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Bazer
09-11-2007, 04:52 PM
same letter style just really watered down and simple haha. looks fucki nice man.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1022.jpg

popshots
09-11-2007, 04:54 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7007/nerm28vt0.jpgi think i did to many arrows...... crits
sume: sick shit...... like the black and white
bazer:love the color scheme

dizzle_d
09-11-2007, 05:02 PM
Sume- amazing. I love it.
Popshots- niceee, I love that A,

that will be all.:D

Bastardo
09-11-2007, 05:31 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5354/picture267pg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sketch for bers!

dizzle_d
09-11-2007, 05:39 PM
Sketch for...
I LOVE YOU
damn

popshots
09-11-2007, 05:46 PM
bastardo: thats good stuff right there

silentchaos14
09-11-2007, 05:51 PM
haha shit for a second there i thought he was dawsek.
everyone on this page has killer shit

sex without condoms
09-11-2007, 05:56 PM
im bored so i did this gay sheeet.
fucked up the M

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00136.jpg

capo93
09-11-2007, 06:05 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5354/picture267pg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sketch for bers!

pretty dope looks like you got caught on the e though...
whatta bout an exchange? just outline but a piece exchange ill pm you

bountyhunter113
09-11-2007, 06:12 PM
wow its like bastardo is biting daws or something....
haha, now that made me laugh....

yo, some abstract-ishh stuff i did on some stickers, some arent evern close to done tho:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/abstract2.png

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/abstract1.png

bastardo- loved ur shit ever since u first started postin

thesilentvandal
09-11-2007, 06:28 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011827.jpg

silentchaos14
09-11-2007, 06:44 PM
braxton- keep workin on it, dont be so generic.
everyone else is lookin sick, that abstract shit is nice. dawsek im startin to think u actually did straight up bite bastardo
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch5.jpg
just some shit i did. i still got writers block.
crits?

sex without condoms
09-11-2007, 06:54 PM
that's cause daws did straight up bite bastardo.

silentchaos14
09-11-2007, 06:58 PM
yeah i kinda figured that but how bout u crit me then agree? not trynna sound like an asshole but yeah it makes sense

sex without condoms
09-11-2007, 07:02 PM
theres nothing to crit every sketch i see from you is the same.
maybe some extra addons but theyre all still like exactly the same.

Sumoe
09-11-2007, 07:25 PM
Morne, are you good at drawing normal shit? Just wondering.

My advice is use bars, but don't do what you are doing. Do not make them the same exact size by drawing two horizontal lines with a ruler. Just do quick pencil sketches while using bars with a little funk/flare etc. No need to even outline at this point.

sex without condoms
09-11-2007, 07:35 PM
im bored so i did this gay sheeet.
fucked up the M

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00136.jpg

humping to the next page

paste
09-11-2007, 07:54 PM
Drivers ed sucks. http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n161/willystyles_2006/tags3058.jpg

shitty 3d i know. Fucking hate u's and having a hardtime with my q. Fucking bad name I know.

Sou - Mvd
09-11-2007, 07:57 PM
looks like zvake
try and proportion all your letters to be within the same size area as each other. with your z and u try and follow the structure of the letter on the keyboard, but just distorted your way if that makes sesnse. Like the round part of the q at the bottom needs to be thicker and your u deeds a descender on the right side

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/1264/004kf7.jpg
for and exchange with mers

sex without condoms
09-11-2007, 08:12 PM
only halfway decent letter is the m

thesilentvandal
09-11-2007, 08:12 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011828.jpg

MakeĽ
09-11-2007, 08:18 PM
condoms without sex- I really like it

paste- only letter I'm really feeling is the a, sorry man. actually the k is pretty good too

neukr
09-11-2007, 08:37 PM
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone006.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone003.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone002.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone.jpg

redxdrum
09-11-2007, 08:54 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture003.jpg

Naysayer
09-11-2007, 08:54 PM
neukr, nice throws I like em.what is your second letter tho? it just looks like a blob in every throw.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/messin.jpg something new.

paste
09-11-2007, 08:57 PM
Naysayer- Like the a, the r is alright.
Reddrum- Its not really my style, I'd work on the letters before the fill, but whatever I know its fun to do.
Neukr- Throwies arent bad, cant really see that bars piece, but from what I make out, it looks alright.
Thanks everybody for the feedback.

Bazer
09-11-2007, 09:09 PM
braxton- keep workin on it, dont be so generic.
everyone else is lookin sick, that abstract shit is nice. dawsek im startin to think u actually did straight up bite bastardo
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch5.jpg
just some shit i did. i still got writers block.
crits?

no dont do that man. look. youre doing block ltters. thats cool, but you needa learn how to add some style. theres different kinds of bars. some are loose and shit, and some are solid and straight. not solid and straight like yours but solid and straight like mine.(the 2nd one)

the first style the bars are loose, knahwmsayin? they dont stay the same thickness but they look alright. its because im picking one way to keep them which is big to small, or small to big, and theyre not solid, they curve. the only pointed edges could be the ends.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Sep_11_001.jpg

now this second style of bars, they stay the same thickness just like yours but the ends dont make the bar look like rectangles, it just adds on some more style right there. ok you see how some of the ends are like "/\" and the bar you make after it, you choose the thickness by one of the points. sane for the first style. im just tryn to get you out of using block letters man cuz they dont looks fun. i dont know if i said it before but theres tons of br styles. just get a little loose man.
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/m.jpg

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 12:02 AM
fuck this shit i cant do it. its fuckin impossible for me to do new shit.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBullshit.jpg

probably the last yur gonna see of me in here for awhile, unless i come up with some shit in my sleep. doubt it tho.
crits?

syrne
09-12-2007, 12:14 AM
it takes time just try bending the bars more and messin with em

Scare2
09-12-2007, 12:16 AM
o hey morne. im just gonna say what i do when im really stuck with a style and its time for change but i cant. i basically stop doing anything related to the letters i used to be doing. like making the tops all the same in the bottom one here. or i go back to an old style. or i just sort of dooodle or go simpler and evolve from there. or i just make a point of not doing any of the same letters or doing all my letters with different structure. and i hate to say it but sometimes i bite other dudes for like three pieces and then come back to my shit and ill have fresh ideas on how to do it. but dont bite like a duche. and change is good its what progresses ur graff. if i were to try and change that style. i would stay simple. like dont do the wierd connections blocks or extensions just the bars. and id not draw guide lines to keep the letters same size and if u dont. then just make ur letters not exactly same hight and shit. and dont make ur O out of 4 bars (like maybe two curved ones or three or something to change the shape.) and change thicknesses a little and stuff basically. fuck with it until it looks really shitty and u hate it... then go from there.

but that shit dont happen overnight. just keep working through the rough patche.s

baze really good crit. morne you should listen to him because no offense that styles progressin like a dead sheep. takes time tho to get to that level. and baze damn id like to see a piece in that first style aha.


naysayer check out bazes crit. i think whats happening to it is your trying to add style but ur bars arent flowin. keep working around and listen to bazer.

i agree with hidden technique

neuker nice throws but the name sumo is way played out bro not just because theres one dude that writes it but because ive seen like ten new guys come on here in the past couple weeks all writing it. but that dont mean u shouldnt be doin it.

dawsek just keep goin doood try new w stuff.


a skettchhy penmobile i did in class today theres some lines throught the letters and stuff but i decided to break from my simpler stuff. (in the bottom pic.) should i go with this style or try and bend out the bottom style.?
says dason
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/dasonpen.jpg

yeah the S blows
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9060021.jpg

amk
09-12-2007, 01:58 AM
fuck this shit i cant do it. its fuckin impossible for me to do new shit.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBullshit.jpg

probably the last yur gonna see of me in here for awhile, unless i come up with some shit in my sleep. doubt it tho.
crits?

you shud be follwing your bars all the way thru till they meet with another bar.
like on the O....you have a tiny little bar which shud follow thru to the vertical bar.

BIGel
09-12-2007, 04:33 AM
well, i'm feelin that NV simple, the first one, ehh, could use some work, just the EL one below looks alright though, also, i like the throw in the upper right corner, it could use some touch up though, gotten better flow for it now, and i like the NV throw, overall not bad

hah now thats some coincidence son, i write el and im from nevada (or was until a couple weeks ago).

anyway, the L on the second sketch is too confusing for a simple, the loop fucks it up, but it looks like you've got the right idea. the NV simple is the best at the bottom, i think the angles you have the letters at screws it up but the bars are clean and well done.

SenTheFirst
09-12-2007, 05:01 AM
fuck this shit i cant do it. its fuckin impossible for me to do new shit.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBullshit.jpg

probably the last yur gonna see of me in here for awhile, unless i come up with some shit in my sleep. doubt it tho.
crits?


you dont have to curve it everytime you know

dim
09-12-2007, 06:31 AM
morne dont worry about it man uve come a hell of a long way from when u started it takes time to build letter structure and to find a style that suits u and u feel comfortable with but when u are trying to make a connection for now make it where the letters touch.

AMansNotACamel
09-12-2007, 09:02 AM
Morne, do you even look at graff? I know straight up chomping might sound wack but you sketch like you have never seen another piece before, bring influence to your work, even heavily cas it will help you understand how moving bars and creating large and small bars can help shape the flow/style of a piece.
Also, get a good/ok, not sloppy, handstyle and do what bouncingsoul did in his tutorial, look at the lines in your handstyle and apply them to the bars you use in your sketch. A simple doesn't have to be a straight up block buster but can be a sketch of letters with extra bars, some flow, just not heaps of wack clutter.
Honest to god, look at that dim cats sig, there is an r an o and an m in there, look at how that shit is formed, like actually look at the lines and how each line makes up the letter and apply what you see is being done with the letters to what you do and eventually, when you get some flow, or half way decent ish you will be able to think of some more original ways of shaping your letters.
Finally, stop using a ruler to do your pencil then not using it to do your outline, you seem like your thinking to much before you go over the line.
Oh and also 'O' is a wack letter cas it is.
And try draw your letters separately to see what makes them good on their own before overlapping, putting in a full sketch etc.

uhhh
09-12-2007, 09:05 AM
Dang bro.
I'm in geometry on this chicks sidekick.
I love technology.
And rich hoes.

daisyface
09-12-2007, 09:45 AM
yo morne def. dont give up, everyone has potential. the only tip i can think of, is you should try filling up a page with nothing but bars, just to get the feel of them. try and make them as uniform with eachother as possible. make some that bend, make some that are straight up rectangles; once you feel comfortable with them THEN try and make those bars into letters. dont worry about them looking cool or whatever just focus on the actual shape of the letter

mas$
09-12-2007, 10:30 AM
Morne, the advantage of being a toy is that no matter weather u bite or not ur still gna be a toy, try it.. dont bite whole letterforms, but try look at extensions and how letters flow together in your favourite artists pieces, then slowly incorporate that into the bar letters you do..just dont give up, it took me a year and a half to get to my current style..peace

"spe@k"
09-12-2007, 10:37 AM
http://a544.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/67/l_f813fe90ed53f24be8743d50da2ae20f.jpg

http://a466.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/82/l_cc9058026b986214187aa4de0cb689f9.jpg

http://a832.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/95/l_d8a440ac4803d196011cc88637226dbf.jpg

any input from anyone?

calculating infinity
09-12-2007, 01:01 PM
too many extensions that dont flow on the third one, the second one is horrendous, and your handstyle needs work too.

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 04:10 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSchool2.jpg
some school shit, its different but i dunno it might have potential

crits?

speak- the first one is the best

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 04:56 PM
the bars are fine, its the marker that throws it off, use penicil, show it to us like that, no marker

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 04:59 PM
half the time its too light with pencil, so i outline it

"spe@k"
09-12-2007, 05:02 PM
so i spent some time on those and now i find out that theres another speak on the site.... so my girlfriend came up with another name for me. ive stolen 8 prismas, 2 markers, and some paint pens and sharpies... so she called me a cleptomaniac. so im starting to write, as of now, Klepto.

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 05:03 PM
wtf is a cleptomaniac? klepto is a sick name imo

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 05:05 PM
cleptomaniac-addicted to stealing, steals even if he doesnt have to
but silent, sounds good, or jus do pen freestyles

sKeeLo
09-12-2007, 05:08 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2694/1282872nb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

letter K with a zillion addons . . dont know if u can see all the lines, this board is huge so im pretty stoked to start somethin big

speak - i like it, has an old school nyc vibe . . .keep workin them letters but you have the right idea and feel

morne - try sketchin and workin different letters besides MORNE and see if somethin clicks, usually helps me

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 05:12 PM
sky- cant see it at all bro

gamf
09-12-2007, 05:18 PM
morne man just go on mr wiggles or something write morne but dont trace it off ur comp screen just try and copy it youll end up fuking it up and the letters wont look anything like they should then u will see potential in a letter like "oh i can add a line here..." etc and then u will have a whole new style for yourself thats how i started but its very important that u dont trace because ppl will know if u go from being ok, to like fuking cope 2 in a day so dont trace it just try writing it withoout puttin ur paper on the comp screen

gamf
09-12-2007, 05:20 PM
dont stop to sketch
t'ill the cats play fetch

renk
09-12-2007, 05:25 PM
scare- the 3D looks odd on the first one, but the simples are hot
speak- tone down on the colors and just sketch your letters
morne- idk man keep working, my advice is to sketch each letter individually until you got it down good then try to put them together

uhh some stuff
some new some old
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/charch.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/dfsf.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/forglenn2222.jpg
blocks!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/blockbuster2.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/fdsfdsf.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a75/wisk101/guy1111.jpg
mostly characters, ill post up some letters later
peace

Bastardo
09-12-2007, 05:27 PM
Keep working on facial structure, then work on body, the body is the hardest bit! if that doesnt look right it all looks fucked.
One of the reason i do balloon heads haha!
Sketch for some girl! xD
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/9605/picture271mi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AyteYourCookies
09-12-2007, 05:44 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture315.jpg

Bastardo
09-12-2007, 05:45 PM
Keep working on facial structure, then work on body, the body is the hardest bit! if that doesnt look right it all looks fucked.
One of the reason i do balloon heads haha!
Sketch for some girl! xD
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/9605/picture271mi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
.

Seek139
09-12-2007, 05:47 PM
bastardo - lookin good but you only love her until she rats your ass out to the cops.
renk - that blockbuster is dead on period
morne - don't you fucking give up...if you do your spitting on everyone who has ever helped or believed in you if you quit you should have never been here Its a matter of how much you want it do you want to be a graffiti writer/artist? or not are you willing to put in the work all the headbanging writers block and all the stress politics and drama all to get it done...ask yourself is it in you?
sky - repost your flick with another shot I can't see shit
speak - idk how long you've been around here or working at your graffiti but it looks like your going big and using colors all that shit when your not exactly ready for it if 1. you are trying to progress and can do simple's ect. than keep trying 2. Your a virgin ass toy goto the new to graff section here in the toy forum.

Another school sketch idh that much time these days with school and all guys but I'm getting in atleast one sketch as always nowadays I'm working on my shading technique critique is much appreciated kthx :D
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02855.jpg

haz3y
09-12-2007, 05:49 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a122/maxathomas/0912071836.jpg


just pencil. an undone sketch done while extremely high.

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 05:59 PM
i never had any intention of quitting graff, just sketching for awhile. but yeah im gonna stop spammin the shit outta this thread and sketch.
oh and ante, my point was proven when the guy after u posted

Bastardo
09-12-2007, 06:02 PM
What point? that noone gives crits?
Check out the post before, he never critted me so i bumped past him

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 06:07 PM
u had nothing to do with it genius it was skeelo

Nem
09-12-2007, 06:11 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a122/maxathomas/0912071836.jpg


just pencil. an undone sketch done while extremely high.

as much as you may think youre creating a masterpiece when you sketch fried off your ass...youre not. nobody ever is.

i learned a while ago that while gettin high does provoke more thought and give you new ideas, it makes you draw and paint like shit. pretty much always.

and i, along with everyone else (i think), would appreciate a sick piece a lot more if someone thought it up without the aid of narcotics.

stay sober when you sketch man, it helps a lot.

popshots
09-12-2007, 06:20 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7007/nerm28vt0.jpg
bump for crits.....
skeelo: looks like its gunna b ill
hazy: dont sketch high... its a bad idea.... id go simpler and dont over lap 3d with the letters
seek: 3d letters look nice
ayte: good progression i dont relly like the extention on the e
bastardo: sick shit as always
renk: work on the characters nose
morn: start bending letters and over lappen them more

Fube
09-12-2007, 06:22 PM
bastardo, i love your sketchs because u keep them so busy, but busy with a purpose, no fancy shit, just an orange marker. gangsta.

whahappen?
09-12-2007, 06:43 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture315.jpg
good job dude these are nice

Bazer
09-12-2007, 06:54 PM
some beees. im writing bazer again. haha..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Sep_12_001.jpg

Sans
09-12-2007, 07:17 PM
That B structure is dope.

Any advice on my Q and R letter structure, or any of my letters for that matter.

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/1429/saqe2sg7.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/7394/dscn1710pf3.jpg

BORG
09-12-2007, 07:19 PM
bazer- nice, i like ur style, and most people cant do a dope b, but ur gettin close to pullin of some sick b's, keep on em
ayte-keep doin what ur doin, u seem to take in all the crits and ur letters keep gettin better and better
bastardo- nice, wheres my throw??? i got a doper one for you i'll hook a flick up tomorrow or sometime

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/365/june17003ut0.jpg

still tryin to progress to a more advanced style
whoever said this looks like a sume bite, i dont see that shit at all

silentchaos14
09-12-2007, 07:20 PM
borg when i see yur shit it reminds me of transformers. i have no idea why but that movie was fuckin sick

Bazer
09-12-2007, 07:23 PM
hmm.. on your r the best i can tell you i guess is make the right leg come out from the end of the part where it turns... like this:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/r.jpg

and my q's r just as good as yours haha.. sorry

HoodRichSucka
09-12-2007, 07:43 PM
some beees. im writing bazer again. haha..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Sep_12_001.jpg

killa bees on tha sworm. i like.

NEZ89
09-12-2007, 07:48 PM
ayte- u need a black book, but ya stuffs pretty ill
seek- bring out the highlights a bit more, it looks like its all one tone
pops- thats sik, u gonna leave it like that or u gonna color it?

El NEZO loco, ignore the handstyle just fuckin around
and i got lost with the colors
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5500/elnezobubblycc5.jpg

AyteYourCookies
09-12-2007, 07:56 PM
I dont need a blackbook, i would like to have one but id rather have a free notebook from my house then pay 20 bills for a blackbook.

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 07:56 PM
Another school sketch idh that much time these days with school and all guys but I'm getting in atleast one sketch as always nowadays I'm working on my shading technique critique is much appreciated kthx :D
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02855.jpg
shading...kinda rough, take an eraser to the outside of the letters, buuut, i reccomend shadin with you finger, cleaner fade, an it lukks like you used a stomp, or a kleenex, use finger...,the tail at the end has pretty good shadin, pm me later bro, iight?

glyce
09-12-2007, 07:57 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank2.jpg
any crits?

Stonk
09-12-2007, 08:03 PM
borg great stuff i really like the faded shines or whatever
Ayte i like it alot especially the bottom.
Glyce.. usually on a throw you dont use 3d..use a drop shadow.

I've been told a few times to cahnge up the k and e so here is some attempts.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc000becb0.jpg
and i changed the I haha.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc000c06e5.jpg

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 08:03 PM
40% off coupon at michaels, makes it 6 bucks where i stay
tike-i kinda like the throw, but dont make it lukk like the splatter things

Samp1e
09-12-2007, 08:06 PM
nez -- just gonna pass along what i get told, save your colors for later.

bazer -- not trying to undermine your style if it is what defines it, but i don't quite "get" your choice to... fuck i don't know how to articulate what i'm trying to say. you see on your bottomleft B? you know how you tapered the topleft of that B and have that extension coming off of it, i don't get the non-fluid way you kind of just cut it off. or say on the bottom right B, how its lower right leg flares towards the endpoint of its bar. damn i dunno if i'm coming across :/

borg -- your letters look i dunno, stiff? not saying that's a bad thing, they just look stiff.

sans -- keep on learning your letter structure.

ayte, popshots -- keep doin your guys' things. it's workin real good.

EDIT:

stonker -- you're a studly lookin tike, just dunno how studly your Es are.

glyce -- do something about the S and its relation to the other letters. the top of your S' flow does fit with the other letters but it looks funny cause on the other letters that flair thing up there comes off as an addon instead of being the base of the letter.

battlestuffs
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5397/kemosta0.png
penstuffs during schoolstuffs
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/7523/scarzw2.png

popshots
09-12-2007, 08:19 PM
ayte- u need a black book, but ya stuffs pretty ill
seek- bring out the highlights a bit more, it looks like its all one tone
pops- thats sik, u gonna leave it like that or u gonna color it?

El NEZO loco, ignore the handstyle just fuckin around
and i got lost with the colors
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5500/elnezobubblycc5.jpg
ill prolly keep it like that....... nice simples.... wanna exchange? i write aflo

NEZ89
09-12-2007, 08:24 PM
ill prolly keep it like that....... nice simples.... wanna exchange? i write aflo

yeah no problem, i'll have it tomorrow

thesilentvandal
09-12-2007, 08:34 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011829.jpg

Sou - Mvd
09-12-2007, 08:36 PM
You bite, go make some more oatmeal until you have your own style.

BORG
09-12-2007, 09:01 PM
bazer- nice, i like ur style, and most people cant do a dope b, but ur gettin close to pullin of some sick b's, keep on em
ayte-keep doin what ur doin, u seem to take in all the crits and ur letters keep gettin better and better
bastardo- nice, wheres my throw??? i got a doper one for you i'll hook a flick up tomorrow or sometime

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/365/june17003ut0.jpg

still tryin to progress to a more advanced style
whoever said this looks like a sume bite, i dont see that shit at all

bump for crits,
sample- i get what your sayin, and agree, but i need to know how to fix this shit up, any ideas??? dope shit none the less, what happened to your older style?

everlasting
09-12-2007, 09:12 PM
hase
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v650/Yomamma123/Picture001-1.jpg
crits

Scare2
09-12-2007, 09:14 PM
sample ur fucking dope. best style on bs hands down in my opinion dude. awsome.

soank nice throwie. but put shadow on not 3d. shadow looks bettahh on throws..

tike. ur letters are doin pretty good. but your E is too busy compared to the rest of em..
the ti throw on the bottom one is hot shit dude


silent,. what kind of food is that...???
i like the top one better except the bottom S is sickk.

borg i like ur other stuff betttah. a little more simple. i dont like the flat endings on them extensions.

hase. i really like ur S and ur E. work on the flow tho. and def work on that handstyle bro.

i just did some singles in class today. goin some new directions..
A S N
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9120028.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9120027.jpg

and i havent really finished thess yet. i kinda like where it went tho.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9120029.jpg

Hoostein
09-12-2007, 09:49 PM
i dont like the n, the conection to the top left and bottom right seems too much.

-GEKS-
09-12-2007, 09:49 PM
s and a are awesome, maybe work on the n the extenstion that goes fromt he right behind the n to the left looks a little weird

unknown...
09-12-2007, 10:13 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3642/p1030880ff8.jpg
Sey....far from done


scare-shits tight.
borg-just take off a few add ons man

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 10:40 PM
scare-omg that fuckin a is sickkkkk no lie,
cile- shits crazy in no way does that remind me of sume, the colorin is sick tho
new jizz
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture035.jpg
bee cee doubleu
CRITTTY PEAS

hehe nem im in your sig...its a great honor

redxdrum
09-12-2007, 10:49 PM
tips? pointers? comments?
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture005-1.jpg

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 11:02 PM
GIVE CRITS TO GET EM...COMEON DO WE HAFTA TELL YALL EVERY TIME YOU GET ON?

redxdrum
09-12-2007, 11:15 PM
GIVE CRITS TO GET EM...COMEON DO WE HAFTA TELL YALL EVERY TIME YOU GET ON?

was that directed at me?
anyways i liked you B it was sick and look original to me

AnteUp
09-12-2007, 11:21 PM
thank you...
ok it was directed to mostly everyone that dont crit,
anyways lukks like eken, nice and simple, lukk like your on your way, jsu so you kno its a throw no a piece, post up sum pieces so i might help you

Scare2
09-12-2007, 11:52 PM
aye yo ante. i like that style its real creative and fresh. nice mix of 3d and 2d letter forms. one thing i dont like is the way the top of the B has more space then the bottom it makes it look top heavy and awkward. the W is really nice and ur shading is dialed i like where its goin./.

ummm eken make ur lines not so sketchy and if thats ment to be a throw ur kind of on the right track keep practicing if its not... then throw some bars on tthat bitch.


unknown i like the charachter. it has good flow and personality. but im not feelin the letters. go simpler, with the fills and the letters. and work the basic structures. the blockbusters in the back are sick. i was about at the same place as you with letters a couple months ago when i got on bs. just work the letter forms and study mut makes em Clickkk.k
nowatimsayin?

something old that i thought was kinda cool. one of my better old pieces.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Tan.jpg

DKORH
09-13-2007, 12:07 AM
i'm diggin the colors

-DKORH.ONE.2K7

redxdrum
09-13-2007, 12:13 AM
Scare2 it was a throw and thanks. and that looks sick what u did

redxdrum
09-13-2007, 12:29 AM
thank you...
ok it was directed to mostly everyone that dont crit,
anyways lukks like eken, nice and simple, lukk like your on your way, jsu so you kno its a throw no a piece, post up sum pieces so i might help you

here are my pieces i know they are lame but im trying to get better
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture002-1.jpg

syrne
09-13-2007, 01:00 AM
those arent that bad

vice versa
09-13-2007, 03:52 AM
hey im just fkn around with a new name atm , hezol ill get a post up soon coz phot0bucket is being annoying atm

redxdrum- thats pretty good but i dont like how the second E is too wide for everything else, and i cant really see the bottom one

scare2- those r some fresh colours, i rekon the green crap around it is mad

South-Pole
09-13-2007, 05:36 AM
don't say his letters are good when they're not

all the persons who posted on this page should go view the new to graff thread

HuntingLOLs
09-13-2007, 07:21 AM
samp1e: first one is fire - the S especially keep working on it
redx: dont do "flame" letters. your extensions dont really flow and the letters are akward(spelling?) - keep trying though

redxdrum
09-13-2007, 09:44 AM
samp1e: first one is fire - the S especially keep working on it
redx: dont do "flame" letters. your extensions dont really flow and the letters are akward(spelling?) - keep trying though
ight thanks. what do u mean by awkward? the name EKEN? or my letters?
like i drew them up real quick and im not new to graff its just im new to pieces and throws. i would realy like to be able to do sick pieces so im all for getting advice.

redxdrum
09-13-2007, 10:29 AM
i started with the 4 bar E
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture006-1.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture007.jpg
right track? or no?

Stonk
09-13-2007, 10:32 AM
no no.. simpler , good to see that you started with the 4 bar, but maybe just curve those 4 bars or something..you dont need the jagged bends yet

sketch3
09-13-2007, 11:36 AM
thicken those bars up a tad

DankNC
09-13-2007, 12:44 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/ozmo.jpg

scare: i love those colors
drum: those simples are startin to look good, i just dont like that top pic (very top)

bountyhunter113
09-13-2007, 02:44 PM
tan- work on ur letters, u dont need to focus on all that other stuff
dank- i like that handie on the top
red- keep all ur bars the same size and dont try adding in soo many bars

here's a bit of doodling i did during spanish class, accidentally got some lil stains on the char during lunch time:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/doodle1.png
cNc?

amk
09-13-2007, 02:51 PM
battlestuffs
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5397/kemosta0.png
penstuffs during schoolstuffs
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/7523/scarzw2.png

this is YOUR S.
if someone bites it fuck them up.
fresh

bountyhunter113
09-13-2007, 02:55 PM
I could cum on that pen sketch of ur's samp

Bazer
09-13-2007, 03:09 PM
this is YOUR S.
if someone bites it fuck them up.
fresh

dude..... shaddap.... its been done millions of times.

thesilentvandal
09-13-2007, 03:22 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011830.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011831.jpg

Chalk
09-13-2007, 03:51 PM
sample. MMmm good. i just wish that O was slightly larger though.

redxdrum. it's ok just thicken up your bars a bit more.

some new simps from me. some scaling issues. other than that nothing special
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalknewsimp.jpg

oh and some grass for a class. weee it ryhmes!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/grass.jpg

-ShAmEE-
09-13-2007, 04:01 PM
tan- work on ur letters, u dont need to focus on all that other stuff
dank- i like that handie on the top
red- keep all ur bars the same size and dont try adding in soo many bars

here's a bit of doodling i did during spanish class, accidentally got some lil stains on the char during lunch time:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/doodle1.png
cNc?

is it me or u alway write on skool shit, cant u afford ur own paper.

Sou - Mvd
09-13-2007, 04:13 PM
daws you bite just encase you forgot ;)

I love how they are getting progressively worse and less structured as you try and make them look less like bastardo bites

"spe@k"
09-13-2007, 04:21 PM
Chalk... that looks pretty sick. its fucking clean.

so after i posted my last shit, everyone said it was above my level. so i drew a simple one, and its even worse than the more complicated ones.

http://a980.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/86/l_74eed19ed1bf0d209e3652c0f01214d3.jpg
and yes i need to work on my tag/ handstyle

http://a310.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/98/l_90b08c599746e5f4ed9ebee0fad296bd.jpg
and then just a throwie. i know, the fill is outside of the outline in some places... i dont care, i was just fuckin around.

sketch3
09-13-2007, 04:26 PM
OK, DONT PUT ARROWS AT THE END OF UR LETTERS,
(sry just relised i had cap locks on)
use bars to make the letters in ther simpilest forms, so for the letter A
you should draw // = \\ and put them together, plus dont colour ur shit just yet no point wasting ink on progresive stuff

"spe@k"
09-13-2007, 04:32 PM
see... i know this your giving me a critique, and thank you, but this is what i dont understand about anyone on here. im an art major, i can do 3 bars and form a simple A, theres no point in doing it over and over and over in everyone i do if ive moved past that shit and now im trying to develop the style and the hookups and shit. i mean, no offence to anyone but i think most people can do simple letters? i dunno, sorry if im seeming like an ass im just tired of hearing about bars when i can do bars, im trying to develop my bars now. ya know?

whahappen?
09-13-2007, 04:34 PM
sample. MMmm good. i just wish that O was slightly larger though.

redxdrum. it's ok just thicken up your bars a bit more.

some new simps from me. some scaling issues. other than that nothing special
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalknewsimp.jpg

oh and some grass for a class. weee it ryhmes!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/grass.jpg
god damn that grass thing is amazing

sketch3
09-13-2007, 04:59 PM
see... i know this your giving me a critique, and thank you, but this is what i dont understand about anyone on here. im an art major, i can do 3 bars and form a simple A, theres no point in doing it over and over and over in everyone i do if ive moved past that shit and now im trying to develop the style and the hookups and shit. i mean, no offence to anyone but i think most people can do simple letters? i dunno, sorry if im seeming like an ass im just tired of hearing about bars when i can do bars, im trying to develop my bars now. ya know?

well it dose make sense and any one who dosnt suck will tell you simples help a shit load, i mean u gave props to chalk in ur post, that shits mad simple,
simple dosnt have to mean boring, if ur so positive u got basic letters down bust a few simples then begin to lean the letters,bend the bars and add a lil flaver. you cant go from dead simple to mad arrows over the course of one sketch, ther need to be many many pages of horrible looking experiments and ajustment to ur simples befor u get the funk,,, ask chalk

DankNC
09-13-2007, 05:08 PM
see... i know this your giving me a critique, and thank you, but this is what i dont understand about anyone on here. im an art major, i can do 3 bars and form a simple A, theres no point in doing it over and over and over in everyone i do if ive moved past that shit and now im trying to develop the style and the hookups and shit. i mean, no offence to anyone but i think most people can do simple letters? i dunno, sorry if im seeming like an ass im just tired of hearing about bars when i can do bars, im trying to develop my bars now. ya know?

you aint gotta do it super simple, just use simple extensions, try not to make letters so complex, and the arrows made that one horrible, way too many arrows

sKeeLo
09-13-2007, 05:20 PM
sketch gave you good advice . . . the sooner you get letter foundation down the sooner you can move on . . .

ill edit a pic in cuz this page is all talky talky

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1970/1282876ca7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

popshots
09-13-2007, 05:52 PM
speak: don't do arrows coming of the ends of your letters,and as much as you dont wanna hear it do back to simple bars i wanted to develop style mad quick and it didnt work so i went back to basics now id say im alright...
chalk: good stuff

bountyhunter113
09-13-2007, 05:54 PM
is it me or u alway write on skool shit, cant u afford ur own paper.

lol, ofcourse i can, i jus like to draw during class coz it's a way to tune out those fucking boring ass lectures

chalk- i love that grass......sooo god damn realistic

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/doodle1.png
neways.......can i get ne critz? i alrdy gave critz to ppl on last page

Clowney-Cakes
09-13-2007, 06:02 PM
chalk nice grass, but i think you could do a better K poss, i am feeling the A tho

AnteUp
09-13-2007, 06:25 PM
advice for mr.jacobson...DONT PUT UR NAME ON HERE...fuck..

silentchaos14
09-13-2007, 06:28 PM
klepto- dont do arrows and get basic letter structure down first, just cuz yur an art major dont mean u get to by pass all the basics.
chalk- sick as always
skeelo- cant see but its probably great
mike jacobson- well thats yur mistake right there.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneArrows.jpg
just some shit from today, the E is the worst letter imo
crits?

Sumoe
09-13-2007, 06:36 PM
No Arrows.

xFatel.Onex
09-13-2007, 06:39 PM
Morne- ima only tell you this once try not to make your sketches so big and also dont have your letters so fat i needa get you some good markers hahha and for your "O" it doesnt look like you sketched it ALWAYS sketchi it and start from the middle circle (the whole) then draw the out side of it, It helps lots.

BORG
09-13-2007, 06:40 PM
morne- please, please, please, stop the simples, i think theyre holding you back, try a piece

silentchaos14
09-13-2007, 06:40 PM
wow and can i ask why not?
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSchool2.jpg
more shit from yesterday that i forgot about
crits on this too?

lol k to everyone above me, that piece of paper is is big as a piece of loose leaf and yeah my O's suck. and i hate biting ppl.

AnteUp
09-13-2007, 06:41 PM
morne-change it up some, no addons yet
sky-lukkin gud bro, always loved your style, i love seein ur ish before its painted/inked
chalk-the gras is fuggin crazy bro, put it in a peice sumtime, the simps arent as good as they could be better, the c is alright, the h bars dont flow, the a isnt good at all straighten the bars sum, the k is jus a noodle, straighten the bars
daws-no bodys gonna crit you till you get ur own style, stop bitin
new jizz
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture035.jpg
bee cee doubleu
CRITTTY PEAS

"spe@k"
09-13-2007, 06:46 PM
okay... tyo those of u that gave me advise... thanks. personaly thats the kind of critique that i want... not just "that sucks... do bars" because noww i know how to improve, not just how to go back to simples.

sir.one
09-13-2007, 06:51 PM
Hey Mike Jacobson!

NEZ89
09-13-2007, 07:09 PM
see... i know this your giving me a critique, and thank you, but this is what i dont understand about anyone on here. im an art major, i can do 3 bars and form a simple A, theres no point in doing it over and over and over in everyone i do if ive moved past that shit and now im trying to develop the style and the hookups and shit. i mean, no offence to anyone but i think most people can do simple letters? i dunno, sorry if im seeming like an ass im just tired of hearing about bars when i can do bars, im trying to develop my bars now. ya know?

lol i was the same way when i first started
i've been drawing and painting since for 12 years( since i was 5) and everytime people told be to do basic stuff i was like " i'm too advance for that basic crap. see heres one of them, as u can tell it looks like crap
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000909.jpg

i thought cause i could do stuff like this
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000655.jpg
i'd master graff easily
but i finally put my ego aside and took the advice i was given
plus i got sick of hearing " that's shit u fuckin toy" lol

jersOneTIC
09-13-2007, 07:21 PM
skeelo - nice sketch
bountyhunter - pretty decent karak
morne - you always do the same, try something new
ante up - nice 3d letters man
tryin some new shit...first one's a freestyle.
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6647/13027jp8.jpg


http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1243/13026jf7.jpg

AnteUp
09-13-2007, 07:26 PM
first one is great second..ehhh not so much, keep it up

Bon3s
09-13-2007, 07:28 PM
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/4179/img0013hq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us) . any crits?? im pretty new here.

Scare2
09-13-2007, 07:28 PM
aha word nez.

and morne i dont know if ur just like not artistic or something but ur sketches have been the same for months. change it up for real.. that doesnt meen put a little block on top of the same N. its all about the main bars of ur letters. if those suck then it all sucks. llike those little arrows and bits and stuff are whack stop wit em. that sketch higher on this page would be pretty good if it werent for all that shit.

yo bones thats pretty sick. you overplayed the cracks in the bottom one. mighta looked sick if they were just lines instead of breaks. bur their good. you have youre letter structure pretty good.

jers that bottom one is fresh man. very creative. you got just the right amount of flairey shit. keep doin em.


so lately i just started sketching single letters on each page in my notebook during school. i kinda like where some of its going. i felt like some of it might be a bit close to sky. but im not sure ??

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9120028.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130033.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130034.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130035.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130031.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130030.jpg

paste
09-13-2007, 08:04 PM
Jers- Like it a whole lot dude, at least the first one. The second one is pretty good too, just like the first more.
nez-That black book pic turned out to be fire dude, nice work.
Ante up-Great work on those letters on the last page man, stuffs very sleazy.

AyteYourCookies
09-13-2007, 08:06 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture319.jpg
fun.

Bazer
09-13-2007, 08:16 PM
klepto- dont do arrows and get basic letter structure down first, just cuz yur an art major dont mean u get to by pass all the basics.
chalk- sick as always
skeelo- cant see but its probably great
mike jacobson- well thats yur mistake right there.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneArrows.jpg
just some shit from today, the E is the worst letter imo
crits?

YES! keep going with this one man. add a little more to the structure. but no extensions. arrows, connectors etc.

thesilentvandal
09-13-2007, 08:19 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011832.jpg

il give crits later, i gotta go take a shower

silentchaos14
09-13-2007, 08:22 PM
its alright over-all but the D looks like an O and i still wanna see u go back to that burner style u painted. it was sick.

Seek139
09-13-2007, 08:23 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011832.jpg

il give crits later, i gotta go take a shower

Yo dude its not your fucking style you bit the whole fucking thing can we seriously just get this kid banned? its really getting on my nerves this blatant ass piece of shit. WHOS WITH ME

silentchaos14
09-13-2007, 08:24 PM
YES! keep going with this one man. add a little more to the structure. but no extensions. arrows, connectors etc.
i pretty much straight up bit yur M by the way, sept mine was less curved and touching in the cneter lol

Fube
09-13-2007, 08:27 PM
jers- i like the 2nd one because is something different from the first one. u always do the first one. props for trying different shit.

daws- your not getting crit for a reason, i think u know that reason, yes, u have bastardo's style down. elaborate on that and make it yours dude. im sick of seeing the same shit with the same letters.

ayte- man, i love that simple stuff. bust a roller with that on something huge.

HoodRichSucka
09-13-2007, 08:28 PM
scare2 - that last S is soooooo fresh. props
-d

Bon3s
09-13-2007, 08:29 PM
aha word nez.

and morne i dont know if ur just like not artistic or something but ur sketches have been the same for months. change it up for real.. that doesnt meen put a little block on top of the same N. its all about the main bars of ur letters. if those suck then it all sucks. llike those little arrows and bits and stuff are whack stop wit em. that sketch higher on this page would be pretty good if it werent for all that shit.

yo bones thats pretty sick. you overplayed the cracks in the bottom one. mighta looked sick if they were just lines instead of breaks. bur their good. you have youre letter structure pretty good.

jers that bottom one is fresh man. very creative. you got just the right amount of flairey shit. keep doin em.


so lately i just started sketching single letters on each page in my notebook during school. i kinda like where some of its going. i felt like some of it might be a bit close to sky. but im not sure ??

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9120028.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130033.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130034.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130035.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130031.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9130030.jpg

damn. that first A and the D are sick as hell. thanks for the crits by the way.

AnteUp
09-13-2007, 08:40 PM
Yo dude its not your fucking style you bit the whole fucking thing can we seriously just get this kid banned? its really getting on my nerves this blatant ass piece of shit. WHOS WITH ME
me, jus ignore him, no crits no nuthin an he'll stop

bouncingsoul
09-13-2007, 09:01 PM
Blehh. I'm falling in love with my throw. Finding it more fun than piecing to be honest... I'll keep trying though hah

Some of this stuff is shit, some isn't... Deal with it

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0945.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0946.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0947.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0948.jpg

"Obey" practice
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0949.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0950.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0952.jpg

Experimenting with ish..
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0951.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0953.jpg

Poop

MUSEone
09-13-2007, 09:02 PM
Ur throw is fucking ill.

Keep that shit up bro.

"spe@k"
09-13-2007, 09:15 PM
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/4179/img0013hq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us) . any crits?? im pretty new here.

the blue one... the h looks alot like an N. i like it thoe... looks like a ripple thing

HoodRichSucka
09-13-2007, 09:25 PM
bouncingsoul. my school notebooks look the same way, just not as good.....haha

Bon3s
09-13-2007, 09:28 PM
kinda killin him with kindness then?edit: that was wayyy up haha. but thanks for the crits. maybe some more pics to come tonight

Fube
09-13-2007, 09:57 PM
bump that bounce!! dont worry, i like bombing over pieceing any day.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/09-13-07_2125.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/09-13-07_2124.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/09-13-07_2123.jpg
love or hate welcome.

sex without condoms
09-13-2007, 10:02 PM
the top of is fucking off the chain.
i love fube.
<33

Scare2
09-13-2007, 10:02 PM
fube. ur a gangster.

but to actually crit it in the second piece i dont think the shape of ur E has as much flow as the rest of the letters. which i mostly cant find. you prolly know that the drips arent all down and in the third one the triple hole mobile doesnt flow with me.

bouncingsoul
09-13-2007, 10:08 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0955.jpg

silentchaos14
09-13-2007, 10:11 PM
that reminds me of ghengis kahn from clone high, i like it but whats he doin with his left hand
?

pocket change
09-13-2007, 10:12 PM
fube-dopeee

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4784/ak003mz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fube
09-13-2007, 10:28 PM
sweet page so far! (not my shit)

pocket- ill man, handy at the top is nice too.

bounce- make a comic book fool.

scair- thanks for the words man, im experimenting with it. lots of fine tuneing to come.

sex- much love, post some of your grimy throws.

RFI. SPit
09-13-2007, 10:36 PM
Experimenting with ish..
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0951.jpg


I've always loved all your stuff, the blue ball point pen is classic!

This little experimental style reminded me of a little experimental style I had going. Looks kinda similar

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8759/photo22no0.jpg

Keep it up Knews, dope as always!

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
09-13-2007, 11:10 PM
bounce- ILL character.

new shit.
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1666.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-13-2007, 11:26 PM
Hah thanks for all the positive feedback and shit

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0956.jpg

The_Sheep
09-13-2007, 11:28 PM
klepto- dont do arrows and get basic letter structure down first, just cuz yur an art major dont mean u get to by pass all the basics.
chalk- sick as always
skeelo- cant see but its probably great
mike jacobson- well thats yur mistake right there.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneArrows.jpg
just some shit from today, the E is the worst letter imo
crits?

Explain to me this: Where do you get off telling people not to use arrows, then post possibly the worst usage of arrows ive ever seen, i say take your own advice

C3ZR ONE
09-14-2007, 01:02 AM
Knews- Lookin good as always. You have your own style. It's time to translate it into paint if you haven't yet.

Fube- I luvs that shit. I dun luv'd it since you first came on this site. And I like that you can paint it too. props.

RFI- That sticker style is much fresh. A sticker doesn't do it as much justice as a roller would tho!

Update- I haven't posted in this forum in a grip which makes me feel bad since I moderate it. haha.
http://a908.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/75/l_a2110deaeb109ddc43f3309b1f5af7c3.jpg

I'm convinced I can paint this. It's a bit more intricate than what I usually paint, but I knows I can doos it. We'll find out Sunday. haha

http://a954.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_da3b7feac77744ba188eafab9a1c12b1.jpg
For my homeboy Trix One. Bangkok Okizoo crew
http://a137.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/68/l_a37e781519e8a3525f87579649c8ee40.jpg
for my Homeboy Alex One, Bangkok Okizoo crew as well. (This cat can fuckin burn me, I should dig up some flicks of his shit.)
http://a861.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/127/l_ccb43216a1838f6c64903991cad7b57c.jpg
For my homeboy Ease 95. Local Okizoo cew MC. The dude is live. I drew this one last weekend before I figured out my new style, but I like it anyway.
http://a951.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_0cc23c2eef87ff6e5d5509691d6997ce.jpg
Homeboy Tek Steez, local Okizoo crew DJ. This is the link pic between the Ease piece and the style I do now (in the first 3 pics). You can see the beginnings of it here.

Peace.

sank.
09-14-2007, 01:12 AM
knews your style is so hot, so simple but yet so hot.

shitty sketch i did today...

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0752.jpg

BIGel
09-14-2007, 03:41 AM
cezr that top piece is probably one of, if not the, best piece ive ever seen from you. if i was looking for anything to crit id say that the extensions coming off the first and last letters look overload cuz they're trying to create a balance almost too hard, but aside from that everything looked clean and natural. \

sank i think you and alive are sketching together cuz im waiting on progression from both of you. nice simples, but you have the foundation to step it up.

popshots
09-14-2007, 06:12 AM
http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/1931/nerm29gj4.jpg
done a month ago and sum1 else drew the weed leaves...... crits....
ceazer:thats good ish
morn: try bending your letters and not post the same straight letter a million times... and dont use arows yet
ill crit more later

TricksForKids
09-14-2007, 11:30 AM
Wuttup BS! finally settled into my closet of a room at university, but ive been jamming it up hard, i sat down and sketched last night and came up with this...yall tell me what you think, aint really my usual stuff, as for the rest of you, knews you blew UP son! i havent seen shit from you in 2 months, that last sketch bumped on this page is gorgeous, fube youre finally getting that style on lock im loving it, ceezy hows it goin son!, shits lookin money as usual, i love all the circles, gives it a squid/octopus like feel, if thats what you were goin for, pocket change, the E and s are amazing..but theyre not yours..come on buddy lets be serious, sank, i love that clean simple look, you should paint it, better than the last sktches ive seen from you, and popshots spend some more time on letters homie, cool colouring though, anyways, heres the BAWK!

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.6ac0224974.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=img004ov3.jpg)

Seek139
09-14-2007, 12:00 PM
college + being arrested = can suck

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 01:41 PM
bouncingsoul- thats ill man, lol @ doing throwies on mathwork, i like the third on from the bottom

amk
09-14-2007, 01:41 PM
wow Cezr. Amazing progress in your style man....serious.

i feel asiff im quitting graff and i dont actually want too.
its fucking wierd.
like i aint sketched or even thought about getting new paint for weeks.
i dont wanna quit.
i just dont know how to get round it ?..
i aint had a clear head for awhile now..
iono wha to do...

:(

neukr
09-14-2007, 02:03 PM
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone010.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone007.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone008.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone012.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/sketchone013.jpg

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 02:06 PM
poopshots-feelin them colors
http://i5.tinypic.com/62443s0.jpg
yea yea i know, a lot of arrows

Sumoe
09-14-2007, 02:07 PM
Simples...

No Arrows...

Practice...

Practice...

Practice...

CRN-one
09-14-2007, 02:38 PM
braxtons: I agree with sumoe, slow it down man. I see a lot of your posts in tools and tips, and they all give me the feeling that you're very, very green when it comes to all this... you've heard it a million times and you'll hear it a million more, start drawing the keys on your keyboard. progress slowy. Simples may not be "cool" like those wildstyles, but you need the foundation to build upon to get to the crazier shit.

Think about it - you don't build a house by framing on the ground. It needs a foundation or it goes to shit quickly. Same thing with your style. If the basic structure isn't there, you'll never get it solid.

As much as it sucks, just keep banging out simples until you can do them in your sleep, then start moving to different shit - blockbusters, bubbles, something easy. Work up to that kinda stuff.

And for the love of god, no arrows. Please. Thank you.

...all this says the man who is still rocking the blockbusters and simples like its religion, because that's all he's capable of. ;)

redxdrum
09-14-2007, 02:50 PM
no no.. simpler , good to see that you started with the 4 bar, but maybe just curve those 4 bars or something..you dont need the jagged bends yet
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture008.jpg

redxdrum
09-14-2007, 02:50 PM
no no.. simpler , good to see that you started with the 4 bar, but maybe just curve those 4 bars or something..you dont need the jagged bends yet
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture008.jpg
better? please give me some tips

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 02:54 PM
yeah thats exactly what they were talking about

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 02:58 PM
ok dont mind how clean it is ill fix that later... and what do u mean by "green"?
http://i1.tinypic.com/53pbu3a.jpg

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 03:02 PM
try bringing the letters closer together and i'm not too sure about the star in the E, kinda cliche, like Xs

Seek139
09-14-2007, 03:04 PM
braxton - keep getting simpler get some form going

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02857.jpg

whahappen?
09-14-2007, 03:04 PM
not too happy with it
bleh..
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4122/picture175wm2.jpg
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2987/picture174gi9.jpg
if i cleaned it up i think itd probably look better

redxdrum
09-14-2007, 03:07 PM
C3ZR ONE im loving your stuff.

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 03:07 PM
so like make them overlap a little bit?

TricksForKids
09-14-2007, 03:10 PM
Wuttup BS! finally settled into my closet of a room at university, but ive been jamming it up hard, i sat down and sketched last night and came up with this...yall tell me what you think, aint really my usual stuff, as for the rest of you, knews you blew UP son! i havent seen shit from you in 2 months, that last sketch bumped on this page is gorgeous, fube youre finally getting that style on lock im loving it, ceezy hows it goin son!, shits lookin money as usual, i love all the circles, gives it a squid/octopus like feel, if thats what you were goin for, pocket change, the E and s are amazing..but theyre not yours..come on buddy lets be serious, sank, i love that clean simple look, you should paint it, better than the last sktches ive seen from you, and popshots spend some more time on letters homie, cool colouring though, anyways, heres the BAWK!

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.6ac0224974.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=img004ov3.jpg)

I come back and get no love? ouch, come on fellas, bummmmp

amk
09-14-2007, 03:10 PM
wow Cezr. Amazing progress in your style man....serious.

i feel asiff im quitting graff and i dont actually want too.
its fucking wierd.
like i aint sketched or even thought about getting new paint for weeks.
i dont wanna quit.
i just dont know how to get round it ?..
i aint had a clear head for awhile now..
iono wha to do...

:(

c'mon guys.
a little bit of fucking help.
its been this site that has spured me on to get better at fucking graffiti.
iv met some fucking kool heads on here too.
i atleast expect the older heads to help me out somewhat who have seen me progress from the start..
its been atleast a year that iv been on here
i just want some serious boost of confidence to get me going again
:(:(:(:(:(:(

whahappen?
09-14-2007, 03:13 PM
c'mon guys.
a little bit of fucking help.
its been this site that has spured me on to get better at fucking graffiti.
iv met some fucking kool heads on here too.
i atleast expect the older heads to help me out somewhat who have seen me progress from the start..
its been atleast a year that iv been on here
i just want some serious boost of confidence to get me going again
:(:(:(:(:(:(
your horrible omg you suck just die i bet youll never make it to the big boys thread, fuck you barely even belong in here

NEGATIVE MOTIVATION MAN IS HERE!

on the real though, it might be that youve gotten al the help you can on this site and need to progress further without getting on BS, i think BS atleast has something to do with it
id give better help but im really tired and cant think straight
or you could just be hitting a rough spot, it happens to every single graffiti writer just take a break for a few days

by the way bawk thats fucking awesome, i love that, except the little random sharp edges things

trashhh
09-14-2007, 03:13 PM
AMar that top one is nice altho u realy should try to get better at making a left side of ur first A!! same in ur other throwie lol, which i kinda prefer anyway

thesilentvandal
09-14-2007, 03:16 PM
sketch letters, then when it gets boring, sketch throwups, then when that gets boring try some characters and then practice your tag, and then, do this all over again, and it should start you up again .

whahappen?
09-14-2007, 03:18 PM
AMar that top one is nice altho u realy should try to get better at making a left side of ur first A!! same in ur other throwie lol, which i kinda prefer anyway
hahaha i know dude cause i start at the bottom of the a and it just looks awkward cause i finish the left side as the last thing i do and its all straight and weird and gross and blehh

and amk maybe cause your considered dope by a majority of people on here you have no motivation to sketch and paint and get better

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 03:23 PM
k theyre closer and got rid of the star
http://i15.tinypic.com/52ms4n9.jpg

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 03:31 PM
lol okay um try lining them up, straighten the L, just us a line or something for the E cause the can aint workin, and the E's too long

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 03:40 PM
know what fuck it all, just do the letters off your keyboard first than start bending and curving them

whahappen?
09-14-2007, 03:41 PM
not too happy with it
bleh..
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4122/picture175wm2.jpg
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2987/picture174gi9.jpg
if i cleaned it up i think itd probably look better
new page

thesilentvandal
09-14-2007, 03:43 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsek.jpg

old style, crits?

TricksForKids
09-14-2007, 03:43 PM
ras...bosss, fuck amk i aint callin you that i know you as ras, but on the real, ive yelled at you and got pissed you alot for months, and check it out, youve gotten better, you dont HAVE to do graffiti 24/7 taking a break wont kill you, i hardly did any this summer, or during these first two weeks at university, but i sat down and sketched yesterday and it felt good again, dont worry, if you like graffiti, then youll just keep doing it, plus youre a teenager, so other weird shit is going on in your head/body, not to get all dr phil on you or anything, word?

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.6ac0224974.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=img004ov3.jpg)

look at me pulling a double bump

hehe

braxtons, those arent letters, theyre sharp objects with sharper arrows, go back to basics, copy the letters on your keyboard, word? word.

redxdrum, thats still not simple, you have inconsistency at the end of each bar, it gets fatter, then roud, then sharper, even that "simple" letter is all over the place, go even simpler man

seek that shits hype, keep it up, try working with really bold clean lines, and try throwing in some shading

whahappen, the letters in your throw are there, but you still sketch em out like youre a 4 year old, take some friggin time

amk
09-14-2007, 03:43 PM
ugh fuck this guys.
its time to call it quits.
on graffiti.
been dope knowing all your guys and communicating with yah..
good luck to everyone in here

sorry
and peace.



NAWWWT AHHAHAHAH ASIFF ID QUIT I GOT THIS FAR.
EXPECT SUM SKETCHES TOMORROW YALLL..

peace. much love.
and Bawk.
lawng time no seee mannnnnnnn..
preddy fresh sketch.
Edit. and word.
i wouldnt mind some of those old rants again
ahah.

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 03:45 PM
http://i12.tinypic.com/4v3kdg5.jpg

Seek139
09-14-2007, 03:46 PM
stay up amk

thesilentvandal
09-14-2007, 03:48 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011833.jpg new simple

oh andbraxtons, , use the letters on your keyboard, and when you get them down and the letters look like this m minus the cracks and the exstesnsion on the right of the k , it should look like this minus the thing i just said.=http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawseksimplefunky.jpg

then when you got thos letters down, try to bend them. hope i helped you .

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 03:57 PM
i think Ys are too complicated better off with I, nice and symetrical
and daws, thats good, but in the first on the D looks more like an O and the k looks like a D

Chalk
09-14-2007, 04:01 PM
those cracks in the last one are awful.....

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 04:20 PM
ok i used the letters on my keys.....there is NOTHING do-able to a capital Y..
http://i14.tinypic.com/6heoi9g.jpg

Bon3s
09-14-2007, 04:28 PM
it feels as if the l doesnt fit in with the rest. its more squared off and jagged and the rest of the letters are more rounded. just keep at it though, they're looking a little better man.

Chalk
09-14-2007, 04:28 PM
Man i wish the L on my keyboard looked like that.

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 04:29 PM
then don't use Y

Dream Creation
09-14-2007, 04:49 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4936/1005ir6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4936/1005ir6.094490a3f5.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=524&i=1005ir6.jpg)

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 05:03 PM
then don't use Y
good idea;]

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 05:30 PM
you may end up goin through a few name changes to find a letter combo thats works well
trust me, i went through like 5

Seek139
09-14-2007, 05:30 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02857.jpg

bump for new page

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 05:39 PM
u should shade it, i think it'll look sick

jersOneTIC
09-14-2007, 06:42 PM
braxtons - do bars for a while
dreamcreation - the e is too hidden
seek - your 3'd are good,you should try coloring them with diff shades
demo-nice color on the last one


http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1243/13026jf7.jpg
i dont usually "bump", but i really like this one...crits?

NEZ89
09-14-2007, 07:14 PM
not really feelin the arrow thingy on the E and R, or that ext. in front of the J

Scare2
09-14-2007, 07:20 PM
hey braxton u didnt use ur keyboard for shit. what they mean is make them look exactly like ur keyboard. ur L only needs two bars, one bend. etc. itll help allot dude. i did the same thing and it progressed my style so fast.

jers its dope. i think u should have connected the top two bars of the R together.

seek hella dope. ddoes it say waR? i really like that style you should start shading and coloring it.

dawsek all the shit ur postings really tight. and now everyone wont give u shit for biting. i never really noticed any bites in perticular. but wutev. people usually blow it way out of proportion but u got all kinds of styles bumpin dude. props.


i combined a couple a dem letttas that i been doin today in class. i kinda like how it came out. and then i noticed that the right bar of my A would make a pretty cool S..?


http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9140036.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/P9140037.jpg

D E M O
09-14-2007, 07:22 PM
seek - good stuff, put some color in it.
Jers- the R kind of looks more like a K or B

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/492/demo81ud2.jpg

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/8074/demo83sh1.jpg

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/5243/demo35ns8.jpg

daisyface
09-14-2007, 08:32 PM
scare that first one is real nice

-SEK-
09-14-2007, 08:36 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2629/project3vn7.th.png (http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=project3vn7.png)

something i did alil while ago
crits

daisyface
09-14-2007, 08:43 PM
its too busy, more addons then letters ya know. try and get a similar flow to each letter . dont feel bad that they are simples because simples can look cool as shit without being complicated ya know

ASH.802
09-14-2007, 09:09 PM
Hey all, I'm looking on some criticism on these two pieces I did for my sister Bianca, both the same outline with 2 different fills. I'm new to graff, so please help out if you can:
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6755/untitled1bp9.jpg
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4181/untitled2ks1.jpg

Seek139
09-14-2007, 09:33 PM
scare it actually says NAR

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02858.jpg

Captain
09-14-2007, 10:38 PM
Nice shit seek, that's really coming along. good to see you working on stuff that isn't all 'sketchy'.

ash, calm that shit down some.

demo, i dunno the arrows seem kinda whack. letters are nice though.

dream creation, go simpler.

braxtons a g
09-14-2007, 10:54 PM
i just wanted to see how a fill would look on this
http://i16.tinypic.com/4uu8ilc.jpg

HoodRichSucka
09-14-2007, 11:54 PM
[QUOTE=D E M O;870247]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/8074/demo83sh1.jpg

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sick!!

silentchaos14
09-15-2007, 12:10 AM
Hey all, I'm looking on some criticism on these two pieces I did for my sister Bianca, both the same outline with 2 different fills. I'm new to graff, so please help out if you can:
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6755/untitled1bp9.jpg
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4181/untitled2ks1.jpg
i dont know if u straight up bit this off somewhere or u got natural talent but for someone who just started, yur on the right track, now go simple and work yur way up

Naysayer
09-15-2007, 12:13 AM
he should make the bars thicker. lose most of the addons. and make the letters the same size.

HadeP
09-15-2007, 12:41 AM
demo looking alot better manz.
and scare, thats sick, i love the shading, add some color ? :)
just a quick little thing i did like 2 mins ago, just messin around, havent posted ina while, but heres a few things
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/iwol3.jpg
little throwy rockin on TD
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/charakk.jpg
pensketch charak
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/charakk2.jpg
umm cant remember if i used pencil on this beast first, i think i did.
crits, comments, opinions please.

South-Pole
09-15-2007, 06:17 AM
new ish:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AT.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TR.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRthrow.jpg

older stuff:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/ET.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/BZS.jpg


hade-not feeling the characters but the letters are ok
Demo-dope,this only goes to the letters,not feeling the arrows
Ash-simples man,or try checking the new to graff thread
Braxton-read what i said to Ash and do the same thing
Seek-fucking dope,you're realy good at 3-d styles
scare-the cab one is nice

-ShAmEE-
09-15-2007, 07:07 AM
seek - good stuff, put some color in it.
Jers- the R kind of looks more like a K or B

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/5243/demo35ns8.jpg

dope. letter are nice fills nice, so dope.

Sumoe
09-15-2007, 07:50 AM
I come back and get no love? ouch, come on fellas, bummmmp

TRICKS, glad to see you back, my kneeeegrow. Haha. Looks like you got a little rusty, though, or just messing with a semi-new/different style. However, it looks good. Not feeling the "B", though.

:)

inkbits
09-15-2007, 08:03 AM
braxton you should work on getting something more worthy of spending the time on before prettying it up with fill imo man. In the time it took to colour that you could of traced over it and tryed something different to get structure better.

ASH.802 and HadeP your pics are massive. get sometrhing like http://www.irfanview.com/ or some shit to resize pics and try keep them under 700pixels wide, this page is stretched to the fuggnutz.

Sumoe
09-15-2007, 10:56 AM
c'mon guys.
a little bit of fucking help.
its been this site that has spured me on to get better at fucking graffiti.
iv met some fucking kool heads on here too.
i atleast expect the older heads to help me out somewhat who have seen me progress from the start..
its been atleast a year that iv been on here
i just want some serious boost of confidence to get me going again
:(:(:(:(:(:(

Don't worry, bro. I feel the EXACT same way, right now.

AyteYourCookies
09-15-2007, 11:27 AM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture321.jpg

pez ss
09-15-2007, 11:28 AM
seek it looks fucking nice best one from u yet its a litlle confuzing to but the shape is so good
amk just sketch alot and go bombing with ur friends i have more fun when im bombing with other people and dont worrie about peopleon bs giving u crits if just ask other freinds that wirte for crits basicly just go out paint with people u know and have fun with it and dont qiut cause ur good and i like seing u post

blue.steel
09-15-2007, 12:04 PM
amk
i dont get it, ur good,
u dont need a boost of confidence. u should have moor confidence then most people by just looking at your progresshion and seeing how much better u have gotin
and dont worry if it seems like ur shits not geting better
because it will
u just relly need to look at your shit
and ask yourself where u want ur style to go
like find ways to make it look moor grimy
or try wildstyle or 3d
relly its up to u where u want to go from here soo
keep sketchin
and keep experimenting
and soon ur shit will get way better

South-Pole
09-15-2007, 12:31 PM
new ish:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AT.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TR.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TRthrow.jpg

older stuff:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/ET.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/BZS.jpg


hade-not feeling the characters but the letters are ok
Demo-dope,this only goes to the letters,not feeling the arrows
Ash-simples man,or try checking the new to graff thread
Braxton-read what i said to Ash and do the same thing
Seek-fucking dope,you're realy good at 3-d styles
scare-the cab one is nice

BUMP FOR CRITS!!!!


for ras,i felt like you a few hours ago until i got my book signed by a legend,try getting up or try new things that should help i think or maybe try looking at any movies that are graff related..hopes that helps,just tell yourself that its all in the head :)

Sick!
09-15-2007, 01:02 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/800000005da374e/1/138/yDDYCAnVsD8HOIn6BMk1TXaf1CyZVAzI.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/EJ6yVReo0z-3oeMjSnHxZqYUaNvfdI2F?referrer=hlnk)
a piece i did for ra freind

nero122
09-15-2007, 01:28 PM
i wudnt shade the inside but its got structure

South-Pole
09-15-2007, 01:45 PM
Sick read my fucking sig before posting here

ok try going simpler,no colour,no 3-d etc...do key board letters for a wild then
move on

whahappen?
09-15-2007, 02:24 PM
BUMP FOR CRITS!!!!


for ras,i felt like you a few hours ago until i got my book signed by a legend,try getting up or try new things that should help i think or maybe try looking at any movies that are graff related..hopes that helps,just tell yourself that its all in the head :)

damn man all that looks really nice
besides the last one, i dont like it

Drakula
09-15-2007, 02:29 PM
Sick-work on letter proportions
South Pole-nice letters.Maybe downsize the the blocks a bit.Theyre a bit big at the moment.Also the arrows don't really fit in.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/IMG_1524.jpg

Rekoh.

South-Pole
09-15-2007, 02:37 PM
umm yeah i don't like the last one myself haha but thanks for the crits
drak-looks mad dope,the only thing that needs work is the arm of the character not feeling that robotic arm or else its dope

sex without condoms
09-15-2007, 02:59 PM
Drak you forgot the 3D on the word oner and on the extension coming from the E and H

whahappen?
09-15-2007, 03:10 PM
for batttle
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/3040/picture176uh2.jpg
dont like my s

sex without condoms
09-15-2007, 03:13 PM
geez take some time.
your letters overlap wayy to much.
dont make the hole in the R so big and your shadow is fucked up

Drakula
09-15-2007, 03:19 PM
Drak you forgot the 3D on the word oner and on the extension coming from the E and H

I was using this shitty marker that made everything really thick and it would just look like a blob of black if I tryed to put 3D there and I decided to just leave the 3D off the oner completely.

South-Pole
09-15-2007, 03:21 PM
whahappen-looks good,even though im not good w/throws maybe try going slow next time

paste
09-15-2007, 03:51 PM
South pole-like em alot dude. Looking good.
Drak- Like the style, I dont like the bend in the right lef of the r kind of makes it look like a b
Whahappen- I know thats a style for throwies and you do it really well, but I just dont really like it.

blue.steel
09-15-2007, 04:17 PM
Rekoh try putting ur k in frount of ur other letters and ur e over ur r kinda like a pyramid formation???
i think it would look dope wit ur style
or dont shits ill allready

Can someone show me or explain to me how to do good addons
cus i relly suck at them

ressurection?alive
09-15-2007, 04:22 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/scan0002-2.jpg



ras, im glad u missed me (iwanted to quote it where u said that but i couldnt find it haha) but this bullshit needs to stop, although the new toys are more then willing to jump up on u and encourage, thats not what graffiti iss about. u wanna quit, quit. its gotta come from inside. sounds gay but that shits true.

im starting to try to get wilder with my own style, although this is a shit example, and ive been saying that forever.

ffuck msfat

ill be pming other mods to see if they can overturn my ban, otherwise, im off to fuckin 12oz. all accnts i will evr make on this site will say "alive" or theres no fuckin point, its abt getting ur name up, even on the internet, fuck, kids put it down but u know its a part.

ill post every once in a while regardless tho. bs has been a great part of my life, and has helped me get much much farther, and ill tell all of u something, all the good comments have been great, of course they have, but its when some complete fucking asshole tells me my shit doesnt deserve housing in a dumpster that i get off my ass.

south pole keep playing with it,
drak u gotta chill, i loved that shit b4, but now ur stepping outta bounds with it, ur not rdy.


peace all.

AnteUp
09-15-2007, 04:24 PM
steel-you jus gotta get good at ur letters first, it comes naturally, but you can get diff inspiration from other people

TO:EVERYONE WHO KNEW I WAS BITIN SUME...
IM COMIN OUT TA SAY THAT I WAS CARRYIN AROUND HIS LERK SKETCH TO GET IDEAS, ADDONS, IDEAS FOR OTHER LETTERS ETC.
I APOLOGIZE SUME, SORRY BRO BUT IM DOIN MAH OWN THING NOW, STARTIN 3-D, SORRY TO EVERYONE I OFFENDED,
AND AMKAH!!!! DONT QUIT BRO, TO MUCH TALENT GOIN TA WASTE, DONT QUIT...

AND TO ALIVE...GODDAMN THAT BITCH BANNED YOU AGAIN?