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RFI. SPit
11-27-2007, 07:33 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8661/photo146eu4.jpg

As you may be able to tell... I got a little lazy with the background hahaha...

Anyway, 2 page sketch.

sex without condoms
11-27-2007, 07:37 PM
I know ppl are gonna start bitching and accusing me of biting AR4s teeth.
so if your going to just fucking do it.

possible name change.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154142.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154217.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185715.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185806.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185829.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185852.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185914.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190033.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190054.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185939.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190117.jpg

slutting cause last on page:[

RFI im lovin' it i'd just take that extra bit off the end of the E

RFI. SPit
11-27-2007, 07:39 PM
Thanks mang. Yea after I did it I looked at that little part and was like wtf... why did I do that haha.

Clowney-Cakes
11-27-2007, 08:36 PM
yo fella the first page in the new book....
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7152/firstpage002ik2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

afrillisdark
11-27-2007, 09:03 PM
cakes. ur font is like a font u dl off the computer... its nice tho.. clean.....

Clowney-Cakes
11-27-2007, 09:25 PM
hahaha its a srtight letter, just like turnded around....thanks tho

enigmatic
11-27-2007, 10:14 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8888/1002441ky6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hidden Teknique
11-27-2007, 10:21 PM
Some quick simples...
Okay so I fucked up big time on the concept I was going for on the first piece, accidentally did a line through the O and looked wrong if I didn't do it on both sides, so just ignore that.
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7535/pics001fn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1883/pics003wa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

And Some Crits

Skuz - The piece is okay, there is a lot of unnecessary little extensions and strange fills in it, maybe add some color and make it looks a little cleaner...also I like the U on the K idea.

Ate - Fix the A, and what the hell is that in the background? Also, the handstyle is hurting.

Dial - I like it, unique style you got going on there, try it out a little more, play with it, experiment.

Sex - 2,3,4,5,6,7,8 pages are dope...I'm liking them, the other pages are ehh, but then again make your shit a little smaller it might help in giving crits, shits so big can't really tell ya dig?

ASLOS
11-27-2007, 10:35 PM
koer im feelin the E, the k has a few extentions that arnt needed, the o doesnt really flow, and the r is alright to.
borg your simples are so ill
scab feelin tha red double outs, with the black, looks good.
jers still super stoked on your style, i dunno what it is, just looks good to me
beyond lookin alright, try shoven those letters together.
cade, good simples, try and keep those lines steady
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Picture052.jpg
a little somethin i worked up this morning, what you all think?
yo man you're not pm'able, pm when its fixed or something

jersOneTIC
11-27-2007, 10:55 PM
added some color...my markers suck but im getting some good ones.
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7237/colazsr9.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-27-2007, 10:58 PM
jers,fix the middle of the e homie .
Fucked up t i know.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/11111111111112.jpg

MainEvent
11-27-2007, 11:01 PM
^thats dope as fuck

kosher
11-27-2007, 11:26 PM
yea what could you have fuckd up?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-27-2007, 11:33 PM
the left t extension it doesnt flow.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/aaaaaa1.jpg

Sumoe
11-27-2007, 11:43 PM
Sex w/o, that shit is illin'...

Same with you, Tezer.

Y'all do not still need to post in here, you know.

kosher
11-27-2007, 11:46 PM
yea i still don't know what you're talking about but i don't really care it's sick

sex without condoms
11-27-2007, 11:58 PM
Sex w/o, that shit is illin'...

Same with you, Tezer.

Y'all do not still need to post in here, you know.

yeah but if i post in the other thread i will...
1. get ripped on for "biting/cramping" AR4s style
2. sir.one will yell at me and bitch bc. he thinks im trying to bite off of him cause i use like RA is all my possible names, even though they are just my favorite letters.

so i'd rather not have to deal with all that
but sume, coming from you, that meant alot :]
<33333

KAKE_ST
11-28-2007, 12:02 AM
thts fuckin huge

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 12:08 AM
just like my penis.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-28-2007, 12:10 AM
yeah but if i post in the other thread i will...
1. get ripped on for "biting/cramping" AR4s style
2. sir.one will yell at me and bitch bc. he thinks im trying to bite off of him cause i use like RA is all my possible names, even though they are just my favorite letters.

so i'd rather not have to deal with all that
but sume, coming from you, that meant alot :]
<33333
you got your own swag
you always use R's in all your names.
its the internet and this site does have politics, ha.
you still my niggggggga.

ppreciate it sume.
i wont ever stop postin in the toy forums.

Sumoe
11-28-2007, 12:11 AM
Well, that's the "problem" with the "Euro" style, or any simple style for that matter, when the letter forms are simple, inspiration can easily be seen as biting. There is only so many ways you can bend a letter (especially when it is simple). The subtleties in the letters are what makes them your own. I think what you've done is very AR4 inspired, but with time it'll probably start to drift away from that and become different as you look at other people's shit. When I started I was soooo shitty, and when I came across sky5's work, I bit the letter forms and shit for a while, but now my shit looks very different from his.

Just my 2 cents.

But yeah, keep messin' around with that style.

Bets369R
11-28-2007, 12:18 AM
jers,fix the middle of the e homie .
Fucked up t i know.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/11111111111112.jpg

Take the end of the T extension and flare it out like you did the arrow and itll look dope. also you could flare up the loop on the Z of you wanted to

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 12:21 AM
:]

unfinished.
and this sketch is also Sume inspired :0D

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/001904.jpg

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 12:29 AM
Going to photoshop this one

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6742/11272007102244pmvr8.jpg


and this one is just a throwup.

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9412/11272007102407pmpe5.jpg

Sumoe
11-28-2007, 12:31 AM
The bottom one is one of my favorites from you.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-28-2007, 12:32 AM
letter structure is horrible. the first w is alright though. the karak is nice make his teef less square and more round go better with the round body theme.

Sumoe
11-28-2007, 12:36 AM
The structure on the bottom one is alright, though. Except for that "W," like Teze said.

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 12:39 AM
i didnt even use structure. thats why i like it

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-28-2007, 12:44 AM
you're kidding right?

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 12:46 AM
why would i be

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5037/dinowx3.jpg

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 01:07 AM
More inspiration from Sume and Tezer bby:]
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/005849.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/010455.jpg

seno2
11-28-2007, 01:19 AM
uhh heres a quickie sorta?
says seno

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4127/img0198nx9.jpg

AnteUp
11-28-2007, 01:32 AM
well, there ya go...i think it lukks pretty badass...but lukks like seko, k lukks like a n, ditch the heart at the bottom of the n, its overused

KAKE_ST
11-28-2007, 01:37 AM
man i need to get to work lol

kosher
11-28-2007, 01:42 AM
gorgeous seno

Dying to live
11-28-2007, 01:43 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/onelinerrr.gif
still trying to get my oneliner going... lookin decent atm?

seno2
11-28-2007, 01:50 AM
thanks guys. =]

imported_big_boss
11-28-2007, 01:51 AM
Seno - fresh as hell. color that shit. Only prob i have is that the second half looks smaller (proportionally) than the first half.

Akel - Your K is broken up into too many little parts. Try to make it flow better with the other letters.

seno2
11-28-2007, 02:04 AM
i wish i could color haha.. no markers sad to say..

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 02:31 AM
uhh heres a quickie sorta?
says seno

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4127/img0198nx9.jpg

The N sucks.

But its still dope. iam down for a colab

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 02:34 AM
any color schemes??

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6742/11272007102244pmvr8.jpg

KAKE_ST
11-28-2007, 02:36 AM
swoe fuckin pink purple pastels dude do with red purples and bright fuckin pink for extras like bubbles or stripes but do the character realistic

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 03:05 AM
Just messing with colors. not going to stay this way... colors will be better.

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6882/11272007110046p11111mji8.jpg

KAKE_ST
11-28-2007, 03:11 AM
i think it looks pretty dope

Fube
11-28-2007, 11:04 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture041.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture001.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1101.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1065.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/LastScan-3.jpg

had some old shit on my computer. decided to post something.

crit welcome.

Fluffy Bunnies
11-28-2007, 12:15 PM
Wow... Fubalicious, i like ur wavy bars, they look sexy


did this for me and you Daws honey... just for me and you... you know, in a non gay kinda way.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/0-2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-10.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-4.jpg
First cardboard, i burnt too much, you can't really tell that's an S at the end
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/CBKILS.jpg
Some random sticks i found
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/KI.jpg

South-Pole
11-28-2007, 01:17 PM
fluff-dope simples
swoe-that piece looks dope
seno-that N is ugly no offence,but dope sketch
kunta-always loved your style


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image059.jpg


new style im trying to develop:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image060.jpg

wich R is better?

shitty throw up i did

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image063.jpg

amk
11-28-2007, 01:28 PM
fluffy comin thru dope shittttt

SkuzSCT
11-28-2007, 02:10 PM
Seno and Fube - tight shit

Swoe it's really clean and shit, definately not my kinda style but good for what it is.

Nice simples Kils

South keep working at it. I personally don't like those throwies at allthose curly half heart things look wierd. your simples are coming along though, you could just apply that as a throwie if bubbly abstract letters aren't your thing.

New simple, if I paint it the Z will be overlapping the tail of the U more likely...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/new.jpg

dim
11-28-2007, 03:22 PM
seno that shit it dope man realy ill keep it up

enigmatic
11-28-2007, 03:31 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9963/1128071519hz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3739/1126071220yn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


ahhh okay this page looks good cept south pole that throw needs help

fwn2
11-28-2007, 03:48 PM
hey crits ani1?http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00301gp7.jpg

http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00301gp7.jpg

seno2
11-28-2007, 04:44 PM
fwn2. looks alright... you should practice drawing simple letters .. like the way they look on the keyboard. once u get that down and figure out letter structure u'll be set. keep it up!


nice page.

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 05:43 PM
pen freestyles from l'ecole
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170537.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170404.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170325.jpg

working on this for a friend, trying to think of a background cause im going all out w/ color and sheeet(sorry for blurry picture)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170636.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172533.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170714.jpg

oldie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172615.jpg

for raw
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170736.jpg

-ShAmEE-
11-28-2007, 05:43 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8661/photo146eu4.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/11111111111112.jpg
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4127/img0198nx9.jpg
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6742/11272007102244pmvr8.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-4.jpg


BUMP BUMP BUMP.

silentchaos14
11-28-2007, 05:50 PM
Wow... Fubalicious, i like ur wavy bars, they look sexy


did this for me and you Daws honey... just for me and you... you know, in a non gay kinda way.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/0-2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-10.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-4.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/CBKILS.jpg

all of your LS at the end look like K's. at first i was reading it dawsekik.

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 06:13 PM
pen freestyles from l'ecole
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170537.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170404.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170325.jpg

working on this for a friend, trying to think of a background cause im going all out w/ color and sheeet(sorry for blurry picture)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170636.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172533.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170714.jpg

oldie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172615.jpg

for raw
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170736.jpg

last page.

5Funerals
11-28-2007, 07:06 PM
Sex without condoms - I really like your style

avore
11-28-2007, 07:59 PM
sex--im lovn it bruh its difrnt!!!!
flufy buny boy nice but the midle of the ws messd up
fube-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8537/yummmmmesf2.jpg

IwriteNASR
11-28-2007, 08:16 PM
kils- sexy simples
sex- i love your goofy style. so fresh and so clean clean
drone- the d and o are taller than the rest of the letters but keep at it its gettin there
5 minute crayola marker freestyle
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7848/f001we0.jpg
crits apreciated

sketch3
11-28-2007, 08:24 PM
lil too skinny for my likein but nice non the less

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-28-2007, 08:37 PM
Dawsekils- shit looks good man just fix the ls like dude said
Sex- that style is sick man
Drone- damn dude thats really starting to look good

trin to make a character
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Stretch.jpg
stretchy guy haha
after i made this i realized it looked like the arms made an S

so i think ill try and make an F, A, and H and make it say FASH

whatdya think?

F3B3S
11-28-2007, 08:59 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG22.jpg
alil somtihgn for back int he day.......


Seno and Fube - tight shit

Swoe it's really clean and shit, definately not my kinda style but good for what it is.

Nice simples Kils

South keep working at it. I personally don't like those throwies at allthose curly half heart things look wierd. your simples are coming along though, you could just apply that as a throwie if bubbly abstract letters aren't your thing.

New simple, if I paint it the Z will be overlapping the tail of the U more likely...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/new.jpg

BUMP

popshots
11-28-2007, 09:47 PM
drone: the r is to small
f3b: dont color your ish in yet jus work on the letters go simpler on the top one and take your time on the 3d on the bottom one.
fasho: weird lokken character
nasr: make your letters thicker and fix the round part on the r

RFI. SPit
11-28-2007, 09:54 PM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/9954/photo150cc4.jpg

Just trying to work with colours a bit...

BIGel
11-28-2007, 10:01 PM
^honestly dont like the colors at all, but thats a promising style you got there, even up those bars a little and fine tune some things and you'd be rollin.

RFI. SPit
11-28-2007, 10:05 PM
Yea, I was trying something new, the colours ended up kinda clashing haha.

Here's an easier sketch to see the letters I'm working on-
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/562/photo135yy2.jpg

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-28-2007, 11:07 PM
Zofone I like both of them and i dont think the colors are that bad either man

Roolete
11-28-2007, 11:23 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0534.jpg

Swoe.45
11-28-2007, 11:34 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6882/11272007110046p11111mji8.jpg

Any more color ideas???

Maste
11-28-2007, 11:36 PM
keep the critter the same and try changing it to natural colors...shades of green and or brown....i have no clue if itll work but hey if its easy to change it why not try

silentchaos14
11-28-2007, 11:36 PM
fasho- that character is sick
zof- that style is lookin good. the O's are wierd in the second sketch.
cher- the H is fucked. in the tag the E sorta looks like an O.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL9.jpg

sex without condoms
11-28-2007, 11:36 PM
EDIT
@ SWOE
Dont make both the O and E pink
if you choose to those i'd make the outline thicker

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-28-2007, 11:36 PM
fuck the color your structure is horrible no flow with the w or the o and some dumb lookin shit on the bottom of the s and e.
stop bumping that garbage with color.

Dying to live
11-28-2007, 11:49 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0534.jpg

bummmpp =]

silentchaos14
11-29-2007, 12:04 AM
fasho- that character is sick
zof- that style is lookin good. the O's are wierd in the second sketch.
cher- the H is fucked. in the tag the E sorta looks like an O.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL9.jpg
bump since u fuckers are beefin.

sketch3
11-29-2007, 12:15 AM
Allright Guys U Got BEEF An W/e But Talkin Bout Fightin In Real Life Over The Net Is Stupid, I Think U Shud Take It To Pms...
Ps Swoe In Case U Didnt Notice Ur S And E Have Tumors
PPS -JROC THATS DISGUSTING, JUST UR SAME OLD SIMPLES WITH ORANG SHIT ON IT, BIG WHOOP.
U OT SIMPLES DOWN NOW U GOTTA ACTUALLY DO SUMTHING WITH EM, EXTENTIONS OR ANYTHIN

sex without condoms
11-29-2007, 12:19 AM
Just finished.
ps. stop the fucking beef.
Ya know what, YOU ALL SUCK!

jp.


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235221.jpg
the E sucked.

idk which picture is better, you tell me.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/001155.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/001138.jpg

Roolete
11-29-2007, 12:20 AM
i love the very top, except i think the the teeth on the o would look better if they were white. it makes me feel primal

sketch3
11-29-2007, 12:36 AM
Im Not Hatin For Hatins Sake, The W Looks Fine To Me, So Did Sum Half Throw Alf Peice Thing He Did. But Teze Is Right The S An E Must Have Downs Syndrom

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-29-2007, 12:58 AM
i agree that the E doesnt really flow with it and it looks kinda like an I if you didnt know it said swoe and how the w isnt the same color as the rest throws it off but other than that shit it looks fucking good as hell. idk das my opinion
and his character is sick

and sex dude i like your style haha that firs ones too tight!

Sumoe
11-29-2007, 01:02 AM
Ideal, I honestly do not understand why you have shown little to no improvement. You started with simples, and you tried working your way up, but there has been very little (noticeable) improvement within your letter forms and structure. All I can say is keep doing what you are doing, maybe it will come to you. I mean, you started around the same time as me and many others on this site. I do not know what else to tell you.
P.S. All of you "beefers" need to chill the fuck out, and shut the fuck up.

Swoe.45
11-29-2007, 01:04 AM
Just finished.
ps. stop the fucking beef.
Ya know what, YOU ALL SUCK!

jp.


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235221.jpg
the E sucked.

idk which picture is better, you tell me.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/001155.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/001138.jpg


I like the teeth, they would look dope in white tho.

BIGel
11-29-2007, 01:05 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/290678218.jpg

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-29-2007, 01:09 AM
Im feelin that K mang!

sketch3
11-29-2007, 01:11 AM
not feelin the a bigel, rest is DOPE
an i gotta agree wit sume, u rock the same letters in every sketch with minute difference, try changing the angle or thickness of the bars u ues not just the color scheme

sex without condoms
11-29-2007, 01:17 AM
I like the teeth, they would look dope in white tho.

i woulda made the teeth white but i colored the O in first and did the mouth after the fact

:[

Swoe.45
11-29-2007, 01:42 AM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8886/swoepinkss5.jpg

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/5209/11282007085327pmyv4.jpg

Dying to live
11-29-2007, 02:07 AM
Swoe : love the character

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/jbsdofiubwoiufbwlfblwibffwajbfsbsd.gif
inspiration from tezer =]

tempest
11-29-2007, 10:26 AM
so i started about in january last year but i havent sketched nething for 8 months now. i just drew sumthin up nd wen i went on here realized wat a long way i still had to go. *sighs*

well here it is... oba

http://img57.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture003ep3.jpg

TricksForKids
11-29-2007, 10:38 AM
yeah..what sumoe said

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 11:16 AM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r179/IWRITESOLO/l_afae55ad013a9329e9498108536515e3.jpg

i write solo normally but im startin KAKE to wht ones better top or bottom?

C-Lurk
11-29-2007, 11:17 AM
I'd say top is better, but fix that E!

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 11:19 AM
how any ideas??

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 11:32 AM
nvm i got something

NEZ89
11-29-2007, 12:06 PM
Akel- i like the A and K but the E's a bit off

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/617/im001473sk4.jpg

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 12:30 PM
nez tht fridge is dope as shit on ur myspace bro

FailOne
11-29-2007, 12:31 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9321/fonebwva6.jpg

Drunk,
Dont really like it but w/e cant win em all
Foneeeee

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 12:38 PM
looksfine bro

NEZ89
11-29-2007, 12:43 PM
its a bit hard to see the F
but still straight

Fluffy Bunnies
11-29-2007, 01:07 PM
Burnin shit cuz i can
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-5.jpg

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 01:09 PM
tht ideas mad dope imma buck on the burnin shit if u dont mind ha

beyondyereyes
11-29-2007, 03:02 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/waahhh.jpg
Lines were messed up cause of resizing. Plus I screwed up so it's also kind of sloppy.
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/ugg.jpg
This is pretty much garbage but I see potential.

Captain
11-29-2007, 03:13 PM
sotek, fix the 3d on the k and work on basic letters before you play with curls.
fluffy, play with fire and you'll get burned. Problably not too badly though, and it really won't hurt enough to bug you, so it's totally worth it.
fail, it looks pretty good.
nez, cut down on useless extensions.
swoe, experiment with other words, and it's time to vary up the style a bit more. you got that shit down pat already.
dying, work on balance, it looks awkward, like it could trip and fall.

Had some fun with arrows today, sketch and concept(ignore the letters in it, i just wanted an idea of how it would look with a piece) respectively:
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1022/skantsy5.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1416/edgind7.jpg






and some shit from yesterday.
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9591/bektworl5.jpg

glass
11-29-2007, 03:13 PM
beyond: all the letters of that second pic look like they dont belong next to each other, like that S looks like part of a throw with the K and T part of a simple piece. maybe to start out, try working with a theme to get a better idea of structure or new ways to bend letters once you're ready to distort them more.

beyondyereyes
11-29-2007, 03:20 PM
I think I understand. It'd be hard to put spirals in a 'K' or 'T' but I'm sure practice will see to that.

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/uzumaki.jpg
I think it's a little better but still a lot of room for improvement.

dim
11-29-2007, 03:46 PM
captain- ur letters in the first peice are good but the arrows in the back grond ruined it to be quite honest

F3B3S
11-29-2007, 04:02 PM
sumthing im trying......still fixing it up........FEBS

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/FEBS.jpg

Dusk07
11-29-2007, 05:06 PM
throw i canme up with in spanish today...throwys arent my thing so if you could help me out or let me know how this one is...i think its alright..

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m2/byf8th/000_0272.jpg

C-Lurk
11-29-2007, 05:13 PM
I'd say letters are a little -too- scrunched. Give them some room, or perhaps lessen the amount of curve they have on them.

Swoe.45
11-29-2007, 05:30 PM
Dusk- lose the curve. and work the K. but other than that its ok. i really dont like bombs. more of a Throw up person.and working on a different wild style. so teze if your down for ANOTHER battle. iam down.
FEBES- Not feeling the S. or anyof it. but i know the updated version will look better.
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1416/edgind7.jpg

^^^
Your better than this. so lets see it.
Sinn- Ewwy!

-Sinn-
11-29-2007, 05:30 PM
Captain keep workin at it definetly progressing
Febs clean that shit up lookin dirty

piece of shit webcam flick
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/murder.jpg
crits?

Bizzaro
11-29-2007, 05:49 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/47.jpg
shitty quick rough sketch im gona make another one but cleaner and fix up the letters more n shit
SIN lose the weird thing vcomin out the s
febes meh i suppose its good but im not feeling it
SKANT shits ill i dun like the one with the riddiculus cluster of arrows though
kils u got fix the s at the end i know uve heard it already

Swoe.45
11-29-2007, 05:52 PM
^^
Bizzaro-Pretty dope. just work on the "K" it looks like a "A"
Sinn- thats ugly brotha...

Haz-E
11-29-2007, 06:01 PM
yo BESAR MAN U FUCKING IMPROVED i havnt been on ur letters arnt great but better then when u started so keep up on the improvement

-Sinn-
11-29-2007, 06:03 PM
Captain keep workin at it definetly progressing
Febs clean that shit up lookin dirty

piece of shit webcam flick
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/murder.jpg
crits?
bump

SkuzSCT
11-29-2007, 06:18 PM
Febes, Sex Without Condoms, and Besar I'm liking what I see on the last few pages.

Sinn, just work on some more simples and focus on letter structure instead of thematic imagery.

Re-posting this because the only crits I got was a bump from Febes:
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/new.jpg
I spend a lkot of time leafing through the last few pages to crit you people, I'd appreciate some crits in return.

Olick
11-29-2007, 06:19 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8886/swoepinkss5.jpg

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/5209/11282007085327pmyv4.jpg

how come your shit always looks the same? *tilts head sideways*

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-29-2007, 06:41 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235221.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/290678218.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/jbsdofiubwoiufbwlfblwibffwajbfsbsd.gif
bump

inked it.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/1aaaaa.jpg

IwriteNASR
11-29-2007, 07:27 PM
kils- sexy simples
5 minute crayola marker freestyle
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7848/f001we0.jpg
crits apreciated

akel, bigel, teze- all dope simples
bumpin for crits

avore
11-29-2007, 07:43 PM
yea besar ur gettin hella bettr bro
nasr--its cool
damn my shadings ALLL FUKD UP
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5619/yummmmme001si6.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1386/yummmmme002fy8.jpg

Bizzaro
11-29-2007, 07:52 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/48.jpg
still working out some kinks

nekid
11-29-2007, 07:54 PM
something old...pic quality is fucked.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/173/d/6/NEKID_THROWIIE_by_dweazy.jpg

electricjew
11-29-2007, 08:15 PM
http://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290085.jpg[/IMG]http://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290086.jpghttp://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290087.jpghttp://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290084.jpghttp://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290083.jpghttp://http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290082.jpg

wat do yous thinkk?...

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 08:30 PM
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290085.jpg

is electricjew's pic since he found a way to mess up img tags.

Clowney-Cakes
11-29-2007, 08:34 PM
^^^^i wrote drone....then found out he was a dope writer....RIP drone
some new shittt...
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8342/therest007jw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6828/therest006il0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6828/therest006il0.bc5ece2868.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=527&i=therest006il0.jpg)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3436/therest001kj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3436/therest001kj1.dd23d26018.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=527&i=therest001kj1.jpg)

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 08:44 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/TEK1.jpg

Something I did real quick during gym.

sex without condoms
11-29-2007, 09:11 PM
yea besar ur gettin hella bettr bro
nasr--its cool
damn my shadings ALLL FUKD UP
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5619/yummmmme001si6.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1386/yummmmme002fy8.jpg

EVERYONE LOOK AT THIS KID.
FOLLOW HOW HE DOES.
BARSBARSBARS!

Drone keep this up. You'll get your simples down pat this way bby:]

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 09:13 PM
yea i'm digging the shadows

afrillisdark
11-29-2007, 09:21 PM
bars.. nice

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 09:24 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/TEK1.jpg

Something I did real quick during gym.

bump?

AOTPs
11-29-2007, 09:40 PM
something quick
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/har.jpg

5Funerals
11-29-2007, 09:45 PM
Sintakz - you did not use bars.

Aker - looking good except for the constant increase in size and the last leg of the R.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400005-2.jpg

Throwup

AOTPs
11-29-2007, 09:54 PM
rast-its ok...try a diff. style of lettering for ur throw up

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/s.jpg

Olick
11-29-2007, 10:05 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/48.jpg
still working out some kinks

besar your shit is gettin better every. single. post. im lovin it man. your gonna be great. keep the good shit up man.

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 10:09 PM
Bars are pointless to me as I did bars for quite some time when I used to write 2-Ez and It doesn't work out because off the get-go the letters in my name don't flow all that well together. I use a handstyle type "sketch" as my basis for what I am drawing and go from there.

As for aker I'm digging it except for the "R" and the "one"

5Funerals
11-29-2007, 10:15 PM
dude bars work for everyone because letters are letters. they dont change based on what order they are in with other letters. Any word can flow if you can rock it the right way.

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 10:20 PM
The problem with me is that I draw from my head. I'm not like people who first start off with a circle and guidelines, then I add circles for the eyes, nose and mouth, then a rough sketch of the hair. Then erase the guide lines. Fuck that. I jump straight on into actually drawing what needs to be drawn. I'm no good at. "Ok bar here. And here. Oh, oh, a bar here too"

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-29-2007, 10:22 PM
tahts why your stuff doesnt look any good or have any flow.
you gotta use bars in order to learn structure.

letsg0skate
11-29-2007, 10:32 PM
Bars will really improve your stuff man. I use to try and freestyle all my stuff too and it looked terrible until I started actually using bars.

MainEvent
11-29-2007, 10:50 PM
besar- very dope
aotps- mediocre
rast- mediocre
aotps- good
tek- wack (been trying to keep it one word on crits, but get a new name too. TekNYC already is fresh)
drone- very dope
elka- ok
blur- wack
nekid- decent
nasr- dope

anemptyswishersweet
11-29-2007, 10:55 PM
did this in a quick minute. know it's kina sloppy but say whatever you wanna say.
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6066/image001tv5.jpg

terower
11-29-2007, 11:17 PM
kils- sexy simples
sex- i love your goofy style. so fresh and so clean clean
drone- the d and o are taller than the rest of the letters but keep at it its gettin there
5 minute crayola marker freestyle
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7848/f001we0.jpg
crits apreciated

I think this is pretty cool! I'd say work on the R and try not to take it tooooo wild, but other than that props

Maste
11-29-2007, 11:27 PM
so i dont understand bars...ill admit it...i just dont thats why i didnt want to do em but i noticed that Besar was doin the same thing as me (not usin bars) they yelled at him and he listened and his stuff is actually gettin pretty hot (good job man...im happy you stuck with it while i was bein stubburn) sooo i got a new word and im tryin to use bars...please tell me what to do to make bars easier instead of "keep doin em" if there even is anything more to it that that.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/3159/sivlbarsqc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ps: sorry for bein a stubburn ass toy haha...i wana get better and this seems to work and i think you guys can help me...so that is my first try at bars and the first try at the new word (changed words cause i didnt like the letters in Maste as much)

pps: my handwriting is shitty...yes

Sintakz
11-29-2007, 11:42 PM
I'm digging everything but the H. Lol nice "Finally". As for the bars use that as a basic framework and start bending, twisting, warping, w/e you wanna do with your letters. The bars are just there to make sure your S still looks like an S when you are done with it. Good Luck.

nekid
11-29-2007, 11:47 PM
work at its fineeeeest
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/076/4/1/HumorSTYLE_by_dweazy.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/076/3/5/NerdSTYLE_by_dweazy.jpg

Roolete
11-29-2007, 11:54 PM
i disagree. i dont like the arrows on the h and r on humor, but the nerd is some hot simples. maybe round out the bottom of the e though

Rank-oner!
11-30-2007, 12:56 AM
Whats up guys I havent been on in forever...actually i had to get a new account name cause my old one wouldn't log on. Some of the people i saw starting really simple have gotten so clean. I wish i could have gotten but i got busted minorly and had to just give it up a while. i'm gonna post some stuff i did a couple months ago i'd appreciate some crits.
Oh Nekid: i really like that humor peice. i don't really feel the arrows mainly the one on the r put it's nice man and so are thosee simples.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank003.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank004.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank008.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank010.jpghttp://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank009.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank011.jpg

good to be back

Sintakz
11-30-2007, 01:09 AM
The pink rank with the lowercase r looks good but the r has that little thing coming off the side and it makes it seem like it is an f with the middle bar covered. I'm digging all of them though.

Rank-oner!
11-30-2007, 01:14 AM
also did this to some old nikes with some crappy deco's that have been sitting around for months
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank013.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank014.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank015.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank016.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank017.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank019.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rank020-1.jpg
not good but i was bored

Sintakz
11-30-2007, 01:23 AM
I'm digging the little character. I'm not really feeling the throwie styled letters as much as I am the standard Simples. Still pretty good though.

Kool-Aid Man
11-30-2007, 01:24 AM
rank - i like them ,the 1st ones N and the seconds a looks odd though.

Bizzaro
11-30-2007, 02:37 AM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/49.jpg
someish gona stop working on this flow and mix up the letters in some straighish shit

Kool-Aid Man
11-30-2007, 02:42 AM
besar thats looking really hot

mas$
11-30-2007, 11:00 AM
bizzaro dude i love that E! the R cud use a lil work tho
spent like an hour on this bitch, first piece with my new twins
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2924/pic055ry2.jpg

littlerocky
11-30-2007, 11:18 PM
bizzaro that shit has so mcuh potential i coudl see that leadin into a dope style
mass pure dopeness accept that middle letter is kinda sketchy kinda looks liek an R kidna like an S???
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4303/img0437mt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new oneliner - Aline
crits?

mas$
12-01-2007, 12:07 AM
yea its an R with a wierd extension of the A running over it
i need to fix it somehow, make it more like a R
thanks
i really like the A and the I, the L looks like a B though?

IaMaMoRoN
12-01-2007, 01:22 AM
Bizzar-i agree with mass...make the R better. its still dope.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0519.jpg

Rank-oner!
12-01-2007, 01:31 AM
^^^^^^damn i really want to see that painted going down the highway. tight man.
Bizzaro: really nice letters you've heard about that R i'd also say make the B a little wider. if you look at the other letters compaired to it, it seems a little bit thinner. really nice though

IAM.
12-01-2007, 04:11 AM
new to the boards. that blockbuster is soooo clean. paint it.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/doodle.jpg<br>

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/piece.jpg

tempest
12-01-2007, 09:31 AM
i like ur second pic. tho the a is a lil akward and the cloud at the end looks like an e. still, better than my shit by far

AZTEKA
12-01-2007, 09:52 AM
Yo iam keep up that style it's lookin good, and the second pic looks better.

AZTEKA
12-01-2007, 09:53 AM
Some sketch i did in either 4 or 5 minutes.
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/8029/meckssketch004pq1.jpg

whahappen?
12-01-2007, 11:03 AM
Bizzar-i agree with mass...make the R better. its still dope.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0519.jpg
bump some nice shit
zero progression fer da win!
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9885/picture223nk6.jpg
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/6404/picture224xd7.jpg
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/283/picture225ga7.jpg
wendys is gay as fuck

iam, that shit is NICE, and its a very dope name

Czar One
12-01-2007, 12:24 PM
IAM, in your second piece, maybe add some cloud above the M, where the 2007 is.

silentchaos14
12-01-2007, 02:38 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEL-1.jpg%5B/IMG%5Dhttp://img236.imageshack.us/img236/138/idelmz7.jpg
dropped the A
crits?
whahappen- keep workin on them.

danker17
12-01-2007, 02:52 PM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/6982/yellowgreen17ny0.jpg
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2350/danpink17nf3.jpg
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2569/newstyle17roughti4.jpg
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5792/supershitty17ir8.jpg

whahappen?
12-01-2007, 05:51 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1976/picture226no1.jpg

Rank-oner!
12-01-2007, 05:59 PM
danker17 need to work on letter sturcture and loose all extensions

Hoostein
12-01-2007, 06:52 PM
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/9f/85/1ca16fc1e9bd.jpg

Rank-oner!
12-01-2007, 07:03 PM
^^^woaah man start off simple. don't try anything complicated. it takes a lot of practice and even if it doesn't look like it to you, the really complicated pieces have letter structure that the artist has built up over time. just start with block letters and use bars to make letters instead of making them wavy.
hope that helps

BIGel
12-01-2007, 07:12 PM
ahh no images are showing up on my computer so i cant crit!

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2007/334/2/3/king_killer_by_bigel.jpg

Drakula
12-01-2007, 07:45 PM
IAM.It's all dope.A Fresh original style is something you dont see that much these days.

BIGel.Dope Dope Dope.Kinda hard to see the G though.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/RABY07.png

New sketch.Reminds me of Lemons.

00-made-00
12-01-2007, 08:07 PM
Raby-Thats sweet man you from london? you have that london styleee.
El- Sick as.

sema
12-01-2007, 08:31 PM
ahh no images are showing up on my computer so i cant crit!

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2007/334/2/3/king_killer_by_bigel.jpg

definitly dope nan if anything do more fades n inline wit a bright color but like i said def dope
drakula- nice its clean

Hoostein
12-01-2007, 08:54 PM
^^^woaah man start off simple. don't try anything complicated. it takes a lot of practice and even if it doesn't look like it to you, the really complicated pieces have letter structure that the artist has built up over time. just start with block letters and use bars to make letters instead of making them wavy.
hope that helps
like this?
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/bc/4b/38f6048e2df8.jpg

silentchaos14
12-01-2007, 09:23 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEL-1.jpg%5B/IMG%5Dhttp://img236.imageshack.us/img236/138/idelmz7.jpg
dropped the A
crits?
whahappen- keep workin on them.
bump for no crits.

Sintakz
12-01-2007, 09:45 PM
silentchaos14 - It's kinda cool, not liking the L though, there is a lot of negative space as well

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/Tek1a.jpg

Vagrant
12-01-2007, 09:45 PM
Idel: instead of bending your letters in odd ways, try experimenting with constructing them in different ways. Using bars. There are many ways to make different letters. You have 2 to choose from right off the bat (upper and lower case).

heres a shitty blackbook piece. don't blame me if your head explodes
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/Blackbookpiece.jpg
coloring is horrible. i wish my markers we halfdead. i would be able to color better with them. too much ink right now it bleeds too much.

T O K E
12-01-2007, 09:47 PM
love the 3d vagrant, it jumps right off the page

Hoostein
12-01-2007, 09:54 PM
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/00/1b/4072ac8eb100.jpg
not done. i feel like im trying to hard to progress.

MUSEone
12-01-2007, 09:55 PM
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/6f/06/cfcef148225a.jpg
not done. i feel like im trying to hard to progress.

take off the arrows on the E and tha A

Rank-oner!
12-01-2007, 09:56 PM
Hoostein: haha man i didnt expect you to make the jump so quick and well haha yea man looking soo much better. keep practicing though. also in your handy the bottom part of your c is curved in and it makes it look like an s.
good job though
silentchaos14: i dont like the dot in the I and the letters are too wavy but the drop shadow is pretty dead on. keep workin on it
vagrant: really nice 3D but the T is really weird lookin like the bar is way to low and to long. makes it look like a plus sign. and if thats a V for the fisrt letter then make it more pointed cause it looks like a u.

Animal
12-01-2007, 10:50 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/pickyture.jpg
I need to fix the O

ill bump my own for no crits

Bizzaro
12-02-2007, 12:38 AM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/51.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/50.jpg
some unfinished messy quick shit im having a hard time getting the >< shape in the first one kus i hit S then the a and the r kill em

lololzheffer
12-02-2007, 02:47 AM
critz?!
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/100_1199.jpg

Rank-oner!
12-02-2007, 03:00 AM
bizzaro: really nice i like the second one more but it might just be cause i cant make out the second half of the first one that well just alot of erased smudges

amk
12-02-2007, 10:26 AM
Bizzar-i agree with mass...make the R better. its still dope.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0519.jpg


love this..
apart from BigEl and Raby...the rest of this page is whack..
Besar..your progressing lots...the top on isnt as good as the bottom but your grasping flow which is good..

Auf Wierdesehn...Ich Liebe Bigel und Raby und All Leute !

sex without condoms
12-02-2007, 11:04 AM
IAM.It's all dope.A Fresh original style is something you dont see that much these days.

BIGel.Dope Dope Dope.Kinda hard to see the G though.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/RABY07.png

New sketch.Reminds me of Lemons.

BUMP!!!<333

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123341.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123259.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121229.jpg

danker17
12-02-2007, 01:43 PM
besar i love the 3d and drakula i love the colors.
sex, what happened to ser?
just some throwys/one liners..
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7607/oneliner17seq0.jpg
I usually just do DR because I havent come up with a full one and it's kind of long.
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9724/dr5ydrydrydry17mr9.jpg

amk
12-02-2007, 02:29 PM
Sex..nice style..
i gave my crits erlier..

eh..
my christmas sketch..
ahah..when im done ill compare it to the one i did last year ..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-10.jpg

DONT KNOW WHERE TO ADD 3D OR WETHER NOT TOO...it looks all wierd cos of the karaks and shit..im confused as to where too put it..

ehhh..
crits for it up to now

whahappen?
12-02-2007, 02:35 PM
liking it except for the hat on the h

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1976/picture226no1.jpg

RFI. SPit
12-02-2007, 02:37 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8471/photo153sd9.jpg

Kinda a little collab with my girlfriend haha... she drew the little animals all over my letters... I'll scan it later today so you can see the details of the animals and such...

PS. I hate dying markers. :(

Teez-EmM!!!
12-02-2007, 02:46 PM
amk put 3d or at least a drop shadow

RFI. SPit
12-02-2007, 02:52 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8471/photo153sd9.jpg

Kinda a little collab with my girlfriend haha... she drew the little animals all over my letters... I'll scan it later today so you can see the details of the animals and such...

PS. I hate dying markers. :(

bump - last post on page

whahappen?
12-02-2007, 02:56 PM
liking it except for the hat on the h

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1976/picture226no1.jpg
penis

whahappen?
12-02-2007, 02:56 PM
Sex..nice style..
i gave my crits erlier..

eh..
my christmas sketch..
ahah..when im done ill compare it to the one i did last year ..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-10.jpg

DONT KNOW WHERE TO ADD 3D OR WETHER NOT TOO...it looks all wierd cos of the karaks and shit..im confused as to where too put it..

ehhh..
crits for it up to now
bump for amkah

MUSEone
12-02-2007, 03:14 PM
Zof- im feelin it man, diff, and thats wat i like to see. Fresh.
Whahappen-exactly wat u said about it..
Amk-add tha 3D, but make it diff. not like tha solid shit most people do.

RFI. SPit
12-02-2007, 03:23 PM
Thanks Muse

Anyway, here's an outline I just started working on. Going to change the E and fix the crookedness, then probably ink it, then colours will come later

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3516/photo154xf3.jpg

sex without condoms
12-02-2007, 03:35 PM
BUMP!!!<333

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123341.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123259.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121229.jpg

sperm buckets.

Bizzaro
12-02-2007, 03:56 PM
shittiness
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/52.jpg

MUSEone
12-02-2007, 04:02 PM
shittiness
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/52.jpg
Clean it up a bit, add shadow, ink.

It has potential....

C-Lurk
12-02-2007, 04:06 PM
BESAR- I think the E is awkward, it needs some flow. Also, don't neglect the R.

RFI. SPit
12-02-2007, 04:33 PM
Thanks Muse

Anyway, here's an outline I just started working on. Going to change the E and fix the crookedness, then probably ink it, then colours will come later

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3516/photo154xf3.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1551/photo155xu5.jpg

Inked this, going to add white highlights to the 3d.
Any suggestions for colours?

tempest
12-02-2007, 04:50 PM
besar: ink it, trace it, ink it agin. then itll b nice nd clean

BORG
12-02-2007, 06:16 PM
zof- your showing alot of improvement, keep that shit up
amwah-nasty, you should do the 3d going towards the character
sex- you know you got some sexy ish, keep bumpin sketches out
besar- letters are a bit off, i was feelin your other shit a bit more

quick outline
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4626/picture001er9.jpg

glyce
12-02-2007, 07:50 PM
bizzaro- if you cleaned it up and added some color it would look sick

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/sure001.jpg
any crits?

sketch3
12-02-2007, 07:58 PM
cile honestly i liked the less evolved version of this style, shits still hype tho

Bizzaro
12-02-2007, 08:34 PM
soank you missed a little bit of the left leg on the A
cile dope shit
spit nice i would go with the 5 shades of yellow that somone suggested
Sex looks nice but once again im not shure how far the style can be pushed prove me wrong
amk dope

dam im getnn lazy as shit with my sketches no time either lately
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/53.jpg

C-Lurk
12-02-2007, 08:40 PM
Take out the line in the middle of the E and raise the top piece of the R and you're set.

Maste
12-02-2007, 09:58 PM
workin on simples
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4010/sivlsimples1xy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2677/sivlsimples2ot1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tried doin one free (without bars)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8371/sivlfreeot0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
it doesnt look any good imo
and a less simple simple
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/714/sivllesssimplekb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i think if i did a whole name "sivlized" like that but maybe with fatter bars it would look decent in paint...with some color

oh and this is an old peice...i forgot about it .it was on the back of some old folder..i still kinda like it. and i think the style can most definatly be developed
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/6103/sireabstractgy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-02-2007, 10:49 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8471/photo153sd9.jpg

Kinda a little collab with my girlfriend haha... she drew the little animals all over my letters... I'll scan it later today so you can see the details of the animals and such...

PS. I hate dying markers. :(
your girlfriend gots skill.
iliek the way your playing with your letters work on flow. maybe make to o's not circles fix the bottomo of the e.
keep sketching.

RFI. SPit
12-02-2007, 10:53 PM
Yea, it's always a work in progress.

I wish I had some pictures of my girlfriend's art, she's 10x the artist I am...

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-02-2007, 10:55 PM
my stuff will always be a work in progress changes slowly but surely.
girls gotta different side of creative shit than guys my girlfriend be coming up with some wild shit that inspires me.

sketch3
12-02-2007, 10:56 PM
tities dont count as works of art, all though i could stare at both for hours

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-02-2007, 11:00 PM
aa
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanonymous.jpg

AnteUp
12-02-2007, 11:15 PM
oh my god...thats the best shit i seen from you...amazin i love the z...
did you get mah pm?

sex without condoms
12-02-2007, 11:39 PM
A "collab" i made with a Teze stickie.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232329.jpg

Bizzaro
12-03-2007, 01:12 AM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/54.jpg
nighttime sketch i like how it turned out little bits i got fix... i realy wana ink it and colour it wiith a dope sceme but i suck balls at colouring and doin those nice fills and patterns watnot and ima fix the S so its symetrical wit de botom
sivl keep all bars the same size and becarful wit the V and make sure u dont hide it to much
Tezer dope baby im luvn it! paint that shit

Rank-oner!
12-03-2007, 01:39 AM
^^ hey man i think you should try making the S wider and making one half go to the left and the second half go to the right. it feels like its left sided right now

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-03-2007, 02:06 AM
got bored at work.

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/BloodPhatcopy.jpg

just fuckin around havent posted anything in a while...
haha i know the letter structure is SHIT!
especially the tyb...

damn Besar ur getting better. you still need a good handy thooooooo

glyce that looks good man keep it up

sezer thats fucking bad dude! in a good way

sex... love ur style

zofone that shits sick but i wouldnt use those colors but...
wtf do i know right? haha

jest11
12-03-2007, 02:23 AM
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n154/punker_j11/sketch2.jpgshitty shaddows didnt really put any rtime into it just more about the letters
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n154/punker_j11/sketch1.jpg

slim_xxxogo
12-03-2007, 02:30 AM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b246/akaslv/akas7sketch.jpg

hey this is one of my first sketches..ive been writing for two 2 months now
ill take any comments

style is when you rush to get that shit done

and it turns out that way

EndurE[594]
12-03-2007, 02:33 AM
I would like advise or comment anything to help give some ideas or whatnot. I would also like to meet Bay Area local writers. I am really trying to get more organized. Msg me..

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9166/graffiti002sc2.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti002sc2.jpg)

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4495/graffiti003wn7.th.jpg (http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti003wn7.jpg)

This one turned out a little light...
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4720/graffiti001dt8.th.jpg (http://img149.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti001dt8.jpg)

tempest
12-03-2007, 11:09 AM
so i know ther wack but im just askin for crits. i like the 3d 't' and the 2d 's'. the fer was just me fucking around. im really new to this so all crits accepted including 'fuck u toy get off the forum bitch!' encouraging!

SEFT
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4615/dscn3817ty2.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3817ty2.jpg)

SEFT
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5967/dscn3815nq0.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3815nq0.jpg)

FER
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1315/dscn3812rn7.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3812rn7.jpg)

FailOne
12-03-2007, 12:05 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/415/newfonepk8.jpg

O came out wackk

C-Lurk
12-03-2007, 03:34 PM
Fail- I don't know if you wrote upside down or something, but I can't read your hands. The piece is pretty cool.
Jest- I like it


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/Chaos___/FULLPage.jpg

Can I get some crits for each different one?

MainEvent
12-03-2007, 03:49 PM
yo fone thats piff dude. your handstyles are ridiculously dope. all the bits and connections on the piece are sick. post some more shit, i wanna see some of your other blackbook pieces.

BIGel
12-03-2007, 05:25 PM
whiteout and crayola washables :(

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2007/337/2/2/envelope_killer_by_bigel.jpg

OriginalCin
12-03-2007, 05:40 PM
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/3452/draw1qu6.jpg

the whole thing


http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/436/draw2kj6.jpg

closeup of the abo

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/1075/draw3ll9.jpg

closeup of the out

comments?

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-03-2007, 05:42 PM
nice try about....

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/Untitled-1copy-1.jpg


anway...
heres some whack simples.

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1794.jpg

sketch3
12-03-2007, 05:59 PM
thats not the point, graffiti is all about how artisticly u structer ur letters,
so its not ur art if you copy someone elses structer.
we call it a bite. dont be a swagger jackker

sex without condoms
12-03-2007, 06:16 PM
just busted this out, fucked up the E
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181055.jpg

and i started to make a bunch of slaps just of my O
i have no painters at this time so all i have to use for slaps is penZ :[
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232922.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232905.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232847.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232828.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232812.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232720.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232659.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232643.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232146.jpg

yeah.....

silentchaos14
12-03-2007, 06:20 PM
sex- the top sketch is nice. i dont know about those stickers though, probably look better in marker. you need a steadier hand for cuttin them too, kinda shaky.

edit: been meanin to ask u for your msn, you got one? just pm it to me if u do.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-03-2007, 06:26 PM
awwww damn, didnt even notice that shout out.
i love you too sex ;]

bump to new page

;936196']
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1794.jpg

cyzo
12-03-2007, 06:34 PM
thats a large photo

cyzo
12-03-2007, 06:35 PM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/cyzad0-1.jpghttp://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/cyzad0-1.jpg%5B/IMG%5D

Animal
12-03-2007, 06:37 PM
Bump?

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/pickyture.jpg
I need to fix the O

mada focka
12-03-2007, 06:49 PM
tell me what you think

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/bensample069.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/bensample067.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/bensample053.jpg

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-03-2007, 07:18 PM
whiteout and crayola washables :(

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2007/337/2/2/envelope_killer_by_bigel.jpg

that is fucking dope man
and ur handys are killer

animal - i like it think it looks nice


damn seize i love that fill!


and sex as always its dope and yeah you need to cut it with a steadier hand wont look legit if its not cut well i really like the bottom one tho mang!
if you wanna cut it out to the line i think you should use an xacto knife or razor or something like that

Maste
12-03-2007, 07:24 PM
^ big el your one of my new heroes along with borg on this site haha you guys kick so much ass

lmao sample thats funking great man

Maste
12-03-2007, 09:03 PM
so, i was bored had a snow day
did a big simple...colored it
i think itll look nice somwhere with a backrgournd...

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2780/sivlizedrj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
oh and i know my hand was a bit shakey in spots...i did this laying down so when i moved around my lines got squiggly sometimes haha funny word...squiggly


EDIT: where all the things about the cok go XD hahaha deleted!...pS please dont delete this post just tell me to delete this part if its needed

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-03-2007, 09:21 PM
ok just did this a few minutes ago

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Fas1.jpg

dif version of my name - fas(phase?) haha
ok im not gonna lie i forgot the H

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Fas2-1.jpg

tried to darken that shit up with photoshop...

sketch3
12-03-2007, 09:23 PM
thicken up the bars, and concentrate only on structer for a while,

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-03-2007, 09:32 PM
oh and maste...
that fucking fill...
IS DOPE!

danker17
12-03-2007, 10:08 PM
Fasho, I like your letters, but, i love your characters.
cyzo- ...really?

Some really shitty pen freestyle..
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6913/penfreestyle17erbc0.jpg

hazetheone
12-03-2007, 10:10 PM
http://i7.tinypic.com/6olsgv8.jpg

feed back should i go to the normal thread yet?

http://i9.tinypic.com/7311v0y.jpg

http://i3.tinypic.com/82cxp2h.jpg

La Coka Nostra
12-03-2007, 10:46 PM
not yet.

hazetheone
12-03-2007, 10:49 PM
alright dude thanks any feedback or improvements that need to be made?

Infected
12-03-2007, 10:50 PM
Here's just a simple:

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/INF3CT-1.jpg
any helpful hints or tips?