Blackbooks

[emel]

i wouldnt count putting up pictures on an intenet forum and having some kids vote on which they think is the most visualy pleasing and not on letter structure(few do) as battle.

[Thrice]

no offence jetpack but you are at the graffiti illiterate stage. Atlok is sick as fuck, he has style, flow, and structure.

[emel]

lollll

[t-bur]

Thrice- you have ALOT to learn.

Emel- its not quantity its who votes for you.

[emel]

I agree that it matters who votes, but its not going to change that the declared winner is the one with the majority of votes

[atlok7]

tburzy live up to your talking dude and post some pics

[MarOne...]

Thrice- you have ALOT to learn.

Emel- its not quantity its who votes for you.

Yeah, this guy is the new knucks.

[JETPACK!!]

no offence jetpack but you are at the graffiti illiterate stage. Atlok is sick as fuck, he has style, flow, and structure.

none taken, ive been writing for like 6 months maybe? and 3 of those i was one of those idiot toys running around bangin up mad tags that looks like ass mixed with shit mixed with more ass with negative steeze. i only got seriously about it around a month after i joined BS. i'll get there eventually, i can paint well, i just need a decent steeze to paint lol

t-bur, thanks, i knew it looked wack too but i did it anyways. ill prolly have another up later.

im gonna get some paint an post some painted pictures soon

all my cans are like 3/4 empty, i cant do shit but handys with them.

anyways. more pics and crits, less chit chat. shits gettin mad off topic

[tgc!mtown]

ATLOK- honestly man im feelin it regaurdless of the legibility i like the style.

[emel]

thats why your not going to get anywhere

[fonone]

now that atlok pointed out the letters i suppose i can read it... but you shouldnt have to you know? im thinking connect a few more bars, and cut down the extension on the left mainly, thats where i couldnt see any letters.

[Thrice]

I've been writing for a few months too, but reading for 7 years....should of started writing right away. And Tbur, go fuck yourself, what is there for me to learn? I can read graff, so fucking what.

Anyways....putting the 'imple' in Simple
http://i32.tinypic.com/1z2q05t.jpg

[t-bur]

Will you faggots shut the fuck up.

Ahem- piece isnt too bad just keep using proportion.. and id rather fuck your redneck mum :).

Ill post a QUICK outline. For a battle with ilikepie unfinished:


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b67d721/1/225/tJv3waEy0T-zwtwez7ghX6S09vNlSn7f.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/AIrCWkNr1D9cHwd3fjxZRO7KuaXBt8go?referrer=hlnk)

[Thrice]

shaky hands much?

[t-bur]

Shut the fuck up its an outline fool.

[giganticCrane]

Will you faggots shut the fuck up.

Ahem- piece isnt too bad just keep using proportion.. and id rather fuck your redneck mum :).

Ill post a QUICK outline. For a battle with ilikepie unfinished:


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b67d721/1/225/tJv3waEy0T-zwtwez7ghX6S09vNlSn7f.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/AIrCWkNr1D9cHwd3fjxZRO7KuaXBt8go?referrer=hlnk)

with shit like that, you really dont need to be talkin down on everyone the way you do. its good and everything, but not THAT good. stop sucking your own dick and try to give useful crits, eh?

[MarOne...]

knucks much? Why do you keep creating new accounts?

[mosezone]

atlok- i think it's pretty fresh
tamk-decent, but not feeling the middle A thing or the little pieces coming off the T and K
giganticcrane-definately feeling the last characters, haha
ahem-move those letters closer, but definately good straiiiiggghhhttt letters
t-bur-good structure, but looks a little too jagged, know what i mean?

some bullshit from springbreak (went to Boston, DC, and NYC) last pic is a new throwie i'll probably be using for now

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01951.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01950.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01949.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01948.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01946.jpg

[Thrice]

heres a tip, don't try to do graffiti when your hand is having a seizure.
EDIT: thans moes, i'd try working on proportions a bit. Nice stuff tho.

Also t-bur good try... but my mom was born in taiwan and moved to philly, then NJ, then back to philly, then CT(where i was born) and then my family moved to the suburbs of GA. I live in one of the most wealthiest counties so im not a fucking red neck, or anyone in my family.

[tgc!mtown]

with shit like that, you really dont need to be talkin down on everyone the way you do. its good and everything, but not THAT good. stop sucking your own dick and try to give useful crits, eh?

those arent useful crits either.. people need to stop beefin on here for real if all you got to say is that shit sucks then dont say it cuz its not crits its fucking stupid. if your gonna say its not good then say why

[mosezone]

atlok- i think it's pretty fresh
tamk-decent, but not feeling the middle A thing or the little pieces coming off the T and K
giganticcrane-definately feeling the last characters, haha
ahem-move those letters closer, but definately good straiiiiggghhhttt letters
t-bur-good structure, but looks a little too jagged, know what i mean?

some bullshit from springbreak (went to Boston, DC, and NYC) last pic is a new throwie i'll probably be using for now

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01951.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01950.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01949.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01948.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01946.jpg

stop fucking beefing in here, i think there's a toy beef thread for that. bump to new page.

[MarOne...]

i really dig that throw, moes.

[tgc!mtown]

moes- im diggin that first one, maybe just show a little more of that E

[whatadizaster!]

moessss i like the second one. good shit, but im not a fan of the coloring

[emel]

that simples blows ahahahahahaha


raaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[Chump]

MOES^ agree with you!...shut up with the beef...
Moes-First one, the letters dont look bad at all. Need some work but dont look bad, its just the letters over lap each other alil to much.
Second one- good... make it dope :)
Third one- Love the idea... just clean the letters up alil.
4th and 5th- im diggin it...maybe alil more flow..

[atlok7]

thrice my rich cousins live in the suburbs of atlanta!

[tgc!mtown]

this was one i did for the round robin tourney i didnt wanna keep it simple due to the fact that the guy i was up against was bringin some serious heat. what do you guys think?

http://i27.tinypic.com/xe51lv.jpg

[tgc!mtown]

that simples blows ahahahahahaha


raaaaaaaaaaaaaa


you really just like starting shit dont you?

[Bazer]

My post was a joke about battling, and i would battle anyone from anywhere any level. Just dont tell me i dont know what im on about raby is too good for the toy forum.

Atlok- Take the crits tone down the extensions and extra add ons.
Tamk- make the bar om the middle of the A connect normaly not overlap it looks fucking stupid like that. Other than that its getting there.


And mr.rosa, zotos, 2zeks, baze you got a link to any painted shit from you?

fuck you n1gga. lets see ya bombs to homie? right now it looks like your bitin my shit!
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b67d721/1/225/tJv3waEy0T-zwtwez7ghX6S09vNlSn7f.jpg
look at that. what a shame.
and you wanna tell me to post my painted ism like im another wack toy like you that doesn't paint?
im out on the street every fuckin night earnin my name and right to call you a toy. the reason i dont post my shit is cuz i dont wanna be the mod thats adored by toys for posting my work every night i go paint makin them think im puttin in more work than i really am.
but heres just a little to keep a few of you guys mouth shut about people not painting.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8043.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8062.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG7793.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8020.jpg


think twice before you accuse someone of not painting cuz not everyone on here like to show off.

[JETPACK!!]

hahahahhaa i love bombing science for its beef, if i wanted to progress like a pro id be over at 12oz

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2015/ethugti1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Chump]

Baze... your B is weird... like it but doesnt look much like a B lol

[IlikePie]

Just got verbally backhanded....

[Thrice]

another quick simple and an outline of a style direction. Crit please
Moes-nice throwies, the top stroke of the E on the last one seems off.
http://i32.tinypic.com/2gxr8ro.jpg

[emel]

i think most people who were talking about all the people who dont paint, kinda knew you actually did, seeing as your a mod and that would make sense

and those tags are ill flaresssss man

[MarOne...]

baze, your style is banging. just keep working on that can control.

and about the 'people who don't paint' thing, I think everyone on this forum has AT LEAST touched/used a can of spraypaint for graffiti.

[atlok7]

baze i wanna give you a high five through this computer screen but thatss not really possible,. pm me some more of your freight pics if your down. im gay for trains

[seywhat]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/seyaresole.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage37.jpg
gonna color these up later
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/sr.jpg
fucked on the shadeing and outline
ahem- try to start doin 3d, but keep doin simples
baze- ill
moes- they're all fresh, just dont overlap so much on the first one

[tgc!mtown]

does everyone read right over mine?

sey- im feelin that first one, especially the little throw at the bottom

[Bazer]

another quick simple and an outline of a style direction. Crit please
Moes-nice throwies, the top stroke of the E on the last one seems off.
http://i32.tinypic.com/2gxr8ro.jpg

the bottom one, at the top of the A (the little corner thing?) you should make it flat like the top of the H and E you know? do the same with the M but keep all your letters the same height and thickness where it looks right, and youll have some pretty fine block letters.

[tgc!mtown]

ctso- im likin them all but was that first one done on the comp? and that black and white one at the bottom is dope as hell, keep up the good work your style is fresh

[tgc!mtown]

o arrite there tight tho man

[Chump]

http://i27.tinypic.com/j122yv.jpg
Exchange i just did... alil sloppy...
CTSO- do some stuff on paper...
SEYWHAT- that style is workin man... keep working on it...

[seywhat]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/seyaresole.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage37.jpg
gonna color these up later

bump for crits

chump- ur throw style is gettin there, ur 3d is off a bit, but not bad
ctso- give crits to get crits

[AnteUp]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/03-26-08_2308.jpg
what throw.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/03-26-08_2149.jpg
A...
old shit, crits please

hence. its nice, i like the more colplex throws but i like that one.
seyar. that simple is lukkin good, the o isnt good, you shouda mad it just a regular but skinny o. the first e on the second one is good.

[seywhat]

thanks for the crits yall
ante- i feel that throw, try to bend some bars and make that a peice. i wanna see some full peices from you
ctso- my bad man, i didnt see, i like that last pic, but u should put those in the digi thread

[Samp1e]

rough cut, gonna ink another day.

gotta mod the S a little to make it fit, i know

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5484/65561923ys5.png

ante -- 2nd pic, it's just got too much going on. the contrasting diagonals just don't work right with your letter. make solid connections with the ends of your bars.

seywhat -- 1st pic's letters are alright, the Es are strange though. 2nd pic, do something different with the L. didn't you write a lot different before? if i remember correctly, that stuff was alright, might wanna drop back and rock that style again?

chump -- generic throw... alright i guess

baze already covered thrice.

[whocares!?!?!]

seywhat, i assume those are based on neighborhood styles from 70's west coast ish, you need to make the bend in the L (before the platform) more in the middle so it doesn't look like a z, and you could fix the o a bit if you just used 4 pieces with singular flexion

(see the L in this, where the middle bend is at)
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/116/277637701_244f30d972.jpg

on the real though i'd work on your hands first the ones up there are pure booty =p

[mmmburgers]

http://www.shrinkpictures.com/processed/phpn0ACMkAM.jpg
just a sketch i did a while back
trying out a new style

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

burgers- i like it

im fucked up on a blunt and a bottle of wine I got for free

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2346/dscn0417nz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[RUP'E]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z278/sweetersc/The_toy.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

calling me toy?

[RUP'E]

ahhaha chill man.
i dont even know if your a toy, but im guessin u are since ur in the toy thread.
but watever, the point is i wanted to post that coz it was funny and i went to the first toy thread available.
chya

[fonone]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7118/mar31129yt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6332/mar31130yk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

give crits first man

[fonone]

i didnt ask for any,

[fonone]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7118/mar31129yt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6332/mar31130yk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yup

[SCIEnce802]

Fix the K, and the N a little, take off some of the smaller not needed extensions and put that on a train.

& work on ur handstyle

[t-bur]

fuck you n1gga. lets see ya bombs to homie? right now it looks like your bitin my shit!
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b67d721/1/225/tJv3waEy0T-zwtwez7ghX6S09vNlSn7f.jpg
look at that. what a shame.
and you wanna tell me to post my painted ism like im another wack toy like you that doesn't paint?
im out on the street every fuckin night earnin my name and right to call you a toy. the reason i dont post my shit is cuz i dont wanna be the mod thats adored by toys for posting my work every night i go paint makin them think im puttin in more work than i really am.
but heres just a little to keep a few of you guys mouth shut about people not painting.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8043.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8062.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG7793.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/CIMG8020.jpg


think twice before you accuse someone of not painting cuz not everyone on here like to show off.

Yeah those dubs are nice. But i didnt once accuse you of not painting, just stated that i wanted to see some of your painted stuff.

[Fazed]

I Love You Baze <3333

[milfhunter]

haha yall got baze mad..funny stuff baze paints hes also part of the cult 77k so watch nigag will slit ur kids throats

[JETPACK!!]

i didnt ask for any,

yo dont play yourself, posting your pix means you want crits. bumpin them only proves my points.

give crits an dont front like you dont want any.

sonic, i like that a lot lot more than anything else youve done<3
grab another bottle of wine an another blunt an see what else you can do, the only thing im not really feelin is the tail on your T, but it flows too well to remove it imo, try altering it a bit an see what you can get outta it.

[:RAVE:]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/Picture013.jpg
sumthin im tryin 2 develop
tips 4 improvment??
n no im not tryn 2 bite sir
its just a sketch 4 my blackbook

[seywhat]

my tips are give crits to get crits :)

[merm1sf]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9946/0331081653tb4.th.jpg (http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0331081653tb4.jpg)
I write ZEUS,

this is just some random shit

as for critss, RAVE, you could try throwing a 3-D on those letters to make em look better
and fonone, those letters are nice but you could work on your handstyle a lil bit

[JETPACK!!]

ZUEEEESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAI ZUES!!

hahahah nice name

tip#1 give crits
tip#2 make your pic bigger
tip#3 your U dosent look like a U, fix that up. nice bomb

[:RAVE:]

i always leave a huge list of crits but the only sketch on his page said he didnt want crits
sheesh i cant get away w/o given crits one time i always give them

n zeus i like it but ur second dot is bigger then ur first one and yeah fix up the u

[t-bur]

Zeus- not bad keep practicing, try using bars maybe.


Rave- use bars and dont use any addons yet, also keep all parts of the letters the same thickness.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b7039db/1/12/QOYRENDG5z_3g8L5wi52kX6Ith98e5Q7.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/GbFSf4ct4D9E5m0hOfgmgpyhEUVHcEhV?referrer=hlnk)

Save, for a battle with i like pie.

[MarOne...]

Zeus- not bad keep practicing, try using bars maybe.


Rave- use bars and dont use any addons yet, also keep all parts of the letters the same thickness.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b7039db/1/12/QOYRENDG5z_3g8L5wi52kX6Ith98e5Q7.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/GbFSf4ct4D9E5m0hOfgmgpyhEUVHcEhV?referrer=hlnk)

Save, for a battle with i like pie.

Yeah, take your own crits. Use simple bars, no addons. and how many accounts you gonna make, ASEN/SLEDGEHAMMER/Knucks/T-Bur?

[JSBiggz]

Fonone-Lookin good, just clean it up a bit
Rave- Use bars to form letters
merm1sf- fix the U
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2341/img0103ux3.jpg

[:RAVE:]

i said im tryin 2 develop that sketch not redo a whole new one
how about sum tips 4 suttle changes i can make
n i used bars 2 develop the structure but i ereased them after

[MarOne...]

Dont post about my shit you long haired fat ass yanky little toy, go and paint or suck your mates cocks. Gay little prick.

Why do you gotta PM me this shit? Oh well, guess someone can't take simple crits.


JS- Keep working on it, make all of your letters the same size.

[t-bur]

How sad are you?

We all know how to make up a pm.

[JSBiggz]

quit beefing faggots and crit my shit

[Jet]

your shit sucks.

there.

[MarOne...]

How sad are you?

We all know how to make up a pm.

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/proofmuch.jpg


made up? haha :rolleyes:

[JSBiggz]

your shit sucks.

there.

That wasnt a crit, that was a derogatory statement

[atlok7]

just messing around in school

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4860/throwcaisonexh1.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9166/throwcaiseroneia5.jpg

[JSBiggz]

Did you change your name atlock?

[atlok7]

ha ive been cais for like a month

[JSBiggz]

oh lawd....i did not notice.....i thought Atlok was a bad ass name....did you get bored or something?

[t-bur]

Atlok- the Case one is nice. The top one akel inspired?

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b70b4cf/1/7/7tC5bdL22j-SH55cBUZ7CIRDjDOO4bMh.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/5lLXMAGy4D8ADsug530w9FySq2LGyt-w?referrer=hlnk)

[hazetheone]

so are we batttling

[atlok7]

im inspired by everyone tbur

[MarOne...]

so are we batttling

word, let me in. I wanna take down this fucking toy again. I've whooped him countless times already.

[JSBiggz]

Fonone-Lookin good, just clean it up a bit
Rave- Use bars to form letters
merm1sf- fix the U
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2341/img0103ux3.jpg


bumperino

Atlock- make the E like the lines and stuff lower...because the lines on your other letters are lower....if you see what i mean....

[t-bur]

MAR , HAZE KFC FUCK FAGGOTS.

WORD : SAVE

RULES: MS PAINT

you already have my toy entry.

[hazetheone]

well
we can include anyone but it would mean more to me if i crushed him by myself

[hazetheone]

MAR , HAZE KFC FUCK FAGGOTS.

WORD : SAVE

RULES: MS PAINT

you already have my toy entry.

no
word boer
sketch with no help from bill gates
god damn you are a bitch

[MarOne...]

well
we can include anyone but it would mean more to me if i crushed him by myself

alright, thats cool. Enjoy getting demolished, asen.

ctso- Damn, those characters are almost fezat-status.

[t-bur]

Demolished? haha stfu.

Ms paint battle or not. I have no scanner or camera with me and wont have for a few days fools.

[seywhat]

MAR , HAZE KFC FUCK FAGGOTS.

WORD : SAVE

RULES: MS PAINT

you already have my toy entry.

HAHAHAHA trien to battle with some shit u already did. come on man, if u wanna battle someone, you gotta put some effort into it

[hazetheone]

shit we can do ms paint but the word is boer

[t-bur]

Done.

The word BUNE.

[hazetheone]

no boer
do you not see me tping thaat
we compromised for your ms paint fetish
i pick the word
BOER

[MarOne...]

tbur- are you fucking retarded?

[t-bur]

Why you so adamant for the word boer, gunna bite someones letters?

But yeah fine boer is the word.

[hazetheone]

yes im going to bite someones letters
you caught me

[rafe001]

http://i31.tinypic.com/6gjxb5.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/2chpzrl.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/s58ux5.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/2dhrzfl.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/3145pip.jpg

crits???

[JSBiggz]

give crits to get them ;)

[AnteUp]

rough cut, gonna ink another day.
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5484/65561923ys5.png
gotta mod the S a little to make it fit, i know


ante -- 2nd pic, it's just got too much going on. the contrasting diagonals just don't work right with your letter. make solid connections with the ends of your bars.

seywhat -- 1st pic's letters are alright, the Es are strange though. 2nd pic, do something different with the L. didn't you write a lot different before? if i remember correctly, that stuff was alright, might wanna drop back and rock that style again?

chump -- generic throw... alright i guess


baze already covered thrice.
bump. the s is pure sex

[seywhat]

yoooo camer, i just remembered about our exchange, did u ever do mine?

[hazetheone]

oh shit no
ill do it now

[rafe001]

oh dang my bad, forgot.

atlok - i like the style of the 2nd one, its sick.
fonone - i like all of that man, the style is bad, i dig the throwup.


sorry bout that. crits now eh?
;)

[seywhat]

rafe- bro drop the markers for a bit, until u get ur letters down pat. the best one is the second one, just dont overlap so much, keep doing simples, and sketch a whole shit load.
samp- orgasmic shit, would looove to see that ish painted

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

the word :shut the fuck up.
me against all of y'all.

[Mr. Octane]

Rafe- I like the fill u had goin on the second one...u kinda killed it with the F tho u shoulda kept it goin. On the last one the second bar on the F is too high up, it should be closer to being even with the horizontal line in the A and the E
Samp1e- that shit is dope...just fix up the S like u were gunna and it'll b all good

been workin on my letters...

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n188/HighOctane89/Doz-1.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n188/HighOctane89/Doze-1.jpg

any suggestions?

[ESKiMO2]

just messing around in school

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4860/throwcaisonexh1.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9166/throwcaiseroneia5.jpg

Second one is fucking awesome! I wish I could do shit like that...

[atlok7]

thanks man. yeah i was just freestyling it in school.
yo whats kfc

[Casual7ie]

mr. octane-the simple is pretty sick, but that handy is kinda wack idk im just not diggin the style of it. but the simple is lookin hot

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Took a chomp outta daws' book cuz i cant figure out how to evolve my old Sinn style
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00927.jpg
Shitty simples i did in class friday
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00932.jpg
crits?

[atlok7]

the second one is dope. but loose the upside down crosses in the first. that shit is wack

[Doctor Lucifer]

What you talking about? Upside-down crosses is whats happening. That means do it.

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture202.jpg

[:RAVE:]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/Picture017.jpg
i know the extensions r wack but im tryin 2 get better at them

evasion- i like the evade except the d looks like an n, a wack n at that

doze- like the first 1 but the second is 2 blocky

rafe- yeah use pencil till u develop structure then when ur finished maybe color it

vois- lose the black lines in ur 3d

[atlok7]

What you talking about? Upside-down crosses is whats happening. That means do it.

;)

[atlok7]

AYO ROTZ is this better letter wise?
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3679/caisredwhitefk6.jpg
CAIS

[Thrice]

siiick atlok, add more color and background.

[hazetheone]

god damnit that is awesome dude
http://i30.tinypic.com/903z83.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/302o2yu.jpg
rave-that is bad on several different levels
1.spades
2.still in pencil
3.crooked 3-d
4.forcefield is the same color as the 3-d
those stick out to me the most

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

burgers- i like it

im fucked up on a blunt and a bottle of wine I got for free

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2346/dscn0417nz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump for crits

haze- thats a dope seyar

[atlok7]

tare- simples are really helping you man looks dope
haze- thankzz/ i like that second one of yours its nice

[Doctor Lucifer]

god damnit that is awesome dude
http://i30.tinypic.com/903z83.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/302o2yu.jpg
rave-that is bad on several different levels
1.spades
2.still in pencil
3.crooked 3-d
4.forcefield is the same color as the 3-d
those stick out to me the most

Loving that steez, camer. wanna hook up an exchange? I write KAWER/KAWR.

[hazetheone]

http://i26.tinypic.com/219ub6r.jpg
this was boer berore that guy refused to sketch
sorry for tha wack ms paint reproduction
kawr-hell yea man ill get it as soon as possible

[:RAVE:]

how is my 3d crooked it supposed 2 towards a center point
n i dun think u need 2 color every sketch u do
it can b in pencil

[hazetheone]

trust me it is

[iBomb4KOG]

atlok that shits freash...try connecting the I into one bar instead of three....feel me?

Rave your 3d is fuckedddddd.....try makin it all even out and the lines n the same angle...feel me??? n throw some color on that bitch

[atlok7]

yeah i feel you

[seywhat]

thanks camer thats dope

[Doctor Lucifer]

exchange with Camer-

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk192/DoctorLucifer/camer1exchange.jpg

fucked up the 'e'.

[JETPACK!!]

AYO ROTZ is this better letter wise?
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3679/caisredwhitefk6.jpg
CAIS

thank you so very much atlok, you listened to whoever and it looks that much better. im not entirely feeling the S, id bring the bar in more of a loop, kinna like the circle of your A.
keep at it bro

haze, thats ill, im diggin the B and E, very sexy. simples FTW!

a lil somethin just so i can keep my sketch a day going before it hits 12 haha

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5089/tamkzp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Soboe!]

thats fire Dr.Luci, :)
that A is so fresh man

[Cozmo]

Jetpack, the T looks a little funny, but otherwise, nice simples.

Atlok, I always like your stuff. I can never read it, but I like it.

Doc, nice job on Camer. I like the eyes.

Camer, I dig the colouring on Seyar, especially the white reflections.

Haze, noice. Well done.

Rave, is that an AA? Don't know if I'm totally feeling the arrows, but I like the 3D and other extensions.

How's this, yo? It's "Dubh," which is Scottish for "black." I'm figuring that'll be about as common a tag as "Boer" is. ;)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/E5Elvis/dubh_scot.jpg

[atlok7]

yeah i feel that dubh, just move the circles in the B closer together

[:RAVE:]

its RA short 4 rave lol

[Cozmo]

Cool. Thanks, man. Should I make them smaller, or just move them closer together?

[Cozmo]

its RA short 4 rave lol

Oh, yeah! I see it now...the little hang-over part on the R...missed that before. :)

[Cozmo]

Here's one from a couple of weeks ago. I coloured it last night...kind of sloppy, but coloured nonetheless.

http://photos-e.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v192/148/86/710342260/n710342260_714900_7107.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

thank you so very much atlok, you listened to whoever and it looks that much better. im not entirely feeling the S, id bring the bar in more of a loop, kinna like the circle of your A.
keep at it bro

haze, thats ill, im diggin the B and E, very sexy. simples FTW!

a lil somethin just so i can keep my sketch a day going before it hits 12 haha

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5089/tamkzp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cozmo, that DUBH is cool, but try to make the letters similar sizes. it kinna goes big to small

[Cozmo]

cozmo, that DUBH is cool, but try to make the letters similar sizes. it kinna goes big to small

Thanks! I never noticed that before...

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Jetpack- the top bar on the T is too thick but other then that its good buddy

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1430/dscn0426jo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[fonone]

jetpack - i do not like you.

my crit of the week. enjoy.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

gtfo of this thread if you're not here to give crits or post flicks man

[Soboe!]

yea and ??FON?? is that pronouced Fone aka phone? if so dont write that, i got a buddy who writes Fone and he is the farthest thing from toy

[fonone]

Nice to know my man, like seriously your opinion means alot to me.

For 1; I doubt we live in the same country.2;I do not write that.

Like i said though, much appreciated, keep up the good work.

[ScreamingAtAWall]

Jetpack- the top bar on the T is too thick but other then that its good buddy

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1430/dscn0426jo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I like that, but the R kind of bothers me. I can't explain it.

I did this VERY quickly, so I know some the letter thickness is inconsistent. Also, the E totally pisses me off so I'll probably change it. Any crits?
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/7563/040108nvhi1.jpg

[:RAVE:]

ur i looks like a d
n give crits 2 get them

[ScreamingAtAWall]

ur i looks like a d
n give crits 2 get them

Did the first half of my post completely go over your head?

And yeah, I was thinking about the I/D thing a minute ago, thanks.

[:RAVE:]

man u dont need 2 b rude n thats a half ass crit
ur supposed 2 do every1 on this page
or at least me lol

[ScreamingAtAWall]

man u dont need 2 b rude n thats a half ass crit
ur supposed 2 do every1 on this page
or at least me lol

I wasn't being an ass. Sometimes I just come across like that, and since this is the intarnetz emotion isn't conveyed well. :p

[Soboe!]

I wasn't being an ass. Sometimes I just come across like that, and since this is the intarnetz emotion isn't conveyed well. :p

your rubbing off a cocky atitude man, thats not needed in here, if you end up being an ignorant asshole on bombingscience you get your ass banned fool! and spell properly, i-n-t-e-r-n-e-t!
jesus!
oh yea, try not to go all out with your letters yet, keep them simpler and straighter for now

[ScreamingAtAWall]

your rubbing off a cocky atitude man, thats not needed in here, if you end up being an ignorant asshole on bombingscience you get your ass banned fool! and spell properly, i-n-t-e-r-n-e-t!
jesus!
oh yea, try not to go all out with your letters yet, keep them simpler and straighter for now

Ignorant asshole? Why's that? Is it because I've OCD and type everything out?

And thanks for the crit.

[edit]
Oh, and since you're being a spelling nazi:
You're
attitude

[:RAVE:]

haha nah man you're is short 4 you are

[fonone]

I dont think you should have to crit every single fucking thing like its some law, the way i see it if you think something is worth critting in your own mind you crit it. No point telling the kid the same thing 7 other people have told him especially if its something like "go back to simples" and to be honest i dont think half the people on here will even listen. but w/e.

[Soboe!]

fon your right, its the way i feel too,

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Inve - I dont even know where to begin i guess ill just say fix the hook on ur "e" it looks like a fucked up lowercase N

JETPACK - seems like urs is startin to evolve like "amkah" or wut ever hes changed it to in the past 4 minutes not callin bite but ur evolutions takin that turn

Cozmo - looks good just seperate the C and H next time


Took a chomp outta daws' book cuz i cant figure out how to evolve my old Sinn style
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00927.jpg
Shitty simples i did in class friday
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00932.jpg
crits?
Bump!

[Soboe!]

the simple is rockin a cartoon style my boy evade, its fresh.

[inchture]

i got told to start of with simples i have been practicing them but my hands sorta shaky is it good enought to move on to something new or should i keep practicing
http://i28.tinypic.com/2uxz61i.png

[atlok7]

AYO ROTZ is this better letter wise?
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3679/caisredwhitefk6.jpg
CAIS
ne critiques?

[inchture]

is this one better?

http://i26.tinypic.com/2h6811d.png

[:RAVE:]

yeah its gettin better
it still needs alotta work but its better none the less
the second stick on ur r and k r skinnyer then the rest of ur letter
n the top right one on ur k should go as high as the rest of ur letters
n ur i is crooked try n make it go straight up

use pencil then u can fix ur sketch w/o havin 2 do a whole new one

[inchture]

ok thanks for this advance

[:RAVE:]

np man thats y im here
n i think u mean advice not advance

[inchture]

yeah advice is what i meant

[fonone]

inchture try using bars, it will help you letters look alot more "normal" just throwing that out there, for information on bars check the new to graff thread. not being an ass just saying its great to help you start out.

[JETPACK!!]

word, amkahs almost as big of an asshole as i am. so maybe we think alike. but im pretty sure he's workin on a new, less bar-ish steeze i think.

to be frank, i like my T a lot, adds character to, i wanna make my other letters have a similar steeze, but its not as easy as it was for the T.
and yeah ctso my K is a bit off, i forgot to shadow the bottom of it and i didnt bring down the back bar as much as i should have. but thanks

trick keep your letters straight, some of your letters angled off to the right. and keep your bars the same width as the others, the kick on your leg is too narrow. try to curve your edges too so its not as sharp, unless you wanna go for a blockbuster look.

evade im not really feelein the first steeze, its kinna hard to read. but i like the pink laser beam or whatever going through it, thats ill haha.
your second sketch is a nice example of simples. i love your A, i was trying to work on a lower case a an get it to look like that, but it wouldnt worked, so i went back to capital. im not feeling the angle of your E's either, try to not put the bar through the back of your E if you na'mean. and loose the crown, no one likes them hahaha

fonone, im glad you dont like me, your hate towards me fuels me like gasoline.

good luck bringing me down:)

[sKeeLo]

AYO ROTZ is this better letter wise?
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3679/caisredwhitefk6.jpg
CAIS

it has alot of the lil elements that can make a piece look good but you can tell that you dont have proper fundamental letter skills down yet . . . i saw your simples in the big boy thread and they need some work in my mind . . your on your way but dont go to far into the deep end of teh pool and not know how to doggy paddle . .

jetpack - thats a long ass sig you got there buddy

[Thrice]

Trick-if you're freestyling with marker, just use a pencil so you can erase and create straighter lines.
http://i30.tinypic.com/24q759k.jpg
Crit please

[oakstr1]

Evasion Of Invasion - i like the top one, n i would like the bottom one if it was just one color

inchture - try simple bubbles smashed together


i didnt like the ' ! ' after i did it.
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/8067/throw1ji8.jpg

you can see where i fucked up on the 's' but its the best i got right now.
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1770/92870002rp9.jpg
crits?

[Scream Out]

and the letter of the day is:
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo248.jpg
i know its kinda fucked but i was just fuckn around, NOT LOOKN FOR CRIT

and heres a quick dirty little sketch with some dead markers and too many random things coming out of this tumorous piece of eyesore haha
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo250.jpg

[Thrice]

im a toy, but not a complete toy. I know about biting and all that shit. Also I like all my letters and not going to change an individual letter because i write ahem the word for a reason. Thanks tho

[Doctor Lucifer]

exchange with Camer-

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk192/DoctorLucifer/camer1exchange.jpg

fucked up the 'e'.

bumping for haze.

[IlikePie]

Your R looks like Mar's.... I think that's who it is... The guy who was doing his fill like it was 3D and it looked cool... Someone tell me if I'm right.

*edit*
Amaze.... Unless you have 2 accounts, I'm not very good at catching on to these things....

[Evasion Of Invasion]

chill on the extensions go to simples nuff said

[tgc!mtown]

Trick-if you're freestyling with marker, just use a pencil so you can erase and create straighter lines.
http://i30.tinypic.com/24q759k.jpg
Crit please

it would look better with straight bars and closer together

Atlok- dope as usuall man, i love your style

[tgc!mtown]

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/bohn.jpg
crits appreciated, as always

oaks - you missed a little 3D on the bottom of the a and k
thrice - the middle bars on the A and H are too thin and the H and M don't flow too well; they feel very posed and forced

im feelin the characters as usuall but you went a little crazy with the peice man i was likin your simples way better

[Cozmo]

Agreed. I like the girls, but the piece looks a little weird. I know this is purely personal preference, but it looks too jagged to me. It doesn't flow.

[Casual7ie]

yo same here. girls hot. peice ehhh. simples are so much better. but the 3d looks fly. to me at least hah

[sketch3]

the sketches are kinda fucked

[inchture]

ok i used bars rubbed them out but fucked up the outline its sorta shaky before i outlined it all the letter were sitting on the line anyway's here it is

http://i30.tinypic.com/x3im1w.png

[Evasion Of Invasion]

R is fucked

[Soboe!]

hey Inchture, i did a super quick tutorial to help you out abit.

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080401_6.jpg

1) Look at how the Letter(s) Flow(s).
2) Use blocks, aslo known as bars to sketch out your letter. Keep them the same width and for now, same lenght.
3) Erase the lines that are NOT needed.
And then you have your finished product :D

P.S. Stick to pencil for now, dont waste your markers for little simple sketches. plus you can always fix your mistake if its in pencil.

[inchture]

what is wrong with it? i did use bars

[Soboe!]

yea, i didnt realize that you posted that, but read the edit i made it, its the last thing i said

[inchture]

ok because the lineswere fine in penicl but i all ways manage to fuck it up with a marker so i think ill stick to pencil

edit:ok so i did a quick just to see if i was doing it right

http://i29.tinypic.com/fdc0ao.jpg

[Soboe!]

try it with a ruler for straight lines, hell even measure if you want to.
other then that your progressing pretty good

[atlok7]

ayo ctso- i drew out some thing that may help you with your 3d. when the 3d stops extending off the letter it keeps the same shape and angle of the letter. so when you draw it make sure its parallel to the line it extends off. the green shows this.

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/8806/bohnen5.jpg

[Soboe!]

A link to help out every one!!!

www.learngraffiti.net/

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/learngraff.jpg

[inchture]

i tried that website but got tired biting mr wiggles letters and tried to start with keyboard letters and devlop my own style (eventually)

edit-if you meant the basic letters and letter progression they were really helpful

[hazetheone]

all upcoming toys should take a page out of tare's book he seriously did it right and got really good within a month or two
i really dont like this but i have to go back redo the whole thing later
this is just to show lucifur that i didn't forget
http://i32.tinypic.com/3025sts.jpg

[atlok7]

yo haze_ lookEN fresh as usual, yo whats KFC

[Soboe!]

its a restaurant you eat at :)
no its a crew

[hazetheone]

pretty much me marone and animal now
revid has been gone forever
but it is a group of the better people in the toyforum
or an excuse for everyone to talkshit
i actually dont know who else is in it ask mar

[atlok7]

do i qualify for better in the toy forum?

[t-bur]

Evade that bottom simple is freshhh!

[t-bur]

pretty much me marone(long haired cock breath) and animal( faggoty asslicking biter) now
revid has been gone forever
but it is a group of the better people in the toyforum
or an excuse for everyone to talkshit
i actually dont know who else is in it ask mar


HAHAHHA funny shit, you mar and animal are all wack as fuck.

[hazetheone]

i had a feeling one of you or amk would say some shit like that
atlok-uhh...YEA
i always thought you were light years better than me

[atlok7]

t-bur, dude you need to stop taking shit man as far as ive seen you dont have alot of game

[hazetheone]

haha burn

[atlok7]

so im in?

[JETPACK!!]

t-bur has no game. KFC are too egotistical

thats how i see it

[t-bur]

Atlok as far as im concerned, you earn resepct by toys because they love your pretty colours and wack structure , not beef mate just stating a fact.

Haze- The reason you thought that is beacause its true:), me and amk are both english we speak the truth, both red at heart aswell. LFC

[Soboe!]

too much talking, enough of that.
my crews called "egotistical po-po killaz"

[hazetheone]

idk what yall are talking about egotistical
shit amk said that shit in jan ever since
its kfc postwhore kfc talk shit
god damn
i post a few times every six or seven pages mar doesn't ever do that much revid is no longer here
i dont see anything egotistical about it
all the crits we give are legit too
you fucks need to check yourselfs

[atlok7]

did u learn that word from rots, jetpack?

[sketch3]

kfc=lame apart from haze
tbur=ur letters are swag, everytime i tell u go simpler for now u ignore it
also im from the uk an all i gotta say is shutup abouttalkin truth
jetpack=pissy whore

[atlok7]

t-bur- battle me in a no color match to shut your fucking british mouth up

[hazetheone]

yes you are in if you want
but beware tbur he is vicious

[atlok7]

ahaha ok

[JSBiggz]

haha burn

more like

t-burned

agagaggagagagagaggagagagagagagagagga

[Soboe!]

that kinda killed it if you realized :)

[sketch3]

wow wow lets not bring nationality into this, cuss i dont wanna be on fagboys team
now can everyone shut up?

old throw for an old battle, i hate it but w/e
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2055/serpwa0.jpg

[Doctor Lucifer]

more like

t-burned

agagaggagagagagaggagagagagagagagagga

that made me laugh.


Thanks for that exchange, camer.

T-bur, shut the hell up. You suck. Ass.

[JETPACK!!]

every day that passes by i hate the kids on bombingscience more and more...

egotistical has nothing to do with post count. saying your better than others means your egotistical. im not beefing haze or kfc, but when you think you run the toy forum. that classifies as egotistical in my mind.

its a god damned opinion. learn what the fuck an opinion means.

my opinions not gonna stop the world from turning, so stop sweatin shit...

[Soboe!]

theres to much talkin now, can we get back to the pics?

[atlok7]

Preach It

[hazetheone]

how many times have you seen me say im better than someone
shit on this page i told atlok he is lightyears better than me
but there is a first time for everything
i am better than you jetpack always have been always will be
proove me wrong

[JETPACK!!]

im not even gonna get into this. good for you haze, you can draw better than someone else. heres a medal for your achiements

[atlok7]

i wanna battle t-bur STEP UP NUCKA

[sketch3]

atlok - thanks for the diagram

sketch3 - care to elaborate on that one? "fucked" is pretty ambiguous
yea i wanted to go into detail but i cudnt proportians,
basicly the eyes and face look out of place, use the circle and cross method to determen the perspective and direction ur character is looking
http://bluebuddies.com/gallery/How_To_Draw_A_Smurf/jpg/How_To_Draw_A_Smurf_Step_2.jpg

[pikser]

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/phpWBHTKEPM-1.jpg

Crits

[hazetheone]

http://i31.tinypic.com/34gq100.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/34tcoox.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/2lxzdq0.jpg
some of my recent favorites at the moment

[JSBiggz]

I love how your name is Camer


just....i think its hilarious

[dim]

camer work on your throwie man

[atlok7]

yo haze check the sig

[hazetheone]

oh ive got it now
why is camer so funny
edit:im honord by your presence
prepare for a journey into true e-hate
you are now tagged as an egotistical e thug
enjoy

[JSBiggz]

Just...some of the websites...i visit.....you wouldnt think its funny


but good throw ups and shit though

[Soboe!]

cause he is a blest child :)

bunk S with TERRIBLE letter structure
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080401_9.jpg

[hazetheone]

structure actually isnt bad
but the proportions are a little cartoonie

[JSBiggz]

that S fucking suck ass.....ive seen squirrells write better S's than that
holy shit



April fools


agagaggagaaggagagagagggagagagagaggagagagaga


looks ok just work on it

[pikser]

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/phpWBHTKEPM-1.jpg

crits

[sketch3]

camer thinken that shit up i want my sketches lie i want my woman, thik in all the right places, (and on lying on my desk)

out of curiosity wud u let me join kfc if i wanted

edit guy above me, stick to the bottom sketch,
and loose the crazy fill

[Soboe!]

yea i actualy just sketched it to keep the flicks coming but i refreshed my page and realized camer posted a bunch so i said wth and posted it anyways

[hazetheone]

pikser-well i hope you take my advice although you dont want to hear it
tone it down before you color it go simple
please take my advice
sketch-do you have any of your work you could post

[Soboe!]

camer thinken that shit up i want my sketches lie i want my woman, thik in all the right places, (and on lying on my desk)

out of curiosity wud u let me join kfc if i wanted

you never ever ask to be in a crew, its just wrong man.

[hazetheone]

i wouldn't call it a crew
its the internet man

[sketch3]

i dont want be in there ''crew'' i said would they let me be if i did

[Soboe!]

oh haha my bad.

[pikser]

thanks for the advice haze

[JSBiggz]

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/2937/img0104ny8.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1273/img0105qz0.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/928/img0106og3.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/9995/img0107nn3.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6627/img0108ra6.jpg


any crits on these bad boys?

EDIT: Pisker simple it up a bit

[Soboe!]

i wanna sex haze to his grave :)

[JETPACK!!]

i wouldn't call it a crew
its the internet man

my respect for you jumped by a signifigant amount when you wrote that. (Y)

[sketch3]

sketch-do you have any of your work you could post
boh!
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/593/freeshp7.jpg
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2181/spekse9.jpg
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6146/muffintopkw6.jpg
this ones OLD
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3734/pict0141ap5.jpg

[Fube]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-01-08_1951.jpg

fuckin around with some simples. this is for a different battle.

sketch, watch the thickness man. all over the place.

[Soboe!]

i was about to say, "i wanna see some fube sketches" and BAM! i click this page and there we go!

[sketch3]

yea i need work on that, its not that bad in the reacentish sketch

[JSBiggz]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-01-08_1951.jpg

fuckin around with some simples. this is for a different battle.

sketch, watch the thickness man. all over the place.


Uhh just a question....why did you make it nice and clean till you go to the A then you were like hey seizure time...then your D is like whats up im a clean letter...and then your Y is like ready. set. seizure.


whats up with that?

[Soboe!]

Uhh just a question....why did you make it nice and clean till you go to the A then you were like hey seizure time...then your D is like whats up im a clean letter...and then your Y is like ready. set. seizure.


whats up with that?

im guessing cause the word is "steady" he wanted to make some letters the opposite of steady...

[pikser]

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/Picture.jpg
crits

[sketch3]

tone it down, lose the crazy fills for now

[JSBiggz]

im guessing cause the word is "steady" he wanted to make some letters the opposite of steady...

ohhh.........gotcha