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garbage down tha way
07-05-2007, 10:24 AM
Quick and sloppy sketch for a friends band. They're just photoshopping the shit out of it and using it for some kinda merch.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/amputeens-3.jpg

Bisak- thats good that your letters share a common style and I can see what you are trying to achieve but you have to get tose letters down the way you want em to be and then put them to that style.

Whynot- i like the style of show more, but it's kinda unreadable.

everything else on the last page looks good.

Sumoe
07-05-2007, 11:52 AM
I'ma start usin' crayolas...

;)

For real though, it doesn't matter what markers you use, as long as you know hot to use them.

2KoS
07-05-2007, 12:03 PM
who feels this steeeeeeez...

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Scan10002waysm.jpg

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-05-2007, 12:40 PM
garbage down tha way- im really feeling those simples the only letter i dont like is that s but it flows wit every thing
2kos-i dont see anything wrong wit it but this aint the tag thread

got a couple pics
first is for the sketch contest
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00155.jpg

next two are some simples
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00154.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00156.jpg

and the next two are some throws
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00157.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00158.jpg

wat cha think?

whahappen?
07-05-2007, 12:41 PM
ok i didnt notice but some of these are so shitty
ankor
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/4124/picture144ub9.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6416/picture145uy0.jpg
jac
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/800/picture146ea4.jpg
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5492/picture147vl6.jpg
bike
sorry about the e..
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3739/picture148pq8.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6498/picture149lc4.jpg
apoc
sorry about the k i didnt notice till now
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/4682/picture150yt8.jpg
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/252/picture151tb2.jpg
doap
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2410/picture152xo0.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/242/picture153fs0.jpg
sank
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5972/picture154ph4.jpg
sank your simple one sucks sorry
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5787/picture155to4.jpg
sone
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1046/picture156qh6.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9817/picture157pt2.jpg

Sumoe
07-05-2007, 12:42 PM
Feelin' the simples a lot...nice throwies too, but my throwies are garbagio so I don't know if my opinion counts.

;)

dim
07-05-2007, 12:49 PM
whappend those are sooo dope i love them i like how all the letters have the same simalarities
mr tasty i like that guy
gum drop the one that says cant wait i think that you should change the A i just dont like the horozontil bar but your throwies are good
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0002.jpg
crits

-GEKS-
07-05-2007, 01:01 PM
dim dont really like it its weird lookin
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1312.jpg
new charac im workin on

sank.
07-05-2007, 02:40 PM
man thanks for the throwie. i have to say some of em are actually lookin good, i remember thinking you had nothing goin for you.

tryin to win the indy 500...

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0709.jpg

Blackeyed_Pea
07-05-2007, 02:54 PM
I like it sank, just make the K a little larger on the top, end letters should conclude a piece nicley :P Like in your handstyle.

7thIncision
07-05-2007, 02:54 PM
Sank - i like it except I'd not have that wierd tumour on top of the N. And the top of the S looks a little fat, but im really liking the A and K, they are sick.

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-05-2007, 03:27 PM
garbage down tha way- im really feeling those simples the only letter i dont like is that s but it flows wit every thing
2kos-i dont see anything wrong wit it but this aint the tag thread

got a couple pics
first is for the sketch contest
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00155.jpg

next two are some simples
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00154.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00156.jpg

and the next two are some throws
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00157.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00158.jpg

wat cha think?
bump
can I get some crits? ...por favor

revolt92
07-05-2007, 03:39 PM
My most recent sketch
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/DSC00127.jpg
critisismzzzzzz

sank - not one of your best but i still like it, but change up the a it makes the whole sketch look odd.

res - is it res or reg? or regs? anywho, keep em like the first sketch.

amk
07-05-2007, 04:02 PM
Top of the S is huge Sank..

godamn..still aint got my scanner up..
one out tha bag

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/213ds.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

twice iv picked that damn sketch..

crits i guess

hungr
07-05-2007, 04:30 PM
is taht it finished?? i dont like the brown on the M it kinda messed it up cause its almost the same colour as the 3D so it looks less like an M

other than that.. the letters are good, maybe make that part of the M u coloured brown a bit bigger and come into one of the legs like u did with the bar on the A's and H. good job none the less big guy

amk
07-05-2007, 04:32 PM
guuh....thats the fill...im only interested in teh letters like...good pointers tho man..i never even noticed ! :)

Bazer
07-05-2007, 04:39 PM
Top of the S is huge Sank..

godamn..still aint got my scanner up..
one out tha bag

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/213ds.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

twice iv picked that damn sketch..

crits i guess

amkah you really messed up on this one. you shouldve connected your letters cuz at first glipmse it looks like MKH. one of the worst fills ive seen you do. how does a yellow can get a green shadow? GO SIMPLE

Nem
07-05-2007, 05:19 PM
revolt, keep your letters on one straight horizontal line. for now. and your c is lookin alright. k is really bad though. keep sketching.

gumdropbehemoth, i like the 1st throw. but i think with a little bit of tweaking it could look a lot better. that 2nd simple is also pretty good lookin, maybe just change up your g.

immediately coming off a salvia trip, not to be taken too seriously.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2194-5.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2195-2.jpg

rough pencil sketch.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2196-1.jpg

Drakula
07-05-2007, 05:54 PM
Like it alot scab.Looking alot like google lettering but I suppose that is what everyone has asked you to do.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good211.jpg
Gonna add more stuff to the K later.

Derogatory9o5
07-05-2007, 06:01 PM
Drak your improving man i like it.

Bartic
07-05-2007, 06:02 PM
Drak i think the only thing thats not working for that piece is the 'A' The arrow piercing the 'A' doesn't work gotta find something else to fill the negative space between the r and a and the left leg looks a bit awkward. I've loving the other letters tho, you got that k

cel...
07-05-2007, 06:15 PM
try making your A go to the left instead of the right drak

00-made-00
07-05-2007, 06:21 PM
drak- much improvement going on, not feelin the arrow on the k tho.
nem- i like the bottom sketch but im not sure on the a.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P1012171.jpg
crits?

bountyhunter113
07-05-2007, 06:31 PM
Taste-I'm definitely feeling that new style, reminds me of calligraphy. Keep at it.
Cyph- really digg that throw. the curve is a nice touch.
Deadpool-looks good and simple.
Glass-if you want to do that "web" effect on your letters, be consistent with it or just do without it.

more more pen sketches/doodles...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Characters/doodle.jpg

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/Eze_death.jpg
upgraded..EZ KILL
awesome shit yo, i'ma sucka for toony styles
n ur letters remind me of some of the good ol' euro stuff
Drak-remove some of em add-ons n stuff
Amk-i agree wif baze, n never rly been too fond of ur style

Mike.
07-05-2007, 08:02 PM
New- i'm lovin it.
Amk- i like how you use alot of colors

http://i11.tinypic.com/68hpu9e.jpg
New name

Bartic
07-05-2007, 08:10 PM
Mike its not working, example of this is your C. on the left side keep the lines parallel like a bar, the big glob doesn't work. If your going to bend ur 'I ' just tilt the main bar, the kinks not hot. And keep ur m normal like ur keyboard

bountyhunter113
07-05-2007, 08:23 PM
what he meant is cut off that part on the bottom left of the "C" so it's slanted like on the right side

imo,draw simples....ur startin off bad

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-05-2007, 09:05 PM
scab im diggin those straight letter did you copy that off another paper or traced it?

drak im liking your style so far but i gotta agree with bartic the A is lacking A's is not a good letter of mine so i cant tell you wat to improve on sorry

mike wow umm go simplier plz M I C <follow that

bumpin this for crits one more time wit a new pic at the bottom plz crit



got a couple pics
first is for the sketch contest
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00155.jpg

next two are some simples
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00154.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00156.jpg

and the next two are some throws
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00157.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00158.jpg

*updated pic*
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00159.jpg

wat cha think?

raveone
07-05-2007, 09:10 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-22.jpg

cel...
07-05-2007, 09:13 PM
ezekial - liking the first pic, nice characters. do you cartoon?
gumdrop - keep working on those bars, not really feeling the throwies though too much stuff going on
mike - i know you're probably tired of hearing this but you've got to use simpler letters and get a feel of them and how they should bend and stuff

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3110/0705072206wg9.jpg

improved my other drawing and added some color, crits? sorry for glare i was using decos and the flash reflects off paint i guess

c.n.k
07-05-2007, 09:26 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0299.jpg

Derogatory9o5
07-05-2007, 09:27 PM
Dang c.n.k liking it alot.

Edit: Im liking rave's stuff to and MRE add some curves or something kinda simple

raveone
07-05-2007, 09:49 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-21.jpg

jersOneTIC
07-05-2007, 09:54 PM
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/6317/003015qf6.jpg

raveone
07-05-2007, 09:58 PM
i like tah man, its got that freight style

Nem
07-05-2007, 10:02 PM
scab im diggin those straight letter did you copy that off another paper or traced it?


the basic letters are some font. i dont remember. arial or some shit like that.

just went on word. super sized it. then drew it on paper by eye. and went from there.

RepUrSet
07-05-2007, 10:29 PM
been a GOOD while since i hit this site..heres some stuff from my BB all thumbnails
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1629/img002kj7.th.jpg (http://img514.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img002kj7.jpg)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/3396/img009by6.th.jpg (http://img159.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img009by6.jpg)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8885/img008le3.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img008le3.jpg)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5444/img007ab0.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img007ab0.jpg)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/378/img006ux5.th.jpg (http://img267.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img006ux5.jpg)

owned
07-05-2007, 10:55 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a105/skeeterguy125/FO.jpg?t=1183694997

sorry its sloppy, crits though

WolfBurrns
07-05-2007, 11:11 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/prpussy.jpg

Dirty quick piece. Should I keep going with it?

owned
07-05-2007, 11:15 PM
yeah i think you should

Captain
07-05-2007, 11:16 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/prpussy.jpg

Dirty quick piece. Should I keep going with it?

I'd say no, or at least even out the bars some and work on the parallelism.

Roolete
07-05-2007, 11:17 PM
i say keep the s and e.

cel...
07-05-2007, 11:27 PM
forte i like the name work on the peice though =P

raveone
07-05-2007, 11:40 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-20.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0002-12.jpg

7thIncision
07-06-2007, 01:41 AM
Rave - Love this shit man, Just the Karak doesnt really go along with the piece. Its too cartoony for it.

Roolete
07-06-2007, 01:44 AM
i dont like the last one..

after 3 months of wanting a name change, i might actually do it. first sketch. i feel like this is much more..me. crits? comments? thumb points? yay? nay?

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0028.jpg

tompenny
07-06-2007, 01:56 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/p7030010.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/p7030011.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/p7030012.jpg

Roolete
07-06-2007, 02:13 AM
did my post get deleted? *suspicious*

on the first pic..um the e looks like cope's e. so ya might wanna change that.
i dont like the karak that much, i like the feet, maybe add some elephant toes? i think lose the bandaid..umm experiment with the teeth. crits on mine?

Ben Jay
07-06-2007, 02:38 AM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x32/sekta1/scan.jpg

crits?

cormac
07-06-2007, 02:54 AM
looks alright im not feeling the end on every letter or the random arrow other than that getting better

Leser
07-06-2007, 03:15 AM
do simple block letters with out extensions for now man, itll help alot. also work on your preportions the arrow on the e is way to small for every other part of the word

Leser
07-06-2007, 03:47 AM
Lesr... thats me really toy me
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/5594/picture001ko4.jpg
Crits please?

Ben Jay
07-06-2007, 06:29 AM
i like it, but im not to sure about the really long r

N.O.T.E
07-06-2007, 08:38 AM
rave nice simples mayne keep it up
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/ase1.jpg
new pen sketch..i know its messy..crtis plz

cel...
07-06-2007, 08:50 AM
did my post get deleted? *suspicious*

on the first pic..um the e looks like cope's e. so ya might wanna change that.



are you on crack? that looks nothing like copes E

http://www.citynoise.org/upload/16048.jpg

NEOZ
07-06-2007, 11:54 AM
NOTE nice and clean man,

so here are some recent sketches from me
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007951.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007950.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007952.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007953.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007954.jpg

uhhh
07-06-2007, 01:11 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/prpussy.jpg

Dirty quick piece. Should I keep going with it?
honestly,
right now it needs a lot of work.
but,
i dont know if youve heardof sky 5 but he used to be here a lot and give a lot of advice.
one thing he told me, was that for a long time after having simples down, he sucked. and was really wack.
but its alright because after awhile youll get shit sorted out and become pretty tight, like him. hah.
anywyas,
i think you sh0ould keep going with this.
dont be scarred to do soemthing funky.
and if people say it sucks it doesnt mean drop the idea,
just maybe leave it out for a few months and revisit it.
ive done that a lot and am still no where near a difinitive style.

if someone has a flick of sky?
itd be nice if youd post it.

Bartic
07-06-2007, 01:24 PM
Neoz good stuff, i'm having trouble with some your 'o's tho

Sumoe
07-06-2007, 01:27 PM
Word up, like a coffee cup...hehe I say that a lot.

Anyways, yeah I sucked really bad up until 4-5 months ago and I still suck, and I've been writing for a year and a half-two years. Although I never did simples I looked at some tutorials sky did and it helped me a lot, it taught me how to construct letters with bars and shit like that so, yeah. But, for a while you won't have a "definitive" style and it will be very monotonous and bland, but just keep playin' with shit, ya dig?

amk
07-06-2007, 01:31 PM
am i on my way to a basic style sume...like this izm ...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gfdbgfdghdfgh.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111gf.jpg

if someone like Sume , Trash Uuuuh say if i have then that would be soo koolio...

ugh keep it up yall too !

trashhh
07-06-2007, 01:36 PM
i think you already have your own style amk.. the second one down with the cap and can is the best uve done IMO

Drakula
07-06-2007, 02:22 PM
You're evolving your style AMK and it looks pretty good.it's just like maybe one or two things in the piece that throw it off a bit,like your connections and stuff.The only other thing I can say is maybe stop with all the wacky fills.I like bright colours don't get me wrong but some of the pieces are way over the top.You will be able to see your good letter styles alot more once you start using one or two solid colours for the fill.I love the two plain white ones with the hands at the bottom.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good212.jpg

Finished off the last piece.Haven't done a full colour piece in ages,some of it's a bit sloppy.

Bazer
07-06-2007, 02:26 PM
sorry drak i kinda forgot about you so i just did this right now
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0907.jpg

Drakula
07-06-2007, 02:27 PM
God.I'm so toy.That's amazing Baze.

sKeeLo
07-06-2007, 03:51 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2662/1252578ui2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

halfdone RUSK canvas . . .

wolfburns - that tab shooting right on top of the L looks alil off, maybe try shotting the tab left and down more so it doesnt take away from that letter looking like an L . . .

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/4172/1252579ca2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

really old skelo where i did the same tab as you on my L . . . lol

Leser
07-06-2007, 03:52 PM
Lesr... thats me really toy me
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/5594/picture001ko4.jpg
Crits please?

only got one crit

AyteYourCookies
07-06-2007, 03:57 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture206.jpgcrits?

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-06-2007, 04:03 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2662/1252578ui2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

halfdone RUSK canvas . . .

wolfburns - that tab shooting right on top of the L looks alil off, maybe try shotting the tab left and down more so it doesnt take away from that letter looking like an L . . .

skys back!

anyway
drak-wen you color go up and down and then wen your finished go left and right bouncing did a good step by step in the new to graffiti thread check it out
lesr- styles kinda hot but the r kills it sorry
baze- i love your effin style makes me want to kill baby hampsters

thesilentvandal
07-06-2007, 04:03 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/battledawsek.jpg

whahappen?
07-06-2007, 04:19 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2662/1252578ui2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

halfdone RUSK canvas . . .

wolfburns - that tab shooting right on top of the L looks alil off, maybe try shotting the tab left and down more so it doesnt take away from that letter looking like an L . . .

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/4172/1252579ca2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

really old skelo where i did the same tab as you on my L . . . lol
SKY!
lesr im digging that lawl
silent vandal make the first letter defined, is it a p or d

Sumoe
07-06-2007, 04:48 PM
So it is sky then?

N.O.T.E
07-06-2007, 04:54 PM
rave nice simples mayne keep it up
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/ase1.jpg
new pen sketch..i know its messy..crtis plz
dawsek thats pretty good simples keep it up
bumpaclot

revolt92
07-06-2007, 05:13 PM
My most recent sketch
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/DSC00127.jpg
critisismzzzzzz

sank - not one of your best but i still like it, but change up the a it makes the whole sketch look odd.

res - is it res or reg? or regs? anywho, keep em like the first sketch.

bump

would crit others but i'm waay to tired

N.O.T.E
07-06-2007, 05:21 PM
yo tick, the bottom end of the "C" is pretty awkward, i'd also keep a standard spacing between the letters and make them the same level, keep workin at it tho

Mike.
07-06-2007, 06:49 PM
yo tick, the bottom end of the "C" is pretty awkward,

Yeah the bottom of the c should kink up a little more.

http://i8.tinypic.com/4ucen20.jpg


still workin

tonentink
07-06-2007, 07:03 PM
i did this ''mic'' a couple years ago for my homie in chi-town!!!

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/4981/micmp5.jpg

aOt!!!

rayseone
07-06-2007, 07:10 PM
mike - use bars, check the new to graff thread if youy dont understand them or pm me and il help you, dont bend ure letters yet and fix your M , the m on the keyboard does not look like your m, same with the c

SER.. :O
07-06-2007, 07:12 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00515.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00514.jpg

New stuff, Old/bad markers :P

SEKT
07-06-2007, 07:16 PM
SER - do your letters like this " S E R " with bars

also dont use arrows and dont bent your letters

SER.. :O
07-06-2007, 07:21 PM
Aight, ty for the tips, might have new pics tonight or something

Drakula
07-06-2007, 07:30 PM
You're evolving your style AMK and it looks pretty good.it's just like maybe one or two things in the piece that throw it off a bit,like your connections and stuff.The only other thing I can say is maybe stop with all the wacky fills.I like bright colours don't get me wrong but some of the pieces are way over the top.You will be able to see your good letter styles alot more once you start using one or two solid colours for the fill.I love the two plain white ones with the hands at the bottom.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good212.jpg

Finished off the last piece.Haven't done a full colour piece in ages,some of it's a bit sloppy.

Bump for new page.

Mike.
07-06-2007, 07:40 PM
mike - use bars, check the new to graff thread if youy dont understand them or pm me and il help you, dont bend ure letters yet and fix your M , the m on the keyboard does not look like your m, same with the c

Ok but I can do that already, I know what bars are, I know how to use them already.

rayseone
07-06-2007, 07:53 PM
well its not evident in your sketches


look i tried to fix the bad parts for you but i cant do shit in ms paint so just to give you an idea

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3927/4ucen20ug2.jpg

Mike.
07-06-2007, 07:55 PM
well its not evident in your sketches


look i tried to fix the bad parts for you but i cant do shit in ms paint so just to give you an idea

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3927/4ucen20ug2.jpg

:rolleyes:

I can do that already...

sketch3
07-06-2007, 07:56 PM
so y dont u?

Mike.
07-06-2007, 07:57 PM
so y dont u?

Becuase it's boring to do and i'm trying to do something a little more creative.

Sumoe
07-06-2007, 07:58 PM
Fine, do what you want then...

and in a couple of months when you still suck, well, that's not our fault.

Mike.
07-06-2007, 08:05 PM
Fine, do what you want then...

and in a couple of months when you still suck, well, that's not our fault.

Do you understand what i'm trying to say?

I can do that shit already, I can do my letters basic as fuck, I can do it with or without bars already

sketch3
07-06-2007, 08:05 PM
yea, were telling u to do it for a reason, if ur gunna complain dont post here

Sumoe
07-06-2007, 08:07 PM
Whatever then, if you CAN do all that shit you don't need to ask us for help, we're not gonna tell you how to develop a style.

Mike.
07-06-2007, 08:09 PM
Whatever then, if you CAN do all that shit you don't need to ask us for help, we're not gonna tell you how to develop a style.

I never asked for any help.

thesilentvandal
07-06-2007, 08:10 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/DAWSEKthROW.jpg

rayseone
07-06-2007, 08:10 PM
why dont u post up with basic letters then to prove that you can do it, look at any good writer, they all use bars to still construct their letters, sume uses bars, everyone in the big boy forums, if you are trying to do more complex stuff, youve still got to remeber bars. but whatever do what you want, a mod should delete all this shit anyway,

edit - silent vandal that throwie looks pretty ill , but i cant do throwies worth shit, the k at the end just looks a bit more complex to all the other letters

.D.H.
07-06-2007, 08:39 PM
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/217/sehcohyx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

k and o are wackk, dont pay them any heed. im trying to get somewhat simpler?

.D.H.
07-06-2007, 08:40 PM
double post.

..ignore the 'simple' on top of the sketch

WolfBurrns
07-06-2007, 08:51 PM
honestly,
right now it needs a lot of work.
but,
i dont know if youve heardof sky 5 but he used to be here a lot and give a lot of advice.
one thing he told me, was that for a long time after having simples down, he sucked. and was really wack.
but its alright because after awhile youll get shit sorted out and become pretty tight, like him. hah.
anywyas,
i think you sh0ould keep going with this.
dont be scarred to do soemthing funky.
and if people say it sucks it doesnt mean drop the idea,
just maybe leave it out for a few months and revisit it.
ive done that a lot and am still no where near a difinitive style.

if someone has a flick of sky?
itd be nice if youd post it.

Yeah, Im a big fan of Sky. Thanks for the feedback. It was only a 10 minute thing(exscuse for the bad structure), but im trying to advance my style and what you said makes alot of sense. I've felt like I just cant figure shit out for awhile now so hearin that helps. Thanks homie. Ups to Sky5 too.

Oh.

DH- Use bars. Thats a good way to stay simple.

Derogatory9o5
07-06-2007, 09:06 PM
Do you understand what i'm trying to say?

I can do that shit already, I can do my letters basic as fuck, I can do it with or without bars already

dude why you asking for crits if you gonna bash em or ignore em ? :S were just trying to help man.

Mike.
07-06-2007, 09:09 PM
dude why you asking for crits if you gonna bash em or ignore em ? :S were just trying to help man.

I told them I could already do that, and they said the same exact thing again. I'm not pissed at them for telling me I need to work on my shit, I already know I do I just got pissed becuase I don't think they even read a word I wrote.

rayseone
07-06-2007, 09:15 PM
look, we did read what you wrote, its just your peice didnt show that you knew how to use bars because from the picture you could easily tell u didnt use bars. you obviously dont have simples down if that was supposed to be something 'abit more creative'. im not taking this any further, if you have any problems just pm me

BORG
07-06-2007, 09:21 PM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5990/june17007vx4.jpg

pic of my sketch tattoo'd on friend as promised
mike- if u dont wanna listen to others, dont, but your not goin to goin anywhere bein stubborn

Bazer
07-06-2007, 09:26 PM
I told them I could already do that, and they said the same exact thing again. I'm not pissed at them for telling me I need to work on my shit, I already know I do I just got pissed becuase I don't think they even read a word I wrote.

yeah they read stuff but it still looks like you need work on basic letters.. but if you wanna do other stuff then thats up to you............................................... .

Vice
07-06-2007, 09:30 PM
now this probobly isnt my place to be joining in this but i just have to get it off my back

mike you are an arrogant, ignorant, bitch. veiw the work of the people who have critted you and decide whether you should trust them or yourself. if your truly interested in graffiti and getting up then you should be worrying more about improving then having fun and doing stuff that is boring. listen to what they are saying. these people are telling things that they have done to improve. i repeat myself; view the work of the people who gave you crits. they are at a MUCH higher level than you or I for that matter. if you want to improve, get up, and not get laughed at then listen to what they are saying. you claim that you know how to do bars but yet you have not posted a single piece of your work that displays that claim.

my piece of advice; stop being a whiney bitch and do what your told. i am completely toy as well but i constantly sketch my stuff and try and work on what i do. its repetitive, its boring, but its necessary.

thats my advice but if you dont want to improve an make progress then be my guest. be 'abit more creative'.

peace out.

cel...
07-06-2007, 09:32 PM
tat looks sick, is it going to be colored at all or left as is?

recent scribble, just trying to work with different flows. i think it would look better colored...but whatever

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/3602/0706072227bg6.jpg

any crits?

Mike.
07-06-2007, 09:35 PM
now this probobly isnt my place to be joining in this but i just have to get it off my back

mike you are an arrogant, ignorant, bitch. veiw the work of the people who have critted you and decide whether you should trust them or yourself. if your truly interested in graffiti and getting up then you should be worrying more about improving then having fun and doing stuff that is boring. listen to what they are saying. these people are telling things that they have done to improve. i repeat myself; view the work of the people who gave you crits. they are at a MUCH higher level than you or I for that matter. if you want to improve, get up, and not get laughed at then listen to what they are saying. you claim that you know how to do bars but yet you have not posted a single piece of your work that displays that claim.

my piece of advice; stop being a whiney bitch and do what your told. i am completely toy as well but i constantly sketch my stuff and try and work on what i do. its repetitive, its boring, but its necessary.

thats my advice but if you dont want to improve an make progress then be my guest. be 'abit more creative'.

peace out.

Your 100% right, im just that kind of person that doesnt like saying they're wrong.

BORG
07-06-2007, 09:40 PM
cel- will be colored but the ouline alone was $250, and to finish it will be $400 more dollars, he's gotta do some saving, fellin the flow of ur piece, but i'd work on the lettering a bit

AyteYourCookies
07-06-2007, 09:45 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture206.jpgcrits?
bump for crits

thesilentvandal
07-06-2007, 10:04 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/DAWSEKthROW.jpg


BUMPER>>>

BORG
07-06-2007, 10:06 PM
ayte- not feelin the flow so much, letters are decent though
silentvandal- shits lookin fresh, would work on how some of the letters flow together though

mars420
07-06-2007, 10:07 PM
http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2601064110012822800EDMmPf

emel
07-06-2007, 10:17 PM
mike.... do more simples

you CANT do that shit
so just start sketchin more, typing istn going to do shit for your style

raveone
07-06-2007, 10:30 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/ravee.jpg

BORG
07-06-2007, 10:33 PM
rave- nice to see that your back, where's the new stuff though? likin the AVE the R needs to be same size as other letters though

popshots
07-06-2007, 10:39 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2079/nermerererermm6.jpgcrits... pencil freestyle
borg: thats sick
cel: dont do those lines on the 3d and jus keep workin on the letters
ayte: the "e" decent but the rest of the letters the bars r messed up
thesilenvandal:like it. ... keep on keepen on
rave: i love the fill

glass
07-06-2007, 10:49 PM
Rave: clean simples and great fill dude, nice
Ayte: yeah i agree with pop about that E, but i also like that T even though i dont think it fits with the others
Pop: looks pretty cool dude color that i want to see it done

anyhoo i just thought of trying a bit of a new style and messed with letters, crits?
http://i14.tinypic.com/6f78lls.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/62qbosw.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/6eygjtw.jpg

Nem
07-06-2007, 10:58 PM
i think theyre absolutely ill.

Vice
07-06-2007, 11:02 PM
the only thing im confused about is the last one. is that an I? i just might be a complete dipshit at its really obvious but yeah. other than that their all great.

cel...
07-06-2007, 11:03 PM
rave - i'm loving your coloring, seriously very cool.

the e looked a lot cleaner before i inked it, ;P

http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/2429/0707070000pz1.jpg

any crits?

glass
07-06-2007, 11:05 PM
lol its supposed to be an S

and thanks for the crit guys

cel: idk if i like the extension on the E, the M and R are decent though. keep up he simples.

Chalk
07-06-2007, 11:08 PM
seems like we could use some simples here!

all the cool kids do em!

old simples ps

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simpor2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/Photo97.jpg

popshots
07-06-2007, 11:08 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2079/nermerererermm6.jpgcrits... pencil freestyle
borg: thats sick
cel: dont do those lines on the 3d and jus keep workin on the letters
ayte: the "e" decent but the rest of the letters the bars r messed up
thesilenvandal:like it. ... keep on keepen on
rave: i love the fill
bump for crits

RepUrSet
07-06-2007, 11:14 PM
been a GOOD while since i hit this site..heres some stuff from my BB all thumbnails
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1629/img002kj7.th.jpg (http://img514.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img002kj7.jpg)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/3396/img009by6.th.jpg (http://img159.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img009by6.jpg)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8885/img008le3.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img008le3.jpg)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5444/img007ab0.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img007ab0.jpg)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/378/img006ux5.th.jpg (http://img267.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img006ux5.jpg)

bump..guess its my fault for not asking for crits

so yeah...crits? :D

popshots-- uh..that say zekt? try to define the letters a bit more but it might just be because its in pencil;
chalk--dope stuff man keep it up:rolleyes: only thing i dont like all that much is that little nudge on the upper-right bar of the k
cell...- uh...mre?moe? try working on the letter structure a bit rather than the inner effects

Vice
07-06-2007, 11:15 PM
ohhh i see it now. i guess maybe try to slant the large part. i dunno tho it could just be my own eyes.

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-06-2007, 11:16 PM
Popshots: I like it. Try outlining in ink? Was that light blue smudge intentional? Maybe add a baby-blue to white or baby-blue to darker blue fade?
RepUrSet: Nice karaks

Still working on that shaky hand. crits?
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/8365/0707070012mn6.jpg

glass
07-06-2007, 11:44 PM
if i posted this on the bottom ill be pissed


Rave: clean simples and great fill dude, nice
Ayte: yeah i agree with pop about that E, but i also like that T even though i dont think it fits with the others
Pop: looks pretty cool dude color that i want to see it done

anyhoo i just thought of trying a bit of a new style and messed with letters, crits?
http://i14.tinypic.com/6f78lls.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/62qbosw.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/6eygjtw.jpg

bump for more crit

None: nice flow but work on the E a bit, just a few little tweaks on the slanted bars on the top and bottom of it

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-06-2007, 11:57 PM
Glass: I like all three, but the A the most.

Just put this together. I don't know if you guys agree, but I definitely feel like I'm progressing, even if it's just a little bit.

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6658/0707070050yr5.jpg

popshots
07-06-2007, 11:58 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9270/jknbnkbr7.jpgcolerd..... not clean... crits...
chalk: lookin good and clean
inue: nice flow to it but someone rights cnue... kinda close but w/e
glass:i like the a alot jus put em all together...

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-06-2007, 11:59 PM
It's inve, I just need to work on making my V's look like V's.

thesilentvandal
07-07-2007, 12:12 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsek.jpg
well ya i dont like my markers

Nem
07-07-2007, 12:24 AM
do you guys draw better when you're high? =P i want to try it

ha!

this is what i got out of being baked off my ass.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/euroscab.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/euroscab2.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/euroscab3.jpg

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/throwsthrows.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/throws.jpg

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/gorescabthrow.jpg
(^^ charac not by me. by my little brother. XD)

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2196-1.jpg
(bump this cuz everyone liked it. and im proud. lawl. bustin the simples.)


im still fuckin burnt right now even. it makes my hand a bit shakier, but a lot of new ideas flow.


silentvandal, thats beautiful. i would have somethin goin on in that 3d though. would definitely make it shine.

BORG
07-07-2007, 01:29 AM
chalk- love the simps, first one's a fav
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6775/picture005pt9.jpg
new one with brighter colors

scab-last one has some potential, sober up, clean it up, and u could be onto something
ps- drawing high is fuckin retarded, i love chronic, but it makes ur art sloppy, shitty, lazy

eso239
07-07-2007, 01:58 AM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture004-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture020.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture026.jpg

inve- dont be afraid to overlap ur letters keep up with the simples

Sou - Mvd
07-07-2007, 02:16 AM
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/7135/002sc2.jpg
new throw =\

amk
07-07-2007, 02:33 AM
Borg...dope as..nice work..i just think the flaring K leg looks akward the way the 3d is...but thats nothing..hehe :p
Chalk ... Extremely nice....i like that simple the best:D

esko
07-07-2007, 02:57 AM
sou - good shit, looks clean

http://i17.tinypic.com/6885cb5.jpg

tag...

Scouse
07-07-2007, 07:52 AM
sumoe that is nice

glass
07-07-2007, 08:37 AM
pop: looks much better colored

did this a while ago and tried some different add ons and such, i dont really like it though but it was more or less just a test. crits?

http://i19.tinypic.com/4zuomrd.jpg

esko
07-07-2007, 10:34 AM
bump off the bottom of the page

looks alright, try adding more stuff now since you got the letter structure down alright


http://i18.tinypic.com/53tnx1u.jpg

i know the e doesnt really flow, but w/e

glass
07-07-2007, 10:45 AM
try and keep the letters a bit more visible, mainly the far end on the right, but still connected to the others even though it looks like it was only because you ran out of space. 3D looks ok, just try and clean it up and work on letter structure, like dont bend that E so far to the right on the bottom. stuff like that.

NEOZ
07-07-2007, 11:00 AM
NOTE nice and clean man,

so here are some recent sketches from me
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007951.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007950.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007952.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007953.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/06072007954.jpg







for more crits

Captain
07-07-2007, 11:49 AM
I kinda like the last one, work some on cleanliness.

GAUGE
07-07-2007, 11:56 AM
1http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x147/GAUGE72/PICT0008.jpg
2http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x147/GAUGE72/PICT0007.jpg
3http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x147/GAUGE72/PICT0006-1.jpg
4http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x147/GAUGE72/PICT0005.jpg
crits(i hate colering in w/colerd pencil anny one now how to make it none sketchie)

Bazer
07-07-2007, 12:16 PM
stop using all those lame ass arrows and extensions dude. stick to some black and white sketches and work on more simple letters.

glass
07-07-2007, 12:50 PM
i third that, def. work on simples

kors: i like that last one out of all those, work on your K and the upper part of the S

Phobia-oner
07-07-2007, 12:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/mypics037.jpg

GAUGE
07-07-2007, 12:55 PM
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x147/GAUGE72/PICT0020-1.jpg
simple?

ENES.ONE
07-07-2007, 12:59 PM
seems like we could use some simples here!

all the cool kids do em!

old simples ps

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simp2blue.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/simpor2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/Photo97.jpg

all of them look legit.. but i dont like the K's, everything else is tight though!

Bartic
07-07-2007, 01:00 PM
GAuge: take out the kinks man and work on your 3d, ur only get get better if you put ur all into it don't half ass a sketch, clean straight lines look at the new to graff thread

thesilentvandal
07-07-2007, 01:55 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsek.jpg
well ya i dont like my markers

BUMPS

rayseone
07-07-2007, 01:56 PM
chalk - il simples man, your coloring and marker skills are real nice your shit pops of the page

gauge - check the new to graff thread, use bars and go simple

kors - best one is the fourth one down , nice and simple with a lil flair keep it up man,

glass - it looks too bumpy, you got structure down tho so just experiment with what you feel, and i was liking that A in the other style a few page back

phobia - do exactly same as what i told gauge to do

crits before i ink? extensions to take out etc, there is antoher page what the end of the R is on but it is only a lil bit so i couldnt be bothered to scan it

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/6476/lastscaneo5.jpg

Captain
07-07-2007, 02:28 PM
k but also dose anny one use rulers in there work i dont cuz i dint know if that would be graf like if you use another persons work for your homework (i do but thats beside the point) and thanks for the form name

NO! NO FUCKING RULERS OR TEH KINGZ OF GRAFFFF WILL DE5TR0Y JOO!!11!! LOLLERCOPTER


but on a serious note, using a ruler is like using a nicer marker. If you know how to use it, it'll help make your stuff look cleaner and whatnot. Just don't get dependent on it.

rayes- I dunno man, it doesn't seem to flow to me.

silent- It's bitchin', but i can't really find the 'd'

glas- Instead of starting with extensions, try fucking with thicker letters and varing bar thicknesses, and making that flow. That's the meat, extensions are just salt.

guage- see the one chalk did with the orange forcefield? try doing that, but with fewer colors and no 3d. Don't try to spice it up yet either.

Bartic
07-07-2007, 03:24 PM
Rayseone: the bottom of the 's' and 'e' is too busy in my opinion, ink her

glass
07-07-2007, 03:30 PM
rays: i like all the letters but the E, top and bottom legs look weird somehow. keep it up.

silent: love that fill man, very sick

first new thing tried in a while, i think the G needs some work but im not sure what. crits?

http://i16.tinypic.com/4trfri8.jpg

QuEeNz-StyLe
07-07-2007, 03:39 PM
latest doodle and some shit for some girl i did to big & od'd on the color scheme just a tad and am to lazy to finish.. not up to par with the rest of the shit in this thread but im only 16 getting there slowly

http://i9.tinypic.com/6fshv8o.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/5zoj47b.jpg

Nem
07-07-2007, 03:45 PM
ahhh!

i love trippy fills.

i personally think the first one is ill.

checka?

i think if you went all out and made the bottom one like, ridiculously symmetrical, it would look pretty cool.

SEKT
07-07-2007, 03:50 PM
GLASS - i really like that style, i think to fix the G you should make the bottem part of the "C" shape curve up at a sharper angle so that the thick arrow looking part dosnt stick out so much,
also i think that the g and s overlap the other letters too much

hope that made sense

Drakula
07-07-2007, 04:46 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good213.jpg

Should I keep going or keep it simpler for now?

trashhh
07-07-2007, 04:48 PM
simplerrrr u wer gettin good at the simpler ones

hungr
07-07-2007, 04:49 PM
sticker
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00580.jpg
crayons are dope!!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00581.jpg

:-l
07-07-2007, 04:55 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4692/picture159ur1.jpg
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/9914/picture158sc0.jpg
amar

rayseone
07-07-2007, 06:56 PM
hungr - hot shit like always

drak - tone it down

qeenz style - ill fill

i lick the nuts at throwies. crits?
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/9651/dsc00320uk2.jpg

Drakula
07-07-2007, 07:21 PM
Seyar-the S the E and the A are great.Work on the the Y and R.


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good214.jpg
Back to my good ways.

ILuvHoodRats
07-07-2007, 07:24 PM
Drop The Fuckin Arrows Man.

:-l
07-07-2007, 07:27 PM
hungr - hot shit like always

drak - tone it down

qeenz style - ill fill

i lick the nuts at throwies. crits?
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/9651/dsc00320uk2.jpg
dont fill the negative space with black, just create more negative space so it flows better as a throw

sketch3
07-07-2007, 07:50 PM
Seyar-the S the E and the A are great.Work on the the Y and R.


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good214.jpg
Back to my good ways.

when you first posed here i thaught' oh god not another toy that wont lissten to any crits and complain about doin blocks' but uv improved so fucking fast, ur developing a nice lil style ther. i know in a year or 2 if keep it up ull be dope,
stay up!!

emel
07-07-2007, 07:56 PM
Drak i like your stuf but i think you should start painting simples now at a chill spot cause when you get better at sketching and you try to paint it.. youl be embarrased

ODonthesetrees
07-07-2007, 08:22 PM
dont fill the negative space with black, just create more negative space so it flows better as a throw
nah you dont want to make more negative space, jsut make the letters so they fill that space on their own, the part at the e you could easily fix jsut keep the middle chunk out as fasr as the other two peices...you need to work on your throw letters alot though, loook at some bomb throws liek kismet and shit to get more ideas on the different styles, tright now youre doign liek mindgem bubble letters

raveone
07-07-2007, 08:54 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-21.jpg

glass
07-07-2007, 09:25 PM
rave: wayyyyyyyy too many arrows and extensions. lose all the extra stuff and revert back and do lots and lots of simples, go check out the new 2 graff thread in the Main Toy Forum Index to get what i mean.

raveone
07-07-2007, 09:31 PM
no thanks

scoot
07-07-2007, 09:36 PM
whats the point of comming to get crits if ur not gonna take them

rayseone
07-07-2007, 09:36 PM
youve got too mouch extensions in the background, the bottom left leg of the R should definately not connect to the V, it always takes something away from the peice if you have extensions stetching long ways through the peice, unless it is done correctly, and dont have arrows at the bottom pointing 2 different directions cuz it looks super awkward. pretty sweet idea for the background tho.c also didnt u post most of the recent peices you just posted like a month ago or so?

Sou - Mvd
07-07-2007, 09:37 PM
Rave I saw that one simple you did with that nice fill, that was good. Why you just posted is lacking alot of the things needed to make that style work. If you're going to try and make that work, keep pounding outlines out and you'll eventually get the flow down, but I'd say keep working on your basic letters, because the last ones were pretty weak.

raveone
07-07-2007, 09:37 PM
i didnt ask for crits and i said no thanks. i like it the way it is

raveone
07-07-2007, 09:40 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0002-16.jpg

simple

i did it at a faimly reunion

sketch3
07-07-2007, 09:41 PM
well we dont, so ether take advice and change it or dont post

edit use bars to make ur letters, doing simpels isnt enough, if the letters suck

raveone
07-07-2007, 09:47 PM
i posted to just show it,




this is a block buster i did, should have took my time

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0002-16.jpg

giganticCrane
07-07-2007, 10:08 PM
the letter structure is atrocious, i wasnt trying for that at all. i just wanted to test this fill on something. i think its pretty cool, actually. and if you can read what it says in the upper left, then you'll know whats up.
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i876552_woooooooah.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com)

scoot
07-07-2007, 10:26 PM
ur letter structure is good.. but the rest just hurts my eyes

scoot
07-07-2007, 10:29 PM
http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/?action=view&current=euro.jpg
(wont let me post the img)
new style.. trying to go euroish.. yea..

any crits on this one?

SEKT
07-07-2007, 10:35 PM
SCOOT - your 3d on the left most side of the "G" is nonexistent

HELLO MY NAME iS KiDDO!
07-07-2007, 10:46 PM
http://a654.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/119/l_3bb72725e7496703bc9c50ffc110882d.jpg http://a505.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/65/l_78658c91e098152110795ff9dd851520.jpg http://a290.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/116/l_b90f7f096d06a3d38944a3954a7fee81.jpg

HELLO MY NAME iS KiDDO!
07-07-2007, 10:53 PM
if you kan't read my shit it says.. 2006' (...in diff' shades of green), the letters SH - for this rave i threw called Shake Like An Earthquake (...in shades of brown, light brown, and reddish-brown), ITSK - (...crew i used to write for "It Takes Skills or Im The Shit 'Krew" (In Red, and the letter K in Green w/ White little stone-shaped patterns, and "KIDOE," on the top right w/ the colors of brown, orange, pink, and tan... kind of OKAY, not even close to my best pieces, but prolly one of the decent-okay ones.. mind you i just started getting back into graff' writing this year... that piece was obviously made over a year ago, mind-you the 2006' in the beginning. does anyone here write from the 818 area?... i wanna go bombing with someone real bad... i got a buncha cans, tips, etc.. and a car. lets paint the city rainbow y'all...

- kiddo One_soN aka KIHDOER! oneR'... but not for long.

IwriteNASR
07-07-2007, 10:56 PM
glass- i think itd look better with the letters not pushed together for that style
queenz- finish that fill its gonna look sick, second one looks pretty nice
seyar- i agree with drak s ,e ,a are nice
drak- i like ur simpler better
kiddo- looks pretty sick
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8656/nasr325tg6.jpg
experimenting with fill+style

EKE
07-07-2007, 10:59 PM
kiddo: beutiful

EKE
07-07-2007, 11:12 PM
nasr work on the N and the A mostly the N... the fill is decent tho

IwriteNASR
07-07-2007, 11:15 PM
glass- i think itd look better with the letters not pushed together for that style
queenz- finish that fill its gonna look sick, second one looks pretty nice
seyar- i agree with drak s ,e ,a are nice
drak- i like ur simpler better
kiddo- looks pretty sick
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8656/nasr325tg6.jpg
experimenting with fill+style

bump bottom of page

EKE
07-07-2007, 11:18 PM
nasr basically on the N dont divide up the top left corner part of the N like you did and on the A the legs of the A shouldn't cross under the cross bar thing...

IwriteNASR
07-07-2007, 11:20 PM
scoot use the same size bars

EKE
07-07-2007, 11:22 PM
scoot clean it up a bit and try making the letters mor consistint thikness

giganticCrane
07-07-2007, 11:24 PM
the letter structure is atrocious, i wasnt trying for that at all. i just wanted to test this fill on something. i think its pretty cool, actually. and if you can read what it says in the upper left, then you'll know whats up.
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i876552_woooooooah.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com)
bump for crits

glass
07-07-2007, 11:33 PM
bump


rays: i like all the letters but the E, top and bottom legs look weird somehow. keep it up.

silent: love that fill man, very sick

first new thing tried in a while, i think the G needs some work but im not sure what. crits?

http://i16.tinypic.com/4trfri8.jpg

EKE
07-07-2007, 11:36 PM
interesting style the A is sick but i dont really like the S and the L and G arent bad but they could be better...

popshots
07-07-2007, 11:44 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/11/nermonerei8.jpgcrits...
giganticrane:i like the tag jus not ther peice to much... the colors r a little much for me
glas: dont overlap the s with the other letters make the l a little bigger and ad some 3d
nasr: i like the fill

meetermaid
07-07-2007, 11:47 PM
(glas piece)

hottt except for the s,it looks a little weird. try and make the top curvy part of it come over the straight bar thing if that makes sense. you've improved a buttload since the last piece i've seen of yours, good stuff

rave it's ok, that font's kinda hard to pull off so keep trying, the thinner parts of the r, v, and e could stand to be a little thicker.

EKE
07-07-2007, 11:50 PM
popshots... wut does it say? and it needs work... clean it up

Phobia-oner
07-08-2007, 12:00 AM
Hey man which thread is the one with the bars tutorial thing?

rayseone
07-08-2007, 12:08 AM
the new to graff thread, which can be found by clicking on this link

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

popshots
07-08-2007, 12:09 AM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/11/nermonerei8.jpgcrits...
giganticrane:i like the tag jus not ther peice to much... the colors r a little much for me
glas: dont overlap the s with the other letters make the l a little bigger and ad some 3d
nasr: i like the fill
bump...
it says nerm..... go to the new to graffiti thread

freakeenyc
07-08-2007, 04:06 AM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9600/cimg6866zm2.jpg
bit the old english letters...thut it was an awesome variation
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/603/cimg6865yw3.jpg
Riddler: Riddle me this!
Batman:WIENOT?
lol came up with that.. thut it was pretty fun..but yall prob think its retarded which it probably is...

amk
07-08-2007, 06:43 AM
latest doodle and some shit for some girl i did to big & od'd on the color scheme just a tad and am to lazy to finish.. not up to par with the rest of the shit in this thread but im only 16 getting there slowly




age doesnt matter in the slightest .. im 15...deal with it..so is Sume..i think?..
Nice sketches tho...keep it up...

gaaaah...
anyways..

sum new memebers i seeeeee..hmmm

Freakay....very niceeee...i love your style like..the top and bottom Wienots show your style very well...keep it up..

Popshots....no point in telling you to one. use bars ... two . do simples..
coz ill just be wasting my breath....Mike finished that shit for me...so now i carnt be arsed..nice colouring...bout it...if i was to say work on your letters coz thyere extremely bad it would be the same as saying go simple and use bars..

arrrgh..

i give in...Popshots...work on your letters....and use bars...fuck addons...you dont need them...and colours..drop them...dont waste them..focuz on your letters..

where the heck did tricks get too ?

Dying to live
07-08-2007, 07:41 AM
freakeenyc they are sikk props on the first 3d its dope

http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/alive2-peice-resized.gif

first attempt peicing with new name crits?

Sumoe
07-08-2007, 11:27 AM
Dope shit freakeenyc, keep it up homie...

and yeah, I'm 1,5 amk. Also Tricks went to camp and will probably be gone for most of the summer.

amk
07-08-2007, 12:04 PM
your an annoying fucking post whore...
who also has no room to crit Freaks letters..
so go sketch..

and good lookin Sume..:P

Alive..keep ALL the letters the same size...aaaaight...nice simple i spose...do you use bars...i doubt it..use bars..i wont go into detail..

peace.!

revolt92
07-08-2007, 12:06 PM
I am sketching, and i it just looks like i'm post whoring because nobody else is posting...ahhh fuck it...this will get deleted later anyway

edit* proof i am sketching...
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/DSC00129.jpg

ugh sucks...ahwell...critzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!?!?!?!

sketch3
07-08-2007, 01:16 PM
ur t looks like its got down syndrome, dont hav the lil bend half way up just one letter, if u gunna do that follow it thru or it wont flow

00-made-00
07-08-2007, 01:29 PM
^haha thts the funniest thing ive herd in ages lmfao
tick- keep working them bars it will pay off.
alive- love tht fill looks nice, next time do the piece in the middle of the page, i used to letter coming out of the page and it looked like i couldnt finish lettters.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P1012171.jpg
crits plz?

BORG
07-08-2007, 01:40 PM
freak- i gotta call a bite, sorry, but theres a freak down here in the south whos been sprayin freak in cursive just like the 3rd one down

lil case of insomnia last night, just fucked around, beginning to hate crayola markers
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/7334/june17008bf5.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 01:48 PM
FUCKING SICK BROSEPH keep it up

heres my boredom: http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2174/montage002xp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BORG
07-08-2007, 02:00 PM
00-made-00, well, you dont seem to be tryin to improve it or anything, i've seen the same piece from you for a while, i would take it to bars, and work on the letterin just a bit

anroe
07-08-2007, 02:09 PM
new to this site sorta, sum of u seen my stuff on 12 oz, heres sum of it anyway..

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/SANY0273.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1152.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1145.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1090.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1092.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1078.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 02:11 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2174/montage002xp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump

:-l
07-08-2007, 02:22 PM
haha half of 12oz like migrated to bs
cool
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1183/pictureti8.jpg
anroe nice simples

sevewon
07-08-2007, 02:31 PM
AMAR quit posting the same pakastani amar handstyles uv already got crits..

ANROE- ur shit looks really good, i like your use of colors. not so much the intense one with the wings

BORG
07-08-2007, 02:33 PM
freak- i gotta call a bite, sorry, but theres a freak down here in the south whos been sprayin freak in cursive just like the 3rd one down

lil case of insomnia last night, just fucked around, beginning to hate crayola markers
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/7334/june17008bf5.jpg

anroe- i'm feelin those pieces, lookin good with ur letters and the flow
bump for crits

anroe
07-08-2007, 02:36 PM
thanx guys, BORG im feelin that MN shit likin the 3D on it, and the background, good jawwbb over all

sevewon
07-08-2007, 02:36 PM
anroe- i'm feelin those pieces, lookin good with ur letters and the flow
bump for crits


dont make so much of the page that rockish look uve got going on, make it more of your MN, they look perfect, but look weird in the corner there. oh and not so much of all that random writing everywere. other than that shit everything LOOKS properly drawn

REAL..
07-08-2007, 02:42 PM
http://i9.tinypic.com/67ec2o5.jpg
new style first aattempt at it all crits welcome :)

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 03:13 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1285/gfdsgd003ai3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump

Chalk
07-08-2007, 03:26 PM
anroe - i'm only feelin a few of those seems like you got it then you lose it a bit.

borg - very nice. but lets see the rest of the letters

cyto - thicken your bars they are wayyy to skinny.

i'm on vacation and all i could find was a pink highlighter....
i also freestyled the K so yeah not my best

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_bpink.jpg

renk
07-08-2007, 03:32 PM
lol i posted here a while back like once, and i always love seeing the work on this site.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/cosenoner.jpg

chalk and borg: very cool shit your guys letters are always so clean
cant really crit because yall are better than me lol but oh well i tried something new :cool:

BORG
07-08-2007, 03:38 PM
chalk- shits lookin tight as always, feelin that 3d feel alot, throw a force field on the piece and should pop

sorry i didn't do the other letters, i sumtimes get lazy, will however do the other letters sumtime soon

rayseone
07-08-2007, 03:47 PM
morn and chalk - fkin ill

renk - keep doing what you are doing, just sort the N out

cyto - thicken your bars and dont bend ur t that way it looks like a J

real - go abit simpler, you got some good ideas so come back to it in like a month or so after finding more structure and it will look pretty dope, fresh coloring

anroe feeling them all apart from the one with the wings, props

crits?
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/8191/seyyyaruv8.jpg

Derogatory9o5
07-08-2007, 03:59 PM
new to this site sorta, sum of u seen my stuff on 12 oz, heres sum of it anyway..

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/SANY0273.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1152.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1145.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1090.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1092.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1078.jpg

Really feeling the good and evil one man nice keep it up.

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 04:28 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9089/fdgfgd001cq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

is this a bad example of flow>?.

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 04:41 PM
weird style, you know... it says nuance
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i879263_coolcool..jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com)

just a quick throwie style thing...
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i879269_nu.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com)

molotow_15
07-08-2007, 04:45 PM
simples dude..
new to graffiti thread..

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 04:47 PM
nah... i know the idea, but not all graffiti is just bars. its annoying to read this thread, cuase all "critz" gets now is "BARS BRO! SIMPLE BARS" and while some people do need to hear that, its completely unnessissary to say that to everyone.

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 04:48 PM
the only part of my drawings that doesnt have bars is the C in the first one anyway, becuase it didnt flow when i had the bottom of the C straight..

molotow_15
07-08-2007, 04:54 PM
nah... i know the idea, but not all graffiti is just bars. its annoying to read this thread, cuase all "critz" gets now is "BARS BRO! SIMPLE BARS" and while some people do need to hear that, its completely unnessissary to say that to everyone.

with a comment like that you will never progress

people try to help and thats the way forward
but if your not goin to accept crits

never post anything ever again

C3ZR ONE
07-08-2007, 04:59 PM
Big Crane- Your first pic IS essentially bars, and it's not bad aside from the A. The second pic is noodles, and rather crap.
Pretty much all good graff begins with a writer working with bars. Then he progresses to things way beyond that, but it's a safe bet, he learned alot by starting at the start and doing bars.

Captain
07-08-2007, 05:00 PM
nah... i know the idea, but not all graffiti is just bars. its annoying to read this thread, cuase all "critz" gets now is "BARS BRO! SIMPLE BARS" and while some people do need to hear that, its completely unnessissary to say that to everyone.

Yeah man, but you're one of them jackass. Hate to be harsh but you're not the first guy to show up and think he's beyond structured letters. 99% of graff is based on bars.

from the bigboy thread-


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=802007#post802007) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v159/labrodent/BLACKBOOKS/img448.jpg


That's based on bars. you just gotta look for 'em. Bars doesn't necessarily mean that they're all parallel or straight, they're just a guideline for structure.

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 05:02 PM
thats not crits, its not useful. "use bars"
okay, i do, but not all the time, i admit. not every style is the simple bar thing, thats what im trying to say. with a more blocky style bars are sort of useless. if i can find a picture of something similar to what i was going for, i'll PM it to you or something...

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 05:07 PM
Yeah man, but you're one of them jackass. Hate to be harsh but you're not the first guy to show up and think he's beyond structured letters. 99% of graff is based on bars.

That's based on bars. you just gotta look for 'em. Bars doesn't necessarily mean that they're all parallel or straight, they're just a guideline for structure.

bro, i know what bars are. i recognize that, im not retarded. and i dont think im "beyond structured letters." nobody is, thats the whole idea of drawing letters... they have to have some structure or they arent letters anymore.

what one of the other posters said is right, i just hadnt realized it: the first one basically is bars, just fatters and less distiguished.

see, what you said was at least helpful, you had a point. just posting "BARS, USE THEM" to everyone and calling it critz is not helpful, and a lot of people need to realize that.

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 05:12 PM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5316/lololpopopo002mm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 05:17 PM
...damn, i know this is hypocritical and all, but that needs to be a little simpler cyto. im not feeling the T, the huge part shooting out the side is just too random even though i know your trying to make it look like it flows. and the blip at the bottom makes it look like a capital I. i think if you just took out the giant thing coming out the left side of the T and then tipped the whole T the other way and shifted the O back to fill up the space it'd look good.

I love that O though, it flows nice. im mad tempted to rip that and make it into a U for what im drawing... eh.

Captain
07-08-2007, 05:19 PM
http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/7200/varha2.jpg

To illustrate my point, bars aren't necessarily uniform, it just helps to start that way. giving specific crits on a letter isn't really going to help you progress, that's all up to you. Telling you to go simple and use bars is meant to give you and idea on how to progress faster through the use of simpler, structured, flowing letters.

cyto... do simple letters, and work on making those flow. No the other pic wasn't a good example of flow.

gigantic- your stuff was simple enough, the structure/balance wasn't reallly there. in specific, just try to take keyboard letters, and warp 'em to make 'em flow. along the way try to add a little style in without using any addons.


she's rather ugly...you're looking at her face?
[damnit way to delete your post molotow]

uhhh
07-08-2007, 05:20 PM
gigantic crane.
anyone decent uses bars,
you may not realize it or really be able to understand for awhile.
but they do.
and anything you show us that truly is not.
wont be worth showing.

show whatever you want but if its actually good, itll use bars and ill show you how.

addicted
07-08-2007, 05:21 PM
Real- Go back a bit, the colouring is grand, but work on the letters, come back to it later on.. BTW its lachlan001 from SC.

Cyto-The first pic looks like CYJO, work on the Y and T.

Chalk- LLLLOVIN IT!

Seyar- Nice colouring but the A and R look kinda plain coz they dont have much extensions, Keep it up though.

Cosen-Work on it..

Anroe- Loving all of it, especially the good and evil piece, keep it up!

EDIT::

Cyto- Nice work man Im feelin that piece. Maybe just shorten out the big bar sticking out of the left side of the T?

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2007, 05:40 PM
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/6979/999ds4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

giganticCrane
07-08-2007, 05:47 PM
gigantic crane.
anyone decent uses bars,
you may not realize it or really be able to understand for awhile.
but they do.
and anything you show us that truly is not.
wont be worth showing.

show whatever you want but if its actually good, itll use bars and ill show you how.

before you insult me read what was said after the first post. as ive said before, I. KNOW.

The_Sheep
07-08-2007, 05:47 PM
This post will porbably get deleted, but some mods need to regulate the ridiculous amount of bumping going on in this thread, this thread gets swamped because people bump there shit after only two posts, wtf? And it just starts an endless cycle of everyone bumping their shit constantly so theyre shit dont get swamped, mods please alleviate this problem...maybe restrict bumps to the next page and only 1 bump per pic? cause i seen some guys who have bumped their SAME tired pics like 5 times, just some suggestions.

And so i am not crit less:
Cyto - not sure if it was the effect you were going for or what but that piece jus dies towards the end, did u get lazy or something? The G R and A look good but the F F I T I looks skinny, plain, and dont flow at all, redo the piece or erase from the F.

And Crane, stfu honestly, you dont need to reply to every comment made towards you, just fuckin do your thing, but stfu

Skesh
07-08-2007, 05:48 PM
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/6979/999ds4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
haha damn 'graffiti'
i like the first 3 letters

glass
07-08-2007, 05:59 PM
same, first three are the best. the other letters look like they should be a bit thicker

also to the mods: lots of beef in here, not pointing fingers, but it should be checked more. maybe you're doing you job and working on it and if so then just disregard this post.

TheBombing
07-08-2007, 06:19 PM
hmmmm andreo or w.e nice job

d_g
07-08-2007, 06:24 PM
This post will porbably get deleted, but some mods need to regulate the ridiculous amount of bumping going on in this thread, this thread gets swamped because people bump there shit after only two posts, wtf? And it just starts an endless cycle of everyone bumping their shit constantly so theyre shit dont get swamped, mods please alleviate this problem...maybe restrict bumps to the next page and only 1 bump per pic? cause i seen some guys who have bumped their SAME tired pics like 5 times, just some suggestions.

Yeah, I've been trying to keep on top of that but it's hard to moderate bumps at the moment, the majority of my time is spent deleting chat and unhelpful shit in the main 3 pic forums.

Another reason it happens is that I get like 3 pages of chat and people bumping their pics to next page because of all the chat, fair enough. But when I go back and delete all the chat and shit it probably appears that they bumped 3 times on one page, know what I mean? Either way, I'll try and get on top of it.

Thanks for the feedback.

thesilentvandal
07-08-2007, 06:50 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawseksimplefunky.jpg

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-08-2007, 07:03 PM
you know this is fucking great I like how ppl post pics with no crits no nothing and still get crits and the complain and argue about the crits but some ppl like myself leave a handful of helpful tips and get none back I mean its bullshit

mods can we do something about this like unless you leave 4 or more crits you get none back or you have to crit everything infront of you something along those lines plz

uhhh
07-08-2007, 07:08 PM
that dawseks tight.
so,
these came out kind of bad, and most look like htey say "relp" instead of "rela",
i put a litttle lip on the bottom of the a, but most arent clear enough to be able to see that.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-006S-1.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-007S-2.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-008S-2.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-009S-2.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-010S-3.jpg
theyre a lot clearer too.
my cameras just horrrrible.

Socrates
07-08-2007, 07:13 PM
you know this is fucking great I like how ppl post pics with no crits no nothing and still get crits and the complain and argue about the crits but some ppl like myself leave a handful of helpful tips and get none back I mean its bullshit

mods can we do something about this like unless you leave 4 or more crits you get none back or you have to crit everything infront of you something along those lines plz

you cant force people to "crit" your "work"
forced opinions are wack

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-08-2007, 07:24 PM
I hear wat your saying socrates but if you have to bump your shit 3 times, 3 different pages and still not get one crit I mean come on