305/Zen_master_flex/osa.jpg
srry bout the size did this weeks ago
opte one i like ur full page looks sick
this one is LACRIM and OSAH as me tag

[scoot]

drak- make ur K look more like one right now its more similar to a H
snorky- work on ur R and S a lil more man their not proportionate

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/bb8.jpg

fucked up on the 3-d... really bad

[enigmatic]

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb293/Blits_KWC/100_0861.jpg

im on top

[mattFOO]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9885/p1010002vs2.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/746/p1010005un4.jpghttp://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1428/p1010006fz8.jpghttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6096/p1010010hj9.jpghttp://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1917/p1010007sh4.jpghttp://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5852/p1010015fr4.jpghttp://img216.imageshack.us/img216/531/p1010012wq6.jpghttp://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3195/p1010009qr2.jpghttp://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5813/p1010011gl8.jpghttp://img72.imageshack.us/img72/9585/p1010008kf1.jpghttp://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4950/p1010013mc9.jpghttp://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6755/p1010003wq8.jpg

[emel]

Matt... dont try to do anything crazy with effects and shit just do simples for now

[Samp1e]

the third one down is along the right path. "letters first" indeed. back burner all your other shit, and get your letters down first.

[Vice]

alright now. heres a throwie ive been working on. what do you guys think?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062607_19121.jpg
crits?


alright...
drak i think you should beef up your k and r
matt i dont really have anything solid to say but i guess i would say go a bit more simple.

[Bazer]

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0900.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

Should I color this or "go simpler". I know the N is fucking wack, and the G isn't too good either.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/among9.jpg

Stak your letter are simple, but the A is wack and doesnt go with em. Try squaring it off on the top like the other letters and actually using a middle bar. Youre on the right track son.

Mattfoo- i hate saying this, but do simples. with the right colors and 3d, simples can make dope pieces.

Enigmatic- the top one has a good concept going but work on yur letters and lose the top connection.

scoot- i dont really like that G. the pointy spots kill it.

Ginsu- It looks good as a whole but where are the letters?

Drakula- That D is dope, dont like the A, the rest are fine.

uhhh- Dope.

[Sumoe]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9885/p1010002vs2.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/746/p1010005un4.jpghttp://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1428/p1010006fz8.jpghttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6096/p1010010hj9.jpghttp://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1917/p1010007sh4.jpghttp://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5852/p1010015fr4.jpghttp://img216.imageshack.us/img216/531/p1010012wq6.jpghttp://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3195/p1010009qr2.jpghttp://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5813/p1010011gl8.jpghttp://img72.imageshack.us/img72/9585/p1010008kf1.jpghttp://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4950/p1010013mc9.jpghttp://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6755/p1010003wq8.jpg


I thought you were A LOT better...

[Sumoe]

yes his post count gives the illusion of tallent

No, it's just that I have heard him say he's been arrested and shit, and he was saying he was pretty good before if I remember correctly...

[ENES.ONE]

WUT YALL THINK. I WAS TOLD TO COME HERE BY 2 OTHERS HAHA.. WUT U THINK THO??http://a859.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/54/l_94db74fbb867190b77abc7cabe29882a.jpg
http://a965.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/56/l_57fc96e4c6327484899ff1bb8f16e24c.jpg
http://a758.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/26/l_67087e24dbfe13a9b0676d5835f7f34d.jpg

[Sumoe]

S'all good, just work on your letter structure and shit...

[ENES.ONE]

S'all good, just work on your letter structure and shit...

y do i keep hearing that.. letter stricture.. can u gimme examples cause i like styles like tha bottom one tho

[braxtons a g]

http://i7.tinypic.com/54klyrk.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4p9de13.jpg

[tense]

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_1004.jpg

[Sumoe]

y do i keep hearing that.. letter stricture.. can u gimme examples cause i like styles like tha bottom one tho

Oops! That was to mattfoo not you.

[BORG]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6186/june17012rx9.jpg

exchange for jers

[-GEKS-]

really like that jers

tense, im likin this simple
the e's hav some style to em, add some more style to the other letters and yoor set.

[uhhh]

for this guy reks..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-041S-3.jpg
for this girl arielle,
spelled arie - lle..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-040S-1.jpg

[-GEKS-]

really unique style i like it i think
somethin i jst made:
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1262.jpg

[uhhh]

me?
well,
thats nice, if your talking about me.
its really not that original.
its just giving things here and there elephantitis and bending this and that. twisting this in a circle, twisiting that.
when it comes down to it, theyre not that complex.

[Bomber444]

yo borg really nice, the only thing is that the s is higher than the other letters, that bugs me a little, but other than that really good, just like ur other shit

[Chalk]

Borg - love the colors

braxtons a g (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=25635) - do simples and not crazy fills

heres a new one with a terrible photo again
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/doma.jpg
fucked up on the green fade on the n

[BORG]

chalk- u seem to amaze me everytime, love that shit, u gotta throw down on some fills sometime though, curious to see that side of chalk

[Stonk]

chalk - i love it. the shading on the 3d is great.. so good

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new109.jpg
i haven't really worked on throw ups lately.. any decent?

[thief 127]

says lost

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/06-25-07_1016.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/06-23-07_1747.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/06-24-07_2338.jpg

for a girl
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/ada.jpg

[BORG]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3461/june17011do7.jpg
quick sketch for the majik battle on cyper styles
i know i gotta thicken the m n a abit more

[Aces One]

nice letters, lose the hand or make it bettter. the thumbs in the wrong position, look at your own hand when drawing hands