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revid!
01-25-2008, 11:34 PM
just fuck around with the bars of it. thats usually how i make mine but yeah i do agree they are kinda a bitch

5Funerals
01-25-2008, 11:56 PM
Smooth nuts - I like that throw up a lot. The faces are a little cliche though
REK ONE - keep working on that style. The N needs to be changed i think. Dont worry about fills yet just try and fix up your letters.
ZOF - wicked funky. If aboriginies wrote thats what it would look like
KASP - awesome style and dope gangster hand.

Some recent B-bookage:
Ignore the bottom piece's wackocity
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400278.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400277.jpg
Character im working on. His hair and hand kind of have me stumped but you get the idea. He came from a volcano.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400280.jpg
Current style
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400281.jpg
This came out really good. Ironic that its not even my name...
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400283.jpg

a maze
01-25-2008, 11:58 PM
First (lower) one and fourth one are fire! Keep it up, man! Get my slaps yet?

5Funerals
01-26-2008, 12:02 AM
yeah dude I got them today sick! We need to do that again in the future. I need to get some finer markers so I can piece on slaps.

a maze
01-26-2008, 12:08 AM
Cool, cool! Yeah, we do need to do it again sometime.

Animal
01-26-2008, 12:39 AM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/ooooooooooohlyea.jpg

I smudged out some unattractive handstyles, but the throwie is what the flick is all about.

RFI. SPit
01-26-2008, 12:39 AM
That bottom Peor in the first flick is funky!

This came out a bit weird, just too much shit going on at the end, did it quick:
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1341/photo243ea0.jpg

5Funerals
01-26-2008, 12:41 AM
those O's are way better!

Animal - give crits! I cant tell what your first letter is but it still looks good.

a maze
01-26-2008, 12:45 AM
Looking hot, animal.

Posting basically my first attempt at a makr throw, crits are very appreciated-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrthrow1.jpg

revid!
01-26-2008, 12:47 AM
reeeel freshh everyone
espically my dudes-animal and makr lookin great!

5Funerals
01-26-2008, 12:54 AM
MAKR - thats dope especially the top right arm of the K.

C3ZR ONE
01-26-2008, 01:17 AM
http://a346.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/17/l_f7c3136e70b594f21c5b07739c48fe89.jpg
ex-gf piece: Not sure how exactly I layered the ' e ' over the previous letter. Anyways, I like most of the letters.

Bump for that. That's my Okibrother!

ZOOOOO!


RFI- I like that. I can see your influence. You kick it with Gesus over there don't you?

zeekoner
01-26-2008, 01:30 AM
a maze maybe you can make a thing for the A instead of a hole.. and i dont liek the R but the rest is great.. keep up the work

mxman
01-26-2008, 03:55 AM
I was also going to say a different A and R but i do like it.

The_Sheep
01-26-2008, 04:51 AM
some gay freestyle stuffs

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3738/dsc00291no3.jpg

JEDI-MASTER
01-26-2008, 05:16 AM
makr looks decent but the A looks like an E wit a big line on da bak nd a big ole dot...everything else flows fine tho, actully i look again ur R looks more like an A...sheep doont care for the letters but like da background

maso1
01-26-2008, 05:55 AM
That throiw is dope Makr

-ShAmEE-
01-26-2008, 06:21 AM
The sheep Fucking love it!

maze. dont ko much about throwies but yh i kool.

rfi - dont rate it the best one u have done, but i have to say it aint my favourite one form u.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/3-1.jpg

mine!

mas$
01-26-2008, 07:56 AM
shameee aint feelin the colours, but the extensions and the letter is DOPEEE
maybe make the bars in the letter a lil fatter?
i mite steal your squircle thingie :P:P
u wanna exchange? i got my ish on my flickr

knucks
01-26-2008, 09:17 AM
Some new styles I've been working on.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4981/01252eb9.jpg




Gesus bite?


--------------------------

So im not flickless:

A piece i did in august 06 for a battle on another forum.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017bcc258/1/118/YIwXmfE_yT9Lf1Bks-Qem1Avuh7tpVAq.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/SK5BWiN2tz80i6ccXRG-Q9fdv3GxdYxR?referrer=hlnk)

SICKLE, i used to write sike and i was batteling stile so the mod picked the word siclke.

No crits please.

NaRsyONE*
01-26-2008, 11:13 AM
peor:your def improving the pink/red one is the best keep it up
azteka:first n third ones are fire post the second when you color it ight
zoh:illlllllll style i love it
amaze:possilby lose the top hump on the M fix the a lil K fressshhhh n Rs nice to
shamee:ill n i dig the fill lol
animal:diggin it nice colors.CE??i think wasnt sure

thanks for crits

NaRsyONE*
01-26-2008, 11:15 AM
amaze:.possibly* my bad idk how that happened

smooth_nuts
01-26-2008, 11:57 AM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture083.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture081.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture028.jpg
more bordem throwie bull shit....

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 12:05 PM
I rarely ever post in here but w.e

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8394/0126081147aky6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Zorf-good shit as always

Smooth-take that face off and itd be dope.

And i cant remember who it was but yea im gonna have to agree w. that other kid, it looks like a Gesus bite, but if not, dope.

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 12:21 PM
yo not tryin to b a dick, that shits wack, they letters are too goofy

Cin123
01-26-2008, 12:25 PM
muse-work on the letter structure
smooth- its pretty fresh

silentchaos14
01-26-2008, 12:30 PM
I rarely ever post in here but w.e

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8394/0126081147aky6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Zorf-good shit as always

Smooth-take that face off and itd be dope.

And i cant remember who it was but yea im gonna have to agree w. that other kid, it looks like a Gesus bite, but if not, dope.
for a kid who talks so much shit to people you would think you could atleast back it up.

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 12:35 PM
I never said i was good at sketching. hahaha look whos talking ur shits whack as fuck to. atleast ill admit im bad.

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 12:39 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/119wbvl.jpg

Cin123
01-26-2008, 12:44 PM
ibomd thats dope

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 12:52 PM
thanks bro

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 12:55 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/11bhfl4.jpg

my boys shit, he needs help, give him yourinput

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 12:56 PM
looks like the o and p from cope2. idk

silentchaos14
01-26-2008, 12:57 PM
I never said i was good at sketching. hahaha look whos talking ur shits whack as fuck to. atleast ill admit im bad.
i never said i was good either, i know i suck and havent made much progress but i still dont run my mouth like you.

ibomb- really nice simples and charac. you boys shit looks like a cope chomp.

Darkeist
01-26-2008, 01:00 PM
iBomb, it looks stolen from cope.

I really fucked up the E, i used bars and sort of bent them a bit

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool-3.jpg

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:02 PM
yeah i know but its not, like its a basic O n a e to match his c, he just started like 1 month agao

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:08 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zogcg7.jpg

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:09 PM
thats cope my *****, the c o . e are different

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 01:18 PM
i never said i was good either, i know i suck and havent made much progress but i still dont run my mouth like you.

ibomb- really nice simples and charac. you boys shit looks like a cope chomp.
i dont talk shit about my sketching, i talk shit in inks. and if u know ur bad, u shouldnt be saying a damn thing about me.

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:20 PM
yo kid muse, u talk mad shittt o every1 like no bullshit, n ur shitsxs wack so quit talkin shit n accept what u do

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 01:23 PM
Kid? U make me laugh. I only talk shit to dumb ass toy that come around saying "how do u open a kiwi" and other stupid ass shit like that, ive never said anything to u so just shut ur fucking mouth. accept wat i do? i already said i admit that i suck. wat else do u want?

if ur gonna continue to talk shit to me, do it throuigh pm's so ur dumbass doesnt clog this thread.

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:27 PM
n ill call u kid all day for one, n 2, u did talk smack to me, 3 you try to act hard, but really u need to relocate yourself cuz were on the internet, so go ahaead talk some more

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 01:29 PM
if ur gonna continue to talk shit to me, do it throuigh pm's so ur dumbass doesnt clog this thread.
Do u know how to read?

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:31 PM
haha i can read but once again ur still talkin smack, i think ur afraid to talk on here cuz u know imma clown your ass all day long

Darkeist
01-26-2008, 01:36 PM
iBomb, it looks stolen from cope.

I really fucked up the E, i used bars and sort of bent them a bit

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool-3.jpg

Bump, crits please

hungr
01-26-2008, 01:37 PM
beef in the book
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160001.jpg
neamstar outline i did colour... HANDSTEEZE ON FIYAH (not)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160002.jpg
bodypainting outline.. next one ima do
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160003.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160005.jpg
i like the UN
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160007.jpg
first sketch with mctits
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160006.jpg
second..
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160004.jpg
third (final one i used on body peice)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160008.jpg

Cin123
01-26-2008, 01:37 PM
LMFAO
thats jks

RFI. SPit
01-26-2008, 01:39 PM
dope hungr

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:39 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/119wbvl.jpg

bump for crits niga

hungr
01-26-2008, 01:42 PM
A doesnt look like an A.. the FUC is good work on the K... make the L caps and a new THE

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:45 PM
haha yeah thats same shit i was sayin, i got to the point where i got tired of drawin n jus rushed it

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 01:47 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/hv2kja.jpg



new throwie

MUSEone
01-26-2008, 02:18 PM
haha i can read but once again ur still talkin smack, i think ur afraid to talk on here cuz u know imma clown your ass all day long

Ur clogging uup the thread by talking shit. Keep it up and ur gonna get an infraction. Thats why i said take it pm's

a maze
01-26-2008, 02:29 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/hv2kja.jpg



new throwie




http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/ooooooooooohlyea.jpg

I smudged out some unattractive handstyles, but the throwie is what the flick is all about.

iBomb4KOG- Bite much???

knucks
01-26-2008, 02:29 PM
iBomb4KOG- your throw looks like a smurfs ass.

Edit*- amaze i cant see it myself.

Feelin animals first letter and colour scheme.

smooth_nuts
01-26-2008, 02:31 PM
HUNGR-loking fresh man im loving the fill on the first mctits
ibom4kog-on the fuck the law thingy try rounding the edges on your letters as for the throw i do not like it to pointless shit like the dots and like drops and shit....word haha
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture090.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture088.jpg
just some more bordem bullshiz...
edit*maze i can't see it either maybe my eyes are just retarded :(

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 02:43 PM
no biitn involved at all. i dont need to bite shit

avore
01-26-2008, 04:00 PM
ibomb--that pigs preetty cool bro
hungr---that black and white ones preety good
drame-- jus keep workin at them simpples bro

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8443/anna4001op9.jpg

Techkanuck
01-26-2008, 04:17 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture37.jpg

Just trying to get a feel for some techniques. I know i need to do simples and work on bars but i still want to try some fun and creative shithttp://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture39.jpg

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-26-2008, 04:23 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160006.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160004.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160008.jpg

damn, you bit spins S hardcore

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n261/SPINage_2006/Canvas2008.jpg

Bazer
01-26-2008, 04:29 PM
ive done that same s before... seen has done that same s before. maybe spin bit me.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-26-2008, 04:33 PM
</dickriding>

either way, shits a bite.

the end
01-26-2008, 04:44 PM
;985537']</dickriding>

either way, shits a bite.

goddamn boy, its not like its an all un-too-common S. stop your bitching.

Techkanuck
01-26-2008, 05:41 PM
Having more fun

IBomb-the karac is nuts, I'm feelin the bubbles

HUNGR- The first one is hot, blue/white/greens...nice
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture41.jpg

iBomb4KOG
01-26-2008, 05:50 PM
do u mean nuts n a good way or bad?

HuntingLOLs
01-26-2008, 05:52 PM
stop calling bite all the time - spin in the S is common, like seriously common...
my exchange with amkwah, its shitty and for that im sorry :( 2 editions
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Unavngivet2.jpg

Techkanuck
01-26-2008, 05:55 PM
in a good way, like crazy shit

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-26-2008, 05:56 PM
no shit its common. you guys are fucking stupid, ITS THE EXACT SAME THING. i can understand if it had minor differences but there isnt. you all need to hop off his dick. whatever, it isnt worth arguing about because i could care less.

ekimboi1
01-26-2008, 06:08 PM
http://a346.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/17/l_f7c3136e70b594f21c5b07739c48fe89.jpg
ex-gf piece: Not sure how exactly I layered the ' e ' over the previous letter. Anyways, I like most of the letters.

http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/leters.gif

an E from an undisclosed site...

dim
01-26-2008, 06:17 PM
beef in the book
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160001.jpg
neamstar outline i did colour... HANDSTEEZE ON FIYAH (not)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160002.jpg
bodypainting outline.. next one ima do
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160003.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160005.jpg
i like the UN
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160007.jpg
first sketch with mctits
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160006.jpg
second..
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160004.jpg
third (final one i used on body peice)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1160008.jpg
mctits droppin mad science


the s is genaric as fuck any one can come up with it

cirus905
01-26-2008, 06:24 PM
quick thro wit colour. havent posted ish n a loong time. peecy

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/cirus905/bombsoh001.jpg

hungr
01-26-2008, 06:35 PM
i know spin so it aint no thang.. but its a mad common thing ..and spin isnt the first to do that.. u need to go farther back than spin.. maybe u rock that S it might make ya feel better

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-26-2008, 06:42 PM
yeah, i figured you knew him, thats why i wasnt going to say anything. sorry to cause so much drama in here. i need to watch what i say around a bunch of pre-pubescent girls.

sketch3
01-26-2008, 06:48 PM
;985664'] i need to watch what i say around a bunch of pre-pubescent girls.
just show us ur tatoo and buy us cigeretts and we'll go all the way

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
01-26-2008, 06:49 PM
who told you how i pick up underage girls?!

sketch3
01-26-2008, 06:52 PM
my homies lil sister,
an there only underage if u turn the lights on,

Techkanuck
01-26-2008, 06:58 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture44.jpg

WOW! Bars and a lil mary jane helped. I still can't seem to figure out the R and O from here though

ekimboi1
01-26-2008, 07:02 PM
thats really bad, hot bout u go SIMPLER
with simple ass straight letters!!

garbage down tha way
01-26-2008, 07:03 PM
yeah neither of those things helped you at all.

Mr Tasty
01-26-2008, 07:22 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/colortaste.jpg
unfin oldy

Haz-E
01-26-2008, 07:23 PM
my homies lil sister,
an there only underage if u turn the lights on,

that was some funny fucking shit dun worry i agree LMAO

TECH KANUCK KEEP UR LINE all the smae size and lose the arrows fuck dude ur really starting from the begining its ight if u got ambition ull do ight


some bull shit i put together crit if u feel
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2219/000b02101yy2.jpg

steyr
01-26-2008, 07:24 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1286/letterstructgg4.jpg

crits please. no haters.

Techkanuck
01-26-2008, 07:33 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture46.jpg

I definetly willkeep to the same sized lines and try simples more, I just felt like doing this to pass time. I still like the look and it's helping me with steadiness and concept.

Haz- the color scheme is awesome and I like the effect in the 3D

Evasion Of Invasion
01-26-2008, 07:44 PM
both of u need to go more simple ur gettin ahead of urselves
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00624.jpg

steyr
01-26-2008, 08:07 PM
^^
envasion- its good, but im not really feelin the I
nice colers and 3d

aww shit is it really that complicated? i thought i kept it simple this time.
the T and E still need more adjustments(in mine)

Haz-E
01-26-2008, 08:11 PM
bumpin cause im was last

that was some funny fucking shit dun worry i agree LMAO

TECH KANUCK KEEP UR LINE all the smae size and lose the arrows fuck dude ur really starting from the begining its ight if u got ambition ull do ight


some bull shit i put together crit if u feel
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2219/000b02101yy2.jpg

Mr Tasty
01-26-2008, 08:14 PM
both of u need to go more simple ur gettin ahead of urselves
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00624.jpg
get rid of all those little extensions
and ur 3d is abit off in places
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/DSC00624.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
01-26-2008, 08:23 PM
thnx tasty

Fazed
01-26-2008, 08:45 PM
Having more fun

IBomb-the karac is nuts, I'm feelin the bubbles

HUNGR- The first one is hot, blue/white/greens...nice
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture41.jpg

I would like it if it wasn't for the skull and crossbones

Mr Tasty
01-26-2008, 08:50 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture498.jpg
bump for crits

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/colortaste.jpg
unfin oldy

glyce
01-26-2008, 08:58 PM
mr tasty- that looks sick but i can see the last part of it


http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank002.jpg

silentchaos14
01-26-2008, 09:08 PM
tasty i like both of them
soank i dont like it at all, especially the K.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Morne5.jpg
havent posted in awhile. the R is still in the works.
crits?

organik
01-26-2008, 09:21 PM
first attempt at a pseudo-wildstyle. i think it sucks. crit?

ekimboi1
01-26-2008, 09:29 PM
yup it sucks, go simpler like block letter, cus that is not a wildtyle or anything close to it!

glyce
01-26-2008, 09:34 PM
yeah i dont like mine either the k and the n suck, so does the fill

MOSE
01-26-2008, 10:15 PM
http://a73.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/21/l_0f132416c38c8a307f23ead06a5bbff0.jpg

UZE_[HGSKrew]
01-26-2008, 10:26 PM
http://a73.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/21/l_0f132416c38c8a307f23ead06a5bbff0.jpg

I really like the force field drips... except for the ones on the E. Maybe work on getting the letters all the same size too though. It's looking good nevertheless.

ESKiMO2
01-26-2008, 10:33 PM
Steyr- Get rid of the parts that aren't the letters.
Zero- Cramped and not very good looking. Try simples.
SI- The 3D shouldn't be over the letters.
Tasty- It looks nice keep the style going
Soank- The OAN is good but the S and K aren't.
Morne- The letters are very stiff.
Organik- Go simples. If you must do that to satisfy yourself just don't post it.

I got a new scanner. I'm in a pretty good mood.

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2707/riactno5.jpg

Yeah, I started slow on the R and then got impatient so I rushed.
Not my best work.

Rank-oner!
01-26-2008, 10:39 PM
Haze: Thats fresh man. im feelin that color scheme a lot! and nice wat to have minimum extensions. props man
Evasion: nice S I. i would take those lil extensions off like tasty said but good letters.
Tasty: that new one looks like a few of the letters are a little but bigger in places but that looks like a ill style. the older one is hard to read cause its brown.

AZTEKA
01-26-2008, 11:30 PM
I rarely ever post in here but w.e

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8394/0126081147aky6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Zorf-good shit as always

Smooth-take that face off and itd be dope.

And i cant remember who it was but yea im gonna have to agree w. that other kid, it looks like a Gesus bite, but if not, dope.

My piece isn't a bite, might be a similarity but whatever. Yo if your the sicker from the moms crew, why don't you post up other pics like the pieces you do.

revid!
01-26-2008, 11:39 PM
yo that style you doin azteka is fresshh
i dont know of any bites!
keep that shit up reguardless!
KFC FAM!

KASE2
01-26-2008, 11:41 PM
STEYER- fix tha "E" nd lose the bottom extension on tha "Y"
TECHKANUCK - fix ur letter style
EVASION - not feelin tha "S"
HAZE - thaz clean
TASTY - there both hella clean, jus on tha top one, id fix tha triangle part u got goin 4 the top part of the "S"
GLYCE - keep workin, especially on ur "K"
SILENT - we both kno u kan do better
MOSE - wow work on ur letters a lot more, tha "S" and "E" r horrible, nd they don't evn fit the style

idleon3
01-26-2008, 11:41 PM
dope throw@ mose the drips are tight.... heres somethin nothin special though yea i wanna do simples but i like to test shit out now and then....

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0071.jpg

ekimboi1
01-26-2008, 11:43 PM
yea, its good u like to experiment but yea, go simpler!

AZTEKA
01-26-2008, 11:51 PM
Im sure its just a similarty and NOT a bite.

K F C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

revid!
01-26-2008, 11:55 PM
^^^^
haha WORD!

Evasion Of Invasion
01-27-2008, 12:19 AM
I dont got shit to say no one else has said
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00627.jpg
crits?

steyr
01-27-2008, 12:19 AM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1286/letterstructgg4.jpg

crits please. no haters.

what should i do with my E?

Evasion Of Invasion
01-27-2008, 12:20 AM
make it look more like an E is my advice

emel
01-27-2008, 12:22 AM
what should i do with my E?
yo everyone has already told you this....
you need to lose all your extensions and extra shit

go back to simpler shit because its not working out for the past few sketches

C3ZR ONE
01-27-2008, 12:23 AM
Steyr- Evasion- Haz-e---- You're all on the right track. Keep it up.

Steyr- that last outline had a cold lock on the overall flow and some of the detailwork shows that you're really understanding what you observe. You need to focus on letter structure now to take it to the next level. if you look at each letter singularly, they aren't bad, but they aren't remarkable either. You should be able to look at each letter and enjoy them as a standalone, ya know? I'm looking foreward to seeing more in the future.

Taste- Breaking it down a bit huh? Going simple? It looks pretty good, just don't ever simplify your handys. I'm still a huge fan of them.

5Funerals
01-27-2008, 12:25 AM
yeah steyr do uppercase

EVAD - The colors do not fit that piece in anyway haha. They are like balloon colors. Your character came out a little fat too but other than that its a nice solid drawing.

steyr
01-27-2008, 12:32 AM
iight you guys, i post some of my simples. but they kinda suck. i gotta get new batteries for camera first.

steyr
01-27-2008, 12:34 AM
I dont got shit to say no one else has said
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00627.jpg
crits?

thats pretty dope.
the letters are all nice. accept the yellow one. what letter is that, a C?

Evasion Of Invasion
01-27-2008, 12:34 AM
yeah steyr do uppercase

EVAD - The colors do not fit that piece in anyway haha. They are like balloon colors. Your character came out a little fat too but other than that its a nice solid drawing.

i know they dont fit the girl i was with said it looked scary so i made dare i say "happy" colors for herand the characs supposed to be chunky cuz he's me:D

MOSE
01-27-2008, 12:40 AM
MOSE - wow work on ur letters a lot more, tha "S" and "E" r horrible, nd they don't evn fit the style

shut the fuck up, dick head.

two of the letters dont fit the style? there is only four letters...youre an idiot.

5Funerals
01-27-2008, 12:48 AM
I dont think mose's critisism was very helpful or valid at all but dont overreact and cause a fight please.

steyr
01-27-2008, 01:05 AM
mose- dont hate on kase.

IkontheHologram
01-27-2008, 01:13 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v626/Devin875/2008-01-27-03801.jpg

-Sinn-
01-27-2008, 01:21 AM
Simples!!

C3ZR ONE
01-27-2008, 01:34 AM
Simples!!

Vouche for that!

Animal
01-27-2008, 01:37 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v626/Devin875/2008-01-27-03801.jpg

go here!
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

it will help you

sevenohsavage
01-27-2008, 03:10 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/ixxisg.jpg

Techkanuck
01-27-2008, 04:49 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture47.jpg

I know the whole thing sucked but I wanted to try some colors....should i forget doing color for now too?

South-Pole
01-27-2008, 06:11 AM
^i'd say take a look at the new to graff thread

Xyk
01-27-2008, 07:17 AM
new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek3.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek2.jpg

mxman
01-27-2008, 08:10 AM
http://a873.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/73/l_e6364672139d886142bf7fa501e7da20.jpg
initial 3d sketch: So before I redraw and paint this onto a canvas, I would really appreciate some feedback on any changes I should make or suggestions on color fill. This will be my first 3d style piece. I have been seeing them a lot and always wanted to try it.


Thanks for the crits, going to go for a self-bump for ideas on how to change my "I." Strange word I know, it's my girlfriends name "mizue" and i'm just not feeling that letter. Ideas appreciated!!!11

mas$
01-27-2008, 08:37 AM
uhm, i wud say put a kink half way through it?

pureemoti0n
01-27-2008, 08:39 AM
LO all! finally bothered to register thought id post some shit i done waht ya think
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8584/skiiresizenv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/299/skiresizeup1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2122/tiiiresiz3as5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Xyk
01-27-2008, 08:44 AM
mxman - Not really feeling the M and I, but the rest of the letters are pretty good.

pureemotion - You seem to have a good concept of basics, decent pieces you posted up. Would like to see more :)

PS: If you're reading this, scroll up 4 posts and drop me some feed :D

mas$
01-27-2008, 08:57 AM
motion, the first and last are dopee!
love the blackletters

new book - cover page - FATE BLACK BOOK is wat it sayss
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2287/2223198796_baf0c4d92b.jpg
and the sketch before it was finished :P
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2125/2222404293_c4710596c9.jpg

pureemoti0n
01-27-2008, 09:35 AM
xyk i think the thicker leeters look better but with the driping background, make the drips parallel if u know what i mean. Mass the T is sick and the k on baak

mas$
01-27-2008, 09:37 AM
its book:P
haha but thanks
i think my B is weak any tips any1

Xyk
01-27-2008, 09:47 AM
new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek3.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek2.jpg

Bumpity before bed.

Mass - I think your letters are pretty damn dope, a very advanced level. CHoice of fill could have been better, stronger colors (all the colors seem kinda dull/mellow) i.e. instead of pink you could have used a red/orange for more contrast. Not much other crits i can give you.

mas$
01-27-2008, 09:50 AM
thanks man, yea i kinda did that while listenin to jazz, so like i was in a pretty chill mood
ill crack out sometin more intense tomorr

Rank-oner!
01-27-2008, 10:09 AM
your letters are hot but im not feeling the arrow extensions maybe keep a couple and change some up?

Mass Appeal
01-27-2008, 10:13 AM
The Sheep..stop biting Fezat :D...and when you actually want to battle ( cos you pussied out last time ) ... give me a call ! :D..

Shameeee....hmmm...es niyceee...but one letter as usual !//do a god damn peice !!

hey..

ZOF...coming along is an ill style keep it up !!!!

:D

some freestyle i did again in an exam when i finished

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gr-2.jpg

woot woot !

crities ! :d

HuntingLOLs
01-27-2008, 10:13 AM
stop calling bite all the time - spin in the S is common, like seriously common...
my exchange with amkwah, its shitty and for that im sorry :( 2 editions
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Unavngivet2.jpg
bump for amkwah since i havnt seen him online :(

and there he was!

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 11:56 AM
zero:loose the addons
xyk:feeling it whats the middle letter
skip:not into the first but i digg the second two specialling the botton one
mas$:fresssshhhhh <3
amk:fresh as always

Cin123
01-27-2008, 12:05 PM
mas- thats dope im feelin that
fresko- nice simple keep it up
hunting- not feelin the shin and try 2 make it more simple

ESKiMO2
01-27-2008, 01:10 PM
motion, the first and last are dopee!
love the blackletters

new book - cover page - FATE BLACK BOOK is wat it sayss
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2287/2223198796_baf0c4d92b.jpg
and the sketch before it was finished :P
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2125/2222404293_c4710596c9.jpg

I always love your shit but the fill ins are kind of distracting with all the lines.

mas$
01-27-2008, 01:15 PM
ah i dunno i been ininspired on fills recently..and thanks:)
its less so in real life tho

revid!
01-27-2008, 01:19 PM
yea i like you letters alot.
stlyes real freshh and im sure in person the fills do better justice.
pictures fuck things up lol
none the less dope shit

mas$
01-27-2008, 01:39 PM
thanks man, ima start fillin the new book.80 pages i give it 2 months till its full:P

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 01:41 PM
SKIP-im liking it all sep for the i in the second flick i think you bent it to far in
idk im just retarded haha
mass-its perty
amk-i lurv your shit always have specialy those cartoony ass caraks haha well now i've started to ramble brouhaha.....
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture090.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture088.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture104.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture103.jpg
just some bleh bordem throwies.....

revid!
01-27-2008, 01:42 PM
haha goddam.
my books HUGE
like its going to take mabye a year lol
but i wanna start rockin pieces like everynight so i can get better
keep us posted wiht pics!

MOSE
01-27-2008, 01:44 PM
mose- dont hate on kase.

haha hes a hater. nothing he says is helpfull, he just hates

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 01:48 PM
http://www.warpedtoys.com/images/product_images/haterade.gif
word.

Rank-oner!
01-27-2008, 03:40 PM
AMK: fresh man :) Thats a sick freestyle only thing i might change would be the top bar on the k the / one is a little skinny compaired to the rest of the letters but your stuff always brings heat :D

Xyk
01-27-2008, 04:57 PM
new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek3.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek2.jpg

Bump. It says REK.

smooth - good throws again lol

undergroundanimal
01-27-2008, 05:14 PM
mass:the sketches look fresh the 3d is sick and i like the colours but i think eskimo s right and the fillins disctract to much and that it would look better with a simple fill
amk:sick freestyle..
xyk:looks ok but not feelin the arrows on the first and i think it would look dope if you add more colour in it..
huntinglols:the letterstructure looks ok and i like the fillin colours of the 1st one but im not really feelin the the background and you should ve used another colour for the forcefield becuse you can`t see any contrast now..
smoothnuts:i like the characters..

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0230.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0232.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0152.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 05:41 PM
^^^your d looks like a j in both of those

Teez-EmM!!!
01-27-2008, 06:20 PM
disire your letters are hot man but im not feeling the arrows to much try making them sharper
new style im working on any crits??
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0236.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 06:32 PM
teez-i like it....alot haha try keeping the letters all the same so size though
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture114.jpg
just another bleh throwie...kenan and kell is on :)

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 06:42 PM
[quote=MUSEone;985301]I rarely ever post in here but w.e

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8394/0126081147aky6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quote]

i really hope this doesn't say sicr?????? :(
if it does, your in nc aswell, and know of my boy SICR -nsf-moms-???
if not, ohh well, you should change what u write, sicr crushes nc

Nah ive never heard of em, or seen anything around here from him. Ive seen NSF and MOMS, and i think Gyser? Idk though. It was just something i came up w. for a name change. im not going through w. it though. No worries. =]

Teez-EmM!!!
01-27-2008, 06:49 PM
lol yeah i fucked it up i did it mad quik but like im more askeing for crits on how to improve the letters

Rambooboo
01-27-2008, 07:07 PM
teez em looks good keep the letter some what close it goes up

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 07:08 PM
teez-i like it....alot haha try keeping the letters all the same so size though
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture114.jpg
just another bleh throwie...kenan and kell is on :)

Haha I was just watching it I love that show

00-made-00
01-27-2008, 07:15 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/atepooo.jpg
Some more poo

Dope shit teez.

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 07:19 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9849/0127081915aay5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Meh. Crits?

I cant really say anything that hasnt been already sadi before so far.

MADE-Fix ur A and T up a bit. Lose tha curve on tha T.

thesilentvandal
01-27-2008, 07:34 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012161.jpg

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 07:35 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9849/0127081915aay5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Meh. Crits?

I cant really say anything that hasnt been already sadi before so far.

MADE-Fix ur A and T up a bit. Lose tha curve on tha T.
Bump bottom of page.

Silentvandal-uve improved since last time i talked to u. o and as for Russia... <333 =]

revid!
01-27-2008, 07:38 PM
disire your letters are hot man but im not feeling the arrows to much try making them sharper
new style im working on any crits??
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0236.jpg

BUUUHHHMMP
this right here is hot shit develop this duuudeee!

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 07:59 PM
dawse:fire!
muse:feeling the throwie
teez: i agree hott shit dude but make the T bigger so its level
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/5579/tim003az5.jpg
something new ignore the cut off karac on the right crits?

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 08:13 PM
Well its been a while Crits?

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0084.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 08:22 PM
Haha I was just watching it I love that show

word.
how could you not love kenan and kel.....

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 08:25 PM
Kel died of cancer. =[

gash77
01-27-2008, 08:26 PM
Cr1cd- I'm really likin the character
Narsy- I like the green/lime fill part, not too shure about some of the letters though..I like the S though.
Teez- Really liking it, especially the T, and really nice fill.
Muse- Nice M, reminds me of a smiley face for some reason aha.

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/263/00000369fz0.jpg
Letters are all wonky and not even and shit, and the e is really fucked aha.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/4880/0000035jf4.jpg
The C is all messed up as well aha.

Crits??

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 08:27 PM
haha thnx. i had another friend tell me the same thing. i like it though. =]

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 08:34 PM
Kel died of cancer. =[
did he seriously or are you just playing?

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 08:35 PM
Thanks man

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 08:36 PM
yea like 5 yrs ago. =/ I remember my parents telling me about it.

smooth_nuts
01-27-2008, 08:40 PM
thats impossible he was a spokes man for kfc back in like 2006 and he had a show with the that one chick from "the proud family" like last year....i watch to much tv haha and im clogging up the thread all well i'll edit in some pics in a few
edit*
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture114.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture090.jpg
i really like the d on this one but what ever
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture079.jpg
bleh!

SNAP!
01-27-2008, 08:41 PM
nah i heard that kel shit was a hoax!

5Funerals
01-27-2008, 08:47 PM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kel_Mitchell

hes not dead

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 08:49 PM
yea like 5 yrs ago. =/ I remember my parents telling me about it.

uhhh what the fuck that ruined my night..i cant even sketch now =(

MUSEone
01-27-2008, 08:52 PM
Well excuse tha fuck outta me...

NaRsyONE*
01-27-2008, 08:57 PM
well wether hes dead or not i love him these are for him ...
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5336/gedc0025jh9.jpg
simple
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1193/gedc0023ly1.jpg
oldy
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6030/gedc0020km2.jpg
another oldy
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7166/gedc0018ig3.jpg
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4033/gedc0019ja2.jpg
crits?
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/359/knkcl6.jpg
plz pm me if you find anything out bout kel lol

Mr Tasty
01-27-2008, 09:28 PM
crits on my new style
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/newone.jpg

SNAP!
01-27-2008, 09:31 PM
http://www.myspace.com/therealkelmitchell

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 09:36 PM
Loveing the structure mr tasty Just made this what you guys think?

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0085.jpg

Animal
01-27-2008, 09:45 PM
cricd-dude, try overlapping those letters, and work on your characters.

KFC! FTW!

revid!
01-27-2008, 09:45 PM
taste that shit is hott keep it up!
same goes for most of the rest of the shit!

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 09:46 PM
cricd-dude, try overlapping those letters, and work on your characters.

Thanks, I didn't overlap in this one because I wanted the spaced out as if its almost flying sread out of his face, but thanks for the advice on lettering

Animal
01-27-2008, 09:54 PM
Thanks, I didn't overlap in this one because I wanted the spaced out as if its almost flying sread out of his face, but thanks for the advice on lettering

not a prob, like your sig.

ay yo revid, you should check your PM's

revid!
01-27-2008, 09:56 PM
new throw been workin on..
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4139/cimg0082wn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and FINALLY! my exchange for my dude a maze!!!
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6698/cimg0088pt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
personally like this one^^ lol
crits

sex without condoms
01-27-2008, 09:59 PM
hot damn.

you are a 3D beast. Your ovals are always purrfect

and i applaud you for that kind sir.
*clap clap*

http://lolcats.com/images/u/07/29/lolcatsdotcomrx9vrkh4koc0s6pq.jpg

Animal
01-27-2008, 10:01 PM
both of 'em are sexy!
specially the second 1.

revid!
01-27-2008, 10:03 PM
haha thanks yooo!
shit takes to much time tho o well i enjoy it.
animal you get one of those stickers in oyur pack to if you wanted to know lol

Animal
01-27-2008, 10:05 PM
saweet!
lookin' forward to them slaps.

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 10:19 PM
New Creation Crit me baby
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0087.jpg

revid!
01-27-2008, 10:21 PM
uh maybe try some thiker more simpler letter structures man i cant really tell what it says...

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 10:26 PM
Appreciated man Was trying to form a script but my next one will be simpeler.

revid!
01-27-2008, 10:28 PM
yeah i just saw your first one on this page its alot better!

mxman
01-27-2008, 11:07 PM
http://a346.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/17/l_f7c3136e70b594f21c5b07739c48fe89.jpg
ex-gf piece: Not sure how exactly I layered the ' e ' over the previous letter. Anyways, I like most of the letters.



http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/leters.gif

an E from an undisclosed site...

Thanks for pointing this out :)





new stuff...
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek3.jpg
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek2.jpg
Oh and I really like this, you should do four neon colors on same page with different attachments

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 11:10 PM
Okay I think i'm pretty excited about uploading this one I really hope you guys like it~
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0088.jpg

revid!
01-27-2008, 11:18 PM
there ya go man.
its pretty fresh keep workin and youll get there
one suggestion i have is on the 3d, dont take it all the way back to the vantage point, cut it off after so far back, i think it would look alot better
anyway good job

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 11:23 PM
Yea I hear you man Thanks I thought since I did it better then usual I wanted it to look almost like its coming at a movie theatre just like BOOM

plz
01-27-2008, 11:28 PM
id say the same that revid! said. but anyways heres my first attempt at writing in over 6 months also got a new name

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q260/schneida333/Picture004.jpg

sorry for the lines im on alot of caffeine at the moment and my hand is a little shakey

JEDI-MASTER
01-27-2008, 11:29 PM
quick throw
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi072.jpg

RFI. SPit
01-27-2008, 11:29 PM
grimey ink sketch
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1108/photo244cf7.jpg

Revid man, that piece is looking hot

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 11:30 PM
Nice I man I like it The stability is nice I think But with the thick ness you can pribably throw a inline in and even a small bit of shadow or even a 3-D would look good. (plz)

Man I don't even know what to say, this Toy is breathless.(RFI)

revid!
01-27-2008, 11:31 PM
word zof.
you know i feels your shit!!

JEDI-MASTER
01-27-2008, 11:38 PM
yea shits nice rfi...but i coulda swore i saw it earlier couple pgs back...mayb jus a bit of deja vu

Cr1cd
01-27-2008, 11:43 PM
Yo RFI what do you think of my wolf one before I want more feedback =]

Rhyseitup
01-27-2008, 11:51 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012161.jpg

love this!

sevenohsavage
01-28-2008, 01:50 AM
zof- im really diggin yo style

http://i26.tinypic.com/2uiumw0.jpg

Rank-oner!
01-28-2008, 02:10 AM
revid: im likin that G alot more than your last one ;)
Baze: thats a sexy simple. nice change up. whens the deadline on that?

idleon3
01-28-2008, 02:27 AM
that zof up top is dope thats a badass style... i think it would look and flow a little better if you closed up that gap in the r though but still pretty badass... and that fresko is dope perfect all the way through....

heres just some shit... blah lol

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0074.jpg

Techkanuck
01-28-2008, 04:02 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture50.jpg

don't be too harsh, will go even simpler next time.

Fresko-I like the concept

Thief looks good but something about the e seems off, it's hard to critique when i suck

idleon3
01-28-2008, 04:48 AM
^^^ not to bad dude... im not the best or anythin but i think it would look a little better if you made your letters a little more distinctive so you can tell what they are ya know like the e overlaps the r to much and kinda looks awkward... just my 2 cents

JEDI-MASTER
01-28-2008, 04:53 AM
quick throw
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi072.jpg

idleon3
01-28-2008, 04:57 AM
can you make it bigger cant really see dude

Xyk
01-28-2008, 05:04 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek3.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rek2.jpg

this just looks like a buncha handstyles. bust some other stuff man! learn some actual simples not like the stuff your doing. the letters u do come how they would if u did it with a chisel tipped marker...


I can do simples, just not very well yet. Ill throw up a couple later.

Plus i prefer this style. Sure it looks kinda like a handstyle, but i could do the handstyle with a fill and 3d if i wanted to. Plus, it's unique. I havent seen anyone else do it much.

Street Smart
01-28-2008, 05:04 AM
zof - hooooot
bazer - nice, shap of the H makes it look like a A a bit though
fresko - i liked the one before better i think.. its nice style though keep working on that one.
idleon- simpler
teckanuck - yep go simpler

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0815.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0816.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0818.jpg
last one was in my pocket.. crits?

idleon3
01-28-2008, 05:10 AM
cool simples ... first flick looks clean but i think the diagonal on the k needs to come down a bit

mas$
01-28-2008, 07:18 AM
revid: im likin that G alot more than your last one ;)
Baze: thats a sexy simple. nice change up. whens the deadline on that?
that aint baze he jus has the same avatar me thinks

Xyk
01-28-2008, 08:48 AM
Akes - I like the purp white one and the red one best. But the A on the red one is slightly off. Keep working at it, your basics are down.
Jedi-Master - Clean that up and make it bigger please.

Xyk
01-28-2008, 08:50 AM
Some new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0010.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0009.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0008.jpg
^The arrows at the bottom were unnecessary, i know, but its not paint... so i cant go over it.

wickedmainframe
01-28-2008, 09:45 AM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/7772/fggffghfhea4.th.jpg (http://img85.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fggffghfhea4.jpg)on the 2nd 3d the marker was all fucked up so it came out messed up.. just a few straight letters...

Fazed
01-28-2008, 10:44 AM
new throw been workin on..
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4139/cimg0082wn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and FINALLY! my exchange for my dude a maze!!!
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6698/cimg0088pt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
personally like this one^^ lol
crits


fool, get out the toys forum. I love it


Some new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0010.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0009.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0008.jpg
^The arrows at the bottom were unnecessary, i know, but its not paint... so i cant go over it.

I kinda like the double arrow.

Rank-oner!
01-28-2008, 12:28 PM
oh weird whats up with that anti bazer?

Rots takes your Daughters
01-28-2008, 01:09 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0001.jpg?t=1201543754 my first ever roten sketch, loong time ago

SEZ
01-28-2008, 01:44 PM
^^^first...damn i think its hot!!!!!!!!!!

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 02:47 PM
Rots - the coloring is fucking awesome.

-ShAmEE-
01-28-2008, 03:15 PM
i think ren u need go to the new to graff thread
daws, nice shit! as always..
man everyones colours skills are so more developed than mine! grr, fuckin hate ma colouring skills. grrr, fuckin pens! not the cleanest. but yeh.

here is my piece of shit.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/4-2.jpg

Cr1cd
01-28-2008, 03:32 PM
Just did this in class what youthink?

http://a881.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_e19d864e9f9a815e3139948616b25e70.jpg

AOTPs
01-28-2008, 03:53 PM
^^^eh its ok just work on ur styles

Baer One
01-28-2008, 03:57 PM
rots your shit is nice
but the arrow on the bottom needs some work
Cr1cd i like your charac but the throw on the bottom needs some work


also bored in class
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9374/baersmallxs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

revid!
01-28-2008, 04:09 PM
its pretty dope man would like to see it colored.
your letters are pretty word.
as for the rest of this page big ol bump.
pretty hot shit.
keep it up everyone!

Rambooboo
01-28-2008, 04:14 PM
Cr1cd little bigger
baer one like tha style love to see it colored

Techkanuck
01-28-2008, 04:24 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture51.jpghttp://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture52.jpg (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture51.jpg)

The first one I really wish i hadn't inked already, and the second is mainly for the A

Cr1cd- I like the charac and the buildings in the background
Baer- The E is crazy
Rots- I love the color, the red is a nice touch, what markers do you use?

revid!
01-28-2008, 04:30 PM
yeah theyre pretty solid..

revid!
01-28-2008, 04:56 PM
heres some shit i just finished.
a quickie that i may fill in later..
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7251/cimg0089wj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and a bomb.
crits

Xyk
01-28-2008, 05:02 PM
Some new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0010.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0009.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0008.jpg
^The arrows at the bottom were unnecessary, i know, but its not paint... so i cant go over it.

bumpity before school

Revid - Thats a solid piece, liking the extensions on both sides. Maybe switch the L up a little, the rest is fine.

Techkanuk - Those are good single letters, I like the A.

Baer - That looks good, but all your lines are wavy as shit. Use a ruler next time, or straighten you lines, and im sure itll come out a whole lot better.

revid!
01-28-2008, 05:03 PM
i like the top one alot. real clean.
keep it up work more on that top ones style

JETPACK!!
01-28-2008, 05:39 PM
rots thats pretty sexy, im diggin the color sceme. its like a chick on her rag.
techkanuck - the R isnt bad, just work on it a bit more an itll look nice. the A is good
revid, im diggin the wings on your L an O. it looks good

a little quikie i did just to put something up

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2391/bels7xn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

revid!
01-28-2008, 05:42 PM
thats lookin fresh man!
im likeiin that throw.
tweak it just a little!
keep it up man ive seen you improve alot
edit:fix your s make that bottom part connect

garbage down tha way
01-28-2008, 05:52 PM
loooogooooo- you got so much better, im lovin the piece. the only thing is all the extentions on either side dont really come from anywhere, but they still look dope haha. your throw really improved too, one of the only good g's ive ever seen in a toss. those fuckers are hard to, i used to write among, it sucked.

seywhat
01-28-2008, 05:53 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture269.jpg
new shit
bels- try makin the inside hole of the s like the e
logo- looks nice. that 3ds dope
baer- thats fresh

JETPACK!!
01-28-2008, 06:03 PM
seywhat im not sure if the middle letter is a B or an O, should make that a bit clearer. thanks for the crits, you too revid.

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3030/bels8pz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6963/bels9ot3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^^^^ i like the S on this one

revid!
01-28-2008, 06:16 PM
hahah thanks garbage, means alot man. lol yeah i really personnaly like that thr0w.
bels thats much better keep it up man!

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 06:21 PM
My shit sucks, i know the bump on the d is too big.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool-4.jpg

Bels - try to make the markings for the inside of your letters something different, and everyone and their dog has used the teardrop

Esoe- Use your bars. And are you from dallas?

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 06:59 PM
darkiest-reminds me alot of daws hmmm
jetpack-i like it sep for the e :(
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture131.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture143.jpg
a huge simple d idk i wanted to do a sketch but i didnt feel like spending alot of time on it haha....
edit*you cant really se it in the pic but theres a yellow force feild around the bubbles :) just htought i'd throw that in there hehe

-ShAmEE-
01-28-2008, 07:01 PM
i think ren u need go to the new to graff thread
daws, nice shit! as always..
man everyones colours skills are so more developed than mine! grr, fuckin hate ma colouring skills. grrr, fuckin pens! not the cleanest. but yeh.

here is my piece of shit.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/4-2.jpg


bump.

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 07:05 PM
darkiest-reminds me alot of daws hmmm
jetpack-i like it sep for the e :(
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture143.jpg
i huge simple d idk i wanted to do a sketch but i didnt feel like spending alot of time on it haha....
edit*you cant really se it in the pic but theres a yellow force feild around the bubbles :) just htought i'd throw that in there hehe

Yeah i know i bit. Im trying to fix though

revid!
01-28-2008, 07:05 PM
yo shame i think thats fresh as fuck.
im really diggin that style man.
smooth-haha thats a pretty nice D you got yourself there...

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 07:09 PM
haha yeah i was to lazy to do a full sketch so :-p
shamee-it looks pertyful :D

revid!
01-28-2008, 07:11 PM
haha lovin that sig!

Fazed
01-28-2008, 07:26 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b397/failurebydesignerjeans_x3/fdasfdsa001.jpg


crits!