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hazetheone
04-01-2008, 08:27 PM
fube do you wanna exchange dude
sketch-you can be in if you want now i like all that shit
masr-make your letters more consistent with less random negative space
jetpack-i wasn't trying to beef you i deff respect your opinion and shit that little tbur argument turned into a lot of stupid shit so we are good man

Scream Out
04-01-2008, 08:29 PM
back to my old name + simples
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo253.jpg

JSBiggz
04-01-2008, 08:29 PM
fube do you wanna exchange dude

masr-make your letters more consistent with less random negative space



Negative space?

hazetheone
04-01-2008, 08:30 PM
actually its just the s
maybe close it off in the inside of it
jus looks kind of out of place
sketch-he never did shit to dis me

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 08:30 PM
back to my old name + simples
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo253.jpg

thats so hot

atlok7
04-01-2008, 08:31 PM
scream thats dope

sketch3
04-01-2008, 08:33 PM
and thats why everyone calls u guys arogant^^^


jsbiggs-negative space is the blank space thats not filled up betwwwen ur letters and extentions

impale- the vertical bar of the e is to thik, as wellas the horizontal bar of the a

haze- from wat i remember jetpaack sucks floppy falafel

JSBiggz
04-01-2008, 08:36 PM
ohohoohohohohoohohoh i see what you mean by negative space

i see in some of my stuff its not colored and what not

atlok7
04-01-2008, 08:37 PM
for the anti throwup battle
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2027/antithrowiedopeql7.jpg

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 08:44 PM
atlok7 work on your handsteez abit :) get them crazy letters down

hazetheone
04-01-2008, 08:45 PM
dude, don't let just anyone on... Sketchs shit is abysmal. Did Revid give you permission to let folks on?

i havent talked to revid for about a month
atlok is fine to let in we can all agree but i can see what you are saying with sketch although abysmal is a very strong word for him it isn't that bad
but you did start this so i should has consulted you

ma bad

Fube
04-01-2008, 08:50 PM
watch the dbl posting, just wait a min it will go through,
cut the e-crew chatter as well.

bumpin my shit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-01-08_1951.jpg

atlok, looks pretty clean but its a tad off flow cus your letters are all over the place. but i like it homie.

jsbigzz, your letters are hurtin, back to basics, i know u think thats basic but its not. watch your thickness, work on simples more. then more complex shit will follow natrualy. cant rush it.

atlok7
04-01-2008, 08:53 PM
soboe i have many styles of handstyle i just like simple handstyle for the legible purposes (dont get simple confused with bad)- here are a few-

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/738/digitaltag3blackxb8.jpg
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/9245/rambazambaqg1.jpg

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5988/foxstencilll9.jpg

JSBiggz
04-01-2008, 08:54 PM
I see what you mean by thickness...but i really think thats a pretty basic sketch....im not talking about the ones with the 3d kinda thing....i just started expierimenting with that...

atlok7
04-01-2008, 08:55 PM
MAR1- if you dont want me in i dont have to be, sorry dude

ref_1r
04-01-2008, 08:56 PM
bump for crits

in the first ones, i dont think the styles of the e and s match.

your shadow looks pretty good on the third one.

and i think lose the last 2.


http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/849/jtyhdea7.jpg

sry its sideways.

critz?

hazetheone
04-01-2008, 08:57 PM
MAR1- if you dont want me in i dont have to be, sorry dude

no he was talking about sketch
ref-when you resize in paint go to image-flip/rotate-then flip it however many degrees it needs to be flipped

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 09:00 PM
atlok what are you using for the digi tags?

atlok7
04-01-2008, 09:03 PM
ahh so you respect my handstyle now? haha jk. i use illustrator and a pen tablet (wacom)

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 09:04 PM
i needa get one of those pen things... how much is the price around?

sketch3
04-01-2008, 09:05 PM
boh!

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2181/spekse9.jpg
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6146/muffintopkw6.jpg



bump, i need some crits cuss my shits '' abysmal''

atlok7
04-01-2008, 09:12 PM
idk i didnt exactly pay for mine

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 09:29 PM
lmfao.. i was expectin that

MarOne...
04-01-2008, 09:37 PM
i havent talked to revid for about a month
atlok is fine to let in we can all agree but i can see what you are saying with sketch although abysmal is a very strong word for him it isn't that bad
but you did start this so i should has consulted you

ma bad

naw, it's cool. Didnt mean to sound like an asshole, haha. It isnt horrible, but you know. Just try to send me a PM if you feel like adding anyone to the ranks, haha. Welcome Mr.Atlok!

Mr. Octane
04-01-2008, 09:52 PM
Rafe- I like the fill u had goin on the second one...u kinda killed it with the F tho u shoulda kept it goin. On the last one the second bar on the F is too high up, it should be closer to being even with the horizontal line in the A and the E
Samp1e- that shit is dope...just fix up the S like u were gunna and it'll b all good

been workin on my letters...

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n188/HighOctane89/Doz-1.jpg

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n188/HighOctane89/Doze-1.jpg

any suggestions?

bump...lost my shit to a few pages of beef..

JETPACK!!
04-01-2008, 09:55 PM
and thats why everyone calls u guys arogant^^^


jsbiggs-negative space is the blank space thats not filled up betwwwen ur letters and extentions

impale- the vertical bar of the e is to thik, as wellas the horizontal bar of the a

haze- from wat i remember jetpaack sucks floppy falafel

falafels are good. a bit of huumas on it an it couldnt be better


bump, i need some crits cuss my shits '' abysmal''

yo sketch, your shits actually good. i dont know what these cats are talkin about, its got some steeze, letter porportions good. bars are good. characters sick. the flows a little bit off, thats all. the S and K somewhat go opposite directions. while the P and E pretty much flow straight. thats all i can see.

yo we should should be cool too and make an e-crew called "Abysmal Writing Techniques" cuz our shits so wack
P.S. that was e-sarcasim... dont take me seriously

and yo marone, its an e-crew. not a monarchy, other writers in your crew should have equal say

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 09:57 PM
honestly i think e-crews are gay no offence to kfc

hazetheone
04-01-2008, 09:59 PM
again i wouldnt call it a crew

MarOne...
04-01-2008, 10:08 PM
yeah, We're more like a gang.

New shit, trying to fuck with structure and extensions-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar8.jpg

atlok7
04-01-2008, 10:13 PM
dope mar but i hate crosses, but mega dope color scheme and your M is straight up tits

Kraft561
04-01-2008, 10:20 PM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t144/imronburgandy/Mygraffiti003.jpg
alright some skool shit crits please

Soboe!
04-01-2008, 10:31 PM
i used to write Lock4 a year ago... then i started to hate the name and dropped it :)

use bars son, go to the new 2 graff thread

EDIT: For Mar- keepin it fresh son! so dope

TheMuffinMan
04-01-2008, 11:05 PM
meh first sketch in my life (if pic sucks, i took it with my phone)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7666/0401082344wf6.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-01-2008, 11:19 PM
Mar- dope
doze- keep on truckin in the right direction
lock- its alright kinda like 2/3 of these peices but I like the first one

crits?

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/632/dscn0431vt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/2153/dscn0438xw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3886/dscn0441js4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soboe!
04-02-2008, 12:27 AM
wtf!!! your getting too good to fast! whats your secret!?

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2008, 12:37 AM
haha thanks, my little secret is that I sketch everyday until I don't feel like sketchin and then I sketch one more time, but seriously I have a llllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooonggg way to go

KASE2
04-02-2008, 01:01 AM
MAR - clean bruh nice color scheme
LOCK -

KASE2
04-02-2008, 01:03 AM
MAR - clean bruh nice color scheme
LOCK - lose the arrows nd jus keep workin on simples b4 u add extensions
TARE - i lyk em, not really feelin tha second 1 all that much tho, nd id say lose tha cleft at tha top of tha "A" in tha 1st 1

Cozmo
04-02-2008, 01:05 AM
You could probably get a decent one off ebay for around $75-100 (small, like 4"x5" wacom graphire). goes up from there according to size and model.

I got a 9"x12" Adesso on Ebay for $100. It's frickin' huge, too. The actual dimensions are more like 16x18, but the pad is 9x12. I got mine for work, because I use Photoshop every day, and doing fine erasing and colouring with a mouse straight-up sucks. But I love my tablet. I can sketch in Photoshop, which is cool, plus you can get brushes to simulate chisel-tips and stuff like that.

Actually what I was doing before I joined this site (which was, pretty much the day I decided to start getting into graff) was using the pen to draw graff on pictures of brick walls. Kind of fun, but a little embarrassing now that I look at it.

Cyto, good job. Looking sharp, especially the bottom one.

Soboe!
04-02-2008, 03:14 AM
AHH! My first "Sewr" sketch!
its sooooo bunk
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080402_1.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-02-2008, 06:50 AM
this is sideways, im not flipping it on ms paint and re uploading it on photobucket. fuck yall. turn your hedz.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/simpl.jpg
oh yeah i changed my name because someone else in cleveland writes it.
sewr- it would look better if you didnt have those blocks on top of the s and w. also make the letters exactly the same height.

mar- fuck you for progressing faster than me. so doep.

cyto- i love what you were trying to get at with the first one, but the a killed it. keep working on that ny shit.

fonone
04-02-2008, 07:42 AM
sewr - fix up that R im not feeling the extension, and the top of the W as well.\, the S is pretty nice though.

hoers - thats a pretty nice simple, not much i can say in ways of improving it, it looks pretty clean.

my first outline for the GIANT battle, what do you think,



http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/5755/apr02131ex1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

unreal180
04-02-2008, 07:45 AM
yeah, We're more like a gang.

New shit, trying to fuck with structure and extensions-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar8.jpg

that upside down cross is fucking dope

atlok7
04-02-2008, 07:57 AM
for the anti throwup battle
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2027/antithrowiedopeql7.jpg

did this yesterday

inchture
04-02-2008, 08:17 AM
i tried using bars again

http://i26.tinypic.com/hx1xs1.png

atlok7
04-02-2008, 08:18 AM
dude dont use marker for now. stick to pencil

inchture
04-02-2008, 08:30 AM
well have u got any crits or anything to help me get better

fonone
04-02-2008, 09:05 AM
its good to see that your not trying to start out on some wild style type shit inch, i think you should make your C boxy like the other letters, should be easier to draw aswell. Other that that id do what atlok said and use pencil, will be alot easier to draw with and you wont get such shaky lines. Once you think you have some pretty solid letters just keep practising them and chuck on some shadow.

inchture
04-02-2008, 09:12 AM
ok thanks for the advice

PhakeWreckage
04-02-2008, 09:52 AM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/HPIM0268.jpg

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/HPIM0263.jpg

krits?

:RAVE:
04-02-2008, 10:11 AM
i really like that top one except for how u connectedthe letters

*cept*
04-02-2008, 10:17 AM
Uhh just a question....why did you make it nice and clean till you go to the A then you were like hey seizure time...then your D is like whats up im a clean letter...and then your Y is like ready. set. seizure.


whats up with that? HAHJAHAHAHAHQAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

*cept*
04-02-2008, 10:19 AM
i really like that top one except for how u connectedthe letters

thats what i really liked about it.

real_destroyer
04-02-2008, 10:24 AM
garbage - i like it
sewr - kinda skinny letters
mar - inverted cross rocks
eskimo - that hmmm.. alien or whatever it is.. better without it.. or better said lose the brows
hint - that's..amazing..
haven't sketched for a long time:
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs25/300W/i/2008/093/d/3/real_green_by_thalliummetal.jpg

inchture
04-02-2008, 10:49 AM
Jet when you mean move them colsers to get a fell do you mean join them up or just move them closer

hazetheone
04-02-2008, 10:52 AM
just move them closer
i think he would have said join them up if he ment that

Drakula
04-02-2008, 10:57 AM
Atlok you're one of those writers who do clean pieces to give the illusion of letter structure but actually it's wack.Sorry to be frank.Try some simpler pieces.The throws shit also.Try and make it less rigid.

So I'm not flickless, some throwies:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture3-1.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture4.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture5.png

sKeeLo
04-02-2008, 11:09 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3465/img3176ku5.jpg

MYND mess around . . . good stuff fube, you def steped your game up since you first got on here but i like your old style alil better

este_oner
04-02-2008, 11:25 AM
phake wreckage- your fucking jocking the fuck out of askew.
like really bad, i wont post a peice but just chill out on it.

raby- i love those one line bombs.

Mass Appeal
04-02-2008, 12:56 PM
stop post whoring Haze..and Atloks letters are whack :) .. Rabys arnt ! :D great work baby

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-02-2008, 01:06 PM
yeah, We're more like a gang.

New shit, trying to fuck with structure and extensions-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar8.jpg




And bump, but don't do upside down crosses. Every mother fucker on the internet does that shit now. Also bump this.



Steeeezy








this is sideways, im not flipping it on ms paint and re uploading it on photobucket. fuck yall. turn your hedz.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/simpl.jpg
oh yeah i changed my name because someone else in cleveland writes it.
sewr- it would look better if you didnt have those blocks on top of the s and w. also make the letters exactly the same height.

mar- fuck you for progressing faster than me. so doep.

cyto- i love what you were trying to get at with the first one, but the a killed it. keep working on that ny shit.

MarOne...
04-02-2008, 03:50 PM
yeah, We're more like a gang.

New shit, trying to fuck with structure and extensions-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar8.jpg

rumpage.

Czar One
04-02-2008, 03:56 PM
working on my Zs
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/Z-1.jpg

Soboe!
04-02-2008, 04:03 PM
thats actualy a really good Z its got great flow
if it was a cleaner sketch it'd be amazin

Techkanuck
04-02-2008, 04:44 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture207.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture208.jpg

Killing time today

MAR- That ish is fuckin hot, even with the cross it's good, maybe start trying to use hieroglyphics or something fresh to be unique and not use the cross, your style and everything else is awesome

Czar- that Z is nice, maybe keep the bottom bar by the circle a little thicker

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2008, 05:01 PM
Vois- I like the second one, the s still needs work though

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/632/dscn0431vt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits

ref_1r
04-02-2008, 05:07 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/6774/jtyhdaj0.jpg

*repost* i rotated and resized it this time cause i didnt get critz b4.

critz?

SCIEnce802
04-02-2008, 05:09 PM
HINT- that throwie is awsome

and who eva was workin on their Z's
nice work.

-GEKS-
04-02-2008, 05:10 PM
do block letters
dont put faces on ur letters...

...yet

atlok7
04-02-2008, 05:19 PM
tare- gettin better son. just keep that T in the flow and same size as the rest, if i were u i would try to draw 4 boxes all the same size and draw all your letters to fit in their own box. just a thought

*cept*
04-02-2008, 05:22 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0011.jpg
ive given plenty of crits all throughout this thread

Soboe!
04-02-2008, 05:35 PM
dont over lap the 3d on your letters

ref_1r
04-02-2008, 06:07 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0011.jpg
ive given plenty of crits all throughout this thread

holy carp, thats dope!

the only thing i would say is dont let the 3d overlap like he said.

other than that, i love your style.


http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4448/jtyhdqpu8.jpg

did sumthin more blocky. tryin out diff stuff with the f.
i like the 3rd one best.

critz?

inchture
04-02-2008, 06:08 PM
ok i tried overlapping the letter never mind the shakiness of the pencil

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1976/lastscanqj1.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lastscanqj1.jpg)

TaskOne
04-02-2008, 06:12 PM
yeah, We're more like a gang.

New shit, trying to fuck with structure and extensions-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar8.jpg


kinda cool, definatly get rid of the upsidedown cross tho..
-cept its not a bad start. make sure you make that e more visable as an E, because it looks alot like a C.
-trip, make sure all the bars are the same size, practice writing 1 Letter at a time untill you find a nice way to draw it. ocne your done this for all letters, try putting it together and fooling around with overlapping.
ref- the top one looks sweet, try making the top bar of the F even bigger to go with the e.

Techkanuck
04-02-2008, 06:15 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture211.jpg

sketch3
04-02-2008, 06:37 PM
thats not a crit, dont just repeate wat u here..
voise thicken the horizontal bars up on the O, the width is fucked on that S
shits mad shaky too

JETPACK!!
04-02-2008, 06:40 PM
your letters also gradually get bigger as they progress. keep your letters the same size. the bottoms alright.. but the top needs to be worked on

C-SONE
04-02-2008, 07:04 PM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/HPIM0268.jpg

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/HPIM0263.jpg

krits?
Theres already an Eskimo from Perth and he's better than you.

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/285/1/8/Quick_one_by_PorkHunt.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs5/i/2004/328/4/f/eski_front_page_sketch_by_PorkHunt.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-02-2008, 07:05 PM
use simple bar's for now, rather than the whole bubble approach. make the bottom bar of your L longer. im feelin the U more than the L or D though, with the D you should make the middle open, dont give it a small hole. hopefully you get what im saying

sketch3
04-02-2008, 07:08 PM
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid1.jpg
the u bothers me the most. any thoughts on lucid as a name? (as in lucid dreaming)

cept - love the fill. the t might be better if you shorten the bottom so the two horizontal bars match up

ref - I like the e and the f but the r doesn't look too good in any of them. maybe try doing a capital r instead?

lucids a cool name(lucid dreams are the shit), but having an l and u next to each other can be tricky. as for ur sketch go right back to basics.read the new to graff thread

-GEKS-
04-02-2008, 07:48 PM
eskimo pretty sick shit
unless u live by that other dude dont bother name changin

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1613.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1616.jpg

got mad flicks i'll start with these haah
critsss

ref_1r
04-02-2008, 07:51 PM
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid1.jpg


love the name.

you definetely have a lot of potential.

i think that d's really rad.

but the rest need work.

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7659/uj6y001ng5.jpg
take 3.

crits?

MarOne...
04-02-2008, 07:52 PM
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid1.jpg
the u bothers me the most. any thoughts on lucid as a name? (as in lucid dreaming)

cept - love the fill. the t might be better if you shorten the bottom so the two horizontal bars match up

ref - I like the e and the f but the r doesn't look too good in any of them. maybe try doing a capital r instead?

The L/U right next to eachother can be very tricky as Sketch said... maybe you should try "LEWCID" or "LEWSID"?

Fube
04-02-2008, 08:19 PM
just deleted a whole page of shit, keep your bullshit name beef to pms, not on this thread. and DO NOT ASK FOR CRITS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER. if someones gunna crit u then they will, im gettin sick of seeing shit bumped over 3 or 4 times. its one thing to be at the bottom of the page, its another to just be greedy. i will delete your shit if its a 4th bump.

thanks for the words skeelo how u been nukka?
good to see ya round these parts.

Pure2352
04-02-2008, 08:33 PM
http://http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/720/graffiti006gv3.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti006gv3.jpg)


I NEED ADVICE- COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!

Pure2352
04-02-2008, 08:33 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/720/graffiti006gv3.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti006gv3.jpg)

I NEED ADVICE!!!!!!!!!!

Casual7ie
04-02-2008, 09:11 PM
sor-nice shit, just not feelin the hearts, kinda makes it look gay, no offense
lucid-sick name, just not feelin the last one
ref-lookin aight, may wanna change the r tho idk
pure-post that in the toy tagz thread

tgc!mtown
04-02-2008, 09:24 PM
geks - not feeling the hearts. i think the s would look better if you flipped it upside down
pure - the U looks like a 4, which is a in l33t, so it looks like pare to me, although i doubt most people would think that way...

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid3.jpg
^d looks off to me

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid4.jpg
^bottom one's mad slanted

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/lucid2.jpg
^epic fail? haha i just really want to incorporate clouds into the letters.

you may wanna lengthen the L on the first one, the second ones pretty cool, and the last one just looks a little messy. over all everythings good step up and the name is sick as well

PhakeWreckage
04-02-2008, 09:43 PM
Theres already an Eskimo from Perth and he's better than you.

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/285/1/8/Quick_one_by_PorkHunt.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs5/i/2004/328/4/f/eski_front_page_sketch_by_PorkHunt.jpg



http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm149/eskimofoks/IMG_2379.jpg



http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm149/eskimofoks/eskimocanvasI.jpg


Perth? Who cares?

MarOne...
04-02-2008, 09:45 PM
vibe- I like those, keep working on them, they have potential.

entry for the robin battle semi-finals

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/amongmarroundrobin.jpg

Is it hip-hop enough?

tgc!mtown
04-02-2008, 09:53 PM
MAR- thanks, im feelin those colors man, good work

atlok7
04-02-2008, 09:54 PM
jesus tiedye is hard to color damn. dude i got jipped in the robbin battle so bad... i sent my entree to baze for the first round but i guess he just decided not to post them and said i was entered in 3 battles. (bull) yeah it was gay.

MarOne...
04-02-2008, 09:56 PM
vibe- I like those, keep working on them, they have potential.

entry for the robin battle semi-finals

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/amongmarroundrobin.jpg

Is it hip-hop enough?

sorry fube, bottom page bump.

Atlok, I feel you. That was bullshit that you didnt get in.

tgc!mtown
04-02-2008, 09:56 PM
heres a couple.

somthin from school:
http://i27.tinypic.com/103d6h2.jpg

then these:
http://i29.tinypic.com/1zh01td.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/6oorhy.jpg

sorry it was on the bottom of the last page

fonone
04-02-2008, 10:16 PM
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm149/eskimofoks/IMG_2379.jpg



http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm149/eskimofoks/eskimocanvasI.jpg


Perth? Who cares?

you have nothing on the real skimo son.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2008, 10:30 PM
Marone- looking tight
eskimo- the I doesn't fit in the first one

oakstr1
04-02-2008, 11:19 PM
TGC - i like how most my best ideas im up in school. middle one is dope
eskimo - shits dope..

Fatso
04-02-2008, 11:29 PM
for the anti throwup battle
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2027/antithrowiedopeql7.jpg

hot hot hot

Seek139
04-03-2008, 01:57 AM
mar - very tasty
vibe - get the whole page done don't waste books!

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/NARgraffiti5.jpg

krave
04-03-2008, 02:12 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/743/screenshot1gv9.png

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9071/screenshot2ll5.png

trying some new things.. suggestions?

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-03-2008, 02:15 AM
Krave- work on simples for now, no addons or extensions

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8110/dscn0446sv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8110/dscn0446sv1.a536febe85.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=522&i=dscn0446sv1.jpg)

heres something that I just freestyled with pen, whatchuthink?

PA3K ONE
04-03-2008, 05:36 AM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8880/dsc06671zp4.jpg

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/7734/dsc06673qd4.jpg

tgc!mtown
04-03-2008, 06:11 AM
mar - very tasty
vibe - get the whole page done don't waste books!

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/NARgraffiti5.jpg

who says i waste the pages usually i throw another one above it, any crits or is that it?

Jamoya Designs
04-03-2008, 07:36 AM
eskimo- thats tight
mar- i prefer the upside down cross one

Crits 4 me?:D

sKeeLo
04-03-2008, 09:26 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2187/img3159aq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6275/img3167te4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2016/img3157oy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fube - you know how it goes, money hoes and clothes all a white boy knows . . . good stuff MAR

edit - the real skimo needs to put some work in on his letters

K-JaG
04-03-2008, 09:43 AM
these are all really good i had know idea that i was so crap coz these are all amazingly good i could really use some more practice

sKeeLo
04-03-2008, 09:50 AM
yup practice makes perfect k jag, stick on here for a year and youll get good . . thats what i did

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9379/img3148fi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

gonna catch a burn from my man kens cigarette . . .

atlok7
04-03-2008, 10:37 AM
lookin nice skee

tempest
04-03-2008, 10:51 AM
bumpage

eskimo- thats tight
mar- i prefer the upside down cross one

Crits 4 me?:D

Jamoya Designs
04-03-2008, 11:13 AM
skeelo that pink and black one is reely cool

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7775/2703081735yz0.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2703081735yz0.jpg)

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/3814/1903082219em9.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1903082219em9.jpg)

crits pleas :D

SCIEnce802
04-03-2008, 11:19 AM
skeelo- that red ones ok, i like that pink one.
tgc- not bad. pretty chill
pa3k- u got the concept down, keep workin that shit, u'll get good quick.
http://i27.tinypic.com/2q9cf7l.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/24oa5at.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/hu3c7k.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/4l2gps.jpg

TheMuffinMan
04-03-2008, 11:24 AM
meh first sketch in my life (if pic sucks, i took it with my phone)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7666/0401082344wf6.jpg

4 pages no critz, i no its weak but how do i get better (its my first shit ever)

inchture
04-03-2008, 11:24 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5183/lastscaneb9.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lastscaneb9.jpg)

tempest
04-03-2008, 11:25 AM
skeelo- dope shit man. on the first one do u find it hard 2 keep the black solid when ur doing your pink outline? how do color tht in? do u do a pink outline then black fill then pink fill....if u dont mind ;)

EDIT:i can not spell black

NAIK_SHOES
04-03-2008, 11:53 AM
CLICK ON THE PIC

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/696/img0076bw4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0076bw4.jpg)
''JULIEN''
COMMENTS PLEASE

cience802- i like the second and the last one
skeelo- you got a lot of skils, i like your shit

Drakula
04-03-2008, 11:57 AM
Skeelo you ain't been on here in aaaaaaaages.Your shit is still lovely though.

Julien that style is niccccceeeee.Keep it up.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Picture7.png

RAYB+BOH = RAYBOH.

atlok7
04-03-2008, 11:57 AM
jamoya dont double post people will get at you eventually, the bottom one is nice

SCIEnce802
04-03-2008, 11:58 AM
thats sick, just throw the 3d on it.
maybe do sumthin to the E

tempest
04-03-2008, 11:59 AM
NAIK-try connecting ur n up a bit more. it looks a bit disconnected. kinda looks like an l and a v. not bad tho

WiseCracker
04-03-2008, 12:36 PM
yo i know i'm toy and this is mad sloppy but is it the right idea?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3189/2384934945_3aca4ac56e_o.jpg

atlok7
04-03-2008, 12:38 PM
eh not really, try and use straight letters, if you want check out new to graff thread

inchture
04-03-2008, 12:44 PM
i tried adding 3d to it

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8239/lastscanow8.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lastscanow8.jpg)

tempest
04-03-2008, 12:49 PM
ur r an p need work. try makin that curve bigger and lose the 3d for now

stumpyhasnolegs
04-03-2008, 12:51 PM
...

WiseCracker
04-03-2008, 12:55 PM
an idea that i have for a piece, i'm trying to practice human form, i know his head is too small, is the idea cool? tips + crits accepted
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2054/2384969563_ed76ccf246_o.jpg

inchture - work on just normal blocks. don't do 3d until the normal blocks are clean and come easy.

SCIEnce802
04-03-2008, 01:27 PM
If u cant draw it sumwut good... dont try to paint it
thats my tip.

Techkanuck
04-03-2008, 01:30 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture212.jpg

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 02:12 PM
the opening page to my new black book (still in progress)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080403_2.jpg
i shoulda used prisma markers for all of it but i didnt have enought at the time so i went with prisma pencil crayons

Fube
04-03-2008, 02:15 PM
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/thesingingshark.jpg

your kidding right? u didnt draw that dont front. is it a sticker? not to be a dick here but ive seen this all over the internet. also as a sig in someone who post in this forum. u dont gotta lie to kick it man.
http://www.sfondideldesktop.com/Images-Toon/Pokemon/Pokemon-0001/Pokemon-0001.jpg
btw, i did this in my new blackbook, no prismas so i had to use sharpies, im not done yet but i think my kracks are extremly original what do yall think?

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 02:21 PM
fube, i love you :)
but where you refering to me?

EDIT: shit did i acciedently post the shark one??

calculating infinity
04-03-2008, 02:32 PM
an idea that i have for a piece, i'm trying to practice human form, i know his head is too small, is the idea cool? tips + crits accepted
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2054/2384969563_ed76ccf246_o.jpg

inchture - work on just normal blocks. don't do 3d until the normal blocks are clean and come easy.
go steal a book on anatomy from a book or art store

Drakula
04-03-2008, 02:34 PM
Skeelo you ain't been on here in aaaaaaaages.Your shit is still lovely though.

Julien that style is niccccceeeee.Keep it up.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Picture7.png

RAYB+BOH = RAYBOH.

Bump, got no crits/comments.

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 02:40 PM
the opening page to my new black book (still in progress)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080403_2.jpg
i shoulda used prisma markers for all of it but i didnt have enought at the time so i went with prisma pencil crayons

bump

drakula - thats really good man, hot hot hot... a diff style of 3D woulda made it stanf out more

inchture
04-03-2008, 02:42 PM
like i said on msn that o is dope but is doesn't really flow with the rest of it

LOPe_GCI
04-03-2008, 02:43 PM
thats some funk raby
nice shit

Doctor Lucifer
04-03-2008, 03:09 PM
the opening page to my new black book (still in progress)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080403_2.jpg
i shoulda used prisma markers for all of it but i didnt have enought at the time so i went with prisma pencil crayons

I write KAWR. Change the name.

Raby, HAYZOOS! Thats maaad fresh.

inchture
04-03-2008, 03:11 PM
his says kowr so who does he have to change it

*cept*
04-03-2008, 03:11 PM
Bump, got no crits/comments. dig it. shoulda erased those pencil
marks though

stumpyhasnolegs
04-03-2008, 03:30 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/14spf86.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/11bkocw.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/123mmuq.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/33vf4w9.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/2a7zo69.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/6tmgow.jpg

bump for crits

Techkanuck
04-03-2008, 04:11 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture213.jpg

stumpy- second to last one is nice, overall got some good stuff

Kowr- cool ideas and stuff, the middle of the W seems weird

Drakula- that's some really nice work, the A seems small enough to be lower case is my only crit

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 04:22 PM
AAAAAAAAAHHHHH
finish product
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080403_3.jpg
crit meh

WiseCracker
04-03-2008, 04:45 PM
soboe - maddddd creative, keep it up except get rid of the extension on the k

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 04:51 PM
haha yea i notice just now i was like FUCK i for got the other letters i should just left it be

Mr.Poosk
04-03-2008, 04:54 PM
wasnt feelin the "G" in gore, so decided to change to "WOES" If you know any dope people that write it let me know and i'll change, but I sketched this up last night, not sure if i should color.

crits and comments please.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3726/graff010yt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soboe!
04-03-2008, 05:01 PM
i have the same keyboard as you :)
it a good W but the O and E dont flow with it

densely
04-03-2008, 05:16 PM
i write aer, some of the following might be kinda sloppy but it's cool. crits please thanks

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/5494/dsc00636hy3.jpg

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6567/dsc00626ji0.jpg

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5373/dsc00627oi0.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3853/dsc00628to7.jpg

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/6851/dsc00629jb8.jpg

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1639/dsc00630la5.jpg

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6808/dsc00631pw4.jpg

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/571/dsc00632ld1.jpg

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1020/dsc00633co3.jpg

densely
04-03-2008, 05:29 PM
here are some more.

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9014/dsc00638zj4.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6576/dsc00646nc4.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2460/dsc00645fw2.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7408/dsc00644oc6.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9929/dsc00643km6.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8606/dsc00642bl5.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7257/dsc00641jn0.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7232/dsc00640te1.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/778/dsc00639xw5.jpg

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4601/dsc00637un1.jpg

crits welcomed

dim
04-03-2008, 07:06 PM
aer keep using bars man

Crazy-Johnny
04-03-2008, 07:08 PM
aero that handy is siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiick and i like the extensions on the a and o keep it up..some of the 3d could use some work but other than that i think its good.

piecelover
04-03-2008, 07:56 PM
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/piecelover/Picture2print018.jpghttp://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/piecelover/Picture2print016.jpg
what do you think?

hazetheone
04-03-2008, 08:06 PM
the first one looks like a week ass azteka who bites some dude named kasp

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:07 PM
peicelover-the first one is alright. i dont like the backround or the r, but its just my opinion after all i suck. and i dig the second one. the fill and karaks are cool as hell

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0022.jpg
ignore the ! haha. didnt realize it was too big untill after i outlined it. anyway crits please? i think i could use some help.

Capo Izi
04-03-2008, 08:16 PM
New junk..

http://a610.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/127/l_fed9496a26128571f52282f45d176769.jpg

Wild style stuff I tried out(probably did awful)...

Truth..
http://a958.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/128/l_0e75fa461efdf2220b76b10755c9008d.jpg

Capo..
http://a105.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/115/l_f3d566111961824a77b4a5ed47f7f6e0.jpg
http://a223.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/75/l_af372bdf8b7ea39863e49c4a52d0ef76.jpg
http://a130.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/14/l_47bf0278aa00e19972b8fed5ded3abe9.jpg

Izi..
http://a648.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_27dcc8b23798df0602ac71fce4aea617.jpg

LAT..
http://a746.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/44/l_ae1e0a853875c9e8c08b07aab03beec1.jpg

Sketch in Class of Capo...
http://a713.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/103/l_4c566d927f3393c6b5bb2c1b0990ae28.jpg

Crits?

ctso-really cool, kind of a morbid horror look

Drakula-nice, fresh, cool coloring too

Aero-maybe work on the 3D otherwise pretty sweet, I like the yellow one the best

Mt.Poosk-NICE, clean and just, nice, good flow, and love the letters, and the 3D is TIGHT.

Vois-nice n' clean, good colors, I like it, flows well too, maybe add some stuff around it, pimp it up a bit, but like that is still perfect-like.

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:45 PM
uhm hmm. capo that wildstyle stuff looked really wack. it was way to abstract. the only one that lookd kinda alright is the last one. and that needs work. my advice, dont do wildstyle untill you can rock a dope simple and throw and handie and all that other shit.

Capo Izi
04-03-2008, 08:55 PM
Yeah, it was all just a test, but what about my first piece? The one made that wasn't a wild style?

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:59 PM
it wasnt a 'wildstyle' it was just a lil too complex and wierd lookin i think. just keep it simple. just straight letters or somethin

atlok7
04-03-2008, 09:11 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/441/caisonepinkylz8.jpg
caisone
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4764/greedrexchangeww6.jpg
exchange with milfhunter (greedr)

Capo Izi
04-03-2008, 09:11 PM
^^Yeah, I knew it wasn't I said that, the only wildstyles are the ones between the first and last.

And It's how I've done most of my recent stuff. It's using bars, but they are pointed, then I just pushed it together. I thought the width and everything looks fine, and then I just add some one-point perspective, and a space scene thing...

Mr.Poosk
04-03-2008, 09:38 PM
Decided to color my last sketch. Colored it pretty fast because i wasnt too happy with the letters and 3d its a bit off.

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1850/graff011wk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits?

Atlok7- Dude, love your style. Though the fill's are a bit boring for my taste.

CTSO- I think that you need to maybe take some more time with your stuff slow down and make the lines nice and stright and it will look a lot better.

CAPO- Love that first one, you should work with taht style more. Better then your "wildstyle"

atlok7
04-03-2008, 09:49 PM
yeah i usually do more stuff to it but latley kids have been saying i can only color and have shit for letters so ive been focusing on more of the letters than the usual pazaz i put into them

sevenohsavage
04-03-2008, 09:51 PM
capo-

yo shit=booboo

Capo Izi
04-03-2008, 10:04 PM
^haha. The only one I really care about is the first one...Is it really that bad, I thought it was my best so far...?

KASE2
04-03-2008, 10:20 PM
MR POOSK - tha "W" is 2 fat, duznt match the rest of it

beyondyereyes
04-03-2008, 11:06 PM
ctso - make the words thicker. it's coming out alright though.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/uglyshit.jpg

Mr.Poosk
04-03-2008, 11:25 PM
MR POOSK - tha "W" is 2 fat, duznt match the rest of it

Ahhh yeah for sure. Thanks man.

littlerocky
04-03-2008, 11:28 PM
beyond....go simple man the flows like no existant. no beef or anything just throwin down my 2 cents. i cant really tell you anything more accept take it back a step and get the letters down before you start playin wit um

atlock feelin the cais one. well mainly the I,S, and O are dope
other letters are a little shabby but still far from weak,and not feelin the greed at all to bottom heavy for me?..idk that could just be me tho..maybe just make the swirls a little smaller?...
some quick sketch i did for the ggg...says linds..crits??
http://photos-f.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v189/127/71/1354950253/n1354950253_30028997_9914.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-04-2008, 07:42 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2187/img3159aq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6275/img3167te4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2016/img3157oy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9379/img3148fi1.jpg
fube - you know how it goes, money hoes and clothes all a white boy knows . . . good stuff MAR

edit - the real skimo needs to put some work in on his letters

was thinking about u. well bumping up homeboi!

FeTuS
04-04-2008, 09:02 AM
Looking for crits on a throwie... I know that I need to work on the lettering...but what exactly needs to change??

lol, I am in no position to be dishing out crits...

tempest
04-04-2008, 09:02 AM
peicelover-i like ur first one. try a diff color scheme on the second
capo- SLOW DOWN! dont sketch so fast. take your time and get bold lines.
ctso-i like the perspective on the third one. try doing some more lettrs in that style
agony-nice colors. me likey. work on your flowl
linds- add some color dude.

i hate givin crits cuz i suck worse than all of y'all. but giv crits 2 get crits rite?

alice
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/2093/alice2ch4.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=alice2ch4.jpg)
ira
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/2930/ira1nr7.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ira1nr7.jpg)
sike
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5418/sike1jd3.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sike1jd3.jpg)

t-bur
04-04-2008, 09:23 AM
Lookin good skeelo and little rocky.

Ms paint fuck about.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b99e32e/1/237/F0s4ZpSi6T-Av9iagTu8mOxIoVijuQMe.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/Taak-N7J4D8r0F7nAhPu2pp2Do4jemXl?referrer=hlnk)

sKeeLo
04-04-2008, 10:20 AM
wut up shamme, good to see you still rockin it on here . .

^^^ is that harley davidson jesus dressed up in a nun outfit?

tempest - not too bad of a start, id work on gettin my letters to lie next to each other without having them cut too far into eachj other, like the L in alice goes too far into the I, shorten teh bottom horizontal bar of teh L and make it go up to open up some space for your I kinda like you did with the bottom part of your C . . .the A is bigger than the other letters, try to get all your bars proportional like you did with the IRA sketch for now . . .

Mr.Poosk
04-04-2008, 10:20 AM
Tempest- I think you need to just take off extentions compleatly and just start with some simple style letters. I know lots of people say it but its true, its what im workin on.


Did this last night before I crashed

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/2328/graff012an0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits plz

tempest
04-04-2008, 10:36 AM
ayt. ty 4 the crits.
poosk-nice keyboard ;). yeh i hav some simple ones 2. these r just my next attempt. so i figure i shuld go back a few huh? nice sketch btw. tho thers a lot of negative space on the s. kinda messes up the flow

sKeeLo
04-04-2008, 10:37 AM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/441/caisonepinkylz8.jpg
caisone


i like this more than your other stuff b/c of teh actual attention to letter structure . . kinda hard to explain but you got have a real dominant up down flow to your letters, i would suggest finding areas where you can throw in a haorizontal bar in there . .like the top part of the N (which is too long up there imo), you could have a long horizontal bar/extension shot left of it . .

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/11/1303073li1.jpg

^^ like i did in this sketch on the top right bar of my N, if you got alot of vertical/up n down flow/bars, i like to look for areas i can throw in a long haorizontal bar to compliment the flow . .

tempest
04-04-2008, 10:45 AM
daym skeelo!

t-bur
04-04-2008, 11:56 AM
wut up shamme, good to see you still rockin it on here . .

^^^ is that harley davidson jesus dressed up in a nun outfit?

tempest - not too bad of a start, id work on gettin my letters to lie next to each other without having them cut too far into eachj other, like the L in alice goes too far into the I, shorten teh bottom horizontal bar of teh L and make it go up to open up some space for your I kinda like you did with the bottom part of your C . . .the A is bigger than the other letters, try to get all your bars proportional like you did with the IRA sketch for now . . .

Haha, im not shame.

D E M O
04-04-2008, 01:23 PM
beyond: make your bars the same width.
littlerocky: I like it, put some color in it
Tempest: like the second one more, but make it cleaner and try pputting some color.

Critz would help

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1990/demoh2bl2.jpg

atlok7
04-04-2008, 01:26 PM
skeelo- yeah i get it

atlok7
04-04-2008, 01:29 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4764/greedrexchangeww6.jpg
exchange with milfhunter (greedr)[/QUOTE]

kgdgsw

nemzone
04-04-2008, 01:59 PM
skeelo, tht piece is mint m8..

demo, that says demok right?? i quite like it, missed 3d on top of the E, other than that i cant say much..

atlok7, its kool, just not feeling the stars, andthe blockletters added on to the others.. also, handy needs work...

i no im in no place to give out critz, but it stops cunts bitchin, and hopefully gets me some

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4040092.jpg

no fuckin inspiration these days, can only piss with the cock u got tho right?

TheMuffinMan
04-04-2008, 02:12 PM
temp- your stuff is not bad ( im worse) i guess you just need to develop a style and practice that more

t-bur- thats pretty hot, i can just make a square in ms paint so thats already good in my eyes

poosk- the letters are hot, im not quite sure where the 3d is going, is it goin directly behind the letters?

skee- thats crazy, i would normally not think of using green and orange together but the colors just work, i like it

DEMO- it takes a true man to use pink, it all looks good and the pink looks hot on that

atlo- it looks hot but I personally cant read any letters except the e, d and maybe an A

nemz- your piece looks clean, the m stands out, but not in a bad way, i definatly like how your piece looks

jersOneTIC
04-04-2008, 02:25 PM
demo - i would fix the d
atlok - dope style
nemz - nice idea...like the cracks
exchange with drak...
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/290/drakez2.jpg

Mass Appeal
04-04-2008, 03:30 PM
wow..its Nemz
great wildstyle stuff Sky
and nice stuff too Demo..i like that peice more than your others ! really smooth and the letters are great too

littlerocky
04-04-2008, 03:40 PM
nemz...so legit.. cracks are right on..only problem i have is where the m enters the z..if you could pull that off some other way..couldnt tell you how..but dope and that M is trillin.

raby...your def headed in the right direction..clean it up a little tho..and i dont like that swirl off the y..i dont really like the flow of the y either the way it has curves while the lest of the letters are rigid..nahhmean?.....also r could be bigger..but your gettin there..

mugs sketch..dont kno if ima finish or not..work in progress..dont kno where to go with the s..sry bout pic quality phone camera..any crits suggestions?
http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v189/127/71/1354950253/n1354950253_30029007_1295.jpg
might redo it..paper got kinda trashed...
and bumpin again because i canhttp://photos-f.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v189/127/71/1354950253/n1354950253_30028997_9914.jpg
freestyle shit i was tryin..posted before but never got crits?..quit it or keep goin?
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3076/newyh8.jpg

alsoo...throwie street legit?
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/876/img0397hp9.jpgignore the handie..it was a bad day lol.
k im done.

hazetheone
04-04-2008, 03:59 PM
t-bur that is horrible,are you still doing the battle i already posted mine so im done just send yours too me and i get it polled
mr poosk-your structure is pretty good just work more on the flow of your letters in the same direction
demon-good
atlok-the ed on that could have been outlined a bit cleaner no biggie
nemz-you school a lot of folks o this sight thats what they should look like great job man
jers-some of your extentions are coming from nowhere
amk-fuck you
little-i cant see the top one very well
the second one is good and the rest are bleh work on not focusing on the loops at the bottom of th throw unless it is a oneliner other wise they are kind of pointless

Drakula
04-04-2008, 06:24 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Picture2-1.png

Exchange for JERS.Quick outline and the Orange marker died on me.

LittleRocky-That freestyle shit is wack,looks like you're going for those thin gothic wildstyles but it's not cutting it.The simple on the other hand is tight.Keep doing simple shit.

-ShAmEE-
04-04-2008, 06:28 PM
skeelo, tht piece is mint m8..

demo, that says demok right?? i quite like it, missed 3d on top of the E, other than that i cant say much..

atlok7, its kool, just not feeling the stars, andthe blockletters added on to the others.. also, handy needs work...

i no im in no place to give out critz, but it stops cunts bitchin, and hopefully gets me some

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4040092.jpg

no fuckin inspiration these days, can only piss with the cock u got tho right?

howz army?

still crunking it up.

-ShAmEE-
04-04-2008, 06:29 PM
Haha, im not shame.

u wish!

littlerocky
04-04-2008, 06:35 PM
thanks drak...that simples tight.. j looks a tiny outa place but nothin to sweat it over.steezy man.

Cin123
04-04-2008, 06:59 PM
man im telling u
tempest work on ur simpz

atlok7
04-04-2008, 07:20 PM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7985/caisonegreenorangexe3.jpg
caisone
took the crits into consideration

dim
04-04-2008, 07:45 PM
dope dope dope CAISER

FoolsONER.
04-04-2008, 07:48 PM
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/7835/foolsoneree9.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8083/fscopyui4.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7521/fsoneoi4.jpg

Crits please, just started out. Trying to keep it simple.

Samp1e
04-04-2008, 08:54 PM
atlok -- something's just off about your piece, but i cant put my finger on it

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/597/87021374mr8.png

SAID
04-04-2008, 09:13 PM
atlok, looks stiff.
..no flow to it.

atlok7
04-04-2008, 09:38 PM
sample- dope but the p throws it off,
said- how do i fix that?

nemzone
04-04-2008, 09:45 PM
howz army?
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4040092.jpg
still crunking it up.


awryt m8, armys gd, fills ma wallet lol.. just no time to do shit as u can probs tell by my shit...

get a wee bump out o it for sum mo crtisizzles lol..

samp1e - im not too keen on it, but mite just be my personal peeves... never been a fan of thickness of lines being inconsitent in a a piece.. and also not a fan of tons of lines cuttin into the letters, a few is ok if thy placed appropriately. other than that its fairly plain.

fools - dont do arrows that come straight out of a letter, thts fugly.. fair nuf if it was an addon or extension, but not at the end of a letter..

atlok - i like it mate. just not too sure about the N, looks too small n squashed up.. also if u huna do stars, get em right, if not they look guff..

jers - love it man, nothin i can say to giv u sum advice.. just keep on keepin on.. simples rock when done right, and u sir do em right..

NOW THATS HOW YA GIVE CRITS U CUNTS WHO DONT CONSIDER IT.. FUCKIN STOP JUST SAYIN 'CRITS'...

peas:p

iBomb4KOG
04-04-2008, 09:47 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/6fy1dh.jpg


ALMOST everythin on this page is look freash specially like Atlok

.D.H.
04-04-2008, 10:00 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7800/vermontdp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Posted this a while back, got nothin except a 3d.. i still havnt worked on it..

ibomb4kog: a little weird, work on the handsteezys a bit
nemz: solid. no comment.
atlok: yeah i agree, something is off somewhere.. it may be that your bars are different and inconsistent lengths

samp: p is a little too curved, but it still looks fine.

i dont know how this writing got italicized

dim
04-04-2008, 10:44 PM
I FOUND IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! its the connection between the i and the s. still fresh as fuck tho
great job atlok

FoolsONER.
04-04-2008, 11:09 PM
awryt m8, armys gd, fills ma wallet lol.. just no time to do shit as u can probs tell by my shit...

get a wee bump out o it for sum mo crtisizzles lol..

samp1e - im not too keen on it, but mite just be my personal peeves... never been a fan of thickness of lines being inconsitent in a a piece.. and also not a fan of tons of lines cuttin into the letters, a few is ok if thy placed appropriately. other than that its fairly plain.

fools - dont do arrows that come straight out of a letter, thts fugly.. fair nuf if it was an addon or extension, but not at the end of a letter..

atlok - i like it mate. just not too sure about the N, looks too small n squashed up.. also if u huna do stars, get em right, if not they look guff..

jers - love it man, nothin i can say to giv u sum advice.. just keep on keepin on.. simples rock when done right, and u sir do em right..

NOW THATS HOW YA GIVE CRITS U CUNTS WHO DONT CONSIDER IT.. FUCKIN STOP JUST SAYIN 'CRITS'...

peas:p

Thanks for the crit man, much appreciated.

nemzone
04-05-2008, 02:36 AM
no worries man.. lil ish i done today.. tryin new shit. 3rd sketch in a year now remember..

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4050001.jpg


on a seperate note... .D.H. -

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7800/vermontdp3.jpg

theres ur pic posted proper, and i quite like it, simple with sum funk, get sum 3dizzle on it..

atlok7
04-05-2008, 08:59 AM
that top ones sharppp nem

Jamoya Designs
04-05-2008, 10:17 AM
drak- nice coloorzz
nemzone- i love that m man
samp1e- nice syle
lol.. uh cant rly crit u cuz i suck but yeah..
advise to help me get better? xD

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9585/0504081840wu8.th.jpg (http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0504081840wu8.jpg)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/122/0504081839qd2.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0504081839qd2.jpg)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1230/0504081838me2.th.jpg (http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0504081838me2.jpg)

crits?

Mass Appeal
04-05-2008, 10:27 AM
very nice Samp !!!
nice for the 3rd in the year Nemz...bring back thta old ish tough

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tuu.jpg

first sketch in a few weeks..may paint.

tgc!mtown
04-05-2008, 10:28 AM
nem- top ones tight as shit
ibomb- that characters dope, maybe some color?
jam- the venom is pretty good, but as far as the other two, use bars and possibly some three d once you have a good letter form down
mass- sick bannana

kore
04-05-2008, 11:45 AM
Mass Appeal - That shit's dope as fuck. I'm diggin that banana dude.

ORAN
04-05-2008, 11:59 AM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6960/oransketchlx6.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2203/oransketchwb1.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5707/oransketchsh2.jpg

soraflair
04-05-2008, 12:19 PM
My first real letter, I know i'm a toy but i'm learning, I was told to stick with paper and pencil so here I am learning.

Final Result
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/3277/040508130500eb3.jpg

Techkanuck
04-05-2008, 02:26 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture221.jpg

Oran- First one looks like it has some good aspects but the R and A need a lot of work

Soraflair- I know my pick is quick and shity, but i would definitely suggest going a lil slower and keeping it clean, maybe try to draw that in 5 or 6 bars to keep it even

HuntingLOLs
04-05-2008, 03:06 PM
yo amk, work on them cracks - i usually look at sidewalks and walls to learn cracks. in any case heres some recent sketches - imma go tokyo in less than 12 hours. PM me if ya are japanese. 2 months bitches! dk to japan!
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Merwhitered.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/merspink.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/merMS.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/MEflame.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/flyerredpink.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/flyerpink.jpg

atlok7
04-05-2008, 03:11 PM
the bottom flyer is nice

Mass Appeal
04-05-2008, 03:52 PM
yeah my cracks are whack !
hunting..all godd asusual ! so sharp and pointy which is great !!! .. enjoy JP too !..they have CRAZY handstyles !
voise..your sharper shit was better from abit back remeber ?...but its simple i guess..just work on cleannie lines theyre all wonkey..


n a bump awump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/tuu.jpg

peace.

Techkanuck
04-05-2008, 05:22 PM
ya, i'm just really really digging this word but all the inspiration I've been having doesn't work well with the V and V to O stuff

t-bur
04-05-2008, 05:25 PM
Bringin the heat amk. Funky shit.

Mers- black and pink dub is killin it just the top right of the M throws it off flow.

Fube
04-05-2008, 06:27 PM
feelin it hunting. someones getting better!



my whores.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-05-08_1816.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-05-08_1811.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-05-08_1809.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-01-08_1951.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300879-1.jpg

Capo Izi
04-05-2008, 07:18 PM
http://a20.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_f98e9da4ec154273ddc8fcf4c8b2557b.jpg

Mass-haha cool banana, nice flow and coloring too.

Hunting-Not bad, just maybe do it a little slower to avoid some shakey stuff

Vois-nice-ish, maybe make it all more "round-like"

Oran-cool stuff, but the weird bubble-fro like thing on the top one is weird and idk, IMO I don't like it, and then the last one the N looks like a backwards K.

Nem-WOW, nice dude, NICE

Shame-LOVE IT, I like the random different letter in it, and the 3D is excellent on it.

Fube
04-05-2008, 07:21 PM
cute,


hate yours.



hate it.

librelikespie
04-05-2008, 07:42 PM
That amwah stuff is dope, and fube, how do you get that grimey fill in 3rd picture?

Capo need to work on ur hand.. I probably do too. crits on my shiet please
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf214.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf212.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf213.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf207.jpg

oh and I write uber now, used to write libre..

sacwacko
04-05-2008, 11:07 PM
all tht shit looks hella dope librelikespie (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=29396)....
but it looks like u did it hella quick.
still, looks good, keep tht shit up.

garbage down tha way
04-05-2008, 11:08 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoers.jpg
libre- the throwups are illy, keep working at the pieces.

fube- all are sick, i love how you make your highlights wave out. big up on the american errorist also, i lost mine=[.

amk- sick char homey.

atlok7
04-05-2008, 11:12 PM
fube- you make me sexually excited
garbage- you make me excited

nemzone
04-06-2008, 05:09 AM
fube, diggin ur flix man
uber, like tht shiz, likin how its not all perfectly colored etc.. it worx
garbage, love that too lol

cant reli crit much cuz they all nice in my eyez


http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4050001.jpg
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4060019.jpg

done the latter on a plane ride frm cincinatti to paris

if its whack tell me why, cuz iv never done ish like this before these 2, just experimenting

Lie
04-06-2008, 06:05 AM
NEMZ IS BACK :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


Welcome back for whenever uve came back haha

nice work like usual

Mass Appeal
04-06-2008, 07:11 AM
LIBRE....distinctive shit.

a real quick peice done on the bus hence th emega slopiness..ima defo redo this ..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dw.jpg

and the E

says APFEROH...the in thing is people having 2 names so id thought i will too...APFER abbreviates APFEL which is Apple in German..but Ls are gay so i did a R on the end...will be redoing.

SCIEnce802
04-06-2008, 08:05 AM
librelikespie- that last one is soooo sick.
mass- not feeling that at all.

MiNZ
04-06-2008, 09:11 AM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/flicks021.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/flicks013.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/flicks007.jpg

tempest
04-06-2008, 11:00 AM
soraflair-instead of doing ur bars all sketchy and square like tht, start off by having them pointy and bold. then erase the stuff u dont need. heres a basic thingy
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/5936/picture018hr5.th.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture018hr5.jpg)

Mass Appeal
04-06-2008, 11:05 AM
pretty nice but the top of the S is too pointy i reckon.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg

tempest
04-06-2008, 11:11 AM
lol. its actually pretty shit in real life. thts sum of the first s's i evr did. just thot it mite help sora out

i like the combo of little letters and nice ones. tho i prolly wuldnt put the a at the beginning. i thot it was part of the name until i got 2 e. i was reading aapfera

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 11:13 AM
pretty nice but the top of the S is too pointy i reckon.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg

i really like that. im diggin the handie alot.

tempest
04-06-2008, 11:17 AM
aye the handy is dope

NAIK_SHOES
04-06-2008, 11:47 AM
CLICK ON THE PIC!

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7209/img0012vl3.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0012vl3.jpg)

''nicolas''
and i know for the S. I had no idea and i wanted to finish it fast.

comments please

mass appeal : nice handstyle, and pice too
Nemzone and mimz your shit are fucking dope

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 11:55 AM
you missed some 3d on the right leg of the a. and the 3d on the o is messed up i think. other then that it looks pretty good

Spark391
04-06-2008, 12:41 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7896/picture577dh8.jpg
First sketch in ages, haven't picked up pencil for 2 weeks.

Amk - I <3 you! Your handstyle has got a lot better. That banana is sexy on the last page, need to work bit whit your cracks.
Nicolas - Pretty good, feeling it, but your S is too round. make it like you made other letters, missed little bit 3d on that A.
Oran - check new to graffiti tread, you should too more simpler stuff.
soraflair - take your time, that stuff looks bit sloppy. but practice makes perfect ;) Do your whole name and post it again. On that letter I don't like how the bottom is going.
Mer - Like the third one and the last one, colouring of that throw is hot.
Fube - that fill of the third sketch is dope
Capo - right direction, keep doing that kind of stuff.
Uber - not feeling your R
Garbage - nice letters
Nemz - damn, like it a lot. On the second one your Z is bit raped, on the first lose that 2008 text. Hope you get the first one painted some day, that shit is so hot!
Fools - that first simple rocks!! like that hand too.
Minz - try to get better pictures, can't realy much tell what is there. On the first one don't like how the leg of the R is going.
Samp - feeling those letters
Jamoya - check new to graff thread,
tgc!mdown - check new to graff thread
Caiseone - flow seems bit fucked.

WiseCracker
04-06-2008, 01:11 PM
spark - i like your style dude, keep it up
mass appeal - i'm diggin' your style too man, i can't wait to see more.

This is an idea i've been working with. tell me which looks best.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2022/2393414452_971f046279_o.jpg

dim
04-06-2008, 01:18 PM
they all look the same

Mass Appeal
04-06-2008, 01:26 PM
hahahahaha

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-06-2008, 01:44 PM
spark - i like your style dude, keep it up
mass appeal - i'm diggin' your style too man, i can't wait to see more.

This is an idea i've been working with. tell me which looks best.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2022/2393414452_971f046279_o.jpg

there all the same thing man....wtf is wrong with u,,

unless u talkn bout color..i same blue...good color

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 01:45 PM
Dont Fuckin Write Dream You Retard.
GET A NEW NAME.
AND GOOGLE DREAM IF U DON'T KNOW WUT IM TALKIN ABOUT.

TRY'N
04-06-2008, 01:56 PM
fube, diggin ur flix man
uber, like tht shiz, likin how its not all perfectly colored etc.. it worx
garbage, love that too lol

cant reli crit much cuz they all nice in my eyez


http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4050001.jpg
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4060019.jpg

done the latter on a plane ride frm cincinatti to paris

if its whack tell me why, cuz iv never done ish like this before these 2, just experimenting
omg yo thats ill why are you in the toy thread?????

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:22 PM
there all the same thing man....wtf is wrong with u,,

unless u talkn bout color..i same blue...good color

haha they are all the same thing. go with the blue or black? but common dont do something that simple. and what were you planning on doing with it? lol?

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 02:37 PM
since i cant find the toy throwups atm, ill post in here....
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/Untitled4.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/Untitled2-1.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/Untitled1.jpg
crits would be appreciated.
all quicks and i haven't written for a few months.
cant say im 100% original on the last one and the middle one is an experiment, never done that style before...

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:42 PM
the middle one looks pretty good for an experiment. the first one is nice and simple and the last one isnt really original, but it still looks good. they are all wall worthy. <-haha wall worthy. but they look good

-ShAmEE-
04-06-2008, 03:04 PM
it all grimey up there.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/DSC01238.jpg

not a big fan of it, but i like apts of it. i think i'll redo it soon, dunno when thou.

sInk.dIs.
04-06-2008, 03:07 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9672/hpim0043fj6.jpg

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2659/hpim0046jh8.jpg
mleh?

WiseCracker
04-06-2008, 03:07 PM
sacwacko - it's not my name, it's a command. i write wise. i know who dream is and i figured if i tagged my name next to it, i wouldn't take away from his skills. pitty he is gone.

yes to everyone that pointed out the obvious, they are all the same. it was mostly color. i wanted to know what color would look better. i figured if i put this up it would put out a message, something like everyone needs to dream, that's why it's like faceless and generic. i know it's simple but i felt like it might make people think if they saw it.

TRY'N
04-06-2008, 03:19 PM
it all grimey up there.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/DSC01238.jpg

not a big fan of it, but i like apts of it. i think i'll redo it soon, dunno when thou.
thats lookin good so far i really wanna see it when you really do it up. fill it in and add 3D and i think it will look really dope

my.favorite.addiction
04-06-2008, 03:20 PM
hola everyone,Im "NoMas"MPR,(although Ive written lots of other things before now) pretty new here.always checked out the site but this is my first time posting.peace.get up stay up.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0023.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0020.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0022.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0024.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0019.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011.jpg