Blackbooks

[hazetheone]

alright dude thanks any feedback or improvements that need to be made?

[Infected]

Here's just a simple:

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/INF3CT-1.jpg
any helpful hints or tips?

[Infected]

haze- pretty nice, but I'd leave the pics out.
on the second one down, probably make your outline a lil bit thicker? Maybe it'd make it easier to read.

[garbage down tha way]

been messing around with my throw alot more, i painted alot this weekend, ill have flicks up by tomorrow night hopefully. this throw is kinda rough, but the painted shit is on point. i promise.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newishh.jpg

infect- id change that name, its too long, and just ultimately a shitty name. on the other hand, keep working those simples, keep your letters the right way around, not backwards, and dont use characters yet until you're good at them.

haze- that shits tight. id take the saw lookin thing of the h, and mess with your e more, but it's good so far, that style has potential. as for the middle one, id scrap that and keep developing the top and bottom shit.

bigel, seize, sex-allll dope.

[HadeP]

Tez - your letters got mad floww good on ya, id say work on your e's a bit, they look kinda crammed in there, but it'll come
mada - top ones dope, but the two, im assuming they're throws, could use some work, check the new to graff thread and work on bars
bigel - always lovin your shit.
haze - dont be stupid guy, if you plan to get big in graff even remotely, you will need to change your name, it doesnt matter if hes in new york or england, legends a legend.
your still toy, loose some of the extentions on the ends of your letters.

just a little throw and a hand style, stuck with a purple highlighter and a sharpy,
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Picture063.jpg
crits comments opinions whatevessss

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

fucked this one up REAL bad. the s is too big. oh well

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1796.jpg

[Dying to live]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/akelpiece.gif

[MaNtS]

yo akel didnt realise you posted on bs, long time since i last checked, anyways catchup soon,
Heres something for a school banner, they pay the paint, i get time out of class, seems win-win to me.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/Wentworth.jpg

[BORG]

akel- take off the arrows and work on your letter and flow
sex/seize- thanks for the shouts my *****s, shits fresh
mants- like the simples, not feeling some of the add-ons

quick simpls
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9504/picture008cm1.jpg

[tempest]

so i know ther wack but im just askin for crits. i like the 3d 't' and the 2d 's'. the fer was just me fucking around. im really new to this so all crits accepted

SEFT
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4615/dscn3817ty2.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3817ty2.jpg)

SEFT
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5967/dscn3815nq0.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3815nq0.jpg)

FER
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1315/dscn3812rn7.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn3812rn7.jpg)

bump

Amek. i like how u got that e character in there. u oughta make that into a sticker now
cile - pretty simplistic but i like it. try putting the 3d the other way nd c how it looks.
wentworth - ur background culd uses work
akel - ur 'k' looks like an 'n'
tempest - pretty wack dude

[mas$]

word borg thats tite
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3379/pic065pi7.jpgi like this, finished it today..mad proud
now vote, throwie or handie in the box?

[Rank-oner!]

^^^^ CILE: that is soooo clean. The simples look amazing and your 3d is dead on. I love it man.
Mas$: really nice man i love that character. I think handstyle but you should see if you can make your own marker and have it drippy

[amk]

...

finished my christmas peice..
in my new blackbook...my first ever one actually..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-4.jpg

hope yall like.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

that cilestyle is hotness man.
if thats the shit that comes from your mind at 6:30 in the morning, i say keep it up!
hah

amwha, thats probably my favorite thing ive seen from you. your fills are always banging.

[garbage down tha way]

been messing around with my throw alot more, i painted alot this weekend, ill have flicks up by tomorrow night hopefully. this throw is kinda rough, but the painted shit is on point. i promise.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newishh.jpg

infect- id change that name, its too long, and just ultimately a shitty name. on the other hand, keep working those simples, keep your letters the right way around, not backwards, and dont use characters yet until you're good at them.

haze- that shits tight. id take the saw lookin thing of the h, and mess with your e more, but it's good so far, that style has potential. as for the middle one, id scrap that and keep developing the top and bottom shit.

bigel, seize, sex-allll dope.

bump, got nothing.

amk- i dont like how the tops of those letters are small and curved, other than that, santas arm is on backwards, and the rest looks dope.

mass- i like the backround and color scheme, but i cant read the letters besides an a and an e.

[SkuzSCT]

Starting with criyts for 2 pages back...

Sivl - getting better every sketch, just don't stop going simple

Fas - letters look good on their own, but thy don't flow with each other, ill Character

Danker - stay more basic before you work with that style

Haze - good style, but you need a name change and a reality check though, Writing haze when you know damn well there's already a legend with that name is pretty damn disrespectful

Infect - keep developing your throws man, theyre not great yet, but if you keep at it you'll get better. Check all the bombing threads for influence

Fen - Sick tag, okay throwie

Sieze - not feeling that style it always seems to stay the same. Good fill though.

Akel - sick piece, work on your tags

mants - clean but very wiggles-like and not very flowy

Borg - dope simpleness

Seft make more even sized bars and focus on making them run paralell and shit this will give you more flow. Dont focus on extensions or hookups yet, they're just making your shit look uglier

Mas$ - sick page, I'd do a throwie that looks really cloudy if i were you.

AMK - sick other than some missing 3d near the santa hat.

[SkuzSCT]

Oh yeah and Over - youve got a good throwie quit posting it though if you don't come up with new ideas for it, maybe yu don't get crits cuz its always the same

[SkuzSCT]

Crits on anything..?
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/scrubfills.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

ohhh shit i see it now. yeah well id make the bottom and top of the b visibly connected so it dont look like a p with an o under it. then, let the a be more visible, it's hiding behind the b. with the r, the right leg is soo dope but the cirlce around the r itself totaally kills it, just lose that and it will look better already.

[amk]

Crits on anything..?
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/scrubfills.jpg

wow..fucking amazing..
that middle gold skuz peice is fuckin orgasmic..
you are dope.
i love you.
so good.

[Bazer]

damn.. lots of nice stuff this page and the last one. i really like that gold skuz.

so anyway, i busted this style not so long ago:
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1096.jpg

and i didn't touch it with my name for a couple of weeks so i decided to do somethin today and it turned into this:

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1137.jpg
and cuki
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1138.jpg


does anyone think i should post in the big girl thread?

[danker17]

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/2126/redpen17kl6.jpg

[Pope]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y14/zebuplexon/Photo001.jpg

Sorry for poor quality of picture D:..
Oh i only had crayons present at the time.

[5Funerals]

Pope - you need to erase all of what you think you know about graffiti and start completely new. Learn about letter structure and bars.

BAZE - Your shit is incredible. Do you ever go bombing and have you ever pieced on a wall?

Everyone esle - fucking dope

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400003-2.jpg

My letters got progressively bigger on this one by accident oh well.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400004-2.jpg

[Pope]

Pope - you need to erase all of what you think you know about graffiti and start completely new. Learn about letter structure and bars.

BAZE - Your shit is incredible. Do you ever go bombing and have you ever pieced on a wall?

Everyone esle - fucking dope

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400003-2.jpg

My letters got progressively bigger on this one by accident oh well.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400004-2.jpg
Could you explain more on the topic.

[smooth_nuts]

he means READ THIS THREAD http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

[Infected]

Damn, skuz. That shit is so clean. love the one on the far right. that fill is nice!

[IwriteNASR]

mass-the canvas is fire.......handie in the box
amk- one word. DOPE
skuz- the gold simples my favorite nice tosses too
baze-theyre all sick, i like the top and bottom one the best
danker- idk not really feelin the style
pope- dont blame it on the crayons, listen to smooth nuts
rast- nice throw and fresh simples maybe tilt that T to balance it out
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/5927/30059349oe4.jpg
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/9195/85036539qf8.jpg

[glyce]

danker17- it looks cool but i think you should make the d fatter

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/sure003.jpg
any crits?

[IwriteNASR]

edit

[glyce]

danker17- it looks cool but i think you should make the d fatter

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/sure003.jpg
any crits?
bumpin to a new page

[DEAR]

Hey, New to this site
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/8357/dearsketch2am9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1513/dscf0466vf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8826/dscf0481ll1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/5956/dscf0478om9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/1299/dscf0482qt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/932/dscf0485ly6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/6927/dearstraightletterfs0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fube]

CRITS

* Give crits if you expect to receive them. What goes around comes around, don't expect everyone to go out of their way to give you crits if you aren't polite to enough to help others out. If asking for crits try and give crits to the last 5 or so picture posters.

* Don't turn down crits from people who aren't as good as you. Just because their skill level is less doesn't mean your piece is flawless and they can't pick it out.

[Roolete]

dear i actually like your second one.. connect the bars of your e and take away of its long extension crossing the d, work on your a..maybe try uppercase? make the horizontal bar on the r a little bit thicker. at least thats what i'd do

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0541.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0542.jpg

what would jesus do

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/1aaaaa.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanonymous.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/12.jpg
AND BUMP THESE SIMPLESSSS.
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/scrubfills.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400004-2.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/Wentworth.jpg
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
lose some of the pointless shit and it's bangin.
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9504/picture008cm1.jpg

[Yukon]

damn edward that cile style is fucking fire man bump

[Infected]

glyce- It's okay, but I would try to loosen up your letters a little, make 'em flow a little better.

Dear- Pretty good stuff, just watch your balance, the 'ear' tend to get bigger as you draw.

Roolette- pretty nice, just watch your color combo.

Sezer- Ill. Try changing up your style a little more, tho.

[Rank-oner!]

Dear: def work on keeping the sizing consistant like on the first one the D is alot smaller, but nice simples.
Tezer: top one is fire man i love those E's and the flow in the best out of the three you posted i think.

[Rank-oner!]

AMK: i love that peice but i think there is some missing 3D at the tops of the letters cause you did one by the right side of the charac but not on the others. The fill is smokin though and im diggin the letters as well.
Skuz: that gold one like everyone says is freakin orgasmic and you should hit that up somewhere.
Baze: i love your letters but in the first one i feel like the B is a little small and on the second that there is some dead space between the B and the A. Really nice though man.
Rast: you have good simples but i wouldnt overlap the 3D like that.

[Maste]

I would just like to say to everyone here that it seems that everyone has been doing really good crits and it is appreciated. Keep up the good work everyone.

Rast: dont put 3d over another part of a letter...just make it stop...it may look odd at first but t defianlty helps
cile: you dont get crits cause your too amazing...
tezer: those are hot man get some more color in there and itll be so freash

[BORG]

tezer- your on some ill shit man, cant wait to see the style progress a bit more, thanks for sendin the sketches, theyre officially in the bbook :)

really feelin the gold piece skuz, paint that shit

[shie-ster]

THIS IS SMOOTH NUTS.he was having trouble with his computer so he had me post it for him.

http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Photo065.jpg
smooth:"just a shitty d with shitty 3d.....im more worried about the stucture than 3d any way*sigh*oh well can i get some crits...sorry about the shitty webcam flick its all i gots to use at the moment"

[shie-ster]

yo smooth, it definately has potential and it flows.but theirs something about it that comes off as sketchy to me.probably how the curve of the d is a bit off.if it was straighter and just one nice curve it would make it alot better.and nothing pesonal, but i just dont like arrows unless you really know how to use them.these ones are nice but i like when they hve a different feel to them.work on the 3-d a little itty bit to.
p.s. im a sexy beast and you know it.:D :D :D

[RUP'E]

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u220/chrislogemann/streetart033.jpg
im guessing this def belongs here crits?

[RUP'E]

oops i hear u have to give crits to get.
in that case
i think sezer hands shit is fairly nice but has room for growth
i think roolete neads practice
i think that dear is rollin along ok.but def needs practice
i think danker 17's peice is nicely coloured and all, but boring

[nekid]

sezer.....i like your style.

[jackimo]

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2827.jpg
Its my first decent throwie so i posted it
Crits on it?

[mas$]

whats it say?
keeez?
its kl got a nice flo, i cant read it tho:(

[librelikespie]

i see krabz...flow is good and its consistent and u fukin suk ass.jkz.
the skuz, tezer and roolete stuff is banging.
help please on my one liner wackness :( :
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img163.jpg

[mas$]

finished the canvas
changed the peach to red
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9206/pic066rw7.jpgi tried postin in the big bbook thread
and i got erased aha

[harry]

http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff049.jpg
my throwie for a battle word is slerm anddd... yeaaa crits btw it has a light orange fill the flash on my camera fucked itt..

[librelikespie]

i see krabz...flow is good and its consistent and u fukin suk ass.jkz.
the skuz, tezer and roolete stuff is banging.
help please on my one liner wackness :( :
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/img163.jpg

halp :(

[harry]

well i dont know what ur complaining about they look super fresh to me now u wanna give me some help haha

[librelikespie]

yer.. the S in that throw could be worked on a little, that connector part above the circle in the bottom of the S is a little thin. Thats bout it.

[sketch3]

to be honest i cant read most of the letters, but thats just me.

i find that if ur doin a 1liner u shud space the letters out moreso than a normal throw,
cuss it looks confusing wat with the overlapping lines

[jackimo]

Hope you can see the letters a bit better :D
http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2828.jpg
http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2833.jpg
If you can't it says KRABZ :D

[mas$]

Krabz, move the dots around, make the R and B look better it will:p

[amk]

libre...decent....maybe define the lettring more though..
jackimo....good flow...but the letters aint as good...rehtink your structure then incorpate that type of flow then itll be a decent throw mann

inside cover of my book..and front cover..

front

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture002-1.jpg

inside.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture001-2.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e-2.jpg

thoughts.

[smile_]

d

[Tokenkaligreens]

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/AnitaChildPic.jpg
slerm lol i suck
harry looks good lol I lost
librel looks smooth to me

krabz lol i like your name keep working it .

[amk]

smile..the S is aight..not sure bout the others tho...try simplified basic bubble letters...doubt you will....

same for the other guy above me ^


for my man CILE.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-1.jpg

PEACE

[smile_]

amk, thats very nice, only thing I would change is the C other than that, I really like the colors and flow of the ILE part..


btw, what did you mean with simple bubbles? Thanks.

[Pope]

I'll have some pictures soon as soon as i find my other digital camera that actually takes clear pictures D:

[Tokenkaligreens]

ya nice fill on the ile maybe try a old english tat style for the c next time

smile i like em i think he means tone it down a bit and make them more rounded and "bubblie" lol he gave me the same crit.

[Infected]

Here it is, the new name. Drew it up at school. I know, it's rough. What do you think?
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/same.jpg

[Maste]

hey yo juts to let you know before everyone rips on you... sane is taken and the dude is pretty damn famous...respected freight train artist...so, just letting you know that people are gunna give you crap...

besded all that i like the style... for a first time with the word its nice...i couldnt use th arrow on the e it doesnt seem to fit aaand i do like the name sane but yea

[harry]

use the edit button. poeple will rip on u for triple posting aswell thanks token but i dunno i think u might have this battle i like urs better we should put it in a pole in the battle section and see who really wins cause u havent lost yet and neither have a i aight peace ill try and make a pole in the battle thread with both of ours up

[AyteYourCookies]

yooooooooo
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture399.jpg

[amk]

smile..the S is aight..not sure bout the others tho...try simplified basic bubble letters...doubt you will....

same for the other guy above me ^


for my man CILE.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-1.jpg

PEACE

for crying out loud....bump over complete bullshit.
Ayte....jus aint working..all the lil lumps bumps humps etc. dont look right...maybe if you left them out it could look better ?..
and give crits.

[harry]

the only ting i dont like is the c....yo token i just put up our battle in the battle forum just waiting for the mods tp approve it

[beyondyereyes]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/pencil.jpg
Sloppy.
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/fishy.jpg
Out of proportion letters and a very very unoriginal character.

[sex without condoms]

sorry for all the repeats of these pictures, i can't tell which are better, if you have a problem, then fuck you in the neck.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175908.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175754.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175637.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175532.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175458.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175356.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175319.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175255.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175236.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174916.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174835.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174810.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174748.jpg

[jersOneTIC]

sex those characters are dope.:)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2559/jerzhe7.jpg

[sex without condoms]

best piece yet from your Jers, you finally fixed up the R and the E so they're proper and match:]

nice job
e-five
*slapping of palms*

[Teez-EmM!!!]

yea jers definity your best. dont you freestyle your shit too?? sex im feeling the caracters and throwups for sure. my faveritie pieces are the second and third.
amk its looks real good over all letters need a bit of work but i like how the c is like his tattoo. finish up the hand and it will be good in the hood

[Teez-EmM!!!]

libre...decent....maybe define the lettring more though..
jackimo....good flow...but the letters aint as good...rehtink your structure then incorpate that type of flow then itll be a decent throw mann

inside cover of my book..and front cover..

front

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture002-1.jpg

inside.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture001-2.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e-2.jpg

thoughts.
wow were did u get a book with black pages? im guessing that u use paint markers on it

[Captain]

wow were did u get a book with black pages? im guessing that u use paint markers on it

looks like it's just the inside cover. lots of books do stuff like that.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

nice shit sex .
some bullshit.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture001.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture003-2.jpg

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

my god tezer, that "bullshit" is FIRE!
i love that first one. my favorite from you by far

[Vagrant]

AGREED!

fucking dope as hell!
nice use of colored pencils ;)
put that "bullshit" on a sticker!
no doubt someone will say to loose the arrows, but fuckem it looks good.

i think you just inspired me to start sketching more

[Tokenkaligreens]

loving these colors on the 1st one tezer
dope characts sex

cool harry

[Grape1]

tezer - love the style. nice flow. all around freshness.
jers - very clean, digable.just not digging the arrow.
sex w/out condoms - not a big fan of the style, clean it up a bit too.

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7685/skech004tc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


some quick shtuff.

[sex without condoms]

just did this, not too good but w.e

FOR SEIZE!! <33333333
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/211210.jpg

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0637.jpg
new peice crits
tezer that is lookin rele sick man lovin the style the z is on fire
jers thats looking rele nice i like the s

[IwriteNASR]

ayte- its good but that A is too small
sex- fresh..second ones my favorite by far
jers-i cant find anytihng to crit, but i agree best you've done
tezer- siick. nice to see some color
dim- idk its kinda sloppy lookin imo
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8756/ccbd6.jpg
crits

[AnteUp]

nasr...wow, your buildin up to a unique style, keep it up, i like the long letter look

[sex without condoms]

Nasr you gotta thicken up your letters just a weee bit more

[SenTheFirst]

sex- fresh characters
teze- always buttery
grape- e is funny
dim- i think you got a little ahead of yourself

some quick stuff
im gettin stuck with flow

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0593.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0595.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0597.jpg

forgot to turn this in

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0592.jpg


exchange with a friend

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0591.jpg

[LikeOner]

Sen the first one is pretty dope

hmm is that other guy who writes near still round, cause if hes not im going to start posting my near stuff.

[Bazer]

zomg
gettin hoes is wat a graff head does best.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1140.jpg

ok now everyone go to sleep. except you ausies... but seriousley if theres anyone from u.k. online right now... wtf man?? wussup?

[BORG]

smile..the S is aight..not sure bout the others tho...try simplified basic bubble letters...doubt you will....

same for the other guy above me ^


for my man CILE.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-1.jpg

PEACE

^^^that shit ill man

baze- what the hell is that?
sen- not bad, make all the letters same size
nasr- if your going for a tall piece, plump up the letters a bit
dim- clean her up a bit, not bad though
sex- i just wanna sex you up!!!
tezer- the arrow on the r in the first sketch covers too much of the r, maybe swing it underneath, but thats a nasty style your comin up on, keep shit up

simps for mo fuckin' amwha
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/7889/picture018cp5.jpg

sorry amwha, i didn't have the patience to draw out a soccer ball pattern ;)

*edit* quick 30 min paintin
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/5571/picture019sq6.jpg

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

homies shit be BANGIN!

[sketch3]

dope is dope is cile n amwha

amk great concept,
cile-evil monkey=<3

[Jet]

ok I haven't posted in here in a long time... since I'm at a shitty college I only have access to a black and white scanner right now so I guess just crits for letter structure.... when I get a chance I'll either flick the pages or scan them better....

old sketch:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/untitled.jpg

new throwie I'm fucking around with:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/untitled2.jpg

something else kinda new: (unfinnished)
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/untitled3.jpg

and a piece I'm sketching out to do (also unfinnished):
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/sfod/untitled4.jpg
EDIT: ignore that shit in the bottom right corner, that wasn't me.

ok here are my crits:

BORG: fresh as always glad to see tose prismas going to good use!! I got another pile ready for you so PM me.

BAZE: sorry, it's ugly. it looks like "GVI" with a little penis for the V, the G has a terrible shape and, in my opinion, too small. The shadow on the G also feels a bit off.

SEN: the first 2 are top notch, the middle 2 I don't like at all, for the Plox I would beef up the P and L cause your O and X are pretty fat. the last one is ok but the S is too small compared to the rest of the letters.

NASR: I like it a lot, the only thing I might do would be to put a couple holes in the black, espicially in the S, but that's just me. I think it looks good anyway.

[amk]

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0593.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0595.jpg




these peices are great !!!
they flow perfectly.
and godamn cile..amazing
we have to exchange again ahhaha

jet...iono man,,not lookin good.....do simples use bars tone it down .... doubt you will.

[Jet]

anything specefic you don't like?

I've been rocking simples/bars for a solid 4 or 5 months so I've just been trying to spice my shit up a little....

[SenTheFirst]

cile, the simples just arent fair. nasty.
jet, 4-5 months? dang son you should have a little better understanding of structure

simples from school. not feelin the e

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0599.jpg

[Bizzaro]

nice sen i got a lotta sketches to post but the computer at my house is fucked itll let me go on any website but bombingscience. its gay

[Jet]

@ sen: really? can you point out to me some parts that you don't like on any of them? To mee the structures look ok. maybe they look shitty cause of the scan...

If you tell me something specefic about the structures that is whack or you don't think looks good then that'll help.

[amk]

@ sen: really? can you point out to me some parts that you don't like on any of them? To mee the structures look ok. maybe they look shitty cause of the scan...

If you tell me something specefic about the structures that is whack or you don't think looks good then that'll help.

JET..
like on the HINT peice...the way the letters lean back ... invert on themselves is whats fuckkin it up in my eyes...make em straight..

so i did this char
but did some shit on his head by accident....all black shit..so i used my inititive (sp) ahahhahah

before..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/xc.jpg

AFTERRRR

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/xzz.jpg

yeah..
Crits on my wittyness

[5Funerals]

AMK - thats looking really nice, if anything work on the nose. The nostril on the right is missing.
Hint - its not terrible its just mad ugly to me. It could just be preference and it could also be the scanner. In regards to the last piece, you need to work on the simple shit much more before you try that style.
SEN - Its all excellent. On the green one the S is kind of removed from the other letters but thats not really something you need to work on.
BORG - there is absolutely nothing to critisize.

Here are some more simples from me. One or two were freestyled. They all have plenty of mistakes.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400003-3.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400004-3.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400005-3.jpg

throwupz
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400007-3.jpg

[c.n.k]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1111.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1100.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1098.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1097.jpg

[5Funerals]

incredible

[mas$]

nide E on the first one:p

[a maze]

sup, everybody? Crits- here's a simple
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/finalnamemaze.jpg

[a maze]

sen- Nice and clean simples. Not too "creative", I like that.

rast-Pretty cool, but try to change up your letters a bit. The letters almost pass as a font.

neuro-Very ill, It'd be cool to see some simples.

[anie 1]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0637.jpg
new peice crits
tezer that is lookin rele sick man lovin the style the z is on fire
jers thats looking rele nice i like the s

fresh dim sum :)

[-ShAmEE-]

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/4351/28287468gj4.jpg

cant spell...

[avore]

cnk [i like the 2nd n 3rd one alot..
maze-keep workn at at its got rhythm
hint- workn at that throwie itl get great
amwha i love that monky--
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4898/yummmmme004ar5.jpg

[a maze]

shamee- it's okay, work on it. Nice way to rep BS. :D

drone- It has some potential, but it needs work, man. try moving the letters closer together, maybe thickening some sections and bending 'em a little more.

Here's another- sorry about the blockiness, my scanner fucked it up bigtime.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze2.jpg

[sex without condoms]

sorry for repeats, you choose the better flick to look at.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184816.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184719.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184618.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184523.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184455.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184351.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/184430.jpg

[Haz-E]

cnk FUCKING FIRE MAN second one is so sex

neways some new throwie i just came up with
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/9375/51337772gn7.jpg

[a maze]

sex, those characters are so ill. Keep it up.

[nekid]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1111.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1100.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1098.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1097.jpg

dope.

[seywhat]

sens- dope
neuro- dope
rast- bring letters further apart and keep doing simples
drone- extend the bars on the o like the others
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture110.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture106.jpg first try at 3d shit and new name
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture104-1.jpg simps

[a maze]

Here's another simple, my scanner fucked up the orange outline. It's actally flourescent. crits?
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze3.jpg

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/211426.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/211530.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/211553.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/211631.jpg

[whocares!?!?!]

Bizzar-i agree with mass...make the R better. its still dope.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb51/bsbclan4life/DSCF0519.jpg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G0bOxs0IIgY

but you probably already knew that.

[freakeenyc]

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/2310/dusehz6dx1.png
any suggestions for coloring the top one.. i cant think.....been ages since i came to this site
that resk^ is solid....feeling teh neuros

[TESTER]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo17-2.jpg

new style for me any cirts? and i know the s sucks i drew a black

freak- try just a solid color with a light colored 3d but at some stuff in the 3-d, lines and shapes and shit look at other peices and get ideas

[a maze]

Bump... No crits. Sex been filling up the boards with his awesomeness, so I guess y'all missed me. :D Here---
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/finalnamemaze.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze2.jpg
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze3.jpg

[BIGel]

hush with the beef, more flix.

http://a162.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/15/l_3fa4e8239846216eeca8280d8f032461.jpg

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

dopity dope bigel

and sex, if your down i wanna colab on a couple canvases. hit me up on aim about it.


heres a quick straight letter sketch

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1798.jpg

[popshots]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9978/afloxo0.jpg
Crits.......
seize: take more time on it nd make da right side of the e nd z out more...
bigel: dope handstyles
Maze: i like da style jus dont color yet jus keep worken at it

[sKeeLo]

popshots - i like the style and approach . . . some things seem to be a lil off . . looks like you break off your bars alil too much, i lke the addon arrow on the top right most part of the sketch, practice and get your addons like that . . open sapce between the L and D looks alil akward and places the D on an island not really connected to the rest of the letters . . good stuff, almost there

[SEZ]

yeah neuro thats dope as fuck!!!!!
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4940/eksyms5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
black fucks it up baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad....

[KASE2]

SEZ- iz koo, but ur rite, lose tha black
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/2peicer.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/bb3.jpg

crits pr favor, kuldnt really get a good shot of tha 2 peice sry

[mask_cib]

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0657.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0654.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0653.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0651.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0648.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0647.jpg

pictures aren't very good...

[amk]

OLD *****S

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111113.jpg

ahahhaha
i did this THIS TIME LAST YEAR !!!!

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/w.jpg


COMPARING TO THIS YEARS CRIMBO SKETCH..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-4.jpg

HAVE THE FUCK I JAVE IMPROVED

PEACE NIAGGAGASSS

EHHHHHHH

MASK.pretty nice i spOSE eh...timmmyyyyyyyyy....leters aright aight..bottom one is good rest WHACk..bye

[NEZ89]

mask- i like the char. and letters on the yellow one but the M doesn't seem to match the rest of the letters, and the first one seems unbalanced.
kase2-the leg and arm of the K are too thin, and try leaving off the extensions.

[NEZ89]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/7183/im001498tp1.jpg

i had a good idea for the fill with this, then ended up biting another writer on accident

[amk]

OLD *****S

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111113.jpg

ahahhaha
i did this THIS TIME LAST YEAR !!!!

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/w.jpg


COMPARING TO THIS YEARS CRIMBO SKETCH..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-4.jpg

HAVE THE FUCK I JAVE IMPROVED

PEACE NIAGGAGASSS

EHHHHHHH

MASK.pretty nice i spOSE eh...timmmyyyyyyyyy....leters aright aight..bottom one is good rest WHACk..bye

Bumpin cos my main man nez gave me no fuggin crits

[msfytwantsme.alive]

you havent improved at all. haha. u may have actually taken a step backwards. hahaha.. and u still waste all your time and ink on bullshit.

u still talk in all caps. you still talk like an idiot. hahahahaha. nothing fucking changes.



last night i spilled a pint of ded and garvey over everything. jesus fucking chirst.


hows life all. ill post up pics later 2night. probably.



how fucking depressing is it that im home this time on a goddamn friday night. unbelievable. nothing fucking happening till next friday. i feel like crying.

[NEZ89]

lol my b son,
i like the old santa, the hangin tongue gives it sort of a "sadistic santa" feel
with the exception of the misplacement of the thumb, the second santa's pretty cool too
as for the letters, i like the old one better only because i haven't seen those from you.
i see to much of the same new ones, that repetitiveness kinda bores me
all in all they both pretty dope

[NEZ89]

oh and nice job on the cans in the first pic

[amk]

for my man ATE

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1d.jpg

[seywhat]

sens- dope
neuro- dope
rast- bring letters further apart and keep doing simples
drone- extend the bars on the o like the others
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture110.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture106.jpg first try at 3d shit and new name
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/picture104-1.jpg simps
bump for crits
amk- ill ass color schemes. youve improved alot in a year
nez- im diggin the style, just not how they overlap
mask- last one is pretty tight just bring the m together more

[NEZ89]

yeah i got alotta complaints bout that

[anemptyswishersweet]

damn... got a little sloppy

http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/5946/image007ni7.jpg

[danker17]

Been doing just alot of pen freestyles..wanting to kill this book.
might as well give crits..
nez- looks like you were trying to color different where it overlaps? just guessing
amk- all dope
seywhat- love the 3d on the second one
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/3275/seventeeninatorsf4.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3997/catchacaseky9.jpg

[jersOneTIC]

tryin something new...
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6616/redya7.jpg

[sacwacko]

fukin nice jers but the r kinda killed it.
i say work on the R and you will be set.

[Sintakz]

Yea that shit is pretty fucking dope Jers. I guess the only reason why I think the R takes away from it is because the letter structure kinda makes it look like a B. Now if your name was Jebs that shit would be 100% ill haha.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

jers make your r more like your and you s more like your r. it will flow better.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

im starting to like this simple shit

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1804.jpg

[BORG]

^^^your starting to get the hang of this simple shit, mad props, love the new e, thanks for the shouts

[nekid]

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0657.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0654.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0653.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0651.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0648.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/100_0647.jpg

pictures aren't very good...

the 3rd peice is fresh

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

thanks man
you get shouts on all my shit now
haha

p.s. when i get home i might even send you a flick of the "secret" back to my canvas ;]
haha

[BORG]

haha fuckin sweet!!!! :)

[ASLOS]

;940418']im starting to like this simple shit

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1804.jpg
i dig, minus the s needs work, but hot

[sacwacko]

;940418']im starting to like this simple shit

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1804.jpg

and the 3d is kinda sloppy.
but it looks good.

[a maze]

sup all?

amk- always ill. That shit is hot.

seize- dig it, but it really looks rushed. Take your time man, no hurry.

jers- dude, awesome. Love it, looks so clean. Work the 'r' a little more.

mask- really enjoy yours, esp. the long b&w throwie. The letters seem to get bigger as they progress though, Keep working on it, it's nice!


Here's another little simple---CRITS?

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze4.jpg

EDIT-

Here are a couple more: Done at school. Again, the oranges and greens are actually flourescent, my scanner fucked it up.

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/maze567.jpg

[SEZ]

old sez...
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9523/sezsketchnq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yes that 'z' is mad fucked up...hahahahaha a hella lot of arrows...sorry realised its really big

at this point i think i liked arrows ALOT!!!!!

Did anyone enter the QTFX battle?

[AEK]

sez- its alright but i would say try some more3 simpleletters without so meny arrows
seize- i like it. nice fill and nice simples.

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg92/Jels_bournemouth/1196020327_f.jpg

not so sure about this one
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg92/Jels_bournemouth/1175980207a6028651379l.jpg


http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg92/Jels_bournemouth/1175980207a6028651343l.jpg

crits???

[SEZ]

ummmmm....dont know what to say...i like the cards

[seywhat]

seize-drop the z just a little bit more to match the s and that shit is fire

[ekimboi1]

aek-work on ya simples,like block letters!
seize-always dope
amk-you got ill shit
i'll edited this later with a pic!

[amk]

sup guys.
im down for exchanging at this time of year for some reason..
maybe cos its christmas hehe..

so SenTheFirst...ima do you a SEZ and Seize ima do you a SEIZE...if its okay ?!?!

ahah

AMAZE...what yor doin on the top one is actually pretty worth holding onto...its like..all wavy and shit which i personally like...maybe work on the structures of letters...whilst connecting them like you are...aight...hope i helped eh

[Bazer]

sez post somethin new...

[amk]

hey bazer......

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdede.jpg

here the exchange

and yeah bazer...you wana your name dropping at the top of the page..theres room screaming you name babe !

hope you like SEIZE n SEZ

[ThickGravy]

Edit.

[dim]

amk nice i rele i like that better then the other peices u posted

[sex without condoms]

unfinished bad pieces are in this batch of pictures.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114550.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114517.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114503.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114448.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114405.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114259.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114229.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114217.jpg
idk which pic is better.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122117.jpg
first time ever sketching something out in a book before. Probably not going to finish the Easter piece though, but I will touch it up

[NaRsyONE*]

Yo mask' where you from ? Cuz there's a mask' getting ups in my area

[SEZ]

sez post somethin new...

more recent....eksy......the 'e' and 'y' are backwards on this to equal it out...
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/6784/eksy2dc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

EY...eksy

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9805/eksyyyyyyygw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this ones on the other side where i managed to leak the ink through on the doper piece anyway...

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7964/eksyyey0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you like baze??? not great but much better than the crap you've seen right?

oh and sorry theyre soooooooooooo big guys...the smaller i make it the more blurry so yeah

like the first one the most cause its equaled out.....

[KASE2]

fo sho bruh

[sex without condoms]

Resize Your Fucking Pictures!

[SEZ]

Resize Your Fucking Pictures!

i already explained...you can even tell by how blurred the third pic is already...
don't be a puss!

[sex without condoms]

Whatever you say.

don't wanna be flickless.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135820.jpg

[SEZ]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7096/eksype6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

is that a character sex?

anyone for a character battle??

[anroe]

some old ish... havent been on here in a min...

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-17.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-20.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-14.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/reddevil.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/greenforce.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-22.jpg


http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/greenbitch.jpg

[sex without condoms]

unfinished bad pieces are in this batch of pictures.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114550.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114517.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114503.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114448.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114405.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114259.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114229.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114217.jpg
idk which pic is better.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122117.jpg
first time ever sketching something out in a book before. Probably not going to finish the Easter piece though, but I will touch it up

bump for new page.
anroe i've already seen and critted most of those sketches on 12oz

[SEZ]

i like anroe...
gay clown...
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1187/sezgayclowncp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

another eksy...

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/7362/eksydontbitehahasi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

although anroe i'm feeling and seeing a bit of MUSE in these...
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3332/noname20xv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6029/greenbitchtw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i think anyone whos seen MUSE will agree with me...?

[F3B3S]

sex without condoms..would have to be the most lackest untalented person iv ever seen...you should try alil harder..ur geting know where,..... dont mean to hurt ur feelings but ur not geting better if anytihgn ur geting worse...................WORD

[SEZ]

why don't you post something dick head?? if you've 'got more important things to do' and youre as good as you
say you are than what are you in here for? exactly cause youre just as toy FEBS sa fuckin' poes!

[dim]

anroe i dont like how the o is all by its self

[sex without condoms]

just did 'em.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/155041.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/162814.jpg

[glyce]

anroe- im not really fellin the first one but the rest are pritty sick

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/sure006.jpg
crits?

[Mass Appeal]

hey bazer......

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdede.jpg

here the exchange

and yeah bazer...you wana your name dropping at the top of the page..theres room screaming you name babe !

hope you like SEIZE n SEZ



sex..dont take this the wrong way man...you contribute a shit load to this thread which is good and you have a decent style of letter...but it would be good if you could add crits to these batches of sketches man...:) :)...exchange too..whut you write !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


sup Anroe...looking good..i always feel your simple ish

bumping till i know sez n seize have seen it eh..wouldnt mind comments eh ?!

[SEZ]

its ok i guess...heres a sez i did...who sketched that are you trying to show us up??

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/6452/quicksezdl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sorry its fucken blurry and a very light pencil my bad

[hazetheone]

sex without condoms your characs are dope but im not feeling the throws or the shit you write all around it

[SEZ]

AMK DON'T WRITE MY OLD FUCKIN' TOY GAY NAME THAT I CAN'T EVEN PIECE RIGHT...THANKS MUCH LOVE ... AND YES THIS 'E' IS WACK! THE WHOLE PIECE IN FACT LETS LEAVE IT AT THAT
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/8054/quicksez2ni2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/8326/sign2vc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Mass Appeal]

what the fuck are you talkin about
That SEZ peice isnt for you..
its for SenTheFirst..
resize your fuckin pictures !

[sex without condoms]

hate the writing, too bad then.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172324.jpg

[a maze]

anroe-that shit is fire, all of it. Keep it up.

no offense, but most of you don't crit at fuckin all. If you want crits give 'em, damn.

[Vagrant]

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/8326/sign2vc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Seriously awesome.
This handstyle is bootylicious

Saying bootylicious is "in" so i'm cool now because I said bootylicious.

[Noddles912300]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/6607/bwarlh6.th.jpg (http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bwarlh6.jpg)
alright dont know if this worked but yea.
havent posted anything in a while, prob should go simpler.

edit: dang i did the thing from imageshack is there a new way to post pics?

Sez: love the handy
glyce: nice simple.

[Drakula]

Sex-I really like your new stuff.You've definately devoloped your own style.Just a a question though.Is it RADE or RAOE?

Thanks for that bump a few pages back aswell.I really appreciate it coming from you.

You really need to start bombing though.:p:D

[fost]

you gotta be fuckin kidding me

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/4373/114405ws5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4599/2pars925zw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7453/friscopars925dd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

at least change it a little bit so people can't tell how obvious of a pars bite that is

[Kriede]

i would say that doesn't look like a bite and you look retarded for calling it out.

[Tokenkaligreens]

dude its graff nopthings new its just twisted up get over it.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

exactly... HEY EVERYONE LETS POINT AND LAUGH!!!

AHAHAHAHAHA


haha jus kiddin, don't feel bad everyone makes mistakes *pats on back*

[F3B3S]

lol yes it does dude....jsut another wack artist tryign to be orginal...WHY dotn i post...cuz i anit leting ppl jock my style dipshit...keepin orginal...by never cumin on here really..only to piss of toys like u and laughing about it cuz ur too much of a chump to relize u gots no life..but to sit on here and bite...i post once in a while...and for the fuck of it.....keep jocking on my dick bitches..........FEBES

[ekimboi1]

no ones jocking your style dude!...

[sex without condoms]

i would say that doesn't look like a bite and you look retarded for calling it out.\

only thing i would say is a semi bite is the bpdy even though ive never seen this before.

[Tokenkaligreens]

lol everyone is quick to hate when they didnt do it 1st,period and again its art everythings been done get over it.
btw nice charaters sex .

[jersOneTIC]

sketch i did in my homies blackbook...
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/9969/neogc9.jpg

[SEZ]

all those people who had some stupid answer probably bite themselves and you use the excuse thats its all been done before...pure toooooyyyyy!!!
i just think anroe looks similar to these muse pieces...especially the way his arrows come off his piece...but i guess its different enough

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2445/muse41xy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/833/greenbitchgz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1825/noname20eg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5686/muse63at3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
muse is tooo dope! i'll admit i was wrong...but those kinda responses are worrying...
its like saying 'oooo everyone else bites so let me hee hee hee'
Nice shit anroe sorry for the mix up kinda

[F3B3S]

no ones jocking your style dude!...

yeah i stop posting so ppl cant...douche bag

[Tokenkaligreens]

nice shit jers dig the S

[modem]

http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh281/nunse/Picture003.jpg

["Fasho" T|y|B]

Anroe - Fuck dude all those are sick as fuck man keep that shit up!

Sex - fuck it dude i think youre shits dope

Soank - thats badass!

Seize - thats pretty down dude

Jers - fuck yeah homie shits sick :P

ok here are some SIMPLES i did for my new throw

let me know if you think these will flow together well

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/FaSho-3.jpg

i was having trouble making an A to flow with it but i think i got a good idea for it now, ill sketch it up tomorrow for you guys

[SEZ]

yeah i stop posting so ppl cant...douche bag

i can see your point of view but whether or not people bite i think you should still be able to burn anyone who does bite your shit.

is anyone gonna give me crits on what i posted...good or bad whatever

[harry]

just do the h accept with a bar across the top to make it an a simple...

["Fasho" T|y|B]

oh shit yeah man thanks that sounds good

[jawsy]

jers-fuckin dope
anroe- nice
sez- i love your clown

[harry]

lol glad i can help...

[SEZ]

did this today and i fucking hate it...not going to finish it
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/3247/sezsketch2fi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

["Fasho" T|y|B]

that looks pretty fuckin dope to me sez

[Mass Appeal]

everyone once in a while...theres always a huge debate on whether biting is good or bad...or wether you shud do it..

offuckingcourse you should bite...not loadsa times....just once...to set you on your way to the style you desire after you feel you have the letters down somewhat in your name..

if you rock a wildstyle its biting....obviously...wildstyles have been recycled over nd over nd over again jus like CHINO BYI said...what makes you lot think they arnt...if people didnt bite...put it this way....graffiti wouldnt be here...because if people didnt copy peoples styles back in the day...it wouldnt of continued to be as big as it is today...

maybe im wrong ?...maybe im right ?..i couldnt care less as thats my opinion..i feel yalls opinions...but thats the opnion i feel mostly...i like opinions..if it wasnt for opinions noone would argue or get better..anyways.

SEZ...despite all the crazy doo dads and little wood planks the letters are actually..( sorry if i sound idotic sayin actually ) ... pretty decent..the have flow which is great..and they look seriously fucking fresh....seriosuly...do this..

. retrace the letters
. clean as possible
. leave out the shitty extensions all around it
. give it a nice one colour fill
. add some 3d
. congrats in my eyes you gots the bets peice youv done that iv seen

peace :)

[anroe]

its cool yo, i can somewaht see a resemblance between me and muses shit, but it wasnt a bite, jus clarifying that, ill prolly post more shit later peace~1

[-ShAmEE-]

sup guys.
im down for exchanging at this time of year for some reason..
maybe cos its christmas hehe..

so SenTheFirst...ima do you a SEZ and Seize ima do you a SEIZE...if its okay ?!?!

ahah

AMAZE...what yor doin on the top one is actually pretty worth holding onto...its like..all wavy and shit which i personally like...maybe work on the structures of letters...whilst connecting them like you are...aight...hope i helped eh


u owe me a battle.

[Mass Appeal]

check yah PM box shameee
i critted on teh last page !

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11ddd.jpg

comments !!

[anroe]

okay mad random here, but anyone down for a battle? get at me

[SEZ]

everyone once in a while...theres always a huge debate on whether biting is good or bad...or wether you shud do it..

offuckingcourse you should bite...not loadsa times....just once...to set you on your way to the style you desire after you feel you have the letters down somewhat in your name..

if you rock a wildstyle its biting....obviously...wildstyles have been recycled over nd over nd over again jus like CHINO BYI said...what makes you lot think they arnt...if people didnt bite...put it this way....graffiti wouldnt be here...because if people didnt copy peoples styles back in the day...it wouldnt of continued to be as big as it is today...

maybe im wrong ?...maybe im right ?..i couldnt care less as thats my opinion..i feel yalls opinions...but thats the opnion i feel mostly...i like opinions..if it wasnt for opinions noone would argue or get better..anyways.

SEZ...despite all the crazy doo dads and little wood planks the letters are actually..( sorry if i sound idotic sayin actually ) ... pretty decent..the have flow which is great..and they look seriously fucking fresh....seriosuly...do this..

. retrace the letters
. clean as possible
. leave out the shitty extensions all around it
. give it a nice one colour fill
. add some 3d
. congrats in my eyes you gots the bets peice youv done that iv seen

peace :)

nah its sooo outta balance....no point anyway its a toyish name..why only a one color fill ?hahaha the less you bite other styles the more rare yours will be i think but thats my 'opinion' lol

funny eksy...
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8411/thrwieol9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)





i'll battle anroe whats the word?

[ekimboi1]

febes, you can prolly beat me in a battle, but your style is wack, so unless your gonna post your work stop talking shit about how people bite your style!

[anroe]

iight sez im down, jus do ur name, black and white, have it up by wensday

[SEZ]

febes, you can prolly beat me in a battle, but your style is wack, so unless your gonna post your work stop talking shit about how people bite your style!

febs is all talk...he sits at his computer claiming hes like some sort of king
when in actual fact hes no better than anyone in this forum...hes more of a toy than anyone else cause he talks shit like they do, febs atleast back it up seriously!

[Mass Appeal]

i agree..
we was spose to be battlin 5 weeks ago..he " need time "
i pmd him sayin that it was 5 weeks ago he was like ugh shit i didnt even realise..
now he has to do some all city big crew productuon mural ith " backgrounds and colours "...ahahah..oh god

[AnteUp]

ayo amkah, dude exchangizzzzlleee? wat tha fuck you write now? i write whats2

[fost]

biting somebody's letters or style to learn about wildstyle is completely different than completely copying somebody else's characters- especially if that writer is known mostly for doing that exact character

and why is everybody so defensive when a bite is called? this forum is ridiculous

[La Coka Nostra]

^ especially in the toy BLACKBOOK thread.
go ahead and bite styles.
if that's what you have to do to be able to develop your own style then fuckin do it.
i did it. and now i have a style all my own.
bite all you want on paper.
but before you get all full of yourself and think you're good because you bit someone's good letters...develop your own before you paint.

[-ShAmEE-]

my head is about to explode.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled-3.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

^ especially in the toy BLACKBOOK thread.
go ahead and bite styles.
if that's what you have to do to be able to develop your own style then fuckin do it.
i did it. and now i have a style all my own.
bite all you want on paper.
but before you get all full of yourself and think you're good because you bit someone's good letters...develop your own before you paint.

woordddd..
and sure ante...its Amwha as always

[Maste]

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/963/sivlxmasug9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
did a little christmass peice... i dont really like anythng but the peice but oh well...first time doin it like that
edit: i think the sanner messed the green there a bit

i like the funky esky a ton
amwah you got a wicked good style
and jers...please tell me that wasnt a "quick skecth" cause itd take me a while to do something that clean

[-ShAmEE-]

you need to get ur letter stucture right, go simpler like the ones on ur keyboard.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled1.jpg


hears mine!

[-ShAmEE-]

check yah PM box shameee
i critted on teh last page !

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11ddd.jpg

comments !!


looks dope. like the way u have done ur karak. should paint that shit.

[SEZ]

k fuck the biting....more mother fuckin pictures raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
febs a poser no doubt

FOST i know what you mean when i called anroe out for a bite everyone was like
ahhh stfu its graffiti its all the same blah blah blah its almost like they all bite and
defend each other...thats some gay cowboy shit baha!

um...ante i already know of a wats2 and hes dope as fuck no lies

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172324.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123918.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/160357.jpg

[Sumoe]

Haha, the bottom one is dope. Nice throwie as well.

[Mass Appeal]

word sume.
sup man..aint been in hur for a while..

for a battle..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-2.jpg

SWER

[Vagrant]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled1.jpg



bump this. not too fond of the lightning bolt but over all i think this is ace. could you polish this up and post a refined version?
I have no idea what to put instead of a lightning bolt, but im sure you could think of something.
maybe you could play around with the U to give it some large Serifs at the top to match the structure of the other letters

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/172324.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/123918.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/160357.jpg
new page.
@Ras
I'm not feeling the new style of letters you've got going on. I like the simpler, more straight letter style you do, it's better.

[-ShAmEE-]

battle. wid amkwasasa.a

had to be quick time, as the kid needs to sleep.

5min..
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled1342.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

bump this. not too fond of the lightning bolt but over all i think this is ace. could you polish this up and post a refined version?
I have no idea what to put instead of a lightning bolt, but im sure you could think of something.
maybe you could play around with the U to give it some large Serifs at the top to match the structure of the other letters


not goin to write zeus. gonna find a new name.

[bouncingsoul]

new page.
@Ras
I'm not feeling the new style of letters you've got going on. I like the simpler, more straight letter style you do, it's better.

Mmmmmmhm, I didn't know you started doing characters and shit

I just remembered you owe me "background" stickers too, whatever those are

I have not posted here in way too long

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_1075.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/690087ec.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/6e131733.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/9bd75923.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/2616a334.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/5ddfdada.jpg

...And yes, that's a dradel, no I'm not a Jew... I just found it on the ground... Seriously

[dim]

dope shit knews the firs blue peice is just ridiculous like i love it and ur characters are fucking ill seeing ur shit make me want to draw like mad sow i get almost as good as u

[sex without condoms]

for a friend
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/191557.jpg

[popshots]

hot digity damn bounce that fresh

[AnteUp]

k fuck the biting....more mother fuckin pictures raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
febs a poser no doubt

FOST i know what you mean when i called anroe out for a bite everyone was like
ahhh stfu its graffiti its all the same blah blah blah its almost like they all bite and
defend each other...thats some gay cowboy shit baha!

um...ante i already know of a wats2 and hes dope as fuck no lies
sorry aint heard of him, i write whats2 by tha way, post up sum flix before i even consider changin mah name

[SenTheFirst]

everythings lookin sexy on this page

mass- lovin that style

disreguard shaky hand/ugly coloring =]


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0600.jpg

[C-SONE]

That hand isn't that bad man. Make the S a bit fatter to match your other letters and you're rockin'

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/hursty.jpg

[a maze]

Knews- Don't dig the backwards 'k' and 'n', but that is hot shit, keep at it.

c-sone- Really liking that simp.

[sex without condoms]

Sone you should make the top right piece of the N sharp and not go into the letter itself so it matches the ends of the S and E

[Enormous]

damn everyboys stuff is lookin tight
heres one
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0124.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/1bbf4c62.jpg

[silentchaos14]

holy fucking shit that knews stuff is hot! everyone else is looking good too.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch.jpg

[Maste]

new word nice...crits; take off the extension on the N and make the middle part of the E a bit less wide...and do it again and again :_)

enormous i like the 3d a ton

and knews thats pretty fresh man clean it up and color it in

[crik]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=1007&stc=1&d=1197274314
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=1008&stc=1&d=1197274314
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=1009&stc=1&d=1197274314
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=1010&stc=1&d=1197277390

first attempts at a throw. tryin to keep it simple. crits please. crits...

["Fasho" T|y|B]

REALLY simple but they have real nice flow... at least i think

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Fasho1-2.jpg

just look at the 2dn and 4th one from the top

on the 4th one think of the brightest yellow as the forcefield my scanner made it come out all nasty faded burnt orange color that you can barely see but the colors look nice on paper

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Fasho2.jpg

this ones pretty sketchy but you get the idea






mass appeal - that is fucking sick that all i got to say!

knews - damn your characters are badass and your pieces are good as hell too

morne - maybe round up the edges i think itd look better

sone - i like that piece yo

sex - that one on the bottom is sick i like how you did the mouths

sen - yeah thicken up the s a little to match the other letters and its dope

enr - i like it

crik - the bottom one is pretty coo