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mexico
12-18-2007, 09:54 PM
I love those EYKS

CNK and Atlok, really good, but maybe a little too much
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC00945.jpg
bad flick, I think this came out good though.

traP905
12-18-2007, 11:00 PM
name change- breZ
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/breZ2.jpg
crit. serious help... and a throw!!! please help me out!!!

jaskesteven
12-18-2007, 11:09 PM
Mexico dude- i don't know but i think theres just too much going on there..

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7705/dscn4335yh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I'm trying.. eh

Dying to live
12-19-2007, 01:18 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/AKER.gif

naw name maybe =\

meetermaid
12-19-2007, 01:30 AM
ake - that`s mad hot, but tons of kids write aker, i duno why it seems to be quite the popular name, i`d rethink it. the style is what i love to see, although the r looks a lil too thick compared to the rest of the letters.

jask - the throw at the bottom ofthe page, in pencil, is beautiful, fuck the green one go with the other one :P

mexico - chill on the colours, it detracts from the throw absolutely and it`s totally confusing. fills are fun but untill you get a good sense of what works and what doesn`t, and good letter structure, don`t bother spending too much time on it, letter structure`s what you should be focusing on and not nutso fills.

atlok - the t`s hot, the other letters are pretty iffy tho. the style`s a little confusing, but it looks like it could be sick if you calmed it down a bit, and maybe didn`t squish in the letters so much, give em all a lil room to breathe.

sex - you already know it, i love you :_


edit: what the fuck is wrong with my keyboard my apostrophes dont usually look like ass..

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-19-2007, 02:29 AM
http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/f1dc98d128ad167661ab091a990e61f7_580x270.png

LAWLZ facebook graffiti for my boy!!!!

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-19-2007, 03:04 AM
workin on this charac haha
yeah hes supposed to look tweaked out like that

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Adrenaline.jpg

neuro - fuck yeah man i love that style yo

atlok - that shit looks sick but all i can see is the a and the k

aker - that shit looks good as hell but yeah the r is spread wider than the rest of your letters

Rank-oner!
12-19-2007, 03:12 AM
dying to live: like the letters not feelin the K as much, but did you get my pm a while back on that throwie

FUZED
12-19-2007, 06:03 AM
seize, love the fill on the letters
flasho, nice kinda anime style i dig it

not graffiti style but somethin i did
says MELISSA
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p88/royaltykustomz/pics005-6.jpg

we already talked about this and i have gone simpler
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p88/royaltykustomz/pics-2.jpg

sketch3
12-19-2007, 06:24 AM
u need to go simpiler

Now Thicken Those Letters Up, Each Bar The Same Width

Dying to live
12-19-2007, 06:43 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/bus.gif
soem shitty vandal squad thing i did just trying to stop the chit chat ;)

dim
12-19-2007, 07:03 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1115.jpg
that n is ill but a little to large compared to the rest of the letters cause it covers the e to much. the o is to small and is rele lacking but over all out come looks ill

Mass Appeal
12-19-2007, 11:13 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/AKER.gif

naw name maybe =\

this is dope but meeter is right...AKER Is a very used...and id also stop writing AKER if your gonna be usin VS with it...AKER is like the most known , most stylistic head on VS and reps the all mighty DNB...hes fuckin ill in the real world too....german guy rules...non the less this is a hot sketch....maybe change the R ...so yuh.

Gumdrop.Behemoth
12-19-2007, 11:20 AM
no beef but aker dont change your name if you dont want to that guys in europe and so what if he wrecks shyt hes like 3000 miles away but whatever just my 2 cents

Drakula
12-19-2007, 11:27 AM
^agreed.Don't change your name unless a writer with the same name lives in your city or near you.

atlok7
12-19-2007, 12:13 PM
dying to live- aker is based out of germany. he writes for the colormonsters

its takkkkkkkken

sketch3
12-19-2007, 12:35 PM
well if hes not based in germany then who gives a fuck, only change ur name if its a legand or in ur city

Gumdrop.Behemoth
12-19-2007, 12:50 PM
thanks for the back up guys appeciate it

jaskesteven
12-19-2007, 12:58 PM
keeep it. that shit's pretty nice.

rsakens
12-19-2007, 01:17 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00108.jpg?t=1198091799
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00110.jpg?t=1198091763

Rots takes your Daughters
12-19-2007, 01:21 PM
Yeah keep writing AKER, the one from VS is whack anyway. There's an AKER in my crew, but there's so many AKERs that the name is played and no one has really done it any justice, if someone would get nuts with that name I think they have rights to claim it.

And DNB is gay.

Rots, BAK NET

But since this is now officially the Vandalsquad thread -

http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/11/18/wag_123226_1118_3182.jpg
^^^ me and moser
http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/09/06/wag_85236_95_1594.jpg
http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/09/30/wag_75332_929_8499.jpg

Me and my ***** RKANE
Vandalsquad is toy

SEZ
12-19-2007, 01:45 PM
I love those EYKS

CNK and Atlok, really good, but maybe a little too much
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC00945.jpg
bad flick, I think this came out good though.

aware mexico fosho

a maze
12-19-2007, 02:50 PM
BUMP--- Few crits

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/candyCane.jpg

hazetheone
12-19-2007, 03:31 PM
maze thats actualy realy cool i like yourstuff
that vandal squad shit is freshhhhh

dim
12-19-2007, 03:33 PM
maze that chracter is pretty cool

Rank-oner!
12-19-2007, 03:39 PM
man those vandal squad pieces are really nice

NEZ89
12-19-2007, 04:07 PM
rsakens- the letters are dope and the color's ill, just don't like the white part, maybe its just the lines in the paper.
maze- the reindeer's dope


for swor, ignor the handy
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9215/im001503hx1.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/396/im001505fz1.jpg
bumb, aint get no crits

sex without condoms
12-19-2007, 04:32 PM
;950094']http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/f1dc98d128ad167661ab091a990e61f7_580x270.png

LAWLZ facebook graffiti for my boy!!!!

:] oh bbyyy <333333333

jaskesteven
12-19-2007, 05:04 PM
meter thanks for the crit
i was'nt feelin the green too much either. i need to work on the A though.

sacwacko
12-19-2007, 05:21 PM
NEZ - that nez is soooo much better that the one in ur sig.

NEZ89
12-19-2007, 05:39 PM
lol progression, thanx

hazetheone
12-19-2007, 05:52 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/72id2e8.jpg
just some quicknes
some size issues i know

Sintakz
12-19-2007, 05:58 PM
I caught all the letters but the H. Other than that I like it. The E looks a bit funny as well.

hazetheone
12-19-2007, 06:00 PM
haha honest mistake ma
it sais jaze
try again

atlok7
12-19-2007, 06:19 PM
haze- dope fill but i cant see the H

hazetheone
12-19-2007, 06:21 PM
again it sais jaze
with a j

NEZ89
12-19-2007, 06:24 PM
haha honest mistake ma
it sais jaze
try again

yeah the fill's dope, but the j looks to much like an I to me, and i'm not feelin the e too much

NaRsyONE*
12-19-2007, 06:24 PM
Haha dumbass

BORG
12-19-2007, 07:49 PM
my sisters baby tore my sketch i was workin on so bare with me, and yes i know the coloring isn't finished :(
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2337/picture204ss7.jpg

Swoe.45
12-19-2007, 07:52 PM
i'v seen that one like a hundred times.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-19-2007, 07:54 PM
...and it never gets old

Sumoe
12-19-2007, 07:55 PM
Yeah keep writing AKER, the one from VS is whack anyway. There's an AKER in my crew, but there's so many AKERs that the name is played and no one has really done it any justice, if someone would get nuts with that name I think they have rights to claim it.

And DNB is gay.

Rots, BAK NET

But since this is now officially the Vandalsquad thread -

http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/11/18/wag_123226_1118_3182.jpg
^^^ me and moser
http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/09/06/wag_85236_95_1594.jpg
http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/09/30/wag_75332_929_8499.jpg

Me and my ***** RKANE
Vandalsquad is toy

Bumpz.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-19-2007, 07:56 PM
roten, you using a tablet?

fr3gna
12-19-2007, 07:57 PM
a_maze- i like the reindeer

hazetheone- looks good stay consistant with the letters (as u have acknowledged)


my stuff, im new, crits are greatly appreciated

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b314/skimonvic/fregna.jpg

Rots takes your Daughters
12-19-2007, 08:01 PM
Yes ma'am.

BORG
12-19-2007, 08:02 PM
i'v seen that one like a hundred times.

i've only posted 3 sketches in that style
and in each of them theres been alot of changes
so shut cho fuckin mouth, bitch elsewhere

sex without condoms
12-19-2007, 08:03 PM
we're on page
30...69
lollercaust!! (.Y.)

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-19-2007, 08:05 PM
a much needed bump!

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture004.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1268.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7556/picture037oa9.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1819.jpg
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/fuckswoe.jpg

Ego905
12-19-2007, 08:17 PM
My ghetto little throwiee
http://i11.tinypic.com/81ydr1k.jpg
Critsss pleasee

popshots
12-19-2007, 08:46 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/2586/aflo4cb1.jpgyea mad quick stikers....
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5518/mnafnh1.jpgchea... it stands for misn, nasr, aflo,
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4025/aflo5oq5.jpg
yea crits on all.......
ego: make it bigger nd dont do da arrows in da lettas....
dayum love those fuck swoe ones...
da vandalsquad ones r nice
cile: when you do ectentions use your preexisting structure nd it'll look a lot better nd if u thicken da extensions up... gud job on coloren

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-19-2007, 09:37 PM
i like cileeee.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/4.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/3.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/2.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/1.jpg

atlok7
12-19-2007, 09:37 PM
fregna- why money signs? $ are wack.

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3640/goldpinkaq2.jpg
just finished this not really feelin it plus the picture fucked up the colors

Fixion
12-19-2007, 09:41 PM
Haven't been here for awhile. Well here's my stuff, feedback would be appreciated
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/BybleRedandPinkSkulls.jpg
Penticles, not pentagrams.
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/byblesixcolour.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/byblefreestyle.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/Rittneybyblecen.jpg
For my friend.
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/DSC00381.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/bybes1.jpg
Again, penticles.


Popshots-Nice simples. Keep it up.
Ego 905, fr3gna-Start simple.
SEIZE-Nice shiz. Diggin the throwies especially. What markers are those on the last one?
Rots-Effin ill. It's on a digital graff game too, LAWLZ.
Nez-The character's nice but your letters, ehhh. Your Z looks like a 2.
Borg-That ALE is brutal.
SEZER-Handies are sexy as fuh.
Atlok-I say, still do simples. Like your handy though.

There's my crits for yall. Mind giving me a lil feedback yo?

Sick!
12-19-2007, 09:46 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/6000000111a5fb9/1/250/E0Yna-CU7z9ulmPIkYQ6fXjWr1SUn6Sv.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/xjxQWcRx3j-iCRXcHZoGjzLmpCezJk5o?referrer=hlnk)
updated throwie.....
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/6000000111a6fe5/1/21/dKPauxeL6D8v2TDE_oIEtnZaG4aKbi6j.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/uAK_UPcDtz-mplAqPRJGlOZHX3Fq7azA?referrer=hlnk)
and another one......yes i know i need to fix the fucked 's'

atlok...i might be blind but that t looks like from the video game
ccc-lovin fuck swoe mind if i contribute?
popshots-dont do stickers yet the better writers unlike us need those but just work on stucture
ego-no beef but quit or start over with new name everything then go bigger and dont color yet
haze- i agree with nez

dim
12-19-2007, 09:52 PM
tezer do you want to do a straight ltter exchange ? i write dimr

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-19-2007, 09:53 PM
im down ill post it up toomooorow.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-19-2007, 09:53 PM
SEIZE-Nice shiz. Diggin the throwies especially. What markers are those on

only the blue sketch is mine. and i used prismas

5Funerals
12-19-2007, 09:55 PM
Yo Frost - I like the old throwie much better, just get the S up to par, lose the arrow, and make the first arm of the T visible so you can tell what letter it is. Also, I dont think you know what you are talking about when it comes to Aflos stickahs. Aflo's got nice stylish simple letters that work perfectly on a sticker. No disrespect just disagreement.

RFI. SPit
12-19-2007, 09:55 PM
ignore the random black scribbles on the page... not part of the piece

not done, still some shading to do... etc...
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/5481/photo176qq4.jpg

Fixion
12-19-2007, 09:59 PM
Haven't been here for awhile. Well here's my stuff, feedback would be appreciated
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/BybleRedandPinkSkulls.jpg
Penticles, not pentagrams.
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/byblesixcolour.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/byblefreestyle.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/Rittneybyblecen.jpg
For my friend.
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/DSC00381.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/bybes1.jpg
Again, penticles.


Popshots-Nice simples. Keep it up.
Ego 905, fr3gna-Start simple.
SEIZE-Nice shiz. Diggin the throwies especially. What markers are those on the last one?
Rots-Effin ill. It's on a digital graff game too, LAWLZ.
Nez-The character's nice but your letters, ehhh. Your Z looks like a 2.
Borg-That ALE is brutal.
SEZER-Handies are sexy as fuh.
Atlok-I say, still do simples. Like your handy though.

There's my crits for yall. Mind giving me a lil feedback yo?
Bumps to new page.

Sick!
12-19-2007, 10:01 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/6000000111a5fb9/1/250/E0Yna-CU7z9ulmPIkYQ6fXjWr1SUn6Sv.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/xjxQWcRx3j-iCRXcHZoGjzLmpCezJk5o?referrer=hlnk)
updated throwie.....
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/6000000111a6fe5/1/21/dKPauxeL6D8v2TDE_oIEtnZaG4aKbi6j.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/uAK_UPcDtz-mplAqPRJGlOZHX3Fq7azA?referrer=hlnk)
and another one......yes i know i need to fix the fucked 's'

atlok...i might be blind but that t looks like from the video game
ccc-lovin fuck swoe mind if i contribute?
popshots-dont do stickers yet the better writers unlike us need those but just work on stucture
ego-no beef but quit or start over with new name everything then go bigger and dont color yet
haze- i agree with nez



buump sorry only one crit thanks 5funerals need more
also at bottom of last page makin new page i think..
i just dont like aslos shit for some reason... i dont know

fixion-looks mad dope keep workin on that girl tho its got potential

5Funerals
12-19-2007, 10:12 PM
ZofOne and Byble sick shit!

New throwup style
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400019.jpg

atlok7
12-19-2007, 10:22 PM
byble- i like the second one and the very last the best. the other seem kinda goofy. the very last red and orange and tht grey throwie are simply dope

jersOneTIC
12-19-2007, 10:55 PM
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7204/bluskzg8.jpg

hazetheone
12-19-2007, 11:04 PM
3d is a little off
but im diggin it man
goodwork

sex without condoms
12-20-2007, 12:08 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/010115.jpg

Bets369R
12-20-2007, 12:13 AM
i think its time to start doing different things. ive been seeing the same stuff from you for like 3 months...

sex without condoms
12-20-2007, 12:33 AM
well i dont want to.
too bad.

kosher
12-20-2007, 02:00 AM
zof it's cool. letter structure could be a bit better but i really like the gradient on the 3d.
fixion, i like the 2nd and 3rd ones. i like the drawings used in the 3rd one. 2nd one you gotta pick whether or not you fill in the white middle space with the highlite color for the whole piece, can't pick and chose (i'm refering to how in the b's it's all pink but in the e there's white)
sick, your letters are too scrunched and your t looks weird. also if you're gonna do blockbuster, keep it straight, don't let it curve upwards.
5funerals, it's really nice, i think it's just slightly abstract as far as the shapes of the letters go. if you could keep it more uniform i'd like it more but it's personal opinion.
jers, gorgeous piece, skyline looks good, street looks ugly. if you're gonna do something like that use perspective and a vanishing point just like you would with your letters.
sex, i don't really like it for graffiti. letters seem too skinny and stuff i don't know. the structure could make for some sick characters though.

just a sketch i did in pencil today instead of paying attention to english and math in the afternoon. i think i made the right decision. i fucked up the r, no need to tell me that. i was just trying the bubbles, don't really know if i'm feeling how they turned out. PLEASE let me know what you think, crits are welcomed with open arms. thanks.

http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v166/86/71/571434156/n571434156_332343_3165.jpg

kosher
12-20-2007, 02:00 AM
sorry double post. if a mod wants to delete this, go for it

ilikekicks
12-20-2007, 02:23 AM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/aksohthrowup.jpg?t=1198138988

kosher
12-20-2007, 03:22 AM
i like kicks, i like it but don't be a dick. everyone wants crits so give some out too

a maze
12-20-2007, 06:19 AM
sex- Thats pretty clean, man, but I'd like to see a new style from you.

kosher-I dig it. Try to make the letters a little less blocky next time.

ilikekicks-it's pretty good, and has some potential. Fix the tops of the letters, though.

EDIT-Something I drew up on a sketchbook the other day- the gray areas are really silver, scanner fucked it-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner5.jpg
crits

renz198
12-20-2007, 08:44 AM
messin with a new style
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/869/dsc00274tv6.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8242/dsc00279zl7.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/658/dsc00283qq4.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9465/dsc00284fl0.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/7733/dsc00287lm5.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6083/dsc00288yw3.jpg
i hate the last sketch but thought id post it anyway CRITS

-ShAmEE-
12-20-2007, 09:25 AM
ignore the random black scribbles on the page... not part of the piece

not done, still some shading to do... etc...
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/5481/photo176qq4.jpg


tis sick. rawr!

La Coka Nostra
12-20-2007, 12:54 PM
byble...i dont think you belong in here. that last simple is amazing. i would love to see it painted. caught the aotp lyrics too lol.

maze, i like that character.

jers the letters are nice as always, but i think the background ruined it. the road and the grass are kinda ehh..

sketch3
12-20-2007, 02:28 PM
jesus im fed up of ppl saying ''dont write_____ hes a dope writer in ______''
unless there a legend, or in the same area dose it matter

rfi bthe e is bigger than the other letter, luv the shadin in the 3d

Seek740
12-20-2007, 02:37 PM
seize- agreed, all of those are lookin very nice
atlok- style looks tight, diggin the colors also
fixion- mad nice, all your stuff has potential
frost- not much to say except i think you should stop telling everyone else to go back to simples and do it yourself. A lot of your stuff would look a shit ton better if you took other peoples advice.
Jers- Haze is right, 3D is a tad off but looks great

plenty of fuck-ups but it is what it is -- tried to get drips to look like the 3D but it was pretty much a fail. enjoy
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/Seek1.jpg
I bet I'm gonna take some heat for writing seek, but hey what can ya do.

sketch3
12-20-2007, 02:41 PM
seek the s and e's are nice make the k flow with the s,
like cemetrical, thicken up the horozontal bars in es an the s

and riot if somone in argentina is hittin up sketch mad shitty i dont give flyin fuck.
and i will continue not in the mood atm

a maze
12-20-2007, 02:53 PM
BUMP- new page

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner5.jpg
crits

a maze
12-20-2007, 03:31 PM
Something new I decided to try, crits?-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner6.jpg

dim
12-20-2007, 03:35 PM
amaze its cool but if u make the connection in the m a little more visible it will look more like and m rather then an a

Bazer
12-20-2007, 03:49 PM
my sisters baby tore my sketch i was workin on so bare with me, and yes i know the coloring isn't finished :(
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2337/picture204ss7.jpg

THATS WHY YOU MUST EAT THE BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!


ok my internet was down so i couldn't post any sketches or battles mayne...

zof. thats my most favorite sketch ive seen from you!

heres some new shit.. and more new steez cuz yall know million styles i my style!!
noy really dont though. haha
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1165.jpg

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1164.jpg

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1166.jpg
i love tezer.

Mass Appeal
12-20-2007, 04:01 PM
wheres my exchange at Rots ! :(

n hump a bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdc.jpg

crits.



AMAZE...never connect letters like you have the AM part...its fuckin crazyilly confusing and it looks mad toyish...other than that is aight. keep it up.

a maze
12-20-2007, 04:02 PM
THATS WHY YOU MUST EAT THE BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!


ok my internet was down so i couldn't post any sketches or battles mayne...

zof. thats my most favorite sketch ive seen from you!

heres some new shit.. and more new steez cuz yall know million styles i my style!!
noy really dont though. haha
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1165.jpg

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1164.jpg

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1166.jpg

amaze you should stop writing amaze..
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1362/537856992_7d2f439660_m.jpg

I WRITE "MAZE"

Rots takes your Daughters
12-20-2007, 04:03 PM
wheres my exchange at Rots ! :(

n hump a bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdc.jpg

crits.



AMAZE...never connect letters like you have the AM part...its fuckin crazyilly confusing and it looks mad toyish...other than that is aight. keep it up.

In my blackbook, still unfinished :( I gues sI'll have to do another one since I don't think I'll be able to get a new marker to finish the fillie :S oh well, I'll do it tonight, no worries.

BORG
12-20-2007, 04:07 PM
haha i know what you mean bazer, fuckin babies!!!!!!!!!
first sketch is fire, feelin the second one aswell, not sure bout the 3rd

amaze-not feelin it too much, simpler, and baze is right

quickie i finally finished for mr. raoe
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9096/picture205jb0.jpg

sorry i been so lazy man, threw in a lil color to make up for it

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-20-2007, 04:16 PM
im deleting this pointless chit chat.
cile i like that karak, haha pussy eater. nothin wrong wit that.
amk.
make the bars in the middle of w and the m the same size. But nice simples.
Bazer- lose the arrows they are pointless.
maze- nice simple piece on the first one posted. keep it up with that.

Bazer
12-20-2007, 04:28 PM
im deleting this pointless chit chat.
cile i like that karak, haha pussy eater. nothin wrong wit that.
amk.
make the bars in the middle of w and the m the same size. But nice simples.
Bazer- lose the arrows they are pointless.
maze- nice simple piece on the first one posted. keep it up with that.

arrows. are. not. pointless...

LikeOner
12-20-2007, 04:32 PM
seek - thats a good start

maze - looking good

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-20-2007, 04:33 PM
yours are.
they dont fit with your letters at all.
they make the piece worse.
accept the criticism or next time ill be more of an asshole.

Bazer
12-20-2007, 04:35 PM
the "point"less thing was a fuckin joke. arrows point. leave em be.
y u being such an asshole niga. for no reason u start actin like your on your motherfuckin period. come off your power trip or calm the fuck down.

lolque?
12-20-2007, 04:40 PM
seize- agreed, all of those are lookin very nice
atlok- style looks tight, diggin the colors also
fixion- mad nice, all your stuff has potential
frost- not much to say except i think you should stop telling everyone else to go back to simples and do it yourself. A lot of your stuff would look a shit ton better if you took other peoples advice.
Jers- Haze is right, 3D is a tad off but looks great

plenty of fuck-ups but it is what it is -- tried to get drips to look like the 3D but it was pretty much a fail. enjoy
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/Seek1.jpg
I bet I'm gonna take some heat for writing seek, but hey what can ya do.

not bad man, i like the letter structure, try doing some actual 3d and putting drips on your force shield.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-20-2007, 04:42 PM
because everytime a kid has a same name as someone you go ut of your way to point that shit out other than help them you never post crits all you do is talk in this thread if you weren't a mod i'd ban your ass.

undergroundanimal
12-20-2007, 04:44 PM
Seek:i like your S..work on your other letters & shadow would look nice
amaze:i like your 1st sketch with the character but im not feelin the 2nd one
bazer:first 2 sketches look sick:eek:
Massappeal:looks ok
Borg:really feelin that green sketch and the character you made on the 2nd ..

i was really bored in class so i added a lot of pointless extensions:D
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/atmosshirt.jpg

crits..?

Bazer
12-20-2007, 04:48 PM
because everytime a kid has a same name as someone you go ut of your way to point that shit out other than help them you never post crits all you do is talk in this thread if you weren't a mod i'd ban your ass.

wooo three posts and i ruined a whole fuckin thread huh? why dont you go cry about it! it was much better when it was just tricks c3zr and hepos were running this section. just quit.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
12-20-2007, 04:54 PM
It was better ?
I didn't know B.S had a work efficency type deal, but thanks supervisor.
So your insulting the rest of the toy section mods too, or just specifiacally calling me out?
think 'bout what your typing, buddy.
Eat Babies?
Is that suppose to be funny.
naaaa....
try again homie.
edit
don't worry i'll delete these.

LikeOner
12-20-2007, 04:56 PM
guys, guys, think about the kids. stop fighting ok? you guys used to be the best BS pals ever. if we see you two fighting we wont know what to think.

atmos - pretty frign sweet, how long you been writing?

undergroundanimal
12-20-2007, 05:15 PM
thanks likeone..
:pdon`t really know that actually..
for as long as i can remember i ve been making sketches at school
because i was bored but since 2/3 years i started taggin, bombin and sketchin more serious (like every day):D

how about you`all..

-ShAmEE-
12-20-2007, 05:24 PM
break peace. and post pics.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled43545353.jpg

NEZ89
12-20-2007, 05:28 PM
what's it say??

-ShAmEE-
12-20-2007, 05:33 PM
letter m

NEZ89
12-20-2007, 05:42 PM
ohh, idk not really feelin it

Roolete
12-20-2007, 05:51 PM
change it up a lil bit and it would make a tight h

undergroundanimal
12-20-2007, 05:52 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/atmosshirt.jpg
bump-next page

-ShAmEE-
12-20-2007, 06:08 PM
that looks hott. the thing in the S killed it for me. but apart from than that dope.

5Funerals
12-20-2007, 06:10 PM
ATMOS - Its awesome as usual but I wish you would change your style up a little bit because your letters are always pretty much the same just with different extensions and tidbits(dont know what to call em haha).

Shamee - It looks good but I dont think it would ever work as an M because it doesnt really look like one.

Heres something I did:
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400003-5.jpg

kosher
12-20-2007, 06:15 PM
http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v166/86/71/571434156/n571434156_332343_3165.jpg


is it so hard to get some crits around here? BUUUUMP

5Funerals
12-20-2007, 06:18 PM
I was gonna say give crits to get crits and then I saw your signature...haha

I think it looks really nice. You should color that mofo

Seek740
12-20-2007, 06:27 PM
looks tight, only thing i notice is first few letters are a bit smaller than the rest but that might have been what you were going for, looks good

edit- ok just the M

undergroundanimal
12-20-2007, 07:08 PM
Mayjer:looks dope..like the letterstructure especialy the M and R..
3d looks really nice to..

5 funerals:i like your character...but what is it..?


i change my style a lot but i spend al my money on cans so i still
don`t have a camera and cant show you any more recent sketches...

got some old sketches and other stuff thou..

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian629.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian631.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus022-1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian633.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian021.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian016.jpg

kosher
12-20-2007, 07:10 PM
shame, i don't really like it. the structure is all weird.
animal, good start. @ second post, 2nd pic is nice. 4th is SIIIIIIICK.
funerals, not feeling it sorry.

love the last days of school before break, never anything to do so i get to sketch all day. this is what i came up with today. CRITS PLEASE!!!

http://photos-156.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v166/86/71/571434156/n571434156_333107_1249.jpg

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:13 PM
wazza every1, been writing for a few weeks, wanted to know what you guys think of this:

i've a few fuck up and shit crayola markers, but w/e, i'd like crits on the letters and technique. thx

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2718/imgyd6.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imgyd6.jpg)

BIGel
12-20-2007, 07:14 PM
hahahaha that car straight made me laugh! sick!

gonna paint this one.
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/354/c/7/just_an_outline_by_bigel.jpg

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:14 PM
is it so hard to get some crits around here? BUUUUMP

ya man it's hard when it's that good. i'd love to see that actually painted.

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:16 PM
shame, i don't really like it. the structure is all weird.
animal, good start
funerals, not feeling it sorry.

love the last days of school before break, never anything to do so i get to sketch all day. this is what i came up with today. CRITS PLEASE!!!

http://photos-156.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v166/86/71/571434156/n571434156_333107_1249.jpg

looks pretty good, i'd say use a better color tho. also, you look skilled enough that you could fancy your letters up a lil more? also, you could work on your J, not diggin it as much as the others.

kosher
12-20-2007, 07:19 PM
bigel that's sick, i very excited to see how it looks painted

BIGel
12-20-2007, 07:21 PM
thanks homie! bump to next page.


http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/354/c/7/just_an_outline_by_bigel.jpg

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:21 PM
wheres my exchange at Rots ! :(

n hump a bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/cdc.jpg

crits.



AMAZE...never connect letters like you have the AM part...its fuckin crazyilly confusing and it looks mad toyish...other than that is aight. keep it up.

it kinda looks like a font to me, too much blank space between your letters. but your letters themselves are pretty gud.

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:22 PM
wazza every1, been writing for a few weeks, wanted to know what you guys think of this:

i've a few fuck up and shit crayola markers, but w/e, i'd like crits on the letters and technique. thx

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2718/imgyd6.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imgyd6.jpg)

bumpin it to teh next page

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:23 PM
bigel that's amazing, love how it's all messed up. Gj. .butyoudon'tbelonghereee.

NEZ89
12-20-2007, 07:48 PM
BIGel-man that shit is mad dope, lol's right,

for Aflo
i was thinkin of changin the shape of the O to match the A, wut u think?
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1159/im001506tt9.jpg

for OFB
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5040/im001507mv5.jpg

Maste
12-20-2007, 07:49 PM
lolque 1st theres an edit button man use it haha no need to wow triple post...i just scrolled up
second crits...your letters are waaaay to squished together also try no to have 3d overlapping letters and work on thier structrue a lot...i dunno if you seen the new to graff thread but it has stuff about bars that seems like bullshit at first but it actually is completly practical so use it haha thats should be good for a start

lolque?
12-20-2007, 07:51 PM
ah, sry for triple posting. thanks for the crits and tips.

atlok7
12-20-2007, 08:10 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5446/clapsthrowieuu4.jpg

skiv
12-20-2007, 08:38 PM
Atlok- Lookin good, like the colors
nez- give you letters a little more to them, looks good tho
& BigEl- get the hell out of the Toy thread haha, looks awsome
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0020.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0021.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0022.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0023.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0030.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0029.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0034.jpg
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0033.jpg

kosher
12-20-2007, 10:44 PM
skiv instead of clicking the link button click the one just to the right of it

capitol
12-20-2007, 11:25 PM
looked at envys piece today and bit this off of it.
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7697/picture952ml9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4176/picture953qf0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
And my typical wack ass style..crit awayyyyy.
Skiv:Fuck you and your links..
atlok:does that say like...elaps??Nice bubbles if so.
aflo:i like the A on the first one it looks very flowing..but the rest is well..unnice..

Bets369R
12-21-2007, 12:46 AM
a couple new pages in the book, crits please

http://i11.tinypic.com/8ezw5rr.jpg

http://i4.tinypic.com/6p9jss2.jpg

Rank-oner!
12-21-2007, 12:58 AM
Atmos: those pics are fire and if those are old i can't wait to see the new ones
Big el: Amazing as usual can't wait to see it painted. your 3d is so clean
Atlok: lookin real good like the colors a lot

Kriede
12-21-2007, 01:59 AM
Big ellen - i think that is my favorite thing i have seen from you yet.

capitol - lose the arrows for starters.

and this is what happens when you don't sketch for a month or so.
here you go borg now shut your spit hole.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2037/2126647310_aefdd13abe_o.jpg

"Fasho" T|y|B
12-21-2007, 02:56 AM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/PhaseOnerFin-1.jpg
i was just fuckin aroudn at work
i know i should go waaaaay simpler but but i was bored and eh i might as well embarass myself and post this shit
and there was no room for the H and all the color is photoshoped haha
laugh at the pointless extension on the A and i also put a poop pile there on the side of it for your vieewing pleasure hah

fuckin borg get the fuck out of the toy section haha thats sofucking tight man

kriede i like that one man amazing tho the 6 isnt lined up with the other numbers

LikeOner
12-21-2007, 05:38 AM
simple it up fash, keep bars consistent and whatnot

-ShAmEE-
12-21-2007, 07:05 AM
Mayjer:looks dope..like the letterstructure especialy the M and R..
3d looks really nice to..

5 funerals:i like your character...but what is it..?


i change my style a lot but i spend al my money on cans so i still
don`t have a camera and cant show you any more recent sketches...

got some old sketches and other stuff thou..

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian629.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian631.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus022-1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian633.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian021.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian016.jpg

dope.

-ShAmEE-
12-21-2007, 07:13 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled435453532.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled43545353.jpg

Mass Appeal
12-21-2007, 07:31 AM
it kinda looks like a font to me, too much blank space between your letters. but your letters themselves are pretty gud.

yeah man...glad you feel like it...a few people have said about that and some said bang some extenions in there..i think them leters are a greta example of addon oppertunity...thanks man :D

Shamee--/..dont think im being an arsehole but that reminds me of Hepos..but whatever...you always do the same old shit...one letter , 2 letters scribbly shit...have you ever actually took the time to draw a full fucking peice...eh ?..ahha but whatever its up to you...and i wanna be cool withchu now..we did our " e - duel " ahah so no more shit...

undergroundanimal....look cool...the car is an great idea...im pickin up a couple of those All City Style Subway Cars...ima do some shit on that hehe....the pink handys on the black background is pure Ronaldinho

the quaker
12-21-2007, 10:08 AM
underground animal-love all of it !
shame-nice m-should do a piece with it.

crits??

renz198
12-21-2007, 10:20 AM
messin with a new style
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/869/dsc00274tv6.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8242/dsc00279zl7.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/658/dsc00283qq4.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9465/dsc00284fl0.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/7733/dsc00287lm5.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6083/dsc00288yw3.jpg
i hate the last sketch but thought id post it anyway CRITS

CRITS PLZ and i have gave crits before just not posted on bs in a while

Mass Appeal
12-21-2007, 11:03 AM
your usin bars with is alright i spose...jus the whole point of the bars isnt there cos there aint no structure ^

daisyface
12-21-2007, 12:29 PM
shamee- m is lookin real good thas a cool style
quaker- characters have potential, keep messin around with them
renz-1st and 3rd are the best imo


k so im havin trouble with addons obviously, any help appreciated
plus bad coloring skills pay no mind to them

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/sty001.jpgsticker

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/sty005.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/sty003.jpgfor a friend

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/sty002.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/sty004.jpg

rsakens
12-21-2007, 01:12 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00108.jpg?t=1198091799
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00110.jpg?t=1198091763

any tips or feedback guys ?

Dryft
12-21-2007, 01:34 PM
Uhm yea, i just started so constructive criticism please
haha, k, first time putting pics up, I have more but a lot isn't good at all..
I've been surfing these forums for a while, gathering tips and stuff uhm, I tried to stick with keeping it simple, block letters and stuff

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/graff001.jpg
Bad choice on colors...
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/DSC02664.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/DSC02633.jpg

I don't have a name I do by yet, righting BE EZ = Be Easy.. which is just something I say alot..

Feedback is wanted :]

daisyface
12-21-2007, 01:50 PM
rsaken-good coloring, nice n clean, good 3d. your letters aren't bad but they dont quite flow together all the well know what i mean
dryft- its good your doing simples since your just startin off. try drawing your keyboard letters, concentrate on straight lines and consistent bars

NaRsyONE*
12-21-2007, 02:04 PM
undergroundanimal:1st two ill,3rd ehh not diggin it,4th fucking hot..n the trucks hott
shamee:dope but still kinda hard to see
renz:maybe loose some extensions n add some color
daisyface:soo clean n nice colors .ill
rsakens:hott fill but try to level your letters out n same size
drfyt:stick to simples n loose the colors..just sketch for now
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9418/green001io5.jpg
not done yet ..color ideas for fill needed ???crits aswell

Bazer
12-21-2007, 02:19 PM
dryft. you hould do the fill in color first. then your outline. even on sketches. that why your black outline looks so sloppy. ive done the same thing before...

did this one just now...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1167.jpg

avore
12-21-2007, 02:24 PM
nars--im likin it bro
dryft --jus keep workin on them simples
kens--i like that k dope
daisy face--im likn that pencil sketch and the last ones pretty cool
rens --theat pencil sketch is dope man
easy--that purple n pink ones pretty sick man
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/443/yummmmme008pu5.jpg

Bazer
12-21-2007, 02:40 PM
DRONE. on your R make the middle bars go through eachother. know what i mean? O_o
like this.
and make the part that goes back a lil thinner. ;)
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/DR.jpg

scary letters
12-21-2007, 04:01 PM
bump that baze, your letters have gotten alot better since ive been here.

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/355/1/f/just_a_quickie_by_bigel.jpg

skiv
12-21-2007, 04:41 PM
Posted the pics this time, not the links, sry my Bad, didnt want to take up to much room cus the pics were big and i could resize them.

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0034.jpg?t=1198276453http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0040.jpg?t=1198276489http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0038.jpg?t=1198276533http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0030.jpg?t=1198276581http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0021.jpg?t=1198276623http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0022.jpg?t=1198276675http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0011-1.jpg?t=1198276723http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0002-3.jpg?t=1198276760http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0010.jpg?t=1198276806

a maze
12-21-2007, 05:51 PM
Bigel- shit is so clean, I'm with everyone else... Get the hell out! ha, off to the big kid threads.
oh, and thanks for pointing that out with bazer, teze. Hate when someone does that.

Sick!
12-21-2007, 07:11 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/600000011436623/1/93/kOH_RRiXsD9EyEDwVqA20CcwBcQDD_GB.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/CMQazctV5T_kl5L8dHBXLNG-EfFSRjVT?referrer=hlnk)
new piece ignore the thing on top of the t
i agree bigel get the hell outta of the toys forum
easy-good job startin off on simples
drone-i like that name and your style good flow
baze-way better
narsy-dope

beyondyereyes
12-21-2007, 08:28 PM
keep it simple.

drapes1125
12-21-2007, 08:50 PM
This is some of the best stuff that ive seen in a while in this thread.

Kriede
12-21-2007, 08:59 PM
Big ellen - i think that is my favorite thing i have seen from you yet.

capitol - lose the arrows for starters.

and this is what happens when you don't sketch for a month or so.
here you go borg now shut your spit hole.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2037/2126647310_aefdd13abe_o.jpg

bump.

Dryft
12-21-2007, 09:20 PM
kk, Thanks Baze, I'll keep that in mind and try it on the next one i do
i'll put some more pic's up tomorrow..

BORG
12-21-2007, 09:40 PM
<3<3<3<3<3<3 Bazer, Bigel, Chalk
nice work guys, keep pumpin em out
especially you chalk ;)

atlok7
12-21-2007, 09:43 PM
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1940/clapsthrowieox1.jpg

atlok7
12-21-2007, 09:46 PM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3299/sketch40oo6.jpg
just a character MSH drawing i did a few months ago

Roolete
12-21-2007, 10:02 PM
get rid of the folds on the throw
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/name.jpg

atlok7
12-21-2007, 10:08 PM
psh fuck that man the folds give it steez. pretty tight but i think the a is wack

a maze
12-21-2007, 10:08 PM
atlok- I like both of em, man. Keep it going.

roolete- I like it, just not feelin that 'a'. The shading for the 3D kind of ruined it for me, too.

dim
12-21-2007, 10:11 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0686.jpg
roolete that looks nice i like the e
this is a work in progress still got to clean it up a bit

AnteUp
12-21-2007, 10:23 PM
dimr-fuckin sick bro, ima work on a peice for you, so i might get an exchange :D...but seriously, sick

dim
12-21-2007, 10:26 PM
sure man what do you write

AnteUp
12-21-2007, 10:35 PM
i write whats2, i dunno when i can get urs up, i've bin confused bout mah style, but i'll try ta produce sumthin

drapes1125
12-21-2007, 10:36 PM
This is the first sketch that ive done in a while so give some crits.
http://a501.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/112/l_edfceee8095727798692751e6a7e8bdc.jpg

drapes1125
12-21-2007, 10:37 PM
By tha way DIM that is sik.
I love it.
Are you gonna color it???
I would.

atlok7
12-21-2007, 10:42 PM
drapes- yo dude try and stay away from the thin shafted arrows. also try to put a little more life and energy to the letters. add some color dude

a maze
12-21-2007, 10:47 PM
drapes- drop. the. arrows... Don't use them at all, just work with bars for now.

dim
12-21-2007, 10:51 PM
bump that baze, your letters have gotten alot better since ive been here.

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/355/1/f/just_a_quickie_by_bigel.jpg
this is one of my favorites from you el. love the style

sacwacko
12-21-2007, 11:46 PM
atlok-dope as shit...
dim-dope as shit too. i wanna see the final.
roolete-looking good....except the A.
blah.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/exchanges/zdfhzdf.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/exchanges/amekexchange.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/exchanges/zorkexchange.jpg
recent exchanges.
on seizes one....i spelt it wrong.
crits?

Fube
12-22-2007, 12:38 AM
sac feelin the throws.

dime ink it man. seen that pencil sketch to many times.

i dont post my shit often.

love hate welcome

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture001-1.jpg
"omen"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1233.jpg
slaps for Cile.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1269.jpg
claps for battle.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1242.jpg
"choy" rip.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/11-30-07_0927.jpg
bier outline.

Rank-oner!
12-22-2007, 01:40 AM
CILE: hey man we still down for an exchange?
Sacwacko: id love to do a throwie exchange if you're down
Fube: lookin really good man

sacwacko
12-22-2007, 02:18 AM
rank.
im down.
you write?...rank?
and lets take this to the real exchange thread k?.

BORG
12-22-2007, 02:26 AM
nice fube, your style is so different, i fuckin love it, haha
keep postin the works, love to see your work alot more

rank- its the holidays man, i'm bout busy as hell this weekend/next week, but i'll get at you when shit slows down and heads back to normal

sacwacko- nice throws, only advice would to be maybe close up some of the gaps between the letters, but thats completely up to you

sacwacko
12-22-2007, 02:29 AM
ha.
yo cile.
wen you get ur camera back you wanna exchange throws?
i write DFIANS if u forgot.:D

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-22-2007, 03:49 AM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1852.jpg

*Wing*
12-22-2007, 05:15 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1197631454_f.jpg

And props to seize!

Buhda420
12-22-2007, 06:21 AM
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd184/joshuaisamadcunt/WednesdayNovember0720072.jpg

Buhda420
12-22-2007, 06:27 AM
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd184/joshuaisamadcunt/SaturdayDecember222007.jpg

Buhda420
12-22-2007, 06:28 AM
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd184/joshuaisamadcunt/SaturdayDecember2220072.jpg

fumer one australia representing delmar

skiv
12-22-2007, 06:52 AM
buhda- looks good, but i dont like it for sum reason, cant really explain it
Wing- Keep working on it

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0034.jpg?t=1198276453http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0040.jpg?t=1198276489http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0038.jpg?t=1198276533http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0030.jpg?t=1198276581http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0021.jpg?t=1198276623http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0022.jpg?t=1198276675http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0011-1.jpg?t=1198276723http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0002-3.jpg?t=1198276760http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0010.jpg?t=1198276806

Bumping for Crits

nero122
12-22-2007, 07:13 AM
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd184/joshuaisamadcunt/SaturdayDecember2220072.jpg

fumer one australia representing delmar
wtf hair pussy havin a turd out of it?

atlok7
12-22-2007, 09:20 AM
yo fube i saw a omen piece down in chicago a few months ago. dope shit. i entered the throwie comp too. XD

mas$
12-22-2007, 09:25 AM
aint posted on here in a while
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/2500/pic091wi2.jpg

that sieze is bangin lovin the style and scheme

avore
12-22-2007, 11:58 AM
mas$--theres like no flow im not feelin it
skiv - make your stuff simple your goin to wild n crazy too early man
seize--nice simples bro
fube-- i like them last 3 hella clean
sacwacko--i like that seize throwie the rest not so
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3591/yummmmme010go4.jpg

DeaNo
12-22-2007, 12:02 PM
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/Picture132.jpg
first time trying that rock peice progression stuff on the top one. crits.

mas$
12-22-2007, 12:03 PM
i dont get wat u mean Avore?
the flow thang
care to clarify

"Riot"
12-22-2007, 12:12 PM
Don't worry about it. its dope.
hes just mad he cant read it.

mas$
12-22-2007, 12:13 PM
lol im in a whole doubt myself stage so yea haha

avore
12-22-2007, 12:18 PM
Don't worry about it. its dope.
hes just mad he cant read it.
ya i can read it it says bare im jus not feelin it.....

sketch3
12-22-2007, 12:21 PM
mass the right lg of th r covers the e too much

mas$
12-22-2007, 12:21 PM
then it dont mean it dont flow, it just means u aint feelin it

drapes1125
12-22-2007, 01:25 PM
http://a872.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/26/l_95ea180470c83167af146cf62cabeccf.jpgcritz

*Wing*
12-22-2007, 01:34 PM
Mass, that shit is hot!

a maze
12-22-2007, 01:37 PM
character thread, drapes...

G-sauce
12-22-2007, 01:52 PM
its my first bubble letter sketch but my third overall. color scheme was 1/3 of a box of crayola markers and two sharpies so that should change. but crits for lettering and whatever else would be nice.

NEZ89
12-22-2007, 02:08 PM
u might wanna start off basic, with blockletters, not really feelin it
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6150/im001509wy5.jpg

mas$
12-22-2007, 02:13 PM
the Z looks lik a dope "2"

Seek740
12-22-2007, 02:19 PM
thats dope, nez
keep it up

a maze
12-22-2007, 02:48 PM
yeah, nez. You've gotten way better, man. Keep it comin.

atlok7
12-22-2007, 02:52 PM
nez- dope shadow and color scheme.is the shadow modified on a computer?
Merty/Mercy- 3rd sketch? shit thats dope for just starting

a maze
12-22-2007, 02:56 PM
did this about a week ago, kinda fucked up the char- crits appreciated

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner7.jpg

atlok7
12-22-2007, 02:56 PM
mass fuck that douche. your shit is dope as hell. wanna exchange?

NEZ89
12-22-2007, 03:03 PM
nez- dope shadow and color scheme.is the shadow modified on a computer?

nope, i borrowed my AP art teacher's prisma markers
they mad nice

maze- nice b, you probably shouldn't have outlined the breakoffs on the R so thik, but its still dope son.

ESKiMO2
12-22-2007, 03:22 PM
Maze- The characters should mostly be second priority if they are with letters so don't make the get in the way of your letters. I would say, make the letters flow a little more, so don't make all of them that tilted or there is too much space. (Sick shit otherwise)

Nez- Keep going with the style.

G-Sauce - I know it can be tedious but keep doing simples as long as you write.



A cow. From my book.
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/74/cownm3.jpg


An old Simple
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5484/dscf0223oi4.jpg


A Vulgar Monkey.
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8530/monkeyfn0.jpg


Sectio. Like section without the N
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8835/sectiobs1.jpg

A more recent but less cool simple.
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5342/dscf0234as2.jpg

I need suggestions. Have any?

Seek740
12-22-2007, 03:26 PM
Only thing i can think of is the first k looks a lot like an r

a maze
12-22-2007, 03:38 PM
eskimo- love that first character, made me LOL for some reason...

NEZ89
12-22-2007, 03:40 PM
lol the characters pretty funny

hazetheone
12-22-2007, 03:48 PM
http://i5.tinypic.com/6xsej4z.jpg

ekimboi1
12-22-2007, 04:43 PM
lol someones beens listening to public enemy!

SenTheFirst
12-22-2007, 04:58 PM
nez- pretty good, lose the drips
maze- fresh simples
jaze- doesnt really flow


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_129022222.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1278.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1286.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1282.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1288.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1287.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1284.jpg

Buhda420
12-22-2007, 05:19 PM
i like that vulger monkey
hahaha

atlok7
12-22-2007, 06:00 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3005/greenclasiche6.jpg
crits??

*Wing*
12-22-2007, 06:08 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1197631454_f.jpg

And props to seize!
Bump!

hazetheone
12-22-2007, 06:22 PM
do a straight letter with bars
and never do a spade like that again

SenTheFirst
12-22-2007, 06:28 PM
nez- pretty good, lose the drips
maze- fresh simples
jaze- doesnt really flow


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_129022222.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1278.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1286.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1282.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1288.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1287.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1284.jpg

bump over the crit-less kids

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-22-2007, 06:31 PM
im in love with your hand.
maybe a throw and hand exchange?

NEZ89
12-22-2007, 06:32 PM
mad dope sen, i like the N's :D

a maze
12-22-2007, 07:12 PM
Jaze- Nice and fresh, bro. keep it up.

Sen- Man, love those throws.

BUMP- new page...

did this about a week ago, kinda fucked up the char- crits appreciated

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner7.jpg

SenTheFirst
12-22-2007, 07:14 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1293.jpg

a maze
12-22-2007, 07:23 PM
hey, sen, what kinds of markers do you use?

SenTheFirst
12-22-2007, 07:26 PM
dry ass prismas haha

need some new ones, after almost every throw/tag i have to change markers and i only have like 7 markers

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
12-22-2007, 07:41 PM
hot stuff man.

heres the shit i produced
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1854.jpg

Haz-E
12-22-2007, 08:41 PM
MAZE charecter off the hook

SEn that throw u did for seize looks banging

finished this up last night

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6356/000b0070ds4.jpg

bouncingsoul
12-22-2007, 09:17 PM
Like those Sen throws... But they're not supposed to be in notebooks...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/6bbf5443.jpg

Maste
12-22-2007, 09:43 PM
love the peice but id love it a lot better if it was colored in or on a wall haha

who you tellin to get outta the notebooks tch

sex without condoms
12-22-2007, 09:58 PM
knews is defanitley the extension and add ons king.
and im very high rght now.

blahblalhblah

atlok7
12-22-2007, 10:20 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3631/greenclasiche61cr8.jpgcrits?

hazetheone
12-22-2007, 10:35 PM
http://i5.tinypic.com/6xsej4z.jpg

what does it take for a guy to get a few crits around here
maze that shit is fire
jurassic park 5

Maste
12-22-2007, 10:47 PM
yo jaze thats nice but the middle of the e is missin ;) haha but it does look weird and the heart on the bottom of the A is cool but doesnt really flow with the rest
atlok your real thin bars a a tiny bit too thin if you made em fatter itd be better and nice clouds i like the ones of the bottom better
maze thats pretty dope haha i know you prolly already know but it sorta looks like the dinos arms are comin out from behind maybe fix that next time
heres mine:
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2746/sedtwoxe2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and i know the forcefeild is a bit off i was usin a hella old highlighter
edit: oh and i woulda liked the stilts to be brown but i have no brown markers

Buhda420
12-22-2007, 11:33 PM
i am really digging that atlok one itd be cool in like a light purple =]

Dryft
12-22-2007, 11:35 PM
Uhm yea, i just started so constructive criticism please
haha, k, first time putting pics up, I have more but a lot isn't good at all..
I've been surfing these forums for a while, gathering tips and stuff uhm, I tried to stick with keeping it simple, block letters and stuff

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/graff001.jpg
Bad choice on colors...
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/DSC02664.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/DSC02633.jpg

I don't have a name I do by yet, righting BE EZ = Be Easy.. which is just something I say alot..

Feedback is wanted :]

BUMP

Kool-Aid Man
12-22-2007, 11:53 PM
Haze - dope but the L looks out of place a bit.
Atlok - yeah just make some bars bigger looks good.
Jaze - i really like how the e and j are the same shape.
dryft - come up with a name, and yeah its good your doing blockbuster style but you should allso work on letters like the ones that you see on your keyboard this will help you get structure.

MARVY
12-22-2007, 11:56 PM
the first one would make an aight rooftop roller

Evasion Of Invasion
12-23-2007, 12:32 AM
Bouncing Soul dope as fuck keep it up
Atlok that shits fresh i like it
Maste aint feelin it rock some straight letters
heres my new throw pretty generic but w/e i like it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/throw-2.jpg
crits?

infektion
12-23-2007, 12:45 AM
hey im new to this shit
just wondering what you guys think
constructive crits please

http://i14.tinypic.com/89l2f03.jpg

hazetheone
12-23-2007, 12:48 AM
that e is hot
but tone it down man
try bars go read the new too graffiti thread and yea
i think you have potential man

mosezone
12-23-2007, 12:52 AM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo-4.jpg

fuck it, i couldn't get any good sketches today. crits anyways?

EDIT: and it looks shitty in some spots because my marker was running out.

Evasion Of Invasion
12-23-2007, 12:57 AM
i got a crit for both infektion and mose CRIT BEFORE U ASK FOR EM ASSHOLE!!!

mosezone
12-23-2007, 01:06 AM
haha alright dude, chill out. your throwies look pretty nice, i'm especially feeling the longer EVADE ones. and fek, that's pretty good for what sounds like one of your first sketches. like haze said, i'd try to lose the random bumps and shit and get simpler letters. but those are looking a lot better than most beginners.

alright, crits now?

Evasion Of Invasion
12-23-2007, 01:08 AM
make ur letters one piece and thickin up ur outline

hazetheone
12-23-2007, 01:16 AM
evade that shit looks decent man
if there is any difference except some have more letters than others
then i dont see it
mozes i cant put my finger on what it is but i actualy like that a lot

mosezone
12-23-2007, 01:23 AM
thanks. that jaze piece on the last page is fiiirre. i especially dig that J.

Maste
12-23-2007, 01:33 AM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2746/sedtwoxe2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and i know the forcefeild is a bit off i was usin a hella old highlighter
edit: oh and i woulda liked the stilts to be brown but i have no brown markers



i just realized that havin the e and d go different ways fucks with the flow... but anwyas..any more crits??

and to all you crazy ass kids...i already gave crits so calm the fuck down

JEDI-MASTER
12-23-2007, 01:47 AM
work on letter structure.....better markers.....

STES1
12-23-2007, 06:44 AM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6158/dsc00214sn1.jpg STES1

mas$
12-23-2007, 07:55 AM
trade with Atlok7 and a new backpack i customed
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/7323/pic094pd7.jpg
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4536/pic092jw6.jpg
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/6599/pic093ky0.jpg

Stes, the E hole looks a bit retarded:P
Fek, its a good startin point, try a couple less random bumps cus the letters are ayt

atlok7
12-23-2007, 08:18 AM
ill trading with my man bare.

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/661/photo85tk3.jpg

bare-- dope pack

mas$
12-23-2007, 08:30 AM
thanks Atlok
that Bare piece is bangin, so's the Handie:p
only crit is that the R looks like an A a bit
but still, thanks for the exchange