Blackbooks

[Haz-E]

LMFAO



Quote:
Originally Posted by SPITONE*DANGR*MISSMURDER http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=913701#post913701)
thats what my friend amanda writes. not me i write spitone. DICKHEAD

i smell BULLSHIT


LMFAO that was such a put down

[5Funerals]

[QUOTE=m125x;913741]30 seconds of work made these... I know they look like crap but whatever QUOTE]


Why would you post something you think looks like crap?

[m125x]

I can delete it if ya want

just know that some of the other stuff in this topic looks even worse than mine does so I decided to post it anyways

[sketch3]

dont delete it, just spend more time on ur ish befor u upload it,
second one has potential. i suggest u take a look at new to graff thread

[m125x]

dont delete it, just spend more time on ur ish befor u upload it,
second one has potential. i suggest u take a look at new to graff thread

Will do thanks

[c.n.k]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1088.jpg

[sketch3]

dam u improved since i last saw u

[Haz-E]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1088.jpg


dope shit man real clean loving it keep it up

[mufy]

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/mufy/IMG.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/mufy/sketch_0003.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/mufy/sketch_0002.jpg
crits please?

bump, crits?

cnk- your letters arent all the same size
haze- your 3d on the r looks a little weird, but other than that i like itt alot

[Swoe.45]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3999/img0051do5.jpg

[silentchaos14]

swoe and neuro- both look good, swoes looks photoshopped. either that or you have a really steady hand and some crazy colouring skills.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/iDEALSimple4.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALCurved.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALSchool2.jpg
bumping the first two and adding the third.
crits?

[Swoe.45]

Its not photoshoped. just takes mad practice.still not happy with it. and your stuff is coming along. its about time you work up a style homeskillet... :p

[synps]

c.n.k- looks awesome it just looks like it gets a bit bigger as you go along (it could just be the camera angle)
mufy- my fave one is the piece in the middle of the second flick. I don't like the first letter in the top of the first one.
swoe- I like it.
silent chaos- Nice and simple. in the second and the third though the d looks like an o

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/bb002.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/bb003.jpg
I'm new to this, crits?

[silentchaos14]

Its not photoshoped. just takes mad practice.still not happy with it. and your stuff is coming along. its about time you work up a style homeskillet... :p
yeah i hear u on the style thing but i have trouble getting my ideas from my head to the page and when i do get them to the page they end up lookin bad.

[Swoe.45]

if you have any question or any help PM me. ill do my best to help ya out the best i can.

[enigmatic]

finally got something not so low in quality.

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1660/1002415us9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7681/1002417ro8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2418.jpg

tell me whatchya think

[Swoe.45]

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1161/10024181jd6.jpg

Toss these things out. then its dope.

[Teez-EmM!!!]

dont waste ur copic markers yet

[Teez-EmM!!!]

well acually its just the first one

[SenTheFirst]

swoe and neuro- both look good, swoes looks photoshopped. either that or you have a really steady hand and some crazy colouring skills.
crits?

you think everything is photoshopped...

[intaout]

synps-pretty good nice and simple
engimatic- not bad they are all pretty good exept the first one with all that black shit

uhhh crits please
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2258/1924253633_ff5fbc02ff.jpg?v=0

[Haz-E]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7681/1002417ro8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

coloring is dope but the A looks sqashed but im diggin the oldschool look

[enigmatic]

well acually its just the first one

ur on crack. there free...

[sketch3]

just cuss sumthins free dont mean u gotta waste it, wat a shitty atitude.
(got nuttin to do wth ur graff)

[Swoe.45]

Bumping for crits over all the BS.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3999/img0051do5.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

award for gayest name on bombing science this year
yay fer joo!
by the way, miss murder was a horrible song

Come on man, he's 13..........

[Nem]

i think ive been staring at swoes sig for a good 5 minutes. haha.

[Sumoe]

Bumping for crits over all the BS.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3999/img0051do5.jpg

Reminds me a little bit of this Kwest piece. I am not implying that it is a bite. Just a thought.

[enigmatic]

Bumping for crits over all the BS.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3999/img0051do5.jpg


id rock that in silver on a train nom nom nom nom nom

[IaMaMoRoN]

critz anyone??
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0388.jpg

[Sick!]

yea dont do that thing on the bottom of the r
other than that its fine

[urbanpirate]

akroe- make the o bigger.
swoe- im really feeling that man
silent chaos- that last ones is nice.

[whahappen?]

Its not photoshoped. just takes mad practice.still not happy with it. and your stuff is coming along. its about time you work up a style homeskillet... :p
do the boobs in your sig do porn?

[whahappen?]

Come on man, he's 13..........
im 14 and when i was 13 i sure didnt like THAT shitty of music

[IwriteNASR]

enigma- not feelin the letters there ive seen better from you
swoe- solid. please paint that
akroe- lose the generic thing on the r and make the o bigger
http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/8784/picture002vm9.jpg
bored in school ^ crits

[Xored]

http://i18.tinypic.com/8f29pxf.jpg
Crits :)
IwriteNASR: I like it
IaMaMoRoN: Loving them cracks :)

[Bazer]

Neoz the last one is dope.Keep that up.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture2-13.png

The Cheech Wizard.

i like this but you should have made the c more round because thats how the rest curve. or you could make the rest more edgy like the Cs. nice job on this one though. you progressed hella fast from when you first started posting here. SOME PEOPLE JUST SIT ON THERE ASS AND POST WHORE ALL DAY IN THE CHIT CHAT THREAD WHEN THEY COULD BE SKETCHING.

[Swoe.45]

Reminds me a little bit of this Kwest piece. I am not implying that it is a bite. Just a thought.


Dont call out bites please. i worked really hard on this idea.

and i want my signature back!!!!

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012031.jpg

[Swoe.45]

^^^
Fire

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1075.jpg

Look! Paper!

Weak E, oh well

[Sumoe]

Dont call out bites please. i worked really hard on this idea.

and i want my signature back!!!!

I didn't call out a bite. I said it looked similar. I did not say it was a bad thing.

[Xored]

bouncingsoul thats nice

[N.O.T.E]

damn havent been on here in a long ass time
bouncinsoul nice penism, lovin the style

heres my penism contribution
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/8936/picture035be2.jpg
closer up
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3377/picture036bt6.jpg

[revid!]

wow its been so long just getting back into the swing of things unfinished outlines and a throw crits welcome if not whatever
http://img7.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/715/715908-holder-cd8268400d177e2bb7104a48026a4a7b.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=715908&showlnk=0)

http://img4.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/715/715918-holder-6bf7062480a18d06a165464f1d02629e.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=715918&showlnk=0)

http://img4.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/715/715924-holder-1522954b39cbb35dfafbbcac8dde4ad6.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=715924&showlnk=0)

http://img8.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/715/715930-holder-506862c184e5f3d9c8a88d7d07b0d9b0.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=715930&showlnk=0)
peace..

[-GEKS-]

dive- throwies are nice, pieces are alright
other guy up there- ill effects, letters arent amazing tho. dont really need work either. idk its good

possibility im bombin tomorrow night and i've decided i dont like the name vent so heres nerk
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1439.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1440.jpg

and some vent shit i never posted
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1435.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1438.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1436.jpg

crits on those 2 for kicks and giggles :)

[revid!]

the handys look pretty good.
clean up the nerk bomb and it will be good. and the 2 bottom vents are nice too
good simple shit

[Bets369R]

Cipe i like the overall theme, but you just need to work more on your letter structure. the bars dont line up and it kinda makes it look out of wack.

Heres something i did tonight, crits please!

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1154.jpg

Bump for more crits.

Crits i got so far:

Work on 3D

[BIGel]

^its not too bad actually, the structure at least. the coloring is pretty shitty and the plaid-ish design isnt doing it for me. the highlights dont match up very well, the bottom extension from the b looks way out of place, but the e looks pretty dope, my favorite letter. handies on the top right are nice, just work on getting a more original script down, just do it over and over and over again.

[Pharoah]

really good yeah for 3D just take the same lenght line and have it going the same angle off every point if you know what i mean to have a consistant shape
also your white lines are not in a consistant place ( like in all the bottom right corners or w.e ) it kinda looks like you just put it on random spaces but overall its very nice just work on the details :)

[Bets369R]

thanks ill definitely take notes

[Dying to live]

throwie =]
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/AKthrowies.gif

simple i did last night im not to happy about it
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/akelsimple.gif

girls name =]
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/kaylahsimple.gif

[sallybsk]

ahh omg im getting discouraged now.
andd i like the nerk throwie. but anywhoo heres my shiiet.

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z156/leetsally/ngs2.jpg

i guess you'd call it a throwie. :p
not really in this crew anymore :[
screwd up top right of N... only thing i hate.
CRITS CRITS CRITS!? :D
yay.

[jawsy]

im just not feelin the e or s... the n is good but the e and s dont fit in the same style

[Bets369R]

same. i like the N. I thought the E was a G. i would say just work on your letter structure more

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

omg seize does more than that throwie?!

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0111.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

lol anyone can do that font.....

[tense]

so? it still looks tight

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590137/1/325/8Md7T2Vk5T85NM45_QQPR-PaYNLCBQdg.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/eI7hNBYmzz9mMXY9l5lDsFdfZVB0Fut0?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590a7b/1/325/iGs6KRvb7D-V2R6371xINDrejss0uTTG.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/LL8AQXG7xj-yNEEdSHQAQxfnd71ykEex?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d591147/1/282/6YBH4X5O6T-XBcw9Ps-jTzzFgXRivVuZ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/yHnv6rwrtz8RHkqVYGSVMQ7aOQIoojUV?referrer=hlnk)

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590137/1/325/8Md7T2Vk5T85NM45_QQPR-PaYNLCBQdg.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/eI7hNBYmzz9mMXY9l5lDsFdfZVB0Fut0?referrer=hlnk)
virus
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590a7b/1/325/iGs6KRvb7D-V2R6371xINDrejss0uTTG.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/LL8AQXG7xj-yNEEdSHQAQxfnd71ykEex?referrer=hlnk)
julia
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d591147/1/282/6YBH4X5O6T-XBcw9Ps-jTzzFgXRivVuZ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/yHnv6rwrtz8RHkqVYGSVMQ7aOQIoojUV?referrer=hlnk)
gser


lol seize everyone knows that font dont try peicing with it

bets that sick bro

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

lol seize everyone knows that font dont try peicing with it


yeah, just to clear things up for everyone, its a black book page, not a page for a sketch. obviously i didn't make up those letters. but thanks to the people who realized that and gave props.

[Vagrant]

^ either way its nice to see ya trying to come up with something else. Your throw is the shit, but you cant have just one gun - you need an arsenal.

[lilil]

wat yis think of dese?http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc140/Big-Jay298/kesk.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc140/Big-Jay298/kesk2-1.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc140/Big-Jay298/kesk-1.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

learn simples and learn to spell

[LikeOner]

Seize - I like it. I dont see why the fact that its not 100% original should make it not look good.

lilil - I dont like it bro. "Go to the new to graffiti thread. Keep it simple."(There should be a button that automatically responds in this way)

[Hoostein]

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/d8/ae/f7e479b9198e.jpg

[Maste]

hoostein. ah you finsihed the letters...i kinda like it but you still needa do some 3d (maybe) and color it in man...
uh crits : the c looks a bit like an e with that extension aand i cant really think right now but theres some other minor stuff...

i liek it

[Teez-EmM!!!]

ur on crack. there free... howd u get em for free?? just racked them. and im not on crack the firt pic isnt that great

[Mass Appeal]

Hoostein..some of the letters themselves extensions and shit aside are aight...the H and A are KINDA nice...but the others are whack....takin into account that only 2 of your letters are half decent...the style your tryna pull off at the moment being bendy bars....you clearly shouldnt be trying....but thas my opinion..

never did get crits on this..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture-1.jpg

my god..
this time last year i was seriously whack...im still whack...but this time last year i was whacker than i am this year..

peace.

[silentchaos14]

Mass your a seriously cocky bastard for someone who isnt all that great. better then me but u seriously need to chill with the ego.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL5.jpg
i know the I sucks and doesnt match the rest of the sketch
crits?

[Bets369R]

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/d8/ae/f7e479b9198e.jpg

the first thing i noticed is that the right bar on the A doesnt match up. it looks like you made it from 2 bars and it kinda bugs me. the E has all sharp edges, where the other lotters have some sharp edges and some round. that kinda messes up the flow. The top of your left bar of the H is all out of wack. If you make it more strait (like the top of the A's left bar) it would look alot better.

[avore]

wat u guys thimk???http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1318/romeoioioio004fo0.jpg

[NAIK_SHOES]

HOOSTEIN:i love your letters but like bets369r said, the right bar on your a dosn't fit. I think it would be nice with a ''down 3d'' (dont know how to say it in english).

Silentchaos14:continue with simple letters and yeah the I sucks:p

Avore: More simple i cant even read it i think i see ''praze''

I dont really think it turns out well but i tried to use the same letters for all..
NAE (CLICK ON THE PIC)

http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/4632/ccf2007110900004jw2.th.jpg (http://img454.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007110900004jw2.jpg)

and i put some fucking cheap highlighters in this one
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9230/ccf2007110900005mz1.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007110900005mz1.jpg)

comments?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

so? it still looks tight

It looks alright, not trying to start beef, its just that it seems like a bandwagon graff thing, Ciles doing it, other aswell, and I think its a lot easier to do a generic font then it is to be original(or as original as you can get nowadays lol)

but also don't get me wrong, if you share the same opinion, don't think that I think that you don't already know that. I'm just sharing :)

[BORG]

i only use an old english font because my tags are trash, haha
never would use it in a piece

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

me either, pieces are supposed to show off creativity and originality. a generic font would just look dumb. it was just a black book page. nothing i would ever consider painting. got bored and decided to try something different (for myself)

[synps]

silent chaos- try overlapping your letter instead of spacing them out so much
avroe- start simple!
naik- I like the first one I just think that you shouldn't have the first bar of n going under the rest of it, That confused me and I thought it was a p




http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/bb002.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/bb003.jpg
I'm new to this, crits?
Bump for crits

[avore]

well are these better then????synps--its comin along there pal
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/2089/romeoioioio003hl0.jpg
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7069/romeoioioio002ye9.jpg

[enigmatic]

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1337/1002420ce8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

pagesafterpagesafterpages

[sketch3]

deff got an oldskool vibe, i dunno fatten up or round of sum bits cud be a nice throw

[enigmatic]

thanks but its no throw. just a simple.

[intaout]

synps- not bad letter structure, the n on the bottom one looks kind of wierd.
engimatic- not bad kind of confusing 3-D or shadow and not the best color scheme
avore- It would be easier to crit if it was more visible. if you are keeping it in pencil i usually put it into a simple photo editing thing and just tweak some bars and shit and it pops out more. but i like the top one kinda.

KRIT ME FOOS!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2258/1924253633_ff5fbc02ff.jpg?v=0

[enigmatic]

engimatic- not bad kind of confusing 3-D or shadow and not the best color scheme


KRIT ME FOOS!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2258/1924253633_ff5fbc02ff.jpg?v=0
wheres the smiley with the dropped jaw. The color scheme isjust fundamentals. And the 3D is dircetly right. Whats wrong with it is the whack "I"

Your throws okay. but has to little flow. no heart to it. but its on its way.

[intaout]

sorry i suck at criting but at least i try
thanks for criting mine btw. i will work on that

[enigmatic]

you tryd and your not that bad. its the thought that counts.

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590137/1/325/8Md7T2Vk5T85NM45_QQPR-PaYNLCBQdg.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/eI7hNBYmzz9mMXY9l5lDsFdfZVB0Fut0?referrer=hlnk)
virus
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d590a7b/1/325/iGs6KRvb7D-V2R6371xINDrejss0uTTG.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/LL8AQXG7xj-yNEEdSHQAQxfnd71ykEex?referrer=hlnk)
julia
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d591147/1/282/6YBH4X5O6T-XBcw9Ps-jTzzFgXRivVuZ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/yHnv6rwrtz8RHkqVYGSVMQ7aOQIoojUV?referrer=hlnk)
gser


lol seize everyone knows that font dont try peicing with it

bets that sick bro


bump............never got any crits

[Haz-E]

ight man ill give you some crits

MAIN WORD letter structure it is needed

work on simple block letters i know its annoying but no one starts off great

instead of pieces or w.e they are work on BLOCK and THROWIES
and dont do 3d until u got that down

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Dammit I have so many pieces that I want to take pics of, but I don't have a camera right now!!!!!!!!!! >_<

[Xored]

http://i18.tinypic.com/8f29pxf.jpg
Crits :)
IwriteNASR: I like it
IaMaMoRoN: Loving them cracks :)
Bump crits

[Samp1e]

sick -- focus on consistency, simplify your work, get your structure down. wouldn't hurt to clean it up too. don't bother trying to connect your letters just yet either.

xored -- drop the forcefield and while the fill is looking alright, better to focus on letter structure first. the width/thickness of your letters is so inconsistent, case in point: the A and the second N. not every line's gotta be a hard angle too, have soft curves, hard curves and shit. as a rule of thumb, ending bars of letters in points generally doesn't look good.

school sketchin and some throwie lookin thing on the side
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/9835/asdfaa5.png
top of the E is messed, R could have more bulk on the right leg.

[AnteUp]

i like it, your movin outta generic into ur own style, and the throw has potentioal too, keep it up

[Synaesthesia]

Xored- The fade is welll done, And I think the B has some potential, But the rest of it looks really odd. The letters are too spaced out and the letters should all be the same size. Try just putting some curves in and making all letters the same size and dont end them in points.

Samp1e- I'm lovingit man, looks great. Only thing I can really say is the R needs the be a little sharper to match the E, if you know what I mean.

[revid!]

bump! tryin to get a couple crits maybe??
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4553/s5001148or2.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s5001148or2.jpg)

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2899/s5001149fp5.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s5001149fp5.jpg)

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/292/s5001150zv2.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s5001150zv2.jpg)

[BORG]

xored-new to graff thread-work on simples
sample-thats dope as hell, love the new letters, thats a fresh two letter throw aswell
dive-work on the letters and flow of the pieces overall, the bottom sketch isn't bad, get the others same size letters and shit

after a long time of workin on advancing my shit, i finally came up with a sketch i feel has alot of potential
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5308/june17001mn1.jpg

[revid!]

thanks man
yours does have potential i think its looking good

[Xored]

borg i'm likening it

[revid!]

heres the newest just an outline didnt get to coloring it yet
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2511/s5001154aa7.th.jpg (http://img292.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s5001154aa7.jpg)

[silentchaos14]

Mass your a seriously cocky bastard for someone who isnt all that great. better then me but u seriously need to chill with the ego.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL5.jpg
i know the I sucks and doesnt match the rest of the sketch
crits?
bump this for crits. and revid use photobucket.com or imageshack and paste the direct link into the button with the mountain and sun on it.

[revid!]

edit*

[revid!]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1008/s5001154ul1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Asperz1]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/21.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/20.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/19.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/17.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/18.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/16-1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/15-1.jpg

Nice choices of Color + Details, the Style is dope to me but i dunno why.. sumthing seems off tho

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5308/june17001mn1.jpg

definitely feeling this style.
the only thing i would change is the extension on the top left of the I is too long. i'd only bring it out to right above the C. and maybe make the C and the I bigger.
i cant wait for more shit with this style.

[EsKoNeR!!]

tonights little doodle. finnaly got a gel pen so im suuuuper stoked on playing around with it
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/Photo15-1.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/Photo17.jpg

[hel1os]

cile - the 'c' and the 'i' look like an 'a' to me, perhaps shorten the top extension of the c a bit so we can see it properly. however i do like it and it only took me 2 looks to realise it said cile so... maybe not :P

[AnteUp]

esk-YESSSS YEESS, i love the color, you finally changed the color scheme...all of ur sketches were lukkin the same cuz of the color, pretty sure it says esk, is that a silver gel pen?

cile-lukks gud, like they sed the extension on the i is to long i like how you made the outline go into the letter, perfect lines, do you blaze before you sketch? or is ur hand naturally not shakey?

[trance9]

stuff for the ol sketchbook

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/fullcolor.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/quickie.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/otherfist.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/ATT00001.jpg

CRITS PLEASE. OR JUST TELL ME WHAT U THINK.

[AnteUp]

glad to see someone else frum texas, lukks like it has potential but dont bring the outline into the letter yet

[trance9]

thanks man, what city u from?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/yooo.jpg
ante heres a better one for you.
im from texas too.
the dfw area.

[AnteUp]

haha thanks bro, i love how tha one wit the tree in mah sig lukks

[sex without condoms]

ante your sig is way to goddamn big.
resize the pictures or something

[AnteUp]

haha better? i thought i already resized them, mah bad :)

[Swoe.45]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7351/img0059bp1.jpg

Looking for someone to battle. so pm me pussies.

[Sou - Mvd]

Kwest called, he wants the top of his s back. I'll battle you, you never seem to be able to deliever though.

[AnteUp]

ouch

[Swoe.45]

ok. make it due tues. ill pm it to you. then post in the battle thread. not this toy shit.

[Sou - Mvd]

ok, own names sound good?

[Swoe.45]

Its a date. :)

[F3B3S]

can i be in this!!???

ROBYN>>>DBA>>FP>>PNA

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG_0002444.jpg

[NAIK_SHOES]

HOOSTEIN:i love your letters but like bets369r said, the right bar on your a dosn't fit. I think it would be nice with a ''down 3d'' (dont know how to say it in english).

Silentchaos14:continue with simple letters and yeah the I sucks:p

Avore: More simple i cant even read it i think i see ''praze''

I dont really think it turns out well but i tried to use the same letters for all..
NAE (CLICK ON THE PIC)

http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/4632/ccf2007110900004jw2.th.jpg (http://img454.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007110900004jw2.jpg)

and i put some fucking cheap highlighters in this one
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9230/ccf2007110900005mz1.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007110900005mz1.jpg)

comments?


criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiits please

[Swoe.45]

can i be in this!!???

ROBYN>>>DBA>>FP>>PNA

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG_0002444.jpg

No doubt. send it to sou-mvd

[enigmatic]

Wow id battle you guys. But i hate battles on this website. There judged by toys who have to many intrefreinds . its all political. Ill do it anyway if we have impartial judges.

[Swoe.45]

^^^
Agreed. its predictable.
but iam just gunna go black and white. wont have colors for about a week.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

ill do it too.

[Swoe.45]

sorry sezer, its an advanced battle. so maybe when your better.

[sex without condoms]

but tezer is better than you...

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

HAHAHA good one swoe.

at least hes original...

[Swoe.45]

already beat him hito.

[BORG]

swoe- deff. looks a bit influenced by kwest, but nonetheless, letters are improving
febes- not to sure what to say, cant even read it, simplify it a bit, and work on some of the letters, if the first one is a r

i didn't read your crits till now, and noticed what you guys are saying about the extension on the i, opps, already did another sketch, i also gotta work on the neg spae between the c and i
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3521/june17002ac9.jpg

ante- i do indeed blaze, and i'm prescribed to xanax, but the steady hand comes from a childhood of intense masterbating :)

[Sou - Mvd]

well I guess because I already beat you by default you cant play either swoe =[

[Swoe.45]

is that your boyfriend in your sig? or wtf. and i was jk with sezer. so. whawhawhaeva. ill toast all ya nigros. :P

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

:rolleyes:
think before you type, female.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

ill join this battle.
got nothing better to do.

[AnteUp]

edit

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d6dea11/1/326/Vk4msPgW2z8U_ELI_nZ7nEqW3gUxx-yN.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/WPVxQ07D4D9NAdjiLVfycwlSWI4PB8TB?referrer=hlnk)

sum simples...fr for frost

borg thats pretty original i like it

[Sumoe]

;915624']ill join this battle.
got nothing better to do.

Me too...probably. If I can muster up something decent. I am taking mad long for your stickers, Cile. Sorry.

Edit: That piece is fire, Cile.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

well, there goes everyones chances off winning.
haha

[Sick!]

crits anyone?

[sketch3]

dont have that line going in as much,were the curv meets the top of the rigt leg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

sticker idea for a couple of the homies.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/clowwwn.jpg

[Teez-EmM!!!]

tezer deff caracter
cilei love that big improvement from ur other stuff the e is the best part but next time u shoud make ur i leaning forward a bit.

[Teez-EmM!!!]

can i get in this battle

[smooth_nuts]

edward im loving it man....evil cloans and zombies are the best caracs EVER!

[thesilentvandal]

il join the battle also

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

sticker idea for a couple of the homies.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/clowwwn.jpg
bump
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/rrrr.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/lilll.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/hollll.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/rtre.jpg?t=1194748703

[Samp1e]

good looking on that last one tezer...

might try my hand on this battle too ;)

[AnteUp]

sweet as devils food, i eat angels for dinner, call me wat you want i dont give a fanga in tha middle... (lil wayne for teze)

tha clown is sick

on the first sketch u shouldnt of put the backwards addon on the e, it lukks like a wack s or a wack y lol

on the second sketch even tho im not a big fan of eazy-e i like it, except for how its not balanced like all of your other peices

on the third sketch the e's dont match the rest of the peice, you shoulda used the fourth sketches e's on this one

like i sed i like the e's on the last one

haha im bored...so lotta crits

[Nem]

tezer, do you paint?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabityscabscab.jpg

even if you think its shitty. id really like some constructive criticism. like, how i could change it up to make it look better. i really like the style and i feel it will evolve nicely with time.

[EsKoNeR!!]

better pic. last one was shitty quality
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0317.jpg

[AnteUp]

nem-stop makin the angles so sharp, u have bars down...now jus round them, and kinda mix the rounded with the straight bars

[Scare2]

man i havent been on here in months. kinda went through a slump and then started back up. Teze, still puttin out the best around. for sure sick.

nem, just keep tryin things and keep changing your styles the more different things you try the better youll get. just keep goin.

esk im not a fan of that style in general so its hard to crit but its talented for sure, id say make the overall shape of the word more symetrical or at least flowy...

so this is some pen stuff that i just started drawin out of nowhere, its nothing like my old stuff and im pretty happy with where its goin. the RAK was my first sketch in amonth or two.

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000022.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000042.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000082.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000062.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000112.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa170/iancarroll7/PB1000122.jpg

[dim]

rele feeling that are man liking pretty much all ur letters except the k's

[-GEKS-]

dont really like the pieces

the "r" and "a" by themselves are the best of those imo

[Fluffy Bunnies]

EDIT haha screw it.. wrong thread.. well anyways


I got feet

[Xored]

tezer, do you paint?

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabityscabscab.jpg

even if you think its shitty. id really like some constructive criticism. like, how i could change it up to make it look better. i really like the style and i feel it will evolve nicely with time.

lose the cloud things that it'd hit the spot :)

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

Is That Battle Full Color Or What?

["Fasho" T|y|B]

nem- i personally like the clouds haha but id get rid of the stairs or whatever they are man

and scare2 im feelin the first rak id love to walk by and see that on a wall!

[AnteUp]

;915949']Is That Battle Full Color Or What?
doesn't matter, swoe isnt doin it in color, i guess you could if you want

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

thanks man

[AnteUp]

anytime

[F3B3S]

well whos all in this battle?

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG2323431.jpg........

(*not my entry.......)ROBYN>

[AnteUp]

damn that lukks gud, keep it up

lukks like it says robon tho

[BORG]

^^^best piece i've seen from you febes

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8274/059zi5.jpg

tweaked some shit

[silentchaos14]

whats up with how it gets bigger through the piece? ive noticed that always happens with your sketch. either way its some hot shit, your stuff always reminds me of transformers.

[BORG]

^^^best piece i've seen from you febes

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8274/059zi5.jpg

tweaked some shit

hahaha, its easier to get a good flow that way
i dont know how you see some transformers in there, haha

bump..........bottom of page

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

borg, THAT IS HOT!
definitely my favorite from you.


sketch for this battle.
i really like this style. let me know if its working or where i can take it.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0145.jpg

[F3B3S]

lol same at'ch ya.......thats,,,nothing...lol i keep the best for me;)...i just like to show lil things....not the whole package....and my perfection on my 3d,style,and colouring....(differnt markers)cuz ppl seem to bitch about my 3 year old markers:P.....i'v been busy..............

[Roolete]

noooo seize dont use that style use the purple one u posted a while backkkk

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

the purple one? is it either one of these?

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1744.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1737.jpg

[Infected]

Well, heres my try at it:

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/INF3CT.jpg

Been writing for about two weeks.

[anie 1]

yo man do simples before the rest of bombing science rips you a new ass hole :|

[Infected]

wha? Thanks for the helpful critique...

[LikeOner]

;916027']

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1744.jpg


This one is so sick.

Infected - No go bro. Go to new to graffiti thread.

[Infected]

well, I've been there... It's for tutorials.

[anie 1]

wha? Thanks for the helpful critique...

i mean do straight letter simple straight letters lik the ones on your key board thats wut i ment by simples

[Infected]

Well, what are 'simples' exactly? Help a brother out! :P

[Roolete]

purple one, gold one, whats the difference? i like that one the best. the gold one.

and silentchaos answering ur question at the top of the page its because c's are a bitch

[Infected]

i mean do straight letter simple straight letters lik the ones on your key board thats wut i ment by simples


What? Can you not read it? I think I've done enough of them, I write words everyday.

["Fasho" T|y|B]

seize i think all those styles are fresh they look so clean keep it up

borg and febes damn those are both gnarly!

infected- those two colors dont really go well together at least not with that piece you shoulda outlined your letters too with a dark color they run into eachother in the piece on the top :X

[anie 1]

What? Can you not read it? I think I've done enough of them, I write words everyday.

wut the helll ahahahha that has nothing to do with wut i just said

["Fasho" T|y|B]

ahaha he doesnt mean just write letters dude ahaha just keep ur shit simple dont try to be mr proffessional wildstylez overnight!

good sticker design? yay or nayz?

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/slaps.jpg

dont have any markers to color this bitch with yet but what should i change if anything
or start over?
just a simple one ya know

[Infected]

Fasho, thanks for something useful. I actually didn't have any dark colors that looked well with the flick, my black had ran out, heh.

Anie 1, what the heck man. You said "like letters on your keyboard". You mean like Regular letters, maybe bubble or boxed? I DO THAT EVERYDAY. I just wanted to change 'em up a little... I thought that was one of the key factors in graff.

[Infected]

Yeah, about the wildstyle one. I was just giving it a go... Sorry? :P

[anie 1]

Fasho, thanks for something useful. I actually didn't have any dark colors that looked well with the flick, my black had ran out, heh.

Anie 1, what the heck man. You said "like letters on your keyboard". You mean like Regular letters, maybe bubble or boxed? I DO THAT EVERYDAY. I just wanted to change 'em up a little... I thought that was one of the key factors in graff.

yes change is it but at the same time wen you try new styles you need structure simples makes it easy for you to change styles by adding shit lik extensions and etc. no beef jsut trying to help man:)

["Fasho" T|y|B]

np infected

i think you tweaked em a lil too much man like try and keep it consistant you know with the size and everything and you can like bend em and stuff just not too much ya know. practice simple shit and let your style develope

[Infected]

Yeah, I get what you are saying, no problem, anie 1. Thanks for help. I'll post a new one shortly...

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL-1.jpg

a cleaner version of the one i posted the other day. with my ghetto flash lol
crits?

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0147.jpg

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

oh yeah? call the biter police! pfft.
not everything is a fucking bite and nobody is original anymore.
fuck.
and ive used that top part of the S several times.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1593.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0148.jpg

i don't mean to sound like an asshole but its 4 in the morning and im listening to my roomate play dragonball z.
sorry. no beef.

[Infected]

well, here's a couple more. I guess my scanner can't 'read' gold/yellow properly, so the one on top is fucked up... and the colors are really de-saturated.

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/INF3CT2.jpg

[silentchaos14]

;916103']oh yeah? call the biter police! pfft.
not everything is a fucking bite and nobody is original anymore.
fuck.
and ive used that top part of the S several times.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1593.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0148.jpg

i don't mean to sound like an asshole but its 4 in the morning and im listening to my roomate play dragonball z.
sorry. no beef.
alright its kool man i was just pointin it out because it looked like u had bitten him but apparenlty not.
edit: forgot the crits. i like both of them, the first sketch is sick but the mouth thing is played. on the second, that extension on the I is wierd.

[Animal]

whatever. just a sketch.

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/eso.jpg

[silentchaos14]

eso that simple is nice.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/I3-D-1.jpg
got high then sketched some this.
crits?

[LikeOner]

;916103']
not everything is a fucking bite and nobody is original anymore.


so true.

silent - letters seem kinda uneven. I and D are a bit squished, the lowercase i looks a bit funny to me. you should throw some 3d and color on your stuff.

Animal - is that a d or an o? either way looks pretty decent.

Fash - I say use block letters first.

[renz198]

some randum sketches some ok some messed up i can't colour for shit
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3585/dsc00222kv8.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3198/dsc00221si8.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9466/dsc00220wj2.jpg
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1808/dsc00219xs7.jpg
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7153/dsc00218yi4.jpg
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4616/dsc00217nw2.jpg
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7129/dsc00216sb2.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1433/dsc00192nj9.jpg

[Hidden Teknique]

eso that simple is nice.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/I3-D-1.jpg
got high then sketched some this.
crits?

Now SilentChaos...I don't mean to come off as an asshole but you really need to try different things...all of your shit is the exact same style and it hasn't seemed that you've progressed, I'm just saying after drawing day in and day out you should have progressed a little at least...try something new for once.

[Roolete]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/11-10-2007101912AM.jpg

and holy shit sieze i like those 2 old ones you posteda lot more then the new one

[garbage down tha way]

roolete- take that pointless extention off the left of the c, dont connect the tops of your letters, or any parts at that, and do something about the right leg of your R, it's weak. i like your H though, and your E too. reminds me of HIDE from cleveland. Your cher handy is sooo dope.

anyways, reposting this, didnt get anything. (crit the throw)

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/overelse.jpg

[sketch3]

Or U Could Just Use A Lil Creativity In Makin Ur Bars They Dnt Allways Gotta Be Squae

[Maste]

not actually form the blackbook...just some things ive done in school
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6442/masteblue3doh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9301/itsoweezeemj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/5233/mastewildqh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
first shot at wildstyle...used inspirations
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8468/mastebitnf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i made this after i was browsin through the forums and i noticed it looks like i bit of someone...he'll prolly rocegnize it a bit...sorry

so, just some stuff i did...constructive crits are good...and ill bust out my blackbook and scan some later

[AnteUp]

ayo seize... i love this style, run wit this
NOT MINE
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0148.jpg
SEIZES (NOT MINE) (NOT MINE) NOT MINE

[dim]

seize i really like that top peice man

[sex without condoms]

fucking around with a random name.
and a sketch for albert fish

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071859.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071858a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071858.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071926a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071926.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071927.jpg

[whahappen?]

fucking around with a random name.
and a sketch for albert fish

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071859.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071858a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1111071858.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071926a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071926.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1110071927.jpg
funky

[silentchaos14]

sex- all that is sick.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL2-1.jpg
todays sketch
crits?

[thesilentvandal]

its better than last time

[NaRsyONE*]

yo whats up everyone i haventd posted in so long hopefully i remember how to heres what ive been upta
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5185/blackbackah8.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5193/lastzl1.jpg
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9632/m3djy6.jpg
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/715/unfinshdnwhh9.jpg
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9618/newfillddx4.jpg
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5224/nwpnpurpyf1.jpg

[Nem]

argh. its not hard to figure the image code out.

ideal, its good your takin your first steps. keep up with it. evolve!

sex, pure sex.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/lord.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/handyyy.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/ayte.jpg

[Xored]

silentchaos14: Good work looking better every day :)

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012040.jpg posibble name change

[AnteUp]

okeys? like people from oklahoma?

[Haz-E]

NARSY thats some dopw shit i love the cleaness wht markers u using

a new sketch in my BB im not realy felling hit me wit some crits
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/1224/000b01001qn8.jpg

[Olick]

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/mrshee/panda.jpg
Pandapooo
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/mrshee/GetAttachmentaspxfile96ee3c99-8857-.jpg
Olick
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/mrshee/BKR.jpg
BKR
honest opinions?? and look closely too. i kno people who just see fancy lines and curves and think its good. what about the letter structure?

[Nem]

get a hold of your ego for a second.

its pretty gross mayne. work on it.

you have good ideas.

char is pretty bad.

[Olick]

i didnt have an ego. if i showed a random person on the street they would go "wow that looks tight" but all they look at is the fancy shamsy stuff. not the letters. i was tired of never gettin real crits.

thanks man

[Xored]

Haz-E: Thats hot i like the 3d fill
NEM: Glad you removed them clouds :)

[BORG]

jroc- lookin decent, keep at em
scab- letters need to be tweaked, not feeling any flow either
daws- learn to give some mother fucking crits son!!!!!!!!!!!!
haze- that looks fly as hell, keep up, letters, structure and flow are ace
olick- to wild, to fast, simplify it slightly, maybe some color???? hard to see it all clearly

found this canvas i painted 3 months ago or so, and i dont know what to put on it, so if you guys could hook up some suggestions/ideas, it'd be greatly appreciated

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6290/june17004vs7.jpg

[capitol]

OLICK:Try some different backgrounds..the bubble thing sucks for the letter structure..but reeally nice letters ink it..

Im pretty sure someone alreayd write MOSH but whateverr...
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7553/picture064gq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/825/picture069ny6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[enigmatic]

that ARMS sketch is good. its kindof small though. in proportion to the page.

[BORG]

^^^best piece i've seen from you febes

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8274/059zi5.jpg

tweaked some shit


bump for all my hard work, and not many crits:(

[Xored]

BORG I love that <3 x4, the littlest dots seem to be too much tho :)

[Olick]

nice pen control ahahah. make the "bubbles" bigger and not all of them the same size unless you want to make sum sick design with a bunch of dots "dunno how to explain it. but owell"

nice pen control and good choice of colors

[dim]

cile the top left hand side of the e is looking to stock compared to the rest of the letter try make it more like the bottom of it

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

borg dope except the bottom leg part, the right side specifically, make it come up instead of go out. naw meen?

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/f-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/h-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/ee.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/j.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/l.jpg

[Olick]

beautiful characters but your pieces need a little more work.

[sex without condoms]

MY STICKERRRBACKGROUNDDDDD!!!

looks like teze got my pack :]

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

i feel so left out.
i havent gotten anyones pack yet :[
hopefully tomorrow.

but that sticker background with the handy is hot.
im feeling the piece with the lime force.

[exhale]

tezer - maybe use a thinner outlining marker for the pieces?

uhh quickie, a's hidden, simple sucks. and it's on an envelope! :)
crits on how to improve?

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/File0086.jpg

[SenTheFirst]

teze- nice simples and characters are dopeness (nice sig haha)
ways- work on your y, you got a hint of style

simples

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1256.jpg

[silentchaos14]

sex- all that is sick.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL2-1.jpg
todays sketch
crits?
bump for some better crits
sen that simple is fuckin fire

[T O K E]

no drop shadow on the bottom of the a, and good shit best ive seen from you

[NaRsyONE*]

my bad here they are
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/53/blackbacktr4.jpg
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4820/m3dqc6.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/403/newfilldux9.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/341/lastup4.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4940/nwpnpurpee3.jpg
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8373/unfinshdnwiw6.jpgcrits ?
-borg-nice..vry clean but the "c" and the "i" rly does look like an "a"
-sex-i lov da throwies
-tezer-those karaks are sick n i like your handys as well .. your letters are nice but i rly like the drips n shit
-ideal-um yah add some more style n start sketchin more than you post also keep the top of the "a" connected looks like an "H" lil bit
-sen-that simple is sexy lol
-nem-i like it but i would prolly like it better with a shadow or a 3d but thats only my opinion
-okeys-its alright but i like the simple that you went over better than than one you finished
-haze-rly dig the color scheme n the letters are looking solid ... n i normally used plain sharpies for fills n outlines n the thinner lines are a ultra fine bull point pen i picked up the other day
-olick-you do look pretty solid idk maybe do less addons or less crazy n see how it looks
-mosh-dig the fill .. but rly work on structure n flow of letters

[Olick]

1st. not really feeling the N but the R and A are lookin dope. dont really like color combination

2nd nice colors but the addon on the S kinda kills me inside =[ not feeling the N again

3rd color combo lookin good. really diggin the A. not feeling the N "again hah" but open up the bottum half of the E and youll be set

4th color combo- loose the weird little green spots. i dont kno how that fits into the piece haha the R looks dope and the S is gettin better

5th really love that color combo. im feelin the A and R the S is ok. but once again. the N lol

6th. possible the best letter structure out of all of them. really liken it alot. the N is perfect and so are the other leters. they all flow with the same style.

overall: your good. great pencil/pen control. i didnt see you go over the lines once haha. good pieces but work on the N and color combo. i liked it alot

[NaRsyONE*]

lol thanks N's are bitches n 3rd one the "E" is rly a "y" (narsy) lol its more clear if you were lookin at the drawing itself n its the first "y" ive ever done idk if that changes anything n i just noticed it rly rly looks like An "e"

[Olick]

oh i can see the connection in your Y now hahah.

[Samp1e]

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8269/sampkm1.png

[Bizzaro]

Narsey shit looks sick just move the letters abit closer
Ideal you gota do block letters like on your keyboard
sen everythings good except somthing about the upper part of the s seems funny
sezer dope characters and nice simples.
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/5.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/4.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/3.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/2.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/1.jpg

im new... crits?

[Olick]

perfect. if a few years youll be good as hell

[Samp1e]

right on. keep pushing those simples and you're on your way

[Bizzaro]

lol i dont wana wait a few years lol but yeah i know it takes time but any crits to speed up the process?

[d_g]

Keep doing the simples and don't get ahead of yourself.

Getting ahead of yourself 99% of the time is a waste of time. Fastest way for most people is to just keep working on simples.

[Bizzaro]

ok ill post in a few days with some new sketches

[Robbie P]

Work on your hand dude. Also most writers you see that totally kill have been writing for 15 years plus, just stick with it.

["Fasho" T|y|B]

tezer those are mad chars

narsy i like everysingle one of em!

samp that shit makes me just wanna try somethin sick like that but i need to stick with simples for now haha love it

beser- flawless simples!

ok ive been working on my letters
the S is kinda funky but fuck it ill put it up anyway
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Fash-1.jpg
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/FashF.jpg
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/FashA.jpg
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/FashS.jpg
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/FashH.jpg
am i getting ahead of myself?
crits plz
sorry for shitty cam pics

[Roolete]

keep working. but please change your sig, its uggggglllyyy

[T O K E]

i love it, i want to draw surrealistically can you point me in the right direction?

as for the letters, the A is fire, the F doesnt really look like a f get rid of the stuff on the bottom right, take the breaks out of the s, h is simple but nice

["Fasho" T|y|B]

haha thanks toke
yeah i see it now the f looks like a J
that s was experimental didnt know where i was goin with it haha

yeah you like surrealism? sick thats my steez mang yeah i can hep you out if ya want

[T O K E]

that would be great if you could just point me in the right direction and get me started

[Roolete]

hey guys! how bowcha move this on into another thread, eh?

["Fasho" T|y|B]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/TYBFIN-2-1.jpg
help me out with this y

someone said i should make the bottom fatter and more 3d and the top skinnier?