Blackbooks

[Rhyseitup]

I KNOW IT SUCKS BUT I WANT CRITS SOO CRITS PLEASE AND THANK YOU
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/Picture1.jpg

[kase121]

not bad, not feeling the y at all though

[hazetheone]

http://i32.tinypic.com/141t8ba.jpg
penism
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zexp5i.jpg
just a freestyle i think

[Rhyseitup]

not bad, not feeling the y at all though

any suggestions?

[hazetheone]

the little diamond at the bottom of the y is kinda wierd
it would looks better without that and kind of even on the bottom

[Rhyseitup]

the little diamond at the bottom of the y is kinda wierd
it would looks better without that and kind of even on the bottom

kay thanks man

[kase121]

yea go without the diamond. maybe curve the tail of the y to flow better but i would say no diamond part

[hazetheone]

http://i32.tinypic.com/141t8ba.jpg
penism
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zexp5i.jpg
just a freestyle i think

bump from the bottom of the page

[kase121]

i like that first one

[Rots takes your Daughters]

Haze, work on your flow. I mean..your letters are coming along, but try and keep your bars all the same width/length, you know.

[Fatso]

decided to scan this one for once:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4629/fatsoub2.jpg
fatso one

[Xyk]

Hot hot hot. I love your style man, really do. go post up in the big boys thread homie.

[ESKiMO2]

Coste this is for u homie
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00750.jpg


Thanks man. I like the fact the emo is about to kill himself.

[JSBiggz]

bump from the bottom of the page

great job, i just dont think your should right camer....for obvious reasons

[Chump]

http://i25.tinypic.com/29ghd8n.jpg
New throw, its a rough sketch.
Crits/ suggestions?
Fatso- i like it... a lot..

[skiv]

Fatso- Nice stuff
Chump- make it flow some a little more
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0002-4.jpg?t=1204644241

[Rambooboo]

xyk is right man the style is nice as fuck fatso

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newst.jpg
skiv- shit son do bars, dont try to make it look like graffiti, just rock simples, you realy cant go wrong with a proper simple.

chump- look at other throwies. dont bite, but go off them. also, simple throws are dope, and c and h are good letters for that. try like, taller and less fat letters, without points.

fatso- feeeeelin it.

[Chump]

i didn't bite. I don't really like tall throws, but ill try some others stuff.
lol I Like points. :(

[garbage down tha way]

i didnt mean you did bite, i mean when you go to look at other throws, dont bite them. ya dig?

[thesilentvandal]

camer try some 3d, cuz now your peice look too plain, atleast do a dropshadow to it or somtin.

[Chump]

yea...
well ill work on the one i have... then post again...

[Mass Appeal]

Haze, work on your flow. I mean..your letters are coming along, but try and keep your bars all the same width/length, you know.

word.
its so bland.
like add something to make it look atleast an incey bit original.

over the past few pages there have been " dopes " " ills " given out to the wackest of people...dont lick arses if someone says they like YOUR peice..it aint helping anyone

Sex..Over..now thats ill..

and the collab is named nothing..because none of the writers involved are toy..

[crystalmeth and abortions]

http://a394.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/85/l_7b8b5175873945cfc28efd0584fe0951.jpg
character

[kase121]

Fatso- Nice stuff
Chump- make it flow some a little more
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0002-4.jpg?t=1204644241

bars man bars

[skiv]

i use bars..im just not that good at them, or i take it a little to far.
spent a little more time on this one.
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0003-4.jpg?t=1204654778

[kase121]

that one is definatly better, you just need to even out your bars, dont worry about extensions yet. all of the bars on the top of the s are nice and even but the bottom they are different widths, same as the other letters. i know you dont want to hear it but stay simple, trust me it will help

[skiv]

chek ur Pm's

[sketch3]

and the collab is named nothing..because none of the writers involved are toy..
puleease im straight wack
call it '' that toy sketch and his tallented friends''

[AyteYourCookies]

Desipher - dope
Bigel - Illness
Kase - Looks good, some of your bars are thinner than others, try to even them up.


http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg57/AyteYourCookies/scan00021.jpg
bump

[Mass Appeal]

hey guys

Ayte..looking good man..you gots good flowing...maybe fix the straight bar on the T yah know...make it so its one straight flowin bar :)

skiv..hey guess what...you do simples..to get good at bars...your not good at bars...s use your brain and work out what you need to do

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-16.jpg

and a lil off topic but im so happy about this..

i did the greatest shot EVER on Call Of Duty 4 erlier..it was like...the whole map...i got positioned in a great sniper spot....looked down my scope...see a bitch like the whole map length away from me...took a deep breath...WHAAAMMMMMMMMM 3 second bullet travel time to hit him right in the fucking head that bitches blood flew 4 feet backwards onto the wall behind him oh yeah :D

hehe peace guys ! :D

[-ShAmEE-]

should of video that shit.

EVERYONE THIS COLAB WILL HAPPEN SOON, WHEN I SAY SOON IT WILL HAPPEN IN THIS MONTH.

I HAVE PHYSICS, GRAPHICS, ART, GEOGRAPHY COURSEWORK TO DO THAT IS IN FOR THE NEXT TWO WEEKS.

IT FOR UNI, OR COLLEGE WHAT EVER U CALL IT.

[mosezone]

skiv-structure's OK except for the E, but i'm just not really feeling it. maybe thicken them up a little bit.
ayte-feeling it all except the T and sooorrrtt of the E
mass-that esnet piece is fucking ill

sketch from earlier. the reason all my sketches have no color is because i just sketch them out at school. if i'm feeling them later, i'll color them. the M is fucked up, but other than that, crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00388.jpg

[dub255]

mose-I think it looks good, ur right about the M sticking out a bit from the rest though

Random throw advice and crits please...i'm a toy i know, gotta start somewhere

[Chump]

http://i29.tinypic.com/sordyu.jpg
New throw...
crits/suggestions?
mose- i would fatten the bottum of the S alittle.

[dub255]

I like it chump you should add a brightly colored force field, i think it would look cool

[Darkeist]

Honestly, its very simple and plain. Reminds me of every other throw.

[Chump]

well simple and plain is what im going for on this one...
I have a throwie thats CHUMP but i m looking for a real simple throw i could do real fast.

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Chump just use the first 2 letters from your normal throw or ppl will think its a diff person
Moes something about ur S just seems un perportional i dunno how to tell u to fix it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00759.jpg
crits?

[Rambooboo]

mass appeal like the style
EVASION like the colors

[Chump]

Chump just use the first 2 letters from your normal throw or ppl will think its a diff person


I am...
CH
CHUMP....
Evasion- look good

[whatadizaster!]

i think he meant the style of your first two letters

[sex without condoms]

Evasion that was the stupidest statement ever.
if people had to use the same style on everything then there would be no development of anything. if you wanna be truly dope you should be able to rock multiple styles.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Chump just use the first 2 letters from your normal throw or ppl will think its a diff person
Moes something about ur S just seems un perportional i dunno how to tell u to fix it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00759.jpg
crits?
your tryin too hard.;)

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/1200000004cbf5d0/1/95/xqOo8dNk3z9x4G32dT_8z_-7e9UpoAaU.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/W3cmlBkg7j-BqgTv5EGXvHMqYqaNF9eS?referrer=hlnk)
latest sketch

[atlok7]

Evasion that was the stupidest statement ever.
if people had to use the same style on everything then there would be no development of anything. if you wanna be truly dope you should be able to rock multiple styles.

FOR SURE

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/1200000004cbf5d0/1/95/xqOo8dNk3z9x4G32dT_8z_-7e9UpoAaU.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/W3cmlBkg7j-BqgTv5EGXvHMqYqaNF9eS?referrer=hlnk)
latest sketch


Bump end of page
(is that still allowed?)

[hazetheone]

word.
its so bland.
like add something to make it look atleast an incey bit original.

over the past few pages there have been " dopes " " ills " given out to the wackest of people...dont lick arses if someone says they like YOUR peice..it aint helping anyone

Sex..Over..now thats ill..

and the collab is named nothing..because none of the writers involved are toy..

see this statement is unnecessary and no one who is not involved cares about the colab just shut up and lets see it
till then keep your unnecessary remarks to yourself

[ESKiMO2]

i dont know what amk was talkin about being bland. i thought the letters were hot.

[hazetheone]

hes just being a dick
because he has been on this site for more months than me and has more posts
but thank you

[AnteUp]

for mah babeeee amk <3...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/03-04-08_1805-1.jpg
CRITS...EXCHANGE WIT AMKAHH
sick-simples bro...
10 min..btw

[hazetheone]

looks good but it would be better i think if you used a ruler

[a maze]

http://i32.tinypic.com/141t8ba.jpg
penism
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zexp5i.jpg
just a freestyle i think

Bumping these, fresh. I really dig that first one. Keep it up, man.

and AMK- don't hate on someone's style just because you may not like the person, haze's letters are nice, not bland or unoriginal. What's the point in even posting shit like that?

[Panda Jerk]

yeah those letters are dope i like the second one throw some 3D on it would look sick

[Fatso]

Bumping these, fresh. I really dig that first one. Keep it up, man.

and AMK- don't hate on someone's style just because you may not like the person, haze's letters are nice, not bland or unoriginal. What's the point in even posting shit like that?

ha its because for a year straight he rocked the exact same bland letters and couldnt rock anything else, no worries jus ignore him

[AnteUp]

AYO STOP TALKIN SHIT ON AMK JUS CAUSE HE AINT HERE. MOST OF YALL NO HE COULD STRAIGHT BURN YOU. SO DONT TALK SHIT, ITS A WASTE OF ENERGY... HE ROCKED BARS FOR A YEAR CAUSE THATS WAT YOUR SUPPOSED TO DO. JUMP OFF HIS NUTS.

[a maze]

No one is talking shit on amk. Do you even fucking read these posts?

[hazetheone]

im staying out of this one

[rayseone]

haze- your letters have the ideas, you just dont have great foundations, in a coupla months or so that shit will look pretty hot tho, take your e for instnce, it looks so awkward, your c and a are the best letters

ante - dont really feel it at all, maybe cuz its different i dunno, just doesnt float my boat, and dont try to just start shit for no reason chill man

some wackkk pen freestyle from school crits i gues?
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9494/dsc00461fn9.jpg

[a maze]

seyar- looks good, man. Although the bars are a little to straight for my liking. Still nice. Whatever happened to our battle?

[Fatso]

AYO STOP TALKIN SHIT ON AMK JUS CAUSE HE AINT HERE. MOST OF YALL NO HE COULD STRAIGHT BURN YOU. SO DONT TALK SHIT, ITS A WASTE OF ENERGY... HE ROCKED BARS FOR A YEAR CAUSE THATS WAT YOUR SUPPOSED TO DO. JUMP OFF HIS NUTS.

haha i think YOU need to jump off his nuts buddy haha funniest thing ive seen in so long :D :D :rolleyes:

[AnteUp]

HAHA... who are you maze and you fatso? i aint even seen you around...lmao
amk's bin gettin shit from yall a hella lot and frankly its extremely childish, stop polluting the thread

[a maze]

haha i think YOU need to jump off his nuts buddy haha funniest thing ive seen in so long :D :D :rolleyes:

yeah, I was gonna say that exact thing, just didn't wanna get him riled up.

[rayseone]

i dunno what happened to it man i posted it in toy battles like 2 days ago?, if its not accepted by tomorow ill post it again

[b SQUARED 08]

decided to scan this one for once:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4629/fatsoub2.jpg
fatso one

Bump this hot shit! Hit the big boys thread fo sho.

[a maze]

seyar-kay, thats cool.

Ante- stop trying to start shit. Shut the hell up, this is for flicks and crits, just mind your own shit and quit trying to suck up to amk. You remind me of knucks, haha.

Fatso, DO NOT take your stuff to the big boy thread, these toys don't know what they're talking about, keep it here for now.

[AnteUp]

seyar-kay, thats cool.

Ante- stop trying to start shit. Shut the hell up, this is for flicks and crits, just mind your own shit and quit trying to suck up to amk. You remind me of knucks, haha.


take your own advice, and im not sucking up, its annoying how yall always try to start beef...(this is the first time i've started beef wit anyone except wit swoe) anywhooo...

seyar-its to box like for my liking, the r doesnt flow with the peice at all its too rounded for the peice

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Evasion that was the stupidest statement ever.
if people had to use the same style on everything then there would be no development of anything. if you wanna be truly dope you should be able to rock multiple styles.
wut i ment is he shouldnt be rockin 2 dif throw styles at once, could confuse the shit outta ppl

Chump just use the first 2 letters from your normal throw or ppl will think its a diff person
Moes something about ur S just seems un perportional i dunno how to tell u to fix it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00759.jpg
crits?

bump

[a maze]

take your own advice, and im not sucking up, its annoying how yall always try to start beef...(this is the first time i've started beef wit anyone except wit swoe) anywhooo...

seyar-its to box like for my liking, the r doesnt flow with the peice at all its too rounded for the peice

I critted in my post you idiot... -_-

and I usually never start beef, it's just when stupid shit gets brought up, like your RED CAPS post.

[AnteUp]

maze... i dont want to hear anymore... you and your fuckin crew are annoying post whores... (with exceptions)

evasion-simples bro, dont jump into harder stuff already

[a maze]

shit always results in dissing someones crew. Shame, shame. I'm just asking you to quit riding Amk's dick. Lets settle this with a battle? you choose word/due date.

[sex without condoms]

maze there's no point, you win already.

[hazetheone]

i like that seyar a bunch the round part of the r kind of throws off all the uniform straight bars

[Fatso]

a maze shut the hell up, please dont give me advice, ive been around here alot longer than you if you didnt know.

edit: and take your own advice about the big boy thread, just seen that wackness you posted in there

[a maze]

well I wasn't trying to sound rude, but your shit isn't ready for the big boys thread yet. But whatever.

[Fatso]

well I wasn't trying to sound rude, but your shit isn't ready for the big boys thread yet. But whatever.

kid. get over yourself. seriously. your opinion is worth shit to me. get better and maybe i'd consider hearing you but for now shut the hell up.

[hazetheone]

no he is telling you its good but not that good
you just got your ego talked up by some toy with like 6 posts
maze burns you anyways
and no one cares how long ''youve been around here'' it doesn make you better and has nothing to do with artistic abbilities

[atlok7]

damn stop bitching i jsut wanna c some pics

[Fatso]

no he is telling you its good but not that good
you just got your ego talked up by some toy with like 6 posts
maze burns you anyways
and no one cares how long ''youve been around here'' it doesn make you better and has nothing to do with artistic abbilities

another wannabe thread king with minimal talent and skill, ok buddy you keep on doing that wack shit and whoring the thread, ill be sketching and getting better, instead of increasing my post count and e-cred, you fags take these forums way too seriously :rolleyes::rolleyes:

[hazetheone]

a few of my favorites that i have on hand
http://i29.tinypic.com/v3j5no.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/n5limx.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/20ql1et.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/dq3sbp.jpg
edit:i think i burned fatso with this post
he said i had no talent
lets battle

[sketch3]

ladies ladies i aint smellt this much pussy scince i droped tuna fish at my back door everyone just shut up and post flicks
bumpo so im not flickless

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/28/spekox6.jpg

[a maze]

Hey fatso, see this?-


name is taken.. and i'd lose the crown, because the real fatso definitely reigns over you. http://visualorgasm.com/photos/vi-fatso002.jpg http://visualorgasm.com/photos/fatso023.jpg

yeah, thats in the BB thread, where you posted your whack sketch.

heres a char so I'm not flickless-
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/charbattlewithevade.jpg

[Fatso]

:) you guys are too funny, "lets battle" ha! you wanna arm wrestle too or something? seriously, i know im better than your pathetic ass you aint even on my level buddy :) feel free to clutter the thread with more of your wackness though :)

[sketch3]

:) you guys are too funny, "lets battle" ha! you wanna arm wrestle too or something? seriously, i know im better than your pathetic ass you aint even on my level buddy :) feel free to clutter the thread with more of your wackness though :)
if ur this sure of urself, get of the fucking net u dont need crits
not taking sides i hate all of u, just everyone shadup ur face

[hazetheone]

:) you guys are too funny, "lets battle" ha! you wanna arm wrestle too or something? seriously, i know im better than your pathetic ass you aint even on my level buddy :) feel free to clutter the thread with more of your wackness though :)

yea
i like your no fill crayon outline pieces too toy
at least get a new color
red is played out

[RFI. SPit]

Cool it down you little girls.

[Fatso]

heres what i noticed:
haze loves mazes cock, maze also loves hazes cock, alot, ante loves amks cock, amk thinks antes cock is ok, poor ante
glad to see amk still holding it down with his king of the toy thread campaign reaching new heights, although you still ride alot of the better guys dicks, now you at least found people to ride your dick as well! congrats old friend! also glad to see the new spawn of wackness in the form of kfc, haze and maze you guys keep riding that dick! this thread is hillarious, its all about peeps in their internet crews and all the massive dick riding that takes place within each crew. ha nah kidding love you all :):):):)

[fonone]

sketch - youve improved alot since i was here a while ago, fix up that S though i think the bottom extension is too long,

haze - think ive seen it all before but nice non the less

amaze - nice charac, real fresh.

its been a while since ive posted a skecth in here... long while. any crits?

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4600/mar0599bv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sketch3]

make that last letter more clear, and thankx for the crits. been bumpin that sketch for weeksand its the first i got

[hazetheone]

decided to scan this one for once:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4629/fatsoub2.jpg
fatso one

bump this hot one
think smart roseart
nice fill
fonone-looks good but extentions should never cover other letters man just put the i on top of that if you realy want it there

[Fatso]

a few of my favorites that i have on hand
http://i29.tinypic.com/v3j5no.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/n5limx.jpg
lets battle
didnt realize you were so good at filling yourself buddy :D:eek::D:eek::rolleyes:

edit: that heart is just too cute bud :)

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/newst.jpg

you guys talk too much.

[hazetheone]

at least i try player
the first ones marker was shit
but you dont want to hear my excuses
lets battle and see who is good at fills
i like how you lef out the good fill

[a maze]

Haze's shit is better than any of your shit, fatso. Just drop it. I want in on this battle

Over- that throw is fire, man.

[JETPACK!!]

i cant believe i read this, it drained the energy from my eyeballs and fingertips

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture042.jpg
Ran out of space for the T :(

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture043.jpg
Blehhhh


Shaddap all of yous. Remember, this is the toyyyyy forummmmmm

*edit* Aww, I missed all the cool beef, everyone posts too fast...
Yer throw is pretty Over...

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0286.jpg
new throw crits one liner

[Desipher]

:) you guys are too funny, "lets battle" ha! you wanna arm wrestle too or something? seriously, i know im better than your pathetic ass you aint even on my level buddy :) feel free to clutter the thread with more of your wackness though :)
haha what level ur shit is average like the rest of us u think ur so good fuckin battle me ur shit aint great stop acting like ur the shit

kfc son!

[Fatso]

at least i try player
the first ones marker was shit
but you dont want to hear my excuses
lets battle and see who is good at fills
i like how you lef out the good fill

left out the good fill? HA more like picked out the ugliest two :rolleyes: you funny, all this battling business, kid you a joke, i know you want so desperately to try and prove something, but your not on my level, maybe when your a bit less wack eh? in the meantime you and amaze should work on being a bit less generic and boring with the shit you do, and you seem to love talking about your fills, well lemme tell you. they suck ass. id rather look at outlines than have to look at that sloppy mess you call a fill

[hazetheone]

AHAHAHA
im sorry for this little session everyone
let it be known a toy blew threw with a few posts bumped fatso and told him to go to the big boy forum so he got cocky
whose realy to blame
TOYS

[sketch3]

just wen u thaught it was safe to post in the toy forum...
e beef strikes from the depths like a hungry great white

ilikepie, ialsolikepie, ialsolike ilikepies letters keep it up
the bottom one isn as good but keep fucking with it and it may develop into dopness

[a maze]

I like pie- That top one is too dope.

[Fatso]

i think ima rep KFC now actually, that would be hillarious!

[Panda Jerk]

could i get some crits

[sketch3]

sure thing fury jerk guy,
the most important thing to remember about oneliners is...
dont forget the basics, peoples prportions,spacing and structer go down the shitter just cuss there concetrating on making it one line

[letsg0skate]

haha I think it's funny how everyone wants too battle to prove who's better, but there are so many toys voting in the battles that it doesn't prove anything. Also who cares about fills for sketches. If you wanna do em, do em. If you don't, don't. EVERYONE JUST STFUGTFOBBQ

[Panda Jerk]

that was my first time ive ever done that

[letsg0skate]

that was my first time ive ever done that
that's what she said.

[Fatso]

oh btw KFC FOR LIFE HOMIE REPRESENT, i wish i had an avator and a cool sig and a high post count, my e-cred is just killin me right now, its cool though, cause haze and maze need to resort to dick riding to gain e-cred, they cheat though, they jus give eachother the load of e-cred, i wish i had e-cred :( :D:eek::mad:;):cool:

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture042.jpg
Ran out of space for the T :(

Gosh darnit, so much posting, whenever I get around to posting anything, it gets washed away by chit chat.

*edit*
I dunno what Fatso is trippin' over, his piece was nice, but it's not amazing or anything.... Hush up, kthnxbye

[sketch3]

u lot need to shut ur fucking noise,
its bad wen uv got mr 5300 posts telling u to stop.
why are u bikkering about whos better?
its the toy forum, we all suck. were all improving

pie- thicken up the bar tha touches the extension of the g,
move the extension down and inwerds to the bar, so it looks more like the s and e

panda do 50 billion more then post wat u thnk is ur best one

[Panda Jerk]

thats waay sick

and skate hahaha

[IlikePie]

pie- thicken up the bar tha touches the extension of the g,
move the extension down and inwerds to the bar, so it looks more like the s and e

Not an S, another R, but I forgot to outline part of it :(

[sketch3]

the last letter? cant se an r, but a gully s

[IlikePie]

Ohhh, that's my ugly E :( I did the bottom all wrong, 'cuz I needed to finish it fast for a battle, and tried to conserve space.... Fuck, I fail at graffiti :'(

[sketch3]

wats it suposed to say? cuss im reading a decent kegrst
but i smoked my self parapleagic last year so dont lissten to meee

[a maze]

I think its Kegret

unless there is two R's, then Regret

[IlikePie]

Regret.... I'm a total failure :P

[sketch3]

heres wat i would do for a smexy s
get ready for wack paint diagram
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7764/kerg042kh9.jpg

[a maze]

OOO, you almost went over his shit!

Just make the first R look like the second.

[IlikePie]

Aww, part of my sweet handies got capped :P
Thanks, took me a second, but I understand what you're doing now. Hahaha, Dope xtension here

[Roolete]

that's what she said.

HAHA when i saw his post this is exactly what i was thinking. i wasnt going to post though.

hahaha

[SenTheFirst]

ilikepie- thats lookin super solid. lots of potential
over- looks dope, you progressed a lot
fonone- some of those bars are too fat

been using vs to practice my throws

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow3.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow2.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow-1.jpg

[Chump]

http://i29.tinypic.com/sordyu.jpg
New throw...
crits/suggestions?
mose- i would fatten the bottum of the S alittle.
didnt get much crits 3 pages back lol
bump

[PureSole]

ilikepie, its looking good and go with what sketch said

[SenTheFirst]

ilikepie- thats lookin super solid. lots of potential
over- looks dope, you progressed a lot
fonone- some of those bars are too fat

been using vs to practice my throws

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow3.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow2.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/newthrow-1.jpg


bottomed
already crit'd everyone

[Chump]

http://i29.tinypic.com/sordyu.jpgdidnt get much crits 3 pages back lol
bump
bump
new page

[Desipher]

was just fucking around no beef ilikepie i was just stoned n needed something to do i know its wack but w.e i suck at drawing on comp i fail :(
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/kerg042kh9.jpg

[FABLE IR CRU]

SEN-Nice tags
SWORE-u have some real good stuff
CHUMP-Likin the C make the H a little bigger & rounder

[fonone]

sketch - youve improved alot since i was here a while ago, fix up that S though i think the bottom extension is too long,

haze - think ive seen it all before but nice non the less

amaze - nice charac, real fresh.

its been a while since ive posted a skecth in here... long while. any crits?

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4600/mar0599bv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sigh one crit..

[-Leski]

Chump, loose the neck fat on the C, fatten up the H, and bring down the angle on both letters tear drop thing. My two cents.

Sen; Loving the green one... cant really say much to crit it. think its looking good.

[Xyk]

fonone, thats looking pretty good. i dotn think its ever a good idea to stretch the 3d all teh way back, so maybe cut it off next time. letters and fill is good thoh.

[Haz-E]

LMAO fatso your all wrong im the king of the toy thread n everybuddy knows it lmao

ne ways yeah yoo fonone that looks ight keep working on it
and SWORE THAT looks a hell of alot like SbombS in the big boy thread w.e im happy to be proved wrong

[Xyk]

trying out a new style, trying to advance...

crits appreciated

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00012.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00022.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

aight.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-17.jpg

bump for my nig ga whats

[roa]

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/roa613/poop002.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

you guys are still arguing? thats fucking dumb. where the fucks a mod when you need one.

[Mass Appeal]

roa that R is staright up bitten from RELA !

[roa]

rela? pic??

[Mass Appeal]

gaaah sorry man i went off my high horse..sorry man..decent peice..the S is kinda throwie like

[FeTuS]

first post...
this is my tag, prolly gonna be my first throwie\burner too. did it up reaaal quick just wanted to do the outline...
looking for crits!

[IlikePie]

was just fucking around no beef ilikepie i was just stoned n needed something to do i know its wack but w.e i suck at drawing on comp i fail :(
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/kerg042kh9.jpg

You know who grinds my gears? That nikka Swore :p

[Derogatory9o5]

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q242/vungoh1/scan.jpg

screwed up most of the second throw.... w/e also sorry its sideways

Critzzz?

[MESN[905]]

drop the belio face on your O there bud

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2639/hpim0316oz9.jpg

what throws the best of the 3?

[Derogatory9o5]

;1029455']drop the belio face on your O there bud

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2639/hpim0316oz9.jpg

what throws the best of the 3?

g2 say 2 , and.. ya I guess its like his , vung showed me but ya I'll drop it , I don't paint the oner part neways.

[Desipher]

LMAO fatso your all wrong im the king of the toy thread n everybuddy knows it lmao

ne ways yeah yoo fonone that looks ight keep working on it
and SWORE THAT looks a hell of alot like SbombS in the big boy thread w.e im happy to be proved wrong
man that looks nothing like sbombs his shit looks like a crappy version of slob
he got cool characters illl give him that but that sketch was just a simple version of this with a dif r and a modded s
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture108.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture126.jpg
if anything my styles influenced by big boy killa kasp tck not that azteka kid

[Xyk]

trying out a new style, trying to advance...

crits appreciated

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00012.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00022.jpg

BUMP

desipher - thats lookin good, maybe clean it up a bit, second sketch doesnt look as good as the first

[Derogatory9o5]

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q242/vungoh1/scan.jpg

screwed up most of the second throw.... w/e also sorry its sideways

Critzzz?


bump fer crits

[*cept*]

BUMP

desipher - thats lookin good, maybe clean it up a bit, second sketch doesnt look as good as the first

haha i actually really dig the second one. keep it up

[roa]

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/roa613/poop002.jpg


bump for crits

[MESN[905]]

Ahhhhhhhh My Letters Are Meelllltttttttiiiiiiiinnnnnngggggggg

[scary letters]

bars o bars!

for the round robin, gonna color it soon..

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs29/f/2008/065/1/b/physics_by_bigel.jpg

[a maze]

Super duper ill.

[sex without condoms]

El, i love you, so clean and those sharper points on your letters make it pop so much more
ROA i really feel that, your basic letter structure is there, just lose the face and change the R a bit and focus on solid letters before adding all them drips and such.

Round robbin entry, not done yet http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170117.jpg

I have fallen in love with the letters, idk if i may change my name.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/170131.jpg

[a maze]

Word, sex. Same word I was going to write after I changed my name from makr, haha. Your Kram piece is hot, I'd keep that name.

[Tokenkaligreens]

ya taht kram is hot. and el your shit never seems to diapoint.

[sex without condoms]

Word, sex. Same word I was going to write after I changed my name from makr, haha. Your Kram piece is hot, I'd keep that name.

see like i totally want to it's just the fact that i hate k's and m's in tosses and i have prolly 2,000 raoe stickers and i really don't feel like just trading them away.
im prolly just gonna keep sketching both names and use it as a backup

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0287.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0288.jpg

im really feeling the first one
and i really want CRITS pleeeeeeaaaaasee

[sex without condoms]

is it just me or do other people get pissed and or hate it when kids ask for crits?

cause i really fucking hate it.

[SAID]

el, get the fuck outta here honestly, your shit kills.
sex cant wait to see that fill
i guess ill post up my round robin entry here too ahahaha
JAGI..
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9527/jagibatyh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9527/jagibatyh9.b97d14375c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=512&i=jagibatyh9.jpg)
what you guys think?

[Panda Jerk]

well when i say crits a just want people to tell me what they think

[Rambooboo]

scary letters that is some dope shit

[SAID]

give em to get em.
honestly, is it that complicated?

[sex without condoms]

well i guess you're gonna be disappointed cause im not filling it, i thought it looked proper without it.
and it's not needed for the battle IMO i got this shit on lock

[Panda Jerk]

yeah for reals

yore peice is sick by the way

[SAID]

ahaha its all good i thought you werent done.
id do a forcefield in a purple or something.
looks dope though.

EDIT: directed to sex.

[sex without condoms]

well when i say crits a just want people to tell me what they think

no shit. that is what a critique is btw.

i was just stating my opinion on it, not trying to beef or anything, it just really bugs me. that's why i never ask for crits. if someone wants to crit me, they can. if i want to crit someone, i will. but if i don't deem it necessary than fuck that shit.

[SAID]

well said.

[Desipher]

el, get the fuck outta here honestly, your shit kills.
sex cant wait to see that fill
i guess ill post up my round robin entry here too ahahaha
JAGI..
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9527/jagibatyh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9527/jagibatyh9.b97d14375c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=512&i=jagibatyh9.jpg)
what you guys think?
feeling the color scheme can see some white lines tho the G could use some work other then that im feelin it

[SAID]

yeaaah i know man my g's are hella weak.
thanks man.

[mosezone]

trying out a new style, trying to advance...

crits appreciated

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00022.jpg

feeling this one. you've got some pretty original style on the pieces i've seen from you.

[SAID]

yeah dude, you got that style packed.

[Evasion Of Invasion]

not rly feelin the Rek piece
and SAID not rly feelin the G rest is pretty hot tho
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00760.jpg
character did in psychology

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Scan374.jpg

Another battle.Says WOTSE.

XYK- It's cool but it looks like it would be a bitch to paint.I'm not being rude but it looks like you fluked a decent piece.You can often tell if people are toy or not by their handstyle and yours is crap.I suggest you just do some REK simples.Also that name is played the fuck out.I must've seen that name about 100 times.

[Derogatory9o5]

El and sex doope as always and that round robin entry is tiiiiight said , just maybe add a dark backround or something to make the colors pop. wotse is pretty tight to drak

[sex without condoms]

yo drak fucking marry me.
all your shit is top fucking notch.
keep it the eff up manggggg

[SAID]

that fucken donut made my day drakula.

[sketch3]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Scan374.jpg

Another battle.Says WOTSE.

XYK- It's cool but it looks like it would be a bitch to paint.I'm not being rude but it looks like you fluked a decent piece.You can often tell if people are toy or not by their handstyle and yours is crap.I suggest you just do some REK simples.Also that name is played the fuck out.I must've seen that name about 100 times.
gully
the fill brings me back

[Derogatory9o5]

XYK that style is deff working for ya , but probably should not write rek.. mad common name.

[a maze]

see like i totally want to it's just the fact that i hate k's and m's in tosses and i have prolly 2,000 raoe stickers and i really don't feel like just trading them away.
im prolly just gonna keep sketching both names and use it as a backup

Yeah, I feel you sex. You got that Raoe throw down pat.

And about those raoe slaps just laying around? You could trade some to me. ;)

Drakula- That makes me wanna eat a donut. So sick.

[AnteUp]

maze there's no point, you win already.
ouch were did that come from? i thought we were cool??

well anyways maze, i have an exchange wit sewr, i have round robin, i have my peice for the advanced toys...etc. i'll take you up on it later just remind me

[a maze]

thats fine if you wanna follow through with the battle ante, but I have no beef with you, I'm over it. :)

[Drakula]

Safe for all the comments.

Donuts FTW!

[sex without condoms]

i dont have any beef with you ante i just really despise 3d graff and thats what you do so maze would have had my vote. it wasn't you i just can't stand 3d graffiti

[AnteUp]

i dont have any beef with you ante i just really despise 3d graff and thats what you do so maze would have had my vote. it wasn't you i just can't stand 3d graffiti

buh buh babe... i still rock my simpulssss :) i jus love 3d also :) i dont see why everyone hates it :(

maze-if you didnt kno, im uber bi-polar...so im over it too, maybe a friendly battle later?

[a maze]

sure man, friendly battle it is. Hopefully I'll remember after this round robin blows over, haha.

[AnteUp]

same here... i think i might rock a simple style in the battle instead of 3d im not sure tho...

[atlok7]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8835/caisrpurplewhiteml1.jpg
tell me what you think

[Evasion Of Invasion]

not rly feelin the Rek piece
and SAID not rly feelin the G rest is pretty hot tho
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00760.jpg
character did in psychology


http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00762.jpg
crits on my ish?

Atlok7 - likin the 3D and effect inside the letters

[AnteUp]

fuck me running atlok...lets get married...no one will kno i promise!!

that is sicker than an infant with stds and a dirty diaper

[atlok7]

ha thanks man, wait till u c the one i did for my pigeon battle. its 2x cooler.

[Desipher]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00762.jpg
crits on my ish?

Atlok7 - likin the 3D and effect inside the letters
stop being so emo

[remos]

haha
flick for talking
sorry its sideways
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/img038.jpg

[SAID]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8835/caisrpurplewhiteml1.jpg
tell me what you think

BUMP BUMP BUMP
dope colors.

[AZTEKA]

Yo cais that shit looks dope homie, letters flow well, bump that sketch.

[Panda Jerk]

yeah dude thats way dope

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0287.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0288.jpg

im really feeling the first one
crits if possable



bump to new page

[atlok7]

yo panda- those look like the style i used a long time ago, like a year ago at least. how long have u been writing?

[sex without condoms]

finished my battle entry, took peoples' advice :]
you can see me sneaking in on the left :0D

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg

[Panda Jerk]

yo panda- those look like the style i used a long time ago, like a year ago at least. how long have u been writing?

about a 2in a half but ive just started getting into this website a couple of months ago

[mosezone]

atlok-fresh letters
evasion-not really feeling the emo shit
panda-def. feeling the first more than the second
sex-loving everything but the quotations

2 fucking wack sketches from today. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Picture002.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Picture001-1.jpg

[Nem]

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/gesus513.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/gesus512.jpg < this turned abstract.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/gesus514.jpg

[atlok7]

i lika da seconda tha betta

[Slic89]

-Nem, im feelin the second, but the first one's fuckin dope!
-Moes, i love the swirls n green for the first
-sex w/o condoms, a little of tilt in ur letters might be gout(?)
-Panda, i like the letters better on first sketch but i like the consistency of the second one better dude
-Remos, i like the one liner above ur tag
-Evade, not feeling the first one at all man, n yea may be draw a human character with that style(?)
- and atlok man, i really got nothing to say to that (respect). may be a few modification on I n R(?)

[OfesOfor]

crappy 10 minute thing

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/DekronJedi/Gome2004013.jpg

[MESN[905]]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Scan374.jpg

Another battle.Says WOTSE.

XYK- It's cool but it looks like it would be a bitch to paint.I'm not being rude but it looks like you fluked a decent piece.You can often tell if people are toy or not by their handstyle and yours is crap.I suggest you just do some REK simples.Also that name is played the fuck out.I must've seen that name about 100 times.

bump

[OfesOfor]

crappy 10 minute thing

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/DekronJedi/Gome2004013.jpg

bumping for whatever reason

[whatadizaster!]

moes - the top one is the best. the S looks funny though
nem - that C <33
ofesofor - make the picture bigger or darken the lines. the 3d on the first letter is off

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg66/dinseone/sombe.jpg
im having trouble with the M

[roa]

finished my battle entry, took peoples' advice :]
you can see me sneaking in on the left :0D

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg

exchange???

lemme know what name

[atlok7]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8835/caisrpurplewhiteml1.jpg
tell me what you think

..

[hazetheone]

dude that caisr has to be the best thing you have posted in here and im in love with that other stuff keep that shit up
just some fun at school trying out the new c
http://i29.tinypic.com/53tes3.jpg
wotes-thats beautiful and bump the donut
osefor-i cant see the pic
whatadizazter-the 3d is wack but the letters are there
sex-the overall is good but the s realy doesnt fit and it could have
edit:not my entry but im getting used to the werd
http://i30.tinypic.com/2d0yijs.jpg

[AnteUp]

cant wait to see it bro, gonna be sick (atlok)

oh i didnt give crits... i love the c, and the s...mah faaaav...the only thing thats wrong is the bar on the first A, its curved wich i didnt notice at first glance, it still flows but a straight bar would be better

[atlok7]

yo ante. thanks brua. ha your signature is tight, im listening to that album right now

[OfesOfor]

resized and darkend lines

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/DekronJedi/tmpphpupsXwK.jpg

[hazetheone]

the r is covering too much of the e and the s is a little thin

[OfesOfor]

yeah e is kind of weak
thanks bro

[garbage down tha way]

cais-im fucking in love with your 'S', 3d, and extentions.

camer- i like where your style is going, but i think you should experiment a little more now that you have a feeling for where youre going. just dont go overboard.

Reos-you've got something going, mess with the s and r a little, with the r in particular, im not too keen on how the left leg gets fatter as it goes down, reminds me of bellbottom jeans and im not a fan of those either. the top of the s is kind of odd, and im not sure about the skinny line in the middle quite yet, maybe if you mess with the top, the middle part would fit.

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Haze i like the style with the word aint seen it like that yet lookin pretty dope
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00766.jpg
another pen character today crits? workin a realistic style

[Xyk]

trying out a new style, trying to advance...

crits appreciated

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00012.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00022.jpg


BUMP FOR THE THIRD FUCKIN TIME WITH NO CRITS. FUCKIN CRIT THE GUYS ABOVE YOU AIGHT?

Evade - Interesting charac, perhaps try giving it some shades or something.


Camer - That looks alright. the middle of the M could use spme work imo.

Ofes ofor - looking good, but the 3d looks really fcked

[OfesOfor]

- its not 3d .. its more of a semi background

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0287.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0288.jpg

im really feeling the first one
crits if possable



bump to new page

last bump i swerz

[IlikePie]

You should try out some [IMG] tags....

[-Leski]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3833/geski3qi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any advice on were to take this? I really like fat and round simples.

Xyk; Second one is really good. The first letter is half way between a A and a R. Needs to be more one way or the other, otherwise its looking dope.

Camer; The C and A are strong as fuck. The other letters are pretty mild...

[Dying to live]

the L looks like a G and the K looks like it has down syndrome

http://a996.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/126/l_1980f9628c4cfb1239d15bae2d3243eb.gif
trying extensions cause my piece looked to plain whatcha thinkkkks?

[Xyk]

Leski - Thanks for actually critting before asking for them. I reaelly like the E, but im having trouble telling what the last letter is.

Akel - That looks pretty solid, marker and color that one.

[Desipher]

the L looks like a G and the K looks like it has down syndrome

http://a996.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/126/l_1980f9628c4cfb1239d15bae2d3243eb.gif
trying extensions cause my piece looked to plain whatcha thinkkkks?
those lil dots remind me of the ish i rock on mine
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture152.jpg

[Rambooboo]

you should color that it would look dope

[Dying to live]

those lil dots remind me of the ish i rock on mine
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture152.jpg
lotsa cats rock them i was trying to be trendy ;D
but bump thats dope

[Panda Jerk]

You should try out some [IMG] tags....

yeah i would but i dont know how to resize.

[-Leski]

Alright, I'll keep working on it.
The I and K need a lot of work yet to fit in with the GES... the GES still needs more tweaking... I'll post some more of it in a few days.

The first letter is a G, not a L, thats why it looks like a G. ;)

Vibe; Ditch all but the black and white one. Its pretty good. Keep working on that style and keep its single colours for now.
Green fill, black outline, green force field, ext.

[Desipher]

ya dying to live its all good man just thot id point it out :P probly wont ever finish that sketch lol

[atlok7]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/715/caisrpurplewhiteml11yq8.jpg
bump got ne crits?

[JETPACK!!]

akel, that looks good. maybe bring out the left arrow a bit more so its super smhexi? im just tryin to find something to crit.. haha

vibe, im diggin the first one work on the B, bring it down a bit. and the last one has potential if its worked on

xyk - it looks good, i like the use of paralellograms? if thats what the crooked rectangle shape is called. keep it up

atlok - ive got no crits for you my friend, but the question is.. do you have crits for me? haha

anyways, heres my shitty shit shit.
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3902/bels13az8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

on another topic, i got my results for my GED exam and i passed with flying colors. i did better than 90% of highschool graduates according to my wack grading sheet.

[Mass Appeal]

atlok..some of the little doodads are overused..like the little Inline Square things...it kinda confuses yah..also all the little lone dots..there are far too many...just do one straight full peice with jus one outline then we can see what your letters are really like. :)

This WAS the peice i was gonna do for MENTE...but its pretty darn whack for the best writers on this fucking whole forum...so ima do a new one...anyways jus posting it so i aint flickless

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/j-1.jpg

[atlok7]

jet pack- l like that style. mabie if u outlined it in black pen and colo0red it it would b sweeter

[Drakula]

Vibe the first and last are aight.I say stick to them for a while.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Picture1.png

Haven't tryed anything too complex in a while so I put some work into this outline.Might get back into this sort of style but ill still be rocking that simple shit.I dunno about everyone else but I sort of prefer nice bubbley funky pieces that dont need arrows or extensions.

[JETPACK!!]

i need to make my shit flow more imo. but whatevs, it'll get there.

word mass, youve deff done better.. but thats not bad at all, it probably would look a lot better if you finished it.

drak, thats looking hot, ive always been a fan of similar styles of that. your Rs a bit bigger than the rest an your extensions are tiny imo. but it still looks good

[There is a deeper meaning]

crits please messed up on colorings and p
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/nikeplayer1305/graff.jpg

[Desipher]

no comment

[sketch3]

Deeper Meaning Dopest Peice Iv Ever Seen, Get Out Of The Toy Forum

[There is a deeper meaning]

for real??

[sketch3]

no its horrible, read the new to graff thread

[Desipher]

Lmfao!!!!!!!

[There is a deeper meaning]

any advice on letters

[sketch3]

read this thread,
all of it
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

[whatadizaster!]

crits please messed up on colorings and p
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/nikeplayer1305/graff.jpg

how about dont use color and dont write in cursive
and do what sketch said.

[IlikePie]

Vibe the first and last are aight.I say stick to them for a while.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Picture1.png


Bump this.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture044.jpg

Weak N, light outline, whatevuhh, for the round robin...

[a maze]

Deeper Meaning Dopest Peice Iv Ever Seen, Get Out Of The Toy Forum

You KNOW this isn't needed, sketch. Give constructive crits, man. :D

[Chump]

but it sure was funny lol

[SCIEnce802]

i agree...
but i dont think it could get any worse, so my crit to him is to use block letters...