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IlikePie
01-08-2008, 09:10 PM
<3 Sex You go through a lot of blackbooks huh?

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00584.jpg

For a battle with this kid on another forum :/

Someone wanna give me a crit? So unloved :(

Not really feeling that jetpack and the other guy who called the bite, its a used style.....

JETPACK!!
01-08-2008, 09:10 PM
ohhhh, your trying to prove a point. well seeing how it came directly out of my head and onto my paper. i would say your bite is void. but hell, keep thinking i bit you. besides, how can i bite something posted after mine?

EDIT: how does my E look like yours?? its completely different

5Funerals
01-08-2008, 09:18 PM
I posted both of those before you posted yours, I reposted them just now. You argue an awful lot and act pretty smart for a kid who joined a week ago and has 70 more posts than me. You can keep the style but you should lose your shitty attitude.

a maze
01-08-2008, 09:27 PM
ilikepie- damn, after that shit gets outlined, looks fuckin ill, man.

Bets369R
01-08-2008, 09:57 PM
I posted both of those before you posted yours, I reposted them just now. You argue an awful lot and act pretty smart for a kid who joined a week ago and has 70 more posts than me. You can keep the style but you should lose your shitty attitude.

They do look the same, but that also is a VERRRYYY comonly used throw up style so you cant really claim it as your own anyway

jersOneTIC
01-08-2008, 10:05 PM
azteka - nice style
5 funerals - nice simples but not feelin the green and orange ones.
jetpack - work on the l and a little on the a
ilikepie - nice dude, i would've put a letter instead of the arrow.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6272/simphg9.jpg
simples
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9758/blacktq1.jpg
and some piece..

IlikePie
01-08-2008, 10:10 PM
^^^Thats what I was trying to figure out, need more flow! Spank you very much. Dope piece too.

AnteUp
01-08-2008, 10:12 PM
fuck this...im dunn wit addons, goin back to threeeh deehh, and maybe simples... :(

G and S
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/GS.jpg
crits...

5fun- simples simples simples, your on the right track (i need to follow my own advice...lmao)
seek- ehhhhhhhhhh, its okay, like simple 3d
sez- well they arent peices, i guess its a handy peice, not feelin it, but i like the handy...lol
i gave crits...i kno this is shit, but give crits please...
roulette-i like it, lukks like your old sketch tho
jers-not your best but still nice, change the r on the first one, lukks to simple, and if you bring out the tail of the s to lukk like thte tail of the j, it would flow better
pie- sick shit, says rab? i love the b

Raket.LHM
01-08-2008, 10:23 PM
^^
I like the "S" by it self but i want to see it in a piece.
:)

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2135/raketmonkeypb3.jpg

IlikePie
01-08-2008, 10:27 PM
Holy freshness Batman!

beyondyereyes
01-08-2008, 10:28 PM
Clean colors... and I like the character a lot. Shit is dope.

AnteUp
01-08-2008, 10:28 PM
directed to racket? :(...

edit-to pie...

IlikePie
01-08-2008, 10:32 PM
Don't worry Ante, you're still my favorite

Raket.LHM
01-08-2008, 10:33 PM
directed to racket? :(...

edit-to pie...

Didnet mean any disrespect. do you have any pieces? never on so i wouldnt know.

Stim
01-08-2008, 10:36 PM
Simplicity is beautiful. This isn't directed at anybody, I'm just saying. Gotta walk before you can run everyone :)

SOOF
01-08-2008, 10:37 PM
havent graffed in well over 4-5 months , first thing in a long ass time

anteup: not really feelin it man, but thats jus me
every1 else pretty good

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/Image331.jpg

AnteUp
01-08-2008, 10:38 PM
Didnet mean any disrespect. do you have any pieces? never on so i wouldnt know.
yes. yes i do... but i do 3d also...its hard to put in peices, but i have sum simples peices

5Funerals
01-08-2008, 10:39 PM
Ante up - on the g I think that the bar on the way top that goes to the right should be scratched and instead you should extend the main bar up a little higher.

Rank-oner!
01-08-2008, 10:49 PM
Jers: i like the piece a lot, the only thing i think you could touch up the top part of the S
Racket: nice man fresh character
Ante: i like the letters. id say make the bar coming off the back part of the lower case G shorter :)

sex without condoms
01-08-2008, 10:59 PM
i love you all.
and btw, Pardon my mouth and ugly face.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153228.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153250.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153310.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153338.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153401.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153422.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153437.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153451.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153505.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153517.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153530.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153545.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153605.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153626.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153642.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153703.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153719.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153739.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153754.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153824.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153845.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153847.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153903.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153922.jpg

faggot

bouncingsoul
01-08-2008, 11:25 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/ad878443.jpg

Stim
01-08-2008, 11:29 PM
Hey, real good sketch Bouncing... I like the shading.

Cool throwies too sex

Some simples =]
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1698/simpsoa8.jpg

Haz-E
01-08-2008, 11:45 PM
STIM yo that simp is looking def keep it up

Bets369R
01-08-2008, 11:58 PM
am i the only one who really dislikes sex's throwies?

if it was anyone else everyone would say its garbage.

no beef with sex but i cant understand why people like his throwies it looks like he just scribbles and colors it :/

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-09-2008, 12:09 AM
i cant understand why people like his throwies

because they are good

beyondyereyes
01-09-2008, 12:15 AM
Potatoe I <3<3 you?

What the hell is that in Sex's second to last picture?

I do like his throwies. I only wish I'd see some flicks of it on walls or stickers at least.

the end
01-09-2008, 12:29 AM
I only wish I'd see some flicks of it on walls.

agreed.

Sex, pick up a can!

Dream Creation
01-09-2008, 12:58 AM
i gave crits...i kno this is shit, but give crits please...
roulette-i like it, lukks like your old sketch tho
jers-not your best but still nice, change the r on the first one, lukks to simple, and if you bring out the tail of the s to lukk like thte tail of the j, it would flow better
pie- sick shit, says rab? i love the b

im not happy with how similar this is to my style to be honest. its pretty much my style style done badly. the flicks on a few pages back i cnt get them on here cos the comp goin to slloooooowwwww.

Rank-oner!
01-09-2008, 03:41 AM
SEX: lookin good as always. I want to do an Exchange with you!
Stim: nice simples.
Bouncing soul: i love your sketches. you do that for art class or something. either way good job and i like how you sketch your photography. thats really cool. you know if you can sketch your pics and they look good you have your values down well.
Soof: sorry man im not feelin the letters. maybe the S but need to work on them as a whole
So heres my 3 sheet sticker. did some fat simples. hit me up with some crits.
colored
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker002.jpg
with highlights
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker005.jpg
and finally with outline
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker008.jpg
oh yea and im gonna beef up that K a little bit by going back over its legs with black

Dying to live
01-09-2008, 03:46 AM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelchecker.gif
messed up the 3d

Rank: looks fucking sexy!

Rank-oner!
01-09-2008, 03:52 AM
damn well so is yours :) i like how i can see more of the E now and that checkered is niceeee

Raket.LHM
01-09-2008, 05:18 AM
the end- it sucks. k? seize is like structure master. connect your letters.

wouldnt go that far. and seize no beef but do you have anything else besides simples and throwies?

Bets369R
01-09-2008, 06:08 AM
;967154']because they are good

i would think you of all people would know what flow, letter structure, and cleanliness mean to graff. ive seen alot better work get bashed on this forum and i just dont understand it.

SOOF
01-09-2008, 07:01 AM
havent graffed in well over 4-5 months , first thing in a long ass time


http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/Image331.jpg[/QUOTE]

remos
01-09-2008, 09:55 AM
[img=http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/3271/medssketchfb3.png] (http://imageshack.us)
[img=http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4391/eorsketchzm8.png] (http://imageshack.us)
[img=http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4391/eorsketchzm8.69fea1f2c6.jpg] (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=525&i=eorsketchzm8.png)
some for my old crew and a character i ended up painting it but it wasnt very good
wont be posting i broke my writing arm...shiiit

remos
01-09-2008, 10:29 AM
here are some from about a month ago
they dont look as good after they were scanned'
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/9037/remos1ps4.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos1ps4.jpg)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/7934/remos2px0.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos2px0.jpg)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2125/remos3zx5.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos3zx5.jpg)

remos
01-09-2008, 10:33 AM
some more but the first one dosent look nearly as good as it did without colour
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5408/remos4wg0.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos4wg0.jpg)
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/4568/remos5aq9.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos5aq9.jpg)

remos
01-09-2008, 10:44 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6872/remos6jp2.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos6jp2.jpg)
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/2672/remos7es6.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos7es6.jpg)
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/853/remos8nk0.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remos8nk0.jpg)

old crew
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/8470/eorsketchhl4.th.png (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eorsketchhl4.png)
character i did. didnt turn out good painted.
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/6060/medssketchkb7.th.png (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=medssketchkb7.png)
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/7374/medscharacterhp2.th.png (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=medscharacterhp2.png)

remos
01-09-2008, 10:45 AM
feedback would be great

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 10:45 AM
sex, shits nice, try to keep it the same porportion and make the letters a little clearer. and yes, slick rick is the ruler.

SEZ
01-09-2008, 11:23 AM
^^
I like the "S" by it self but i want to see it in a piece.


http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2135/raketmonkeypb3.jpg

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7923/7speg5hl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

STOP biting from ROKET

youre not the only one who goes on artcrimes...cant believe no one else saw it,
ROKET also uses that exact 'e' in another of his pieces.
change your name and dont bite so blatantly and still tell seize he has no style or whatev

REMOS use bars and keep your shit the same size

Rank-oner!
01-09-2008, 11:24 AM
SEX: lookin good as always. I want to do an Exchange with you!
Stim: nice simples.
Bouncing soul: i love your sketches. you do that for art class or something. either way good job and i like how you sketch your photography. thats really cool. you know if you can sketch your pics and they look good you have your values down well.
Soof: sorry man im not feelin the letters. maybe the S but need to work on them as a whole
So heres my 3 sheet sticker. did some fat simples. hit me up with some crits.
colored
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker002.jpg
with highlights
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker005.jpg
and finally with outline
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksticker008.jpg
oh yea and im gonna beef up that K a little bit by going back over its legs with black
It would be awesome if people gave feedback before they asked for it.

so im bumpin this

oh and Remos: clean up you simples, you were trying to move to fast

ESKiMO2
01-09-2008, 11:24 AM
(Some pages back)


i gave crits...i kno this is shit, but give crits please...
roulette-i like it, lukks like your old sketch tho
jers-not your best but still nice, change the r on the first one, lukks to simple, and if you bring out the tail of the s to lukk like thte tail of the j, it would flow better
pie- sick shit, says rab? i love the b

I made the same mistakes you did. When you are a toy- as much as you love the other arts you must focus on the letters and not the details. I realized that a short while ago. Once you got your letters down to the point you don't even really need to think about it, then you start messing with them. Someone should post a time line or some shit like

start - simple bar letters - curved lines - know letters very well - creative letters - add details

It's probably not right but hey- someone who knows more about it than I do should to help people out.


+ RACKET- The G on BIGR is awesome!

undergroundanimal
01-09-2008, 04:14 PM
ilikepie,jers,bouncingsoul look sick...
stim looks dope to..,sex that longest post i ve ever seen here i like your throwups man..props
rankoner:i like that sticker except for the r and k the 2nd leg(don`t know how the call it) just looks a bit small to me.. would look great as blockbuster
akel:looks aight..im not really feelin the shadow and you should have used another colour for the forcefield..
soof:the s looks best but needs a lot of work the other two letters dont look right me..i would change my style and work on some more simple letters first..
i did that to.. i made all kinds of throwups for maybe 7/9 months before i started to do (pieces)
Remos:same story..keep it simple, work on your letterstructure instead of colouring and adding shadow highlights etc..

Mass Appeal
01-09-2008, 04:21 PM
rank is beatuful !

white
01-09-2008, 04:51 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelchecker.gif
messed up the 3d

Rank: looks fucking sexy!


damn that looks good....love the checkered

undergroundanimal
01-09-2008, 04:54 PM
in progress:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0052.jpg

finished:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0060.jpg

close-up:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0057.jpg

aboz
01-09-2008, 04:55 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/chubzz43va/Picture.jpg

gane17
01-09-2008, 05:02 PM
damn undergroundanimal that shits hot

sex without condoms
01-09-2008, 05:17 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081754a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081754.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081753.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081752b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081752a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/0109081752.jpg

Rots takes your Daughters
01-09-2008, 05:24 PM
Sex without considerations! <3

dim
01-09-2008, 05:39 PM
YAY a RAOE straight letter and it looks dope man keep doing those

sex without condoms
01-09-2008, 05:49 PM
i was doing them.
then i stopped
i just did that cause you wanted to see one
there's more a page or 2 or 3 back

Rank-oner!
01-09-2008, 05:53 PM
Underground: thats so fresh. i like the colors a lot. nice detail
SEx: lookin good again..though instead of SANK you should do a RANk ONE :)
AMK thanks bud ;)

tha.dank.bomber
01-09-2008, 05:56 PM
sex i like your stuff but ive never seen it painted, put up some of your painted throws, thatd b dope

sex without condoms
01-09-2008, 06:04 PM
i don't paint, not ready yet.

BIGel
01-09-2008, 06:06 PM
your ready, wreck shop.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/009/f/3/jerry_rice_by_bigel.jpg

aboz
01-09-2008, 06:18 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/chubzz43va/Picture016.jpg

aboz
01-09-2008, 06:19 PM
i write sal

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 06:22 PM
redo it, i cant read it. its just a black blob. dont fill it it, just do the outline, then repost it. and sex if i can paint, then you definatly should be able to

AOTPs
01-09-2008, 06:23 PM
yea yo aboz redo that shit

beyondyereyes
01-09-2008, 06:24 PM
i don't paint, not ready yet.
What about stickers?

Aboz, do a simple outline first. It's unreadable.

Bigel, that's pretty dope any ideas on what colors to use yet?

sex without condoms
01-09-2008, 06:26 PM
go here budday

http://peelmagazine.com/slaps/viewtopic.php?t=2152

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 06:36 PM
bigel thats fucking ill, the only suggestion i have is MAYBE to loose some of the arrows, the letters are kinna masked. but i like the arrows a lot.

fuckin with a new style, i was just putting letters on my paper to work with the flow. it says BELS

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1917/belsun6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

a maze
01-09-2008, 07:07 PM
jetpack, I like your older style way better, but this one has potential... maybe round the letters off a bit at the top?

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 07:19 PM
its an overused style, i wanna try something somewhat original. ill fuck around with it more and see if it'll look better. its not painted so i dont care really.

actually heres something different i did last night.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2652/hubbahc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Stim
01-09-2008, 07:19 PM
Hey, real good sketch Bouncing... I like the shading.

Cool throwies too sex

Some simples =]
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1698/simpsoa8.jpg
bump, just once

Dying to live
01-09-2008, 07:56 PM
^^ i love that one ;)

dim
01-09-2008, 08:02 PM
aile that e is fresh

Bastardo
01-09-2008, 08:20 PM
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/719/picture280409cv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

First sketch in ages im proud of

AOTPs
01-09-2008, 08:23 PM
^^ i feeling it

revid!
01-09-2008, 08:38 PM
new piece
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8102/cimg0030im1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits

sex without condoms
01-09-2008, 08:50 PM
shakey ass lines

revid!
01-09-2008, 08:54 PM
what you mean like what should i do to make it better

revid!
01-09-2008, 09:01 PM
whats the best way to fully develop a good style because everytime i come up with a sketch i think is dope i end up hating it and can never progress and sort of style

Haz-E
01-09-2008, 09:22 PM
REVID yea the lines are shakey ohwell ur 3d is totally cream man good job

just some quick shit i whipped up today 4 letter burner i think i fucked up the 3d not sure tho
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7088/image003yx2.jpg

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 09:24 PM
revid, dont make your letters so blocky, make shit smooooother, itll be easier on the eyes. try rounding off the edges to see how it'll look.
aile, looks great, made me try out some simple letters. im diggin the color scheme with the single pink L.
bastardo, shits hot. its nearly as fresh as my breathe after i brush and mouthwash.

well i gave in and tried out nice simples. whadda think?

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1536/bels1mq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

a maze
01-09-2008, 09:28 PM
jet, youre slowly but surely getting there... keep it up!

Hobbes
01-09-2008, 10:26 PM
I'm sick of bein' told to 'start simple' so tell me something I don't because I've done simple letters million time but I wanna piece 'n you can't stop me so crits please

revid that shit looks dope you should dig on that, forget haters, I think you develop your own style when you do letters so many times you automatically think to draw it a certain way. Maybe you won't have the best style at first but it'll progress.

JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 10:32 PM
maybe you should do it two million times... make your letters clearer at least.

Hobbes
01-09-2008, 10:35 PM
clearer how?

blue.steel
01-09-2008, 10:45 PM
lol
do simples buddy

revid!
01-09-2008, 10:45 PM
yeah... i always draw shit, think its dope and then i end up hatin it i wan some dope ass style thats super unique but i alwyas think im losin it thats why i ask how to work on getting your own style

hal.cyon
01-09-2008, 10:49 PM
I'm sick of bein' told to 'start simple' so tell me something I don't because I've done simple letters million time but I wanna piece 'n you can't stop me so crits please

no offense but, clearer how? can you read what you wrote? i can't, can you? no? then start simpler. and then even simpler. and then even simpler. until your writing nothing but block letters that you can read. exactly how you see them on your keyboard. zero arrows or other add on's. do it a couple hundred times. do it till your hands bleed. then. when you've mastered super simples, start to bend your letters. just a tug, here or there at first. not the whole word. pull one way on one letter. then go the other way. find the way that best suits you, and seems has the most steez. then you'll have the basis to begin thinking about letters 3 dimensionally. how they fit together. how they bend apart. how this relates to the letter next to it and to the letter next to it. then when they start fitting together a little bit, develop more flair. best advice i can give. i still draw super rediculously overthought but underdeveloped letters everyday. but when you start with simples, you have a strong basis with which to begin, and later if you need to look back, you remember the development of the letter, and it helps you. im not the best, but since i began using simples, i've actually come a lot further than without.

Hobbes
01-09-2008, 10:58 PM
yes, I can read what I wrote. At first I could barely write my name because I didn't know how to do the N's how I was trying to, I've done 'simples' tons of times so I think I have at least some letter structure. I always get sick of doing simple shit 'n do a piece though. I don't know what kinda letters I'm supposed to be making right now 'cause I think I'm past super simple block letters but I can't piece how I see it in my head. I just suck at drawing.

hal.cyon
01-09-2008, 11:08 PM
yes, I can read what I wrote. At first I could barely write my name because I didn't know how to do the N's how I was trying to, I've done 'simples' tons of times so I think I have at least some letter structure. I always get sick of doing simple shit 'n do a piece though. I don't know what kinda letters I'm supposed to be making right now 'cause I think I'm past super simple block letters but I can't piece how I see it in my head. I just suck at drawing.


im quite sure you can read what you wrote. and if i squint really hard i might be able to as well. but is that honestly what you want to put on a wall? if so then so be it. if not, the simple route is a proven path to greatness. every single writer you can think of started with simps. it how they get so creative with the letters later on. goes by the same principle as if you know where you've begun, you find a clearer path to where you're going. write whatever your name is in simple. then like i said begin to develop each letter appropriately. it takes time. doesn't happen overnight. pull here, push there, makes them yours. simples teach you how to make letters the same size, appropriate widths of letters, how one leg of the a should be the same size as the other..., they teach you a ton. and when you get good at them, make them better. make them yours. and then thats when it gets fun and super creative. this isn't something you just get overnight. after months you'll understand simples. then develop and so on. its not that you suck at drawing. anyone can draw. its that you're not passionate enough to develop the letters the way that you want. and thats frustrating.

beyondyereyes
01-09-2008, 11:36 PM
hal... i know this wasn't intended for me obviously but you make me want to do some simples right now. haha

Roolete
01-09-2008, 11:39 PM
stop all the talking.

hobbes nobodys is forcing you to do anything. do whatever you want.

the reason people are saying to do simples because its easier to build off of them, in the long run you'll progress faster. but again, your choice.

~GraffiC.EstatE~
01-10-2008, 12:11 AM
Rank- Looks ill, i dont even know what to say about it
Desire- lovein your shit looks absolutly dope!
Sex-your throwies look grimey and they grow on me more and more as you keep posting mass amounts.

Somthin i sketched up didnt feel like cleanin it up and shit.
Crits?
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3682/bb009td3.jpg

ReVO
01-10-2008, 12:13 AM
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/4195/2341186027845031900bl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits please. Looking for improvement. Sorry about all the shit in the background someone started doodling on it before I got the paper.

Reason To-Shine
01-10-2008, 12:37 AM
what about youe 'e'? you didn't fill that space between it and the 'v'... that just looks silly to me... also try to make your letter the same size... like the 'e' is very thick and your 'v' is very skinny...

ReVO
01-10-2008, 12:50 AM
what about youe 'e'? you didn't fill that space between it and the 'v'... that just looks silly to me... also try to make your letter the same size... like the 'e' is very thick and your 'v' is very skinny...

Alright thanks

the end
01-10-2008, 12:58 AM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6162/yousmellsqq7.jpg

Reason To-Shine
01-10-2008, 01:02 AM
...my 'o' is quite similar...

the end
01-10-2008, 01:03 AM
i like that o... been using it for a long time now.

Reason To-Shine
01-10-2008, 01:09 AM
...its nice... whats also cool is if you make it a third of the size the rest of your letters- flip it upside down and add mulitple lines below it... its a nice little thing I do sometimes...

the end
01-10-2008, 01:17 AM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6162/yousmellsqq7.jpg
bump it up.

felt some inspiration for a while today, some kid twice my size picks a fight with me, right before im about to finish him off he calls his friend to come n pound on me. bystander took him off though and hit him up a few times.
fuckin kids who cant fight for themselves, he even had his dad there to watch him beat the shit outa me.. but guess what i have a fucking bite mark on my nipple from that little bitch.

cannot fucking wait to show everybody :D

rigth after he did it i yelled "he fucking bit me! right on the fucking nipple!" and preceded to give him a nasty black eye

idleon3
01-10-2008, 01:22 AM
^^^ good shit... fuck a coward but try str8s for a lil while longer dude
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0046.jpg?t=1199949636
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSC00289.jpg?t=1199949714

the end
01-10-2008, 01:30 AM
^^^ good shit... fuck a coward but try str8s for a lil while longer dude

the fuck? look at your shit.

beyondyereyes
01-10-2008, 01:33 AM
i have a fucking bite mark on my nipple from that little bitch.

Um... what the fuck?

Anyways... I'm digging it a lot The End. Looking good.

And Idle I don't want to sound like an Ass but take some of your own advice.

idleon3
01-10-2008, 02:03 AM
are you serious... lmao... mine aint the shit but its decent my shit smears on toilet paper are cleaner then your graff

Dying to live
01-10-2008, 03:25 AM
you have a weird obsession with shit...
and you need more letter structure.

jawsy
01-10-2008, 04:52 AM
yeah.. half your extensions in the first peice sort of come out of nowhere

BORG
01-10-2008, 09:04 AM
idleon- simples, simples, simples, no more extensions, its not time for wildstyle, your lettering is in need of an upgrade as well as your structure right now, be patient with the style, and work on the handstyle

the end- the bottom of the y throws it off, aswell and the odd extension on the o, and on the smells the m is a bit weird too and not feeln the l's maybe bring the bottom part of the l's a bit further out

i'll try n get some shit posted up later

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 01:35 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e292/Xperiment67/Picture035.jpg


trying to give my letters a little style.. the Z's a little wonky.. but I like the M.

crits?

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-10-2008, 01:46 PM
^^^ good shit... fuck a coward but try str8s for a lil while longer dude
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0046.jpg?t=1199949636
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSC00289.jpg?t=1199949714


HAHAHHAHA you too man

Seek139
01-10-2008, 01:52 PM
;968460']HAHAHHAHA you too man

+1

Mass Appeal
01-10-2008, 01:52 PM
lol yeah ^

SEZ
01-10-2008, 02:04 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e292/Xperiment67/Picture035.jpg


trying to give my letters a little style.. the Z's a little wonky.. but I like the M.

crits?

first learn to flow your letters properly on paper and then go paint.
dont go over the same line a hundred times...thats how you get drips.
edit- oh and you probably shouldve used the black for outline, most likely
wouldve looked better

DRIPS!
01-10-2008, 02:05 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/5135/driphc1.jpg
little pen sketch.

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 02:09 PM
first learn to flow your letters properly on paper and then go paint.
dont go over the same line a hundred times...thats how you get drips.
edit- oh and you probably shouldve used the black for outline, most likely
wouldve looked better


That was no help...

I dont need someone telling me when I should go paint in my chill spot.

The lines I went over "a hundred" times dont have any drips.

revid!
01-10-2008, 02:15 PM
shit from last night..
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3497/cimg0032rr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2494/cimg0033od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and some skool scribble steez from today..
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.f0ba7dd4e5.jpg (http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?f0ba7dd4e5.jpg)
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.ca463d38cb.jpg (http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?ca463d38cb.jpg)
crits apreciated trying to progress that style

Mass Appeal
01-10-2008, 02:20 PM
That was no help...

I dont need someone telling me when I should go paint in my chill spot.

The lines I went over "a hundred" times dont have any drips.

that was help because euuurthing he said there was 100% true !

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 02:57 PM
that was help because euuurthing he said there was 100% true !

That's like giving someone a crit that said "cats are felines" and telling them it was help.

"learn to flow your letters better"

Basic rule of graffiti. Didn't need to know that.

"do it on paper before you go paint"

one - my money
two - my paint
three - my spot
four - doesn't help

the comment about drips.

there were no drips on the lines I went over a couple of times.
What drips there are was from it being a wet wall.

red fill with black outline?

I couldn't have followed any lines I did in red underneath considering THAT was red.
the very same red.

so nope, no help.

JETPACK!!
01-10-2008, 03:09 PM
dont ever paint on a wet wall.
your Z would look a lot better without the tag in it
your O and B would look better without the hearts and your M would look better without that smily face thing in it. the forcefields kinna whack. but on the plus side the letter porportion and flow isnt too too bad

did you go over your own bomb? cuz that would explain the half of a yellow field

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 03:12 PM
dont ever paint on a wet wall.
your Z would look a lot better without the tag in it
your O and B would look better without the hearts and your M would look better without that smily face thing in it. the forcefields kinna whack. but on the plus side the letter porportion and flow isnt too too bad

did you go over your own bomb? cuz that would explain the half of a yellow field

Thanks, yeh the wet wall was a bad idea but my friend talked me into it. We go down there all the time.

The yellow forcefield is an accident, underneath was an older bomb of mine. We've run out of space down there.. so we black stuff out/go over our stuff now.

It was my first time trying out some tweaks to the letters. I'll work on some sketches and post more later.

5Funerals
01-10-2008, 03:16 PM
EGODEATH - dude the only reason why his tips arent helping you is because you are retarted. It may have not dripped when you went over those lines but it looks shitty as fuck. Your shit would look better if you practiced more on paper before you painted. Your handstyle sucks and you have no style so you better hit the books before you waste any more of your money which reminds me, dont pay for paint unless its for graff cause otherwise its a waste.

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 03:22 PM
EGODEATH - dude the only reason why his tips arent helping you is because you are retarted. It may have not dripped when you went over those lines but it looks shitty as fuck. Your shit would look better if you practiced more on paper before you painted. Your handstyle sucks and you have no style so you better hit the books before you waste any more of your money which reminds me, dont pay for paint unless its for graff cause otherwise its a waste.


I'm aware it looks shitty as fuck. Fuckin off half drunk in the middle of the night tends to make it look shitty as fuck.

That's why we do it where we do it. No one but me and my friend go down there.

Also, I'll pay for paint for whatever I feel like buying it for. And I'll spend my money on whatever I want. Perks of having a job.

I'll also paint whenever I feel like it. Mmk. Moving on.

His tips also don't help because they werent tips.

AOTPs
01-10-2008, 03:59 PM
y does everyone blam it on the booze

Dying to live
01-10-2008, 04:08 PM
ahah i reckon when ever some one cant pull off a decent fucking bomb its "oh yeah did i forget to mention i was drunk and it was pitch black and i was battling a dragon with me eyes blindfolded.."

and why were you at a chill in the middle of the night..

5Funerals
01-10-2008, 04:14 PM
Also, I'll pay for paint for whatever I feel like buying it for. And I'll spend my money on whatever I want. Perks of having a job.


Yo I got a job too

Seek139
01-10-2008, 04:19 PM
Yo I got a job too

Paint receipts look great at the initial house raid...

Drakula
01-10-2008, 04:26 PM
Who keeps paint receipts at their house?To return their paint?I don't think so lol.

Seek139
01-10-2008, 04:28 PM
Who keeps paint receipts at their house?To return their paint?I don't think so lol.

Keep track of their spending its called living on your own.

5Funerals
01-10-2008, 04:28 PM
Seek you didnt see the whole conversation. I told him not to waste $ on paint and he tried to one up me by making me seem like deadbeat but I have a job.

Seek139
01-10-2008, 04:35 PM
Seek you didnt see the whole conversation. I told him not to waste $ on paint and he tried to one up me by making me seem like deadbeat but I have a job.

ahh got you!
/spam

HuntingLOLs
01-10-2008, 04:35 PM
that was help because euuurthing he said there was 100% true !

how exactly was his advices help? red outline with black fill is ill as fuck if you can pull it off - in any case its not like the red wasnt opaque enough to cover black and if black had been outline it will have looked the same cept in different colours. rest i think was explained by EGO

however -

dont try to excuse a shitty throwup/piece with anything. it sucked deal with it.

its like hooking up with fat chicks, you did it deal with it.

and 5funerals:
what the hell does: "dont pay for paint unless its for graff cause otherwise its a waste." mean?

revid:

best way to progress isnt to hope for progress. continue drawing and you'll end up with it - find old sketches and look at them, there you should be able to find progression. style will come if work for it

SLEDGEHAMMER
01-10-2008, 04:41 PM
STOP CLOGGING THIS THREAD WITH BULLSHIT THIS IS A FLICK THREAD

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000016f16a4e/1/29/kdt_Kae97j9aI_1W0LIPoPCCFoMGFwrD.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/BrfYSepA6D_doS2KEODRXGljRuacJTgC?referrer=hlnk)

yes i know m y shits been fucking whack lately, my letters are off at the moment.

beyondyereyes
01-10-2008, 04:55 PM
It looks like there's a "V" between the "T" and the "O" which I'm assuming doesn't belong since your name is gusto. The 3d needs a little work and the letters I think would go better if thickened and perhaps were simplified a little more. It's not bad but not great either.

I need to figure out how to use prismas more effectively. I guess I just go over the color too much and it ends up in uneven blotches or it might be the paper I'm using also. Plus I need work on color selection that works together.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/ugly.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/uglycolors.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/uglycutoff.jpg

a maze
01-10-2008, 04:57 PM
geist- throws lookin' clean, man... You're getting there.

SLEDGEHAMMER
01-10-2008, 05:00 PM
Those crits were whack but appreciated none the less, i write ASEN that piece is for a battle.

Blockbusters nice apart from the T you should have made it capital and bulked it up a little.

The throws decent though.

sanrtizer
01-10-2008, 05:15 PM
sledgehammer- not bad..not my fav from you,that o's weak it looks like a donut and now im hungry ha..people always tell me this but thicken up dem bars son
geist- thats a dope throw, nice to see some clean simps too

idk if this is worth my time filling it
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/2301/img0085ov0.jpg

a maze
01-10-2008, 05:16 PM
sanrtizer- Lose them extensions, other than that, lookin good.

been working on my throwie a bit, but I've been using my prismas at school lately, so I don't have em... So I hope you guys like Crayola, the OG marker-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mazeoner14.jpg\
Crits?

sanrtizer
01-10-2008, 05:17 PM
try not to make all those lines intersect its confusing... i cant really tell but it looks like your letters overlap a lil too much too

-EgoDeath-
01-10-2008, 05:22 PM
ahah i reckon when ever some one cant pull off a decent fucking bomb its "oh yeah did i forget to mention i was drunk and it was pitch black and i was battling a dragon with me eyes blindfolded.."

and why were you at a chill in the middle of the night..

I'm a night owl, I don't usually go out during the day cause im usually working or just dont feel like it. We dont really sneak around .. it's an underpass beneath some railroad tracks. I just park beside it and get paint as I need it out of my car. hang out there for 2-3 hours at a time, smoking, watching trains, painting.

None of the other writers around know about it/go there. It's a small town anyway. So we use it to test out ideas and stuff and work on can control (which I obviously need). So it doesn't really matter when our stuff looks bad, we fill it up and roll over it as needed.




anyway..

Sanr - the extension on the R looks like a penis.. i'd lose it. Other than that I like it.

Geist- I like the last two, but like sledgehammer said on that first one, it seems like the t should be capital.

Maze - I like the E but its confusing overall

jawsy
01-10-2008, 06:04 PM
geist- there lookin good especially you first one i like it
maze- dont overlap those lines too much
but i still like it
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1745/photo19if3.jpg
some shit

Lawk.
01-10-2008, 06:54 PM
i really like your shadow aper its good
maybe make the r not hang over so much though

Started not to long ago need crits =)

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii229/VisaliaPaintCrew/IMG00019.jpg

ps only 2 colors i had

NEZ89
01-10-2008, 07:00 PM
might wanna start off with block letters
the K looks bloated and the shading is mad off

NEZ89
01-10-2008, 07:01 PM
aper- yeah probably shorten the leg of the R

Raket.LHM
01-10-2008, 07:02 PM
^^^ good shit... fuck a coward but try str8s for a lil while longer dude
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0046.jpg?t=1199949636
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSC00289.jpg?t=1199949714

Just take a breath and use some struckture. if you used structure it would be hawt. just keep working it brotha..

Bets369R
01-10-2008, 07:03 PM
Some old stuff. i got in a bad car accident before christmas so i cant do any new stuff for a while :(

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/Picture25.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1164.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/Picture24.jpg

NEZ89
01-10-2008, 07:05 PM
i'm feelin the first one

Bazer
01-10-2008, 07:05 PM
geist- there lookin good especially you first one i like it
maze- dont overlap those lines too much
but i still like it
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1745/photo19if3.jpg
some shit

these letters are allmost perfect but the thing that i noticed you did is what alot of other people seem to do with there Rs'.
you made the right leg star from under' the curved part of the R. know what i mean? look:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/321321-1.jpg
you shouldve done the second one insted of the first one. i think thats why your r looks kinna funkeh.

sex without condoms
01-10-2008, 07:08 PM
i really like your shadow aper its good
maybe make the r not hang over so much though

Started not to long ago need crits =)

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii229/VisaliaPaintCrew/IMG00019.jpg

ps only 2 colors i had

top left.
jeremy(SP) fish :) <333

Lawk.
01-10-2008, 07:15 PM
top left.
jeremy(SP) fish :) <333

are you talking about the aesop album? ha

BohemianBastard
01-10-2008, 07:26 PM
Fuck you, adore me

http://i11.tinypic.com/828x25j.jpg

Rambooboo
01-10-2008, 07:30 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2235/2184498100_25cb04bd7d_b.jpg http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2385/2184499550_7f13389a62_b.jpg

check these two pics crits pleez

SLEDGEHAMMER
01-10-2008, 07:37 PM
Nice to see you still postin in the toy forum bohemian bastard, shit's fly.

BohemianBastard
01-10-2008, 07:41 PM
my shit gets largely ignored no matter where i post it
no difference, if i can help someone than thats coool
still im just a underage kid who sits at home and gets drunk whilst listening to vivaldi
fuck yeah
peace

ESKiMO2
01-10-2008, 07:41 PM
Ram- Start with simple letters.
Bastard- hot shit, where do you live?
Bets- The last one looks okay but the circle on the end of the B is awkward.
Lawk- I always stay away from Ks when doing bubble letters. Bubble letters are less important than actual structure with bars.
Aper- I like the letters but the E doesn't really match the flow. Try making it less rounded off.

sanrtizer
01-10-2008, 07:47 PM
aper- your on the right track fix that r
lawk- jus keep sketchin
bets- those throws are on point. the t and s are too small on the second pic
bohemian bastard- such a dooope style no crits its too sexy
bumping+outline and 3d
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8785/img0087kr4.jpg
crits PLEASE

a maze
01-10-2008, 07:47 PM
bumpity

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mazeoner14.jpg\
Crits?

b3aT
01-10-2008, 07:53 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g82/Penguinpowah/Duki.jpg
Need to save up for some markers... i need to line up my letters btw.

b3aT
01-10-2008, 07:56 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g82/Penguinpowah/IMG.jpg
sorry if its big. This has too many add ons.

anie 1
01-10-2008, 07:58 PM
wuts with the random aarows coming out of no where?
the first piece i mean

b3aT
01-10-2008, 08:17 PM
i sketched over an archer.

dim
01-10-2008, 08:40 PM
Fuck you, adore me

http://i11.tinypic.com/828x25j.jpg
damn this shit is sooooooo fresh man i love this style keep it up i wanna see more

revid!
01-10-2008, 09:14 PM
bumpin this one for crits
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7098/cimg0039eq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and this is from work...progression?....unfinished
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5125/cimg0040ni6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5125/cimg0040ni6.fe917da194.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=cimg0040ni6.jpg)

Apple pie
01-10-2008, 09:18 PM
Hahhaha, Revid my buddy drew something like that the other day.
No worries though it look ariight, i like how your trying to make your letter weave and flow
keep it up and youll develop that style you want mang!

revid!
01-10-2008, 09:21 PM
haha oh word what you meen about your buddy drawing something like that
and thnks for the crits

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-10-2008, 09:46 PM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1973.jpg

5Funerals
01-10-2008, 09:48 PM
two guys above me - those are both great especially bohemian bastard's.

SEIZE - wicked nice. Just work on banners I guess cause the rest is perfect.

New throwup style cause stupid beef with jetpack made me realize how played out my last one was. Ignore the wavy O in the first one.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/peorthrowie.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/throwup.jpg

revid!
01-10-2008, 09:49 PM
word man that sketch is lookin clean..
i think im the only one on here giving crits haha
good color combo

revid!
01-10-2008, 09:52 PM
5 funerals- that bomb has good structure just needs cleaned up a bit
the r try not to have such a gap between the legs and the circle part lol hard to explain
but looking good
*oh and maybe thickin up the p a little

5Funerals
01-10-2008, 09:53 PM
yeah I know what you mean, the beginning of the second leg should be pushed to the right so it almost shares a line with the head of the R.

Cheers!

revid!
01-10-2008, 09:54 PM
yeah deff man! good lookin

JETPACK!!
01-10-2008, 10:22 PM
fatten up the legs of the P and R 5funerals, shit looks hot. yeah that stupid beef shit made me do mad simples. word, whatever i can say we probably both will benefit from it...

Sumoe
01-10-2008, 10:43 PM
Nice stuff, Ensr, Seize...

Others, do simples, work on structure, and go to the "New 2 Graff" thread is you have not already. And if you have done that, just keep practicing.

Supreme510
01-10-2008, 11:02 PM
quick sketch

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/kennethroa15/Photo336.jpg

tell me wassup

Supreme510
01-10-2008, 11:03 PM
not finish yet

revid!
01-10-2008, 11:09 PM
looks like it kinda goes big to small...
and you may wanna lose the crown..

newbornsek
01-10-2008, 11:11 PM
my wack shit.. haha i need some work
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00791.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00790.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00789.jpg


and the throw comp, fuck this word
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00788.jpg

Supreme510
01-10-2008, 11:16 PM
it does go big to small

newbornsek
01-10-2008, 11:16 PM
"newer throw"
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00794.jpg

Supreme510
01-10-2008, 11:17 PM
i told ya it aint done for the coloring

Dresden
01-10-2008, 11:36 PM
Yeah, I suck. Criticism please! What can I do to improve?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/hellkat/IMG_0429.jpg

beyondyereyes
01-10-2008, 11:40 PM
New to graffiti thread. Check it. Use bars though. As in use simple rectangles to make letters, you know block letters. Then just continue with them until you're ready to warp them.

On the handy just keep practicing. It'll take time.

Bisqik though? Like the pancake mix?

Dresden
01-10-2008, 11:46 PM
New to graffiti thread. Check it. Use bars though. As in use simple rectangles to make letters, you know block letters. Then just continue with them until you're ready to warp them.

On the handy just keep practicing. It'll take time.

Bisqik though? Like the pancake mix?
Thanks for the advice. And yes, Bisqik like the pancake mix. :]

Roolete
01-11-2008, 12:06 AM
cool throw newborn

i think im finally gettin the hang of simples. shits harder then i thought
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0640.jpg
used like half my whiteout pen

faTTYYY
01-11-2008, 03:12 AM
lettering is bad but i plan on making it look perrty
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/17/p1000081pt4.jpg

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6994/p1000085ky2.jpg

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9247/p1000082ra0.jpg

crits?

Hoes
01-11-2008, 04:26 AM
cher-http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7875/editnt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

you should have made the right leg of the H the same as the left leg...get me?

HuntingLOLs
01-11-2008, 08:39 AM
thats exactly what he shouldnt in my opinion. however it rarely works with R's left bar being longer than the right though this looks ok

Skesh
01-11-2008, 11:12 AM
no that H's good
the whole sketch is good!
i like it, go paint

SEZ
01-11-2008, 11:27 AM
That was no help...

I dont need someone telling me when I should go paint in my chill spot.

The lines I went over "a hundred" times dont have any drips.

dont be stupid, it looks like crap you idiot, i was trying to help but whatever
go paint as gay as you want in your 'chill spot'.
if youre so good and dont need advice go and paint a real hot spot shit face



edit-i agree roolette, simples are harder than they sound haha
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4573/eyksorangekx9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i suck i know

TricksForKids
01-11-2008, 12:11 PM
now now sezzy be nice, he has a "chill spot", hopefully hes referring to a large wall in his family's dining room so that when they sit down for dinner they can throw up whatever they ate again...egodeath...take the advice you get you emo-star-tagger

Mass Appeal
01-11-2008, 12:13 PM
yo Tricks !!!!!!

can we exchange !?

TricksForKids
01-11-2008, 12:18 PM
yeah sure but mine better be nice, what do you right now? AMK?> AMKWAGAG? AMKWAHHHH..lol

Mass Appeal
01-11-2008, 12:18 PM
AMKWAGAG hahahah nah..iv been writing AMK for a whole year now...:)

TricksForKids
01-11-2008, 12:19 PM
alright, AMK it is then, might even be done by tonight if youre lucky, peace

ZuriMarie
01-11-2008, 12:32 PM
tell me wat you think
http://webmail.aol.com/33706/aim/en-us/Mail/get-attachment.aspx?uid=1.22436478&folder=Inbox&partId=2

-EgoDeath-
01-11-2008, 01:16 PM
dont be stupid, it looks like crap you idiot, i was trying to help but whatever
go paint as gay as you want in your 'chill spot'.
if youre so good and dont need advice go and paint a real hot spot shit face



edit-i agree roolette, simples are harder than they sound haha
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4573/eyksorangekx9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i suck i know

I guess you just completely passed over everything else I said?

I already said I know it looks like shit. That's why it's in a spot that only me and my friend know about.

You didn't help at all. Nothing you said would have helped me make it better. You just spewed what amounted to nothing.

What Jetpack said was what could be considered help.

SEZ
01-11-2008, 01:27 PM
ok enough about you now...post pics or shut up

Haz-E
01-11-2008, 01:41 PM
Seize that sketch is off the chain man n im feeling the banner and the english writing looking dope
Cher I really like your stuff but im not feeling that simple work on it abit n itll be cream as hell

bumping my last sketch
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7088/image003yx2.jpg

jersOneTIC
01-11-2008, 01:50 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8692/peaceqk4.jpg
decos are cool.
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8316/pinkorrx2.jpg
lazy fill...

SEZ
01-11-2008, 01:53 PM
yeah you put your shit together well^^^

gane17
01-11-2008, 02:20 PM
the R in the second one looks as though it could use sorting out a bit, and the extension on the J in the first one stops it from looking like a J, but other than that looking nice

crits on these please?
http://i2.tinypic.com/8eu5c0p.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/6kac078.jpg

-Leski
01-11-2008, 02:42 PM
Gane man, stop that.

Blockbusters, Blockbusters, Blockbusters.
Then when you can pump out decent blockbusters and bubble letters start using bars.

Like this ----> GANE --->break down the strokes of each letter into bars, keep it neat.

Go visit the new to graff thread.

(my stuff was worse.)

EDIT
throwie...
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8477/21856010ix2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEZ
01-11-2008, 03:15 PM
bump this got no crits
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/9607/eyksorangenq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

revid!
01-11-2008, 03:18 PM
some school drawings......
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2008/cimg0042ml5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/1121/cimg0043jq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hopefully getting better
lemmmeee know

faTTYYY
01-11-2008, 03:23 PM
the top one is fucking ill

Mass Appeal
01-11-2008, 03:39 PM
I guess you just completely passed over everything else I said?

I already said I know it looks like shit. That's why it's in a spot that only me and my friend know about.

You didn't help at all. Nothing you said would have helped me make it better. You just spewed what amounted to nothing.

What Jetpack said was what could be considered help.

look..quit you jibba jabba...seriously....quit whining...man...you got some harsh crits...so have i....it fuckin helped me....grow a pair of balls and place them in that ball-less scrotum of yours.

JETPACK!!
01-11-2008, 03:45 PM
kay stop telling egodeath to grow balls an shit or whatever, cuz the more you talk, the more he does. then everyone argues and its not a crit thread anymore.


http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1536/bels1mq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumpin this from a couple pages ago, didnt get many crits

Rank-oner!
01-11-2008, 03:50 PM
I Love Amk!
Also jers i think thats fire man but i think on the second one the top part of the R is too skinny in comparison to everything else

revid!
01-11-2008, 03:52 PM
jetpack-the basics are there, the e and l are yor strongest letters work on that b just dont put those extra lines on the inside and make the s more blocky like the other letters its a little too skinny in the middle but overall its comin nice

Rank-oner!
01-11-2008, 03:54 PM
sorry

Bazer
01-11-2008, 04:57 PM
revid, dont make your letters so blocky, make shit smooooother, itll be easier on the eyes. try rounding off the edges to see how it'll look.
aile, looks great, made me try out some simple letters. im diggin the color scheme with the single pink L.
bastardo, shits hot. its nearly as fresh as my breathe after i brush and mouthwash.

well i gave in and tried out nice simples. whadda think?

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1536/bels1mq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ok theyre simple but if youre not already doing it, you should learn how to use bars. and if u are then your defeating the whole purpose of them the way that your letters dont stay the same thickness...
bassically im sayin, that good ur usin simples. try using bars to build ur letters. but if u are already then learn how to keep em the same thickness through the whole bar.


here's somethin i did yesterday...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1192.jpg

BORG
01-11-2008, 04:58 PM
feelin that e bazer, that extension that runs off it is kinda akward with the letter though :(

JETPACK!!
01-11-2008, 05:00 PM
sez, your flows off. fix your E and Y. just angle them a bit better, it looks good though
revid, it looks great, i like the second one. work on your L, or your first letter, i think its an L but im not entirely sure. i dont really like the style of it.

if i could erase marker, then i'd fix my S. cuz i know i fucked it up :)

P.S. i drew this before the crits starting coming in, so wait for my next sketch for any real improvements

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/407/bels2nb2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bazer
01-11-2008, 05:11 PM
feelin that e bazer, that extension that runs off it is kinda akward with the letter though :(


i was goan put a penis right there but when i got to the marker outline i was "naaahh". haha

revid!
01-11-2008, 05:26 PM
looks fresh man

mind.or.matter
01-11-2008, 06:24 PM
Havn't Posted in a while, but meh.

jetpack, the left side of your b is too fat, get the top bar of the E parallel on both sides, and the s is too fat and too far from the L

revid man im feelin it like that, fuck smooth edges...

sez, the angle of the y doesnt really fit with the rest of the letters

Havn't been sketching as much as i used to but heres one.
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/EnvePink.jpg

SEZ
01-11-2008, 06:36 PM
thanks i can see what you guys mean, i should tilt it to the left so its straight

Czar One
01-11-2008, 06:56 PM
um.....excahnge with IlikePie.



yo Mr. So, sorry, it's rough. Didn't have any pencils and I tried to clean it up on the computer a lil bit.....
New style i'm working on =/

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/rab32.jpg

faTTYYY
01-11-2008, 07:10 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7807/p1000120wu7.jpg

crits..

mind.or.matter
01-11-2008, 08:12 PM
what ever happened to "if you want to get crits, give crits"?

Roolete
01-11-2008, 08:19 PM
i like it czar. i think the 3d is a little too long.
fatty close your letters

how is it that after 8 months this is all ive developed?. ..
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0642.jpg

faTTYYY
01-11-2008, 08:22 PM
thx cher that top one you just posted is fuckin sick

loser.
01-11-2008, 08:53 PM
i like it czar. i think the 3d is a little too long.
fatty close your letters

how is it that after 8 months this is all ive developed?. ..
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0642.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6420/piccwr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

a maze
01-11-2008, 08:56 PM
woah... o.o

Not super-close, but there are many resemblances...

UncleDonny
01-11-2008, 08:58 PM
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j5/MARK6275/01-11-08_1907-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j5/MARK6275/01-11-08_1927.jpg

Robbie P
01-11-2008, 08:59 PM
Why you freakin out dude? All you need to be able to do is nice straight letters to get up doing rad stuff. Paint straight letters, have fun, and remember the dudes you see doing pieces now have been writing for more than a couple years not months.

JSBiggz
01-11-2008, 09:34 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/319/img0001fv5.jpg
Just started writing Mekone, my first attemped, did it in tech class....crits would be appreciated

JSBiggz
01-11-2008, 09:35 PM
oh shit....thats big...srry bout that guys

UncleDonny
01-11-2008, 09:43 PM
mek the 3d is ok and the n on the one is the right idea but those E's and M are sloppy

mattFOO
01-11-2008, 09:47 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/548/fooib0.jpg

JSBiggz
01-11-2008, 09:48 PM
yeah, i think i just need to straighten up my M....i like the way it looks....just needs to be a bit more uniform....and i didnt want the O just to be a plain circle, so i tried to do something to it, and the E's.....i dunno

RemoZ
01-11-2008, 10:18 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1912/dsc00180ma2.jpg
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5162/dsc00181hx7.jpg
---------------- Now playing: Against Me! - Jordan's First Choice (http://www.foxytunes.com/artist/against+me!/track/jordan's+first+choice) via FoxyTunes (http://www.foxytunes.com/signatunes/)

enak1
01-11-2008, 11:01 PM
http://http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9572/dsc00251gp0.jpg


if anyone has any crits feel free....

enak1
01-11-2008, 11:05 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9572/dsc00251gp0.jpg

any crits?

a maze
01-11-2008, 11:14 PM
enak1- Like we tell everyone around here, start with simples and work your way up.

remoz- good to see you are sticking with simples. I really like the first one, keep it up.

faTTYYY
01-11-2008, 11:47 PM
diggin the 1st piece by same

a maze
01-12-2008, 12:40 AM
new shit-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mazeoner15.jpg
crits

Rank-oner!
01-12-2008, 12:57 AM
Bazer: im likin that R alot :) but how come the E is lower case?
FATTTY: without a bottom i cant tell what it says might have potential but give crits to get them
SAme: lookin real good. likin the simps
And i dont see anything alike in that painted piece to Cher but the top of the E and thats about it.
Maze: i like what your coming up with but i think the Z could use a little work on being more defined as a Z but i like that throw style a lot

-Leski
01-12-2008, 01:11 AM
Nice stuff a maze, the drop shadow on your tear is a little odd looking though. not a big deal.

The letters are hot.

@Same, I like the first simple, just make all the letters the same size ans touch up the right side of the A (make the right leg longer) and the start of the M. (make the left leg less rounded)
Edit, maybe make the prongs on the E deeper.



http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8477/21856010ix2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bumpity because I'd like a few critz if anyone has any for me.

a maze
01-12-2008, 01:14 AM
Rank- yeah, I get what you're sayin about the z, have any suggestions on how I could fit it?

Roolete
01-12-2008, 02:03 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6420/piccwr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

woah shit my e is like exactly like his. ive never even seen this before. where is this guy?

SEZ
01-12-2008, 02:06 AM
yours is better who cares^^^hahaha

Rank-oner!
01-12-2008, 02:07 AM
Maze well this is sketch as shit cause i just did a quick idea and i cant do your style but maybe this will give you some ideas or something
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/maze001.jpg
and Roolete his Top part is but so many people use that shape E with it curving up on the bottom bar and even that and your middle bar is different

Evasion Of Invasion
01-12-2008, 03:04 AM
rank sry to say i cant read that throw try somethin more simple
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture103-1.jpg
crits?

STAR01
01-12-2008, 04:31 AM
EVA; that shit looks tight, but i think you should lose the "snaketail"
SAme; i like that second one alot maybe make a bit more background with that blue??

some shit i draw at school crits??
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4864/1002343tx0.jpg

spuzzy
01-12-2008, 06:53 AM
EVA; that shit looks tight, but i think you should lose the "snaketail"
SAme; i like that second one alot maybe make a bit more background with that blue??

some shit i draw at school crits??
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4864/1002343tx0.jpg

reminds me of those black and pink boxes of camels. i like it.

c.n.k
01-12-2008, 10:03 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1140.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1141.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1142.jpg

BlackBookCook420
01-12-2008, 10:03 AM
http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=latestshitlk6.jpg


Eat it......Choke on it

Carbon2
01-12-2008, 10:10 AM
-c.n.k: Nice letter and coulours, nice charr. Exellent!
-STAR01: I feell ya, that shit is ill
-BlackBookCook420: Do not feel the coulours... But the letters are ill!
-RemoZ: I feel ya coulours and all.

This is just some shit i did:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/8471/dsc01966nz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BlackBookCook420
01-12-2008, 10:19 AM
I got a problem with that hahah im colorblind...

5Funerals
01-12-2008, 10:21 AM
Haha Carbon your colors are worse. I think you should go to the new to graff thread because its very very helpful. It will teach you all about bars and letter structure and simples. You should be drawing was simpler things and dont bother coloring yet because letters should come first.

loser.
01-12-2008, 10:44 AM
woah shit my e is like exactly like his. ive never even seen this before. where is this guy?

hes from toronto, and sez your a moron

BlackBookCook420
01-12-2008, 10:45 AM
Word Up Brotha

SEZ
01-12-2008, 11:37 AM
hes from toronto, and sez your a moron

i'm gonna ignore this before you turn it into another one of
your gay ebitch fights

loser.
01-12-2008, 11:43 AM
how about you just stay in this thread till your not such a fucking toy, come out when u dont suck so badly