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Code
10-03-2007, 04:11 PM
k, dud since i guess you forgot about me :( i will still give you a crit

First dud i actually would probally like it if it were not at an angle like that, second lose the extensions on the bottom and top of you first bar.

enigmatic
10-03-2007, 05:23 PM
nothing on this page looks super toy at all.

good job everyone whose posted. especiallly bouncing and the guy after him.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-03-07_1709.jpg


says jen. girl. 15 min.

dim
10-03-2007, 05:56 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0410.jpg

exhale
10-03-2007, 06:07 PM
stuck - u looks squished, try not to overlap 3d
enigmatic - maybe make the n 's legs farther apart
bruno - um shorten the top of the k's extension and try not to curve all the extensions?
code - the c and n don't look the same to me. and the c's top extension looks out of place.
bon3s - not feelin the red and yellow one 2nd simple from the first pic.
melo - l's leg seems a bit fat and the o seems like it's trying to get squished in
huskinator - swald? i like it but the s's bottom part seems a bit fat compared to other letters?
ungr - um on the first one the g circle seems out of place and on the second one, the n looks too thin
dimr - i like but it looks shakey? like on the i but maybe that's just the colouring.

thesilentvandal
10-03-2007, 06:30 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011903.jpg

dim
10-03-2007, 06:38 PM
daws everything is good but the top bar on the d is to skinny im not sure if u were trying to go for that or not but over all it looks good

whahappen?
10-03-2007, 06:39 PM
ok lets count all my styles :)
1
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011845.jpg

do this, not the thing you posted

pez ss
10-03-2007, 06:43 PM
shame make the bottem right extention thicker
amk freash as hell color that with a nice fill or sumthing
sex cik throws
heres some of my stuff http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/piecewitheyes.jpghttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/pinkpurplepiece.jpghttp://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/pinkfullpagecaracter.jpg can i get some crits on these?
skelo looking dope ass hell there but i think it would look more like one piece and not like three in a row if u did that same colours but all in one letter with all the letters if u get what im saying
husk looks kinda like graff creator but i could be wrong
BUMPIN FOR SOME CRITS

Demiurge
10-03-2007, 07:07 PM
oh and some grass for a class. weee it ryhmes!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/grass.jpg

Fucking nice.

bouncingsoul
10-03-2007, 07:09 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1053.jpg

Math test today

Sumoe
10-03-2007, 08:07 PM
How the hell?

Killin' shit on a calculator. Good shit.

sex without condoms
10-03-2007, 08:09 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/lpoppo.jpg
fuck dumb sluts.

bouncingsoul
10-03-2007, 08:28 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1054.jpg

From the Ground Up
10-03-2007, 08:37 PM
^^^
pretty damn fresh, i just think that the arrows seem too sharp for the piece (a little outta place)....you should round/square them off a little more, like the arrows you used in your canvas sketch

Fube
10-03-2007, 09:16 PM
sex i love that man. bumps.

Scare2
10-03-2007, 09:23 PM
pez- its lookin pretty nice. get better pics tho.
we all know that chalk is an artistic beast
knews thats one of the coolest things ive ever seen. i didnt even know that was possible.
sex- its a godd change keep it up.
bouncing. i dont like the shape of the top of youre S. its not defined enough for my tastes. but otherwise its reall fresh.


bump



http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/eastYO.jpg

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/Scolor.jpg

speak1er
10-03-2007, 09:36 PM
crits??

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/speakaa/IMG_0564.jpg

T O K E
10-03-2007, 09:43 PM
crits??

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/speakaa/IMG_0564.jpg

arrows are gay

BORG
10-03-2007, 09:48 PM
speak- the letters need work, thry and do them all the same size for now, extensions are gay, not feelin the colorscheme. 3d really throws the piece off- just use a certain length, not ongoin 3d

keep workin on it though

props to esk, knews, and sex w/o kittens

dizzle_d
10-03-2007, 09:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/lpoppo.jpg
fuck dumb sluts.

FCUING BUMppppppppPPPppPP SEX I LOVE YOU

hungr
10-03-2007, 10:36 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00002-1.jpg

popshots
10-03-2007, 10:40 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1369/nerm32wn8.jpg
crits......
sex: cool new style
speaker: go simple
east: i dont like the arrow at the bottom of the a
knews: dope as usual

Bazer
10-03-2007, 10:51 PM
sex without bazer. i like the old steez better. this new one is to blobby.... and i just read something about some dude having six styles... i got 17 niggggaaaaaaaaaaa!!!............

IlikePie
10-03-2007, 11:04 PM
You count?

Scare2
10-03-2007, 11:39 PM
word to that pie.

you dont know me
10-04-2007, 12:01 AM
isnt that "eat pussy" thing, on a mcdonalds? i could almost swear i saw that thing on a mcDs in like Lloyd.

the end
10-04-2007, 12:39 AM
heres some pen sketch i did a few days ago
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/705/hbkpenbb4.jpg

Naysayer
10-04-2007, 01:40 AM
shit. you couldnt find a marker to do that fill? haha

the end
10-04-2007, 03:21 AM
lol, well i did it all in pen and there was some fuck up lines along the way so i just filled it in, looks pretty bad, but the letters are decent i think.

we had a movie today in class so i made this
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4927/marcie103ag7.jpg

...AMOK...
10-04-2007, 03:43 AM
speak- calm down w/ those arrows and i'm not feelin the continuous 3-d
hungr- that's clean as fuck so sick

thought i'd just mess around and got this
crits

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok086.jpg

Bazer
10-04-2007, 07:11 AM
amok. you gotta start of a little more simple buddy.

popshots
10-04-2007, 07:47 AM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1369/nerm32wn8.jpg
crits......
sex: cool new style
speaker: go simple
east: i dont like the arrow at the bottom of the a
knews: dope as usual
bu,p for mcrittels
amok: go simpler

Attican
10-04-2007, 09:24 AM
Amok- that's sick, but its busy. It would look a lot better without the green symbols...

Another tip: your stuff will look a lot cleaner if you have more contrast between the outline and fill.

bountyhunter113
10-04-2007, 11:06 AM
Amok-everything about it's bad, the color, the letters...........the stupid add-ons
popshots-ur 3d trails need to b much longer......but imo jus lose em and lose those weird arrow extensions or w/e n work on some of ur letters more, but some of em look good
the end- not much to say bout that, keep doing ya thang

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/sketch1.png
^that's a messed up variation of this char i drew before:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/doodle1.png

messin around wif my handie:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/handie1.png
CnC?

Bon3s
10-04-2007, 11:44 AM
sex without condopms you're shit is fuckin DOPE!

pez ss
10-04-2007, 01:37 PM
sex with out condoms that new piece is fucking dope as hell

Code
10-04-2007, 02:42 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1006/scan0002gc7zp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I am still trying to find another letter that can flow the same way i am trying to get it to flow.

Bump..it says CA

Bounty- Lovin the characters not feelin the handies tho

Popshot- I dont know why i just dont seem to like it to many things going on in the piece, maybe take out some extensions for you can actually see the letters a bit.

Amok- Go simpler and work on 3d alot buddy

The End: not feelin the whole connection on the bottom of the letters and how its wavy and shit, but over all letter structure is good :)

Hungr- dope shit dud

pez ss
10-04-2007, 02:45 PM
i need a camra http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/2.jpg
sketch u definity have some potential just chill on evey thing for a bit like with the fill and arrows and stuff
amok same for u. ur problem is u do all these wierd jaged thins to ur out like ur letter sizing isnt bad but i need to jst go simleer then start moving around bars so thay have shap then ad extentions and all that other steam.

i want to colour this in today but i dont whant to put a final out line on it tell i think its pefect . crits

whahappen?
10-04-2007, 03:01 PM
Amok-everything about it's bad, the color, the letters...........the stupid add-ons
popshots-ur 3d trails need to b much longer......but imo jus lose em and lose those weird arrow extensions or w/e n work on some of ur letters more, but some of em look good
the end- not much to say bout that, keep doing ya thang

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/sketch1.png
^that's a messed up variation of this char i drew before:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/doodle1.png

messin around wif my handie:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/handie1.png
CnC?
sup mike jacobson

NAIK_SHOES
10-04-2007, 04:12 PM
I KNOW ITS NOT CLEAN...
just try new letters...
COMMENTS PLEASE...:)
http://aycu23.webshots.com/image/28982/2003084152095939862_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003084152095939862)

Mello
10-04-2007, 04:18 PM
Pez - liking the E mate

Code - the C is real nice, the A needs a bit of work though

mike jacobson - charak at the top looks good, lower down doesnt look as good heh

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/1127/melo8jt8.jpg
I hate M's _

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4346/melo9oz1.jpg
meh, just some block stuff

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-04-2007, 04:29 PM
http://a970.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/4/l_2bf66e4f2e686955f1f95b6c9e573019.jpg
crits. :/

Bon3s
10-04-2007, 04:53 PM
melo: second ones clean. reminds me of the adidas kinda lettering but squared off. i like it.trance: i like it. not so sure about the backghround though....lol

Stonk
10-04-2007, 05:22 PM
yeah melo i like that second one.. would be a good roller.

Mike jacobson haha im really feeling those characs. nice stuff.

aga i like it i think....i like the one on the right more.

haven't posted anything in a while, fuck im never happy with anything i get done.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc00384441.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc00385943.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc0038884e.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc001db38d.jpg

sacwacko
10-04-2007, 05:32 PM
i like all that tike....the simple is nice and clean.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/Untitled-1-1.jpg
dfians....
critssssssssss!@#$%^&*

IlikePie
10-04-2007, 05:34 PM
I like the last one, angry beavers rock.

silentchaos14
10-04-2007, 05:48 PM
lose those dumb ass hearts on the bottoms, both of you. theyre played and look gay

bountyhunter113
10-04-2007, 05:55 PM
oh my gawd, how did u guys find out wut my name is???

sackwacko-again..........u''ve got bad 3d trails too, letters aint the best, but keep at it
tike- angry beavers rule........omg y do ppl do that dam heart thingie???? i curse mark ecko and any other writer that uses it too
melio-lovin dat 2nd simple
aga-dat's kewl
code- i uno try a "z" or a "j", it alrdy doesnt flow co zthe "C" n "A" dont look like they go together

wahappen-ur a bastard............u did the same thing last time i posted dat

damnit chaos u beat me to it

workin on some new stuff, dat stuff i posted was pretty old

Mello
10-04-2007, 06:11 PM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/1127/melo8jt8.jpg
bump, what you people think of this one?

Tike - the K and the E in the middle 2 are fucking tight

Dfianz - nice mate, just sort the the Z a bit i reckon

pez ss
10-04-2007, 06:39 PM
i need a camra http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/2.jpg
sketch u definity have some potential just chill on evey thing for a bit like with the fill and arrows and stuff
amok same for u. ur problem is u do all these wierd jaged thins to ur out like ur letter sizing isnt bad but i need to jst go simleer then start moving around bars so thay have shap then ad extentions and all that other steam.

i want to colour this in today but i dont whant to put a final out line on it tell i think its pefect . crits
melo the block stuff is good the first o is a little wide
dafinz dot overlap ur letters so much and keep em the same size and dont do that heart thing

BUMPIN FOR CRITSSSSS!!!!!!!!

NAIK_SHOES
10-04-2007, 06:51 PM
I KNOW ITS NOT CLEAN...
just try new letters...
COMMENTS PLEASE...:)
http://aycu23.webshots.com/image/28982/2003084152095939862_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003084152095939862)


what do i have to do for a comments

Sick!
10-04-2007, 07:19 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/80000000930d689/1/19/GLGIiiaK7D-LHJ8mIIaGGWtweM6vZjeI.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/PLjlnsNFyj-a2kmu8vP-PW8qAU6y3pKm?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/80000000930dd63/1/19/TBnHHNWw3z-cbd9eqmhsAoOeDzwIJJSj.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/AvVt9IPa3T9Bjrzwbh2O_0Ec4864pXKi?referrer=hlnk)

some new shit...crits plz
mello yours has potential...stay simple and work on that euro style
naik-thats clean add colors
sac-keep the 3d bars off for a while and just do outlines

bouncingsoul
10-04-2007, 07:19 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1056.jpg

NAIK_SHOES
10-04-2007, 07:40 PM
bouncingsoul- I don't really see the letters but the flow looks good
sick- I think you should go a little bit more simple fort now
stonk- i like the burners and the one with a green uni

Naysayer
10-04-2007, 08:51 PM
what do i have to do for a comments

heres a comment: It blows quit life.

actually its not bad. color it so that we can kindof get a better idea on whats going on. you may need to go a little simpler.

silentchaos14
10-04-2007, 09:00 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/SAOner.jpg
little exchange i did.
crits?
bouncing- u really need to throw some colour into that cuz i cant see the letters at all

Naysayer
10-04-2007, 09:07 PM
chaos- your S is whack. work on just that letter a couple of times. The top I think needs to come down more. and look at the width of the bar on the O compared to your A compared to the circle of the E. Also look at the bottom of the N it like flares out all goofy.

Bazer
10-04-2007, 09:14 PM
from a couple of days ago but i just got my book back..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1065.jpg

BORG
10-04-2007, 09:17 PM
^^^looks cute, the b looks a bit thicker than other letters
some of the extensions, like top of e, not feelin

Protect_Ya_Neck
10-04-2007, 09:46 PM
http://i22.tinypic.com/2e1drg2.jpg

huskinator
10-04-2007, 10:29 PM
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/6563/1004072222og4.jpg

not done yet, new name etc...

ARMAwonR
10-04-2007, 10:59 PM
its been a minute since i've posted ...

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid225/p1ee69cca03ef050ba4e4de1c9cfc9b08/e7a2eba7.jpg

Ohh yeah ... CRITS PLEASE :D:D

bouncingsoul
10-05-2007, 12:31 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1057.jpg

Naysayer
10-05-2007, 01:00 AM
bouncing soul. Try doing the whole thing on paper. then you can color it.

I got all technical on this one and didnt really like it that much...
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP0212.jpg

so I decided to relax and not worry so much about the technicalities of my sketch and try to really find my style. Here is what I came up with.
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1001-2.jpg
The M is the only letter I am not that big of a fan of.

HadeP
10-05-2007, 01:16 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer5.jpg
little thing i sorta did.
bouncing so dope man, tables save the day eh? :)
arma dope color scheme, your letters look sorta like a beefed up handstyle, still dope, im feelin it, work on your throws tho.
silent, im sorry, but its horrible, look at your letters, they dont match eachother, keep your letters consistant, and work some steady block letters brah! dont give up

theres some crits, can i get some myself?
and if all you have to say is "it sucks"
or some stupid shit like that unless you have something else to add, like some advice, if not, dont even bother.
instead, grab a fucking shovel and beat yourselves with it.
im aware that i told silent his sucks, but i also gave him advice to what he should do.
peace.

c.n.k
10-05-2007, 01:34 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/N2the.jpg

Bazer
10-05-2007, 06:56 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1057.jpg


bump this. and this.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1065.jpg

dim
10-05-2007, 07:49 AM
bazer dope man i really like how you bend your letters
knews thats ill and i really like the script style you did at the bottom
neysayer for your m in the second peice maybe if u bend it more downward it would be mor of an m rather cursive styled r, you'll no what i mean i think

huskinator
10-05-2007, 08:57 AM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t158/gilligan21/1005070853.jpg

obviously not done, any crits from anyone respectable?

mas$
10-05-2007, 10:40 AM
i dunno if im respectable, but thats pretty hot man, i think the 3d wud look better if it came to the middle of the piece, and didnt end like..
that heart extension on the G dosent really flow though, but yea as a whole its nice, post the coloured version

sank.
10-05-2007, 01:01 PM
husk man your deffinatly on the right track. the letters get kind of clogged up in the middle. i'd say define them more like you did with the s and the a. also try to make your letters the same witdth. keep messin around and it will eventually start to click.

whahappen?
10-05-2007, 02:51 PM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t158/gilligan21/1005070853.jpg

obviously not done, any crits from anyone respectable?
sup mente?

huskinator
10-05-2007, 02:52 PM
huh?

whahappen?
10-05-2007, 03:02 PM
just saying thats a nice mente bite

Sumoe
10-05-2007, 03:13 PM
Thoght the same thing at first, but if you really look at it, it looks nothing like Mente's shit at all.

in_the_red
10-05-2007, 03:17 PM
Mewt07, don't even attempt 3D until you have basic letter structure down. You need to use bars.. Go to the new to graffiti thread.

Fube
10-05-2007, 03:33 PM
u guys are gunna have to let go of all this "bite" accusing and just let the fool with the style handle his business. no beef anywhere, but if your not sure, just keep your mouth shut.

IlikePie
10-05-2007, 04:10 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00123.jpg

Decided to post this before I ruin it with color.(Exchange with cams)

Husk, I don't like the style, but it's clean.
Knews, you're beautiful
Naysayer, push your E in closer, it's not overlapped at all.

sefer
10-05-2007, 04:16 PM
IlikePie- Is that first letter an S?? Other then that I think it's cool
Here's a new one http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/376/spics031nv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits are welcome

pez ss
10-05-2007, 05:13 PM
bouncing soul. Try doing the whole thing on paper. then you can color it.

I got all technical on this one and didnt really like it that much...
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP0212.jpg

so I decided to relax and not worry so much about the technicalities of my sketch and try to really find my style. Here is what I came up with.
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1001-2.jpg
The M is the only letter I am not that big of a fan of.
you need to make ur e closer to ur l and then make all the letters taller sept for the s. loose those gay tic things at each end the m looks nice try to keep ur hand moving when ur out lining ur piece cause it looks real skeatch now . twith the second on the o is to wide on the one side dont do that just make like the rest of the letters. but once u fix up the first piece i think it might be time to put a pen out line on it or something
heres that piece i was trying to get crits for put an out line on it so u can see it better.http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/4.jpgcrits plzz

IlikePie
10-05-2007, 06:09 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00125.jpg

Fuck the lighting in my house :(

TESTER
10-05-2007, 07:20 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/15-1.jpg
crits?

Bazer
10-05-2007, 07:30 PM
i think the style is actually really nice. but you should cut down on how much you mold the lines. you know what molding is?... =\
heres a throwie i did for the throwie battle.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_05_001.jpg


***WEEKLY THROWUP BATTLE (Advanced/Toy)***

WORD: Kunta

SPECIFICS: 3 colors max. paper or wall.

DEADLINE: Fri. October 12th

RULES: This battle is for writers of any skill level. No digital modifications. One entry per person.

MOD IN CHARGE: 1nonly Baze (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/private.php?do=newpm&u=16718)

silentchaos14
10-05-2007, 07:43 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketches.jpg
some pen freestyles that i outlined.
crits?
baze- thats sick

BORG
10-05-2007, 08:42 PM
i think the style is actually really nice. but you should cut down on how much you mold the lines. you know what molding is?... =\
heres a throwie i did for the throwie battle.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_05_001.jpg


^^^not bad, lettering kinda reminds me of mine

jroc- no pen frestyles, its hard enough for you to sketch a decent simple

kunta throwie
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9761/scan0004pr8.jpg

T2T
10-05-2007, 08:47 PM
Tester-love your shit mad nice...(personally i dont think im good enough to actully crit of give tips to anyone yet)

iirght here sumthin i did too and form school n colored it wen i got home....crits? tips? advice?

p.s.-sorry its so damn small i dont kno what to do about it heres a link to a photobucket i dont kno if i will make a diffrence tho http://s224.photobucket.com/albums/dd175/T2T101/?action=view&current=Picture200371.jpg if u kno how to make it bigger PM me or post it along wit ur crit thx

HadeP
10-05-2007, 09:09 PM
baze its dope, but id try and keep all the letters in a straight line, if that makes sense, unless your trying to make them on a slant, then, whateves, personally i think it'd look better if it was straight

QuEeNz-StyLe
10-05-2007, 09:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/rtc.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/segzwho.gif

i never get around to finish things.. crits/comments are more than welcome
the first one was one of those smoke a blunt and sketch type things

Aces One
10-05-2007, 10:00 PM
queens, that first ones fuckin fresh, but looks like you got a bit too much goin on under your letters,
thats just me though.

bountyhunter113
10-05-2007, 10:11 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/15-1.jpg
crits?
fuck man, this would be soo fucking dope if the "s" wasnt that bad........fucking fresh nonetheless, bro
that is an "s" tho? correct me if i'm wrong

queens- ya man srsly, lay off on the arrows n stuff.........still nice tho
aces- ya, the structure still needs work

huskinator
10-05-2007, 10:23 PM
just saying thats a nice mente bite

ive never even heard of mente till you posted that and i looked him up. from the few photos i saw, he was way more advanced than me, and really our shit doesnt look anything alike.

its almost impossible to start up without being called out for biting. all the new stuff coming up now is so modern, technical and complicated, i however have a soft spot for the simpler more oldschool stuff with really bright colors, and theres only so many ways to twist those letters without it turning out like shit. yeah some stuff is going to look similar to someone elses stuff, but its pretty obvious i created all of those letters on my own when they all have the same kind of style and are blended together.

Aces One
10-05-2007, 10:32 PM
i duno, mente pretty damn up in the game. but i no what you mean, now adays it is almost impossible not to bite. if you make a letter, chances are there is another leter EXACTLY like it or similar to it. so unless you took the letter directly from someone elses art and it didnt coincidentally look like someone elses, its kinda hard to call out bites and being right...but enough of this shit, this threads for art, post some pics.

sank.
10-05-2007, 10:48 PM
people need to know the difference between, being influenced by someone and staight up biting. the only thing that looks similar in your guys's stuff is the way you outline and maybe some of the add ons. but fuck what people say to you on the internet. tools like whahappen sit at their computer and postwhore all day. do your thang man and dont listen to the haters.

amuin-gcs
10-05-2007, 10:51 PM
from a couple of days ago but i just got my book back..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1065.jpg

im diggin the red shit.

QuEeNz-StyLe
10-05-2007, 11:20 PM
nah definently hear u on the arrows i usually dont put shit like that was just experimenting and inked it like that oh well

Tryp
10-06-2007, 12:23 AM
just messin around.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled2-1.jpg

and still in ideaworks..

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/untitled-46.jpg

T2T
10-06-2007, 12:28 AM
Tester-love your shit mad nice...(personally i dont think im good enough to actully crit of give tips to anyone yet)

iirght here sumthin i did too and form school n colored it wen i got home....crits? tips? advice?

p.s.-sorry its so damn small i dont kno what to do about it heres a link to a photobucket i dont kno if i will make a diffrence tho http://s224.photobucket.com/albums/dd175/T2T101/?action=view&current=Picture200371.jpg if u kno how to make it bigger PM me or post it along wit ur crit thx

pretty much got the end page an probley will again but w/e bump^^

huskinator
10-06-2007, 12:49 AM
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2562/1006070041bgy7.jpg

finally got to finishing

Mello
10-06-2007, 08:47 AM
husk - fucking sick, loving that charak too

Tryp - the C, A and I are nice, but the H an R need some work

aces - nice mate, really feeling that S

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/8990/melo12jh0.jpg
O needs work

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1540/melo11bw4.jpg
same with this, O needs some work

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4244/melo10ha3.jpg

Crits?

uhhh
10-06-2007, 10:20 AM
on a 6" by 5" canvas..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-047S-4.jpg

syrup2
10-06-2007, 11:40 AM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7985/img0863on1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7985/img0863on1.f86421e897.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=522&i=img0863on1.jpg)

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7026/img0857tt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5407/img0858md8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/499/img0855nn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

amuin-gcs
10-06-2007, 01:32 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w1-1.jpg
^^^some 05 shit.
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/pen.jpg
^^the battle piece for bon3s...they wont poll it.
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/2hat.jpg
^^^hat
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr-1.jpg
^^cezr

TESTER
10-06-2007, 02:14 PM
yea bounty i didnt step back and look at it before i used my new prismas that i racked, i was excited to use them and i redid it same style and i'll post tonight with the better ''S"

sex without condoms
10-06-2007, 03:37 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00173.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00172.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00171.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00170.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00169.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00168.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00167.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00166.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00163-1.jpg

whahappen?
10-06-2007, 05:01 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/8527/picture200hw6.jpg
fuck my r
slick sketch
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5206/picture201dr8.jpg

HoodRichSucka
10-06-2007, 05:20 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w1-1.jpg
^^^some 05 shit.
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/pen.jpg
^^the battle piece for bon3s...they wont poll it.
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/2hat.jpg
^^^hat
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr-1.jpg
^^cezr

SICK!

pez ss
10-06-2007, 05:27 PM
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff27/qust/4.jpg

Nem
10-06-2007, 05:52 PM
whahappen, make stuff more blocky for now for a while. then round stuff out and bend it up. its gettin there.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/tttthrowie.jpg

sex without condoms
10-06-2007, 05:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00173.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00172.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00171.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00170.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00169.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00168.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00167.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00166.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00163-1.jpg
new page

Nem
10-06-2007, 06:11 PM
please paint.

silentchaos14
10-06-2007, 06:17 PM
why arent u ready?
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch.jpg
crits?

ilikekicks
10-06-2007, 06:39 PM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/240/img0111mb0.jpg

Bastardo
10-06-2007, 06:41 PM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/285/picture280244zk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New gers throw....... looks better in real life.
):

whahappen?
10-06-2007, 06:41 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/8527/picture200hw6.jpg
fuck my r
slick sketch
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5206/picture201dr8.jpg
:confused:

Nem
10-06-2007, 06:42 PM
i personally think you've got too much goin on in that sketch. for right now at least. it just kinda explodes at you.

unless thats what you were goin for. good job then. haha.

edit: to ilikekicks

Sumoe
10-06-2007, 06:55 PM
because i'm not good enough.
Negative. Me and you are both good enough to paint, and yet we don't.

At least I think we are. I have my reasons for not painting illegally quite yet, though.

StAtiK1
10-06-2007, 07:52 PM
sexwithoutcomdons u should definatly paint your throwies they look pretty sick, and plus its good practice

bouncingsoul
10-06-2007, 09:08 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1058.jpg

Bleh, bored

...AMOK...
10-06-2007, 10:04 PM
sex w/o condoms - those throwies are fire and the last one in penci lis sickkk
ilikekicks - thats crazy.. alot goin on but it looks pretty good nonetheless
bastardo - thats pretty good i like that alot
whahappen - not eelin either of those at all... on the amar one: the r is whack work on that and the bars should be more even in size just not feelin it at all and the same goes for the slick one... and on the slick one make the letters the same distance apart the c is alkl the way behing everything....
bouncing - can't really see it but it looks good from what i can see

crits
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok087.jpg

thesilentvandal
10-06-2007, 10:42 PM
amok , simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011909.jpg

silentchaos14
10-06-2007, 10:52 PM
why arent u ready?
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch.jpg
crits?
bump to new page.

SenTheFirst
10-07-2007, 12:10 AM
amok- not feelin the loopy things
daws- youre gettin some dope simples, keep doin work

first canvas

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0571.jpg

sex without condoms
10-07-2007, 12:22 AM
Negative. Me and you are both good enough to paint, and yet we don't.

At least I think we are. I have my reasons for not painting illegally quite yet, though.
i disagree. i, in all seriousness do not think that i am ready to paint yet. i need to sketch more. YOU on the other mother fucking hand need to pick up some goddamn cans.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00173.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00172.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00171.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00170.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00169.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00168.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00167.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00166.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00163-1.jpg

bumping yet again

and Sen your missing mad highlights in the piece

amuin-gcs
10-07-2007, 12:58 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/amuinred.jpg
just did this...its gay, 2 crayolas and a blue smell good marker (the fruit smelling kind, DOPE)

eQust-tbk
10-07-2007, 01:36 AM
^^^ i like that.. good work
well.. the last 2 things i up on here
said toy tread... so here i am.. and
im in a writing block.. so im gonna
kick it in here for a bit... till i can get
shit right.. here is a quick 20 min
peice.. eh.. what yall think..says equst

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8964/photo00044ik6.jpg

huskinator
10-07-2007, 02:05 AM
equst - thats looking dope man, keep it up. if you could somehow scrunch it up a little more to get rid of the freespace i think it might look a little better, but so far thats hot!

silentchaos14
10-07-2007, 03:22 AM
equst that shit is nice. no complaints.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSketch2.jpg
crits?

Roolete
10-07-2007, 03:27 AM
better. the extensions on the n are ugly, but keep messin around

o ya and u owe me an exchange, bra

...AMOK...
10-07-2007, 03:36 AM
thesilentvandal - it's simple and i like it keep it up man
amuin-gcs - thats not lookin bad man i liek it good flow
equst-tbk - thats fire man keep that shit up
silentchaos14 - the top right extension on the N is whack but i agree keep messin w/ it man

this is what the one before turned into
lost the extensions and lil cuts
kept it simple
crits?
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok088.jpg

silentchaos14
10-07-2007, 03:38 AM
roolette whats yur name ill get it done right now? amok that looks decent except the thing at the bottom of the O.

Roolete
10-07-2007, 03:54 AM
silent- i write chers

amok- the letters are an alright start, but the 2d is fuckkkked. stay simple with it for now.
an exchange with ilikepie, didnt have other newish images
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/sewp.jpg

silentchaos14
10-07-2007, 03:56 AM
alright thanks for reminding me roolete. i didnt even remember doin an exchange, repost the pic if u could please. btw if my shit looks like its improving, its cuz im high. i always make progress when im high.

Roolete
10-07-2007, 03:58 AM
god i hate spamming. heres the exchange, its in the exchange thread too.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/zens.jpg
bottom of page 444

silentchaos14
10-07-2007, 04:04 AM
i honestly dont even remember being in the exchange thread. thanks it looks great.

vice versa
10-07-2007, 04:17 AM
just some crits, might post summin lata

Amok- i rekon ure first one is alright, and ure second 1 is an improvement, just keep kickin simples and i rely like ure 3d stuff lol
Sen the first- nice and clean man
Dawsek- i really dig ure style man, clean n fresh
Sex w/o condoms- like ure throwies, i rekon teh second last flik looks a bit strange coz of the large block of black pencil
Amuin GCS- i really like that man, nice ass style
Equst-i really like ure style keep it up
Roolete- nice stuff maybe downsize ure W a bit coz it kinda outweighs the other letters, idk

silentchaos14
10-07-2007, 04:23 AM
evryone on the page is doin good so far.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSketch-1.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSketch2-1.jpg
before and after outline and 3-d
crits?

vice versa
10-07-2007, 04:44 AM
hey, i posted this pic a while ago and ddnt get any crits coz gay ppl were on at the time and i only got around to doing it now
so yeah...
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0417.jpg
before^^
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0426.jpg
after^^
crits plz, i critted ^^^^^

evade
10-07-2007, 04:56 AM
amor:A and the M are good the bomb as the O is over played at least from what i've seen try to come up with something else, also the R needs some work

zens: at least ur starting out with simples, you got the shadowing down, now its time for some better letter structure to put some style in there



now this is my reversable style that i came up with, why its reversable and what the point of it is, there is no real reason i just wanted to see if it could be done and i did it. has image right side up and fliped to show that it does say evade both ways, the bottom a is lower case incase u cant figure it out
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/945/reversablexg9.png

LikeOner
10-07-2007, 05:33 AM
Evade - I don't know bro, personally I'm not feeling it. Letters look a little goofy to me.

Zens - looks good but I think the Z and S could look better In my opinion.

Roolette - I like both those, no criticism I can offer.

amuin- fucking sick

vice versa
10-07-2007, 06:36 AM
hey, i posted this pic a while ago and ddnt get any crits coz gay ppl were on at the time and i only got around to doing it now
so yeah...
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0417.jpg
before^^
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0426.jpg
after^^
crits plz, i critted ^^^^^
bumpity bump :D

LikeOner
10-07-2007, 06:44 AM
vice-versa letters look decent, don't really like the bomb character, maybe change the face. I dont like the coloring personally.

thesilentvandal
10-07-2007, 10:31 AM
amok , simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011909.jpg

bumpzorsiznoqqqqqqqq

Blackeyed_Pea
10-07-2007, 10:56 AM
bumpity bump :D

uhmmmmmmmm hahhaha can you say AMK bite?

Blackeyed_Pea
10-07-2007, 10:57 AM
hey, i posted this pic a while ago and ddnt get any crits coz gay ppl were on at the time and i only got around to doing it now
so yeah...
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0417.jpg
before^^
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x136/Fonzie9/100_0426.jpg
after^^
crits plz, i critted ^^^^^

:O AMK bitez0r

pez ss
10-07-2007, 11:03 AM
colourd my piece the writing in the backround is rage against the machine(no shelter) lyrics.http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/2aver/rageaganstthemachinepiece.jpghttp://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/2aver/closeupofratmpiece.jpg

Bazer
10-07-2007, 01:23 PM
i rly new n been sketching bout a year n a half i got some pic but how do i post em

read this.
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=37

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 02:12 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8182/img00471zo2.jpg

TESTER
10-07-2007, 02:28 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/16-1.jpg

a better "S"

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:08 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/5877/img00518mw0.jpg

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
10-07-2007, 03:15 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/evil1_001.jpg
i am uber toy but here you go

LikeOner
10-07-2007, 03:20 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/evil1_001.jpg
i am uber toy but here you go

I am a toy to, but I think you should probably stick to making the letters more evenly sized and symmetrical. Lines look a little shaky, I got the same problem.

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:20 PM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/9743/img00506iq7.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:22 PM
http://http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9162/img00509zz6.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:23 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9162/img00509zz6.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:25 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/7545/img00511fn9.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:27 PM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4210/img00502hc2.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:32 PM
rly old but any tips ?

LikeOner
10-07-2007, 03:41 PM
Nars I dont really like the character your doing for your Rs. Other than that looks good.

seywhat
10-07-2007, 03:44 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture048.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture044-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture047.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture046.jpg
heres some new shit i've been drawing
nars- dont make the r two peices and lose the extension on the n
evil- use bars and do stright letters first

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:54 PM
heres some nice shit more recent

olahlah
10-07-2007, 03:59 PM
evening,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo12.jpg

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo13.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 03:59 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1073/narrrfj8.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 04:05 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6048/img00527vi4.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 04:10 PM
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3056/img00528xx1.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 04:17 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9940/img00517fy7.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 04:23 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/8905/img01016nd4.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 04:24 PM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2867/img00525de5.jpg

Kaze
10-07-2007, 04:28 PM
Did this really quick bad picture

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a349/rylandieno/ENOH.jpg

daisyface
10-07-2007, 05:29 PM
i dunno if that s is workin try making that lower line go down instead of up

SenTheFirst
10-07-2007, 05:38 PM
kaze- go simpler
nars- work on r's
dan- uhh spend more time....

first canvas(done)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0575.jpg

thesilentvandal
10-07-2007, 05:39 PM
sen, you getting so much better!

IlikePie
10-07-2007, 05:49 PM
I dig that fill.

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 05:55 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/8949/img00529mf4.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 05:58 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6320/img00531kk0.jpg

daisyface
10-07-2007, 06:01 PM
evening,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo12.jpg

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo13.jpg
i like these alot

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 06:10 PM
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6415/img00503it1.jpg

-ShAmEE-
10-07-2007, 06:12 PM
dont think ur ready for addons yet, but nice fills, butu need to kno u letter stucture.

Sans
10-07-2007, 06:27 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/8949/img00529mf4.jpg

dope

pez ss
10-07-2007, 07:32 PM
colourd my piece the writing in the backround is rage against the machine(no shelter) lyrics.http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/2aver/rageaganstthemachinepiece.jpghttp://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/2aver/closeupofratmpiece.jpgcrits?????

Roolete
10-07-2007, 07:39 PM
work on first two letters, i like the a and the r. i know what style your goin for, but you should still try to straighten out your lines a little bit.

SenTheFirst
10-07-2007, 07:58 PM
kaze- go simpler
nars- work on r's
dan- uhh spend more time....

first canvas(done)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0575.jpg


bump for crits

amuin-gcs
10-07-2007, 08:52 PM
white paint marker

sharpie paint markers suck

i used a whiteout pen for the highlights, its piss sloppy but its cool as long as you cut it

s.paint markers dont suck. i like them alot......

i might paint this one instead of the other cezr piece.
(to cezr. GET PAINT FOO! I AINT IN TOWN YET BUT ILL CALL U WHEN I AM. U OLD FART.)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr-2.jpg

Bon3s
10-07-2007, 09:13 PM
narsy: heres minehttp://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8822/img0011sl4su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) im out though, im fuckin dog tired. ill peep this thread out tommorro and see how its goin.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
10-07-2007, 09:22 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/evil1_002.jpg
I fucked up the i

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 10:25 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4917/img00533gx0.jpg

Nem
10-07-2007, 10:53 PM
nars, i like the style definitely, you have some really good ideas and color schemes, but you need to work on your structure. in my personal opinion, the letters dont look very solid, and theres not much of a flow to things. theres not really any specific thing i can tell you to do because its your piece, and your art, but in my opinion you just need to work on structure, then get back into doin this shit. you'll be so golden.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/anubis.jpg

fuck the letter B

how are my handies coming along?

noxi
10-07-2007, 10:57 PM
Hey guys. This is my first post and i just started writing. I started on friday, but i was wondering what you guys think of this.

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5589/cimg0982uv6.th.jpg (http://img523.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg0982uv6.jpg)

I know the bottom of the "I" is squiggly. That was on accident

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 11:02 PM
the 3d on the 'O' shouldnt cover the 'X' just work on that but for starting fri. doing good keep sketchin

Hoostein
10-07-2007, 11:08 PM
Good job doing simples, make sure your X is the same width and the rest of the letters. Dont have your 3-D go over letters, it looks sloppy.

NaRsyONE*
10-07-2007, 11:44 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3052/img00534si4.jpg
i posted this erlyier but it was real fuzzy n hard to read

eQust-tbk
10-08-2007, 12:35 AM
an exchange with sinn... it took
like 2 mins.... i dont know... maybe
he will see... im not good... i might
finish it up... well here it is... i love
exchanges what can i say

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5567/photo0007lf4.jpg

huskinator
10-08-2007, 01:07 AM
exchange with equst:

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1608/1008070102vy8.jpg

NEOZ
10-08-2007, 02:43 AM
huskinator, great sketch

here are recent of mine..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/060920071157-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071180.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071181.jpg

librelikespie
10-08-2007, 06:43 AM
crits?
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img015.jpg

vice versa
10-08-2007, 06:45 AM
heres just some crits, and btw i dont bite amk okay?

damn this page is sick
neoz, really like ure full page sketching stuff lol
huskinator, thats a dope sketch for equst
equst, im really diggin ure letter structuress
noxi, ure getting better already man, gw
narsyone, man uve been killin these last few pages with some real fresh stuff, keep it up plus give crits to get some ay
nem, nice scab blue and yella throw plus uve been getting much better
librelikespie, its alright try and make things cleaner and wat part of aus u live in??

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 10:12 AM
Noxi.just keep doing what your doing add some bends n your own style maybe some fills to. Equst.love the whole sketch colors style n everthing going on dope. Kors.dig the style n characters but some of the S's look like T's to me but I still like the sketches

amk
10-08-2007, 11:18 AM
an exchange with sinn... it took
like 2 mins.... i dont know... maybe
he will see... im not good... i might
finish it up... well here it is... i love
exchanges what can i say

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5567/photo0007lf4.jpg

no offence mate but these letters are pretty bad...the S is pretty ill....but take away the extensions on the other letters and you can see the flaws...i mean the I is non exisitant....and the structure of the first N is way unproportioned...and the last N looks like a M....you gotta chill out and focus on those letters and not focus so much on the extensions to hide these bad letters

i say again no e-beef as im jus tryna tell you what i think and bascially try to help you

Narsy also.
man quit posting one pic after another continusley....i mean....just post as many pics as you want in ONE POST.
your work i dont really feel.....id say tone it down....but keep messing with fills as itll help you out when you paint....also....you posted a pic with a lil pen freestyle throw up in the corner out or focus...it was fucking ill...try n find it.

keep up the good work
im out
peace.

bountyhunter113
10-08-2007, 11:41 AM
lib- i like that char, develop it....not likin ur letters tho
equst- yea, i agree wif wut amk said
neoz- that "O" in the first piece is wack
husk- yea i'm rly likin dat too

some doodling yesterday:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/Halloween.png
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/TAC2.png
^this one was for a TAC(Themed Art Contest) on Deviantart, if u check out the deviation it'll make more sense

yea, make sure u leave a comment/view my DeviantArt profile if ya get a chance:
http://bountyhunter113.deviantart.com/

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 12:24 PM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5462/4throwsnf9.jpghttp://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2954/penthrowbd8.jpg
this what you were talking bout?

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 12:26 PM
exchange with equst:

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1608/1008070102vy8.jpg

sick as hell...

Bon3s
10-08-2007, 12:28 PM
narsy: heres minehttp://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8822/img0011sl4su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) im out though, im fuckin dog tired. ill peep this thread out tommorro and see how its goin.
bump for crits. narsy: your shit is fuckin hot. i REALLY like the way you're puttin those colors and shit toigether, its nice. is you ever wanna do a swap or something, hit me up.
noxi: its alright, but try and add a font to it, its very boxy and just square-ish. if you added a little bit of..like..flair? or something it would look better. i wish there was a diff. word than flair, that sounds so homo lol.

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 12:48 PM
Noxi:lol he just needs some ....FAZAZ

NEZ89
10-08-2007, 12:48 PM
Nars-the stickets are sick
Bon3s-with the execption of the spoonlike thing extending from the M it pretty decent

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 12:53 PM
I don't rly know I'm not to into those kinda old n don't like the structure but w.e thanks for critts that 'NEZ'is nice

bountyhunter113
10-08-2007, 01:38 PM
lib- i like that char, develop it....not likin ur letters tho
equst- yea, i agree wif wut amk said
neoz- that "O" in the first piece is wack
husk- yea i'm rly likin dat too

some doodling yesterday:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/Halloween.png
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/TAC2.png
^this one was for a TAC(Themed Art Contest) on Deviantart, if u check out the deviation it'll make more sense

yea, make sure u leave a comment/view my DeviantArt profile if ya get a chance:
http://bountyhunter113.deviantart.com/

bump, i alrdy gave critz............how come i always give cNc, but no1 ever gives me cNc??!

bon3s- i dont like the fill

SKA11289
10-08-2007, 02:03 PM
bountyhunter- those characters are sick man.


First time ive posted in like a year, crits?
http://www.mypicshare.com/thumbs/20071008/40x8lycv.jpg (http://www.mypicshare.com/40x8lycvpic.html)

http://www.mypicshare.com/thumbs/20071008/o8ivdx4c.jpg (http://www.mypicshare.com/o8ivdx4cpic.html)

http://www.mypicshare.com/thumbs/20071008/5we68xee.jpg (http://www.mypicshare.com/5we68xeepic.html)

http://www.mypicshare.com/thumbs/20071008/tvhg63kp.jpg (http://www.mypicshare.com/tvhg63kppic.html)

http://www.mypicshare.com/thumbs/20071008/y6jzf3vd.jpg (http://www.mypicshare.com/y6jzf3vdpic.html)

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 02:09 PM
That first ones my fav PORKYS SO FRESH

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 02:12 PM
The other A's look more like lower case d's to me

MainEvent
10-08-2007, 02:18 PM
bones- i like the fill alot, just bang out the letters a little better.

nez- that sketch of the writer is really really nice. keep sketching and working on your letters because with talent like that on the character, you'll be able to do some dope shit once you get more experience. good fill on the second, nice work overall for starting out. stay up

ak- good shit. first piece is nice and simple. i like the second and fourth throwies the best. nice work


just a little concept piece i wanna do. im sure its been done before so i really dont care about dudes saying "hey its been done, and better!" like the time i posted the panda ish. just wanna get some crits on the letters mostly cause thats where im struggling. solid black is one style, crosshatched is another, and the dots is where they intersect and overlap.

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1704.jpg

amk
10-08-2007, 02:21 PM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5462/4throwsnf9.jpg

the N A ones are nice
but pretty unoriginal iv seen it before.
none the less not bad.
also.
for god sake
stop posting 4 times in one go.
there is nothing to get when posting.
you say all you want to say in one post.
just like i am now.

BoutnyHunter...does this look like the char thread ? ... nah...no offence but i fort you was better...if i put it the way i think then i think those chars their whack....the look like no effort as been put into them..like a limp cock.
n the fact you posted them in the big boy char thread is rediculous..
c'mon man.
work on your lettering.

fuck i aint posted SHIT for so long.
i aint been able to sketch.
school and shit ...
i just carnt wait till next August when shits over.
then ill be painting,sketching , bombing , shit like that constantly...

so here is an old one...im sorry for the lack of peices from me...maybe ill rustle sumthing up as im doing some graphic design / graffiti type shit for art class...

so here is a couple of my favourites..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fewferw.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-9.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dsfcwe.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rwerwer4.jpg

Comments welcome..
peace.
keep up the work guys

MainEvent
10-08-2007, 02:28 PM
wow, that shit was really fuckin sick. how long have you been writing fam? feelin that shit alot, letters, fills, characters. very dope

amk
10-08-2007, 02:35 PM
you talkin to me ?
like....i was thinking about it erlier how long..
its actually been a year...
because it was this time last year that i was getting back into graff again...
cos i did shit on and off when i used to go out but never really felt shit for it untill i got into graff hardcore style thanks to the guys on here

MainEvent
10-08-2007, 02:44 PM
good shit, definitely stay up. feelin your work alot.

thawbrkone
10-08-2007, 02:51 PM
evening,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo12.jpg

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo13.jpg

im feeln these

AyteYourCookies
10-08-2007, 03:01 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture343.jpg

Casa45
10-08-2007, 03:18 PM
AMK, I like your letters most of the time. but i hate you fills, looks like a banner for a gay parade...

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 03:29 PM
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/6796/seathinglm2.jpg
my new throw plus some wack character lol better than my old one or na?

Bazer
10-08-2007, 04:09 PM
amk, you keep posting up old stuff man..

-ShAmEE-
10-08-2007, 04:20 PM
the N A ones are nice
but pretty unoriginal iv seen it before.
none the less not bad.
also.
for god sake
stop posting 4 times in one go.
there is nothing to get when posting.
you say all you want to say in one post.
just like i am now.

BoutnyHunter...does this look like the char thread ? ... nah...no offence but i fort you was better...if i put it the way i think then i think those chars their whack....the look like no effort as been put into them..like a limp cock.
n the fact you posted them in the big boy char thread is rediculous..
c'mon man.
work on your lettering.

fuck i aint posted SHIT for so long.
i aint been able to sketch.
school and shit ...
i just carnt wait till next August when shits over.
then ill be painting,sketching , bombing , shit like that constantly...

so here is an old one...im sorry for the lack of peices from me...maybe ill rustle sumthing up as im doing some graphic design / graffiti type shit for art class...

so here is a couple of my favourites..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fewferw.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-9.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dsfcwe.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rwerwer4.jpg



Comments welcome..
peace.
keep up the work guys

seen this bumped like a gazillion time...anythin new

amk
10-08-2007, 04:20 PM
Baze..i expalined why if you read the post.......winkys love you Bwazaww
shame shut the fuck up....anything new from you ?....no....oh and those one letter freestyles dont count....have you EVER done a full peice you retard....haven you managed to gather the fact that ill battle you when im fucking ready....just shut the hell up and get over yourself and get a fucking reality check.

" fuck i aint posted SHIT for so long.
i aint been able to sketch.
school and shit ...
i just carnt wait till next August when shits over.
then ill be painting,sketching , bombing , shit like that constantly...

so here is an old one...im sorry for the lack of peices from me...maybe ill rustle sumthing up as im doing some graphic design / graffiti type shit for art class... "

look shame...belive it or not...in that text lies the key to all your issues and problems in your life...can you even read english ?
anyways im out

peace.

-ShAmEE-
10-08-2007, 04:48 PM
Baze..i expalined why if you read the post.......winkys love you Bwazaww
shame shut the fuck up....anything new from you ?....no....oh and those one letter freestyles dont count....have you EVER done a full peice you retard....haven you managed to gather the fact that ill battle you when im fucking ready....just shut the hell up and get over yourself and get a fucking reality check.

" fuck i aint posted SHIT for so long.
i aint been able to sketch.
school and shit ...
i just carnt wait till next August when shits over.
then ill be painting,sketching , bombing , shit like that constantly...

so here is an old one...im sorry for the lack of peices from me...maybe ill rustle sumthing up as im doing some graphic design / graffiti type shit for art class... "

look shame...belive it or not...in that text lies the key to all your issues and problems in your life...can you even read english ?
anyways im out

peace.

ohh so nows it okayfor baze to ask and get a simple thing like that. then when i ask have to read all that ohh fuck u. doin letters is better than bump old shit.

"spe@k"
10-08-2007, 05:21 PM
http://a347.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_e1f2512f0a8b5d3a9710900e6fd503aa.jpg

just something i did real fast lastnight...

Fube
10-08-2007, 05:30 PM
if u stroll thought all these pages theres a lot of deleted post. not trying to be a "post killer" but u motha fuckas need to understand, if its not crit or flicks it will be deleted. so think before u post, if your feelin someones shit, bump them to the next page, not this page. keep the chat and bullshit beef to pm's people. ya feel me?

Chalk
10-08-2007, 09:57 PM
nars, i like the style definitely, you have some really good ideas and color schemes, but you need to work on your structure. in my personal opinion, the letters dont look very solid, and theres not much of a flow to things. theres not really any specific thing i can tell you to do because its your piece, and your art, but in my opinion you just need to work on structure, then get back into doin this shit. you'll be so golden.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/anubis.jpg

fuck the letter B

how are my handies coming along?

mind if i run with your eygptian guy?

Sick!
10-08-2007, 10:15 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/800000009e3a09f/1/20/FkbYPIp22T9p4njXUaXNGVXG54KdFSnw.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/0lt6-iII1z-i9lgAJdjSVvTuOG8d_bnh?referrer=hlnk)
yet...sorry about the really shitty photography....

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/800000009e3aa42/1/20/6pD1tXgu5z_--81pBsW-mrHOqu4SviR9.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/sN6Rm_3b5j8AVzX25qb3aXR_27ETR-Fx?referrer=hlnk)
another....any improvement since my last post?

spek-like the char
nem-sorry bro aint feelin it
amk-love your shit man...all around good

Aces One
10-08-2007, 10:27 PM
Ska, that second AK is damn fresh.
Sick, cant say anything about the first, except get a scanner, but the second isnt too bad, just start with a bit simpler letters, lose the connections, and try a bit more on makin your letters the same size too. youll get there.

Sick!
10-08-2007, 10:40 PM
not feelin it sorry bro take out the star and make the letters closer..also take out that raise thing on the top side of last e

Calo314
10-08-2007, 10:42 PM
Anybody like this ?

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 10:53 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9058/battlewinrmt7.jpghttp://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1086/narsonehk6.jpg
prolly one of my last sketches atleast for a couple days "SAKE":sick style love that E' "YET":looks alright but kinda blurry get some new pics n il let yah know what i think "CALO"i dig all the letters very nice "KLEPTO"work on the style n the K' but i stil dig your work "AMK" i dig your shit to nice colors

Aces One
10-08-2007, 11:01 PM
damn narsy, your shits so fresh, love the second one. also, couldnt help to notice your comments/crits were in a quote, confused me, thought it was your sig, might want to edit that. but damn. the only thing im not feelin much is the black sparkles on your first piece.

Fube
10-08-2007, 11:01 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1048.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1049-1.jpg

practice. love or hate welcome.

nars- fix your s, some of them look like e's. looks like u work hard on your fills, i think it looks good man, but hit some more simples like mine. u will be amazed on how much u progress.

calo- its ok, just about the same crits as nars, u know what? u all need to keep at the simples, im mean do what u wanna do, u dont have to just do simples.

BORG
10-08-2007, 11:05 PM
fube-go for the bottom one, not feelin the top throw as much as your others

nars- i am not feelin much of your letters, fills, bg, ect. look good, but work on your lettering

NaRsyONE*
10-08-2007, 11:06 PM
thanks for crits
KUNTA:yeah i might start doing some of that simple stuff yours clean imma try it out soon
ACES ONE:thanks for pointing that out lol im still getting used to this shit

Apoc Dozer
10-08-2007, 11:18 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1121/jjjjjj003tk3.jpg

I tried going simple but with some curve, can anyone help me out?

silentchaos14
10-08-2007, 11:32 PM
yeah u kinda lost yur curve after the first letter. try just doing two horizontal lines across yur page and following those and eventually take them out and it should help. it helped me alot.

Roolete
10-08-2007, 11:48 PM
finally some decent simples. im gonna tweak em a little bit then paint
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0425.jpg

silentchaos14
10-09-2007, 12:50 AM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch2.jpg
ran out of room cuz im an idiot. gonna throw some curve or something into the next one i do.
crits?

lordloss
10-09-2007, 12:56 AM
ace- i like it just try to go simpler and a lot bigger
narsy- i love it keep going
kunta-the first one is alright but i really dont like the second one for some reason just keep sketching you will get it.
verm-i love it its clean flows nice job
cher-3d is a bit off but letters are nice just try to make them a bit smaller
zen- you are getting better each time i see it keep working
i will have some pics up in a bit when i get time

TricksForKids
10-09-2007, 01:12 AM
AW you guys are all getting along and being nice and constructive and actually producing some decent shit

fube i personally like the first one more, dont feel like you need to simplify your shit, thats you, you know? keep fucking with the first one, the k's just a little off, i can see what youre going for but you didnt hit it

narsy, shits fresh, but alot of its colouring, you got a cool old school/new school euro fusion going on, keep it up, dont be afraid to remember its a PIECE, so not only does each letter have to be good, but they all have to go together

apoc and roulette, nice simples, fix your R roulette, you got lazy on it, the C and E are nice and simple though, thats awesome that you guys are starting out the proper way

as for everyone else on this page, i can only say the same thing i always say, go simple or go choke on a bean sprout and stop posting your junk that you KNOW is junk, people cant TEACH you graffiti, it takes a little fucking ceativity

Aces One
10-09-2007, 01:22 AM
Zen - Nice n simple....MMM FRESH
Cher - simple too, but your C seems to small.

Chalk
10-09-2007, 02:30 AM
how come no one told you not to write sake?

don't write sake

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1361/1402040745_b03001f5dc_o.jpg

Aces One
10-09-2007, 03:09 AM
its for my friend

skoe
10-09-2007, 03:53 AM
just try this if theirs a person out their writing ur name thats better than u then just change ur name thats like writing saber but u live in europe

librelikespie
10-09-2007, 04:02 AM
crits for all in general, I cant say shit about ur letters n stuff, if you like the way they look, roll with it. You dont wanna be stuck getting up with a shitty style that u hate and just cant get to flow. But i have to say, at least have ur stuff looking half decent, know what I mean? If people say eg. "loose the tail on ur e, it looks wack" but you actually like the way it looks, keep it, its just one persons opinion. but if you get swamped over by people that hate your shit, improve!

sketches from school today...
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img017.jpg

This one has faces in the shape of the letters above.
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img016.jpg

Seti
10-09-2007, 06:06 AM
wagwan, aint been on here for time, heres a couple new sketches an a life drawing.....

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image126.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insnew2.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Untitled-1-1.jpg

Bazer
10-09-2007, 07:07 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1048.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1049-1.jpg

practice. love or hate welcome.

nars- fix your s, some of them look like e's. looks like u work hard on your fills, i think it looks good man, but hit some more simples like mine. u will be amazed on how much u progress.

calo- its ok, just about the same crits as nars, u know what? u all need to keep at the simples, im mean do what u wanna do, u dont have to just do simples.

hahaa everyone in the last page called you kunta
*_*
i'd say go with the first one though... the 2nd one.. eeehh.. ;/

South-Pole
10-09-2007, 07:15 AM
libre those characts look dope,and that first sketch is niiiiice
nars your fills are better than your letters,for me letters should be better than the fill,so that means try doing simples for a while
Ace change your name if theres already a Sake getting up in your area
or else try working on those simple cause your E is the only decent letter yet
fube-that funta throwie is ok,not feeling the k though
silent-you got better,got straigther lines,looks more clean but non the less
you still need more work and loose those extensions on those letters man

whoaa haven't posted shit here in a while,keep getting better and better
i don't have much time to find my cam,so i only scanned this unfinished outline,whoa can't even remember the last time i wrote my whole name

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/unfinisheddopework.gif

more shit comming,just don't have enough time to post them

librelikespie
10-09-2007, 07:33 AM
seti- wtf u doin in the toy forum :D
south pole- now thats sick! no need for a fancy fill, the letters alone look nice!

AyteYourCookies
10-09-2007, 02:25 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture343.jpg
bump

whahappen?
10-09-2007, 03:03 PM
ayte the e's right bar that supports the hole is way too big
changed mah name to awar
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4990/picture203qb0.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1732/picture202rl7.jpg
i fucking love w's