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Emerican
10-14-2007, 09:28 PM
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9461/jeeby2dh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
second try

...AMOK...
10-14-2007, 10:43 PM
jeebis- idk... not really feelin that style... all the round edges and shit and the lines creeping in from the outside make it look kinda sloppy

crits... i think i'm done but idk i might add something here and there idk

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok091.jpg

in_the_red
10-14-2007, 11:56 PM
Amok - that style is really weird, the S and K are okay but the other letters look silly.

Emerican - work on your Es.

Darkiest - get rid of the negative spaces and try lots of different letters. Your handstyle needs a lot of work too, get rid of the arrow on it.

Urbanpirate, the letters aren't too bad, the colouring isn't good though, just keep practicing.

Samp1e, at first glance it looks good but the letter structure could be worked on a lot, make it more readable.

C-SONE
10-15-2007, 12:22 AM
Dim ya got a nice steeze

For a sketch battle on another site
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Image0005.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Image0002.jpg

letsg0skate
10-15-2007, 12:43 AM
I like the first one a lot very nice letter structure and good 3d

AEROSOL_FEEN
10-15-2007, 12:50 AM
don't make the letters look like theyre connected and add 3d to the second one it would be sick

...AMOK...
10-15-2007, 01:13 AM
bump for crits



http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok091.jpg

C-SONE
10-15-2007, 01:15 AM
Get rid of all the wak looking extensions kid AND FUCKING STRAIGHT LETTERS

sank.
10-15-2007, 01:31 AM
anyone of the decent cats in this thread wanna exchange, pm me...

in_the_red
10-15-2007, 02:03 AM
C-Sone, it's a nice style but the S is too skinny and the E leans the wrong way.

Dying to live
10-15-2007, 08:02 AM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/hkhk.png
tryed my hand in a simple..

NEZ89
10-15-2007, 11:50 AM
C-sone i like both, but i aint really feelin the lil char. on the bottom one ya'meen
dying- not too sure abot the E, the rest looks nice though

mas$
10-15-2007, 11:56 AM
dying to live - that L looks kinda wierd cus the top part is really close to the E
but its lookin good otherwise

not really blackbook stuff, but hey:p
done on my PC http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3657/finalposterchaosbc7.jpg

NEZ89
10-15-2007, 12:03 PM
did u use photoshop for that?? eh its alright, nothing special
straight handy
lol @ the 2 pokeballs,

sKeeLo
10-15-2007, 01:14 PM
don't make the letters look like theyre connected and add 3d to the second one it would be sick

i like when letters are connected . . .

csone - im likin it but the extension from the S and E dont really make sense givin the nice simple letter form but i do like the fact that you did them on each end to balance it out and give it symmetry . . .

this thread is sterile as fuck lately, no built up talk or back n forth or anything funny/interestin being said . . just a bunch of drawings and "thats dope!" comments, its boring to follow . . .

Mello
10-15-2007, 01:39 PM
mass - looks pretty good, the person on bottom right looks a bit sketchy, but not bad mate

dying to live - nice, just work on that L

loose the swirly star shit and stick to simples for a while

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/6782/melo13ui5.jpg

yea i know i fucked up the O, but any other crits?

LikeOner
10-15-2007, 02:31 PM
mello-looks pretty decent, I can't really pick out anything specific to improve on, except the L maybe could use a little work maybe, just keep it up I guess.

I dont mean to be a bitch but Im bumping for crits, my first time posting anything in here I was hoping to get some.


I was gonna wait till I had got something decent down to post, but thats gonna take forever. So I got stoned and did this thing. Excuse the shaky ass lines, my hands are retarded and I need to go slow so my bad handshaking really shows.

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8881/img0947wi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Also heres this wack ass shit I was sketching in school.

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.593285f6ac.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=513&i=img0948hm4.jpg)

Go easy on me guys, constructive criticism please, lol.

dim
10-15-2007, 02:35 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0543.jpg

urban pirate do simples and dont worry about coloring yet like make ur letters with bars look in new to graff thread
samp that s is ill but the a is way to fat
crits
bump

ChewSA
10-15-2007, 02:50 PM
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0001-2.jpg
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0002-3.jpg
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0003-1.jpg
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0004-1.jpg
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0006-2.jpg

Voze
10-15-2007, 03:02 PM
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0002-3.jpg


http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07421/IMG_0006-2.jpg

these two have the most potential by a long way, pretty much only because you have gone much simpler with them than the KIRS sketches which tbh are shit.

these one's are cool tho, but the actual lines look a little wobbly to me. what you really need to concentrate on is getting your letter structure solid and getting a nice flow, these two are looking good for that.

the best thing to do is to forget the fancy colours and crazy 3d and just work on your letters, add a quick drop shadow to make em presentable and chuck em on here for crits. you'll be gully in no time!

Voze
10-15-2007, 03:09 PM
I was gonna wait till I had got something decent down to post, but thats gonna take forever. So I got stoned and did this thing. Excuse the shaky ass lines, my hands are retarded and I need to go slow so my bad handshaking really shows.



Also heres this wack ass shit I was sketching in school.

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8804/img0948hm4.593285f6ac.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=513&i=img0948hm4.jpg)

Go easy on me guys, constructive criticism please, lol.

that's actually the best one, the top left simple. i'd look sick with some nice clean lines and a nice fill. i'd say jus keep goin with that and you'll gain confidence wit your lines and that.

I wouldn't bother with your throwie on that, just work on the simples, cause a good throwie comes from the flow and style you learn for yourself , not just doing a generic what u think a throwie should look like

ChewSA
10-15-2007, 03:19 PM
thanks voze, ill keep at it :D

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 04:02 PM
you know how i do.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00200.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00199.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00198.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00197.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00196.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00195.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00194.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00193.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00192-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00191-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00201.jpg

IaMaMoRoN
10-15-2007, 04:49 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0235.jpg

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 04:54 PM
That ultra simple is pretty hot.
I would just make the bar of the leg on the R a little wider and bring it up a bit next time

six oh 3 graff
10-15-2007, 05:14 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/WhiteWolf666/1015071809.jpg

i wanted to see if i could get some crits on this.
it was done pretty quick, I want to keep it simple but try and make it better

LikeOner
10-15-2007, 05:26 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0235.jpg

What did you do this with?

newbornsek
10-15-2007, 05:28 PM
yo cnk
if that 2nd letter is an e, than its defffintitly ur weakest letter,
other than that its on lock

whahappen?
10-15-2007, 05:29 PM
some wack shit im too fucking apathetic to take more recent flicks of beter stuff
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8931/picture208js3.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7867/picture209uf1.jpg

garbage down tha way
10-15-2007, 05:32 PM
These sketches are shitty looking. Oh well.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/over.jpg

Hint-Make all your letters as tall as eachother and make your h capital. You can do some dope shit with capital H's in throwies.

Ultra-Not bad at all, just the R look too skinny.

sex- killin it everytime, i love your throwz.

Dim- You're getting real good man, keep at it.

Melo-You have an ugly M (just the middle) but the rest is cool, the L could be more exciting tho. Actually it probably couldnt. fuck Ls.

Chew- yeaaahhhh simples.

Akel- I'm sooo feelin that.

Mass- get that on aTshirt or somethin, lookin ill.

[phenom5]
10-15-2007, 05:35 PM
mello-looks pretty decent, I can't really pick out anything specific to improve on, except the L maybe could use a little work maybe, just keep it up I guess.

I dont mean to be a bitch but Im bumping for crits, my first time posting anything in here I was hoping to get some.
Someone on here already writes RANE, very well might I add.
Don't know if that matters to you or not but whatevaaaa


-Over, the v and e are pretty played out I've seen them everywhere
-Ultra, dopesauce, not much to crit here since your on your way
-Hint, it looks weird when you write the first two letters in lowercase and then the last two in uppercase, it doesn't flow well

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 05:37 PM
These sketches are shitty looking. Oh well.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/over.jpg

Hint-Make all your letters as tall as eachother and make your h capital. You can do some dope shit with capital H's in throwies.

Ultra-Not bad at all, just the R look too skinny.

sex- killin it everytime, i love your throwz.

Dim- You're getting real good man, keep at it.

Melo-You have an ugly M (just the middle) but the rest is cool, the L could be more exciting tho. Actually it probably couldnt. fuck Ls.

Chew- yeaaahhhh simples.

Akel- I'm sooo feelin that.

Mass- get that on aTshirt or somethin, lookin ill.

and because you're a cool cat...
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ov-1.jpg
:D

undergroundanimal
10-15-2007, 05:38 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus022-1.jpg

six oh 3 graff
10-15-2007, 05:51 PM
Thanks for the crits guys i really appreciate it
I'll post some new stuff soon

The pic above this post looks dope
i really like it

d-stroy
10-15-2007, 06:11 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1192489699.jpg ?

garbage down tha way
10-15-2007, 06:21 PM
Sex- Thanks dude, but considering you're the coolest cat, I drew you a picture too.;)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/ser.jpg

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 06:24 PM
:]

krime.
10-15-2007, 06:27 PM
undergroundanimal: DOPPEE. im really feelin that fill. keep it up...


just switched back to an older name of mine, KESO, and decided to try it out on one of these template things i just printed out...
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04443.jpg

you can get that template and a whole lot more and this site:
http://fakeproject.com/Graf_Paper/

link to PDF file:http://fakeproject.com/Graf_Paper/FPCoA_graffiti_coloring_book.pdf

i printed all of em out so that should keep me occupied for a while :D

capitol
10-15-2007, 06:34 PM
Keso:Looks dec, make the lenght on the arms of the k a bit longerr
Ser:i like.
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6333/graf667lg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
did this for a girl.

krime.
10-15-2007, 06:55 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04446.jpg

ughh i hate my S

Jroc1993
10-15-2007, 07:20 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBefore.jpg
before
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneAfter.jpg
after i coloured it.
crits?

keso- that tag is the nicest thing on that truck. work on your S to make it match the rest

paste
10-15-2007, 07:22 PM
Heres an idea for everyone: unless you actually think something is decent and it looks like at least a half-assed attempt, dont post it. Not aimed at anyone in particular.

Roolete
10-15-2007, 07:24 PM
ginger-improving! try uppercase r and e on ur throws

Roolete
10-15-2007, 07:38 PM
which is improving? the piece or the throw? cuz that throw was just a doodle. the piece is what i wanted crits on

never really seen ut throw but ur pieces are definitely improving. make ur o a little bit fatter

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 07:41 PM
you know how i do.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00200.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00199.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00198.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00197.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00196.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00195.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00194.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00193.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00192-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00191-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00201.jpg

mwahhahahahaa

BORG
10-15-2007, 07:54 PM
sex- nice mans

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3020/june17nn0.jpg

looked better last night when i was high, ohh well

instead of saying you dont like some of the extensions, how about saying which extensions you dont like, thanks

sex without condoms
10-15-2007, 08:01 PM
sex- nice mans

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3020/june17nn0.jpg

looked better last night when i was high, ohh well

instead of saying you dont like some of the extensions, how about saying which extensions you dont like, thanks
:]
ditch the top extension on the E
the one right under the middle barrrrrrrrrrrr

krime.
10-15-2007, 09:25 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb122/NJballa609/DSC04446.jpg

ughh i hate my S

bump for crits...

Jroc1993
10-15-2007, 09:29 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBefore.jpg
before
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneAfter.jpg
after i coloured it.
crits?

keso- that tag is the nicest thing on that truck. work on your S to make it match the rest
bump for new page and yeah keso yur crits are there already

blue.steel
10-15-2007, 09:34 PM
uhhh here ya go
kinda slopy
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3009/55125565pe9.png (http://imageshack.us)
jrok
ur o is to small
krime
make ur letters the same size on ur peace
on your throw i dont know wut to tell u
i guess u need to know letter structure before u can do good throws

BIGel
10-15-2007, 09:51 PM
havent checked in here in awhile but im glad to see so many older faces still around and getting better. props to borg for the sticker pack, the bottom flick is his pack

hepos' book.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/288/a/8/hepos_book_by_bigel.jpg

detail shot.
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/288/8/4/hepos_by_bigel.jpg

airbrush on glass..
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/288/e/c/glass_by_bigel.jpg
my homie suer did this for me.
http://a691.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/32/l_665c4785050cc5bca452a6fcc44a895a.jpg

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/288/7/7/skraps_by_bigel.jpg

in_the_red
10-15-2007, 11:49 PM
Borg, it looks like your tag needs a lot of work.

Krime, just keep practicing. Keep your letters on the same level and the same size.

Jroc, lose the extensions. As everyone has told you many times, keep it simple. The O is terrible, it needs to be the same size as the other letters. Actually all the letters are pretty terrible.

Bigel, I love the way you did the shadows, with the thin black lines.

Apoc Dozer
10-16-2007, 12:10 AM
bump for new page and yeah keso yur crits are there already

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2825/ssssssssssssssssssstt2.jpg

Just Keep M Simple until you fix all letters all perfect then do add-on/style shit

O too small already said, just make letters same side

With your R just lose the add-on again, and make the curved bar on the R same thickness throughout whole bar

With N same with R, keep the bars the same size and thickness and lose add-ons

E just keep same thickness with bars, lose add-ons but also keep space between top bar of E same space between the Middle bar of the E as the bottom bar of the E

E<-- See same space between top part of E and bottom part

This my advice, I'm obviously not one to talk, but I'm pretty sure I know the basic of drawing simple letters, take it or leave it,

don't take this as offense, I'm just trying to help you out, most people just say one little thing about your simple if that, hope this helps

Voze
10-16-2007, 04:51 AM
you know how i do.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00200.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00199.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00198.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00197.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00196.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00195.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00194.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00193.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00192-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00191-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00201.jpg

i swear you're never ever gonna progress if all you sketch is sloppy 3 second throws and do your pieces with a ruler. you got style but try takin it in a direction more... forward

dim
10-16-2007, 06:57 AM
BIGEL- good to see u back, and you came back with a bang. im really feeling those chracters, they are truly great.

daisyface
10-16-2007, 08:50 AM
sex-lets see some finished stuff!
borg-im thinking maybe the extensions are too small and they make the letters look too bulky
jroc-ehhhh I dont know why you insist on doing weird add on things
bigel- dope shit, the airbrushed glass gives a good effect
bluesteel- you got a pretty decent style, just looks a lil sloppy with the lines, maybe its the pic quality i dont know

ok i havent posted in a long time...writers block is a bitch


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um005.jpgquit before i was done

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um001.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um006.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um004.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um007.jpghome grown yeeeehaw

00-made-00
10-16-2007, 10:48 AM
Daisy: its good defo going in the right directon.
Bluesteel: i like your letters they lok kool, maybe try spaceing them out a bit, other than that there hot hot hot.
bigel: im in love with the glass i want one of them, and the heps sketch is sweet as especially the E.
Havent posted in baressss but i got a flicky. Scanner fucked it up, id fight it but im prettysure id lose.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/toui1.jpg
i <3 simples

Jet
10-16-2007, 11:20 AM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/toui1.jpg
i <3 simples

then please go back to doing keyboard letters.

amk
10-16-2007, 11:24 AM
ahah Voze up in this bitch
sup mannnnnn
gerron MSN geez

Ultra...aint bad...the R is pretty bad tho....not really bad but isnt up to pare with the other letters...its pretty generic id say bit still nicely done and clean..

undergroundanimal
10-16-2007, 12:36 PM
borg: really like the extensions man.. good job
bigel:love those sketches and the airbrush aswell..
bluesteel:it`s really sloppy but i think it would look nice if you just take your time,and make the 1st and last letter more similair..
daisyface:really like your 4th sketch..

not finished yet butt can anybody give me some crits on my design/letterstructure...
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus021.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
10-16-2007, 12:55 PM
SLIK ... KILS backwards
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-1.jpg
KIL
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-6.jpg

00-made-00
10-16-2007, 01:01 PM
jey- listen the scan does it no justice man ill get a better pic, its funny your the only perso who thinks that even amk said to me what the fuck is jet talkin about, the only thing i agree on is the bubble i shouldnt of put them on.

Fluffy: feeling that style man i like it.
Easy: im feeling that i think its sik, so stick with it.

Jet
10-16-2007, 01:09 PM
Toui I checked out your shit in the Progression thread and you can't honestly say that the shit on top of the page here is as good as that stuff.

to make it better you should try to make all the letters even, the "I" is awkwardly sticking out on top.

also the 3D on the dot of the I is way off compared to the rest of the letters, pick a vanishing point and stick to it.

and just straighten out your force field, it's angled in places that it should be straight, like below the "I" and "U"

00-made-00
10-16-2007, 01:16 PM
ok man no beef homie?
to be honest recently my letters just dont fit for some reason i dunno its weird. it will sort its self out i hope. xx

Messer
10-16-2007, 01:36 PM
wassup im new here.......been writing about 10-11 months now.....crits and shizz apreciated...
here is my shizzzz:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image005-1.jpg
random E trying to work a new style:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image002.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image003.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image004-1.jpg
heres a 3 second throw i did for the number 3:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image001-2.jpg

eMJayBee
10-16-2007, 01:53 PM
messer- coloring is good, work on your letters though

an unfinished sketch, critz on the structure..
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/grasff212.jpg

Messer
10-16-2007, 01:59 PM
thats it HOOTTT^^^
haha i know my structure neeedddssss woorrrkkkkk hahaha...but i got the block at the moment so im just trying to bash out whatever i can do.......any body got any advice on whats going wrong with my structure??.....
[heres some older peices from like 2-3 months ago]
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image060.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image061.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image070.jpg

sex without condoms
10-16-2007, 02:35 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00149.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00148.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00156.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00157.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1012072045.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
10-16-2007, 02:37 PM
I am not feelin any of those mang

mum
10-16-2007, 03:13 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture053.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture052.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u94/dvs_bucket/Picture051.jpg
grimey

sheltr
10-16-2007, 03:31 PM
borg: really like the extensions man.. good job
bigel:love those sketches and the airbrush aswell..
bluesteel:it`s really sloppy but i think it would look nice if you just take your time,and make the 1st and last letter more similair..
daisyface:really like your 4th sketch..

not finished yet butt can anybody give me some crits on my design/letterstructure...
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus021.jpg
i like what ur doing but ur e looks like a g unless its g lol

Teez-EmM!!!
10-16-2007, 04:18 PM
easy it looks good but loose the hart and that other red thing emjay try to mke ur bars a bit straghter and spead ur letters out more and i would tone it down a bitveryold http://aycu21.webshots.com/image/30060/2003416305994057303_th.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003416305994057303) http://aycu30.webshots.com/image/29269/2003493449326772166_th.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003493449326772166) crits??

Teez-EmM!!!
10-16-2007, 04:26 PM
http://i21.tinypic.com/2rr87zn.jpghttp://img03.picoodle.com/img/img03/6/10/16/t_IM000297m_61c307c.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/6/10/16/f_IM000297m_61c307c.jpg&srv=img03)http://img3.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.6fdf08bf86.jpg (http://img3.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?6fdf08bf86.jpg) trying to find the best place to upload my images delet this post if u want

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-16-2007, 04:35 PM
i like dat name.

thesilentvandal
10-16-2007, 04:43 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011943.jpg

Bastardo
10-16-2007, 04:56 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1572/picture280269ec6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3493/picture280266tq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sex without condoms - you need to realise your letters are too far apart man, bring em in abit

IlikePie
10-16-2007, 05:13 PM
Bastardo, you're beautiful.... :(

NEOZ
10-16-2007, 05:17 PM
eMjayBee, TEEZ props for great sketches love the style ..
bastardo 2nd one is hot:)

here are recent of my trying new style..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071207.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071205.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071203.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071202.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/151020071200.jpg

and a simple one
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071204.jpg

Bomb Zulu
10-16-2007, 05:20 PM
Tell me what you think

Cheers mates.


http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/2253/zulu1sn9.th.png (http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zulu1sn9.png)

sex without condoms
10-16-2007, 07:36 PM
WOOT WOOT!! (i hate F's.)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/10160719371.jpg

even though y'all hate me. and daws i did throws with your name cause I love the letterzzzzzz

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071935.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071935a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071935b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936e.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071935c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071936b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071937.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071937b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071937c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071937d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071937e.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071938.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071938a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071939.jpg
RIP BIGGIE. couldnt fit the E in screw or the last up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071941.jpg
more to come...

sex without condoms
10-16-2007, 07:51 PM
...the rest.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071942.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071942a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071943.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071943a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071943b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071943c.jpg
^Space Marines are the coolest in Warhammer. If you don't agree, fuck you.
Last Page in throwie book :[ !!!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1016071949.jpg

Teez-EmM!!!
10-16-2007, 07:57 PM
id say u have some of the best throwys on this fourm

Sou - Mvd
10-16-2007, 08:31 PM
I'd love to see like a 6 foot tall one of your throws sex, that would be hot

just some random scribbles from boring ass classes
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5268/picture096tp2.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9247/picture098ge6.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3721/picture100vh6.jpg
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2686/picture099fs1.jpg
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7842/picture101aq9.jpg
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5971/picture103qb9.jpg

emel
10-16-2007, 08:35 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6115/resoooeevd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

smoethin i did real quicklike as you can tell the O is the worst

emjaybee-those letters look too skinny thicken em up a bit
bastardo-your throws are ill i dont know what else to say
sex-^read above^

SenTheFirst
10-16-2007, 08:36 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011943.jpg

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1572/picture280269ec6.jpg


bumpdy bump

daws<3

sou- purple one is sick
reso- i like the s

sex without condoms
10-16-2007, 08:41 PM
I'd love to see like a 6 foot tall one of your throws sex, that would be hot

just some random scribbles from boring ass classes
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5268/picture096tp2.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9247/picture098ge6.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3721/picture100vh6.jpg
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2686/picture099fs1.jpg
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7842/picture101aq9.jpg
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5971/picture103qb9.jpg


ASMA
FUCKING POWDERED TOAST MAN.
I FUCKING LOVE YOU, YOUR A MAD ILL FUCKING KID!!!
REN AND STIMPY<333333333333333333
oh and your sketches, illmatic *****rr

Stim
10-16-2007, 08:45 PM
Bump Sou, Daws and Sex.

throwie
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5343/throwiemx1.jpg

Eack
10-16-2007, 08:59 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/2131/haloweenca5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

littlerocky
10-16-2007, 09:11 PM
whole page is so illaccept eak work on ur letters some not so much on coloring..
pen sketch i just did..
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6685/img0399gj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
..reads MUG should read MUGS but no s yet.. like never finish my sketches. crits please.

AnteUp
10-16-2007, 10:16 PM
mug-welll its not that bad... the swirls are the only thing makin it lukk gud, keep tryin
sou-purple one is sssiiiicckkkkk
stim-nice simple throw. i like it
emel- i like the E
OOOLLdddd peice in tha book i kno, c is too big, letters suck...ehhhh
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz659.jpg
fuggin wit throws... mostly the first one i bin workin on
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz657.jpg

garbage down tha way
10-16-2007, 10:38 PM
Ante-not feelin that piece at all, but the tag under it is lookin fresh. keep workin on the rest of the stuff, its got potental.

rocky-defff g simpler.

Time for my all i can do is throwies post.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/trow.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/trow2.jpg

Animal
10-16-2007, 10:38 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/anml2.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/Anml.jpg

Torrent
10-16-2007, 11:27 PM
AnteUp (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=23924)-2 seems good. If you balanced the throwie more. It'd look sick.
garbage down tha way (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=24378)- Dope R. The E is a little unoriginal but it flows nicely.
Animal (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=29684)- First one has potential. Keep with that simple block style.



Okay just had some sketches. I know the names Lust, Self and Typoe are taken, I was just messing with other names. Any critique?

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6258/img0332smallbf1.jpg

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6388/img0335smalltj7.jpg

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/4650/img0333smallga5.jpg

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7007/img0336smallcn1.jpg

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5821/img0337smalluj3.jpg

Juicee
10-16-2007, 11:40 PM
New here, i write either JUICE or JUICEY.
Started bombing around last summer, but i've BEEN drawing shit on paper. Lol at first i didn't even know it was graffiti, just thought it looked cool, lol

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/jujuice.jpg

The character drawing wasn't that good. I've drawn better.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/000.jpg

NEOZ
10-17-2007, 01:47 AM
eMjayBee, TEEZ props for great sketches love the style ..
bastardo 2nd one is hot:)

here are recent of my trying new style..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071207.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071205.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071203.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071202.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/151020071200.jpg

and a simple one
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/161020071204.jpg
bump[in'

daisyface
10-17-2007, 08:23 AM
New here, i write either JUICE or JUICEY.
Started bombing around last summer, but i've BEEN drawing shit on paper. Lol at first i didn't even know it was graffiti, just thought it looked cool, lol

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/jujuice.jpg





your throwie has tons of potential.
mass-shits tight im feelin it

renz198
10-17-2007, 08:47 AM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6956/dsc00095pk7.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1779/dsc00098gi6.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1323/dsc00124lj1.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/2370/dsc00128yx1.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8436/dsc00133ba3.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4206/dsc00141hg4.jpg
here sum a ma stuff wat u guys think

Animal
10-17-2007, 11:04 AM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/anml-1.jpg

mas$
10-17-2007, 12:25 PM
animal, nice colouring but work on your letters

hype3200
10-17-2007, 12:44 PM
just pracite,
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u176/vweater/DSC00482.jpg

ekimboi1
10-17-2007, 01:50 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/anml-1.jpg

like mass said, work on some straight leters first, but the coloring is aight!

ZOT
10-17-2007, 02:03 PM
here are some oldies from this summer:

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/sketch3.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/sketch.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/sketch2.jpg



Dude is that AF ?

watch 10 minutes, the Animal Farm is the fattest crew of Belgium

check this is sum old skool shit http://www.geocities.com/graffanvers/af.html

Bazer
10-17-2007, 02:33 PM
hhaaha. hint. "hey dad is it ok if-no." haha...

heres an ugly sticker im just gonna throw away. =]

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_17_001.jpg

ekimboi1
10-17-2007, 02:37 PM
hhaaha. hint. "hey dad is it ok if-no." haha...

heres an ugly sticker im just gonna throw away. =]

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_17_001.jpg

yes just throw it away, it is completely shit!!lol j/p j/p yo dat sticker isnt actually that bad, dont throw it away though, put it in ur book or something!!!

Bazer
10-17-2007, 02:47 PM
i already have the same piece in my book.. i throw alot of pieces on sticker away though.. ij ust happened to post this one. the only one ive every really kept was this one. but its in a homies book.. =\
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0939.jpg

Sumoe
10-17-2007, 02:50 PM
I think that is one of the better pieces you've done.

Samp1e
10-17-2007, 03:15 PM
yeah baze that first stick isn't your par :/ but if you really wanna throw it away, i'm a garbage can ;)

colored + ish
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9881/56308326fi3.png

South-Pole
10-17-2007, 03:16 PM
hhaaha. hint. "hey dad is it ok if-no." haha...

heres an ugly sticker im just gonna throw away. =]

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Oct_17_001.jpg

I like it,not your best though maybe try filling it all with that purple fill instead of a part of it cause it distracts from the letters when you see it at first glance but still it looks nice like that

Stim
10-17-2007, 03:17 PM
Bump Sou, Daws and Sex.

throwie
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5343/throwiemx1.jpg
bump?

younopewho
10-17-2007, 03:32 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/nidex/nope10.jpg

Just a quick sketch, ditch the arrows?

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 04:11 PM
fuggin wit throws... mostly the first one i bin workin on
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz657.jpg
ante-all of them except the 1st one look sick, maybe if u cleaned the first one up more it would look good.
renz- the colours kinda distracted me so i didnt pay much attention to the letters, looked decent though. maybe post without colour?

Teez-EmM!!!
10-17-2007, 04:13 PM
sample im liking thos colours but u should do more than just the s and the a do all of ur name it will look more complete

neukr
10-17-2007, 04:17 PM
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/cam142.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/cam143.jpg

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 04:27 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL.jpg
new name new simple
crits? im really feelin this name

Sumoe
10-17-2007, 04:37 PM
LOL...

Pretty good, SUMO, you need to work a little bit more on structure and keep the same width with bars for now. Second one is lookin' good, though.

urbanpirate
10-17-2007, 04:52 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL.jpg
new name new simple
crits? im really feelin this name

lol well theres not much any could say for crits on that,no offense. also, your not the first ideal so ideal ONE would be not so original but w/e man

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 04:58 PM
yeah i kinda figured there was someone with the name already but that wasnt really the reason for the one. it had nothing to with being the first to write it, it meant one as in me. if that makes sense

Juicee
10-17-2007, 05:44 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL.jpg
new name new simple
crits? im really feelin this name

its a cool name but to tell you the truth, its really really plain.

thesilentvandal
10-17-2007, 05:50 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011950.jpg

Torrent
10-17-2007, 05:52 PM
AnteUp (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=23924)-2 seems good. If you balanced the throwie more. It'd look sick.
garbage down tha way (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=24378)- Dope R. The E is a little unoriginal but it flows nicely.
Animal (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=29684)- First one has potential. Keep with that simple block style.



Okay just had some sketches. I know the names Lust, Self and Typoe are taken, I was just messing with other names. Any critique?

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6258/img0332smallbf1.jpg

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6388/img0335smalltj7.jpg

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/4650/img0333smallga5.jpg

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7007/img0336smallcn1.jpg

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5821/img0337smalluj3.jpg


Bump. Any critique?

AnteUp
10-17-2007, 05:54 PM
best style form you BY FAR daws, keep it up

jayes
10-17-2007, 05:59 PM
My first post on bombingscience .

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w186/jmo3_bucket/lkjdhg.jpg

AyteYourCookies
10-17-2007, 06:01 PM
Daws- that is tight
jayes- nice simple.

Sans
10-17-2007, 06:04 PM
daws- I like you other style better, but thats just an opinion. Still fucking nice though.


need to grab a couple new markers before i finish this, crits?
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/9351/gesmallce0.jpg

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 06:10 PM
personally i think thats too much extensions on two letters. lose most of those skinny ones just flyin all over the place

eQust-tbk
10-17-2007, 06:30 PM
the exchange with angus.. yah
whatever.. i been mad busy.. so
i dont sketch much anymore...

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5678/photo0010vo3.jpg

D_U_K_E
10-17-2007, 06:32 PM
its kinda tough to see cause its in pencil but let me no what u think and critcs

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 06:35 PM
Everyone always complains that i never post "complete" work.
i Fucking hate coloring!!!!!!!!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071913b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071913a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071913.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071912d.jpg
I kNOW i didnt color in the teeth. i didnt fuCKing want toooooooo N!ggerS!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071912c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071912b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071912a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071912.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1017071911.jpg
and while i'm at it, fuck forcefields as well.

Stonk
10-17-2007, 06:46 PM
im liking those throws, just not so much the "b's" id say stick with the s.

ok i was just messing around with extensions and add ons and what not.. i at first wasn't even planning on posting but i somewhat liked it at the end...ignore the "droppy antennas" hanging off the t and e.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/sc002e4bb9.jpg

Apoc Dozer
10-17-2007, 07:05 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL.jpg
new name new simple
crits? im really feelin this name

Don't listen to the guy saying it's too plain

All I would say is to clean up the lines a little, just make them straighter, and maybe make the Left side of D the same thickness as the right curved bar of D

Other than that great simple

But damn I'm really into that name, rolls off the tongue

thesilentvandal
10-17-2007, 07:10 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011954.jpg

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 07:11 PM
you really need to work on your shaky outlines on your pieces

thawbrkone
10-17-2007, 08:48 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7199/img0074yt3.jpg

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 08:49 PM
wtf does it say? and yeah delete your other post. if that second letter is an e, u bit me lol.

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 08:49 PM
yuck.
wayyy to bubbly and shaky my friend

thawbrkone
10-17-2007, 08:52 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4347/img0068ep3.jpg

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4293/img0070ck0.jpg

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/596/img0073dd9.jpg

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/222/img0080wg1.jpg

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6084/img0083ob6.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5894/wellox7.jpg

Hoostein
10-17-2007, 08:54 PM
wtf does it say? and yeah delete your other post. if that second letter is an e, u bit me lol.

No one in their damn right mind would bite you. Just kidding man. Make sure you keep the right and left side of the D the same width.

Bazer
10-17-2007, 09:09 PM
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/cam142.jpg
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/cam143.jpg

theres a sumoe/sumo in texas...... just saying before you start gettin shit from people....
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A1077.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A1076.jpg

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 09:25 PM
my only shaky lines i see are my forcefields and thats bc. i go mad slow.
i dont like them anyhow that's why i never do them besidess.
im bored.
old shit.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00139.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/IMG00138.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/cantstopthis.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072243a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829072242.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0823072339.jpg

Citizin
10-17-2007, 09:35 PM
Thats styles a little wierd but I'm diggin' it..still diggin ser's, although for a while I thought that wierd s was a b.
Anyways, My scanner broke down, had to use cell phone pics. This first one is a throw style I've been working on..This camera made it look messy as fuck. But it really looks not messy at all. Except for my pink marker broke and got drippy. Looking for crits..I'm happy wiht my e, fucked up on the u plus i think it looks like a v, and the p..I don't know. It says EUP! because I couldnt fit the other two letters
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/774/eupwierdthrowaq8.jpg

This one is something real simple..Just for quick ass, hollow throws so I can do a shitload of them Once again a camera phone pic, I'm happy with me e on this one, not so much the u. Also should I ditch the hook up on the e and the u at the top?
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7866/eusimplethrowce9.jpg

And yes I know, it's shaky, and looks messy. I'll do much cleaner ones later, or tommorrow.

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 09:58 PM
here thaw, honestly if you don't think my throwie is better than yours, you're just fucking bugging.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00202.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-17-2007, 10:12 PM
please don't do me a throwie.
exchange good chap?
borg don't worry your stickers are coming slowly but surely.

some rehab ish.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/bbbb.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/a.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/pimpson.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/arrrr.jpg

some newer stuff.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/tezer.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/seeeee.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/dddddd.jpg

BORG
10-17-2007, 10:16 PM
yeah i figured the stickers would take a lil longer due to your rehabilitation, shits straight

all is fire, characters are funny as hell
hope your doin well, been sober takes alot, good luck

sex without condoms
10-17-2007, 10:17 PM
Teze Where The Fuck Have You Been My N!gger!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Miss You Soo Muchhh
And A Questionn
Can I Use You As My Reference For My Moderator Applicationnnnn??????

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-17-2007, 10:23 PM
yessir.

AnteUp
10-17-2007, 10:30 PM
fuck, teze bro that rehab shit is sum crazy shit, mad skilz, o an i like tha little demon dude on tha shirt, sum tight shit

silentchaos14
10-17-2007, 10:33 PM
screen print that wierd face, it would make a nice shirt

Fube
10-17-2007, 10:59 PM
sezer- damn your getting better. letters are comin along nicely man. btw, clean for 3 years and counting. it gets better. stay up.

whahappen?
10-18-2007, 02:17 PM
some random names
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/396/picture215df9.jpg
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8056/picture214wu5.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/383/picture213cy8.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1172/picture212jpgry2.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3005/picture211vw2.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7633/picture210pj8.jpg

IaMaMoRoN
10-18-2007, 02:51 PM
what you guyz think?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0238.jpg

dajam410
10-18-2007, 03:01 PM
New book!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301356.jpg





Latest creation:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301359.jpg

I love it so far, but I'm stuck on what I should put under the piece. Any suggestions or advice would be greatly appreciated!

IaMaMoRoN
10-18-2007, 03:04 PM
yeah dude...im feeling the cover..tight peice

Bazer
10-18-2007, 03:09 PM
New book!
I love it so far, but I'm stuck on what I should put under the piece. Any suggestions or advice would be greatly appreciated!

try doing something like this on the bottom.... just s suggestion.
http://www.inkart.com/images/lineart/oak_tree_roots.gif

urbanpirate
10-18-2007, 03:23 PM
Latest creation:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301359.jpg

I love it so far, but I'm stuck on what I should put under the piece. Any suggestions or advice would be greatly appreciated![/QUOTE]


Maybe a graveyard?

urbanpirate
10-18-2007, 03:28 PM
whahappen- nice clean it up a bit tho

Cres- dont connect the RE, nice letering tho

dajam- nice colors and backfround

that HINT stuff is good too.

Crits? http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z291/graffitirevcrew/z2newp.jpg

SenTheFirst
10-18-2007, 04:15 PM
try doing something like this on the bottom.... just s suggestion.
http://www.inkart.com/images/lineart/oak_tree_roots.gif

i was thinking the exact same thing

IaMaMoRoN
10-18-2007, 04:22 PM
i dont know why but i like the way the r connects with the e.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0239.jpg

sex without condoms
10-18-2007, 04:56 PM
New book!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301356.jpg





Latest creation:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301359.jpg

I love it so far, but I'm stuck on what I should put under the piece. Any suggestions or advice would be greatly appreciated!

yO JAmmmmm
if you want some free bad brains shit hit mee upppp cause i know the guyss

silentchaos14
10-18-2007, 05:11 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALThrow.jpg
a little sloppy, the new marker bled alot. drop shadow sucks dick too but whatever.
crits?
tres- that shit is nice but the r is a little hidden due to it connecting to the e

daisyface
10-18-2007, 05:15 PM
yeah that shadow is pretty crappy, and your lines are really shaky, but the letters themselves are an alright shape. maybe make your d more blockier like the other ones --to silentchaos

Jet
10-18-2007, 05:18 PM
DaJam, props for the Bad Brains sticker!

Apoc Dozer
10-18-2007, 05:19 PM
Ideal wtf happened to that clean simple, just go from that, keep the lines straight

don't make it "sloppy", before you post your simple make sure it's clean if it's not then try again then post it

If you already know whats wrong with it, then there is no point in posting it for critz

silentchaos14
10-18-2007, 05:20 PM
yeah that D is my one problem. i was thinkin of doin a lower case one, havent tried it yet. if i make it more blocky it will look like an O.

i wanted to see if there was other shit i missed, i just pointed out the obvious. and i said that was a throw not a piece, even though that simple was really clean.

Tunak
10-18-2007, 05:34 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALThrow.jpg
a little sloppy, the new marker bled alot. drop shadow sucks dick too but whatever.
crits?
tres- that shit is nice but the r is a little hidden due to it connecting to the e

Looks like u got Parkinsons or some shit use a pen or somethin

silentchaos14
10-18-2007, 05:36 PM
can u not read?

Tunak
10-18-2007, 05:41 PM
the pencil bled too? but fa real ive seen other shit by you and its always shakey im just sayin

silentchaos14
10-18-2007, 05:44 PM
yeah my hands are pretty shakey, the pencil i kinda sketched out a rough idea. sorta did the same with the marker but it did bleed alot. now back to the crits cuz this is spamming and i already got a warning for it

jersOneTIC
10-18-2007, 05:44 PM
haven't been here in a while...
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9909/blackbluedq3.jpg
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/3682/maroonat9.jpg
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6364/greenun2.jpg
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8930/burnerwc0.jpg
thats all.

whahappen?
10-18-2007, 05:47 PM
some random names
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/396/picture215df9.jpg
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8056/picture214wu5.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/383/picture213cy8.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1172/picture212jpgry2.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3005/picture211vw2.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7633/picture210pj8.jpg
yea

silentchaos14
10-18-2007, 06:02 PM
u have horrible luck with getting crits. but im gonna give u some. the throws seem really messy to me and the extra lines and stuff are distracting.

AnteUp
10-18-2007, 06:22 PM
5 and 6 are the best ones whahappen

jers- top ones def tha best

Samp1e
10-18-2007, 06:24 PM
whahappen -- damn, lots of improvement since the last time i remember looking at your throws. namely the 2nd and the last pic, diggin those especially. work at keeping your lines clean and steady, as difficult as it may be with a pen.

jers -- hot. you've been putting in work an it shows.

thesilentvandal
10-18-2007, 06:44 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011956.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011955.jpg

C-SONE
10-18-2007, 06:45 PM
Final entry for competition on another site.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1130340cropped.jpg

AnteUp
10-18-2007, 06:51 PM
daws i think you should altogether ditch the last style, your goin place wit tha first pic

Teez-EmM!!!
10-18-2007, 06:52 PM
daws there both sik i like the first more but the bottom should line up togther u no what i mean? the da is a little shorter than the rest but its still real freash

MontanaPainter
10-18-2007, 06:53 PM
Final entry for competition on another site.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1130340cropped.jpg
i am feeling this simplicity and that toon


nice

sex without condoms
10-18-2007, 06:54 PM
******s******s******ss!

my favorite toss ive ever done.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917123.jpg
i know the R is too big.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071923a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071923.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071921a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071921.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071920.jpg
The R sucksss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071919.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071916a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071916.jpg
^cant think of Rs for the last 2

NEZ89
10-18-2007, 06:54 PM
yeah jers your stuff just keeps getting better

don't like the X
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2079/sixpeicead9.jpg

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6580/christinapeicelq4.jpg

Just tryin out something new, for me anyway
not one of my proudest works but eh..
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9753/im001337qh9.jpg

Juicee
10-18-2007, 07:03 PM
New here, i write either JUICE or JUICEY.
Started bombing around last summer, but i've BEEN drawing shit on paper. Lol at first i didn't even know it was graffiti, just thought it looked cool, lol

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/jujuice.jpg

The character drawing wasn't that good. I've drawn better.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/000.jpg

Bump fa more critz

BORG
10-18-2007, 07:08 PM
props to jers, daws, sex......, whahappen

nez- not bad, go simpler on the last one, too much goin on and not feelin the extensions

for the seka battle
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5572/june17mo9.jpg

quickie..........might leave it like this and put an amazing fill on it, i hate working with more advanced extensions

dim
10-18-2007, 07:10 PM
jers im rele feeling the top two keep it up

sex without condoms
10-18-2007, 07:13 PM
******s******s******ss!

my favorite toss ive ever done.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917123.jpg
i know the R is too big.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071923a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071923.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071921a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071921.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071920.jpg
The R sucksss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071919.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071917.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071916a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1018071916.jpg
^cant think of Rs for the last 2
slutting.

Z FUSE
10-18-2007, 07:19 PM
ill shit up there
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1756/dsc07811nu1.jpg
crits on this please

[phenom5]
10-18-2007, 07:20 PM
Dust42
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/9905/dust42os4.jpg

Eskimo33
10-18-2007, 07:23 PM
props to jers, daws, sex......, whahappen

nez- not bad, go simpler on the last one, too much goin on and not feelin the extensions

for the seka battle
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5572/june17mo9.jpg

quickie..........might leave it like this and put an amazing fill on it, i hate working with more advanced extensions

Not bad, Good letter structure. Should look good once you get it all cleaned up. Everyone that posted before him try to tone it down a bit. NES, your last N looks horrible bro, cut down on the extensions.

BORG
10-18-2007, 07:24 PM
props to jers, daws, sex......, whahappen

nez- not bad, go simpler on the last one, too much goin on and not feelin the extensions

for the seka battle
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5572/june17mo9.jpg

quickie..........might leave it like this and put an amazing fill on it, i hate working with more advanced extensions

dust- what the fuck is that????? cant really se it that well, tone it down a bit, work on them letters
wisk- work on makin the letters simpler and push them closer, drop the extensions

some ***** just dont know how to give crits i guess
.....bump

Eskimo33
10-18-2007, 07:26 PM
Z FUSE, Hey bro try to make your letters thicker. And dont show your overlapping letters. Try to make your letters a little more straight to many bends make them look sloppy till you get better.

My camera is down so hopefully i'll get a flick up later. :(

thesilentvandal
10-18-2007, 08:30 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011956.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011955.jpg

bumpity doo - BORG add me on msn


elemerica@hotmail.com

Tunak
10-18-2007, 09:01 PM
I never really got into writing until school, since I'm bored as shit I just draw I have about 15 of these but I like these ones are the best.

as for critz phenom the letters look bad and theres to much shit going on but the face nd shading are ill
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6615/schoolshitru9.png
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8255/schoolshit1za3.png

BORG
10-18-2007, 09:12 PM
bumpity doo - BORG add me on msn


elemerica@hotmail.com

^^first ones dope. my laptop crashed a while back so i dont get on msn anymore, but i plan on getting it fixed around christmas, first sketch is dope, not keen on the second

tunak- new to graff thread......simples simples simples

Eskimo33
10-18-2007, 09:16 PM
For the CUKI battle (nvm i thought it was a piece battle. anyways crits still welcome)

Crits are welcome.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture284.jpg

BORG
10-18-2007, 09:18 PM
^^ the cuki battle isn't a piece battle mans, it's a throwie battle

Eskimo33
10-18-2007, 09:20 PM
lol yeah i see that now, I never did read that good. :(

crits still welcome.

Waer
10-18-2007, 10:25 PM
Yea, so im new hereeeeee and new to writing, i used to write "when" a little bit but I changed to "waer" so there some sketches from both names

any crits or comments are appreciated

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3406.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3407.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3408.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3409.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3412.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3411.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3410.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/ianasimpson/100_3413.jpg

ive never really posted pics on here before so hopefully it all works out

BORG
10-18-2007, 10:26 PM
^^^new to graff thread

KASE2
10-18-2007, 11:44 PM
WHEN - they arite for ur first stuff, but u need 2 got 2 tha
"new 2 graff" thread lyk BORG sed earlier 2 sum1 but yea jus work on simple shit nd letter form but keep it up bruh

*Wing*
10-19-2007, 04:00 AM
Props to Borg and Daws!

NEZ89
10-19-2007, 09:17 AM
yeah jers your stuff just keeps getting better

don't like the X
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2079/sixpeicead9.jpg

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6580/christinapeicelq4.jpg

Just tryin out something new, for me anyway
not one of my proudest works but eh..
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9753/im001337qh9.jpg

bump 4 more crits
Borg- thats ill but the E looks like it's lacking something
not sure exactly what

Bets369R
10-19-2007, 09:22 AM
i like your last one the best but the N doesn't really flow with the rest of the letter structure. It seems like you made the N too big and the E is just kinda squeezed in there the Z is really nice though

IlikePie
10-19-2007, 09:37 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00133.jpg
Eh

Eskimo33
10-19-2007, 10:55 AM
Hey pie, your S and E aren't that bad but you need to work on the last two letters they have no structure. Maybe go a little simpler.

Eskimo33
10-19-2007, 11:19 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture284.jpg

BUMP FOR CRITS :D

Stim
10-19-2007, 12:13 PM
hey,
practicing, sorry the pink letters suck a little.
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2673/practicemp9.jpg

IlikePie
10-19-2007, 12:26 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00133.jpg
Eh

Ehh, says Sew, didn't feel like doing the P (at eskimo)
Stim, I like that style a lot
Eskimo, nice simples, but some of those little blocks aren't workin' in my opinion.

South-Pole
10-19-2007, 01:46 PM
^only things that bugs me is the W and a bit those add-ons on the s

Saxaphone
10-19-2007, 02:03 PM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3841/pict0001yz7.jpg
i like pie, maybe try to thicken up your letters a bit.

IlikePie
10-19-2007, 02:19 PM
That R is hawt dude

IaMaMoRoN
10-19-2007, 02:19 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0241.jpg

ekimboi1
10-19-2007, 02:41 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/nidex/nope10.jpg

Just a quick sketch, ditch the arrows?

yes, first use a pencil and sketch out simple box letters!!!!!!!!!cus dat looks like shit!

dim
10-19-2007, 02:56 PM
cres- im not rele liking the thing comming out of the c but im rele feeling th conection between the r and the e. color it

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-19-2007, 03:54 PM
slutting.
for da homie sex.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/sewr-1.jpg
scribbles.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/doooo.jpg

BORG
10-19-2007, 05:20 PM
pie- new to graff thread
cres- not bad, lovin the simps, you shouldn't connect them though, it looks goofy
tezer- fuckin nasty son

finished my entry for the seka battle today, shits really looking nuts
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2135/june17008kr9.jpg
^inked

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
10-19-2007, 05:22 PM
those letters are looking real good and that fill is so unique.
cant wait to see it finished.

p.s. you pack got mailed out today

Beantownbeats
10-19-2007, 05:50 PM
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff282/Beantownbeats/Sere1r.jpg

Crits please?

thesilentvandal
10-19-2007, 08:10 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011960.jpg

i cant take a good picture all the pictures i take are like fucked up, cile, how do you make your picture so clean ?

Sumoe
10-19-2007, 09:05 PM
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/292/8/8/____by_SUMOE.jpg

I'ma get started on your pack pretty soon, Borg, while I'm in the mood to do shit.

I'll probably throw in a couple of pieces, simples and characters.

Bleh.

BORG
10-19-2007, 09:07 PM
straight..........
feelin' this piece like hells, that fuckin e is insane, love it alot

...AMOK...
10-20-2007, 07:55 AM
sumoe- that is dope as fuckkk

crits?
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok093.jpg

mas$
10-20-2007, 08:00 AM
amok, lookin alrite, just that m looks wierdthe first half is kinda wack
the o's interesting tho

Haz-E
10-20-2007, 08:09 AM
Sumoe thats some crazy shi im loving it man

hey i was just wonder if i can get some tips

heres one of my skethes there will be more to come
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4789/image033yk2.jpg

Dying to live
10-20-2007, 09:17 AM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/vbnsdbsd.png

for a comp
vid here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGyu9GYDB7w

AnteUp
10-20-2007, 11:12 AM
sume-damn bro, the colorin aint ur colorin, it lukks like a toy (me) would of dunn it, no pizaz, but u dont take tips from toys right?
dyin-use bars even for your addons, colorin is shit
amok-the o lukks like a b, it flows like a shit after raisin bran
arms-put it on the same line for now, the m is regular, and everythin else is kinda bad, use the m and build off of it

euthanasia
10-20-2007, 11:44 AM
I'm not really on par with anyone on here, this was a quick one, just looking for some critics.
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w296/thisisdarkvirtue/IMG_0109.jpg
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w296/thisisdarkvirtue/IMG_0110.jpg

sketch3
10-20-2007, 12:11 PM
eddy- dope shize, ccc reppin
sume -loverly
cile- likein it, saw the sneak peek too, dope fill
euth- make sure all the bars in ur letter are the same width,

boozer3000
10-20-2007, 12:27 PM
so i'm kinda new.
i know im not perfect or even that good but i try.
so tell me what you think and give me some tips please.
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/BOOZER3000/untitled2.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/BOOZER3000/graff.jpg

EsKoNeR!!
10-20-2007, 12:33 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/Photo13.jpg
last nights drunken madness. for the seka battle

Sumoe
10-20-2007, 12:36 PM
sume-damn bro, the colorin aint ur colorin, it lukks like a toy (me) would of dunn it, no pizaz, but u dont take tips from toys right?
dyin-use bars even for your addons, colorin is shit
amok-the o lukks like a b, it flows like a shit after raisin bran
arms-put it on the same line for now, the m is regular, and everythin else is kinda bad, use the m and build off of it

Colored it like that on purpose...

But, coloring does not really matter too much. I'm happy with where my letter style is going, though.

:)

AnteUp
10-20-2007, 12:40 PM
i liek where its goin too, keep it up

sex without condoms
10-20-2007, 02:07 PM
i just love him soo much!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1020071501.jpg

enigmatic
10-20-2007, 03:21 PM
DIGITALLY REMASTERED. due to gay ass suplies..
whatchya think. i might paint something like this

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6290/1020071539copyaa2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6290/1020071539copyaa2.67b65cf491.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=512&i=1020071539copyaa2.jpg)[/QUOTE]


i need more supplies...

dim
10-20-2007, 03:48 PM
fucked up 3d. u have like 2 different 3ds on there

Saxaphone
10-20-2007, 05:09 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7840/pict0008iz1.jpg

sex without condoms
10-20-2007, 05:10 PM
im really feelin' that except for the bad name and the P

silentchaos14
10-20-2007, 05:47 PM
my fuckin god does that say bape? just kill yurself now.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/iDEALsimple.jpg
crits? i think i fucked up the 3-d but whatever it was the first time i did it like that

bountyhunter113
10-20-2007, 05:48 PM
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs21/i/2007/292/8/8/____by_SUMOE.jpg

I'ma get started on your pack pretty soon, Borg, while I'm in the mood to do shit.

I'll probably throw in a couple of pieces, simples and characters.

Bleh.
heh, i love that simple on the bottom.......ur progression is amazin bro

IlikePie
10-20-2007, 05:51 PM
my fuckin god does that say bape? just kill yurself now.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/iDEALsimple.jpg
crits? i think i fucked up the 3-d but whatever it was the first time i did it like that

Your 3D is fine, but you should start pushing your letters together a bit, and if you can't draw straight lines with a pencil, what I do is make a lot of little dark lines and it ends up a decent looking line. And the curve in the D gets thinner as it goes down.

Sumoe, wowee, that's hawt.

Saxaphone
10-20-2007, 06:36 PM
haha, you gayboy.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/776/pict0001mm7.jpg

bountyhunter113
10-20-2007, 06:39 PM
coz there's mostly bumped flix on this page....:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/sticker_pack1.png

yea.......i hate the fuckin shoes too.....stupid ass ppl wear that shit coz they think they "gangsta"...

Saxaphone
10-20-2007, 06:40 PM
i love them bounty hunter, especially the plain biro ones.

bountyhunter113
10-20-2007, 06:42 PM
wth? i dont see a post by bouncing soul......eh, u were quick wif editing that post,lol

silentchaos- yea, i like it, but too shakey.......there aint no shame in usin a ruler bro

AnteUp
10-20-2007, 06:59 PM
silent- thank you for usin pencil lukks WAYYYYY better keep it up

BORG
10-20-2007, 07:50 PM
..........played around with a more original fill on this on

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/6906/june17011pq6.jpg

bounty--looks kinda cool but really rushed and sloppy

Citizin
10-20-2007, 08:08 PM
..........played around with a more original fill on this on

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/6906/june17011pq6.jpg

bounty--looks kinda cool but really rushed and sloppy

Damn that's good. Love the fill of course, and the 3d is nice.
Also just curios what markers did you use? Kind of looks like prismas?

thesilentvandal
10-20-2007, 08:09 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011975.jpg

BORG
10-20-2007, 08:30 PM
citizen- those are prismas, i finally got a grip on a shitload

C-SONE
10-20-2007, 08:36 PM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/vbnsdbsd.png

for a comp
vid here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGyu9GYDB7w
AHAHAH, Who are you on OHH?

Dying to live
10-20-2007, 08:41 PM
AHAHAH, Who are you on OHH?
Pardon?

C-SONE
10-20-2007, 08:47 PM
I figured that was for the Ozhiphop Sabotage competition, I could be wrong though.

littlerocky
10-20-2007, 08:51 PM
whole page is so illaccept eak work on ur letters some not so much on coloring..
pen sketch i just did..
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6685/img0399gj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
..reads MUG should read MUGS but no s yet.. like never finish my sketches. crits please.
bumpin this form way back cuz i got like no crits ans sex those throwies are illin.