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BORG
12-15-2007, 07:48 PM
capitol- lacking structure and flow, lose the extensions and work on lettering
roolete-not feelin them extensions, i did do a whole alphabet in simples if you would like you can use it as a reference for letters you're having trouble with

ante- good to see you come through, think this is the 5-6th page them sketch's have been bumped, fuckin hilarious

intaout
12-15-2007, 07:50 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2042/2113378303_a58df5ae12.jpg
i'm not so proud but, does anyone have tips on getting perfect lines? exhaling as you write kind of helps...
CRITTS PEEASSEE
Roolete- pretty cool i like where its going, not sure about H's
Capital- naht digin it man, simples..
man for swoe this must be some like mad peice exchange, lol... what did he do?like madd bite or something?

AnteUp
12-15-2007, 08:01 PM
borg-haha yea its fuckin crazy, i dont do simples but i like em, i think ima work on wm more...
intaout-he got beef wit the whole closed casket click, so we say...fuck em lol

eack-its actually not that bad imo bad colors tho

Sick!
12-15-2007, 08:21 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W/6000000109a1b14/0/0/HtAI5qZtPwUZnBoTuZjuegmKrJ-kbfRnXgvgObr9jecn7qeqKFcpOo3ugI-6NSoZV4GIpOXpJPpvWJCs1w3CYOJvrUAjK05Cddx2/W2zvpMo8qLCOEyy8j_xFT3Yx_jNf2WjhMN9hHeagVzEUgdxUiw .jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/4cYOKX_v4D_U1VUBY9Jq--RmO9uCyYLm?referrer=hlnk)
ignore the background
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W/6000000109a20c1/0/0/-77YbWz6SeOkHB9GrsjyUSQ209UPxbSfHH74U4W5RGl9C-gcfwzRc8VDf-yiuOG63QGI5tfhQw1SEwqnlia1cvDazzi1j3kZ1GKg/fEvLhGhS3PS8RwsrgyivJckFlNc6pHHAcYj6j3HnbTkYjrEk0Q .jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/ZF_kq7vZyz8UPwu7eLosFD9x2EUPCujK?referrer=hlnk)
new throwie with sticker and sum tags
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W/6000000109a2603/0/0/aDgwBO39hOq9ziIalxKKSiEHOcYQLrQTQmnkVOyIHkVdfP0FkK i2TspVHlE6ryB3qw-zDbWyPNiyCSBYnm_D9P2TDaOp9gh5RHDJ/RPeB3PFONwmVS7OSPnIE1s1A6ivvSl9wm1NbsnNpo4ppcZbqcg .jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/6H-L9DXMsj8GRW9WtOkmDKlvfBiu390w?referrer=hlnk)
please respect...we just lost a crew member on wednesday



intaout- like the throwie
roolette-take the extension on the left off but otherwise its clean
luvin them fuck swoes....ban his ass pleaaase but yall shulda made it look a lil more like kwest...haha

AnteUp
12-15-2007, 08:25 PM
intaout-nice and clean, its a little generic, try an figure out a unique style, oneliners lukk beautiful, so try some

rayseone
12-15-2007, 09:35 PM
holy shit fuck swoe simplels still going strong dope shiz ccc

random boredom, not at all special
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2233/dsc00415mu3.jpghttp://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7743/dsc00416yn9.jpg

ekimboi1
12-15-2007, 10:06 PM
good shit seyar
SICK!- work on stuff a lil more simpler.

heres 2 new ones-
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/newpiece001.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/scan0001.jpg

not fealing the bottom one, i just did it like 10 mins ago...
crits?

sex without condoms
12-15-2007, 10:28 PM
didnt feel like sketching today.

something shitty im working on in paint.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/piec.jpg

5Funerals
12-15-2007, 10:31 PM
some simplezzzzzzz
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400016.jpg
I really like this one except for the fact that I tried to add a little too much stupid detail. Also the 3d on the O is fucked.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400015-1.jpg
Very Simple but I like it.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400014-1.jpg
Character

revid!
12-15-2007, 10:37 PM
new shit
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2508/s5001213we4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2508/s5001213we4.b4d513db12.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=527&i=s5001213we4.jpg)
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6067/s5001212un7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6067/s5001212un7.20543670fb.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=526&i=s5001212un7.jpg)
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8677/s5001211tj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8677/s5001211tj1.d1774a0d6a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=526&i=s5001211tj1.jpg)
nipple bomb ^^^ hahahaha

Sick!
12-15-2007, 10:38 PM
keep workin om it 5funerals
sex your shit is clean
bumpin my stuff for crits...bottom of page

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W/6000000109c1433/0/0/dU5ANoe9Cu6eT48LEmSzegDmVom4zapr7uoODB2dMi3JMhcYal d4WoG3_o-u9phzLRW5rnuAQLEILVfwxhu0vjzB9-7PmLeWJ4qs/3bH183cRGTVahviNK9XoUdXdjGvWewpDSY0Zcgtgm5t4U9macg .jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/8BBzFPyQ5z9s9tEyAum5nwoURTQxFJvA?referrer=hlnk)

5Funerals
12-15-2007, 10:40 PM
FROST - you need to go back to simples. Your bar width is all over the place and your lines are shaky. Also the letters go from bigger to smaller.

ekimboi1
12-15-2007, 10:44 PM
good shit seyar
SICK!- work on stuff a lil more simpler.

heres 2 new ones-
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/newpiece001.jpg
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/scan0001.jpg

not fealing the bottom one, i just did it like 10 mins ago...
crits?

sick- i just told you to work on more simpler stuff! crits on mine?

Sick!
12-15-2007, 10:45 PM
first looks dope

5Funerals
12-15-2007, 10:50 PM
that is some critisism....

beyondyereyes
12-15-2007, 11:30 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/gross.jpg
Needs work but it's a lot better than before. Need to work on the tag and the face which is ugly as fuck due to resizing.

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 01:06 AM
This is for the kid that told me to pick up a beer.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/012317.jpg

F3B3S
12-16-2007, 01:28 AM
dude man wuts that shit on ya lip...herpies?...

sir.one
12-16-2007, 01:34 AM
puberty.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 01:45 AM
sex, do you always drink alone at your computer?
that must be a sad life you live.

BORG
12-16-2007, 01:47 AM
thats some lager man, what the hell??????????
all the delicious beers to drink, and your slurping a lager, c'mon main!!!

hazetheone
12-16-2007, 01:50 AM
sam adams boston lager=delicious
milwalkies best=half can of beer induced regurgitation
i think 91%isopropal tastes better than milwalkies best

SEZ
12-16-2007, 02:18 AM
did this oneliner EYKS...so quick to put up!!!!
can i please have crits...i think i should lose the arrows and work on the S and
K?
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3334/eyksonelinerou5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 02:21 AM
dude man wuts that shit on ya lip...herpies?...

i split my lip open.
got hit in the face with a bag that had a pair of rollerskates in it.

and i drink all the time if im alone or not alone it doesn't matter, i just love it and im only drinking extra gold cause it's what my dad gave me.

BORG
12-16-2007, 02:25 AM
^^^haha, lager is exactly what a dad would drink

sez- oneliner???????? i dont think soo, do some research on one liners, and get the flick outta your signature, its so fuckin big

i'll have a oneliner up tomorrow :)

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 02:29 AM
ahhh i see.
yeah, i sounded like an asshole, sorry man.
i still love you <3333

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 02:37 AM
you did?
i can't really think rightn ow anyhow i took 15 triple c's so im going to bed.
nighty.
Seize<333333333
Cile<333333333

SEZ
12-16-2007, 02:39 AM
^^^haha, lager is exactly what a dad would drink

sez- oneliner???????? i dont think soo, do some research on one liners, and get the flick outta your signature, its so fuckin big

i'll have a oneliner up tomorrow :)

i thought it was when you do a throw and all the letters flow together with
one line...oh and you dont have to be a dick about it.
anyways i like it whatever it is a throw up then!!!

HERE NOW YOU CAN TELL ME HOW SHIT I AM AGAIN...

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5727/eyksca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 02:46 AM
thats what it is but yours isnt all one line

SEZ
12-16-2007, 02:56 AM
;947102']thats what it is but yours isnt all one line

oh so you mean i shouldnt lift my hand? not even once? hahaha
i thought the letters just kinda had to come off of one another.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 02:59 AM
yeah, all one line.
hence the name ONE LINER

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:01 AM
thats wat they do, but its one line, no pickin up, an calm ur ass down about borg, he aksed u to resize ur sig cuz its to fuckin big

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:04 AM
;947113']yeah, all one line.
hence the name ONE LINER

that sucks how am i supposed to do the little wiggly line in the 'E'


AND HOW BIG IS YOUR SIG FUCK HEAD!

Bets369R
12-16-2007, 03:12 AM
that sucks how am i supposed to do the little wiggly line in the 'E'


AND HOW BIG IS YOUR SIG FUCK HEAD!

the corner of your Y can be used as the middle of your E if you do it right

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:14 AM
AND HOW BIG IS YOUR SIG FUCK HEAD!
HAHA but mah sig lukks gud

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:23 AM
HAHA but mah sig lukks gud

too bad you cant do one yourself.

thanks bets i know what you mean...i can wiggle my way into the Y



http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9435/eyksthrowyy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:28 AM
haha to bad i cant do wat? a shit ass throw?

Bets369R
12-16-2007, 03:30 AM
how about we keep the petty beef out of this thread.

or how about a ONE LINER BATTLE Ante Up Vs Sez.

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:33 AM
haha to bad i cant do wat? a shit ass throw?

why don't you shut up and post pics if you're so good??!!?!?!?!
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/7113/eydz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i have no idea what letter that is...maybe an 'i' was just random..


oops i didnt finish the 'K' on the last one.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5339/eyksthrowsi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:33 AM
haha i dont do throws, but i'll post up tomorrow

Bets369R
12-16-2007, 03:36 AM
how do you not do throws?..that about all i ever do. dont got time to lurk around unless im doing a legal wall..which is never.

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:38 AM
i've bin workin on mah peicin an handies for a hella long time, needa work on mah throws an karaks

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:39 AM
how do you not do throws?..that about all i ever do. dont got time to lurk around unless im doing a legal wall..which is never.

antes just tryna act hard or something...and what faggot ass writer doesnt
do throws are you tripping

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:45 AM
hahaha i find you funny.
weres ur peices?
ur karaks?
diff people work on diff things stupid fuck

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:49 AM
thats a lame excuse...ok since you've been 'working' on your handstyles lets battle!!!

bump this can i have crits please???
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3066/eyksey9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 03:51 AM
word: fuck throws
due:18
colors: any

SEZ
12-16-2007, 03:59 AM
first youre an idiot for saying colours, after all its a handstyle second im not
writing that and third either give crits or post pics else get out shit head

Haz-E
12-16-2007, 07:46 AM
HOLY FUCK this beef takes up one whole page fuck man fight over PM

sez the throwie is looking pretty dope just lose some of thpse arrows i think it looks whack

rsakens
12-16-2007, 09:42 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00090.jpg?t=1197819444
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00094.jpg?t=1197819696
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00093.jpg?t=1197819713
crit... & tips please

traP905
12-16-2007, 10:26 AM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/trap.jpg

Tips?

5Funerals
12-16-2007, 11:07 AM
TRAP - I think you just need to make the T look more like a T because it looks like a P and for the R make the top part like the top of the P so it flows better. Other than that is looks really nice.
Rsakens - Its all dope. I dont know enough about graffiti to give it crits haha.
Sez -you should ditch like half of those arrows because they make it look crazy in a bad way. Especially since every arrow is different.

traP905
12-16-2007, 12:04 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/2.jpg

done really quick i dont even no why im posting it. i tried to fix the T and R a bit...

KASE2
12-16-2007, 01:05 PM
fix tha "e" so tha bottom kiks out farthr than tha top mite make it look btr

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 02:27 PM
rsaken-that shit is hot, for reals...first pic is tight, the fill is amazin imo, the throw ehhh is alright, the second e on the first pic isnt very good tho

anemptyswishersweet
12-16-2007, 03:01 PM
you think BAKE is already too played out?

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7449/dsc00057wz5.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 03:23 PM
bake- i dont think you should make a throw look like a one liner unless it actually is.
thats just my opinion. work on it some more.

cher- thats hot. cant wait to see it inked. id lose the extension on the left of the C though.

Roolete
12-16-2007, 03:24 PM
trap keep workin good start
bake dont do the individual shapes make a letter a letter. and theres wayyyyy too much space between your letters in your handy

yes, i erase a lot
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0560_2.jpg

anemptyswishersweet
12-16-2007, 03:27 PM
thanks yo.

TaskOne
12-16-2007, 03:59 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy002.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy009.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy008.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy026.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 04:03 PM
stick to simples with bars.
the best one is the white one with blue 3d and silver highlights.
and the vaughn bode character is way too played out.

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 04:51 PM
everyone likes my karaks so i decided to put one on a canvas.
here's that background, partially done, the full shots suck so i took some closeups.
the crosses were made out of newspaper then painted overs.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174129.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174123.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174710.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174659.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174644.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174623.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174540.jpg

and heres a sketch from earlier
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174159.jpg

RFI. SPit
12-16-2007, 04:54 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy002.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy009.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy008.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/jklhkuy026.jpg

You jumped into a complex style way too early, your letter structure is incredibly weak

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 05:14 PM
sex-there really not karaks, i dont kno how to tell you how to make upside down crosses
task-rfi sed it for me...
ewww nasty ass simple i tried...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/fuckswoe001.jpg

ilikekicks
12-16-2007, 05:36 PM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/aksoh002.jpg?t=1197848135

sacwacko
12-16-2007, 05:37 PM
ante....why bonethugs?
ilikekicks-im not sure about the 3rd and 4th letters.
the S needs some work but i dont even know wut the 4th letter is supposed to be?

AnteUp
12-16-2007, 05:42 PM
its a random word, anyways, crits
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/fuckswoe001.jpg

sacwacko
12-16-2007, 05:49 PM
it acually has some pretty good letters...i just hate how small it is.
i say give that bitch some steroids and give it some 3d.

Czar One
12-16-2007, 06:01 PM
I know the Z is too far away, and that the 3-d and highlights are fucked....

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/newsprintsketch.jpg

Roolete
12-16-2007, 06:07 PM
individually, the letters are good, but even though their the same shape i dont think they flow together very well in a piece. your throwie is so dope. at czar.

sex i think you should put ur karak in the a bottom corner in black and white. cause the red and blue crosses already have enough contrast

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/12-16-2007035834PM.jpg

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 06:13 PM
Cher, that piece is ballin'. i just think you should bring the line in the E further in towards the middle tip.

and yeah the whole canvas was done with acryilcs so im painting in my karak in white and outlining it in black but im not sure if im going to cover up some of the crosses with it or not.

uhhh
12-16-2007, 06:16 PM
its been quite awhile,
im too lazy to find a fresh floppy disc for my camera.
but heres a simulation piece i just finished up.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/uhhh3-1.jpg

cher-you seem to have gotten quite a bit better.

sex without condoms
12-16-2007, 06:28 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174159.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 06:57 PM
make the E look like the other letters and that shit will be fire

popshots
12-16-2007, 06:58 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8505/aflo3nw7.jpg
crits...
czar: i like da throw...
uhhh: i like dem colors... i dont like da e though....

sam.s
12-16-2007, 07:12 PM
kicks - the 3d is off on the k but the letters are decent
ante - just wanna see it bigger lol
czar - 3d isnt that bad but the letters are dope
roolete - ur right... the letters dont flow that well together, when u do it just mix it up a lil bit and see what happens
sex - not feeling that style as much...
popshots - nice, just keep sketching and ull get there

atlok7
12-16-2007, 07:25 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9130/yearbookmodsh5.jpg
a pencil and paper outline scanned into photoshop and steezed up.
hope you fools dig

beyondyereyes
12-16-2007, 08:28 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/gross.jpg
Needs work but it's a lot better than before. Need to work on the tag and the face which is ugly as fuck due to resizing.a much needed bump

sacwacko
12-16-2007, 09:01 PM
geist-try adding some 3d in ur shit.
so u can get better at 3d and structure at the same time.

BORG
12-16-2007, 09:10 PM
geist- the t lacks the same width as the other letters
atlok- the a is weak, your lettering reminds me of amwha, specially the k
popshots- not bad, feelin the simplicity
raoe- sorry bout your simps, have em up tomorrow, that sketch is fire

first oneliner
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/6066/picture197hc1.jpg
i'll have a better one up later

Sumoe
12-16-2007, 09:27 PM
;947696']make the E look like the other letters and that shit will be fire

Haha. I was thinking the other way around, because that "E" is illin'.

hazetheone
12-16-2007, 09:30 PM
http://i16.tinypic.com/6ktqj5z.jpg

sam.s
12-16-2007, 09:38 PM
pretty nice haze but i rekon it could get confused between a j and a t with an extention... meh maybe im just seeing things

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-16-2007, 09:42 PM
its been quite awhile,
im too lazy to find a fresh floppy disc for my camera.
but heres a simulation piece i just finished up.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/uhhh3-1.jpg

cher-you seem to have gotten quite a bit better.
i missed ya kid.;)

Haz-E
12-16-2007, 09:43 PM
CILE that one liner is bombtastic

HAZE dope

hazetheone
12-16-2007, 09:50 PM
http://i16.tinypic.com/8a4l7x2.jpg

more need crits

atlok7
12-16-2007, 10:01 PM
geist... shits fucked up

atlok7
12-16-2007, 10:03 PM
jaze- dope letter style but i dont think the E fits all that well. mabie a center vanishing point 3d would look tight

bouncingsoul
12-16-2007, 10:18 PM
This is an atheist jihad!

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/0ba8f05a.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-16-2007, 10:35 PM
i want to see your shit with some colors!!!!

AMansNotACamel
12-16-2007, 11:55 PM
Do you challenge heads to random battles on the streets?
My bad for talking without a flick

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5940/dorksau3.jpg
but from a million pages back, sexual R :rolleyes:

Bets369R
12-17-2007, 12:06 AM
some slaps i made for my friends book, cris?

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/betsthrows.jpg

edit: that line is from my scanner, ignore it

BORG
12-17-2007, 12:17 AM
i still eat you on the streets...you know nothing

hahahhahahaha your only makin a fool of yourself man, stop before you completely embarass yourself
first of all, to "rape me" you have to have a fuckin ill style, then you gotta paint better than me, which i highly doubt you can, just shut your fuckin mouth and stop comin at me like your king kong, i'll fuckin rape you so badly, worse than seize's simps jackass

simps for my boy seize
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/27/picture198aq8.jpg

KASE2
12-17-2007, 12:17 AM
BETZ- iz tha second lettr a "p" or an "r"

o nd BORG - ports r whack, smoke BLACK AND MILDS(wine flavor)!!

Bets369R
12-17-2007, 12:19 AM
BETZ- iz tha second lettr a "p" or an "r"

who was that question to?, if it was to me, its neither..its an E.

Edit...damn your edits.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-17-2007, 12:31 AM
naaa borg kool xl blue *****.

BIGel
12-17-2007, 12:46 AM
word knews, i wish you'd color too.

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/350/3/e/lack_of_colors_by_bigel.jpg

wheatpaste
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2007/350/8/5/new_wheatpaste_by_bigel.jpg

sank.
12-17-2007, 12:56 AM
Damn el, you've been puttin in work. thats the freshest thing i've seen from you.

SEZ
12-17-2007, 02:07 AM
nah bets i'm not

heres a little something for the 'CCC'
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2120/cccfagsko5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? not the best simples in here i know...some positive advice would be nice?
CCC can hate me all they want cause its mutual!

BIGEL i hate how good you are fuck! fuck! fuck man! hahahaha

BORG
12-17-2007, 02:38 AM
^^^your out your damn mind kid, not doin any "fuck sez" simpls for you, sorry

bigel- love that piece, shits fuckin ill, handstyle is nuts, really feelin that character aswell

Rank-oner!
12-17-2007, 02:44 AM
Borg: that one liner is fire for first one good job man

LikeOner
12-17-2007, 04:25 AM
sez - looks pretty good, coloring could be more solid though.

this internet rivalry shit is gay though, that goes for all parties involved.

SEZ
12-17-2007, 06:27 AM
THANKS BETS!
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9553/eyksonelineruw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bets369R
12-17-2007, 09:06 AM
THANKS BETS!
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9553/eyksonelineruw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for sure. looks dope. what are you using to color it in? get in touch with some prismas or something

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 10:34 AM
Bigel U Just Burned Every Post In This Thread

SEZ
12-17-2007, 11:06 AM
for sure. looks dope. what are you using to color it in? get in touch with some prismas or something

yah i noticed a pack o' those at a graffiti shop in town...was
a bit short of cash but christmas is coming:)

Fluffy Bunnies
12-17-2007, 11:28 AM
the E's wack as fuck...and from now on i'll write fuck cile on my shit k?
since you wanna play it like that stupid fuck! i dont care how good you think you are!

What?!?! you serious? i actually like that E, nothing is outa proportion and it's perefct.

SEZ
12-17-2007, 11:38 AM
wow look at that different opinions how strange

Attican
12-17-2007, 12:25 PM
yah i noticed a pack o' those at a graffiti shop in town...was
a bit short of cash but christmas is coming:)
I'll trade you...check your PM

AyteYourCookies
12-17-2007, 12:35 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture415.jpg

TESTER
12-17-2007, 12:58 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo11-4.jpg

Attican
12-17-2007, 02:02 PM
Tester...sick shit, man.

Ayte...you too. Sick as shit. I can tell you actually practiced a long time before trying hard stuff, unlike most of the tools on this forum.

5Funerals
12-17-2007, 02:04 PM
Tester -I like your style a lot. Maybe make the T's identical?

Attican
12-17-2007, 02:09 PM
They are...that's human error, man. They'll never be exact, but those are the same.

undergroundanimal
12-17-2007, 02:27 PM
Bigel:thats shit is so fresh:eek:
Sez:oneliner looks pretty dope i would only make the y a lil bit smaller so both the letters are the same size..
ayte:like your letterstructure... but i would lose the smal letters on the side
and change the colour of your ..uhhm.. black llines you did in your shadow because you cant see them very well..
Tester:simple but i like it...

here are a vew of my sketches:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz021.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz017.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz019.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz020.jpg

undergroundanimal
12-17-2007, 02:35 PM
Bigel:thats shit is so fresh:eek:
Sez:oneliner looks pretty dope i would only make the y a lil bit smaller so both the letters are the same size..
ayte:like your letterstructure... but i would lose the smal letters on the side
and change the colour of your ..uhhm.. black llines you did in your shadow because you cant see them very well..
Tester:simple but i like it...

here are a vew of my sketches:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz021.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz017.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz019.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/nieuweshiz020.jpg

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 02:59 PM
TEST dude your stuff is fresh duno just adicted to your style

AYTE dope clean your colouring
atmos looking dope not likin the s thou

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-17-2007, 02:59 PM
atmos, work on your S's and that shit will be hot

NaRsyONE*
12-17-2007, 03:07 PM
atmos:fuckin ill shit dude mad stix to
ayte:dope but idk bout the lil block letters in the background , maybe put them vertically nxt the the peice
tester:nice simps but change the E's a lil,or least the bottoms of them
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/1967/newbz4.jpg
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5015/picture004up7.jpg
critz?

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 03:56 PM
http://i19.tinypic.com/6z9j21s.jpg

http://i11.tinypic.com/7x2y4qp.jpg
tester hot
ayte not feeling it
atmos hot
narcy not feeling it

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 04:10 PM
JAZE man first one pretty dope second one man duno not feling i like dat e thou

a maze
12-17-2007, 04:28 PM
nars-Man, love it. Dig that 2nd one down, that shits fire, dude.

jase- Shit's awesome, dude, but I'm not really diggin the extension on the back of the 'e'. Keep it up, though.

Here's some more simps I've been expanding on-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner2.jpg

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner3.jpg

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner1.jpg

Crits??

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 04:30 PM
deffinately digging it amaze
thanks for all the positive crits im just sketching as much as possible daily so expect a lot more pics

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 04:33 PM
Maze your Ms remind me of MUSASHI's
it;s not a bite at all I'm just remembering a mad old head who was on here about 2.5 years ago

Olick
12-17-2007, 04:37 PM
word knews, i wish you'd color too.

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/350/3/e/lack_of_colors_by_bigel.jpg

wheatpaste
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2007/350/8/5/new_wheatpaste_by_bigel.jpg

why do you keep posting in the toy books? you make everyone look bad =[ loljp i like your style alot man

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 04:55 PM
;947696']make the E look like the other letters and that shit will be fire

redid it.
idk which picture is better.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174308.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/174250.jpg

Bazer
12-17-2007, 04:57 PM
that is by far the nicest jiz cloud ive ever seen.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-17-2007, 05:00 PM
i likey!
maybe just fatten up the bottom bar of the E to match the bar widths on the bottom of the R and A. if that makes sense

a maze
12-17-2007, 05:02 PM
bigel- best shit I've seen from you yet. I am addicted to your style. EDIT- What kind of markers do you use for your outline/characs?

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 05:19 PM
;948541']i likey!
maybe just fatten up the bottom bar of the E to match the bar widths on the bottom of the R and A. if that makes sense

word i was going to do that but i didn't want the bottom leg of the E to be hanging down so much more than the other letters

anie 1
12-17-2007, 05:28 PM
nars-Man, love it. Dig that 2nd one down, that shits fire, dude.

jase- Shit's awesome, dude, but I'm not really diggin the extension on the back of the 'e'. Keep it up, though.

Here's some more simps I've been expanding on-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner2.jpg

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner3.jpg

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner1.jpg

Crits??

clean kido the only thing i can say is work wit that tag a little but cleaaaan :D

LikeOner
12-17-2007, 05:35 PM
sex - thats pretty sweet, i agree with seize tho. and also i dont see why you dont throw color on your stuff

maze - coming along pretty good

bouncingsoul
12-17-2007, 06:00 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/3cb4d08f.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/7284d00f.jpg

Rots takes your Daughters
12-17-2007, 06:09 PM
^^^ You have no right to be posting in here, away with you...To the 'lookie lookie at my blackbookies' thread with you..Be gone.

a maze
12-17-2007, 06:26 PM
^^^lol, sweet shit Knews.

mosezone
12-17-2007, 06:41 PM
yea jaze, those are both illll.

blunttokes
12-17-2007, 07:05 PM
mazer dope stuff!

atlok7
12-17-2007, 07:28 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9457/greenpinkwd8.jpg
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1345/blugreenplaidbc6.jpg
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5488/orangegreenoc8.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2710/mshstripecw5.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4205/mshpengu0.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7642/greenpink2ea2.jpg

rallones
12-17-2007, 07:29 PM
not good but w.e, help would be nice:)
p.s i no 3d is off just wondering if u got any tips wow im sad

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 07:29 PM
your letters are kind of hard to follow but overall pretty good

TricksForKids
12-17-2007, 07:37 PM
just stoppin by to say hello

maze keep up the simples, leave the colours for now, make sure you ahve consistency in the width of your letters, and dont eb afraid to space them out a bit more

knews is beastly, the best example ever on this site of simple consistent phenomenal progression..i just wish the kid could afford markers...maybe ill send him some for xmas

sex baby its looking good..but get some flashy colours in there before i eat you

atok, go simpler, calm down on connections

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4686/wisheswg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 07:53 PM
FUCKING TRICK FOR KIDS<#33333333333333333333333333333

did this in 5 minutes.
i hate it.
still, no where near done.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/204828.jpg

TricksForKids
12-17-2007, 08:03 PM
i could see someone paying like 500,000 bones for it, i mean it sucks, but for some odd reason if i had 500,00 bones id probably hook you up, its just fucking cool..but ugly, you feel me boss? lol miss you too

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 08:04 PM
tricks i miss your batman avatar.
put that shit back mr. dark knight

TricksForKids
12-17-2007, 08:06 PM
Yo i dont know how to...someone should tell a mod to tell us to stop talking...i hate kids like us that clog the thread and bump our own shit cuz we know were dope

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4686/wisheswg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mr. Lefty
12-17-2007, 08:11 PM
Maze your Ms remind me of MUSASHI's
it;s not a bite at all I'm just remembering a mad old head who was on here about 2.5 years ago

No, it hasn't been that long since Musashi's been here; shit.. I lost my internet back in July and he was still on.

TricksForKids
12-17-2007, 08:14 PM
you should argue more about when musashi was last on

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 08:35 PM
KNEWS looks great now get to the big boys section

RALL ones DUDE ur E looks so outta place and fix up ur letters it looks like a bad etempt at a simple

ok new throwie style just got it ill proly have a painted one with all the bugs out in couple days so
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8268/100b0660mz6.jpg

BORG
12-17-2007, 08:42 PM
sex- its so grimey, love it, get some colors in there, not many just a few light shades of brown or something
tricks- nice handstyle, long time no see, keep up man
haze-not bad, i would bring the c out a bit more, hiding too far behind the e

canvas in the works, gotta get a grimey background runnin sometime later tonight hopefully
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7337/picture200jd3.jpg

lololzheffer
12-17-2007, 08:50 PM
dosjt grimey mean gross?
that canvas is soooo siq tho!

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 09:00 PM
borg Canvas = bangin

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 09:07 PM
sex- its so grimey, love it, get some colors in there, not many just a few light shades of brown or something
tricks- nice handstyle, long time no see, keep up man
haze-not bad, i would bring the c out a bit more, hiding too far behind the e

canvas in the works, gotta get a grimey background runnin sometime later tonight hopefully
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7337/picture200jd3.jpg

word brah i was actually gonna do brown around the karak then do red crosses with brown 3d with green and black lines

Sumoe
12-17-2007, 09:09 PM
just stoppin by to say hello

maze keep up the simples, leave the colours for now, make sure you ahve consistency in the width of your letters, and dont eb afraid to space them out a bit more

knews is beastly, the best example ever on this site of simple consistent phenomenal progression..i just wish the kid could afford markers...maybe ill send him some for xmas

sex baby its looking good..but get some flashy colours in there before i eat you

atok, go simpler, calm down on connections

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4686/wisheswg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


My knigguh Bawk.

Bump.

Roolete
12-17-2007, 09:19 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/rent.jpg

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 09:29 PM
SEXAY
http://i14.tinypic.com/6y2ox9j.jpg

sacwacko
12-17-2007, 09:30 PM
im likin that.
real clean rent.

sex without condoms
12-17-2007, 09:35 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/rent.jpg

fix up the circle on the R and the proportions on both sides of that T and itll be bangin'.

you're definatley one of the people i've seen the most progression out of and im digging it alot.
good job budday!

:0) & <333333333333s

spag
12-17-2007, 09:37 PM
**IGNORE S
haha. and forcefield color.
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/9305/ben007lo8.jpg


i normally give crits but i like the recent stuff and don't have stuff to add. i'll be sure to give some when more stuff is posted. sorry. i like the last 5 things by the way

atlok7
12-17-2007, 09:48 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7227/pinkwhiteflowan9.jpg
just drew this up. experimenting with the color fades. i think it looks pretty nice

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 09:50 PM
dude looks good but chill out with all the extentions no need to cover up that nice looking peice

"Riot"
12-17-2007, 09:51 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/kilt001.jpg
jackin around with names.
KILT.

atlok7
12-17-2007, 09:55 PM
haha ya haze connections are addicting, i feel the shape isnt the same with out the little guys

hazetheone
12-17-2007, 09:56 PM
draw a simple
then go back
and do a few less extintions
get a better feel for how the letters look without them

Haz-E
12-17-2007, 09:57 PM
ROOLETE dopeest one yet the first one i like by u it could use a few tweaks but hey its ight

fixed up the throwie way cleaner
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5844/100b07201yq8.jpg

atlok7
12-17-2007, 10:00 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7227/pinkwhiteflowan9.jpg

RFI. SPit
12-17-2007, 10:32 PM
crumpled up in my pocket from today at school

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4769/photo172ij8.jpg

AnteUp
12-17-2007, 11:02 PM
the zofo is actually very good the ne dont match very well, to much spacing

HadeP
12-18-2007, 01:03 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Picture096.jpg
work in progressssssssss
tell me what you think

sex without condoms
12-18-2007, 01:09 AM
Do Not Write Tye
Anything Close Or Sounding Anything Like Tie Is A Nooooo Go
No Go
No Go
Change Your Name.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-18-2007, 01:11 AM
agreed!
tie is a mo'fuckin legend.

crik
12-18-2007, 01:44 AM
i got the TIE memorial issue of some mag. i cant remember what magazine right now lol

BLTZ
12-18-2007, 02:43 AM
ZOF I like your cartoonie style all you have to do is clean it up and work on your proportions(actually practise simples a few times then once you fully understand letter structure try that piece again
here are a few newer pieces

Now tear them apart like wet tp
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece003.jpg
^^a few nights ago
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece004.jpg
^^I did this one a work last night
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece005.jpg
^^ first experament with fills
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece006.jpg
^^just started workin on diffrent fills
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece007.jpg
^^I know wuts wrong wit it now u tell me
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece009.jpg
^^Unfinished piece I was workin on bout a week ago
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii316/get_bltzd/greedbattlepiece010.jpg
^^canvas I started working on yesterday

Kool-Aid Man
12-18-2007, 04:10 AM
Haze - lovin the throw
Zof - work on the N it takes up to much space but thats dope.
gram - work on letters like the ones on your keyboard and keep the letters same size

BLTZ
12-18-2007, 04:24 AM
ur telling me that after all this time i still SUCK well F#@& you JK
Good looking on the crit Ill pump a simple out for you here quik

scary letters
12-18-2007, 04:35 AM
thats a sick throw haze.

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2007/352/9/3/all_the_way_across_by_bigel.jpg

closeup
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2007/352/c/4/closeup_by_bigel.jpg

sacwacko
12-18-2007, 09:27 AM
damn bigel.
dope.
sum sum for the RTB.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/hello.jpg
crits.

sketch3
12-18-2007, 09:34 AM
r has to much gwanin

sacwacko
12-18-2007, 09:35 AM
wut is gwanin?

SEZ
12-18-2007, 11:11 AM
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/3484/eykssimpleyellowvl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3113/eyksgreenlo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3281/greeneykszn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please

Maste
12-18-2007, 11:13 AM
goin on? maybe haha it makes sense
i dont the the little things on the top of the capital letters...
scary letters: nice throws man
bltz: practice more ;)

edit:
ekys the s looks like a 5 its weird doin a mix between curvy and straihgt the middle of the "e" looks ..off and the left side of the k should prolly be longer than the right side... just my opinion

SEZ
12-18-2007, 11:20 AM
i agree with the k especially with the last one...but i like my 5s

FUZED
12-18-2007, 11:43 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/kilt001.jpg
jackin around with names.
KILT.

i like the t on this one but in my opinion the top of the k needs to have more body to it looks cool tho

FUZED
12-18-2007, 11:46 AM
SACWACKO in my opinion you have a lil too much goin on in some or your peices but nice work

SEZ
12-18-2007, 12:05 PM
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/3484/eykssimpleyellowvl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3113/eyksgreenlo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3281/greeneykszn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please

bump this for crits please

kilt lose the cracks in the letters

thawbrkone
12-18-2007, 12:06 PM
that E is fukn dope

FUZED
12-18-2007, 12:10 PM
that E is fukn dope

thats what i was thinkin, i like the 3d on that piece too

SEZ
12-18-2007, 12:13 PM
yah its still sloppy...need to put more effort into it especially last one

sketch3
12-18-2007, 12:23 PM
the top ones stucter sux

the best iv seen from u is the blockbuster

FUZED
12-18-2007, 12:27 PM
just a couple of mine
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p88/royaltykustomz/pics002-12.jpg

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p88/royaltykustomz/pics003-9.jpg
can i get some crits

Haz-E
12-18-2007, 12:31 PM
YO BIGEL thanks for the crits althou ur throw is like 10 times better lol

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-18-2007, 01:28 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/rent.jpg
heroin.

NEOZ
12-18-2007, 01:47 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071257.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071258.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071259.jpg

made some..

Fused try to sketch some simple things this is not working well, and really dont write CANz..

Sez, try to work more on your lettre structure,

FUZED
12-18-2007, 01:50 PM
i don't write canz anymore now i write FUZE after those pics ive gone to more simple things

sketch3
12-18-2007, 01:55 PM
fuzed read this and especially read the thing about bars http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

FUZED
12-18-2007, 01:58 PM
thanks bro i have read that and thats where i am at right now

sketch3
12-18-2007, 02:05 PM
well just use bars to form basic letter forms, do this until u hate graffiti and can bust out the simples backwerds an in ur sleep,
then its just a question of bending and leaning ur simples until u got a funky style.

graff takes ALOT of work, many many sketchs of pure garbege to get one good extention orr letter,

how quickly u develop depends on how much u do.
can take Years to get to the ''crazy wildestyle arows'' stage

FUZED
12-18-2007, 02:10 PM
that first one i posted tho isn't that just simple or should i just keep working on just genaric blocks no interweaving no 3d no shadow?

sketch3
12-18-2007, 02:18 PM
exactly, until u can do it perfectly and make it look good with no extras u shouldnt even bother colouring it,

just until u understand the structer of every letter, every peice uv seen, can be broken down to bars,

FUZED
12-18-2007, 02:31 PM
thanks for the tips man, much appreciated

-ShAmEE-
12-18-2007, 02:32 PM
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6947/68505890og2.png (http://imageshack.us)

sketch3
12-18-2007, 02:35 PM
thanks for the tips man, much appreciated
no problam, im only helpin u cuss i wanna see a dope peice on the wall in ur charcter sketch, u promis wen ur good u gotta do it

FUZED
12-18-2007, 02:38 PM
no problam, im only helpin u cuss i wanna see a dope peice on the wall in ur charcter sketch, u promis wen ur good u gotta do it

oh gauranteed, i got more character pics, just need to upload em

sketch3
12-18-2007, 02:47 PM
plese do there gully

sex without condoms
12-18-2007, 02:47 PM
done with acrylics, not finished yet still gotta cut it outies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154359.jpg

sketch3
12-18-2007, 02:50 PM
likin the used tampon fill u got goin there

-ShAmEE-
12-18-2007, 03:01 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled564.jpg

fuckin love it.

sketch3
12-18-2007, 03:08 PM
i just got it , would make a sick belt buckel

Leadpoisining
12-18-2007, 03:17 PM
1098

sketch3
12-18-2007, 03:19 PM
fuzed read this and especially read the thing about bars http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
use bars to form basic letter forms, do this until u hate graffiti and can bust out the simples backwerds an in ur sleep,
then its just a question of bending and leaning ur simples until u got a funky style.

graff takes ALOT of work, many many sketchs of pure garbege to get one good extention orr letter,

how quickly u develop depends on how much u do.
can take Years to get to the ''crazy wildestyle arows'' stage



read it

-ShAmEE-
12-18-2007, 03:29 PM
i just got it , would make a sick belt buckel

word. has to be done!

sketch3
12-18-2007, 03:35 PM
im think chrome every thing, with ruby love hart and dimond ''n'' and ''i''

a maze
12-18-2007, 03:55 PM
Thought I'd put something holiday-related up before it's too late, so-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/candyCane.jpg

5Funerals
12-18-2007, 04:02 PM
that is soo sick! Best holiday piece I have ever seen.

samwich
12-18-2007, 04:03 PM
what's up, this is my first time posting. been into it for about a month now, trying to stick to blackbooking. I have a bad habit of getting shit down on lined paper though. I know my shit is off, so believe that I'll be practicing. criticism is mos def welcome
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v411/mmmetrosexual/kitty013.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v411/mmmetrosexual/kitty016-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v411/mmmetrosexual/skv.jpg

5Funerals
12-18-2007, 04:05 PM
MOZY - I like the second two a lot. Do you know about bars? Also, give crits to get crits.

-ShAmEE-
12-18-2007, 04:07 PM
Thought I'd put something holiday-related up before it's too late, so-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/candyCane.jpg


that some funkay shizzel...nice.

new time post. go to the new to graff thread.

samwich
12-18-2007, 04:10 PM
bars for keeping proportion?

Rank-oner!
12-18-2007, 04:13 PM
man that Christmas piece is nice. likin the charac

sex without condoms
12-18-2007, 04:13 PM
samwich i wouldnt write mozy

EMONIAH on here writes mozy and boy is he a beast

Sick!
12-18-2007, 04:21 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W/600000010f08df5/0/0/Z46QPs0SepJ0iU7an41CZyPPoDcBA0PPcn6XGZIWl6RTNGye_M 85hPOgleZqdm027Fpj8a_RiRks1NEcJSw1JzZH5D1txqSGqMfe/Rl_PpPDw4Uc5SzApehsfqIQdkMWSv-FrtmE9_l1rtQjC_1igvQ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/OZquqM5i7D-PGWc2oIv7alZfv9HpYtx2?referrer=hlnk)
new throwie since i cant get crits in the throwie thread anymore
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/4/S/600000010f0e272/0/0/Z530SlEHVUv2pshe-kvqd4n1_sYVudiWiSFZWSIq3YlzjBOai-Omqt7XTQHyEDhTIvw7sJ99GOaX5Y8XCUdfHX-mFv1s0qRiQWCo/fDn7CbjE-Z_lT7nCDxIaXzflDnWHE5eoZYBI4JqUGxBYqwVQ-A.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/KDk0DNpV3z_-Zn5Km02_fs_DBQgUxcgh?referrer=hlnk)

samwich
12-18-2007, 04:28 PM
frost I like your F but I think you should give the R, S and T a little more definition

Czar One
12-18-2007, 04:33 PM
sick: looks like its got potential, but also looks like you were thinkin to hard about it?
my throwie, It was posted with my other pic earlier, just cropped it out.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/newsprintthrow.jpg

Haz-E
12-18-2007, 04:33 PM
FROST no beef but your structure is mad weak

i sugest u look at throwies and straights cause that will really help when ur makiing a throw also make eachletterhave a similar design
now take my throwie for example
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5844/100b07201yq8.jpg
as u can see the bottoms of the letters are all rounded n each letter excluding the "L" has a lil extemsion

just trying give some help

samwich
12-18-2007, 04:37 PM
damn, someone has mozy for real? guess I'll have to start from square one.

Animal
12-18-2007, 04:39 PM
czar: that flows nice.
Haze: extension is spelled with an N not an M. but nice throwie.

NEOZ
12-18-2007, 04:46 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071257.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071258.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/CRAZY_IVAN_RUS/121220071259.jpg

made some..

Fused try to sketch some simple things this is not working well, and really dont write CANz..

Sez, try to work more on your lettre structure,

got no crits or whateve... so bumping...

Czar One
12-18-2007, 04:47 PM
not really feelin that face in the last one, and the first one's O looks kinda like a lower case b to me.

Mass Appeal
12-18-2007, 04:49 PM
everyone on this pagfe apart from sex and shame shud use bars to make lettering..

late...tired...sloppy...minging sketch...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdc.jpg

i will redo these letters.
peace.

sex without condoms
12-18-2007, 04:54 PM
done with acrylics, not finished yet still gotta cut it outies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154359.jpg

dry humping

equator_2012
12-18-2007, 05:02 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9962/rolerzz5.png (http://imageshack.us)
vandalsquad shit i did the other night!

Rots takes your Daughters
12-18-2007, 05:09 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/12/18/wag_42817_1218_9588.jpg


yeah this is in my blackbook too. ;)

Sumoe
12-18-2007, 05:10 PM
That is his style, simple, and funkeh.

sacwacko
12-18-2007, 05:41 PM
rots-im liken that.
equator-dope. wok on the R
mass-great.
neoz-real clean
sex-its grungie
c zar-reall dope.
haze-good
maze-good
frost-eww.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/hello.jpg
crits

Roolete
12-18-2007, 06:11 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9962/rolerzz5.png (http://imageshack.us)
vandalsquad shit i did the other night!

shit cror how many accounts do you need?
so im not piclesshttp://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0570.jpg

the.sate
12-18-2007, 06:17 PM
some toy pieces...

"sater" 905 reppin
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/967/picture1fx2.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture1fx2.jpg)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/5109/picture3qc1.th.jpg (http://img178.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture3qc1.jpg)

NEZ89
12-18-2007, 06:51 PM
for swor
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9215/im001503hx1.jpg

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/396/im001505fz1.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-18-2007, 06:58 PM
quit graffiti!
quit starting shit or im bannin' you.
end of story.
;)

AnteUp
12-18-2007, 07:06 PM
amen, thanks...(to teze) im tired of this fool thinkin he tha shit...

amwah-keep doin wat ya doin, but puts sum addons, not crazy add ons like the swirls to ur letters, somthin sutle, like chips outa tha letters, or extra bars ate the bottom legs of the a

SEZ
12-18-2007, 07:25 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5757/eykssimpleyellowjz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AnteUp
12-18-2007, 07:34 PM
handy is great, got an old school feel to it, if you need bars inspration check out teze, cile, or seize

SEZ
12-18-2007, 07:37 PM
not really seize, his letters are still off but the others i agree. i like tezers simps

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/838/quickeyksru1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

does this k fit better?

Taiko
12-18-2007, 08:03 PM
Hey hey hey, Im writer from regina, Taiko is the tag and im just getting into wildstyle, im not very good but i thought id post something so i could get some feedback and tips

SEZ
12-18-2007, 08:06 PM
youre like me you need to go simpler

hazetheone
12-18-2007, 08:10 PM
Hey hey hey, Im writer from regina, Taiko is the tag and im just getting into wildstyle, im not very good but i thought id post something so i could get some feedback and tips

woa woa woa chill out man
start drawing simple
bars go to the new to graffiti thread
woa

SEZ
12-18-2007, 08:22 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4189/quickeyksyi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sick!
12-18-2007, 08:44 PM
dont double post but you need to work on almost everything start with just outlines no color

AnteUp
12-18-2007, 08:47 PM
yea, calm down wit tha posts, its good use of bars, the structure is good, but make the bars the same thickness, like i sed, peep ciles stuff an see how he makes bars

BORG
12-18-2007, 08:49 PM
sez- not bad, all your sketches are kinda repetitive, and a bit rushed, i would take your lettering back just a bit, keyboard style, and spend a little more time on it, perfecting all the mistakes as much possible, flow isn't bad, work on keepin the bars the same size, like the bottom of the k where it flairs out, not feelin' it

sex without condoms
12-18-2007, 08:55 PM
done with acrylics, not finished yet still gotta cut it outies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154359.jpg

idk which picture is the best.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1218072126b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1218072126a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/1218072126.jpg

c.n.k
12-18-2007, 09:13 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1115.jpg

atlok7
12-18-2007, 09:21 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/7292/pinkwhiteflowly0.jpg