Blackbooks

[SEZ]

hes from toronto, and sez your a moron

i'm gonna ignore this before you turn it into another one of
your gay ebitch fights

[loser.]

how about you just stay in this thread till your not such a fucking toy, come out when u dont suck so badly

[SEZ]

thats exactly what i'm doing^^^and yes when it comes to piecing i do suck ass and i'll admit it but i can still hold my own as a bomber so eat my stinky winky
edit- loser in a way i feel sorry for you, you must really not have much of a life to be coming on here and
bashing toys, go paint or something seriously, i'm toy and i probably paint more than you do...
stop flapping your lips we're all on here for the same reason.

[loser.]

please.. your bombs blow, you can hold shit.

[SEZ]

^^^you must be a really insecure person...shame man shame

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/blla.jpg
for Rots
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121526.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121427.jpg
for reet
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121403.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121345.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121327.jpg

[BlackBookCook420]

If i was you id work on all my shit before i started bombing...... you should have atleast one throw down thats stable and is actually good.....stick with one and keep practicing it.....

[5Funerals]

Rade - wicked nice, I see you are friends with reetbot :p
I messed up the O but other than that I like it
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400009-5.jpg
Crits?

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/blla.jpg
for Rots
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121526.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121427.jpg
for reet
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121403.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121345.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121327.jpg

bump
and for the gazillionth time i dont write rade

[Hoostein]

swc, yay!!! very nice

[Rank-oner!]

That throw isnt mine...maze just asked how he could make his Z look more like a Z and i tried helping out haha i cant write that style for crap but maybe it will help

[garbage down tha way]

sex- sex :D

peor- keep consistancy with your bars.

cnk- so dope.

toss
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/new.jpg
tag
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/new3.jpg
ewwww
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/new2.jpg

[AZTEKA]

Raone- nice as always.
Over- all 3 pics are nice.

A sketch I did, kinda over did it with the lighting.
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8984/01121em7.jpg

[SEZ]

If i was you id work on all my shit before i started bombing...... you should have atleast one throw down thats stable and is actually good.....stick with one and keep practicing it.....


thats a dumb thing to say, if i'm bombing more than i piece why would i have to work on my piecing to bomb? doesnt make sense

[mosezone]

garbage, that first throw is pretty nice, but i'm not so sure about that R
azteka, that's pretty dope, but there are a little too many extensions.

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00305.jpg
crits?

[-GEKS-]

i think some of the letters over lap too much
still nice
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1458.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1459.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1497.jpg

[faTTYYY]

garbage- that last piece is ill keep it up
mosezone - work on the ose part to get them into proportion with the rest of your letters
loser. - loser.

other than that, good shit all around

[SEZ]

please.. your bombs blow, you can hold shit.

you know loser for someone who cant even pull a decent handstyle you sure have a big mouth, you should be in the toy forum too you fucker

[a maze]

Stop the beef, damnit... No point.

Bumpin this-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mazeoner15.jpg
crits

[sex without condoms]

i gotta admit, i see no letters there

[a maze]

It's pretty easy to see for most of the people I've showed this style to.

you can't read any type of complicated graffiti, wildstyle and such?

[sex without condoms]

no, i can, its just if the letters are what i think they are, you need work on that toss

[rayseone]

i dont see shit either, juts because its complicated doesnt mean it doesnt have to have structure and be unreadable,

mosez - not fond of the e at all bring your o out abit too, could kinda look like a d

geks keep with the simples, they will pay off eventuallly

azteka, i like that man, the s is kinda lacking tho

over - doppe throw, peice is illin too

shitty ass pen fresstyle crits ?
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9814/dsc00435cr6.jpg

[sex without condoms]

something like this would be better, imo.
i suck at Ms and Zs anyhow but w.e

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/3640/174609vk9.jpg

[a maze]

yeah, I'm still working on it, thanks for the maze pic, btw.

seyar- s is too small, work on simples and lose extensions.

[garbage down tha way]

seyar- i like your style alot, only things with that is the y looks a bit skinny, the horizontal bar on the bottom of it is kinda random, and the r could have some more steez. dope tho, keep it up.

sex- that z is fire

azteka- that piece is hot, only thing is that the extentions on the s get kinda tangled up in eachother.

amaze- same thing everyones saying, i cant read it.

mozes- keep your bars proportional and make the letters the same height.

[sInk.dIs.]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9312/fscn3116xr1.jpg

[Evasion Of Invasion]

rank sry to say i cant read that throw try somethin more simple
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture103-1.jpg
crits?

bump

[drankndro]

whyd u jus put eva? i like the evade at the top but try diff colors and get rid of the weird black and green thing at bottom and the dying in your arms thing

[con]

i just got a new black book so im sketchin

[hazetheone]

dying in your arms haha

[-ShAmEE-]

dont like this but, i took the time doin it so blah.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/12.jpg

[scary letters]

gettin there evade, the u and a need serious work but the e has potential!

everybody always tellin me i never do simples

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/012/0/4/no_north_south_or_eastsiders___by_bigel.jpg

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2008/012/d/5/gotta_stay_sharp_by_bigel.jpg

[roa]

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/roa613/ropc.jpg

[TricksForKids]

the R in elzers weak biggg, but the rest of the shit is hype, feelin the Z alot, and your throwups are off the chain as usual..

first sketch in a while..go easy on me.trying out a new style...and yes i know the colouring got fucked up..my scanners ultra sensitive...

exchange with AMK:

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8381/img003ob4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[TricksForKids]

ohh...and i missed 3D...lol

[mattFOO]

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/548/fooib0.jpghttp://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9778/0112082144vr8.jpghttp://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1817/0112082148qo6.jpg

[renegade185]

i got 2 rough sketches of a throw im workin on. crits? tryin to figure out if im goin in a good direction with it.
btw. i write hazmat
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/101_0110.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/101_0099.jpg

[mattFOO]

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5151/foooooooxl4.jpg

[mattFOO]

second one is nice lose the swirly

[blunttokes]

crits wuld be great plz n thnx
my first sketch piece i have done in the 3yrs ive been into the game for.

mainly a bomber but time to try some pieces i guess but ya crits wuld be killer

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5649/1003291uy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thnx

[SEZ]

^^^yeah i knw what you mean, i'm also not much of a piecer,
go simpler and use bars to make your letters

[vegimite on toast]

New sketch style.
First photo is the proper one, second is my hardcore gangsta photo.. Lolz.
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/P1000244.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/P1000242.jpg
nice foldable steak knife
camping is cool!

[-ShAmEE-]

why just why do u put ur money and a knife in ur flicks, i dont think anyone gives a shit about that, is that thai weed?...dont tell me u get high on that?

[mas$]

aHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[sketch3]

why just why do u put ur money and a knife in ur flicks, i dont think anyone gives a shit about that, is that thai weed?...dont tell me u get high on that?

yea man if ur smokin y bother with that mersh an tie shit,
skunk ftw

[Mass Appeal]

the R in elzers weak biggg, but the rest of the shit is hype, feelin the Z alot, and your throwups are off the chain as usual..

first sketch in a while..go easy on me.trying out a new style...and yes i know the colouring got fucked up..my scanners ultra sensitive...

exchange with AMK:

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8381/img003ob4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks man...this is dope !

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/l-1.jpg

BAWK throw.. ^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/n.jpg

BAWK peice...thought id throw your ledendary sig in there TRICKs haha :P

hope yuh like..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/o.jpg

shitty fucked up inline peice thing ^^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/pp.jpg

book cover.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/m.jpg

peice i may paint.

[Rots takes your Daughters]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1912/dsc00180ma2.jpg
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5162/dsc00181hx7.jpg
---------------- Now playing: Against Me! - Jordan's First Choice (http://www.foxytunes.com/artist/against+me!/track/jordan's+first+choice) via FoxyTunes (http://www.foxytunes.com/signatunes/)


Change your name, son.

[Skesh]

indeed
http://www.totalegekte.nl/v2/index.php/site/comments/same/
http://www.totalegekte.nl/v2/index.php/site/comments/same_graffiti_part_ii/

[Mass Appeal]

thanks man...this is dope !

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/l-1.jpg

BAWK throw.. ^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/n.jpg

BAWK peice...thought id throw your ledendary sig in there TRICKs haha :P

hope yuh like..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/o.jpg

shitty fucked up inline peice thing ^^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/pp.jpg

book cover.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/m.jpg

peice i may paint.

:mad:

[TricksForKids]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8381/img003ob4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i might have to steal that throwup ras, that shit is really really hype, the piece is one of your best yet too, i juts feel like theres still little flow between all your letters,try going a little crazier maybe and squaring some shit off, still looks bubbly and childish, but alot better simpler letters, so props man

and a bump for my sketch for youuuu

[Sumoe]

Nice stuff, guys.

Amk, you've improved a lot. But you really need to work on that hand, in my opinion. I don't know, maybe it's just me.

[Mass Appeal]

ahah :d..great to see the older heads think iv goten a lil better..thanks guys..and yeah SUME im mega working onit !

[dim]

amwha
i love those wha throws man and the peice is freash to

[faTTYYY]

that bawk throw is fucking sick massappeal

[sky_one]

mass appeal-that shit its dope love the colors
tricksforkids-dope
heres some shit did changed my tag to made
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/131/madeqq7.png
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6351/ppqh2.png
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9317/fatpensaz2.png
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/32/fatpenssu2.png
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/285/fatpenskr4.png
crits please?

[faTTYYY]

^^^ i would work on getting your d's and e's proportional with the rest of the letters. besides that its lookin good

[blunttokes]

^^^yeah i knw what you mean, i'm also not much of a piecer,
go simpler and use bars to make your letters


wurd i always do bars as my letters i jus thot it was time to go further but ill keep the bars goin on....

ill have a sketch up later tonite.... gatta work pce

[AyteYourCookies]

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture415178.jpg

[HuntingLOLs]

seriously amk, the throw is one of the dopest i've seen. honest to god

[NEZ89]

Mass- your characters are dope but u need to work on their hands
Ayte- i like it, probably extend the top right part of the T more

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

amk- im diggin that throw very creative
ayte- i like that your using bars like to see someones listening

http://i3.tinypic.com/6le8d1d.jpg
what cha think dont know what to color it very color dumb

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012119.jpg

name change

[Bastardo]

"props to bastardo for helping with the name choice" ;)

Goog god amk your handies need so much work, so does your throw, ignore high coloured pieces and stick too throws.
Your throw is way way too bunched up.

Werst the bottom one is on a new level, just change the T looks like a poo

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/8593/picture280413hk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Werster and sickoe

[thesilentvandal]

"props to bastardo for helping with the name choice" ;)


:) yes :D

[mexico]

AMK_I like the colors
MAOE_I dig the third one
AYTE_ thats sick, but ink it/finish it more.
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/bs2.jpg
I liked this better a couple of days ago, but now Im not so sure

im still workin' on it.

[Rambooboo]

mexico keep the lines cleaner

["bulb"]

http://i5.tinypic.com/8av896r.jpg

["bulb"]

http://i5.tinypic.com/8av896r.jpg

["bulb"]

http://i11.tinypic.com/6wnxum1.jpg

[NEZ89]

bulb try doin your own thing b
use learngraffiti.net as a referance instead of copying from it

over did it a bit with the add ons
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5960/im001606zw6.jpg

["bulb"]

http://i5.tinypic.com/6ppr3b8.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012122.jpg

[jawsy]

nez- that nost in bangin except i dont like how the t connects to the top of the o
bulb- never bite from learngraffiti.net
thesilentvandal- i love it.. does it read werst?
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1846/photo25pk6.jpg
my simp...
can someone pleeease help me to make sure my letters dont get bigger and the word goes :(
oh and ignore the line in the a... accident
crits??

[dim]

werst that shit is made clean and dope man but why the change in name ?

[thesilentvandal]

cuz the D was bothering me so much, and i couldnt progress.

[revid!]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012122.jpg

buuuummmpp thissss
maddd hott stylee

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012125.jpg

["bulb"]

http://i11.tinypic.com/8ebjezb.jpg

[Bazer]

http://i5.tinypic.com/6ppr3b8.jpg

please dont sign back on and post some bullshit like this again.
if you wanna be a dope graff head like cope 2 or Bazer 6 or Zesterock 1you gotta start straight from the bottom. no biting, and simple letters.

everyone knows u bit this...

[acereborn]

Yes, I'm a toy... Crits appreciated.
Btw, Silentvandal, your piece is awesome!!

http://www.theyetigames.com/viper1.jpg

[Kriede]

silent me likey very much.

BORG you still around?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2070/2191845140_16ec379076_o.jpg

[Roolete]

i liked your old c's a lot more

[Street Smart]

Aper - yes it gets bigger make em the same size and it will be nice.
werst - shits dope
viper - do simples
chalk - love it

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

amk- im diggin that throw very creative
ayte- i like that your using bars like to see someones listening

http://i3.tinypic.com/6le8d1d.jpg
what cha think dont know what to color it very color dumb

bump everthing is dope that is supposed to be dope

[jawsy]

nez- that nost in bangin except i dont like how the t connects to the top of the o
bulb- never bite from learngraffiti.net
thesilentvandal- i love it.. does it read werst?
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1846/photo25pk6.jpg
my simp...
can someone pleeease help me to make sure my letters dont get bigger and the word goes :(
oh and ignore the line in the a... accident
crits??
bump for more crits

["bulb"]

http://i17.tinypic.com/717i7w1.jpg

[blunttokes]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012119.jpg

name change


im diggin this shit for sure bro... props!

wersto is a dope name!

["bulb"]

Jawsy tri drawin a verry faint line at the top and the botom of APER and make the highest point of each letter just touch the top line and the lowest point of each letter just touch the bottom line .. (just for practice)

i drew this in like 5 seconds but you get the drift
http://i12.tinypic.com/82ubtlc.jpg

[Bazer]

heyyy bulb. your doing your own thing now. haha.. k wel all i have to say is learn how to build ur letters using bars that way they dont come out bulky and different sizes everywhere, know what i mean? like this but it could be alot more simple and they dont have to be so squared.
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9674/555553532jy7.jpg
also check out the new to graffiti thread. there's alot of good tutorials.

this is also a good example of using bars.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture212.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture213.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture215.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture216.jpg

[BlackBookCook420]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4409/serrrrrp1.jpg


here ya go


toy? or not?

[mind.or.matter]

Ok, we need to get back to if you want to post a picture, you have to crit on the images before.

Anyways

Bulb - lose extensions add-ons etc until you get your letter structure down better, your all over the place. If you've read any other page in this thread the same thing is said constantly. SIMPLES! Start simple.

Jawsy - Although bulb seems to have no perception of letter structure, listen to him about using lines to keep letters the same size.

Acereborn - pretty much the same thing i said to bulb applies to you. So read that and use those critz on your own work.

MOther Fuckers. Crit if you want crits from now on.

[mind.or.matter]

blackbook guy post up some sketches, see, BLACK BOOKS. that is paint. but still looks dece post that in the pictures thread.

[BlackBookCook420]

In a way im just tryin to show some of you what SIMPLE is...that took me all but 20 mins

[BlackBookCook420]

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9137/ryukoj5.jpg

Not usually one for characters but im MADLY IN LOVE WITH DEATH NOTE....so heres my re-indition of Shinigami Death God Ryuk. ENJOI!!

[-ShAmEE-]

nice!...kid need to learn how to post a piccy.

[AyteYourCookies]

http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture415178.jpg
bump

[NICCSACC]

that "T" is cool. tight overall now add some color!!

[aboz]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/chubzz43va/Picture021.jpg

[renegade185]

scrap that and start over. start real simple.

[Maste]

if you can read it good for you haha
this is my second time doin this style...ever i sketched it real quick on the bottom of a paper and likely it so did it over and colord it in...with sharpies
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4485/sed2abspx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
it says sed2
i am aware that:
the first s doesnt really flow with the rest of the letters
the e has no hole and has to be more defined
the d needs to be less "bloblike" and have a larger "arm" so that you can tell its a d...
and the 2 needs to be more two-y

so, other than that do you guys think this has potential or i should just try something different all together. personally i hink it has potentially to be cool/funky and it could definalty work witha little work

edit: forgot crits:
wers i love the new throwie keep at it man
ayte: the extnesions on the e and a dont really work..also try putting the lower bar on the T a little closer ot the one above it
aboz: do some more sketches just in pencil so you can structure your letetrs better (i know mine^ doesnt have a lot of structure its just something new im trying out) but yea you need more structer...also dont try to make connections until youve got nice structure caause it will work so much better

[Rots takes your Daughters]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121526.jpg]

<3 How did I not see this

[JEDI-MASTER]

quick throw
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi041.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012127.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012126.jpg


every thing on this page is dope, except bulb

[magashna]

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb227/dan-graff/DSC03323.jpg

[acereborn]

Did this for the exchange
http://theyetigames.com/nas1.jpg
AyteYourCookies, I like it :)

[a maze]

acer- keep working on bars, don't waste the ink in your markers right now... just work with bars.

[hazetheone]

Did this for the exchange
http://theyetigames.com/nas1.jpg
AyteYourCookies, I like it :)

hey man work with 3 d and go smaller loose the color use barsagain you cant have 3d coming from everywhere like that
everyone on the last page minus rots needs to work a little more with structure and less with colors

[acereborn]

Thanks for the tips guys:)

[revid!]

some more work sketches..think im gonna get down with some color tonight ill post it later...
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7503/cimg0048sf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/348/cimg0047an0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
gettin there

[revid!]

wersto your shits fire man!
and most of the other shit is hot to cept for a few..
keep it up yall

[Mace]

revid:

get to straight bars and lose the wild extensions on the first one the second one is even a little bit to extension heavy focus on the letters and simpler your pretty much there. Once you get bars down the extensions will follow also make your extensions actually come from somewhere not just like random addons

heres my shit
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/amerpenfreestylepiece001.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012128.jpg

[revid!]

word,man shits fresh. lovin that fuckin stylee

[SNAP!]

Alot of nice shit on here...heres my last pages..still gettin a grip on my shit..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2119/2166128795_535b5feda3_d.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2003/2187060196_8c7a11c61e_d.jpg

[sex without condoms]

MY *****h SANK!!!
12oz is down huh badday, rofl!
ROTS!!!<3333333333333

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/183005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182918.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182901.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182848.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182833.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182633.jpg

[AZTEKA]

revid- looks dope.
silentvandal- nice and clean as always.
amer- likin that letter structure.

tried to do a tko style piece, the r didn't fit all the way, but whatever, what ya'll think? tried to take a brake from my usaul piecing style.
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/186/01140wq9.jpg

[revid!]

thanks mann
im diggin thatt

[MESN[905]]

toss
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/new.jpg

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/8732/hpim0005rb9.png

wtf kid u bit the hell outta the exchange i did for you...

[TricksForKids]

now now boys...all your throwups look the same anywas

bawk tryin his hand at a new styloooo, holla

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9758/img004bm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193817.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193756.jpg

fuck y'all
p.s
Bawk- ill, duh.
Mesn- Over's version is better, even if he did bite so whocares, your's sucks more. Stop complaining.
Kasper-dope
Daws- liked all your older stuff better.

[I<3Trendz]

for my friend rane
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/DSC00062.jpg
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/DSC00061.jpg
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/DSC00063.jpg

[TricksForKids]

something about how grimey your shit is gives me a boner sex, not like, a sex boner...juust...you know

[sex without condoms]

just cause i like to see Tricks erect.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154346.jpg

[mosezone]

tricks, that style is fucking niiiiice
trendz, those are looking decent. i like the 1st most, but you might want to work on the a and e
sex, that's pretty dope looking. what the hell is that thing, anways?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00302.jpg
just some quickie i did earlier

[garbage down tha way]

;972012']
wtf kid u bit the hell outta the exchange i did for you...

actually, the only similarity is the top right of the letters, the rest of it is how my throws always were. and before i fucking wrote graffiti ive seen throws like that, its not your to claim, but if it helps you to sleep at night, ill never do them like that again:)

[magashna]

i ain't been on here in a minute, but 12oz is back up, so i'm goin back again, lol, later rots

[Roolete]

revid:

heres my shit
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/amerpenfreestylepiece001.jpg
HAHA your 0 for 2, kid. piece is a straight MEK bite, and your handy looks like amar's. but nice try.

ANYWAYS..
been sketchin too much lately, completely out of color sceme ideas.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0646.jpg

[sex without condoms]

MY *****h SANK!!!
12oz is down huh badday, rofl!
ROTS!!!<3333333333333

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/183005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182918.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182901.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182848.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182833.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/182633.jpg

bump that hump

[mosezone]

roolete-that's doope. you should add some nice 3d to that and it would look sickk.
sex-i'm feeling the throw on the 1st one. i also like the dick from the a going into the d's mouth

tricks, that style is fucking niiiiice
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00302.jpg
just some quickie i did earlier

critss?

[Maste]

mosez that handy is nice and i like the peice...but the letters dont seem to flow? i think. the middle of the s is too fat and the top is too little and the top of the e is too big oh and ps get new markers XD
sex: keep on keepin on man
cher: i cant tell if the extensions hurt it or make it awsome XD add some sorta color man... do something you havent done in a while

and i got bored so i drew my different ideas ive had with sed2 ...in rough sketches:
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/3543/sedsheetml6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like this one:
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8186/sed2bsf3.png (http://imageshack.us)
and this one:
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5320/sed2cbq6.png (http://imageshack.us)
prolly cause i actually put some attention into both
also i have another one of the second one thats all shaded and looks a lot less shitty if thatd help...i kinda like that style. a friend of mine showed it to me. its simple but looks cool imo

oh and i like tht throwy that was on the top right of the page...it came out clean...damn...i might do more of those haha i was just messin around on most of this

any crits on anything i got there or the peice i did in the last post

[revid!]

heres my colored shit i promissedd..
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1637/cimg0049qk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and muh random bombing
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4634/cimg0050cw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critssss

[mexico]

Revid_ I like those throws.
CHER_ Sick!
Mosez_ that might look better if the letters were all the same color
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/bs2-1.jpg
made this in photoshop with a tablet.

[revid!]

HAHA your 0 for 2, kid. piece is a straight MEK bite, and your handy looks like amar's. but nice try.

ANYWAYS..
been sketchin too much lately, completely out of color sceme ideas.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0646.jpg

reaallllyy feelin this..
i like the add ons and the letterss
anxious to see it with 3d and colourrr

[Haz-E]

CHER your shit is so fire i would love to do an exchange wit u one day would u bee down

[the end]

I hate piecing in pencil, ugh.
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/4685/test114cq6.jpg
and heres a sloppy bullshit throw
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5673/testthrow114ni6.jpg

[revid!]

word man.
cool style i like it its pretty original
what you do to get suspended lol

[SenTheFirst]

cher- its hot, but make the leg on the r a little skinnier
test- handies lookin pretty good, but i dont think you should disconnect all of your letters in your sketches

suspect battle

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1322.jpg

[fOrSaQeN]

holla

[revid!]

yo wtf no crits for me!

[blunttokes]

heres my colored shit i promissedd..
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1637/cimg0049qk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critssss


keep this up its got mad steez!!

[revid!]

thanks alot man!
been waitin for somone to give it a glance all night!

[the end]

lego - thats a pretty nice style, only thing that really shows is bottom leg of L is quite fat

here's a (now) oldie, but goodie.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2595/fuckcops1228wx6.jpg
made that as soon as i got home from being arrested

[faTTYYY]

cher - that piece is badass. you keep comin with really nice work keep it up
the end - your vandalism is fucking ill
this page is pretty sick all around
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6195/p1000139sm0.jpg
tryin a new name, crits if you got em

[jawsy]

mosez that is fresh

[MESN[905]]

Mesn- Over's version is better, even if he did bite so whocares, your's sucks more. Stop complainingeh considering it was a 10 second throw when i was fucked up so yah its not gonna be dope but that doesnt mean he can bite 75% of the letter form

[Mass Appeal]

HAHA your 0 for 2, kid. piece is a straight MEK bite, and your handy looks like amar's. but nice try.

ANYWAYS..
been sketchin too much lately, completely out of color sceme ideas.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0646.jpg


Exchangeeee withhhh meeeee !!!!!
wow.

[TricksForKids]

now now boys...all your throwups look the same anywas

bawk tryin his hand at a new styloooo, holla

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9758/img004bm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bump for some love boys

[-ShAmEE-]

i'm diggin it!

[BORG]

tricks- not feelin this style much, you should go back to your previous style, so much fresher ;)

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4113/picture307yv5.jpg

"aglomvrambadj" throw
fuck j's lol

[Drakula]

I'm not really a fan of your throws Borg.I guess I'm a sucker for grimy shit.Those are too perfect in my opinion.

[undergroundanimal]

borg im feelin your throwie man..
and i hate them j`s too hahaha... here`s my aglom throwie:

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0085.jpg

[BORG]

^^chea, mighty fresh, that shits lookin nice and lively, lotta good movement

drak- i'm sorry, thats how graff is though, and i had to sketch that throw out unfortunately,shit was all good till i hit the j lol

[hal.cyon]

tricks- not feelin this style much, you should go back to your previous style, so much fresher ;)

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4113/picture307yv5.jpg

"aglomvrambadj" throw
fuck j's lol

are you missing the second a? just don't want you to get knocked man.

[hal.cyon]

borg im feelin your throwie man..
and i hate them j`s too hahaha... here`s my aglom throwie:

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0085.jpg


very nice.

[DEAR]

^^bangin!

[FailOne]

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/857/dave0001tr1.jpg

Marker freestyle
lemme know what you think
Says fone

[00-made-00]

Fone- I like it man i think the middle bar on the n is a bit too small, but still looks sik.
borg- Fresh i love the A.
underground- has a sexy swagger too it.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Atei.jpg
Crits Please.

[revid!]

more schoool shit as always....
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/861/cimg0051hf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some straight letter thing prolly make it into a sticker
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/2378/cimg0052ae7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beyondyereyes]

Diver... sick as usual. Add color though it'd be sav.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/untitled-1.jpg
Color is ugly and I'm not at all proud of this. It looks... shit I don't even know how to describe it. Needs lots of work though.

[faTTYYY]

cher - that piece is badass. you keep comin with really nice work keep it up
the end - your vandalism is fucking ill
this page is pretty sick all around
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6195/p1000139sm0.jpg
tryin a new name, crits if you got em

wheres the love
or hate

[NICCSACC]

wheres the love
or hate

throwups R fast looks like U sketched that shit broham. its not ugly just played out tha rear. i like tha 1st and last letters tho. heres a tip... think outside tha box. peace

[faTTYYY]

kk thanks hoss

[00-made-00]

You people are all cunts you never crit people who ask for it fuck the lot of you.
Fatty- give up its fucking awful i mean anything that once looked good in a throwie youve ruined.
beyond- if your not proud of it dont post it you WANKSTAIN!
revid- new to graff thread do simples or make it clearer i dont know what it is.
Tricks you had this runing smoothly before you left, its turnt to shit now.

[BlackBookCook420]

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/4982/moreshitttld5.jpg




checkit..


can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya?can i holla atchya? can i holla?..holla holla

[a maze]

Blackbookcook420- SIMPLES, man. Simples.

EDIT- might change my name, haven't decided... The 'z' is real hard to make flow with the other letters, so here's a REAL QUICK sketch of a name I might use-MAKR

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrnamechange.jpg
crits?

[TricksForKids]

now now made..be nice...but i hope your talking about the thread and not my style:( lol

alright alright...listen up ladies and gents...this used to be a place to come and get your shit torn to scraps..and in the process learn a thing or two, its now turned into a joke, as its bump after bump of "LOOK AT MY TOY SHIT!" and im guilty of it too...so..this is how you crit:

Borg: the letters in your throw are there, but it looks too smooth, almost like you pounded it out on the keyboard, which is just my opinion...but i prefer the grimeyness of throws as well, they gotta have some sex appeal, because if you cant paint that clean AND fast..then its gunna either look like shit. or youre gunna get booked

Underground animal: that shits pretty nice son, once again its got a little more flair than Borgs, but its still cartoonish and gets its style from how clean it is, so be careful of trying to make a throw look perfect, you feel me?

Fail, im not a fan of your style really at all, unless its done EXTREMELY well, but i mean you obviously know what youre doing, and your handstyle is off the chain, youre good, its just my opinion so i dont really know how i can give you criticism

Made..the colours are cool, and the letters flow with each other, but individually they need hella work, that lump on the A has got to go, make the E even more simpler, and that I needs som serious work

revid and beyond, all im gunna say to you 2 is that you need to calm down and go back to basics, BASIC LETTERS, like on your FUCKING keyboards, dont post again until your shit looks simple as fuck

fatty, youre a perfect example of what borgs throwup might look like if he painted it..fucking sloppy..wheres the effort? youve got some decent letters but take some fucking time before you push the scan button

and amaze, keep it up, space out the holes in your letters more, like the A and R, but other than that keep it simple

[a maze]

Yeah, thanks tricks, will do. It was a real quick sketch anyways, just wanted to get it out, you know?

and about the thread, I think we should make it to where we HAVE to crit the first 5 people before you, therefore, everyone gets some love!

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

Fone- I like it man i think the middle bar on the n is a bit too small, but still looks sik.
borg- Fresh i love the A.
underground- has a sexy swagger too it.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Atei.jpg
Crits Please.

Made- good to see you trying out new styles of letters, the bottom right of the E is too curled up though, you should try making the back bone of the E the same shape as the right upward bar of the a to give a cemetrical feel and then maybe give the top of the right a similar shape to the top left of the A, after try making the T Flow cemetrically between the two letters. Ill do a quick sketch if you dont understand haha.

[a maze]

Tricks- I really like your new style, haven't really seen alot of your old.

New flick, the letters arent really descending, my scanner caught the pic at an angle.
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makroner.jpg
crits?

[sex without condoms]

remindes me of wutang, idk why.
and yeah, stick with maze, all of those sketches were fire.

[a maze]

wow, thanks. which ones? tosses? Reason why I changed was because I couldn't get the z to flow worth a shit.

[mind.or.matter]

maze - the MA are deffinately youre stronger letters

new style, i dunno if i saw it somewhere or not but here.
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/ENThrow004.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/ENThrow006.jpg

[SAID]

just started to sketch about 6 months ago
i seem fucken bad compared to you guys :eek:
what do you guys think ?

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3589/p1000771eo6.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000771eo6.jpg)
and my friends really into the newstream, as i call "shit" hip hop and wanted me to sketch up some rappers

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9995/p1000772hl1.th.jpg (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000772hl1.jpg)
letters suck i know.
any suggestions ?

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9161/p1000770yk8.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000770yk8.jpg)
tried to make my ltters flow into a flower LIVE.ONE
old tag.

[sex without condoms]

wow, thanks. which ones? tosses? Reason why I changed was because I couldn't get the z to flow worth a shit.

nah your throwies i hated for maze
but your pieces, damn.
they were all sexy....like Rots.
<333

[ReVO]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7673/2355863647897242060so1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[sank.]

trying to progress my style, but not really happy with anything im producing..

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0878.jpg

[fonone]

ahh i quit sketching for a bit and then came back to it with a new word, wat do you think?

http://aycu40.webshots.com/image/41799/2001015688854908982_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001015688854908982)

http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/40482/2001025848507496347_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001025848507496347)

http://aycu34.webshots.com/image/41193/2001019869831714288_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001019869831714288)

[-Leski]

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5859/3andahalfnp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1130/38859487yj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/5015/84508526zx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1088/63600568xi5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Simples from yesterday and today... or yesterday and the day before...
Anyways, just moved onto bars from super simps and blockbuster styles... There a tad wack but oh well, i'll get it down eventualy. practice practice ext.

from oldest to newest, top to bottom.

any critz to help me out?


Foone- I like your simple under the spray can, dont care for how the R and E are linked but I geuss the R's leg would kill the flow if it was hangin.

Zombi- Nice bubbles, fatten up your I. Keep perportions in mind, the Z is way big and the o is tiny. It doesnt look bad but it would probly look better.

[MERkfX^]

I'm new to this forum but yea, heres a quickie 5-8 minute sketch, with a pen.

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7985/mjm009jk2.jpg

[fonone]

leski - my favourite is the third one up until the K, which i think looks bad due to the bottom legs pointing in different directions and it doesnt maintain "flow"

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0804.jpg
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0805.jpg
new throw's

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

Dimr- both fresh except for the dodgy bottom left extension on the D.

Klaz/sank- dope S but all of the other letters are lacking the style, try making other bars over hit like the middle bar on the S, and experiment with similar shape cuttins such as on the top of the S... if any of that makes sence to you.

Leski- stick with the pink piece but lose the dodgy extension on the bottom left o the S and on the top left of the K, also unslant the K but other than the S, K and the I being a weird shape its not that bad.

Fonone- the polkadot piece has potential, the letters are quite strong just keep playing with them.

Maze- its a nice style that flows just the K and R dont flow because of the skinny bits.

[SAID]

I'm new to this forum but yea, heres a quickie 5-8 minute sketch, with a pen.

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7985/mjm009jk2.jpg

sickkk :D

[Laces Out]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7673/2355863647897242060so1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
Wack.
The tag is alright I guess.

[JEDI-MASTER]

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi043.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi042.jpg

[JEDI-MASTER]

dimr thows r sum sexi ass throws nigguh even with the sketchy extension like previousley mentioned,

[Mass Appeal]

sup yall..
a huge fucking river near my house is gonna burst its banks and flood all my town...
so im saying goodbye..
love you all !
ahahah.

ill be back.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

you better... or else </3

[sketch3]

didnt ur house all ready flood?

u need to move out of wat ever shity area u live and move to london,
only time ur house is in jepordy is wen u everyone leaves it for a few hours
damed pikeys

DIM can u do a calmer fill for me pweese?

[Mass Appeal]

yeah it flooded in june lol..........
still aint happend yet...

[-Leski]

Thanks for the critz on the other page guys, I'll keep working on it.

[JSBiggz]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/319/img0001fv5.jpg
Just started writing Mekone, my first attemped, did it in tech class....crits would be appreciated

srry for the bigness but any crits?

[dim]

amk you will be missed :( RIP

[Mass Appeal]

wtf i aint dead hahahaha..

name tubles..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/q-1.jpg

KAMK..
loolz..

jbiggzsss..you have the basic idea i spose.

[revid!]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0804.jpg
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0805.jpg
new throw's

feelin these man..
clean em up a bit but theyre lookin good

[Maste]

and i got bored so i drew my different ideas ive had with sed2 ...in rough sketches:
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/3543/sedsheetml6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like this one:
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8186/sed2bsf3.png (http://imageshack.us)
and this one:
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5320/sed2cbq6.png (http://imageshack.us)
prolly cause i actually put some attention into both
also i have another one of the second one thats all shaded and looks a lot less shitty if thatd help...i kinda like that style. a friend of mine showed it to me. its simple but looks cool imo

oh and i like tht throwy that was on the top right of the page...it came out clean...damn...i might do more of those haha i was just messin around on most of this

any crits on anything i got there or the peice i did in the last post

so, posted that with a ton of crits like 3 days ago...aaand noone said a word

[MessTonic]

Can someone help me out real quick, whats the special code to get 10% off in the online shop? i got an email for it but it got deleted so now i can get it sent twice.. So can someone tell me what it is real quick? Thanks

[AZTEKA]

revid- nice as always.
maze- nice letter srtucture.

some sketch i finished awhile ago.
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7479/01161bz1.jpg

[HuntingLOLs]

only thing i could say dimr is that remove the lapping over lines. dont look sexy

[dim]

sed work with bars more just strait simple letters and then star bend them
mess tonic would love to help you but i dont no the code either

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/nar3piece1.png

[a maze]

nah your throwies i hated for maze
but your pieces, damn.
they were all sexy....like Rots.
<333

Rots is pretty sexy... His pieces, I mean.
I'll try to find a way to make it flow, but until then, I'll be supplyin' yall with some MAKR sketches.

[whahappen?]

Fone- I like it man i think the middle bar on the n is a bit too small, but still looks sik.
borg- Fresh i love the A.
underground- has a sexy swagger too it.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Atei.jpg
Crits Please.
http://images.jupiterimages.com/common/detail/80/81/23518180.jpg
your fill reminds me of gummy worms

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/9d8c8489.jpg

Psha

[a maze]

Dimr- looking hot, man. Maybe keep your fills just a tad simpler to show off the nice throw a little more, kinda distracted me.

seek- ew, don't really like that man. Simples?

knews- 'Psha' in fucking deed! shits ill.

New shit, working like hell on my structure, but like a dumbass I decided to fill it... Ended up not liking it, so I didn't finish fill. Oh well-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr2.jpg
crits plzzzzzzzzz

[Seek139]

Dimr- looking hot, man. Maybe keep your fills just a tad simpler to show off the nice throw a little more, kinda distracted me.

seek- ew, don't really like that man. Simples?

knews- 'Psha' in fucking deed! shits ill.

New shit, working like hell on my structure, but like a dumbass I decided to fill it... Ended up not liking it, so I didn't finish fill. Oh well-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr2.jpg
crits plzzzzzzzzz


ehh no... I do 3D you should know this considering I've posted more than 200 times I was just posting a little freestyle of 2d.

[JEDI-MASTER]

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi043.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi042.jpg

bumpin for crits

[a maze]

seek- definitely stick to the 3d, way better dude. No beef, just saying.

Bump, new page-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr2.jpg

[rel]

makr- Sick, man. finish coloring it!
eskro- on the bigger picture, i like the 2 across the bottom of the page. i'm not quite feelin the other ones though.

Did this for my friend:
(ignore that black thing in the top left corner.. i messed up. :/)
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh163/relwrites/IMG_4437.jpg

[SAID]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5305/p1000775kq2.th.jpg (http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000775kq2.jpg)
tried a new style.
simpler and less wild than my usual stuff, tried to close up all the letters?
whata you guys think?

[sex without condoms]

Maze your sketch reminds me of MUSHASHI
not that it is a bite at all your sharp edges and curves just remind me of what he used to put out.

i dig it:]

[Stonk]

jedi master - dont try and make it so complicated..i think your trying to hard.

a maze - i like all the letters except the a..also i think that it could all maybe be scooted a litle closer but it looks really good.

havn't posted in the black book section for while.

i need some help with these throws
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00181.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00175.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00173.jpg

and just some other bullshit..how do you guys feel about these extensions and what not..i hate them haha.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00177.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00178.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00179.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00180.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00174.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00176.jpg

[rel]

Tride- sooo good. burns me. :P your handstyle is sick. keep it up! how long have you been writing for?

[kase121]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/rugrats.jpg

not finished

haha hey arnold, just saw that

[Stonk]

haha funny you like that hand because a couple other writers aren't really feelin it but whatevs. thanks though.. umm probably like 1 and a half years like actually working and trying to do shit

haha setoke everyones on that nickolodeon kick. not really feeling the characs though..theres something weird with em. the simple up top though is good. just add a drop shadow and it would be great

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0804.jpg
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0805.jpg
new throw's
bump

[a maze]

Maze your sketch reminds me of MUSHASHI
not that it is a bite at all your sharp edges and curves just remind me of what he used to put out.

i dig it:]

Man, I've heard that one time before... also heard he was around here a while back and was a moody ass. I wish I could find some of his flicks.

[rel]

lol yeah it really does look nice, and whoever says it doesn't is just.. jealous. :P

setoke- i agree with stonk about the karaks and adding the dropshadow.. work on drawing the bodies. they look hella awkward.

dim- just an idea, but i think you should try making the R the same size as the D.. so the letters are like, "shortTALLTALLshort" instead of "shortTALLTALLTALL." it's hard to explain, but do you get what i mean?

[Stonk]

dimr no point in putting in a fill on a throw up..but that is a really good throwie. i like it especially that m and r

[kase121]

i suck at drawing karaks that why im trying to start basic, what exactly is akward about the bodies so i can fix it?

[revid!]

tride most of them are pretty good
looks like your on your way keep it up

[AnteUp]

seek- definitely stick to the 3d, way better dude. No beef, just saying.

Bump, new page-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr2.jpg
amk?

[Swavey]

Heres a quick simple pencil sketch I did a second ago... Sorry its on lined paper :( its the only thing that was within reach.

Critz?

"Swavey"
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s79/PoppinSwav/Swavey011608.jpg

:rolleyes: Swavey

[dufus]

feedbackhttp://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2447/ups022zj4.jpg (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/%3Ca%20href=)

[revid!]

oh god that refuse is soo hot man.
really feelin that would you be down for an exchange? pm me if so
heres some school shit fuck a scantron
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8278/cimg0055sz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits
edit. i know its sloppy pen type shit

[SAID]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9981/p1000769xp5.th.jpg (http://img85.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000769xp5.jpg)

dufus, id make your r abit thicker, but i honestly like those style of letters

crits ?

[SAID]

oh god that refuse is soo hot man.
really feelin that would you be down for an exchange? pm me if so
heres some school shit fuck a scantron
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8278/cimg0055sz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits
edit. i know its sloppy pen type shit

niceee dude, just the black scribbles in the middle of your letters

[SAID]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9981/p1000769xp5.th.jpg (http://img85.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1000769xp5.jpg)
crits pleasee

[atlok7]

dim thats some fresh shit.

work in progress...\
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/4473/photo91af2.jpg

[revid!]

yo get a better pic man i cant even see that shit

[SAID]

juss click on it, iss a thumbnail

[revid!]

yea man shits alright kinda comfusing dont really know exactly what im lookin at
but your coloring is nice and some of the leters look good....

[SNAP!]

latest page in my book... ignore the ugly yellow shit. i just wanted to kill some space and expirament
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2170/2197959851_d9f16396f2_d.jpg

[SAID]

yea man shits alright kinda comfusing dont really know exactly what im lookin at
but your coloring is nice and some of the leters look good....

thanks man

[revid!]

good. straight. letters.
(in the middle)
i would lose having two forcefeilds around it tho just stick to one and work on your 3d a little i think
overall good

[SNAP!]

thanks! it does look kinda weird...i only did it cause the white cloud got out of control and felt it needed to connect. thanks again!

[a maze]

Swavey- looking good, work on your letter structure, make sure all of the letters flow.

Dufus- Wow, man. Very clean, shits hot! Keep it up.

Revid!- For now, stick to simples, just work on the flow and stay consistent. You'll get there.

Atlok- Looking hot, but getting to the point where everything is so jumbled, I get troubled reading it. No probs, though. Keep it up.

and about that AMK shit, if that was a call on a bite, I don't bite, esp. off another respected member on this site with some bad ass coloring/ style skills. I'm just developing my letters, man. Maybe someday I'll be as good as AMK, ha ha.

[JEDI-MASTER]

o lol i forgot to mention my hands.....i did them higjh so whoever said i was trying "to hard" lol i put no thought in that but thanks neways nigguh

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/202927.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/202832.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/202800.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/annmarieee.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193756.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193817.jpg

[kase121]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/rugrats.jpg

not finished

crits suggestions greatly appreciated

[Haz-E]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2447/ups022zj4.jpg

dude this is fuckin dope

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/sketjup.jpg

[a maze]

new shit... Was in a hurry, and my Black outliner is practically out of ink. Oh well-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr3-1.jpg

[sex without condoms]

OH MY GOD.
MUSA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
where the eff have you been bby? i missed you.
this is Fosale! btw if you don't know my new account.

[revid!]

why the fuck do ppl tell me to do simples and shit.
i can do simples i have been forever.
does my shit really suck that bad

[a maze]

wow, THE musashi. Nice to meet you! Apparently I'm your doppelganger.

[Rank-oner!]

damn AMK your whole town is gonna flood??? nice sketch :)

[MUSASHI]

I got busy there for a minute...it's winter time now and I'm with some time on my hands....

"wow, THE musashi. Nice to meet you! Apparently I'm your doppelganger."

I like how you put "THE" in caps...let's see what kinda rubbish I can come up with this year...

[dim]

that refuse is tight but for some reason it reminds me of fube i dont no why i have looked at them together maybe there similar or maybe im and idiot you deside but the out come is tight