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the end
03-06-2008, 07:31 PM
new stoned shit :)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9973/tester3608er6.jpg

sex without condoms
03-06-2008, 07:52 PM
finished my battle entry, took peoples' advice :]
you can see me sneaking in on the left :0D

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg
im a greedy mang.
humps

atlok7
03-06-2008, 07:58 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7766/caisrgreenpurptubingmg5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2938/caisrpurplewhitenk8.jpg
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2169/caisrorange3dud2.jpg
a few newies.

what_one
03-06-2008, 08:00 PM
that doesn't really answer the question... This will: How old are you?
haha cop for sure jk

Scream Out
03-06-2008, 08:02 PM
shiiiiiiititttttt man, those are fucking sick atlok

atlok7
03-06-2008, 08:02 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7766/caisrgreenpurptubingmg5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2938/caisrpurplewhitenk8.jpg
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2169/caisrorange3dud2.jpg
the bottom of the page suckss

Cute
03-06-2008, 08:23 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7071/jmdiu5.jpghttp://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6627/illjs0.jpg
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8520/cbcj5.jpghttp://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2887/slumho0.jpg

wafflecakee
03-06-2008, 08:56 PM
damn atlok those are sick

Case-One
03-06-2008, 09:07 PM
GODDAMN ATTY! thats some dope shit

Roolete
03-06-2008, 09:20 PM
nothing personal atlok, i just dont like your style. never have. fix that r though, looks like an a.
cute, sharpen up your letters
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/03-06-2008071410PM.jpg

Haz-E
03-06-2008, 09:24 PM
holy fuck cher looking mass dope gotta see dat wen its all done nice looks ill
sorry if this pic is to big ive been practicing philly hands for couple days now so tell me wwat u think dun care should have a new piece up in a couple days been busy wit school
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8277/dsc00017vc1.jpg

There is a deeper meaning
03-06-2008, 09:25 PM
hopefully better than the first one
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/nikeplayer1305/Justingraff2-1.jpg

Light40
03-06-2008, 09:34 PM
Did you read the new to graff thread? I would start there, and learn what bars are before you do 3D or color or anything at all.

TheHeartOfARobot
03-06-2008, 09:35 PM
Atlok, dope shit!

You ever try computer graphics? I freelance print design, judging by your shit you'd be really good at it.

JETPACK!!
03-06-2008, 09:39 PM
deeper meaning, thats a lot better than your first... but its still mad wack. keep sketching though. what are you using to color?

There is a deeper meaning
03-06-2008, 09:43 PM
im using those bic permanent markers but the first one was elmers paint markers... my friends use decos i only got one right now the brownish color is actually gray it came out wierd in the scanner

atlok7
03-06-2008, 09:53 PM
Atlok, dope shit!

You ever try computer graphics? I freelance print design, judging by your shit you'd be really good at it.

yezir dude. seven clothing project. i started it by just selling hiphop influenced t's to kids at my school, i had like 100 printed for my first line of 5 shirts. im also currently working on getting a scholarship to art college for graphic design and i possibly computer aided design. aka CAD

a maze
03-06-2008, 10:51 PM
nothing personal atlok, i just dont like your style. never have. fix that r though, looks like an a.
cute, sharpen up your letters
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/03-06-2008071410PM.jpg

The E and R are real iffy for me, not really feeling them. C and H are both hot.

FABLE IR CRU
03-07-2008, 12:58 AM
Newer simples
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple001.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple002.jpg
ATLOK-dope as always
DEEPER REASONING-learn basic blocks before anything else
ROOLETTE-I'm liking were that style is going

TheHeartOfARobot
03-07-2008, 01:20 AM
On second glance, I thought the second o was an a, probably because the ! was too low.

But don't worry about it, everyone is obviously going to know what it means. Unless they have serious comprehension problems.

Xyk
03-07-2008, 05:54 AM
Sleet, i really like that, its simple adn easy to read. My advice is work on the M and N, those seem like the weaker letter. I liek the O's though.

Fable - work on ur B. thats the weakest letter you haev in there. the rest is pretty well formed. tsart adding some forcefields/3d on taht.

soem of my new ish

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00031.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-07-2008, 11:04 AM
dont like t, stucture is soo weak. need to make it simple. and get down with the letters.


err. yeh..


MINE!?>
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/11-1.jpg

rsakens
03-07-2008, 12:27 PM
some of my lates shit
ELMR
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00161.jpg?t=1204914820
the new name keane
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00139.jpg?t=1204914464

rsakens
03-07-2008, 12:29 PM
pefix
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00128.jpg?t=1204914486
method
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00120.jpg?t=1204914517
sketch it oskar
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00081-2.jpg?t=1204914553
spur
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00077-3.jpg?t=1204914570
mader
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00070-1.jpg?t=1204914586

5Funerals
03-07-2008, 02:15 PM
rsakens - that shit is freshhhhhh! you have some creative bars and extensions.\
shamee - im not really feeling it because I dont know what it is.
xyk - the structure is pretty poor
sleet - the letters are all for the most part good but there are some bars on there that are just ugly like on the right leg of the M. Im not sure if you used bars at all actually. Your 3d could use work too.
Fable - looks good im a fan of the style
Roolette - your structure is a little too tweaked for my taste. still dope though
there is a deeper meaning - new to graff thread
haz-e - wrong thread really but looks good
cute - new to graff thread
atlok - I like it a lot man

wow only two new to graff thread people not bad!

heres a new simple style I have been working on that I like a lot any critisism would be mucho appreciated.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan1.jpg

Mass Appeal
03-07-2008, 02:52 PM
nothing personal atlok, i just dont like your style. never have. fix that r though, looks like an a.
cute, sharpen up your letters
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/03-06-2008071410PM.jpg

fresh H !!!!

FABLE IR CRU
03-07-2008, 03:06 PM
Newer simples
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple001.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple002.jpg
ATLOK-dope as always
DEEPER REASONING-learn basic blocks before anything else
ROOLETTE-I'm liking were that style is going
Bump
crits
Peor-nice simple style
Rsaken.good stuff & nice color combos

iBomb4KOG
03-07-2008, 03:10 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/t6a5i1.jpg

jersOneTIC
03-07-2008, 03:38 PM
pefix

sketch it oskar
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00081-2.jpg?t=1204914553


bump...the blue one is nice.
recent one...
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/4926/kknsh9.jpg

Mass Appeal
03-07-2008, 03:53 PM
RSAKENS...Duetsch sproken ?..Meine duetsch sproken ist toll haha...das blau ein ist gut

*cept*
03-07-2008, 03:54 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0011.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012.jpg
still workin on it
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0013-1.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0007-3.jpg
thoughts on this one? was just messin around with a fine point and thought it came out pretty cool
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0005-9.jpg
still workin on this one too.

sooo, crits? not too much style in my shit. i keep it simple. but any comments or anything is GREATLY appreciated

hazetheone
03-07-2008, 03:55 PM
ignore the handstyles and throw i was falling asleep in class
http://i31.tinypic.com/2iu3s4i.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/351air8.jpg
jers-i didnt know you were that good man nothing realy wrong with it at all
rsakens-i dont like any of your stuff its done well but not my style
peor-the top of the e looks a little small
fable- the b is weak as fuck just grab a page for b's only and get out your ideas
ibomb the chars are kind of lame and threw me off a bit
cept-dont let 3d overlap another letter

Light40
03-07-2008, 04:26 PM
My hands are shakey as fuck from drinking last night but here's a new sticker im working on
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1496/dsc0431vi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Scream Out
03-07-2008, 04:52 PM
nice stuff here today
new sketch, i know it still needs work
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo243.jpg

rapfiend
03-07-2008, 05:35 PM
heres the first one in my BB. sorry the lines are all jagged, i shake an assload so my control is sub-par at best. hit me up with some criticism. lates

[wrapfiend]
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/rapfiend03/Picture006.jpg

Scream Out
03-07-2008, 05:41 PM
try doing basic block letters and progress from there
it also helps to draw with pencil first because you can erase anything you dont like and fix it before you have your finished outline

thesilentvandal
03-07-2008, 06:03 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012231.jpg

Case-One
03-07-2008, 06:12 PM
cheeyeah^^^^

*cept*
03-07-2008, 06:41 PM
nice stuff here today
new sketch, i know it still needs work
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo243.jpg
fresh

SCIEnce802
03-07-2008, 07:32 PM
This page has A LOT of nice stuff. mainly on the top. good work.

a few sketches.
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0013.jpg?t=1204939635
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0014-2.jpg?t=1204939797
A lot of these ones arnt sized up very good to the other... the top left one is 4 stickers long.
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0004-1.jpg?t=1204939823

Scream Out
03-07-2008, 07:39 PM
scie, in your green throwie style your c looks A LOT like an f, fix that. your really need to work on your letter structure though, keep it simple dude

some throws ive been working on
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo244.jpg

Xyk
03-07-2008, 07:40 PM
Scream out- thats looking fresh homie. i liek the circle things on those. The throwie is fresh as well.

Scie - keep sketching is all i can say. Ur S is quite alright, but ur I and E look really weak, so work on those. Work on getting those clown sketches more real too.

Silent vandal - That shit is hot. I guess im fucked in our battle.


AND BUMP. For those who say the structure is weak, could you please elaborate? I don't see what you mean.



soem of my new ish

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00031.jpg

the end
03-07-2008, 07:40 PM
meh its ok
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/9392/tester3608yh9.jpg

Scream Out
03-07-2008, 07:44 PM
nice stuff here today
new sketch, i know it still needs work
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo243.jpg


scie, in your green throwie style your c looks A LOT like an f, fix that. your really need to work on your letter structure though, keep it simple dude

some throws ive been working on
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo244.jpg

bump for new page

SCIEnce802
03-07-2008, 07:46 PM
xyk-

Thnx man.. idk what the whole structure thing means ethier.. but i like the clowns to be more cartoony then real.. (i liked the S also)

nice simples u got there ^^^ erase those lines tho.

Scream Out
03-07-2008, 07:51 PM
if that was directed at me there are no lines to erase seeing as how it is all done in marker lol

SCIEnce802
03-07-2008, 07:57 PM
lol, nope, all thats to xyk..
but i think u should totally try to erase marker.
xD

garbage down tha way
03-07-2008, 08:01 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/twirl.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/simp.jpg
scream out- it looks nice so far, but id define the letters a little better. theyre a little too skinny imo. throw is fire tho.

the end- its not bad, just kinda messy.

mxman
03-07-2008, 08:26 PM
http://a230.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/72/l_dc23388a082717443698012f2f34045d.jpg
sharpie outline, no filled yet.

http://a320.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/26/l_4d718e5705538935f6ea7f20a6c144a7.jpg
sharpie + ball point pen

acereborn
03-07-2008, 08:35 PM
damn, that character is hot

why are you postin that in the toy forums? lol

mxman
03-07-2008, 08:42 PM
All I was told was to keep posting here until told otherwise.

acereborn
03-07-2008, 08:45 PM
Haha, I probably have no say in who gets to post where, but:

I'd say go for the regular forums, at least with the character for sure.

I'm sure you can work on your pieces a bit before you go there, but the character is definitely worthy of the forum gods lol.

mxman
03-07-2008, 08:49 PM
I should add this to my previous post, but I just finished it, pretty weak but it's my first attempt at this style:

http://a459.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/93/l_a685b5e25d2bda83c91ac8dc580732b2.jpg

http://a158.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/125/l_d3a3bb888ef7b1a24567248fd89a4dad.jpg
If anyone remembers Rob Zombie, I was really into his music and art and so this character came about. Much of my art back in 2002 was heavily influenced by his work, however, this is an original you wont find in his album art. I gave most of my character drawings away and this is one of the only ones I kept for myself. Ball-point pen.

acereborn
03-07-2008, 08:51 PM
thats a nice piece, id try to make another one like it, but with a 3d

dim
03-07-2008, 09:23 PM
mxman that looks pretty clean not really feeling the letters tho i like the chracter

Light40
03-07-2008, 09:24 PM
mxman: sick characters.

Cin123
03-07-2008, 09:26 PM
scream out that fuckin dope man
mofuckin sic ass handie

Xyk
03-07-2008, 09:35 PM
MXMAN - HOLY SHIT THOAT REGGAE CHARAC IS OFF THE HOOK! Fuckin ball point and sharpie??? Def post teh characs in big boys forum man.

Bump for new page

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00031.jpg

acereborn
03-07-2008, 09:39 PM
^^ the peice is nice, sticking with simples and a nice 3d and forcefield

the only problem with it is how you have the lines on the inside of your letters, you need to either erase them or colour the piece imo.

EDIT: You can't really erase that I guess, but next time either don't have them or colour it.

dim
03-07-2008, 11:03 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1004.jpg
work in progress
over really nice stuff man

AZTEKA
03-07-2008, 11:07 PM
Props to dim, that sketch looks dope. Some sketch I just finished up.
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3939/03041eg6.jpg

5Funerals
03-07-2008, 11:12 PM
xyk - stop bumping that you have already got like 5 crits. try giving some more

Xyk
03-07-2008, 11:16 PM
xyk - stop bumping that you have already got like 5 crits. try giving some more

Everytime time i bump or post, i give crits. why dont u tell that to people who post without crits alright?

5Funerals
03-07-2008, 11:18 PM
you bumped it three times with like 1 crit each time. relax im not hating

Xyk
03-07-2008, 11:23 PM
yea. im just kinda irritated that almost every time i bump or post, 2 or 3 people would jsut post tehir flicks under wihout crits. no worries, ill stop bumping that piece.

btw, you said my piece didnt haev structure. could you elaborate on that please? reply in pm maybe, so we wont clog the thread.

mxman
03-07-2008, 11:37 PM
xyk- I agree, I didn't crit shiat. I think the overlapping sketch has potential, go bigger and color it up.

dim- sick sketch, i wish i could manipulate bars like that.

AZTEKA- if you loook a post above you at dim's piece you'll get an idea of how you should fix yours. Especially the wiggle on the K, P and R. IMO.

5Funerals
03-08-2008, 12:05 AM
I dont really need crits on this one it is kind of ridiculous and really messy
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan-3.jpg

dim
03-08-2008, 12:07 AM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1005.jpg
5 funerals flip the pick around its tuff to read from here

5Funerals
03-08-2008, 12:10 AM
yeah I gotta stop posting sideways ones. It says Peor with worm bars.

your letters flow nicely and I like the fill but that extension on the D that doesnt close off and has the fading fill thing is played out and doesnt make sense in your piece since the other side doesnt have it

FABLE IR CRU
03-08-2008, 01:10 AM
I thought i would put this here before i destroy it with ink & 3-D
Crits
Peor-I like that style-yours looks good
DIM-lost its apeall when u colored it i liked the sketch ALOT morehttp://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/Gangster001.jpg

Xyk
03-08-2008, 02:45 AM
Fable - thats looking alright, but ur F looks too small in comparison to the otehr letters. Try connectign the top and bottom of the e, and work on the l a bit more

dim- that looks really good, i love the fill. maybe just lessen up on whats happenin with teh letters, it looks like too much going on in too small a spce.

Peor - Coloring and 3d if you do it si gonna be a bitch on taht piece haha. i liek it thoh, nice and simple, earthworm idea is cool. maybe if you made it earthworms and cookies or summin, thatd be interesting

Heres some new stuff, trying out diff backgrounds/colors/styles
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg

garbage down tha way
03-08-2008, 07:29 AM
dim that piece is fucking illy, all that i would work on is with the r, where the bottom of the loop and the right leg meet, id make em form into one bar as apposed to two. also maybe mess with E's cuz it seems to be your most basic letter.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/twirl.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/simp.jpg
bumph.

Rambooboo
03-08-2008, 08:02 AM
garbage like the style the R on the second one looks like the R sex uses

mxman
03-08-2008, 08:02 AM
Fable- your extension off the F doesn't match your E....Change the left so of a to point out....why is your B rounded?....Why is the top part of the E inward like that? Fix those things and come back.

dim- now that it's filled i do see that it needs a little work as far as bending your bars but not too much...

xyk- nice fill, if that's an E at the end, experiment with fixing it up.

a maze
03-08-2008, 09:41 AM
garbage like the style the R on the second one looks like the R sex uses

No it doesn't. -.-

5Funerals
03-08-2008, 10:17 AM
it looks nothing like it

Rambooboo
03-08-2008, 11:36 AM
sorry just woke up went back and looked my mistake

LittleWeapon
03-08-2008, 12:16 PM
garbage down tha way-im diggin the style keep that shyt up

http://i28.tinypic.com/27yyh3p.jpg
what cha think?

fr3gna
03-08-2008, 01:35 PM
Sick outline little weapon



new one, crits please : )

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/fregnanew3Djpg2.jpg

acereborn
03-08-2008, 01:42 PM
^^ its a good simp, but you might as well do the same forcefield around the entire piece.

Teez-EmM!!!
03-08-2008, 03:01 PM
dimr make the leg on your r higher up and the bottem bar of ur e the same width as the top
fregana your letters are to close together spread em apart
little wepon go a little simpler ur letters are ok tho
over sick as allways
fable dont write fable cause there is already a writer that writes that. make ur piece straighter and ur bars stright in stead of diagonal like on ur f
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0462-1.jpg
i need some helpfull critzz on this

SenTheFirst
03-08-2008, 03:13 PM
dim that piece is fucking illy, all that i would work on is with the r, where the bottom of the loop and the right leg meet, id make em form into one bar as apposed to two. also maybe mess with E's cuz it seems to be your most basic letter.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/twirl.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/simp.jpg
bumph.


give this dude his props, he's progressing the right way. startin with simples and workin step by step to more advanced stuff. perfect example.

i wish more of these dudes would follow you...

keep it up

emokid
03-08-2008, 03:34 PM
POWWW. i ant been on here in a looooooongggg time. this is my 2nd sketch in about 4 months, this explains why i havent progressed at all. PC4PC??//LOL

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN7180.jpg

over, the e r on the top one needs sortin and the o+v is nicey.
bottom sketch is nice.

sheltr
03-08-2008, 03:45 PM
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee187/sheltaro/nusheltr.jpg?t=1205012618
what do z peoplez think?

Desipher
03-08-2008, 04:10 PM
Props to dim, that sketch looks dope. Some sketch I just finished up.
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3939/03041eg6.jpg
seriously kid change your fucking name my brother burns you
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/KASP.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e355/kaspask/kapsketchinvtert.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f62/kaspsak/steeze4016.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f62/kaspsak/rasta.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f62/kaspsak/RinohSketch.jpg
nuff said that kasp kills u

hazetheone
03-08-2008, 05:36 PM
ignore the handstyles and throw i was falling asleep in class
http://i31.tinypic.com/2iu3s4i.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/351air8.jpg
jers-i didnt know you were that good man nothing realy wrong with it at all
rsakens-i dont like any of your stuff its done well but not my style
peor-the top of the e looks a little small
fable- the b is weak as fuck just grab a page for b's only and get out your ideas
ibomb the chars are kind of lame and threw me off a bit
cept-dont let 3d overlap another letter

bumping from a few pages back
i got nothing

atlok7
03-08-2008, 05:48 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7766/caisrgreenpurptubingmg5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2938/caisrpurplewhitenk8.jpg
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2169/caisrorange3dud2.jpg
the bottom of the page suckss

bump. only like one cat gave me a crit. guys got ne?

emo kid- looks sweet
sheltr- dude in general it looks cool but try splitting letters up so its not one big chunk. and out line in pen and give it a little color.
dim- nice colors
little weapon- dude dont worry about extensions right now. it looks like you have alright letters. just work on letters for now.
fable- kinda cool, but i think the Es a little weak. add some 3d

easer
03-08-2008, 07:26 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti034.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti.jpg

i feel at home

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
03-08-2008, 08:12 PM
this whole page is filled with sick looksin shit..keeep it up..

SenTheFirst
03-08-2008, 08:35 PM
seriously kid change your fucking name my brother burns you

nuff said that kasp kills u


get off that man's nuts

long as you aint in the same city it dont matter


haha aint no seriously, its the internet...

Chump
03-08-2008, 08:38 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2vluoea.jpg
Workin on a new throw....
needs work i know...
Crits suggestions?
easer- not a big fan on the first one. Dont like the jagged letters.

Blam!
03-08-2008, 08:52 PM
its ok ^ i dont like the P and the U to much tho.
keep drawin.

garbage down tha way
03-08-2008, 09:34 PM
give this dude his props, he's progressing the right way. startin with simples and workin step by step to more advanced stuff. perfect example.

i wish more of these dudes would follow you...

keep it up

big ups sen, i really appreciate it.

"Riot"
03-08-2008, 10:40 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT004-4.jpg

Xyk
03-08-2008, 10:44 PM
Riot - Thats looking pretty good there. Nice and simple.

Chump - the first three letters look solid, but the M looks weird, and the Ps style doesnt really match the CHU.

Easer - The second one looks a lot better than the first.

Atlok - Last ones my fav, great color shcheme and great fill. I love the way u did the fill on the 3d in the second one too. go post in teh big boys section homie.

Haze - Lookin really good, not much i can crit you on. Love the R on the second flick.



Heres some new stuff, trying out diff backgrounds/colors/styles
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg

Desipher
03-08-2008, 10:44 PM
get off that man's nuts

long as you aint in the same city it dont matter


haha aint no seriously, its the internet...
what nuts that kids fuckin wack looks like a bad bite of kasps older shit

"Riot"
03-08-2008, 10:48 PM
xyk- thats really different.like.REALLY different hahah. but i like it.

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT006-1.jpg

new throw?

hazetheone
03-09-2008, 12:56 AM
haha xyk your shits tripping me out
how would you paint it

blunttokes
03-09-2008, 01:03 AM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8972/1003775se4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ignore the extentions

hazetheone
03-09-2008, 01:06 AM
wow you ruined a totaly good simple
congradulations
make sure your bars dont go from big to little and shit

SecondSky
03-09-2008, 04:32 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3238/pacmanud6.jpg

No auto-resize i guess..

Fouldini
03-09-2008, 09:41 AM
Role:Go back to basic, PLEASE loose the extentions?
Chump:Nice throwie, but personally I dont think the C flows very well?
Caiser:Holy fuck
Haze:Looks nice, the fill dosnt look too good though (no offence) I know you couldnt help it if you only had a biro :p



Any crits on my peice?
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3742/71318000xh1.jpg
EDIT: Appolgies for the camera quality. An EyeToy does NOT make a good camera ;)

Xyk
03-09-2008, 09:50 AM
Foul you bastard, you skipped giving me a crit :(

I think you should put ur letters closer together, or make a bigger 3d/forcefield. Theres a lot of empty space between the letters and bars. Also, try starting out with blocks, like big square rectangular blocks, instead of connecting the letters together. Try that out and post that out, itll prolly look a lot better.

Fouldini
03-09-2008, 10:37 AM
Just to let you know, that peice is actually really small (Height about 6cm, width 12), And I was just experimenting with using a marker as the main body of a quick (10/15minute) peice :)

Oh and just for the record, yours looks sick:) Its very Tokyo-esqe

Mass Appeal
03-09-2008, 11:16 AM
POWWW. i ant been on here in a looooooongggg time. this is my 2nd sketch in about 4 months, this explains why i havent progressed at all. PC4PC??//LOL

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN7180.jpg

over, the e r on the top one needs sortin and the o+v is nicey.
bottom sketch is nice.

where you been ?..missed your penism..ill as always..! :D

Mass Appeal
03-09-2008, 11:20 AM
nice stuff here today
new sketch, i know it still needs work
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo243.jpg

double bumo cos this style is fucking fresh...shit like this needs more recoginition iin here...try your look in the big boys with that shit Pogs !

iv got a real busy week coming up with college this and college that aswell as my 10 hour GCSE art exam on wednesday and friday..so i dont think ill even make the round robin battle !

so heres a oldy from Febuary 2007 !!!!

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/jy.jpg

jus incase you didnt read....

from February 2007

sex without condoms
03-09-2008, 11:34 AM
FUCK YOU IN THE GODDAMN NECK RAS
AND THEN IN THE ASS WITH A CACTUS!





jp, i love you <333333333333


oh and i just realized that in your piece the M and H are exactly the same.
foolio <3

Bazer
03-09-2008, 11:36 AM
pear... still rockin that same simple................
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1302.jpg

wiserism
03-09-2008, 12:12 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/grosss.jpg
bored ^
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/skezr.jpg
old battle piece^^ neva finished
my picture quality sucks werkin off a sidekick sorry
-_-

easer
03-09-2008, 12:58 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti037.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti025.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti035.jpg

:D:D:D:D

sex without condoms
03-09-2008, 01:00 PM
All your letters look like a Daws bite.


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132454.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132357.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132336.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132318.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg

"Riot"
03-09-2008, 01:15 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT004-4.jpg

bump no crits.

thex-go back to simples. lose the arrow.

Leadpoisining
03-09-2008, 01:52 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2049/2321871984_8e036886d9_o.jpg
all your pieces burn mine i just want some advice how to get better

Fouldini
03-09-2008, 02:01 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2049/2321871984_8e036886d9_o.jpg
all your pieces burn mine i just want some advice how to get better

Loose the tiny tags all over it, they look like crowns at first sight *shudder*

Oh and about the arrow, I cleverly touched the marker down on the peice, so rather an arrow than a big black blob in the middle of a yellow highlight

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 02:04 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture045.jpg

For the round robin. Not gonna finish due to Just Another nearly cutting his finger off and wants to kill off the S, so I gotta do another.

Riot- Tone it down a bit, just not ready yet
Sex- <3 it
Easer- No, tone that down
Baze- <3 that
Ras- Good ol' ras :p
Pear- I missed your characters

Leadpoisining
03-09-2008, 02:09 PM
1583

Leadpoisining
03-09-2008, 02:11 PM
fucked up on the I

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
03-09-2008, 02:15 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132454.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132357.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132336.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132318.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg

no comment on these...wow

RFI. SPit
03-09-2008, 02:29 PM
Sex, that last one gets me hottt.

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 02:31 PM
Haha, COME BACK NEMZ! Is he still in the war?

Leadpoisining
03-09-2008, 02:34 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3147/2321872346_7e1ba941b1_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3214/2321056917_7efb619df0_o.jpg

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 02:36 PM
Instead of 2 posts, just edit your post....

Leadpoisining
03-09-2008, 02:37 PM
ya my bad

MESN[905]
03-09-2008, 03:16 PM
SEXWITHOUTCONDOMS- the throws u drew in black pen are alot better then the ones u drew in blue



http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5241/hpim0316ih5.jpg

what ones better #1 or #2?

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 03:22 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture045.jpg

For the round robin. Not gonna finish due to Just Another nearly cutting his finger off and wants to kill off the S, so I gotta do another.

Riot- Tone it down a bit, just not ready yet
Sex- <3 it
Easer- No, tone that down
Baze- <3 that
Ras- Good ol' ras :p
Pear- I missed your characters

Bump.

I like 2 more.

MESN[905]
03-09-2008, 03:26 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8972/1003775se4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ignore the extentions

dogggggggggg what are u sayin with those arrows and the loop hahaahahaaha

redo that shit without em and lose the hook in on the right leg of the r

rsakens
03-09-2008, 03:34 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture045.jpg

For the round robin. Not gonna finish due to Just Another nearly cutting his finger off and wants to kill off the S, so I gotta do another.

Riot- Tone it down a bit, just not ready yet
Sex- <3 it
Easer- No, tone that down
Baze- <3 that
Ras- Good ol' ras :p
Pear- I missed your characters

change your name

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/1/187732661_9b36ccf22e_b.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/24/44465083_0522783fea_b.jpg

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 03:39 PM
If you wanted to read, it was for the Round Robin battle.

wiserism
03-09-2008, 03:40 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/grosss.jpg
bored ^
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r162/wiser_tka/skezr.jpg
old battle piece^^ neva finished
my picture quality sucks werkin off a sidekick sorry
-_-
bump 4 crits

nd baze i like yur shit bump!!

rsakens
03-09-2008, 03:44 PM
If you wanted to read, it was for the Round Robin battle.

oh i see
my bad ;)

scary letters
03-09-2008, 03:56 PM
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/069/2/d/RAWR_by_bigel.jpg

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/069/a/a/aces_high_by_bigel.jpg

a maze
03-09-2008, 04:01 PM
^looks like the kid from the boondocks, looks mad ill, El.

-GEKS-
03-09-2008, 04:30 PM
bigel- dope
wiser- also dope.

okay i need yall to look at this from the point of view of a 17 year old girl with most likely no knowledge of what a good graffiti piece is supposed to be

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/scan0001.jpg

crits please
also ideas for coloring would be nice i guess
w/e peace

RFI. SPit
03-09-2008, 04:32 PM
elzy <33

Sped up video i made last weekend of me drawing a piece outline up-
http://youtube.com/watch?v=mL4jmmBnHnk

IlikePie
03-09-2008, 05:27 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture047.jpg

Still bored, never ever do throws :/

sex without condoms
03-09-2008, 05:46 PM
Haha, COME BACK NEMZ! Is he still in the war?

I don't know but I miss that man. He was one dedicated fool.

</3

sketch3
03-09-2008, 05:58 PM
mxman- i allways wondered why u were in the okizoo crew, no beef not calling u toy or anything.now i see its cus of ur dope chrecters. just work on ur peices and ull be in the big boy thread.

garbege that simples live,

MessTonic
03-09-2008, 06:16 PM
All your letters look like a Daws bite.


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132454.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132357.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132336.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/132318.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194556-1.jpg

i would stop putting upside down crosses.. Shits way overdone by people, and just seems like a fad.. hype

und3cided
03-09-2008, 06:19 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3238/pacmanud6.jpg

No auto-resize i guess..

Your style is good, but it just seems you snorted some crack before hand, really sketchy in straight lines. nice though

the end
03-09-2008, 06:58 PM
workin on it...
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/6779/tester3908lr1.jpg

atlok7
03-09-2008, 06:58 PM
;1033273']SEXWITHOUTCONDOMS- the throws u drew in black pen are alot better then the ones u drew in blue



http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5241/hpim0316ih5.jpg

what ones better #1 or #2?

numero uno. but the sencond one isnt bad. i think you should rock both. kids who only know one style are jokes.

Hazex
03-09-2008, 07:56 PM
MESN:sick fukin style dude!!
theend :quite nice but maybe making the first t bigger? and the second t you sould make it longer to the left.


so long time i didint sketch i trying to do a new style

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4659/picture003he4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I kinda just like my S

hazetheone
03-09-2008, 08:03 PM
dont misplace the holes dont try and make your letters look wierd dont bend hem just use straight bars for now

sex without condoms
03-09-2008, 08:51 PM
new shiittt

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192511.jpg
MAR!!!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192524.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192539.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192558.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192952.jpg

sanrtizer
03-09-2008, 09:05 PM
sebr- number 2 imo
ilikepie- pretty nice only thing needin work is the s
role- new to graff thread
elz- fuckin ill
geks- lose the underline and things above it
sex- dope tosses, last ones my fav
black an whites
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7189/img0161bh9.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4428/img0163bq7.jpg
C R I T S

hazetheone
03-09-2008, 09:09 PM
your stuff from about a mounth ago is a lot cleaner but there is some weird curves in both k's and the second r and your handstyle just got me psyched

synps
03-09-2008, 09:40 PM
Sex- I love your throwie style. It's sick. I especially like the "Croe loves jews" the croe looks sick.

Sanrtizer- I like the second more for sure. Only thing I dont like is how on the inside of the R the hole the thing you did there it just looks a bit wierd


Trying a new style, Tell me what you think:
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/style002s.jpg

a maze
03-09-2008, 09:42 PM
MAR!!!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/192524.jpg


Oh, an exchange? FOR ME?! OMGFTW

hazetheone
03-09-2008, 09:42 PM
that s looks like the guy from scary movie twos ''strong hand''

RFI. SPit
03-09-2008, 10:07 PM
Getting away from the usual with something a little more goofy. It's not great.. a work in progress.... Never really done anything like this before. Meh.

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9792/photo294qy4.jpg

Sex- I lovee it baby. That A is so cute

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-09-2008, 10:14 PM
Getting away from the usual with something a little more goofy. It's not great.. a work in progress.... Never really done anything like this before. Meh.

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9792/photo294qy4.jpg

Sex- I lovee it baby. That A is so cute

Work on the 3d a bit

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9003/dscn0205fj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8817/dscn0200um2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/6264/dscn0206cy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2973/dscn0207mo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

RFI. SPit
03-09-2008, 10:22 PM
Few older flicks cos I'm a little bit bored.

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j4/spitrabbit/Photo275.jpg
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j4/spitrabbit/Photo273.jpg
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j4/spitrabbit/Photo179.jpg
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j4/spitrabbit/Photo177.jpg
Super old!:
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j4/spitrabbit/Photo218.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-09-2008, 10:35 PM
Maybe space out your letters more so we can see the entire stucture? just constructive crits

Fube
03-09-2008, 10:47 PM
rfi, would love to see it painted, i think once u make it clean on a wall more peeps would understand your style. feelin the red and yellow one.

Tare, bottom's the best in my book but i dont like the a or the r.

sex, well, nothin to say. looks the same as all your other stuff, not bad tho in any means.

i have not had time to sketch in weeks man, decided to do an outline on a forum i used to visit a lot.

crits welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300827.jpg

Nem
03-09-2008, 11:25 PM
fube, sick. def that guy with the teefs on the end.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabab.jpg

edit: i just realized every letter there is pretty much an s.

crystalmeth and abortions
03-09-2008, 11:41 PM
RFI- that style is dope
http://a496.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/48/l_2e80210cbbc9822d038e8d49db33e987.jpg
new style. crits?

JSBiggz
03-10-2008, 12:05 AM
thats nice bro

Evasion Of Invasion
03-10-2008, 12:28 AM
Soft - I like the 3D
Fube - I LOVE it keep it up
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/feb182008005.jpg
rough copy got the battle crits?

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-10-2008, 12:29 AM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/206/dscn0208ks8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Xyk
03-10-2008, 05:32 AM
Tare - I like those simples you're working with. Good way to start, and the progression can be seen. Keep it up.

Evasion - That E is one sick motherfucker. Pity i cant say the rest for the other letters though. Ur evolution thing didn't work out so well in my opinion, mainly cos ur first block letters were pretty weak.

Fube - WHOOO. I fuckn love that. Color it homie, that is sick.

crystalmethandabortions - Thats lookin alright, but i would loosen up on the extensions next time, doesnt really look like you got the hang of it yet. Some look sorta out of place. But the letter structure is nice and good.



And one last bumpity...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg

Desipher
03-10-2008, 06:50 AM
js biggs ur sig scared the fuck out of me i was trippin on lsd and saw that i nearly died for real

wiserism
03-10-2008, 07:37 AM
sebr- number 2 imo
ilikepie- pretty nice only thing needin work is the s
role- new to graff thread
elz- fuckin ill
geks- lose the underline and things above it
sex- dope tosses, last ones my fav
black an whites
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7189/img0161bh9.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4428/img0163bq7.jpg
C R I T S
idk why but 4 sum reason i really like this style
hopefully u learn 2 develop it more shits tight like virgin pussy

rsakens
03-10-2008, 08:09 AM
weak battle
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00028-4.jpg?t=1205154393

the.sate
03-10-2008, 08:20 AM
And one last bumpity...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg[/QUOTE]

since no1's helpin you wit crits i'll give ya some word. A good start but u gotta work on structure some more and take off those double bars, witout the double bars it would be a clean simple, but if ur lookin to progress into somethin more complicated then just crush till u come up wit more complicated bars, perspective(how u bend each letter) and u'll be on the right track. hope this helped.

Xyk
03-10-2008, 09:04 AM
^ Appreciate the input. I'm pretty confident that i can bust a simple and rock it clean, so im trying to slowly add on to those. O still don't understand structure thoh. I mean, the letters are easily visible, the bars pretty much reflect the way each letter is written normally, so i'm still very confused on that point.

Mr.Poosk
03-10-2008, 09:42 AM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/9342/graffid0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


say's GOR, Kinda new to actually writing letters, done chara's a lot.

Crits please. Thanks.

AEK
03-10-2008, 09:54 AM
weak battle
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00028-4.jpg?t=1205154393

rsakens- loving this. i liek the colours alot and the trains are sick. not sure on the background tho, just not my style.

Xyk- im with the.state dont do double bars they dont look good at all. i liek the colours tho with the purpel and the white. keep going i liking it tho.

atlok7
03-10-2008, 10:20 AM
mr poosk- dope. the teeth look sick

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2008, 12:42 PM
weak battle
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00028-4.jpg?t=1205154393


when i see ur work i think this kid looks like hes got style. then u think na plane toy, it just the fill that makes it look kool.

mate u need to really work on ur stucture really weak compared to ur fills.


just my thought...



BEEF










NOT>

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-10-2008, 12:50 PM
Tare - I like those simples you're working with. Good way to start, and the progression can be seen. Keep it up.

Evasion - That E is one sick motherfucker. Pity i cant say the rest for the other letters though. Ur evolution thing didn't work out so well in my opinion, mainly cos ur first block letters were pretty weak.

Fube - WHOOO. I fuckn love that. Color it homie, that is sick.

crystalmethandabortions - Thats lookin alright, but i would loosen up on the extensions next time, doesnt really look like you got the hang of it yet. Some look sorta out of place. But the letter structure is nice and good.



And one last bumpity...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg

fo sho dude, Im glad you know what im tryin to do, wroking on straight up simple structure cuz Ima go and bomb some of these simples out there and I dont want sloppy structure, and you can always go with a basic fill...

I think a lot of new graff writers these days get carried away and thats why all the OGWriters are getting pissed off and saying graff scene is alive and dead at the same time.

Well ima try my best to keep it real ;)

Mr.Poosk
03-10-2008, 12:58 PM
Quick one I did In class today, Crits very welcome.

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/318/graff001fm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/9520/graff002yj8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aqua
03-10-2008, 02:40 PM
these are taken on my phone so there kinda bad quality.
i've only been sketching for about 1-2 weeks so yeah :)

http://i29.tinypic.com/28hobif.png

http://i30.tinypic.com/11jm9ok.png

http://i26.tinypic.com/1z5urte.png

http://i26.tinypic.com/24w7brl.png

http://i28.tinypic.com/n7vao.png

http://i28.tinypic.com/2r23m7t.png

http://i28.tinypic.com/t817o3.png

thoughts?

rsakens
03-10-2008, 03:44 PM
when i see ur work i think this kid looks like hes got style. then u think na plane toy, it just the fill that makes it look kool.

mate u need to really work on ur stucture really weak compared to ur fills.


just my thought...



BEEF










NOT>

its all god i hear that from a god few people before
gona work harder on my letters :)

atlok7
03-10-2008, 03:45 PM
just messin around in school today/ its a bit ik
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/7610/caisrpenthrowcy7.jpg

Chump
03-10-2008, 03:51 PM
looks dope...
its dif from your style
needs alil work but im diggin it

atlok7
03-10-2008, 03:54 PM
yeah im not really planning on doing it much, just enough to keep me awake in school. ha

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 04:13 PM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/9342/graffid0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


say's GOR, Kinda new to actually writing letters, done chara's a lot.

Crits please. Thanks.

this is the most blatant gesus bite i've seen.
note: the letter A

silentchaos14
03-10-2008, 04:15 PM
haha yeah i was about to point that out. those last two sketches of aqua's look bittin from some graff creator shit ive seen.

aqua
03-10-2008, 04:19 PM
haha yeah i was about to point that out. those last two sketches of aqua's look bittin from some graff creator shit ive seen.

yeah, i based them on the letters off learninggraffiti.com or something.
i was just trying out that style and thought it turned out okay.

Mr.Poosk
03-10-2008, 04:41 PM
this is the most blatant gesus bite i've seen.
note: the letter A

Where is the "a"? There is none in there you idiot, learn to read then talk.

*cept*
03-10-2008, 04:42 PM
And one last bumpity...

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg

since no1's helpin you wit crits i'll give ya some word. A good start but u gotta work on structure some more and take off those double bars, witout the double bars it would be a clean simple, but if ur lookin to progress into somethin more complicated then just crush till u come up wit more complicated bars, perspective(how u bend each letter) and u'll be on the right track. hope this helped.[/QUOTE]
man that dude has his shit down. people only need to go simpler when letters are assymetrical, dont look like eachother, different sizes etc. those are bomb, havent really seen a style like that. keep it up

NEZ89
03-10-2008, 05:08 PM
the.sate- i agree with cept on the double bar thing, but its still pretty dope

i hate how the fill came out. it's been a min since i've used prismas, but no excuse
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/1773/march2008blackbook001lg3.jpg

thesilentvandal
03-10-2008, 05:27 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawss.jpg

atlok7
03-10-2008, 05:28 PM
thats dope

NEZ89
03-10-2008, 05:37 PM
the.sate- i agree with cept on the double bar thing, but its still pretty dope

i hate how the fill came out. it's been a min since i've used prismas, but no excuse
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/1773/march2008blackbook001lg3.jpg

why does my stuff always end up in the last 2 or 3 posts lol
bump

silent thats ill man

5Funerals
03-10-2008, 05:55 PM
that piece is really good but man oh man does your hanstyle need work!

NEZ89
03-10-2008, 06:02 PM
lol yeah its been pissin me off, i go to try something and get so frustrated when it comes out like crap

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 06:03 PM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/9342/graffid0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


say's GOR, Kinda new to actually writing letters, done chara's a lot.

Crits please. Thanks.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f333/urbangesusgeek/Ab/100_0415-1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f333/urbangesusgeek/Ab/100_0587.jpg

i dont feel like finding more

sanrtizer
03-10-2008, 06:47 PM
poosk- dont bite
nez- lose those arrows that colorings fire
daws- dope throw

bumpin this cause i didnt get much crits


sebr- number 2 imo
ilikepie- pretty nice only thing needin work is the s
role- new to graff thread
elz- fuckin ill
geks- lose the underline and things above it
sex- dope tosses, last ones my fav
black an whites
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7189/img0161bh9.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4428/img0163bq7.jpg
C R I T S

Mr.Poosk
03-10-2008, 07:01 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f333/urbangesusgeek/Ab/100_0415-1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f333/urbangesusgeek/Ab/100_0587.jpg

i dont feel like finding more

Ok, so you are saying that just because I use teeth and eye's in my letters its a gesus bite, look at the letter forms, even how the eye' and teeth are done are differant.

Its not a bite, its called influence, learn the difference. kthanks.

Rambooboo
03-10-2008, 07:06 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2038/2325631662_936caff87f.jpg

atlok7
03-10-2008, 07:08 PM
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/1633/caiswhiteblackoranggeil5.jpg

critzz?

5Funerals
03-10-2008, 07:11 PM
KANR - that first one is so dope. I feel like nobody on here feels your style but me.

c.n.k
03-10-2008, 07:13 PM
atlok that looks pretty good .. i'd just make the letters more visible.
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/metniterekon.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/rekon1.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/beamo.jpg

a maze
03-10-2008, 07:14 PM
Meta Knight FTW. SSBB kicks ass.

IlikePie
03-10-2008, 07:16 PM
<3 Metaknight, and nice letters too :P

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-10-2008, 07:24 PM
the.sate- i agree with cept on the double bar thing, but its still pretty dope

i hate how the fill came out. it's been a min since i've used prismas, but no excuse
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/1773/march2008blackbook001lg3.jpg

Thats simple and tight man, Id love to see that on a wall..

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-10-2008, 07:26 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/206/dscn0208ks8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump for moar crits plz

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 07:31 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/202401.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/202322.jpg

atlok7
03-10-2008, 07:32 PM
sex- the bottom throw on the bottom picture is schweet

NEZ89
03-10-2008, 07:39 PM
Thats simple and tight man, Id love to see that on a wall..

i'm doin it this weekend

5Funerals
03-10-2008, 07:43 PM
tade- new to graff thread
sex - I really want to see some new stuff from you.

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 07:54 PM
sebr- number 2 imo
ilikepie- pretty nice only thing needin work is the s
role- new to graff thread
elz- fuckin ill
geks- lose the underline and things above it
sex- dope tosses, last ones my fav
black an whites
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7189/img0161bh9.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4428/img0163bq7.jpg
C R I T S


*****h, exchange?
and if we do, lemme get those drips in my shizz, them is too hot.
i would do em i just hate add ons with me stylezor

KANR FTW!!!!!!!!

jawsy
03-10-2008, 08:17 PM
nez- thats tight
kanr-the second peice is better, the first k is disgusting
rambooboo- go simpler
atlok- thats fuckin hot
c.n.k- its lookin good, colour them bitches
tare-keep workin on it
sex-i love your throws


crits on the letters folks??
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/5315/photo17mv4.jpg

sanrtizer
03-10-2008, 08:17 PM
yea sex im down to exchange ill hav it up by tomorrow

j-f
03-10-2008, 08:40 PM
jawsy i like it jsut for some reason im not feeling the extensions on the a and r

OfesOfor
03-10-2008, 08:51 PM
just some 5 minute f*** arounds

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4749/gome2004019fo7.th.jpg (http://img365.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004019fo7.jpg)

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/1227/gome2004017wu0.th.jpg (http://img365.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004017wu0.jpg)

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5562/gome2004016rc5.th.jpg (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004016rc5.jpg)

and just messing around with the name

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/251/gome2004015fw3.th.jpg (http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004015fw3.jpg)


haha crits?

a maze
03-10-2008, 08:52 PM
for sex without cone domes-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/sexchange.jpg

SSBB FTW

hazetheone
03-10-2008, 08:58 PM
just some 5 minute f*** arounds

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4749/gome2004019fo7.th.jpg (http://img365.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004019fo7.jpg)

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/1227/gome2004017wu0.th.jpg (http://img365.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004017wu0.jpg)

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5562/gome2004016rc5.th.jpg (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004016rc5.jpg)

and just messing around with the name

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/251/gome2004015fw3.th.jpg (http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gome2004015fw3.jpg)


haha crits?

use the code please
no one wants to click on the individual pics

[IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2zpnur8.jpg

sanrtizer
03-10-2008, 09:00 PM
heres your exchange sex
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9104/img0164eo1.jpg
sorry bout the weak o, unfortunately it shit teh bed
edit: damn my a's too small too

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 09:10 PM
im in love with your E's and O's

hazetheone
03-10-2008, 09:10 PM
dude if you got the inside of the r right that shit would be on point

sanrtizer
03-10-2008, 09:25 PM
any advice on how to get the inside of my r "right"

RFI. SPit
03-10-2008, 09:40 PM
was trying something completely new... not really feeling it. I like the ZOFO okay.. but i got lazy toward the end.

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3005/photo303hi5.png

maze: sick character
Jawsy: nice E

a maze
03-10-2008, 09:44 PM
zof- I really feel that.

hazetheone
03-10-2008, 09:47 PM
any advice on how to get the inside of my r "right"

just make te hole in the r like normal with no curles

atlok7
03-10-2008, 10:04 PM
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/1633/caiswhiteblackoranggeil5.jpg

critzz?

bottom of page bump

IlikePie
03-10-2008, 10:08 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture048.jpg

Round Robin shit again.... Not likin' it really, but I gotta turn this mug in....

RFI, Only really feelin' the Z and N
Sanrtizer, Yeah, fix your R and it would be pretty hawt
A Maze, <3 Young Link....

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 10:08 PM
Everyone is gonna yell at me !!!!!!!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221214.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/222025.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/222000.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221931.jpg
forgot shadow in the R
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221914.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221858.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221839.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221824.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221808.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221730.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221704.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221634.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221602.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221520.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221505.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221446.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221431.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221410.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221320.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221253.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221542.jpg
forgot shadow on the R and A

c.n.k
03-10-2008, 10:08 PM
a maze tha shit!
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/birdrekon.jpg

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 10:19 PM
your neuro shit was so much better

the end
03-10-2008, 10:24 PM
ms paint yo!
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/8705/310testermspaintqu0.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-10-2008, 10:25 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221410.jpg
i like thisss.

Steel!
03-10-2008, 10:47 PM
"jew"?

IlikePie
03-10-2008, 10:57 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture048.jpg

Round Robin shit again.... Not likin' it really, but I gotta turn this mug in....

RFI, Only really feelin' the Z and N
Sanrtizer, Yeah, fix your R and it would be pretty hawt
A Maze, <3 Young Link....

Damnit sex, stop posting for like 2 days so us normal people can get feedback :mad:


But really, is there a waiting line on who gets to carry your first offspring?

sex without condoms
03-10-2008, 10:59 PM
nope I'm gonna be happily married in a few years i hopee
and have 8 children !


nah fuck that but i actually impregnate women and sell the babies to unfertile mothers

the end
03-10-2008, 11:48 PM
ms paint yo!
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/8705/310testermspaintqu0.jpg

ba bump

jawsy
03-10-2008, 11:58 PM
nez- thats tight
kanr-the second peice is better, the first k is disgusting
rambooboo- go simpler
atlok- thats fuckin hot
c.n.k- its lookin good, colour them bitches
tare-keep workin on it
sex-i love your throws


crits on the letters folks??
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/5315/photo17mv4.jpg

bump to new page
+ throwiehttp://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5874/photo18oy9.jpg

Nem
03-11-2008, 12:15 AM
My hands are shakey as fuck from drinking last night but here's a new sticker im working on
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1496/dsc0431vi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

theres a threadless t-shirt with a similar design. not callin bite. cool lookin regardless.

Fube
03-11-2008, 12:46 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/221520.jpg

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/1633/caiswhiteblackoranggeil5.jpg

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3005/photo303hi5.png

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9104/img0164eo1.jpg

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/beamo.jpg

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/metniterekon.jpg
bump deeees, ^^

and this.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300827.jpg

FABLE IR CRU
03-11-2008, 03:19 AM
Newer simples
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple001.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/simple002.jpg
ATLOK-dope as always
DEEPER REASONING-learn basic blocks before anything else
ROOLETTE-I'm liking were that style is going

BUMP
REN--good & clean
APER--good simples
FUBE- thats a nice throw

wafflecakee
03-11-2008, 08:33 AM
fube those are sick
3d is kinda wack fable, keep practicing, things are looking good.

my most recent simples.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2299/nokt1fa4.jpg

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5496/nokt2ct5.jpg

sketch3
03-11-2008, 10:51 AM
My hands are shakey as fuck from drinking last night but here's a new sticker im working on
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1496/dsc0431vi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
iv seen a stencil almost exactly like this in person nest to bankys maid
im gunna call a bite

Thrice
03-11-2008, 11:32 AM
waffle- i like the top one, nice use of extensions with blocks. for the bottom one...not feeling the letter structure but if you did that one point perspective wihtout a ruler, props to that. Nice stuff tho. Here is my Throwie A, crits on it, hope it's not too whack.
http://i32.tinypic.com/2vsq5pe.jpg

smooth_nuts
03-11-2008, 11:44 AM
havent mposted here in a minute
new throw
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/newthrow.jpg
every thing fube bumped plus his shit is looking ill as fuck
fable-fix the bottom of the b and the top bar of the f looks kinda weird
jawsythe simples dope but im not feeling your throw at all
ilikepie-its pnice and clean....

Maste
03-11-2008, 12:38 PM
iv seen a stencil almost exactly like this in person nest to bankys maid
im gunna call a bite

it -is- a design that has been used before but that doesnt mean it is a bite... i think that if you cant bak it up with a picture than its not worth calling a bite...kind of a waste of a post. i dont know if its a bite or not but its a coolidea and and its not completley played out and if he happened to ahvea simular idea as someone i dont think he should be reprimanded...not much is original anymore and i see someone calling a bite every 2 pages...why?

as for the char itself i like it and wanna see it in color

LOPe_GCI
03-11-2008, 12:44 PM
fube and rekon lookin doooooooooope
copped some new markers last night so heres a piece.
tryin to develop the simple style, lemme know if its whack
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0367.jpg

sketch3
03-11-2008, 01:01 PM
lope dope but losse the plyed heart thing on the t, make the i the same size and the extension on the l is looking flimsy

maste if u read wat i said, i saw it in person, so unless hes from london...
also its just to similer

EyeZee
03-11-2008, 01:06 PM
yo lope it starts off good then it seems like you just got lazy. work on the last three letters n take that shit off the t it looks wack.
rekon looks dope love that style
pretty quick sketch for my buddy sarahs room
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/4272/isaias001iz4.jpg

Mass Appeal
03-11-2008, 01:33 PM
lope..urthing sketch said aswell as sorting out the top S bar

aqua
03-11-2008, 03:19 PM
i tried out a simpler one :)
http://i26.tinypic.com/jt6u7m.png
crits?

aqua
03-11-2008, 03:21 PM
fube those are sick
3d is kinda wack fable, keep practicing, things are looking good.

my most recent simples.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2299/nokt1fa4.jpg

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5496/nokt2ct5.jpg

i like the first one, the second looks a bit like dot to dot to me though.
:D

sex without condoms
03-11-2008, 04:21 PM
simple steezin, fucked the E horribly

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/153338-1.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
03-11-2008, 04:22 PM
Sex - ur simples give me wood
Nokt - keep it straight i suggest bars
Aqua - same thing as nokt
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00775.jpg
Freestyle 3D E's in class, crits?

wafflecakee
03-11-2008, 04:25 PM
sex: the shadows are kinda wack.

mosezone
03-11-2008, 04:29 PM
aqua-decent simple
sex-liking it, but not feeling the sun thing
evade-feeling the first one besides the arrow

some guy, simple, and a throw from school. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo001-1.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo002-1.jpg

crystalmeth and abortions
03-11-2008, 04:31 PM
feel lame for postin this cuz the 3d is alot like Fubes. but i did this fill before i saw that so, any crits?
http://a382.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/98/l_c168ebb9e71e16389697196b838c6c2d.jpg

Rambooboo
03-11-2008, 04:31 PM
evasion like to se the 3d in a whole thinghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2038/2325631662_936caff87f.jpg crits

Chump
03-11-2008, 04:34 PM
moes diggin the throw...
The top one the O looks like a D and the thing on the M looks to much like a apostrophe...really loike the SE though

Evasion Of Invasion
03-11-2008, 04:37 PM
evasion like to se the 3d in a whole thing

your wish is my command heres my round robin entry
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00772.jpg
says wrek crits?