Blackbooks

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yea. it says soft

[einsamkeit]

http://aycu35.webshots.com/image/43914/2002456330006076397_fs.jpg
for martyr ... fucked up the y... but w.e hella rushed.

http://aycu27.webshots.com/image/46626/2002447030831475023_fs.jpg
my throws on paper : )

[Vagrant]

yeah its on two 228's but thats all I had at the time.

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/VagrantTextType.jpg

Tezer: looks fine to me. You ever paint at all? If you're waiting for summer then I can't wait to see some painted pieces.
Dim: yeah nice quick fill. next time try to keep it inside the throw though. (or make the throw bigger if you did the fill first, which you probably did)
Destil: very nice simple. love the forcefield

bump

[hazetheone]

give it some wierd transparent overlaping color effect

[Dying to live]

http://a683.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/39/l_31e17af4849fbb44dbcfa5faa14db08a.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

the main problem is that y w me too....ima get it tho... hows this??http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/02-26-08_2116.jpg

[hazetheone]

loose the upside down cross
and i would say just go simpler like dont even worry about throw style yet and work on letter structure and shit

[j-f]

akel thats sickk
martyr the ear lobes on the Rs look weird- work on the letter shapes it all doesnt flow very nice

[Scream Out]

inverted crosses should only be used when painted on or around a church. lets them know whats up

[*cept*]

the main problem is that y w me too....ima get it tho... hows this??http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/02-26-08_2116.jpg word, imo y's are the hardest letters, stylistically, to make your own

[*cept*]

http://a683.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/39/l_31e17af4849fbb44dbcfa5faa14db08a.jpg
lovin that fill

[SEZ]

old piece from 2006 when i used to write akso...i think i've seen an akso in here?
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/584/oldakso2006cw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit- some more from a whiiiiiiiiile back...
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3659/aksoym2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2189/aksodripssc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

as you can see i loved my drips at the time

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/5593/drippyaksoqt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
couldnt get the whole pic in

[revid!]

nevermind

[glyce]

martyraz- lose those extensions on your r

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank009.jpg

[revid!]

teze mad hott shit same to akel and sez

[COLOR192]

AKEL- like the colours! the letters are fine too
SEZ- lovin them!
(soz for not critting any more but i'm in a hurry)

new nick:
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3415/img0899hr2.th.jpg (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0899hr2.jpg)

Bump

[hazetheone]

teze mad hott shit same to akel and sez

it doesnt matter as long as your shit looks nothing like his/hers

[atlok7]

yo glyce- loose the cracks and dont have the top arm of the S hand down and over lap the middle. it would look better that way

[Chump]

thinkin about writing
gemz/s as well as logo
anyone know if thats used

i think some one on this thread writes logo

[Grape1]

theres also a guy here in toronto who write gems. and hes rocking it too.

[revid!]

yeah im the one who writes logo
lol...
just bored with it

[dufus]

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/3981/ups023wd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/9816/ups025ig0.jpg (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/%3Ca%20href=%22http://imageshack.us%22%3E%3Cimg%20src=%22http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/3981/ups023wd1.jpg%22%20border=%220%22%20alt=%22Image%2 0Hosted%20by%20ImageShack.us%22/%3E%3C/a%3E)">http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/614/ups024xr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

[a maze]

dufus, that is bangin.

[revid!]

yesssir

[BZAR]

wrong thread my bad :@

[COLOR192]

new nick:
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3415/img0899hr2.th.jpg (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0899hr2.jpg)

Bump

still bumping for crits

[hazetheone]

did you give any?

[Chump]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2d2ejxf.jpg
New "M"...
Crits/suggestions?
Color- doesnt look bad. Just maybe some more style. Not a big fan of the F. but mainly just give your letters more style.
Dufus- Dope.
(Fixed the P)

[COLOR192]

did you give any?

yes, I did.
anywayz, Chump - not feelin the U and the P kinda looks like an E
Dufus - I hate u're Rs and the F

[hazetheone]

that doesnt look like a p at all

[Chump]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2d2ejxf.jpg
New "M"...
Crits/suggestions?
Color- doesnt look bad. Just maybe some more style. Not a big fan of the F. but mainly just give your letters more style.
Dufus- Dope.
Fixed the P

[mosezone]

sez-that S-K extension is super dope
glyce-not really feeling the S or K
refuse-first in nice, 2nd is fire, and the throw is pretty nice except for the last E
freak-i agree, just add a little style
chump-looovin' that throw

i'm thinking about changing my name because i love all of the letters in MOSEZ except for the Z, which doesn't flow at all. so has anybody heard of anyone who writes MOES?

[5Funerals]

freak - give crits to get them
chump - pretty good but every one of your letters has something in it that sets it apart from the others.
Refuser - those are soo stylish!

Heres a quicky:
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan0001-1.jpg

[Chump]

chump - pretty good but every one of your letters has something in it that sets it apart from the others.


is that a bad thing?

[mosezone]

i think he means it's a bad thing, like they each have a little something that disrupts the flow. for example, your H has got that little thing on the right side of it. i guess the letters just need a little more uniformity.

..but has anybody heard of a MOES?

[skiv]

yo CHUMP. looking good, i think all you have to do is give that P some more style and it will be perfect.

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0006-1.jpg?t=1204159524


just a quick thing^^^
dont tell me to do simples, i can do that..working on this style.
i like the I and the E, the 3-d shoulda been different
crits?

[sex without condoms]

i cant critique that because you answered your own question.
that style should be thrown away and work on simples like that Freak piece above.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193720.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193658.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193547.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193329.jpg

[atlok7]

dont tell me to do simples, i can do that..working on this style.
i like the I and the E, the 3-d shoulda been different
crits?[/QUOTE]

well their prolly not simple enough. just focus on basic letter shapes and worry about the steez later

[skiv]

ahhh!
simples = been there done that.. the stuff like FREAK, i've done.
im just tryin new stuff.

[el oh el]

looks like vensrs ish to be honest

http://postthatpic.com/files/2882/DSC05714.JPG

[atlok7]

dude dont worry about new stuff right now. you need to work on your structure and .. letters in general. im not hating. you just need to stay solid and simple.(use bars) trust me dude.

[HuntingLOLs]

..but has anybody heard of a MOES?

just do it. it wont kill you and you will probably change your name again before you will get big enough for somebody to confront you :p or just swap em around: SEMO, SEOM, ESOM etc. (most of those suck tho)

[SenTheFirst]

ahhh!
simples = been there done that.. the stuff like FREAK, i've done.
im just tryin new stuff.

if youve been there done that then you would have learned structure and nobody would tell you to do simples b/c you would have good structure. you dont have good structure.


take the crits or dont ask for them

[crystalmeth and abortions]

skiv-work on making more even lines.
http://a87.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_9602f48cfb38e6f6f46b10c85c324cee.jpg
^shitty choise on the shine color. but any crits?

[SenTheFirst]

looks like vensrs ish to be honest

http://postthatpic.com/files/2882/DSC05714.JPG

haha look at old seize with his bangin simps

[mosezone]

i didn't know seize painted that candle piece. soooooo fucking clean!

and crystalmeth, you should definately separate your letters.

[atlok7]

yeah that shit is mad. seize where ever you are right now. i love you.

[el oh el]

i just posted a better flick in the bombs/pieces thread

[skiv]

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0010-2.jpg?t=1204164334
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0001-1.jpg?t=1204164374http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0030.jpg?t=1204164394http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0003.jpg?t=1204164463http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0012.jpg?t=1204164483http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0015.jpg?t=1204164516http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0011-1.jpg?t=1204164548http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0001.jpg?t=1204164588

[sex without condoms]

i cant critique that because you answered your own question.
that style should be thrown away and work on simples like that Freak piece above.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193720.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193658.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193547.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/193329.jpg

humping.

and yeahh you reallllly need to stick to simples pal.

[ESKiMO2]

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/925/nonamejk1.jpg

Just messing with photo shop. Halfway done.

[revid!]

oookkk so here goes..
ive been real bored latley doin the same old shit and today i watched that retna video on the main page and that shit inspired me to go do some crazy shit so i know the o's are fucked but this is the first of a style i hope to progress crits are welcome
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4158/cimg0193ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit. i will not quit doing my other shit lol i just wanna do some unique shit

[Rank-oner!]

inverted crosses should only be used when painted on or around a church. lets them know whats up

Actually they should not be used at all because now its the fucking trendy thing to do and regardless of anyone's religion writers know better than to hit up a church. Shits lame, like bombing a house or something.

[Cliff]

Yo Chump im diggin that M a lot

[TaskOne]

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/925/nonamejk1.jpg

Just messing with photo shop. Halfway done.

this is ill son although your in the wrong thread. nice work.

[atlok7]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/624/caisrclowdhf1.jpg

just fucking around with backrounds. yeah shitty ik but w/e

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

atlok finishin up our exchange right now.
you done?
http://www.tmobilepictures.com/photo/photo34/8a/b4/807a7e0a9c4d.jpg?tw=305&th=228&_rh=5grmpb59h7hcvuh4ddxs1n0yd

[atlok7]

not yet dawg. but ill do it right now

[a maze]

caisr- that r is unreadable as fuck. Fix it please.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

i got you too mar.

[Rank-oner!]

Im down for an exchange im bored as fuck

[a maze]

rank, I'm down.

[RFI. SPit]

tezer- looking good, like the style
sex - always killin!

the start of a new sketch, messed up in 2 places
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2969/photo274ku8.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

rfi.
i like how your styles developed it's original, but your o's are covering up to much of the f and n.Maybe make the z more symetterical with the e by adding the same add on from the bottom of the e to the bottom of the z too. instead of the o. keep it up homie.

ps.
i got ya rank.
i'm writing obtuse now.

[RFI. SPit]

little update here..
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4240/photo275hq1.jpg
still lots to do!

[a maze]

looking real fresh, zof. Keep it up.

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture039.jpg
Quick little battle thing that's not gonna happen, shitty, but I don't post flicks enough.

*edit*
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture038.jpg
And a half assed tutorial, won't even post it in the other thread, I'm ashamed :P

Fresh shit Zof, but yeah, your F is hidden.

[oakstr1]

RFI. SPit - thats tight. i like the colors
i like pie. - that shits really dope.

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/8067/throw1ji8.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6245/img031bm4.jpg

[RFI. SPit]

yea, f got too hidden, oh well
but, here's the finished piece!

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7303/photo276at2.jpg

[SEZ]

old piece from 2006 when i used to write akso...i think i've seen an akso in here?
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/584/oldakso2006cw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit- some more from a whiiiiiiiiile back...
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3659/aksoym2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2189/aksodripssc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

as you can see i loved my drips at the time

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/5593/drippyaksoqt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
couldnt get the whole pic in

bumpinggggg

[Rank-oner!]

yo heres the stuff i came up with sorry for the sloppyness wanted to get it done quick haha
i also took a pic without highlights
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade006.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade008.jpg

[einsamkeit]

http://aycu40.webshots.com/image/45799/2002934612083830362_fs.jpg

http://aycu13.webshots.com/image/43452/2001594406654639731_fs.jpg

http://aycu21.webshots.com/image/46500/2001585233180782064_fs.jpg

crits plz...

RFI... sick fill, coming along super good.
Rank... shit is ill love the silver and blue, the last one is kinda shotty though. but still dope.

[Light40]

Shits all dope, better than I can do so I got nothing for crits, cept that I like all of it.

Trying to make a throwie any help?

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7421/dsc0420ur7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FSMone]

Hey guys. New to the forum!

Just wanted to get some feedback on my throwie...
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5544/picture008hu3.jpg

Thanks :)

[IlikePie]

Flying Spaghetti Monster, you a Pastafarian?

[twisties]

I can't settle on a word so i keep trying different things to see what i feel comfortable with-
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/Picture_0331.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/Picture_0321.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/Picture_0341.jpg

bumpin for crits!

FSM- Work on your S as it's lacking the most.
Light- I'm not feeling it at all..the bubbles then down to points just don't work for me..I feel it should be one or the other but not both.
einsamkeit- you've got the flow on the throw but to me it just doesn't work..try drawing each letter by itself and then lap them over...i mean work on the letters a bit more overal.
Rank- you have those simples down! Do you sketch anything different though?
RFI. SPit- Shits fire!

[OSA]

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t269/Wu-Zi-Mu/DSC00023.jpg

yall wanna give me some tips??

[skiv]

oh i finally get to say this....

SIMPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chump]

bumpin for crits!

FSM- Work on your S as it's lacking the most.
Light- I'm not feeling it at all..the bubbles then down to points just don't work for me..I feel it should be one or the other but not both.
einsamkeit- you've got the flow on the throw but to me it just doesn't work..try drawing each letter by itself and then lap them over...i mean work on the letters a bit more overal.
Rank- you have those simples down! Do you sketch anything different though?
RFI. SPit- Shits fire!

I really like the last one and the one you have your fingers on top of...
I really like your throw...post one of those...

[leuwk]

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/8256/img4505xy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture039.jpg
Quick little battle thing that's not gonna happen, shitty, but I don't post flicks enough.

*edit*
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture038.jpg
And a half assed tutorial, won't even post it in the other thread, I'm ashamed :P

Fresh shit Zof, but yeah, your F is hidden.

Got one crit :(

Osa, put your pencil down and read the new to graff thread.

[D E M O]

exchange peice i made for Riot(OFB1)

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/456/ofb1qz2.jpg

[Rots takes your Daughters]

That's cool but the letters are week, play with it, it will get good

[EMAK]

lookin pretty clean up there^


how many blackbooks have all of you guys filled up???

i have filled only one completely and almost done wit a second one... ive only been writing since 06

[Cause816]

exchange peice i made for Riot(OFB1)

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/456/ofb1qz2.jpg

post the flik he did for you. That kid's got some talent

[Light40]

Twisties: your 3D is off on almost all of them and they look sloppy as fuck
Leuwk: Check the width of your letters, use bars.
OSA: try starting with a fat marker and just writing your name so you can see the bars
DEMO: I like it, it a bit hard to read but its real clean.

[Rots takes your Daughters]

lookin pretty clean up there^


how many blackbooks have all of you guys filled up???

i have filled only one completely and almost done wit a second one... ive only been writing since 06

4, and 3 sketch books. I think I've been writing from either early 05 or early 06

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-13.jpg

AMKRAAAHHHHHHHH

ilikepie...you got so good boy...get in on the collab..mind if i take that flick..gah ima take it anyway :P

[ESKiMO2]

I'm feelin it amk

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT005-1.jpg

yeah got a cold so why not?
rouuuggghhhh sketch.
crits?

[Mass Appeal]

the B is pretty cool..but the E jus looks wierd cus of the vertical bars being sooo lil hehe..and whats the first thing ?..nice B though..good simple start

["Riot"]

hahah thats a f. :)

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT006.jpg

hahah here try that.
better?

[Chump]

we still dont know what the first thing is...

[5Funerals]

riot - keep working the bars and loose the other crap
amk - not feeling the M but the rest is awesome. I realize that it is slanted to flow with the A and the bars on the left side are identical so I think you should change the right side of the M maybe.
Demo - its really clean and the colors are nice but those letters are kinda of lousy. Your O would make a sick B.
Ilikepie - I like that style a lot
Sum - go to the new to graff thread and pick a different word. There must be 3 billion sums out there.

Heres another pen freestyle. Crits would be appreciated.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan0001-2.jpg


edit - shit sorry for the upside downage......

[Light40]

Only got one crit.

Trying to make a throwie any help?

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7421/dsc0420ur7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)[/QUOTE]

[5Funerals]

try giving crits.

Dont do those little shine lines because shine isnt black
it flows well

[Mass Appeal]

thats better RIOT man

["Riot"]

nice sarcasm...?

[Mass Appeal]

what the fuck ?
i said the F is better why the heck is it sarcasm
take it or leave it.

bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-13.jpg

AND A COLLAB UPDATE

THESE ARE THE FOLKS WHOS PEICES I HAVE

CHER
SEIZE
TRASH
EMJAYBEE
AZTECA
REVID
OVER
RANK
RABY
TESM
SEWER
DAWES
ROTS
AKEL
KILLS
DESTIL
AIMR
DIMR
CILE
TEZE
SKETCH

IF YOUR NAME AINT IN ON THAT LIST AND YOU KNOW YOUR IN ON THE COLLAB THEN GET YOUR ARSE INTO GEAR AND SEND ME YOUR FLICK.

["Riot"]

nah. usually people make dumbass comments about my username.
RIOT man...threw me off.
thanks though.

that sketch is dope.
theres just something about that m. idk what?
throws it off just a little but i cant put my finger on it.

[Light40]

Peor: I like your other stickers I saw, I dun like something about the E maybe tweak it a little, other than that I like it.
Riot: like the B, whats the first letter?
Sum: try simples and look at your bar width.

[5Funerals]

riot - keep working the bars and loose the other crap
amk - not feeling the M but the rest is awesome. I realize that it is slanted to flow with the A and the bars on the left side are identical so I think you should change the right side of the M maybe.
Demo - its really clean and the colors are nice but those letters are kinda of lousy. Your O would make a sick B.
Ilikepie - I like that style a lot
Sum - go to the new to graff thread and pick a different word. There must be 3 billion sums out there.

Heres another pen freestyle. Crits would be appreciated.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan0001-2.jpg

edit - shit sorry for the upside downage......

bump

[5Funerals]

yeah dude its my top horizontal bar on the E. It needs to be more cylindrical like the others.

["Riot"]

Peor: I like your other stickers I saw, I dun like something about the E maybe tweak it a little, other than that I like it.
Riot: like the B, whats the first letter?
Sum: try simples and look at your bar width.

O.

haha looks like i need to fix that one to.

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT011.jpg

new styleish?
crits?

funerals. fix the e and o. the middle bar on the e is to small and straight ish.

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-13.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/456/ofb1qz2.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade006.jpg
Shamee. REwind.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/10.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/9.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/8.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/7.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/6.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/5.jpg

[Chump]

http://i31.tinypic.com/2wqg0v4.jpg
at work...
Crits / suggestions?
Riot- i like it but maybe alil to boxy dont like the M
Shame- Lookin sick

["Riot"]

that throws alright.
fix the c. the little space. lose that and see how it looks then.
try to add a lil bump on the right leg in the middle. know what i mean?
do something with the p. to plain compared to the other letters.

[Light40]

PEOR: maybe put a space like you have in the top of the P and R, i dunno.

[Chump]

that throws alright.
fix the c. the little space. lose that and see how it looks then.
try to add a lil bump on the right leg in the middle. know what i mean?
do something with the p. to plain compared to the other letters.

The space in the C is Teeth most of the time but ill try it out though...
Bump on the leg of what?
Yea the P needs work but just trying to perfect one letter at a time lol

["Riot"]

on the M. the right leg. in the middle.
idk howto explain it.

[Chump]

kinda like the H?

["Riot"]

yes

[Mass Appeal]

shamee..you gotta good style..but you jus simply dont do enough..im hoping youv got your peice for the collab right

[AZTEKA]

Somethin that was inspired by mewt. Peace.
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4041/02270lg8.jpg

[AZTEKA]

........... And riot that one piece that says kemist, likin that style.

[dim]

azteka nice man i really like that i dont really see a mew influence tho lol
either wat looks ill

[dim]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/624/caisrclowdhf1.jpg

just fucking around with backrounds. yeah shitty ik but w/e
THIS IS SO DOPE <3 <3

["Riot"]

Somethin that was inspired by mewt. Peace.
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4041/02270lg8.jpg

freshhhhhhhhhhh.

[Mass Appeal]

that is one nice peice AZTECA..i see you coverd up some bad lettering with the big blob right ?..done it myself in the past hehe...everythign is fine..i love the S

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT016-1.jpg


GURO.
REALLLL fast sketch.
Im going to put this up this weekend. Its for this girl at my school who got in a wreck wendsday and is now in coma. if she doesnt wake up ill throw this up or a quick throw that says "please wake up!"

Itll go on the wall near the crash.
just to boost the spirits of those who knew her.

[AZTEKA]

Thnx for the critisisms, but yeah, that yello blob is from the deco marker that i was using. That guro piece is lookin dope, post it up with some color, homie.

["Riot"]

alright. i gotta take my time this time.

fuck i really hope she wakes up.

[-ShAmEE-]

shamee..you gotta good style..but you jus simply dont do enough..im hoping youv got your peice for the collab right

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/9.jpg


this is it homie.

tng. run tingz.

[Mass Appeal]

my throw entry !

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-14.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

that looks so much better since theres a bottom now

[skiv]

This page is looking good right now

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture040.jpg

Can't really crit this page, everyone seems to know what they're doing :)
Gonna add color some time today.

[-ShAmEE-]

not reali feeling it. it to addony. take away some addons. i in the stage of stuff u thinks okay. but it just wak. i kno hard shit but it is, i've got pages of shit like that. trust me thoguh u will get betta, take like a couple of months. u need kno what ur lookin for in your style.

love u pie.

[dufus]

i like that^^ nice style...
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6301/ups029rp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8615/ups028rt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7402/ups027vu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5346/ups026pg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

[-ShAmEE-]

nice steez. u wanna get some lumous colours. pink and yellow baby. u wanna exchange.

[IlikePie]

not reali feeling it. it to addony. take away some addons. i in the stage of stuff u thinks okay. but it just wak. i kno hard shit but it is, i've got pages of shit like that. trust me thoguh u will get betta, take like a couple of months. u need kno what ur lookin for in your style.

love u pie.

:) Thanks, I know what you're saying, and yeah, I'm not really happy with it. Just keep moving on and progressing, and thanks for the actual crit instead of "not feelin' it".

[-ShAmEE-]

hey i'm feeling ur struggle. <---so hip hop.

[atlok7]

schwanks dim

[SEZ]

Kasper- it looks ok but it seems your trying too hard to pull wildstyle...random extensions all over your letters and shit oh and its soooo influenced and common but whatev

Riot- i like the simps...i know how you feel my girlfriend was in a car accident and also in a coma afterwards its fucked up how life turns.

Shamee- uh does that say TNG? if it does your letterings wack actually it looks fucked up either way.

Refuse- sick throwie dope simples

[crystalmeth and abortions]

http://a481.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/85/l_cae22971748b30150eb60e4d33eb41e8.jpg
Quick simple

[RFI. SPit]

Quick simple

Not enough

["Riot"]

ay bro.
you need to simple it down.use bars.
sucks but its reall good in the long road.

And new markers would be good hahah

[TaskOne]

i like that^^ nice style...
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6301/ups029rp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8615/ups028rt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7402/ups027vu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5346/ups026pg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

you remind me of myself haha i love your style bro.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

bump the fuck outta refuse

[bloot]

you remind me of myself haha i love your style bro.
That shit is just way too sloppy for me

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0996.jpg
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0995.jpg
DDs crits
i love those bombs refuse

[RFI. SPit]

Some flyyy Ds!
I'd leave off that arrow on the left of the first drawing. But other than that, those are funkyy!


One bump for this one:
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7303/photo276at2.jpg

[mosezone]

refuse-i'm feeling all those. so dope.
dim-1st D is ill, but maybe try to clean up your lines a little. same with the 2nd.
zof-dooope, do you paint any of your sketches?

new name. any crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00383.jpg

[Thrice]

fix the M's, besides that i like the top one, not the bottom one.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0996.jpg

if you got rid of the left vertical bar, that would be a bangin S




blahhhh

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2407.jpg

[jvillebboy]

definitely feelin refuse!
dim - i like the D! fill it in or suttin. wanna see
mose - that reminds me of the restaurant moes! WELCOME TO MOES! i think your bottom left moes though is the nicer of the 3

seize - I WANT SOME OF THOSE OBAMAS!

tried my hand at a throw. first try. crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/puertolumbian/0228082050.jpg

[JSBiggz]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1764/img0038vj2.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5906/img0039fr6.jpg
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/396/img0040ll8.jpg
Crits?

[jvillebboy]

uhm....i used to write that....not kidding you....

[TaskOne]

bored doodles.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/014.jpg

seize dope sticker dope throw dope dope dope dope dope
mek- feelin the first one. bars bars bars
jville- start with easy'er bubble letters.
mose- that m sucks.
RFI- sicknessssssss

[ESKiMO2]

ya refuse keep doing that

[JSBiggz]

uhm....i used to write that....not kidding you....

haha thats cool...before i switched i used to write emak....and i havent been on this site for a while....then when i found someone writing emak and i was like zomg!?!?!...but that was after i switched names

[jvillebboy]

ahahaha. yea, i heare you. mek one was exactly what i used to write. like last year before i took another break. lol. im still lookin man. lol. so i know how it is

[BORG]

this page is lookin fresh, keep it up

something in the works
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4639/picture337cg7.jpg

[MUSEone]

feelin that karak homie. keep it up.

[JSBiggz]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1764/img0038vj2.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5906/img0039fr6.jpg
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/396/img0040ll8.jpg
Crits?

bump for crits ;)

oh yeah and also...i usualy bubble letters...i guess thats how you would classify them...anyway...this is an attempt at something simple and a little more blocky...so crits would be fantabulous

[mosezone]

refuse-i'm feeling all those. so dope.
dim-1st D is ill, but maybe try to clean up your lines a little. same with the 2nd.
zof-dooope, do you paint any of your sketches?

new name. any crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00383.jpg

any more advice? borg, every single one of those letters is freshhh. i want to see that shit painted.

[equator_2012]

;1023363']http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0996.jpg

if you got rid of the left vertical bar, that would be a bangin S




blahhhh

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2407.jpg




now that is a deff tryage for that S fuck damn!

[BORG]

^^thats mr. tezer/obtuse haha, the character is mine

jsbiggz-all letters same size, all bars same size, keep on with them simples

moes-not feelin the top one, bottom 2 have potential, work with those

[Tokenkaligreens]

moes keep working them, agree the bottom 2 are the best. borg that character is sick
jsbiggz keep with the simples

a 1 line throw im messing with crits?
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img004.jpg

[OSA]

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t269/Wu-Zi-Mu/DSC00022.jpg

people want to give me some more advice ??

[Thrice]

are you going for a throw up or a piece?

[whatadizaster!]

people want to give me some more advice ??

do you want to give advice?

[OSA]

Thrice - i was going for a throw up
whatadizaster - i'm only new to graffing i don't really have much advice

[JSBiggz]

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t269/Wu-Zi-Mu/DSC00022.jpg

people want to give me some more advice ??

for some reason people always start with these letters....write each letter individualy then think of ways to shift shape these letters...and you can also incorperate it into your handstyle

[JSBiggz]

i mean incorperate your handstyle into your throw..or what ever....i think mr wiggles did something on this..but i cant find it.

[OSA]

Thanks Jsbiggz

[Chump]

http://i31.tinypic.com/11hay3k.jpg
Crits / suggestions?
OSA- try more simple regular letters... go from there..
SEIZE love that throw...

[Tokenkaligreens]

osa if your gonna rock the boxes make them the same size.

chump looks good, how the H and U have like a lil swerve to the first hump add that to the M

can i get a lil crit love lol

[JSBiggz]

Thanks Jsbiggz

np champ

[bomb cities not iraq]

Yo chump im really feelin those letters. really clean and lookin ill. The only letter i dont really like is the "P" so if you fix that, it would be legit

[OSA]

ahh k i'm gonna try out the bubble style see how that works for me

[Chump]

osa if your gonna rock the boxes make them the same size.

chump looks good, how the H and U have like a lil swerve to the first hump add that to the M

can i get a lil crit love lol
Thanks for the crits not sure exactly what you are suggestion though...
I like your throw... not my style but i like the orange one...

[Thrice]

meh....i screwed up my S and I.
http://i29.tinypic.com/9vbfyc.jpg

[atlok7]

CHUMP- more ill than before. but i feel like the C and the P still dont flow

[Chump]

Yo chump im really feelin those letters. really clean and lookin ill. The only letter i dont really like is the "P" so if you fix that, it would be legit
Yea I hear ya man...
Im just stuck on how to fix the P...

[Iowna9]

Chump - love ur throwy the p kinda looks like an e though
osa - space it out and keep workin on it

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1618/firker18sg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some school work
crits?

[Tokenkaligreens]

chump thx dont even worrie looks good as is , spice the P up lol idk maybe some teeth "smile bitches" :)
thrice round out the bottoms of the O an I bring the top of the S down.
iowna9 looks good imo 2nd one is the best.

[OSA]

i like the s but if the bottom part of it had been a little bigger and the i overlapped it it would be pretty nice.


meh....i screwed up my S and I.

[BORG]

this page is lookin fresh, keep it up

something in the works
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4639/picture337cg7.jpg

consolidate your posts ppl, i just posted this 20 mins ago.........shouldnt be lost just yet

[revid!]

its super dope teze :)
oh my bad you tooo borg :)

[Chump]

http://i31.tinypic.com/11hay3k.jpg
Crits / suggestions?
OSA- try more simple regular letters... go from there..
SEIZE love that throw...
Bump
I need help with the P...
Suggestions?

[dim]

damn borg thats going to turn out ill i love the character
chump i cant do ps to save my life so i can really help you there but work on the right side of the m like where the bump is keep working on that throw the more you do it the better it will get

[UZE_[HGSKrew]]

Bump
I need help with the P...
Suggestions?

"P" at least in my mind is pretty difficult to do with any style. PBT Krew out here does it well along with PHAT but.... hmmmmm. no real advice to give about that topic honestly. HOWEVER alot of people i this thread tend to overlook or dismiss style altogther. Which you have in spades. Props on the "C" I love it. it looks pissed. its great. and in the end style is what really counts next to letter structure. props:D

[Chump]

;1023555']"P" at least in my mind is pretty difficult to do with any style. PBT Krew out here does it well along with PHAT but.... hmmmmm. no real advice to give about that topic honestly. HOWEVER alot of people i this thread tend to overlook or dismiss style altogther. Which you have in spades. Props on the "C" I love it. it looks pissed. its great. and in the end style is what really counts next to letter structure. props:D
Thanks man...Yea Im still working on it but that P is a bitch...

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Borg - mad fresh charcs as always
Chump something about the C is just off try messin around with the inner curve
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00696.jpghttp://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00697-1.jpg
crits?

[whatadizaster!]

omfg at the fill on the last one ^^^

[RFI. SPit]

Bump
I need help with the P...
Suggestions?

Dude.. please... you've been bumping the same throw for fucking days.

Development isn't simply about asking for crits and getting other people's opinions. I developed my style where I am today with hardly anybody's input at all. I sketched and sketched for now almost 2 years without getting crits from anybody, and it's got me pretty far. Don't be afraid to mess around with your letters, you alone decide on what exactly you want, other people can't do all the work for you. Please stop bumping this throw.

Sorry to go off on a tangent. it's a decently solid style.. very generic, but work with it, see what you can come up with.

[Evasion Of Invasion]

which im tryin to edit the post to get one of them the right way

[Chump]

my bad...

[RFI. SPit]

You didn't do anything wrong, I'm just saying try to work some things out for yourself, feel me? Read what I edited into my other post too.

[SAID]

http://i31.tinypic.com/11hay3k.jpg
Crits / suggestions?
OSA- try more simple regular letters... go from there..
SEIZE love that throw...

BUMP THAT FUCKEN M
OUUUUUUIEEEE

[Chump]

lol wasnt me that time

[atlok7]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9435/caisrblackandwhitemg3.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

this page is lookin fresh, keep it up

something in the works
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4639/picture337cg7.jpg
i likeeeee.
cile and seize holdin this thread together.

[jvillebboy]

Borg - dope as letters of course. im hopin youre gonna put somethin where the character is. and by the way, he looks sick.

chump - the p...hmmm....i hate p's. everything else is on point. i love how you got the flops to em. but the p...uhm, try givin it that little upper right point curve thing like you got on the other letters, and then the base, thin it out just a little to match the rest of them. you know? try that out. i think it might work.

atlok - that shit is fresh as hell man! i know youre gonna add color right? im lovin the style. on point. the extensions balance out nicely as well.

so im tryin out another name, esoes. tried writin it a bit ago before i started watchin LA Ink. lol, but here you go. crits?:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/puertolumbian/0228082240.jpg

[blesu]

Revid you fucking toy, stop writing blesu.
You'll bring a bad rep to the word you fucking toy.
learn how to do throw up's and stop using the texta's your parents bought you for school.
Blesu FT COP ATS

[jvillebboy]

oh, and evasion i completely skipped you - im diggin the MN more than anything. im likin the color and shit. the guy, i dunno so much about him, but its straight. i could see it developin more. the pandas cute. lol. but this thread poppin

[Rank-oner!]

Yo Tezer you see the piece i did???
you too amaze

[ESKiMO2]

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4041/fun1nz7.jpg
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2323/fun3yp7.jpg
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5682/fun2ut2.jpg

[TaskOne]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9435/caisrblackandwhitemg3.jpg

lookin much better atlok.

[atlok7]

atlok - that shit is fresh as hell man! i know youre gonna add color right? im lovin the style. on point. the extensions balance out nicely as well.
QUOTE]

yeah but i need ideas for a fill

[mas$]

lookin realy good..imo the arrows wud fit better if they came from the piece not toward it
but thats jus me

[JSBiggz]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1764/img0038vj2.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5906/img0039fr6.jpg
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/396/img0040ll8.jpg
Crits?

Bump for crits...and any suggestions on how i can jazz it up a bit?

[renz198]

eskamo lovin the caracters
atlok stuffs fire
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2521/dsc00408zq9.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3452/dsc00410ch7.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4919/dsc00409qg7.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/1732/dsc00407yq6.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6084/dsc00406vj7.jpg
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9233/dsc00395mq5.jpg
sketchs in the new ook some stickers and one on my art folder in skool crits!

[skiv]

Jsbigs- not bad, keep working on it, i liked your first one.
rens- cut down on the extensions.. maybe add some more straight lines

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0008-1.jpg?t=1204304823http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0011-3.jpg?t=1204304844

[Thrice]

Revid you fucking toy, stop writing blesu.
You'll bring a bad rep to the word you fucking toy.
learn how to do throw up's and stop using the texta's your parents bought you for school.
Blesu FT COP ATS

??? Revid writes logo(s)

[Dubs1]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r117/jdu1002/0227080331.jpg

i will get into crit and all that after i get this first one up on the thread.... anyone wanna welcome me to the boards.... ? haha!

[skiv]

the robots chill, the word not so much.
like the color scheme

[5Funerals]

dubs - new to graff thread
skivs - go back to simples and work on your bars
REN - looking good man keep working on the color schemes
MEK - the first one is good keep going in the other direction. The other two still need work. Trust me you dont need to jazz it up yet.
ATLOK - looking FRESH
Eskimo - I like your style
Here are some more school sketches:
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan0001-3.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/4.jpg

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Borg - mad fresh charcs as always
Chump something about the C is just off try messin around with the inner curve
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00696.jpghttp://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00697-1.jpg
crits?
Bump
dubs - robots good cant read the word tho
peor - i prefer the second one
P.S real bloods drops on the NOVA piece

[hazetheone]

none of those are very good
i realy think you should take your time more if it helps you draw better
or just bite ewok

[Evasion Of Invasion]

eva ones i put time in on the fill that was it meh think wut u want

[hazetheone]

i didnt understand that at all
you high?

[5Funerals]

evasion - the EVA one is really dope your extensions on the E and A that book end the piece remind me of ABOVE one from canada. Come to think of it your V is really similar too.

[hazetheone]

evasion
STOP BITING

[Drakula]

Nova the bubble style's aight but I'd say make the letters fatter and closer.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/IMG_2704.jpg

battle piece for another forum.Says Fragile

[Jelllo]

My First Throw ups
The I is screwed
Crits????
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/stain2.th.JPG
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/stain3.th.JPG

[ESKiMO2]

New
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6306/fun5mb3.jpg
Old
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9537/fun401xy8.jpg
New
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9800/fun8ml7.jpg
Old
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8457/fun7qc6.jpg

Stack- Use the simple bar method.

[5Funerals]

you shouldnt write coste

[Epoc]

New
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6306/fun5mb3.jpg
Old
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9537/fun401xy8.jpg
New
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9800/fun8ml7.jpg
Old
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8457/fun7qc6.jpg

Stack- Use the simple bar method.

Ill, Illish, Ill, Not so Ill.

[skiv]

those are all pretty good..
if some one says not to write something..............tell them to go fuck themselves. unless ur trying to write cope2 or seen and big names like that.

some QUICK things..second one is something i want to improve on. i like the design
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0014-1.jpg?t=1204327531



OH and BUMP THIS!!!
Sick & simple
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/IMG_2704.jpg

[COLOR192]

SKIV - go to simples. use bars
DUBS1 . robot is cool, letters are nor.
PEOR - in the first one, i'm not feelin the P nor the R. in the 3rd, I'm not feelin the E or the O.
Evasion - Dont like u're chars and in the NOVA sketch, I only like the color. the others are cool.
FRAGILE - change the E, and it'll be nicer.

almost the same sketch but w/ color. I know u said I should add more efects but i'm stayin w/ simples for a bit longer. ^^
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2586/img0928bo5.th.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0928bo5.jpg)

[ESKiMO2]

you shouldnt write coste

I'm not I just want to practice the letters at the end of my name. I work better on the first two letters of a word.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

eskimo- that first one is dope as fuck. i dig the s

[OSA]

the s is scerwed and the o is pretty fucked and the oand s are too close and the s and a are too far away

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t269/Wu-Zi-Mu/DSC000221.jpg

crits?

[skiv]

if i go any simpler then that first one im gunna have blok letters...

[kaze!]

osa- go simpler, if you wanna do throws use bubble letters. smae goes to you stack.

first throwies

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/deedthrow2.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/deedthrow.jpg

[DERN]

Hey, just starting writing about 2 weeks ago and in needs in some crits on this I did.

forget about the A on top and that E.
http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc04230kl3.jpg

Just a sketch so the bars are still in there.

In my eyes I could probably have the D a wee-bit bigger and closer to the E.

Am I on the right track?

[sketch3]

yes definetly, ur actually looking dope for 2 weeks, keep doing wat ur doing

[BORG]

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5769/picture340ab5.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

my lord Cile you know what i think !
OSA...thats a good start..but the lettering aint good...use bars..new 2 graff thread will explain bars.
raby....awesome man

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-15.jpg

AMKR

[a maze]

^wow, so NOW you take an r... Good thing I changed my name, or else I'd be TOTALLY biting off you -_-

Revid, that battle go down yet? hit me up.

Cile- dope

Teze- also dope.

[AnteUp]

fuck nuts cile, sick shit!! i never got a b-day stick :(

amkr-doesnt flow well bro...

[sketch3]

if you two are guuna keep bitching everytime somone posts either keep it to pms or dont read eachothers post

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/DRAMECHLOE.jpg

lick my bumbum

[OSA]

thanks for crits guyss.

[Mass Appeal]

fuck nuts cile, sick shit!! i never got a b-day stick :(

amkr-doesnt flow well bro...

im moving on from that all flowey shit...changing my letters up..its about time iv had those letters for like 1 year now...:D .. itll turn out nice you know it will babes

and Amaze..i aint writing AMKR...i write AMK...and i add stuff onto the end...like ihave done for the whole time of writing AMK...dont worry

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-15.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-14.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-13.jpg

[AnteUp]

alright i like where this is going, im a supporter of the amk campain *****aasss

[roa]

my lord Cile you know what i think !
OSA...thats a good start..but the lettering aint good...use bars..new 2 graff thread will explain bars.
raby....awesome man

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-15.jpg

AMKR

this is hawt fiyah

put mo shizah on your flickr

[a maze]

amk-yeah, I get you amk, it's cool. Didn't notice about the r (like for amkoner), just thought about my name, my bad. I like your new ish, looks pretty nice.

EDIT-Teze, hate to keep asking, but I'm about to piss my pants waiting for that exchange! :P

Rank, I got you, putting the finishing touches on yours right now, dope piece btw.

EDIT AGAIN-Here you go rank-
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/rankonerexchange.jpg

[kaze!]

osa- go simpler, if you wanna do throws use bubble letters. smae goes to you stack.

first throwies

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/deedthrow2.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/deedthrow.jpg

bump for crits

[Rots takes your Daughters]

Boring, unoriginal, ordinary, blank, forgettable

[Animal]

^^^ so true, looks like every throwie i've ever seen, too blank and boring.

[DERM]

Could of outlined it better
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/955/dsc04232fd3.th.jpg (http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc04232fd3.jpg)

[kaze!]

yeah it is too blank, fuck. allright ill jazz em up a bit

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/dimer.jpg
this is a new outline of a peice that im doing for my boy tezm i think it needs changes plz help
amk god damn im loving that new steez its so dope
amaze thats nie but i dont really like the r id help u on it but i cant do them very well

[atlok7]

dimer thats pretty hot but i believe the E doesn't flow right, i think its the size. and dawg dont worry about a character at this time just focus of letters. but its nice

[Rank-oner!]

word thanks amaze, i had posted yours the other night, haha i thought they were just gonna be quick sketches so i kinda rushed it, ill try to pump something else out
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade006.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/trade008.jpg