Blackbooks

[sketch3]

id luv to see sumtin completly clean from u, i know ur style is all skratchy and grimey but i wanna see u just rock i clean felt tip hollow once...pweese for mee. btw ur t is either to lil or just hidden

[Roolete]

crap, there are no crits on the last two pages

gumdrop- lose the extensions and make ur letters the same size
amk- i like it, maybe change up the posture?
amber- go simpler, make it more readable
amk again- i like this, colors are great
fin- your letters arent really the same style
stinky- outline it in black?
trik- make your I bigger
amk for the third time - like this a lot, weird shirt though
emak- love your style, like the second pic the best
ninja- your throw is good, work on the piecing
taste- hot hot hot, i dont thnk the t and e look the same at all..
mants- maybe straighten the letters up a bit?
tonentink- good improvement
tasty again- liked the other one better

crits? on a plane
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0132.jpg

[REAL..]

new style (i know it needs work) pens at my mates house so sketch only will do a final with fill im stickin with this style crits appreciated....
http://i11.tinypic.com/63d1e1s.jpg

[fish]

Lose some of the pointless addons man and that should look aite. The structure looks good tho...
Here some of my shit...

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6264/dsc00006be0.jpg

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9983/img4136zo1.jpg

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/6016/llooondonap8.jpg

[sketch3]

good to see sum one reppin ldn,

on the first one i would make the main part of ur i less long, and fill it with a stretched dot.. if u get wat i mean, if not ill edit it in ms paint

[Casa45]

http://i11.tinypic.com/63d1e1s.jpg


I like it, just try to make the letters all the same size...


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/taste-2.jpg


This could be SO hot... keep it up bro...

[sketch3]

Sorry man, dunno what you mean :S...

Any crits on structure and stuf..
do this it looks better
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2994/fisheu1.jpg

[MaNtS]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/more1.jpg

[fish]

Cheers Sketch...

And Mants whats with all this no hole stuff lately ??

The M and E are nice but I think the O is too square and the R needs some work...
Keep it up with those simples man...

[MaNtS]

sometimes in sketching, less is more,

a character without eyes can make it more of a character just by not having eyes,

[amk]

Casa..i love you man..:)...seriosuly...i just seriosuly wanna get on with you...isit too much to ask ?..

Degatory...thanks dudeeee..but underage sex is a crime :(....maybe when i turn 16 ajajjaa

Mants illin yesss..

just cum up with an R..:O..im pretty stoked as i aint been able to do them for ages...ill have a full sketch up saying AMKRAWR soon..

love and peace. Amkawww

[NAIK_SHOES]

2 sketch
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4536/ccf2007072100000lc2.th.jpg (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007072100000lc2.jpg)
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/1610/ccf2007071900000rp0.th.jpg (http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007071900000rp0.jpg)

i suck i know..
comments please...
i know that my pens are cheap..i paid 2$ for 12:(

[Captain]

Degatory...thanks dudeeee..but underage sex is a crime :(....maybe when i turn 16 ajajjaa


Move to hawaii. legal at 13 if I remember.

Anyway, more, i'd say that the no-hole look just isn't working that well. sorry man, it looks kinda unfinished.

[amk]

thats coz it aint finished man ahah i gotta put in the peice heheheh :P..13 damn..

peace.

RFI...i aint callng yah out..but iv never seen your shit..could you post some or summet ? :)

[kurug3n]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/more1.jpg

Dont like the O but that R is sick

[jersOneTIC]

just got new markers:eek:
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4851/13003xp7.jpg

[-Sinn-]

Jers likin the 3-D but not such a fan of the letter structure might wanna go simpler just a lil
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/keila.jpg
crits?

[Captain]

Jers, it looks like you kinda got flow, but not the structure. work on that and it'll be tight.

Sinn, it'd be better with brighter colors, but maybe that's just me.

I found a [crappy] camera so I finally got to take some flicks.

letters were just fucking around-
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/7523/crayonstylefc0.jpg

bunk, but a good five minutes nonetheless:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/812/nokiapennietk9.jpg

and the faces, which are really fucking hard to draw in crayon:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6646/girlut0.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/613/guyts9.jpg

[emokid]

jers, dont like them letters much, need more definition

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6676.jpg

this thread sucks of late. allow me to contribute the same old shit.

[kurug3n]

Jers likin the 3-D but not such a fan of the letter structure might wanna go simpler just a lil
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/keila.jpg
crits?

the S needs a little work but other than that its all good

[SAEK]

the E and S in res look tight

[SAEK]

http://i17.tinypic.com/688ssc4.jpg

this is a current piece im workin on. been sketchin for about a little over a year now and im just wonderin if im ready to go out and paint

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4

[Captain]

http://i17.tinypic.com/688ssc4.jpg

this is a current piece im workin on. been sketchin for about a little over a year now and im just wonderin if im ready to go out and paint

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=688ssc4


i'd say to work on flow more, and when you paint, do some chill spots first to make sure you can control the can.

exhale, i don't think anyone really gives a shit anymore if it's a bite unless the guy's really trying to pass himself off as the original artist. Post crits man.

[rayseone]

captain - good faces but the letters need work

amdre - pretty good but wokr on flow, tery and make it a bit smoother, not neccesarily your letters, although they need to be smoother in my eyes, by the peice in general looks kinda jagged

pear - ill, but your R seems a lil smaller just kida throws the peice of a bit

i could use some crits before i ink this, and what can i do to fill up the space between the Y and A

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8921/lastscanmi4.jpg

[Mr Tasty]

seyar thats def dope...try addin a 3d..maybe the gap wont look so empty then

[SAEK]

yeah but how do i get flow? i still dont understand. and the names amore

[Bazer]

this is what being lazy does to you guys....

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Jul_22_001.jpg

i think i started this one a few days ago and i just got to the A.. im one lazy little sexy bitch..

[rayseone]

yeah but how do i get flow? i still dont understand. and the names amore


make all the letters lean one way/make a bar repetitive in each letter, check the new to graff thread, amk did a decent tutorial on flow. just try to keep a bar repetitive throughout the letter.

baze i think the super long extension of of the B through the A kills it, that a alone is pretty nice tho

[westsida]

sryar where the 07 is change that to 20 then put 07 in the space

[..TwoShameFull..]

http://www.vandalsquad.com//graffitiView.php?id=1542860&returnpage=archiveView

uuuuuuughhhh

first try at digi shit... wack



2shae

[amk]

Baze...lukin aight man..
Syaer...dooopeeeeeeeeee

work in progress..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tytr.jpg

first R in ages....i havent attempted an R since like...March 2006..ahah

[..TwoShameFull..]

that R is dope.. the best of those letters.. the thing were the letters meet tho... its just ugly. just have it normal, the a is real nice too, the K needs work but IMO u shud ditch dat M blud

[amk]

first [ost in 4 hours...wow.
this thread is going down hill..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ghrhrt.jpg

filled in..
peace.

[sketch3]

nice amk
SEYAR im feelin that, lose the extention on the r tho

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3675/kilaia3.jpg

for a battle with wing that never happened. crits?

[Apoc]

amk I don't really dig that style but you did a decent job.

heres some freestyle shit I did at 4 in the morning-

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/scan0005.jpg

[ninja_303_763]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/4.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

first [ost in 4 hours...wow.
this thread is going down hill..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ghrhrt.jpg

filled in..
peace.

I really like the sketchy orange heart fill in the yellow letters. It's real fresh. The handyrock is excellant too. Way to evolve. One thing I would suggest just to try out and see how you like it is to thicken your outline so your letters pop more. You could still rock the 3-d. I don't, cuzz I just like how the thick outline pops my letters, but I think it would really do alot for most of your sketches. It would make your stuff so much more bold. Try it once and tell me if you like it.
Example....
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7938/im000790nr4.jpg

[sketch3]

nice amk
SEYAR im feelin that, lose the extention on the r tho

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3675/kilaia3.jpg

for a battle with wing that never happened. crits?


bumpski bottom of page

[Stinky]

Ehhh its alright try to thicken your lines a bit and know for some more crap from the kitchen.
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4626/scan0010vs4.jpg

[Bazer]

I really like the sketchy orange heart fill in the yellow letters. It's real fresh. The handyrock is excellant too. Way to evolve. One thing I would suggest just to try out and see how you like it is to thicken your outline so your letters pop more. You could still rock the 3-d. I don't, cuzz I just like how the thick outline pops my letters, but I think it would really do alot for most of your sketches. It would make your stuff so much more bold. Try it once and tell me if you like it.
Example....
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7938/im000790nr4.jpg

hehe.. i bit that from u back when i did simples. hehe... been rockin it ever since..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0923.jpg

[trashhh]

first [ost in 4 hours...wow.
this thread is going down hill..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ghrhrt.jpg

filled in..
peace.

I think the extensions on the A look a bit too straight, and work on the cracks a bit.. apart from that its lookin nice, nicely coloured as always too

[amk]

whao Thanks Cezr and Trash..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/frrrrr.jpg

first throw in awhile..

[-Sinn-]

Jers likin the 3-D but not such a fan of the letter structure might wanna go simpler just a lil
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/keila.jpg
crits?
bumpity bump bump bump
Amk - the throws pretty good but that handy is wack

[Chalk]

amk i really like that throw. thinken your outlines like cezr was saying slap a forcefield on that. and you are golden.

[amk]

so...forcefeild on my throws...thicker outline on my peices..and im golden..?..dope

[Captain]

amk the throw is bitchin'. And do try the thick outline like cezr said, i used to do it all the time and loved it. Oh, and try progressing your flow even more. Can't have too much flow.




I found a [crappy] camera so I finally got to take some flicks.

letters were just fucking around-
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/7523/crayonstylefc0.jpg

bunk, but a good five minutes nonetheless:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/812/nokiapennietk9.jpg

and the faces, which are really fucking hard to draw in crayon:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6646/girlut0.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/613/guyts9.jpg
bump because the other bump got deleted.

[Clowney-Cakes]

ok..now ran out of room in my black book, but did get some new kicks...
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1553/box001sv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with GR-D370 (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=GR-D370&make=JVC) at 2007-07-22

[Davo70]

quality people captain. Clowney Cakes, only okay, maybuh better than i can do. i don't really know.

[amk]

Elka..keep em up man....maybe lose the lil tabs...but its aight for a simple..
Captain..dope shit man...the faces are whao..

W.I.P

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ggrere.jpg

so i spent the last 30 mins fuckign with extensions..and i just aint feeling em at all...i hate extensions all together..infact i aint liked wild since i got doing this style...so its the simple couple - o - addon ish from now on and rocking them crazy fills..

peace.

[jersOneTIC]

did this yesterday...
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/3236/13rs3.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

E looks illin..nice. T needs work...they are one of the most difficult letter to flow, due to structure..well that what i think.

[whahappen?]

Baze...lukin aight man..
Syaer...dooopeeeeeeeeee

work in progress..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tytr.jpg

first R in ages....i havent attempted an R since like...March 2006..ahah
hahaha this is soo soo dope man
idk if i like the r's leg tumors or not though
and your throw is dope paint it

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sweet4-1.jpg

throwie to piece.

[sketch3]

ue s look like a b and ur t looks like an f, unless u changed ur name to beef

[D E M O]

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9775/demo2mi3.jpg

[Casa45]

What happened to all the somewhat decent toys???

[SAEK]

demo that shit looks sick

[Mr Tasty]

new style im workin on...sry looks abit messy...still workin on it
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/taste-2.jpg

tonentink...big improvment...but make the A abit fatter on the new one...the A is the only weak letter
bump for crits if pos

[clevername]

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/6223/picture001uw4.jpg blah

[Drakula]

mr tasty-I like it but as always it's really sketchy,try and do a solid piece with some colour.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good240.jpg

Trying some new styleee.

[Sou - Mvd]

R is looking a little skinny in some places and you have to work on getting your first two letters to flow with your last two still but I like the amount of addons you have on this piece, it still might be to many but it's not over the top. It's an improvement.

[emel]

mr tasty-I like it but as always it's really sketchy,try and do a solid piece with some colour.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good240.jpg

Trying some new styleee.
drak, changing style isnt ONLY about switching up extensions.... when i look at this it still reminds me of your other ones, which is the SAME style just a few changed doodads
start OVER with new letters and your style will be different

[Dinan 3er]

drakula I dont like the curly on the r. but other than that it looks nice.
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/dank.jpg

[emel]

can someone tell me how to put quote shit in my sig cause that "curly" comment was funny as hell

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

yo whathappen that sig is fuckin nice lol

demo- i like those colors and the piece is sick
taste- i like the piece but i cant really see alot of it but idk try investing in a better scanner idk
clevername- i like the simples keep fucken wit em
drak i like your style alot but that r isnt cutting is get rid of the swirly thing

iight so here two new piece wat cha think
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs071.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs070.jpg

[clevername]

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/6223/picture001uw4.jpg blah
hate being on the end of a page

[Blackeyed_Pea]

Dinan chill with that, go to the new to graff thread, read up on all the tutorials and trying putting together something after that

[Bazer]

What happened to all the somewhat decent toys???

what happened to you posting work? =(

[BORG]

^^^hahaha
went through a bad case of writers block and after workin some alphabets i came up with cile1, lemme know what u think
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3850/june17001qb0.jpg

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4697/june17002yf9.jpg

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/482/june17003sd3.jpg
^^messin with letter width and a couple extensions

[Vice]

so why did you try writing cile1? either way all of it is great. loving the kareks. and pretty much i lover all of that stuff.
also i always like your simples.

[BORG]

^^i just liked how the letters lay together, has a good flow for my style, and i'm a freight whore, so those low letters will be quick n easy to spray

[Captain]

mother fuck does anybody post crits anymore? If you post a fucking image and you want fucking feedback, crit the people above you goddamnit. I've been without a camera for a month, posting crits and advice the whole damn time, and the one time i post an image it gets overlooked by all but amk. Jesus christ man. It's like when the year turned this board went straight to hell.

[BORG]

sorry captain, u know i love ur shit, it just wasn't on this page and i usually don't go back and look unless i'm mega bored

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

thank u captain took the words right out my mouth wheres sky wen you need him

[BORG]

captain- on the 1st piece, ur letters are movin around too much, secon one, work on the N, characters are dope

[AnteUp]

borg...thats beautiful bro

[Dusk07]

not gettin alot of crits in the throwie areas so thought i would try here...new du throw...

critss=D
http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/18558/2000921355775245875_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000921355775245875)

[AnteUp]

i think u shud get rid of the little drop on the side, to generic, it lukks gud but wat tha fuck do i kno about throws? lol

p.s borg i would love to see you in tha click (closed casket) hit me up in pms

[Sou - Mvd]

http://aycu39.webshots.com/image/18558/2000921355775245875_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000921355775245875)

Work on your letter structure, using bars still applies to throws, just in a different way.

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/9249/010ty0.jpg
weak s and m I know, so no need to critique those but anything else is welcome.

[Nem]

dusk, nice attempt at flow, but your structure leaves something to be desired. dumb that throw down just a little bit, try some flow again, and see what happens.

sou, beautiful colors. and that style is sick. but it would look nicer if the letters were spread out just a tad more. only a tad though.

borg, the arm in that one sticker looks pretty deformed, or maybe the shading doesn't really show the arms position enough. definitely keep it up with that sticker on the right though, i love it. and those are pretty original extensions. dont know if they're well placed or not, not experienced enough to say. but keep it up.

gumdrop, the S is decent, work on it. W is pretty bad, i would suggest starting all over with it. also try a new E. and on the right leg of the R, put that extension on the other side. and cleaner lines just come with practice. sorry, but i say scrap the nokia piece. =/

dank, dont really know what to say other than keep tweakin it. the top N is alright. just alright though.

drak, nice curly. lol.


first sober sketch in a while. if this is decent, i have an excuse to stop smoking. heh.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scb.jpg

[clevername]

dusk - theres an idea there, just keep working at that throw, just keep filling page after page with em, it'll start to look better, lose the little bumps and the swoop thing for now

gumdrop - don't worry about fills or shadow, just do simples, use bars whenever you can, everything should look like it goes together, nothing should be out of place or disproportioned

nem - simples simples simples, use bars, keep everything the same size

everyone else - looking dope

I dunno I don't really think I'm good enough to critique anyone but whatever

anyone have any help for me on the sketch I posted earlier? its a few posts up

[Nem]

nem - simples simples simples, use bars, keep everything the same size



is that code for it sucks?

and i did use bars. albeit shitty ones. but bars nonetheless.

[SAEK]

http://i12.tinypic.com/5x5g48x.jpg

heres another one im workin on. i messed up on the O and R

[ninja_303_763]

THROW SOME SHINE ON THAT HOE!!lol

[silentchaos14]

workin on my entry for the battle
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9408/nokiasketchiq4.jpg
i need to fix my K and I but other then that i think its lookin alright
crits?
lol my foot made it into that pic

[ScNk]

nice foot lol
work on evening it out bro, looks winky wonky where the I and A are connected, they seem to trail off, make all the joins look like the 'N and O' resize the top of the N and O widen em a bit, and yeh work on the K
i should try that battle

[SAEK]

i dont like how the middle of the N is crooked but yeh thats just me. but everything looks good other than the K but thats already covered

[d_g]

where are the mods at too...we need to keep this place flowing pic wise...and if noone aint deleting one post crits and bullshit like that it aint gonna happen..

I'm here every spare minute I got. I'm the only active mod in the toy forum at the moment because everyone else is somewhere else.

I can't make people post pics.

I can delete one crit posts but I'm not going to. Why? Because if I did that no one would be getting any crits at all, and sometimes they're good crits, crits that wouldn't be there if I deleted them.

And seriously on the one crit post thing? Get off your fucking high horse mate. 90% of the posts I see from you are:

"Blah blah blah, killing it, dope, what kind of shoes are those - bullshit chat"

Then followed up by usually only one crit or pic so I don't delete your post.

[KASE2]

DEMO - that shit iz sav. stay up

DRAKULA - it lookz good, if nething i wuld jus say get rid of the swirly thing on the "r" leg

CLEVERNAME - I can't tell wheter ur's sez PACE or PAGE either way, i like it

[The_Sheep]

make all the letters lean one way/make a bar repetitive in each letter, check the new to graff thread, amk did a decent tutorial on flow. just try to keep a bar repetitive throughout the letter.

baze i think the super long extension of of the B through the A kills it, that a alone is pretty nice tho

wtf no, that aint what flow is, flow is when your letters written out together take on a nice shape and the letters compliment eachother, not that repetitive shit amk passes off as "Flow"

Swer- Dont do that two letters in one bs, sketch each letter individually, dont do fills yet either man, work on outlines for now and no extensions either actually, just work on letters. As for the nokia piece, please color in the lines, its not that hard, and the bar thicknesses are inconsistent and dont look nice, try to have the thickness somewhat even for now, also try to use a pencil or something for your sketches, and if you do use marker use quicker steadier strokes, cause the piece doesnt look very clean

Page- Nice nothing wrong with it really, if i had to pick something i would say the little thing on the G looks off but its barely noticable, nice man

Cileone- Im sorry to say but those extensions are kind of crappy looking, to me extensions are supposed to be used only to add to the geometry of the piece, that shit just dont look good man, the letters are hot though, nice karaks too kinda wrinkly though

Dusk- Its kind of bad man, im not feeling those little nipples either, and drop shadows should not overlap onto the piece, i say ditch this style as it doesnt seem to have potential

Sou MVD- Your stuff is always original so props on that, not sure what it says but the first letter seems to overlap the second a tad too much, other than that it sexy as hell

Nem- Nothing really wrong with it its just boring as hell and lacks flow, try and be more creative with your style

Amore- Reminds me of Amkahs shit, looks decent though, not much to crit just get workin on some new ish

As a general crit to all, i think peeps should stop posting their name all the time, work on some other letters anyone can make their piece flow after 1000 redos of the same tired letters, we are toys after all, we need to develop all parts of our writing

[opte one]

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7897/dsc00344gu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with W810i (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=W810i&make=Sony+Ericsson)
messin bout wit a new style
crits plzzz ???

[Vice]

the only thing i can say is dont go with that style... in fact, dont go with any style other than simples or blocks for a few months. and also if you didnt read the post with the big mother fuck at the beginning of it then read it cause it says give crits before you get crits so yeah. im being friendly.

[Drakula]

Silentchaos-Don't bend your letters at all yet.Just keep them as simple as possible.

Opte-what vice said

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good242.jpg

No more curly!

[opte one]

thanx for the crits.an drak likin itt.

[Blackeyed_Pea]

Its coming along nice drak its good to see ur taking crits, just dont make your R bend so much cause it seems the rest of the letters are straight.

[near]

drak, looks ok cept the top part of the r the "circle" or w/e or maybe its the leg i cant really tell...it kinda looks like an awkward 'A'...your A is nice tho, also maybe try to find something else to do instead of arrows because on their own like that they stand out and look kinda forced in...umm next step id say is play with the R and try to close up some space between letters, your A to K is nice and tight as is the D to R i suppose but the gaps towards the tops of the letters kill the flow a little bit....maybe space the K out more or something i dunno...its a slight spacing issue i think...also the bottoms of your letters move up slightly as the piece progresses...not sure if u care...

i check this forum all the time i just dont say stuff alot of the time :)

[2KoS]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Scan10003-1.jpg

excludin the two circles in the o as u can see its a ONE-LINER.

and excuse the sketchy shadowin lul, couldnt be fucked with it there and then.:cool:

[REAL..]

nice one liner 2kos...
heres the finished piece i only have a few colours still had to make do with 99p pens also xD
http://i11.tinypic.com/6frzimc.jpg

[AT!]

Kinda new any crits
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/3222/at1bh2.jpg
fuck the yellow bits on that 1
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/7183/at2bj0.jpg
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3227/at3ka9.jpg
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/1838/atlogoqf5.jpg

[ninja_303_763]

ur "t" on the third one looks like a "y".

[ninja_303_763]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5002.jpg

just somethin outa the norm. crits??

[REAL..]

nice and simple try and put the letters closer together and nice choice of colours...

[Blackeyed_Pea]

nice one liner 2kos...
heres the finished piece i only have a few colours still had to make do with 99p pens also xD
http://i11.tinypic.com/6frzimc.jpg

Thats some dope shit mang

[Sumoe]

Aight...I'ma be here more to help out d_g in here now. No chit-chat and if you don't post some crits with your work, you should.

Post crits you little fuckers...

Real-Pretty solid letters, chill with the extensions for now. You should use some, but less than you have now.

[WhiskeyTango]

Just keep practicing. Practice makes you perfect.(or atleast a little better)

[Dinan 3er]

Dinan chill with that, go to the new to graff thread, read up on all the tutorials and trying putting together something after that
Its really that bad huh.
I thought it was coming along nicely for a simple throw.

[KASE2]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/burner.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/throwiemulti.jpg
jus sum throwies, sloppy i kno i was half asleep crits por favor

[ninja_303_763]

make tha "k" look like a "k". take that thinkg off tha"a". and tha "S" is too skinny ant the end. the "E" is iight.

[amk]

Aight...I'ma be here more to help out d_g in here now. No chit-chat and if you don't post some crits with your work, you should.

Post crits you little fuckers...

Real-Pretty solid letters, chill with the extensions for now. You should use some, but less than you have now.

Word.

right..who gave crits...

Real...lookin aight compared to your last one...niceism..maybe tone the extensions down a tad....coz there is alot there....and dont waste your pens just yet...wait till yah rocking them funkay letters

Drak...sick...got a old skool London feel to it....dope shiss

* update update update *

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tthrhth.jpg


i added thr RABBIT to make it look cute...coz it says Amkaw..ahah..Aaaw..how cute..lmao !

[SAEK]

yeh the second one looks alright just take off that thing on the A

[SAEK]

amk i like how u make everything look hella smooth

[-GEKS-]

amk- thats really cool- dont really like the rabbit in there tho, doesnt really match the style of the rest of it, bt maybe yoo had yoor own reason to insert that. w/e. dope

kase- not feelin it, dont really hav a lot to say, keep workin on it

real- dope, maybe less extensions


workin on a new name, i jst cant stand my g, and my e isnt that great either. so im gonna start writin sank or rank.
throwies
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1331.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1330.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1333.jpg

[moer]

rank- the R the N and the K all flow but work on ur A

[revolt92]

Someone on this forum already write sank i believe

but good nonetheless

[moer]

emel- the N is a lil wack but the fill is dope as fuck

[Drakula]

I like the throwie Rank more than the sank.keep rank and change your sig.

[REAL..]

cheers for the crits everyone im glad its better than last time and yeh im new to that style and it needs practice and toning down but i think its improving... what does everyone think about no extensions at the bottom i think that would look better...?? cheers again :) peace oh and whoever did the lrg and nike thing looking fresh theres a nice style there...

[Vice]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00418.jpg
yes... the k is somewhat inspired by geks k. ive been having trouble witht that letter. im not sure about my T.

crits....
GEKS i think i like the S more than the R. in other words i mean go with sank not rank.
amk i like it all except for the last letter. no matter what i do i cant figure out what it is. is it an O? is it a W? what is it?
kase get rid of the nose on the k and get rid of the elephant trunk on the A other thank that its good.
ninja if thats supposed to say s8en then its good. pretty clean.

edit: and i do see that the bottom leg on the k is too skinny.

[The_Sheep]

Vice- Look at the thickness of your bars, look at your T, then look at your K, see the difference? The K looks anorexic, so does the A bar, redo it with consistent thickness and try see if that looks better

Geks- You have the right idea, just keep going, but the thing is you need to make your shit look cleaner, to do this simply trace your piece but real dark and use clean strokes instead of small short choppy ones

Amk- Like the background and all, real clean but i think its time you wrote something other than your own name

Real- To me it seems overdone, like a really well done ugly piece? Idk looks a bit grimey for my tastes but others like it so its good, not one of those pieces i can crit since theres not much wrong with it, its just not for me i guess

[sex without condoms]

throwbacks.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00039.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00033.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0527072327a.jpg
and just for enjoyment here's a dolphin hugging a teddy bear.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1207062013.jpg

[Derogatory9o5]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jul_23_002.jpg

....

......

Really digging i'd like to see a some colaa

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I'd make the vertical bar on the h a little shorter or maybe make the T a little taller. anyways, I like it.

heres mine: Its a crappy photohttp://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3528/riskgraf003tp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sex without condoms]

actually amkah! you still owe me an exchange from like back mad months ago

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010023-1.jpg

[amk]

oh shit...my bad...:O :O :O ... umm ... ill do you a magethon one to say sorry ahaha..shit i completkey forgot...

Thisone...i was thinking..the round T dont flow..then you went and changed it..wierd...did you e-read my mind..shits dope man.. !

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1965/cytograff003vn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3930/cytograff002ew8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3756/cytograff001jm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/1271/cytograffy004nz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bastardo]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3447/picture168xw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6524/picture146tl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/293/picture133zr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Brain Deadizzle
Mers
2007


Cyto on the last one dont make the letters all match up exactly, take the lil wiggly bit off the T and make the Y's wiggly bit go the other way 2 make it look like a Y!
(:

[raytone]

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/raytone/pieces011.jpg

i´m just beginnig its my second day writing but any critiques are good

[Drakula]

Bastardo you belong in the big boys thread man.

This, I love your username!And it's a dope sketch aswell.All I can say is improve the right leg of the H a little more,lose the curly bit so it fits in more.And don't put that line of the S through the I,it just looks odd.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good244.jpg

Aaaaarrrghh my K doesn't fit in.

[amk]

try un guess who Vote For This One is...

nice Drak...i think the R is abit wee too tall tho...and the K bottom bars dont really floooow....iono...still aigghhtttttt

[HadeP]

quit hatin on the H, its dope the way it is :)
if the the straight piece was bigger, it would look fucked.
it has mad flow the way it is

[trim]

mers- mad fresh lovin the throws wanna exchange? i write cris
drak- great flow in ur letters
this- make every letter about the same hight and width and it will look better

[Bazer]

sex what happend to the A? haha :D

there, i added some 3d.. im done.. have no color so im done.. :(
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jul_23_002-1.jpg

shit i just noticed i messed up a little..

nice but how about some 3d on the period? :)

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Jul_23_004.jpg

the end.........? lol... i gotta do a few things to it still..

[sex without condoms]

the E seems a little too skinny compared to the B A and Z

[SAEK]

drak the k looks smaller than all the letters to me

[sex without condoms]

an old ass piece for knews

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/myknew.jpg

[Chulo]

vote, im feelin that except for the 'i' and the 's'
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/neam-1.jpg

[Captain]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3447/picture168xw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6524/picture146tl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/293/picture133zr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Brain Deadizzle
Mers
2007


Cyto on the last one dont make the letters all match up exactly, take the lil wiggly bit off the T and make the Y's wiggly bit go the other way 2 make it look like a Y!
(:

been fucking long enough since you were here man, that shit's blazin.

chulo-don't sketch the shit, do complete lines.


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/Jul_23_002-1.jpgI've got my doubts about that saying jhis, so the thing to remember with t's is not to put an extension there if it's gonna look like a 'j'. And it usually does. t's are a bitch. otherwise it's kinda cool.

drak, try something for me, use fewer extensions, and try and flow everything from the basic letters to the little addons and

raytone, start fresh and checkout the new to graff thread. and don't bite anything from there, we'll notice.

cyto, do more like the bottom one, and less like 'risk'

war, work more on bar flow, see the line comment to chulo, and i'd suggest a name change (every sixth grader that's into graff thinks of 'war' at sometime) but do what you want.

NEW SIG!!!!

[raytone]

captain thats damn good u write very good

[emel]

drak.... dude listen to what people have been saying, do a different style, lost all those arrows and extensions, your doing the same thing over and over stop doing that it pisses me off
its like posting the same thing every 5 hours and changing one or two small parts of your letters.seriously!

[Chalk]

for a skate park i'll be painting. quick sketch of maybe some simples. i am have spacing issues, might bust out my tracing paper later to space it out better. over alli feel OK. about it...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreet1.jpg

bastardo - sick miss seeing your stuff.

chulo - not bad. stick with straight bars before you go and bend them. concentrate on keeping your bars all the same witdh with clean straight lines.

Sex WC - your K and E don't look like themselves...

Baze. - lookin like fire. though that fork extension on the top left side of your B has gotta go.

Drak - i would say lose the arrows. for now. push your letters closer together, and open your D a little more.

Raytone - simples, plain and simple

Cyto - please resize your images. and your I isn't really flowing with your letters. extend the top and bottom to make it more tradional might help it out a bit.

Vote. me likey. A lot. ink and color it please.

[moer]

ive been sketchin for bout 6 months now, i know im not ready to go out wit paint yet, still tryin but tell me wat u think, and dnt look at all the drawing on the side jus focus on the peice

http://i18.tinypic.com/4qgaoux.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/53tkf8i.jpg

[South-Pole]

^Read my sig before posting anything in this thread

Bastardo-Fuck,sick as usual
Baze-I'd like to see it finished lol.
Drak-I liek it but your K looks a bit like an H and slow down with the arrows
Vote-Looks good,just change the smiley on the dot of the i

here goes...havent sketch'd in 2 months or 3,,,well heres my last sketch that i done 2 or 3 months ago,,i just started sketching yesterday and still trying to go further w.e just wants some crits,,oh and yes there wasn't enough space for the whole piece on the paper like always

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Back.jpg

[amk]

Trn...sick manh....ahahha...your sig...LOL...ugh the peice...maybe lose the arrows....but if you like it do them..i aint feeelen the lil indents on the letters but thats me..overaall letters looks purfect..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rwrere.jpg

crits..? lol..

[MaNtS]

nice pr0n ha ha

hmm maybe space the legs of the W out a tad at the top, so theyre not connecting, cause they could be mistaken for a very weirdly shaped o, :S anyways dope. keep it up :)

[amk]

shit...wheres the posts at...thanks mants..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fewfewwf.jpg

yeuh....filled peice....just the doodads to finish off now.
toned the fill down alot too.

[The_Sheep]

South Pole- Bars is too thick cuz, starve em a bit, and it might just be me but 1/3 of the image is cut off? strange sig btw

Amk- Glad to see the colors aint too crazy, lookin good though, looks like an epic coloring project ahead of you

Anyway, its 4:00 am and i just finished a quick sketch and would like some crits on it from everyone:
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1097/dsc00114th1.jpg
peace

[-ShAmEE-]

sheepster! love ur style exchange?

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/S1.jpg

[sketch3]

thats dope shamr, uv improved loads.
only crit i can give is straighten ur N out, it looks abit wonky,

sheep love it, id put a nice fat ouline on it tho, personal prefrence.

amk nice to see a calm fill from you i allways like a simple fill, but thats me .
its dope but wats with all the LRG ???? stay up

chalk i luv the simpel style u got, but i think the F go;s into the L way to much.ill none the less

drack i love the new D R A iwould defently devolp that style, be sure to devolp the K asawell

bastardo-fucking dope asallways.ur shits bless

so im not picless, just sum freestlyed simples....

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9752/gangstaboogienc3.jpg

[ninja_303_763]

South Pole- Bars is too thick cuz, starve em a bit, and it might just be me but 1/3 of the image is cut off? strange sig btw

Amk- Glad to see the colors aint too crazy, lookin good though, looks like an epic coloring project ahead of you

Anyway, its 4:00 am and i just finished a quick sketch and would like some crits on it from everyone:
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1097/dsc00114th1.jpg
peace


yo this shit is fresh!! i would do alot more and throw some thin shine and 3d on it.

[near]

diggas im lovin that style throw some 3d on that!

amk in the most un-beefing way possible, ive been holding it back for awhile but, you think you are better than you really are...you obviously have some drawing skills as can be told by the background on your sketches but i think if instead of spending all this time colouring backgrounds on sketches you just dropped letters and developed them you'd be further along (graff-wise) one particular instance of this is i remember a month or so back you had a sketch with a character on the right that got posted about 20 different times instead of making new sketches and it was nothing special at all...once again im not beefing and i realise you are young and have mad time/room to improve, im just merely stating what i see and my suggestions...take it or leave it...

[amk]

iv never claimed to be tight...i just like adding shit to my sketches thats all...and i know iv got waaay more imprving to do...and i am going to start concentrating on my letters....thus this huge peice in a way to say bye to the crazy colours nd shit for awhile...whislt i study shit like SKY told me too...and i respect what you said Near as i look up to you..and i have tekn your comments..i take into account what ANYONE says to me....and i feel in myself that i aint been concentrating on graff that much as of late....its like i get caught up in these backgrounds and fancy colours and shit as people said they liked them...so thats why i kept doing them yah know..

and UUUh..you one time told me i had letters down lol...thanks anyways man...i appreciate all yall comments...

[sketch3]

thats dope shamr, uv improved loads.
only crit i can give is straighten ur N out, it looks abit wonky,

sheep love it, id put a nice fat ouline on it tho, personal prefrence.

amk nice to see a calm fill from you i allways like a simple fill, but thats me .
its dope but wats with all the LRG ???? stay up

chalk i luv the simpel style u got, but i think the F go;s into the L way to much.ill none the less

drack i love the new D R A iwould defently devolp that style, be sure to devolp the K asawell

bastardo-fucking dope asallways.ur shits bless

so im not picless, just sum freestlyed simples....

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9752/gangstaboogienc3.jpg

bump for crits on tha karek, pwees

[Sumoe]

diggas im lovin that style throw some 3d on that!

amk in the most un-beefing way possible, ive been holding it back for awhile but, you think you are better than you really are...you obviously have some drawing skills as can be told by the background on your sketches but i think if instead of spending all this time colouring backgrounds on sketches you just dropped letters and developed them you'd be further along (graff-wise) one particular instance of this is i remember a month or so back you had a sketch with a character on the right that got posted about 20 different times instead of making new sketches and it was nothing special at all...once again im not beefing and i realise you are young and have mad time/room to improve, im just merely stating what i see and my suggestions...take it or leave it...

Word.

Sheep-diggin' your style, very Fezat-esque.

[Sumoe]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3447/picture168xw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6524/picture146tl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/293/picture133zr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Brain Deadizzle
Mers
2007


Cyto on the last one dont make the letters all match up exactly, take the lil wiggly bit off the T and make the Y's wiggly bit go the other way 2 make it look like a Y!
(:

Bump this shit.

[ninja_303_763]

this ones from the exchange.
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5005.jpg

[N.O.T.E]

sketch3 im lovin the nig you drew, the shadowing is ill, diggas thats sick, roms 3d is off in couple places its ight overall tho
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/Picture001-1.jpg
pen sketch i did, dont really like the a or the e, any critiques to improve the letter structure?
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/P1010444.jpg
i've also been practicing simples alot, keep, how does this look, used prismas so it kinda bled

[Vice]

Ase it is all really good except for the fact that ion the bottom of the S it looks like there is an X and on the bottom of the E it looks like there is a K but other than that its good.

[emel]

^Read my sig before posting anything in this thread

Bastardo-Fuck,sick as usual
Baze-I'd like to see it finished lol.
Drak-I liek it but your K looks a bit like an H and slow down with the arrows
Vote-Looks good,just change the smiley on the dot of the i

here goes...havent sketch'd in 2 months or 3,,,well heres my last sketch that i done 2 or 3 months ago,,i just started sketching yesterday and still trying to go further w.e just wants some crits,,oh and yes there wasn't enough space for the whole piece on the paper like always

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Back.jpg

i dono why you didnt sketch for 2 3 months ..... or how you couldnt..
but i dono dude your style is always the same and you just add litte addons and needless extension things onto your letters when they are just weak letters themselves i would make them skinnier and do different style not just
straight bars

[capo93]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3447/picture168xw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(:
this right here... is an inspiration

south-pole - i havent seen you improve that much try and not make you letters so fat it will give you more options
ase- that top one is pretty hot if you would thicken it out a bit
sketch- i think thats the best ive seen from you? iunno i havent seen much of your stuff (not implng you dont post any)
the_sheep- thats pretty hot colour it all funky haha
shame- it looks like as you progressed or thot you were progessing you lost all letter structurei would say tone it down a bit... even tho everyones saying that ad yournot listening... no difference to me tho

[IlikePie]

Bastardo is amazing..... I can't really crit that.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00065.jpg

Pensketch at 3:00a.m. Nothing special :/ Says Rab

[moer]

ilikepie-all the letters flow i like it, is the last letter a K?

[HadeP]

:/ who cares how long it took... its not really important..
you should always be taking your time on your sketches.
making sure everything looks good.
when you rush shit you miss details and make mistakes.

[whahappen?]

this page is looking nice
random word nark
fucked up the nark philly hand but w/e
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1053/picture163hk9.jpg
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7751/picture162ns3.jpg

[moer]

note-the fade is pretty dope in the shading but the letters are kinda wack, work on straighter lines

[variousnames]

capo93 stuff looks like DINERS stuff from peterborough and looks a bit like a euro look to it

[capo93]

not mine its bastardos...
ughh one line:( got some pieces later but photobuckets being gay...
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/oneliner.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/piece2.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/piece1.jpg

[variousnames]

ummmm i know u aint diner cos i have him on myspace and msn , and ur stuff looks very midland uk stuff , u heard of vise from TWC???? writes yeti aswell.

are u from uk aswell???

[Captain]

South Pole- Bars is too thick cuz, starve em a bit, and it might just be me but 1/3 of the image is cut off? strange sig btw

Amk- Glad to see the colors aint too crazy, lookin good though, looks like an epic coloring project ahead of you

Anyway, its 4:00 am and i just finished a quick sketch and would like some crits on it from everyone:
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1097/dsc00114th1.jpg
peace

looks somwhere between fezat and bouncing (problably the pen)
keep that shit up man.

sketch- the mobster thing doesn't do it for me, but I'm likin' the little head above it.

[IlikePie]

Ehh, I'm too lazy to do it in MS Paint, but the bottom right leg of the K isn't attached. Ehh, not a big deal, better than my throws still :(

[variousnames]

fair enuff mate , sound , thanks for the postioning of that comment :)

capo i do have a liking to ur stuff a bit , the style reminds me of my mates , i think u should keep adding to it , i think u got something .... maybe try a one off with each letter as a character or something

[capo93]

werd thanks man i dont understand what u mean by the charac thing but explain in pm's if you want cause were taking up space.. i like pie yah i know i thotit was close enough so i just said it was haha
sheep serious props on that diggas

[Dream Creation]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7955/southpolehelpmj7.png (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-24

south pole here is wat i would do:
where the green boxes are= chomp the extentions away uneeded ur letters have no direction and ur arrows arent showing any

where the red boex is on the R u have skinnny bars not to bad but where i made blue boxes should be the same as they too are a cross bar.

onto the red arrows;
on the T you need to lengthen down to stay similar size to the other letters
arrows on the R the top part the R wich looks like a its bottom bar is set to a different drection to the bottom right bar, to fix this move the bottom right hand cross and down bar little further down and let the cross bar not touch but run parrelel then.

um sounds alot but its little thing realy some one on the other page said do a different style DONT no point in running from style to style just get this one down and ur on a decent road.

[South-Pole]

bump so south dnt miss it lol

no worries i cant miss post like that

emel i dont take that as beef since its crits no hate,,and for saying that i had the same style since the last time i was on bs is cause i made that sketch about 2 or 3 months ago when i was on bs.So im just posting some work i never posted before k..and yes the bars are thick i know,i'll try to make the thickest ones shorter and i'll get rid of those useless arrows

Dream Creation,i understand what you say,this crit was quite useful,,i'll try that tomorrow or when i'll sketch.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/9038/trufflemo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[krazzie_ammo]

whahappen - i love that :)

amk - im not really feeling those ugly extensions,

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/5376/152ty8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-24

[sketch3]

just sum freestlyed simples....

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9752/gangstaboogienc3.jpg

one last bump, not to many crits

krazi dope

amkah ur A look like a P

[Mr Tasty]

that dosent say tis...scrap that style work on ur letter structure some more

[ATEC]

http://i17.tinypic.com/5zbkwfm.jpg

[G-Fat]

great atec...good starting out with basic lettering thats the first step...now stick to the basics and your style should develop, just keep on with the whole pen and paper bit.

[moer]

atec- i like the color fill but the letters are a lil wack, they all flow pretty good together but lose the smoke in the backround its to much, it wud be better wit jus an outline, the E is pretty dope

[Chalk]

atec - the top of your T looks like it's about to fall off...

just some outlines so far for the skate park piece. it will read FLAT ST. all on the same line not like i have it shown here.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatst2.jpg
way better than my simples for it i did earlier IMO
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreet1.jpg

[Vice]

yeah im liking it much more. plus its obviously your style so it will be recognizable as yours.

edit: heres a pic of my newly updated throw.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00423.jpg

changed the T and worked on the K

[moer]

heres a sketch i did of a simpler peice than my last post...crits pleeeeeeze :)

http://i15.tinypic.com/5y0mdty.jpg
heres with an outline
http://i10.tinypic.com/52xv1c3.jpg

[The_Sheep]

Moer- Too much going on with that o man, i know os are simple looking and its natural to try and make it look fancy but leave the os alone for now, and your r needs work as well, try moving the curved bar more out

Chalk- I think you overdo it with the bending alot but i guess thats your style, the s is kind of bad though maybe tone it down?

Vice- Your s looks like a fat guy, its all droopy and weird, look at a normal s and try to imitate that more, your overall s's are always egg shaped, and i dont know why you changed the t, your last t was fine, its like you change something for the better, but also change something for the worse, just leave the good things and work on the bad things, namely the s, the k is looking better but still work on it, also dont color in the spaces with black it throws it off

bleh didnt come out the way i wanted but ill post it anyway:
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/4557/dsc00132xg3.jpg
Says Esham, crits? peace
-Removed Outline

Edit: Found this drawing of aesop that i drew a while back, figured id post it
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6651/dsc00126pt2.jpg

[emel]

chalk i like those except the L doesnt seem pushed together enough and looks a bit funky

riski lost the arrows and work on those I's but nice start

that "read" is dope i just think the D is a bit big for the other letters

if it says "tis???? i can only read the S, start over.

stak, looks ilke you ened to use bars homie

esham i like that style i would just seperate some letters a tiny bit


I been tryni to get a bombbbbb down since i watched piece by piece last night *one of the best graff movies out there i think* check it out on google
i really like this N but i want the S to fit the style, any suggestions/ crits?

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/613/scan0001ah0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-24

[capo93]

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/DSC02392.jpg
shoulda outlined thisbitch thicker.... wtvr

sheep- im a fan
emel- i can only make out the s whcih isnt to bad
chalk- look not o bad i unno something about the letters dont flow
** edit im aware the fill is outside the lines it was intentional**

[Chalk]

emel you should really use a a dark color for your outlines. that grey isn't workin for me.

capo - i'm having a hard time seeing your letters. and what did you say about mine? i cannot decrypt that at all.

sheep - how do you suggest i tone down my letters?

and oh what color can do. almost hides the shitty 3d
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatst4.jpg

a quick and bad photoshop to see it on the wall...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreetexample1.jpg

[syrne]

emel you should really use a a dark color for your outlines. that grey isn't workin for me.

capo - i'm having a hard time seeing your letters. and what did you say about mine? i cannot decrypt that at all.

sheep - how do you suggest i tone down my letters?

and oh what color can do. almost hides the shitty 3d
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatst4.jpg

looks pretty sexy chalk

[Captain]

atec - the top of your T looks like it's about to fall off...

just some outlines so far for the skate park piece. it will read FLAT ST. all on the same line not like i have it shown here.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatst2.jpg
way better than my simples for it i did earlier IMO
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreet1.jpg

Honestly, if you made that second one a bit cleaner, and tweaked the 'a' some, I think it'd look better.

capo, you can always go back and line it thicker.

moer, make your bars more consistant for now mate.

[whahappen?]

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7897/picture165mn1.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6010/picture164zs6.jpg
capo thats dope
chalk nice

[ninja_303_763]

i would work on that hand style some more.

[FIN one]

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9899/nokiatv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
chalk- not bad it looks a lot like a style i had a while ago lol
capo-you colored outside of the lines. jkjk i cant really see the letters go back in and thicken the outline or something

for the nokia thing. not the best but o well it was a good way to spend an hour getting used to different letters. crits please

[amk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreetexample1.jpg

damn...your cantrol is soo dope...wy tah imrove eh..i wub you.
fin...theres about 3 different form of letter in there....sum typeish Gesu I...basic O ... and oldskool type A N....they look aightt...id just say stick to one style...and keep it flowin gna meen...good work fella.

[FIN one]

no offense amk but ur a lil retarded. he said he photoshopped it to see what it would look like on a wall haha. no beef just playin but he did say that. thanks for the crits and now that u mention it the I is a little gesus reminiscent lol o well i really only like the a and n. but meh, i think im improving and thats all that matters

[amk]

oh sit...really..?..
ugh

ahaha..ahaha shit i didnt even notice..
duuuuh...another dumb moment by dumb shit ras..
aahahaha....daaamn..

Capooo...feelen that fillll....throw sum inks on that bith ahaha....get a big phat marker....and make teh letters pop...itll look schweet.

[sKeeLo]

chalk - not bad, i dontr like how the top bar of the F cuts down so much, not feelin the L kinda looks akward maybe try thinning the bottom bar alil and givin it more curve instead of the clean angle or have the left bar of the A shoot down and over top some of the bottom bar of the L . . .the 2 Ts are idnetical to each other whixh is good, looks like you have the same problem with teh top horizontal bar of teh T like i do, still havent locked in on a nice T yet . . . the middle thin straight across bar on the S doesnt really mathc cuz all your bars are the same width except that one, i also dont like how the middle thin bar of teh S goes straight across from one end of the letter to the other . . . but i would look to add some thinner bars to mix in with teh other wider bars, going from thin to wide or having thin and wide bars really opens up alot of doors to where you can take your style next . . .

ill try and edit-post some recent scribbles in here . . .

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4365/1191964nv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/5932/1202052fm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^ 2 oldies, sorry if uve seen them before i just really dig how my fills where rockin back then . . .

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4953/1202060cp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just stumbled across a pic of this half doen canvas, i totally forgot about this one and its nowhere to be found in my crib, fucking sucks it looks like it was a pretty good start

[REAL..]

heres something to ruin the page :)....
morning shizzle cba with 3d and it was all sketch but i cleaned it up...
gotta love extensions i was tryin to see how many i cud use! ;)
http://i10.tinypic.com/6gtx5pe.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/52usvbq.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/67q7984.jpg
peace...

[sKeeLo]

thats looking better than some of the other stuff ive seen from you . . some of the letters are lumpy (teh left side of the 2nd A, top half of L) . . if i was you i would step my shit back alil and work on gettin more comfortable with bending your bars and trying to develop a nice stylish simple letter that u can then use to build on by adding tabs and lil dodaads like you got and later full on extension/addons . . . your best and only good letter in my opinion are your Es, maybe study them and see why they work and what it has that the other letters dont . . .

[REAL..]

cheers it was only a 5 minute thing but it needs work i know and that second A is an O lol its badly done yeh the E's look better i dno why i just need to practice i guess... thanks for the crit much appreciated... :)

[STAR01]

Skeelo i love that canvas too bad you can't finish it
REAL that are some nice sketches, i like that style you should definetly do something with those although maybe you need to look at the arrow cause that looks a bit toyish
and that Nokia ting is pretty ill!

here's something i sketched last night tell me what you think


http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/7362/1002121pt1.jpg
also what do think about the tag underneath it???
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6021/1002129la1.jpg

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/237/1002138rt6.jpg
i need some help with the A here cause i have no idea of what A would look good here

[variousnames]

crits needed ... just speak on a few things i just smashed this up on paper in about 30 minutes so ... would liek people to say wot there think, considering it was quick in my few

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d189/xpninal/2007-07-25-48856.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d189/xpninal/2007-07-25-48867.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d189/xpninal/2007-07-25-48873.jpg

any otehr ideas ... it was a quick freestyle in a rush aswell.

[2KoS]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Scan10004.jpg
oneline

[STAR01]

2 kos that oneliner is dope!

ANY CRITS ON MINE???http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4788/1002141iw4.jpg
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7892/1002144fq5.jpg

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

Kos- that shits illin bruv!!!
Star- fatten your letters up abit mate, and make your letters more defined as i cant read what it says man, kee practicing though.

[emokid]

why lie, it doesnt look ok, it looks like crap. thewit needs to go to the new2graff thread and do some block letters for a while.

[South-Pole]

Wit and Star try checking the new 2 graff thread


new piece..no addons no arrows only letters and i finally managed to find a way to write my whole name

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/NEWONE.jpg

[Vice]

yeah im liking it much more. plus its obviously your style so it will be recognizable as yours.

edit: heres a pic of my newly updated throw.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00423.jpg

changed the T and worked on the K

can i have a few more crits please?

alright heres my crits...
Tron the best thing i could say to help you would be to do what sketch said.

and then truthfully all the other things have been given all the crits they need.

[near]

vice decide between holes or lines in your letters, the A K has holes while the S T has lines...if that makes sense...make it consistent throughout and it will flow nicer also be consistent in "ends" i dont even know what to call it but look how your T is "sharp" at the top and the rest of the bomb is rounded...the letters are somewhat inconsistent in style, the A & K are pretty much the same style while the T is its own and so is the S...probably because your A & K are a mix of round shapes and rounded corners while the S is very bubbly, as for the T fix up what i said before...do taht up and re-post

[trim]

NOKIA BATTLE i wish i put highlights but i didnt have a white penhttp://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s234/kr3wsk8a/bose.1006.jpg

[Blackeyed_Pea]

I personally like your letters torn id just like to see them beside eachother instead of on top of eachother.

[trim]

im so stupid, i posted my piece without criting,
vice-i dont like your throw it lacks flow and style
real-nice steez
2kos-fresh throw great flow through it
southpole-make the letters all around the same size

[smilez]

mine are a little sloppy

http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0001.jpg

http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0003.jpg

http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0002.jpg

[Drakula]

mine are a little sloppy


Indeed.You're letters are going everywhere in all sorts of sizes.The letters are unreadable and the 3d is shocking.Go back and do some simples with no 3d.

New handy:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good246.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good245.jpg
I know I was told to leave the arrows.I did this before I read the crits.

[Scare2]

drak i love the D but its bitin sky heavy. but you oppened your R and A up at the botom but not the K. it would look better stretched out like the other letters. the R is also really dope.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Saeshadowfix1.jpg

[whahappen?]

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7897/picture165mn1.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6010/picture164zs6.jpg
capo thats dope
chalk nice

:o
trim do fucking simples please

[Stinky]

Hey Hey Hey!, How is everyone today? Well did anyone else submit their entry for the Sizurp throwie battle, gunna be a swell turn out I believe. And now for some crap, I would crit, but Whahappen handled that quite nicely lol. Blahh!
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2582/scan0017nq9.jpgwell some random skribbles, A oompa loompa color theme.

[Vice]

woohoo good crits going around everywhere! keep it up!!!!

edit:

somehow i managed to come up with something decent on the first try. here it is. im not sure about the T. looks... odd. i dunno tho.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00424.jpg

my crits =

stinky: not bad. i dont think i can think of any way to crit that it has a solid style.
whahappen: in all honesty i dislike and cant read that style but keep it up because from what ive heard your good at it.
trim: you would have a much better chance of winning that battle if you did some decent, clean simples.
drak: the handies kinda hard to read but the piece is lookin good. seperate the k though like scare 2 said.
scare2:if you colored that in by hand thats hella clean. that says sae right? if so its all good.
smiles: drak said it. simples.

well i think thats it for my crits...

oh and chalk your sig makes me laugh every time i read it... that was great... he was in complete denial...

[ATEC]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z6/ATEC090/atec5.jpg

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs072.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs073.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs074.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs075.jpg
heres the w rotated
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs0751.jpg
wat cha think i know its not clean just bear with it

my bad
krazzie- loving the simples but are there any othere style you can do other than tthe simple ones?
atec-the t is hidden or to small fix that
trim do simples or quit that shyt is disgusting
sae- im not diggin that A and cut some of those extensions off
vice- shut the fuck up or battle me

[NEZ89]

atec- likin the characters
steelo-dat is fuckin ill yo

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2455/im001032fq0.jpg
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8408/im001028em3.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/222/im001030kh2.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1867/im001024dy1.jpg
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8008/im001033smalllb3.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4415/im001041smallpa2.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/870/im000976uh8.jpg

[NEZ89]

everything but the fith one is old
so my tags have changed a bit
and ignor the PGA crew thing

[Bazer]

sorry to the toy mods for posting here but i need entrys.


only one week left!

***BI-WEEKLY VIRTUAL GRAFFITI BATTLE***

WORD/PHRASE: Any word/ Your name, etc.
(there's a prize this week: 1 Montana Can, 3 personalized stickers from Die59, and a small black book)

SPECIFICS: Props To BS (or Baze)

PROGRAMS: Bomb the World, Vandal Squad, Graffiti Playdo, any graff simulator

DEADLIINE: Thur. August 2nd

RULES: No digital modifications. All skill levels welcome, but polling depends on the number of entries.

Simulators:
Graffiti Playdo (http://graffiti.playdo.com/)
Vandal Squad (http://www.vandalsquad.com/)
Bomb the World (http://www.bombtheworld.net/)
Art Pad (http://artpad.art.com/artpad/painter/)

MOD IN CHARGE: 1nOnly Baze

VS FOR DUMMIES: -Click here to learn to take a screenshot. (http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/tutorial.jpg) Zoom in if the words are blurry.

[emokid]

trim, trim off (MASSIVE FUCKING LOLS :]) all the add ons and extensions n it might look good.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6678.jpg

umm.. same old thing

[hungr]

my bomb burns this whole peice of shit sketch
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00647.jpg

[BLTZ]

Hungr-nice main piece but the G looks a little thin
How are these
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/9/7/25/f_BLTzbubblesm_8c965e8.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/7/25/f_BLTzbubblesm_8c965e8.jpg&srv=img33)
http://img38.picoodle.com/img/img38/9/7/25/f_BLTzstars1m_49d8bc1.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/7/25/f_BLTzstars1m_49d8bc1.jpg&srv=img38)
^yea I know the star fill is crap and lame^
http://img30.picoodle.com/img/img30/9/7/25/f_BLTzthink1m_6514ad4.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/7/25/f_BLTzthink1m_6514ad4.jpg&srv=img30)
crits

[moer]

hungrrrr- i love ur throws, i like the peice a lot especially the G and the U, try squishin the right side of the N a little closer together to the left side lol sounds kinda confusing, im not really feelin the lil swoop in the R, but i definately like ur throwies! make me a throw up for my name :)

[d_g]

Hungr, you're probably on of the best writers in the toysection at the moment. Keep up the good work.

Blitz, your fills are waaaaay too busy. Your letters need A LOT of work, I suggest reading through the New2Graff thread. And keeping shit simple.

Pear, that R would make for a dope K haha. But yeah looking good, keep working on it.

Trim, those extensions are quite bad, if you worked on your letter structure and got that down and then came back to that add on style it could turn into something nice, but it needs massive amounts of work.

Nez, it's not too bad, if I was you I'd do less fills and more sketches though, still need to work on letter structure and just coming up with some nice letters though.

[moer]

stinky- ur letters r pretty dope, still needs a lil work

vice- everything flows pretty good cus they all got the little triangle things but the letters need work, maybe lose sum rounded corners and put sum curves in, dnt worry my throws arent the best either

nez- ya stick to sketchin lil bit more and lose the crazy fills out for a while

hers a throw up i tried, please gime sum critssss

http://i12.tinypic.com/4py81uv.jpg

[moer]

bltz-lose the fills and work on the letters more

will u gime crits on these?

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/2791/moer001vd9.th.jpg (http://img372.imageshack.us/my.php?image=moer001vd9.jpg)

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2084/moerqc8.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=moerqc8.jpg)

[knewsince.]

i say visit the new to graff thread Moer.

[Bazer]

moer i just dont know what to say.. there's somethin about the thickness of your letters that isn't right. just keep working on them.


here's my finished whatchamapoopoo... im getting lazy...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0925.jpg

[ATEC]

dope Baze!
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z6/ATEC090/atec6.jpg

[Chalk]

baze did your green marker die? and your 3d seems to be off in some places.

bltz - you may want to check out the new to graff thread...

hunger - i really like waht you have goin on there. though your G doesn't really fit in that well.

emokid - i still say your R looks like a K

and took skeelos advice and tried to add in thin bars with the thick ones... not sure if i was sucessful or not... also just some tracing of letters with slight adjustments trying to get the negative space to seem even.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flatstreet5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flat6.jpg

[SEKT]

lookin pretty good ATEC a few things that would make it better though are make the top of the T more horizontal and loose the indent on the right side cause right now it looks like an F

[exhale]

atec the bottom left part of teh s looks a bit weird?

something made quick. tips/crits?
http://www.imageox.com/image/64939-File0016.jpeg

[FIN one]

baze- nice, but to me it looks like it gets bigger from left to right.
chalk- try doing a similar bar in each letter or something to give it a little more flow. not bad tho

heres a 5 min sketch of my girl. i did it cuz i havent really "drawn" in forever it needs some tweaks here and there, like the eyes arent right(she looks asian lol) and other stuf. i was thinkin of possibly tranferin it to better paper and putting a lil piece under it or next to it. borry its not graff related but i would like to know if it has any potential.
thanks
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1134/samdrawing002nh7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

edit: i found a bunch of old crap from the beginning of last school year.i dont know if they belong here or the carak thread but they were a part of my black book so if i should move them, let me know. the last one was when i couldnt think of a word to try and the only thing i could think of was Dalte so im not taking the name lol. pure practice. this is mad old tho so crits are welcome, but i will most likely not work on these again.
thanks
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2662/oldcharacters001en2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1319/oldcharacters002ou8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8952/oldcharacters003xh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8701/oldcharacters004ir9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9831/oldcharacters005rb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

really sorry for the huge post haha

[REAL..]

FIN....haha im likin those skectches though im not sure bout the piece and the girl is aight...
NEZ... i like the second and fifth pic, clean the others up a bit also they have potential....
PEAR/EMOKID.... i love that sketch it flows well the only thing is it looks like it says peak and my R's used to do that whole K look.... but keep that shit up...
HUNGR... i like that maybe put the letters closer together but i like the throw...
BLITZ... ott man calm down a little and focus on letters and not fills...
MOER.... the second one aight maybe use www.tinypic.com (http://www.tinypic.com) ??? but yeh thats nice and simple but not sure bout the first one at all...
1nONLY BAZE.... that shit is out maybe make letters slighlty more distingiushable but thats only me trying to give crit its still fire i love the colour scheme... oh ive just seen some of the 3d is off... :/ ah well
ATEC... thats nice and simple good to see people not going ott maybe try sum fills now... :)
CHALK... nice and simple i like it...good letter structure..
EXHALE.... im lovin that style man its defined and original.... keep it up

i think thats everyone!!

[ATEC]

fin- those sketches are nice. but your piece doesn't seem to flow very well.
exhale- That is pretty Gnar.
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z6/ATEC090/atec7.jpg

[BORG]

pear- work an extension to the bottom of your a to fill some negative space
hunger- top one is lookin dope
chalk- wtf is flat st.? haha looks fly as always

chilled with my boys for a sketch session, and this is what i got
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/2871/june17008ks3.jpg

[BORG]

pear- work an extension to the bottom of your a to fill some negative space
hunger- top one is lookin dope
chalk- wtf is flat st.? haha looks fly as always

chilled with my boys for a sketch session, and this is what i got
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/2871/june17008ks3.jpg

yeah, i gave up on my i
bump....bottom of page

[Vice]

Why didnt you use the I from your stickers? i liked that one alot. but other then your I its all great. clean as always and great coloring skills. my only word of advice would be to not say 1 after it. i never really liked it when people do that. i think it makes them sound defensive or self conscious.

[sank.]

uhhh are you there?

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0724.jpg

[N.O.T.E]

yo sank, your A looks more like an R because of the way you cocked it, fix that up and the N and you'll be on your way
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z230/ase_9/Picture004-1.jpg
new style i tried to work with, i'm thinkin about painting this

[TricksForKids]

Sup kidlets? i see some new names in here...which is always a good sign...lol, but really, id give crits but i have no time up at camp, still teaching kids how to swim and shit...yeah im rugged like that..hope youre all having good summers..Peace! BSC!

[7thIncision]

Revolt, same thing man, he is looking for a word to write. People just use different words to represent the same thing.

Sank - looks good man, i like it. I would just work on the top of the N. get rid of that thing, other than that i thins its good.

N.O.T.E - Its good, somethings just lost in the markers you are using, your structure looks goot, same with the additions, but it looks like its done with a shaky hand.

I haven't posted anything in a while, here it is... speaking of shaky. This is the first one i've done in this style. I'm not looking for the standard "take a step back and go to simple blockbusters or whatever".
Plus i really hate the I.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/minst1.jpg

[Drakula]

Borg-I'm feelin it,but I digged your old stuff more.I suppose I'll like it more when you start developing it.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good248.jpg

Just the DR for now.Just wanted yo know if I should continue or not.

[FIN one]

no offense drak but you never change your letters. you just change what add-ons u put on them. it gets mad old cuz they always look the same. do a different word or something or try a new style. no beef, just my opinion.

[N.O.T.E]

keep goin man, once you put 3d on that shit and get it nicely colored it will prolly look dope..
7th, letters are pretty good, i think the only thing about the i, is the bottom part, maybe you should soften the edges a lil bit, but good stuff man

[FIN one]

7th, your bars change thickness a lot try to keep them consistent throughout the piece. try pushin them together maybe. just looks like you tried a little too hard and rushed. it has no flow really but keep at it, not the worst ive seen.

and to emel, yeah i dont know why he doesnt pay attention lol

[D E M O]

Drak - I like your letters, but experiment more with them

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6518/demo32jr9.jpg