PDA

View Full Version : Blackbooks



Pages : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 [217] 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283 284 285 286 287 288 289 290 291 292 293 294 295 296 297 298 299 300 301 302 303 304 305 306 307 308 309 310 311 312 313 314 315 316 317 318 319 320 321 322 323 324 325 326 327 328 329 330 331 332 333 334 335 336 337 338 339 340 341 342 343 344 345 346 347 348 349 350 351 352 353 354 355 356 357 358 359 360 361 362 363 364 365 366 367 368 369 370 371 372 373 374 375 376 377 378 379 380 381 382 383 384 385 386 387 388 389 390 391 392 393 394 395 396 397 398 399 400 401 402 403 404 405 406 407 408 409 410 411 412 413 414 415 416 417 418 419 420 421 422 423 424 425 426 427 428 429 430 431 432 433 434 435 436 437 438 439 440 441 442 443 444 445 446 447 448 449 450 451 452 453 454 455 456 457 458 459 460 461 462 463 464 465 466 467 468 469 470 471 472 473 474 475 476 477 478 479 480 481 482 483 484 485 486 487 488 489 490 491 492 493 494

Scare2
07-11-2007, 09:02 PM
Loads of good stuff on this page everyone!

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good227.jpg

Lol at the rubber thing.

Hell yes Drak. that charachter fits perfectly. the second two letters are a lil smaller, but the way they lean out on either side for the charachter will make a great full color piece.

Scare2
07-11-2007, 09:09 PM
oh and i did this for the battle. might do a couple more too not sure.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/sher.jpg

uhhh
07-11-2007, 09:21 PM
heres my first attempt for the sher battle..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-088S.jpg

bump?
:eek:

i think yes!
:)

Vice
07-11-2007, 10:44 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00165.jpg

my new attempt at a throw. whatcha guys think?

scare2 very good. dont think im worthy of critting it.
uhhh same as above.
soank: its good except for the s. it looks kinda like a big blob. work on that.
nuance: i think its all good except for the e. i doesnt seem to fit with the rest for some reason.

Chalk
07-11-2007, 10:47 PM
drak i really think you should have his other hand showin maybe have him holdin the top of the R's leg or something

Scare2
07-11-2007, 10:49 PM
vice- you should either move the cross of the t up or down so it is upper or lowercase. right now its kinda in between. but the idea is there. go check out some throw styles and try to feed off how other people are doing things.


and yeah chalk i was thinking the same thing about draks. but maybee have him resting it on the A like hes leanning on it.
right now its hard to tell that thats his other arm.

Scare2
07-11-2007, 11:01 PM
o and im working on this for a friend but am kinda at a block. crits?

i want it to say jay bird. but im not really feelin it so far.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/jay-b.jpg

Phobia-oner
07-12-2007, 12:19 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte137.jpg

GrimeyScraper
07-12-2007, 12:39 AM
o and im working on this for a friend but am kinda at a block. crits?

i want it to say jay bird. but im not really feelin it so far.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/jay-b.jpg

I think the T should be more upright and the Y needs more space in the middle of the two uprights. other than that looks good so far.

killaseck
07-12-2007, 12:48 AM
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7249/picture069dc4.jpg
Pretty Toy just need some critz the k is bbbeerutal!

FIN one
07-12-2007, 01:16 AM
thats a j in scares thing btw

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-12-2007, 03:31 AM
soof, go simple its a bitch but ur letter structure isnt prime

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1954.jpg
new simple
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1955.jpg
pen freestyle
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1953.jpg
random character
critz?


style kinda reminds me of sezr
nice simples though

sKeeLo
07-12-2007, 05:30 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1945/1262615li8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9666/1262618km0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i admit the sketch above ("duse") is heavily influenced by the peices i saw today but u cant call it a bite (cough cough sume cough cough) . . .

sky 5 moooother fuuuuuckers!!!!!!

1904

RepUrSet
07-12-2007, 08:27 AM
dope stuff skeelo

thinking of putting some colour to this..any crits? thumbnail btw
:edit: pasted wrong link =p http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6175/img013ke7.th.jpg (http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img013ke7.jpg)

sex without condoms
07-12-2007, 08:30 AM
teh OLDness!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010009-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010024-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010023-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010022-3.jpg

Sou - Mvd
07-12-2007, 08:43 AM
Yay to that ^

Liking those letters a lot

For the Sher battle, Could have been better =\

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/6035/001vh9.jpg

edit: hah oops, just realised it looks like gher

sex without condoms
07-12-2007, 08:50 AM
please work on your handie ebefore you start them rough and hard to read pieces

giganticCrane
07-12-2007, 08:53 AM
yea.. the idea is cool but its completely unreadable and none of the letters really look right. like i cant tell if the E is lower or uppercase.

RepUrSet
07-12-2007, 10:26 AM
dope stuff skeelo

thinking of putting some colour to this..any crits? thumbnail btw
:edit: pasted wrong link =p http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6175/img013ke7.th.jpg (http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img013ke7.jpg)


bump and since i drew that i did this.. critsss on both
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/4421/img012hv4.th.jpg (http://img129.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img012hv4.jpg)

sou- original but hard to read:eek:
sex without condoms..wth? lol well...with proportional adjustments that could actually be a decent throwie style..:D the total eclipse thing

Bazer
07-12-2007, 10:51 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good224.jpg

Crits?


this is starting to look like my old stuff.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55079154/

the way it flows is that it all bends in the same direction so if youre gonna keep doin that dont forget to bend your k like that next time.
you bent the extension but it might have looked better if it was the left bar on the k.

amk
07-12-2007, 11:51 AM
Thanks for the pointers Hunting..
Sex..the H's are so good...feeling the style lots..and lots..
Drak..way for imrovement...keeep it up..
Sou...umm...aight i spose..i like your other styles better but eh..

so..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fvwrfwefwe.jpg

should i progress further with this style addons things..?

AZTEKA
07-12-2007, 12:11 PM
This one kind of lost it's color to the background, but otherwise what ya'll think?http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/204/piece002ts2.jpghttp://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7862/piece001ym3.jpg

Sumoe
07-12-2007, 12:49 PM
yes sky is fuckin back

Welcome back Sky...

amk
07-12-2007, 01:02 PM
revamped version

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/df.jpg

this type shit is just a once in awhile type thing..hehe..

peace.

00-made-00
07-12-2007, 01:08 PM
yeah amk my main homieeeee looks good man i like the other style tht wil take you far like star wars.

RFI. SPit
07-12-2007, 01:28 PM
I'm not feeling it at all

amk
07-12-2007, 01:33 PM
yah RFI. its just a lil change up hehe..i aint planning on sticking widit..just sumthing to swtich too after a lil while..

Thanks all the more and cheers Made

[breakout]-azer
07-12-2007, 01:41 PM
amk i aint feeling it at all.
mayby adding colour will change my mind but as it is i just dont like it.

Scare2
07-12-2007, 01:47 PM
amk. i really like it. but maybee put some tention lines or some cracks where the hand of the M is gripping the left bar. it has some potential


also just dont overdo it. maybee a couple of those letters in a piece. but a whole one might get tedious. its nice an creative tho.

near
07-12-2007, 01:55 PM
yeh id say stick to what u were doing before it looked better than that....

Mr Tasty
07-12-2007, 02:23 PM
i dont like the arm things mcuh,i like ur other stuff more..but its not bad...at least ur doin both ;P

sank.
07-12-2007, 02:25 PM
toy stickers thread sucks so im postin it here...

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0717.jpg

and kovr wanna exchange??

jersOneTIC
07-12-2007, 03:37 PM
This one kind of lost it's color to the background, but otherwise what ya'll think?http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/204/piece002ts2.jpghttp://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7862/piece001ym3.jpg
best shit i've seen in THIS forum..

Nem
07-12-2007, 03:59 PM
would look way ill with some highlights in the 3d. maybe a bright outline color.

good blending too.

giganticCrane
07-12-2007, 04:39 PM
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i897749_sloppy.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com)

sloppy as fuck.

Drakula
07-12-2007, 04:57 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good228.jpg

kinda reminds me of Amkahs characters.

RFI. SPit
07-12-2007, 05:07 PM
Yours looks better in my opinion

hungr
07-12-2007, 05:44 PM
i wanna paint on a girl too :( .. hopefully robert dinearo is down for a production on his girly... placement is everything
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00601.jpg

FIN one
07-12-2007, 05:53 PM
that would look sick on a girl imo

-Sinn-
07-12-2007, 07:03 PM
Hungr that looks dope ur improvin fast

Drak ur style is amazing i love that K

heres some simples and characters
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture346.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture345.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture344.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture343.jpg
crits?

Scare2
07-12-2007, 07:18 PM
Drak that stuff is amazing. i liked ur other charachter better. but the proportions are better now and i reallly like the way the A fits into the k at the bottom

did this a lil while ago. just felt like posting something.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Dasonboom.jpg

Phobia-oner
07-12-2007, 07:21 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte137.jpg

crits if possible?

percoset fun
07-12-2007, 07:33 PM
some new shit critsssssshttp://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/P7120002.jpgss???? http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/P7120001.jpg

Sumoe
07-12-2007, 07:57 PM
best shit i've seen in THIS forum..

You haven't seen a lot then, have you?

Oaklander
07-12-2007, 08:43 PM
Anybody up for a friendly battle? Handstyles, throwies, pieces, whatevs. PM me or post right here.
http://i16.tinypic.com/4knsutx.jpg
http://i9.tinypic.com/4z0n51e.jpg
http://i9.tinypic.com/53g2kjo.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/4q404sk.jpg
http://i14.tinypic.com/67retdj.jpg

tonentink
07-12-2007, 09:29 PM
i dont write asek it was for the battle whenever they had it!!!
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5710/asek1tm1.jpg
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9415/toser3yj8.jpg

ChRoMa 11820
07-12-2007, 09:31 PM
those arent too bad
how long u been writin?

for the bottom one i would fatten up the bars for the main part of the T and E

F.R.A.T.
07-12-2007, 09:45 PM
hungr - hilarious its a great idea, not just on a girl u coulkd really have fun bombing with that:)
tone - blocks with that style it looks like u dont have ur letters done
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1954.jpg
new simple
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1955.jpg
pen freestyle
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1953.jpg
random character
didnt get any critz?[/quote]

new style
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1952.jpg

Bazer
07-12-2007, 10:28 PM
post work please.
or talk here
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=1750&page=126

F.R.A.T.
07-12-2007, 11:35 PM
how about gong

jersOneTIC
07-13-2007, 01:18 AM
You haven't seen a lot then, have you?
i've seen MANY things believe me...anyways i was talking about the guy's style and that i haven't seen shit that good in the toy forums in a long time..:Dw/e here's a sketch i did yesterday
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2720/13001hg8.jpg

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-13-2007, 01:32 AM
wow this thread was dead today

Dusk07
07-13-2007, 01:40 AM
pencil sketches. simples and bars...

crits.

http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/19758/2000906059190810746_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000906059190810746)
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/20120/2000996813099003689_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000996813099003689)

Sumoe
07-13-2007, 12:11 PM
i've seen MANY things believe me...anyways i was talking about the guy's style and that i haven't seen shit that good in the toy forums in a long time..:Dw/e here's a sketch i did yesterday
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2720/13001hg8.jpg

You must've not been around when Sky poster a lot, then.

Anyways, love the "E".

uhhh
07-13-2007, 02:23 PM
well, he did say recently.
and sky bearily posts anymore.
and not under his screename.

that jers is pretty nice.
i really liek the e, and hte j and r are alright. but the s kinda ruins it.

BORG
07-13-2007, 02:34 PM
jers- the e looks like it'd be dope, but the bottom of your e is hidden behind the j

ChRoMa 11820
07-13-2007, 04:10 PM
jers i love that whole sketch
except the top of the letters have 3d that doesnt fit
it should be angled more down
try using a vanishing point if u didnt already
and if i were u i would fill in the holes (that the pink shows through) with 3d ..but thats just my preference i think it would look better tho

hungr
07-13-2007, 04:15 PM
heres gong for whatever reason.. kinda.. bad
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00602.jpg

Scare2
07-13-2007, 04:43 PM
hungr i really like youre N.

did this the other night. im gonna put some color in it i think.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/scarelastpage.jpg

Nem
07-13-2007, 04:46 PM
damn dude. calm down.

i say just change up your S. and R too. on the 2nd pic.

clean up the throwie in the first pic, change your P on it too. and make all the letters the same size.

G - Wahl
07-13-2007, 05:05 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture346.jpg


keep playing around with this style, it has potential

Scare2
07-13-2007, 05:08 PM
o this too.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/scarelastpage001.jpg

Nem
07-13-2007, 05:13 PM
lose the exclamation marks.

and try this with the R.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scarelastpage001.jpg

make that little part go up into it more.

uhhh
07-13-2007, 05:23 PM
wow ur mom should be ashamed tht she ever gave birth to you this is the wackest thing ive ever seen it looks like i took and dump in my hand and smeared it all over my cats ass you should go into your basement and hang ur self and not leave a not for ur mom either bcuz she wont care.


you can take his advice or do us all a favor and burn it and ur 2 thumbs off so tht u can nvr do this shit again or there isa third option and just die.


yes it was and u wana see my shit well give me a minute fuck all of you and bombing science can suck my dick they better hope tht noone from this site comes into kfc or ima turn them into a kuntucky fried asshole just like percs

uhm, mods.
where are youuuu?

tonentink
07-13-2007, 05:23 PM
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6421/gongyl5.jpg

Clowney-Cakes
07-13-2007, 05:24 PM
heres gong for whatever reason.. kinda.. bad
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00602.jpg

Hunger-im now a fan of you work, i have awalys liked it but now...i look forward to you stuff man...good job and keep it up!

Dusk07
07-13-2007, 07:30 PM
pencil sketches. simples and bars...

crits.

http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/19758/2000906059190810746_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000906059190810746)
http://aycu01.webshots.com/image/20120/2000996813099003689_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000996813099003689)
bump for critsss

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-13-2007, 07:49 PM
Dusk07: I like both of them, but on the second one the D doesn't feel right. Maybe don't make the bottom-left of the D's leg go so far up?

A work in progress. I've been preparing for a road trip the last couple of days, so I've been sketching here-and-there for like 3 minutes at a time. I'm thinking I should make the N more like the V? And I have writer's block as far as the E goes ... seeing as I haven't drawn it yet. And that swoosh thing is something I've seen a ton of local writers use, thought I might try it out (on paper, anyways)

Anyways, crits?
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1213/0713072040st2.jpg

bloodlandmoney
07-13-2007, 07:53 PM
wow... i think you need to take a little more time in your peices, you can really tell you only took 3 minitues . BUT the letter structure is ok nothing new

capo93
07-13-2007, 08:40 PM
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/DSC02386.jpg
ughh first post of a sketch in a while says mek...
dusk- seems pretty simple but i would use bars still there are certain parts of your letters that dont really work out?
scare- looks good but i dont like the way the s overlaps your c and i agree with the thing on the leg of your r but its a good start
sinn- keep working on that it could end up reallllllllllllllllllly dope

HuntingLOLs
07-13-2007, 09:15 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good228.jpg

kinda reminds me of Amkahs characters.
nah, the charac is like some futurama shizzle, matt groening or whatever...if you wanna do 3d the charac is placed realle bad as it is - your D, imo, has to little space compared to the R and A (mostly the R dominates), thats always one of the harder things to get flowing imo - spaces and letters.
anyway, some sketches:
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00559.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/DSC00560.jpg

cel...
07-13-2007, 09:22 PM
Drak you're getting good but try to do a different piece =P

quick sketch, crits?

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/7395/0713072217ju2.jpg

*ignore the little scribbles on the bottom/top =P*

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-13-2007, 09:22 PM
wow... i think you need to take a little more time in your peices, you can really tell you only took 3 minitues . BUT the letter structure is ok nothing new

"A work in progress" = I know it's messy, and I'll clean it up after I actually draw the last letter.

Drakula
07-13-2007, 09:25 PM
HLOLS-Thanks for the crit.I like the second one alot.Just forget the background for now though and just do black and white stuff.
Capo-Looks like a nice euro style from what I can see at this stage.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good229.jpg
Very sketchy.I think I made teh R smaller this time but I fucked up the arrow on it.

edit:I do the same piece over and over as eventually as it'll evolve.You just have to keep tweaking it over and over to get a good solid flow and letter style.

Phobia-oner
07-13-2007, 09:44 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte143.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte142.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte141.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte140.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte139.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte138.jpg

N.O.T.E
07-13-2007, 10:25 PM
gong nice shit keep it up, draks overall its ight, im just not feeling that space between the R and A, i dunno its probably just me

new style im workin on
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/Untitled-1.jpg?t=1184383355

Sumoe
07-13-2007, 10:43 PM
Gay arrows/add-ons.

BLTZ
07-14-2007, 12:49 AM
ok lets try this again
Im thinking about adding a header(Welcome 2 Salem)
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/9/7/14/t_welcolm2salm_8ddf95c.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?srv=img33&img=/9/7/14/f_welcolm2salm_8ddf95c.jpg)
did that work
crits.

Jroc1993
07-14-2007, 01:02 AM
yeah it worked but i dont know what to say about it, i cant tell if it has structure or not but i like jesus

SOOF
07-14-2007, 01:05 AM
BLTZ - concentrate more on your letter focus for now, get a decent style down then start adding the fun shit.

rayseone
07-14-2007, 01:06 AM
ya it worked but it is small as fuck, watever tho, from what i can see you need to just use letters instead of characters man, Graff is about letters. use bars to construct them

on the other hand hungr dope shit man i look forward to everyone of your posts, drak its pretty good but it looks so fucking awkward cuz the right leg of your k is always up super high so it knocks the piece off balance. ase listen to sume, people that are doing simples, keep doing em, youu will proggress.

and i have writers block, and its a bitch. so just an outline, critique before i ink if i do?there is another part to the R just on a seperate page
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/2388/lastscanko0.jpg

BLTZ
07-14-2007, 01:08 AM
Its not jesus its a witch(welcome 2 Salem) Salem witch trials.
Well I guess its not good enough since you mistaked a witch for Jesus LOL

BTW if you think it is too small then click on the pic(it is a link to imageshack with a larger picture)

Phobia-oner
07-14-2007, 01:08 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte143.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte142.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte141.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte140.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte139.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte138.jpg

seems like whenever i post, it always goes to the next page

Nem
07-14-2007, 01:09 AM
your stuff shows how bars simple bars can be way sick.

every letter is done beautifully in my opinion. go for some extensions bra!

edit: directed to seyar

SOOF
07-14-2007, 01:10 AM
seyar - nice shit man.

rayseone
07-14-2007, 01:18 AM
verse - imo the bottom one is the best, just the S is a lil big. keep doing stuff like the bottom one, then when they start to look dope, or just well proportioned and stuff, start experimenting with slanting them, moving them closer together, bending a few bars. etc

and thanks

Tomb-905
07-14-2007, 02:09 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/TombPeice2.jpg

amk
07-14-2007, 02:30 AM
HLOLS-Thanks for the crit.I like the second one alot.Just forget the background for now though and just do black and white stuff.
Capo-Looks like a nice euro style from what I can see at this stage.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good229.jpg
Very sketchy.I think I made teh R smaller this time but I fucked up the arrow on it.

edit:I do the same piece over and over as eventually as it'll evolve.You just have to keep tweaking it over and over to get a good solid flow and letter style.

your really progressing fast man...but every time you progress that more...your style gets more unoriginal...you need to put in there sumthing that you love personally....to make it yours and not unoriginal..think of sumthing that noone really does often...coz i think this is leading to a basic wildstyle...which i hate....but if you like wild..then keep on at it man...but just add the originality factor of whatever you want..whetther it be a crazy fill...or different shaped extension...just so someone remebers you by it..by that i mean..they look at your sketch and automatically think DRAK ! ..yah know...keep it up tho:p

isit me...or isit that hardly anyone is postin in here anymore..?

cel...
07-14-2007, 08:19 AM
Drak you're getting good but try to do a different piece =P

quick sketch, crits?

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/7395/0713072217ju2.jpg

*ignore the little scribbles on the bottom/top =P*

bump for crits

capo93
07-14-2007, 08:36 AM
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/DSC02386.jpg

ahh bump for more crits only got one...
drak- i love that micky mouse but i agree that everytime you progress it gets more and more unoriginal not that your bad just try to branch out a bit more
tomb- lose the extensions and focus on the letters for right now... extensions will come alot easier once you know your letters
verse-nice and simple keep your letters the same size
BLTZ- no clue wtf it says.. or is? same for you NOTE

00-made-00
07-14-2007, 09:05 AM
capo- i cant really see the pic tht well , but it looks ok.
Drak- you are improveing pretty rapid but there allstarting to look the same, the character is ok tho.
tomb- give out some crits then people will crit you.
some sketches, gong and tdg.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/t-d-g.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/gong.jpg

shax44
07-14-2007, 09:18 AM
made, don't make that line in the g so fat, i don't like that

just try a different style, start all over again. this style doen't work for a G.
i know it's fucked when you have to start all over again, but just do it.
and G looks better than g i think (in a different style)

00-made-00
07-14-2007, 09:23 AM
i dont need to start again trustt mee.
its in pen so if i fuck it up, i cant go back on when i gt a decent pen t**** with ill put up some better pics.

daisyface
07-14-2007, 09:44 AM
rayseone-lookin good i like ur y alot
verse-keep doin them simples, imo the last one is the best
tomb-maybe dont connect your letters, and the top of the B needs to come down
capo-i dunno what it is exactly but it looks like it could be cool haha

shax44
07-14-2007, 10:15 AM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4796/hpim1185kx5.jpg
wanted to make 44 in the circle on the X, but i forgot it :P

amk
07-14-2007, 10:21 AM
Shax...what are you talking about...start all over again...what the heck...it was a pen freestyle...im sure you can do a G in that style...waste of crit there...sayin start all over again..

shax44
07-14-2007, 10:33 AM
make me a G in that style then, if it looks good, you're right, if not, you're not right

exhale
07-14-2007, 12:04 PM
shax - maybe make your right part of the x seperate? i donoo

umm i was just trying stuff out..
http://www.imageox.com/image/62365-File0014.jpeg

Drakula
07-14-2007, 12:30 PM
The PCK LWG and the 11 are better than the actual piece.The letters aren't working.Just do bsome bar lettering for now and revisit this style when you've got your letters down.

hungr
07-14-2007, 01:37 PM
near: hungr has no colours at his house...shady fill

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010151.jpg

shax44
07-14-2007, 01:37 PM
exhale, make your letters fatter

emel
07-14-2007, 02:39 PM
nice one forthefuckof it i would just make the S a bit more rectanglish er... less round and lose the quotation marks at the bottoms but i ilke this simple

amk
07-14-2007, 02:43 PM
Near..Hungr...dope shit..i never know which one of you has drawn the peices lol...i donno..
Exhale...feeling the style mang...maybe lose the praying mantis type isms there..
Shax..shut up being petty and stay on topic..
as for your peice...use bars to construct your letters....and tone it down to simple block letters...i know you wont so why the hell me telling you..

in the process of moving house yah...so heres one outta the baaaag

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rwerwer4.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111113.jpg

and sorry to dump this on cha...but noone bothers with tha digi thread eeh..my GRAFF SIM battle entry

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/vdfbvfd-2.jpg

peace.

edit.
fuck the chars and pwetty colours...crit my letters...

Roolete
07-14-2007, 02:57 PM
i dont like ur chars too much, their a little stiff. ur second pic is probably my favorite thing ive seen from you though. amazing.
3rd piece
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0091.jpg

-Sinn-
07-14-2007, 03:02 PM
amk uv got probly the sickest fills ive ever seen

Phobia-oner
07-14-2007, 03:25 PM
went crazy for the hell of it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte154.jpg

amk
07-14-2007, 03:26 PM
Sinn..its a shame i cannot paint them fills hehe..thanks man !
FORTHEFUCKOFIT...maaaan...id say..use lighter birght colours...so it lookes poppy and in yah face yah...then i might be able to yah letterting...from what i can see it looks okay..but maybe switch it up colourwise a lil next time aight man..
ROOLETE....thanks for your opinion on my chars man..appreciated...hmm...your usiung bars wich is dope...maybe...sitch up the E so it isnt so unorinigal...coz iv seen that style of E lots man...just stating..:)

shax44
07-14-2007, 03:43 PM
Shax..shut up being petty and stay on topic..
as for your peice...use bars to construct your letters....and tone it down to simple block letters...i know you wont so why the hell me telling you..

do you really think that bars thing looks good in this style? i'll try it though, only because you say i won't =)

amk
07-14-2007, 03:48 PM
bars isnt a style..its a way to make letters..go to the new 2 graff thread...and quit being cockey ey..
im out.
peace.

*Wing*
07-14-2007, 03:49 PM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4796/hpim1185kx5.jpg
wanted to make 44 in the circle on the X, but i forgot it :P

Thumbs up for this one!

shax44
07-14-2007, 03:54 PM
bars isnt a style..its a way to make letters..go to the new 2 graff thread...and quit being cockey ey..
im out.
peace.

dude, i mean in this style ^ i know bars isn't a style

i'm glad wing likes it =)

p.s. i'm not new to graff

*Wing*
07-14-2007, 03:58 PM
Well, you need to fix the X a bit, but the style is cool... :)

shax44
07-14-2007, 04:00 PM
i know, that gap on the left and right side of the X (everyone says that)

amk
07-14-2007, 04:04 PM
you obviously are new 2 graff becuz if you wasnt new you would know you need bars to make letters no matter what fucking style it is....regardless of style....bars are what make letters.

its simple.

SOOF
07-14-2007, 04:44 PM
shax44: work on your h and a

shax44
07-14-2007, 04:55 PM
you obviously are new 2 graff becuz if you wasnt new you would know you need bars to make letters no matter what fucking style it is....regardless of style....bars are what make letters.

its simple.

whatever

SOOF, use bars to make your letters, ask amk

cel...
07-14-2007, 06:07 PM
nobody wants to crit my stuff =( =P

Riccweee
07-14-2007, 07:58 PM
okay then, been gone for a while, threw this up right now, note that the coloring looks alittle wack due to the scanner.(Also the fact that I never really knew good coloring anyways)

Crit it please!

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u4/bajsbucket/sliceigen.jpg

FIN one
07-14-2007, 08:19 PM
i say go simpler loose the wierd extensions and try to keep the thickness the same throughout ur letters. id also recommend not coloring yet until u get good at structure and flow.

this was supposed to be for an exchanhe with sledgehammer but i havent heard from him so whatever. doesnt matter, its good practice. crits?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3307/stickers2005sh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Gumdrop.Behemoth
07-14-2007, 08:19 PM
amk I don't know wats wrong with you
you said you need bars to make letters well that's look like a letter so it must have bars right? I think the only thing wrong with the sketch is that the x could use a little work

SOOF
07-14-2007, 08:29 PM
old pics but havent posted here ina while, im working on a few pieces as we speak so ill have newer pics up later, but crits anyway??

sorta new:http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/07-14-07_1726.jpgcrits

random shit:http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/07-14-07_1728.jpgcrits

OLD PICS, AS WE TALK NOW I GOT BETTER STYLE, NEW PICS UP LATER

paste
07-14-2007, 08:43 PM
me and my buddy, thought I'd do a charcter styling of us. Just for kicks. Stickers of thats coming.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs007.jpg

This stuff is some semi-realistic stylized stuff that Ive been playing around with.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs005.jpg

Pretty please for crits?

-Paste

FIN one
07-14-2007, 09:17 PM
not really feelin it the second one is ok but i still dont feel them maybe try to study a lil anatomy or something. anyone got any crits for me?

eMJayBee
07-14-2007, 09:52 PM
Dont know if I should post these here
Could I get some citz on the letters, thanks

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/graff006.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/graff001.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/graff004.jpg

Apoc
07-14-2007, 10:08 PM
not bad emjay, but yeah you need to work on the cleanliness of your letters. No pun intended. heres another octopus-related thing.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/scan0003.jpg

FIN one
07-14-2007, 10:34 PM
does that say boner? i like it emjay keep it up. i think a dark uni on the first one would be sick

FIN one
07-14-2007, 10:35 PM
i say go simpler loose the wierd extensions and try to keep the thickness the same throughout ur letters. id also recommend not coloring yet until u get good at structure and flow.

this was supposed to be for an exchanhe with sledgehammer but i havent heard from him so whatever. doesnt matter, its good practice. crits?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3307/stickers2005sh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits, didnt get any

Apoc
07-14-2007, 10:39 PM
does that say boner?

haha no it says "aoner" but it does look like boner. I really have to work on that. Hitting trains is prolly not the best thing for me to do.

unloadtheclip45
07-14-2007, 10:40 PM
emjay shits llooks good,didnt like the color on the first one,couldnt read all the letter

unloadtheclip45
07-14-2007, 10:41 PM
im feeling it fin.its original

whahappen?
07-14-2007, 10:41 PM
fuck it
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/4008/picture160cv1.jpg

Mike.
07-14-2007, 10:45 PM
haha no it says "aoner" but it does look like boner. I really have to work on that. Hitting trains is prolly not the best thing for me to do.

This might sound weird but do you play halo?

"echo
07-14-2007, 10:53 PM
Just stuff I came up last night. What do you think? New tag and stuff.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0344.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0343.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0342.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0341.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0339.jpg

Apoc
07-14-2007, 10:57 PM
very good start ceok! original name and very simple proportionate letters. Something we don't see much around here...

"echo
07-14-2007, 11:04 PM
Ah, thanks! I was scared to get shit crits again.

sketch3
07-14-2007, 11:14 PM
haha no it says "aoner" but it does look like boner. I really have to work on that. Hitting trains is prolly not the best thing for me to do.

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3417/bstc1.jpg

problem solved

Apoc
07-14-2007, 11:15 PM
thats what I was gunna do ;)

thanks tho ehee

paste
07-14-2007, 11:16 PM
fin man, thanks for the crits, I have been working on my anatomy, but they fucking cut that class next year, so Ive just been going from books. I dont know, hopefully they get it back by the time I'm a junior. Anyways, thats some damn fine work on that mesa vomiting karak tag. Its really fresh and well done. Much props, doesnt prolly mean much from me though...
-Paste

whahappen?
07-14-2007, 11:20 PM
fuck it
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/4008/picture160cv1.jpg
:D

SOOF
07-14-2007, 11:21 PM
Just stuff I came up last night. What do you think? New tag and stuff.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0344.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0343.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0342.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0341.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0339.jpg
Not bad man, your on a good start, Now i would start messing around with your letters and see if yu can start kicking a style, But overall its good.

cert1
07-14-2007, 11:22 PM
echo on the 2nd to last 1 u should make the k the same size n it will look better

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/bd997348.jpg

crits it says ce

Captain
07-14-2007, 11:33 PM
cert... stay away from complex fills for now, and just work on flowy letters.

Davo70
07-14-2007, 11:41 PM
first blackbook stuff, crit my shit, cuz i'm a toy

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs2007.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs2001.jpg

tense
07-14-2007, 11:47 PM
do simples man^^^^^^^^^

sKeeLo
07-15-2007, 12:21 AM
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/5398/1262623pu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

wut up toy box!! man im messed up, i took a pink and green, i know the green guy cool dude does his job nothing more but i never met the pink one and hes is a beast . . . . .

davo i would follow what echo is doing = bubbles and simples and straight letters all day, in school, on the bus, when your eating stc . . .

cert - not bad, letters have similar structure/style which is good . .maybe take out the crimp on the left part of the C and try some other lil way to spice that area up . . .i hate when people on here say "yo dont write blah blah blah cuz blah blah be killin it in my parts and hed smoked you" but i do speak up when people put ones behind there stuff . . . cert is a mo' fuckin legend writer in DC and all over, he put up more than anyone else in dc and dc is a huge city to conquer with tons of schooled trained writers . . . . i also gave his brother his name "DEK" which he still writes and is in fly id now (that luck bastard, nah dek is a real chill playboy type cat) . .cert and crew almost did a miller light commercial where he and some guys would just be finishing painting and crack some beers but they pulled the plug when they thought it would give off teh wrong image . . . google "cert grafitti washington dc"

ps. certs also a big guy physically

cert1
07-15-2007, 12:25 AM
thanks for tellin me would it be ok if i just wrote ce then?

Sumoe
07-15-2007, 01:00 AM
That "S" is bangin', Sky...

FIN one
07-15-2007, 01:27 AM
paste- thanks for the props all u need to look at is proportions and stuff. i can try to give u some pointers but pm me so we dont clutter the thread with talk.taking an art class or two helps a lot too

F.R.A.T.
07-15-2007, 02:15 AM
cert - the fill i kinda distracting
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/15-07-07_0249.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/15-07-07_0250.jpg
some new stuff

GHOST 2-5-2
07-15-2007, 02:20 AM
fuck it
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/4008/picture160cv1.jpg
name change?

sKeeLo
07-15-2007, 03:06 AM
sume your battle entry against mewt was truly banging . . . my S and B dont go together to well, the S is tall and the B is long . . . .

mek - your styles alot like mine and sumes, the problem the 3 of us have is that are letters dont interact or really cut into each other enough leaving each letter on its own island to hold its own . . . . i would run a white gel pen all along the inside of the outline on the top dark sketch and i think the letters will really pop . . . i think i used a white gelp pen alil bit on my sketch last page and you can see how much it really helps your sketch when doing a dark fill and dark outline . . . ill edit this with a pic hopefully

stay up

Sou - Mvd
07-15-2007, 03:13 AM
Mek try putting the letters in your handstyles closer together, and in regards to the pieces, work on making them flow. Try sketching them out as just one line like a handstlye and making the letters naturally fit together.

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/6885/004hj6.jpg

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/4541/001xj4.jpg

Robbie P
07-15-2007, 03:32 AM
The last one is excellent, the perspective is good and it looks like that 50's horror style. The K in duke stinks though. I dig it very much.

amk
07-15-2007, 03:48 AM
Soumyd..i agree with Rob...the perspective on the bottom is bangingggg...dope man..not really feeling the top on too much...but the bottom is noooice !
MEK...its kinda hard to work out the letters coz of the colours and blurry pic...they look aight and kinda basic..maybe switch it up abit ?..
Skeelo..dope...coloruin gis awesome on the S ..the fade is dope...feeling the letters aswell..
Cert..lovin the fill..
APOC...letters are getting good faaaast !!!!...keep it up..

i shud have my scanner up soooooon..so heres another oldish one...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gftncgc.jpg

i dont know if im even improving ..:(

Roolete
07-15-2007, 03:52 AM
woah you can pump these out fast. dont really know how to crit you, your better then me. i like it though. 4th piece, better then the last one? and any ideas for color?

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0094.jpg

sKeeLo
07-15-2007, 04:03 AM
am k - youre improving, ur better than where you were a month or 2 ago when i stepped out . . . . those new markers you got a few months ago def help . . i would suggest finding a couple of writers whose style is like yours but more developed and skilled and learning (not biting) from them . . . really breakdown their stuff and seeing what works and figuring out why it works . . . slowly and naturally youll start to be influenced by them and your stuff will take another step up . . and buy some damn cans dammit!!! youre not 18 yet so it aint a felony count against you (or however they carry it in the UK)

12 to 14 - leanr letter structure and painting 101 from older brother or BS toy box
14 to 16 - bomb the fuck out of your city, town, marina whatever
16 to 18 - start doing 15 min plus street burners and billboards and what not
18 to death - slowly stop bombing and end up going painting only when your pissed faced drunk or down to chill spots and legal yards, canvasses become your unfortunate friend . . . .

roolete - just becasue someone might be better than you dont me you cant crit, some of the best advice i ever got was from people in here like to try and add more curve/fluidity and they were right, really opened up my letters to alot more possibilities . . . im not feeling th elil curly things you got coming off teh tops of some of teh bars, maybe try making thoise bigger as full on addons (addon bar is roughly same size as bars in letter structure)

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1460/1212199yq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old obey sketch so i aint picless

F.R.A.T.
07-15-2007, 04:08 AM
amk how the fuck do u colour so clean
roolete keep our hand stead and make ur letter width even
just finished this sorry for the shitty pic im using a phone
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/15-07-07_0504.jpg
good night!!

amk
07-15-2007, 04:10 AM
sKEELO...i have painted hehe...if you want i can find all the flicks .. ?..and its dope that your back man..thanks for the help too..:)

Sick!
07-15-2007, 08:39 AM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/8000000014661a9/1/99/JNhm9BLf0j_bA6lthc3xLaV0m8Qdly3p.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/8OnfG9Ba4D9NDfVxZrFbQKujzO2IK0a3?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/80000000146631f/1/59/-jVC_vsv3z9-IWvAg__o7YiqYZYm7Hge.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/5O2ZILsp6j9pJUO2ntPlQdlO6ZrlPxWM?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/80000000146646a/1/111/5TRrdf4Z4D_VU25FGZwJH-N5-cM4H3qF.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/gOHdt-BNnD-pVihrzAaaDK5RGphwoBLZ?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/80000000146658e/1/37/MuC4qwaj6j8B1exlHZZGm24Bva2g6wbX.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/MrYF3OXv2D881Pzl9k8VCCJZWIcMyak7?referrer=hlnk)

i fucked up the one that says kassandrawith the connections and handstyles

FIN one
07-15-2007, 09:14 AM
try to keep your letters the same thickness and size. and look at your 3d before you ink it, take a step back and see if it makes sense, cuz yours is a little off.the 3d should be the same thickness throughout the whole piece. also, i would save your markers for when you get better,just work on structure and flow. use bars to make letters.if you havent already, check out the new to graff thread.

whahappen?
07-15-2007, 11:08 AM
name change?
yea
and it probably the best flowing name ive had
reposting for like the 1000th time cause im a whore like that
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/4008/picture160cv1.jpg

sick only the 2nd one is decent, but concentrate less on fills and get solid letters down, with all proportions correct
mek i cant really see the letters

"echo
07-15-2007, 11:12 AM
first blackbook stuff, crit my shit, cuz i'm a toy

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs2007.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/taggerungs2001.jpg


Structure man, use simpler letters. Do block or bubble style letters first.


And to avoid double posting, here's another one I did last night. I think I totally fucked up the "K" though >_<

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0346.jpg

By the way, where is that tutorials thread? I looked all over and couldn't find it.

siZo
07-15-2007, 01:01 PM
Not sketched in a while so.. new black book aswell, its small but cool :p

Critz please??...

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb188/Ross-Mcleod/Picture022.jpg?t=1184522494

c.n.k
07-15-2007, 01:11 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/Q3.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/Q2.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/q1.jpg

sacwacko
07-15-2007, 01:21 PM
yes....amk-you rock.
sKeelo-nice,wut area you write?
f.r.a.t-nice but get a better flick.or scan.
sizo-work on simple stuff more.but ur dimensions are quite nice.
davo70-idk wut to say.
c.n.k.-dope as hell but bad crew name.but wut evers clever know wut i mean.
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/BIZ.jpg
crits and structer shiz.
it says biz.

FIN one
07-15-2007, 01:49 PM
calm down killer haha me might not seen it until after he posted or sumthin. i think u need to go way back and go simpler tho sacwacko.

cnk- i really like the charac but i think u should make it stand apart from the letters. like maybe a cool color scheme or something especially in the first one. i like the charac in that one the best but he blends in a lot with the letters

siZo
07-15-2007, 01:55 PM
Wow, fucking hell.. calm the fuck down.

Im not really feeling your b, looks alot like a k! Your Z looks like a 2 aswell, i know its not easy to make them look differant but they look very similar in your sketch.

Oh, and your post should be deleted, faggot.

FIN one
07-15-2007, 02:00 PM
i say go simpler loose the wierd extensions and try to keep the thickness the same throughout ur letters. id also recommend not coloring yet until u get good at structure and flow.

this was supposed to be for an exchanhe with sledgehammer but i havent heard from him so whatever. doesnt matter, its good practice. crits?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3307/stickers2005sh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump to give some people something good to look at:p

no i bumped it to let all the new people see what i mean by simple. just start with drawing letters as you see them on your keyboard, and when you get good at that, start to bend the bars and add a few things here and there.but stick with the simples first. ugh i hate saying that cuz its way better put in the new to graff thread but some people fail to look there for some reason.

edit: sizo and sac stop the bitchin at eachother. and sac, the point of being here is to develope a style, no one should have a style really when just starting. honestly, i like his more than urs.

siZo
07-15-2007, 02:05 PM
Grow up mate, i give you crits and you cant take it! Im a toy and i know.. but you will need to accept the fact that there is always room for improvement! Your just looking for someone to tell you your great.. Your better than me, i know but that doesnt mean i cant give you a negative crit! I bet you have said a film or something on tv is shit, but you couldnt really do better yourself, think about it!

C.n.k, i like it alot but id say your character is covering it up to much of the letters but its still really nice!

EDIT - Fin, thats really sweet.. ever bombed that?

drapes1125
07-15-2007, 02:12 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti015.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti017.jpg

Sumoe
07-15-2007, 02:41 PM
:eek:
*slaps in face*
:(

Pretty good c.n.k., but you need to really work on each individual letter, and maybe tone down on extensions.

Samp1e
07-15-2007, 03:01 PM
c.n.k -- lots of ugly extensions/addons on your letters, and I don't think the letters aren't that great. work your letter structure and that handy you have in the second pic. and in the case that you're gonna have so much going on in your pieces,might be easier on the eyes to throw some simple colors on there to give some of it definition. it looks flat with just black and white

edit: yeah what sume said, work the individual letters. massive potential, just need to refine it.

sacwacko - calm down man, you're flipping out over someone not giving you some feedback. it happens, oh well too bad. sometimes people just don't have anything to say/don't want to and that happens. sure there's nothing wrong with asking them to get some feedback, but at least be diplomatic about it instead of "omfg u faggot fucker gimme crits". as for your piece: there is nothing wrong with experimenting, but it looks like (as with most cases) that when someone is experimenting they throw all the simple shit they learned in structure and proportions out the window and just do something whack.

sizo -- keep working at your pace. I'd recommend trying to thin out the letters, make em less bulky.

fin one -- lol @ your character, nothing wrong with it just made me chuckle! real solid letters. keep at it.

drapes: try not thicken up your letters, and I guess what I'm trying to get at is to add some flow, some curves in there. hard angles are not so aesthetically appealing, curves and variation will make it more interesting.

sadly I just don't really have the patience or the continuity to work through an entire piece in a sitting anymore.
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5295/spa0066bk3.jpg

REAL..
07-15-2007, 03:52 PM
new 'future style' looks better in person really cant make stuff out on the pics but oh well i should draw bigger!!
from an angle to make shiz out
http://i18.tinypic.com/4qht5dc.jpg
the character...
http://i13.tinypic.com/67iv0qs.jpg
and the piece... :) all crits welcome i think this style is improving...
http://i13.tinypic.com/6g8xmh4.jpg

toned down style a bit and i hate the outline in crappy felt pen but oh well...

*Wing*
07-15-2007, 04:01 PM
I like the colours, but you need to fix that L and A...

FIN one
07-15-2007, 04:18 PM
drapes-i only saw 2 but im gonna tell you what ive been telling mostly everyone that has posted in hte last 2 days haha, go a little simpler,try to fatten up ur letters and keep them the same size and width not a bad start tho.

real- i kida like it keep it up but yes, watch the size of the letters and the L and A do look wierd
peace

sank.
07-15-2007, 05:02 PM
anyone decent wanna exchange?

whoarethereal evil
07-15-2007, 05:02 PM
few throwies i shuda coloured the circle on the top of the t but i cleverly 4got



http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9494/p1000090ij4al7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Apoc
07-15-2007, 05:32 PM
I really like the throwies bro.

Sadly I can't throw to save my life.

Drakula
07-15-2007, 05:43 PM
few throwies i shuda coloured the circle on the top of the t but i cleverly 4got



http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9494/p1000090ij4al7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Yes,cleverly *ahem*

Yeah I like them.The two on the right are the best and the handy is looking pretty dope aswell.

Captain
07-15-2007, 06:16 PM
real, work a bit more on structure, but I like it.

guy who did the throwies- I like 'em, but i can't really make letters out of 'em. problably just me.


So I found my loomis book lying around, i read some of it, and I've decided to learn to draw people. The first step is looking at a photo and drawing the person (not tracing, just drawing from reference for experience). Hopefully I'll have something to post later tonight, along with a bunch of throws or something.

Ps. I now have only my crayon to draw with. Wish me luck.

BLTZ
07-15-2007, 08:05 PM
ok lets try this again
Im thinking about adding a header(Welcome 2 Salem)
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/9/7/14/t_welcolm2salm_8ddf95c.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?srv=img33&img=/9/7/14/f_welcolm2salm_8ddf95c.jpg)
did that work
crits.

bump for a few more crits
it says BLTz and it is in pen

Keirs
07-15-2007, 08:10 PM
The throwy Is pretty dope dunno bout that lil circle on top da T tho
Bltz Id go simple letters like blocks and shit on ur keyboard Right now ur
just trying to hard(Everyone Does when they first start) start easy and slowly evolve

Sou - Mvd
07-15-2007, 08:15 PM
your letters are looking way to straight and jagged, try curving parts of them, not all bars need to be staright you're allowed to bend them.

just a repost and something new

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/6885/004hj6.jpg
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1495/009on3.jpg

ODonthesetrees
07-15-2007, 08:17 PM
in "the abominable dr. asma" your B's dont flow

Dr. Kazer
07-15-2007, 08:18 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/DSC01587.jpg

Keirs
07-15-2007, 08:23 PM
I agree the B's dont flow in it

Keirs
07-15-2007, 08:25 PM
Someone mind explaining how i upload picss?
If i did it then dont bother

Jroc1993
07-15-2007, 09:01 PM
yeah u uploaded it but go to http://www/imageshack.us and upload it there then copy the direct link to image, then click the little mountain thing and paste the link in there.
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1176/mornesketch2ph4.jpg
some simples im workin on
crits?

Samp1e
07-15-2007, 10:06 PM
^ bars should have same thickness/width for the most part, like in your M and onot like your O R and N.

F.R.A.T.
07-15-2007, 10:28 PM
morne try putting more curve in your letter
old pic never got any critz
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/11-07-07_1952.jpg

Chalk
07-15-2007, 10:37 PM
i know it's old but i just got a better pic of it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/c_purp2.jpg

edit*

Scare2
07-15-2007, 10:51 PM
kazer the bottom leg of the second k got a lil fat where it connects to the body of the letter. its a nice style though.

and chalk. wow. its really tight. the only thing i can think of is the charachter is a little static. but i love the texturing and the trunk.

Sou - Mvd
07-15-2007, 10:52 PM
That elephant is so fucking dope, the only thing I can say is that the throw looks a little flat perspective wise.

Sumoe
07-15-2007, 11:34 PM
I love your characters Chalk...keep it up bro, and "stay up".

lol

Phobia-oner
07-16-2007, 12:06 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte156.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/dekuflower/lafolderdelaarte155.jpg

Chalk
07-16-2007, 12:10 AM
verse not really feelin those letters. to be honest. careful with leaning your V to me it sort of reminds me of a simple J

Jroc1993
07-16-2007, 12:33 AM
yeah u uploaded it but go to http://www/imageshack.us and upload it there then copy the direct link to image, then click the little mountain thing and paste the link in there.
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1176/mornesketch2ph4.jpg
some simples im workin on
crits?
i have trouble keepin the bars the same size but i try fix it best i can
bump for a few more crits?

ScNk
07-16-2007, 01:03 AM
hey guys i'm new to the forum
just been admiring the work of everyone in the forums in the past few days and decided to give a few attempts. what yall think? crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/sanyo005.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/sanyo011.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/sanyo016.jpg

sketch3
07-16-2007, 01:05 AM
i say go admire the advice in the new to graff thread, cuss they all suck.
dont take that as an inslut, everybody sucked when they started

rayseone
07-16-2007, 01:07 AM
check the new to graff threadin the toy forums its a sticky, read all the stuff in there, use bars and stay simple. the throw i not all that bad on the first phot, just the s is a bit awkward

ScNk
07-16-2007, 01:14 AM
i say go admire the advice in the new to graff thread, cuss they all suck.
dont take that as an inslut, everybody sucked when they started

no offence taken, just wanted to know where i was at.. but thanks for bein honest i'll check it out


check the new to graff threadin the toy forums its a sticky, read all the stuff in there, use bars and stay simple. the throw i not all that bad on the first phot, just the s is a bit awkward

sweet as bro, will work on the s's

sketch3
07-16-2007, 01:16 AM
my advice to you would be use bars to construct simple letters until u got letter construction down, but ur probily reading this in the new to graff thread any way

rayseone
07-16-2007, 01:33 AM
SCNK - if you can see in my sketch, the bars that construct the letter, i did this to help you just if you dont understand which most people dont straight away, but they dont show up too good cuz my scanner is a peice of shit

chalk - that elephant is fucking freshh

crits? no r
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/3680/lastscanxd0.jpg

Samp1e
07-16-2007, 02:57 AM
scnk -- simplify, get your letter structure better

rayseone -- good lookin, don't quite like the topleft of the Y. I'm guessing its to fill negative space though?

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/3980/spa0067py3.jpg

*Wing*
07-16-2007, 03:02 AM
Nice start Sample, looking forward to see it finished!
rayse, simplify that extension on the Y and it's going to be dope

ScNk
07-16-2007, 04:22 AM
thx will make sure to keep it simple with the structure..

useful shit in that new to graffiti thread, never noticed that thread.
i'm likin ur style samp1e would be good to see the rest of it

sank.
07-16-2007, 06:00 AM
sample that a is fire. the top of the s is really awkard tho, try to make the top of the s as big as the bottom.

throw up in ive been workin on...

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0718.jpg

and some simples...

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0720.jpg

-ShAmEE-
07-16-2007, 06:01 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/Sw2.jpg

caffine
07-16-2007, 07:38 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u253/pleedude/0712072236.jpg

I need help with the letters...

drapes1125
07-16-2007, 07:39 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti019.jpg
crits please

sketch3
07-16-2007, 07:41 AM
New To Graff Thread

amk
07-16-2007, 09:06 AM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5295/spa0066bk3.jpg

dope lettering...like.." foreaaalziee "...i swear..very nice..
Gumdrop..unessary...stay on topic ..
shameee...looking ight spose...bout time you posted sumthing graffie..aha...sweet ism ..
JROC...you still at the simple stage...wow...i fort youd be wwaaaaayyy better...keeep em up thoo

FIN one
07-16-2007, 09:09 AM
looking really good sample

Drakula
07-16-2007, 01:36 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good231.jpg

Crits?

I'm having trouble thinking of anything original to put on my it like everyone told me to.

siZo
07-16-2007, 01:44 PM
Sample - Not much to say really, just keep it up :D

Crits Please?

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8223/picture023kq6.jpg

Sorry drak didnt see you - It looks really really good but maybe just sort out the letter positioning, make them more level?? other than that i think its ready for a colour fill etc.

ReBuilt
07-16-2007, 02:05 PM
Drak, been noticing your work. Getting a lot better, seeing lot's of improvement.

Keep it up. :)

I'll start posting my work here soon...

tonentink
07-16-2007, 02:10 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/923/koldwx2.jpg

something my homie haze did for me in 5 minutes !!!

aOt

vc wridahs !!!

FIN one
07-16-2007, 02:27 PM
toneentink-go with simples. y doesnt anyone notice the anount of times this advice is givin to other ppl?

drak- try making them not tilt and add some 3d to it i love it tho

sizo not bad just make it cleaner

Chalk
07-16-2007, 02:32 PM
drak it coule be something as simple as doing something with the 3d.

Mr Tasty
07-16-2007, 02:39 PM
drak i realy like it as always but i still hate the A...dosnt suit the rest...il try show u wat i mean abit later

amk
07-16-2007, 02:42 PM
DRAK..you seriosuly need tah make it unorignal man...its oing into a basic wildstyle...dont if yah want.just a recommendation mang..

REBuilt...welcome to BombingScience...hope to help you improve man..:)

krazzie_ammo
07-16-2007, 02:59 PM
tenentink - not really feeling that, keep its simple :)
sizo -not bad, just follow it up with a couple of letters that flow witth it
drak - nice, add some 3d.

heres a quick simple i did on the train with some new sharpies!
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7923/150pe1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hot at 2007-07-16

popshots
07-16-2007, 03:12 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4079/nermnasreq8.jpg
crits.... me and nasr
krazzieammo: sick shit u shouls do a diffrent color out line but it looks fune
drak: like it exept for the arrows comi off the end of the a and the r

rayseone
07-16-2007, 03:32 PM
drak - draw a line and then try to keep all the bottoms of the letters on that line cuz your pieces always get higher as they go

sizo - the bottom right leg is too fat, make it a bit thinner and it will look pretty good

gold - tell you home haze to not have stupid addons, ok for five minutes tho i guess, and dont have extensions going through the middle of the O

krazzie - dope simple, nothing else really to say.

popshots - your letters seem to lumpy or something, pick a theme and carry it through every letter, look at some of whappens throws to see what i mean, their is something that carrys through in each letter.

REAL..
07-16-2007, 03:38 PM
new 'future style' looks better in person really cant make stuff out on the pics but oh well i should draw bigger!!
from an angle to make shiz out
http://i18.tinypic.com/4qht5dc.jpg
the character...
http://i13.tinypic.com/67iv0qs.jpg
and the piece... :) all crits welcome i think this style is improving...
http://i13.tinypic.com/6g8xmh4.jpg

toned down style a bit and i hate the outline in crappy felt pen but oh well...

bump for crits still begining of new style needs work but idea is there :)

amk
07-16-2007, 03:42 PM
Yeah I want to I just have writers block today.I can't think of anything else to put in.

look at other writers original things they put in..sumthing really diffferent...like Revoks signature E...or Cali / LA writers signature styles...and Philly hands...just sumthing..that really seperates your shit..from the other shit that someone else has done man..your gonna be good...how old are you..?

REAL.-quit bumboin your sketches over and over....you shudnt even be thinking of new styles...you shud be thinking of no style at all and working basic..

rayseone
07-16-2007, 03:45 PM
real - i would say go a lil simpler, but dont forget about those sketches, come back to them in like a month or so of doing simples, then try the ideas then and they will look alot better, youve got some good potential becuz you have good coloring skills. when i say do simples though, dont mean like completely satraight letters, just do them the odd time, just like find structure, by slanting your letters different ways, bending bars here and there, also try to work on the sizing of your letters, they seem to get smaller as they go along. maybe draw 2 lines and try to keep your letters in between there.= like that kinda. and like amk says quit bumping juts do new ones.

FIN one
07-16-2007, 03:51 PM
krazzie-love it
something i started last night to test out these little kid markes i got,dont like them haha but its not finished yet ill post the product later but what does everyone think?
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/2568/bbandme007vu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kosher
07-16-2007, 04:46 PM
krazzie i like it alot man
fin that's gonna be sick when you're done

Bazer
07-16-2007, 04:56 PM
an Z i made in the car on my way to mexico...
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/CIMG6144.jpg

siZo
07-16-2007, 04:58 PM
Krazzie.. That looks smart as mate!

Pop, Not bad but im not sure on you m, maybe miss out the bump on the top left??

Real.. Just not feeling it.. your would be better if you changed the right leg, but dont like the rest, sorry.

Fin - Thats looking good, love those colours!!!

Chalk - surely you do not need to post here, your definetly not a toy! :D nice as fuck!!

Baze - I like it but what is that paper all about ?? :D

Crits please...

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2113/picture025td1.jpg

kosher
07-16-2007, 05:03 PM
i like it sizo

Drakula
07-16-2007, 05:06 PM
Fin:The first letter,the character and the bubbles look really dope but the other side of the character needs work.I can't read it and it doesn't make sense.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good232.jpg

Just trying out new things with the bubbles.Wish I had more room for the K.

kosher
07-16-2007, 05:12 PM
the other letter is an "s" and i'm assuming it's supposed to read "bos"

molotow_15
07-16-2007, 05:14 PM
work on the arrows they lack flow and look immature

the letters are also bulker than some others..
it looks wrong

work on it
then repost

-ShAmEE-
07-16-2007, 05:52 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good231.jpg

Crits?

I'm having trouble thinking of anything original to put on my it like everyone told me to.

err mate..dont worrie about tryin to make it orginal yet, still keep messing around with them letters. and learning the stucture of them letters. then when you do this then u find ur style, cuz u will start remaking the letter to ur fancey so in the end u killin one bird with two stones.

F.R.A.T.
07-16-2007, 06:05 PM
drak start trying extensions and wat not
cause skeelo to me to
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/16-07-07_1902.jpghttp://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/16-07-07_1859.jpg

-ShAmEE-
07-16-2007, 06:13 PM
umm..first one is okay...secound i like. but please take out the arrows.

Scare2
07-16-2007, 07:06 PM
drak im lovin the stuff ur doin. one thing i was thinking is an abstract 3D style might go nicely with the letters.

glass
07-16-2007, 07:53 PM
frat: i like the second one, that E (although generic) is done well. keep it up and maybe a few less arrows.

yeah so most of you know i can do better than this so dont hold it against me, just messing with a new style which i need to work more with the individual letters. anyhoo, crits?

http://i11.tinypic.com/4p9hlxe.jpg
^didnt know what to do with the space that was under the A so i extended the S, probly should have re done the A

http://i17.tinypic.com/6c5xvmr.jpg
^thought of this sitting at the computer, i think its in a good direction

FIN one
07-16-2007, 08:00 PM
i like the g and the a the most

Mr Tasty
07-16-2007, 08:24 PM
tryin something new out...uninished S
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/newt.jpg
worth tryin to develop this style?
i like the A most

emel
07-16-2007, 08:59 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good231.jpg

Crits?

I'm having trouble thinking of anything original to put on my it like everyone told me to.


it looks dope as it is
not diggin the arrows though, in my opinino i think you should start sketchin other shit and not get caught up in one piece and not be able to try dif "styles"

glass
07-16-2007, 10:26 PM
taste: pretty neat stuff dude, i'd like to see it again if you clean it up more though

back to my decent solid style, working on painting it too. crits?
http://i9.tinypic.com/5xe9yl3.jpg

ScNk
07-16-2007, 10:45 PM
glass, like the style but letters look over extended imo

Chalk
07-16-2007, 11:26 PM
clean up your lines to make the edges more sharp it's hard to see the actual shape of your letters with all the sketchy stuff still there.

IwriteNASR
07-17-2007, 12:16 AM
drak- i like it but not a big fan of those arrows..and i agree with emel experiment more cause thats a solid style u got down
glass-nice but the line in the middle of the a is weird looking try making it straight
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/2148/nnnnnoq3.jpg
tryin out new styles crits...

Samp1e
07-17-2007, 12:24 AM
this isn't directed explicitly at you nasr but on the large scale, people need to stop "trying out new styles" and just get something simple and solid down under their belt. learning the basics will make building and developing your style(s) will become more natural, things will just kinda fall into place.

as for your piece, it'll be much more aesthetically appealing if you have curves complimenting your hard angles and straight sections of your letters. it is real difficult to make hard, angular letters have flow and curves look sexay.

Nem
07-17-2007, 05:02 AM
nasr, it just looks really blocky to me.

drak, youve got K's down to a science my friend. XD

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabsonelinerpiece.jpg

dont ask...

Samp1e
07-17-2007, 05:45 AM
done enough for me
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1517/spa0068ka1.jpg