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daisyface
01-23-2008, 04:30 PM
failone-im realllllly digging your style props
forsaqen-even tho u DIDNT give crits ill give you one. structure doesnt seem to be there.extensions are kinda weird
mesn-first one is better imo
emel-dope R
mass-handstyles look a bit odd but the throw is good the M to me looks like an M, but i could see what your talkin bout about the V
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/amycuttinhair013.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/amycuttinhair016.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/amycuttinhair015.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/amycuttinhair014.jpgnew throw idea i like it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/amycuttinhair017.jpgattempt with addons

crits pleaseeee?

Rank-oner!
01-23-2008, 04:32 PM
AMK: ive been workin on my style just for you :) hopefully have sumthin up by tonight

revid!
01-23-2008, 04:34 PM
so whats wrong with my throws??
i saw someone say somthing about it a page back

sketch3
01-23-2008, 04:35 PM
AMK no it isnt

daisy face i love the top one, cept the w dosnt fit in.
kinda like the fat bitch who sits at the front of class

revid!
01-23-2008, 04:35 PM
ps weta that shits coming along nicely keep at it
as for me im slackin was going crazy but i been busy these couple days will ahve some colored new shit laterr hopefullyy

revid!
01-23-2008, 04:43 PM
oh btw here are my bomb styles
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7469/cimg0050ux8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks

fOrSaQeN
01-23-2008, 05:03 PM
crits pleaseeee?

top two W's seem weird to me...work on structure on the first peice... and too many arrows on the last one...

JETPACK!!
01-23-2008, 05:19 PM
amk, im not really diggin that throwie. maybe add a bottom line to the outline so itll be easier to paint.
weta, i dont like the first one too much, but the rest are ill. and the add ons arnt bad for an attempt. im diggin the throwie.
logo, i like the bombs, lol your G looks like a mitt

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7420/bels5ai4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SAID
01-23-2008, 05:22 PM
Heres a post that kinda shows my progression over the passed 5 months
alot were drunken freestyles

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/821/fonercg6.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/2999/scanna7.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3028/anotherfoneqq3.jpg
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6516/foneyysimpleim1.jpg
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/857/dave0001tr1.jpg
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2130/dave0002yf9.jpg
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8974/fonewildbs1.jpg
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/1681/foneonesketchka5.jpg

BUMPPPPP

AnteUp
01-23-2008, 05:50 PM
right im sure all the old school writers were ALWAYS down for an E-battle dog caz you know if your not down for an E-battle then your just a chump right?

anyone smell that?

1.)your not an oldschool writer
2.)no...it means your a bitch :)

battle him, get it over with...
oh and for a crit... the first pic of yours is good kas

BORG
01-23-2008, 06:15 PM
amk-fresh ;)
daisyface- i think your letters would progress faster if you didn't put so much bends in the bars, but its comin along nicely, keep at it
logo- looks good, i like the simplistic style of the throw on the bottom
jetpack- the throw is nice and simple, generic, add a lil bit of "yourself" or style to it you know

begininng of the nasm sketch
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/4634/picturesd5.jpg

prob gunna add a bit more to it

alergeeeezz
01-23-2008, 07:35 PM
here's my new shit since last nite...its not done yet, i did it all in school today
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4778/alerg015kl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3111/alerg016ff5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5835/alerg018wg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7136/alerg019rt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1803/alerg020yy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so gimme critts...

blunttokes
01-23-2008, 07:37 PM
keep workin on that dude!

ill post a few things up in a bit




begininng of the nasm sketch
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/4634/picturesd5.jpg

prob gunna add a bit more to it


so dope borg... u always make my day so much better :P

Cin123
01-23-2008, 07:44 PM
said- fuck you :p
ur shit is soooo dope
that style is mad sick
i give props

blunttokes
01-23-2008, 07:45 PM
said- fuck you :p
ur shit is soooo dope
that style is mad sick
i give props


thats actually fails work he bumped but lol

alergeeeezz
01-23-2008, 07:46 PM
alerg, not being a dick but that one n pencils wack, drop that shit n start from scratch focusing one letter structure, make it clearer, feel me..........n lemme get some feedback on that peice that says cocane

no man i feel you and i was talking to ma bro...i took his advise and started from scratch in another piece from check it out and get back to me...ya COCANE looks good but i would have to say that it looks like the letters have no room to breath, ya know i think they are a bit crammed in.

emel
01-23-2008, 07:49 PM
anyone smell that?

1.)your not an oldschool writer
2.)no...it means your a bitch :)

battle him, get it over with...
oh and for a crit... the first pic of yours is good kas

Anteup... iwasnt saying i was an old school writer... amk was trying to say how things changed and how NOWADAYS people wont battle and it comes with a lot of bullshit unlike the olden days... hence old school writer, not once did i say i was an old school writer....

and im a bitch because i wont E-battle him? ok.... thanks for clearing that up for me anteup...... oh, and that smiley face you put after "it means your a bitch" was really cute.
You're o so clever

alergeeeezz
01-23-2008, 07:50 PM
zof that shit is real fresh the colors are sweet and i like that style keep it up

mosezone
01-23-2008, 08:35 PM
borg, that's super dope. alergz, i kind of dig the last one
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00312.jpg
some sketch i did real quick. i might re-do it and change it up a little and color it. crits?

the end
01-23-2008, 08:36 PM
Had a bunch of finals today, ugh, so i took an adderal and a bong load before school.
i had 2 really clean outline peices on each of my scantrons.. but the ygot turned in. so heres a pretty cool, but sloppy one...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2664/anatomy123vn3.jpg

later on in the day when i wasnt so shaky...
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9770/marcie123mh9.jpg

and something from lastnight when i was just stoned...
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1103/test122bu2.jpg

been really trying to get in the swing of piecing again, when i stopped and focused purely on writing i tarted doing whack shit soo...

einsamkeit
01-23-2008, 08:38 PM
Bendin those bars... loving the T in the last one

mosezone
01-23-2008, 08:41 PM
2nd one is super dope.

atlok7
01-23-2008, 09:02 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4476/greendinoeggdotsnuccalm5.jpg

revid!
01-23-2008, 09:02 PM
shits lookin good moze and the end.
everyone keep doin whatcha doin.
im workin on this coloerd shit right no hoopefully flick will be up soon

atlok7
01-23-2008, 09:07 PM
the end- haha i like the purple shadow on the middle one. shits dope.

a maze
01-23-2008, 09:11 PM
borg, that's super dope. alergz, i kind of dig the last one
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00312.jpg
some sketch i did real quick. i might re-do it and change it up a little and color it. crits?

Looking MUCHHH better, man! Maybe extend the 'o' a little bit more to make it resemble the 'e' in size. Keep it up!

a maze
01-23-2008, 09:14 PM
later on in the day when i wasnt so shaky...
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9770/marcie123mh9.jpg


been really trying to get in the swing of piecing again, when i stopped and focused purely on writing i tarted doing whack shit soo...

SO DOPE. :)

revid!
01-23-2008, 09:19 PM
word!
a maze check yo pm's

AnteUp
01-23-2008, 09:21 PM
Anteup... iwasnt saying i was an old school writer... amk was trying to say how things changed and how NOWADAYS people wont battle and it comes with a lot of bullshit unlike the olden days... hence old school writer, not once did i say i was an old school writer....

and im a bitch because i wont E-battle him? ok.... thanks for clearing that up for me anteup...... oh, and that smiley face you put after "it means your a bitch" was really cute.
You're o so clever
you dont understand, you said oldschool writers dont e-battle, and since your not oldschool then e-battle him... oldschool writers would take any challenge given to them, and thanks for the smiley remark, makes me all giggly inside to know someone thinks im cute... :rolleyes:

revid!
01-23-2008, 09:24 PM
^^^^
hahaha oh man
tell these dudes to battle and get it over wit
and take the chat to another fourm lets get some flicks up
(not directed to you ante)

kase121
01-23-2008, 09:29 PM
alerge - i like your 2nd 3rd and 4th A but i wouldnt have the top right side extend up so high

blunttokes
01-23-2008, 09:39 PM
tryin to get into the piecing thing but its gunna take some time for sure... heres some shit i tried lol

nothing good or nething but ya no...
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1074/1003342edited01pa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6401/1003343tm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7618/1003345aa6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin marker went gay on me..
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5599/1003346cs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4119/1003347rd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2517/1003348en3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9017/1003349dz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quick throw not good at all
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8661/1003344it5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1002/1003350yq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5615/1003355ye0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i need to take more time doin my drawings but i am add adhd to the max lol
i no it needs work but im gettin there... i stricly bombed from for a few years...now im tryin pieces hopefully in spring ill throw some out there...

crits r cool

iBomb4KOG
01-23-2008, 10:02 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/xpo9zc.jpg

bumped for crits??

ayleusone
01-23-2008, 10:15 PM
bomb.... that shyts ill, man....

emel
01-23-2008, 10:29 PM
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/3230/kasrbookwarpfixxo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I fucked up.... badly. but i wish to contribute and please tell me what i should changeee



ibomb4kog-lose the extensions and go simpler
blunttokes-^^^^^
the_end-looks good some parts look a little too skinny IMO
moseone- dope simple, but the bars on the 2 are a little funky, rest of the letters are pretty solid

Roolete
01-23-2008, 10:34 PM
editt. kasr i like that style i think you need to fix the top of the a, take off the extension in the s, and change the hole in the r. but thats just me.



http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/4634/picturesd5.jpg


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/01-23-2008082814PM.jpg
the start of mine

Rank-oner!
01-23-2008, 10:38 PM
Cileeeee: bringin the heat again! when's mine comin :)
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranknewr004.jpg[/QUOTE]

bumpin

Street Wize
01-23-2008, 10:40 PM
Roolete- Go way more simple. Ur letter construction look good but i would not put all the fanciness into it until your really good at ur simples.

revid!
01-23-2008, 10:48 PM
emel deff feelin that sketch man keep it up
roolette yours is coming along nice to i want to do an exchange with you someday wen im not alredy doin some lol and bump that borg ish

Evasion Of Invasion
01-23-2008, 11:12 PM
Cile demolishin as always
Roolete lookin pretty fresh diggin the extensions
Rank likin the color scheme
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00588.jpg
givin it a euro twist crits?

revid!
01-23-2008, 11:16 PM
thats pretty fresh man i like it
euro steezzz

Raket.LHM
01-23-2008, 11:22 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/4634/picturesd5.jpg

prob gunna add a bit more to it

feeling the style. you got any painted pieces?

Evasion Of Invasion
01-23-2008, 11:23 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture585.jpg
that post reminded me of this old sketch swoe was dissin i hate the cords but love the S

Sumoe
01-23-2008, 11:27 PM
Borg, that's dope, bro.

But, I'd like to see you go crazy for once. As of now, at least from what I've seen, your letter work is mostly glorified simples, which are dope. However, I don't think they're indicative of what you can do. Just mess with your letter structures more.

a maze
01-23-2008, 11:28 PM
Borg, that's dope, bro.

But, I'd like to see you go crazy for once. As of now, at least from what I've seen, your letter work is mostly glorified simples, which are dope. However, I don't think they're indicative of hat you can do. Just mess with your letter structures more.

Yeah, Definitely agreed.

revid!
01-23-2008, 11:36 PM
^^
word.

Rhyseitup
01-23-2008, 11:45 PM
throw
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/batman.jpg
and another one
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/HEHE-1.jpg

LOPe_GCI
01-23-2008, 11:53 PM
makr simple exchange.
tried to clean it up a bit
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0255.jpg

Rhyseitup
01-23-2008, 11:58 PM
i sketched this yesterday. no colours, crits please..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/img.jpg

Raket.LHM
01-24-2008, 12:49 AM
Sorry for shitty pic. my part of a Raket/Swoe collab

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4614/01232008112600pmkl2.jpg

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3294/01232008112600pmzf4.jpg

RUP'E
01-24-2008, 01:20 AM
http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u220/chrislogemann/streetart033.jpg
its good cept for the thing on the side.
emels peice is the sex
any crits for mine?im not happy with the lettering

Mass Appeal
01-24-2008, 01:46 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/01-23-2008082814PM.jpg
the start of mine

NEAM ? ..
its been nagging at me for ages but this sketch did it.

Rank-oner!
01-24-2008, 03:02 AM
Rup'e: nice characters but work on your letter structure.
Rhyseitup: i think it says rhyse but its kinda hard to read 3d looks ok though
Lope: im not diggin the extension off the M but simps still lookin good.
Roolete: i cant tell much now, maybe ink it up.
Borg: know his shit is ill ;)
Evade: im not feelin the A D E maybe connect them or something.
Revid: i was saying on your throws the G looks kinda like a C

So i promised AMK i would get one up tonight haha
left off the extensions really though. i have one but its way overboard
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newrankgrn003.jpg


hit me up with them crits

Xyk
01-24-2008, 04:00 AM
Rank:
Thats really nice work with the colors^ Also like how you amde it seem like hands were gripping the letters.
Rupe:
Nice characs, but the letters are very bad.
Raket:
Shits fresh, would love to see it colored.

Rank-oner!
01-24-2008, 04:12 AM
ha thanks but they're not hands. they are just stretches or connections but the one on the K kinda looks like a hand
the flash took the color away some but you can see closer http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newrankgrn005.jpg

twisties
01-24-2008, 04:35 AM
Rank- Would love to see that on a wall..But I'm not feelin the red outline though..maybe a different colour?

Xyk
01-24-2008, 04:37 AM
I see. The one on the K does look very very much like a hand, xept it has an extra finger lol.

The one on the A would be the add on im not really feeling. but its all good.

Ima try and get some of my stuff up soon. Did graff for a few months back in 9th grade, now im starting it up again :D

twisties
01-24-2008, 06:53 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/card.jpg
crits?

smooth_nuts
01-24-2008, 07:57 AM
twisties-stick with the simples the other shit is just kinda bleh
rank-i i like it but whats up with the little lines where the top part of the a connects and shit it looks weird
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture028.jpg
just muh throw desided to post out of bordem haha crits would be loverly....

Haz-E
01-24-2008, 07:59 AM
ABOUT that sketch isnt bad actully its a pretty nice style
i hate the B and if u make all the widths of the letters the same it will look pretty dopeI say do it again and use some of my advice and i think you will have something going man

Xyk
01-24-2008, 08:21 AM
Smooth_nuts - Thats a solid throw. Go paint it :D

Here's some of my stuff, been a long time since i last wrote.

Pigment ink and fluorescent highlighters suck when scanned, gotta keep that in mind :P

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg

--

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg

^Messed up the 3d on the N in the second one.

Crits pls.

LOPe_GCI
01-24-2008, 09:36 AM
rank- decent simple. maybe try to give the letters a little more movement. they seem really stiff. you could try some variation on the width of your bars and moving the letters around to fit into each other better.
about- definitely try to develop that more. like haz-e said, try to keep the width of the letters the same or atleast consistent and that will be fire.
xyk- i would just say simplify your style for now, it needs some structure badly


makr simple exchange.
tried to clean it up a bit
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0255.jpg
bump n grind for crits.

Sumoe
01-24-2008, 10:15 AM
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2008/024/7/2/Collage_thingy__by_SUMOE.jpg

Excuse my sloppiness.

Maste
01-24-2008, 10:40 AM
lope: the tail on the m looks yucky (yes i use that word haha)
smooth:its nice but the O with the grr is kinda overplayed ...that dosnt stop it from lookin good
rank: haha i love that style...the shineys arre a tad to big but its cool ...paint it :)

Kriede
01-24-2008, 11:14 AM
lope - love the sketchy fill.
sumoe glad to see you sketchin again.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2193/2216224899_0f8db0a695_o.jpg

Fazed
01-24-2008, 11:53 AM
fixed a lil.
I know my A looks like a 9.

http://i25.tinypic.com/16i7a0w.jpg


crits please

BORG
01-24-2008, 12:10 PM
sume- damn, its nice to finally see something from you, thats looking good, like the concept
chalk- looking good, the leg of the l looks odd, back????? haha keep pumpin that fresh shit out for me :)
fazed- its comin along girl, keep the bars the same thickness for now, and all the letters the same height, and try to get them about the same width, dont rep nc????? lmfao

steyr
01-24-2008, 12:26 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/8836/rosyoneos1.jpg


a random drawing i did for my bitch during finals.

Noddles912300
01-24-2008, 12:32 PM
Chalk: Looks dope
Fazed and Steyr: Simples.
Steyr you kinda went over wit the extensions. Do simples
Fazed looking better but next time make sure the A looks like an A. Still ur getting simples better keep practicing

blunttokes
01-24-2008, 12:32 PM
ha thanks but they're not hands. they are just stretches or connections but the one on the K kinda looks like a hand
the flash took the color away some but you can see closer http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newrankgrn005.jpg

this is godly!

blunttokes
01-24-2008, 12:36 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/01-23-2008082814PM.jpg
the start of mine[/quote]


NEAM ? ..
its been nagging at me for ages but this sketch did it.


kinda reminds me of neam aswell...

steyr
01-24-2008, 01:04 PM
Chalk: Looks dope
Fazed and Steyr: Simples.
Steyr you kinda went over wit the extensions. Do simples
Fazed looking better but next time make sure the A looks like an A. Still ur getting simples better keep practicing

thanks.
haha there is no A, it says michelle. lol

steyr
01-24-2008, 01:06 PM
yeah, i do go a little overboard with the extensions.

renz198
01-24-2008, 01:31 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/8836/rosyoneos1.jpg


a random drawing i did for my bitch during finals.

the colouring on the 3ds nice man but thats about the only good thing with this sketch go back to block letters and bars they will help you improve alot

Hoostein
01-24-2008, 01:48 PM
Steyr, lets be serious man, you suck really bad. At least from what we can tell, because ALL you do it shitty wildstyle pieces. Maybe try a simple? Then more simples and. . . Im sure youve heard it a million times but how about you take some fucking advice? Please, dont do that ugly shit and more. My eyesight has been really giving me trouble and that isnt helping whatsoever. Please, simples. Coloring is good!...? Sersouly your structure is bad, well its really not even there yet. Just simples please.

Sumoe
01-24-2008, 02:04 PM
http://fc.deviantart.com/fs23/f/2008/024/b/6/Handstyles_by_SUMOE.jpghttp://sumoe.deviantart.com/art/Handstyles-75486421

Okay, yeah, I know my handstyles suck. Any crits?

revid!
01-24-2008, 02:11 PM
shits fresssshh man
can i ask you a ?

SEZ
01-24-2008, 02:16 PM
kaus i'm offended by your sig seriously dude, Gods going to bring you down

SEZ
01-24-2008, 02:20 PM
Steyr, lets be serious man, you suck really bad. At least from what we can tell, because ALL you do it shitty wildstyle pieces. Maybe try a simple? Then more simples and. . . Im sure youve heard it a million times but how about you take some fucking advice? Please, dont do that ugly shit and more. My eyesight has been really giving me trouble and that isnt helping whatsoever. Please, simples. Coloring is good!...? Sersouly your structure is bad, well its really not even there yet. Just simples please.

youre a real dick, if youre such an expert than why are you in here?
get off his case...we're all here for the same reason...

steyr keep at it, but simples do pay off...i learnt that and so will you...

revid!
01-24-2008, 02:36 PM
keep the talk down lets get some flicks goin!

Recon
01-24-2008, 03:21 PM
YO, KIDDIES HERE'S MY SUBMISSION FOR THE NASM SKETCH BATTLE POLLS GONNA BE IN A WEEK OR SO

Vote for ME!!!! http://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sctm/v172/173/97/501686124/n501686124_875776_1715.jpg

NaSM + takes up two full computer paper pages, no rulers or anything

Xyk
01-24-2008, 03:51 PM
Here's some of my stuff, been a long time since i last wrote.

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg

--

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg

^Messed up the 3d on the N in the second one.

Crits pls.

Bumpity.

Steyr - Go simpler.
Recon-That looks good, but im having difficulty finding the letters. Maybe coloring it will make it better. Nice symmetry work thoh.

Mass Appeal
01-24-2008, 03:54 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/01-23-2008082814PM.jpg
the start of mine




kinda reminds me of neam aswell...[/QUOTE]


dont mean to beef with you neither ROOLETE but it is awfully strange how you turn from this..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/IMG_0433.jpg

to this....

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/01-23-2008082814PM.jpg

in the space of like...3 weeks..

this is all i can find of his painted shit ...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/79f2Atmp.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/normal_8546423.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/to-neam0041.jpg

i dont know man..maybe you got some special progression power or something..it jus seems abit fishy that you go from the first sketch to that ... in such short time...where the extensions are soooo perfectly placed etc.

AOTPs
01-24-2008, 03:55 PM
o shits son mass jus brunt a kid haha

a maze
01-24-2008, 04:00 PM
makr simple exchange.
tried to clean it up a bit
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0255.jpg

Ho, ly shit. FRESH, Thanks man! I'll have yours up in a bit

Fazed
01-24-2008, 04:01 PM
fazed- its comin along girl, keep the bars the same thickness for now, and all the letters the same height, and try to get them about the same width, dont rep nc????? lmfao


haahha seriously, I hate this fucking place. I have no excuse for that A lookin like a comma. Thanks for the crits =D

BORG
01-24-2008, 04:09 PM
^^you hate fayetteville hahahaha
come to raleigh, you got me, woem, celm, kolun, shoyu, calus, sicr, nakt, and a bunch others.....plus the million toys haha

hhmmmm amk, you drive at a good point, i can see a bit of similarity in the two :(

steyr
01-24-2008, 04:35 PM
Steyr, lets be serious man, you suck really bad. At least from what we can tell, because ALL you do it shitty wildstyle pieces. Maybe try a simple? Then more simples and. . . Im sure youve heard it a million times but how about you take some fucking advice? Please, dont do that ugly shit and more. My eyesight has been really giving me trouble and that isnt helping whatsoever. Please, simples. Coloring is good!...? Sersouly your structure is bad, well its really not even there yet. Just simples please.

haha, sry bought ur eyes =]
why do you think i posted that sketch in this forum?
to get advice. i might take ur advice. but im still new to this shit, and i got other peeps that are helpin me out with this shit. piece.

zeekoner
01-24-2008, 04:36 PM
crits?

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/8033/1010899on9.jpg

steyr
01-24-2008, 04:38 PM
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2008/024/7/2/Collage_thingy__by_SUMOE.jpg

Excuse my sloppiness.

mahhh, those black kids always droppin bombs on us white folk.

RUP'E
01-24-2008, 04:46 PM
verry pretty sumoe, finishit.
zeekoner keep workin onit for a long time.
thats sick recon maybe add bolder lines or 3d or somthing then colour it?
um mines probably shit but the themes nice chek it out.
p.s i had problems uploading it so heres a link,.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=213014829&albumID=2890&imageID=10194747

Captain
01-24-2008, 04:52 PM
http://fc.deviantart.com/fs23/f/2008/024/b/6/Handstyles_by_SUMOE.jpghttp://sumoe.deviantart.com/art/Handstyles-75486421

Okay, yeah, I know my handstyles suck. Any crits?


I'm too lazy to go through and crit everyone, I'll do one of those tomarrow.
But a chance to crit sume? Hell yes I'm gonna jump on this.

The top one doesn't look too bad, it's just a bit squished and the letters seem out of whack sizewise. Try a few where they're the same height, some progressively getting larger, some getting smaller, just to learn to control size. Do some chill simpler stuff for awhile, try to avoid really sharp corners. You add too many and it looks like a mess of broken glass or some shit.

Trash the bottom two. They's unsalvagable. Sorry.

http://static.eway.com/catalog/8/1088885_ioe.jpg

get like four or five of those. play with using just the tip, or the whole nib. They're really good for handie practice. Fill up some notebooks until there's less white on the pages than black.

Ps. I find the disproportionate skill between your sketches and hands amuzing. Keep up the good work on that side.

Drakula
01-24-2008, 04:55 PM
Makr-Thats exactly what you should be doing at the moment.Just keep going cuz its sick.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/IMG_2470.jpg

Sketch I did for OZONE R.I.P.London Legend.

traP905
01-24-2008, 05:03 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/DSC00102.jpg
my throw. crits?

knucks
01-24-2008, 05:16 PM
Drak- dope ozone sketch. Rip Ozone, Rip Wants.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017abaaee/1/169/yWmxcZc07T8LUTD0U9Aacsts9YXZrK5E.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/lI3Vx5tB0T_aSxNjdh-34TWc-_3adkJu?referrer=hlnk)

sketch3
01-24-2008, 05:20 PM
Makr-Thats exactly what you should be doing at the moment.Just keep going cuz its sick.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/IMG_2470.jpg

Sketch I did for OZONE R.I.P.London Legend.

this is big fam,
london lost two great heads that day,
edit knucks thats just silly, tone it down

a maze
01-24-2008, 05:25 PM
Drak- dope ozone sketch. Rip Ozone, Rip Wants.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017abaaee/1/169/yWmxcZc07T8LUTD0U9Aacsts9YXZrK5E.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/lI3Vx5tB0T_aSxNjdh-34TWc-_3adkJu?referrer=hlnk)

lose the fucking extensions, how many times we gotta tell you??? SIMPLES!

knucks
01-24-2008, 05:28 PM
I dont care what you say. Its a freestyle , im not going to paint it.

Stop telling me to do simples, If i feel my letters ill keep them, i have a style which is pretty simple.

sketch3
01-24-2008, 05:31 PM
if u want ppl to stop telling u to do simples then stop posting up prime examples of wack wildstyles with no structer, the 'one' is abot 50000000000000x better than the a and ? i cant even tell wat it is

a maze
01-24-2008, 05:36 PM
New shit, big slap I made-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr9.jpg

edit- couple of other slaps I have-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makr10.jpg

AOTPs
01-24-2008, 05:44 PM
thats wuts up maze

Fazed
01-24-2008, 06:11 PM
^^you hate fayetteville hahahaha
come to raleigh, you got me, woem, celm, kolun, shoyu, calus, sicr, nakt, and a bunch others.....plus the million toys haha

hhmmmm amk, you drive at a good point, i can see a bit of similarity in the two :(



we have Sinj, Digital, and 7473. And only two of us actually put up. And only one of us has actually put up in NC. =[

kase121
01-24-2008, 06:16 PM
I dont care what you say. Its a freestyle , im not going to paint it.

Stop telling me to do simples, If i feel my letters ill keep them, i have a style which is pretty simple.

its ugly man, im not trying to be a dick but there is no structure at all. the N and E in the one are good though....

twisties
01-24-2008, 06:17 PM
ABOUT that sketch isnt bad actully its a pretty nice style
i hate the B and if u make all the widths of the letters the same it will look pretty dopeI say do it again and use some of my advice and i think you will have something going man



about- definitely try to develop that more. like haz-e said, try to keep the width of the letters the same or atleast consistent and that will be fire.



I plan to work on it...I actually got frustrated with the U more than the B but I will go back and rework it just not on cardboard which is why it's not completely smooth. Thanks for the crits!

I've got some simples I'll post up later.

Maze- Some nice slaps you have.

a maze
01-24-2008, 06:57 PM
I dont care what you say. Its a freestyle , im not going to paint it.

Stop telling me to do simples, If i feel my letters ill keep them, i have a style which is pretty simple.

If you dont care, then DONT POST THAT SHIT. Stay out and work on a simple style and only come back when you have one down.

revid!
01-24-2008, 07:04 PM
makr shitt is firrreeeee
and word to what amaze said.
lets keep this talk down only seein a few pics.

knucks
01-24-2008, 07:07 PM
Maze you say that as if i cant do simples you lairy mug,

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017accf28/1/31/_OZL94zUwD_RHw5ESGPnNOYKEVa86c0Z.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/qshiDvmA3z8HArt1aVA_hIOMkFXemA1Z?referrer=hlnk)

I have a style also,

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001673a95a/1/100/jDseRfGQ6j-eTHZOv48MKUiv74NH9HYm.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/GzeVVvNc6D_wD0X0d5s7xeV0XujFiCzd?referrer=hlnk)

Not like i try to perfect my sketches, as long as they look fresh on wall.
I dont give a fuck what you, sketch or your other little asslick clan think, fuck you all.

Edit- maze what the fuck is that bottom right leg on your R about in your pink sticker.

steyr
01-24-2008, 07:09 PM
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/7559/steyrrosyonenq6.jpg

i did this one today. help me out here? are my letters better?

revid!
01-24-2008, 07:10 PM
hey man.
thats your opinion last i checked there was a toy chit chat fourm
take it there
this is for SKETCH pics and crits.
lets keep this legit.
yor simple is tight.
i see you have a style thats cool man.
keep it up.
less of the chatter tho...

a maze
01-24-2008, 07:11 PM
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/7559/steyrrosyonenq6.jpg

i did this one today. help me out here? are my letters better?

Dude, dont waste those precious sharpies!! work simply and use BARS, lose the ARROWS, and forget about coloring for now.

revid!
01-24-2008, 07:12 PM
you man your colorin skills are fire no doubt but your letters still need more structure

Sumoe
01-24-2008, 07:19 PM
I'm too lazy to go through and crit everyone, I'll do one of those tomarrow.
But a chance to crit sume? Hell yes I'm gonna jump on this.

The top one doesn't look too bad, it's just a bit squished and the letters seem out of whack sizewise. Try a few where they're the same height, some progressively getting larger, some getting smaller, just to learn to control size. Do some chill simpler stuff for awhile, try to avoid really sharp corners. You add too many and it looks like a mess of broken glass or some shit.

Trash the bottom two. They's unsalvagable. Sorry.

http://static.eway.com/catalog/8/1088885_ioe.jpg

get like four or five of those. play with using just the tip, or the whole nib. They're really good for handie practice. Fill up some notebooks until there's less white on the pages than black.

Ps. I find the disproportionate skill between your sketches and hands amuzing. Keep up the good work on that side.

Ha, thanks, I'll try working on that. But, yeah. I guess I just never got the hand of hands, haha. But, I've been trying to work on them lately.

Feelin' that sketch, Drakula.
Good simples, a maze.

SenTheFirst
01-24-2008, 07:31 PM
Drak- dope ozone sketch. Rip Ozone, Rip Wants.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017abaaee/1/169/yWmxcZc07T8LUTD0U9Aacsts9YXZrK5E.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/lI3Vx5tB0T_aSxNjdh-34TWc-_3adkJu?referrer=hlnk)

hows it freestyle when you traced over pencil?

a maze
01-24-2008, 07:32 PM
Ha ha. Sen, damn, youve been gone for a little too long! I've missed seeing your shit!

JEDI-MASTER
01-24-2008, 07:33 PM
first time wit decos, fd up a lil bit
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi070.jpg
Blockbuster, didnt turn out how i wanted wit da K but yea here ya go neways
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi071.jpg

revid!
01-24-2008, 07:34 PM
yeah i feels you
yo maze chek yo pms duudee

knucks
01-24-2008, 07:37 PM
Sen, how did i go over pencil?

Animal
01-24-2008, 07:51 PM
you put a pen on a piece of paper that had already been drawn on with pencil and followed the pencil lines with the pen.

SenTheFirst
01-24-2008, 07:51 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/standdown.jpg

doubt you put a pencil thin(ironic..) highlight on your outline.

checkmate.

knucks
01-24-2008, 07:53 PM
Sen are you for real hahaha.

Animal, shutup you fat dick.

a maze
01-24-2008, 07:55 PM
was that a compliment? :D

Animal
01-24-2008, 07:56 PM
Heeeeeeeeellllll Yeeeeeah!

revid!
01-24-2008, 07:57 PM
^^
hahaha

Kelevra
01-24-2008, 08:01 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/WhiteWolf666/0124082044.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/WhiteWolf666/0124082043.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/WhiteWolf666/0124082042.jpg

sorry about the quality, have to use my phone camera

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:02 PM
Exchange with my man Revid! I misplaced the one I was working on earlier, but i promised an exchange, so heres a makeshift one until I find the better one, haha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/shittylogoxchange.jpg

liquid swords
01-24-2008, 08:04 PM
that first one is tight. accept for the transformer. its good character, but transformers are gay as hell.

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:08 PM
haha, thats Gundam, dude.

revid!
01-24-2008, 08:09 PM
ohhhhhhh worddddd man im lovin that!!
goddamn im almost done with yours ill have it up soonn bro!

liquid swords
01-24-2008, 08:09 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/standdown.jpg

doubt you put a pencil thin(ironic..) highlight on your outline.

checkmate.

ey yo sen, his shit is fine.(no hate brotha)
how the fuck are you gonna highlight someones shit like that, are you serious.
and i know this is graff, but graff is a style. a style of art. you dont tell musicians how to make there music, you dont tell chefs how to cook there food.
my point is, its okay to tell ppl what you dont like, but when you tell them whats wrong with it and try to change every detail up to make it perfect, you just get clones and generic sketches

liquid swords
01-24-2008, 08:11 PM
haha, thats Gundam, dude.

my bad *****, a gundam.
its still tight tho, regardless what cartoonnetwork character he used. hahaha

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:12 PM
ey yo sen, his shit is fine.(no hate brotha)
how the fuck are you gonna highlight someones shit like that, are you serious.
and i know this is graff, but graff is a style. a style of art. you dont tell musicians how to make there music, you dont tell chefs how to cook there food.
my point is, its okay to tell ppl what you dont like, but when you tell them whats wrong with it and try to change every detail up to make it perfect, you just get clones and generic sketches

hes not hating, He's pointing out that he lied about freestyling his sketch. He was highlighting the pencil lines.

knucks
01-24-2008, 08:21 PM
The sketch was whack liquid but i see where your coming from man.

And sen the reason those lines are there was because i sketched it out in a bic then it run out so i went over with a fabric marker then a twin touch forcefield.

SenTheFirst
01-24-2008, 08:25 PM
@knucks- i aint trippin padna, keep workin
@zeta- start off making all of your bars the same width
@liquid: -_- all up in the koolaid and dont know the flavor.


well i wasnt gonna post this cuz i gimped the piss out of the 3d on the s and the bottom of it(you can tell by the 3d). just bad tracing. my isnt too steady

but i havent posted in a while

anyways, i aint sleepin on yall

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1329.jpg

Animal
01-24-2008, 08:27 PM
some slaps i just did
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps1.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps2.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps3.jpg

liquid swords
01-24-2008, 08:28 PM
hes not hating, He's pointing out that he lied about freestyling his sketch. He was highlighting the pencil lines.

yeah i kno he wasnt hatin

revid!
01-24-2008, 08:33 PM
animal FRESSHHH!!!
lovin that man

SenTheFirst
01-24-2008, 08:35 PM
@knucks- i aint trippin padna, keep workin
@zeta- start off making all of your bars the same width
@liquid: -_- all up in the koolaid and dont know the flavor.


well i wasnt gonna post this cuz i gimped the piss out of the 3d on the s and the bottom of it(you can tell by the 3d). just bad tracing. my isnt too steady

but i havent posted in a while

anyways, i aint sleepin on yall

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1329.jpg


got bottomed

Animal
01-24-2008, 08:38 PM
oooooooooh!

sen you make me wish i had come up with your style first.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-24-2008, 08:39 PM
sen, you have the same problem i used to have, making the S and E flow. work on the structure of the letters so there isnt as much negative space. other than that, shits lookin good man.

kaze!
01-24-2008, 08:50 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/DSC06657.jpg

New handstyle, name and first bars. I messed up the "Z" on the bars though. Crits?

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:53 PM
^^^please tell me you arent biting Knucks/SLEDGEHAMMER's style, PLEASE!!!!!

revid!
01-24-2008, 08:54 PM
fuuuucccccccckkkkkkkkk!

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:56 PM
^haha


some slaps i just did
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps1.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps2.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/slaps3.jpg

Bumping these for super-throwie fresshness! :D

revid!
01-24-2008, 08:58 PM
bump those for sureee i want a trade with my two dudes!!!
the crew!!!

a maze
01-24-2008, 08:59 PM
...? This person?

:)

Yes... of all the people you could bite, dont bite this dude. -.-

revid!
01-24-2008, 09:02 PM
hahahaha oh myyyyyyyyyyyy

BIGel
01-24-2008, 09:05 PM
my voter ballot.

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/024/2/e/duhh_by_bigel.jpg

SenTheFirst
01-24-2008, 09:06 PM
@el: nasty

a maze
01-24-2008, 09:06 PM
fire, man! What else is there to say??

revid!
01-24-2008, 09:06 PM
goodddd dammnnn man i love that fuckin style to death
your shits always fire
good shiittt

a maze
01-24-2008, 09:12 PM
I havent copied him lol, I cant even read his things.

I look through people sketches for inspiration and core lettering nothing more :P.

looks like a straight up BITE. Listen, just go back to the stuff you were doing before, K?

zeekoner
01-24-2008, 09:13 PM
workin on my throw crits?

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/8033/1010899on9.jpg

a maze
01-24-2008, 09:33 PM
Zeek, you missink another e? Try making your letters just a tad bit more legible next time.

zeekoner
01-24-2008, 09:47 PM
no its short zek and zeek 1 or should i stick 2 just zeek 1? also crits plz!!! i just drew these some shit came to my head lol..

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3394/1010914jc6.jpg
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/3985/1010905hz6.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9033/1010910zi1.jpg
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3705/1010911em0.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/111/1010912zo7.jpg
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4509/1010879dp1.jpg

Nem
01-24-2008, 09:50 PM
Maze you say that as if i cant do simples you lairy mug,

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017accf28/1/31/_OZL94zUwD_RHw5ESGPnNOYKEVa86c0Z.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/qshiDvmA3z8HArt1aVA_hIOMkFXemA1Z?referrer=hlnk)


thats not even a textbook "simple" sketch. and it proves nothing. you're not good yet man. keyword, YET. you gotta give it a lotta time. you cant force that shit out and just be good. i dont think you have a style yet either. it just looks like any other half-assed, bad-structure, sloppily colored mess. patience, and acceptance that you suck, are the two things you need before you even start.



Not like i try to perfect my sketches, as long as they look fresh on wall.

why would you not try to perfect them? how would you know what youre doing on the wall without a concrete, PERFECT example on paper? most writers, if not all writers, start out holdin the piece of paper out in front of them as they're painting. lookin at it making sure its exactly the same, or pretty close to the sketch. you cant sketch with paint on a wall.

a maze
01-24-2008, 09:53 PM
oh, god... Here comes pages upon pages of more E-beef... I'm about to go into E-hibernation and E-wait this E-shit out.

revid!
01-24-2008, 09:57 PM
ok lets squash this shit.
please keep this shit clean this is fuckin stupid.
go somewhere else to bitch
sick of this e beef today shits wack...

zeekoner
01-24-2008, 10:00 PM
hey i wnat some crits on my new stuff plz tell me what u think im trying to get a good throwie

iBomb4KOG
01-24-2008, 10:02 PM
im not feelin any, fuck around for a while then when u get a nice one show me wats up

a maze
01-24-2008, 10:02 PM
If your name is going to be Zeek, I suggest you add another 'e' in that throwie.

***If you want crits, you need to give em too, zeek.

zeekoner
01-24-2008, 10:14 PM
i thought ppl might not wnat my crits because im not to skilled yet but i will give some of what i think.. but i see ppl wright ze for zendo and stuff liek that yea ze off of VS if u kno who im talkin about..

iBomb4KOG
01-24-2008, 10:17 PM
i feel u but ur names 4 letters, zeek, by writin ZEK ur changin ur name, if u get what im sayin, your names not that long so go ahead n thrrow that extra e n there??????

a maze
01-24-2008, 10:19 PM
for a bomb for zeek, prolly use ZK.

revid!
01-24-2008, 10:29 PM
or pick a totally different name....
may just be easier

Rank-oner!
01-24-2008, 10:45 PM
Sen: that SE is lookin tight. the top bar off the s is a lil dif from the E though. looks good

Animal: those are some nice slaps kinda hard to tell thats a K though.

Amaze: those stickers look ALOTTTT better. you moved your K out :)

Kelevra: your getting there man. make sure to keep those bars proportional and even. nice charac.

Jedi: id pick some different colors for that throw ha hard to read. keep workin on that blockbuster though.

Drakula: thats a fresh sketch man really really nice. color scheme reminds me of old school addidas originals.

Sume: your simp and sketch are lookin really good ha its crazy to see your pieces then your handies. that top one has the best flow. not sure about the others though. work with that top one :)

traP905: work on your flow the first letter doesnt flow with the other two and work on that S some more

Zeek: i agree you need to have two E's no reason to shorten a 4 letter word unless your just doing to two letter throw.

REcon: looks like too many extensions and the diamonds look funny. its complicated but maybe overdone. im also not feelin those holes for the extensions.

Smooth nuts: im diggin that throw but not the left side of the D so much.

CHALK!: i havent seen your stuff in forever. you've progressed a ton. Im feelin those letters . color it man. I also think next time if you bent the L the other way or kept it more straight and bent the K out the other way it would have nice symmetry with the c like < > haha if that makes sense.

Maste: the shinnies in the middle of the letterS? haha cause that was cause of the flash they arent as big as that its a lighter green then white but i prob could go smaller there next time.

BigEL: thats a fresh throw. diggin that bottom handy too. why fuck voting though?
haha if you get what im saying. cause of the C

sooo im bumpin this again
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newrankgrn002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newrankgrn005.jpg
bumping this one just for the heck of it.http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranknewr004.jpg


And im posting this piece to show how easy it is to get ahead of yourself with extensions haha Take it simple! i trashed it and drew that one up there ^^^
complete crap haha-http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newextns002.jpg

revid!
01-24-2008, 11:00 PM
youve got a unique ass style man thats awesome.
keep it up youll grasp extentions soon enough.

BIGel
01-24-2008, 11:05 PM
nice stuff rank!

bleh, scanner cut me off. not done.

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2008/024/7/0/dammit_by_bigel.jpg

revid!
01-24-2008, 11:06 PM
daym dude.
dont even know where to start.

Roolete
01-24-2008, 11:14 PM
the left?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/01-24-2008091220PM.jpg

Cr1cd
01-24-2008, 11:17 PM
bout a week worth of experience with tags and creation got decent art backround though, such as portraits and what not tell me what you think of this no feed back is bad feed back.

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5379/pict0059xh8.jpg

Rank-oner!
01-24-2008, 11:19 PM
ha i just got a compliment from El ha im so happy haha.
I like this new stuff man. you took it a lot skinnier but its really well proportioned and your extensions always help make up your letters so its not over done at all. really ill man. i cant wait to see it inked. so is this just experimenting or is this your new style?
REvid: thanks man i really appreciate that. i want to be well rounded but my main style i want to be unique.



oh and when's the deadline for the NASM battle and whos the mod?

Rambooboo
01-24-2008, 11:19 PM
cr1cd start out with simples and bars
roolete and bigel nice

Roolete
01-24-2008, 11:22 PM
those are just simples im hopin to work out the rough parts in my style..the nasm battle is like some bombingscience competition. theres a sticky in the battle forum

cr1cd try to tone it down a little and make it more readable

Cr1cd
01-24-2008, 11:58 PM
How about this (Sorry for blurry and bad lighting its late now and I had to hold it up near the light so my arm got shakey after taking 9 pics (due to overkill by flash)

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0064.jpg

NOVA213
01-25-2008, 12:02 AM
any crit on my shit?
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=676&page=817

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 12:13 AM
Nova: nice work man some of your pieces are lookin real good. nice use of simples. and that throw is really nice. you wanna do an exchange?
oh and next time crit some other people before you ask for crits just a heads up.
Roolete: so you droppin that other style you had been workin on?
cr1cd: work on more basic simples

NOVA213
01-25-2008, 12:27 AM
yeah hit me up

BIGel
01-25-2008, 12:34 AM
BARS BARS BARS.

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2008/024/3/9/say_word_by_bigel.jpg

fully scanned!
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs23/i/2008/024/f/f/nasm_by_bigel.jpg

Raket.LHM
01-25-2008, 12:37 AM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4614/01232008112600pmkl2.jpg

Techkanuck
01-25-2008, 12:50 AM
[/URL]
[URL="http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook001.jpg"] (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook011.jpg)
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook005.jpg[/IMG]"] ("[IMG)
Few simple ideas to pass the time

Techkanuck
01-25-2008, 12:51 AM
[URL="http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook011.jpg"]
[URL="http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook001.jpg"]
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook005.jpg
Few simple ideas to pass the time

Cr1cd
01-25-2008, 12:54 AM
Well you said basics so How about these (the top one was just fooling around and i'm running out of paper but I thought it sorta looked good you guys be the judge)

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0069.jpg

Tech I like them wish i could offer some crit but my toyish self couldn't say much

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 12:57 AM
El thats so sick. when you gonna color it? nice throw as well i like the R in the hand by the throw a lot.

Cr1cd: bottom one is more like it now get those down
Tech; simpler

just messing around bored.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksldks002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksldks005.jpg

Cr1cd
01-25-2008, 01:02 AM
thanks sorry Its getting late or should I say early i'm heading to bed mayhbe i'll dream up something sexy thanks everyone for the development advice

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 01:11 AM
yea i said the bottom ones look better you need to start with block "keyboard letters"
work on those for structure then slowly start playing with your own style using BARS

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 02:15 AM
not the one im going to enter but just bored again
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/nash001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/nash003-1.jpg

JEDI-MASTER
01-25-2008, 02:36 AM
thanx rank for da crit earlier...my scanner fucked up da coors hella bad but will keep workin on simple pieces ima bomber at heart but im workin my way up on pieces n shit

organik
01-25-2008, 05:40 AM
crit?

Xyk
01-25-2008, 06:31 AM
Here's some of my stuff, been a long time since i last wrote.

Pigment ink and fluorescent highlighters suck when scanned, gotta keep that in mind :P

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg

--

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg

^Messed up the 3d on the N in the second one.

Crits pls.

Bumpity.

Rank - Thats some nice ish you got there. Not really feelin the A, and the extension of the bottom of the H, but the rest look good to me.

Racket - Shit fresh man, but im not really feeling the face on the end.

BigEl - ILL. I wanna see that colored.

mas$
01-25-2008, 09:26 AM
Bigel - shits firee
organix -bars dude barsss

havent posted up in agesss
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2303/2218777068_68d654a3e7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2232/2218777066_48918de617.jpg - For my girl
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2210/2175761502_c8de9c430d.jpg

eksgi
01-25-2008, 10:11 AM
^
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That first ones dopppppeeeeee.

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:18 AM
What up people, this is Big Nate first time posting here. Always been interested in graffiti and I'm trying to get into it. Looking for some suggestions and comments. I'll start off with my older stuff (2006) and work up to now. Oh, and my book received some water damage. I had planned to re-do a lot of these pieces anyways.


http://a240.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/118/l_500cdd90411c114142c9bcdf30a10b7f.jpg
candy: don't care much for the arrows.

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:21 AM
http://a568.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/54/l_572b9718ea730431bce2e4e58beb7de7.jpg
least colors ever: I don't care for the lower case ' r '

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:23 AM
http://a965.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/89/l_772ff13285646f62171722eaa1a8ae9c.jpg
popsicle: don't care for my perfect tiny little bubbles and again I went with a lowercase ' r ' my bottom arrow came from nowhere

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:26 AM
http://a132.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/105/l_f8dccf20b84fd68f42f1585c2c76c08b.jpg
worst colors ever: ala toxicity. I really liked the letters i came up with and form on this except I ran out of room. I was working with some markers when it smeared, i almost tossed this piece but decided to scribble in pen instead.

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:29 AM
http://a346.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/17/l_f7c3136e70b594f21c5b07739c48fe89.jpg
ex-gf piece: Not sure how exactly I layered the ' e ' over the previous letter. Anyways, I like most of the letters.

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:33 AM
2007 pieces: didn't do much of anything last year...

http://a664.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/46/l_ab19096159a50825fa93c49617852a6f.jpg
island style: I love these colors and the way I faded them, love my little bubbles and hate my arrow off the ' d '

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:35 AM
http://a172.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/107/l_a7c099c99d7a37ca3913e853003a98ab.jpg
dondi inspired: What can I say, I love those old school DONDI trains. I like this a lot.

mas$
01-25-2008, 10:43 AM
its the newest one:)
new book too, no lines..yay!

^ u in okizoo?

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:44 AM
2008: Little bit rusty. I might be rushing things a bit.
http://a163.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/36/l_8ebd547b07f085691dd3038df84df6ba.jpg
japanesegirl1: ouch, why the unnecessary sigs, i dunno... very simple letters and something strange happened to my ' y '

mxman
01-25-2008, 10:46 AM
http://a213.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/92/l_40acafc8727aea6957939d19af4a2c2c.jpg
japanesegirl2: Love these colors but my arrows are too small.

mxman
01-25-2008, 11:12 AM
http://a501.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/73/l_5d6e9f9b81927f27fad8d8f8cd66f244.jpg
japanesegirl3: stole some decoration ideas, like the colors, my first bigger piece.

mxman
01-25-2008, 11:15 AM
http://a873.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/73/l_e6364672139d886142bf7fa501e7da20.jpg
initial 3d sketch: So before I redraw and paint this onto a canvas, I would really appreciate some feedback on any changes I should make or suggestions on color fill. This will be my first 3d style piece. I have been seeing them a lot and always wanted to try it.

FailOne
01-25-2008, 11:16 AM
feelin it mxman, has that oldschool flavour

Fazed
01-25-2008, 12:01 PM
just got done.
literally.
just now.

http://i29.tinypic.com/261epna.jpg

I know my K is jacked up.

crits please.

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 01:30 PM
MXMAN: dont post a new pic and then submit. post all your pics at one time or use the edit button. And im not saying you are but dont bit any letters cause i look at your first posts then you last. maybe that was over a long period of time or something but the first ones you should scrap. Im feelin the one before the 3d but not the 3d piece. also everyone new just to let you know you need to give crits before you get em

Ezik: work on that K a little man but good work

MASS: the first one's ill man, the second is harder to read cause of the colors but you got a nice style.

remos
01-25-2008, 01:58 PM
mxman those are all dope
i broke my arm so i cant really get into much detail but w/e
[img=http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6055/remos11fy9.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1830/remos10aw5.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1830/remos10aw5.2603999195.jpg] (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=502&i=remos10aw5.jpg)

[img=http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8184/sncvd2.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8184/sncvd2.74b2804b00.jpg] (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=502&i=sncvd2.jpg)

NaRsyONE*
01-25-2008, 02:14 PM
mxman:last one is real nice but idk if you bit it or just progressed real quick
ezik:space the I and the K out a lil
remos:stick with bars n simples
cr1cd:sames crits as remos
bigel:diggin everything specialy the handys
racket:nice but try stretchin the A out n show more of the T
zero:dont use colors or arrows or anything bars n simples
rankoner:hott as usual
mass:i fuckin love the first two third ones alright i think its just the fill tho
organic:structure your letters ..your gotta weird name hahaha
xyk:hard to read but its a unique style


having prablems clearly uploading my new pics hopefully have um up later

mas$
01-25-2008, 02:16 PM
mxman:last one is real nice but idk if you bit it or just progressed real quick
ezik:space the I and the K out a lil
remos:stick with bars n simples
cr1cd:sames crits as remos
bigel:diggin everything specialy the handys
racket:nice but try stretchin the A out n show more of the T
zero:dont use colors or arrows or anything bars n simples
rankoner:hott as usual
mass:i fuckin love the first two third ones alright i think its just the fill tho
organic:structure your letters ..your gotta weird name hahaha
xyk:hard to read but its a unique style


having prablems clearly uploading my new pics hopefully have um up later

thanks, yea that 3rd one was in school i only had kiddie markers and a lone sharpie lol, its one of my least fav colour schemes

NaRsyONE*
01-25-2008, 02:20 PM
haha i know what you mean

revid!
01-25-2008, 02:24 PM
heres my battle entry against thrice i figured id just post it up
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3108/cimg0076mc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSASHI
01-25-2008, 02:34 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musacr.jpg just checking to see what y'all thought of the letters

some good stuff on this page and well you know...remos your links are incomplete...

NaRsyONE*
01-25-2008, 02:49 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/2852/tim001oj9.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7776/tim002gm6.jpg
yeah my blackbook doesnt fit on my scanner ....my bros bringing home his camera later tho so il try to repost em..crits?

revid!
01-25-2008, 02:58 PM
likeing that style man!
specially that last one
post up more soon!
keep it up

fOrSaQeN
01-25-2008, 03:03 PM
wat

knucks
01-25-2008, 03:27 PM
Mus- i used to love your older stuff mate, but not too feeling that, letters seem to skinny and weak.

Nars- would be quite nice if you didnt add all those extra bars.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017b5eb96/1/111/qr02YKLc5T8t5hoeU2x4WQ6fhK-VhLLZ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/wobUfmCO2z_zrwWIBoTVc6iyCl3YQrXp?referrer=hlnk)

Some quick simple stuff, feel free to slag my shit off again..

Fazed
01-25-2008, 03:39 PM
just got done.
literally.
just now.

http://i29.tinypic.com/261epna.jpg

I know my K is jacked up.

crits please.

bumpin this for more crits. =D

Techkanuck
01-25-2008, 04:00 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture36.jpg

What I did instead of class

Musushi- that shit is hot
Nars I really like the second one

Bazer
01-25-2008, 04:14 PM
Zero, stop connecting your letters all together man. It just doesn't look right.
Ezik, try some overlaps on your letterrrrsssah. *nods*

now some of this
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1220.jpg

and i dont know if the dude that was on 12oz that was talkin shit to me my boy is on here but just know this-
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1219-1.jpg
if u dont know then shutup.

a maze
01-25-2008, 04:19 PM
Zero, stop connecting your letters all together man. It just doesn't look right.
Ezik, try some overlaps on your letterrrrsssah. *nods*

now some of this
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1220.jpg

and i dont know if the dude that was on 12oz that was talkin shit to me my boy is on here but just know this-
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1219-1.jpg
if u dont know then shutup.

What the hells up with the top one? New style, or really old?

revid!
01-25-2008, 04:19 PM
wack.
haha no im totally kidding man your shits always fresshhhh.
keep it up.
you know the drill.

Animal
01-25-2008, 04:19 PM
*Musashi- it looks good, im just against the use of arrows, but your style, nothing wrong with it.

*Fazed- try keeping all your letters the same size and use blocks for your letters, it looks like you just tried to free hand it and thats messin your shit up.

*Tech- dude, connecting your letters is kinda lame, makes it harder to read, also keep you letters the same size the whole way through.

Animal
01-25-2008, 04:23 PM
Whats up Makr?

revid!
01-25-2008, 04:25 PM
yo its my 2 dudes huh haha

a maze
01-25-2008, 04:26 PM
Hey-Low Animal.

Mus- i used to love your older stuff mate, but not too feeling that, letters seem to skinny and weak.

Nars- would be quite nice if you didnt add all those extra bars.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000017b5eb96/1/111/qr02YKLc5T8t5hoeU2x4WQ6fhK-VhLLZ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/wobUfmCO2z_zrwWIBoTVc6iyCl3YQrXp?referrer=hlnk)

Some quick simple stuff, feel free to slag my shit off again..

Bumping this, WORK WITH THIS STYLE AND PROGRESS FROM THERE, looks good.

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 04:32 PM
baze: whats with the first one?
so i got a few crits but bumping this up
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/nash001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/nash003-1.jpg

all these were random shit i did just bored
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksldks005.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksldks002.jpg

Cin123
01-25-2008, 04:36 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/058.jpg
my boy tezzm

revid!
01-25-2008, 04:36 PM
shits tight
but one question man
do you like workin so small because some of those are quite small lol
dope shit none the less
good work!!
(rank)

Bazer
01-25-2008, 04:46 PM
What the hells up with the top one? New style, or really old?
iono? i do alot of styles man.

zeekoner
01-25-2008, 04:54 PM
NaRsyONE- love your style its diff.keep it up

knucks- work on 3d letters aren't to bad keep practicing

Techkanuck- work on letters dont have any add ons and work on the outline but keep it up u will get good soon

Fazed
01-25-2008, 05:03 PM
*Musashi- it looks good, im just against the use of arrows, but your style, nothing wrong with it.

*Fazed- try keeping all your letters the same size and use blocks for your letters, it looks like you just tried to free hand it and thats messin your shit up.

*Tech- dude, connecting your letters is kinda lame, makes it harder to read, also keep you letters the same size the whole way through.



I used blocks for everything but the K. I have K issues.

Rank-oner!
01-25-2008, 05:04 PM
yea those two green ones are small cause i was just bored and didnt want to waste a marker on a big piece. the nash one is bigger but still didnt feel like a full blown page ha.
thanks though man
Narsy: I like those styles. not feelin the top A though to many bars but otherwise its lookin good.

revid!
01-25-2008, 05:12 PM
haha yea! i feels you

organik
01-25-2008, 05:12 PM
mxman:last one is real nice but idk if you bit it or just progressed real quick
ezik:space the I and the K out a lil
remos:stick with bars n simples
cr1cd:sames crits as remos
bigel:diggin everything specialy the handys
racket:nice but try stretchin the A out n show more of the T
zero:dont use colors or arrows or anything bars n simples
rankoner:hott as usual
mass:i fuckin love the first two third ones alright i think its just the fill tho
organic:structure your letters ..your gotta weird name hahaha
xyk:hard to read but its a unique style


having prablems clearly uploading my new pics hopefully have um up later

Thanks man... I haven't done anything in like a year, except for the one that says ganik, I just started writing that. I'll post up some newer shit in a little bit.

Rambooboo
01-25-2008, 05:36 PM
techanuk use bars
mass nice lovin tha colors

smooth_nuts
01-25-2008, 06:11 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture078.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture079.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture075.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture073.jpg
paper throwie bordem they all suck balls....

Xyk
01-25-2008, 08:05 PM
smooth_nuts - Love your throwies man, expecially the second devil one.

Bumpin one more time. Any thoughts on the style or what can be done to make it better?

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg

mxman
01-25-2008, 08:07 PM
Thanks for the comments, I know it seems like I mad progressed on the pieces to move on to 3D but I have always been working on graffiti and tags, but these are all sketches and have never made it to the book or had any color put into them. I should have clarified that. Their is not much biting from anything. No side by side copying just a lot of the same letters over and over modified a little. I didn't know that I was suppose to comment on others work when I had none to show for myself. Good to know. Also, I assumed a massive single post would take to long to load once everyone else posted images following it. Other than that, I look forward to checking out the works shown here. Peace!

AZTEKA
01-25-2008, 09:23 PM
Some new styles I've been working on.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4981/01252eb9.jpg
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6123/01251rf3.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2056/01250tu3.jpg

Fazed
01-25-2008, 09:24 PM
^^^^ you're from north carolina or south?

revid!
01-25-2008, 09:25 PM
yooo id say that new style is workin for you my god.
i think those are real fresh man!!!
kepp that shit up!

RFI. SPit
01-25-2008, 09:29 PM
Lookin good Azteka



slopppyyyy quick one
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7106/photo233fz4.jpg
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2276/photo237hl0.jpg

pink marker is dead :(

revid!
01-25-2008, 09:33 PM
lookin good as well man!
that style is fresh!

AZTEKA
01-25-2008, 09:43 PM
Thanks for the crits everybody, and rfi.spit, you down for a piece exchange.

Xyk
01-25-2008, 09:47 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg

Bumpity.

RFI. SPit
01-25-2008, 09:47 PM
yea sure I'm down, you write Kasp?

AZTEKA
01-25-2008, 09:52 PM
Yea I write Kasp, do you write zof or zoftee?

RFI. SPit
01-25-2008, 09:53 PM
Zof, Zofone, your choice

dim
01-25-2008, 10:00 PM
zof ur shit is mad funky i just wish u could do more with that o but im super syked on your style

RFI. SPit
01-25-2008, 10:20 PM
Thanks guys... yea the O is always a let down, I can't think of anything good to do with it. If anybody has any suggestions I'm open to hearing them