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smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 07:28 PM
pshhh shut up baby i know it....
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture126.jpg
i really like this one sep for the ugly silver swirls and the speech bubble :(

knucks
01-28-2008, 07:31 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017d9e1a3/1/205/p6loMRjM7D_J29-__2g-c0XkB4-q4YgV.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/LI2BoKmzxj_bj7-miBntNyDtRfhgfVFG?referrer=hlnk)

For a battle, i missed the second R shiiitttt.

Smooth Nuts- Feeelin that shit man, great improvement.

Shammee- im not feeling that top right swirl.

Ezik- keep using bars mate.

Street Smart
01-28-2008, 07:32 PM
the fuck???

sorry i ment anti bazer... and wtf?




http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0815.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0816.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0818.jpg


bump for more crits.

bels - i like that the second one, keep working on it.. i think there might be i tiny bit of shadow on the top of those letters needed just like look at how high the B's shadow goes and then add a bit to the e,l and s

smooth - thats a real nice throw you got there, is that your 2 letter throw or do you just write DO?

Animal
01-28-2008, 07:32 PM
like your sig smooth, way to rep. lol.
supness revid?

Smooth- likin it
shamee- likin it but it looks like it could be cleaner
Ezik- use bars mang, and try colorin' it all the same color.
also,
Akes- work on your drop shadow. nice simps.

knucks
01-28-2008, 07:35 PM
Akes- man that bottom red biro simple is freshh.

MUSEone
01-28-2008, 07:36 PM
like your sig smooth, way to rep. lol.
supness revid?
To bad his dumbass spelled "friendly" wrong =P

<3 Smoothie =]

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 07:36 PM
haha word
street smartizzle-yeah thats my two letter throw i write doap...im feeling the purple and red simples :D
edit*haha muse you sligh boots fucking me up and shit you dick head haha
<3 ya too brosiph but in a non-gay way ya digg

Animal
01-28-2008, 07:42 PM
Haha he did! and i didn't even notice it. lol, wtf? freindly.

knucks
01-28-2008, 07:43 PM
Enough of the chat lads, post pics n flicks :).

revid!
01-28-2008, 07:45 PM
haha goddamnn man, fix that shit. please.

Animal
01-28-2008, 07:46 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa156/TeriandSeanM/kfc.jpg
here you go

knucks
01-28-2008, 07:47 PM
Me?

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017d9e1a3/1/205/p6loMRjM7D_J29-__2g-c0XkB4-q4YgV.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/LI2BoKmzxj_bj7-miBntNyDtRfhgfVFG?referrer=hlnk)

bump

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 07:47 PM
pshhh shut up baby i know it....
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture126.jpg
i really like this one sep for the ugly silver swirls and the speech bubble :(


darkiest-reminds me alot of daws hmmm
jetpack-i like it sep for the e :(
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture131.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture143.jpg
a huge simple d idk i wanted to do a sketch but i didnt feel like spending alot of time on it haha....
edit*you cant really se it in the pic but theres a yellow force feild around the bubbles :) just htought i'd throw that in there hehe

bumpage from the last page....notice how its spelled WRONG in rev's sig too haha
edit*thanks animal i was just about to fix it hehe

Animal
01-28-2008, 07:50 PM
i didn't notice that one either! damn, dudes, did you guys go to schoo?

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 07:50 PM
Seywhat- That O should be smooth.
JetPack- I don't like the characters.
Darkeist- I think if you made the bump on the D an O attached to it- it would be cool.
Smooth- Nice D! =B
Shame- Get rid of that shit on the bottom and make the legs fatter.
Fazed- Fix the E
Knucks- I see some nice letters in there like the first A and the T
Akes- Last one is nice. Others need work.

RAPE! It's funny!
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6797/rapeiy6.jpg
Yeah, it sucks shit. I'm just getting to know my new style.
I will be back in a few minutes with some good shit I did today.

5Funerals
01-28-2008, 07:51 PM
smooth nuts - its all looking good especially the giant D. you should do something more with the throwie
Knucks - crits for crits

heres a sticker I did. my R is messed up but im more concerned with what people think about the fill and the style
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400314.jpg

Animal
01-28-2008, 07:52 PM
peor- lose the stars, but the throw is fire
eskimo- shits FIRE!!!, I would like to see something even better if you have it.

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 07:53 PM
smooth nuts - its all looking good especially the giant D. you should do something more with the throwie
Knucks - crits for crits

heres a sticker I did. my R is messed up but im more concerned with what people think about the fill and the style
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400314.jpg

The one below looks nice. Pic?

revid!
01-28-2008, 07:53 PM
5funerals- lookin good bro!
smooth-you heard it here shits lookin good now go do a FULL throw lol i wanna see that
everyone else lookin good from what i see keep it up!
ill have some new shit up in a few...

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 07:56 PM
peor-i like it but you shouldnt be worried about fills and normaly do faces and shadow with my throw thats just an old one from the book i really liked :-p
eskimo-im not feeling the r :(
edit*FULL THROW!?! fool you crazy haha i'll see what i can do just for you ;)

knucks
01-28-2008, 07:57 PM
I bumped that flick , i left crits on the other page.

Peor- The middle of the PER need to be level,

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017da409a/1/56/ovXWs1uO3z-EQAh4NauGnQGnFOqqPgWh.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/4ijqpoxm4T-HbaHV8kI5vyd1s7GfNlDP?referrer=hlnk)

Ya digg?

5Funerals
01-28-2008, 07:58 PM
yeah dude thanks! I didnt finish that throwup yet. I will post a picture of it later guys.

plz
01-28-2008, 07:59 PM
peor lose the stars http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q260/schneida333/Picture005.jpg

a maze
01-28-2008, 08:01 PM
Looks better wthout them stars. Keep it up! Man, KFC is spreading like wildfire! KFC ftw!

5Funerals
01-28-2008, 08:02 PM
haha word guys I will cut that shit out.

PLZ - make all your letters stay next to each other for now and work on uniform bars.

plz
01-28-2008, 08:04 PM
yea il use a ruler next time

sketch3
01-28-2008, 08:05 PM
use bars to make the simplest letters u can

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 08:05 PM
went back to my old D

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool434.jpg

5funerals - looking fresh
smooth - d is good letter structure

revid!
01-28-2008, 08:20 PM
hot off the presses piece i just finished from afterschool
NOTE:the letters are uneven and sloping downwards on purpose thanks. lol
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7712/cimg0090bm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and bumpin this
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/5913/cimg0089oi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new throw~

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 08:24 PM
went back to my old D

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool434.jpg

5funerals - looking fresh
smooth - d is good letter structure

bump this for new page. And revid your stuff is flowing really well. G's are hard as hell, but you make em look good

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 08:24 PM
revid-i like the second one better then the first
ps.the throws looking dope :D
pps.i just realised some thing cfk backwards is kfc haha....no one else is gonna understand that haha

revid!
01-28-2008, 08:25 PM
yeah i know! ahhha

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 08:30 PM
Plz- the letters are kind of broad.
Darkeist- Nice, add some more letters to it.

I just inked this shit I did in school
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1193/eskiobb3.jpg
I can do better. Just trying this new style.

What should the outline color be?

Cliff
01-28-2008, 08:31 PM
Lovin your stuff rev

Street Smart
01-28-2008, 08:33 PM
logo - soooo dope.
dm - dont really like the M's extension, i think make the M fatter.
eskimo - looks great.
smooth - would love to see your full throw if you have flicks?

revid!
01-28-2008, 08:33 PM
thanks man.

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 08:35 PM
Yeah, i couldnt think of another extension, and i didnt want to bite my friend so i tried this. I thought it looked okay. But ill try some different thigns

DEAR
01-28-2008, 08:39 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2527/dscf0513wc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Darkeist
01-28-2008, 08:40 PM
Dear, i think its good that your keeping simple, i like all of it, but something about the e is off

revid!
01-28-2008, 08:44 PM
dear shit looks hot man keep it up for sure

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 08:47 PM
Hot shit dear. Yeah, I noticed the bottom of the E needs minor fixing but otherwise it's perfect.

I did this a while ago (a few months back) and I can't get what I did to make it look like that but I like it. The flow. I crossed out parts I didn't like.

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6985/danpsvf2.jpg

Says Danps. Random letters. I don't know why.

revid!
01-28-2008, 08:49 PM
lookin pretty fresh

knucks
01-28-2008, 08:50 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2527/dscf0513wc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017dad62f/1/24/WGI7BT6Euz-vRg3t5VStPMIXbuM81S8u.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/uM-coohj4D9_dyCLr9S38wRrDwQEtDx1?referrer=hlnk)

Use bars ALWAYS when your learning your letters it made you fuck up your E. R was a bit floppy too. Other than that nice style man keep working it

5Funerals
01-28-2008, 08:50 PM
Dear - work on the E but it looks really good
Eskimo - I love your style
Darkeist - I dont like the part of the m that curls around but it looks pretty good other than that
Revid - Killer fill and awesome style.

This page is looking good so far.
Ok heres where Im at
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400315.jpg

and heres the throwup someone requested
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400316.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 08:53 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture148.jpg
tried doing a full name throw up...i FAILED haha ah well
dear-im loving your handstyle and the simples arent that bad either haha
eskimo-your flick isnt showing up :(
peor-im fucking loving that throw man

knucks
01-28-2008, 08:53 PM
PEOR-Bottom one has ALOT of potential, keep the letters the same proportion ( etc O too big P too skinny) and you could have some ill shit on the go.

Street Smart
01-28-2008, 09:00 PM
smooth - the doa is great i dunno what the P did look like but maybe try making it as big as the D, keep playing around with it.

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 09:01 PM
Peor- Like number two. I think there has to be a bit more curves.
Smooth- I haven't done many throw ups but it looks like it needs something on the end.

From 3 months ago.
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7296/monkeyxa5.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-28-2008, 09:03 PM
Peor- Like number two. I think there has to be a bit more curves.
Smooth- I haven't done many throw ups but it looks like it needs something on the end.

From 3 months ago.
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7296/monkeyxa5.jpg

:(

a maze
01-28-2008, 09:04 PM
Eskimo- Think you should lose all the little bumpy things, but thats just me.

Dear- looks simple to the max! Haha, keep it up.

AHHH! First extension post! If you can tell, its my first real attempt at extensions, its freestyled and rushed, but i wanted to see reactions, haha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext1.jpg
crits plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Cliff
01-28-2008, 09:05 PM
Thats sweet maze

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 09:05 PM
yes it does need something at the end...AN O!
never again fuck full name throw ups haha two letters are where its at 8-)
edit*god damn you fools post fast as fuck haha
maze-thats looking sexy but calm down with all the little dots
cliff-new to graffiti thread,thank you

knucks
01-28-2008, 09:06 PM
I was diggin your simples man but thats pretty nasty.

I think the MA would look dope without those extensions.

revid!
01-28-2008, 09:15 PM
PEOR-mad freshh man ferril keep it up ive seen that top one progress alot!
great work and the bottom looks ill as well
smooth-im pretty dissapointed lol you just gave up!?! looked good tho
everyone else keep doin whatcha doin!

revid!
01-28-2008, 09:16 PM
Eskimo- Think you should lose all the little bumpy things, but thats just me.

Dear- looks simple to the max! Haha, keep it up.

AHHH! First extension post! If you can tell, its my first real attempt at extensions, its freestyled and rushed, but i wanted to see reactions, haha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext1.jpg
crits plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
yes man come join me in extention land!!!!
hahaha great shit man
throe some 3d on that bitchhhh

knucks
01-28-2008, 09:22 PM
The extensions on the left of the M and the right of the R throw the piece off balance, I was playing with it in paint and without them two im feeling it.

Props for first time and not getting carried away.

5Funerals
01-28-2008, 09:23 PM
word makr im feeling that one a lot. Some nice crisp 3d would make it sooo good.

your middle bar on your M should have that little bumpy part like the other letters do

revid!
01-28-2008, 09:24 PM
defffff^^

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 09:24 PM
PEOR-mad freshh man ferril keep it up ive seen that top one progress alot!
great work and the bottom looks ill as well
smooth-im pretty dissapointed lol you just gave up!?! looked good tho
everyone else keep doin whatcha doin!

YES!
i just gave up and dont you lie to me you know everything after the o looked like shit actualy that whole throw was kinda bleh haha...well back to bordem :(

Street Smart
01-28-2008, 09:24 PM
cliff - check out the new to graff thread.
makr - shits so hot.
smooth - please don't give up =)
i suck so bad at throw ups.. i write akes the others are mates names all by me though
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/DSCF0821.jpg
crits?

revid!
01-28-2008, 09:25 PM
hahaha man c'mon!!!!!
try some shit out brohhhh

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 09:39 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture151.jpg
WORD.

a maze
01-28-2008, 09:41 PM
^^haha, that 'o' made me laugh. but You gotta expand if you hope to get any better.

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 09:44 PM
*sigh*yeah i knows....

Xyk
01-28-2008, 09:44 PM
Some new stuff...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0010.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0009.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0008.jpg
^The arrows at the bottom were unnecessary, i know, but its not paint... so i cant go over it.

bumpity last time.

a maze
01-28-2008, 09:45 PM
smooth nuts-Well keep it up, your throw is slowly but surely starting to develope some illness. :D

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 09:47 PM
word thanks homie
rek-that straight letter is looking clean as FUCK but the e is weird rah,the other two just look like handstyles to me :(

revid!
01-28-2008, 10:04 PM
yeah i feels you on that smooth for rek.
smooth- hahaha oh my i was laughin when i saw that post. i really hopw you plan on workin on that shit because it has mad potential man!

AnteUp
01-28-2008, 10:10 PM
SMOOTHPUBES :)= I LIKE THE D
MAKR-LOOSE THE EXTENSION BOTTOM LEFT...AND DONT CONNECT ALL THE LETTERS...

NEW DUBBA YA...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/W-1.jpg
CRITS PLEASE

revid!
01-28-2008, 10:16 PM
some shit i just finished
workin with these wacky ass weird markers lol
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/9731/cimg0091ya6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeaa

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 10:17 PM
yeah i feels you on that smooth for rek.
smooth- hahaha oh my i was laughin when i saw that post. i really hopw you plan on workin on that shit because it has mad potential man!

I'll work on it if you suck muh bowls.

ante-i dont like it cause well...it reminds me of power rangers :(
edit*
revid-what the hell is up with the little puppy thingies in the background haha the straight letters looking K3W1 though

revid!
01-28-2008, 10:19 PM
dont ever say that to me again smooth.....
lol

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 10:22 PM
i can PROMISE you i WILL haha
sorry but it will happen again :(
rah.

The_Sheep
01-28-2008, 10:23 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000017dad62f/1/24/WGI7BT6Euz-vRg3t5VStPMIXbuM81S8u.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/uM-coohj4D9_dyCLr9S38wRrDwQEtDx1?referrer=hlnk)

Use bars ALWAYS when your learning your letters it made you fuck up your E. R was a bit floppy too. Other than that nice style man keep working it
:rolleyes: The bars hes using are fine, i think you need to study bars again cause you use too much, it fucks with the flow of letters and ends up making your letters blocky and stiff...my opinion... its pretty obvious he used bars, just not in excess like you

revid!
01-28-2008, 10:23 PM
lolz..

a maze
01-28-2008, 10:28 PM
Revid, sick fill. Stop the chitchatter fellas, pics/crits only.

skiv
01-28-2008, 10:33 PM
Revid- that looks really good for just block letters
no other pics on this page tho...


http://i30.tinypic.com/mu98jc.jpg%5B/IMG%5D
http://i29.tinypic.com/5z32bb.jpg%5B/IMG%5D

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 10:41 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Photo074.jpg
just fucking with the hand style....
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/hb036.jpg
an old throw flick....o's lop sided as fuck
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/hb006-2.jpg
another old throw flciks :D

a maze
01-28-2008, 10:42 PM
Skiv- Nice characters (Pokemon!) , but I suggest you go to the new to graffiti thread.

sanrtizer
01-28-2008, 10:43 PM
peor- thats got mad potential only thing needed is to work out those proportions which has been said i think
smoothtesties- that 2 letter is pretty sweet
ante- thats a dope w but i think ive only seen 1 or 2 of your letters converted to 3d try a full letter peice
logo- bumpin simples
dear- kinda reminds me of emokids older stuff (anybody see a resemblence)
skiv- tune it down alot make it simmmmple and use bars.......and i dont like pokemon
pen freestyle
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8682/img0109dp6.jpg
muh bombs
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/512/img0106xv0.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 10:49 PM
sanr-that sick man i love it
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/camdoap002.jpg
this was my throw about summer 07
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture151.jpg
this is my latest throwie flick...just thought i'd share that :D

sanrtizer
01-28-2008, 10:51 PM
mad improvement.......im proud of you smoothie bby

revid!
01-28-2008, 10:54 PM
haha yea i agreee man
so lets hurry up and go paint smooth!

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 10:58 PM
thanks sanr im loving that sa throw man :)
and as for you revid im ready when ever you are babe :-*
but theres one thing you have to do first
and that is suck muh bowls
kinky.

revid!
01-28-2008, 11:07 PM
wow man......
you need to chill with that shit.
lolz but well go soon.

smooth_nuts
01-28-2008, 11:15 PM
haha im sowy i'll stop if it makes you feel better....:(
edit*
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture126.jpg
so im not flickless

revid!
01-28-2008, 11:31 PM
yeah...it would lolz
alot

smooth_nuts
01-29-2008, 12:18 AM
http://www.invisionplus.net/forums/uploads/writersroom/post-10-1201582955.jpg

Street Smart
01-29-2008, 12:25 AM
fuck yeah smooth looks dope

Cyto Aka Son1c
01-29-2008, 12:26 AM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3544/dscn0166vm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the end
01-29-2008, 12:32 AM
Tango piece, part of a poster i made for dance class...
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5928/tango127ke4.jpg

a few days old now, wish i didnt add all the yellow lines, i was trying to cover up the pen beneath.
ivew been workin with this piece since that purple and yellow one.... thinkin i might whip out pencil and eraser soon
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/421/marcieeeeeo0.jpg

Rank-oner!
01-29-2008, 12:34 AM
Amaze: you know i like your style a lot but i dont think those extensions are workin with your piece. its kinda like i cant do regular ones on my weird style. its not a bad piece i just think you should work with different ones. keep it up though bud

REvid: nice blockbuster fill is pretty ill ha but i know your inking abilities and you could have done better on the 3d lines and if your rocking a multicolor fill you should have some fade in the 3d. (just saying cause your skilled at coloring man ;) )
also on the piece you did at school, the O's are highlighted on both sides but whatever that throw is still sexy. that new G is lookin good.

Sanr: im not feelin all the letters connecting at the top man maybe seperate them next time but other than that looking good.

Smoothnuts: im feelin that simple from you man good work.

The End: nice real clean
soo here some ish i did at school with only markers i had
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/smallrank001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom003.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom004.jpg
i need to work on G's
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom005.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom007.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom009.jpg

whocares!?!?!
01-29-2008, 12:44 AM
Tango piece, part of a poster i made for dance class...
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5928/tango127ke4.jpg

a few days old now, wish i didnt add all the yellow lines, i was trying to cover up the pen beneath.
ivew been workin with this piece since that purple and yellow one.... thinkin i might whip out pencil and eraser soon
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/421/marcieeeeeo0.jpg

TBH diggin the green and purple joint way more, that looks real nice

mind.or.matter
01-29-2008, 01:28 AM
fuckin starting this, suggestions? colours? etc.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/ENThrow007.jpg

rank - lookin dope, on the last blue one maybe try making the loop on the n a bit smaller, meh my opinion

MARTYRaz
01-29-2008, 02:26 AM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1182/blahqv8.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blahqv8.jpg)

The_Sheep
01-29-2008, 04:12 AM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7728/dsc00297pg4.jpg
for my girl

mxman
01-29-2008, 05:51 AM
not meant to for crits, just for kicks, i did this during my half hour lunch
http://i26.tinypic.com/szzwxl.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/iypsn9.jpg

steyr
01-29-2008, 08:44 AM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/7254/steyrmcgeeok8.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7771/steyrmcgeecolorpn0.jpg
ok, i forgot to get pics pf my simples=[, ill post them after school.
crits please no haters.

mxman
01-29-2008, 08:48 AM
pros: I like your S...i really dig your colors, graphics, fill, bubbles, dots, 3d all of that!!

cons: i hate when people say this to me but yea block your letters (work on letters) i think even you must know the E is pretty bad.

twisties
01-29-2008, 09:43 AM
Crits:
mind.or.matter- Go basic..just simple letters...I'm really not feeling it at all.
the end- I'm actually liking the yellow in the background.
Rank-oner!- You've got some nice pieces there...What's wrong with your G..I think it looks rather good.
steyr- work with your block letters before attempting that style. It'll help you out.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/aoi.jpg
Just wanted to try a different word..I keep getting stuck at the O in about..lol

Laces Out
01-29-2008, 09:45 AM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/3065/01160822161yz7.th.jpg (http://img250.imageshack.us/my.php?image=01160822161yz7.jpg)


I just drew that shit up in mathclass with a black marker.
Kinda whack but whatever.

mas$
01-29-2008, 09:55 AM
^^ simples, make your letters uniform and simple before you tweak them

twist, bring the A closer to the O?
like the form tho would look cool with more blackletter styles in it
also i see a bit of Faith47 in it, not a bite just reminds me of her

Laces Out
01-29-2008, 09:57 AM
Word, I mean I just fnished it like seriously a few minutes ago.
I didnt pay that much mind to the uniformity of the letters either cause I was just sketching it out.
Im planning on actually putting that up on a wall soon.
Anyway, thanks for the crits and whatnot.

mas$
01-29-2008, 10:30 AM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7728/dsc00297pg4.jpg
for my girl
u kno ive noticed, noone crits this dude..i love ur style man, cant read it for shit but its nice n clean, u wanna exchange?
ive got shames one done, gna post up later..just pencil tho cas of school:(

silentchaos14
01-29-2008, 11:12 AM
Word, I mean I just fnished it like seriously a few minutes ago.
I didnt pay that much mind to the uniformity of the letters either cause I was just sketching it out.
Im planning on actually putting that up on a wall soon.
Anyway, thanks for the crits and whatnot.
i feel bad for whoever is gonna have to look at that. seriously dont even bother wasting your paint, give it awhile till you get your simples down to the point u can do them with your eyes closed.

mas$- no one crits the dude because he dont give crits

mas$
01-29-2008, 11:17 AM
trudat i dont care i like his stylee
i jus broke like the golden Bs rule didnt i?hhaha

silentchaos14
01-29-2008, 11:40 AM
you aint the only one so it dont matter, the tbb thread was complete shit awhile back but its gettin better now.

Laces Out
01-29-2008, 11:43 AM
SilentChaos14- Like, I have my simples down.
I was just trying something different.

Drakula
01-29-2008, 11:57 AM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/7254/steyrmcgeeok8.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7771/steyrmcgeecolorpn0.jpg
ok, i forgot to get pics pf my simples=[, ill post them after school.
crits please no haters.


Looks like you're biting Rosy One a bit here:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture4-4.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture3-6.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture2-14.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture1-13.png

It's funny how the Y the R and the S are the best letters.You even bit her fill style with the little spots of light.

Rank-oner!
01-29-2008, 12:16 PM
damn thats a pretty hard bite but seriously you kids need to learn to give crits instead of just posting up your shit and expecting people to say anything.

steyr
01-29-2008, 12:22 PM
yes my piece is a complete rosyone bite.
its not like i wouldnt expect you guys to know.
shes like my favorite writer right now
her style kicks ass, so im tryin it out.
itl obviously changer, im like 3 or four months into this shit, so i have no style of my own yet.

SEZ
01-29-2008, 12:29 PM
Heavy ass bite steyr, i'm dissapointed...

Drakula
01-29-2008, 12:33 PM
yes my piece is a complete rosyone bite.
its not like i wouldnt expect you guys to know.
shes like my favorite writer right now
her style kicks ass, so im tryin it out.
itl obviously changer, im like 3 or four months into this shit, so i have no style of my own yet.

It's alright to bite bits and pieces from other peoples style but don't totally jack letter forms.

At least your honest about it though.:p

crystalmeth and abortions
01-29-2008, 12:52 PM
http://a555.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/75/l_39e9acaf38a94621a5f2fb1a4050b652.jpg
t's messed up
http://a267.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/l_83573728d0f74fdc426e5d9a1fb34e72.jpg
sketch

sank.
01-29-2008, 01:34 PM
anyone wanna exchange, pm meh...

InfamouSN
01-29-2008, 03:26 PM
Fuck. Toy ass piece, I don't do many pieces. gotta fuckin practice them...

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j14/metallicflames31/areyouforeal016.jpg

Rots takes your Daughters
01-29-2008, 03:43 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom005.jpg

To whoever posted this: Don't write Surge.

InfamouSN
01-29-2008, 03:54 PM
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j14/metallicflames31/123abc123001-1.jpg

Here's a pretty shitty throwie... I have better, I'll put em up later.

I need to bomb foreal. =[ I haven't in SOOOOO SOO fucking long.

Cr1cd
01-29-2008, 04:11 PM
Its nice I just got a new bomp pic today I threw it up in the toy bomb thread as for BB check this out from today

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0098.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-29-2008, 04:19 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom004.jpg
so dope man

dim
01-29-2008, 05:20 PM
yes my piece is a complete rosyone bite.
its not like i wouldnt expect you guys to know.
shes like my favorite writer right now
her style kicks ass, so im tryin it out.
itl obviously changer, im like 3 or four months into this shit, so i have no style of my own yet.
im glad ur not one of those kids who try to play it off like they dont bite cause every oe bites i mean honestly. U see a connection u like in a position u try it on a peice u see a nice color scheme u try it out and from biting ur create ur own style biting is fine for us toys because we need some thing to try out to develope our style
and rosy one is dope <3 :D

sketch3
01-29-2008, 05:34 PM
yea but he didnt try a conection an colour scheme, he straght chomped the whole thing,

eMJayBee
01-29-2008, 05:36 PM
InfamouSN- Simples
Cr1cd-Simples, dont stick your letters together

Dont know if I should post this here or elsewhere, critz please...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/000_0214.jpg

knucks
01-29-2008, 06:04 PM
It say lakey?

How is anyone suppsoed to crit something they cant read.

twisties
01-29-2008, 06:09 PM
twist, bring the A closer to the O?
like the form tho would look cool with more blackletter styles in it
also i see a bit of Faith47 in it, not a bite just reminds me of her

I must admitt I don't know who Faith47 is..I'll have to look her up..but thanks for the crits!

Rank-oner!
01-29-2008, 06:13 PM
Rotten: i dont write surge that was gonna be my name a long time ago just because of the kick ass drink. that was just for fun

eMJayBee
01-29-2008, 06:17 PM
Almost, it says flakey, I just wrote something random. Was going to ad some color to define the letters more, dont know if I should though..

knucks
01-29-2008, 06:22 PM
I am actually feeling those letters(not to keen on the F), maybe make the a a little smaller and lower down , and try not to lap the K across the E too much. Also make all your extensions similar that bottomright squiggly arrow just aint working.
Colour that shit to give the letters some definition.
Good work, keep it up.

hal.cyon
01-29-2008, 06:27 PM
InfamouSN- Simples
Cr1cd-Simples, dont stick your letters together

Dont know if I should post this here or elsewhere, critz please...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/000_0214.jpg


i dunno what dudes talking bout, this is pretty illy. and steyr i thought yours looked a lot like a rosy cop when you posted in the name battle, i mean it looks *alright*, its just not yours. you still drawing lefty?

dim
01-29-2008, 06:32 PM
the e is to covered

Cyto Aka Son1c
01-29-2008, 06:35 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3201/dscn0168og1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Rank-oner!
01-29-2008, 06:40 PM
Nice sketch man but make your letters more like the E and S and you'll be set.
like make the K and R a little taller and skinnier

knucks
01-29-2008, 06:41 PM
rank ya wanna do a sketch exchange?

AERO838
01-29-2008, 06:41 PM
Tango piece, part of a poster i made for dance class...
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5928/tango127ke4.jpg

a few days old now, wish i didnt add all the yellow lines, i was trying to cover up the pen beneath.
ivew been workin with this piece since that purple and yellow one.... thinkin i might whip out pencil and eraser soon
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/421/marcieeeeeo0.jpg

thats tight!

Cyto Aka Son1c
01-29-2008, 06:44 PM
Nice sketch man but make your letters more like the E and S and you'll be set.
like make the K and R a little taller and skinnier

ok thanks man, I couldn't decide which style to go with so the kr are indeed different then E S

You think I'm ready to put that on a wall?

I've painted before and have moderate can control

Cr1cd
01-29-2008, 07:05 PM
Got the new sketch in give me you crit (sorry for the blur)

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0101.jpg

a maze
01-29-2008, 07:17 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/boredom007.jpg


This is clean as fuck. Wanna exchange??

Cr1cd
01-29-2008, 07:21 PM
Lol anythinga bout mine a maze?

knucks
01-29-2008, 07:21 PM
That chrome style is fuckin gully.

a maze
01-29-2008, 07:30 PM
Knucks, what does "gully" mean??

cr1cd- its okay, I'd put that in the character thread even though it says your name, try simples.

New extension pieces, fucked up the brown one, freestyled it-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext3.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext2.jpg
Critses

organik
01-29-2008, 07:32 PM
Trying some more simple shit. Crit?

-GEKS-
01-29-2008, 07:36 PM
gully is good. lol

a maze
01-29-2008, 07:43 PM
Yeah, us good 'ol Okie boys don't know any language other than ebonics and redneck. :):):)

knucks
01-29-2008, 07:44 PM
Haha... brown piece is fresh.

smooth_nuts
01-29-2008, 07:49 PM
OH MUH GAWD!
maze that white piece it fucking pertieful you made my eyes cream haha....
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture165-2.jpg
my piece of shit little quicky thingy....word

Techkanuck
01-29-2008, 07:50 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture55.jpg

BAD BAD COLOR and control, but getting ideas and shit down.

Maze- LOVE the first one

Street Smart
01-29-2008, 07:55 PM
smooth - cmon man you give up way to easy, im liking that A and the D i think you should make the hole in the o bigger so it has the same bar thickness as the other letters

steyr
01-29-2008, 07:59 PM
i dunno what dudes talking bout, this is pretty illy. and steyr i thought yours looked a lot like a rosy cop when you posted in the name battle, i mean it looks *alright*, its just not yours. you still drawing lefty?

yeah mine was a rosy bite, um yeah still drawin righty but im gettinmy cast off my left arm on thursday, then i gotta where a removable splint.

smooth_nuts
01-29-2008, 08:02 PM
and who the fuck said i was giving up i was just stating i hate all my work :-p eat it bitchin...your right the hole in the o should be bigger and it should over lap the a it looks to square if its not....
the end-second ones looking nie but i dont like the first one at all :-/
emjaybee-does it say flakey?kill some of the arrows and shit
ser-it makes me think of seize not calling bite it just reminds me of him haha...i think every letter but the z and o look weird idk i suck as at criting haha

loser.
01-29-2008, 08:04 PM
Knucks, what does "gully" mean??

cr1cd- its okay, I'd put that in the character thread even though it says your name, try simples.

New extension pieces, fucked up the brown one, freestyled it-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext3.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext2.jpg
Critses


your liking amk's style huh??

BohemianBastard
01-29-2008, 08:11 PM
you're a fucking moron

a maze
01-29-2008, 08:12 PM
^ I second that. :)

sketch3
01-29-2008, 08:24 PM
third,
gully means gangster

oakstr1
01-29-2008, 08:33 PM
a maze = i like the colors, n i like the throw.

Cyto Aka Son1c = alls good to me..but to me the e looks like an f. i would just do that up.

heres some shit ive been working on. always open to suggestions n help.
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/8067/throw1ji8.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3270/throw2pb2.jpg

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 08:35 PM
your liking amk's style huh??

you are an idiot
maze-shits tight
oaks-you got potential nice job
http://i32.tinypic.com/2mfg5dw.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/x3wndw.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/9h77dx.jpg

"Riot"
01-29-2008, 09:02 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT008.jpg

pen freestyle.
crits????

a maze
01-29-2008, 09:03 PM
Man, jaze, all your shits looking ill!

-GEKS-
01-29-2008, 09:04 PM
third,
gully means gangster


yea ik i just meant if someone calls ur work gully its a good thing
im hip :cool:

deathorglory
01-29-2008, 09:06 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext2.jpg
I wouldnt have all your letters conneted like that. It makes things confusing. Try breaking them apart. The letters look nice. Try it without the spiky addons just, straight lines see how that comes out. If you keep the connections, please work on theK to the R, since the < part is seppereated from the I part on your k's and r's it kind of makles this weird undecihpherable mess in the middle...

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 09:12 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT008.jpg

pen freestyle.
crits????

you are approaching crits all wrong
to get that critted at least crit everything on the page first
i mean cumon

ESKiMO2
01-29-2008, 09:17 PM
Riot - it's cool but I would get rid of the cracks and scale down the Ts
Haze- the first and second are some of the best I've seen here.

Death- Remember to quote.

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9157/sc01f02505pc1.jpg

Esoteric.

a maze
01-29-2008, 09:18 PM
^^looking much better, man.

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 09:21 PM
Riot - it's cool but I would get rid of the cracks and scale down the Ts
Haze- the first and second are some of the best I've seen here.

Death- Remember to quote.

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9157/sc01f02505pc1.jpg

Esoteric.

that looks hot but too many leters in my opinion

ESKiMO2
01-29-2008, 09:22 PM
^^looking much better, man.

You said I should get rid of the bumps but it really helps me connect shit and make transitions.

a maze
01-29-2008, 09:24 PM
well, looks like you lost a bunch of em. You have a unique style, and I like it.

ESKiMO2
01-29-2008, 09:27 PM
thanks. I had been messing around with graffiti a year until someone taught me the whole letter structure.

mosezone
01-29-2008, 09:45 PM
oaks-at least you're staying simple. good job on that
haze-lookin' pretty good, but some of the lines look kinda shaky
riot- first, make all your letters the same size
eskimo-looking dope. the only thing i don't really like is how the letters like curve downwards

this was just some sketch that ended up shitty, so i didn't finish it, haha
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00319.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00318.jpg
i suck hella bad at fills
crits?

also, this never got answered in any other threads, so i figured i'd ask it here

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=122041

you think i should change my name? because it's basically the same as that dude, and he fucking burns. but he's from Germany (i think), so it might not matter as much. i wouldn't have any problem changing my name, but the thing is, all the ups i've gotten in like the past 1-1 1/2 years wouldn't mean shit. i was thinking i should just keep this name until i leave for college or something, then i'll change it. what do you fools think?

Cr1cd
01-29-2008, 09:49 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT008.jpg

pen freestyle.
crits????

Is that CLoud breaking that building with its cock, If it is thats some ill ass original thinking.

mind.or.matter
01-29-2008, 09:52 PM
Mosez - lookin good, maybe make the M taller on the second one... And don't change your name, Germany is fuckin far away

next rough sketch, crits?
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/ENThrow008.jpg

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 09:58 PM
mosez-i lov the second one ill fill
not so much the first one
riot-needs work
the buildings are too empty and the veins look dumb
and stop bumping it everyone
enue-finish the outline the ribbon in the back looks nice

my throwie battle entry
http://i25.tinypic.com/2ivxmc2.jpg
any crits are appreciated

organik
01-29-2008, 10:12 PM
Doing shit more simple. The k on the second is fucked up. Crit?
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/4441/ganik3bi4.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9241/gaanikpt1.jpg

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 10:14 PM
stop asking for crits and not criting
is it hard to understand

garbage down tha way
01-29-2008, 10:16 PM
haze no fair, why do you get to have a cool throw style.

hazetheone
01-29-2008, 10:17 PM
haha it just kicked in
that was always my weaknes
now im bad at handstyles
and eating shit

silentchaos14
01-29-2008, 10:21 PM
organik- not liking either of them
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Morne6.jpg
shit from earlier today, hand is so unsteady now.

ESKiMO2
01-29-2008, 10:21 PM
My throwups suck.

organik
01-29-2008, 10:27 PM
Fair enough. I didn't read the rules until just now. My bad.

Mosez - I dig the fill on the second one.
Enue - The only thing throwing me off is the U... looks like it could be a V.

Techkanuck
01-29-2008, 10:27 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture56.jpg

Trying something new for my fiance.

Haze- like it, maybe a bigger P

Organik- The first is amazing...love the color

Silent-I really like it, R seems tall to me.

mind.or.matter
01-29-2008, 10:35 PM
next rough sketch, crits?
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/ENThrow008.jpg
E-N-V-E, sorry for the confusion.

organik
01-29-2008, 10:40 PM
E-N-V-E, sorry for the confusion.

Ha, then in that case i dig it. Finish it!

revid!
01-29-2008, 10:57 PM
haze im feelin that bro shits hott!!
rest is pretty good, some so so and some lookin in a good direction
so keep it up everyone!

Techkanuck
01-29-2008, 10:59 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture57.jpg

Added color, know i should wait on it and on better things, still tried.

Envy- looks good, def. waiting to see it finished

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:09 PM
its not really all that bad man..
your letters can still use alot of work but you have to basic concept.
and you coloring looks pretty good too.
just for now stick to simpler fills ect.
it will make things easier when you start to improver more!
good work!

twisties
01-29-2008, 11:15 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/aoi.jpg
More crits?

haze-I'd say make the P or Y bigger (I'm sorry I can't tell what it is..lol)..Otherwise it is looking good.
mind.or.matter- Much better! Finish the sketch though :)
Techkanuck - I actually like it colourless but I think that's just me still colouring is that bad at all...Just work on your letter structure and you'll be getting there.

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:19 PM
.

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:20 PM
try to make the A flow a bit more for some reason it seems out of placee...
maybe its just me lolz

twisties
01-29-2008, 11:21 PM
^ A . means?

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:23 PM
your letter A???
lol

dim
01-29-2008, 11:23 PM
enve thats cool keep working with it bro

twisties
01-29-2008, 11:24 PM
No...You wrote . as your first post so I am wondering what that means :P

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:27 PM
lol oh sorry lol i edited it didnt mean to say what i did.

twisties
01-29-2008, 11:28 PM
Ooohhhh..no worries..just wondering..lol

I spaced the letters out so I could draw them better and I guess more evenly too but thanks for the crit.

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:29 PM
haha yea no problem.
id really like to see it closer together with a certain flow!

Bazer
01-29-2008, 11:37 PM
some simple sssstufff...................

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1229.jpg

mxman
01-29-2008, 11:39 PM
InfamouSN- Simples
Cr1cd-Simples, dont stick your letters together

Dont know if I should post this here or elsewhere, critz please...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/000_0214.jpg

Everyone might be crying cuz that can't read this but i think this wildstyle piece is dope as hell, i love most of the letters except your K needs to be separated from your E and your F needs more clarity. Bad ass letters and form, can't wait for the fill on it.

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:41 PM
some simple sssstufff...................

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1229.jpg

super duper type freshness.

21
01-29-2008, 11:42 PM
its gettin there but i reckon the letters just aint flowin looks a bit too wibbly wobbly for my liking.. u got the 3d sorted now work on more simple peices, with more defined bends

mxman
01-29-2008, 11:44 PM
this was just some sketch that ended up shitty, so i didn't finish it, haha
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00318.jpg
i suck hella bad at fills
crits?
also, this never got answered in any other threads, so i figured i'd ask it here

LOVE the fills. love the letters.

Widen your Z next time to flow it better. like maybe have the end of it stick out like your M.

revid!
01-29-2008, 11:46 PM
yeah im feelin that piece/and or fill

mosezone
01-29-2008, 11:51 PM
thanks for the crits everybody. i think i might do that piece on a canvas, so i'll post that whenever i get around to painting it. baze, i'm feeling everything but the A. it just looks a little too slanted, know what i mean? i realllly dig the way the B and E flow also.

Rank-oner!
01-30-2008, 12:04 AM
baze: those simps are soooo hot :) that would be a really nice piece beside some tracks. i think the B could be a little bigger but not much

Moze2: Best piece you've produced yet. really good fill (not feeling the things in the E as much like maybe have it more like the O with dots. and the Z looks a little funky but over all those letters flow the most out of everything you've done and the 3d is lookin gooood. :)
good job man

Knucks: sure hit me up:

Amaze: lookin good but i think on the 2nd one the K is getting really close to being an R the brown one is a little more seperated at the top. and yea id be down for an exchange.

All the people who keep posting stuff and asking for crits before critting, stop! no ones gonna crit anything if you dont first and then you'll just be bumping trash up :) so from now on leave crits before you get them.

smooth_nuts
01-30-2008, 12:09 AM
baze-i likes its...FRESH!
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture165.jpg
another bleh throw
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Morne6.jpg
was helping jroc with his r earlier not really a sketch but i figured i'd post it....word.

thats me
01-30-2008, 12:29 AM
new name,testing

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/CIMG0186.jpg

mmmburgers
01-30-2008, 12:35 AM
wtf cake?
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

organik
01-30-2008, 12:56 AM
CAKE - I'm not really feelin the K. Extend the upper part, so there isn't that open space.


Forgot to post this one earlier.
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3528/ganik45ne0.jpg

revid!
01-30-2008, 12:57 AM
needs some 3d i thinks

steyr
01-30-2008, 01:01 AM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3619/steyrbrower2lj5.jpg
i drew block letters all day in school today.
i drew up some block letters here and jjust decided to trick em out a lil bit with 3d, i call it "6 random extensions that have no purpose in the sketch and they are just in there to take up space"(i tried not to bite rosy to hard this time;))
ps. this took only like 45 mins i think

mosezone
01-30-2008, 01:06 AM
it's nicely done, but the only letter than looks like it has any real structure is the S.

i did this in like 5 minutes, do you think this Z looks a little better than the one in the sketch i posted earlier?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00320.jpg
and yes, those are some grapes with arms and legs.

revid!
01-30-2008, 01:09 AM
^^^
hahaha yeah man its lookin real good!

organik
01-30-2008, 01:50 AM
Mosez - Diggin it. Looks better.

This better?
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7905/ganik45ru0.jpg

Rank-oner!
01-30-2008, 02:10 AM
those letters are a little unproportional in some places but nice outline and 3d

bored again some more simps

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/podsifdsofi004.jpg

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 02:30 AM
http://a602.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/14/l_6d3a473aec3b3577b8bb6429a6a0d8f9.jpg
as basic as it gets. but any one got an opinion on it? good or bad. lemme know

Street Smart
01-30-2008, 02:35 AM
thats not as basic as it gets, look above you, thats how a simple is done.

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 02:48 AM
***

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 02:49 AM
***

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 02:53 AM
that Rank has more technique to it though

Evasion Of Invasion
01-30-2008, 03:38 AM
the rank ones way more simple and yet better simples tend to kill if u know how to use em store that in ur head meth
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00637.jpg
collab with -Sinn- still to do my part other then the handstyle
crits?

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 03:55 AM
i feel that. dope piece by the way

http://a955.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/83/l_f42b45862e00d59298c430d643f3fe22.jpg
(colors didnt come out on camera) ^

Xyk
01-30-2008, 06:44 AM
crystal - the B and R are fine, extension on the R doesnt look so good thoh. cant tell what the last letter is/ also the 3d doesnt look so good, but the coloring is good.

Evasion - Nice. I like it. The charac could use some work, and the D on your handstyle as well. the rest is nice.

For the sketch battle.

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0011.jpg

mxman
01-30-2008, 07:34 AM
xyk: cool colors but i guess id prefer the tag somewhere else.

http://i26.tinypic.com/2zxr34g.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/kdmi5g.jpg

steyr
01-30-2008, 09:55 AM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3619/steyrbrower2lj5.jpg
i drew block letters all day in school today.
i drew up some block letters here and jjust decided to trick em out a lil bit with 3d, i call it "6 random extensions that have no purpose in the sketch and they are just in there to take up space"(i tried not to bite rosy to hard this time;))
ps. this took only like 45 mins i think

Evasion- i like what you did with that piece, puttin ur character over it.
Meth- Nice piece, im feelin the R. the 3d is good, but i dont like the coloring in it. good job tho.
bumped this for crits.

real_destroyer
01-30-2008, 11:04 AM
nice colors
i don't like T and E tho

steyr
01-30-2008, 11:31 AM
yeah. i work on my T and E separately, then try to work them in, cause those are my worst letters

thats me
01-30-2008, 12:12 PM
thanks gor the critz

South-Pole
01-30-2008, 12:42 PM
Steyr-loose the arrows and work more on your letters
famo-don't try stuff like that yet,go simple block letters

SEZ
01-30-2008, 12:42 PM
rank-your simps are pretty down
steyr-simpler, like i had to learn
crystal-do simples and stop trying burners
inner city- try harder

Techkanuck
01-30-2008, 01:53 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture58.jpg
Bottom one is just trying to get used to the markers, and the top I want bothe A's to be like the first i think and i need help on the K

xyk-I like it, maybe a more vivid red force feild

mx-I like the legit one, a good start

Vagrant
01-30-2008, 02:08 PM
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/GrimePencilBar.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/GrimePenstyle.jpg

bored at work steez with something new

real_destroyer
01-30-2008, 02:40 PM
http://www.hiphopkulture.ro/public/artisti/8343/GRAF_real%20-%20noname.jpg
http://www.hiphopkulture.ro/public/artisti/8343/GRAF_real%20-%20space%20piece.jpg
some old stuff... i'll post new shit when i'll get my cam back..
vagrant i like your stuff
kara the gold/silver thing looks like a blob

revid!
01-30-2008, 02:45 PM
vagrant those are lookin good! the top ones m needs a lil lovin tho
and teckkanuck that top one looks great! those letters are lookin nice good work!
real destroyer-go simpler it looks like your trying to hard on tha top one. the bottom ones style could turn out..

ESKiMO2
01-30-2008, 03:05 PM
Kara- The K is a little cut off.
Enve- The V shouldn't curve so much.
AOI- I would get rid of the extension on the right neg of the A

I made a throw up in school today. I like it but I need help.

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3544/eskiothrowiebd8.jpg

If you haven't noticed I don't fuck around with the M anymore.

Rank-oner!
01-30-2008, 03:15 PM
eskimo: i think you should change up the I and K a little but thats def a good start.
real; im not feeling the extensions too much but it could be just be its not colored

revid!
01-30-2008, 03:18 PM
rank man your lookin good check your pms

STR-WHO
01-30-2008, 03:22 PM
[QUOTE=ESKiMO2;990173]Kara- The K is a little cut off.
Enve- The V shouldn't curve so much.
AOI- I would get rid of the extension on the right neg of the A

I made a throw up in school today. I like it but I need help.

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3544/eskiothrowiebd8.jpg

the e is fucked up, make it less sharp

a maze
01-30-2008, 04:23 PM
Eskimo- looking good man, but the k,i, and o dont seem to fit.

New shit-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext4.jpg

Techkanuck
01-30-2008, 04:29 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture59.jpg

Inked and moved the K over

Real the second one is hot

maze- Lovin it as always

smooth_nuts
01-30-2008, 04:42 PM
KARA-make the right leg of the k a bit bigger next time
maze-you suck die haha nah man its dope :D
real destoyer-simple it down man
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture182.jpg
just some more of my garbage(i actualy like this one though :D) i had to i cant get a good flick of this the little letter hovering around the big letters(and yes i bit that off chillen haha)are al blurd so i just edited em with ms paint :-p crits would be great

apeer!
01-30-2008, 04:50 PM
maze- shits hot man love the colors

Heres my first post.... crits please i could use them

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3029/0000033vg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Stim
01-30-2008, 05:09 PM
Hey, not enough activity in the characters thread.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7277/wizardfz5.jpg

Jet
01-30-2008, 05:13 PM
Eskimo- looking good man, but the k,i, and o dont seem to fit.

New shit-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrext4.jpg

I would change the 3d a little bit, make it more of a barcode than just stripes. just an opinion though

RFI. SPit
01-30-2008, 05:43 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3619/steyrbrower2lj5.jpg
i drew block letters all day in school today.
i drew up some block letters here and jjust decided to trick em out a lil bit with 3d, i call it "6 random extensions that have no purpose in the sketch and they are just in there to take up space"(i tried not to bite rosy to hard this time;))
ps. this took only like 45 mins i think

setyr, you're really good at colouring and doing 3d, it always looks good.
But man, your letters are so awful dude. You really need to start over on the basics or something, stick to the block letters and straight line letters. LOSE the arrows man, everybody keeps telling you this over and over, they kill the piece so hard dude.

-ShAmEE-
01-30-2008, 06:00 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3619/steyrbrower2lj5.jpg
i drew block letters all day in school today.
i drew up some block letters here and jjust decided to trick em out a lil bit with 3d, i call it "6 random extensions that have no purpose in the sketch and they are just in there to take up space"(i tried not to bite rosy to hard this time;))
ps. this took only like 45 mins i think


dude like JUST LISTEN! do fuckin simples. none of this wack shiz bitch please. u have some nice colouring skills but get to that new to graff thread now READ EVERY FUCKIN PAGE, then but out some simples and dont use ink. get get them letters down

TIPE HEFNER
01-30-2008, 06:06 PM
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-ShAmEE-
01-30-2008, 06:14 PM
<a href="" target="_blank"><img src="http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w267/tiperjonez/tipe_dsm_lsw_vm.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>
http://s178.photobucket.com/albums/w267/tiperjonez/?action=view&current=tipe_dsm_lsw_vm.jpg
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w267/tiperjonez/tipe_dsm_lsw_vm.jpg
http://s178.photobucket.com/albums/w267/tiperjonez/?action=view&current=tipe_dsm_lsw_vm.jpg

sanrtizer
01-30-2008, 06:15 PM
real- go simpler on that first one....second one is too squished space it out
eskimo- make the k overlap the i a little less and bring the o down to the other letters level
makr- youve progressed sooo much in so little time....only thing i see is that the m is a lil taller than all the other letters its fresh tho
steyr- listen to everyonnnne
for my kfc homeskillets
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/7346/img0112ka4.jpg

Rank-oner!
01-30-2008, 06:16 PM
amaze: that looks a lot better man. but i would do something a little diff. for the 3d

SAID
01-30-2008, 06:28 PM
a maze: lovinnnn it :D

5Funerals
01-30-2008, 06:32 PM
sanr - that is dope for real man
Steyr - thats one of those pieces that looks beautiful at first and then you look at the letters and wince. It doesnt even look like you used bars. Props on the coloring and 3d though.
Makr - I love that. The stripes in the 3d look awesome.
Apeer - work on less shaky lines and get a new P and R. Also, someone on here rights Aper. Just letting you know.
Techaknuck - looks awesome but the K could use work. Also, the hole of the R should be smaller like the A holes. Pun intended.
Eskimo - work on the I. It looks good though.
Real Destroyer - those letters are pretty ugly man go simpler.


Ok I tried to progress my recent style and I am pretty satisfied. My E is the worst part of this sketch but I know what I need to do to fix it.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400321.jpg

Rots takes your Daughters
01-30-2008, 06:36 PM
This was one of the (if not the) first ever sketch(es) I did.

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/IMGP0062.jpg

Hahahahahahahaa

sketch3
01-30-2008, 06:40 PM
its not even that bad,
im not just saying that cuss ur e popular either, my first sketch was illegeble