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Puffer
02-07-2006, 08:33 PM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 08:02 PM
a bomb and tag under my new name
COERCE
i did it fast, thats why the choppiness on the shadow so plz excuse that
unless ppl tell me its terrible and im just oblivious to it im gonna paint it 2mrw and get pics

please give me all of your thoughts, good and bad, as long as they r helpful

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6541/dsc007923nn.jpg


thanks so much
yeah fix the r a bit, and on the e's and c's have it so that thing doesnt go soo far up just bring it down a bit, and have the ! a bit fatter and closer to te last letter, and just the handstyle , work on that, thats it, not too much to improve

alive
02-07-2006, 08:39 PM
aiight well thanks 4 ur help,
on the e i was trying to go for a lowercase e,
a slight cope 2 bite im ashamed to admit
and yes, i did think it resembled an r
lol
but ill work on it, any suggestions for that?

btw, is it good enough to paint?

thanks again so much,
coerce

Sluts_r_us
02-07-2006, 08:41 PM
i wouldnt suggest painting it...

alive
02-07-2006, 08:50 PM
ouch

any suggestions then?
u cant just say that and leave me hanging

pleeeeeeeeeease?

AMAZ tbscrew
02-07-2006, 09:13 PM
yes....make ur sig smaller and dont paint it... :D

no just change ur e's i guess..i mean they dont even look like a bite.

AMAZ tbscrew
02-07-2006, 09:13 PM
double post...ummm uhhh.... soo uh ill bump suttin i guess

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/eve.../Picture020.jpg (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture020.jpg)

seno2
02-07-2006, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM
seno r u in nyc?
nah man. midweeest

AoAssis
02-07-2006, 09:52 PM
Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
help? you don&#39;t need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out

faint rem one
02-07-2006, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked :D

acek
02-07-2006, 09:59 PM
new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch


http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/8263/sezamsketchpaint5by.png

crits and comments on the letters plz

cess!
02-07-2006, 10:05 PM
yo yoyo hope i get some good words for this..i would blurt out the handstyles at the top cus i was just dickin around so dont pay any attention to em

good night
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesgreenyeller001.jpg

xAWOKE.925
02-07-2006, 10:30 PM
Uuh...i can&#39;t even really tell at all what it is. It&#39;s like a crazy shaped piece. The fill is kinda cool but the letters are mad wack.

Nyc Sno
02-07-2006, 10:36 PM
Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nyc Sno@Feb 6 2006, 06:28 PM
just working on some throwies tell me what u think
which one is better



http://i1.tinypic.com/nccvtl.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
sorry to bump again :( :(

acek
02-07-2006, 10:46 PM
new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch


http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/8263/sezamsketchpaint5by.png

crits and comments on the letters plz

bump

AMAZ tbscrew
02-07-2006, 10:59 PM
^^3d will make it look better..i think

and mace keep workin on it..i like #1 better

ylive4death2come
02-08-2006, 03:17 AM
Originally posted by faint rem one+Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (faint rem one @ Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.
tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked :D [/b][/quote]
i know thats wat made me angry. i come to more experienced people for help and immature people like you just waste your time to do this.

ylive4death2come
02-08-2006, 03:24 AM
Originally posted by AoAssis+Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.
help? you don&#39;t need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out [/b][/quote]
look. just shut up. im not even replying to anymore shit from now on immature bitches can say what they want instead of posting their work or doing something constructive.

KANZ-KONVIKS
02-08-2006, 04:26 AM
just a couple

feedback wanted hard yo&#33;


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1489.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1488.jpg

weldo
02-08-2006, 04:33 AM
KANZ-KONVIKS ur second peice is dope dont like the 1st one but ur handy on the end looks like a ball sack
help please sorry really shit photos :(
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2804/cci000008dw.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4828/cci000013lq.png (http://imageshack.us)

fonek1211
02-08-2006, 07:54 AM
Nice ones there weldo, but the coloring on the second one sucks... Get some markers or something to make it looks cleaner... I can&#39;t read what it says... I think I&#39;m getting kazae?? Also both of them look almost exactly the same other than the coloring and a few other parts... Nice work though... I like...

Anyways, I wanted to know what you guys use to outline your stuff...

Uhhh, I&#39;ll try to get some pics on here asap cuz my camera&#39;s dead right now... Soon though&#33;&#33;

fonek1211
02-08-2006, 08:01 AM
Nice ones there weldo, but the coloring on the second one sucks... Get some markers or something to make it looks cleaner... I can&#39;t read what it says... I think I&#39;m getting kazae?? Also both of them look almost exactly the same other than the coloring and a few other parts... Nice work though... I like...

Anyways, I wanted to know what you guys use to outline your stuff...

Uhhh, I&#39;ll try to get some pics on here asap cuz my camera&#39;s dead right now... Soon though&#33;&#33;

cnttouchths6777
02-08-2006, 02:49 PM
any one want to give me some help on how to put a pic on this thing, iv been trying for a while and i just dont know where to go

cess!
02-08-2006, 03:56 PM
^ just make a photobucket account..and use the img link and paste it right on..or go to imageshack and copy the picture location that you uploaded(its given right to you) then put at the beginning and end of the image..

awoke i made this a little simpler to see..i didnt think it was that confusing
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/madeeasy.jpg

seno2
02-08-2006, 05:25 PM
Yo nother sketch i did in school.. haha :)

http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/4544/image1260yh.jpg

wutchu thinkkk?

TricksForKids
02-08-2006, 05:29 PM
not diggin the middle of the E, and first S, other than that its banginm, still like your simpler style more though

Peace

cess!
02-08-2006, 05:39 PM
i think the e gets overlapped too much..other wise its pretty nice

in detention today
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesSquid002.jpg

TricksForKids
02-08-2006, 05:45 PM
that bottom style is HOT man, im not feelin that squid, even though its alright, but honestly, take some time and clean up that bottom piece, that style would just be so easy and fresh to paint, nice man

faint rem one
02-08-2006, 06:06 PM
seno, i agree with regs, the E is a bit off, but otherwise dope shit as always :)

cess, man, that bottom style is hot.

kief
02-08-2006, 06:19 PM
I did these last night, didn&#39;t have any good paper (just used an old school organizer thing) or markers or anything but for the first things I&#39;ve ever written I&#39;m pretty happy with a couple of them.

This was the first, and my favorite of them all:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/8784/00000321hp.jpg

Shitty little sharpie throw:
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7992/00000335io.jpg

Pretty ugly thing I tried to do a little 3d with:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/6886/00000349tu.jpg

This pic is pretty blurry but I liked the K on it:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/9112/00000352cm.jpg

I kinda threw this shitty character in randomly... the mouth is screwed and the f is kinda lame:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/4364/00000368ie.jpg

...and my least favorite of them all:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/125/00000375ug.jpg

So... anybody want to give me some pointers?

Myme
02-08-2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name

cess!
02-08-2006, 06:56 PM
thanks fellas

Sluts_r_us
02-08-2006, 06:58 PM
workin on a throw for my new name...i cant make a p that i like...feed though...

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9641/pesk0036gi.jpg

or

http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/2404/pesk0016qh.jpg

which is better?

beltonmoltow
02-08-2006, 07:03 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b2/bapeski/gusjer.jpg

GUSH

advice

TUNE2
02-08-2006, 07:04 PM
the second one it looks a lot fresher

acek
02-08-2006, 07:44 PM
gush that dope.. i like a lot your colours

whick marker do you use?

beltonmoltow
02-08-2006, 07:46 PM
prisma&#39;s and decos

MUSASHI
02-08-2006, 08:39 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6541/3ghosts8mu.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3ghosts8mu.jpg)

are you feelin&#39; this?

cess!
02-08-2006, 08:45 PM
those ghosts made me laugh i dunno if in a good way or a bad way

BOOGIEMAN
02-08-2006, 08:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:

beltonmoltow
02-08-2006, 09:04 PM
i would say keep your letter width even

cess!
02-08-2006, 09:05 PM
that S in risk looks alright you shud keep it
besides that just practice evryday

heres somethin i dunno if its an improvment im still molding this style..and yeah the fish has ears
and nostrils
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesfish003.jpg

fonek1211
02-08-2006, 09:14 PM
Gush, I like your colors a lot... Seno&#39;s is tight too... Dude, I still need some help with the outlining thing... What do you guys use to outline??? Help would be appreciated thanks&#33;&#33;

whatsgoinon
02-08-2006, 09:21 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blah5fp.jpg

just a quick sketch i put together today no 3d or anythin yet jus wanted some opinions to see wat can be improved holler

fonek1211
02-08-2006, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by BOOGIEMAN@Feb 8 2006, 08:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:
Nice... Like beltonmoltow said, keep your letter width even... Especially with your i&#39;s... Other than that, it looks pretty good... Clean and nice color choices...Some letter structure could use some work though... Like the b in the first one sucks... Keep working on it though&#33;&#33;

fonek1211
02-08-2006, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by BOOGIEMAN@Feb 8 2006, 08:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:
Nice... Like beltonmoltow said, keep your letter width even... Especially with your i&#39;s... Other than that, it looks pretty good... Clean and nice color choices...Some letter structure could use some work though... Like the b in the first one sucks... Keep working on it though&#33;&#33;

kief
02-08-2006, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.

beltonmoltow
02-08-2006, 09:43 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b2/bapeski/gushpink.jpg

did this in like 5 secounds :ph34r:

cess if you work out the bugs that style would look ight

humano
02-08-2006, 10:12 PM
yo cess i like that style, the colours are dope, but i have no
idea what it says, does anyone?
nice caracter aswell

505 artist
02-08-2006, 10:19 PM
Smoke in Seno i love ur shit man :D

AoAssis
02-08-2006, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by KANZ&#045;KONVIKS@Feb 8 2006, 04:26 AM
just a couple

feedback wanted hard yo&#33;


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1489.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1488.jpg
i like i like

humano
02-08-2006, 10:45 PM
here r sum pics i did in the past few days
new carak i tried still developin it
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500000.jpg[/IMG]
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jer...4-2-1500001.jpg (http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500001.jpg)[/IMG]
any opinons/feedback what ev
peace :wacko:

humano
02-08-2006, 10:54 PM
two more







http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500003.jpg[/IMG]


http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/aba6745e.jpg[/IMG]

^^^ is is wack i no
any thoughts

MUSASHI
02-08-2006, 11:22 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/7853/edge1uv.th.jpg (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=edge1uv.jpg)

thought I&#39;d post this since the thread is pinned...cant wait to get some prismas,but the kit&#39;s like 80 bucks ...ya&#39;ll know that though

MUSASHI
02-08-2006, 11:26 PM
I like that stuff humano..it&#39;s really cool the top one not so much ...essay handstyle is tight but saurus isn&#39;t hittin&#39; so hard

Ume
02-08-2006, 11:34 PM
not really a blackbook, but whatever..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/greenyblueish1.jpg
i need to get one of those tablit things, or something, clean this computer out, it keeps like darting off to the side every couple seconds.

knowlij
02-08-2006, 11:35 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4034/imga00419qr.th.jpg (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00419qr.jpg)


http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1076/imga00425jk.th.jpg (http://img142.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00425jk.jpg)


http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1333/imga00439nd.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00439nd.jpg)

http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/3798/imga00442qb.th.jpg (http://img289.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00442qb.jpg)

knowlij
02-09-2006, 12:11 AM
crits ^^^

flclnaruto1213
02-09-2006, 12:27 AM
try less complicated color schemes...

kill
02-09-2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it

AKEN.
02-09-2006, 02:36 AM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Feb 8 2006, 08:39 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6541/3ghosts8mu.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3ghosts8mu.jpg)

are you feelin&#39; this?
if the whole "shark" thing is intentional thats pretty dope.

fonek1211
02-09-2006, 02:52 AM
Dude, I didn&#39;t even notice that shark thing... Props man if that was on purpose

fonek1211
02-09-2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...

C3ZR ONE
02-09-2006, 07:24 AM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 8 2006, 05:39 PM
i think the e gets overlapped too much..other wise its pretty nice

in detention today
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesSquid002.jpg
Word... I had to bump this one. The squid is ill Cess..And the little boat in the air. :lol: You come up with some origional shit, one thing that wigs me out though is you seem to have a scratchy way of sketching. Do you paint?

I hate it when I forget to log out at night.

---CRoR---
02-09-2006, 11:01 AM
heres an outline of my throwy... not the best lookin but im still working on it.....

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7755/im0011399oj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

soba06
02-09-2006, 11:23 AM
did this today any tips ?
http://img286.imageshack.us/img286/4562/pyrosketch8wz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i like it but the r is a bit sh*t

cess!
02-09-2006, 03:29 PM
yeah cezr thats just the way iv been doin my stuff.kind of messy..i dont paint..used to but got bagged..once i can drive ill be painting

cror you shud clean it up and color it it wud look cool most likely

beltonmoltow
02-09-2006, 03:29 PM
keep it simple for a while and cut the character

Ume
02-09-2006, 04:00 PM
bored in school, messed up the U though.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/schooly.jpg

cess!
02-09-2006, 04:10 PM
i think i like your train better

*and some stuff i got..
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesd005.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesd001.jpg

Puffer
02-09-2006, 04:29 PM
i like your bomb, very clean and would look good painted, you piece is good to, but i like the first one of that piece you posted better

AMAZ tbscrew
02-09-2006, 04:41 PM
i dont like ur pieces anymore cess...i think ur going over bored with it..ur lossin ur letter structure.... my 2 cents

Puffer
02-09-2006, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by kief+Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kief @ Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick. [/b][/quote]
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style

cnttouchths6777
02-09-2006, 04:52 PM
this is my first pic. any one and everyone please give me some advicehttp://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e279/cnttouchths6777/DSC01031.jpg

Puffer
02-09-2006, 04:54 PM
well atleast you started out simple, just practice for along ass time, and dont quit

TNS_NOPE
02-09-2006, 05:16 PM
ces, im likin your throwie, pretty sick..

Sluts_r_us
02-09-2006, 05:34 PM
some simple i was workin on at like 12 cuz i couldnt sleep lol...
http://img348.imageshack.us/img348/3351/pesksimple3ro.jpg

cess!
02-09-2006, 05:47 PM
im just trying to develop it, trying new things with it..i havnt stuck with a definate one yet..

Sluts_r_us
02-09-2006, 05:51 PM
i like the one wit the grey n yellow fill...i like that style

kief
02-09-2006, 05:55 PM
Originally posted by Puffer+Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Puffer @ Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kief@Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style [/b][/quote]
Sure, he&#39;s a good writer, I never said anything about that. Doesn&#39;t make him any less of a dick. I don&#39;t give a shit if you two like my name or not, that&#39;s not changing because a couple douche bags online think it&#39;s lame, but I know I&#39;m a toy and I want to get better, so just ignore the name and look at the sketches.

AMAZ tbscrew
02-09-2006, 06:05 PM
^^ i think you should write lame...

Sluts_r_us
02-09-2006, 06:13 PM
updated simple sketch....

http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/2822/pesk0052ah.jpg

other sketch from before...colored lol...

http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/2996/pesk0045zw.jpg

cess!
02-09-2006, 06:31 PM
kief has a point

e beef is pointless..plus name changes happen all the time

kief
02-09-2006, 06:45 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Feb 9 2006, 06:05 PM
^^ i think you should write lame...
I think that was a really pointless post.

505 artist
02-09-2006, 06:48 PM
Originally posted by weldo@Feb 8 2006, 04:33 AM
KANZ-KONVIKS ur second peice is dope dont like the 1st one but ur handy on the end looks like a ball sack
help please sorry really shit photos :(
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2804/cci000008dw.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4828/cci000013lq.png (http://imageshack.us)
nice ones big as arrows a sic ass style

humano
02-09-2006, 07:03 PM
did these today any thoughts, comments?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1600004.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1600000.jpg

ylive4death2come
02-09-2006, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by whatsgoinon@Feb 8 2006, 09:21 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blah5fp.jpg

just a quick sketch i put together today no 3d or anythin yet jus wanted some opinions to see wat can be improved holler
that looks sick, i think it would look best w/ a shadow instead of 3d tho

MUSASHI
02-09-2006, 08:26 PM
hey guy&#39;s thanx for the props...the shark thing just happened with the g& h then i went with it since sharks are like the ghost&#39;s of the ocean and it fit the whole theme...glad you liked it...humano your comin up man.props...id quote but i&#39;m too lazy to figure out how to

CL3ver1
02-09-2006, 08:57 PM
some new stuff
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/10/69/10479601_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/15/89/10479851_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/31/99/10479913_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/96/99/10479969_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/60/37/10267306_l.jpg

505 artist
02-09-2006, 09:21 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6756.jpg

comments it not done
dunno how to 3rd this one

cess!
02-09-2006, 09:21 PM
uno
i like the first three, the second one the most, you shud work with it more

CL3ver1
02-09-2006, 09:26 PM
thanks cess...im feelin your new ish to im likein this long style for some reason.ever since i watched mib3 haha.
505 lookin good man. wish i could tell you what to do with that 3d maybe pull it all back? or down idk

505 artist
02-09-2006, 09:34 PM
thanks cleaver that what im doing
man this peice has tooo many add ons i think
the letters some dont even show
but oh well lol :lol:

AMAZ tbscrew
02-09-2006, 09:36 PM
^^^yeh pull the 3d back

CL3ver1
02-09-2006, 09:37 PM
pssh o well still looks fesh man props.

505 artist
02-09-2006, 09:38 PM
aw ahit i did it down the 3 d sorry
but it coming al rite

cess!
02-09-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by CL3ver1@Feb 9 2006, 09:26 PM
thanks cess...im feelin your new ish to im likein this long style for some reason.ever since i watched mib3 haha.

yeah thanks..
whats up with mib3 ? my stuff doenst look too much like it does it? i try to stay as original as i can..i just did somethin up ill post it when i get a pic..

CL3ver1
02-09-2006, 09:51 PM
naw yoh i didnt meen it like that.i ment to put a periosd but i guess not. naw like that euro train long arty style i guess? idk it looks hot. mib3 is some where on the 2nd page of the picture thread you should watch it those trains are nasty.

cess!
02-09-2006, 09:56 PM
ill definatly check it out..

cess!
02-09-2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg

kill
02-09-2006, 10:38 PM
Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo

AMAZ tbscrew
02-09-2006, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
:wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

AoAssis
02-09-2006, 10:39 PM
nice, cant wait till this style developes, only thing i dont like about pieces that ride on the botom of the paper is the rest of the paper just seems waisted,atleast thats how i feel when i do my pieces that ride on the botom

505 artist
02-09-2006, 10:46 PM
Originally posted by 505 artist@Feb 9 2006, 09:21 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6756.jpg

comments it not done
dunno how to 3rd this one
short temper :angry: i fuked up and rolled it and trew it :angry:

kief
02-09-2006, 10:51 PM
Yeah cess I really like that shit

JETc17
02-09-2006, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
eww



your losing all of your structure :ph34r:

AMAZ tbscrew
02-09-2006, 10:58 PM
^^dosnt matter...alot of graffiti dosnt have letter structure....now that i look at it its more of a design but its still hot

Sluts_r_us
02-09-2006, 11:53 PM
i see the letters...that shits hot cess...so are those colors...

throw i have been workin on:
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2073/peskthrow0014oz.jpg

kill
02-10-2006, 12:22 AM
Originally posted by kill+Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo [/b][/quote]
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff

ion-i
02-10-2006, 12:43 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_wings.jpg

kill
02-10-2006, 12:54 AM
3d is bad and the extensions look bad

Ume
02-10-2006, 01:06 AM
where is the 3d bad?

ion-i
02-10-2006, 01:16 AM
Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 09:54 PM
3d is bad and the extensions look bad
That&#39;s not even constructive criticism, that&#39;s just pointless remarks mocking my drawing.
The 3D is meant to be appearing from the middle. So both sides of the piece have the 3D coming from the bottom-center. I don&#39;t know what&#39;s wrong with it..

Whatev though.

faint rem one
02-10-2006, 01:18 AM
Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:54 AM
3d is bad and the extensions look bad
do better....

and cess, that style is dope no doubt

gnarlatron3030
02-10-2006, 01:29 AM
I actually like it

no crits

kill
02-10-2006, 01:33 AM
i didnt know know that it was suppose to be comin from bith sides mi bad

kill
02-10-2006, 01:37 AM
mock mi drawin if u want

humano
02-10-2006, 01:41 AM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/sarussecondstage00000.jpg

kill
02-10-2006, 01:45 AM
letter structure bad

fonek1211
02-10-2006, 06:57 AM
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 09:21 AM
your E is overlapped too much by the n....try to spacce them out more...

there is something i just do not like about it but cant seem to place it...no beef tho...

fonek1211
02-10-2006, 10:27 AM
Alright, I&#39;ll try doing that... I think since I didn&#39;t have enough space I did that... No problem dude... I dunno think about it and tell me... I guess I&#39;ll start coloring then...

Mse
02-10-2006, 11:39 AM
soo tired must nit sleep
b&w
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6679/homieisnotcoloredno3d0sq.jpg

colored
[IMG]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5587/homieiscoloredno3d1bp.jpg[/IMG

faint rem one
02-10-2006, 01:48 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5587/homieiscoloredno3d1bp.jpg

*fixed for mse*

Mse
02-10-2006, 01:56 PM
hee didnt notice thanks
any comments?

faint rem one
02-10-2006, 01:58 PM
ok, that piece is mad trippy, and i kinda like the style of it, but whats it say, and the karak is ill, i love his half exposed brain. haha.

Mse
02-10-2006, 02:04 PM
i cant be fucked to finish the char see the mouth i didnt put the othe side of the cheek or whatever :(
and it says
http://img497.imageshack.us/img497/5391/forsent3d9ax.jpg

REMO+RTW
02-10-2006, 02:19 PM
http://i1.tinypic.com/ngvn1x.jpg[/img]]old wildstyle of mine ([img)

REMO+RTW
02-10-2006, 02:25 PM
http://i1.tinypic.com/ngvqxg.jpg[/img]]crew members graff ([img)

EatRichPeople
02-10-2006, 02:38 PM
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz? By the way question to some experianced heads, do you do the whole 3d without ruler something to measure? I did this without but it came out pritty croocked.

peace

cess!
02-10-2006, 02:50 PM
take more time with your letters..make them more legible ..and sometimes i use a ruler..sometimes no..its whatever your comfortable with


post one Thousand

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 02:54 PM
lol cess get a life.....jk im almost therewith you....lol

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 03:04 PM
heres my throw...changed the e.....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskthrow002.jpg

beltonmoltow
02-10-2006, 03:47 PM
pesk your throw up is mad plane add some style :D

kief
02-10-2006, 04:04 PM
Some more toy shit for y&#39;all to laugh at:

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/6512/00000326et.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/9272/00000338yj.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/3938/00000345oe.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/3479/00000352rl.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/8376/00000367xs.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/377/00000378cz.jpg

Crits? I&#39;ll get some better paper, and some markers and stuff soon.

T R E O
02-10-2006, 04:10 PM
^^since you said so..
lmao&#33;haha.naw.jk.
anyways.
they dont look great.keep workin at it.go a tad bit simpler.work on the 3D also.its kindve fucked.

Mse
02-10-2006, 04:11 PM
well your doing better than most people starting out
just keep it simple adding a little bit of flavour
good work

beltonmoltow
02-10-2006, 04:20 PM
kief no offence but change your name man its kinda lame

kief
02-10-2006, 06:10 PM
What&#39;s so lame about the name kief?

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 06:26 PM
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/7477/pesksticker1ko.jpg

some sticker i did...

cess!
02-10-2006, 07:54 PM
thats not bad..finally your colorin stuff hah

beltonmoltow
02-10-2006, 08:42 PM
im not feelin the big holes in the P and E

Myme
02-10-2006, 09:10 PM
^That sig image is crazy.. Our eyes are trippy

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 09:43 PM
that shit in his sig is mad old...

and yeah cess i felt like colorin...

Sparkz
02-10-2006, 10:01 PM
Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Feb 10 2006, 02:38 PM
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz? By the way question to some experianced heads, do you do the whole 3d without ruler something to measure? I did this without but it came out pritty croocked.

peace
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy

seno2
02-10-2006, 10:09 PM
yo well heres a new style im working on.. trying to devoolpe it&#33; :-&#092;
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4595/image1576pv.jpg

Sluts_r_us
02-10-2006, 10:11 PM
shits tight seno

Ume
02-10-2006, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by Sparkz@Feb 10 2006, 11:01 PM
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy
so what if your using it already? is he in the same area code as you? even the same country? your not gonna be keeping the name forever either, plus his looks better then yours.

cess!
02-10-2006, 10:43 PM
judging by what eat rich people put up, im sure thats open for debate ume..

seno2
02-10-2006, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by seno2@Feb 10 2006, 10:09 PM
yo well heres a new style im working on.. trying to devoolpe it&#33; :-&#092;
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4595/image1576pv.jpg
buuump dee bumpzors :D

DynamiteBoy
02-10-2006, 11:03 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*

cess!
02-10-2006, 11:55 PM
seno the point of a bump is to bring it to a new page..but thats lookin good..you shud try and hit up the big boy thread and see if they dont shoot you down

seno2
02-11-2006, 12:04 AM
my bad.. aite ill try right now :-&#092;

ion-i
02-11-2006, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Feb 9 2006, 09:43 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_wings.jpg
bump :)
just wanna see some more crits before I go paint it :)

seno2
02-11-2006, 12:25 AM
i liek i like.. just the N thats kinda iffy for me.. but all in all very nice

Puffer
02-11-2006, 12:38 AM
Originally posted by kief+Feb 9 2006, 05:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kief @ Feb 9 2006, 05:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Puffer@Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM

Originally posted by kief@Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style
Sure, he&#39;s a good writer, I never said anything about that. Doesn&#39;t make him any less of a dick. I don&#39;t give a shit if you two like my name or not, that&#39;s not changing because a couple douche bags online think it&#39;s lame, but I know I&#39;m a toy and I want to get better, so just ignore the name and look at the sketches. [/b][/quote]
cock knobbler

flclnaruto1213
02-11-2006, 12:41 AM
kief your f looks like shit in all your stuff , get a new name.

and sluts the blue throw on the sticker, the pe is wack and the sk is good

Sluts_r_us
02-11-2006, 12:59 AM
ye i suck at p&#39;s...n i got no ideas for the e..lol

Ume
02-11-2006, 01:09 AM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 10 2006, 11:43 PM
judging by what eat rich people put up, im sure thats open for debate ume..
sadly, i was hoping the same, but i went and looked at his posts...and eatrichpeople is better.

Sluts_r_us
02-11-2006, 01:14 AM
ahh so eatrichpeople is a peson lol....i wasnt sure if he didnt spell somethin rite so i was like wtf....im tired and this post is useless lol...w.e.

UKCsire
02-11-2006, 03:15 AM
a little somethin I did for the enter battle

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/graff003.jpg

ehh...!?!
02-11-2006, 03:25 AM
sire do u consider urself a toy or something since u posted that here?

UKCsire
02-11-2006, 03:54 AM
I dunno man...I don&#39;t really think about stuff like whether I consider myself a "toy" or not...doesn&#39;t really matter to me...if I&#39;m a toy, oh well, if not, great - won&#39;t affect my drawings really...annnnnd I just wanted to get some comments on the piece maybe some crits...

fonek1211
02-11-2006, 04:48 AM
Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz???? [/b][/quote]
bump... :rolleyes:

news
02-11-2006, 05:01 AM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f282/news2/DSCF0173.jpg

still needs sum work ohh well critz

faint rem one
02-11-2006, 05:29 AM
Originally posted by UKCsire@Feb 11 2006, 03:15 AM
a little somethin I did for the enter battle

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/graff003.jpg
and to think i ALMOST joined this battle.

:lol:

dope shit sire.

fonek1211
02-11-2006, 06:34 AM
Nice Sire... I&#39;m still trying to come up with something better... God dammit this is hard...

The coloring is really nice.. I like it...

For news... Nice way to start off simple but try and add a little something to the h since it looks just like the one on my keyboard

Sparkz
02-11-2006, 11:26 AM
Originally posted by Ume+Feb 10 2006, 10:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ume @ Feb 10 2006, 10:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sparkz@Feb 10 2006, 11:01 PM
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy
so what if your using it already? is he in the same area code as you? even the same country? your not gonna be keeping the name forever either, plus his looks better then yours. [/b][/quote]
have u seen any of my stuff?
didnt think so.

cess!
02-11-2006, 11:42 AM
Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
theres too many edges

DynamiteBoy
02-11-2006, 11:48 AM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@Feb 10 2006, 11:03 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*
crits?

cess!
02-11-2006, 11:52 AM
too many edges

EatRichPeople
02-11-2006, 11:54 AM
@Sparkz and Ume, sorry for the confusion, I wright Seon....just really messed up the S. I didn&#39;t really like the style of the lettering anyway but I hadn&#39;t done anything in a while and I wanted to practice shading....didn&#39;t really work yet.
And cess thanx for the critz.

Klaz
02-11-2006, 11:54 AM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy+Feb 11 2006, 11:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DynamiteBoy @ Feb 11 2006, 11:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DynamiteBoy@Feb 10 2006, 11:03 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*
crits? [/b][/quote]
Darko is taken by someone alot better than you.

i see your gettin experimental but stick to straight letters then try and throw some stuff in.

EatRichPeople
02-11-2006, 01:56 PM
some stuff from a while ago.

http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2326/camelklein16vg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CAMEL

http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/5571/erb6yq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ERB

critz

Silvar
02-11-2006, 02:10 PM
^^^a prime example of how simple lettering can lead to great things. watch and learn kiddies

looks nice man, props. v clean too

faint rem one
02-11-2006, 02:22 PM
agreed^

EatRichPeople
02-11-2006, 02:32 PM
thanx both...hope it will eventually lead to great things :)

peace

c0ld
02-11-2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....

cess!
02-11-2006, 06:05 PM
eatrichpeople
you went from this
http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2326/camelklein16vg.jpg

to this?
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg


go back to the original straight letter one its much doper

c0ld
02-11-2006, 07:48 PM
*bump*

feedback.......plz.......^

repo302
02-11-2006, 07:58 PM
i dont see any thing that changed since your last post cold

c0ld
02-11-2006, 08:43 PM
it is.

i tried to do the letters neater/better looking.
i made em all the same size.
i got rid of the HUGANTIC border.

and my first attempt at block letters is there too......so..........

MUSASHI
02-11-2006, 09:54 PM
well here&#39;s another one for ya ...just wanting to see what ya&#39;ll thought &#39;bout it...cuz i think it&#39;s the style i&#39;m gonna go with cuz you can fill it so many different ways and i like it http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3464/adroitsketch8xi.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=adroitsketch8xi.jpg)

DynamiteBoy
02-11-2006, 10:02 PM
does it matter if you have the same name as somebody? just as long as you live in different cities? cause thats what one of my friends told me

MUSASHI
02-11-2006, 10:20 PM
alli gotta say is this to the question above...using someone elses name is the same as cheating...what i suggest is to find a dictionary find a really obscure word that pops when you read it...another example lets say you have this dope ass style and it really burns but you use a name that someone else has been using for years and that dude comes to your town and see&#39;s your shit with his name ...how would you feel if the situation was reversed?

dwell on this until the situation is resolved in your mind...or consider another path

c0ld
02-11-2006, 10:20 PM
Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
well youre a lot better than me but my advice is to change that F at the beginning. It looks like it says EONEK, so ya, take that line off the bottom of the F.

c0ld
02-11-2006, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_<

EatRichPeople
02-11-2006, 11:04 PM
Youre right cess..thanx

peace

kill
02-11-2006, 11:08 PM
Originally posted by kill+Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff [/b][/quote]
can sum one please give me sum crits

DynamiteBoy
02-11-2006, 11:08 PM
does anyone have the name "orbis"?

c0ld
02-11-2006, 11:20 PM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM
does anyone have the name "orbis"?
wrong thred for this, bud.

check the toys forum main page again, I think the right ones up there :)

DynamiteBoy
02-11-2006, 11:22 PM
yeah i found it thanks :)

c0ld
02-11-2006, 11:26 PM
np :)

TricksForKids
02-11-2006, 11:26 PM
ok, because graffiti has become so incredibly mainstream, and is now the "cool" thing to do, we&#39;re settling something on names.

Your name is yours, and thats all that matters, if someone else writes it in your area, you fight for it, and try to be better than the other person.

Obviously dont take someones name whos a king, for example dont start writing cope 2 and taki 183, youd just be an idiot...

and if someone writes your name, or you write theirs in another city,country,area, then who the hell cares?

Peace

C3ZR ONE
02-11-2006, 11:30 PM
Word.. Tricks knows..

c0ld
02-11-2006, 11:33 PM
Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_< [/b][/quote]
bump.

DynamiteBoy
02-11-2006, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 11:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 11:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_<
bump. [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m not that much better than you but i&#39;ll give you some feedback based on my knowledge, i like simplicity over complicated stuff and you should try to study different styles and just derive you own cause the ones you got right now i&#39;m not feelin&#39; your style is consistent though and the 3d is ok just try to vary your style

C3ZR ONE
02-11-2006, 11:50 PM
Cold- You&#39;re right where you should be for a begginer. Start with the boring shit and work your way up. Blocks and bubbles are retarded, but most people need to study them to get down line structure. I would suggest after you get that down to study other work that you like and copy it exactly as an exersise. Don&#39;t post it or claim it. You just do it to learn what you&#39;re doing wrong and how to do it right. You learn the little things that equals quality work quicker that way. Once you&#39;ve done that alot and well, drop it and develope a style of your own.

CL3ver1
02-11-2006, 11:51 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
omg this shit is ill&#33;..cess man.props b

-i-oni..i have a new respect for you man i like that piece you did,,as for everyone else in Nfk.....

SuprTnr2
02-11-2006, 11:51 PM
C3ZR, you gots a PM.

C3ZR ONE
02-11-2006, 11:54 PM
That&#39;s weird...Cuzz actually, I don&#39;t have a PM.. Send it to the right dude?

C3ZR ONE
02-11-2006, 11:55 PM
My bad. It said I didn&#39;t, but I did.....

c0ld
02-12-2006, 12:00 AM
good to actually get real feedback and not

"YOU SUCK&#33;"

thnx.

DynamiteBoy
02-12-2006, 12:02 AM
no problem man just keep trying.

well can someone critique my work? As i&#39;ve sad before i&#39;m kinda new

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8046/pict17280tp.jpg

cess!
02-12-2006, 12:04 AM
thank you clever.

tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................

C3ZR ONE
02-12-2006, 12:06 AM
It&#39;s not too bad.. ;) The letter structure is descent and your handstyle is reasonable. Work on your 3d. It looks like you just whipped it out without giving a shit. Good 3d can make a piece twice as good.

C3ZR ONE
02-12-2006, 12:08 AM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 12 2006, 12:04 AM
thank you clever.

tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................
Word... Cess knows too... Getting up will be our death if it sells big..

TricksForKids
02-12-2006, 12:09 AM
hmmm its not bad man, lose those weird indents on each letter, im assuming it says darko? and try to make your letters all the same size, that D is enormous, but it has potential, just try not to do to many addons, and connecting your letters, youll get there

Peace

TricksForKids
02-12-2006, 12:11 AM
and cess, graffiti is definitely mainstream, at least here it is, i live in toronto, its just not as underground as people claim it is, the only reason its not "actually mainstream" is because theres limited way to promote it other than on t-shirts and dvds, but theres millions of people who are into graffiti in the world.

fonek1211
02-12-2006, 12:13 AM
Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 10:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 10:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM

Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes:
well youre a lot better than me but my advice is to change that F at the beginning. It looks like it says EONEK, so ya, take that line off the bottom of the F. [/b][/quote]
Yeah, thanks for the advice man... And cess too... I&#39;ll try and get another sketch up here and this piece colored...

Darko, that&#39;s a pretty cool piece... As for critz, I saw keep all the letters the same size... The a and the o are kinda smaller than the rest... The r and the k are pretty cool but the endings look exactly the same... Try and add some variety in that I guess...

Cess, that shit is awesome dude... I still preferred that red and yellow or orange or whatever piece... That was great... I like the color choice in that piece... Looks really good... Keep it up

Cold, nice way to start off... Your bubble letters look way better than the block ones... Try and add some new things and experiment with the letters and the structure and stuff...

Any more critz for this??

kill
02-12-2006, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by kill+Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill &#064; Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff
can sum one please give me sum crits [/b][/quote]
bump

please give me advice

TricksForKids
02-12-2006, 12:17 AM
kill....where do you write....?.....

AMAZ tbscrew
02-12-2006, 12:22 AM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture027.jpg :mellow: ????


monster created.

kill
02-12-2006, 12:25 AM
i write in sf

what do u think ? damn it&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

TricksForKids
02-12-2006, 12:25 AM
i hope thats not an R... i dunno man, i just dunno, go back to your simpler stuff i think

C3ZR ONE
02-12-2006, 12:25 AM
Oh snap&#33;&#33;&#33; Someones been doin there homework.. And since you didn&#39;t follow my advice and stay off walls (like I said long ago) that&#39;s gonna look tight on a wall. ;) Props Ever... (work on a handstyle to go with it.)
That&#39;s so hot....

DynamiteBoy
02-12-2006, 12:26 AM
Amaz nice stuff, i&#39;m trying to get my letters to flow like that.

and i&#39;ll tkae your guys&#39; advice try to make my letters then same size and try to make it flow better

C3ZR ONE
02-12-2006, 01:13 AM
Well, I&#39;m off to go rave like it&#39;s 1993 again... :lol: Peace out *****s.
WWW.OKIZOO.COM

Mse
02-12-2006, 06:43 AM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2673/cheappp0iv.jpg
nice cess but what doesss it say :D

Sparkz
02-12-2006, 11:58 AM
Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Feb 11 2006, 11:54 AM
@Sparkz and Ume, sorry for the confusion, I wright Seon....just really messed up the S. I didn&#39;t really like the style of the lettering anyway but I hadn&#39;t done anything in a while and I wanted to practice shading....didn&#39;t really work yet.
And cess thanx for the critz.
k man, my bad looked like an a
but now i seen the seon on the side

cess!
02-12-2006, 12:25 PM
mse that looks kind of cool, it wud be better if the letters were a little more defined...sayes Noles

Ume
02-12-2006, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 12 2006, 01:04 AM
tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................
it hasen&#39;t been underground for awhile, maybe the first 10 years that it started, but then movies came out like Style Wars, Beat Street, and Wild Style. when they came out they were released in movie theaters. and graffit has been used in advertising for a long time now, the game is just gonna be that, a game, kids might get inspired to go out and paint, who cares? times just going to sort out the ones that do it because they saw it in a video game and then once they get bored of the game stop painting, and then the kids who play it and get addicted to the real thing....who knows, maybe those kids are gonna be the next big things later on?

SiMpUhL
02-12-2006, 03:12 PM
kay i got some stuff for ya
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0262.jpg
theres a gold FORCEFIELD around the first one
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0240.jpg

sorry some of it is so big

i cant figure out how to resize them

Enemy
02-12-2006, 03:12 PM
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/540/dok8qd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
havent sketched in a long time so... what do u all think??

obsene
02-12-2006, 03:17 PM
nice one enemy :)

Sluts_r_us
02-12-2006, 03:31 PM
yo enemy wtf is ur avatar?

cess!
02-12-2006, 03:43 PM
Originally posted by SiMpUhL@Feb 12 2006, 03:12 PM

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg

whats this say? its very messy

AoAssis
02-12-2006, 03:43 PM
looks like a nipple eh? ya thats wat i thought, but someone else asked before, i think he said it was a can on montana

AoAssis
02-12-2006, 03:44 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;+Feb 12 2006, 03:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess&#33; @ Feb 12 2006, 03:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SiMpUhL@Feb 12 2006, 03:12 PM

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg

whats this say? its very messy [/b][/quote]
haha look at his handstyle, one big arrow goin through it

cess!
02-12-2006, 03:49 PM
at the top right there seems to be some kind of foreign character.. possible Korean??? :huh: :blink:

Enemy
02-12-2006, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Feb 12 2006, 03:31 PM
yo enemy wtf is ur avatar?
in an eyeball getting scraped out of an eyesocket :rolleyes:

cess!
02-12-2006, 06:58 PM
shit..
i never saw it like that


thats disgusting man

noise not music
02-12-2006, 07:00 PM
feed back/constructive crit?

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8341/diesimple6tt.jpg[/UR

Sluts_r_us
02-12-2006, 07:03 PM
it always looked like a tit that was all bloddy to me lol...

Enemy
02-12-2006, 07:13 PM
^^^ hahaha yea i kinda see what u mean :blink: lol
any crit for my sketch like things i need to work on??????

kill
02-12-2006, 07:16 PM
Originally posted by kill+Feb 12 2006, 12:15 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 12 2006, 12:15 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff
can sum one please give me sum crits
bump

please give me advice [/b][/quote]
no one gave me any advice please for the love of god gimmme sum advice

anything

SAFTinator
02-12-2006, 07:20 PM
Comments, criticism, anything would be appreciated. http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft2.jpghttp://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft3.jpghttp://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft1.jpg
sorry its sideways.

noise not music
02-12-2006, 07:22 PM
TO JUICE:

heres my advice..but im a toy too so it proably dosen&#39;t mean shit and im not trying to sound superior,just what I think..

try to make the letters the same height..(symmetrical i guess?)..like how the left side of the U goes in a lot and the other one dosent.. and the one side of the I goes all high and the other dosent..and the overlapping is all mixed up..how the left side of the C goes over the I but then the left side of the U goes under the G .. and try to keep it all the same size...

you dont have to listen to any of that,just what i think from toy-to-toy

Ume
02-12-2006, 07:27 PM
holy fuck i&#39;ve been bored, can&#39;t go out and paint cause no paint and sick...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005601.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005602.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005603.jpg
simple thing, fucked up the U...like usual..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005604.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005605.jpg

flclnaruto1213
02-12-2006, 07:40 PM
sesu no offence but...i think all your painted shit actually looks way better, the only one i liked was the yellow blue fade

kill
02-12-2006, 07:48 PM
i lke the purple sticker nice color
thanks to the guy that gave me advice

noise not music
02-12-2006, 07:52 PM
Originally posted by kill@Feb 12 2006, 07:48 PM

thanks to the guy that gave me advice
word

and SES i like the first purple SES in that post

Ume
02-12-2006, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Feb 12 2006, 08:40 PM
sesu no offence but...i think all your painted shit actually looks way better, the only one i liked was the yellow blue fade
yeah id rather paint, notice i don&#39;t draw THAT much? it&#39;s only every now and then when i do draw, and yeah it&#39;s the only one i liked to. hahaha

flclnaruto1213
02-12-2006, 07:56 PM
lol cool.

your painted shits dope as hell though by the way.

noise not music
02-12-2006, 08:04 PM
Originally posted by noise not music@Feb 12 2006, 07:00 PM
feed back/constructive crit?

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8341/diesimple6tt.jpg[/UR
hate to be a postwhore and do this again..but

Sluts_r_us
02-12-2006, 08:21 PM
sesu....i like the blue fade one n the one before the simple...

cess!
02-12-2006, 08:38 PM
sesu you have a cool style, make sure to always color in the same way tho , cus that brown/green/yellow piece looks messy

Ume
02-12-2006, 08:43 PM
yeah i know, i was in a hurry to finish it before class ended...oh well, you put in little effort and you get shit. haha

cess!
02-12-2006, 09:23 PM
Originally posted by noise not music+Feb 12 2006, 08:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (noise not music @ Feb 12 2006, 08:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-noise not music@Feb 12 2006, 07:00 PM
feed back/constructive crit?

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8341/diesimple6tt.jpg[/UR
hate to be a postwhore and do this again..but [/b][/quote]
is that a P or a D ?
otherwise i can appreciate the simplicity you shud add color tho

Sluts_r_us
02-12-2006, 09:39 PM
^^^you got the 3-d on the arrow wrong if its part of the sketch...

cess!
02-12-2006, 09:42 PM
sup

fuckin around with somethin new
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/weird.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/blue.jpg