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garbage down tha way
10-25-2007, 04:56 PM
i dont know.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/ovahh.jpg

made- its not bad, i just dont like how the o is smaller although the top part compensates lost space to the height of the other letters, id just make it bigger thats all. i dunno about that i either, maybe make it capital or somethin. looks good tho.

harry- its simple enough, but the letters are kinda ugly. make em look more like your keyboard letters, they dont have much structure. on the right trak tho.

borg- that shits hot, the letters are clean and good looking. cities are overplayed in sketches, but im really diggin that sin city atmosphere. dope.

craze- make your letters like this CRAZE, i know thats played out, but really if you wanna get good you gotta mess with simples for a long ass time.

tezer/sieze/stim- all lookin freshhh.

BUMP NO CRITZZZZZzzzz.

sketch3
10-25-2007, 04:59 PM
Because your graffiti sucks.

lol even tho ur an ass i can admit you made a funny

jroc-i thaught u finaly improved, but silly me it was a bump,
that purple shit sux

iowna9- dont bother filling it cuss the letters arnt great

00-made-00
10-25-2007, 05:14 PM
Over- i love you throwies there so sik,you gt any painted flicks?i think your o is slightly smaller tho if you look closely, down fo an exchange?

garbage down tha way
10-25-2007, 05:21 PM
thanks alot man, yeah lets do it, you write ideal or towi

dizzle_d
10-25-2007, 05:29 PM
Casa, just stop, shut the fuck up, seriously.
Your making yourself seem like a fucking immature little bitch who has emotional issues so you take it out on people online.
wow.


anyways, new school sketch.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2811/zombie1xs4.png

*Wing*
10-25-2007, 05:46 PM
Looks fresh!

Sumoe
10-25-2007, 05:49 PM
C'mon, people...

Please do not start beef in this thread, if you have a problem with someone PM them, that goes for all of you. Stop arguing about nothing.

Bullshit deleted.

redxdrum
10-25-2007, 07:25 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture005-2.jpg

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture003-3.jpg

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture002-3.jpg

can i get some advice or crits?

dajam410
10-25-2007, 07:44 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301405.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301404.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301410.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301392.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301411.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/S7301400.jpg


Gettin' busy in my new book. Oh, and don't ask about the arrows on the blue/white one, I don't know what the fuck I was thinking.

harry
10-25-2007, 07:54 PM
fuckkk dajam that shit is amazing get outta the toys thread now go to the big boys they will be ablle to give you better crits cause all i can do is say that its fucking great

Hoostein
10-25-2007, 08:05 PM
fuckkk dajam that shit is amazing get outta the toys thread now go to the big boys they will be ablle to give you better crits cause all i can do is say that its fucking great

Big boy thread isnt for crits. Nice dajam. I love it, and your simples make me hard :(



can i get some advice or crits?

Do your letters more simple. lose everything, the hand, the wack 3d, and make your 2 E's identical. Straight letters will help you tons.

reka one
10-25-2007, 08:15 PM
dajam- that shits fresh

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/1025071444.jpg

I NEED MARKERS...

sketch3
10-25-2007, 08:16 PM
thinken up that c and its gravy

harry
10-25-2007, 08:22 PM
crits i improved the n from last timehttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff034.jpg

reka one
10-25-2007, 08:45 PM
thinken up that c and its gravy


is that for me ? if it is thats a G ha but yeah after i put it up here it really stood out so ima fix that pronto

sk8er6
10-25-2007, 09:30 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/newbomb.jpg

F.R.A.T.
10-25-2007, 09:42 PM
sex and amwah nice guys

drak, loving the okzen cept ur n look too much like an R

a new throw which still sucks, cause i got shitty throw skills(kidding i dont have any skills) http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/mekthrowsandm.jpg
and a piece
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/LateNightPrawn.jpg

Bazer
10-25-2007, 09:44 PM
"TEZE!" not tezel. for tezer.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1099.jpg

harry
10-25-2007, 09:50 PM
yo someone crit my last pic post

silentchaos14
10-25-2007, 10:03 PM
harry work on your R and make your n uppercase instead of lower case, it just makes sense since the rest are all uppercase.

harry
10-25-2007, 10:07 PM
yea i no but i always fuck up upper case ns thats what i used to do but now with the lower case n i find it looks better and yea anything specific to work on with the r

garbage down tha way
10-25-2007, 10:18 PM
sex and amwah nice guys

drak, loving the okzen cept ur n look too much like an R

a new throw which still sucks, cause i got shitty throw skills(kidding i dont have any skills) http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/mekthrowsandm.jpg
and a piece
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/LateNightPrawn.jpg


shutup your throwz are dope fool.

thawbrkone
10-25-2007, 10:19 PM
sezer i love everything u come up wit bro but jus not feelin that extension off the S that goes over the E but thats jus me
still dope though


but then again what do i know):

harry
10-25-2007, 11:33 PM
crits i improved the n from last timehttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff034.jpg

ahhhh someone give me some fucking crits i got one and it dident help me so please crut thissssss!

capitol
10-26-2007, 12:02 AM
make da N smaller possible make it uper case.

sank.
10-26-2007, 12:18 AM
the toy sticker thread is a joke, so ill post this here. gonna ink it when i get some markers.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0798.jpg

harry
10-26-2007, 12:40 AM
thanks any more crits

Dying to live
10-26-2007, 03:40 AM
try making your letters more sharp not so blob like..

C-SONE
10-26-2007, 05:01 AM
sex and amwah nice guys

drak, loving the okzen cept ur n look too much like an R

a new throw which still sucks, cause i got shitty throw skills(kidding i dont have any skills) http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/mekthrowsandm.jpg
and a piece
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/LateNightPrawn.jpg
Don't write mek
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee255/IMG_9110/PA040034.jpg (http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee255/IMG_9110/PA040034.jpg)
^^ MEKS!!!, Apart from that I like your steeze. Keep up the good work.

Mass Appeal
10-26-2007, 06:00 AM
look..
didnt your momma tell you that it doesnt matter what the fuck you write...aslong as it isnt an obvious legend...or lives in your city...god damn.

dope shit Mek.
don listen to dahh fooolzzzzzzzz

ey and Mek...soory to say this in here guys..but..
i got Skate.....its a fuckin dope game....but the framerate is whack...anyways...ill chat on MSN when im on my AMKAH account again man..peace.

Bazer
10-26-2007, 06:23 AM
bump. i didn't get any praise.

"TEZE!" not tezel. for tezer.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1099.jpg

Mass Appeal
10-26-2007, 07:57 AM
at firs glance the T looks like an S for some gay reason..but then you see the T and its ILL !
the E's are fire..the Z is fire...dont know about the last letter though..?

librelikespie
10-26-2007, 08:01 AM
Baze - I see tezel :S.. i dont see anything wrong with that.
Harry - your 3D is off. Letters are very bland.. iduno
FRAT - im really feelin al of them sketches.I reckon you should keep writing meks....who knows, you'll probably be burnin that other mesk in a year or so

heres some sketches in my book:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img094.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img093.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img092.jpg

harry
10-26-2007, 08:07 AM
your stuf is really fresh but what parts is my 3d off

librelikespie
10-26-2007, 08:21 AM
It's off on the top extension of the E and the tops of the N

harry
10-26-2007, 08:33 AM
shit yea thanks man

ARK_Jump
10-26-2007, 09:00 AM
has any1 seen a book bout 3 by 6 lost in the graff world tryin to find it again
almost no chance of finding but o well figured id post anyway

Mass Appeal
10-26-2007, 09:42 AM
ARKjump...wrong thread...hit the book thread.
Librelikespie...i dont like any of your letters...there is no structure...your hittin a style you carnt pull off.......simples ..blocks...... i know you wont do them so why bother me critting..

librelikespie
10-26-2007, 09:58 AM
thanks for crits mass apeal, I dunno what you mean by structure.... I didnt block that shit up cos i couldnt be bothered to use a pencil....
what do you mean by "your hittin a style you carnt pull off" ?

huskinator
10-26-2007, 10:00 AM
thanks for crits mass apeal, I dunno what you mean by structure.... I didnt block that shit up cos i couldnt be bothered to use a pencil....
what do you mean by "your hittin a style you carnt pull off" ?

hes basically saying your letters suck.

librelikespie
10-26-2007, 10:03 AM
oh well. gotta start somewhere. And there isnt any use holding beef on the internet. So I wont say shit. :D

crimateNC
10-26-2007, 10:35 AM
well... u could start by connecting the bars? its all like "HEY I'm the letter I but don't confuse me for the second half of my neighbor Mr. K"

-ShAmEE-
10-26-2007, 11:37 AM
toys writing shit...that tickled me..
do you need crits..?...you seem to know what your doing.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fe.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e985d7c2.jpg

finished

crits..

noticed loads of people have been bumping this a few times. but i really dont think this is amazing, the only dope letter is the M, all the other letters look like it has been affected by the onion peeling effect. you have killed the stucture of the letters, NO BEEF.

crimateNC
10-26-2007, 11:55 AM
noticed loads of people have been bumping this a few times. but i really dont think this is amazing, the only dope letter is the M, all the other letters look like it has been affected by the onion peeling effect. you have killed the stucture of the letters, NO BEEF.

I see what you're saying with the first "A". I think the "W" would be better if it was more simple.

NAIK_SHOES
10-26-2007, 12:45 PM
Harry: try to keep it a little more simple and more ''square'' (sorry for my poor english)

Sank: I love your simple, really like the ANK

1nonlybaze: Nice letters, f*** nice T and i love the ''extension''(ok?) on it, what about the last letters?

Libre: Nice caract, but i juste d'ont feel your letters

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/466/l870ff494a20c2f1a81a5b9fw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
OLDSKETCH...COMMENTS PLEASE..

crimateNC
10-26-2007, 03:24 PM
NAIK - nice, I like the bars, did u happen to add color to it?

AZTEKA
10-26-2007, 03:33 PM
Naik those letters are lookin tight keep up your style that shits dope. Crimate what part of NC you from?

ESKiMO2
10-26-2007, 04:14 PM
Mass Appeal - You are so awesome at coloring.
I wish I could say the same.
A request I did for a girl named Cindy...
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3937/dscf0103ps4.jpg

And a sketch n ink I did in like 40 minutes. Nothing special. just felt like posting.

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9190/dscf0082ub5.jpg

yeah... it says step. I don't know why. I like it though. Comments and suggestions please.

Haz-E
10-26-2007, 04:47 PM
NAIK im loving that "E" man everything looks dope Im not feeling the char that much thou but its alright

Eskimo im not feeling the Step thing i like the first pic thou

First Simple in my new book
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1938/0000033cl6.jpg


Char I did like a sec ago
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9918/0000026ow6.jpg
FOG HORN ANYONE

Vagrant
10-26-2007, 05:17 PM
Progression of my new realistic Fly Karak

http://a804.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/l_b66fb1f865e412a12fa2d1eb7231083b.jpg
http://a719.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/89/l_f5f10be2da56cc4ed24d6aec803fabae.jpg
http://a689.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/l_e585dc5622778ad44daf899fe4960590.jpg
http://a37.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/l_f3e81768c11faa011d6ca4ba7e93e36c.jpg

harry
10-26-2007, 07:09 PM
thats really good man and thanks for my crits aswell brudddddda

Sick!
10-26-2007, 07:23 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000c2b316c/1/83/vny_ZbDQ6j9gcEuUtkmxjmF7FMvTRmvn.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/8JfexC0b0z9R1o0ZyVUGToV1C5fXBcyk?referrer=hlnk)


really liking that fly karak vagrant

Kool-Aid Man
10-26-2007, 07:36 PM
vagrant thats hot, that finished?

skiv
10-26-2007, 07:36 PM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0006.jpg?t=1193445305http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0005-1.jpg?t=1193445332http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0002-2.jpg?t=1193445361

skiv
10-26-2007, 07:45 PM
Shame, Niak, & haz-e looking good
Sick keep working on it

enigmatic
10-26-2007, 07:47 PM
I hope you can appreciate how carefull study has gone into the progression of the following outlines. Sort of a throwback to dondi, psycho, mare, iz the wiz, and other kings of the era.

If you notice the loose less jagged letter structure then take a peep at some of mares subway work you will see the evolution since the subway days. Most importantly is understanding how it translates onto a wall.

Peep this

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4848/1026072034kq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4848/1026072034kq0.f5ddf89bfe.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=528&i=1026072034kq0.jpg)

skiv
10-26-2007, 07:55 PM
wtF! are u talking about?
jeez

enigmatic
10-26-2007, 07:56 PM
...ignorance.

enigmatic
10-26-2007, 07:57 PM
wait (checks url) this IS a GRAFFITI forum right?

it appears so. im not gonna jump on you for not knowing your history but... Well, get to know your history.

skiv
10-26-2007, 08:05 PM
haha k, u just used a lot of words to explain ur pic, & it didnt really make sense

CRone!
10-26-2007, 08:10 PM
Just have to say..Naik - love it, especially the E.
And Eskimo - That Cindy is fucking insane style I love it.

Roolete
10-26-2007, 09:50 PM
postin this here cause someone ran the throwie thread into shit. no crits allowed, what a joke

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/10-26-2007074345PM.jpg

enigma, i like it. the bottem style is cute.

ANYONE decent want a piece exchange? i cant do my own letters, and i need helpp.

:-l
10-26-2007, 10:04 PM
top right of the h doesnt flow and looks dumb, align it with all the other parts jutting out like it is if you wanna keep it on the h

trashbag
10-26-2007, 10:53 PM
idk tell me what you think
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c359/mitch64/DSCF03702.jpg

slabk1
10-26-2007, 11:48 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture003.jpg

well im new to this. i write slabk. heres mine. any crits? this was done in class when i was bored.

enigmatic i like your simples.

in_the_red
10-26-2007, 11:54 PM
The S is horrible but the other letters aren't too bad. There's lots of small things you need to fix up. I'd lose the arrows and try to make it a bit simpler. The colours look gross and the skull's pretty silly.

F.R.A.T.
10-27-2007, 12:00 AM
roolete - the h is funky, and bit confusing
rend - look at some throws before attempting your own
slabk - lay off the extensions for a while and focus on letters more

IROC
10-27-2007, 12:23 AM
meh, i havent sketched in a while...

http://i23.tinypic.com/ojlfnt.jpg

Haz-E
10-27-2007, 07:53 AM
Irok dude im not really liking it i really think you should go right to left in the shadow on the letters instead of all over the place it would look alot nicer And im not feeling the letters try and go abit simpler

Rend i have to admit thats a style im liking,

Bump for some crit
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1938/0000033cl6.jpg

Dream Creation
10-27-2007, 08:42 AM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2889/1008kn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

iroc dnt go simpler u done most thing right its a throw right? the A is to small and u need to get cleaner!
slabk- get simple tryin to hard makin ur self look worse than u probably are!

so heres my LSD coloured snail like it?

Bazer
10-27-2007, 09:21 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture003.jpg

well im new to this. i write slabk. heres mine. any crits? this was done in class when i was bored.

enigmatic i like your simples.

this looks a bit like esk. like you ripped the k first or something.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/trippic.jpg

enigmatic
10-27-2007, 09:55 AM
I hope you can appreciate how carefull study has gone into the progression of the following outlines. Sort of a throwback to dondi, psycho, mare, iz the wiz, and other kings of the era.

If you notice the loose less jagged letter structure then take a peep at some of mares subway work you will see the evolution since the subway days. Most importantly is understanding how it translates onto a wall.

Peep this

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4848/1026072034kq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4848/1026072034kq0.f5ddf89bfe.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=528&i=1026072034kq0.jpg)

bump

Gumdrop.Behemoth
10-27-2007, 11:23 AM
im back guys!
first real sketch in monthes wat cha think?
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bc013.jpg

T O K E
10-27-2007, 12:43 PM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2889/1008kn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

iroc dnt go simpler u done most thing right its a throw right? the A is to small and u need to get cleaner!
slabk- get simple tryin to hard makin ur self look worse than u probably are!

so heres my LSD coloured snail like it?

you should put a blotter on his tounge

renz198
10-27-2007, 01:00 PM
new sketch un coloured and coloured sum stickers
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/1932/dsc00160lt2.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4664/dsc00162zn8.jpg
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5466/dsc00157ck4.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2207/dsc00158lw2.jpg

Saxaphone
10-27-2007, 02:26 PM
yo im loving that first sketch and the style of it, good stuff. wasnt really feeling it after you coloured it though.
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/3892/pict0032vs8.jpg

jersOneTIC
10-27-2007, 03:13 PM
slabk - fix the s
haz-e - lovin the color scheme
dream creation - nice
gumdrop - add some 3d to that..it'll look better
saxaphone - the m kills it
some shit
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1503/s6300555im6.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8562/s6300554jz7.jpg

ESKiMO2
10-27-2007, 03:36 PM
Jers, on the top one the J and the E are so awesome. The sharp turn on the leg of the R and the extention on the end of the R aren't so great, though. The S is coming along! But seriously the J and E are just pure awesome.

trashbag
10-27-2007, 03:49 PM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c359/mitch64/DSCF03722.jpg

renz198
10-27-2007, 04:01 PM
yo im loving that first sketch and the style of it, good stuff. wasnt really feeling it after you coloured it though.
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/3892/pict0032vs8.jpg

yeh man a always fuk my shit up when i colour it thanx for the crits but

BombingSciences Bitch
10-27-2007, 05:53 PM
slabk - fix the s
haz-e - lovin the color scheme
dream creation - nice
gumdrop - add some 3d to that..it'll look better
saxaphone - the m kills it
some shit
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1503/s6300555im6.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8562/s6300554jz7.jpg

The black and white one looks fire, but just bring the 'j' out a bit further, the 'e' is kinda covering it. Hot nonetheless.

librelikespie
10-27-2007, 08:22 PM
is this style even worth working on?
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img101.jpg

newrush - dont make your 3d overlap your letters cos it just looks silly.
jers - thats some tight poop
enigmatic - your pissing everybody off. youve whored that picture countless times in many threads on many forums and I think you should stop.

Samp1e
10-27-2007, 09:28 PM
jers -- ill shit. first one is fire

pie -- letters first, develop style later.

ESKiMO2
10-27-2007, 09:52 PM
Okay, I knew I had to get more creative and contemporary with my letters so I woke up this morning and I've been working on it piece by piece every since. I like the outcome though. I'm afraid to ink it... I don't want to ruin it but I might just make a copy. My sister only gives me the prismas that are dried out anyway.

it says CRED. if you are wondering why I don't write ESKiMO2 and it's my name is because I like doing a lot of other letters than just those...

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7905/dscf0147ao6.jpg

Libre, that style is worth keeping and working on if you can clean it up a little. There is a lot of free space but if you like that make it long and spread out.

Bastardo
10-27-2007, 09:53 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2539/picture280304dc4.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1043/picture280305jn1.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/4118/picture280307id1.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6427/picture280310gf1.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8025/picture280255qt3.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/651/picture280258mj5.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2523/picture280313ul5.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9008/picture280314sd9.jpg

Gers/Rodent one
www.myspace.com/labrodent (http://www.myspace.com/labrodent) add me, comment, whatever
Cred the C looks like an S man, take off that add on on the bottom of the C

C3ZR ONE
10-28-2007, 12:02 AM
Bastardo- Fresh as ever.

Jers- The E and the S are tight, but maybe a little generic. You've got ahold of the flow tho.

Eskimo- I can't really call it. It's pretty fresh, but it looks too much like Gesus's shit to give you alot of credit for it. No harm tho I guess.

Random bullshit.
http://a207.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/41/l_8249b4fc3bc206ba0ce76e47c4bf3a76.jpg
http://a373.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/70/l_dfb89ba780eeaab4ad783e9b516b7c3c.jpg
http://a200.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/74/l_9621df000d8b5a779f30b443f1a62717.jpg
http://a276.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/44/l_8836fef67beea4023c4c326abebc2123.jpg
http://a592.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/111/l_82a05408749124097bfbc53350ac4bc7.jpg


Pick up a copy of Peel Magazine #9 when it comes out. I'll be featured in it. ( Not for this crap, but for posterwork) Peace!

Bastardo
10-28-2007, 12:17 AM
Feeling all your letters man, especially that first one, stands out alot ot me! colour them..

Just done this
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i183/naber123/Picture280316.jpg
Rodent

F.R.A.T.
10-28-2007, 12:28 AM
cezr - hella clean, although im not a fan of the bubbles and extentions, you rock it well
bastardo - simples i would maybe change the E to lowercase, but thats just me, throws before were great as always

cause i got nothing else
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/LateNightPrawn.jpg
i dont like the m buut watever
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/mekthrowsandm.jpg

IROC
10-28-2007, 02:13 AM
iroc dnt go simpler u done most thing right its a throw right? the A is to small and u need to get cleaner!


hows this?
http://i22.tinypic.com/aws6tx.png


im not really feelin this, but i figured ill post it anyway...
http://i21.tinypic.com/aywp4x.png

Kool-Aid Man
10-28-2007, 02:25 AM
cezr -thats clean i want to see that magazine i love your posters
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/ake.jpg
critz please?

Kool-Aid Man
10-28-2007, 02:28 AM
Irok - fix up the shading on first one i like the a better

librelikespie
10-28-2007, 02:44 AM
iroc - about your throw, i would add an extension to the N thats the same as the one at the top of the A and that should make it look sweet.

heres sum shit, been trying out a new style:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img103.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img104.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img105.jpg

silentchaos14
10-28-2007, 03:36 AM
ake- not feelin it, the A looks wierd.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL4.jpg
shit from tonight.
crits?

Kool-Aid Man
10-28-2007, 05:20 AM
yeah ideal try somthing new like moving your letters together??...
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/akes2.jpg

JamesyBub
10-28-2007, 06:46 AM
yeah kool aid thats sick and clean..

uhhh
10-28-2007, 09:29 AM
no.
not really,
at all.
its not sick,
and its not very clean.

i dont know if im just not on enough anymore, or if all the better people have moved to the advanced forum.

thesilentvandal
10-28-2007, 09:36 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011988.jpg

TAZM
10-28-2007, 10:21 AM
its been awhile since ive posted anything cus i didnt feel th eneed to show every single thing ive done to progressbut im getting better.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/Dage_______.jpg
silentvandel - looks good
akes - block letters first. the letters are very uneven
ideal - its good that your doing simples but try to keep your lines straighter and not all jaggy. but other then that the leters look pretty even. just lose the extensions for now

and sry for bad quality. i used my cell phone for pic

crimateNC
10-28-2007, 10:28 AM
silentvandel - "w" could use some work
Ideal - ummm.... bars?

http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/teaguesyN87/corstagup.jpg
crits

Mass Appeal
10-28-2007, 11:56 AM
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7905/dscf0147ao6.jpg


this looks jack shit like Gesus..
so shut the fuck up whining.
it looks more of a really whack peice that needs seriously working on and toning down to the letters like im typing with yes you got it simples blocks and i jus said all this without any full stops or commas meaning im out of breath in my head some how.

Daws....thats is Haws Haws HAWT !

Dream Creation
10-28-2007, 02:18 PM
yeh IROK gettin there not make stuff into bars and try minimalising the bending of the bars keeping to that style this will give u nicer sence of letter structure! then u can add curves un and it will look so damn fresh! stick with that style dnt try and be original ur own flair and style comes naturaly much later!

Nem
10-28-2007, 02:48 PM
eskimo, definitely tone that shit down for now. work on the basics. i wouldn't call bites on gesus though....

crimate, its good you're using a relative uniform shape for each letter. your structure is a little bit shaky. but theres potential there. work on the C the most.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/pinkdrippies.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stylemaybe-1.jpg

whocares!?!?!
10-28-2007, 03:51 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011988.jpg
YES.
YES.

Haz-E
10-28-2007, 03:54 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011988.jpg

the silent vandal im loving he clean lines what marker are u using for the white
love it keep i up

Mass Appeal
10-28-2007, 04:28 PM
...

i critted up there ehhhh ? !

Nem....yo doing straight letters uuh.....buutttt....they aint done properly..you addin flava to that shit and you shudnt be...get letters down then go onto flavaahhh


5 minit quicken..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/feef.jpg

IlikePie
10-28-2007, 04:35 PM
The W and A are wack, you're trying too hard.

Roolete
10-28-2007, 05:02 PM
i agree, amk's older shit had better letters. amk bring back the havok battle.


throwie thread is shit
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/10-28-2007025110PM.jpg

Nem
10-28-2007, 05:07 PM
i think your H is too complex.

harry
10-28-2007, 07:23 PM
i like ur c and thats about it

Chalk
10-28-2007, 07:26 PM
i think the C looks too much like a T

Fube
10-28-2007, 07:53 PM
the throwie thread is not shit. is it that bad to have one toy thread not for crits? whats wrong with just posting it here?

anyway, some outline from me. love hate welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1103.jpg

dizzle_d
10-28-2007, 08:07 PM
Mad Up to Daws, Fube, Amwha, and Cher.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7835/img1962wu2.jpg
for a halloween colab with my brotha Amwha

Scab keep at it with the first one, and silentchaos I see some improvement.

I also have to do a piece for the halloween colab, but I'll post that later.

sex without condoms
10-28-2007, 08:22 PM
To anyone that i owe sticker packs to. I wont be able to get them to you for at least another week cause i od'd on friday and now im mad sick so ill get the packs out by wed of this week.
peace y'all!

HuntingLOLs
10-28-2007, 08:42 PM
nice shit cezr, welcome back! (i think?) nice shit mers as well (rodent now?)

my SEKA battle entry:
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0047.jpg

lololzheffer
10-28-2007, 08:53 PM
yeah ideal try somthing new like moving your letters together??...
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/akes2.jpg

work on your overall letter structure. and try adding some 3-d

Roolete
10-28-2007, 08:56 PM
i like all of it except for the pink arrows

and fube the reason i said that is because i view the toy thread as a place to improve. i presonally dont want to look through a gallery of bad throwies that arent improving. but its just my opinion

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0460.jpg

edit: towards huntinglols. that akes is gross

Samp1e
10-28-2007, 09:03 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/795/seka2zg9.png

-GEKS-
10-28-2007, 09:26 PM
cher- sick
lols- sicker
sample- dope 3d, but i cant read it. maybe its just me tho

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1432.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1430.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1429.jpg
put that on a hat...looks exactly the same
sry for dark pics

i think im gonna start rightin vent

dim
10-28-2007, 09:46 PM
slabk - fix the s
haz-e - lovin the color scheme
dream creation - nice
gumdrop - add some 3d to that..it'll look better
saxaphone - the m kills it
some shit
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1503/s6300555im6.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8562/s6300554jz7.jpg
jers that top e is so dope

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
10-28-2007, 10:51 PM
yeah, that e is bomb.
i wouldnt put it on top of all the letters though.

most of this shit are the packs borg and sable sent me.
just a few throws and a simple.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1738.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1739.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1743.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1742.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1741.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1740.jpg

harry
10-28-2007, 11:21 PM
you have a verrry fresh style post it in the big boys thread

HadeP
10-29-2007, 12:54 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer8.jpg

Kool-Aid Man
10-29-2007, 01:13 AM
work on your overall letter structure. and try adding some 3-d

shouldnt i just work on letter structure and then add 3d later after got letter structure???

renegade185
10-29-2007, 01:37 AM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/haz4.jpg
been workin on my throw.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
10-29-2007, 01:58 AM
yeah, i hate the colors of this.
whatever.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1744.jpg

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 03:16 AM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff46/kevr_2007/CopyofDSCF0759.jpgcouple of sketches i did quickly last night http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff46/kevr_2007/CopyofDSCF0762.jpgc&c please!!!

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 04:36 AM
another sketch i just quickly done.c&c please!http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff46/kevr_2007/jamessszzzsss.jpg

Tokenkaligreens
10-29-2007, 04:39 AM
guy above me if your doing that quickly slow the fuck down work you letter kiddies style isnt forced....

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 05:32 AM
just done another sketch mucking around..the k is disgusting and fucked it up with the green line but ohwell..c&c

http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff46/kevr_2007/yewwwwww.jpg

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 05:44 AM
^^no no stop,just stop,all your letters are disgusting ,you need to go way way more simpler,stop saying fucking excuses to cover your bad letter structure,take your time,try visiting the new to graff thread

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 06:08 AM
ahahha ok ok ok..and no it wasnt an excuse if u didnt fucking realise i was telling myself the k was disgusting..

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 06:10 AM
excuse or not you need to go way more simpler,k?

anyways,few scribbles:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs4.jpg

gold piece done on a random plastic box:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/gld.jpg

got a few more stuff to post,but my cam ran out of batteries

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 06:20 AM
as in i no i need work but i especially fucked up the k...

dizzle_d
10-29-2007, 09:36 AM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7835/img1962wu2.jpg
for a halloween colab with my brotha Amwha


babumppp

seize, hot shit, as always, but the Z and second E look pretty half assed

south pole second one is pretty hot

Jamesy, do simples, use bars. it helps a lot, but thats just a suggestion, I don't want you to do somethin you don't want nahhh meaann.

dinedgc
10-29-2007, 10:37 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/blured09/dine.jpg

crits welcome

and jamesybub, slow the fuck down for now, straight letters for a while

NEZ89
10-29-2007, 11:04 AM
sieze, the letters are cool, but i'm not too sure about the coloring
jamesy- do straight letters

kinda rushed this but yeah
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2236/im001400my7.jpg

GodAnubis
10-29-2007, 11:08 AM
its one of my first scatches hope its ok that i am posting it here
i still dont know what color to make it around the letters
i hate my S its always sux!
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/7566/pic00107ql3.jpg

NEZ89
10-29-2007, 11:17 AM
^^^block letters son

GodAnubis
10-29-2007, 11:41 AM
^^^block letters son

yes father
and what do you mean by block letters?

Mass Appeal
10-29-2007, 11:44 AM
block letters......" what do you mean by block letters ? ".......they are what they are....dumb nuts....B L O C K L E T T E R S

GodAnubis
10-29-2007, 12:10 PM
block letters......" what do you mean by block letters ? ".......they are what they are....dumb nuts....B L O C K L E T T E R S

wow now i understad all
not!
block letters does it mean to know how to draw letters rigth?
or what?

NEZ89
10-29-2007, 12:16 PM
lol the letters on your keyboard,

GodAnubis
10-29-2007, 12:32 PM
lol the letters on your keyboard,

tnks
for the understanding

dizzle_d
10-29-2007, 12:54 PM
yo Anubis, blocks are like simples, like the keyboard letters. USE BARS to create your letters. like to make an A = /-\ ... you see? once you get that down, then start adding some flavor, like bending your bars, adding shit. you probably will just jump into bending the bars and shit, and thats aight, but remember simples...

FidelGastro
10-29-2007, 12:58 PM
Bars are probably the most usefull piece of advice you can get. use bars and your simples will be rockin in no time

Iowna9
10-29-2007, 02:08 PM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/2143/perk3ak1.jpg

crits

Jamesy bub- try using bars

Nem
10-29-2007, 02:09 PM
eskimo, definitely tone that shit down for now. work on the basics. i wouldn't call bites on gesus though....

crimate, its good you're using a relative uniform shape for each letter. your structure is a little bit shaky. but theres potential there. work on the C the most.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/pinkdrippies.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stylemaybe-1.jpg


bump.

perk, take out those overlaps on the top of the P and R.

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 03:05 PM
excuse or not you need to go way more simpler,k?

anyways,few scribbles:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs4.jpg

gold piece done on a random plastic box:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/gld.jpg

got a few more stuff to post,but my cam ran out of batteries

BUMP TO NEXT PAGE

sketch3
10-29-2007, 03:07 PM
like the look and don

IlikePie
10-29-2007, 03:07 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00153.jpg

For a battle elsewhere...

Mass Appeal
10-29-2007, 03:09 PM
yo Anubis, blocks are like simples, like the keyboard letters. USE BARS to create your letters. like to make an A = /-\ ... you see? once you get that down, then start adding some flavor, like bending your bars, adding shit. you probably will just jump into bending the bars and shit, and thats aight, but remember simples...

iLikePie..
my crit to you..^^^
dizzle did it for me though..

Nice Mr.iGotMyPicTakenWithSeen.......:p:p:p:p:p

and damn Fluffy.....
THAT THORW I FIREEEEE

Fluffy Bunnies
10-29-2007, 03:11 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/5.jpg

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 03:18 PM
sketch it says don't look or else it doenst make sense lol
lol mistermass,thanks
fluffy,that throw looks nice
libre what does it say?can't read it

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 03:23 PM
libre try rocking another style if this one isn't working well

-GEKS-
10-29-2007, 03:40 PM
cher- sick
lols- sicker
sample- dope 3d, but i cant read it. maybe its just me tho

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1432.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1430.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1429.jpg
put that on a hat...looks exactly the same
sry for dark pics

i think im gonna start rightin vent

bump for crits

librelikespie
10-29-2007, 04:14 PM
libre try rocking another style if this one isn't working well

lul wut :D I'm libre...
?? haha

garbage down tha way
10-29-2007, 04:47 PM
throwz, of course. im actually working on a piece tho, it's not too bad. ill get that up here later.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/oq2.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/oq.jpg


vent- i was so excited when i saw your v ande, but then i saw the n and t and i was like ehhhhhwww. just make the n fatter like the v and e and take that weird looking thing off the end of the t. also, if you could make yur letters all in the style the v has going, thatd be dope youd have something going for yourself. look at cali simples.

kils- throw looks good. feelin the style.


i like pie- maybe im toy for saying this but im actually feelin that, i dunno. the style looks different and original, but i wouldnt say it lacks structure. if there was one letted id change up, itd be the e in the beginning.

HuntingLOLs
10-29-2007, 05:34 PM
amk is right, you're not that advanced yet. make it way simpler. not nescessarily blocks, but simples

(hidden bump!)

nice shit cezr, welcome back! (i think?) nice shit mers as well (rodent now?)

my SEKA battle entry:
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0047.jpg

Samp1e
10-29-2007, 06:01 PM
hunting -- hot. it just pops real well, but my only issue is with the A. it looks off from the rest of the sketch.

ilikepie -- yeah, i agree with the previous posts about your letters somewhat. you have a style going on right there, but there's a lot of tweaking you need to be doing. the piece thus far looks alright, but the letters don't hold their own solo. there's some balancing issues you need to work out with the S, i think it just doesn't sit that well tilted so hard. the M also looks like a bad K, need to work on the left side if it for the most part. not saying that you have to take a step back, just figure out what to do and work with the style you're pursuing right now.

garbage -- not my flavor of throw, but again i'm not much a throwie person myself. just don't listen to me :)

geks -- keep working on consistency, balance. ditch your addons for the time being.

fluffy -- my flavor of throw! crisp.

again SEKA bump
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/795/seka2zg9.png

Maste
10-29-2007, 06:22 PM
so, i wasn't gunna post cause i haven't taken pictures of my recent shit but, after lookin through a junk load of old posts i noticed that theres a lot of bad stuff in here and mine dont look too bad comparitivly haha so heres some thigns i did a while back...just with one or two markers i found layin around
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/4040/wise8bluesc6.jpg
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6295/wiseorangezg7.png
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5576/wizeoutlineny0.png
i was/am still tryin to develop a style and those were one i was tryin out.
haha i know it aint great too

South-Pole
10-29-2007, 06:26 PM
looks ok ,but theres a few things that needs to be corrected
loose those add-ons
the way you coloured your fill makes the letters hard to read
the extension on the right of the a has to leave
otherwise your letters look well structured

edit:this crit was directed at samp

wise-why ask crits for some old work lol,im not feeling those alot,the letter structure needs work


some random quickie i just done,aec(all evil crew,artistes en cavales,all enemys bla bla..just some random stuff i came with)

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image045.jpg

one last bump for this piece

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs4.jpg

Maste
10-29-2007, 06:41 PM
south. just for shits and giggles is all. ill get up some new shit when i get my hands on a camera or scanning software

B$uR2EaTyOuRc0oKiEs
10-29-2007, 06:47 PM
garbage: not really feelin that....try some simple bubble letters

Sample: that shit is hot...looking forward to seeing more

Wise:Not feelin the fill....and maybe use a black outline make it stand out more

south pole: i like the color combo and the style but the C could be a lil closer to E

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/292/011zh2.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9365/009th0.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/839/012hw3.jpg

Q--->
10-29-2007, 06:47 PM
HuntingLOL's and samp1e, your guys' stuff is great, like the styles...
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2637/cinqfe6.png
Something quick when I was bored at school...

sex without condoms
10-29-2007, 07:08 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1024072019.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1024072018.jpg
fucking around with a weirddd S
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1024072018a.jpg
this sucks.

IlikePie
10-29-2007, 07:11 PM
I want you to...
1. Get off your ass
2. Pick up some paint
3. Apply paint to wall
4. Take a picture.
5. Upload picture
6. Post on Bombing Science

Seriously, I wanna see your shit up on a wall.

dizzle_d
10-29-2007, 07:11 PM
sex, thats beautiful.

:wub:

... no homo

sex without condoms
10-29-2007, 07:18 PM
for Rawskishorts.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071951.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071950a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071950.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071948a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071948.jpg

enigmatic
10-29-2007, 07:25 PM
stickers? they look good

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2011.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2012.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2013.jpg

fuckn sketches

thesilentvandal
10-29-2007, 07:27 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011994.jpg

skiv
10-29-2007, 07:36 PM
looks like a mix of new & old skool

dim
10-29-2007, 07:38 PM
euro meets new york ?

dizzle_d
10-29-2007, 07:43 PM
now thats whats up.. Euro meets New York

thesilentvandal
10-29-2007, 08:05 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011995.jpg

sex without condoms
10-29-2007, 08:06 PM
i realllly don't like that one bit
sorry buddy:[

:-l
10-29-2007, 08:22 PM
for Rawskishorts.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071951.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071950a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071950.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071948a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1029071948.jpg

step 1: rack some rusto
step 2: spray said rusto in the shape of your throw on a surface
step 3: take picture
step 4: post picture

dude...youre ready
are you just scared you'll have no can control or some shit?

Iowna9
10-29-2007, 08:30 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3030/perk3ud9.jpg

crits

F.R.A.T.
10-29-2007, 08:43 PM
nice stickers sex
my own
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/mekmfcpiecesticker.jpg

Casa45
10-29-2007, 09:26 PM
...

i critted up there ehhhh ? !

Nem....yo doing straight letters uuh.....buutttt....they aint done properly..you addin flava to that shit and you shudnt be...get letters down then go onto flavaahhh


5 minit quicken..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/feef.jpg


This doesnt flow and your extenstions are wacked out.

cezr- not feeling your new shit.
frat- not feeling your extenstions either.
sample- pipe it down and go simple.

SenTheFirst
10-29-2007, 09:31 PM
daws- apset looks tight
mek- your style is so clean. good stuff bro keep it up


simples

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1206.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1208.jpg

dim
10-29-2007, 09:34 PM
mek thats so ill man keep it up

Licossa
10-29-2007, 09:43 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1387/picture019lg0.jpg
Man I really like pens a lot more than pace, yeah I know the highlights are weird lol, I wanted to do them better but kept messing up with the marker

sen - don't do that thing on the e, and fix the top bar so it's even, do that and it'd be nice

iowna - go simpler, dont overlap the bars within a letter either, do keyboard letters for now

mek - your letters are dope but easy with the extensions, there are a few that could be dropped

Casa45
10-29-2007, 10:27 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/6779/img0030yy8.jpg
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/5235/img0032yp6.jpghttp://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6822/img0031gi6.jpg

Nem
10-29-2007, 10:36 PM
i like your old letters with all the circle madness more.

SKriBL*666
10-29-2007, 10:48 PM
Not much of a piecer.
But i have really been tryna work on it.

Not done.
Dont mind the K and T.
Looks not good.


http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k202/AerosolSkam916/scan002.jpg

HadeP
10-30-2007, 12:45 AM
excuse or not you need to go way more simpler,k?

anyways,few scribbles:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/fs4.jpg

gold piece done on a random plastic box:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/gld.jpg

got a few more stuff to post,but my cam ran out of batteries

looks like you where having a seizure while holdin the camera there B.
not really feelin the gold, but everything else is aight, keep at it.

HadeP
10-30-2007, 12:48 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/lojiconer8.jpg
bump for crits

Mass Appeal
10-30-2007, 03:04 AM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4528/img0008vq8.jpgSome dumb shit.


http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/6779/img0030yy8.jpg
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/5235/img0032yp6.jpghttp://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6822/img0031gi6.jpg

dont like any of these...the P's have huge tumors on em....the U looks whack..looks bitten from Sume infact..the M is basic...did you bite those P's cos the other letters look nuttin like em extension wise....im prettty glad..and wassap with the Ice Cream rocket ?.............

JamesyBub
10-30-2007, 05:05 AM
yeah nez and huntinglols there dope as sketches!

BORG
10-30-2007, 05:28 AM
casa- go simple on the pump lettering and and it'll be pure fire, the swoe piece e is really fuckin anorexic, pump some fat into her, but i love a ***** who rolls a good blunt
pens- nice simples, keep at em
scribl- ???? do simpler stuff for now, i cant really read that all that well, your letters could be improved alot through simps
southpole- not feelin that trn or gld, for the trn use the same height and shit, and dont let the letters just run off like they are
hade- simples, fill looks pretty decent

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/275/june17au5.jpg

some halloween inspired shit from this weekend
more flicks up later

daisyface
10-30-2007, 09:39 AM
casa-despite what everyone else is saying i like that first one alot. the E on the second one, not so much. like borg said you should fatten it up a lil
skribl-hmm too pointy for my taste, not much structure
borg-your characters are getting better and better props

experimenting with a new name kinda,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/shoows003.jpg
crits plz

sKeeLo
10-30-2007, 10:29 AM
yeah i like the first casa too . . . didnt know you could bite such a simple U, a zillion people do it like that

daisyface - i like how you have a consistent bend to your bars which helps it look right . . keep bending em every which way you can . . .maybe try pinchin the W in more tighter and bringin the middle bar up more, same thing with the E try bringin the 3 horizontal bars in more so it more tight/squished in and extend the middle bar of the E . . . with the yellowish 3d maybe try running a darker ornage on th einside to give it alil more depth and not soo much plain yellow look with all the open sapce 3d you have going, it takes 2 seconds but really makes 3ds look better in my opinion

B$uR2EaTyOuRc0oKiEs
10-30-2007, 12:43 PM
garbage: not really feelin that....try some simple bubble letters

Sample: that shit is hot...looking forward to seeing more

Wise:Not feelin the fill....and maybe use a black outline make it stand out more

south pole: i like the color combo and the style but the C could be a lil closer to E

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/292/011zh2.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9365/009th0.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/839/012hw3.jpg


bumped becuz no critz were givin

SenTheFirst
10-30-2007, 01:48 PM
^^^ you need some finer tipped markers or something
daisy- second one looks nice
cile- dope

i think im going to start writing ten10 b/c i just like t's a lot

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1209.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1211.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1212.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1213.jpg

Mello
10-30-2007, 03:29 PM
Sen - the lower case E looks better
Bsure - bottom one looks ok, middle looks like it might be ok but work on your colouring, top one looks whack
Daisy - the top E in the bottom piece would look pretty good :)

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1456/melo14vo3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

capo93
10-30-2007, 03:51 PM
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/mek-pencilfill.jpg
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/mek-2piecepage2.jpg
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/Bastard.jpg
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/mek-bored.jpg

mello- not digging the m or the o the e and l have potential
ten-digging that throw keep it up
bsur- simples.. please
casa- lookspretty decent

FidelGastro
10-30-2007, 04:03 PM
mek im feelin the style drop a darker outline on those so we can see them better though and start doing more canvases/colored pieces. where the characs at?

2quiet2notice
10-30-2007, 04:08 PM
im shite but ill drop a few in.

sex without condoms
10-30-2007, 04:20 PM
Mek your Es are horrendous.

enigmatic
10-30-2007, 04:27 PM
stickers? they look good

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2011.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2012.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/10-29-07_2013.jpg

fuckn sketches

eeeh

silentchaos14
10-30-2007, 04:49 PM
enigma- not feelin the throws, the pieces are nice though.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALCover.jpg
my black book cover.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALSimple2.jpg
shit from class today.
crits?

Saxaphone
10-30-2007, 04:52 PM
the blackbook cover is quite good, but i didnt like the second picture at all. mainly because of the squigglyness, it just made the letters look really bad. try doing some straight lines and curves n stuff instead of squiggley stuff. the blackbook cover is quite good though.

Sumoe
10-30-2007, 05:17 PM
Not trying to be an ass...

But you're progressing at an extremely slow pace, Slient.

But, you are improving at least.

Forget about the squiggly shit for now, focus on the straight letters.

Drakula
10-30-2007, 05:21 PM
Don't be fooled.I've seen people with twice the post count but are still toy toy toy.Ideal just keep with the simples and don't do anything else.Absolutely no bits coming off,little flairs,squiggly lines or lumpy letters.Do you know how to wield a pen man?No beef or anything but your letters no matter how simple have shaky as fuck lines.The newest one is a big improvement though.Just do that.

garbage down tha way
10-30-2007, 05:35 PM
new style i just made up on accident, anybody feelin it?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newstl.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newish.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newisht.jpg


ideal- nice simple dude, lookin good. shit under it is ugly tho. keep ya lines straight.

enigma- old school lookin fresh, that throwie is off the chain tho, so dope.

capo- i dont know anything about euro so i cant crit that but, its kinda ugly, reminds me of a playground. throwz dont look to bad tho, id work on those some.

mello- yer m looks like an octopus, id fix that. pretty much make your simples a little more readable, like the e is two pieces and the l is also. the o doesnt fit with the rest.

ten- the top one is my favorite, id go with that one. the t is lookin hot.

sketch3
10-30-2007, 05:38 PM
i like your first s, mayb cuss its kinda similer to mine

garbage down tha way
10-30-2007, 05:40 PM
hahaha ouuuch its an r. but your right it does look like an s. hahaha

Sans
10-30-2007, 05:53 PM
crits? improvement of any sort?
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7284/reg1vv3.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4068/reg2uk0.jpg

Socrates
10-30-2007, 06:54 PM
yooo
tooo much hatin

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285992833.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285267187.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285267184.jpg

lordloss
10-30-2007, 06:59 PM
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-6.jpg
just did a simple s i really like it thinking about making the beging of my peice crits?
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-2.jpg
just a fast throw up crits?
SANS: like the lettering and the color over all it great.
Garbage: i like were your going with it just fix it up looks good
soc:your amazing

thesilentvandal
10-30-2007, 07:08 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012005.jpg

Sumoe
10-30-2007, 07:13 PM
yooo
tooo much hatin

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285992833.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285267187.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285267184.jpg

Nice.

Bastardo
10-30-2007, 08:22 PM
Daws give up on that style it just aint working for you, stick to your other style, its alot better for you

nickstix
10-30-2007, 08:45 PM
the silent vandel...nice, i like it, keep it up.

havent been on here in a long ass time, want to get into it again. heres something i sketched real quick in school...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/rus.png

nothing great, crits?

sex without condoms
10-30-2007, 08:53 PM
nope, you'd lose.
hands down.

5min sketch and fill, not good.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00205.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00206.jpg

idk if i posted this
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1024072016.jpg

huskinator
10-30-2007, 09:24 PM
yooo
tooo much hatin

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/285992833.jpg

did you seriously post a knife in front of your sketches? bahahah

sex without condoms
10-30-2007, 09:27 PM
sex, your shit really isnt that good. i dont know why your talking like your the boss of this thread. i mean, whats there to be proud of anyway, best toy?

because i back up my friends.
and im in and have been in a terrible mood.
overdosing, get your stomach pumped, then getting a staff infection from a highschool lockerroom and then a fever of 103.4 and strep throat doesn't really go far with me.

im posting this again cause i love it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/myknew.jpg
fuck y'all

sex without condoms
10-30-2007, 09:35 PM
i have been.
i had an ingrown hair that got infected.
i got released today.
and idk if it was a staph infection or not thats what they said but idk if meningeitus(SP) is a type of staph infection or w.e

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00188.jpg

sex without condoms
10-30-2007, 09:52 PM
if you want but there'd be no point.
if we do im just gonna use an old rough reach sketch from awhile back.
this is what i'd use.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/lpoppo.jpg
or
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010235.jpg

SenTheFirst
10-30-2007, 10:27 PM
ser-clean


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1216.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1220.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1222.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1225.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1227.jpg

HuntingLOLs
10-31-2007, 02:49 AM
@ silent chaos: it has nothing to do with moving slow - i used to think so too but lately i've gotten alot better in controlling my pens and now i move them slow as fuck because it gives better lines. practice is all there is to it
sex, dont like your normal shit but the coloured reach sketch is hot (although your throws are becomming real hot) [



http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1024072016.jpg

started doing some slimy shit, digging that kinda stuff and hoping i can develop some letters that have that in 'em. keep dreaming little fellah :(
anyway:
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0049.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0051.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0052.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0053.jpg

NEOZ
10-31-2007, 09:26 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071225.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071224.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071223.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/261020071222.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/261020071221.jpg

Sex great stuff..
HuntingLOLs great stuff too..

sKeeLo
10-31-2007, 09:42 AM
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-6.jpg
just did a simple s i really like it thinking about making the beging of my peice crits?
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-2.jpg
just a fast throw up crits?


looks like your kinda new to this . . . that bubbly simple style is a good place to start, maybe try figuring out a few lil things you can do to add a lil flavor to your letters . . . i really cant give you a specific crit without being able to draw something and posting it up for you to see . . . pm me if you want and ill pm you some pics showing you some lil tricks of the trade that might help or find a style someelse does thats like yours but more advanced and see why theres is better . .

neoz - man get your letter/bar proportions down before trying to get too advanced with it, its a pain in the ass but you cant progress until you get your proportions down . . .(yeah i can see that some bars are meant to be smaller or go from small to big but its not working for you yet, get proportions down first before tryin to vary the size of your bars)

Mass Appeal
10-31-2007, 12:22 PM
wow.
beef..
beef..
beef..

guuuh.
And Casa..
i aint battling anyone at the moment...i have 2 weeks of constant exams so if youwant to battle me you can wait and smoke all your weed and go back to da stre3ts whers yous belongg..

and Shamee can wait too...so can BountyHunter...man why the fuck you ignoring my PM's..eeeh..

anyways..
kinda glad to see everyone is back in here...nice stuff being posted guys keep it up.

Sen....nice my dude.....it would be good if you followed the line all the way thru to the cicrle part of the T to make an S shape...it would look illen.
HuntingLOLSSSSSSSSS....nice aint seen muh from you for an while..
nice mannnn..

reposties.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e985d7c2.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-3.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/5ybrge.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1.jpg

haven to roll wit dese for the next few weeks aiggght
Peace.

oh and Huzkinatz0r...chill the fuck out hoppin on Sex's dick like that..who the hell are you ?..i smell the next Casa

whahappen?
10-31-2007, 02:08 PM
because i back up my friends.
and im in and have been in a terrible mood.
overdosing, get your stomach pumped, then getting a staff infection from a highschool lockerroom and then a fever of 103.4 and strep throat doesn't really go far with me.

im posting this again cause i love it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/myknew.jpg
fuck y'all
remember when you posted that in NJ thread and people were calling you wack and shit for like 5 pages
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/658/picture218wq4.jpg
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/209/picture217du5.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3828/1190849247784cz7.jpg
fucked up the full awar thing cause my paper was crinkled like a shit

nickstix
10-31-2007, 02:15 PM
come on can i get some crits? im just getting back into this and i want to know how im doing...

the silent vandel...nice, i like it, keep it up.

havent been on here in a long ass time, want to get into it again. heres something i sketched real quick in school...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/rus.png

nothing great, crits?

bump

5Funerals
10-31-2007, 02:54 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/DSCF0001.jpg

HuntingLOLs
10-31-2007, 03:19 PM
amk i think i've said it some time ago but your 3d needs to be same lenght. look closely at the WAH part for example - W's 3d is abit longer than the A and H is way longer than both. if they're the same lenght it will look better (the cross in the A is really ncie tho, if there was 1 or 2 more in other letters or something it would have looked cool, but dont like colour scheme) and yeah, been without cam for a while (that means more sketching and less trolling on BS tho)
anyway, forgot this one (i think?):
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0055.jpg

Haz-E
10-31-2007, 04:29 PM
yooo lord loss ur shadow is abit off and ur throwie letters can use some workk take a look at some other throwies and try again

and the "s" is really whack try using some bars that helps alot with structure trustttt



HuntingLOLs
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0055.jpg

that SM is looking dope

Haz-E
10-31-2007, 05:06 PM
whahappen?
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/658/picture218wq4.jpg

YEAH man BLOBS aint doing it for me and is that ur handie in the corner if so might change that up to

dim
10-31-2007, 05:17 PM
smer that shit looks like its comming along rele well cant wait to see a full peice from you.

Nem
10-31-2007, 05:47 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010235.jpg

MORE OF THIS!!!!

Im seriously in love with that style.

-ShAmEE-
10-31-2007, 06:07 PM
@ silent chaos: it has nothing to do with moving slow - i used to think so too but lately i've gotten alot better in controlling my pens and now i move them slow as fuck because it gives better lines. practice is all there is to it
sex, dont like your normal shit but the coloured reach sketch is hot (although your throws are becomming real hot) [

started doing some slimy shit, digging that kinda stuff and hoping i can develop some letters that have that in 'em. keep dreaming little fellah :(
anyway:

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0051.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Foto0052.jpg

the arrown and green shit killed ur letter S
secound one is the better one.
keep rockin this, nice simplish stuff, dopeeish

sex without condoms
10-31-2007, 06:10 PM
got new flicks from today and some shit for Huskinator and cher:]
ima post later

Sans
10-31-2007, 08:36 PM
crits? improvement of any sort?
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7284/reg1vv3.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4068/reg2uk0.jpg

bump for crits?

thesilentvandal
10-31-2007, 09:58 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012007.jpg

i know i forgot some shadow

Maste
10-31-2007, 10:13 PM
sans only thing i can see to crit is that it looks like you missed some 3d on the underside of the g and the u...i dunno if that was intentional or not. oh and the little arm off the u looks akward to me but i dunno how youd change it

huskinator
10-31-2007, 10:14 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8641/1031072258lr3.jpg

silentchaos14
10-31-2007, 10:54 PM
throw some d's on dat bitch!
i dont know if it was supposed to be rich boy but thats who it reminds me of.

NEOZ
11-01-2007, 05:09 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071225.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071224.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/311020071223.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/261020071222.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/261020071221.jpg

Sex great stuff..
HuntingLOLs great stuff too..


bumping For more critics

skeelo, great crits you gave to me I'm glad but still I'm working to improove myself.. and what you mean is me starting all over again with some simplys and shit.. I will give it a try anyway.. I dislike the 1st and 3d one myself becoase they just got out ugly....

sKeeLo
11-01-2007, 08:55 AM
nah man i aint sayin go back to simples but to pay more attention to the thickness of your bars so that all of them are proportional to each other then when you got that down try and make bars go smaller to bigger or vice versa . . .it looks like you have a particular style you want to get down so keep at it

HuntingLOLs
11-01-2007, 09:11 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012007.jpg

i know i forgot some shadow

shading has to be more round. shading doesnt come out that pointy. the same curve as the letter has should the shading have. hope it makes sence :(

D E M O
11-01-2007, 10:43 AM
kors- I really like the second one. Also work more on the S.
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/8923/sheepog2.jpg

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2520/demo35wa2.jpg

NICCSACC
11-01-2007, 10:47 AM
i like those sheeps faces or whatever and a couple of the drop shadows on the bottom one but the rest i dont.

South-Pole
11-01-2007, 11:27 AM
demo-the only letters i like are the E and M sorry

trying out new things

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/wtf.jpg


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/lO.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image045.jpg

thesilentvandal
11-01-2007, 12:34 PM
south pole, get your ass on msn haha

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012008.jpg

NEZ89
11-01-2007, 12:35 PM
south- not really feelin the stars and circles fillin in the 1st, the top part of the leg of the K looks too far out on the 2nd, the 3rd's cool, but the 3-d looks a little off

Haz-E
11-01-2007, 01:05 PM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2520/demo35wa2.jpg

LIKING IT alot except the M change dat it woill look sex colours are crazy dope

garbage down tha way
11-01-2007, 03:05 PM
just because my last sketches were wack..
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/towz.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/goodyet.jpg

demo- i dont like the top one, he structure of the letters is a little off, but the bottom one is fire. im reaaally feelin that, i cant really point out anything big thats wrong with it, id just seperate the e and m so they dont look like one letter. stay up.

daws- i like your non-euro style alot, some bang em out of the box shit, but that last sketch has too many things poppin off it for me.

south pole- the kec is my favorite. top oned be cool too with out the little extentions at the bottoms of the legs. middle ones too blocky.

sketch3
11-01-2007, 03:09 PM
daws gotta agree with the garbege man, like ur non euro stuff waaaay more