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Sou - Mvd
08-27-2007, 01:20 AM
fight club hardly sucked, defiantly not as good as the book. The movie was pretty much solid in every major aspect though. Care to share why you though it sucked?

Also it says glory

And finally, drop those little do dads on your e and try outlining the letters again but thicker and were there are corners on your 3d but not all those other little lines if you understand

Sumoe
08-27-2007, 01:31 AM
still biting sume i see.......

LOL...

Alright, I guess he did bite me somewhat. But, it's like this. My first "S" was highly influenced by Sky 5, and it developed as time went on. As long as it's not a total bite it shouldn't matter too much. I mean, my older shit was like a shitty version of Sky's letters, but now it looks quite different from his work. because I got influenced by writers other than Sky. All I'm saying is that, while I don't condone biting, it's okay to get influence from someone or somewhere. As long as you're not only getting influence solely from that one person. Because when that happens, you're just copying shit.

Pce.

bouncingsoul
08-27-2007, 02:23 AM
I've written a lot about this actually. Bite ideas, not pieces. Hell, I shouldn't even call it biting. Steal ideas, don't bite pieces. Borrowing is for the weak, stealing is for the smart

EsKoNeR!!
08-27-2007, 02:55 AM
jsut a hsitty new style im working on.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/IMG_0144.jpg

Nem
08-27-2007, 03:27 AM
damn you.

thats exactly the style i was trying to imagine for the longest time. a combination of nice bar work and awesome symmetry. with good flowing lines.

hopefully you can take it far.

c0ld
08-27-2007, 03:36 AM
hoodrich-cut out most of the extensions.
the t looks like a j.

seize-lose the faces or clean the one on the E up. male the i a lil bigger.

capitol-nice

esko-SICK



i havent been here in a few days. heres what i got to show for it.
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4503/stakid9.th.jpg

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2284/neonsab4.th.jpg

havnt colored it yet.
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/3835/cloudoy9.jpg

I Kick Rocks Yo
08-27-2007, 06:07 AM
Hey wutsup? Here a few throwies i drew in my blackbook (I actually drew them with a marker, people keep telling me they look photo shopped or something).

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1162/bubblerw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5907/spikedy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/269/gatting2ct5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


It says Sake, and I know some of you people are gonna say don't write Sake, he's famous, blah blah blah. But I kinda don't care since I don't live in the same country, let alone around people who even know about canadian graff (i'm actually from nyc). I don't bite Sake's shit, I know his styles and intentionally do it differently and put up my own crew so if someone does happen to see it and knows who the other Sake is (which is unlikely in my city), they'll know its someone else.

Regardless, I kinda wanted to know if its any good. I'm wondering cuz I've been through an assload of name changes and I'm always critical of what I do, so I end up not liking anything I do and I end up just changing the whole name. So I started practicing with Sake. And I kinda started liking it. So yea, how's it look (remember i'm from nyc)? I want honest opinions cuz I'm gettin some paint soon and I was plannin usin those throwies

CLK
08-27-2007, 10:53 AM
EsKoNeR - i like that, pretty damn good :D, keep it up
Seize - like oyurs twoo, nice E-s

Blackeyed_Pea
08-27-2007, 11:29 AM
Hey wutsup? Here a few throwies i drew in my blackbook (I actually drew them with a marker, people keep telling me they look photo shopped or something).

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1162/bubblerw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5907/spikedy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/269/gatting2ct5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


It says Sake, and I know some of you people are gonna say don't write Sake, he's famous, blah blah blah. But I kinda don't care since I don't live in the same country, let alone around people who even know about canadian graff (i'm actually from nyc). I don't bite Sake's shit, I know his styles and intentionally do it differently and put up my own crew so if someone does happen to see it and knows who the other Sake is (which is unlikely in my city), they'll know its someone else.

Regardless, I kinda wanted to know if its any good. I'm wondering cuz I've been through an assload of name changes and I'm always critical of what I do, so I end up not liking anything I do and I end up just changing the whole name. So I started practicing with Sake. And I kinda started liking it. So yea, how's it look (remember i'm from nyc)? I want honest opinions cuz I'm gettin some paint soon and I was plannin usin those throwies
Only thing is, your well aware there is a well known artist that writes sake but yet u still do it. Its alright if you started writing sake for awhile and was completley unaware that there was another writer that goes by the name of sake. And if iam correct he bombs in NewYork from time to time so...Its up too you i like your throw style in the second one.

amk
08-27-2007, 11:35 AM
those throwies are ill. ^^
get them up like..now haha...NYC man..paint shit !

esk...looking nice mane..feel your style.

urbanpirate
08-27-2007, 11:46 AM
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/pieces.jpg

Clowney-Cakes
08-27-2007, 01:06 PM
yo go more simple, ik cant even read what it says

pez ss
08-27-2007, 01:18 PM
wow theres some dope shit thes last few pages
skeelo- killi it
sake- u need to paint thoush now but i cant say i like ur e in the first one but that me talking maybe make the middle part smaller
esko- nice colors but put in more black dots in the backround but not to much.

PROMO
08-27-2007, 01:18 PM
^^^^^Work on letter structure

cerex89
08-27-2007, 02:10 PM
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/pieces.jpg
not bad but it look like u had a stroke there buddy with those shaky line but other than that i like it
this is my throw up what u thinkhttp://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/scan001001-2.jpg

enigmatic
08-27-2007, 02:15 PM
i think its odd recons posting in here. thats way to evolved for toyness.

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/3898/0827071355im9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/3898/0827071355im9.bd8ef1e8ad.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=503&i=0827071355im9.jpg)

sex without condoms
08-27-2007, 02:30 PM
lose the arrows.
work on the second one though its going somewhere and i could be feeling it then...

dark2
08-27-2007, 02:30 PM
479

CLK
08-27-2007, 03:15 PM
Urban pirate - nice stuff :)

Akshun
08-27-2007, 03:18 PM
cerex id say make the dot for the i bigger and the leg of the L longer and ud be straight

base-loose the arrows and ud be workin wit somethin

tryin new things crits?

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/untitled.jpg

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/Picture004.jpg

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/1-1.jpg

Sumoe
08-27-2007, 03:28 PM
Urban pirate - nice stuff :)

Ummmm, no. Lose the arrows and work on you letters...a lot.

hungr
08-27-2007, 03:44 PM
to the man who writes "sake" if u plan on getting up in NYC writing sake and yer not throwing shit up as hard as sake is doing it people will recognize and u will probably catch hard beef, seeing as peeps from NYC like to beef.. u may be in another country but NYC isnt far from Montreal..and im more than positive he has shit up there, cause he has shit up in enough places.. and the fact that u said no one in the states knows sake or "canadian graff" is retarded because sake did a production with Sever and Rime who are from farther away than NYC... so i think u should change yer name, u can still rock the same style throw ups but u should probably change your name

dark2
08-27-2007, 04:23 PM
cerex id make the L a bit bigger but besides that itas got potential unlike mine lol

SOOF
08-27-2007, 04:44 PM
crits ? (dont bother bout the o's, i jut didnt put the o thing in, dont no why)
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/08-27-07_1557.jpg

jersOneTIC
08-27-2007, 04:47 PM
urban pirate - colors are coll but work on LETTERS
cerex - it's good except for the last 2 letters..too tall
soof - add something to the o's
here's some shit...haven't finished yet.
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9088/13021ra3.jpg

dark2
08-27-2007, 05:04 PM
jers thats sweet







480
crits?

Akshun
08-27-2007, 05:06 PM
jers nice ish i dont have ne suggestions


cerex id say make the dot for the i bigger and the leg of the L longer and ud be straight

base-loose the arrows and ud be workin wit somethin

tryin new things crits?

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/untitled.jpg

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/Picture004.jpg

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff8/ScIeLeR/1-1.jpg
bump

intaout
08-27-2007, 05:45 PM
Urb Pirate- cool style really tech
Cerex- simple and bubbly looks good
Base- lose the arrows but its starting to look good
Akshun- Silver and the Gold look good arounf it, good style, funny chin,
Soof- pretty good
Jers One- Thats sick i really like it
Dark- too small




my first attempt..crits?
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1131/1252550590_3e0d50f2fa_o.jpg

Akshun
08-27-2007, 05:57 PM
thnx for the crits

soof-mos def put somethin to make them look like o's work on the f and make all bars in the s the same width itd look better that way

ark-get that outline steady and move ur letters closer together but i like the style of letters dope style

Los
08-27-2007, 06:10 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5972/picture8bi5.jpg

Crits Please.

syrup2
08-27-2007, 06:13 PM
lose the stripes and and make the s more like an s

I was gonna post this in normal books but I figured Id get bitched at because I dont have enough arrows

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2582/l1c6711cc134d0dce64c0e7gc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2582/l1c6711cc134d0dce64c0e7gc1.c337969901.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=l1c6711cc134d0dce64c0e7gc1.jpg)

dark2
08-27-2007, 06:42 PM
syrup thats sweet
and los like syrup said lose the strips



481

crits? and sorry bout it being small my web cam is retarded

Los
08-27-2007, 06:47 PM
Ugh.. Someone told me to put stripes in it to see how it would look.

Syrup, I dont know how it doesnt look like an S.

silentchaos14
08-27-2007, 07:00 PM
Los- id suggest u get a better name cuz S's seem hard for u. and three letter names aint the easiest to work with
syrup- i have no idea what to say
dark- maybe add a 3-d, use bars if u didnt

Los
08-27-2007, 07:03 PM
I know how to do an S.

Slushi (Brother) told me to do that S.

Los
08-27-2007, 07:08 PM
Akshun- Lose some arrows.

If you dont like my crit. Sorry but i dont know much.

thesilentvandal
08-27-2007, 07:26 PM
soof- simples
intaout - bars
los - LOS <--- USE those
syrup - not bad not bad , i cant think of something to change right now tho
akshun - simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011793.jpg

Eack
08-27-2007, 07:42 PM
Very nice dawsek

Dream Creation
08-27-2007, 08:28 PM
akshun- the force field is shit lose it! and add some flow!

dawsex - not feelin bottom of ur s infact ur S needs lil work.

AND WILL TOYS STOP FUCKING COMMENTING, ON SHIT THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT! JUST POST FOR THE SAKE OFF FUCKING POSTING!

BORG
08-27-2007, 08:30 PM
knews - yeah i sketched the CA one day, then did the ER later so . . every day i wake up with a lil different style so i try to get the pencil sketch down in one sitting so what your talking about dont happen . . .

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/82/1202093ud3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
old stickie reposted . . .

gotta bump that shit, dope as hell, love thw wilds piece

daws-d looks like an o
akshun- fuck lookin the arrows, work on those letters, and forget about the arrows

dark2
08-27-2007, 09:20 PM
akshun i think looks pretty good



484

any better?

silentchaos14
08-27-2007, 09:54 PM
it aint really working, to me they seem like really simple throws. maybe try go more blocky? like the letters on your keyboard?

kelio
08-27-2007, 10:02 PM
akshun i think looks pretty good



484

any better?

no its not better im not trying to be a dick but its true,
look at your keyboard and make block letters. use bars. look at this.
this is exactly what you need to do bruh. just keep it up.
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/32dfsaas.jpg

Dr. Kazer
08-27-2007, 11:02 PM
The cover(first attempt at space paint):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010012.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/k-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010014.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010017.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010019.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010020.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010021.jpg

gcrolla
08-28-2007, 12:46 AM
jahsf

syrne
08-28-2007, 01:08 AM
syrup thats sweet
and los like syrup said lose the strips



481

crits? and sorry bout it being small my web cam is retarded

practice your handstlye more

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 01:26 AM
kazer- theyre all sick. second and third are nicest, props on the space thing too
gcrolla- not sure what that 3rd letter is but yur other letters seem pretty generic. nice start for a throw tho just keep workin on it
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MornSketch.jpg
ran outta room cuz im an idiot.
crits?

c0ld
08-28-2007, 01:42 AM
i havent been here in a few days. heres what i got to show for it.
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4503/stakid9.th.jpg

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2284/neonsab4.th.jpg

havnt colored it yet.
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/3835/cloudoy9.jpg

*bump* wtf gave plenty of crits but never got any.

Dr. Kazer
08-28-2007, 01:54 AM
Cold; like the second flick. Not really feeling the first one all that much.
Morn; like the blocks. IMO I'd work on the R a little; make the bottom right bar slanted er something. plan on doing a roller?
Thesilentvandal; I love your letters. Did you use highlighters?
Akshun; I like your letters. I'd work on your flow with them, though.
SOOF; use bars. start simple. sounds stupid but it helps.
Jersonetic; good all together. keep it up.
Intaout; real good for your first. Work on the r, bring the letters a little closer together & add some 3-d & you're golden.

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 01:58 AM
kazer- theyre all sick. second and third are nicest, props on the space thing too
gcrolla- not sure what that 3rd letter is but yur other letters seem pretty generic. nice start for a throw tho just keep workin on it
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MornSketch.jpg
ran outta room cuz im an idiot.
crits?
bump end of page

Hoostein
08-28-2007, 02:03 AM
I think more of a "\/" part on the M. stretch that R out a bit.

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 02:06 AM
yeah i always fuck up my R and the M was an accident cuz i didnt really do two bars. but im gonna do another one of them in a bit

Dr. Kazer
08-28-2007, 02:12 AM
The cover(first attempt at space paint):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010012.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/k-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010014.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010017.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010019.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010020.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/P1010021.jpg

bmp.

Ez3kieL
08-28-2007, 03:31 AM
EzekieL/EzKiLL, too easy to kill pens....
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/EzeS.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/Ez_E.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/DSCF2029.jpg

Nem
08-28-2007, 03:40 AM
that blue one in the top pic definitely.

i like it.

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 03:46 AM
i have no idea what to say about those ezekiel.
but kazer nope i aint doin a roller , why u askin?

CLK
08-28-2007, 05:33 AM
yo cOld i think you should try something new :) not those block letters always

---CRoR---
08-28-2007, 11:20 AM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/2036/1001711dw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thesilentvandal
08-28-2007, 11:24 AM
morne - keep those simples up :D
kazer - nice work keep it up
ezekiel - i dont even know what to say :S
cror - nice throwup

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011795.jpg
Rip waster12
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011794.jpg

---CRoR---
08-28-2007, 11:28 AM
thnx


rip waster12 cac

dizzle_d
08-28-2007, 12:26 PM
Ezekiel- that third one looks like your trying to go way to wild, keep it simple for now... the skull character is pretty killer, but, you have to go a little simpler, like lose the little drooping things in the center of the E, and you have to work on your Z's aswell. your best letter is your K, or your L, so work on the others. keep it up though
Cror- your throwup letters don't seem to really flow, work on the flow of the letters....for example... like on your R you have a thick bar on the left side, put the thick bar on all of the letters on the left side. you'll get it:cool:
Dawsss- those sketches are so dope colors are good too. I'd say the only thing that looks a little strange is the D, I mean add a little something to it to make it look more like a D and less like an O, maybe make the upper left bar a little more bold. you know what I mean? haha If that made any sense. Keep those eye candy sketches cominnnn...
RIP Waster12.

Ok, so it was another late night so I just sketched this up. I went a little crazy with the colors and such(for me at least)( OH AND MIND THE SPIDER MAN LEG!!) ::ahem:: anyways ...
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1988/img1853mg6.jpg
Crits on the letter structure and what not would be appreciated.
thanks.

---CRoR---
08-28-2007, 12:36 PM
i get ya im better at painting then drawin but i still need to work on my paint skills....... im a lot better then i use to back in 05 and 06

but thanks for the crits!

Stonk
08-28-2007, 01:10 PM
Dizzle D that looks real good..maybe on the inside of the holes of the letters make it the same of the 3d..thats the only part thats weird.

Silent vandal - that shit is hot. love it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc000e399c.jpg

dim
08-28-2007, 01:13 PM
tike good simple
dizzle d i like it but i dont know about all the extra little addons on the upper right of the peice dont get rid of all of em just some
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0246.jpg
crits

sketch3
08-28-2007, 01:16 PM
dim fresh as hell, reminds me of samp's work

tike dope simple, fix up the e a lil

cror all good except the n, shits deformed

HoodRichSucka
08-28-2007, 01:18 PM
dim: i like it a lot. wrtie a whole word in the same style, i think it will be sweet
-d

Mr Tasty
08-28-2007, 01:35 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture333.jpg
651
pretty shit but i liked the S/5

sex without condoms
08-28-2007, 01:39 PM
i like it its a new turn from your usual stuff

Mr Tasty
08-28-2007, 01:40 PM
yea it is...i tried it again..the S came out different.but its ok still
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture335.jpg

klipa
08-28-2007, 02:01 PM
mr tastey= you should try and clean up your lines abit and space your letters out slightly and your style will increase with ease.

dim= i love that s it would be good to see a full word thrown from that.

a battle peice. the camera robbed the colour tho but oh well

on another note i know this isnt the thread but if anyone wants to battle jus pm me peace

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/99/cimg0865wg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-Sinn-
08-28-2007, 02:35 PM
kilpa - lookin good...real good
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture408.jpg
its a trade for eQust
crits?

Akshun
08-28-2007, 03:39 PM
EzekieL-i like the first two alot but the last one im not feelin as much the add ons really kill the piece to me.

runt-work on the r a lil bit and str8ten ur lines and ull be str8

silent vandal-i love the colors in both pieces i think the s in the bottom piece is the dopest s between the two i dont care for the one in the top piece. and ur a id say but a lil hole in the middle so it looks like an a it looks like and n to me

dizzle d- i like it no complaints

tike- bring the t down and in some and i think it be dope, and work on that e just a lil bit

dim- i like the s dope shit

mr. tasty - i love it

klipa- nice

sinn-work on the d

ALL TOYS KEEP WRITING AND BOMBING

NEZ89
08-28-2007, 03:54 PM
Dim- that S is cool
Tasty- i agree with klipa, jus clean up the lines

i really didn't try on this but w/e
still working on my handstyle<--any tips
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/8486/im001161ih1.jpg

pr0n
08-28-2007, 04:14 PM
this is my first post here, just a quick pen sketch with a skull charac :)

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5999/pr0nskullhv3.jpg

REAL..
08-28-2007, 04:18 PM
new sketch not sketched in a while been on a slump i got tired after a while bits are sloppy will clean it up tomoz and fill it in...
all crits appreciated ive got a long way to go...
http://i16.tinypic.com/4yqv7gw.jpg

-GEKS-
08-28-2007, 04:20 PM
get rid of all the arrows
then we'll talk

sketch3
08-28-2007, 04:21 PM
dope letters but hidden behind way too many extensions/arrows/extras

jersOneTIC
08-28-2007, 05:08 PM
urban pirate - colors are coll but work on LETTERS
cerex - it's good except for the last 2 letters..too tall
soof - add something to the o's
here's some shit...haven't finished yet.
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9088/13021ra3.jpg
bump for crits..

minesweep
08-28-2007, 06:02 PM
I dont like how your arrows come out of no where, and the top loop of the R looks abit weird to me, but all in all it looks good.

-Critz?
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4318/dscn0854xk2.jpg

AnteUp
08-28-2007, 06:09 PM
haha ur sig says no more imposter faces, and you put one on ur sketch...lol

heres ur crits... thicken ur lines, make the letters shorter

Akshun
08-28-2007, 06:15 PM
nez- in the first one get rid of the letters inside the letters u know it would look so much better without that. the bottom one man thats nice except the e should be a lil bigger, and the tope of the z shoudl be str8 liek the bottom of it yadadamean

pron and real-give crits and u get them back

jers-already commented

minesweep-go for str8 letters man dont bend or do nothing to em make em fat and str8 and ull be suprised how much u like it. and get ur lines straight. stop drinking coffee and doing acid they give u shaky hands lol.

dim
08-28-2007, 06:56 PM
jers nice man real clean
tasty nice stuff keep that style up
minesweep i like ur e
real u have to many wraparounds on ur letters
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0243.jpg
it says ditm
crits

Hidden Teknique
08-28-2007, 07:03 PM
New throwy, still workin on the N, and still in progress, crit?
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3169/hpim0452zj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dizzle_d
08-28-2007, 07:19 PM
Sinn- I actually really like that, its very nice. colors are good and letters look fine, only thing I would fix IMO is the left middle bar of the D, for some reason it looks to thin. keep it up.
Nez- work on your e's other than that the N and Z look pretty tight.
Pron- pretty clean except you must work on your letters. start out using bars like |. once you get that down start bendin em.:cool:
Real- its hard to see, from what I see though the letters looks pretty good, but its hard to tell with all those arrows, its like covering up the letter structure. (maybe try a sketch without them)
Jers- looks real good, but the E looks a little funky. looks real good though.
Minesweep- definetly lose the drop shadow for now, it makes it kindof hard to see the letters, fatten up your letters a bit too.
Dim- looks real ill, realll ill, only thing is the T looks like a lower case R. nice though.
Anom- that M looks pretty good, O looks to squished in there, space it out a bit.


http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1988/img1853mg6.jpg
ok so basically I hardly got any crits(thanks for those of you who did)
mind the colors and the spider man leg, and the missing 3d in the middle. I messed this one up coloring. Crits on the structure would be good.

Hidden Teknique
08-28-2007, 07:22 PM
thanks for the crits
dizzle d - Try to get rid of that upside down V in the B though, other than that it looks good.

Cyto Aka Son1c
08-28-2007, 07:33 PM
Dizzle d- Fix the B
Hidden- I like everything but the N but like you stated, its a work in progress

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5992/redfed002ie4.jpg

Also just a sketch, crits? and it says Risk and the R is not flowing

Scare2
08-28-2007, 08:09 PM
Hidden technique. that is fuckin dope. i dont think theres much improvement to do. paint it quick.

Dim. i love each letter individually. but together they dont flow try to make them more evenly sized. and a littlle more symetrical or flowy.

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 08:36 PM
cyto kinda looks like draks style
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch3.jpg
just fuckin around
crits?

cyber one
08-28-2007, 08:54 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/Copyofcyer.jpg
Crits?

kelio
08-28-2007, 08:54 PM
Mr Tasty: i love that s.
klipa: nice coloring but im not really feeling it. i really like the first se though.
-Sinn-: yeah i like it sin
NEZ89: looking good. just keep it up. i like your handies. maybe make that e a capitol e.
pr0n: no.
REAL: i like it. maybe lose a few arrows like everyone said.
jersOneTIC: show your s off more.
minesweep: thick bars and letters shorter.
dim: lose the arrows but im feelin that d
Hidden Teknique: i dont know. that n looks like a m. you have nice handies though.
dizzle_d: lose the random arrows at the end. i liek it other than that.
Cyto Aka Son1c: i cant really see what it says.
silentchaos14: now bring your letters closer together.

heres my latest. critz? excuse the shitty coloring.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0008.jpg

cerex89
08-28-2007, 08:58 PM
that handie is killing me that S is all over the place and the C has a different flow from ur other letters

Clowney-Cakes
08-28-2007, 09:17 PM
fossil- looken good sept for the i, dring down the dot

New throwy, still workin on the N, and still in progress, crit?
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3169/hpim0452zj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not bad, bu i think the N looks like a R, maybe just me. dont know

Dusk07
08-28-2007, 09:29 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/Copyofcyer.jpg
Crits?

bumpin this. nice and simple. nice flow dude. i like it.

stumpyhasnolegs
08-28-2007, 09:29 PM
,,,

sketch3
08-28-2007, 09:38 PM
mad ugly, start again

silentchaos14
08-28-2007, 09:40 PM
cyto kinda looks like draks style
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch3.jpg
just fuckin around
crits?
bump cuz bottom of page

BORG
08-28-2007, 09:46 PM
^^^goddamnit morne, bumpin your shit, let it sit for a while, if noone crits it then bump, thes letters need work, get some lined paper and stop wasting pages of a bbook

sKeeLo
08-28-2007, 09:56 PM
phlank - i would try to not end your letters/bars with an arrow, maybe its just me thoo . . your proportions seem off but if you keep rockin that style and practicing things will come together . . .

kelio - it looks like your bars are alil too long n thin, thicker stouter bars may be easier to get down . .

morne - dont pay no mind to borg man, its your bbook fill that bitch then start on a new one . . . but i did fill up the cheap lined notebooks when i was startin out . . .

cerex89
08-28-2007, 10:20 PM
fossil- looken good sept for the i, dring down the dot


not bad, bu i think the N looks like a R, maybe just me. dont know

thats my signature but thanks

dim
08-28-2007, 10:47 PM
morne keep using the bars ur deffenatly making an im provement but when u do ur o dont do the jagged things on the corners
escobar on ur s there is to much space in between the bottom part of the s to the top part and the bars that kinda stick out of ur letters make u loose ur flow in the peice
cyer dope flow man keep it up
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0274.jpg

emel
08-28-2007, 11:19 PM
stumpy- cant even see the letters in that one liner... lose the arrows and dont worry too much about color right now just letters
DIM- i really like that style but the letters are different sizes and i dont see that arrow fitting anywhere
CYBER- those letters are dope keep it uppp
CYTO- really like that K, maybe dont lean your letters that much to the side?:confused:


some sorta recent stuff, im gonna paint the top one soon just not sure bout the colors

TELL MEEEE WUTTT YUU THENNNK


http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8672/craigslsitcw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2231/craigslsit002fx9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.9c3c18ea20.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=craigslsit004ou1.jpg)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.bb6219a5b2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=craigslsit005rg7.jpg)

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2093/craigslsit008ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Samp1e
08-29-2007, 12:13 AM
emel -- diggin it all. sex E on the RES piece. last one is hot.

dim -- D is for dope.

got a scanner, wanted to test it out so i did a quickie
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1629/untitled1om8.png

xFatel.Onex
08-29-2007, 12:21 AM
yo my boy Morne in that sketch up there ^^ your R is so fucked up hahahah

keep workin on that shit your inproving

sevewon
08-29-2007, 12:30 AM
emel- nice colors, keep goin at er
stumpyhasnolegs- stay simple, your jumping to conclusion

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/seve6.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/seve5.jpg

Samp1e
08-29-2007, 12:33 AM
sev -- tone down on the fills, especially the first one. looks like someone's lunch came back up on paper :X. put more work into your letters.

xFatel.Onex
08-29-2007, 12:36 AM
^^ lmao lunch came back up on paper haha (puke if your to stupid to figure that out)

---CRoR---
08-29-2007, 12:37 AM
cror all good except the n, shits deformed



yea i was just lookin at the sketch n was like my N is an eyesore...

ill have more shit up ina few days

sevewon
08-29-2007, 12:46 AM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/sev9.jpg

sevewon
08-29-2007, 12:51 AM
sev -- tone down on the fills, especially the first one. looks like someone's lunch came back up on paper :X. put more work into your letters.

i was actually going for the "puke" look on the first one. fuck, its a good thing someone relized what my first bomb was trying to represent

xFatel.Onex
08-29-2007, 01:11 AM
some old/new ish (dont tell me to use letter structure its not my steez or my cities steez)

http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital076.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital078.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital077.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital069.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital081.jpg

Nem
08-29-2007, 01:14 AM
i love your crazy ideas. other people probably wont.

keep em comin. crank out that weird shit.

calculating infinity
08-29-2007, 01:28 AM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5807/overtcs8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8484/0823072256gy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

Dusk07
08-29-2007, 01:32 AM
dont like the first man
but i like your throw, nice and simple and clean=]

calculating infinity
08-29-2007, 01:42 AM
that first one is an old name
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5360/0829070135io7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/5868/0829070141gi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shred til ur dead
08-29-2007, 01:47 AM
cyber- real clean good stucture i like it
kelio- sorry bud but the only think i like at all is the top char
phlank- im really likin it especially the first one i think the black spills kinda ruined your second one but i love the letters also, loose the arrows
kor- make your o the same size as the other letters
rk- i would say loose that extension on the top of your r
calculating - i agree with dusk on your first two and i like your second two

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/9151/dscn0217rd2.jpg

crits please

calculating infinity
08-29-2007, 01:48 AM
to me, your m seems too spaced in the middle for the rest and the gap in the r between the head and the leg looks weird.

silentchaos14
08-29-2007, 03:16 AM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MornSketch2.jpg
rushed it, i know it looks like shit
crits?

Hoostein
08-29-2007, 03:44 AM
I dont really like the top part of the O, hte part that extends off of the N seems a bit large...But once again, keep practicing those R's

Samp1e
08-29-2007, 04:11 AM
silent -- those things coming out of the top of your letters? don't do em, looks bad. work on that R, don't slant your letters yet. so you know too, when you use your markers, put a piece of paper under the page you're doing so it doesn't bleed through to the next page.

shred -- work on that M and fix that R. the right leg of the R shouldn't start under the base of the curve, it should start at the base of the curve

infinity -- hot throws, can't say the same for the piece. keep doin your thing

fatel -- work on the consistency of your letters, clean up your piecing too. and an FYI, there is another SOBR already out there

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1629/untitled1om8.png

edit: something I worked on since this was originally posted. feel like it's very sky5/skeelo influenced.
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8/untitled2sf7.png
will work on later... need sleep now.

Mr Tasty
08-29-2007, 10:38 AM
workin on new style
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/as.jpg
AS

TricksForKids
08-29-2007, 11:22 AM
MY BITCHES!
the bawksr is back....there seems like a lot of new kids joined over the summer...hmm lets see here..:

Fatel the second last sketch is my favourite, youre on the way to a cool euro style but remember, if youre gunna go outside of the box with your letters you cant automatically assume you dont draw them cleanly, tkae alot of time with nice bold clean lines if you want those letters to pop

calculatiing, your hiding to many letters in the first sketch, and that last letter, r? or lowercase n? is too fucked with to see what it is, the throwup on the other hand..paint it...now.

shred, im glad youre starting off with simple letters, but sketches become 10 times worse when you add that awwwwful outline thats like a centimetere away from all the other letters

Sample, hype shit, your first sketch is better, but im loving the M in the second one, dont try to go too crazy, your simple stuff speaks enough for itself


silentchaos, those extensions youre adding to your letters dont work, especially on the O, you have the shape of simple letters down, so keep them that way

Tasty, it looks decent but i cant give crits to a scrunched up piece in pencil, taske time, spread out your letters, and use some damn pen

South-Pole
08-29-2007, 11:38 AM
Seve-looks ill im realy loving the colouring
Samp-those letters are dope,you improved madly
morne-make it cleaner,letters are ok
cyber-looks cool would look good when painted
Emel-nice simple
stumpy-new to graff thread right away
escobar-keep using bars
taste-not realy feeling it

exchange i done with dawsek

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Dawsekexchange.jpg

sticker i made

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SETH.jpg

random piece done on a show box

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Amen-2.jpg

BORG
08-29-2007, 12:42 PM
south-pole dont write amen, this is a freight king in the south, not only that but think of who else write amen, so common, be more original

tasty- its hard for me to make out your letters, you should give it a pen outline, and erase all the other bullshit

REAL..
08-29-2007, 01:21 PM
samp1e i really like that second one i know what ya mean bout the influence but i reall dig it... kep it up.. xD


haha ill keep doing what i want... sorry if no one likes it rofl
heres it finished and the thicker parts on the outline are intential for 'style' purposes lol...
http://i17.tinypic.com/4qfqdyg.jpg
i may also draw in on black card one day in silver and hopefully it will look like this rofl i inverted this shit just to see and i love it... lol
http://i19.tinypic.com/62f76s6.jpg

Stonk
08-29-2007, 02:13 PM
Calculating infinity - great stuff. that throwy is so nice
Morn - i'd say try some different letters..those look a little funny


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc0015557a.jpg

HadeP
08-29-2007, 02:14 PM
pretty dope manz.
heres shit from my new black book
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/iwoc.jpg
^already posted i believe^
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/iwolthropiece.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Iwolcharak.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Iwol.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/STCcharak.jpg
crits, opinions, thanks all.

alive
08-29-2007, 02:47 PM
edit: something I worked on since this was originally posted. feel like it's very sky5/skeelo influenced.
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8/untitled2sf7.png
will work on later... need sleep now.


funny. this style now is what i think TRASH's style SHOULD be. nothing personal.

alive
08-29-2007, 02:49 PM
workin on new style
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/as.jpg
AS



and this is gorgeous

although crits, if i may, i at first thought it read, lower case aSS. do u see it? i think the right side of the A just flailed a little much.


peace.

Drakula
08-29-2007, 04:10 PM
Tonk-The simples are nice but only the bottom K is right.Also Make the D look rounder.

Tasty-Very nice,but get a better camera if possible.

Samp-Like the style man but I'm really not digging that A.I don't like the lines that go inside the M and I think you should get the inside bit's completely inside the S and the left of the A.

Hade-Again I think you should get rid of all the inside bits and keep the bars consistent.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good280.jpg

New outline.Should be going on a canvas.

HadeP
08-29-2007, 04:10 PM
alive are you kidding me, trash's style right now, is wonderful. theres nothing wrong with it, his work is alot higher quality. no beef.
sample, the style is dope, but the letters should be defined more.
it'll make it clear'r

kelio
08-29-2007, 04:11 PM
HadeP:dope color shitty letters. bring them closer. character has potential.
Mr Tasty: i think its dope. but yeah use some pen. but from what i can read i think its looking good.
calculating infinity: thats rly dope. you using decos to color that?
Samp1e: i think its dope.
South-Pole: bring your letters closer and work on the top right of that e its curved in instead of out.
REAL: that looks ill as fuck.
Stonk: try to keep your letters even. no too bad but keep trying keep them blocks.

decided to post this here since i never get critz in the character thread. so critz?
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0009.jpg

HadeP
08-29-2007, 04:28 PM
kelio, try and keep everything centred
the whole charak doesnt really flow,
the head is dope, but the body isnt centred with the head at all.
and the arm thats holding the baloon isnt as high as the other arm.
also with the baloon tran and draw a more rounder/or more oval shaped(depending on the look your going for)
the ears are pretty dope. but on the inside of the ear try and keep it the same length from the out side of the ear all the way around, if that makes sense.
also whats shitty about my letters?

amk
08-29-2007, 04:40 PM
MY BITCHES!
the bawksr is back....there seems like a lot of new kids joined over the summer...hmm lets see here..:

Fatel the second last sketch is my favourite, youre on the way to a cool euro style but remember, if youre gunna go outside of the box with your letters you cant automatically assume you dont draw them cleanly, tkae alot of time with nice bold clean lines if you want those letters to pop

calculatiing, your hiding to many letters in the first sketch, and that last letter, r? or lowercase n? is too fucked with to see what it is, the throwup on the other hand..paint it...now.

shred, im glad youre starting off with simple letters, but sketches become 10 times worse when you add that awwwwful outline thats like a centimetere away from all the other letters

Sample, hype shit, your first sketch is better, but im loving the M in the second one, dont try to go too crazy, your simple stuff speaks enough for itself


silentchaos, those extensions youre adding to your letters dont work, especially on the O, you have the shape of simple letters down, so keep them that way

Tasty, it looks decent but i cant give crits to a scrunched up piece in pencil, taske time, spread out your letters, and use some damn pen


thank lord.

please crit these Trickssssss

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/g-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/sciferrrrrrr.jpg

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


well...Alive...i think Trash's style is dope and fresh.

drak...take it staeady man..you going way overboard...like you dotn need too....keep it up with those simple letters you used to bust...the BOMB one...i carnt remeber what it exactly said..they was gurd.

peace.
And welcome back daddy trickstah

kelio
08-29-2007, 04:46 PM
thanks for some good critz hard to get some good ones bombing science.
HadeP:your letters arent even, i know people are always saying bars but its true just make all of your letters out of bars. even bars. keep them the same width. and try to keep your piece the same size. just clean it up you really dont have to worry about coloring and 3d and shit. just keep working on your letters not saying go all the way back to simples but just try out some bars.
and amk its dope. color that shit.

Samp1e
08-29-2007, 04:55 PM
funny. this style now is what i think TRASH's style SHOULD be. nothing personal.

i don't know to take this as a good thing or a bad thing or if it's a thing at all : o


Samp-Like the style man but I'm really not digging that A.I don't like the lines that go inside the M and I think you should get the inside bit's completely inside the S and the left of the A.

i had some inking errors :/

your piece has a lot going on in it... might just be that it isn't the cleanest cause the pencil hasn't been erased but i think you've got too much going on, stuff going where it shouldn't be.

HadeP
08-29-2007, 05:01 PM
i used bars before :s the sketch is based on bars, i just added extentions, and i did forget to keep the bars the same width and length, i also added bends to the bars and stuff. but i sort of see what your saying about the width, over all is the style okay tho?

emel
08-29-2007, 05:14 PM
stumpy- cant even see the letters in that one liner... lose the arrows and dont worry too much about color right now just letters
DIM- i really like that style but the letters are different sizes and i dont see that arrow fitting anywhere
CYBER- those letters are dope keep it uppp
CYTO- really like that K, maybe dont lean your letters that much to the side?:confused:


some sorta recent stuff, im gonna paint the top one soon just not sure bout the colors

TELL MEEEE WUTTT YUU THENNNK


http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8672/craigslsitcw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2231/craigslsit002fx9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.9c3c18ea20.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=craigslsit004ou1.jpg)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.bb6219a5b2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=craigslsit005rg7.jpg)

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2093/craigslsit008ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



OMG FIRST SELF-BUMP!:cool:

kelio
08-29-2007, 05:25 PM
i used bars before :s the sketch is based on bars, i just added extentions, and i did forget to keep the bars the same width and length, i also added bends to the bars and stuff. but i sort of see what your saying about the width, over all is the style okay tho?

yeah its good style just keep worrking oon it. it will look good eventually.

HadeP
08-29-2007, 05:32 PM
yeah its good style just keep worrking oon it. it will look good eventually.
thanks man

REAL..
08-29-2007, 05:37 PM
samp1e i really like that second one i know what ya mean bout the influence but i reall dig it... kep it up.. xD


haha ill keep doing what i want... sorry if no one likes it rofl
heres it finished and the thicker parts on the outline are intential for 'style' purposes lol...
http://i17.tinypic.com/4qfqdyg.jpg
i may also draw in on black card one day in silver and hopefully it will look like this rofl i inverted this shit just to see and i love it... lol
http://i19.tinypic.com/62f76s6.jpg
DRAK: i really like that style it has potential...
KELIOS: i like that chars head work on the bodys flow a little but i like it, its quite original...
AMK: smooth as usual...
and bump for crits i know most people hate the extensions but id liek some eal crit cheers... xD

REAL..
08-29-2007, 05:38 PM
oh and reso i like that last one....

calculating infinity
08-29-2007, 06:21 PM
one liner
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/397/0829071820zh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alive
08-29-2007, 06:26 PM
Tonk-The simples are nice but only the bottom K is right.Also Make the D look rounder.

Tasty-Very nice,but get a better camera if possible.

Samp-Like the style man but I'm really not digging that A.I don't like the lines that go inside the M and I think you should get the inside bit's completely inside the S and the left of the A.

Hade-Again I think you should get rid of all the inside bits and keep the bars consistent.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good280.jpg

New outline.Should be going on a canvas.


i think this is dope as hell, could go to the big boy forums. youve skyrocketted man.

alive
08-29-2007, 06:28 PM
alive are you kidding me, trash's style right now, is wonderful. theres nothing wrong with it, his work is alot higher quality. no beef.
sample, the style is dope, but the letters should be defined more.
it'll make it clear'r



no im dead serious. sorry, ive never liked his style at all. doesnt flow for me. yeah no beef, i mean, thats not my sketch anyway, say what u want abt it.

amk
08-29-2007, 06:52 PM
uhm uhm

if i was to sketch these letters..
minus the england footballer leg ahha...

ENGLAND rep for the world lrpd jam 2007..

anyways...would they be worth sketching..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/wag_234313_2908_2317.jpg

my style seems to be better on that shit...im annoyed as hell about it..

AnteUp
08-29-2007, 07:24 PM
amkah baybay it kinda does lukk better on that simulater...hmmmm

CIEN..(sign) fuckin wit new names
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture017.jpg
CRINGE...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture018.jpg
TERN...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture019.jpg

rayseone
08-29-2007, 08:21 PM
, i owuld honetsly consider going back and getting some structure down cuz them letters have none at all bro, wayyy to many forced extensions and horribly bent bars, its kinda obvious your same skethces are really really inspired by sume but when you get to other letters, you have no idea, hook up some simps or somin man, or just thicken up your bars and dont try going nuts like that for a long ish time

Scare2
08-29-2007, 09:10 PM
i agree with alive. sample has style off the hook and trashes style doesnt flow for me either. hes damn good tho

Drak ur progressions goin crazy just keep at what ur doin cuz its working. and deffenitely keep experimenting.

emel their all allright. but the last one is tiiighhht. i love that
S its on fire.

Dial.on
08-29-2007, 09:31 PM
owen- dats a nice oneliner man
AMK- lookin fresh man.. but yeah it kinda looks better on like computer..

new burner.. just qwik.. first time i did it so its kinda sketchy.. crits? (saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0017.jpg

kelio
08-29-2007, 09:45 PM
emel: i like your style just lose the faces.
Drakula: yeah that is very good im really feeling it.
amk: how much time you spend on vandal squad i cant paint for nothin on tht shit.
AnteUp: structure.
Dial.on: really only like your s.
____________________________
heres some more characters only my 2nd and 3rd one. critz :D
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0011.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0010.jpg

Naysayer
08-29-2007, 10:00 PM
I dont really know how to crit karaks, but They arent very good. Keep working on them.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/done.jpg

pocket change
08-29-2007, 10:05 PM
saga-i would straighten out your S it just doesnt flow with the rest of it. and just keep working with bars and experiment, dont have each end f the A flare out at the top. my 2 cents. keep sketching man.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1918/akxd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres a throw i just did. feedback. crits. help. anything.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-29-2007, 11:09 PM
nice throwies does lose the line in the d.
i ve been working on my handy.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/ffff.jpg
lame piece.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/fukk.jpg
finally found someone to sketch with he actually writes what i use to write soze.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/arocl.jpg

AnteUp
08-29-2007, 11:12 PM
fuck...sketchin is goin down tha drain... heres a use of bars... yay or nay...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture020.jpg

teze- the handys are off tha chain...congrats on tha sketchin pahtnah
dial on- like tha colors...
kelio-karaks aren't gud
nay-same as me...bars

Robbie P
08-29-2007, 11:21 PM
Nay, the E and N are really weak.

sex without condoms
08-29-2007, 11:22 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243a.jpg
FOR the Old Heads!!!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243.jpg
for a girlie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072242.jpg
new canvas
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071311.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071620.jpg
new shitty backrounds

AnteUp
08-29-2007, 11:22 PM
haha, ones im havin trouble wit... thanks

enigmatic
08-29-2007, 11:38 PM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/5143/0829072321dr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bazer
08-29-2007, 11:39 PM
i hope youre not writing base now..... well heres a piece i did in school yesterday.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0994.jpg

i didn't even finish the 3ds on those little bazer simples.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-29-2007, 11:41 PM
Handstyle Battle:
word: Santa Claus
Due: When I get 10 entries.
Mod: Edward"Sezer"Hands

enigmatic
08-29-2007, 11:51 PM
Baze your in japan... i think i should be allowed to write what i want.

dim
08-29-2007, 11:52 PM
sex- i rele like that style and the canvas looks great
base- if u lose a little bit of the addonsbut not all of them it would look much better
tezer i like that peice allot and dope chracter too
pane id lose the extension on the upper part of the n
ante up keep workin on it and the letter u feel are ur weekest
kelio not rele feeling those characters
dial on- work on ur a but i like how u bent the s
baze like all ur stuff i rele like that peice and the blue shading u put in some of the corners are nice as well

pr0n
08-29-2007, 11:53 PM
kelio: What kind of crit is "no." . . . especially coming from someone as talentless as you

Bazer
08-29-2007, 11:58 PM
Baze your in japan... i think i should be allowed to write what i want.
no no if i want to write it than its your problem. im in houston txas im just not open bout it. i writer bazer. not baze, base, or baser. but im sayin, base is a pretty established writer from philadelphia.

http://artcrimes.com/joebase/greenyellowjoe_base.jpg
http://artcrimes.com/joebase/stylemafiajoe_base.jpg

Chalk
08-30-2007, 12:26 AM
bazeeee- that painted shit is niceeee. i am in love with the fill on that first one.

sezer - i like that last pic a lot. but the love throwy reminds me a bit of OD

dial.on. i think that your S is way to horizontal. the top of the A looks like it's getting its hair parted.the G looks like a Y the way you have the part of the A overlap it. but that last A is ok in my eyes maybe thicken the bars a bit.

i thought it be time to work on a throwie *gasp*
the A still needs work. and i think i should add a little funk to the H still. but this is really the closest i have come to what i think is a solid throw.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkthrows.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-30-2007, 12:37 AM
chalk loving them throwies.
that last picture is my homeboy sozer not me.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/heather.jpg

Captain
08-30-2007, 12:38 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkthrows.jpg

ATTENTION PLEASE

this is sex.

that is all.


_______
bazer, nice penstyle. you're deff gettin' there.

base, work on your letters some.

Dial.on
08-30-2007, 01:01 AM
tezer- ill shit man.. like how ur shit is like simple bars but wit ur own flow to it.. i unno yo hard to explain what im tryin to get at..lol.. ye charac is sik to
does- nice throw..get it around..

umm yeah lookin for crits but if its anything about the extention I KNOW i was bored as shit..try to clear em out.. the 2007 is wak too so yeah anyhitng else...(saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0019.jpg

Pico Hollywood
08-30-2007, 02:59 AM
Baze-GooD shit Classic
Chalk-nice Throwies

CLK
08-30-2007, 09:55 AM
Dial.on - nice burner
Chalk - dope throwies

http://photos1.hi5.com/0009/324/322/HT0T6g324322-02.jpg
http://photos1.hi5.com/0009/611/314/vieEl9611314-02.jpg
chek these out, crits please

dim
08-30-2007, 12:33 PM
bazeeee- that painted shit is niceeee. i am in love with the fill on that first one.

sezer - i like that last pic a lot. but the love throwy reminds me a bit of OD

dial.on. i think that your S is way to horizontal. the top of the A looks like it's getting its hair parted.the G looks like a Y the way you have the part of the A overlap it. but that last A is ok in my eyes maybe thicken the bars a bit.

i thought it be time to work on a throwie *gasp*
the A still needs work. and i think i should add a little funk to the H still. but this is really the closest i have come to what i think is a solid throw.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkthrows.jpg
bumping this for illness nice job chalk:D

sketch3
08-30-2007, 12:38 PM
clk nice shit, not feeling the second one much

chalk dope
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2074/skefq1.jpg

crits please??

NICCSACC
08-30-2007, 01:05 PM
try harder its sloppy looking

Naysayer
08-30-2007, 01:15 PM
CLK - I like it keep it up.
chalk - very nice
sketch - i dont think its that bad. Clean up your lines a little more. I think with some tweaking you might have something.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/again.jpg
digitly filled.

alive
08-30-2007, 01:30 PM
yd u fill it. and y the hell did u do those dots? the letters are decent, work on consistancy.

klipa
08-30-2007, 01:35 PM
chalk, love them throwies
naysayer, try spacing your letters out a bit more or keep the overlaps cosistant

sketch, get a bit more simple work with block letters with the lines all one width them go over it also try adding a bit of 3d and use a thiner pen
peace

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7914/cimg0867pz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bust me some crits.

sketch3
08-30-2007, 01:47 PM
kipla lookin dope
normally my shits simpler i was trying out extennsions
an as for it being sloopy i outlined it with the first pen i grab,wich just happened to be mad fat

sex without condoms
08-30-2007, 01:47 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243a.jpg
FOR the Old Heads!!!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243.jpg
for a girlie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072242.jpg
new canvas
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071311.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071620.jpg
new shitty backrounds

hump da bump!

dizzle_d
08-30-2007, 01:56 PM
Sex that is really good...
really good.
keep that coming, I always love seeing your eye candy.

sank.
08-30-2007, 02:07 PM
kovr 3rd one down = sex.

and chalk that throw is lookin dope.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0740.jpg

daisyface
08-30-2007, 02:33 PM
sank-looks good, cept the top of the k maybe?
sex without condoms- i really dig that style
klipa- nothin to say, it looks good and clean
naysayer-add some 3d!

i got bored...might as well get some crits?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/paintthetown.jpg

kelio
08-30-2007, 04:19 PM
this is my first post here, just a quick pen sketch with a skull charac :)

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5999/pr0nskullhv3.jpg

no is what you get when you fucking suck and have no structure at all.
i might not be that good but you have to start somewhere.
lets battle, since your so much better than me fucker. ha.
you name the word.
oh and since no is not a good enough crit for you, here you go.
use bars. make your letters the same size. get rid of the gay skull.
stop with the arrows and the little bars at the end of your letters, you
don't even need 3d on those shit letters. go back to basics, look at the keys on your keyboard and start from there. also check out the new to graff thread.


1nOnly Baze: looking good.
Chalk: that looks so dope i think i like it better without the face though.
sketch3: use thicker bars.
Naysayer: looking goodd so far i would remove the bar of the left leg of the first a though.
klipa: im really feeling that.
sex without condoms: damn i love your shit.
sank: i like it so clean. needs some color now


-kelio

REAL..
08-30-2007, 04:44 PM
this is for CRZ... lol i spent ages on venom and then got bored and did a half ass job on the CRZ... i cant do 3 letters rofl but u can tell its me...
http://i9.tinypic.com/6d2g5mb.jpg

REAL..
08-30-2007, 04:46 PM
samp1e i really like that second one i know what ya mean bout the influence but i reall dig it... kep it up.. xD


haha ill keep doing what i want... sorry if no one likes it rofl
heres it finished and the thicker parts on the outline are intential for 'style' purposes lol...
http://i17.tinypic.com/4qfqdyg.jpg
i may also draw in on black card one day in silver and hopefully it will look like this rofl i inverted this shit just to see and i love it... lol
http://i19.tinypic.com/62f76s6.jpg


bump coz i didnt get one word.... -.-... lol

sketch3
08-30-2007, 04:46 PM
dope, venoms ill

pez ss
08-30-2007, 05:28 PM
drak- your shit is sik but u need to use a litter pencil if u want to get a clean fill cause that dark probly wont erase that well
clk-that ck is sik lose the aroows tho but the first sketch needs some work
chalk-man that a good throw but it could be better u wanta extange trows i write aver??
ske use a thiner outliner and just fucus on the letters use a pencle first if u dont already

pocket change
08-30-2007, 05:57 PM
saga-i would straighten out your S it just doesnt flow with the rest of it. and just keep working with bars and experiment, dont have each end f the A flare out at the top. my 2 cents. keep sketching man.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1918/akxd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres a throw i just did. feedback. crits. help. anything.

crits, comments or whatever. didnt really get anything on it other then dial and sezer thanks guys.


real-looks pretty dope. cant tell what the first letter is though. T?
sank-looks good keep it up.
chalk-looks good, i would just mess around with the H and A a little.

Dial.on
08-30-2007, 06:11 PM
real- thats a DOPE character.. carnage YEE

another burner..3rd sketch.. still workin out the bugs in it...keep the crits comin..there helpin.. its just sketch i didnt wanna bother colourin it.cuzz im gunna do another one anyways..(saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0021.jpg

sketch3
08-30-2007, 06:27 PM
ur a looks too much like an s

AnteUp
08-30-2007, 06:32 PM
okay pen freestyle...

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture021.jpg

pocket change
08-30-2007, 06:39 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1918/akxd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump, end of page. crits, comments, anything. last time im bumping this shit.

saga- dont make your S so horizontal.

AnteUp
08-30-2007, 06:46 PM
give to get

bountyhunter113
08-30-2007, 06:49 PM
entry for the handie battle, didnt come out as i wanted, but teh marker was startin to fade:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/santa.png
too bad my scanner wont scan my chars n stuff good, coz i'm rly excelin in em n detailed drawings, still not that good at letters n stuff tho

ante- dunno if it's just me, but dat "Ci" is rly similar to chalk's......no beef tho, just reminds me of his stuff
chalk-em were some rly nice throwies
dial.on-looks kewl, reminds me of some guy called engym(not the one from here on BS)

AnteUp
08-30-2007, 06:51 PM
haha, nope mah shits not even close to chalks, not even as good

Stonk
08-30-2007, 07:37 PM
i would rework that handie..not so good at all.

trying a new not so simple simple style :)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/Tikealmostwild.jpg

BORG
08-30-2007, 07:54 PM
ante- letters need some structure, take some time and work on em
bounty-looks decent, better than mine
stonk- sorry to rain on your parade but thats simple, i dont think the k and e flow as nicely as the t and i, work on the k and e and it'd look dope

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8451/june17010aq3.jpg

chalk-nie throwie, finally more than 2 letters, like it, made me feel like doin a couple quicks

alive
08-30-2007, 08:14 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03405.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03406.jpg

Seek139
08-30-2007, 10:08 PM
Hey guys been awhile since I posted but i got some flicks :D

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02739.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02738.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02736.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-30-2007, 10:53 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/foool.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/heather.jpg

dizzle_d
08-30-2007, 11:00 PM
damn Teze, those colors are making me want some candy haha. really nice color choice, and the piece is probably my favorite I've seen all week.
second one is dope too.
damn I can't believe how much you progressed over the summer.

keep it up dute

Hoostein
08-31-2007, 12:31 AM
Tezer, I love that! Great colors :p

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-31-2007, 12:52 AM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/foool.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/fuckoner.jpg
expirementing with different e's
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/dddddddd.jpg

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 12:56 AM
my shits wack!
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital099.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital103.jpg

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 12:59 AM
yo Tezer im feeling tht shit expecialy the fill in's

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-31-2007, 01:04 AM
mad potential in the second pic.
scrap the first one work with the bottom one but simplify it some more. more letter structure.

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 01:13 AM
i hate using letter structure pisses the fuck outta me i need my letters to flow freely i honestly dont care if there mega bunk over the years ill learn but ill never use letter structure hahaha(dont tell me ill get no where cuz its not true)but hey everyones shit is bunk to some one

Stonk
08-31-2007, 01:14 AM
tezer those fills are so good, i love em.
and personally i like the lower case e's better.

i was kinda happy with this but now im really seeing the problems wit hthe flow.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc000c7a58.jpg

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 01:15 AM
i live in canada and im tryin to rock a euro stlye hahaha im also latin no europian in me :D

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 01:16 AM
Tike that shit isnt bad you have potential which i dont hahaha

d_g
08-31-2007, 01:26 AM
i hate using letter structure pisses the fuck outta me i need my letters to flow freely i honestly dont care if there mega bunk over the years ill learn but ill never use letter structure hahaha(dont tell me ill get no where cuz its not true)but hey everyones shit is bunk to some one

That seriously is stupid. You do know what letter structure is right?

Graffiti is about letters, and letters have structure, and with out structure they're just shapes.

Nice shit teze, you posted the same pic twice though tsk tsk tsk :p

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 01:28 AM
d_g my letters are supossed to look like shapes haha its my steez :D

Scare2
08-31-2007, 01:49 AM
yeah DG is mad right. its not graff if thers no letter structure. if thers a letter thers letter structure. it just either looks like shit or looks good. i think wut u mean is u like more free letter structure. and no ur letter structure isnt even free. its angular and awkward looking. no offense but keep practicing and eventually ull realize that dg is right.
(im not sure anyone really like letters looking like shapes onless its cool)
and all letters are shapes.???

mad props to Teze. ive never seen u do anything bad. soma the best styles on bs.

chalks throwie Cs are rad.

and whoever was doing that rad 3d lettering on the last page and got no crits it looks reall good. the first one is the best. other than that i dont remember much in perticular.

borg ur throws were nice too tho.

alive
08-31-2007, 02:00 AM
simply inconcievably stupid.

rudez
08-31-2007, 02:13 AM
hey guys im new to this forumn but ive been lookin at it 4 a while,
anyway ive been practising some throwies with the name slick (thts my tag as well as 'rudez')

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u140/rudez01/DSC00069.jpg

and here is a throwie i did, i made up the letters n the spot so i no it doesnt look good, its my first one to but watever:

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u140/rudez01/DSC00058.jpg

btw im from sydney

critisism will be greatly appreciated!
thnx guys

xFatel.Onex
08-31-2007, 02:18 AM
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1690/dscn0218cs2.jpg

crits please

page 2788^i think... yea man im really gunna listen to you when you come up with this stuff you call graff....

EDIT* sorry im sounding like a jackass im just pissed off cuz i have a broken wrist and it hurts to sketch

Hyperactiveness?
08-31-2007, 03:49 AM
AnteUp I can see that what your trying to go for here. Keep trying to make all the letters work and after awhile play with the sizes of the letters. Itll turn out fucking awesome if you keep at it.
Stonk im feeling that. Nice thick readable letters thats the type of style I really enjoy. Thumbs up.
BORG Sweet throwie sketches man they're fucking clean sketches man. I prefer that pinkish one.
Seek139 Loving the third flick. I would say not to bother cleaning it up I like how its all laid out.
Tezer thats so sick man I wish I had your kind of vision.
xFatel.Onex Im really liking the 2nd flick like I said earlier I love creative, simple letters, cant get enough.
rudez Id advise to stick to blackbook work for now and keep your paint of the walls. Just practice some letter forms for now

I've been gone for awhile but I got some new shit to post.. Then im gone for the next couple of weeks. So see yall sometime in awhile again.

Friend of mine. He quit writing.
http://a433.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/127/l_fb4c3278b0b980c32764a6ff240c2798.jpg
http://a180.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/65/l_71ba82daf3794e821d08a54c65868db3.jpg
Development through my name.
http://a356.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/99/l_ebeeaa904807da698835f052a0347713.jpg
Dont ask about the U on this one.. I dunno the answer to the question lol
http://a258.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/93/l_f4fadd53aae5e5d477b7f32b49328ab9.jpg
http://a461.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/70/l_dcc70f010514e2ea8b0b41c41d5fe184.jpg

Heres some random character flicks
http://a854.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/126/l_c83578c0c9cf920b9b9de8345651e705.jpg
Dont mind the "Hiep" thing, I was just trying to make everything look cartoony
http://a502.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_69db290a39e00896913a4cf27e31a0fd.jpg
http://a393.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/83/l_c86830bdd2043ae47e596ac368bf33e8.jpg
Dont stop the practice! Compare that shit to this drawing I did when I was 8 lmfao
http://a648.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_150a0682af21bb2b973c2fbda435a96f.jpg
Leave crits for me to read when I get back. Thanks. Peace.

alive
08-31-2007, 12:53 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03407.jpg

Captain
08-31-2007, 01:33 PM
rudez- new to graff thread.

hyperactive, i don't like any of the sketches except the last one. As for the characters, I'm only feeling the one with the chick and the dude.

Quick penstyle, I know it's really messy.

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8567/img1690ru6.jpg

Samp1e
08-31-2007, 02:43 PM
aww dammit i hit back and lost my post... again.

captain -- work the lower half of the C, all of the A, tweak the upper S, enlarge the O, tweak the P.

alive -- can't make out the second letter... an A? never really been a fan of your throw style, but to each his own

hyper -- that mario is sick as hell :) really, the purple hiepur is the only thing i'm feeling.

rudez, shred -- new to graff

eh
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4449/untitled1tr9.png

alive
08-31-2007, 02:47 PM
its a lower case A. for CAER. c lowercase a cap E lower r

i think u shouldnt have defined the left leg of the A within the S. otherwise work on consistancy and drop the fill.

Seek139
08-31-2007, 02:50 PM
Thx for the critz from everyone

sample - try working on the end form how the piece as a whole will look on the left side is seems to dip idk if you wanted that but just something i saw.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02745.jpg

pez ss
08-31-2007, 03:13 PM
real- thats dope now finish it ad some colour a nice fill and some 3d do a back round to.
hyper- i was going to tell u to do block letters then i see u did that last peice is sex
edward- lovin all of it
sample- use less 3d and less extentions at the bottom of the s.
a simpler thing i did
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/aversimple.jpg and a quik throw i did for chalkhttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/chalkthrow.jpg crits comments??

daisyface
08-31-2007, 03:33 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/paintthetown.jpg

bump...

pez-that chalk throw is sweet
seek-i would say clean up your lines and it would look alot better
hype-last character i like

jersOneTIC
08-31-2007, 03:56 PM
captain - the o is too small
samp1e -think it would look better if you add something to the bottom of the p
seek139 - nice style
daisyface - good but not feelin the p and the a
just a pen freestyle i did...says "TRICK"
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3941/13022mu3.jpg

Seek139
08-31-2007, 03:57 PM
daisy i'm gonna go work on another piece but in pencil this time...i freestyle all of the pieces. because i usually keep outlines as painting is an everyday thing for me

emokid
08-31-2007, 06:04 PM
pretty funky daisyface

jers, keep working on letters, decent though

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6836.jpg

pencil outline. yes the p and the r are meant to be smaller.

bountyhunter113
08-31-2007, 06:17 PM
Hey guys been awhile since I posted but i got some flicks :D

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02739.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02738.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02736.jpg
looks fresh, but some letters need work same goes for ur handy
jers-lose the arrows and we'll discuss your structure
samp-heh lovin everyting but the fill,lolz

yea guys i realized how garbage that handy was that i posted.......i've improved like 100x since yesterday.........was practicing durin all meh classes ;p flix of new stuff on sunday

darthbaker
08-31-2007, 06:32 PM
i hope youre not writing base now..... well heres a piece i did in school yesterday.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0994.jpg

i didn't even finish the 3ds on those little bazer simples.

damn thats tight because thats my name hahah nice u thats the only letter i dont like too much in my name but nice dude

emokid
08-31-2007, 07:02 PM
bump

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6837.jpg

with colour this time. well. some colour. badly coloured in fact.

darthbaker
08-31-2007, 07:09 PM
http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/5499/img0008vp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my horrible attempt at baltimore handstyle

thesilentvandal
08-31-2007, 07:40 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/DAWSNEWSKETCHSKETCHEURO.jpg

Seek139
08-31-2007, 08:22 PM
daws reminds me of uk trains

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02746.jpg

pencil and yes i know the perspective gets off i would paint is slanting down \ on the rails. stay up :D

Roolete
08-31-2007, 08:26 PM
emo this is what i would do...take the bar with the red out btw. just my opinion
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/untitled.jpg

Gumdrop.Behemoth
08-31-2007, 08:41 PM
or instead of making a upper case a try a lower case imo

sKeeLo
08-31-2007, 08:48 PM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2695/1282849yk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

still got add all the lil bubbles, arrows, toxic splashes and drips that help distract the eye from my letter structure and poor fill color decisions . . . not too thrilled with this one, feel rusty and letters r coming out clumpy . .

wers - did u see the cardboard WERS i did for you a few weeks ago?

rayseone
08-31-2007, 08:53 PM
sky that is ill man but on the c in caer, it looks like a E because of the extension, there is a few messed up extenisons but other than that it looks ill

silentchaos14
08-31-2007, 09:03 PM
pear- what roolette said.
dawsek- good as always, nice euro feel to it.
seek- i have no idea what to say cuz 3-d aint my thing
skeelo-no comment cuz i cant read it
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Throws.jpg

new throw im workin on
crits?

dim
08-31-2007, 09:05 PM
skeelo the dc to nyc is ill i cant wait to see it finished
seek i rele like ur block 3-d style

Captain
08-31-2007, 09:20 PM
pear, it's nice, but it doesn't seem like you've tried to variate your style/letters at all. Might be time to try and progress.

daws, not much to crit, try making it even cleaner?

sky it's just a teeny little bit less awesome than usual, but it seems you know that already.

seek, #1 define the letters more, right now you really gotta look for 'em. #2 try spending more time perfecting your 3d and cleanliness. usually your stuff is just a little bit off and a little bit unclean, but it's enough to almost ruin it. your shit would be really hot otherwise though.




Quick penstyle, I know it's really messy.

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8567/img1690ru6.jpg
bumped for a couple more crits

Blackeyed_Pea
08-31-2007, 10:54 PM
work on your structure a bit captain, your letters arent sized the same and it goes thick to thin in a sort of bad way, just keep the sizing in general consistant for now.

rayseone
08-31-2007, 11:11 PM
captain i would say get rid off all the lil lump kinda thingys, if your gonna put an extension there, either put it on fully or not at all, i think the best letter is the s, your a is real weak so work on that, same with your C, your o is just a circle so its no difference really and your p is pretty decent, but yeah, i would try to keep all your letters the same size, until you can execute it right you kno

anyways i will have something up later on hopefully

dajam410
09-01-2007, 12:46 AM
Some quick shit.



http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7300494.jpg

fox on a trampoline
09-01-2007, 01:35 AM
sKeeLo,very nice i like the bottom one just cause the can...what kinda pens/markers u use?

Gumdrop.Behemoth
09-01-2007, 03:38 AM
yea skeelo I seen it liked it a lot to thanks!

xFatel.Onex
09-01-2007, 03:54 AM
hey seek can you show me where your letters are? its to complex if you look at daims stuff its still very simple it just pops out at you and he makes it look like its in a fighting stance

silentchaos14
09-01-2007, 05:50 AM
pear- what roolette said.
dawsek- good as always, nice euro feel to it.
seek- i have no idea what to say cuz 3-d aint my thing
skeelo-no comment cuz i cant read it
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Throws.jpg

new throw im workin on
crits?
bump to new page.

amk
09-01-2007, 07:01 AM
aww dammit i hit back and lost my post... again.

captain -- work the lower half of the C, all of the A, tweak the upper S, enlarge the O, tweak the P.

alive -- can't make out the second letter... an A? never really been a fan of your throw style, but to each his own

hyper -- that mario is sick as hell :) really, the purple hiepur is the only thing i'm feeling.

rudez, shred -- new to graff

eh
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4449/untitled1tr9.png

this is very nice...
the A is really wobbly tho but i can see why os of the connection from the S...but damn that P is furesh and the M an S are jus up to par.


Dawsek...quit doing gay euro fills just to make those letters look euro.....euro isnt about gay colours and shit...its about orginality..

and you know i told you to look at euro shit before you do it to get an idea...well my good freind Propz...i showed you his shit remeber...he said not to look at anything and do WHAT YOU THINK is euro...that way you get originality...

peace.

bountyhunter113
09-01-2007, 11:00 AM
for those who said they couldn't read skeelo's letters..........it's pretty obvious to see imo:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/caer_outline.png

Seek139
09-01-2007, 12:06 PM
hey seek can you show me where your letters are? its to complex if you look at daims stuff its still very simple it just pops out at you and he makes it look like its in a fighting stance

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/showone.jpg

I write N A R the reason why I don't do the whole daim thing is because i am working to be original you know? the way the I think of my style and i'm not saying I'm a king or someshit when I explain my style is that it reminds me of the city. Its the reason the letter structure stays blocked and the rest is madness the letters are the buildings of the city the extensions vines on the trees all coming together in the concrete jungle. What I hope it will look like in 3-5 + years is something of a "wildstyle" 3D we will see

Also for all the people who had comments about my actual sketching ability I'M WORKING ON IT unlike other forms of graffiti everything has to be perfect in 3D styles if the eye catches on to it your screwed , like its not even funny how you can ruin a whole piece by not doing one line right so alot of the times I do my pieces in pen because i like the flow I don't usually fill my pieces with color in the book because i need it to be clear when i get to the rails. So I am working on it and I will not quit and thx for all the comments.

klipa
09-01-2007, 12:30 PM
sumat new.
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1012/cimg0870zp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)