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Casa45
09-28-2007, 04:13 PM
Decos

and reposting it because i got bottom of page =\

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1223/1451294432_bc24145706.jpg?v=0


I like everything except for the letters.

AnteUp
09-28-2007, 04:49 PM
wat tha fuck casa i thought we were cool (ur sig)

sou-more abstract than letters
bawwwk-lukks good

Dusk07
09-28-2007, 04:55 PM
Posted this in the big back blook thread,thought i would post it in here and try and get some more crits=]?
Fight to survive is the krew im in= F T S

http://aycu08.webshots.com/image/29167/2001387431037200543_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001387431037200543)
http://aycu15.webshots.com/image/27414/2001388243033665620_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001388243033665620)

AnteUp
09-28-2007, 05:20 PM
it lukks great, but ur tryna make it lukk to sharp everywhere...
for fube
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture038.jpg
flowmotion
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture036.jpg
yes thats a d12 cd in the background

BORG
09-28-2007, 05:25 PM
ill be back to give crits later, just wanted to post this for feedback real quick i gotta run peace!

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/165/img006ho7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump this shit, feelin these letters
where the fuck did all the intermediate toys go, this thread is lookin real nasty lately, with only one or 2 dope pieces every other page

^^ante- casa hates ccc due to the beef battle between him and tezr, haha, decent handy btw

whahappen?
09-28-2007, 05:27 PM
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6881/picture197ya8.jpg
critles

braxtons a g
09-28-2007, 05:29 PM
dusk- widen up the letters man u gotta bunch of empty space.. looks good though. or u could just fill in the space with other stuff

Tryp
09-28-2007, 05:41 PM
anteup - thats a cool style goin there. i would just maybe try and make the letters flow in a certain angle or direction with that style maybe, thats just me.

tricksforkids - thats so sick, creative, clean and neat. very interesting thoughts going on there man, ill def look into some more of your stuff more.

whahappen - nice throwie, looks nice and quick too. ive always envied the style that some people get in a throwie though they seem so simple, i just cant really gain it for some reason. letters look nicely proportioned though, very nice.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-41.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-40.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-38.jpg
never finished the text thats supposed to go underneath and im gonna color it soon.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-42.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-37.jpg
ignore the whiteout inside the letters, obvious fuck up..

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-43.jpg
a sticker thrown together, i havent been doing many (if any) lately..

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-44.jpg
everyone should try this if they're broke lmao, pocket size mop.
made with household shit.

dajam410
09-28-2007, 06:22 PM
Dusk07- That shit is tight! Not really feeling the handstyles but i love everything else.
TricksForKids- Those letters look incredible, Such a neat style
whahappen?- as always, those throws look dope. We should do an exchange, PM me about that




http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/scanner001.jpg

Some more school sketches, I'm going to attempt to paint the bottom one next time I'm painting freights, but I'm a little skeptical on that. Haha. The top one is unfinished.

sKeeLo
09-28-2007, 06:38 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5366/1282890md2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

need some help on this color scheme, its broken into 3 parts yellow/red then greens then soon to be pink/purple . . . but its looking a lil flat so im thinking about adding a lil light green to the inner part of the yellow then adding alil of the pink to the inside of the green then probaly add a yellow to the inner part of the not yet put on pink . . . i think it will help tie eveything together

dajam - remember to use rusto and not krylon for freights . . . id probaly leave out the lil vine things coming off the letters, love watching freights roll thru silver spring

dajam410
09-28-2007, 06:54 PM
Thanks man, I've only painted them once before and I used rusto. I only use krylon for fills though, outlining in Rusto. We should paint sometime man, I'm in Silver Spring occasionally. PM me if you'd be down.

ghozt
09-28-2007, 06:56 PM
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/80/scan0006we0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


some ugly shit for some stupid battle. im gonna do that over. crits? :]

skeelo your shits dope mann.

whahappen?
09-28-2007, 07:01 PM
Dusk07- That shit is tight! Not really feeling the handstyles but i love everything else.
TricksForKids- Those letters look incredible, Such a neat style
whahappen?- as always, those throws look dope. We should do an exchange, PM me about that




http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/scanner001.jpg

Some more school sketches, I'm going to attempt to paint the bottom one next time I'm painting freights, but I'm a little skeptical on that. Haha. The top one is unfinished.
yo i dont have a camera so ill exchange after this weekend when i get it back, and on the bottom one take off the arrows on the left of the d and the right of the m and thatd be fucking dope as hell

Licossa
09-28-2007, 07:04 PM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/5686/picturees6.jpg
bumping this i guess

braxtons a g
09-28-2007, 07:41 PM
dajam- nice flow and sweet style
skeelo- man thats lookin good. gonna look real good when ur done

silentchaos14
09-28-2007, 07:56 PM
everyone on this page has been decent or amazing (u should know whos who)
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Zens3.jpg
last night
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/BoutTaBubble.jpg
horrible sketch from shop class
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Zens.jpg
sketch from earlier
crits?

braxtons a g
09-28-2007, 08:04 PM
silent- looks good except on the bottom one ur S is more squared where ur Z is rounded a lil bit. idk if u jsut messed up or the marker stuck but just make them the same and itl be all good.
ps.....what does bout ta bubble mean lol i really want to know

daisyface
09-28-2007, 08:05 PM
first one looks pretty good

silentchaos14
09-28-2007, 08:13 PM
bout ta bubble is a song by tech n9ne, download it. youll probably like it if u listen to rap/hip-hop. i was listening to it in class and felt like sketching something other then my name so i sketched the song name. and on the last one the marker stuck and bled alot so it fucked it up.

braxtons a g
09-28-2007, 08:23 PM
bout ta bubble is a song by tech n9ne, download it. youll probably like it if u listen to rap/hip-hop. i was listening to it in class and felt like sketching something other then my name so i sketched the song name. and on the last one the marker stuck and bled alot so it fucked it up.

yea ill check that song.. i figured the marker just messed up or something. looks good all except for that little spot

bla5t
09-28-2007, 09:53 PM
bout ta bubble is a song by tech n9ne, download it. youll probably like it if u listen to rap/hip-hop. i was listening to it in class and felt like sketching something other then my name so i sketched the song name. and on the last one the marker stuck and bled alot so it fucked it up.
you're always down on yourself man.. cheer the fuck up...work on your simples.

Fube
09-28-2007, 10:18 PM
silentchaos14 (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=28067): take that simple u just did and find one of your first sketches. u will see improvment just because your dong simples. keep it up!

blue.steel
09-28-2007, 10:35 PM
bumping

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7585/90819013ar5.png (http://imageshack.us)


zens it looks way better with that curve u did on the n
just make it taller like u did on the first one
and try like makeing some of ur bars start in diffrent spots
its hard to explain so look at this
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7358/jersij7.png (http://imageshack.us)

all i did was drop the right side of ur n just a little
i think it looks better
just make ur letters less simple
cus u have stright up simples down

Bipolar*Pills
09-29-2007, 12:41 AM
yeah yeah, so I write PILLS - PILZ - PILSKILL - PILZROCK - PILAR - PILLER - PILLSTAR - PILSUCK - ZLIP - PYLZ and any other way you can fuck yourself with the fucked up letter flow I chose. I been writing off and on for about uh, two-three years? Fuckin, MSK, AWR, TATS and guys like EWOK, REVS, GLUE, ATLAS really inspire me to push my letters farther. Im going to start practicing more I just want some constructive criticizm.


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185832.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185749.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185541.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185341.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185257.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/184822.jpg

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l119/scotteh_2006/185121.jpg

silentchaos14
09-29-2007, 12:42 AM
thank you fube and blue steel but honestly im sick of fuckin simples and i aint goin anywhere yet, im more or less back to where i was with morne. pillz u may be gettin a pm from a certain 666 member.

Bipolar*Pills
09-29-2007, 12:44 AM
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/165/img006ho7.jpg

I love this type shit.

silentchaos14
09-29-2007, 12:51 AM
that K is a little wierd

Licossa
09-29-2007, 09:47 AM
yeah yeah, so I write PILLS - PILZ - PILSKILL - PILZROCK - PILAR - PILLER - PILLSTAR - PILSUCK - ZLIP - PYLZ and any other way you can fuck yourself with the fucked up letter flow I chose. I been writing off and on for about uh, two-three years? Fuckin, MSK, AWR, TATS and guys like EWOK, REVS, GLUE, ATLAS really inspire me to push my letters farther. Im going to start practicing more I just want some constructive criticizm.

1. Stop writing Pills
2. If you really have been writing for 2-3 years and thats where you're at, just stop now.

Harsh but whatever.

ninja_303_763
09-29-2007, 10:56 AM
bipolar- nice letters


i aint post'd in a mineute.
<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5018.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>

ninja_303_763
09-29-2007, 11:00 AM
bipolar- nice letters


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5018.jpg

South-Pole
09-29-2007, 12:31 PM
blue steel-stuff looks mad dope,feeling the letters like the colouring
pills-needs some work
bawkster-looks coool
ninja-first letter:try making your first bar the same size as your second one
second letter-erase it
third letter-loooks ok but take off those arrows,and try making your bars the same size

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA41367.jpg

bla bla,,crits

terower
09-29-2007, 12:35 PM
South Pole- The fill distracts from the letters. If you used a bigger marker for the outline it might be different, but as is, it looks strange. Also, I've never been a huge fan of having those type of faces in letters, but that's just me.

terower
09-29-2007, 12:38 PM
I can't remember the last time I posted here.

A few variations on a theme:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo177.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo176.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo175.jpg

I'm on the fence about the squiggly extensions, and I know the T is the weakest letter.

Comments? Criticism?

bla5t
09-29-2007, 12:41 PM
I'm not really feeling the S .. especially in the first one don't overlap the bottom part of the S over the top part.

terower
09-29-2007, 12:54 PM
I'm not really feeling the S .. especially in the first one don't overlap the bottom part of the S over the top part.

Eh... I can understand that. I still think it looks interesting, though. Most S's are pretty similar and I was trying to spice it up. Other than that is there a specific thing you don't like about the S?

South-Pole
09-29-2007, 12:57 PM
Sort-the fill was made to distract from the letters
im realy feeling that style,not realy feeling that arrow on the t though and not
much your t

Bipolar*Pills
09-29-2007, 01:02 PM
1. Stop writing Pills
2. If you really have been writing for 2-3 years and thats where you're at, just stop now.

Harsh but whatever.

I'm very off and on but, I'm not quitting this shit. It lives inside me. I might change my name, but it's unlikely. You guys should know what I mean when I say I've been OFF and ON for those 2-3 years... Mostly writing to avoid classwork, Im out of highschool now and you'll see me apply myself. watch out.

silentchaos14
09-29-2007, 02:08 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSimple.jpg
little simple from last night
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/TasrExchange.jpg
exchange for G-fat. didnt put too much effort into it as u can see lol
crits on both?
terower- on the last one it looks like sorf so i might wanna lose the extension on the T

Bon3s
09-29-2007, 02:08 PM
pils: just invest in some better markers. or the time it takes to go rack some.
terower: im likin the style, the second one is lookin the illest and that f looks sick.
blue steel: damn man, thats lookin reallllly nice. and the character is tight aswell.
soutpole: im likin the style and all, but is it a k/kife, or an L/Life?

anyways, some sketches from recently.
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6685/82860257hh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

South-Pole
09-29-2007, 03:22 PM
it's an L

TricksForKids
09-29-2007, 03:24 PM
You guys are all doin it nice, pills dont let people talk shit to you, that stuff aint bad at all, and blue steel its lookin pretty hype, peace, some bawk coming at ya

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/2541/img009lx0.th.jpg (http://img364.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img009lx0.jpg)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9213/img007wp6.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img007wp6.jpg)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/606/img008kp5.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img008kp5.jpg)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2263/img010hd9.th.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img010hd9.jpg)

sefer
09-29-2007, 03:57 PM
All of your guys stuff is looking good - a sketch for A tag I did http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1411/mattspics023rm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
- Something I did last night http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9199/mattspics025hq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Helpful crits plz

blue.steel
09-29-2007, 04:11 PM
^^^^
u need to stop the addons, make all ur bars the same size, make all ur letters the same size, lose that extenchion on the middle bar of the e, and u need to work on ur 3d
ur stuf needs alot of work
i think u need to totaly restart,

Bipolar*Pills
09-29-2007, 04:17 PM
You guys are all doin it nice, pills dont let people talk shit to you, that stuff aint bad at all, and blue steel its lookin pretty hype, peace, some bawk coming at ya

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/2541/img009lx0.th.jpg (http://img364.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img009lx0.jpg)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9213/img007wp6.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img007wp6.jpg)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/606/img008kp5.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img008kp5.jpg)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2263/img010hd9.th.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img010hd9.jpg)

Aye, that shit is clean right there ^^

dim
09-29-2007, 05:06 PM
thats sick bawk keep it up
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0377.jpg
new peice crits please

AnteUp
09-29-2007, 05:08 PM
dim... i love it bro, keep it up the d and the r flow wonderfully, but the i and m are a diff story, kinda reminds me of knews, but jus the bars, it lukks great tho

Naysayer
09-29-2007, 05:08 PM
All of your guys stuff is looking good - a sketch for A tag I did http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1411/mattspics023rm5.jpg[/IMG] (http:[IMG)
- Something I did last night
Helpful crits plz

thicken your bars and lose the extensions.

Nem
09-29-2007, 05:11 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0318.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/kkjjh.jpg

im goin nowhere...

dim, sweet structure, work on the extensions.

sefer, work on making your letters basic and clean.

AnteUp
09-29-2007, 05:14 PM
SILENTCHAOS- STOP WRITING IN SHARPIE, JUS OUTLINE IT DARKER WIT PENCIL OR PEN, IT LUKKS LIKE SHIT WHEN YOU OUTLINE IT, SO SHOW US WITHOUT THE MARKER, I DUNNO WAT ELSE TO TELL YOU CUZ U AINT LISTENIN TO ME...

NEM- UR TRYIN TO HARD TO USE BARS, IN UR TAG AND IN UR PEICES, DONT BE AFRAID TO BEND EM, PLEAAASEEE

sefer
09-29-2007, 05:26 PM
Here's a new one, I lost all the extensions and widened the bars, the S turned out weak though. - http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8354/mattspics026na1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
As usual, comments are appreciated.

Tryp
09-29-2007, 05:27 PM
dim man, that is smoking. if you got good colorin skills too man, you're golden...nice job.

BORG
09-29-2007, 05:32 PM
sefer- curve it all up, press the letters together, its much easier to get flow that way, but you may have to work ur letters a bit more, the s isn't that bad, the e is way worse, just keep sketchin and workin hard and u will prob get shit down pretty easy

nem- love all letter except fot the b, it just doesn't do it for me

dimr- nice, ur deff progressin, not feelin most of the extensions, but those letters are lookin good

sefer
09-29-2007, 05:35 PM
BORG, can you explain what you mean by curve it all up??

Nem
09-29-2007, 05:36 PM
nem- love all letter except fot the b, it just doesn't do it for me


on which sketch?

BORG
09-29-2007, 05:37 PM
like in your letters, they've got kinks every where, this is where u put 2 bars together, round them areas out, the e is a good example

^^nem- i was talkin bout the throwie

sefer
09-29-2007, 05:59 PM
Here's another one, it's a Hollow with no 3-d, http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4355/mattspics027fl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits plz

AnteUp
09-29-2007, 06:00 PM
same size bars...thats all

as in, thickness, dont change the thickness in the same bars,

sefer
09-29-2007, 06:03 PM
I always have that problem... Unless I take a ruler to check every damn letter, anyone have some tips to remedy this??

AnteUp
09-29-2007, 06:16 PM
jus use a ruler, its fine to do until ur good at bars

sefer
09-29-2007, 06:19 PM
Any other advice?? Thx BTW

AnteUp
09-29-2007, 06:22 PM
make them on the same line and not up and down up and down, dont do pen freestyles yet, get good wit a pencil, haha time for someone elses advice

BORG
09-29-2007, 06:23 PM
u could do what alot of people do and go by eye, or u could use your pencil/pen tip to size it up, good luck

sefer
09-29-2007, 06:26 PM
Thx, I'll have a (Hopefully) better one up soon.

Nem
09-29-2007, 06:36 PM
how about this B?

any suggestions for a B?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/newb.jpg

whahappen?
09-29-2007, 06:55 PM
how about this B?

any suggestions for a B?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/newb.jpg
it looks fine like that, but you take your c and put a dots in the top and bottom parts then take out like the right middle indent where it goes down then forms the bottom

Nem
09-29-2007, 07:01 PM
ahhhh. what?

do it in paint or something. im terrible at visualizing that.

BORG
09-29-2007, 07:02 PM
nem- that b is better, i would take the lil extension on the upper part of the b of, and leave it as a simple b, would flow much nicer and close up that little gap between the a and b

sefer
09-29-2007, 07:07 PM
Here's another one, With 3-D and a cool forcefield ^.^ http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/7963/mattspics028np0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

IlikePie
09-29-2007, 07:11 PM
Your O and V need a lot of attention. Try and smooth out the edged a bit too and try to keep all the letters the same width. Oh, and your 3D is really off, try to keep all your lines going in the same angle bud.

=INTRO=
09-29-2007, 07:17 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2248/hpim0640nf4.jpg
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5930/hpim0645ma4.jpg
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/2796/hpim0642oc8.jpg


Can I get some crits on these? Looking for a new throwie. Anyone I should put some effort into developing?

kuso
09-29-2007, 07:54 PM
bored in school
http://i20.tinypic.com/316s1gz.jpg
http://i21.tinypic.com/2afc488.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/2hqqu7t.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/2ibi0yf.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/21dpw6b.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/5n6te0.jpg
http://i20.tinypic.com/n2litu.jpg
http://i22.tinypic.com/2rfc0pc.jpg

whahappen?
09-29-2007, 08:16 PM
ahhhh. what?

do it in paint or something. im terrible at visualizing that.
yea looks stupid forget i even mentioned it
but example anyways
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1423/dzsfffffffffffflm5.png

whahappen?
09-29-2007, 08:21 PM
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4837/picture196ix6.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6881/picture197ya8.jpg
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9370/picture195az9.jpg
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1013/picture193yx4.jpg
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/3897/picture192ev0.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/883/picture182sg0.jpg
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/4639/picture180zo0.jpg
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8350/picture178ni2.jpg
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/48/picture179nw4.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2164/picture021tk8.jpg
hahahahhaahahahah EURoStYlE GaIz
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/1121/hahahahharb1.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6927/picture019nd1.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9433/picture018xp9.jpg
hahahahahahhaha that shit is from like 6th grade^ lulzorango
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5111/picture017yg3.jpg
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1607/epicwinav8.jpg
like a month ago
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5266/picture007cx3.jpg
omgz first throw evar
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9321/amarthrowck5.jpg
ha
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/8827/picture172fh4.jpg
hahahaahh idk why the fuck this is on my image shack...
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9990/meeeeeeeeehahann2.png

whahappen?
09-29-2007, 08:21 PM
2 months?
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/488/picture168jpgjb2.jpg
bahahah
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3959/pokecardfo6.jpg
idk what this is either...
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1582/igottehcakefd2.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1065/picture006fm6.jpg
lolzor-coaster
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2491/picture073vn7.jpg
some exchange on MS paint or some shit ha
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9352/5ythv7.jpg
hahah
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3548/picture015db3.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3982/sssssssssssji3.png
omg i get up?!??!
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5688/picture012lg6.jpg

kuso
09-29-2007, 08:24 PM
^ wtf

MAST
09-29-2007, 08:40 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/omni-2.jpg
not done

Writers
09-29-2007, 09:19 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9890/1004078hi4.jpg

heres a simple i did tell me what u think

Nem
09-29-2007, 09:23 PM
shitshitshit
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/tthrow.jpg

shit....shitshit.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/shit.jpg

...kind of a bigel jock. a tiny bit. =[

Writers
09-29-2007, 10:16 PM
yo scab i think that u should make you lines go through your letters it just make it look like u messed up and a tip for your handstyle dont make you letters pointy let them flow just copy the letters from your key board and modify those

heres a throwie i did tell me what u think....
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8576/1004079mm2.jpg

Nem
09-29-2007, 11:11 PM
i think your last letter could use a little bit of shaping. other than that i like them. 'specially the S.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors-1.jpg

skoe
09-29-2007, 11:24 PM
i like the fill in the b and c

Writers
09-29-2007, 11:32 PM
i think your last letter could use a little bit of shaping. other than that i like them. 'specially the S.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors-1.jpg

yea i realized that too but i fellt to lazy to redo the throwie agian and i like the color on your C

Citizin
09-30-2007, 01:13 AM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7964/euphoabnshcuy4.jpg

Got kind of cut off but I didn't want to scan it again. I'm happy with the EU and O but I dont like the PH.

silentchaos14
09-30-2007, 02:07 AM
looks pretty sick, the E is wierd though. it looks like its missin the middle part

-ShAmEE-
09-30-2007, 07:32 AM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7964/euphoabnshcuy4.jpg

Got kind of cut off but I didn't want to scan it again. I'm happy with the EU and O but I dont like the PH.

try not to over lap ur letters. and try not to go too crazy with ur letters. if that is ment to a E it looks like a C, well that what i thought it was until i read what u typed. so try to keep it simple.

South-Pole
09-30-2007, 08:41 AM
blue steel-stuff looks mad dope,feeling the letters like the colouring
pills-needs some work
bawkster-looks coool
ninja-first letter:try making your first bar the same size as your second one
second letter-erase it
third letter-loooks ok but take off those arrows,and try making your bars the same size

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA41367.jpg

bla bla,,crits


BUMP?

sefer
09-30-2007, 08:54 AM
South-pole- the L looks weird with that extension, other than that it's pretty good.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/125/mattspics029nm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits plz.
Edit: Didn't realize it was so light...

dim
09-30-2007, 09:02 AM
thats sick bawk keep it up
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0377.jpg
new peice crits please
bumping this on

sefer
09-30-2007, 09:03 AM
I think it looks awsome DIM, but what do I know...

sex without condoms
09-30-2007, 11:13 AM
dont spend all those colors on your pieces, you need to get some letters down first.

possible name change idk, throwies. and yes, i know the pictures were taken in my bathroom.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00160.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00159.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00158.jpg

Citizin
09-30-2007, 11:22 AM
Think that's the first time I got positive feedback..thanks.
I really like that first and third throw style btw..flowy.

pez ss
09-30-2007, 12:05 PM
thats sick bawk keep it up
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0377.jpg
new peice crits please this sik dim just make ur d a little skinner cause its wider then the other letters

sefer
09-30-2007, 12:11 PM
Everyones stuff is looking really good, anyway here's a new one http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9567/mattspics030gc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits are welcome.

blue.steel
09-30-2007, 01:03 PM
^^^^ look at the bars u used
they go from big to small, focus on keeping them all the same size.
so iam not picless vvvv

http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/28802/2005605775619613909_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005605775619613909)

MAST
09-30-2007, 01:29 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/omni-2.jpg
not done

crits?

Oaklander
09-30-2007, 02:19 PM
Mast I know that you want to put a lot of connections in your pieces but you can't, not yet anyway. Make your pieces simple and master the basics.

I thought the colors were dope when I picked them but I put them on wrong. Here:

http://i23.tinypic.com/nbezj7.jpg

Writers
09-30-2007, 03:38 PM
Mast I know that you want to put a lot of connections in your pieces but you can't, not yet anyway. Make your pieces simple and master the basics.

I thought the colors were dope when I picked them but I put them on wrong. Here:

http://i23.tinypic.com/nbezj7.jpg
welll u need to bring the leeters closer, Fix ur R and keep the colors simple and practice practice practice:D

thesilentvandal
09-30-2007, 05:43 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsesketch1.jpg

giganticCrane
09-30-2007, 05:46 PM
silentvandal, that shit is dope. i like it

Bon3s
09-30-2007, 06:47 PM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6685/82860257hh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump for crits

thesilentvandal
09-30-2007, 06:48 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011892.jpg

Bon3s
09-30-2007, 06:51 PM
tyhats look hot, nice simples.dim: those letters are fuckin SICK bro, the m and i look sweeeet.sex without condoms: i like the last one bestmast: I like it, but its very complicated. is there any way maybe you could color it with a few different colors to bring oput certain lines more?

AnteUp
09-30-2007, 07:32 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsesketch1.jpg

this shit is tight, keep it up

Licossa
09-30-2007, 07:34 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011892.jpg
I like this a lot, make the left bar on your n shorter though

silentchaos14
09-30-2007, 07:38 PM
Dawsek-that extension on the D isnt round enough. it dont match the roundness of the rest of the sketch
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/DawExchange.jpg
exchange with daws
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Zen3-D.jpg
some 3-d shit.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensPencil.jpg
some pencil shit just for ante.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensOutlined.jpg
after outline and 3-d fill.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSketch.jpg
sketch filled with oil pastels lol
crits?

Bomber444
09-30-2007, 07:42 PM
fill with regular markers. looks like a child drew it

Mace
09-30-2007, 07:42 PM
zens gud stuff keepin it simple try not to put those wavy lines in they take away from it. i know u want to progress but stayin simple until u hav it down is the best way to go

heres a simple from me
im so poor i do ghetto fills with my markers

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/acmesimple.jpg

Bon3s
09-30-2007, 07:53 PM
i like it mace. just try and get a pic with a better fill.zens: try and use markers man, it looks like a crayon on cardboard haha.

dim
09-30-2007, 07:55 PM
mace the m is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to streched out and loose the bit on the left side of the m but keep it up cause u got good flow

popshots
09-30-2007, 08:00 PM
defacer: work on the letters a lot more... practice fills later
thesilentvandal: good stuff
zens:are you morne? if so then why do u do straight letters evrytime? experiment and try diffrent things otherwise youll never progress

popshots
09-30-2007, 08:13 PM
put the letters closer together make the letters the same size and jus keep worken on it

Mace
09-30-2007, 08:40 PM
zens gud stuff keepin it simple try not to put those wavy lines in they take away from it. i know u want to progress but stayin simple until u hav it down is the best way to go

heres a simple from me
im so poor i do ghetto fills with my markers

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/acmesimple.jpg

bump for crits

dim
09-30-2007, 09:12 PM
daws dope shit man for real we should exchange sometime pm me when ur down or if ur down
mace check ur pm's man lol

HoodRichSucka
09-30-2007, 09:47 PM
the AM blue throw is cool. but loose the drips IMO.
-d

Citizin
09-30-2007, 09:50 PM
Complete randomness..After I did the eupho at the bottom I just decided to cover the whole page..
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/179/picturecp2.jpg

Nem
09-30-2007, 10:05 PM
citizin, clean it up and space out your letters. make them equal size.

anom, they're gettin better, keep sketchin more and more, tweak em a lil bit each time.

mace, clean that shit up. spend some time on the fill.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nastybars.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/evil.jpg

you dont know me
09-30-2007, 10:32 PM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2754/picture135nu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


For Crits.

tell me what i can fix, its a new name, and new style for me

Goze

Nem
09-30-2007, 10:39 PM
make all your letters straight up and down for now, like, not tilting forward or back. and make the lines inside of your E and O straight instead of those little ) lookin things. add a dropshadow maybe.

sex without condoms
09-30-2007, 10:43 PM
dont spend all those colors on your pieces, you need to get some letters down first.

possible name change idk, throwies. and yes, i know the pictures were taken in my bathroom.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00160.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00159.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00158.jpg
bumping for slutwork.

in_the_red
09-30-2007, 11:45 PM
Hidden Teknique, use bars.

Nem, make your letters fatter.

you don't know me, make your letters all the same size. I'd also spend more time on letter structure and less on colouring the letters in.

Roolete
10-01-2007, 12:03 AM
i love the first one...want to exchange?

or at least screw?

Scare2
10-01-2007, 12:14 AM
dawse. the purple simple is reallly tight. i like it more then the other one but their both dope

silent chaos stop making all ur letters Exactly the same hight. and dont use lower case letters. they only look good when done well or at certain times. the fill isnt working either. solid fills look better
on your 3D zen letters. study what it says in new to graff about 3D. but the reason it doesnt look right on youre Z and E. is because you have to mimic the lines of youre letter. just moved in a certain direction.
i was gonna write it out but i decided to just draw it.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/tutuorila.jpg

^its pretty confusing and hard to read. but try and see how the 3d Works on other peoples letters and aply that to yours. some time itll click. but think of it as shadow and then connect each corner to its coresponding corner on the shadow. amk does a nice tutorial in the new to graff thread.


mace it would look better without a fill.

anom the first three arent working. the rest are. really. just keep doing youre simples (their really good) and you will naturally progress into more complex shit.

citizen go allot simpler none of its working. just practice practice practice. and start with really simple stuff like anom.

scab still dude go simpler. and the handstyle isnt working for me. the blended fill didnt work but i do like the purple background effect.

goze it looks like a throw but it doesnt have the proper style and flow of a throw. id say work on piecing a little bit with some strieght letters and then develop more bubly throwie things. the fill worked nicely tho. it looks good and is interesting but it doesnt distract from the piece at all.

sex i like the first E and the bottom E and R. work on the Ss though. its an original idea you have with the bottom two. but i dont like the way it flows right now. maybee tweak it a little. its nice to see a fresh letter in a throw though. it worked best in the third. one. id say use the third one it looks pretty dope.


new

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/eastgreen.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/eastlalalala.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/S.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/W.jpg

BORG
10-01-2007, 06:36 AM
scare- looks good for the most part, but what the fuck do you write??? u do random letters, east, scare, i'm fuckin confused, pick a name and drop the rest of the bullshit

new slap
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/731/scan0001hn6.jpg

waihin
10-01-2007, 07:41 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/Taskinilluzion/Photo1.jpg
waidimar

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/Taskinilluzion/Photo5.jpg
wai

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/Taskinilluzion/Photo6.jpg
wai


crits? i'm not too awesome at this stuff, what should i work on? flow? lettering? thanks boys and girls

kuso
10-01-2007, 11:21 AM
bored in school
http://i20.tinypic.com/316s1gz.jpg
http://i21.tinypic.com/2afc488.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/2hqqu7t.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/2ibi0yf.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/21dpw6b.jpg
http://i24.tinypic.com/5n6te0.jpg
http://i20.tinypic.com/n2litu.jpg
http://i22.tinypic.com/2rfc0pc.jpg

feedback?

mum
10-01-2007, 11:25 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture022.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture019.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture020.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture021.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture018.jpg

mum
10-01-2007, 11:32 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture002.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture003.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture004.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture005.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture010.jpg
few oldies

amk
10-01-2007, 12:37 PM
Mum....from Yorkshire eh ?...ahah i liver near yoouuuuuuuuu.....
not bad not bad...just that all your letters are exactly the same almost...use bars to make your letters aswell..

cile...i second that..and damn that sticker is hort

im sorry i havent bene able to post anything for awhile as iv had other shit on my mind...so here is an quicke..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fnbdrt.jpg

dancin ' letters

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 12:53 PM
AmkAHHHHH my main man.
pretty fly...
only thing I'd suggest is to fatten up yo letters, I just want to see how that'd look. nahhmean. ahhaahh. good shit Amk

Sumoe
10-01-2007, 02:46 PM
All you homos yip-yappin' in this thread need to chill, post up and shut the fuck up.

LOL

enigmatic
10-01-2007, 02:52 PM
defacer squish the letters closer together.

pen freestyles from class. randon words. 80's letters.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-01-07_1533.jpg

-ShAmEE-
10-01-2007, 03:06 PM
reali likin that P. hot stuff. and that B. nice simples.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/u.jpg
letter U

Bazer
10-01-2007, 04:31 PM
shamee i sure wish you would do more whole pieces.................

heres some random shit....

simples from this morning....
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1055.jpg


handyrawk
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1056.jpg

outline for yet another steelo...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1057.jpg

ze.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1058.jpg

i did this one 2 months ago but i just found it..... in my desk -_-.......
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1059.jpg

zek outline...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1062.jpg
buncha zeeees.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1063.jpg
and an old as okizoo outline i niver complteted... >_>
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/sefsdfs.jpg

the pics r small cuz my phone had low memory. =|




:)
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/untitled-10.jpg

pez ss
10-01-2007, 04:35 PM
shame make the bottem right extention thicker
amk freash as hell color that with a nice fill or sumthing
sex cik throws
heres some of my stuff http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/piecewitheyes.jpghttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/pinkpurplepiece.jpghttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/pinkfullpagecaracter.jpg can i get some crits on these?

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 04:58 PM
scare - its always the same :S
borg - pm me, lets do a stiker pack exchange ?
waihin - SIMPLES PLZ !
ark- continue this way
mum- thats sick , but, its always the same thing? try sometihng different sometimes in a while
amk- there is too much left over space on the sketch, except of that, its got good flow and everything. the little clouds kinda kill it tho.
enigmatic - nice simples ( kinda)
Shamee - is that an U? if it is i kinda like it.
bazer- thats sick keep it up
pezzss - simples, thank you





http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011897.jpg

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 05:01 PM
More throwies/handsteezes
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071712a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071712.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711a.jpg
^ugly
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711.jpg

Citizin
10-01-2007, 05:03 PM
Still love that style..especially if it was a clean throw. It'd be sick as fuck,

HadeP
10-01-2007, 05:59 PM
amk, no beef, theres just something i dont like about your style,no beef or disrespect.
bazer - always a fan
cile - dope dope dope
havent posted ina while, just soem shit ive been doin, lemme know what you think.
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer3.jpg
new steez ive been playing with^^
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer4.jpg
oldish new
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer.jpg
newish
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lcharac2.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lcharac1.jpg
sorry for badish quality, used my phone,

AyteYourCookies
10-01-2007, 06:39 PM
strait out tha dungeons of rap, where fake nukkas dont make it back

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture336.jpg

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 07:05 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011898.jpg

AyteYourCookies
10-01-2007, 07:16 PM
strait out tha dungeons of rap, where fake nukkas dont make it back

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture336.jpg
ok im gunna give some crits so i get some.

wahen- do some real letters.
ark -make your letters bigger so their not as mooshed.
amk - i really liked your old style like that havok peice
bazer -freshnesssssss
kovr - noiceee throws
daws - lookin noice your progessing everytime.


crits on my peicE?

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 07:27 PM
thats a pretty killer sketch Ayte.

HadeP
10-01-2007, 07:33 PM
yo dawsek all your letters look exactly the same pretty much
ayte - pink and pink is dope, but pink and light blue is doper ;)
good piece tho, nice structure and no random extentions. maybe work on fills and crazy shit like that.
crits on my stuff please.

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 07:36 PM
okay.... soooo....

they flow real well.
props Daws

IwriteNASR
10-01-2007, 07:37 PM
daws- looks good
ayte- like the letters but the t and e are too big
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9859/bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbm5.jpg
idk just fuckin around wit this style

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 07:38 PM
yo dawsek all your letters look exactly the same pretty much
ayte - pink and pink is dope, but pink and light blue is doper ;)
good piece tho, nice structure and no random extentions. maybe work on fills and crazy shit like that.

they got good flow, yours dont, so stop masterbating infront of my shit, and go sketch some more and learn simples before you say something about someone who could kil lyou any day in simples. kthxbai :)

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 07:42 PM
but he has a point.
all your shit does look basically the same.

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 07:49 PM
your shit also always look the same, and its not even a joke :S

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 07:49 PM
sex. I want you... I CAN'T CONTROL MY FEELINGS ANYMORE


edit sorry heres a quickie flickieeee:
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/710/img1926mk1.jpg

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 07:51 PM
your shit also always look the same, and its not even a joke :S

yeah but i've never bitten so it's ok

enigmatic
10-01-2007, 07:52 PM
ayte thats goodyour on the right track.

naser thats okay. dont photoshop sketches.

amkah its like similar to the stuff youve been doing for months. paint.

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4818/1001072035bb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


colored sketch some style as those outlines.

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 07:54 PM
Enigmatic, its confusing to read, but I think if you just made the outlining cover each part of the letters it would look better.

sex I don't think you heard me. I... want... you...

IwriteNASR
10-01-2007, 07:56 PM
enigmatic i didnt photoshop and i agree wit dizzle very confusing

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 07:57 PM
yeah but i've never bitten so it's ok

haha, you have so muych real life haters, so you just come on here and make your king? wow, you must so much be a little bitch in real life, you got 1 style while i have like 4-5 of them maybe even more, anyways, return to jacking off to my shit, if you want to, il make your name in my letters, you could jack off a bit more. happy now bitch?

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 08:00 PM
why.
i hate all your work.
and i dont even get ups. i dont want to.
id ratherkeep sketching and progress my shit on my own until i feel im ready.
and id rather have 1 solid style than 4 that are bitten and 1 thats not.

silentchaos14
10-01-2007, 08:01 PM
alright im officially siding with silent. sex yur an idiot, he has like 3 styles that are dope and one that isnt so great (the one that uve been posting). it dont even look like a bastardo bite anymore so u cant even argue that.

popshots
10-01-2007, 08:02 PM
thesilentvandal: you sound like a dumbass
dizzle d: good stuff lets see it colored

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 08:04 PM
alright im officially siding with silent. sex yur an idiot, he has like 3 styles that are dope and one that isnt so great (the one that uve been posting). it dont even look like a bastardo bite anymore so u cant even argue that.

thats exactly what i said.

all of his styles are bitten/80% based on bastardo's exchange with him.
only the style that he has been posting/did before the exchange with bastardo is the only original style he has.

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 08:05 PM
Enigmatic, its confusing to read, but I think if you just made the outlining cover each part of the letters it would look better.

sex I don't think you heard me. I... want... you...



<3333
wish myspace shit worked on here:0[

&hearts;

thesilentvandal
10-01-2007, 08:06 PM
ok lets count all my styles :)
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011898.jpg1
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011845.jpg2
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011766.jpg3
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsek.jpg 4
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011696.jpg5
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/HaistaireEurau3.jpg 6


6 styles, what you got 1 ? so stfu and go sketch

paste
10-01-2007, 08:07 PM
Ayte- Like the fill, the letters arent too bad either, not too fond of the a though.
Dizzle_D- Pretty sweet, not a huge fan of that style, but to my untrained eye it looks alright.
Enigmatic- Visually confusing, I dont know what else to say really.
Daws- Great, you have a couple of alright styles, doesnt give you the right to talk all that shit. Shut the fuck up and get over yourself. Seriously.

popshots
10-01-2007, 08:07 PM
i side with sex.... we should all have a side battle... jus a suggestion
nasr: bottom of the a bar doesnt goe with the extencion
egnimatic: cool fill weird letters jus keep worken at it

dizzle_d
10-01-2007, 08:08 PM
haha &hearts;; right back atchaaaa sex XD


Damn Daws you have many styles :)

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 08:12 PM
thank you for this fucking post.

oh my god.
see why the hell dont you progress your ill shit.
2 and 4th style rock so hard.
and why didnt you post up your other styles?
oh right cause they were all bastardo chomps.
and i do have more than 1 style.
id just rather have 1 thats good.
but w.e you do your gay thing.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00139.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010021-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010189.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010220.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010238.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010236.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010235.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010234.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010233.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/gogogo.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/myknew.jpg

redxdrum
10-01-2007, 08:22 PM
u guys should.
sex- u killin it.

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture023.jpg
the letters didnt turn out like i wanted but still the basic structure i would like crits on. or advice or just tips

Roolete
10-01-2007, 08:29 PM
jesus christ who the fuck are you? all your doing is spamming the thread more. im on sex's side but i got respect for daws because he gets up and hes like..11? hes movin away from the bites (finally). but seriously hoodrat shut up
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/risk.jpg
ill edit another pic in later

enigmatic
10-01-2007, 08:30 PM
ayte thats goodyour on the right track.

naser thats okay. dont photoshop sketches.

amkah its like similar to the stuff youve been doing for months. paint.

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4818/1001072035bb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


colored sketch some style as those outlines.

bump

popshots
10-01-2007, 08:33 PM
rollete: i wouldnt do the random bumb at the left of the r... thats jus me
esken: gud simples
hoodrat: u got n e flix of your ish???

IwriteNASR
10-01-2007, 08:43 PM
roolete-i agree about the bump on the left of the r
eken- that e on teh other sheet at the bottom of the flik looks better
sex and daws please keep it to the pm's
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4942/ghjab3.jpg
bumping but now its colored shitty

popshots
10-01-2007, 08:47 PM
theres a few things here and there but overall its decent

thawbrkone
10-01-2007, 09:12 PM
doesnt have color i cant find that flick
but
gotta love cheech:) http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4241/pict0108ph4.jpg

meetermaid
10-01-2007, 09:20 PM
nasr that n is fucking hotttttt, work on the s and r

brkone i cant read it at all, though i do love cheech wizard.. keep tryin

you dont know me
10-01-2007, 09:38 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2042/picture136ce4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for crits
i tried to take advice, and tweek it a bit, so tell me how i did

GOZE

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 09:43 PM
i wouldn't write goze he's a really famous and talented writer from new jersey.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00163.jpg
just did this i don't really like it cept for the S.

meetermaid
10-01-2007, 09:53 PM
study up, back in the 70s/80 and up to now cheech wizard has been an incredibly influential comic, by vaughn bode. it's like you gotta try out a cheech charac at least once in your graffiti carreer haha

silentchaos14
10-01-2007, 09:55 PM
oh i didnt know that, oh well now i do. that second dude in yur sig has ALOT of fuckin scars.
new pics comin soon

meetermaid
10-01-2007, 10:02 PM
andy warhol :D

sexxx, whatchu writing these days? ser? the first e's beautiful, the s's sweet too.

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 10:05 PM
More throwies/handsteezes
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071712a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071712.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711a.jpg
^ugly
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1001071711.jpg slutting.
and @ meeterrr
im not sure now im on a standstill maybe switching but im not suree

meetermaid
10-01-2007, 10:08 PM
those are throws worth keeping bwoy, you got that bomb steez i love.

yeye thaw it's the shiit.

Nem
10-01-2007, 10:30 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/popopopo.jpg

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 10:33 PM
i wouldn't write goze he's a really famous and talented writer from new jersey.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00163.jpg
just did this i don't really like it cept for the S.

everyone knows im a slut.
new pagism.
scab you need a new B

HadeP
10-01-2007, 10:34 PM
lookin phresh son.

BORG
10-01-2007, 10:37 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/popopopo.jpg


i'm deff feelin this be alot more, i'll do a couple throws for to help u work out that b, keep workin with it though

garbage down tha way
10-01-2007, 10:39 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/overthrowz.jpg

Nem- Start your throwies off more simpler. None of them bubbles coming off like on either side of the s... just make it so people can read it. that says scab right?

sexwithoutcondoms- most of your throwz look so dope, im just not really feelin the S in the sers though. handstyle is ill though.

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 10:40 PM
thankies.
id put a line in your E for a lil more pizzaz and with your R try a capital instead, they tend to look better.

HadeP
10-01-2007, 10:41 PM
bow chika wow wow
yo those axe commercials are so dope.

HadeP
10-01-2007, 10:43 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/overthrowz.jpg

Nem- Start your throwies off more simpler. None of them bubbles coming off like on either side of the s... just make it so people can read it. that says scab right?

sexwithoutcondoms- most of your throwz look so dope, im just not really feelin the S in the sers though. handstyle is ill though.

feelin it mann,
just that handstyles a little messy, do the handstyle then the extentionn so it fits nicely :)

Nem
10-01-2007, 10:52 PM
eh?
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/vbnm.jpg

Naysayer
10-01-2007, 10:58 PM
scab- I do like that I can read your throw but something is weird about it. Try doing it faster maybe?

I already put this in the toy throwie thread but this thread gets a lot more action and everyone is posting their throws in here anyways. This is what I got...

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/krobthrowie.jpg

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 11:00 PM
no no nooo
this is with a mousepad so sorry its sooo shitty
here borrow this.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/scabber.jpg
the B on the second one looks mad shitty with my A, sorry
:0(

Naysayer
10-01-2007, 11:01 PM
no no nooo
this is with a mousepad so sorry its sooo shitty
here borrow this.
[IMGhotobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/scabber.jpg[/IMG]
the B on the second one looks mad shitty with my A, sorry
:0(

meng you got mouse skillz. haha especially the 3d.

BORG
10-01-2007, 11:04 PM
eh?
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/vbnm.jpg
^^^that b resembles a 6, i like the simpler b alot more, if you take the rest of your letters and make them simpler it'd look alot better with the simpler b

naysayer- nice starting simple, push all the letters together,i dont like gaps in throwies, and work them so they look better and still flow

sex without condoms
10-01-2007, 11:04 PM
Nem that B on top and bottom are so generic it's impossible to bite it.
go for it, pop its cherry.

Nem
10-01-2007, 11:23 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/simp2.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/simp.jpg

pretty much a sex bite

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/sexbite.jpg

Naysayer
10-02-2007, 01:03 AM
Ok so one of my friends told this girl that I had painted her name in my abandoned house. She wanted to see it and now she wants me to do another one cuz I told her that the one I did was not very good. Well her name is amanda and I dont really have any more walls big enough that I havent hit. So I was going to do this in this awkward triangular spot. so here is what I came up with. I am painting it tomorrow. I forgot there is a little circular window tho so we will see what happens with that...

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1001071437.jpg
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/amanda2.jpg
I hope this works...

Naysayer
10-02-2007, 01:10 AM
I might have to do a new sketch I am thinking

librelikespie
10-02-2007, 02:00 AM
shit did it work? http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img002.jpg

iWuzOnce
10-02-2007, 02:39 AM
Ok so one of my friends told this girl that I had painted her name in my abandoned house. She wanted to see it and now she wants me to do another one cuz I told her that the one I did was not very good. Well her name is amanda and I dont really have any more walls big enough that I havent hit. So I was going to do this in this awkward triangular spot. so here is what I came up with. I am painting it tomorrow. I forgot there is a little circular window tho so we will see what happens with that..

Honestly you're askin to get booked... if you keep going back to the same place and everyone is talkin... you needa find somewhere else and tell no one. that's about it. Cos sooner or later if you keep doin that it'll catch up to you. Not good.

Jet
10-02-2007, 09:23 AM
shit did it work? http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img002.jpg


no, the fill is shit.

Naysayer
10-02-2007, 10:37 AM
that karak is allright. your letters are pretty whack tho.

dizzle_d
10-02-2007, 11:29 AM
word up to that.^

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/710/img1926mk1.jpg
crits

p.s. sex I still want you.

-ShAmEE-
10-02-2007, 11:54 AM
letters around more., means so straight points. curve them points.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/c.jpg

HuntingLOLs
10-02-2007, 12:56 PM
alot better than your round style imo

-ShAmEE-
10-02-2007, 01:34 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sec.jpg

i think i killed it with the 3d.

Dusk07
10-02-2007, 02:27 PM
Sick style man^

Workin with super simple letter instead of messin with my other styles, this will be easier to paint this weekend and i need a simple style...
crits? also a knew name kind of...well on here that is.

http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/30939/2000562890229633731_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000562890229633731)

-ShAmEE-
10-02-2007, 02:54 PM
so. they be improtant crits. err. u need to kno ur stucture of ur letters.

Mello
10-02-2007, 03:36 PM
Anon - not bad mate, liking the yellow 1 with purple splat round it

shame - fucking ace, surely you dont need to hang round the toy forum :confused:

Joust - looking pretty solid, try adding some shit to it now.

Havnt done anything for like 3 months and even when i did i wasnt that good, so now im trying to get back into it.

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5333/melo6vn2.jpg

Yea i know the M is shit an the O isnt great heh

thawbrkone
10-02-2007, 04:18 PM
shame like they said i think your above this forum

sKeeLo
10-02-2007, 04:52 PM
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/772/1282892dx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

got one of my bbooks back, this is an oldie . . . 2 below arent me and these guys aint toy

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1179/1282896bm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4581/1282899ut1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shamee - you got alot going on but your basic letter style/structure needs some fine tuning

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 05:18 PM
eh, pencil fill-ins suck
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164.jpg

Game905
10-02-2007, 06:19 PM
simple peicehttp://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4710/rise001ry0.jpg

Game905
10-02-2007, 06:20 PM
word up to that.^

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/710/img1926mk1.jpg
crits

p.s. sex I still want you.


bump bump. clean

whahappen?
10-02-2007, 06:21 PM
shit
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4871/picture199qd9.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3711/picture198xv4.jpg

Nem
10-02-2007, 06:21 PM
i like your structure game, with a little time it'll probably be pretty dope. not really diggin the half tech/half euro fill.

work on your color schemes.

repost of some old shit.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs13-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/Scabs3-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/onelineraction.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/flowy-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/euroscab3-2.jpg

should i try to revert back to any of these now that i have a decent structure?

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 06:30 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00156.jpg

Game905
10-02-2007, 06:33 PM
i like your structure game, with a little time it'll probably be pretty dope. not really diggin the half tech/half euro fill.

work on your color schemes.

repost of some old shit.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs13-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/Scabs3-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/onelineraction.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/flowy-1.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/euroscab3-2.jpg

should i try to revert back to any of these now that i have a decent structure?

need some work on your structure and your style on the second 1

Nem
10-02-2007, 06:34 PM
what do you write?

cause i always try to read your throws and cant. they look really sick though. i love the style you got goin. specially the little coily thing off to the right. XD

kove? kovr? i see an H or something?

Nem
10-02-2007, 06:35 PM
need some work on your structure and your style on the second 1

i know those are shit, but with my structure NOW, im asking if i should reattempt any of those styles.

Game905
10-02-2007, 06:37 PM
i know those are shit, but with my structure NOW, im asking if i should reattempt any of those styles.
i would reattempt the last 1 im liking it

whahappen?
10-02-2007, 06:48 PM
shit
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4871/picture199qd9.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3711/picture198xv4.jpg
new page

HuntingLOLs
10-02-2007, 06:51 PM
like the throw :o

IwriteNASR
10-02-2007, 06:53 PM
scab-dont revert to those just try others
sex- thats sexy love that style
amar- ur throws are allll dope but u should take more time on ur peices it flows nicely but it looks kinda rushed and the first A is a little taller
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/998/ccccc001da8.jpg
fuuuuck school. crits

dizzle_d
10-02-2007, 06:55 PM
Game you be on the right track my dute:cool:

SEX I STILL WANT YOU
plus I really dig your style its lookin so so so so tight. If it was a candy bar I'd totally rack the whole boxxx nahhmean ;)
kthnks.

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 06:55 PM
what do you write?

cause i always try to read your throws and cant. they look really sick though. i love the style you got goin. specially the little coily thing off to the right. XD

kove? kovr? i see an H or something?

well i write kovr
and the OH is in quotes cause i hate the single letter O
so the OH makes the O sound instead of using the letter
ya digg?

Game905
10-02-2007, 06:59 PM
scab-dont revert to those just try others
sex- thats sexy love that style
amar- ur throws are allll dope but u should take more time on ur peices it flows nicely but it looks kinda rushed and the first A is a little taller
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/998/ccccc001da8.jpg
fuuuuck school. crits


dude im loving that style.

Scare2
10-02-2007, 07:12 PM
amar for now keep your bars the same width. but its gettin allot better.

SenTheFirst
10-02-2007, 07:42 PM
rise- colors arent too good
nem- if you have better structure now why would you go backwards?
sex- looks tight
nasr- not bad, right side of a is too big

workin simples
ya i know, the n is fucked sideways

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0561.jpg

thawbrkone
10-02-2007, 07:57 PM
im liken it sen

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 08:04 PM
Sen the extensions on the S and E should kinda match the N.
Also make your N bigger and try putting an extension on the top left of it going to the left or on the right coming off to the right to maybe match the style up a bit more.

hhhhhhh
10-02-2007, 08:08 PM
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture006-1.jpg


silver pen fucking broke so i couldnt finish excuse the big silver blob


crits?

Dusk07
10-02-2007, 08:15 PM
Sick style man^

Workin with super simple letter instead of messin with my other styles, this will be easier to paint this weekend and i need a simple style...
crits? also a knew name kind of...well on here that is.

http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/30939/2000562890229633731_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000562890229633731)
bump for more crits=] extention advice would be much appreciated i have horrible trouble with extentions.

emel
10-02-2007, 08:25 PM
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/772/1282892dx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

got one of my bbooks back, this is an oldie . . . 2 below arent me and these guys aint toy

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1179/1282896bm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4581/1282899ut1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shamee - you got alot going on but your basic letter style/structure needs some fine tuning

fuck yeah relm got upsss roudn these here parts especially on the red line

...AMOK...
10-02-2007, 09:05 PM
whahappen- nice throwie
nasr- that style's sick
sen- i like that S and E

crits?

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok075.jpg

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok077.jpg

HoodRichSucka
10-02-2007, 09:19 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5366/1282890md2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

need some help on this color scheme, its broken into 3 parts yellow/red then greens then soon to be pink/purple . . . but its looking a lil flat so im thinking about adding a lil light green to the inner part of the yellow then adding alil of the pink to the inside of the green then probaly add a yellow to the inner part of the not yet put on pink . . . i think it will help tie eveything together

dajam - remember to use rusto and not krylon for freights . . . id probaly leave out the lil vine things coming off the letters, love watching freights roll thru silver spring


not sure if we cover'd this, but what does it say? excelent work btw.
-d

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 09:21 PM
i see k,u,s,e,m but idk if im missing anything

eMJayBee
10-02-2007, 09:50 PM
sen- very good simples
h- Simples
dusk- build your letters with bars, then start to bend them into a good looking letter
amok- no extensions, just work on the letters
I should have posted my letters, sorry only pic I have of them, but they are the same

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/grasff062.jpg


well here are two drawings I did today, I am planing on doing a production with my only tagging bro in the crew for his dad who died Saturday. So I was wondering which looked better (just the letters, not the character), thanks
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/grasff072.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/grasff073.jpg

sex without condoms
10-02-2007, 09:56 PM
your letters arent good you need to focus on simples and do them.

Scare2
10-02-2007, 10:07 PM
i hope we all know that sky has the dopest style of anyone. anyone..

and in that piece i think that the "u" might be an I. im not sure.

emjay i take it back. your letters are dope as hell. especially that fuckin A. holy shit. just work the can control

finished these

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/eastYO.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Scolor.jpg

bouncingsoul
10-03-2007, 12:33 AM
First decent sketch in weeks. I'm pleased

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1052.jpg

smooth_nuts
10-03-2007, 12:48 AM
bounch i always loved your style(exspecialy your karaks)and that sketch shows why keep it up man

EsKoNeR!!
10-03-2007, 07:31 AM
first decent outline ive done for a while. pretty stoked on it
gunna try to make it a fullpage
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/Photo5.jpg

EsKoNeR!!
10-03-2007, 10:58 AM
i fucked up the fill bad on that. no good

lord patrick
10-03-2007, 11:24 AM
hello everybody, im borrowing pats account to try and get crits
i know im no good but one can only hope for the best

Naysayer
10-03-2007, 11:42 AM
hello everybody, im borrowing pats account to try and get crits
i know im no good but one can only hope for the best

it looks good. but there is someone on this forum thats writes hungr. so you better watch out for that.

huskinator
10-03-2007, 12:07 PM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t158/gilligan21/1003071238.jpg


i need a new name

Mello
10-03-2007, 01:04 PM
hello everybody, im borrowing pats account to try and get crits
i know im no good but one can only hope for the best

yea like Naysayer said, someone here writes hungr =/

husk - lookin good mate, the D is a bit hard to read, but still, flows nicely :)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2630/melo7ma1.jpg

I fucked up the shadow, so theres a shot of it before the shadow too.

Game905
10-03-2007, 02:11 PM
yea like Naysayer said, someone here writes hungr =/

husk - lookin good mate, the D is a bit hard to read, but still, flows nicely :)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2630/melo7ma1.jpg

I fucked up the shadow, so theres a shot of it before the shadow too.

you can see the d fine

Bon3s
10-03-2007, 02:41 PM
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7756/stencilsandchris014ga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us) sketch i did today.. and some other recent ones.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9185/stencilsandchris015qg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7024/stencilsandchris013uf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Code
10-03-2007, 02:50 PM
Bon3- actually my faverite one out of all those sketches is the pen one with the drop shadow, it has decent letter structure, but the H doesent seem to work with the rest of all those letters

Mello- I am in love with your O and the flow is decent but the M to me seems a bit to thick

Bouncing: That is so dope

Esk: Complete and total fire

K here is mine

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1006/scan0002gc7zp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I am still trying to find another letter that can flow the same way i am trying to get it to flow.

brunorod
10-03-2007, 03:03 PM
bouncingsoul- I dig your stile man, great sketch. Just clean it up a bit.
EsKoNeR- Cool sketch dude. Does it say Estu? I can't really read it.
Mello- It's a good start but I'd try to get a better letter structure, try to bend your bars different ways until you find something you like.
huskinator- Good letter structure dude but I don't like the stars and hearts.
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Alright, so I've been working on my letter structure (specially on my Ks) during math class here's one I like:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/PencilK.jpg

Please give crits, I don't care if you say it's bullshit but also tell me how to get better, I wanna improve.