Blackbooks

[Seek139]

Demo on the first one how did you get your blend like that do you use prismas?

[lost127]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/lostshaolin.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/lostinshaolin.jpg

[HoodRichSucka]

Demo on the first one how did you get your blend like that do you use prismas?

yea seriously, ive been using prismas for all the time ive been writing and still cant figure that shit out. ppl have givin me tips but i dont get it. sharre the secret

[D E M O]

it depends on the colors you use, some colors dont blend that well. you just need to keep playing with them and see what works for you

[uhhh]

honestly.
prismas are super easy.
say you want to go from red to yellow.
well, in the basic 12 pack,
theres red and yellow and two in between colors.
first, you lay down the red, but flare it out on the end thatll be fading to yellow.
now take the next lightest color, go over all the red, but a little bit more, and again, flare it.
now, take the next lightest color, and co the same, this one might need a little "blending" basically rub it over where the colors intersect, it bleeds the two inks together.
and finally the yellow, go over all the color, and if needed, blend it a little as previously mentioned.
now it may take a tiny bit of practice, but its really not too hard.

[Scare2]

dial on i actaully raelly like it if you cleaned it up and took a little more time too it. itd look real good. i really like the way you do your As. but fix the V in sv.

demo i like ur coloring but i dont like ur individual letters. i think it looks good as an overall piece. but i dont like the structure. i think thats a personal opinion tho.


Lost deffenitely outline the ffirst one with some black u cant see shit. it looks like its good tho. nice dragon. the bottom one is dope. uv got a really nice style of wilds that flows. but the crown looks way out of place. its too simple in comparison



this is a sloppy pen sketch i did in spanish class today too.
i dont know... i gotta play with the letters more. but my simples were getting repetitive.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/SCAREOCLEL.jpg

[the end]

first proper sketch in a few weeks.
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/8964/sultanfy0.jpg

[d_g]

HOWEVER, every name is absolutely not taken. there is no other CAER. try fucking harder. that is a pathetic defeatest attitude that DOESNT BELONG IN GRAFFITI. try a name thats not playyyyyed.

There's a CAER in my city.

[From the Ground Up]

Scare2 - Looks good, but the extension on the bottom-left of the A looks wack to me...
The End - Lose the extension on the T. Other than that, its a good start. Simples is key!
D E M O - Looks illen man

[Bazer]

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/SCAREOCLEL.jpg

this is getting better but dont forget to keep your letters the same size. your e is bigger than your S

[alive]

There's a CAER in my city.


who for all intensive purposes, does not matter or count. tell him he may suck my dick. lol.

[Smae]

Demo - Love u're colours! rlly nice bruv!
Lost - put a black outline on the 1st sketch and it'll b rlly rlly nice
Sultan - Like it. just loose the extension on the T
Scare - rllyt nice! only prob is that u're E is way too big

[uhhh]

smae,
nice quote in your sig,
i think that was teh funniest thing ive ever heard.

alive-o duh theres another caer.
i mean, there kaer just on this site.
and im sure theres other who spell it that way,
and your way.

[klipa]

exchange with fase.
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6077/cimg0883zv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[amk]

EVERYONE on this page is trying way to hard. take that focus and use it to work on subtle progression, first straight letters, then curvy and flowy or clean bends with variations in bar size etc. depending on where your mind takes youwith it. then work on super duper flowyness, then extensions, and then study more i guess. then you should be where im at, still toy but studying hard.

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5518/1002271pr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

YOU take THIS advice

And this shit about names lol.

if you dont paint then whats the big deal ?
noone will no who you fucking are if you debate this shit over a fucking forum.

[South-Pole]

^bullshit,stop arguing over shit and post pics(this doens't goes to amk only)


Base fix that A don't make it bend so much to the right
Fase looks okaaayy, not feeling the arrows
scare,keep going don't forget about letter size

went mad on this one lol:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRN-5.gif

should i finish this or erase it all?

[Clowney-Cakes]

seek-nice shit man, for reall!
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4343/pieceee003jf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4416/pieceee002fc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7618/pieceee001pv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump for crits

[amk]

you dont bump shit from the last page asking for fucking crits if you dont fucking give any.



South...best thing i seen from you...R is so fresh...T is fresh....flows like a fucking river...ink that bitch

[Clowney-Cakes]

...3 pages back, and i just dont say repeat shit that people already say

[Seek139]

southpole - finish it up and keep it up :D
elka - train quality straight letters work out the bugs

Another work in school i still have to color it tell me what yall think :D
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02757.jpg

[Clowney-Cakes]

wow man nice shit man, nice style man. will look even better when colored

[snezoner]

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m28/snezone/358.jpg

[NEZ89]

south pole- can u darken it a bit, its hard to see
elka- the 3d needs a bit of work
seek- thats freakin ill man

something i'm still working on, i'm gonna finish shading myself l8ter
but what colors should i use on the peice?
and should i put something in the bottom space or jus leave it blank?
i was thinking of putting in that city peice i did a while back

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9453/im001258rp0.jpg

[dizzle_d]

Snezonnnnaahhhhhh- I love your handie. and your colorss. orgasmicccccccccccccccccccc... does it say Seur? If it does, fix up the E, push it out a little more, so its not as squished in.

[snezoner]

thankyou, been fuckin with this style, idk gotta find a way to make it more complex but its allready gonna be balls to paint, a million cut backs=/

yeah it says seur i write sewer but i cant change my username know how?

[Seek139]

snez - I can't define the letters but the straight artistic side it's awesome
nez - Is that little boy curtis jackson? LOL

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02759.jpg
ITS COLORED and BLENDED thanks to the kid who helped me out.

[paste]

Snez, thats pretty dope I really like that lettering, it reminds me of some guy, I just cant remember the name. It might even just be you. But seriously, looking very dope, props for the handies too.
Nez-pretty good simple, I'm not too keen on that bubble fill, it just doesnt seem to fit. Just one guys opinion though.
Seek-I really like the 3D stuff man, its looking pretty sleezy. I'm not too sure about the color scheme you chose though, it just doesnt seem to go with the style ya know? Again, just one kids opinion.

[d_g]

who for all intensive purposes, does not matter or count. tell him he may suck my dick. lol.

Well technically he does, no beef or anything but he burns you.

I'll get some flix later.

[NEZ89]

nez - Is that little boy curtis jackson? LOL


haha no its me, i said i wasn't done yet


Nez-pretty good simple, I'm not too keen on that bubble fill, it just doesnt seem to fit. Just one guys opinion though.

So should i try a different fill?
and what colors should i use?

[paste]

Yeah, I might try to integrate the fill into the picture a little more, not sure how exactly. Sorry I cant be more helpful. Maybe shades of blue/purple? Again not sure, but the picture of you is looking great, so try to find a fill that stands out just as well.

[Smae]

Seek - rlly cool! dont kno why but u remember me of Odeith (http://www.odeith.com/)
NEZ - i'm not feelin u're letters... but it's rlly cool1
Elka - Fix u're K

[NEZ89]

everyone keeps telling me blue and purple
konw what i'ma photoshop it and see how it'll look

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

in a kids book.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1657.jpg

[Sou - Mvd]

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/1571/002ae5.jpg

I'm diggin that throw seize I'd just say make the dot on your I touch the stem part ( pretty much double it's size). Also work on your hand. Try and make all the letters touch each other and I'd say switch up the little scribble above the I

[Dusk07]

-sieze..diggin it.

-sou i like the fill and the idea but its really hard to read..or maybe its just meh.
not really feelin the handy though...=/

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000005402749/1/154/fkWPww4N5D8J9whllEvOme-xq7uBMYF6.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/vCKEwuwc2T-qDKBeZT2DTWvBWRpdce2T?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/80000000540280c/1/154/yM4GZjMRwz_qc0MO19GkCZ65_hmxUKpk.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/RmjqQqHn6z-6eSGLJrhDC0ZTg0AYINJH?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/8000000054029d7/1/154/yVXswXvA4j_bP6d3bK4ALqA1HVc5jjbJ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/unr4GHSR1T-QyFBi9-pGOp85ylGGfA04?referrer=hlnk)
ignore the handys on this one

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000005402d00/1/154/54frZINh6D864P-PnQQpj7j5ymD18SoB.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/dmRTCyCX0z-Ep26aC2ny98Bu3PLTYkAc?referrer=hlnk)

[From the Ground Up]

Snez, thats pretty dope I really like that lettering, it reminds me of some guy, I just cant remember the name. It might even just be you. But seriously, looking very dope, props for the handies too.
I believe you are thinking of cormac

[paste]

Yep, thats the one, thanks for catching me there.
Sick-Scrap that third one dude and keep working on those throwies.
Sou- Like theyve said, dope fill, not too keane on those letters though. Its kinda just really loose right now, know what I'm saying at all?
Seize- I like that throwie, but I'm kinda feeling the dot of the i on top of that first e and the second e, so it kind of looks like its rising in the middle or some shit like that? I dont know, just an idea. Looking good though.

[alive]

alive-o duh theres another caer.
i mean, there kaer just on this site.
and im sure theres other who spell it that way,
and your way.




right, and kaer is not caer. not complicated.

and d_g, he may still suck my dick. lol.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/carter-1.jpg (http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vcGhvdG9idWNrZXQuY29t)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/fuckedup.jpg (http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vcGhvdG9idWNrZXQuY29t)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/nixon-1.jpg (http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vcGhvdG9idWNrZXQuY29t)

[BORG]

lil wayne died???

tezer- the first one is dope, but on your 2 tezer pieces you cover up your z's with your e's, looks dope though, would u be down for another piece exchange?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

naa it say r.i.p soulja slim.
I've done a couple of borgs in my book already im down though. i got 2 more stickers than im down with your pack.

[Dial.on]

edward- always diggin ur shit.. real clean .. simple but u got ur own funk to it.. nice..

sou- i dont know wuts goin on there man?..i dont mean to sound like a dick at all.. but i unno im gunna say simpler..u dun have to listen to me though im just one person..

STILL experimenting with some new styles... NEW one (saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0005-1.jpg

[AnteUp]

on tha second t it lukks like the swastika, lol but all lukk dope

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011814.jpg

still bastardo bite bitches?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

yes.
i liked your older shit anyways.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/tezer-1.jpg

[snezoner]

I believe you are thinking of cormac


yo i was so scared someone was gonna start some shit on that cause i saw his shit right last in the bbook thread, i really took a good look at his style and if ya look the only thing we have in common is bulky fat letters, his shit aint scratchy like mine, and his letter structure is better, im really trying to work away from all you cats stylewise, its only a coincidence...
some mod deleted my post in the bbook thread, like mad fuckin quick fter i posted, i can only guess they were thinkin i bit..

[dizzle_d]

Daws- keep it up! :D
Dial.on- I thought the S was a B, maybe define the S a little more.
Tezerrr-straight killin ish, lovin it.


http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7374/img1867hg9.jpg
school sketch today I know my 'Handi' sucks extreme dick. I'm workin on it as I type.Its so horrific.^
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5313/img1866no7.jpg
old^
Crits please( I think by now we know I don't bite Bastardo )

[Make•]

^I like the colored one much better, looks really dope!

[AnteUp]

simple... again...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture023.jpg
dizzy baybay, u doin euro? lukks gud...
teze-karak is killin it

[dizzle_d]

thanks fo the critsszzzszszs guys;
cien my main mannnn- diggin the nicee pen freestyle, only thing is maybe move the N out a little more:D

[AnteUp]

muchos gracias senyor... i cant get tha n down gud yet...gettin there tho...
fuck bro, ur style has changed a hella lot

[BORG]

cien- deff work on the n, looks good though
sexwithoutkitttens- me 2

sorry teze, been drinkin a bit, so i tryed somethin new, hope you likess it

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2476/june17002dq2.jpg

[sex without condoms]

ivee had a liter of absolut and 4 smirnofff raspberrry brusts

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

cien- deff work on the n, looks good though
sexwithoutkitttens- me 2

sorry teze, been drinkin a bit, so i tryed somethin new, hope you likess it

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2476/june17002dq2.jpg
here ya go my *****, i keep it simple.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/f.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/h.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/g.jpg

[BORG]

tezer- the c in the second sketch is looking ill as hellz, funny thing bout thre character, he kin da looks like me, dope shit, thanks, i'ma work on that piece tomorroe

[AnteUp]

the borg sketch is the best one...

for burs..
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture026.jpg

[crimateNC]

http://www.north87.com/images/graff/!cid_090807_0042.jpg
I whipped this up, gonna work more on it

[AnteUp]

no... use bars... wtf it say? coag? on tha reals tho, same thick ness bars bend em an all that shit

[crimateNC]

it says coag, umm those bars are actually my green pen intended as just details not splitting of the letter

[AnteUp]

no they arent... i mean REALLY simple
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz317.jpg
trust me they work

[South-Pole]

Ante-cleaner piece pwease!!
borg-lol you shouldn't drink while sketching
tezer-Borg sketch is the best
crimate-BARS,nuff said

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRN-5.gif

fuck you guys,i always get 1 crit lol so ....BUMPP!!!

inked result:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Fresh.jpg

more

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/die.jpg

should i finish this?

[amk]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011814.jpg

still bastardo bite bitches?

fuck you kid.
dont ever ask me for my opinions or help on MSN 50 times a day ever again.
you come on MSN and ask me

" i want cheau and bastardo's style how do i get it "

lol fuck you.
you dont get it by biting.
you will never get it.
cos you dont get graffiti.
when the harsh crits come the " fuck you dick head " shit comes out.

so dont come back on here in 3 months time sucking my dick sayin " amk knows more than you about simples he helped me loads " bullshit just to get back in my books.

your a fucking tool.

TRN...looked better uninked man sworry...feel the D in the Die.
Teze...damn you got good

[crimateNC]

woot. I like bars now, thanks for the tip I think i've just unlocked the secret i've been looking for...

[crimateNC]

i dunno, good question, not here obviously. I've always just thought well if it looks ok then its good.

but yeah here is experiment one
http://www.north87.com/images/graff/!cid_090807_1044.jpg

[alive]

i mean, thats true, its just that u need good structure to look good. anyway. stop coloring, stop using 3d, focus on the letters. then just keep playing with it, maybe fatten up the lettes a bit.

[Clowney-Cakes]

not bad man, not feeling the A or C

[sKeeLo]

amk - for someone who has zero skills and no feel for foundations you got a big lil ego goin . . .

crimate - id suggest what alive said and thicken teh bars, get your bars more scrunched/tighter

[Blackeyed_Pea]

Ante-cleaner piece pwease!!
borg-lol you shouldn't drink while sketching
tezer-Borg sketch is the best
crimate-BARS,nuff said

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRN-5.gif

fuck you guys,i always get 1 crit lol so ....BUMPP!!!

inked result:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Fresh.jpg

more

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/die.jpg

should i finish this?
only reason it looks whack inked is cause of that fucked up 3D :O

[bountyhunter113]

wow what the fuck............i have a drawing of a nice mech(it's unfinished tho)......and my fuckin scanner cant even get a good scan of it.......best i could get was a lil handy i had on the page:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/mech.png

crimate- yea man, do wut alive told ya to
ante-ya it's gettin better, but loose the cracks
south-pole- that one bar on the "R" is waaay to skinny

[Clowney-Cakes]

emokid - keep it up I can appreciate your style and where it could be booktime!

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02754.jpg
In my class book w00t

BUMPP

[bouncingsoul]

Ehh throw?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0939.jpg

lol rhymes in the back

[crimateNC]

bounty i think if u use photoshop as the application to scan then it will work better. not too sure, not a hardware techie.

southpole - yeah man, its like some pseudo rule that you can't do 3d like that and make it look good. lol I have no clue what i said, but yeah try some vanishing point, or atleast a drop shadow with it. The letters look good to me, and thats not saying much.
Bouncingsoul - nice, I dunno if its me but the drop looks kinda misplaced on the right part.

[alive]

drop doesnt matter all that much, its a throw, shits supposed to be grimy. make that shit one line and ill be in love.

seek, looks illin, but i cant say shit bout that 3d crazy.

[K(i)ng]

Crimate- I love the G, i'm not to sure about the O...
Blackeyed- The one That you asked if you should finish, definetly i like it better then the first one.
Bouncing- The throw would pry look better if it weren't in pen so i'd say try using like a sharpie sketch see how that turns out.

Here's one i did like 1/2 hour ago

http://img29.picoodle.com/img/img29/9/9/8/f_khaozm_0ba0ee7.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/9/8/f_khaozm_0ba0ee7.jpg&srv=img29)

Crits???

It spells Khaoz (chaos) and sorry for the bad quality

[crimateNC]

drop doesnt matter all that much, its a throw, shits supposed to be grimy. make that shit one line and ill be in love.

seek, looks illin, but i cant say shit bout that 3d crazy.

/signed

yeah I guess you're right.

here is experiments two, three and four. {I need to stop with the experiment crap...}

http://www.north87.com/images/graff/!cid_Photo005.jpg
http://www.north87.com/images/graff/!cid_Photo047.jpg
and some handstyles i've worked on
http://www.north87.com/images/graff/!cid_Photo0512.jpg

and

king - i like the colors, why is the s 3d over top of the other letters and the rest isnt? I dunno but, nice job

[K(i)ng]

The second COAG on the first picture would look pretty tight covering like a whole freight or something depending on the colors

what do you think of my last post though crimate??

[c.n.k]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/NN.jpg

[Bazer]

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1012.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1011.jpg


and incase anyone asks.. yes. its a penis.

[AnteUp]

heh...thats a penis... *hand clap
amazing

edit-cnk lukks gud

[still.alive]

haha. GAY. i loove the style on the first, it doesnt seem like ur usual ish. although u kinda lost it after the Z? or i actually just dont understand whats going downthere, i see an R.

[tense]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011814.jpg

still bastardo bite bitches?

Start SIMPLE, do block letters, stop biting

[South-Pole]

only reason it looks whack inked is cause of that fucked up 3D :O

i know it looked better unink'd just cause of that fucking 3-d :

since im posting heres a few crits

k(i)ng:new to graff thread now

boucing-fresh as always

cnk-no comment..dope

crimate-im feeling the first sketch than your last one try re-doing the last one and make the bars a bit bigger

nar-i can''t crit you,i like it and i don;t like it lol i dunno

[AnteUp]

ahaha... i thought they couldnt ban over personal ish... oh well...

bounce-cant see it, but shure its dope

[bouncingsoul]

Hah I can't see it either

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0940.jpg

lol

[AnteUp]

ok now that i see it...

im not gunna say lukks gud anymore...gonna give good crits...scouts honor :)

bouncin- make tha k a little bigger, lukks like an naked asian in a room filled with naked black guys, s needs a little work, i love the w, lukks like you were tryna make the k an e lukk alike so they flow more, but it makes the e lukk a little worse

[Roolete]

save alive!

and bounce, i'm definitely going to bite your k and e.

[Dial.on]

knews -thats a dope throw man... u shud really start up painting.. u would definatley get some repect on the street..
baze- theres somethin about the E i dont really like other than that its sik

workin on a piece... had a sketch on here yesterday.. today i added some more phunk to it.. im goin to paint a piece soon so i need some crits to make sure its good ................
....................................(saga)........ ............................
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0009.jpg

[Smae]

Coag- don't like them... and u're A's are strange :P
South - it'd be really nice without the 3D
King - for wot I can see, go to the "new to graff" thread
CNK - thats cool
Baze - nice!
Dial on - fix the S and the G... the S looks like a B or a 3/E and the G doesn't look like anything at all... :\

here's a simple one i've made(as u guys told me to):
http://a62.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/122/l_44799b70f3085d23c0dccf75117f3d9d.jpg
there shouldn't be that lil space in the A...

CRITS PLEASE

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0941.jpg

Hah, my pen exploded so I had a little fun with it

[whahappen?]

there is no other CAER. .
sup guys
new name
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2164/picture021tk8.jpg
i dont think anyone else writes it

[StAtiK1]

lookin good whahappen

[whahappen?]

hmph, digital blojob much:D
id rather be gay then wack
and compliments dont constitute as dick sucking, please take your faggotry somewhere else
snaplol!
this wasnt preplanned at all, just sortve went with it
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/7409/picture173gj9.jpg
damn thats messy

[anarchy]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0941.jpg

Hah, my pen exploded so I had a little fun with it

Fire.

[sex without condoms]

whahappen i really feel none of your new throws at alll
the letters overlap wayyy to much and theyre just too sloppy
like i get the while grime thing but i just fell its like over the top in overlappingness

[whahappen?]

whahappen i really feel none of your new throws at alll
the letters overlap wayyy to much and theyre just too sloppy
like i get the while grime thing but i just fell its like over the top in overlappingness
yea, that last one was just bad, it wasnt really premeditated at all so it came out sloppy

[AnteUp]

Coag- don't like them... and u're A's are strange :P
South - it'd be really nice without the 3D
King - for wot I can see, go to the "new to graff" thread
CNK - thats cool
Baze - nice!
Dial on - fix the S and the G... the S looks like a B or a 3/E and the G doesn't look like anything at all... :\

here's a simple one i've made(as u guys told me to):
http://a62.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/122/l_44799b70f3085d23c0dccf75117f3d9d.jpg
there shouldn't be that lil space in the A...

CRITS PLEASE

new to graff thread

[emokid]

bouncing that throw is well nice

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6843.jpg

no advancement letter wise but i COLOURED it! with crayola feltips n all.

[-ShAmEE-]

sorri emokid i feeling it.
it too thin in parts and the thinker bars arent reali flowing. sorri.,

[emokid]

shamee did you mean you're NOT feeling it :) haha

[Fube]

^^^
"English motha fucka, do you speak it!"
-pulp fiction.-

same- what ante said, its hard to tell some guy they suck and need to go to "new to graff thread'' when u might want to take a look at your letters as well. crit is crit though.

still cant stand the philly shit.

bounce- keep workin on it. its grime though.

[HoodRichSucka]

emokid - i like the color a lot

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/Senter.jpg
still workin... not ganna lie, the R was influenced by sky5 (obvously)..but i think its getting better...
-d

[still.alive]

its not obvious, just shaddup abt it. lol. looks good but pull ur letters in together.

[whahappen?]

^^^
"English motha fucka, do you speak it!"
-pulp fiction.-

same- what ante said, its hard to tell some guy they suck and need to go to "new to graff thread'' when u might want to take a look at your letters as well. crit is crit though.

still cant stand the philly shit.

bounce- keep workin on it. its grime though.
was the phily shit in referance to me
haha
why do people think my throws are philly
they dont even resemble philly throws

[HoodRichSucka]

emokid - i like the color a lot

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/Senter.jpg
still workin... not ganna lie, the R was influenced by sky5 (obvously)..but i think its getting better...
-d
crits.

[uhhh]

honestly.
youve been on this site way to long to be where you are.
did you quit for awhile?
or just not work on stuff?

[HoodRichSucka]

thanks...? um i mainly do handstyles and piecing isnt my thing. just been working on it lately. but appreciate it...????

[Sans]

Tried something a little different.

What do ya think?

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8338/saqe1yg1.jpg

[K(i)ng]

I like your emo kid, The color scheme is nice, and so are the bars

[HSAL]

SANS, liking that man - simple. reminds me of the paris metro system man...

here's mine, fresh style; taking with a shit less than 1mp camera. crits?
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4258/picture007rh7.jpg

[ceak.]

hoodrich-your definately improving from what ive seen. id say pull the letters together a bit more and it would look much better.
emokid- ive always liked your style. keep it up
HSAL- nice man, i like what you did with the fading drips good work


just started sketching a few days ago, trying to do some simples. really looking for crits on the blockish one but any are welcome.sorry about the size

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1183/1346690675_753de4a8f4_b.jpg

[Dial.on]

knews -thats a dope throw man... u shud really start up painting.. u would definatley get some repect on the street..
baze- theres somethin about the E i dont really like other than that its sik

workin on a piece... had a sketch on here yesterday.. today i added some more phunk to it.. im goin to paint a piece soon so i need some crits to make sure its good ................
....................................(saga)........ ............................
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0009.jpg


i got shit last on the page this was posted..crits?

ceal- i unno man.. i think that "c" COULD look good like.. i unno though somethin about it bugs me..

sle- the S could have some potential but i dont like how its pointy and shit.. start wit bars.. clean em up...and keep sketchin.. itll come to you..

hoodrich- its good ur using bars but like try to make it less spaced out and less complicated... ur handies are pretty sick try doing a handy and then doing it in like bar form.. know wut im sayin...

[BORG]

hsal- looking good, take those ugly prong thingy's off the ends of all your letters
ceak- you are headed in the right direction, take out the odd-ball extra extensions off all your letters, and it'd look better
saga- sorry, i'm not feelin that, try using one thickness for now, and get your letters down solid, then go wild

i sobered up and pumped this out for an exchange with tezer
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5598/june17002ea6.jpg
sorry bout the r, just tried to make it look symmetrical

and i worked on a lil more advanced c, and i have mixed feelings about it so tell me what you think
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2204/june17003zl9.jpg

[ceak.]

those throws are sick man. im not really feeling the little tail with the half circle though, really doesnt seem to fit with the rest of the letter, just my oppinion.

[Naysayer]

hsal - keep it up looks good.
ceak - keep working on it the bottom right one is my favorite but its coming along meng.
dial on - I dont really kno how to crit you but its looks cool to me. maybe color it.
borg- I love your shit. on the c you might try making it a little taller. But what do I know? not much rly.

[Clowney-Cakes]

Anom- getting better, keep that shit up and fix the N and M in most of them!!!! listen to peoples crits!

[AnteUp]

borg...holy shit thats amazing...every thing, buuut. the c's penis is kinda wack if you take it off then it lukks jus as good or better.
saga...its diff from mostly any thing ive seen i personally like it
anom keep it up. its nice an simple. loose tha karak tho
sieonah-lukks great i like it..

haha, fuckin around wit 3-d kinda wack but here goes..
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture027.jpg
ehh crits

[DanielDTC]

anom-looks hot bro

some old and newer shit:
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_188.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_187.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_186.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_185.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_189.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_190.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_191.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o10/HardcorePaintballer/IMAGE_193.jpg

wat u think?

[AnteUp]

no faces, no addons, no extensions...bars...please god do barss

[whahappen?]

borg...holy shit thats amazing...every thing, buuut. the c's penis is kinda wack if you take it off then it lukks jus as good or better.
saga...its diff from mostly any thing ive seen i personally like it
anom keep it up. its nice an simple. loose tha karak tho
sieonah-lukks great i like it..

haha, fuckin around wit 3-d kinda wack but here goes..
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture027.jpg
ehh crits
top is weird but the bottoms dope
keep doing that

[Bazer]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2204/june17003zl9.jpg


ceak you dummy. dont bump the pic right above you... *nods in disappointment.*


cile, i like it baby but the extension on the left looks to low and to skinny. or maybe to short... iono.. play with it. =]

[Sou - Mvd]

slummmmmmmmmp
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2959/001at9.jpg
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/4381/004pw2.jpg

[Roolete]

gumdrop if its a traced bite show a pic of what its traced from

even though people didnt like these, i did so i kept going, getting better?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0309.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0310.jpg
quickie freestyle

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSktch.jpg
was gonna say MORNER but i ran out of room and just realized it sounds like moaner.
crits?

[Roolete]

i reccomend checking your own sig, fella.

[silentchaos14]

alright well i aint feelin that style, seems too puzzle-ish. could be cuz im tired tho.

[AMansNotACamel]

^^ Trill shit, it's good to see someone put so much effort into their sketches, morn. D:

[silentchaos14]

either thats a joke or yur blind cuz thats one of the more shitty unclean sketches ive done. but whatever if yur serious thanks. nother one comin up.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Morne.jpg
changed it a little, did a few little add-ons.
crits?

[amk]

gumdrop if its a traced bite show a pic of what its traced from

even though people didnt like these, i did so i kept going, getting better?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0309.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0310.jpg
quickie freestyle

who told you to stop doing this ???
noone should tell you to stop doing anythng in graffiti unless they are far better than you.
graffiti is free expression.
dont get pushed around on a forum.
if you like it you keep doing it
cos i seriously feel that shit and i think it can come out seriously original and very nice.

ill have a new sketch up soon.
ill post the letters then ill do a char and a fillzor OMG not a fill OMG OMG OMG :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:
i need to get back to doing fills as i need to start getting ideas for them down for when i paint lol.

[daisyface]

morne i can finally see some improvement, your letters are getting to be more consistent-good. your R is still a lil weird tho try putting that second leg a little more to the right

roolete i would say that you should try to get your bars more even, it looks like you rushed it a bit in some spots, take yo time!

[Clowney-Cakes]

yeah man, that morne is one of your btter ones, just fix the O and R amd it will be looking good

[Chalk]

i think that this is the best i have seen from you yet. really feelin it. good work. just try to fix the N and M a bit. so it flows better.
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/2369/bbook018xb4.jpg

[HadeP]

crits.
the s is decent, the e is to hidden,
loose the extention on the bottem left piece of the n, its whack.
define the T more, the bottem right extention is bitter then the top left extention making the T look like a C, the next E is better, the R is good.
over all squish your letters in together, maybe slant some letters to give it more flow, watch your extentions. other wise, nicely done.
maybe add some color ;)

[HadeP]

trying some new shit i've worked on in the past few days, crits please
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/2167/bbook004ap0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/8022/bbook009ch2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5562/bbook011ec8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9884/bbook013oc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3335/bbook016kg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3209/bbook017rm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/2369/bbook018xb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/4677/bbook020ce2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3734/bbook022dk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/6558/bbook031fz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


CRITS PLEASE!
most of them are pretty dope, the one thing i would worry about is watch your 3d, its off in some points. and if y our going to make the letters over lap eachother with the 3d, make sure you keep it consistant.
over all pretty good throws, lets see some pieces!

[whahappen?]

anom dont do the 1rst 2nd 3rd or 4rth ones, the rest are pretty nice, basic but nice

[HadeP]

someone already writes meso??
hit up new to graff thread, you stuff is poor quality,
use bars and try and get some form in your letters.
not to be rude, but graffiti takes passion, time and patients, your sketches look like they took less then 5 mins.
take your time and post things your proud of. or things your serious about.

[amk]

Anom...some pretty nice some pretty bad....i like the one where the guy is holding it ahahah looks nice.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rew.jpg

same style just a year later

[WhiskeyTango]

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4258/pic0004lj2.jpg

[HadeP]

slummmmmmmmmp
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2959/001at9.jpg
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/4381/004pw2.jpg
the second one is fire, the first one looks like you had a seasure while holding a pencil.. i dont know what that was an attempt of.
for crits id say keep your bars the same width. but its not a big problem.

sorry for the individual posts.

[HSAL]

AMK - shit man those characters remind me of ROSYONE, she's awesome at those old-style hip hop characs. nice one though. keep it up, can't wait to see you colour it in.
Whiskey Tango - sort out your letter structure, it looks a bit messy tbh, and there are too many jagged bits where bits seem to stick out etc. and widen your letters also. start again, but don't colour it in - post back up here when you're done.

a few i never posted here:
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9934/dsci0024du0.jpg
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4711/dsci0014ch9.jpg
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4201/dsci0015rh4.jpg

customized converses i did not too long ago:
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3074/dsci0002kn0.jpg
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2566/dsci0003ko2.jpg

[amk]

AMK - shit man those characters remind me of ROSYONE, she's awesome at those old-style hip hop characs. nice one though. keep it up, can't wait to see you colour it in.


in what way ?
the arms ?
i was influenced by her to get back into old skool shit.
maybe abit too much.
but they are just basic old skool chars.
Thanks anyways

[HSAL]

everything about them reminds me of her... even the writing lol. yeah i reckon you were a bit too much influenced, but nevertheless it is nice to see.

sex_without_condoms: i've written 666 for a while now on my work. it's not a bite from the 666 crew residing here.
i either write Sie666 (the 666 not reppin anyone, it's part of my tag) or SieONER.

[the end]

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/2019/marcieuptill3dg0.jpg
MA are a little big, not bad though. and my line is a little off ill probably use a ruler next time. right leg of m might be a little thick, pretty satisfied with everything else.

[sex without condoms]

redemption.

idk which picture to use so ill just put all 3 up.
the reason i didn't finish the sex part is cause i hate it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00126.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00125.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00124.jpg

[Tact1kal]

Just some stuff I recently did. Help, tips, etc, are appreciated. Thanks.
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture014.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture013.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture016.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture012.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture011.jpg

[dim]

sex- sick as always
hsal- i like those shoes nice straight letters on them
tacktical- keep working on them
amk- rele like those chracs
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0318.jpg
crits

[dizzle_d]

AMKAAHHHHH- Lovin those old school characters. crazy good(poppptartsss...)
Hsal-lookin good, but whats with the triple six??????????????
The End- looks nice, but fix the R up I don't like how the bottom part doesn't connect ya knowww?you know...
SexwithOUTcondoms-Fire man! FIRE! I love that styleee keep it comin.
taktical- go to the new to graff thread :D
DIM!!!-thats definetly my favorite from you. its so good I love it. colors are straight too. only thing i don't like is the 'one' at the bottom
...Anyways some old some new. whatever.
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7374/img1867hg9.jpg
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5313/img1866no7.jpg
old^
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/9497/img1897fm7.jpg
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2535/img1894dk7.jpg
mehh shit quick throw^
Crits please

[Tact1kal]

So, just work on letter structure, style, etc?

[AnteUp]

dim-ehhh, i see that you used a darker brown for the fill but it lukks like you did shity colorin cuz of it, i reccomend a lighter brown for the complex fill
burss baybay- lovin tha throw, sorry bout not addin you on aim yet...mah comp is shit an i think i got more viruses..

[Bastardo]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1449/picture259cj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thinking bout having this as a second name xD

[AnteUp]

bastardo, glad to see you back... im not sure whos you anymore,theres people gettin pretty damn gud at copying ur style bro...lol

BUMMP



http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture027.jpg

[Roolete]

its cool bastaro, not feeling the r as much as the other letters though
and ante, i like the bottom half more then the top

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/risk.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/ar.jpg

whoever posts next is a retard

[BORG]

burs-nice throw, clean it up
basterdo- you got a funky ass style, but i like it
ante- look at the 3d a bit, it looks very odd

a friend found a wall me and him are goin to do giant rollers on and heres and idea i got
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9054/june17006ah0.jpg

let me know what you guys think

[AnteUp]

haha, first try at 3d so yea...
weeeooo put sumthin in the ngative space between the L and the end of it...

[AyteYourCookies]

AMKAAHHHHH- Lovin those old school characters. crazy good(poppptartsss...)
Hsal-lookin good, but whats with the triple six??????????????
The End- looks nice, but fix the R up I don't like how the bottom part doesn't connect ya knowww?you know...
SexwithOUTcondoms-Fire man! FIRE! I love that styleee keep it comin.
taktical- go to the new to graff thread :D
DIM!!!-thats definetly my favorite from you. its so good I love it. colors are straight too. only thing i don't like is the 'one' at the bottom
...Anyways some old some new. whatever.
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7374/img1867hg9.jpg
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5313/img1866no7.jpg
old^
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/9497/img1897fm7.jpg
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2535/img1894dk7.jpg
mehh shit quick throw^
Crits please
is this the guy that daws was biting?

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture300.jpg

[Naysayer]

the left leg on your a seems like it isn't uniform width. The Y looks good however.

[Tact1kal]

How about now? Changed my name to something that more suits who I am. Tips, help, etc is appreciated. Thanks!
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o171/xTact1kalx/Picture-1.jpg

[dim]

sex- sick as always
hsal- i like those shoes nice straight letters on them
tacktical- keep working on them
amk- rele like those chracs
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0318.jpg
crits
bumping this to new page

[silentchaos14]

bumping this to new page
dim its pretty good but yur lines are shakey

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02795.jpg

This one isn't exactly done and without color it looks all eww Soo try and look at the letters rather than the bottom the 3D looks off because its not colored or shaded. ohh and I'm wondering if anyone from here is from jersey or was at formula D last night

[silentchaos14]

i aint sure what it says but 3-D style has always amazed me.
whats up with the blue light on yur foot? and theres a spelling mistake in yur sig, its spelled gangstas i think.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch4.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MornSKetch3.jpg
crits?

[Hoostein]

i like the second one more than the first, definate improvment.

[Naysayer]

don't worry about 3d and halo (what are those wierd outlines called. I know everyone calls them forcefields but that sounds so ghey). Just work on the letters until they look descent. I cant tell what the first letter is. the e is your best letter but the weird extension on the top right leg part needs to go, keep developing the R and O.

here is something I did for klipa.
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/klipa.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011822.jpg my blackk book cover

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011819.jpg canvas i just did

[BORG]

ayte- nice letters
seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on
morne- u pretty much got it, now its time for you to drop the simps man, u been stuck on those for quite a while, try a piece with dope letters now
klipa- the bottom of the L is covering the extension on your I

workin on progressing my style to a more advanced look
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5891/june17007yo2.jpg

some people need to learn to give crits btw

[sex without condoms]

*directed at daws
theres no point even saying anything anymore.

when you get your own style come back.

[Seek139]

seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on


http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02759.jpg

[Naysayer]

borg it looks good. I am expecially impressed with the precision you must have had to do the smaller cile bit. wow.

[Bastardo]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1449/picture259cj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thinking bout having this as a second name xD

Bump.

And i cant be doing with the toy exchange thread.

Anyone wonna throw exchange?

[Seek139]

Either, Mers preffered though!
What do you write?

*Ahh nevermind

*Fuck, your name is hard, ill have yours by tommorw

just thought you guys should know mers is a 3D god
http://graffiti.org/mers/mers9.jpg

[BORG]

^^theres alot of mers, its all about location, i'm a big fan of mers from df crew

fucked up on the r and s, but i'll get you another one when i got more time to perfect it

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/1342/june17008bc8.jpg

[AnteUp]

seek- damn i think that the color looks worse than without...i love the without..its beeautiful. how long you bin doin 3d?
cile-lukks peerty gud

[AZTEKA]

Some sketch for a battle. It's suppose to say Straight Outta N. Karolina but I forgot to write the word outta. That mers tag is dope, that 3D looks perfct and right on point.http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8554/mecks002dr4.jpg

[hellomynameisftc]

/\ thats sick
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/8288/throwupshit003kb9.jpg

[Sou - Mvd]

loose the rime eye in your r and make your s similar to your other letters.

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1314/798469137_d266769052.jpg?v=0

[uhhh]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011822.jpg my blackk book cover

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011819.jpg canvas i just did

honestly.
this stuff looks good.
but it IS bastardos.
usually bites come out real bad,
but you do a good job of making this look like its yours.
but its not, and its very very obvious.
just look in your sig,
the "daws" is very good and has that nice euro style, while the "ek" are decent, but nowhere near the level of the "daws"
and by no coincidence, when you exchanged with bastardo,
he did "daws" for you, meaning you had to come up with your own "ek" and they dont fit very well because the style isnt yours.
youve been called out many times on this.
really, stop. the letters arent yours and we all know it.

[Sumoe]

Some quick, character, doodle thingy.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/252/5/b/Random_Character____by_SUMOE.jpg

[Seek139]

sumoe - fresh no doubt do me a favor and fix your desert eagle at the butt it has to discharge hole and make one that is actually firing!!! good work though for a "quickie"

Two angles of my piece for today got school tommorow so I needs my sleep night all.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02796.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02797.jpg

[HadeP]

sex- sick as always
hsal- i like those shoes nice straight letters on them
tacktical- keep working on them
amk- rele like those chracs
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0318.jpg
crits
thats actually a really well done D. the only thing i would work on is keeping your 3d lines straight, i dunno if they're like that on perpose, personally speaking i think it would be alot better with straight lines, but thats just me, other than that, overall really well done.

[HadeP]

ayte- nice letters
seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on
morne- u pretty much got it, now its time for you to drop the simps man, u been stuck on those for quite a while, try a piece with dope letters now
klipa- the bottom of the L is covering the extension on your I

workin on progressing my style to a more advanced look
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5891/june17007yo2.jpg

some people need to learn to give crits btw
looking good cile. one thing i would look at is keeping the letters generally the same size, other then that all the extentions are looking good, they're making sense, it was a good move to take out the extention on the back of the c with the half cicle bit. but yeah try and make that E just a little bit smaller, and your good to go. also, becareful not to evolve into sume's style, its looking a little influenced, not calling a bite at all. just saying it looks lke it could evolve into something similar. no beef intended.

and i hope the "some people need to learn how to give crits"
wasnt aimed at me.

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Morn.jpg
just an update

[T O K E]

morn you should try and make your lines more clean

[AMansNotACamel]

That Morn sketch is a thousand times triller than the other thousand you have posted....
On the real though, make fat bars, skinny bars, bent bars or whatever cas you may as well be posting the same sketch on every single page.

[SenTheFirst]

azteka- handstyles are nice, sketch looks like you rushed a little
risk- just try regular 3d
sumoe- clean
seek- lookin good
morn- looks like you thought about the outline way too much


my first oneliner. kinda sloppy but you get the idea. still workin on a more legible n

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0443.jpg

[Chalk]

Morn good job on keepin on. When it comes to making clean lines. it has a lot to do with with motion of your body not just your hand. same thing translates into when you paint.

based of your sketch i sorta feel like you are pressing pretty firmly when you draw. also seems like you are just drawing with your hand not your arm. to do a long clea line. it's not just about moving your wrist. it's about moving your whole arm and shoulder.once again that will translate into when you paint your piece it becomes a WHOLE body movement to get the clean lines you can just make a short line take afew steps and repeat. you'll have to kinda find the elegance into making a flow of body to help get clean lines.

also your letters are looking a lot better. your R should be a bit wider like the rest of your letters. and the bottom leg of your R where it comes out from the from the main structure bar, i don't think you should have it connecting where you have it. i feel like it should come out right where the the curve of the R meets the main bar. just my opinion on that.
and a diagram to help if it rambling didn't make sense.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/mornrr.jpg

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneNew.jpg
thanx for the diagram. this sketch didnt turn out how i wanted it to but i think im sketched out for the day.
crits?

[SenTheFirst]

azteka- handstyles are nice, sketch looks like you rushed a little
risk- just try regular 3d
sumoe- clean
seek- lookin good
morn- looks like you thought about the outline way too much


my first oneliner. kinda sloppy but you get the idea. still workin on a more legible n

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0443.jpg

bump, bottom of page

[SenTheFirst]

ive practiced and gotten more used to it

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0445.jpg

[Naysayer]

sen1, your N's look like Us change them up a bit. other than that its a great one liner.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/emily.jpg
I thought I had posted this but I guess I didn't.

[AyteYourCookies]

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture302.jpgcrits?

[whahappen?]

ive practiced and gotten more used to it

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0445.jpg
dope as fuck
holy shit

[Naysayer]

you need to keep things straight on your A here. you see how the horizontal bar isnt a uniform width? and same with the half circle at the end. Here I drew little lines so you could see where it isn't aligned..

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/s.jpg

the rest looks really great tho. keep it up.

[iloveyou.alive]

nah changing the bar is fine, your problem is that the change is so damn rigid, theres no flow, the rest of ur letters are all curves.

[kelio]

dim: that d looks good.
amk: really feeling those characters.
BORG: i would make the c bigger and your handdy loooks good.
silentchaos14: your gettting there slowly but you are.
Naysayer: bring your letters closer i wouldn't worry about coloring and whatnot
until you have some good letters, also work on flow. just keep it up.

Went simpler decided i would listen. critz? just working on bars and floww.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/Drawing0013.jpg

[Drakula]

Sate keep the letters the same size and width and lose the bar things sticking out of the end of the letters.

New name REKO(don't ask why)

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good288.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good289.jpg

I know the extensions are shite but crit the letters please.

[Stim]

Your really progressing in leaps and bounds drak, erase those lines. I wanna see whats up with the letters flat out.

[NEZ89]

ayte- that pretty cool
Reko- love the handie
Sen- holy shit thats fuckin raw son

Mu'Min, muslim, means Believer
kinda rushed it
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1365/im001262na8.jpg

and i decided to change the peice a bit
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/5871/nezmuralpt2yj7.jpg
still not done though

[sketch3]

that kareks fressssssh, letters nuttin special

btw moomins are a weird cow/hippo animal cartoon in the uk

[sex without condoms]

ugg i have shit to post but i want a new page cause im a fucking slutt
but here's an old flick to fill the pages for me.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/cantstopthis.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011826.jpg

[AnteUp]

sen i like the oneliners...
drak if ur not gonna listen to simples then watever...
sex-ehhh not a style i "dig" but it lukks good
more 3d...
I, sorry the flash fucked up shadin in the top left on both... >:O!!!
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture029.jpg
an anuther c
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture028.jpg

[Chalk]

just trying out something new. i like some parts. really don't like a lot of others.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkgreennn.jpg

-drak - i'm feelin it quite a bit. the one thing that is sort of bothering me is how busy the middle of your E seems.

-sex with out condoms - it's like sex with out condoms.

- senthefirst - that oneliner is pretty damn hot. and the handy i think would look a lot better. if you made the first E bigger.

[Clowney-Cakes]

chalk-dope 3d and nice to see some shit comming off the piece now.

[sex without condoms]

Chalk finally.
i can see all your letters.
in every other piece i always think your k is wayy to hidden by your L. Im diggin the new style.

not finished shit
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00135.jpg
rough sketch for the obey elimination battle
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00128.jpg
i dont really like this at all. if i decide to finish it its gonna say ohver the river and through the woods
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00127.jpg
something i did while watching the VMAs
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00130.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00131.jpg
random tosses
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00133.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00132.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00129.jpg

[Naysayer]

sexw/ocondoms- looks good I like the last few more than the first few.
Chalk - I have always loved your shit. Looks so good.

[bountyhunter113]

sex without kittens- i liked ur other/older stuff better, the throwies look good tho
chalk- geesh man, ur progressing at a good rate and ur doin it in all the rite ways.......i bet a year from now, your shits gonna be crazy

[dizzle_d]

I thought I would write a post telling everyone how much I love Mers/Ger aka Bastardo.

OKAY lets start off with what hes good at.
EVERYTHING.

That will be all.

[dim]

rele nice stuff kovr

[sex without condoms]

im bringing out the wrinkles!!!

mad fuckin oldddd
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010545.jpg

[silentchaos14]

nothin personal sex w/o condoms but i aint feelin it, im tired of euro-ish style.
chalk yurs is amazing except that weird extension comin from the right leg of the K

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneNew.jpg
thanx for the diagram. this sketch didnt turn out how i wanted it to but i think im sketched out for the day.
crits?
bump from yesterday night.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSchool.jpg
bullshit from school.
crits?

[Dial.on]

sex wit out condoms-- ........ i really am at a loss of words...like i dont wanna be a dick but im not diggin it at all man..it still looks like bastardo bites.. but like sloppier..i unno man.. u dont have to take my word for it

chalk- shits CLEAN like it

new piece...weed kills writers block;)
COULD be cleaner.. but its just a pencil outline..got no colours.. getting some soon :D just crit me on the piece... not the cleanness
(saga)
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/scan0011.jpg

[Naysayer]

lose that ghey extension on your O morne. saga I dont really know how to crit it, it looks great to me.

[BORG]

ayte- nice letters
seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on
morne- u pretty much got it, now its time for you to drop the simps man, u been stuck on those for quite a while, try a piece with dope letters now
klipa- the bottom of the L is covering the extension on your I

workin on progressing my style to a more advanced look
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5891/june17007yo2.jpg

some people need to learn to give crits btw

chalk- nice to see you tryin to progress, same here, shits rough
morne-crit in quote
saga- all letters same size for now, drop all the extensions, dont rush shit man

BUMP FOR CRITS

[Make•]

^that cile handy is really fucking dope. The CE looks really clean and good, but I just have the feeling that judging by your other work you could make it better... dont get me wrong the still very dope

sexcondoms- I happen to really like the "squirt"

[SenTheFirst]

sex- fresh
morne- try just drawing straight, no bend, no extension, simple letters like that. you gotta steady your hand somehow


my throwie battle entry

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0494.jpg

[Smae]

wtf is euro style?

Dial - both S and G don't look like... anything
Borg - It sucks! xD JK! rlly cool! don't know wot more to say...

[iloveyou.alive]

just trying out something new. i like some parts. really don't like a lot of others.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkgreennn.jpg

-drak - i'm feelin it quite a bit. the one thing that is sort of bothering me is how busy the middle of your E seems.

-sex with out condoms - it's like sex with out condoms.

- senthefirst - that oneliner is pretty damn hot. and the handy i think would look a lot better. if you made the first E bigger.



k so ur C LK is dope, your H's bars are too flimsy think only one curve at a time and then back to bars. does that make any sense? i think that will help. then ur A structure is weak, its flimsy and the right leg loses its structure entirely.



riot for alives return!

[dim]

yo sen that throwie is ill keep it up

[BORG]

sen- nice, same problem with myself, cant pull of a v throwie style

for the sirved throwie battle
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/1441/june17010ct8.jpg

[AnteUp]

throw is nice, kinda generic tho...
chalk-amazing babycakes ;)
morn-STOP USING PERMANENT MARKERS, USE PENCILS

MORE...3-D...constructive comments!!please
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture031.jpg

[iloveyou.alive]

im bringing out the wrinkles!!!

mad fuckin oldddd
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010545.jpg


i remember it, love it. haha why the fuck would u write that tho?


kinky sicko

[braxtons a g]

morne- work on getting ur lines straight and itl be good
sexwithoutcondoms-looks good

http://i2.tinypic.com/4mrl9qq.jpg
just trying out new stuff with the new name.... too many people found out who i was.. had to change it;[ no color or cloud on this yet but will be soon

[Sou - Mvd]

throw is nice, kinda generic tho...
chalk-amazing babycakes ;)
morn-STOP USING PERMANENT MARKERS, USE PENCILS

MORE...3-D...constructive comments!!please
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture031.jpg

It looks a lot better than your previous stuff, but still, 3d is very demanding structure wise. Imagine that c as a 2d letter. It would look pretty weird. Keep an eye on where you're placing extensions and how they change the overall shape of the letter. From a technical viewpoint, the downward extension at the top of you c should be the same angle as the stem of the c. Right now it's twisted and the entire top section of the c isnt sitting fla ton the stem. Other than that you're off to a good start and it's looking a lot more promising than you're other stuff.

[Sou - Mvd]

just trying out new stuff with the new name.... too many people found out who i was.. had to change it;[ no color or cloud on this yet but will be soon

Dont bother, save your markers.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

[braxtons a g]

ok this was my stuff with my old name.. what do u think of it

http://i4.tinypic.com/4vpmzah.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/4xwrq7q.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/678ad75.jpg
http://i9.tinypic.com/61vstgi.jpg
http://i7.tinypic.com/4ra8saf.jpg
http://i5.tinypic.com/5z5q0cw.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/6bylg68.jpg

[AnteUp]

New To Graff Thread...

[Robbie P]

I also think there are a thousand people who write Faze, fer serial.

[daisyface]

braxton- at least it looks like there was some effort put into the fills, but you should be doing simples ( no arrows or crap added on)

[mas$]

Faze, u got some good stuff, like the 3d and stuff, but man if u want a really dope sick as fuck style, start with bars and simple block letters and slowly, SLOWLY start to add some extensions and make it wilder..
good luck

[dizzle_d]

well I wouldn't go that far man.
His 3d is pretty bad.
actually, everything is pretty bad about those. no beef.
honestly Faze go take a good look at the New to graff thread...
everyone starts out like that so don't feel bad. Do simple letters using bars, and then once you get that down thats when you start bending them.
keep it up though.

[ZOT]

suckadick

[Stonk]

no no definetly do not feel it..haha. um. first if that is supposed to be a throw up you dont need the fancy? i guess you could call that... fill, just 2 colors for throws pretty much, and if its supposed to me of a "piece" go to bars, please.

There should be a voice whenever you click into toy blackbooks that repeats over and oever and over "use bars use bars" it would seem to cut down on the the repetitivness haha

[Clowney-Cakes]

haha wow people are getting mad at crits now? wow.
anteup- nice shit man, think you could paint that?

[amk]

just trying out something new. i like some parts. really don't like a lot of others.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalkgreennn.jpg

-drak - i'm feelin it quite a bit. the one thing that is sort of bothering me is how busy the middle of your E seems.

-sex with out condoms - it's like sex with out condoms.

- senthefirst - that oneliner is pretty damn hot. and the handy i think would look a lot better. if you made the first E bigger.

wooooOOOOOOoooooow

Daws....even iff that style aint yours...that R is FRESH

[Clowney-Cakes]

pthhhhhh hahah kid, i have no beef its kids like you that make beef over the net.
newset shit.....ehhhh.. i dont kno wwhat to think..
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/8562/newset001vf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9698/newset002pi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5973/newset003pn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[braxtons a g]

elka - killer drips .... u should turn that NV into blockbusters one day
ok i tried the bar thing.... am i on the right track?
http://i11.tinypic.com/4z02fds.jpg

[whahappen?]

ok i tried the bar thing.... am i on the right track?
http://i11.tinypic.com/4z02fds.jpg
too generic

[dajam410]

Not in my book, but close enough:

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/canvas.unfinished2.jpg

[The_Sheep]

elka - killer drips .... u should turn that NV into blockbusters one day
ok i tried the bar thing.... am i on the right track?
http://i11.tinypic.com/4z02fds.jpg

Alright Imma explain one thing, when you bend bars you bend them in a way that you can still tell what letter it is, there are certain bends that work with each letter, its up to you to figure it out, your L now looks more like a W, also thickness has alot to do with it, your bars seem a bit thin, try beefing them up, but your on the right track, just dont bend for the sake of bending, also one more thing, you should bend your letters in a piece, not just one single letter, experiment with flow, but dont get caught up in the whole repetetive bars thing that seems to be such a trend nowadays

[sex without condoms]

Jam i really like your other style that you paint with alotttt more.

[braxtons a g]

i know i need to make the Y a little bigger
http://i4.tinypic.com/6fskmyx.jpg

[Chalk]

get rid of those arrows and breaks son.

[Clowney-Cakes]

DAJAM-sexy as me (and that sexy)
brax-keep shit simp. but getting better

[amk]

but thats what you shud be doing at this stage mannn
and get rid of that huge freaking mahoosive long sig..

[The_Sheep]

ohh so make it like a puzzle so they fit together when put together?....instead of overlapping?

no man...just bend them so they look nice together, thats it, no puzzles... and stop with the arrows and extensions, work on the letters, NO ONE recomended the extensions

and AMk, if i remember correctly you the one who used to have a huge gay "mahoosive" picture of Pharrel in your sig :rolleyes:

[T O K E]

if i do that then i gotta hear "too generic" and "too plain"

if anything the arrows and the bits make it more generic

[braxtons a g]

http://i13.tinypic.com/61k5j6x.jpg

[Chalk]

new to graff thread. now please.
NO BREAKS OR EXTENSIONS.

[Sumoe]

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/254/8/4/Black_and_White_Simple_Steeeez_by_SUMOE.jpg