Tot Black Books

[MUSASHI]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6387/char6nd.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=char6nd.jpg)

okay....here is something that was made by accident.but it shows how I toned it down according to advice given me...what ya think am i on the right track? I know that i need to work on my marker steadyness ,but that is why i am in the toy forum ,right ..give up some insight

[alive]

a bomb and tag under my new name
COERCE
i did it fast, thats why the choppiness on the shadow so plz excuse that
unless ppl tell me its terrible and im just oblivious to it im gonna paint it 2mrw and get pics

please give me all of your thoughts, good and bad, as long as they r helpful

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6541/dsc007923nn.jpg


thanks so much

[MUSASHI]

the "E"'s and the "R" need some serious rethink on the "E" make the middle nub more pronounced lose the slash in the top arm.... on the "R" do you think it resembles an "R" ? just tryin to help ya out a bit cuz to me the word looks like "COCKCC" dig?

[Puffer]

Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 08:02 PM
a bomb and tag under my new name
COERCE
i did it fast, thats why the choppiness on the shadow so plz excuse that
unless ppl tell me its terrible and im just oblivious to it im gonna paint it 2mrw and get pics

please give me all of your thoughts, good and bad, as long as they r helpful

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6541/dsc007923nn.jpg


thanks so much
yeah fix the r a bit, and on the e's and c's have it so that thing doesnt go soo far up just bring it down a bit, and have the ! a bit fatter and closer to te last letter, and just the handstyle , work on that, thats it, not too much to improve

[alive]

aiight well thanks 4 ur help,
on the e i was trying to go for a lowercase e,
a slight cope 2 bite im ashamed to admit
and yes, i did think it resembled an r
lol
but ill work on it, any suggestions for that?

btw, is it good enough to paint?

thanks again so much,
coerce

[Sluts_r_us]

i wouldnt suggest painting it...

[alive]

ouch

any suggestions then?
u cant just say that and leave me hanging

pleeeeeeeeeease?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

yes....make ur sig smaller and dont paint it... :D

no just change ur e's i guess..i mean they dont even look like a bite.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

double post...ummm uhhh.... soo uh ill bump suttin i guess

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/eve.../Picture020.jpg (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture020.jpg)

[seno2]

Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM
seno r u in nyc?
nah man. midweeest

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
help? you don&#39;t need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out

[faint rem one]

Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked :D

[acek]

new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch


http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/8263/sezamsketchpaint5by.png

crits and comments on the letters plz

[cess!]

yo yoyo hope i get some good words for this..i would blurt out the handstyles at the top cus i was just dickin around so dont pay any attention to em

good night
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesgreenyeller001.jpg

[xAWOKE.925]

Uuh...i can&#39;t even really tell at all what it is. It&#39;s like a crazy shaped piece. The fill is kinda cool but the letters are mad wack.

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nyc Sno@Feb 6 2006, 06:28 PM
just working on some throwies tell me what u think
which one is better



http://i1.tinypic.com/nccvtl.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
sorry to bump again :( :(

[acek]

new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch


http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/8263/sezamsketchpaint5by.png

crits and comments on the letters plz

bump

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^3d will make it look better..i think

and mace keep workin on it..i like #1 better

[ylive4death2come]

Originally posted by faint rem one+Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (faint rem one @ Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.
tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked :D [/b][/quote]
i know thats wat made me angry. i come to more experienced people for help and immature people like you just waste your time to do this.

[ylive4death2come]

Originally posted by AoAssis+Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.
unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.
help? you don&#39;t need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out [/b][/quote]
look. just shut up. im not even replying to anymore shit from now on immature bitches can say what they want instead of posting their work or doing something constructive.

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

just a couple

feedback wanted hard yo&#33;


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1489.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1488.jpg

[weldo]

KANZ-KONVIKS ur second peice is dope dont like the 1st one but ur handy on the end looks like a ball sack
help please sorry really shit photos :(
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2804/cci000008dw.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4828/cci000013lq.png (http://imageshack.us)

[fonek1211]

Nice ones there weldo, but the coloring on the second one sucks... Get some markers or something to make it looks cleaner... I can&#39;t read what it says... I think I&#39;m getting kazae?? Also both of them look almost exactly the same other than the coloring and a few other parts... Nice work though... I like...

Anyways, I wanted to know what you guys use to outline your stuff...

Uhhh, I&#39;ll try to get some pics on here asap cuz my camera&#39;s dead right now... Soon though&#33;&#33;

[fonek1211]

Nice ones there weldo, but the coloring on the second one sucks... Get some markers or something to make it looks cleaner... I can&#39;t read what it says... I think I&#39;m getting kazae?? Also both of them look almost exactly the same other than the coloring and a few other parts... Nice work though... I like...

Anyways, I wanted to know what you guys use to outline your stuff...

Uhhh, I&#39;ll try to get some pics on here asap cuz my camera&#39;s dead right now... Soon though&#33;&#33;

[cnttouchths6777]

any one want to give me some help on how to put a pic on this thing, iv been trying for a while and i just dont know where to go

[cess!]

^ just make a photobucket account..and use the img link and paste it right on..or go to imageshack and copy the picture location that you uploaded(its given right to you) then put at the beginning and end of the image..

awoke i made this a little simpler to see..i didnt think it was that confusing
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/madeeasy.jpg

[seno2]

Yo nother sketch i did in school.. haha :)

http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/4544/image1260yh.jpg

wutchu thinkkk?

[TricksForKids]

not diggin the middle of the E, and first S, other than that its banginm, still like your simpler style more though

Peace

[cess!]

i think the e gets overlapped too much..other wise its pretty nice

in detention today
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesSquid002.jpg

[TricksForKids]

that bottom style is HOT man, im not feelin that squid, even though its alright, but honestly, take some time and clean up that bottom piece, that style would just be so easy and fresh to paint, nice man

[faint rem one]

seno, i agree with regs, the E is a bit off, but otherwise dope shit as always :)

cess, man, that bottom style is hot.

[kief]

I did these last night, didn&#39;t have any good paper (just used an old school organizer thing) or markers or anything but for the first things I&#39;ve ever written I&#39;m pretty happy with a couple of them.

This was the first, and my favorite of them all:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/8784/00000321hp.jpg

Shitty little sharpie throw:
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7992/00000335io.jpg

Pretty ugly thing I tried to do a little 3d with:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/6886/00000349tu.jpg

This pic is pretty blurry but I liked the K on it:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/9112/00000352cm.jpg

I kinda threw this shitty character in randomly... the mouth is screwed and the f is kinda lame:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/4364/00000368ie.jpg

...and my least favorite of them all:
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/125/00000375ug.jpg

So... anybody want to give me some pointers?

[Myme]

worst.name.ever.

get a new name

[cess!]

thanks fellas

[Sluts_r_us]

workin on a throw for my new name...i cant make a p that i like...feed though...

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9641/pesk0036gi.jpg

or

http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/2404/pesk0016qh.jpg

which is better?

[beltonmoltow]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b2/bapeski/gusjer.jpg

GUSH

advice

[TUNE2]

the second one it looks a lot fresher

[acek]

gush that dope.. i like a lot your colours

whick marker do you use?

[beltonmoltow]

prisma&#39;s and decos

[MUSASHI]

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6541/3ghosts8mu.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3ghosts8mu.jpg)

are you feelin&#39; this?

[cess!]

those ghosts made me laugh i dunno if in a good way or a bad way

[BOOGIEMAN]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:

[beltonmoltow]

i would say keep your letter width even

[cess!]

that S in risk looks alright you shud keep it
besides that just practice evryday

heres somethin i dunno if its an improvment im still molding this style..and yeah the fish has ears
and nostrils
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesfish003.jpg

[fonek1211]

Gush, I like your colors a lot... Seno&#39;s is tight too... Dude, I still need some help with the outlining thing... What do you guys use to outline??? Help would be appreciated thanks&#33;&#33;

[whatsgoinon]

http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blah5fp.jpg

just a quick sketch i put together today no 3d or anythin yet jus wanted some opinions to see wat can be improved holler

[fonek1211]

Originally posted by BOOGIEMAN@Feb 8 2006, 08:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:
Nice... Like beltonmoltow said, keep your letter width even... Especially with your i&#39;s... Other than that, it looks pretty good... Clean and nice color choices...Some letter structure could use some work though... Like the b in the first one sucks... Keep working on it though&#33;&#33;

[fonek1211]

Originally posted by BOOGIEMAN@Feb 8 2006, 08:56 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/boogie.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y166/criminal4vida/risk.jpg


Comments? :huh:
Nice... Like beltonmoltow said, keep your letter width even... Especially with your i&#39;s... Other than that, it looks pretty good... Clean and nice color choices...Some letter structure could use some work though... Like the b in the first one sucks... Keep working on it though&#33;&#33;

[kief]

Originally posted by Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.

[beltonmoltow]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b2/bapeski/gushpink.jpg

did this in like 5 secounds :ph34r:

cess if you work out the bugs that style would look ight

[humano]

yo cess i like that style, the colours are dope, but i have no
idea what it says, does anyone?
nice caracter aswell

[505 artist]

Smoke in Seno i love ur shit man :D

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by KANZ&#045;KONVIKS@Feb 8 2006, 04:26 AM
just a couple

feedback wanted hard yo&#33;


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1489.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_1488.jpg
i like i like

[humano]

here r sum pics i did in the past few days
new carak i tried still developin it
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500000.jpg[/IMG]
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jer...4-2-1500001.jpg (http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500001.jpg)[/IMG]
any opinons/feedback what ev
peace :wacko:

[humano]

two more







http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1500003.jpg[/IMG]


http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/aba6745e.jpg[/IMG]

^^^ is is wack i no
any thoughts

[MUSASHI]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/7853/edge1uv.th.jpg (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=edge1uv.jpg)

thought I&#39;d post this since the thread is pinned...cant wait to get some prismas,but the kit&#39;s like 80 bucks ...ya&#39;ll know that though

[MUSASHI]

I like that stuff humano..it&#39;s really cool the top one not so much ...essay handstyle is tight but saurus isn&#39;t hittin&#39; so hard

[Ume]

not really a blackbook, but whatever..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/greenyblueish1.jpg
i need to get one of those tablit things, or something, clean this computer out, it keeps like darting off to the side every couple seconds.

[knowlij]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4034/imga00419qr.th.jpg (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00419qr.jpg)


http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1076/imga00425jk.th.jpg (http://img142.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00425jk.jpg)


http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1333/imga00439nd.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00439nd.jpg)

http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/3798/imga00442qb.th.jpg (http://img289.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imga00442qb.jpg)

[knowlij]

crits ^^^

[flclnaruto1213]

try less complicated color schemes...

[kill]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it

[AKEN.]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Feb 8 2006, 08:39 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6541/3ghosts8mu.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3ghosts8mu.jpg)

are you feelin&#39; this?
if the whole "shark" thing is intentional thats pretty dope.

[fonek1211]

Dude, I didn&#39;t even notice that shark thing... Props man if that was on purpose

[fonek1211]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 8 2006, 05:39 PM
i think the e gets overlapped too much..other wise its pretty nice

in detention today
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesSquid002.jpg
Word... I had to bump this one. The squid is ill Cess..And the little boat in the air. :lol: You come up with some origional shit, one thing that wigs me out though is you seem to have a scratchy way of sketching. Do you paint?

I hate it when I forget to log out at night.

[---CRoR---]

heres an outline of my throwy... not the best lookin but im still working on it.....

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7755/im0011399oj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[soba06]

did this today any tips ?
http://img286.imageshack.us/img286/4562/pyrosketch8wz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i like it but the r is a bit sh*t

[cess!]

yeah cezr thats just the way iv been doin my stuff.kind of messy..i dont paint..used to but got bagged..once i can drive ill be painting

cror you shud clean it up and color it it wud look cool most likely

[beltonmoltow]

keep it simple for a while and cut the character

[Ume]

bored in school, messed up the U though.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/schooly.jpg

[cess!]

i think i like your train better

*and some stuff i got..
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesd005.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nolesd001.jpg

[Puffer]

i like your bomb, very clean and would look good painted, you piece is good to, but i like the first one of that piece you posted better

[AMAZ tbscrew]

i dont like ur pieces anymore cess...i think ur going over bored with it..ur lossin ur letter structure.... my 2 cents

[Puffer]

Originally posted by kief+Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kief @ Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick. [/b][/quote]
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style

[cnttouchths6777]

this is my first pic. any one and everyone please give me some advicehttp://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e279/cnttouchths6777/DSC01031.jpg

[Puffer]

well atleast you started out simple, just practice for along ass time, and dont quit

[TNS_NOPE]

ces, im likin your throwie, pretty sick..

[Sluts_r_us]

some simple i was workin on at like 12 cuz i couldnt sleep lol...
http://img348.imageshack.us/img348/3351/pesksimple3ro.jpg

[cess!]

im just trying to develop it, trying new things with it..i havnt stuck with a definate one yet..

[Sluts_r_us]

i like the one wit the grey n yellow fill...i like that style

[kief]

Originally posted by Puffer+Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Puffer @ Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kief@Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style [/b][/quote]
Sure, he&#39;s a good writer, I never said anything about that. Doesn&#39;t make him any less of a dick. I don&#39;t give a shit if you two like my name or not, that&#39;s not changing because a couple douche bags online think it&#39;s lame, but I know I&#39;m a toy and I want to get better, so just ignore the name and look at the sketches.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^ i think you should write lame...

[Sluts_r_us]

updated simple sketch....

http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/2822/pesk0052ah.jpg

other sketch from before...colored lol...

http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/2996/pesk0045zw.jpg

[cess!]

kief has a point

e beef is pointless..plus name changes happen all the time

[kief]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Feb 9 2006, 06:05 PM
^^ i think you should write lame...
I think that was a really pointless post.

[505 artist]

Originally posted by weldo@Feb 8 2006, 04:33 AM
KANZ-KONVIKS ur second peice is dope dont like the 1st one but ur handy on the end looks like a ball sack
help please sorry really shit photos :(
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2804/cci000008dw.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4828/cci000013lq.png (http://imageshack.us)
nice ones big as arrows a sic ass style

[humano]

did these today any thoughts, comments?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1600004.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/Captured2004-2-1600000.jpg

[ylive4death2come]

Originally posted by whatsgoinon@Feb 8 2006, 09:21 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blah5fp.jpg

just a quick sketch i put together today no 3d or anythin yet jus wanted some opinions to see wat can be improved holler
that looks sick, i think it would look best w/ a shadow instead of 3d tho

[MUSASHI]

hey guy&#39;s thanx for the props...the shark thing just happened with the g& h then i went with it since sharks are like the ghost&#39;s of the ocean and it fit the whole theme...glad you liked it...humano your comin up man.props...id quote but i&#39;m too lazy to figure out how to

[CL3ver1]

some new stuff
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/10/69/10479601_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/15/89/10479851_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/31/99/10479913_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/96/99/10479969_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00010/60/37/10267306_l.jpg

[505 artist]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6756.jpg

comments it not done
dunno how to 3rd this one

[cess!]

uno
i like the first three, the second one the most, you shud work with it more

[CL3ver1]

thanks cess...im feelin your new ish to im likein this long style for some reason.ever since i watched mib3 haha.
505 lookin good man. wish i could tell you what to do with that 3d maybe pull it all back? or down idk

[505 artist]

thanks cleaver that what im doing
man this peice has tooo many add ons i think
the letters some dont even show
but oh well lol :lol:

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^^yeh pull the 3d back

[CL3ver1]

pssh o well still looks fesh man props.

[505 artist]

aw ahit i did it down the 3 d sorry
but it coming al rite

[cess!]

Originally posted by CL3ver1@Feb 9 2006, 09:26 PM
thanks cess...im feelin your new ish to im likein this long style for some reason.ever since i watched mib3 haha.

yeah thanks..
whats up with mib3 ? my stuff doenst look too much like it does it? i try to stay as original as i can..i just did somethin up ill post it when i get a pic..

[CL3ver1]

naw yoh i didnt meen it like that.i ment to put a periosd but i guess not. naw like that euro train long arty style i guess? idk it looks hot. mib3 is some where on the 2nd page of the picture thread you should watch it those trains are nasty.

[cess!]

ill definatly check it out..

[cess!]

yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg

[kill]

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
:wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

[AoAssis]

nice, cant wait till this style developes, only thing i dont like about pieces that ride on the botom of the paper is the rest of the paper just seems waisted,atleast thats how i feel when i do my pieces that ride on the botom

[505 artist]

Originally posted by 505 artist@Feb 9 2006, 09:21 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6756.jpg

comments it not done
dunno how to 3rd this one
short temper :angry: i fuked up and rolled it and trew it :angry:

[kief]

Yeah cess I really like that shit

[JETc17]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
eww



your losing all of your structure :ph34r:

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^dosnt matter...alot of graffiti dosnt have letter structure....now that i look at it its more of a design but its still hot

[Sluts_r_us]

i see the letters...that shits hot cess...so are those colors...

throw i have been workin on:
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2073/peskthrow0014oz.jpg

[kill]

Originally posted by kill+Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo [/b][/quote]
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff

[ion-i]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_wings.jpg

[kill]

3d is bad and the extensions look bad

[Ume]

where is the 3d bad?

[ion-i]

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 09:54 PM
3d is bad and the extensions look bad
That&#39;s not even constructive criticism, that&#39;s just pointless remarks mocking my drawing.
The 3D is meant to be appearing from the middle. So both sides of the piece have the 3D coming from the bottom-center. I don&#39;t know what&#39;s wrong with it..

Whatev though.

[faint rem one]

Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:54 AM
3d is bad and the extensions look bad
do better....

and cess, that style is dope no doubt

[gnarlatron3030]

I actually like it

no crits

[kill]

i didnt know know that it was suppose to be comin from bith sides mi bad

[kill]

mock mi drawin if u want

[humano]

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f399/jericho111/sarussecondstage00000.jpg

[kill]

letter structure bad

[fonek1211]

Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????

[Sluts_r_us]

your E is overlapped too much by the n....try to spacce them out more...

there is something i just do not like about it but cant seem to place it...no beef tho...

[fonek1211]

Alright, I&#39;ll try doing that... I think since I didn&#39;t have enough space I did that... No problem dude... I dunno think about it and tell me... I guess I&#39;ll start coloring then...

[Mse]

soo tired must nit sleep
b&w
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6679/homieisnotcoloredno3d0sq.jpg

colored
[IMG]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5587/homieiscoloredno3d1bp.jpg[/IMG

[faint rem one]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5587/homieiscoloredno3d1bp.jpg

*fixed for mse*

[Mse]

hee didnt notice thanks
any comments?

[faint rem one]

ok, that piece is mad trippy, and i kinda like the style of it, but whats it say, and the karak is ill, i love his half exposed brain. haha.

[Mse]

i cant be fucked to finish the char see the mouth i didnt put the othe side of the cheek or whatever :(
and it says
http://img497.imageshack.us/img497/5391/forsent3d9ax.jpg

[REMO+RTW]

http://i1.tinypic.com/ngvn1x.jpg[/img]]old wildstyle of mine ([img)

[REMO+RTW]

http://i1.tinypic.com/ngvqxg.jpg[/img]]crew members graff ([img)

[EatRichPeople]

http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz? By the way question to some experianced heads, do you do the whole 3d without ruler something to measure? I did this without but it came out pritty croocked.

peace

[cess!]

take more time with your letters..make them more legible ..and sometimes i use a ruler..sometimes no..its whatever your comfortable with


post one Thousand

[Sluts_r_us]

lol cess get a life.....jk im almost therewith you....lol

[Sluts_r_us]

heres my throw...changed the e.....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskthrow002.jpg

[beltonmoltow]

pesk your throw up is mad plane add some style :D

[kief]

Some more toy shit for y&#39;all to laugh at:

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/6512/00000326et.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/9272/00000338yj.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/3938/00000345oe.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/3479/00000352rl.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/8376/00000367xs.jpg

http://img495.imageshack.us/img495/377/00000378cz.jpg

Crits? I&#39;ll get some better paper, and some markers and stuff soon.

[T R E O]

^^since you said so..
lmao&#33;haha.naw.jk.
anyways.
they dont look great.keep workin at it.go a tad bit simpler.work on the 3D also.its kindve fucked.

[Mse]

well your doing better than most people starting out
just keep it simple adding a little bit of flavour
good work

[beltonmoltow]

kief no offence but change your name man its kinda lame

[kief]

What&#39;s so lame about the name kief?

[Sluts_r_us]

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/7477/pesksticker1ko.jpg

some sticker i did...

[cess!]

thats not bad..finally your colorin stuff hah

[beltonmoltow]

im not feelin the big holes in the P and E

[Myme]

^That sig image is crazy.. Our eyes are trippy

[Sluts_r_us]

that shit in his sig is mad old...

and yeah cess i felt like colorin...

[Sparkz]

Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Feb 10 2006, 02:38 PM
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz? By the way question to some experianced heads, do you do the whole 3d without ruler something to measure? I did this without but it came out pritty croocked.

peace
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy

[seno2]

yo well heres a new style im working on.. trying to devoolpe it&#33; :-&#092;
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4595/image1576pv.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

shits tight seno

[Ume]

Originally posted by Sparkz@Feb 10 2006, 11:01 PM
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy
so what if your using it already? is he in the same area code as you? even the same country? your not gonna be keeping the name forever either, plus his looks better then yours.

[cess!]

judging by what eat rich people put up, im sure thats open for debate ume..

[seno2]

Originally posted by seno2@Feb 10 2006, 10:09 PM
yo well heres a new style im working on.. trying to devoolpe it&#33; :-&#092;
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4595/image1576pv.jpg
buuump dee bumpzors :D

[DynamiteBoy]

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*

[cess!]

seno the point of a bump is to bring it to a new page..but thats lookin good..you shud try and hit up the big boy thread and see if they dont shoot you down

[seno2]

my bad.. aite ill try right now :-&#092;

[ion-i]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Feb 9 2006, 09:43 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_wings.jpg
bump :)
just wanna see some more crits before I go paint it :)

[seno2]

i liek i like.. just the N thats kinda iffy for me.. but all in all very nice

[Puffer]

Originally posted by kief+Feb 9 2006, 05:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kief @ Feb 9 2006, 05:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Puffer@Feb 9 2006, 04:44 PM

Originally posted by kief@Feb 8 2006, 09:39 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Myme@Feb 8 2006, 06:51 PM
worst.name.ever.

get a new name
good one, dick.
never call myme a dick, hes a real good writer, so you can fuck off kief, and i agree with myme, worst name ever, but the other word of kief definatley represents your style
Sure, he&#39;s a good writer, I never said anything about that. Doesn&#39;t make him any less of a dick. I don&#39;t give a shit if you two like my name or not, that&#39;s not changing because a couple douche bags online think it&#39;s lame, but I know I&#39;m a toy and I want to get better, so just ignore the name and look at the sketches. [/b][/quote]
cock knobbler

[flclnaruto1213]

kief your f looks like shit in all your stuff , get a new name.

and sluts the blue throw on the sticker, the pe is wack and the sk is good

[Sluts_r_us]

ye i suck at p&#39;s...n i got no ideas for the e..lol

[Ume]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 10 2006, 11:43 PM
judging by what eat rich people put up, im sure thats open for debate ume..
sadly, i was hoping the same, but i went and looked at his posts...and eatrichpeople is better.

[Sluts_r_us]

ahh so eatrichpeople is a peson lol....i wasnt sure if he didnt spell somethin rite so i was like wtf....im tired and this post is useless lol...w.e.

[UKCsire]

a little somethin I did for the enter battle

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/graff003.jpg

[ehh...!?!]

sire do u consider urself a toy or something since u posted that here?

[UKCsire]

I dunno man...I don&#39;t really think about stuff like whether I consider myself a "toy" or not...doesn&#39;t really matter to me...if I&#39;m a toy, oh well, if not, great - won&#39;t affect my drawings really...annnnnd I just wanted to get some comments on the piece maybe some crits...

[fonek1211]

Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz???? [/b][/quote]
bump... :rolleyes:

[news]

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f282/news2/DSCF0173.jpg

still needs sum work ohh well critz

[faint rem one]

Originally posted by UKCsire@Feb 11 2006, 03:15 AM
a little somethin I did for the enter battle

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/graff003.jpg
and to think i ALMOST joined this battle.

:lol:

dope shit sire.

[fonek1211]

Nice Sire... I&#39;m still trying to come up with something better... God dammit this is hard...

The coloring is really nice.. I like it...

For news... Nice way to start off simple but try and add a little something to the h since it looks just like the one on my keyboard

[Sparkz]

Originally posted by Ume+Feb 10 2006, 10:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ume @ Feb 10 2006, 10:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sparkz@Feb 10 2006, 11:01 PM
aeon...... and im usin that name allrdy
so what if your using it already? is he in the same area code as you? even the same country? your not gonna be keeping the name forever either, plus his looks better then yours. [/b][/quote]
have u seen any of my stuff?
didnt think so.

[cess!]

Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
theres too many edges

[DynamiteBoy]

Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@Feb 10 2006, 11:03 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*
crits?

[cess!]

too many edges

[EatRichPeople]

@Sparkz and Ume, sorry for the confusion, I wright Seon....just really messed up the S. I didn&#39;t really like the style of the lettering anyway but I hadn&#39;t done anything in a while and I wanted to practice shading....didn&#39;t really work yet.
And cess thanx for the critz.

[Klaz]

Originally posted by DynamiteBoy+Feb 11 2006, 11:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DynamiteBoy @ Feb 11 2006, 11:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DynamiteBoy@Feb 10 2006, 11:03 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/1605/pict17293vk.jpg

i&#39;m kinda new so just tell me what you think about it *all comments acceptable*
crits? [/b][/quote]
Darko is taken by someone alot better than you.

i see your gettin experimental but stick to straight letters then try and throw some stuff in.

[EatRichPeople]

some stuff from a while ago.

http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2326/camelklein16vg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CAMEL

http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/5571/erb6yq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ERB

critz

[Silvar]

^^^a prime example of how simple lettering can lead to great things. watch and learn kiddies

looks nice man, props. v clean too

[faint rem one]

agreed^

[EatRichPeople]

thanx both...hope it will eventually lead to great things :)

peace

[c0ld]

look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....

[cess!]

eatrichpeople
you went from this
http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2326/camelklein16vg.jpg

to this?
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/8928/stefan7aq.jpg


go back to the original straight letter one its much doper

[c0ld]

*bump*

feedback.......plz.......^

[repo302]

i dont see any thing that changed since your last post cold

[c0ld]

it is.

i tried to do the letters neater/better looking.
i made em all the same size.
i got rid of the HUGANTIC border.

and my first attempt at block letters is there too......so..........

[MUSASHI]

well here&#39;s another one for ya ...just wanting to see what ya&#39;ll thought &#39;bout it...cuz i think it&#39;s the style i&#39;m gonna go with cuz you can fill it so many different ways and i like it http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3464/adroitsketch8xi.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=adroitsketch8xi.jpg)

[DynamiteBoy]

does it matter if you have the same name as somebody? just as long as you live in different cities? cause thats what one of my friends told me

[MUSASHI]

alli gotta say is this to the question above...using someone elses name is the same as cheating...what i suggest is to find a dictionary find a really obscure word that pops when you read it...another example lets say you have this dope ass style and it really burns but you use a name that someone else has been using for years and that dude comes to your town and see&#39;s your shit with his name ...how would you feel if the situation was reversed?

dwell on this until the situation is resolved in your mind...or consider another path

[c0ld]

Originally posted by fonek1211+Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fonek1211 @ Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
well youre a lot better than me but my advice is to change that F at the beginning. It looks like it says EONEK, so ya, take that line off the bottom of the F.

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_<

[EatRichPeople]

Youre right cess..thanx

peace

[kill]

Originally posted by kill+Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff [/b][/quote]
can sum one please give me sum crits

[DynamiteBoy]

does anyone have the name "orbis"?

[c0ld]

Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM
does anyone have the name "orbis"?
wrong thred for this, bud.

check the toys forum main page again, I think the right ones up there :)

[DynamiteBoy]

yeah i found it thanks :)

[c0ld]

np :)

[TricksForKids]

ok, because graffiti has become so incredibly mainstream, and is now the "cool" thing to do, we&#39;re settling something on names.

Your name is yours, and thats all that matters, if someone else writes it in your area, you fight for it, and try to be better than the other person.

Obviously dont take someones name whos a king, for example dont start writing cope 2 and taki 183, youd just be an idiot...

and if someone writes your name, or you write theirs in another city,country,area, then who the hell cares?

Peace

[C3ZR ONE]

Word.. Tricks knows..

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_< [/b][/quote]
bump.

[DynamiteBoy]

Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 11:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 11:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 10:23 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Feb 11 2006, 05:47 PM
look, I didn&#39;t make a new thread just for this *pats self on back* :rolleyes:

i did a few new ones........i hope this is the right thread for this...................
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/3663/co36rt.th.jpg

advice....
critz plz..............i get fussed at for makin my own thread, then when i put this in the right thread, no one responds.........? <_<
bump. [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m not that much better than you but i&#39;ll give you some feedback based on my knowledge, i like simplicity over complicated stuff and you should try to study different styles and just derive you own cause the ones you got right now i&#39;m not feelin&#39; your style is consistent though and the 3d is ok just try to vary your style

[C3ZR ONE]

Cold- You&#39;re right where you should be for a begginer. Start with the boring shit and work your way up. Blocks and bubbles are retarded, but most people need to study them to get down line structure. I would suggest after you get that down to study other work that you like and copy it exactly as an exersise. Don&#39;t post it or claim it. You just do it to learn what you&#39;re doing wrong and how to do it right. You learn the little things that equals quality work quicker that way. Once you&#39;ve done that alot and well, drop it and develope a style of your own.

[CL3ver1]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
yoo
hope its a step in the right direction ...now that i found a style it feels like i can do anything with it..my graffiti found a home :wub: for the most part
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/pinkngreen005.jpg
omg this shit is ill&#33;..cess man.props b

-i-oni..i have a new respect for you man i like that piece you did,,as for everyone else in Nfk.....

[SuprTnr2]

C3ZR, you gots a PM.

[C3ZR ONE]

That&#39;s weird...Cuzz actually, I don&#39;t have a PM.. Send it to the right dude?

[C3ZR ONE]

My bad. It said I didn&#39;t, but I did.....

[c0ld]

good to actually get real feedback and not

"YOU SUCK&#33;"

thnx.

[DynamiteBoy]

no problem man just keep trying.

well can someone critique my work? As i&#39;ve sad before i&#39;m kinda new

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8046/pict17280tp.jpg

[cess!]

thank you clever.

tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................

[C3ZR ONE]

It&#39;s not too bad.. ;) The letter structure is descent and your handstyle is reasonable. Work on your 3d. It looks like you just whipped it out without giving a shit. Good 3d can make a piece twice as good.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 12 2006, 12:04 AM
thank you clever.

tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................
Word... Cess knows too... Getting up will be our death if it sells big..

[TricksForKids]

hmmm its not bad man, lose those weird indents on each letter, im assuming it says darko? and try to make your letters all the same size, that D is enormous, but it has potential, just try not to do to many addons, and connecting your letters, youll get there

Peace

[TricksForKids]

and cess, graffiti is definitely mainstream, at least here it is, i live in toronto, its just not as underground as people claim it is, the only reason its not "actually mainstream" is because theres limited way to promote it other than on t-shirts and dvds, but theres millions of people who are into graffiti in the world.

[fonek1211]

Originally posted by c0ld+Feb 11 2006, 10:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Feb 11 2006, 10:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 11 2006, 04:48 AM

Originally posted by fonek1211@Feb 10 2006, 06:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fonek1211@Feb 9 2006, 06:55 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e182/upmybutt/c25978ac.jpg

Finally got my camera working... I know it sucks but I want some comments before I color it... Thanks

btw, I know my outlining is messy... Still working on that...
...critz????
bump... :rolleyes:
well youre a lot better than me but my advice is to change that F at the beginning. It looks like it says EONEK, so ya, take that line off the bottom of the F. [/b][/quote]
Yeah, thanks for the advice man... And cess too... I&#39;ll try and get another sketch up here and this piece colored...

Darko, that&#39;s a pretty cool piece... As for critz, I saw keep all the letters the same size... The a and the o are kinda smaller than the rest... The r and the k are pretty cool but the endings look exactly the same... Try and add some variety in that I guess...

Cess, that shit is awesome dude... I still preferred that red and yellow or orange or whatever piece... That was great... I like the color choice in that piece... Looks really good... Keep it up

Cold, nice way to start off... Your bubble letters look way better than the block ones... Try and add some new things and experiment with the letters and the structure and stuff...

Any more critz for this??

[kill]

Originally posted by kill+Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill &#064; Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff
can sum one please give me sum crits [/b][/quote]
bump

please give me advice

[TricksForKids]

kill....where do you write....?.....

[AMAZ tbscrew]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture027.jpg :mellow: ????


monster created.

[kill]

i write in sf

what do u think ? damn it&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[TricksForKids]

i hope thats not an R... i dunno man, i just dunno, go back to your simpler stuff i think

[C3ZR ONE]

Oh snap&#33;&#33;&#33; Someones been doin there homework.. And since you didn&#39;t follow my advice and stay off walls (like I said long ago) that&#39;s gonna look tight on a wall. ;) Props Ever... (work on a handstyle to go with it.)
That&#39;s so hot....

[DynamiteBoy]

Amaz nice stuff, i&#39;m trying to get my letters to flow like that.

and i&#39;ll tkae your guys&#39; advice try to make my letters then same size and try to make it flow better

[C3ZR ONE]

Well, I&#39;m off to go rave like it&#39;s 1993 again... :lol: Peace out *****s.
WWW.OKIZOO.COM

[Mse]

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2673/cheappp0iv.jpg
nice cess but what doesss it say :D

[Sparkz]

Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Feb 11 2006, 11:54 AM
@Sparkz and Ume, sorry for the confusion, I wright Seon....just really messed up the S. I didn&#39;t really like the style of the lettering anyway but I hadn&#39;t done anything in a while and I wanted to practice shading....didn&#39;t really work yet.
And cess thanx for the critz.
k man, my bad looked like an a
but now i seen the seon on the side

[cess!]

mse that looks kind of cool, it wud be better if the letters were a little more defined...sayes Noles

[Ume]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Feb 12 2006, 01:04 AM
tricks you dont think graffitis that mainstream do you?
i think its stayed pretty well underground for the most part..its just that fuckin mark eckos game that might put us over..................
it hasen&#39;t been underground for awhile, maybe the first 10 years that it started, but then movies came out like Style Wars, Beat Street, and Wild Style. when they came out they were released in movie theaters. and graffit has been used in advertising for a long time now, the game is just gonna be that, a game, kids might get inspired to go out and paint, who cares? times just going to sort out the ones that do it because they saw it in a video game and then once they get bored of the game stop painting, and then the kids who play it and get addicted to the real thing....who knows, maybe those kids are gonna be the next big things later on?

[SiMpUhL]

kay i got some stuff for ya
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0262.jpg
theres a gold FORCEFIELD around the first one
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0240.jpg

sorry some of it is so big

i cant figure out how to resize them

[Enemy]

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/540/dok8qd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
havent sketched in a long time so... what do u all think??

[obsene]

nice one enemy :)

[Sluts_r_us]

yo enemy wtf is ur avatar?

[cess!]

Originally posted by SiMpUhL@Feb 12 2006, 03:12 PM

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg

whats this say? its very messy

[AoAssis]

looks like a nipple eh? ya thats wat i thought, but someone else asked before, i think he said it was a can on montana

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by cess&#33;+Feb 12 2006, 03:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess&#33; @ Feb 12 2006, 03:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SiMpUhL@Feb 12 2006, 03:12 PM

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0256.jpg

whats this say? its very messy [/b][/quote]
haha look at his handstyle, one big arrow goin through it

[cess!]

at the top right there seems to be some kind of foreign character.. possible Korean??? :huh: :blink:

[Enemy]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Feb 12 2006, 03:31 PM
yo enemy wtf is ur avatar?
in an eyeball getting scraped out of an eyesocket :rolleyes:

[cess!]

shit..
i never saw it like that


thats disgusting man

[noise not music]

feed back/constructive crit?

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8341/diesimple6tt.jpg[/UR

[Sluts_r_us]

it always looked like a tit that was all bloddy to me lol...

[Enemy]

^^^ hahaha yea i kinda see what u mean :blink: lol
any crit for my sketch like things i need to work on??????

[kill]

Originally posted by kill+Feb 12 2006, 12:15 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Feb 12 2006, 12:15 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kill@Feb 11 2006, 11:08 PM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 10 2006, 12:22 AM

Originally posted by kill@Feb 9 2006, 10:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-kill@Feb 9 2006, 12:54 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3042/graffpix1245rj.th.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffpix1245rj.jpg)

ta da
what do u think i dont like the j and the u
but i love the c
need crits on letters before i color it
bumpo
bump

and slut
i dont like the top of the s and the e dont match the other throw letters
cess has hot stuff
can sum one please give me sum crits
bump

please give me advice [/b][/quote]
no one gave me any advice please for the love of god gimmme sum advice

anything

[SAFTinator]

Comments, criticism, anything would be appreciated. http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft2.jpghttp://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft3.jpghttp://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e229/saftinator/Saft1.jpg
sorry its sideways.

[noise not music]

TO JUICE:

heres my advice..but im a toy too so it proably dosen&#39;t mean shit and im not trying to sound superior,just what I think..

try to make the letters the same height..(symmetrical i guess?)..like how the left side of the U goes in a lot and the other one dosent.. and the one side of the I goes all high and the other dosent..and the overlapping is all mixed up..how the left side of the C goes over the I but then the left side of the U goes under the G .. and try to keep it all the same size...

you dont have to listen to any of that,just what i think from toy-to-toy

[Ume]

holy fuck i&#39;ve been bored, can&#39;t go out and paint cause no paint and sick...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005601.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005602.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005603.jpg
simple thing, fucked up the U...like usual..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005604.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005605.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

sesu no offence but...i think all your painted shit actually looks way better, the only one i liked was the yellow blue fade

[kill]

i lke the purple sticker nice color
thanks to the guy that gave me advice

[noise not music]

Originally posted by kill@Feb 12 2006, 07:48 PM

thanks to the guy that gave me advice
word

and SES i like the first purple SES in that post

[Ume]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Feb 12 2006, 08:40 PM
sesu no offence but...i think all your painted shit actually looks way better, the only one i liked was the yellow blue fade
yeah id rather paint, notice i don&#39;t draw THAT much? it&#39;s only every now and then when i do draw, and yeah it&#39;s the only one i liked to. hahaha

[flclnaruto1213]

lol cool.

your painted shits dope as hell though by the way.

[noise not music]

Originally posted by noise not music@Feb 12 2006, 07:00 PM
feed back/constructive crit?

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8341/diesimple6tt.jpg[/UR
hate to be a postwhore and do this again..but

[Sluts_r_us]

sesu....i like the blue fade one n the one before the simple...

[cess!]

sesu you have a cool style, make sure to always color in the same way tho , cus that brown/green/yellow piece looks messy

[Ume]

yeah i know, i was in a hurry to finish it before class ended...oh well, you put in little effort and you get shit. haha