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Naysayer
10-09-2007, 03:07 PM
why? i dont like your W at all.

anarchy
10-09-2007, 03:47 PM
I think it will look better once it's painted. The pen you used for it kinda uglies it up.

NaRsyONE*
10-09-2007, 03:47 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/821/historyff3.jpg
i fucking hate school but today i left my mark in history lol .http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/527/studhrb8.jpg
stufy hall quickyhttp://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8707/remhseb8.jpg
my extremely old handstyle i seen in the bathrroom today REM" my previous word
crits.
VERN:nice but do it less boxy ,more style
CHER:dope simple but like your style
ZENS:keep working on it you can get into a real hot style
SAKE:eh idk dig the first one more
CHALK:damn....crazy lol
LIBRE:nice style n characters
SETI:not my style at all but thats fresh
TORN:love that post some more
AYTE:same crits as TORN"
AWAR:DOPE throws man

Citizin
10-09-2007, 04:44 PM
I've never really tried putting characters into my throw..But I just came up withthis..and I think it looks pretty allright, funny too..I mean it's off balance a little and some of the letter structure is wierd but the jist of it Im happy with actually..crits is what im looking for.
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1929/euphoriconekarakthrowxd8.jpg

sketch3
10-09-2007, 04:47 PM
THE IDEA WORKS BETTER WITH THE U AND H BUT NOT FEELING IT ON THE OTHERS, BTW WATS THE LAST LETTER.

shit sorry cap locks

sketch3
10-09-2007, 04:57 PM
could work if you develped it, like having all the holes as open mouths

Bastardo
10-09-2007, 05:14 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/999/picture280255xz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Exchange with MOTER.

Chalk
10-09-2007, 05:17 PM
SAKE:eh idk dig the first one more
CHALK:damn....crazy lol




I didn't do that. that's a MUCH better sake.

i'm not trying to start beef or anything.

but here is your proof he has his own thread at 12oz
http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=94441&page=6

NEOZ
10-09-2007, 05:28 PM
huskinator, great sketch

here are recent of mine..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/060920071157-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071180.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071181.jpg

bumping for some more C&C

whahappen?
10-09-2007, 05:30 PM
ayte the e's right bar that supports the hole is way too big
changed mah name to awar
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4990/picture203qb0.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1732/picture202rl7.jpg
i fucking love w's
werd

librelikespie
10-09-2007, 05:51 PM
my markers bled.. butt its still kinda funny, amirite?
all hail penis pigeons!
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img018.jpg

sex without condoms
10-09-2007, 06:18 PM
havent posted in a while.
idk if ive posted these before or not but w.e i dont caresss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071739.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071742.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071741.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740.jpg

StAtiK1
10-09-2007, 06:21 PM
kind of a random drawing about a girl, more on the sad side i guess but whatever. lmao its also really rough

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3598/l1z001ml1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jersOneTIC
10-09-2007, 06:50 PM
bastardo - dopes
neoz - nice characters and simples
librelikespie - nice piece,you should do it bigger
takin it back to chrome and black...:)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/9642/13032sr9.jpg

NaRsyONE*
10-09-2007, 06:57 PM
I didn't do that. that's a MUCH better sake.

i'm not trying to start beef or anything.

but here is your proof he has his own thread at 12oz
http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=94441&page=6

no no what i meant was that i liked your first skecth better, that one with the star by the S' i liked that one better than the boxy red n blue one i know theres two dif SAKE's you get me now?

NaRsyONE*
10-09-2007, 07:02 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/999/picture280255xz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Exchange with MOTER.

DOPE

sex without condoms
10-09-2007, 07:07 PM
havent posted in a while.
idk if ive posted these before or not but w.e i dont caresss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071739.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071742.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071741.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740.jpg
slutting to new page for overlookedness

krime.
10-09-2007, 07:31 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04436.jpg

crits por favor

Bastardo
10-09-2007, 07:48 PM
jers i like it...but the middle of the R looks weird to me?
Make it lower i would suggest

NaRsyONE*
10-09-2007, 07:57 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8071/redbroworngebo1.jpghttp://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6113/purpinkredgc3.jpghttp://img159.imageshack.us/img159/7981/pinkngreenuj7.jpghttp://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2551/maroonpurplefacedu8.jpghttp://img73.imageshack.us/img73/2127/orangemolddf5.jpghttp://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6523/yellowthrowsfv4.jpghttp://img210.imageshack.us/img210/613/ghostava4.jpghttp://img253.imageshack.us/img253/613/patrickid3.jpghttp://img253.imageshack.us/img253/2871/3dks0.jpgall oldies crits.?

Nem
10-09-2007, 07:58 PM
should i continue with this?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/SSSSS.jpg

Aces One
10-09-2007, 08:29 PM
narsy - like the last one and third to last.

T2T
10-09-2007, 09:35 PM
just seein if this is any beter.....


http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd175/T2T101/Picture200371.jpg

d-stroy
10-09-2007, 09:59 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1191981290.jpghttp://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1191981291.jpg[/IMG[IMG]http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1191981292.jpg

d-stroy
10-09-2007, 10:00 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1191981291.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1191981292.jpg

Bazer
10-09-2007, 10:04 PM
your 3d is prety bad.. do your letters first and then your 3d. remember to not mak the 3d on the letter to the left be ontop of the next letter cuz it just looks retarded.

Stonk
10-09-2007, 10:09 PM
cease that piece is pretty simple but it still needs to be simplified a bit more and lose that arrow on the e. alos on the tag round it more, and uhh just practice..it needs work.

sex..i love your style. so hott (the 2 t kind of hot!) haha. especially your throwies

ok so i suck at throws..critz please..hopefully from someone with some decent throws
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc002c8f4e.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc002cbe35.jpg

Aces One
10-09-2007, 10:09 PM
Tike - like the throw on the bottom left on your last page.

sex without condoms
10-09-2007, 10:13 PM
havent posted in a while.
idk if ive posted these before or not but w.e i dont caresss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071739.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071742.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071741.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740.jpg

whoring, yet again.

thawbrkone
10-09-2007, 10:24 PM
sex work on your handstyles

sex without condoms
10-09-2007, 10:32 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0813071308.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0813071302c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0731071713a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0731071713b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0731071712b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010022-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-3.jpg
meh?

Fube
10-09-2007, 10:34 PM
I didn't do that. that's a MUCH better sake.

i'm not trying to start beef or anything.

but here is your proof he has his own thread at 12oz
http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=94441&page=6

heres your reason, enough with the sake shit. write what u want to write. these guys are just trying to save u some pain.

=INTRO=
10-09-2007, 10:46 PM
Krine: Soooo niiiice
D-stroy: Missing shadow in top of letters in the first one. I like it other than that. Nice ans simple
Stonk: Letters seem to fit nicely together.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/6443/hpim0659wt0.jpg
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/527/hpim0656pp5.jpg

For the kunta battle in case I decide to enter it. Just wondering if I can get some crits on these. I'm thinking the second one would be the way to go.

Citizin
10-09-2007, 10:46 PM
I don't know..I guess this character shit ain't working out..Just want to get down a throw style. This page is looking dope anyways..
crits?
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/9696/shittycharacthroweuphorsg3.jpg

silentchaos14
10-09-2007, 11:24 PM
eupho- they look alright just keep workin at them and maybe they'll get better.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensCurved.jpg

Stonk
10-09-2007, 11:30 PM
i personally really like those hands sex..some are a little iffy but most are real good..
kunto the 3d on the first is a little strange.

the above throws.. ehh make them more simple readable

hating throws and school right now:mad:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/tikepaperthrow.jpg

sex without condoms
10-09-2007, 11:46 PM
sex work on your handstyles

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/serhate.jpg
just did this

[phenom5]
10-09-2007, 11:48 PM
Those handies are dooope lol
For the girlfriend

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6093/0005400bi9.jpg

librelikespie
10-10-2007, 02:23 AM
random sketch during english lesson.. :D
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img019.jpg

syrne
10-10-2007, 02:34 AM
eupho- they look alright just keep workin at them and maybe they'll get better.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensCurved.jpg

make fatter bars

C-SONE
10-10-2007, 03:40 AM
Eww wtf is most of this shit.


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Sketches10003.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Sketches10002.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Sketches1.jpg
I Suppose I'll post this one aswell
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Sketches10007.jpg

in_the_red
10-10-2007, 05:10 AM
librelikespie, you're studying an awesome book. I know that's not very helpful.

C-sone, I like your last sketch the best, but the E looks a bit funny - leans to the right too much I think. Other than that, the letter structure is really good.

silentchaos, your bars need to be fatter and you need to make sure they're not shakey - they kinda go skinnier and fatter and it's obviously not on purpose.

librelikespie
10-10-2007, 08:04 AM
silentchaos - id say try to keep it consistent. Keep he widths of the top bars roughly the same, etc.
phenom5 - your letter structure needs some work, but your colour choices are good
c-sone - your stuff's dope!

ish i sketched just now
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img020.jpg

NEOZ
10-10-2007, 09:03 AM
huskinator, great sketch

here are recent of mine..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/060920071157-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071180.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/270920071181.jpg

bump agian for more crits and comments:D

lib - nice one
c-sone dope ideed

Stonk
10-10-2007, 10:56 AM
people need to remember to give out critz..people are sucking awfully hard on that aspect.

anyway.. neoz i really like that second one. if you added a shadow on those letters i would really like it.

librelikespi - that reminds of a shel silverstein book haha. anyway i cant' really read it..whats it say?

c.n.k
10-10-2007, 11:48 AM
libre-use bars...simples...make your letters more clearer.
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0967.jpg

nero122
10-10-2007, 12:26 PM
damn cnk thats nicceee anyway some shit
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/10102007372.jpg

mum
10-10-2007, 12:30 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture032.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture033.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture034.jpg
here me now rudeboiiii!!!!

sky_one
10-10-2007, 01:09 PM
hey i dont apere here for a while heres some shit its about 2 months old this sketch ive emproved alot more later il pute the new shit i did ...chanxed my tag to made
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z270/sky_oner/fatpens.jpg?t=1189864206
p.s all your sketches on this page are dope big ups

Stonk
10-10-2007, 01:38 PM
GIVE FUCKING CRITS EVERYONE! do not complain when you don't recieve any when you post.

CNK..nice shit, real clean. though i would make the 2 side even ..i dont like how the left is higher than the right.

Nero..i cant tell what it says..but i do like the colors:p

mum..im feelin that style . not so much the d on the second one though

Made simplify that down some..looks like your using decent bars kinda but you went crazy with extensions.

nero122
10-10-2007, 02:05 PM
its an 's'

Mello
10-10-2007, 02:12 PM
to be fair my inexperienced eyes couldnt read it either

amk
10-10-2007, 02:14 PM
Nero...reminds me of Hepos man

nero122
10-10-2007, 03:01 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/10102007372_editededit.jpg

Bazer
10-10-2007, 03:06 PM
Nero...reminds me of Hepos man

EXACTLY. the extentions, addons and all.

S8nt
10-10-2007, 03:06 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0785.jpg

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0776.jpg

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0779.jpg

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0787.jpg ^copied from a book before anyone jumps on my dick about it i was just trying out some new prismas
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0781.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0778.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0777.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/bomballnite/IMG_0775.jpg

nero122
10-10-2007, 03:10 PM
hepos 's' don't look nothing like mine i didn't bite him i just spent allot of time developing a style that i liked so w/e if you think i bite him then whatever
we'll ask him if he thinks im biting him

nero122
10-10-2007, 03:11 PM
damn cnk thats nicceee anyway some shit
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/10102007372.jpg
bumpin so yall see it unedited so you dont gotsta swith teh pages yeahhh

RemoZ
10-10-2007, 03:12 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/5941/1001433ie8.jpg

dajam410
10-10-2007, 04:09 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301160.jpg

Not exactly in my book, but whatever.

sex without condoms
10-10-2007, 05:09 PM
havent posted in a while.
idk if ive posted these before or not but w.e i dont caresss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071739.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071743.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071742.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071741.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1009071740.jpg
last Time i promiseeee
but i dont think it matters anyhow bc. you love it anyway.
i hope... eep!

pez ss
10-10-2007, 05:16 PM
s8nt the bomb is ok but loose the crown there gay and mak the dot on the eye smaller allso chill with peices just do some simples can help i see u got some artistic tallent so u have some serous potential.

dajam looks sik are u finished?? [IMG] (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php.?image=1pieceforteambattlekj2.jpg) crits?? i might use this for the team battle but i will probly trace it and fix it up a bit.

whahappen?
10-10-2007, 05:26 PM
ayte the e's right bar that supports the hole is way too big
changed mah name to awar
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4990/picture203qb0.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1732/picture202rl7.jpg
i fucking love w's
tired

sank.
10-10-2007, 05:51 PM
sex without kittens your throws are so sexy, wanna do one for me??

the end
10-10-2007, 06:04 PM
pen sketches on a STD pamphlet at school
http://i23.tinypic.com/210ehso.jpg

pez ss
10-10-2007, 06:11 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3852/1pieceforteambattlevf9.th.jpg (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1pieceforteambattlevf9.jpg)

Dusk07
10-10-2007, 06:21 PM
Havent posted in a while..been workin with a new name

Me and my homie Cyer rippin up this kids black book.

Crits?

http://aycu13.webshots.com/image/31492/2004635401008026107_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004635401008026107)
http://aycu10.webshots.com/image/30369/2004646475221155199_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004646475221155199)
http://aycu34.webshots.com/image/30313/2004624106121049454_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004624106121049454)
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/28806/2004669135683793819_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004669135683793819)
http://aycu32.webshots.com/image/31791/2004699636121587452_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004699636121587452)
http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/28459/2004664396950243147_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004664396950243147)

Citizin
10-10-2007, 06:46 PM
s8nt - love the first ones colors
nero - sick, complicated, but sick
remoz - the hookups get a really crazy but overall it's nice
sex- still love your throw style
whahappen - i like that, it's something else
dusk - i like the third black and red joust throw the most..

Here's some shit..just fucking around with. The two "peices" are kind of old. The three throws were just simple..
(Sorry about this awful picture it doesn't look that bad :P)
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/696/vanishingeuphoel6.jpg
(This one had to be sideways to fit)
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1192/euphoricone2ql8.jpg
(the colors didnt come out on this one)
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6896/shittythrows3euphojv7.jpg

popshots
10-10-2007, 07:05 PM
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/1732/nerm33ay1.jpg
crits and or help with a o to go with it
s8nt: go dimpler and dont wory bout coloring
citizen: work on droped shadow....and jus keep worken on it
dusk: use same width bars
sex: thats the gud sheet

the end
10-10-2007, 07:12 PM
just added this
http://i24.tinypic.com/24qioh1.jpg
added a force field since, made it that much better

Citizin
10-10-2007, 07:12 PM
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/1732/nerm33ay1.jpg
crits and or help with a o to go with it
s8nt: go dimpler and dont wory bout coloring
citizen: work on droped shadow....and jus keep worken on it
dusk: use same width bars
sex: thats the gud sheet



kfl? or afl? or is it an e in the middle?

theend- rofl at the surface..I like the handy but it's kind of hard to see the colors..but overall. I really like it. Dont know what to say. I usually dont like the look of letters connecting but this one flows really well..

LikeOner
10-10-2007, 07:12 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301160.jpg

Not exactly in my book, but whatever.

Really fucking good man, excellent letters, good color choices, very clean. Why are you in the toys section?

popshots
10-10-2007, 07:14 PM
it says AFL but im wirken on a O

Citizin
10-10-2007, 07:19 PM
Not really sure what to tell you..except that the f overlaps the l alot..finish it. It'll probabaly look nice.

krime.
10-10-2007, 07:32 PM
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/1732/nerm33ay1.jpg
crits and or help with a o to go with it
s8nt: go dimpler and dont wory bout coloring
citizen: work on droped shadow....and jus keep worken on it
dusk: use same width bars
sex: thats the gud sheet

im feelin this. cept tha A lookin like a K...and the F kinda look like an E to me...anywayss....
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04436.jpg
postin this again since nobody gave me any help or nothin

Citizin
10-10-2007, 07:34 PM
im feelin this. cept tha A lookin like a K...and the F kinda look like an E to me...anywayss....
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04436.jpg
postin this again since nobody gave me any help or nothin

The r and the e kind of look fucked up to me. It's sloppy too but thats not a big deal.

sKeeLo
10-10-2007, 07:41 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3117/1292923ot7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my quick 2 min freestyle attempt at trying the hepoes style out, he has is own way of curving the whole feel of his piece kinda like yours nero then throw in the way hepoes doesnt draw straight lines but breaks it down to an organic kinda clumpy look (like you did nero) then add the big letter structure bars with the small long curvy addons (like you have nero) . . . . i love the way his small addons shoot out and how he works the inner outline details like sume does, i gotta do that more but i do fill before outline so . . .

ps - havent really looked at a hepoes joint in a awhile so dont call me a biter

dajam - still aint feelin those lil curly things coming off the letters, maybe try running it along the bar of your letters alil bit then shooting it out (kinda like i did with the lil runner addon on the upper left part of the P i drew above) instead of having it just shoot out . . . the big addons you have coming off the D and A while structurally sound and balance withthe one on the right of the M just dont look right . . . someday soon your gonna be slaying kids

Roolete
10-10-2007, 08:02 PM
skeelo- not really feelin it, maybe it would look better in a piece, it feels croded

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0428.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0429.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0431.jpg
^just stuff from school
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/setik.jpg

sex without condoms
10-10-2007, 08:10 PM
I dont get you cher.
top one is garbage.
third and forth sketches, so hot.
your sir are a confusing one.

younopewho
10-10-2007, 08:11 PM
Crits:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/nidex/Graff/nopesketch.jpg

cert1
10-10-2007, 08:11 PM
sKeeLo- thats hott as shit i luv it
krime-u gotta work on it alot and work on ur hand

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/untitled.jpg

it looks kinda fuzzy or sumthin cuz i took it with my phone
crits please

Roolete
10-10-2007, 08:22 PM
I dont get you cher.
top one is garbage.
third and forth sketches, so hot.
your sir are a confusing one.

haha the reason i do the first style is i like it, and im hopin i can improve it so everyone does. the third and 4th dont work for my letters, and im just messin around until i find something i like.

LikeOner
10-10-2007, 08:22 PM
Krime - the letters look like they are decent just clean it up and work on your handstyle.

popshots
10-10-2007, 08:31 PM
cert: diggen the fill

Roolete
10-10-2007, 08:43 PM
hey sex u like this 1? just finished
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0433.jpg

sank.
10-10-2007, 08:46 PM
finally got some time to sketch....

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0777.jpg

popshots
10-10-2007, 09:04 PM
rollete: dont like the drips
sank:reminds me of bawks older ish.. good overall

sex without condoms
10-10-2007, 09:06 PM
Sank the K is just a tadddd bit too small
Cher, that could really go someplace. id just make the extensions and letter bodies a little less loopish and bubbley.
but the H is mad fucking hot.

sk8er6
10-10-2007, 10:07 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/bombs.jpg
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/bombs-1.jpg

p.s. i have changged my hand

BORG
10-10-2007, 10:29 PM
chers- hot damn, i'm really feelin that piece, its got a bit much movement, but the lettering is straight, i'm not too sure how i feel about the drips, but nonetheless keep sketchin mans, i think your onto something here

AZTEKA
10-10-2007, 11:01 PM
2 sketches for 2 differnt battles.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/310/bombingsciencekuntabattxd7.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombingsciencekuntabattxd7.jpg)
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5630/bombingsciencecitybattlcs9.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombingsciencecitybattlcs9.jpg)

KASE2
10-10-2007, 11:03 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/givemeliberty.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/givemeliberty2.jpg
jus sum shit 4 my american lit. class so i thot id show tha world lemme kno wutchu think yadadadaa

the end
10-10-2007, 11:49 PM
Sorry for the shitty picture before... forgot, phone < camera
http://i23.tinypic.com/5nnom9.jpg
i love sketching in pen, you can only make so many adjustments until you have to finish up

liltaz78
10-10-2007, 11:49 PM
tell me what you think
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a221/liltaz78/DSC00152.jpg

jersOneTIC
10-10-2007, 11:49 PM
bastardo - dopes
neoz - nice characters and simples
librelikespie - nice piece,you should do it bigger
takin it back to chrome and black...:)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/9642/13032sr9.jpg
bump
cert1- like the fills, but not the letters
roolete - shits dope
sk8er6- the throwup is decent, but work on the simples
kase2 - nice simples dude

S8nt
10-11-2007, 12:22 AM
tell me what you think
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a221/liltaz78/DSC00152.jpg

not feelin the add on to the A tone it down a bit

syrne
10-11-2007, 01:09 AM
damn jers your shits lookin good how long ago did you start?

the end
10-11-2007, 02:02 AM
tried out the same style again for another sketch, on another name. :)
also some experimental shadowing...
http://i22.tinypic.com/25tf79x.jpg

C-SONE
10-11-2007, 02:17 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/givemeliberty.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/givemeliberty2.jpg
jus sum shit 4 my american lit. class so i thot id show tha world lemme kno wutchu think yadadadaa
I think you shouldnt have your full name on a graffiti site that is patrolled by jacks

Skin1016
10-11-2007, 04:22 AM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/robert2.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/r3.jpg

Teeeeeeeeeeeear them apart

krime.
10-11-2007, 05:56 AM
I think you shouldnt have your full name on a graffiti site that is patrolled by jacks

no offense but if you actually think patrick henry is his name then you need to go back to school lol

C-SONE
10-11-2007, 06:34 AM
no offense but if you actually think patrick henry is his name then you need to go back to school lol
Oh, A quick Wikipedia search has now informed me of who Patrick henry Actually is. In my defense I would like to say that being an Australian we don't actually learn much American history in school and with it not being a subject I am particularly interested in I have not pursued information about the American revolution in my Leisure Time.

Skin1016: STRAIGHT LETTERS DUDE & don'nt colour your sketches till you have some sort of letter structure knowledge down as you are just wasting your markers and pencils otherwise.

South-Pole
10-11-2007, 07:20 AM
Skin-keyboard letters,go for it
theend-keyboard letters,simples bla bla,...
Jers-dope as always

1st canvas:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/paname.jpg

art:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/art.jpg

can't wait to finish this one lol:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/tornnew.jpg

*Wing*
10-11-2007, 12:11 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg

Here's sth mine, from today, on a school bench...

bomb cities not iraq
10-11-2007, 01:06 PM
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee155/alex2792/1010072015.jpg
first piece attempt
Any Tips/ Crits thanks

NEZ89
10-11-2007, 01:26 PM
Do simple block letters

Jet
10-11-2007, 01:50 PM
south Pole that A on your Art is wayyyy to far away.

jersOneTIC
10-11-2007, 01:51 PM
damn jers your shits lookin good how long ago did you start?
like 3 years ago:cool:

whahappen?
10-11-2007, 03:52 PM
ayte the e's right bar that supports the hole is way too big
changed mah name to awar
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4990/picture203qb0.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1732/picture202rl7.jpg
i fucking love w's
wow 3rd time and it hasnt even been noticed
sikes do simples and forget about colors
wing dont connect the n to the g

DaVe516
10-11-2007, 04:05 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b169/DaVe516/DSC02797.jpg

DaVe516
10-11-2007, 04:06 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b169/DaVe516/DSC02798.jpg

Citizin
10-11-2007, 04:06 PM
not feelin the add on to the A tone it down a bit
eah unlss its like yake or jake or take tat as pretty crazy..otherwise it's basic i like it.

And to be honest this whole page is looking dope.

DaVe516
10-11-2007, 04:07 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b169/DaVe516/DSC02795.jpg

dim
10-11-2007, 04:23 PM
your 3d is off on that last peice

ClownPrince.
10-11-2007, 04:26 PM
There's too much going on, and the fact that you missed the 3D on the backside of your "2" pretty much sums up that page.

popshots
10-11-2007, 04:32 PM
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/1732/nerm33ay1.jpgbump fo crits.... and or help with a o or a color scheme..
dave:id work on the letters more then the fill...i don like the back of the r...
whathappened: i dont relly the top 1
bomb cities: use bars nd go simpler

*Wing*
10-11-2007, 04:41 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg

Here's sth mine, from today, on a school bench...

Bumping!

Whahappen?: Nice throwies, I like the second one! And thanks for the crtiz!

cert1
10-11-2007, 04:55 PM
sKeeLo- thats hott as shit i luv it
krime-u gotta work on it alot and work on ur hand

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/untitled.jpg

it looks kinda fuzzy or sumthin cuz i took it with my phone
crits please



dave516- u messed up th 3d on ur 2

and bump 4 crits

popshots
10-11-2007, 05:01 PM
wing:your bars go from slim to thick...

*Wing*
10-11-2007, 05:06 PM
Well what to do, W is slim by nature :D

krime.
10-11-2007, 05:30 PM
cert1: im really feelin that. not too crazy bout tha fill, but the letters are dope.

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04438.jpg
fucked up on the E :/

whahappen?
10-11-2007, 05:32 PM
keep working on that^, make the middle of the k more like the middle of the r
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/5833/picture204on9.jpg

Fube
10-11-2007, 07:28 PM
wha, looks like a nice alphabet your workin on. keep at it.

"kunta" is "kickin" my ass. cant get the letters to work right.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1052.jpg

Drakula
10-11-2007, 07:30 PM
You're definitely losing it whahappen.Your old throwies were sick!The ones you're banging out now are horrible.

sex without condoms
10-11-2007, 07:33 PM
Fube the K looks like an F and the U looks like a C

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00186.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00185.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00184.jpg
New style?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00183.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00182.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00181.jpg

Dusk07
10-11-2007, 07:41 PM
Havent posted in a while..been workin with a new name

Me and my homie Cyer rippin up this kids black book.

Crits?

http://aycu13.webshots.com/image/31492/2004635401008026107_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004635401008026107)
http://aycu10.webshots.com/image/30369/2004646475221155199_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004646475221155199)
http://aycu34.webshots.com/image/30313/2004624106121049454_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004624106121049454)
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/28806/2004669135683793819_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004669135683793819)
http://aycu32.webshots.com/image/31791/2004699636121587452_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004699636121587452)
http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/28459/2004664396950243147_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004664396950243147)


bump for more crittzz

KASE2
10-11-2007, 07:56 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/life.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/death.jpg

so im sure you guys hav all seen that tite azz tribal shit where it sez life one way nd wen u flip it, it sez death. yea i got bored in class nd drew it out, not hella raw status but hey iz all freehanded so lemme kno wutchu u think yadadadadaa


o and JERS- your shit b on point bruh az usual, stay up

WING - iz good jus keep workin on it id say put tha left part of tha "w" closer 2 tha rest of it, itll flow btr

Sans
10-11-2007, 07:58 PM
sex- I dig your style, very original.


crits?
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7861/82159517og7.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7861/82159517og7.jpg)

sex without condoms
10-11-2007, 08:23 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00187.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00188.jpg

KASE2
10-11-2007, 08:42 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/kayespurp.jpg
sum shit
crits por favor

2KoS
10-11-2007, 08:54 PM
that sert shit has got bangin style man

sex without condoms
10-11-2007, 09:42 PM
for teh battleeee
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00190.jpg

Nem
10-11-2007, 09:51 PM
sex, your throws are beautiful.

kase2, take all the little extensions off your piece, and work on the basic structure of the letters for now.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/peed.jpg

Roolete
10-11-2007, 11:08 PM
sorry fube honey, sex has got this battle.

scab, gettin better, keep workin.

exchange
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/meow.jpg

sex without condoms
10-11-2007, 11:10 PM
So dope.
just the W could use a bit of work

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-11-2007, 11:37 PM
good shit sex.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/expooose.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/dddddd.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/11.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/raqaa.jpg

Nem
10-11-2007, 11:39 PM
mmm, nice and buttery.

thawbrkone
10-11-2007, 11:48 PM
sex
gotta give it to you some your stuff i questiond but deffntly like that last one
you got my vote for battle on that one

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
10-12-2007, 12:43 AM
this is my new throw and i want critz b4 i go put it up....oh and the tag
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/newthrowie_001.jpg

Roolete
10-12-2007, 01:01 AM
sex, your throws are beautiful.

kase2, take all the little extensions off your piece, and work on the basic structure of the letters for now.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/peed.jpg


http://www.bombingscience.com/graff1/bomb-435gfdgfdg444fd.jpg

not callin anything....but watch out. sc is all i really see.

Nem
10-12-2007, 01:10 AM
ahh. im not trying to bite it. i just kinda wanted to adopt the basic structure until im comfortable enough to move on to my own style.

if thats allowed.

Naysayer
10-12-2007, 02:07 AM
nem dont worry. those are both way generic to be bitten. you can bite that shit all day long.

in_the_red
10-12-2007, 05:16 AM
Freek, I think you should practice a lot more before you start painting.

South-Pole
10-12-2007, 05:43 AM
Skin-keyboard letters,go for it
theend-keyboard letters,simples bla bla,...
Jers-dope as always

1st canvas:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/paname.jpg

art:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/art.jpg

can't wait to finish this one lol:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/tornnew.jpg

BUMP!!!!!!<<<< only got one crit

dim
10-12-2007, 07:25 AM
torn keep using ur bars and develope your style of off them your on the right track so keep at it maybe instead of making the letters tall maybe try like style them out a bit make the peice wider but not like making the leters fat (if that makes sense) and in the last one work on the o because its just kinda floating up there lol but your on the right track so keep it up make

*Wing*
10-12-2007, 08:28 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg

Sezer, nice tags! And Fube, great throwie, really digging that style!

huskinator
10-12-2007, 09:13 AM
wing - start fresh and work on letter structure and even proportions, your not ready for style yet man.

FailOne
10-12-2007, 09:45 AM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/821/fonercg6.jpg

I Approach The Mic With Intelligence//My Rhymes Take You Back To The Essence In Ya Car N Ya Residence//The Evidence Clearly Shows I Got Flow..Lock Down The Illest Parties Just To Let Ya'll Know//Thee Undertoe Is Wicked..Dialect Be Supreme Diabolical Schemes To Take Ya Links N Ya Cream//Making Dreams Come True When I Come Through Ya Done Dude The One Crew Ninja From The Streets To Be Ill...Ya Know The Deal


Says Foner for those who don't know
dunno if this belongs in toy bbooks or what. But Either Way Enjoy

-ShAmEE-
10-12-2007, 11:41 AM
addons dosent have to be the answer to a good piece. but u have got a nice fill and style. just need to work on the letter stucture.

Fluffy Bunnies
10-12-2007, 01:45 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/robert2.jpg


eh mang you should go paint that :)

whahappen?
10-12-2007, 02:57 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graff1/bomb-435gfdgfdg444fd.jpg

not callin anything....but watch out. sc is all i really see.
nahhh
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3646/picture207sg0.jpg
hahah fucking wack simple thing
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8779/picture206mv8.jpg
its a lower case a then w then lower case a then r
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8435/picture205uv0.jpg

NEZ89
10-12-2007, 03:50 PM
i don't like the R too much in that torn south-pole, the top part of the leg looks too far out

don't like my N
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2394/im001317ff6.jpg

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2535/im001316ly4.jpg

whahappen?
10-12-2007, 04:06 PM
nahhh
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3646/picture207sg0.jpg
hahah fucking wack simple thing
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8779/picture206mv8.jpg
its a lower case a then w then lower case a then r
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8435/picture205uv0.jpg
nez your z's just look bad but i cant figure out why

Bazer
10-12-2007, 04:50 PM
whahappen. stop posting throwies in this thread. theres already a thread for that.

some gangsta shit..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1065.jpg

some wackness.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_09_001.jpg

some un finished, bad picture type shit ya hurd?
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1090.jpg

and a throwie mayne.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_05_001.jpg

***WEEKLY THROWUP BATTLE (Advanced/Toy)***

WORD: Kunta

SPECIFICS: 3 colors max. paper or wall.

DEADLINE: Fri. October 12th

RULES: This battle is for writers of any skill level. No digital modifications. One entry per person.

MOD IN CHARGE: 1nonly Baze (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/private.php?do=newpm&u=16718)

*Wing*
10-12-2007, 06:09 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg
And bumping again...

LikeOner
10-12-2007, 06:15 PM
Baze I like the first one but I think I like the throw even more. So clean looking and pops real nice.

scoot
10-12-2007, 07:38 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/ehh.jpg

.D.H.
10-12-2007, 07:59 PM
sorry fube honey, sex has got this battle.

scab, gettin better, keep workin.

exchange
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/meow.jpg

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8489/graffiti007tq1.jpg

this isnt really the best example, at all, but theres a few similaties. the handstyle, not shown here, almost matches yours. EMOW does a face in all of his o's. meow is emow rearranged.
ill have better examples soon...

Nem
10-12-2007, 08:08 PM
a lot of people do faces in their O's, its a pretty convienant place for one.

librelikespie
10-12-2007, 09:17 PM
nez89- not really feeling that first piece, the can isnt very original and the drips stuff it up. Letters are looking good though, try jazzing them up

wing - did u copy those letters off graffitigen or something? I dunno, but try cleaning that up and try keep the letter thickness consistent.

scoot - :S letter structure man

heres some of my shit:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img021.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img023.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
10-12-2007, 10:14 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-5.jpg exchange http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3.jpg

glyce
10-12-2007, 10:22 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/Picture003.jpg
just messing around. i kind of fucked up my 3d, any crits?

BORG
10-12-2007, 10:39 PM
sorry fube honey, sex has got this battle.

scab, gettin better, keep workin.

exchange
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/meow.jpg

shit man, i'ma have to say thats a mean bite on chalks 3d

sk8er6
10-12-2007, 10:44 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch2.jpg
ran out of room cuz im an idiot. gonna throw some curve or something into the next one i do.
crits?
uhhh, take off the extentions. maybe start over. and look at the proportions of the letters. for something that simple with a 3 letter name you shouldnt be going all huge and shit on the page anyways.

BkomeOne İM
10-12-2007, 11:01 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/beonwb/snipshotCARVXMJX.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/beonwb/HPIM2800.jpg
lil sum sumin.

librelikespie
10-12-2007, 11:30 PM
just sketched this, it looks better in real life because the shell and stuff is all flourescenty but the scanner didnt pick the flourescentyness up :(
colour:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img026.jpg
black and white:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img027.jpg

krime.
10-12-2007, 11:35 PM
a lot of people do faces in their O's, its a pretty convienant place for one.

lmaoo

Citizin
10-12-2007, 11:37 PM
just sketched this, it looks better in real life because the shell and stuff is all flourescenty but the scanner didnt pick the flourescentyness up :(
colour:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img026.jpg
black and white:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img027.jpg

I know how you feel..scanners bring out every imperfection in a sketch. I really like it. It's different. Maybe clean it up, color it, and go bigger it'd be pretty fresh..Only thing I don't like is the e doesnt seem to go with all the other letters because of the skinnyness..

IaMaMoRoN
10-12-2007, 11:38 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5624/lbd670b267feb5bc24b670doa7.jpg

librelikespie
10-12-2007, 11:48 PM
yup, thanks for the crits citizin.
IaMaMoRoN - that is very nice. not sure if you drew it or not. if you didnt, then you are naughty. if you did, then thats pretty fresh!

IaMaMoRoN
10-13-2007, 12:20 AM
librelikespie-yeah i did...im just gettin started with this bombing science thing...but you will see more from me. thanks

Roolete
10-13-2007, 01:29 AM
shit man, i'ma have to say thats a mean bite on chalks 3d

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8489/graffiti007tq1.jpg

this isnt really the best example, at all, but theres a few similaties. the handstyle, not shown here, almost matches yours. EMOW does a face in all of his o's. meow is emow rearranged.
ill have better examples soon...


ok, borg, i always do 3d inwards with no vanishing point, and i got tired of it being solid black like usual. this was the simplest thing i could think of. but i see where ur comin from

dh, i dont write meow, it was an exchange. so the letters arent my fault. everyone puts faces in their o's, i didnt want to draw one out. if you check tags thread i have a bunch of handies, and if you still dont believe me i can pm u somethin. i didnt see any other similarities. ive never even heard of emow.

sorry if i offended, it was coincidental.

c.n.k
10-13-2007, 02:21 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0986.jpg

silentchaos14
10-13-2007, 02:44 AM
neuro- the only thing i dont liek is that wierd E.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch3.jpg
something new. probably just gonna shorten my name to zen. im only using it for sketching and stickers and shit anyway.
crits?

Fube
10-13-2007, 02:44 AM
bump BbkomeEOoneEr, and cnk!

i likes i likes.

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 03:43 AM
Silent chaos - you still need a lot of practice but you're definitely getting better. Your Z shouldn't be pointy on the bottom left, and it's too curvy compared to the other letters. You're right, the E is weird. Don't worry about making your letters look funky and interesting, focus on letter structure above all.

c.n.k. - I like the stars, the perspective on them is really well done. Not feeling the extension on the right side of the U, at the top, or the spiky extensions on the top of the R. Not that keen on the E either. Its nice and clean though and the colouring is good.

Moron - Not bad although too many colours in my opinion (I'm a colour person haha).

Librelikespie - Interesting style, I personally can't really read it but it looks quite cool. Work on the cleanliness of the lines.

Bkome - Hot shit, the yellow sketch looks like it needs some highlights or something, it's a bit too yellow - might just be the photo. The letters are dope though.

Glyce - all your letters should be the same thickness. Your tag needs a lot of work too.

That's all for now folks.

Fluffy Bunnies
10-13-2007, 04:51 AM
Hey what about me... I return and no one says a damn thing :(

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 05:24 AM
I didn't say anything about yours 'cause it looks pretty good to me. Maybe your K gets a little skinny in places though. I like the way you've shaded the letters.

amk
10-13-2007, 10:45 AM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-5.jpg exchange http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3.jpg

Dopeage..

man get on MSN..
i need your wisdom to help with Skate.Reel..
my shit wont upload at all !!!!!

N.O.T.E
10-13-2007, 10:45 AM
what ip bs havent been on this site in a mad long time, been workin on my letters..
baser, bkome, cnk nice shit
iamamoron nice coloring, letters arent that bad too
heres a pen sketch im doing halfway through i started to rush so its pretty messy now: http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/1620/p1010626yd5.jpg

*Wing*
10-13-2007, 11:17 AM
Looking good considered that you didn't use bars!

JEDI-MASTER
10-13-2007, 11:36 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_0986.jpg

yea i like dis alot the E was original, but that extra hook in d amiddle wasnt needed, kinda made it look like an S at first with extenisoions just seemd a lil off but the rest of the piece was perfect, rest of letters bang on,i liked the color selection and the attetion to detail spent alot of time lookin at this shit look forward to cn more nig

StAtiK1
10-13-2007, 12:13 PM
n.o.t.e - not bad, it looks like you might of tried to go a bit more complicated than your ready for but thats just me.

drew this in class after we had a test cause i was bored, i had to go over it again at home though cause the pencil was to light:P crits?

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3528/test003bt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"Riot"
10-13-2007, 12:55 PM
^^^Dope.

sex without condoms
10-13-2007, 01:22 PM
im hoping that was direrected at neuro

StAtiK1
10-13-2007, 01:32 PM
im hoping that was direrected at neuro
you could have just gave me a crit but whatever... lol

amk
10-13-2007, 01:39 PM
why. lol

because yours is the opposite of dope.
its whack.

" harsh crits are the way forward "

"Riot"
10-13-2007, 01:40 PM
im hoping that was direrected at neuro


haha it was.

StAtiK1
10-13-2007, 01:43 PM
because yours is the opposite of dope.
its whack.

" harsh crits are the way forward "

thats not a crit thats just an insult and it doesnt really help.. lol

amk
10-13-2007, 01:56 PM
it is a crit because im saying its whack....thus being a crit...duuuh
anyways..

i dont know really wha to say...its really bad...just do simples....im sure youv been told already...so why dont you do them...or youll stay whack forever...and whenever you post..people will say

" thats dope "

youll be like

" uh yeah man i know "

then theyll be like..

" i was onabout Amk "

and youlll be like..

" uh uuuh...ugh....i need to do simples just like everyone has told me too "

peace.

StAtiK1
10-13-2007, 01:59 PM
it is a crit because im saying its whack....thus being a crit...duuuh
anyways..

i dont know really wha to say...its really bad...just do simples....im sure youv been told already...so why dont you do them...or youll stay whack forever...and whenever you post..people will say

" thats dope "

youll be like

" uh yeah man i know "

then theyll be like..

" i was onabout Amk "

and youlll be like..

" uh uuuh...ugh....i need to do simples just like everyone has told me too "

peace.

uhm ya i do simples this is basically the only thing iv ever done that really hasnt been, plus its not even that far away from a simple. just experimenting i guess, all you had to say was u should stick to simpler things...

amk
10-13-2007, 02:51 PM
aight man.
youll progress

.D.H.
10-13-2007, 03:22 PM
here statik: lose those curls coming of the end of the t's. your drop is slightly off in some places. at the bottom of the t's, its too 'pointy'. i prefer to square things off and try to avoid sharp edges, but that may just be a personal habit. make the bars in you letter more rectangular.

roolete: word, i get ya. it happens

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 03:30 PM
N.O.T.E. - Not bad, although I can tell it's a little rushed. The thicker outline around the edges of the letters should be around the bottom as well. Lose the arrows, they just don't work. Your shading isn't that great and your bubble background thing should be under all the letters. The letters look okay though. The curl in the A looks good, but not the one in the E, you can tell it's rushed haha. Keep it a bit simpler - only use extensions if they're going to add something nice to the piece. Hope that helps.

Statik1, that looks like my title pages in my exercise books from primary school haha. Do simples, make your letters as basic as possible, and don't put underlining lines, and silly curls on letters. Keep your letters the same size. Hopefully that was more helpful than what Amk said, but he's right though, it's pretty whack.

crimateNC
10-13-2007, 03:55 PM
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/teaguesyN87/STEVpeice.jpg

I've been practicing the bars and stuff. crits plz

LikeOner
10-13-2007, 04:02 PM
n.o.t.e - not bad, it looks like you might of tried to go a bit more complicated than your ready for but thats just me.

drew this in class after we had a test cause i was bored, i had to go over it again at home though cause the pencil was to light:P crits?

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3528/test003bt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I actually don't think this looks that bad, just take the curls off the T's, they don't look right, and make the bottom of the T's straighter in my opinion.

mas$
10-13-2007, 04:03 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1537/pic035tg4.jpg
some new ish..well one pic
tried paintin it on the basketball court floor, but between the floor suckin up paint, runnin outta white and my likes gettin fucked cus its horizontal it kinda fucked analy

From the Ground Up
10-13-2007, 04:04 PM
why the fuck would you paint the ground???

mas$
10-13-2007, 04:13 PM
cus ther where no walls around that arent peoples houses :p
and i thought it wud be fun haha

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 04:16 PM
Mass, too many little extensions and things. I guess the letters aren't too bad though.

Crimate, work on making your letters the same size. There's too many extensions, make it simpler. The letters are okay, but damn, work on that tag!

mas$
10-13-2007, 04:20 PM
yea i kinda went wild on that one..i did one with the addons and ish toned down, looked better...i swear dubai really needs a legal wall so i can practice painting without havin to watch my back for people gna report me..otherwise ima be stuck doin posters and slaps for ever..

StAtiK1
10-13-2007, 05:53 PM
d.h., note and likeoner thanks for the advise, im aware of most of it. after i drew it i was like the curls on the T's and the underline is kinda gay, but whatever its practice:p lol

librelikespie
10-13-2007, 06:36 PM
mass - i actually kinda like that piece, i reckon it would look sick on a wall instead of the ground :D

heres sum diarrhoea from me:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img031.jpg

Eack
10-13-2007, 06:50 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4240/scan0003dd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 07:09 PM
librelikespie, those are looking pretty good. Are they supposed to slope down on the right like that? They might look good just going straight across.

Eack, you should give crits if you expect to get them. Lose the arrows, they look silly. Try making your letters fatter and you should probably go simpler.

librelikespie
10-13-2007, 07:13 PM
Eack - overall, that ish is tight! But in my opinion, those extensions are kinda wack and the letters could use some work, but style is good and colour scheme is good, I like it.

inthered - lol no they arent supposed to slope down, my scanner kinda did that, stupid piece of shit scanner :D

Bastardo
10-13-2007, 07:14 PM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8381/picture280253ca1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9682/picture280258rc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Eack at first that looked okay, but at closer look the letter need alot of work, steer away from fancy fills because that drags away from the letters, stick to simple letters using bars, and come back to fills when you have better letter structure.

Eack
10-13-2007, 07:15 PM
librelikespie, those are looking pretty good. Are they supposed to slope down on the right like that? They might look good just going straight across.

Eack, you should give crits if you expect to get them. Lose the arrows, they look silly. Try making your letters fatter and you should probably go simpler.

last time i gave crits everybody complained "cuz they where not right" so im simply avoiding beef

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 07:16 PM
Crits can't be 'not right' but I understand if you don't feel ready to give them. Just mention that before you post a pic :-)

librelikespie
10-13-2007, 07:21 PM
bastardo - tight sheeyet. im diggin that red box with the lines going thro... oh wait? hehe .... those throws are awesome, i dont see any problems.

Eack
10-13-2007, 07:25 PM
btw bastardo i love that style...i really like your tags 2...
im still tryin 2 find myself a style :P

BombingSciences Bitch
10-13-2007, 07:37 PM
Aren't we all?

.D.H.
10-13-2007, 08:47 PM
mass - i actually kinda like that piece, i reckon it would look sick on a wall instead of the ground :D

heres sum diarrhoea from me:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img031.jpg

this could be a cool style if you had better structure and it wasnt so damn sloppy. get you letters down better and come back to this, there is some potential

*Wing*
10-13-2007, 08:54 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg
And bumping again...

5 pages and one crit ffs!

Bastardo, I like your style, keep up the good work!

Hoostein
10-13-2007, 09:05 PM
it gets thicker throughout the entire thing. dont do that. keep letters the same width. I think that kind of I (and also the O that matches it) are so played out. the n to G connection is too big in y opinion. there. stop bumping it. i l

BORG
10-13-2007, 10:06 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5557/dscf2667zp4.jpg-
quickie

Wing- go way simpler, its not terrible, uses same letter widths and heights and work on the flow of letters for now

glyce
10-13-2007, 10:18 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/Picture005.jpg
i think this ones a lot better then my last, any crits?

librelikespie
10-13-2007, 10:24 PM
borg and glyce - nice n clean!

tried to make it cleaner, fukin markers bled :D

Failure:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img032.jpg

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 11:28 PM
Glyce, that looks almost exactly the same as the last one. The S needs to be fatter in the middle part. Lose the movement lines around the outside. Your tag needs work too.

thesilentvandal
10-13-2007, 11:42 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011938.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011937.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011936.jpg

the s in the 2 last sketches are gay

From the Ground Up
10-13-2007, 11:58 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4240/scan0003dd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

lose the arrows, the red, and the random extension coming outta nowhere in the middle of the A

now that i got being a prick outta the way, tight colors, nice simple letters, and nice 3d


bastardo....
what can i say, fire as always lol

smooth_nuts
10-14-2007, 12:54 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011938.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011937.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011936.jpg

the s in the 2 last sketches are gay

the s in the second one looks ok but the last one looks blah.....im really diggig the canvas got a flick of what was on it the first time

LikeOner
10-14-2007, 05:20 AM
I was gonna wait till I had got something decent down to post, but thats gonna take forever. So I got stoned and did this thing. Excuse the shaky ass lines, my hands are retarded and I need to go slow so my bad handshaking really shows.

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8881/img0947wi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Also heres this wack ass shit I was sketching in school.

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.593285f6ac.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=513&i=img0948hm4.jpg)

Go easy on me guys, constructive criticism please, lol.

-ShAmEE-
10-14-2007, 05:45 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011938.jpg
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5557/dscf2667zp4.jpg
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1537/pic035tg4.jpg
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/09242006011553dsfdsf.JPG
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9682/picture280258rc4.jpg
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8381/picture280253ca1.jpg


BUMP...this is some nice shit.

*Wing*
10-14-2007, 06:30 AM
Fresh euros Daws!

-ShAmEE-
10-14-2007, 08:07 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/s-2.jpg

i love the letter S!

Skesh
10-14-2007, 09:16 AM
it doesnt look like a letter

mas$
10-14-2007, 09:29 AM
it looks like either one of the following:
1.E
2.H
3.X
4.B
5.S

*Wing*
10-14-2007, 10:37 AM
It looks like S, :D

*Wing*
10-14-2007, 10:38 AM
It looks like S, or maybe J :D
Borg, I'm loving your CE! Great structure and colors!

hype3200
10-14-2007, 01:08 PM
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u176/vweater/DSC00479.jpg

heres something i did for a friend, comments welcome

mas$
10-14-2007, 01:21 PM
try colourin the same way...etc side to side, then cross that(ie go top to bottom over it) to get it solid
just a tip

Nem
10-14-2007, 02:42 PM
hype, make your letters the same thickness all around. and work on coloring like mass sedddd.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/moonthrow.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/eye.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stickity.jpg

mas$
10-14-2007, 02:51 PM
that cats pretty cool nem, just the body seems shapeless try defining it more, like making it a circle, then slowly adding everything on again, so the arms stick out more and stuff..kno wht i mean?
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/952/charoxr7.jpg
just a progression on my old charo(one in the street art battle)
whatcha think erryone?

daisyface
10-14-2007, 03:13 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stickity.jpg

you should make him holding a bottle of rum or somethin

Teez-EmM!!!
10-14-2007, 03:30 PM
5 pages and one crit ffs!

Bastardo, I like your style, keep up the good work! wing u need to make the w thiker cause it dodent look right how the w is thing and the rest is thick

whahappen?
10-14-2007, 03:38 PM
that cats pretty cool nem, just the body seems shapeless try defining it more, like making it a circle, then slowly adding everything on again, so the arms stick out more and stuff..kno wht i mean?
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/952/charoxr7.jpg
just a progression on my old charo(one in the street art battle)
whatcha think erryone?
8 mile yo

Samp1e
10-14-2007, 04:09 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7413/sacq0.png

Nem
10-14-2007, 04:10 PM
if thats SA

i like it.

beautiful S.

Darkeist
10-14-2007, 04:20 PM
i cant read it, just looks like a bunch of rough edges and shit (to samp1e)


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/isuckatskating006.jpg

crits please

urbanpirate
10-14-2007, 04:33 PM
crits please?

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/z2piece.jpg

crits.

"sey" dont leave a space inbetween teh y and e . make the top part of the s more bold. and make it more round.

sample: nice style but distinguish your letters more.

nem , make the cat hold something

dim
10-14-2007, 04:46 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0543.jpg
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0544.jpg
urban pirate do simples and dont worry about coloring yet like make ur letters with bars look in new to graff thread
samp that s is ill but the a is way to fat
crits

Teez-EmM!!!
10-14-2007, 04:56 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5557/dscf2667zp4.jpg-
quickie

Wing- go way simpler, its not terrible, uses same letter widths and heights and work on the flow of letters for now yo borg is this for the team battle if it is were using basicly the same colours lol
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc230/teezm/IM000297.jpg

urbanpirate
10-14-2007, 04:58 PM
dim the bottom of the i and left side of the are should be balanced out more

Emerican
10-14-2007, 07:14 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5977/jeeby1si4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New name, usually do Yak but im gettin bored and not to hyped on it. Hopefully this Jeebis will spark somthin.

Darkeist
10-14-2007, 07:34 PM
i cant read it, just looks like a bunch of rough edges and shit (to samp1e)


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/isuckatskating006.jpg

crits please


bump.

crits please

Nem
10-14-2007, 07:56 PM
you have the right idea, just keep trying different types of throws.

that one isnt so great.

keep sketchin em.

...AMOK...
10-14-2007, 08:04 PM
samp1e- sick style man thats fire
sey- keep experimenting u got the right idea but keep messin around w/ it

friend's name... crits?
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok090.jpg

BORG
10-14-2007, 08:51 PM
samp- looks good, the a looks a bit thick
dimr- style's comin together, keep it up
amok- not really feelin it, but thats just me, work on them letters
team/aver- nice letters looking overall good, yes thats a quickie for the team battle

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2236/june17001uf4.jpg

bored today

Happy Halloween BS *****s

AZTEKA
10-14-2007, 09:57 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0543.jpg

Yo dimr this is dope, keep this style. And borg that shit is cool.