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whahappen?
09-01-2007, 03:08 PM
http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/5499/img0008vp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my horrible attempt at baltimore handstyle
?

klipa
09-01-2007, 03:58 PM
any thaughts??
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/8979/cimg0880wn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-01-2007, 04:50 PM
Klipa- fix the middle line, its too bendy

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/294/gfuck1fr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SOOF
09-01-2007, 05:45 PM
crits?
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/09-01-07_1829.jpg

alive
09-01-2007, 05:50 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/showone.jpg

I write N A R the reason why I don't do the whole daim thing is because i am working to be original you know? the way the I think of my style and i'm not saying I'm a king or someshit when I explain my style is that it reminds me of the city. Its the reason the letter structure stays blocked and the rest is madness the letters are the buildings of the city the extensions vines on the trees all coming together in the concrete jungle. What I hope it will look like in 3-5 + years is something of a "wildstyle" 3D we will see

Also for all the people who had comments about my actual sketching ability I'M WORKING ON IT unlike other forms of graffiti everything has to be perfect in 3D styles if the eye catches on to it your screwed , like its not even funny how you can ruin a whole piece by not doing one line right so alot of the times I do my pieces in pen because i like the flow I don't usually fill my pieces with color in the book because i need it to be clear when i get to the rails. So I am working on it and I will not quit and thx for all the comments.


not to be a dick, that shits ill, and i couldnt do it, but any piece can easily be fucked up, thats not just in 3d aiight? dont act like ur above straight letters.

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-01-2007, 07:10 PM
Klipa- fix the middle line, its too bendy

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/294/gfuck1fr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump 4 crits

+

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/3223/lp0wt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

silentchaos14
09-01-2007, 09:19 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneThrowie2-1.jpg
cleaned it up a bit

sample- looks sick but the A seems weird to me.
seek- now that i can read it, the r seem more like a capital.
cyto- the colour killed it but it was decent before the fill

alive
09-01-2007, 09:20 PM
get rid of the circle inside of the O, its ppointless, its obviously an O. then work on getting all the letters the same size, ur m is double sized.

Seek139
09-01-2007, 09:32 PM
not to be a dick, that shits ill, and i couldnt do it, but any piece can easily be fucked up, thats not just in 3d aiight? dont act like ur above straight letters.

Like I said above not acting like a king here and thats not what I meant no need to get in the red sorry.

BORG
09-01-2007, 09:38 PM
nar- i'm not big on 3d, but i do feel you should atleast make an actual letter and then do your little add ons and shit,honestly that just looks like a huge unstructured puzzle, which alot of people can do

Stim
09-01-2007, 09:51 PM
I like that samp and the dajam joint one page back. I see improvement in small incriments from everyone which is awesome. long live BS toy forum

Seek139
09-01-2007, 10:04 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02747.jpg

Hey atleast it's a 3D puzzle right...lol new one from me tonight calming it down alittle but keeping it fresh in a progression uphill towards the ultimatum style definitum

alive
09-02-2007, 09:35 AM
well BORG, ur wrong. but the simpler one here is noticibly better. btw, not to be an ass, but the"concrete jungle" theme is played.

alive
09-02-2007, 09:36 AM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2695/1282849yk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

still got add all the lil bubbles, arrows, toxic splashes and drips that help distract the eye from my letter structure and poor fill color decisions . . . not too thrilled with this one, feel rusty and letters r coming out clumpy . .

wers - did u see the cardboard WERS i did for you a few weeks ago?



this is dope man, thanks soo much. i cant wait for it!




http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0001.jpg

Seek139
09-02-2007, 10:25 AM
well BORG, ur wrong. but the simpler one here is noticibly better. btw, not to be an ass, but the"concrete jungle" theme is played.

LOL Its the graffiti fashion police run!

pez ss
09-02-2007, 10:55 AM
real- thats dope now finish it ad some colour a nice fill and some 3d do a back round to.
hyper- i was going to tell u to do block letters then i see u did that last peice is sex
edward- lovin all of it
sample- use less 3d and less extentions at the bottom of the s.
a simpler thing i did
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/aversimple.jpg and a quik throw i did for chalkhttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/chalkthrow.jpg crits comments??
bumpin for crits
sky- thats dope likein the green 3D
seek- that a is really good i dont really like ur r cause its dosent look like one maybe start with the letter then do ur thing same with the n.

xFatel.Onex
09-02-2007, 11:14 AM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02747.jpg

Hey atleast it's a 3D puzzle right...lol new one from me tonight calming it down alittle but keeping it fresh in a progression uphill towards the ultimatum style definitum
See this is nice better then the last and SHieeet son thats one huge ass sketch book and pencil!!!:rolleyes::eek:

Roolete
09-02-2007, 01:10 PM
bored outta my mind last night...tried something ridiculous, and i cant figure out if its decent or complete crap. prolly crap
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0279.jpg

Drakula
09-02-2007, 01:15 PM
I would say crap.

Stick to your other style that was fresh!

edit:sorry I though you were Bastardo for a minute there haha.But yeah I still don't like it.

awormiscoming
09-02-2007, 02:33 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/oreksthrow.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/oreksthrow666.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/skerothrowcharacter.jpg

MontanaPainter
09-02-2007, 02:55 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/oreksthrow.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/oreksthrow666.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/skerothrowcharacter.jpg
i am loving that hand style on the veriie top. when you are doing the outlines on ur throwies it looks like you paused when drawing it man. try like flicking your wrist(what i do)

amk
09-02-2007, 03:27 PM
jea..
those hands are ill.
develop from those.

alive
09-02-2007, 03:34 PM
this is dope man, thanks soo much. i cant wait for it!




http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0001.jpg



bbbbbump

scoot
09-02-2007, 03:37 PM
clean that up bro i can only see a "C" i think..

whahappen?
09-02-2007, 03:43 PM
this is dope man, thanks soo much. i cant wait for it!




http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0001.jpg
not feeling the middle bar of the a
like it just looks really weird

alive
09-02-2007, 03:46 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/SCAN0001-1.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/SCAN0002.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/SCAN0003.jpg

whahappen?
09-02-2007, 03:49 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneThrowie2-1.jpg
cleaned it up a bit

sample- looks sick but the A seems weird to me.
seek- now that i can read it, the r seem more like a capital.
cyto- the colour killed it but it was decent before the fill
make the bottom of the m like this
like make the lines go further up
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6689/hel3tl1.png
shitty ms paint thing but you get the idea..

awormiscoming
09-02-2007, 03:51 PM
Here's some more...
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-hands2.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-hands.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-handshw.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-HWthrowie.jpg
School is cool.

Chalk
09-02-2007, 04:15 PM
extchange with lost
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/lostchalk.jpg
mediocre letters. and a piss poor job coloring, i wish i could do marker fades.

pez thanks for the effort. but for me personal.y i feel the A looks to much like an R and the K could easily be confused for the H or the other way around.

alive if i knew where you lived i would personaly give you a pencil and an earaser i want to see some clean lines from you pleeeeasssseeee.

amk
09-02-2007, 04:18 PM
Chalk...like it man...dont like the prurple 3d accents tho i mus say...sorry
Alive....why not try sum new letters ?
Awariscoming...like i said..develop from the hand style...i like it.


aight im out now goodbye

scoot
09-02-2007, 04:22 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/eastcoaststyle.jpg

some new stuff i just threw together.. looked better until i outlined it..

aver - make ur V look more like a V its kinda looking like ur name is AUER
chalk - not really diggin the L or T .. but that just could be my oppinion

the end
09-02-2007, 04:43 PM
what does that say scoot?

just drew,
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/1156/img00187tw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Chalk
09-02-2007, 05:23 PM
ok i guess i'll buy that G and E. but really man that N, no matter how you sell it just doen't read.

sketch3
09-02-2007, 06:12 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/eastcoaststyle.jpg

some new stuff i just threw together.. looked better until i outlined it..

aver - make ur V look more like a V its kinda looking like ur name is AUER
chalk - not really diggin the L or T .. but that just could be my oppinion


are there even letters ther?

amk
09-02-2007, 06:27 PM
not worth a post.

xKAPTIVx
09-02-2007, 06:28 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/alexis27onfire/throwie1.jpg
i write kaptiv so im just trying to make it shorter.
not sure what else to do so im going to throw up ka
thoughts?

silentchaos14
09-02-2007, 06:29 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneThrowie3.jpg

took whahappens advice, didnt turn out how i wanted it tho.
crits?

bountyhunter113
09-02-2007, 06:31 PM
caer, that e needs work coz it jus looks akward
u should get influence from asesr's work(not bitin), coz i swear to god his a's and e's are fucking amazing
the end-ur letters are to skinny, beef em up and dont leave big empty spaces
chalk-yea, the middle bar on the "s" is too long n i'm not feelin dat "o"
amk- i think u tryin to put in too much style, not feelin this rite now

amk
09-02-2007, 06:33 PM
god damn..
gotta get this place how it used to be man
GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS.
freaking nora.

Morne...lol...did you even put effort into it ?...it seems asiff you just get a pen and draw the letters without doing them properly...no effort at all.sorry.

Kaptiv...pretty simple i guess....but it dosnt look right....the letters look off....use bars to make letters ... i doubt you will but hey thats my crit.

look in the new 2 graff thread for bar help.

GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS IN THE TOY FORUM
add to your sig ^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dd.jpg

Bounty.
i aint pushin anything.
im tryna advanced with addons..
whats the fucking point in sticking with gay basic letters without moving on.
its rediculous.
you have to move on from basic lettering sometime.

silentchaos14
09-02-2007, 06:49 PM
whats so wrong with my letters? it looks like morne to me, try be more specific next time.
with yur letters i aint sure if it says AMK or A~K, so maybe work on that?

whahappen?
09-02-2007, 06:55 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneThrowie3.jpg

took whahappens advice, didnt turn out how i wanted it tho.
crits?
i think it looks a little better but curve the longer bottom parts of the m, like the parts i showed you, bend them like how the other letters bend
just a suggestion you dont HAVE to do it
amk dont do that tag again, the piece is okay
really fucking new and abstract

tense
09-02-2007, 07:16 PM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x207/TMONEYSHONEY/IMG_1290.jpg

Possible throwie

sketch3
09-02-2007, 07:19 PM
posiible throwie upie in my mouthie


thats awfull, new to graff thread

Mr Tasty
09-02-2007, 07:19 PM
noo amk..not liking that style...usualy love what u do but damn...this def is the wrong way to moving to basics to addons..random addons that dont make sense and just make the piece look ugly..lost ur letter structure...ur addons should fit in with the letter structure

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-02-2007, 07:28 PM
GUYS I NEED HELP WITH THIS S and figuring out what the extensions should be..

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6987/pppppp001bk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe
09-02-2007, 07:30 PM
AMK-It's bad, bro...

But, keep messing with extensions. There was a point that I fucked with extensions and it was ugly as fuck, but doing that helped me with doing extensions later on. Keep doing what you're doing, messing with extensions. But, don't forget about your letters.

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-02-2007, 07:36 PM
AMK-It's bad, bro...

But, keep messing with extensions. There was a point that I fucked with extensions and it was ugly as fuck, but doing that helped me with doing extensions later on. Keep doing what you're doing, messing with extensions. But, don't forget about your letters.

I feel like you are critiquing mine lol, can you help me or advise me as to what I should make the extensions on my piece into? arrows, hands, cocks, anything what do you think? plus I dont know how to finish the S and quick suggestions?

Fube
09-02-2007, 07:58 PM
from this spot on, if u are not giving crits, or posting flicks, your post will be deleted. i dont care about bumps, bump all u want, if u bump excessively i will delete your post too, flick or not. this means, if u bump it once or twice ok, no bumping on the same page. no bumping more the 3 times. use your heads here. if your giveing props to someone, use pm's. i will delete your "that shit ill", or, "i really have nothing to say about that its sooooo good." me and the other toy mods have way to many post to scroll through and we dont have the time to be fuckin with pointless post. ya feel me? if u have a problem with what me, or any other mod deletes for that matter, pm that mod first. if your still not happy then pm msfyt, but shes a busy woman. hopefully soon we well see 70%flicks 30%crit.


-fube-

HadeP
09-02-2007, 08:22 PM
amk to many add ons. every leg of every letter is basically an extention, the structure is lacking some.less add ons, and some extentions dont make sens

kelio
09-02-2007, 08:51 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dd.jpg

i honestly dont know whats so bad about this.
I actually like it.
its not like the average graffiti.
its something different, keep working on it amk.
maybe lose the curvy things at the top of the a & K

amk
09-02-2007, 08:54 PM
alright sorry but i just read the crits and needed to get this off my chest.

which style do yall prefer and what style shall i continue with..


ths LA Cali stype shit..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/g-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tt.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/kukuy.jpg

or my old style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/b.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fnbdrt.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/123.jpg

or shall i mix them ?
major props to yall who give me a lil bit off feedback.
thanks.


----crits----

Tense...god damn man...i want you to take all that shit talking you did to me back.

cyto...iono man...its looks good at first sight..then you pull away those addons and you can see the letters aint really that good...sorry.

xKAPTIVx
09-02-2007, 09:03 PM
amk - i like the new style, if you can pull off the details of the letters it would look really nice.

whahappen?
09-02-2007, 09:05 PM
amk dope
crits on the attempt
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1994/picture016cc5.jpg
or discuss the epic fucking win of what im currently eating
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1607/epicwinav8.jpg

awormiscoming
09-02-2007, 09:05 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-books.jpg
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/Oreks-book.jpg
whatever...

awormiscoming
09-02-2007, 09:13 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/P9020090.jpg

SOOF
09-02-2007, 09:13 PM
amk: i like the originals,your old style
awormiscoming:not bad, it has potential
tense:all yur letters are off

toy throw thread is dead, so im psting here, crits?
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/09-02-07_1743.jpg

whahappen?
09-02-2007, 09:18 PM
amk dope
crits on the attempt
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1994/picture016cc5.jpg
or discuss the epic fucking win of what im currently eating
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1607/epicwinav8.jpg
:o:o
soof use the one on the right and make the letters distinguishable

ORIGIN IX
09-02-2007, 09:55 PM
these r some things ive been drawing/sketching, only its not a black book ^.^ its a yellow book i found in my room.
http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/1807/sketching2001hd8.th.jpg (http://img475.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketching2001hd8.jpg)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/474/sketching3001xf3.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketching3001xf3.jpg)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6619/sketching5001zw5.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketching5001zw5.jpg)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6677/sketching6002ah1.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketching6002ah1.jpg)
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3328/sketching1001uz5.th.jpg (http://img355.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketching1001uz5.jpg)

have been doing sketches like these for about 3 months(when i started "writing")
critique ifu wanna

sKeeLo
09-02-2007, 09:57 PM
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/689/1252575im0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

posted this earlier and people didnt like it but i was really feeling it so im posting it larger so u can see . . . . i normally dont like my stuff but i was really feeling this BLADE, too bad i had to give it away . .

whahappen - for your R i would do what you did on the top loop part of your A instaed of that roundy thing . . plus triangles like on your A are easier to paint . . .

alive
09-02-2007, 10:00 PM
easily some of the best ever from u i think. its gorgeous. old school feel. who the fuck didnt like it. btw i saw mine if u didnt see my comment, its great! i cant wait. thanks again!

Smae
09-02-2007, 10:08 PM
2 other sketches:
http://a564.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/90/l_39f8a1b3a2750ed71aa99cb3a0367b83.jpg (about 5 mins)

http://a556.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/90/l_f2cb9921068a1326d85d5ea17876350b.jpg (about 2 mins)

xKAPTIVx
09-02-2007, 10:10 PM
not feeling the second one...
neither the first one, maybe if you work on it a bit

Sumoe
09-02-2007, 10:25 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/245/0/4/Book_Burning_by_SUMOE.jpg
Kinda gay, I'll prolly finish it, maybe not...

ORIGIN IX
09-02-2007, 10:26 PM
skeelo, the purple one on the right is mad nice. left one is hard to read (for me hehe)

whahappen?
09-03-2007, 12:35 AM
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5111/picture017yg3.jpg

shred til ur dead
09-03-2007, 12:57 AM
smae i think ur first one is okay the letters could use some work like the bubbles getting smaller or whatever shouldnt like substitute for the actual lines of the letter the second one im diggin ur s but the rest of the letters dont match it id say loose the things comin out of the bottom of the m dont make the crossbar of the a loop around into the right bar and for the e instead of having the middle bar squiggle around just make it a full bar

thats all just in my opinion though :]

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/2408/dscn0217em4.jpg

a simple with 3-d

crits?

silentchaos14
09-03-2007, 12:59 AM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/245/0/4/Book_Burning_by_SUMOE.jpg
Kinda gay, I'll prolly finish it, maybe not...
at first i thought this was done on the computer. nice colouring job

Sou - Mvd
09-03-2007, 01:04 AM
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5111/picture017yg3.jpg

That throw is the hottest thing ive seen in this thread for a while, I love it!

awormiscoming
09-03-2007, 02:22 AM
That throw is the hottest thing ive seen in this thread for a while, I love it!
I have to agree, real hot shit.

BIGel
09-03-2007, 02:55 AM
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/246/d/c/tower_by_bigel.jpg

found a lost book today with some oldies in it!

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/246/c/7/ooooh_by_bigel.jpg

sank.
09-03-2007, 03:27 AM
hot shit el. ive alwayes loved your stuff, we should exchange..

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0744.jpg

amk
09-03-2007, 08:00 AM
from this spot on, if u are not giving crits, or posting flicks, your post will be deleted. i dont care about bumps, bump all u want, if u bump excessively i will delete your post too, flick or not. this means, if u bump it once or twice ok, no bumping on the same page. no bumping more the 3 times. use your heads here. if your giveing props to someone, use pm's. i will delete your "that shit ill", or, "i really have nothing to say about that its sooooo good." me and the other toy mods have way to many post to scroll through and we dont have the time to be fuckin with pointless post. ya feel me? if u have a problem with what me, or any other mod deletes for that matter, pm that mod first. if your still not happy then pm msfyt, but shes a busy woman. hopefully soon we well see 70%flicks 30%crit.


-fube-

???
lol.


Amar.man best shit you have ever done...is that like half philly hand half throw....freakin ill.

Hoostein
09-03-2007, 10:14 AM
skeelo, thats hot. if I had to say anything it would be that the extension off the lower part of the L im not feelin so much.
AMK, i think what you were doing before that was amazing. until that last one i thought you never erased, never seen one eraser mark on your shit, alway sooo clean.
bigEL, I dont even have to tell you thats good. you make me feel like i suck reallly bad.
SANK, that K is kind of lookin lik an R a bit, just my opinion although people probably wont agree with me.
SMAE, simples. am I right?
Micro, liking it, but for some reason the leg extending at an angle from the R doesnt look right.

00-made-00
09-03-2007, 11:51 AM
skello- so good fr so many reasons.
big el- i love your charaters,different level.
sank- smetimes i think your a sorta looks like an r maybe make the bottom bar a bit shorter.
sume. yes you should finish it, shits fire.
micro- i like the idea pretty kool, just keep doing tht, its the path to successes ahah.
smae- go simple and maybe to the new to graff thread it will point you in the right direction.
soof- looks good but prehaps make the letters a bit mre readable.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/toui-.jpg
Sketch i did today crits?

dizzle_d
09-03-2007, 12:06 PM
Touiiiiiiiiii lovin the pen sketch man really feelin it!

keep it up

klipa
09-03-2007, 12:07 PM
sumat new.
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1012/cimg0870zp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




one is sorry but one needs crits.
00-made-00= im strangly drawn to that style, the little bits on the side need to go tho keep it tidey mate, thicken up the 3rd letter just a bit, id like to see it cleaned up and coloured.

BIGel= super cool smashing great, esp, the throwie, sicko.

HoodRichSucka
09-03-2007, 01:22 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/245/0/4/Book_Burning_by_SUMOE.jpg
Kinda gay, I'll prolly finish it, maybe not...

amazing...

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/special.jpg
working on structure...kinda weak. need help

HoodRichSucka
09-03-2007, 01:25 PM
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/689/1252575im0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

posted this earlier and people didnt like it but i was really feeling it so im posting it larger so u can see . . . . i normally dont like my stuff but i was really feeling this BLADE, too bad i had to give it away . .

whahappen - for your R i would do what you did on the top loop part of your A instaed of that roundy thing . . plus triangles like on your A are easier to paint . . .

i really like it man. good work

Hoostein
09-03-2007, 01:28 PM
Hoodrich: not diggin the C so much, how its trying to math the E ya know? the E looks good, but maybe take a bit of that ext. off. I guess

Robbie P
09-03-2007, 01:32 PM
Hoodrich: Get rid of the extension on your E and C, they're pretty pointless. Also try to slant your A and L in the the other direction to flow better with the other letters.

Sume: Looks pretty good, I don't know whats up the flaming book shit though.

00-made-00
09-03-2007, 02:02 PM
kilpa- yo man thanks, id say maybe make the S a little bit smaller and the E biger other than tht im feeling it man.

whahappen?
09-03-2007, 02:05 PM
amazing...

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/special.jpg
working on structure...kinda weak. need help
bottom of the c is weird and the bottom of the s is too long
and thanks guys
cant beleive no one picked up on the zoolander referance though:p

Scare2
09-03-2007, 02:29 PM
yo hoodrich you have the basic lettering structure going pretty good but then you added some extensions that mess the letters. (bottom of the C and E. i think your I would look better if it was streight. the right side of the L got too thin. fatten those bars up a little. i dont like the way the top part of you S goes behind itself. but i like the bottom right shape on that S. i dont like the bottom left though.maybee cut it off before it bends..? im not sure. also the P is too hidden. that was allot... but your basic letter structure is coming allong quite nicely. big improvement lately. o and i dont realy like the fanny top things on top of the s and c. but its gettin better and better keep goin. props.

Bazer
09-03-2007, 02:36 PM
hoodrich, the thing wit your letters is that theyre far from being as good as your handstyle. try making letters out of them. and your simples dont have to be absolutely simple...... ugh i hate when people think that. look these are simples to mayne.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1004.jpg

alive
09-03-2007, 02:50 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0002-1.jpg

Bazer
09-03-2007, 02:57 PM
alive do u have a picture of a finished peice that is like..... that doesn't have the sketchy lines? i like your style but you always lay it down with those sketchy lines. =\

scythe
09-03-2007, 03:26 PM
Some new stuff, haven't been on in a while.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/poo019.jpg
Painted piece, i have horrible can control...
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/s32.jpg

alive
09-03-2007, 03:28 PM
go simple simple simple. and this isnt the fucking paint thread.

Seek139
09-03-2007, 05:06 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02751.jpg
A piece over some pizza mhm...

alive
09-03-2007, 06:24 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0005.jpghttp://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0004.jpg

enjoys_art
09-03-2007, 06:45 PM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7703/dscn0320qp3.th.jpg (http://img519.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0320qp3.jpg)

Drew this up last night. crits?

alive
09-03-2007, 06:47 PM
start over, do block letteres, dont do backgrounds, dont use color. dont do fills. dont do effects. plain fucking letters. and get a better pic.

Bastardo
09-03-2007, 06:50 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4964/picture244ds1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Quick exchange with Hungr, Tryin to complicate my style more (:
Mers BDG

alive
09-03-2007, 06:55 PM
love it, u wanna do an exchange? maybe even, (if ur comfortable with it, i understand otherwise) physical? like actually sending it?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-03-2007, 07:07 PM
thats a long exchange nyc to the white folks mother land.

Bastardo
09-03-2007, 07:07 PM
I havent got any decent supplys atm so i use rubbish markers! and im not gonna send you a pooey sketch haha! ill do a exchange now and wen i get some supplys ill send you one, and i sell canvas' aswell if you would like 2 buy one.
http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/1599/picture004zu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/7558/picture009en0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe
09-03-2007, 07:15 PM
Yoooooo, Bastardo. We have an exchange from like a year ago, and I don't think either of us did them... Wanna exchange now that our styles have progressed?

By the way that "G" is dooooope.

Bastardo
09-03-2007, 07:17 PM
Sure thing! will be up later (:
Mers

Sumoe
09-03-2007, 07:20 PM
I might have yours on Tuesday or Wednesday...I work realllllllll slow. Especially with this more complicated shit I'm trying.

But yeah, I'll have it up when I'm done.

Roolete
09-03-2007, 07:25 PM
another late night style experimentation...

really needs crits on this
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0287.jpg

alive
09-03-2007, 07:27 PM
go simpler. 8:30 is late night?

Roolete
09-03-2007, 07:28 PM
last night at like 6 am.u think simpler? aaawww, i liked that one.
another one from last night
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0284.jpg

alive
09-03-2007, 07:30 PM
that reminds me of CHEU. but is vry nice. dope simple style.

jersOneTIC
09-03-2007, 07:31 PM
enjoys_art - do block/simple letters
bastardo - nice letters
roolete - show the c off more and the r should be higher imo.
some recent shit...
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/7726/13023rw3.jpg

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1103/13024ru1.jpg

Drakula
09-03-2007, 08:04 PM
Like 80% of that is dope jers.But there's a few things in it that ruin it man.On that top one the top of the R is just one straight line down and it looks really pointy compared to the rest of the piece.Also the middle bar of the S is too straight down and looks more like a backwards Z.On the second one the The right leg of the R really needs some sorting out,too fat.And both of them need proportion adjustments.There's alot of lumps and thick to thin bits.Other than that though it's real good.

thesilentvandal
09-03-2007, 08:10 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011803.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011800.jpg

Sumoe
09-03-2007, 08:17 PM
Way too much "inspiration" from Mers.

kelio
09-03-2007, 08:30 PM
sKeeLo: i love the old school feel to it.
Smae: if you want critz take the time to make your sketch decent.
Sumoe: damn thats so dope. love the s.
whahappen?: thats so dope love to see it in some color.
BIGel: love your style so crisp.
HoodRichSucka: the extensions off of your letters are too long.
Seek139: maybe bring your letters closer.
Bastardo: i would love to do an exchange, maybe once i get better.
Roolete: keep doing what you like, cause im fellin both. maybe lose some of the drip bubble things off of the cher sketch.
thesilentvandal: all of the sketches you do are the same i meen its dope but maybe try something different. like mess with your letters or something.

just working on my style and new letters. critz please.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0012.jpg

Sumoe
09-03-2007, 08:38 PM
why the fuck cant people forget that it looks like mers, and just critique the fucking damn thing?

BECAUSE IT'S A BLATANT BITE...
The "W" and the "S" are pretty much exactly the same, and the "A" is very similar. It's okay to get inspiration, but biting isn't.

Edit: I'm assuming YOU did the "DAWSE" in your signature on Vandal Squad or something. That style is nothing like the shit you're doing now. Why is that? Why don't you try to develop the other style more and stop biting Mers?

EDIT AGAIN:
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9255/stuff025ga2.jpg
^^NOT MINE, BASTARDO, A.K.A. MERS' WORK/SKETCH

sKeeLo
09-03-2007, 08:49 PM
jers not bad, first one has extensions that seem to come from nowhere, aka not connected to the bars/letters whic ive never been a fan off . . also your Es seem to be tooclose and overlapped by the J . . 1000 % agree with drak that that top triangle/edgy thing in yuuor R looks akward

silent vandal - i like it would love to have a page or 2 from u in 1 of my bboks . . top maybe had too much of a proportion difference btw the thin and thick bars (even thoo that appears to be the style they still look too unproportional)

roolete/kelio - i would get a better understanding of the basics/simples before tryin more abstract letters/styles

Sick!
09-03-2007, 09:40 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000004eb7524/1/4/OxB_FEGO7D9tCAJY683MBOn3N-KwbrY9.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/ysBuUsEn0j8yFXsb1te4P1HAL0KIxoYS?referrer=hlnk)
fucked body bomb
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000004eb7b58/1/4/Ii_j7bEW4T_L_aMo6lYGpY8kIBUAgwH-.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/mvVf39Hx0D__Ii31_8JrFO8Nv9HjHxfr?referrer=hlnk)
kinda old

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000004eb7e0c/1/4/rf-Ofj3A5D8YRZCyPCNw_xFVzy37UfWC.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/MFy6qkTmrz_YV6f2pjG7ypv6GcoZU01k?referrer=hlnk)
old battle entry that never made it on

SOOF
09-03-2007, 09:56 PM
"sick" is such a played out name, i can name like 3 people just in my hood that rite it, but yea jus pick a new name bro

IwriteNASR
09-03-2007, 10:08 PM
cher- not feelin the first one but the simpler ones pretty nice
jers- all together pretty nice but the JER flows a lot better than with the s
daws- i agree about some similarities, it looks good but im not getting into the whole calling a bite situation
sick- i agree new name but for the letters dont worry about fills for now and use bars
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/4093/penif9.jpg
pen freestyle my n is a lil bit bigger....CRITSSSS

garbage down tha way
09-03-2007, 10:16 PM
In health class, highly inspired by the word "sex".
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/sekz.jpg
Nasr-What your trying to do withthe extentions is cool, but don't do it yet. Get the letters down first, and once theyre good, you'll already have a dope way to add extentions. The N shouldn't have so many bars, just make it like an N.

Sick...-Don't write that name. The letters are ok though. Keep dramatic fills out of blocks though. Thats stupid. The middle one is the one you should roll with. The bottom suck and the top has shitty proportions.

scoot
09-03-2007, 10:34 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/bleh.jpg

new shit ive been working on.. dont know how to finish it...

sick - just work on the lettering man dont try and do fills.. its just a waste of markers keep it simple
garbage - feelin all the letters but the k kinda throwin the rest of it off.. i think its the bottom right of it that looks kinda like it doesnt fit in
nasr - the N and S need to be worked on a little bit they dont flow well with the way you have the rest of your letters.

Blackeyed_Pea
09-03-2007, 10:37 PM
I really dont understand your letters i cant even remotley make them out theres no structure there your going for some real crackhead style lol.

Mr Tasty
09-03-2007, 10:48 PM
finnish it by throwing it in the bin...
start doing block letters...LETTERS..no1 can read wtf ur writing..(and not in a good way)

younopewho
09-03-2007, 11:48 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/nidex/Graff/sketch.jpg

Crits please..

SOOF
09-03-2007, 11:51 PM
^^^ dont be really worrying bout 3d yet, but yea i wouldnt call it bad, but fix the e,
it has potential

Stim
09-04-2007, 12:26 AM
Bastardo- crisp and funky as hell
Roolete- The simple is dope, but the other one is iffy
Jers- It's definetly good but i've seen you do alot better imo
Sick- Less square, more true to realistic keyboard letters. practice drawing perfect circles for awhile, it helps with curves
Nasr- Letter structure is getting there, maybe can the addons for now.
Garbage- I see good control over the pen but maybe the letters don't flow quite correctly
Nope- Work on drawing cleaner lines without stopping and going

jumbly little sloppy sharpie/ pen thing. I know it's not great but just so I can throw up a pic

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/6712/pic1141hb1.jpg

SOOF
09-04-2007, 01:01 AM
goin simple for once, crits ?
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/09-04-07_0156.jpg

fox on a trampoline
09-04-2007, 01:55 AM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4823/picture109zy9.jpgthanks smooth -- crits? maby color schemes

amk
09-04-2007, 03:26 AM
Edit: I'm assuming YOU did the "DAWSE" in your signature on Vandal Squad or something. That style is nothing like the shit you're doing now. Why is that? Why don't you try to develop the other style more and stop biting Mers?


thats because he did that VS peice before the exchange...and he didnt know what euro was...and thats what he shud be doing....going into euro not knowing what it is...that way you get a dope original style..

lol..
he said to me once on msn..

" how do i get a style like cheu and bastardo "

ahahah ...



what happend to the no crit delete shit ?.
foxonatrampoline...thats the koolst name ever...anyway...you have 3d down i thinkys...but cut it off somowhere...dont folow that shit all the way down to teh vanashing point....the letters are not good i must say....id say straight those boys up then slap that 3d on..

va lah...(sp)

you have a great simple :p

d_g
09-04-2007, 04:11 AM
va lah...(sp)

Viola.

Come on msn you bitch we need to sort out this TDC shit.

fox, drop the addons, add some curves, don't worry about colour yet.

Soof, it has potential, I'd keep working on it.

Stim, good simples, you kinda need to work on your flow though, mainly by fixing up your tilty-ness of your letters.

Nope, take away the addons, the don't balance, just work on getting that simple down, it's not too bad.

BIGel
09-04-2007, 04:47 AM
thats what he shud be doing....going into euro not knowing what it is...that way you get a dope original style..


smartest thing ive heard come out of your mouth ras. euro is built on simple lettering therefore it can only go so far. i dont know how long ago it was but i remember seeing a piece you did on deviantart in a semi-wildstyle boxy type script that i wish you would have ran with, it had potential for days man. i think the whole concentrating on achieving a "euro" style is one of the biggest plagues on graffiti. yea im biased, i think its totally without skill and uses fills and color to distract from form and letters, but going at your art with the intention that you want it to look like a certain genre is absolute bullshit; its completely uncreative and restricts what your imagination can think up. (that goes for west coast styles too, just to show you im not completely one sided. ;))

amk
09-04-2007, 09:11 AM
FUCKING WORD. BIG EL.
i love you man.
you are the most good headed person on here.
your wise as fuck and you no your shit.
most people go straight into euro thinking CRAZY COLOURS BENDY LETTERS AND BUBBLE BACKGROUND.

well its more than that.

its like getting down a euro style is a trend thesedays..
everyone wants it.
and its stupid.

and Kset man..
There is no more MOE or TDC. that reso has fucked shit up.
ill see about getin you in TSC and repping OE man

Sou - Mvd
09-04-2007, 10:36 AM
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/9076/001ik7.jpg

amk
09-04-2007, 10:42 AM
god damn no critties.
sorry Sou but if i was to crit you without you critting it wouldnt be fair.

from now on im only cirrtin the guys who crit.

stim...fuckin ill man....nice lettering....wearlly nice....keep doing sum more shiz like that man itll come.

so back to my old letters....i forgot how good it was drawing this style....so ima use the la type shite to fall back on...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fr.jpg

CRITS ahahah

alive
09-04-2007, 10:58 AM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0006.jpg

whahappen?
09-04-2007, 02:11 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011803.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011800.jpg
its reaaaallly generic

whahappen?
09-04-2007, 02:15 PM
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5111/picture017yg3.jpg
apparently this is really wack so why is it
amk its dope
soof s is small

dizzle_d
09-04-2007, 04:39 PM
I say FUCK BARS. BOOOM COLOURS
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/4697/img1866rv5.jpg

ALIVE battle me, Bars VS. no Bars. no beef. Fuck why do I start shit.

----sorry crit later.

adam8023
09-04-2007, 04:47 PM
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/vdxrg.jpg
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/kuhiluh.jpg
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/cbkmtyh.jpg
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/asdfg.jpg
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/graffsnitches.jpg


Please comment and post and suggestions. thanks also the colors in my black book are completly different there to light in here

pocket change
09-04-2007, 04:49 PM
amk- looks good just fix the right bar in the middle of your M.
fox on trampoline- keep working on your letters, use bars. no extentions yet. forget 3D till u get decent letters.
adam-SIMPLES, use bars. do straight letters, block letters.
heres a simple i just did. i know the DO doesnt flow so well with the ES. whatever, tell me what you think. crits. peace

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6152/ak002yy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hoostein
09-04-2007, 04:55 PM
the line on the D needs to be thicker.

Sou - Mvd
09-04-2007, 04:56 PM
Alright Alive, I just had to clear this off my chest. all this bar shit is pissing me the fuck off.
This is like what you live off of,
No Colours,
Only Use Bars,
and no extensions.
and from the time i've been on here you hardly have progressed, I'm not sayin I did either, but at least I'm trying other things... damn.

Start over, do block letters, don't do backrounds, don't use colour don't do fills, don't do effects, Plain fucking letters... haha you said that to someone with less drawing skillz than you, when thats what your living by. I MEAN SHIT. try some new shit already.
I say FUCK BARS. BOOOM COLOURS

ALIVE battle me, Bars VS. no Bars.

Ya fuck bars!!:rolleyes: Maybe you shouldn't be biting people. Alive is progressing his way even if it's not fast. He has some of the best structure in the toy forum. Graffiti is about fucking letters, not colour backgrounds effects and fills. Without decent letters none of that matters. So you know what, more power to alive. All that shit takes no skill anyways, original well structured letters on the other hand do. Your piece is poorly structured, and rely's on colour and other shit to distract you from the fact that it's garbage. Im so sick of new people coming into this thinking euro is just some easy mode graffiti you dont need good letters for. Fuck off and stop biting other peoples work dickweeds.

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/194/dsc0008tq0.jpg

dizzle_d
09-04-2007, 05:22 PM
OHK! I GAURANTEE YOU YOU WILL NOT FIND A LETTER SIMILAR TO MINE, I CREATED THESE LETTERS, ONLY THING THAT MAKES YOU THINK OF HIM IS THE COLORS, SERIOUSLY, JUST STOP, BECAUSE I DIDN'T BITE ANYONE. chill....

alright I'm sorry everyone. Alive- I was joking around bro, no hard feelings
Sex- sorry for not respecting you,
Sou- I gaurantee you won't find a letter like mine. I made my letters. I have pieces with plenty of structure, matter of fact I was writing for about a year now using structure, and I'm just going a different way now. changing pretty much. anyways sorry for being such a shithead everyone, normally I'm not like this. haha damnn alright enough talking and no more beef.

Sou - Mvd
09-04-2007, 05:23 PM
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/5056/009ju0.jpg
aww haha the post got deleted right as I was about to respond to the clown that bit mers

RemoZ
09-04-2007, 05:24 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/6103/1001369mu3.jpg

HuntingLOLs
09-04-2007, 05:29 PM
ok all of you shut up. u guys are fighting about useing bars. who gives a fuck. graffiti is about expresion and freedom. dont use bars if you dont wanna, just dont cry and bitch when people start hating on your shit cause its wack and has no structure.

graffiti is about getting up. art is about expression and freedom. different things.

your E is the most solid letter, too much space between some letters (the S has huge gaps inbetween)

exhale
09-04-2007, 05:35 PM
remoz - eskmo? maybe add a line to define the s? or not if it looks bad haha

umm the shadowing is messed up
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/File0035.jpg

pocket change
09-04-2007, 06:25 PM
graffiti is about getting up. art is about expression and freedom. different things.

your E is the most solid letter, too much space between some letters (the S has huge gaps inbetween)

not everyone that writes graffiti is in it for getting up and being famous. i do it cause i love walking around town and seeing something i did, having kids come up to me being like wow thats a nasty spot, sure theres that amazing feeling that comes in when you have the most ups in your city, and when other people respect you. but nothing else compares when i go home after bombing all night, its like having sex for the first time. then going out and just seeing everything you did, sure i may not like all my shit, but i just love going out and painting all night. k im done

remoz-fix your S, i would try shortening the top right bar of your K.
ecos-fix your S in the peice, make a little more legible.

bouncingsoul
09-04-2007, 06:41 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011803.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011800.jpg

Ha, looks a lot like Bastardo

"Caliskatz" for, well... Caliskatz

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0937.jpg

Zion-I kills it

sketch3
09-04-2007, 06:48 PM
CAN WE NOT HAVE THIS DSSCUSION IN A FLICKS AND CRITS THREAD

sou not feeling the handie buut thats just personal preference

poket change-thinken up the vertical bar in ur d, and keep them simples up

Sou - Mvd
09-04-2007, 06:48 PM
hey bouncing, how's that canvas coming along? no rush
Really feeling that c, other that that your l and second a are a little small but it works with the flow so I wouldnt even worry about it, it's looking pretty solid.

http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/4158/018hk8.jpg
Somthing new, just an A because I always sketch way to big and end up taking the whole page. Dont like the right leg at all going to re work it when I get back but it's food time now! yay

sketch3
09-04-2007, 07:12 PM
hey i cant see the letter a in there, but w/e its probily dope an im to toy to read it


well i gotta battle with jrock
an this is just a quick freestyle i whiped up cuss he was bitchin at me, ha i just relised it was so rushed i left out a c

i think i need to redo it cuss its mad sloppy and missing altter, wat do u think
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6563/jrok1ff1.jpg

silentchaos14
09-04-2007, 07:19 PM
you may have me beat on this one but the word was jroc not jrock or jrok

Smae
09-04-2007, 07:41 PM
help me choose the collest colour to my current sketch pls... don't mind those squares and that B&W S
http://a419.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/89/l_0a1a620bef9ff5166d4bb73d9d4bff82.jpg

and meanwhile, one of my Slim sketches(my old nick)
http://a73.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/103/l_4165de48627b486776be7c7dc4466840.jpg

critts pls

Fube
09-04-2007, 07:54 PM
ahhh another fruit booter. that shit fucked my body up, watch it.

your shading is good on the 3d stuff but for the letters id say dont worry about addons yet. take a peep at the "new to graff" thread. look at some tutorials.





watch the chat guys, im tired of deleting post here.

AyteYourCookies
09-04-2007, 08:19 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture293.jpg
crits?

the end
09-04-2007, 08:31 PM
ayte- i dunno whats with that bubble on the right leg of the a, actualy i think thats the only letter that doesnt fit too well. and again with the block on the bottom leg of the e

sex without condoms
09-04-2007, 08:33 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243.jpg

garbage down tha way
09-04-2007, 08:52 PM
In health class, highly inspired by the word "sex".
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/sekz.jpg


Bump no crits.

sKeeLo
09-04-2007, 09:22 PM
^^^^^ id work on those jaggedy hammer looking things on the ends of your bars/letters . . . especially the one on teh top left of the S and on both ends of the Z . . . the ones at the bottom left of the S and top right of the R look alright . . .i dont think your ready for doing those lil inner outline stuff yet, work on gettin clean good simples down first and like someone said awhile back that dont mean block letters and exact copies of keyboards in my opinion . . .

rollerblading is for fat girls and guys who are to afraid to eat pavement every once in awhile . . . in my opinion

edit - sorry, i didnt read all that stupid back n forth on the other pages or that people like "fruit booting", i didnt write that to insult the "fruit booters" . .ill try and edit a sketch in so this thread can get back on track

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/4559/1282868ej3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^ not mine

Smae
09-04-2007, 10:49 PM
help me choose the collest colour to my current sketch pls... don't mind those squares and that B&W S
http://a419.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/89/l_0a1a620bef9ff5166d4bb73d9d4bff82.jpg

this is the sketch I wuz talkin bout: http://a133.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/80/l_617686a226b7093e511752890965c384.jpg

and for me, skate is for punk ass bitches who watch too much Viva La Bam and who are afreind of doing a face plant(try to miss a Full torque 270 out and see if u dont do a facial plant... or if u dont get close to it) did u felt insulted? I thought so... do some searching before talkin about it... I'd love to see a sk8er doing just the first gap in this vid: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlNnDxTm4kc
or maybe smthin like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KH5KfO3gL_g&mode=related&search=

Sumoe
09-04-2007, 10:52 PM
^^Ugly...

Here's a preview to some simpler 'ish/style I'm doing/working on, hopefully it will be paintable.

By the way, it's not the piece it's the small "MSW" in the corner. LOL.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs19/i/2007/247/a/b/Shizzzzzle____by_SUMOE.jpg

Scare2
09-04-2007, 10:52 PM
smae uv got really artistic 3d Lettering and its reall nice. the simpler stuff lacks though work on basics as well as developing that other style.

sketch ur J is ur best letter in my opinion its gettin better but the K doesnt work very well.

bouncing sexwithout condoms and sky dope.

garbage ur letters arent working for me id say go simpler and learn basic leterr structure.

ayte just keep on progressing and the bits off the side of the E dont really work.


i just started school today and uh... it was kinda boring so i doodled the fuck outa my schedules. and my pen ran out of ink halfway through the day.
i started pen sketching this simpler style and ever since i cant really do anything but it. but i can do it real easy. its pretty fun. kinda hard to do letters othe then scare though.
what do you think of the style seeing as i havent posted in a while i was too lazy to put batteries in my camera.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040012.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040014.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040016.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040018.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040019A.jpg

Volume_one_
09-04-2007, 11:07 PM
Its been a wail but heres a drawling I did for a friend
http://a11.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/111/l_d8a35ac9ce2993e50fe0857674470c12.jpg

Scare2
09-04-2007, 11:56 PM
vvolume ur friend has a wierd name.. kelst?? but umm keep ur bars the same thickness and the coloring makes it really hard to see your letters. but none of it stands out to me really.



smae uv got really artistic 3d Lettering and its reall nice. the simpler stuff lacks though work on basics as well as developing that other style.

sketch ur J is ur best letter in my opinion its gettin better but the K doesnt work very well.

bouncing sexwithout condoms and sky dope.

garbage ur letters arent working for me id say go simpler and learn basic leterr structure.

ayte just keep on progressing and the bits off the side of the E dont really work.


i just started school today and uh... it was kinda boring so i doodled the fuck outa my schedules. and my pen ran out of ink halfway through the day.
i started pen sketching this simpler style and ever since i cant really do anything but it. but i can do it real easy. its pretty fun. kinda hard to do letters othe then scare though.
what do you think of the style seeing as i havent posted in a while i was too lazy to put batteries in my camera.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040012.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040014.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040016.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040018.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9040019A.jpg

babump

syrne
09-05-2007, 01:20 AM
nice simples

The_Sheep
09-05-2007, 01:20 AM
Bouncing- Usually love your work but something about this one im not really feeling, the flow just seems off a bit, love the s though

Sketch3- good use of bars but work that O into the piece instead of just throwing it on top of the R, also define the J more

Ayte- A is nice, Y is decent, T needs work man, i dont like how it just splits in two, the E is ok but lose those little squares, nice job on the 3d

Smae- The whole letters ending in arrows is NOT working at all, get rid of all those extensions cause theyre well, ugly, just work on those letters man, your getting ahead of yourself

Scare- Dont bump your shit after one freakin post, anyway you have a good idea of what to do with simples, now move on to making your stuff less "Uniform" looking, experiment and mess around with shit

Volume one- hate the colors but the letters are real nice, the K covers the E a bit too much though

First Sketch In A While:
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8779/dsc00193hn4.jpg
Crits?

FormulaQ
09-05-2007, 04:56 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243.jpg

your shadow makes no sense cmon dog how long u been doin dis atleast get the shadow right

South-Pole
09-05-2007, 06:04 AM
whoa some dope stuff on the previous page
bouncing,sume,sex,sky 5 keep this forum alive

exhale-shadow is fucked but letters are ok
sou-looks pretty solid
smae-err simples buddy
scare-nice simples,try different things to move on
sketch-nice usage of bars,make that o bigger
ayte-loose those adds on the E
volume-those colours are ugly,letters are fine though
Sheep-looks fucking dope,nothing else to say

all of those are free styles no pencil used,board markers/high lighter used

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRN-4.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SE.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AE-2.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Seth-1.jpg

00-made-00
09-05-2007, 08:36 AM
Scare- dopest simples ive seen in a while,maybe try stepping it up a bit and adding some stuff.
the sheep-im feeling that definatly improved since your last one, but id lose the addon on top of the p.
formula- hes shadow is fine you drip i done see a problem?
south pole-clean it up a bit and use a pencil more.

Did this this morning i liked the letters then i added the arrows not sure if i should of hmmm?
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/toui-2.jpg

SenTheFirst
09-05-2007, 09:52 AM
southpole- work on 3d and keep sketchin simples
made- i think it would be better without the arrows


A throw I did for my friend


Yea, I know the S should be more pointy



http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0441.jpg

amk
09-05-2007, 09:54 AM
^^Ugly...



yo sume..
your one of the koolest cat in here man..
but Fube said if you dont crit.
you post gets deleted
what the fuck happend to this.
straight after you poasted a pic with no crit sume.
and so did like 15 other people.
i think that what fube was gonna do was fuckin dope yah know.
and i think its a duty for you to crit into detail SUME as your one of the most advanced in here ! :)
i aint jumping on anyones dick here
im just saying that sume you have to give us guys way more help and crits yah know.
and fube i think if you did that thing about less chat less crits ( im one of the culprtis ) it would be so dope..like one of the bestest rules ever.

props to you guys yah.
you have hard jobs deleting my shit and other shit.
i just want sume to crit more cos like i say your advanced and your a toy mod too.
:)
no harsh feelings..

and for dizzels peice...i think its fucking dope.

toui...ill baby but damn lose those arrows...they aaint working...you shud paint that peice lakside with those colours on sunday....but dont add those arrows man its makes the ltters look worse.


sorry sume if you take it the wrong way :(

dizzle_d
09-05-2007, 11:39 AM
Sume- Its looking really tight, I can not wait to see it finished. Its lookin ssoooo soooo dopeee
Scare- Those are some quality simples, I really like them. keep it up.
The Sheep- I love that style so much. really ill. don't really like that little bar piece at the right side of the S though.
South-Pole- I like the The A the E and the S in the 2nd and third one. I don't know why, but it seems the bottom of the S is a little to thin, I'm not sure though.
Toui- ohhhhh snap! Touis comin through with the fresh sketches, letters and colors are looking good, only thing is, the arrow on the bottom of the I doesn't seem to fit with the rest... keep those nice sketches comin :D
SentheFirst- nice throwie. lookin good. fix the R though.


"and for dizzels peice...i think its fucking dope."
Thanks AMK, at least someone does :rolleyes:...

Constructive crits please
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/4697/img1866rv5.jpg
ok, This may resemble Bastardos style, but I can assure you its just because its the same kind of style. My letters are completely different than his, and I can tell you right now I came up with these letters on my own.... just clearing this whole thing out.

South-Pole
09-05-2007, 12:25 PM
^I detect a bite,it says Burs or Murs ami rite?naw just kidding,looks fucking dope,and would look doper without that huge arrow coming out of that B(is this a b?)but still looks similar to Bastardo's stuff

sen the first-looks ok,tag is ok + my 3-d is fine thank you

toui-looks fresh but would look better without the arrows

and amk i agree with you on people posting without giving crits first,give crits to get some nothing hard in it

HoodRichSucka
09-05-2007, 02:09 PM
working on structure!...
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/smore.jpg

Stonk
09-05-2007, 02:11 PM
saner i like the throw but maybe consider a name change becuse of sane.. new york king who killed shit but unfortunately died in the 90's.

South pole i like your bar simple style..looks good.

sex without condoms i love it.. so hot..but yeah i guess hes right the drop shadow is a tiny bit off , but nothing to major.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc0018d8ad.jpg
for the leader of the vandalsquad in our city who arrested me a while back.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc0018bff9.jpg
just bored messin around

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc0018ab31.jpg
trying a different kind of 3d highlight.. i feel like i almost got it on the bottom but fucked everything else up. :(

thesilentvandal
09-05-2007, 02:12 PM
scare - keep up those simples boii
the sheep - i so badly wanna see how its gonna look in like 3-4 months, i like the style already
south pole - practice your simples, dont color yet
toui - idk why, i just dont like it alot :S sorry
sen the first - i kinda like the throw, keep it up
dizzle d - KILLING !
hood rich sucka, i see the bars, but i dont really feel them that much.
tike- feeling the colors, and the rest, keep it up boii!.

2 new sketches for people that say that i bite bastardo :) (L)
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011808.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011806.jpg

emokid
09-05-2007, 02:18 PM
stonk, stick with the fuck you style rather than the bottom one its much better looking.

silentvandal, i'm sorry but its too close to bastardos style, even if you didnt bite it still looks like you did.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6840.jpg

i am well aware the a is shit

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6842.jpg

'ash' on my homework planner COS I AM BADMAN LOONATIIIIKKKK. ahem.

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6841.jpg

ooo pink.

Sumoe
09-05-2007, 03:19 PM
working on structure!...
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/smore.jpg

This is exactly how I was about 10 months ago. Keep doing what you're doing, bro. Keep messing with different styles. You got mad potential, especially with those illin' hands. ;)

Dizzle, I like it. Keep doing your thing. But, you said "fuck bars" a day ago or so, the funny thing is, your letters have bars, whether you realize it or not. :rolleyes:

thesilentvandal
09-05-2007, 03:46 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawstrainfunnyshit.jpg

alive
09-05-2007, 04:16 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0007.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0008.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0009.jpg

kelio
09-05-2007, 04:55 PM
Sumoe: not rly feeling it. the piece and hand are so ill though. i think the right leg of the m throws it off.
Scare2:nice simple.
The_Sheep: i love your shit, always.
sex without condoms: i dont see anything wrong with the shadow.
South-Pole:love your a and e.
dizzle_d: guess it looks good.
HoodRichSucka: your s and o dont flow. the rest looks fine to me.
Stonk: i would bring the last 3 letters closer to the t.
emokid: love your style.
alive: i love all of them

critzz please i didn't feel like coloring.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/img008.jpg

thesilentvandal
09-05-2007, 04:55 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011809.jpg

HoodRichSucka
09-05-2007, 05:42 PM
sumoe- thanks man. glad to hear that, especially from someone ive looked up to ever since i joined to forum. not suckin nuts, just givin props. thnks

-d

Seek139
09-05-2007, 05:42 PM
emokid - keep it up I can appreciate your style and where it could be booktime!

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02754.jpg
In my class book w00t

HoodRichSucka
09-05-2007, 05:52 PM
^ i like ur style, u should def. take art classes if u dont already. im also assuming ur in highschool, see if they got an AP art class and take it.

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/b4after.jpg

thinking of making a box around this and filling it black...since the white on the paper makes it so boring, any thoughts/idea????


also working on a sketch of Tkid, kinda hold but picked it up and started shading the hat...any advce????
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/Tkid.jpg

enigmatic
09-05-2007, 06:11 PM
bastardo sex without kittens and sneak

fresh shit.

heres some simple isht i did a little bit ago. dont even go "oh wow that 3d is whack" because i didnt want to do it, you all know what 3d looks like, im just workin on mah letters anyway. and painting and stuff..

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2270.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
09-05-2007, 06:45 PM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1630-2.jpg

blue.steel
09-05-2007, 07:00 PM
sale that is relly bad
ur trying to do things that are way to advanced then u relly can do...
u need to slow it down and focus on keeping ur letters as evan as u can.
dont try advandced letters like u did 4 ur e
try and makeing ur e look as much as u can as the e in ur tag, same wit every other letter.
wut i am saying is u will never get good unless u focus on makeing ur letters look like letters
no extenchions untel u understand how letters are put together
then u will see how crapy that is and how stupid u were for trying to make it look wildstyle when u cant do a normal simpler style
good luck i hope u take my advice
and if it dosent look right at first dont worry just keep sketchin and u get better

kelio
09-05-2007, 07:15 PM
critzz please i didn't feel like coloring.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/img008.jpg
here alive.
thanks blue.steel

bountyhunter113
09-05-2007, 07:43 PM
nvm
yo hoodrich god damn........u already got structure and flow down(obviously from ur handies), so all u gotta do is beef up ur handies so they are pieces n some other minor crap(knews had a tutorial on this in the new2graff thread or w'e)

AyteYourCookies
09-05-2007, 07:56 PM
seek - looks dope i dont think you be in here but i could be wrong im not really felling the r tho maybe try a uppercase one?
hoodrich - the tkid looks good do up some shading on his back, pop a feather in that hat and youll pimpin' son. On the peice the a doesnt really fit with the other letters i sujest making it wider at the top.
base - make the 2 bars meet at the top of the a and use pencil or color cleaner cuz the colouring is sloppy.
seize - i dont really know what to say it looks dope.
dawsek - looks good except for the k make it more legible.
sale - simples
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture294.jpg

crits??

hungr
09-05-2007, 07:58 PM
an exchange with bastardo
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00827.jpg
ass-backwards
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00829.jpg

BORG
09-05-2007, 08:15 PM
seize- nice letters and flow
ayte- your really improving, keep it up
hungr- the forward one is dope, not feelin the backwards one as much, your s on both should be thicker to match and flow the rest of the piece better

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/593/june17wc6.jpg

this was supposed to be an chinese snake, but i turned it into an electrical eel instead

^^for you tezer

fox on a trampoline
09-05-2007, 08:17 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/5291/picture110ne6.jpgcrits ?(())seek-thats a crazy "a" i got the same note book lol
hoodrich-id just keep it like it is though i might fade the orange and yellow in background a lttle more
seize- i love youre style shadings nice too

jersOneTIC
09-05-2007, 09:03 PM
ayte - not feelin the t
hungr - always liked your style
borg - your stickers are crazy
fox - nice 3d, but i would chill on the extensions
here it is guys,no arrows. painted this piece...ill post pics tommorow...crits?
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2094/13025bz3.jpg

fox on a trampoline
09-05-2007, 09:26 PM
thanks for crits jers like youre style but i might make the dot on the J higher (so its not touchin the letter) but same shape

darthbaker
09-05-2007, 09:36 PM
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/1079/img0014ak4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new shit popout thing pretty awful fill but i like it

goddamn at that borg sticker

sex without condoms
09-05-2007, 10:16 PM
sorry for the shit flick.
not finished.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/cantstopthis.jpg

and idk if you can read it but for all the old heads there's an i love box on the far right with me shout outss
<333

blue.steel
09-05-2007, 10:17 PM
jers the top of ur r dosent fit relly
i think if u did it like this or something
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/262/jerslz1.png (http://imageshack.us)
it would look ill
or dont your shit is tight already

darthbaker
09-05-2007, 10:23 PM
the only thing wrong with that is it makes it look more like an A..

Smae
09-05-2007, 10:25 PM
Borg - that shit looks great!
Fox - don't like it... soz
Jers - great. I think that the "J" dot is fine there...

i'm gonna do a trho up in the train tracks and I wuz thinkin of doin smthin like this: http://a268.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/100/l_34f9e199df36d3357e9ff4534c143683.jpg
ya think I should fill it with a colour or with white??

smikoer
09-05-2007, 11:12 PM
Smae:
Yeah mate, good to see you're doing basic.. but I think you need to work on your lettering a bit more before getting it up. Sketch sketch sketch =]

Gumdrop.Behemoth
09-05-2007, 11:29 PM
smae: i think there pretty basic and pretty good for a beginniger(sp) but you need to get more confiedent(sp)

but here is my first sketch in a while
wat cha think?
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG_0013.jpg

Scare2
09-06-2007, 12:16 AM
yeah gumdrop i like it its really progressive from you. i see allot of influences i think iv seen other places not like a bite but like things influencing ur style and its lookin good. the one thing is that the E really isnt working. u mighta known that tho. and the top of the s, the bars get too thin and it makes it stand out from the rest. i like ur other letters but the arrow in the R is outa place. good arrow. but it dont fit the style and its the only one. id hack it out/.

smae. theres not really anything wrong with painting at any skill level. half the dudes on here dont paint. and thats graff. toy or not. id say go get some experience in every part of the game. and as far as that sketch. the squiglly line in the S is whack. make it streight (unless that was a mistake) and dont curve the top of it up like that. just bring it to a streight end. (< the top of the S) .. the bars in the E get a bit squiggly. but for sure do some painting. get can control. and keep sketching keep it simple.

just dont paint toy stuff somewhere where ur gonna have to see it everyday for a year or so. do it places where its for practice not for ups. until u get better.

o and dont get caught.

the end
09-06-2007, 12:26 AM
smae, IM gonna go along with scare, it all just takes practice, time and some determination :) ...good advice on not painting somewhere youll regret wish i heard it earlier at one point ;)

gumdrop, the AN looks pretty good together but then youre spacing goes a little whakc and by the time you get to ER the letters are completely different. besides that it looks pretty decent.

heres some freepenning shit ive been working on since school started... yesterday. in just those few days ive seen quite a bit of progress myself.
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/1659/mrscorralyq5.jpg
ignore english 3, super quicky lol

skoe
09-06-2007, 01:23 AM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a205/DJDJ06/002.jpg

this any good its my firs sketch with my new name

Gumdrop.Behemoth
09-06-2007, 01:33 AM
which of my letters looks "influnced" can you let me kno cuz all I think that in influncedd is the R

skoe
09-06-2007, 01:37 AM
which of my letters looks "influnced" can you let me kno cuz all I think that in influncedd is the R
i like your A its pretty fresh

vice versa
09-06-2007, 06:23 AM
Behemoth- answer looks good but personally i dont like the S

SKOE- nice S but i rekon lose the extra bit on the O

i tried this name out its GRAWP and its the first sketch ive done with it and u can see the tag

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0201.jpg

crits plz

South-Pole
09-06-2007, 11:18 AM
Simples Simples Simples Simples!!!

klipa
09-06-2007, 11:38 AM
quicky.
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7521/cimg0881sw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7521/cimg0881sw5.881f1e55c6.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=cimg0881sw5.jpg)

Gumdrop.Behemoth
09-06-2007, 12:36 PM
im really fuckin diggin that K the P not so much
and thanks every one for the crits i do hope i can get some more

thesilentvandal
09-06-2007, 02:09 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011812.jpg

fuck all you haters that say i bite

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-06-2007, 02:41 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011812.jpg

fuck all you haters that say i bite
you bite.

sex without condoms
09-06-2007, 02:48 PM
sorry for the shit flick.
not finished.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/cantstopthis.jpg

and idk if you can read it but for all the old heads there's an i love box on the far right with me shout outss
<333

i got nothing on this just wondering if i should finish it.

ps
Daws, you bite.

sevewon
09-06-2007, 03:27 PM
bastardo sex without kittens and sneak

fresh shit.

heres some simple isht i did a little bit ago. dont even go "oh wow that 3d is whack" because i didnt want to do it, you all know what 3d looks like, im just workin on mah letters anyway. and painting and stuff..

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2270.jpg

dude dont do base. theres already a bayse reppin calgary...and lets just say alot of western canada to

Seek139
09-06-2007, 03:43 PM
Klipa - I like where your going
Jers - Coming around to some great stuff that would look really good on Freight I hope thats your surface of choice
Zeus - classic line...changed alittle lol

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02756.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02755.jpg

Clowney-Cakes
09-06-2007, 03:51 PM
seek-nice shit man, for reall!
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4343/pieceee003jf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4416/pieceee002fc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7618/pieceee001pv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Dial.on
09-06-2007, 03:55 PM
kp- thats hot man real clean
jers- skeez out the loop on the R a bit more.. and itll look fine..

new piece im workin on i might paint it when i get the paint.. dpends on weather i get good crits or not...(saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0001-2.jpg

Samp1e
09-06-2007, 04:06 PM
dial -- i suggest that you relax your letters a bit and get a better handle on them. like you've got ideas, but you need to really really really work on them, and take smaller steps.

Clowney-Cakes
09-06-2007, 04:16 PM
dial-i think you should go a little bit more simp, i cant really see what it says. and you might want to get rid of the background or maybe tone it down a little bit might make it look better

Slushi
09-06-2007, 04:39 PM
critzz please i didn't feel like coloring.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/img008.jpg

sorry to bump it so far, but did anybody else notice that this is a horrible Gesus bite?

Bazer
09-06-2007, 04:48 PM
meh.. i wouldn't call it a direct bite... maybe inspired by... iono.. im to sleepy to tell..

here's something new i did today.. im run this style for a little bit until i can get a nice piece from it... and i need to come up with some original extensions.....
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1009.jpg

sex without condoms
09-06-2007, 04:50 PM
i got nothing on this just wondering if i should finish it.

ps
Daws, you bite.
i just wanna know if i should complete this.

HadeP
09-06-2007, 05:43 PM
The one in winnipeg got shot by the fuzz cuz he was native its a shame he was a good writer
yo im in calgary. bayse is insane if you dont know his shit check him out on VO, voltron is killling this summer. somethin i cooked up in school today
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/iwol2.jpg
dislike the o personally.
crittz comments opinions

enigmatic
09-06-2007, 06:29 PM
EVERYONE on this page is trying way to hard. take that focus and use it to work on subtle progression, first straight letters, then curvy and flowy or clean bends with variations in bar size etc. depending on where your mind takes youwith it. then work on super duper flowyness, then extensions, and then study more i guess. then you should be where im at, still toy but studying hard.

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5518/1002271pr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Seek139
09-06-2007, 06:41 PM
EVERYONE on this page is trying way to hard. take that focus and use it to work on subtle progression, first straight letters, then curvy and flowy or clean bends with variations in bar size etc. depending on where your mind takes youwith it. then work on super duper flowyness, then extensions, and then study more i guess. then you should be where im at, still toy but studying hard.

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5518/1002271pr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

LOL ^ *bump*
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02756.jpg

enigmatic
09-06-2007, 06:44 PM
thats dope but dont bump stuff on the same page lol. that is tight tho

silentchaos14
09-06-2007, 06:46 PM
sir that is fuckin amazing

HadeP
09-06-2007, 06:59 PM
i suggest a name change there champ!
calgary bayse is alot better
no beef just advice.
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/bayse3.jpg
calgary for life:)

Roolete
09-06-2007, 07:23 PM
^yummm

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0299.jpg

Nem
09-06-2007, 07:25 PM
the leg on the R wood look good if it was fatter.

silentchaos14
09-06-2007, 07:50 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketchSHITTY.jpg

first sketch in awhile, its a little sketchy, the E is fucked and so is the right leg of the R but whatever.
crits?

tense
09-06-2007, 07:52 PM
I like the N just make the bottm right corner look like the top left one and it would be bettr

Captain
09-06-2007, 08:09 PM
Morne get up and try something other than blockbusters. use bars, keep it basic, but try to flow a little. it seems like you figured out simples and haven't really progressed at all. you'll get there, but only if you try to push it.

Seek, your stuff is looking better and better. slowly, but still.

Seek139
09-06-2007, 08:10 PM
thats dope but dont bump stuff on the same page lol. that is tight tho

I was pointing fun at you for giving the 411 to people like your cope 2 or some shit.


Captain thx Its a progression which I don't plan on quiting at.

Bazer
09-06-2007, 08:13 PM
here's something new i did today.. im run this style for a little bit until i can get a nice piece from it... and i need to come up with some original extensions.....
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1009.jpg

bump cuz it was at the shit end of the page. =[

and you people tellin base about bayse... totally different spelling, totally different style.
and "base".. i told you before theres another base in phillie thatll burn your ass so bad. just give up. youve been writing just as long as i have, maybe longer but haven't gotten down some descent structure.

HuntingLOLs
09-06-2007, 08:17 PM
meh.. i wouldn't call it a direct bite... maybe inspired by... iono.. im to sleepy to tell..

here's something new i did today.. im run this style for a little bit until i can get a nice piece from it... and i need to come up with some original extensions.....
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1009.jpg
if there's something hard to come up with its extensions :< i usually tell my self: "just bend it!" and at some point something pops out. that goes for letters mostly though.

daws bite like a lioness hunting caddle

silentchaos14
09-06-2007, 08:18 PM
captain are u telling me to go more difficult? i have no idea what u mean by flow

Sou - Mvd
09-06-2007, 08:26 PM
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/4375/005qe9.jpg
Morne just keep pushing out those straight letters, you are improving it just takes practice. Start looking at other pieces and try and feed off of the way they are constructed to begin to understand how to bend and construct more complicated letters when it comes time.

enigmatic
09-06-2007, 08:29 PM
1.that base is on the other side of the united states.

2. i write base48. the numbers imply im not the original and dont claim to be. every name is taken.

and if you dont want me to give helpful advice then whatever.

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5932/1002273gb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5932/1002273gb8.4274c046b1.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=521&i=1002273gb8.jpg)



http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3999/1002272cr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alive
09-06-2007, 08:34 PM
the throw is good decent just work on consistancy i suppose. the piece needs to step back a bit.

HOWEVER, every name is absolutely not taken. there is no other CAER. try fucking harder. that is a pathetic defeatest attitude that DOESNT BELONG IN GRAFFITI. try a name thats not playyyyyed.

AnteUp
09-06-2007, 08:43 PM
every name isnt taken, make one up

Clowney-Cakes
09-06-2007, 08:47 PM
roolete-i gues its ok, go with something a little mores simples to read when starting, thats just me
morne-i think you shoukd use stright letters and keep them all the same, i do like the simp tho.
base-one i like your name, and two i like you shit nice throw nice simp. keep up the good work.

AnteUp
09-06-2007, 08:58 PM
this is shit... but here it is... KE
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture022.jpg

enigmatic
09-06-2007, 09:04 PM
hmm okay i guess i could like... choose 3 random numbers and letters...

i like m's. ummm. 3 is my lucky number. 1 would be tight...

m31! thats not taken...

im gonna keep practicing with this name.

alive
09-06-2007, 09:06 PM
i mean, dont do it on my accnt, im just saying that shits played.

m13? thats gonna be a bitch of a name.

Dial.on
09-06-2007, 09:13 PM
ante up- waaay more simple.. im sure ppl have told you to use bars.. trust me it works..
base- lose the wak extention in the A and do somethin with the S like make the bottom touch the A or somethin i unno its buggin me ..lol

just foolin around tryin to find some diferent way to place my letters..
(saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0004.jpg

Scare2
09-06-2007, 09:15 PM
yo im not a huge fan of the jagged rawer styles but ill crit it as best ican. i dont like the way the two bars of the K come out so far from eachother. make em come out at the same place and angle away from eachother. i like the spiky top shit on the top bar. i dont like the E really its too confused. i think its because of the way all the bars got squisshed toghether i would just keep going with where your at and work on flow. but also do simples every now and then to help your progression

so ive been doin the simples for a while and my style really developed fast. and peopletold me to progress it a little further. so theres some simpler stuff and then i tried to branch it out a little and add some flex. they all pen sketchess by the way.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9060020.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9060021.jpg


dial ill try n crit that later but i gotta go.

alive
09-06-2007, 09:16 PM
DIAL ON.

u remind me of jank in some wierd way. u prob dont know who the fuckim talking abt. not calling a bite by any means. its something abt the construction. ur S has no structure, otherwise keep with it, uve got potential. i feel like a prick saying that. who the fuck am i. w/e.

xFatel.Onex
09-06-2007, 09:54 PM
Saga thats a dope sketch and scare work on them letters a little more to get them to pop

D E M O
09-06-2007, 09:57 PM
Scare i really like the bottom one, specially the E
work on the S

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4674/demo35ar8.jpg

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8209/demoh2fr7.jpg

HoodRichSucka
09-06-2007, 10:05 PM
^^i like it. better than my shit

Seek139
09-06-2007, 10:06 PM
Demo on the first one how did you get your blend like that do you use prismas?

lost127
09-06-2007, 10:07 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/lostshaolin.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/lostinshaolin.jpg