Blackbooks

[Samp1e]

captian - shit is poppin with the force/drop effect thingy you did with it. not really feeling the M, isn't as fitting to the A or S (with the addons). the A could have a beefier right leg too

[dark2]

cold i like the 1st 1 but the second 1 not doing anything 4 me

and i tryed 2 follow your advice and this is what i ended up doing

454

there bad i know

[noam12]

ok i didnt really get any crits on the last page so bump....what do you like/dislike (apart from asb)??
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/4964/0821072136jh5.jpg

chill with the colors, the e looks like an uppercase L and the a looks like a backwords p. handstlyes not to bad haha. other than that simpler is better.mhm cleche words but the best words

[Mo152]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa163/Mo152/gupe-1.jpg

pen died as i was doing it so thats whwy only one letter is inked lol but yea
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa163/Mo152/gupe2.jpg

cnc

[the end]

Tasty- my favorites are the 2 and 4. Left side of 2 could use less detail and yes, taller 't'.
Mo-pretty neat looking, just not clicking for me though, I'm thinking pull your letters pretty close and see what that does for ya.

For a bro of mine
http://i17.tinypic.com/4y54oyh.jpg
I think everything but the 'w' is a little underdone, only the quotation marks aren't placed very well. the 'lock' I would add some more connecting action to match other side better. The shading on back 'r' leg has been added... What do you guys think?

[silentchaos14]

i see potential but i cant tell if u use bars or not. other then that just dont overlap as much

[dark2]

lots of potential keep it up

[the end]

Thanks :) first criticism I've gotten from other writers.
Here's some much more clean I did a few days ago.
http://i15.tinypic.com/63t54rm.jpg
Man, just recently had one of those breakthroughs, made writing 100 times more fun

[silentchaos14]

the bottom part of the E dont fit and the big extension on the R is weird

[*OsBaGoSh@]

end- i like your style = simple and the different letter sizes should be replicated through the whole piece

mo- the top more but i think its jus cause you connected it otherwise cool

Tasty- the second one

capitan- i like the write and the s. the handstyle is silly

Krazer- i like the top without the frillies

Cold- work on keeping them the same size

Morne - fix tat r

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0101.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0100.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0099.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0091.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0090.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0086.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0085.jpg

CRITZ!$!$!$

[dark2]

i really like the hypebeast


455

can't get the k and r 2 look good arg but what do you think?

going bombing in a bit

[the end]

Hey dark I would suggest using bars to form your letters, simple and blocky. I found bubble to be a not so good starting point for me. Practice your handstyle too helps a ton... Just takes practice :)


Hype- that all looks pretty nice, especialy the colouring, except its all kinda the same, id like to see some other styles from you. Also work on that handstyle a bit kinda etchy. Oh nice throwie too

[dark2]

so more like this ?
456

but obviusly better i jus threw it 2gether quickly cause going out in a few

[Mo152]

thanx for the crits people...

hyperbeast looks perrty good man, feelin the graveyard and the one after it.. some of your hype throws need some work tho

dark not so much,, each letter consist of different parts when you make your letter make each part a bar of the same size and width as the next... theres a tut of letter progression somewhere on here try and find that

[Scare2]

aye hypebeast. ur stuff looks like its streight out of an 80s newyork blackboook. its tight but try branchin out good simple stuff though. it really makes me think train. the last three or soo are by far better than the firsts

dark no offense but thats whack. use bars of equal thickness and do simples like on ur keyboard. and i could be wrong but it looks like the D in ur first one got bit from the DRO throw a couple pages back. keep goin tho.

[Hyperactiveness?]

Captain that shit is still pretty solid on my opinion
Dark man keep trying man you remind me of my old days, I was shit then.. im still pretty shit now but s'all good in the long run.
Mo your style doesnt appeal to me but dont take that too seriously its just me
the end the R needs to come out more like in your "marcie" sketch and im not really feeling the W I feel everything else though good work.
Hypebeast damn man Scare I second that! Straight new york old school style! Love it man I envy you! You even got "Hype" in your name. Makes me proud to be wearing the name I got.

I got some shit to post but itll be awhile.. I do all this shit at another house. My family is too cheap ass to get a decent computer for the internet. Haha I cant even turn the fucking thing on anymore.
BE BACK IN A BIT!

[dark2]

slowly getting a lil better lol but ill start trying 2 use bars and jus sketchin shit up and no affence taken i know its whack lol thanx for the crits and sugestions

[Sou - Mvd]

style! Love it man I envy you! You even got "Hype" in your name.

haha you know hypebeast isnt a good thing right?

anyways

hypebeast you need to work on your letters a lot. It's fun drawing full colour double pages but if I was you I'd put the markers away for a bit and just start working on busting out page after page of straightletters.

[inkbits]

dark2 ..trying to do the whole letter in one go can be like drunken urination, rather then trying to trace the whole letter from your mind use bars of the same thickness to construct the letter.

*OsBaGoSh@ ..fourth one down is best of them imo. allthough it's bubbly style your letter proportion isn't too bad man in some places, you should work on your handstyle more to go with it if you attempt full pages like that.

the end ..looks decent man but if you're going to connect letters you need carry that out in more then one place within a word imo to balance things out.

Mo152 ..first one not bad, can tell the style you're attempting.

Captain ..it's looks really rigid man, the M is heaps bendy then you sort of go more sharp and rigid as it goes along. also it's hard to split bars (like bottom of A and top of S) unless you split them in enough places and far enough into a letter to maintain the flow of the overall thing. you'd also need at least one split in every letter to use that imo.

Dr. Kazer ..sketchy extensions on the first one looks allright, don't know the letters though. the arrow kind of kills the other imo man.

c0ld ..old style looks a lot better imo.

silentchaos14 ..would look better if the O was thinner and the R wider, bar thickness is good though man for blockbusting.

Mr Tasty ..second is the most solid one, the extension under the E could flow out more imo though. also extension under the T is hard to make out where coming from, if it's coming directly from the S and not the T then it fits allright.

capo93 ..top one looks cool. right side of the M kind of looked weird at first but made sense and works after looking at it a bit more. style at top of letters looks real familiar but don't know if I'm thinking of you anyway or seen somewhere else.

kelio ..you should of used the red line on the paper to keep letter size proportioned.

larsson719 ..the E looks allright but the D is a bit too bulbuss and round for the other two letters. also if you are going to use arrows you need to think about where they are coming from, something needs to generate the extension/arrow. you've got them coming from nowhere which looks out of place man.

pez ss ..don't bump for crits so quickly. anyway sketch looks ok as an overall, the E is good, I'd say keep at it.

Drakula ..the R is cool, you should try and keep that going throughout. the A looks kind of too skinny imo and your K would be good if a bit fatter like the style of the R.

ASB_ONE ..looks good man, getting more flow going for sure. the G's rocking.

Nem ..your posts are invisible.

Eack ..the A and K match real well but the C and E look sort of out of place. the overall look of the sketch is not bad though, colours allright and background shit is not too over the top.

DemonicKronik ..it kind of looks like your trying to produce a logo or something, I'd work on simple blocky stuff to get spacing and size down a bit more.

exhale ..hard to make out actual letter structure for me but looks decent as a whole for shape etc. should try basic colour on that sort of structure.

uhhh ..on point.

StAtiK1 ..size is good and spacing allright for simples, keep at it.

thesilentvandal ..I like it, on point.

incomplete canvas so not pic deficient...
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11626636.jpg

[kelio]

-Captain: shit looks ill. maybe change up the bottom left leg of the a though.
-Mr Tasty: it all looks good but yeah second or Fourth
-dark2: keep working those simples, use bars my friend.
-Mo152's: will loook good if you clean it up a bit, keep letters the same height.
-the end: tell your friend not to use extensions yet, his letter structure isn't ready for them, and you keep working on the bars, looks alrite so far.
-*OsBaGoSh@:looks old school, not really feeling it but yeah just keep working on your letters, really like that elephant though.
-inkbits: love that canvas, the color choice mmmm.

heres what i got from yesterday. critz?
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/100_1859.jpg

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

Ikibits , good crits, and that canvas is looking mighty fresh so far.

Keli, use the bottom right piece, dont cut the lines in as much and drop the little extension on the bottom right of the R for the meantime, also space your letters out a tad more.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/20000000c21f912/1/70/s0lMnD317T-JxI_QfhdXhBQjwtxymz1V.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/7nfkz-ZI0T8s_FagRfBOKR3eZu_8b8mB?referrer=hlnk)

For a battle with baze. SUME

[popshots]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5766/nerm21uc7.jpghttp://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9628/nerm22si0.jpghttp://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4254/nerm23ta8.jpg
old ish from summer school
inkbits: looks nice
seldgehammer: clean it up i guess and i dont like the extencion on the m
kelio:the o's to big and the r is a lil to covered up

[Nem]

Nem ..your posts are invisible.



and what can i do about this?

not suck so much?


popshots, i would make the left side of that N a little fatter. not really feelin the lips on that charac.


annnnd. the letter B can suck a cock.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/throwwww.jpg

[Saeo1]

popshots- Feelin those letters just not the character.

Nem- That S is wack. get ur letters more proportional, and if thats u says thats ur style than find a new style.

Sledge- Not bad. but is that part under the M connected to the E or the M? whatever it is lose it.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00204.jpg
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00209.jpg
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00212.jpg
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00214.jpg

[douchebag4life]

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/529/00kh4.jpg

crits plz

[glass]

heh, i have a friend who writes Dice. anyway what you want to do is try and get your lines nice and clean. you're starting with simples which is good, stick doing those simple letters and block letters until you've got them down (one of the better members will let you know when you should move onto more complex stuff. also check out the new to graff section and try messing around with simple bars.

[Hyperactiveness?]

haha you know hypebeast isnt a good thing right?

Of course Sou. The guy definitely needs some letter structure work. But im just saying his color scheming and artwork depict that of the old style seen way back in new york.. like King Blade.

[silentchaos14]

yeah go to the new 2 graff thread and learn bars. learn those then post again

[Mr Tasty]

yea thx for the advice everyone...i painted the 4th one today...
the 2nd one woulda looked bad in the spot i was painting in
il post pics in the paint thread later

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-4.jpg

[AVID1]

Sex without condoms: interesting style. personally I would have added a background or something. Try drawing a goofy elephant or something.

[c0ld]

inkbits-thats really nice, be sure to post more flicks

kelio-its improving. id say work on the C. angle the "arms" one the ends of the letter out wider

sledge-nice. clean it and ink it.

nem-its nice, but what did you draw that on? did u do the black urself? if so, take it out, i think.

sex-uhm....weird lol. work on those Es. honestly, i dunno what to say, lol.


some stuff i worked on last night.

writing my old name again. sorry for the coloration on the first one. almost out of pink.
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8025/bubbspj9.th.jpg


ignore the coloration on these
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/2302/ohmoldsve3.th.jpg

this ones colored pretty bad. it was kinda dark.
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/2991/cold1bo4.th.jpg


critz plz?

[fox on a trampoline]

just want some crits on the "S"....(IN THE BOX)459

[sex without condoms]

use bars.

but your username is awesome.

[kelio]

SLEDGEHAMMER: i would just thicken up those letters a bit.
popshots: love the two letter throws not rly feeling the rest.
Nem: looks kinda sketchy keep working on it though.
Saeo1: i cant reallly read any of them, the picture is a horrible quality.
douchebag4life: keep working on those simples, bars bars bars.
sex without condoms: love that shit, interesting style. so dope.
c0ld: umm simples :)

just dodleed this up, b's are a bitch. critz?

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0003.jpg

oh and anyone else notice the toy forum is moving slower now, like less active?

[DankNC]

oh my god, i had a shit load of crits and went to look at fox's pic and now there gone, oh well, fox thicken the middle of that s a little

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/soni.jpg

for a battle against graffic estate and someone else... crits

[poepomhoog1]

dope shit....specially the shading/coloring....missin some 3d on the top of the s though

peace

[amk]

yo popenhog...no offence but id fort youd know better
i dont think that thin by DANK is nice at all.
sorry man.

escobar....dont bend your bars yet....you can see you aint ready by hpw the look and how they are postisioned..draw 2 horrizontal lines and sketch inbetween them man....itll look better....good to see you usin blocks too

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/g-2.jpg

a logo design that i need to photoshop

[DankNC]

thx for catchin that missin 3d, fixed it

[pez ss]

end- i like your style = simple and the different letter sizes should be replicated through the whole piece

mo- the top more but i think its jus cause you connected it otherwise cool

Tasty- the second one

capitan- i like the write and the s. the handstyle is silly

Krazer- i like the top without the frillies

Cold- work on keeping them the same size

Morne - fix tat r

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0101.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0100.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0099.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0091.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0090.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0086.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0085.jpg

CRITZ!$!$!$
first id like to say e for effort. but ya u gotta chill with the extras u should definity do some simples ur style is awsome keep that and when ur letter start to improve then do all these backrounds and colour and ur stuff will look freash as hell.

[poepomhoog1]

AMK-no problem man you can think what you think and I can think what I think....beautifull aint it :)

Logo looks nice...if that still means anything haha

[BORG]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2804/june17003ll0.jpg

for battle with thrillhouse, gunna get raped

[Chalk]

borg fuckin CLEAN. great structure too / and a smooth flow.
ever get your prismas?

[BORG]

not yet, but im sellin a canvas soon and i'll pick up some

[sky_one]

borg-that shit is dope dude keep it up
more shit i think the S kinda sucks but give-me some crits please
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9097/42077404rw3.png
heres something im working for a battle on the mindgem forum the name is BINE what is the best one??
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/7762/69788671rf4.png

[c0ld]

osba-your style is sick. i love it. but listen to pez.

borg-raw.

sky-top left in the 2nd one.

repost for more critz on this particluar one
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3161/ohmgermna0.th.jpg

and this is th first one ive done in my new black book with new markers.
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/427/coldsimplf0.th.jpg
its not that crooked. there was a wrinkle in the paper when i scanned it.

critz?

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newthrow.jpg
ohm- dont make your letters wavy like the H. the cold thing is nice and simple.

Sky- definitey run with that one on the left second from the top.

Borg- so dope, jus the S at he end is really small. if that is an S and not an extention.

[silentchaos14]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2804/june17003ll0.jpg

for battle with thrillhouse, gunna get raped
this is fuckin sick, the only thing that looks off is the S.........if thats even an S

[glass]

garbage: i like that M and the O. work on the other especially the A and G

[Blackeyed_Pea]

where in the FUCK do you see an S ROFL

[glass]

im guessing he means the extension off the lower end of the E

[silentchaos14]

yeah thats the one, it looks like an S
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/NewMorneSketch.jpg
did some sketchin today, pretty rough but oh well
crits?

[Sumoe]

You're using bars and all, but it just doesn't seem right.
I would sketch you something to help you out. But I'm hella busy right now. Anyways Just keep practicing.
Oh yeah, and dope shit, BORG.

Pce.

[Blackeyed_Pea]

Yeah but if you notice that exact extension is coming off the of the C aswell, its all about symmetry i love pieces that symmetrical.

[silentchaos14]

i never noticed that but oh well it still looks like an S

[pocket change]

morne- your M looks alright, just keep workin with those block letters.



http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1379/ak029qv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-GEKS-]

make all the bars same width(the r especially)
and no more seizores while drawing


edit lol my internet went down when posting and like 10 people posted in between
does- dope shit

[Blackeyed_Pea]

Morne from looking at your simples, it seems like you already have a letter in mind but the bars dont let you do it so you do some whack short bar and connect it too a bendy bar like your R for example. I dont know its really hard to explain but just take your time with your simples then start adding your own funk to it once you get the structure of it down.

[glass]

Borg: Noice as always

Morne: keep working at it and it'll eventually come

so what do people think about this kind of style of throwie. not really like the other i see around and im not so sure, i think its ok but idk if im going in the right direction with them. anyway here they are.

http://i13.tinypic.com/62pwhw0.jpg
http://i17.tinypic.com/6h4kpj4.jpg
dont like this last one as much as the above two
http://i16.tinypic.com/6gd9cw2.jpg

so you guys wanna help me out?

[pocket change]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1379/ak029qv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump..end of page.

glass-the H in the second pic is alright. i like the last throw better. just keep working on it and tweakin shit and experiment. where in the 603 u from?

[fox on a trampoline]

sky one-- second one down on the left (BINE) is dope stay up
borg--- i love the A

[Los]

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/871/picture286gx2.jpg
This is just my throw up. - Simple
Critisisms please.

[DankNC]

morne- just make sure the blocks are proportional, other than that keep workin with those blocks
glass- your last one looks best
does- i like it man

[silentchaos14]

Los u might wanna read the new 2 graff thread and stop bein a little fag
edit: glass- i like the quake throw out of all them, nice to see someone doin somethin different instead if rockin played out styles

[Los]

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5103/wag50140896731thumbjx0.jpg

Critisisms please.

[HadeP]

Borg: Noice as always

Morne: keep working at it and it'll eventually come

so what do people think about this kind of style of throwie. not really like the other i see around and im not so sure, i think its ok but idk if im going in the right direction with them. anyway here they are.

http://i13.tinypic.com/62pwhw0.jpg
http://i17.tinypic.com/6h4kpj4.jpg
dont like this last one as much as the above two
http://i16.tinypic.com/6gd9cw2.jpg

so you guys wanna help me out?

yoo those are dope, add some shading in there and your set for throwies id say.
then after your used to them, you can add extentions and shit, but dope dope dope.

[DankNC]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/soni2.jpg

can i plz get some crits on here?

[Dusk07]

workin with bars, tryin to come up with a bombing style. mixed it up a bit went with a lower case d. i think i like this style idea so far, super rough sketch of it but


http://aycu24.webshots.com/image/22823/2005512677760902517_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005512677760902517)

crits=]? my k is being worked on..looks to much like an x..i know=]

[DankNC]

personally it has way to many extentions, lightn up on em and itll look better

[Samp1e]

extensions? how about work on structure first.

[HadeP]

character i just sketched:
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/anezcharac.jpg
and throwy:
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/aneznewthrowi.jpg
critttzzzz

[*OsBaGoSh@]

dusk - the idea is neat but i agree clean it up

sone- fix the e a little otherwise i like it espicially the shadding

los- i like the colors but maybe take some away the o idea is cool

glass- the botom is my fav i think its cause the holes on the letters are to big but thats just me

I like my bubble old style letters but im trying a new style.. the camra made it look tweaky
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0121_2.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0118.jpg

[DankNC]

when you say sone, you talkin about me, cause thats just for a battle, and the words soni, but thx for the crits

and i like your style

[evade]

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5756/styles025ur4.jpg

crits?

[HadeP]

try using a capital A, i dunno if this is for everyone, but preffereably for myself i like consistancy when it comes to capital and non capital.

[dark2]

460

crits?

and evade thats is going to be sweet

[Scare2]

Dark keep ur bars all eqqual thickness like the top of your R gets thinner and it makes it look bad.

evade do the same. keep ur bars more consistent. and maybee do some simples im not really sure from just that. but work on your structure too.

osbagosh. umm the letters i like are your Us ur first M is pretty cool. i like ur second T and ur Os fit the style pretty well. its a good style to have but not a good base for ur lettering. and id work on the other letters.

hade the charachters ok. but i dont like the teeth. the throwie is reall nice if u took off the wacky bit sticking outa the top of the A and the bottom of the E. but i really like ur other letters.

and pocket change can i just say one more time that that throw is burning fiery dope sauce that looks hott



a page from my old blackbook just for fun.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Dasonboom.jpg

[Scare2]

o and dark those squiglle holes in ur letters dont work so well. either do a hole or do like a streight line for the hole for now. and also the K gets too big.

[c0ld]

hadep-duno abt the karak but i like the throw.

osba-i think cut back on the arrows.

evade-rgars cook but i def think u should go with a capital A


scare-frickin rad.

still on simples.
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/5986/simpskz8.jpg

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1983/simps2pf0.jpg

i rly liked the way this one turned out.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/7526/coldrussiabq8.jpg

feed?

[BORG]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2804/june17003ll0.jpg

for battle with thrillhouse, gunna get raped

bump for my hard work

cold- those first two simples are lookin good, that last one needs work, dont overlap so much over the other letters

[poepomhoog1]

I don't know man but I really wanna eat Icecream after seeyin that....anyway the hard work paid off man...clean coloring, nice letterstructure...fittin background...so yeah I'm off to go get Icecream..

peace

[douchebag4life]

this is my effort at bars

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/481/pictureii6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
By mypicturespwnyou (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mypicturespwnyou)

crits please

[hungr]

borg it looks crisp.. all id say make the letters the same size and take the extensions off.. if not both just the one on the E.. but crisp colouring still

[STAR01]

Cold you're getting there keep sketching you've got potential
dice fatten up your letters and keep working on those bars


hey i need some help on the right sketch i quickly sketched it in graff studio cause i couldn't make a pic of my real sketch but you get the idea, bur i realy hate my R can anyone give me an idea of how it should look like in this piece??

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/842/321eg5.png

it's for the right one.. Help will be much appreciated:D

[douchebag4life]

another attempt at bars

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9049/picture001yh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
By mypicturespwnyou (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mypicturespwnyou)

crits please

[popshots]

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5514/nerm24py4.jpgdone before my summer school days.... dont relly like it..
cold: i like em exept for the last one
borg: really nice work
dice: dont use a black sharpie use a pen or pencel for now....and work on that 3d

[Los]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9655/picture286nb1.jpg

Im trying to think of a new style . This is just simple.

Suggestions?

[Saeo1]

Popshots- Lose the first connections on the A, they jus dont fit.
douche- Nice keep it simple, ull get there.

Borg- Like ur styylle. would you be down for a battle one day soon?

(i know bad picture quality(webcam) but only posted colored ones this time so people can make it out)

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00230.jpg-Alca
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00222.jpg-Enso
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00208.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00205.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00204.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00223.jpg -Elka

[scoot]

new shit ive been working on
(scanner fucked up the colours of this one..)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/annie.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/ifuckeditup.jpg

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

go simples, no extensions.

[NEZ89]

borg- thats ill, what kind of markers do u use??


recent page
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9499/im001127ya4.jpg

[Mr Tasty]

sry for quality
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tasteaa2.jpg

[glass]

nez: nice simple and i like that throw

[kelio]

Mr Tasty: thts dope you need to get a better camera tho. haha.
NEZ89: like the throw the piece looks like hez tho.
scoot: i only rly like the e
BORG: dopeness i want to also know what kind of markers you use.
evade: yeah use capitol a like tht e
Scare2: good cloring but wrk on your structure. thicken up your bars
douchebag4life: dont worry about drop shadow and what not yet just kep working on those simples.

heres what i got. critz pleaseee.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/100_1861.jpg

[CLK]

http://photos1.hi5.com/0009/505/876/4dzeus505876-02.jpg

is this good for a toy? :D

[c0ld]

los-give crits to get em.

nez-frickin raw. i love that throw.

kelio-youre steady improving on it. but it seems like the style changes as you move from left to right. tone down the e and the s just a little.

dice-youre getting there. try to keep your lines straighter.

colored versions of last nights work:

the scanner didnt pick up all the colors in this. the 3d is orange.
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9855/polkasp5.jpg

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5183/tallgp3.th.jpg

[dark2]

im with nez i think its good but ya ima toy to lol


468


as u can see im worse lol

[NEZ89]

well like everyone told me, start with block letters
like on a keyboard then slowly progress

[pez ss]

borg thats ill same with taste i like the colours speshly the orange bits i like the pink bubles but i dont like that yellow for some reson but thats just me

[douchebag4life]

meh...

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9529/picture002ps7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
By mypicturespwnyou (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mypicturespwnyou)

crits please

[pez ss]

dice the bottom of ur e should be more round try to be less sketchy and make ur letters the same hight so ither make the d shorter or the rest taller make ur i wider and ur d a little slimer and just keep practising heres a sketch i did any crits? suggestions?http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/skeatch.jpg

[7thIncision]

PEZ - its good, but darken it. Lose the arrows. other than that, good.

Douchebag - Lose the 3D, and work on that handie. Stay simples. You're on the right track

[Akshun]

pez- nice simple letters man i like that. work on your hand style though because if u dont have a good hand u wont have good nething else it all starts with just a tag man.

douchebag.i cant see it that well but maybe u need to go simple. from what i see u need to work on 3d but i cant really tell

[kelio]

heres what i got. critz pleaseee.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/100_1861.jpg

can i get some more crtiz on this.
i crit everyone and get like one or two.

[Clowney-Cakes]

borg- thats ill, what kind of markers do u use??


recent page
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9499/im001127ya4.jpg

BUMPPPPPP..cuz.................its dope!

[Drakula]

Escobar you're on the right track just lose alot of the bumps.Just keep it up you'll get it eventually.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good274.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good276.jpg

I think the colours ruined it.I made the the letters look too small.Also I think I should have put more arrows and extensions on the left half.

[Los]

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3684/picture5rt5.jpg


Crits Please.



(I Know I need a better cam.)

[pez ss]

drak-the cheach wizerd is good orange would have been a better colour to use also try and erase ur pencle lines itle look way cleaner as far as letters the a is the best one the d is lacking the k could look a bit more like a k and less of an hand the arow should have came from the bottm of the k

escobar- those letters are looking good i would suggest that u interlock the c with the o and the b with the o oh and the a with the b and the s with the e but not to much just a little.

can i get some more critz on my piece i wanna fix it up tommarrow and im not near a comp so i need em now

[Drakula]

Thanks.That's some good crit right there.My colors really need sorting out.

[Bastardo]

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/2408/picture004yo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/569/photo0036mw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5642/photo0045vx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/2694/photo0051sd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/173/photo0053jq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1551/picture224zb5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/3950/spa0049uj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^The Man Himself!

I now write mers and Irock :)
Brain Dead Gang.

[pocket change]

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8059/ak033fk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2374/ak032fz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bastardo]

Well cheers for the crits pocket change.

But yeah the O would look better with the star smaller,
The E would look better if the middle was bgger than the top two halfs, that way you can make the S wider aswell which i think would make it look better aswell. the D is fine just maybe put a spiral in it or sumin, lines bore me lol

[sex without condoms]

Bastardo I still love you.
even though you like like a kid i hate.

<33

[HoodRichSucka]

bastardo, that light blue handstyle on the brick. So Sick!
-d

[dim]

bastardo dope shit man keep it up
pocket change i unno about the swirl in the s but ur flow is good
nez nice shading on the buildings and cans
ave im feeling that e
dice keep working with bars and the rest will come

[Tryp]

bastardo - cool style.youll be outta here soon.
kelio - nice bar usage.
pocketchange - your flow is def. better than mine man. props
drakula - i liked the sketch, maybe diff. color scheme woulda better suited it.

some of my first stuff ever.
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-5.jpg

done in nail polish lmao. yes i like scrodum
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-6.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-7.jpg

[Tryp]

some more from the bullshit..

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-8.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-9.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-10.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-12.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-11.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-13.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-17.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-20.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-19.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-15.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-16.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-14.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-18.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-21.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-24.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-23.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-22.jpg

carcus.

[dark2]

tyrp im feeling some of those there sweet


469

crits?

[Captain]

dice- complete your lines, don't sketch like that.

ave- go a bit simpler.

kelio- it doesn't flow much, but you're using bars, that's good.

nez- tight fucking shading there.

drak- get a thinner lining pen, and do your final on a new sheet of paper, unless you were going for that look.

los- go into new to graff thread, look for stuff about bars and structure

pocketchange, see my sig.

bastardo- nothing to crit really man, just forward your style some more, try new things.

chair- keep up the creativity, but work on flow and structure.

dark- bubbles are nice, but try bars.



first letter for an exchange, I usually don't like to post unfinished shit, but I feel like it.

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/1060/scabsdn9.jpg

always trying something different.

[Mo152]

bastardo is killin it man, love those handys

and sense you are now writing mers i am gonna asume you have heard of the rapper named murs, if not hes fresh

[shred til ur dead]

kelio i like it but i think ur o is too big and some of the letters have some odd extensions

drakula i like it but i think instead of putting more arrows and extensions on the left side you should just take off some on the right

bastardo and tryp i really like ur shit

dark use bars

captain i like it so far id like to see the rest

(im crittin so i can get some but if you feel like i dont know what im talking about you can just ignore them:) )

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3162/dscn0216rd8.jpg

sooo i tried to stay simple but now that im lookin at it again in front of me i should've made my i and r taller but any other crits would be helpful:)

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/fuckthis.jpg

[Nem]

i think it would have looked better without the lines and dots in the letters.

will more color be going in there?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

na that hoe went in the garbage can.

[Nem]

='[

[Saeo1]

Popshots- Lose the first connections on the A, they jus dont fit.
douche- Nice keep it simple, ull get there.

Borg- Like ur styylle. would you be down for a battle one day soon?

(i know bad picture quality(webcam) but only posted colored ones this time so people can make it out)

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00230.jpg-Alca
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00222.jpg-Enso
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00208.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00205.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00204.jpg-Saeo
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00223.jpg -Elka


Bump? Nothing at all.. 2 now.

[Nem]

i cant see your letters with all that flamboyant coloring.

the drop shadows look good on some of them?

nothing really sticks out to me as ill though.

the last one kinda has a cool idea. still not feelin it though.

work on it.

[CLK]

yo chek this out
http://photos1.hi5.com/0009/611/314/vieEl9611314-02.jpg

CRITS PLEASE !!!

[CokulusOne]

*photolink*

it must be working then.

so, here's a new sketch. it has been ages since i visited this place.

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/624/p1010592kp7.jpg

[glass]

yo dark, ive seen your stuff you keep posting and i want you to try something out for me. AMK made this nice tut and i want you to try doing steps 1 and 2 only. try it maybe twice or so then post those. i bet you'll see a big difference if you try it.

http://i9.tinypic.com/5zncho7.jpg

[ninja_303_763]

i kno im in the wrong thread,but my boy wants to kno if theirs any writers that go by "coma". or write "coma"

[AnteUp]

captain...i wanna do an exchange wit you...but you never reply :( is okahhy...
an coke i like that,

[HadeP]

i kno im in the wrong thread,but my boy wants to kno if theirs any writers that go by "coma". or write "coma"
theres a writter in my city(calgary AB) who writes Coma, but hes not very good. theres a Koma, who is fucking amazing, i think hes in montreal or something, i dunno check names out on www.visualorgasm.com, or search in google images, but do research on it.

[SOOF]

edward:look sicks but from a quick glance it looks like after the e another letter, like a f at the end or something but not bad

[pocket change]

ok bastardo sorry man i didnt even see that u were above me when i posted, but i that canvas looks pretty dope. your throw is pretty dope too, i like your style a lot man, i love throws with characs in them, i just suck at it. but nice work.

o and for you captin- read your own sig kid, and then look at my post, did i ask for "crits", no i didnt so why would i have to give them in the first place. and i dont even get the fact of toys giving toys crits because obvisouly if your in here you dont know much and have no room to critisize anyone. but whatever. i never asked for them so chill out. frankly i dont give a fuck if you like my shit or not. i do it for me not you not anyone else. peace.

[Los]

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5373/picture7wh1.jpg

Crits Please.

[dark2]

cold i tryed 2 use bars

470

sorry bout pic quality web cam sucks

[dark2]

471


went over it in black so could see it




and los try to keep the bars the same size

[Nem]

dark, keep your bars straight for now. and the same width. otherwise, keep up the practice.

los, like dark, keep the bars the same width for now.

cokulus, i love that song! reminds me of gta...its pretty ill. but i would maybe take out that blob on the bottom right of the K. under the E. i dont really understand what its part of.

until recently, everytime i would go to sketch, i would try to appeal to everyone on the forums. but now im kinda just sketchin for myself. and im not gonna paint anything until one of you guys says somethin im doin is cool. but im sick of not having fun while i sketch.

most of this stuff is probably shit by the way...

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/workinprogress.jpg

im afraid to finish it! ^^

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/retardedhandy.jpg

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stupidcharac.jpg

not trying to go for realism so dont bash me on that.

its payday mofuggas! im gointa go pick up that check.

[d_g]

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/2408/picture004yo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Bump this shit.

[amk]

shit Bastardo...ill mate my little saviour..ill as fuck...that style you got going now is 100 % fucking euro..

start hitting trains in a couple o' months mate.
serious.
your like 15 right ?.

[eMJayBee]

Bastardo- nicee canvas

Did this while I was in "in school suspension" haha
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/graff089.jpg

[Saeo1]

^^ Looks good but cant read it at all. id say loose alot if not all those aarows.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Stock.jpg

Did for battle but was a day late.

[whahappen?]

ooh yes
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3548/picture015db3.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9464/picture014gy9.jpg

[Nem]

dark, keep your bars straight for now. and the same width. otherwise, keep up the practice.

los, like dark, keep the bars the same width for now.

cokulus, i love that song! reminds me of gta...its pretty ill. but i would maybe take out that blob on the bottom right of the K. under the E. i dont really understand what its part of.

until recently, everytime i would go to sketch, i would try to appeal to everyone on the forums. but now im kinda just sketchin for myself. and im not gonna paint anything until one of you guys says somethin im doin is cool. but im sick of not having fun while i sketch.

most of this stuff is probably shit by the way...

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/workinprogress.jpg

im afraid to finish it! ^^

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/retardedhandy.jpg

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stupidcharac.jpg

not trying to go for realism so dont bash me on that.

its payday mofuggas! im gointa go pick up that check.

new page bump.

whahappen, supersize those nips!

and itd be even better. XD

[Scare2]

hell no emjay dont lose shit. that style is fire. maybee do a couple simpler pieces but holy god that wild is dialed.
im really not sure how you would do this. but if u could do a color scheme that highlighted the letter structure as apposed to the extensions and the addons to sort of make the letters pop out that would be dope. like maybee fade from red to yellow as u get further away from the basic lettering?? just a thought. itd be much hard tho.

sae 01. go simpler man. the structure isnt there.

scab or whoever is above me. finish the first one. graffs about progression. and the handy is whack make it simpler and lose the swirls. the charachter might look good if painted in a really artistic way but on the paper it just looks like a lack of talent. in my opinion. its pretty stylized. the first piece looks like it might have potential.

[Bastardo]

shit Bastardo...ill mate my little saviour..ill as fuck...that style you got going now is 100 % fucking euro..

start hitting trains in a couple o' months mate.
serious.
your like 15 right ?.

14 mate (:

[Nem]

damn....imagine how good youre gonna be when youre like 25.

you have the gift!

[Scare2]

aha yeah 14s the only age to be these days. thats where its at. props on all the work bastardo.

[whahappen?]

14 mate (:
k i officially quit

[7thIncision]

Fuck, Im 16, he'd own my ass... I've always liked your shit bastardo. Keep it up.

[Saeo1]

hell no emjay dont lose shit. that style is fire. maybee do a couple simpler pieces but holy god that wild is dialed.
im really not sure how you would do this. but if u could do a color scheme that highlighted the letter structure as apposed to the extensions and the addons to sort of make the letters pop out that would be dope. like maybee fade from red to yellow as u get further away from the basic lettering?? just a thought. itd be much hard tho.

sae 01. go simpler man. the structure isnt there.

scab or whoever is above me. finish the first one. graffs about progression. and the handy is whack make it simpler and lose the swirls. the charachter might look good if painted in a really artistic way but on the paper it just looks like a lack of talent. in my opinion. its pretty stylized. the first piece looks like it might have potential.


lol if you say that has potential and you tell me the structure isnt there and to go simpler? lol... you have no say than and no i dont just take cristism badly cuz i was fine with it till i see you said that has potential.


and yah bastardo that shit is fire, if you stick with graff for years and keep headin where ur headin ur style will be killer.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Enso.jpg
Unfinished. just basic outline.

[Hazex]

bastardo....damn its too nice for my eyes :D
saeo..all letters look fine but the first 1 i dunno what it is an e?

so its been a long tim ei didint post here i jsut did this..

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7514/dsc00042pk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Saeo1]

lol yeah a upper case "E". I unno how it isnt legible :S what else could it be?

but yah thanks

nice basics, the only letter that needs alot of work is the S.. looks misshaped.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Enzo.jpg
-Enzo

Ignore shitty handstyle :P

[Nem]

hell no emjay dont lose shit. that style is fire. maybee do a couple simpler pieces but holy god that wild is dialed.
im really not sure how you would do this. but if u could do a color scheme that highlighted the letter structure as apposed to the extensions and the addons to sort of make the letters pop out that would be dope. like maybee fade from red to yellow as u get further away from the basic lettering?? just a thought. itd be much hard tho.

sae 01. go simpler man. the structure isnt there.

scab or whoever is above me. finish the first one. graffs about progression. and the handy is whack make it simpler and lose the swirls. the charachter might look good if painted in a really artistic way but on the paper it just looks like a lack of talent. in my opinion. its pretty stylized. the first piece looks like it might have potential.


lol if you say that has potential and you tell me the structure isnt there and to go simpler? lol... you have no say than and no i dont just take cristism badly cuz i was fine with it till i see you said that has potential.


and yah bastardo that shit is fire, if you stick with graff for years and keep headin where ur headin ur style will be killer.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Enso.jpg
Unfinished. just basic outline.

lets see you bust some simps then.

[Saeo1]

y would i want to, its no fun. i myself think this looks better and i am my own critic since im not posting here for crits just to show my stuff and see what people think. If you wish to battle than yah okay say so and PM me, if not dont tell me to bust anything.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/workinprogress.jpg

and y are you even trying to tell me to bust simples. ^^ that shits wack!

[Nem]

if youre your own critic, then why do you throw a fit when some dude you dont even know says my piece of crap has potential but yours doesn't?

[Saeo1]

lol cuz hes probably as bad as you are but im not gunna judge the guy i havent seen his work im just guessing if he said that. anyways like i told u, i dont want no little beef over BS. If you think your better PM me. if not than this is over.

anyways onwards with the flicks.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00228.jpg

anyways sorry for bad quality. Too lazy to turn other PC on for Scanner but its fairly legible from the picture, Alka.

[the end]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9403/img00166zc5.th.jpg (http://img80.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00166zc5.jpg)
Eh quicky

[sex without condoms]

12oz exchange.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823071738.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823072339.jpg
randomism.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823072339a.jpg
FOR MY NUGGAS
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258a.jpg
canvas.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072245.jpg
random not finished sketch Somr.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258.jpg

[Scare2]

hey nem no worries ill vote for ya. and wutev to the dude with the bird picture.. i forget ur name. if u dont want the crit.
but if u wanna see what people think on here i personally think the actuall letters lack the structure to back up ur more complex style.

sexwithoutcondoms. its a reallly dope style. iv gotta say ive done a bite or two from it before. ahaha. the
i really dont have allot negative to say. and that new piece looks like progression. keep it up.


i just did this for some dude tommorow. ignore how gay the theme is. do the letters work an shit. its photoshop edited.

o and that handies not mine.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/kidsdayercoloredit.jpg

[Saeo1]

^^ lol thanks for backing my point up, look what these kiddies still drawing and yet telling everyone there style lacks.

Sex- love the Euro style letters, wish i could pull sumtin like that off. nice letters.

[Clowney-Cakes]

that green canvas looks nice man.
get a better picture if you can next time

[Saeo1]

^^agreed i would like to see a better picture of the canvas
also i love the red on the more of the peice type one.

[Nem]

what have i done!

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/flowy2.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/flowy.jpg

kill me.

[Scare2]

well u just killed. it . i hate to say it but thats streight whack. nicely symetrical but whack. go simpler.

good call sae. and its there cuz im doin it for a farmers market and they want that kinda theme. i think its as gay as you doo. agreed on the canvaas.

[dark2]

475

[-Sinn-]

keep ur letters the same width bub

[Samp1e]

was gonna use it for the stock battle but i fucked the O
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6953/spa0077wc4.jpg

and some shit
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5609/spa0079tp5.jpg

[STAR01]

Samp1e i really like the first, finish it it will look dope
sexwithoutcondoms that red outline looks good
Dark use bars and stick with simples for a while

tried something different with my simples crits??
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7449/1002183xh5.jpg

[South-Pole]

^nice simple loll,clear that grey colouring and its fine

sex-dope euro style im loving the canvas
nem-not feeeling it sorry
scare-lloooks nice and haha at the cuccumber
Samp-nice progression


Should i finish this ?too lazy lol

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AMEN-1.jpg

Paint marker test

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AE-1.jpg

[STAR01]

^i think it looks dope don't be lazy it will look awesome in the end, i'm really feeling the colors on the last pic combinate them

[amk]

y would i want to, its no fun. i myself think this looks better and i am my own critic since im not posting here for crits just to show my stuff and see what people think. If you wish to battle than yah okay say so and PM me, if not dont tell me to bust anything.


get the fuck out of here.
you dont post to get crits but you post to see what people think.

pfst i pity you.

and just to think i had that attitude to simples.
im ashamed of myself.

east-pole....looks ill..the E esp. but the A needs work...i aint feeling the speration at the top..



oh shit sample..
your like the illest in this toy forum.
serously incredible !


so i was thinking i need new letters..
so i just got sum simples...and busted extensions on them..
im startin to advanced with extensions moreee..

ill have it finished laters

cya. !

[Dying to live]

http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/ewww.gif

[MrMaze]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/2351/scan10015bk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thoughts?

[glass]

i know it suites your name maze but you want to go working with bars and look up the new to graff section. man i hate always having to say this. haha it makes me feel so unhelpful.

[HadeP]

haha,well they should be reading the forums before posting, i believe someone just said the same thing last page.

um.. i was sketching last night, just doing some random image i had in my head.. and i came out with this
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/iwoc.jpg
crits opinions anythinggg

[Akshun]

maze wat does that say first off cuz i dont see maze in that. second there is already and old skool maze(if u care) and lastly go simple simple simple. it honestly helps out alot once u got ur letter structure down perfect and u start bending and doing add ons it makes it way easier if u already got the structure down u know.

dying to live- loose the add ons i like the way u bend ur letters but the add ons are over board. work on the structure of ur letters too

[the end]

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1081/img00177wj8.th.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00177wj8.jpg)
What do you call this, its not really a piece or tag?

[AnteUp]

its more of a tag

[Saeo1]

Lol AMK. than put the cans down and go back to simples because your shit aint better than anyone else to be tellin them to go back to simples. Quit trying to run this toy forum you just a wanna be mod who didnt make it.

ive done my share of simples just as you have, i have chose the exact same reason to stop doing them as you have too. So shut it.

Hade- Same with you u say go simple ... that aint simple it needs so much work it aint funny do u here me to tell u go simple no id say lose the green and blue blob crap and the bar under near the letters and it wouldnt look thattt bad.

Geez dont tell people to go simple if you aint doin it urself and ur shits just as wack.

[7thIncision]

The End - Yeah its a handie with a wierdness to itt, maybe if you make the black letters thicker, but the same, then give it a fill and then do the outline and its good.

Here's something i did, its B/W but i dont mess with fills much. Whatever.

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/untitled.jpg

[rayseone]

look im not one to get on to shit, but seao, amk fucking burns you to the moon and back, dont try to tell him to go simple when its obvious you havent done simples becuz your shit fucking liks sack, honestly, what happened to respecting better writers, and he doesnt try to run this toy forum he tells it like it is becuz he has knowledge of graff like only a few of the heads in this toy forum, seriously if u cant walk the walk, dont talk the talk

mods pleease delete this once he has seen it

edit - manest keep working with thewm bars and keep tweaking them, you are getting there, just sort your E out abit other than that it looks decent

[smooth_nuts]

12oz exchange.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823071738.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823072339.jpg
...

I <3 THAT STYLE :D

[7thIncision]

Mad shit, mad shit, kinda hard to read tho, good luck with the battle

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/throw.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/piece.jpg
New piece and throw style. crits?


Sex without condoms- such a dope style.

manest- not bad, just make your bars more proportonal (bottom of s is too fat, lft leg of N is fat, ext.

Hade- Work more on your letters before you try and make it look like "graffiti".

dying to live- simppllleeess.

South pole- Those letters are lookin ill. They look a lot better clean like that without extentions.

[00-made-00]

amung- The thowie is hot really like it get that on a wall, im not to sure about the arrow on the a other than that good shit.

Looking back on the last few page ive noticed that some people need to swallow there pride, keep there mouths shut before better writers embarrass them.

[emokid]

amung, throwie is good, keep working on the piece as well.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6803.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6802.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6801.jpg

havent sketched in ages. style is kind of scrappy and proportions are wrong atm.

[silentchaos14]

emokid- i like that style, its different which is good. just try fix the left part of the A and make the R bigger

[sky_one]

tryp-keep up with does simples man
captain-nice letter
dark-keep up with does bubbles and work on bars 2
bastardo and pocket -nice throwis
nez- thats is dope
heres something i did i now the leters arent the same size but i did this shit at 4am
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9203/95808614ja6.png

[7thIncision]

Sky - Sick sketch.. play aroudn with the addons.

Btw, the sig is illll... i love odeaith man, corner's and angles. I've been looking for a site with hiw stufff.

[session-one]

okay this is old stuff i found cleaning out some files
from when i actually had a scanner
pretty shitty but crits are much appreciated
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/bus.jpg
^^^on the bus ride home
VVVmy first time tryin to do drips
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/drips.jpg

[kelio]

Dying to live: its alrite kinda sketchy. need to work on structure alot.

MrMaze: structure.

HadeP: the coloring looks good.

the end: looks like a shitty tag to me.

7thIncision: lookiing good keeep it up.

sex without condoms: im curious, did you start with bars, i mean how did you achieve the "euro" kinda style. What seperates it from other styles. loooks ill and im jw.

garbage down tha way: i like both ecspeically the throw, maybe mess with that a a lilttle more.

emokid: damn emo kid thats ill, reallyy feeling that style.

sky_one: i like everything cept the y.

session-one: i reallly dont know what to say, work on it some more.

heres what ive been working on, critz please.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0005.jpg


Saeo1 stfu amk kills your shit.
amk battle this bitch get tht shit over with.

[session-one]

thanx for crits
i think the add on on top of the A is kinda weird
and the right side bar of the R should be longer, overall i think it okay

[Roolete]

make your e smaller and your bars thicker

just did this, good style?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0262.jpg

[session-one]

cher right?
id like it a lot more if u made the C more reckognizable
and if u took a little off the extension on top of the R
work on flow too it looks somewhat choppy
not bad though

[Dying to live]

Roolete-i like that style its simple but real nice but im not sure about the "H"
meh probably just me

did this last night
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/qefqfw.gif
crits?
p.s i know the swirly add-ons aint great

[bouncingsoul]

FINALLY got a decent sketch going for Satire. I've been working so long to get one that I felt was up to par with him

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0933.jpg

[Dying to live]

nice but the "R" looks a bit small

[Bastardo]

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9255/stuff025ga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^ exchange with dawsek

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8056/stuff020zo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^ some random pimping

Mers - Brain Dead Gang!

[Scare2]

bastardo tight like allwaysss. uuhh... im tryin to find something i could crit.. maybee the bottom of the S kind of lost the flow of its curve.
and next time catch tags like 6inches lowwer.

and umm sae put the ego awaay it dont mean a thing if u cant back it up. i dont like amk that much but the shit that comes out of his graff's ass could burn you.

[D E M O]

Bastardo - not much to crit, very dope, maybe more color.

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7430/demoh2ij7.jpg

[Samp1e]

FINALLY got a decent sketch going for Satire. I've been working so long to get one that I felt was up to par with him

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0933.jpg


jesus shit bump. the S and E on this are sexalicious.

bastardo you already know but i'll just say that your shit is on point.

demo, not much to say, it's pretty solid

[7thIncision]

Bastardo - i cant believe you're fucking 14 and chicks are getting you to draw on them, you have fucking talent.

[Clowney-Cakes]

demo- i cant really tell thats a M, maybe fix that?
just a quicky...
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/1617/newwwwwww001fz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/1617/newwwwwww001fz4.dd90e8e0d5.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=521&i=newwwwwww001fz4.jpg)

[7thIncision]

Elka its sick, but you messed up the outline a bit on the L.

[thesilentvandal]

bastardo- tight as always
demo - not bad, but keep the colors away for a while
elka - nice simples


so after bastardo helped me with my euro stuff i got 3 new sketches ...
dawse
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011784.jpg

iRock sketch for bastardo(fucked up on the K)
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011785.jpg

Daws Sketch
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011787.jpg

[kelio]

Demo: looks alright not really feeling the e though.
bouncingsoul: damn, thats nice, just clean it up i suppose.
Clowney-Cakes: i like it very nice simple.

Bastardo: how bout you help me out with some euro steeze
haha i tried though. critz? i know i need color i mean the letters in general.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0007.jpg

[7thIncision]

For euro... add more colour. Obviously, and some flair.

[Roolete]

stick to simples, which is pretty much what that is except for with an ugly ES

[kelio]

make your e smaller and your bars thicker

just did this, good style?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0262.jpg

really cant call my shit ugly roolete. if anybody needs simples you do. lol.

[smooth_nuts]

roolete you've done alot better

[Roolete]

haha it looks better now that its clean and its a new style, and i like it, whatever.

and to kelio..look at my other posts, and if you really want to embarass yourself in a battle, im fine with it.

[kelio]

i admit you better than me.
you have done better.
i dont have to have a battle with you to show your better than me lol.
i still dont think my sketch is total trash though, ill just keep working on it i suppose.

[Roolete]

yea no beef. cleaned it upa little, its still messy, but maybe its better now..i liked this.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0264.jpg

[ICER]

Kelio-make your first lettet match with the others.
Elka-nice simples but, work onyour shading

here is some of my latest work...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/ecskae.jpg

[Nem]

no way i can keep up with the shit on this page....

fuck. im so toy. bastardo. fuckin 14. thats crazy! so much props to you dude.

im gonna go sketch for as long as i can. XDXD lord....

[rumpleforeskin]

ICER that shit is sick as fuck! very nice.

[whahappen?]

yea no beef. cleaned it upa little, its still messy, but maybe its better now..i liked this.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0264.jpg
make top of r shorter and fix the bottom right leg, shorten or take off the extension on the bottom left of the right leg of the h, and shorten or take off the e's top extension

[Dying to live]

roolete looks nice now i like the style


new pen one the L is messed up looks like a W
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/vffdddf.gif


and the other
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/qefqfw.gif



Crits please

[PROMO]

Dying to live, on the second one, make the bottom extension on the L less wide and maybe a tad bit lower,and make the A bigger too. the first is good though

[MrMaze]

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2580/scan10014mc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ok i tried bars and simpled it down a bit but im not sure if i like the r's

[Akshun]

maze is the first letter and s??iono that really aint bars. bars are drawing the letters of ur name exactly how u see them on your keyboard straight bars search the new to graff thread and ull see tutorials on how to do bar. on the upside i think u got the idea of the 3d down which is good

[Drakula]

Sorro first off don't mix pencil and markers.Next leave those letters do some simple letters to learn some letter structure.Also use bars to keep the same width and consistency.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good277.jpg

I'm finding it hard to fit my pieces on to on A4 page so everything just gets squashed.The R is way too big.

[sketch3]

so is the d,ugly imo

[AZTEKA]

What ya'll think? New name i'm trying out.http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2568/mecks001mg4.jpg

[Clowney-Cakes]

demo- i cant really tell thats a M, maybe fix that?
just a quicky...
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/1617/newwwwwww001fz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/1617/newwwwwww001fz4.dd90e8e0d5.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=521&i=newwwwwww001fz4.jpg)

bump for more feed back!

[sky_one]

elka-like does simple dude
azteka-dope shit
drak-dope
heres some new shit CRITS PLEASE
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3427/19952314wp0.png

[thesilentvandal]

elka- nice simples
azteka- meh, could be better
drak- dop but the d is kinda fucked :S
sky- your getting the hang of bars.


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011791.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011790.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011789.jpg

[AnteUp]

new shit...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture016.jpg
for teze... jus thought of it yesterday...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture014.jpg

sorry guys, i'll crit after i get back on

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0934.jpg

[glass]

bouncing: kewl, how are those canvas's coming?

ante: decent idea but i dont like the extension off the top curve of the S and the M looks too skinny.

[AnteUp]

knews-hot damn, thats a shit load of arrows maybe too much (it'd be nice to get sum crits from you nigro) :)
vandal-not a BIG fan of that style...but i like how ur workin it...
sky-you might wanna change ur name...lukks like ur on the right track keep it up...
drak-use the same thickness of bars homie...


edit:glass-which extension?

[AnteUp]

this is shit from the casket click, x tasy changed his name to POERK, this is his new shit...
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/poerk4.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/poerk5.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/poerk3.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/poerk2.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/poerkbg.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/1187310545.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/1187328693.jpg

[urbanpirate]

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/pieces.jpg

[sKeeLo]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4397/1282848cx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beginnings of a CAER REKS cardboard . . . . still alot of colors to add to the fill, the C loooks like a bad E

everythin on this page has been nice
knews - wheres that canvas you were working on?

[po3rk]

it looks good sKeeLo.
No better than good.
it looks great sKeeLo.

[bouncingsoul]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4397/1282848cx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beginnings of a CAER REKS cardboard . . . . still alot of colors to add to the fill, the C loooks like a bad E

everythin on this page has been nice
knews - wheres that canvas you were working on?

Duuude, I completely fucked that one up. The heavy pencil killed the paint, you were absolutely right. I just gave up halfway through it. I'm doing one for "Asma" though. But it's taking a while as I haven't found time at all recently. Sorry bro, if you're waiting for it

Also, sky, the middle of the CA is completely empty. I mean, not literally since you added the extension but it's way too much dead space I think. Should have just put the A there. Also that arrow on the left of the C is kinda weak- not a diss- like it looks flimsy compared to the solidity/thickness of the rest of the piece. I like it otherwise though. Should be looking great when finished

[*kUsH*]

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/5177/dsc02991cw5.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02991cw5.jpg)

something i drew real quick.... holla back at me!

[sKeeLo]

knews - yeah i sketched the CA one day, then did the ER later so . . every day i wake up with a lil different style so i try to get the pencil sketch down in one sitting so what your talking about dont happen . . .

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/82/1202093ud3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
old stickie reposted . . .

[bouncingsoul]

Same thing happens to me too. It's why I can't just sketch small parts of something. Once I start it I have to finish it. At least the basic outline. The coloring and all that jazz I don't really put much attention to anyway (as most of you probably have noticed ahaha) so I just have to have the letters down. After that I can leave it alone, but it's practically impossible for me to part with a half done word

[Bazer]

new shit...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture016.jpg

still biting sume i see.......

[HoodRichSucka]

skeelo- i love it, what kind of markers man!?

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/Piece.bad.jpg
i really need help on my sketching. any pointers? lemme guess, looks the pointless extensions...? i dunno. thanks

-d

[AnteUp]

BAZE- haha, wat thing looks even close to sume...the razors on the top of the S maybe, nuthin else, so post sum pics if you callin a bite

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1593.jpg

disregard the faces.

hoodrich- lovin your handsteez

[Samp1e]

BAZE- haha, wat thing looks even close to sume...the razors on the top of the S maybe, nuthin else, so post sum pics if you callin a bite

bazer is right... the S is pretty similar, you just kicked out the top right harder and added a bar and some twists and butchered it. there was also a piece he did with an M just like that, minus the topleft addon thing.

seize -- solid but the I is small

[HoodRichSucka]

[/QUOTE]disregard the faces.

hoodrich- lovin your handsteez[/QUOTE]

thanks but fuck the handstyles, i need help with my pieces. thats where i lack majorly

[Pico Hollywood]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/SouthpawCapo_IV/Image005.jpg

made this in a few mins..Not best work just want to see the rating haha

[-GEKS-]

take yoor time, show some o yoor "best work"
as for that piece, everything shoold be the same width

[Sou - Mvd]

The E is in there too!
haha I hope the getting suspended for biting rule is still in effect
I love when they try and deny it too, it just makes me happy

Just a trash sketch from a battle that never happened because I never finished it =\
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6426/002cd5.jpg
and my new desk that I am going to finishing building right now because im g like that
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1433/005fk7.jpg
(http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1433/005fk7.jpg)