Blackbooks

[TRY'N]

it all grimey up there.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/DSC01238.jpg

not a big fan of it, but i like apts of it. i think i'll redo it soon, dunno when thou.
thats lookin good so far i really wanna see it when you really do it up. fill it in and add 3D and i think it will look really dope

[my.favorite.addiction]

hola everyone,Im "NoMas"MPR,(although Ive written lots of other things before now) pretty new here.always checked out the site but this is my first time posting.peace.get up stay up.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0023.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0020.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0022.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0024.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0019.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011.jpg

[my.favorite.addiction]

o.
dam.
photobucket blew up my work all crazy.
sorry >_>

[-ShAmEE-]

dont rep ur work with gel pens. aint good, just use tha standard pencil and pen, just wok on them letters.

[my.favorite.addiction]

me?
I only used sharpies.a silver one and the rest thins.

[-ShAmEE-]

well they aint doing u god, just use pen and pencil. do simples.

[sketch3]

for real, that shits ugly go right back to basics

[my.favorite.addiction]

haha,aight,thanks for the crits.
I aint trying to play it off,but my camera did make the colors look pretty wack >_<
my scanner is broken right now.

are any of these alright at least?not color but styles?what should I drop or work on more?

[Doctor Lucifer]

no. none of them are alright. they suck. Go to 'the new to graffiti' thread.

[atlok7]

dude dont b such a dick, give him suggestions

[Fube]

yes, please be nice. like snuggles soft nice so he can go put that out on the streets and get fucked up.

spoon feeding always works.

[JETPACK!!]

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0023.jpg

hahahah i nearly shat myself when i saw this. dude i think you may need a shrink or something. drawing burning hospitals could be viewed as a plea for help. plus all the blood drippin off your letters an shit is wack. the only color is red too. shit son

your 4th is your best. dont add any pretty emo pictures around the letters. just do letters for now, make em nice, blocky and simple like you have going right there. make it legible, no one wants to see letters they cant read.

some new shit i whipped up, to be honest. the more i look at it the more i hate it. the Ks wack, but feedback would be cool. one

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8898/tamk1dw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AeroOne]

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5368/graffiti008wz0.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti008wz0.jpg)

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3788/graffiti009vs5.th.jpg (http://img519.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti009vs5.jpg)

Crits???

I WRITE AERO 1

[JETPACK!!]

give crits to get crits.

buuuuttt since im nice...
your shits wack

that bomb has potential, draw it 1000 more times and itll be nice

[AeroOne]

thanks man

[Casual7ie]

hola everyone,Im "NoMas"MPR,(although Ive written lots of other things before now) pretty new here.always checked out the site but this is my first time posting.peace.get up stay up.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0023.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0020.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0022.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0024.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0019.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011.jpg

ok im not good at doing peices or anything of the sort, but those are not good, keep that shit simple and dont try to make wildstyles and drawings and all that is just wack as hell. keep it simple stupid. kiss. remember that

[Mr.Poosk]

Aerone- I think that the "A" in your throw doesnt really look like an a at all, more like a "G". other then that i like where your going with it keep it up.

jet Pack- I agree im not a fan of that K at all, but the t is hot, and i like that a minus that weird extention coming off the top, really ruins the flow.

Shame- Dude lovin that sketch, hot as hell, get it colored up.

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/9576/graff013uy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
WOES

Some ish i did this weekend, crits please.

I know i fuked up the 3d but wasnt sure what to do with it.

[smooth_nuts]

crits
http://a599.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/51/l_da74402f0e633de07274b7418ee8d3ce.jpg
woes-your o looks like a u
my.favorite....-new to graffiti thread
shamme-thats looking ill so far man cant wait to see the finished product
tamk-i like the t but the rest of the letters are all....ehhh,ya know

[Fube]

ok im not good at doing peices or anything of the sort, but those are not good, keep that shit simple and dont try to make wildstyles and drawings and all that is just wack as hell. keep it simple stupid. kiss. remember that


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-06-08_1930.jpg

like disssss.
your trying to progress to fast.

[smooth_nuts]

ahhh fube thats fresh man sep theres noforce field on the e haha still fresh though...

[letsg0skate]

yes, please be nice. like snuggles soft nice so he can go put that out on the streets and get fucked up.

spoon feeding always works.

I don't really appreciate your sarcasm :[

[oakstr1]

WOES - dam that shits dope as fuck. cant seem to find somethin wrong with it. haha

JETPACK!! - nice throw up. the K is real nice.

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2262/simpleslp4.jpg
something im trying to do really big. the S is whack. crits?

[Desipher]

a doodle it might be blurry but i dont know im kinda baked says aker and theres a dragon
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture193.jpg

[crystalmeth and abortions]

desipher-hard to see. but from what i can make out it looks fresh, and im feelin the dragon

http://a328.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/104/l_a95656fc450da7dc5ab931ad9889f2d7.jpg
quick sketch, crits?

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture222.jpg

[nemzone]

omg yo thats ill why are you in the toy thread?????


haha thnx man. well i dnt wna go t big boys book, cuz al just get flamed n hated if i do.. also theres still the likes of sky5 who posts in here, and if hes not postin then i def wont in the big boys lool

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg

i never get suggestions any more. ! :(
and spoon feeding is not the way forward.

Vois..please man..go back to that sharp shit simplish shit you was doing awhile back..it was great and a movable style.

[atlok7]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-06-08_1930.jpg

like disssss.
your trying to progress to fast.

i would think even more simple than that!

[-ShAmEE-]

yeh you could be more simple. but it is still simple.

[JETPACK!!]

mass, i like the steeze you got going on, but im not reelin feelin how you placed the letters. it dosent have the best flow to it, kinna looks like the letters are floating around in some space portal or whatever. try making all the letters the same size without add ons. just to see how it would look.
vois, i actually like what you've got going there, it's getting better. keep the dot on your I straight. and dont use the crayon or whatever you do for the field around it.

some shit i did last night but didnt post. ignore the wack handstyle

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/8781/tank2eo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Techkanuck]

Ya, I was using highlighters on receipt paper at work and one sharpie. Just wanted to try more top down shit. Mass I totaly know the sharper shit it much better and the shit you do is always a good example. This style is something i'm looking at more for the begginging of when i decide to grab a can, and doing something like the last one on a door or something is really how I want to try it. And ya jetpack, I definetly thing the dot should be more centered but i fucked up so it went there.

Mass- your peice is ill as hell, always like the sharp lines, only crits may be to make the Top of the A a little more like the rest in angle and gap, and the cut back part of the R is thinner and has a different chamfer on it.

[tempest]

desipher- nice. i luv the dragon. ur k looks like an r tho
crytalmeth - its ok. is the s supposed 2 b a five? try a dollar sign, it mite work better. and lose the wigglies on the t
mass- ive seen tht like three times now! major bumpage ;) still a nice peice tho
jetpack-your cracks need them work. i wuld suggest trying them with a thinner marker and if u spray tht use a needlethin cap.

i hate givin crits cuz i suck wors than most of yall, but giv em 2 get em rite? hers my newest one. i was told 2 go simple and just work on letter formation so heres an attempt. i kno the a is wobbly, wat else sucks? ;)
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/456/picture020ni2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture223.jpg
did this in lecture to get back to cleaner ones
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture224.jpg
V is Handicapped

[tempest]

atleast i thot it was giv crits 2 get crits...
fix the i on the secon one. its all slanted and wierd

[Fube]

I don't really appreciate your sarcasm :[

keep it up. i gave u one point, u get a 3 day ban for 2 points.
evidently u fucked up somewhere else aswell.
give me a reason to issue one more point man.
the way your going u wont be able to post here, stuck with 12oz where people really dont givva fuck on whats posted.
i could care less if your a member of this forum.
not smart to make enemies who have the power to fuckin ban u.

call me power hungry, say i ant shit but a mod on a computer forum, call me a looser with no life, say u dont care if u cant post here anymore. do whatever.

i see your still posting here. think about it before u open your mouth. ;)


btw mass, dont take this as a dis, but i think your marker control is better then your letters. i dont know how to tell u to fix it. but im not really feelin it because i see it to much.

[NAIK_SHOES]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4854/img0025nx1.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0025nx1.jpg)

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/7360/img0019gp8.th.jpg (http://img258.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0019gp8.jpg)

sorry for the 2nd pic, it,s my desk at school

Vois: you got my old name and i am sure that you can have a fire handstyle, nice first
Tank2: i love your style man the only thing is that thing on the end of your K
fube:clean and simple i love it

[Atomik]

ezoyd
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/ezoyd.jpg

[Spark391]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7896/picture577dh8.jpg
Didn't get almost anything.

Oaks - make the letters more bit more separate don't like how A is overlaped, I would like to see sharper edges but it's only my opinion.
Amk - don't know realy what to suggest, for me it looks perfect
Sawfi - that thing coming out of the I looks very wack, loose it.
tempest - make the M flow like othes
Tank2 - your cracks don't look realistic. find a picture with good cracks and learn from there.
Vois - likeing the first one
Desipher - don't like how the second R flows, that dragon is dope as hell and letters are nice too.
Ezoyd - dark fills and dark outlines don't work, can't realy see letters anymore with out any highlights

[Mass Appeal]

thanks FUBE...stuck on progressing to be honest.

spark..everythings good..maybe change the swirl..or add one on the S or sumthing to make it better..i need to do you a piece dont i...can i do a PARK cos man .. im seriously bad at S's...pweeez

heres something i did AGES ago...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-18.jpg

i know its hard to see etc. but i thought id post it so i wasnt flicless

i was planning on filling all the cars with the cool heads...but i never got round to it...too much work ha !

[letsgobombin]

few blackbook throws
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow11.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow10.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow12.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow13.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow14.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow15.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow2.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow4.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow6x.jpg

more soon
mass appeal- im likin the trains, did u draw them? some pretty nice simples keep drawin
spark- i dont know y but i like that style your s doesn't match though
atomik- being all black its kinda hard to make out the letters try a light outline
naik- it looks like the next step on from simples, try addin somethin on the end it seems too short
tech- first one is nice clean simple, second is really sloppy, the s is weird

[Spark391]

Amk for me it's ok, you can to just Park if that S would rape that whole sketch :D I have problem doing s's too. Can't usualy match them with other letters n shiiit.

Pocs - I like fourth one the most, make that bar of the p lil bit rounder and the o as big as other letters and it would be fine.

[Mass Appeal]

mass appeal- im likin the trains, did u draw them? some pretty nice simples keep drawin


yes

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoerss.jpg

letsgo- look at other throwies for inspiration but dont bite them.
amkrack- you should definitely finish that, its ill.
spark- work on keeping proportions. as in the s is too fat.
vois- top simple is nice, keep fucking with simples.
jetpack- youre definitely progressing, keep doing what your doing. just stop putting those bumps at the ends of the letters.

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture225.jpg
Wonder what my name is. Took 15 minutes in class so it, like most of mine, is a little grimey around the edges and such.

HOERS- I'm feelin the color scheme and the style only thing i can see is that the R seems
kinda wide.

POCS- I like 2,5,7 they seem like they got some potential to be nice pieces, the rest seem like they need to be tweaked and worked on longer to develop properly.

[JETPACK!!]

hoers- im feelin it, but i dont like your E. it seems to narrow to me. your R and S also seem much taller than the rest of your letters. and i know that all those bubble things on my letters look wack:( oh well.
shane- im not feelin the curve in your H and N. you also covered up too much of your S imo
pocs- make sure all your letters are legible and not to make them look the same or crazy similar.

just made the freshest chicken caeser salad. fucking scrumptious.

heres something without any ugly tumors on it

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/473/tank3zt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[letsgobombin]

few i missed
i bit the c from a local artist, does this still count as bitin, properly? i do it alot when im stuck i take one letter and make the others up myself
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow7.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow8.jpg

garbage- is that moers or hoers? the colouring is pretty shady and some of the letters are wack but a little work and it'd make a nice piece
tech- make the top bit of the n shorter and sort the s out it look a bit dodgy. good simple though although s doesnt suit the rest and id ont like the curve on the h also make bottom bit of h more square to match the rest or vice versa
jetpack- im lovin that simple

[JETPACK!!]

letsgobombing, if your gonna bite a letter, try and make the rest flow with it. the letters in your first picture have hard sharp edges, while your C is smooth. try and smooth the other letters or sharpen your C.. id say smooth your other letters

[Desipher]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7896/picture577dh8.jpg
Didn't get almost anything.

Oaks - make the letters more bit more separate don't like how A is overlaped, I would like to see sharper edges but it's only my opinion.
Amk - don't know realy what to suggest, for me it looks perfect
Sawfi - that thing coming out of the I looks very wack, loose it.
tempest - make the M flow like othes
Tank2 - your cracks don't look realistic. find a picture with good cracks and learn from there.
Vois - likeing the first one
Desipher - don't like how the second R flows, that dragon is dope as hell and letters are nice too.
Ezoyd - dark fills and dark outlines don't work, can't realy see letters anymore with out any highlights
theres only one are it says aker but ya i know what u mean will look better when i ink i got a full page of doodles on it i need to ink just to lazy :P
letsgo: the 8th ones go potential id lose the lil angel wing idea on the p for now might be a good idea later one when u advance
hoers:looks good
tech: make ur letters more simple and even out the sizes puportionatly(sp)
jetpack: sometihng about the T bugs me i think its the little hooks on both sides of the t bar
spark: loose the curly thing on your a

[garbage down tha way]

garbage- is that moers or hoers? the colouring is pretty shady and some of the letters are wack but a little work and it'd make a nice piece


if you saw my other fills you'd be thankful for this one. and what letters are wack?

[sacwacko]

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/Pocsthrow2.jpg


this almost looks painted at first glance.

[intaout]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2316/2345725579_e3381e14c9.jpg?v=0
pocs i agree with the other crits, when your biting
one letter the rest have to look very similar or els
e the flow is gone. the throw has similar letters b
-ut the points of the top corner should be sticking
off of each letter and the p should not have as
much gap.
^thatones better..

[crappytheclown]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c135/crappytheclown/img452Large-1.jpg
hey everyone. This is my first piece, just wondering what your thoughts are on it. Any negative or positive comments and feedback is appreciated.

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture2-15.png

Another battle word for a different forum.

AMK Nice idea.Looks good so far.
Spark Dope simple.Got a nice flow but definately lose the swirl on the A.
Tank thats a nice simple too but I'd say make the the bottom bar thats kicking out of the K, bigger.

[Doctor Lucifer]

Damn raby... I love your style. Wanna hook up an exchange?

[NAIK_SHOES]

drakula: nice sketch , nice letters
crappy theclown: start with block or alot more simple
intaout: nice throw

I don,t feel my A but anyway, an 15 minutes sketch
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8796/img0026wx4.th.jpg (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0026wx4.jpg)

[JETPACK!!]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c135/crappytheclown/img452Large-1.jpg
hey everyone. This is my first piece, just wondering what your thoughts are on it. Any negative or positive comments and feedback is appreciated.

jhahahahahahhahaha make it simple man, thats nothing but a bunch of lines and colors.

M A K E Y O U R L E T T E R S S I M P L E L I K E T H E S E O K ? J U S T L I K E T H E O N E S O N Y O U R K E Y B O A R D. kthnx.

or you can read the new to graff thread

[Doctor Lucifer]

NAIK SHOES- go a little bit simpler.

[JETPACK!!]

i inked it up a bit, added some cracks, although there fucking wack.

an raby, your shits hot. im diggin the steeze a lot

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9184/tank3mo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture2-15.png

Another battle word for a different forum.

AMK Nice idea.Looks good so far.
Spark Dope simple.Got a nice flow but definately lose the swirl on the A.
Tank thats a nice simple too but I'd say make the the bottom bar thats kicking out of the K, bigger.


dude u need to do more than one extension if ur going to do them or it looked like u have developed more on one letter.

[MarOne...]

i inked it up a bit, added some cracks, although there fucking wack.

an raby, your shits hot. im diggin the steeze a lot

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9184/tank3mo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DAMN. A name change was just the ticket. You have progressed mounds in just a few days. Looks Good!

[JETPACK!!]

cool beanz, check back in sometime tomorrow an ill have thrown those suggestions into a sketch. i like the whole bigger to smaller idea, although id probably get a lot of dead space at the bottom of my letters. and im not sure on the drop shadow being on the bottom, but ill try it anyways. right now im battling with the K, it always fights with me dammit!

cheers for the crits ctso

thanks marone

[fOrSaQeN]

http://a905.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/37/l_959425597b52f0d3ae68edf69e5c4888.jpg

[SCIEnce802]

yo jetback- drop the 2, its wack. but that simple is nice, good style

[JETPACK!!]

ahhh, i get ya ctso. but if i do that, then the dead space in between my letters wont be filled. ill try it anyways, maybe im wrong.

and science, there's already a tank, an its safe to say he burns me anyday. the two on the end keeps me safe from anyones shenanighans

ewwww 1000th post. whose a whorrreeeeeee

[Casual7ie]

http://a905.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/37/l_959425597b52f0d3ae68edf69e5c4888.jpg

i like it cept the e. it looks to mushed together. and make the middle line, curve thingie on it more squared like the rest of it. and make the first leg of the n shorter maybe... make some minor changes and id look mad dope

[MarOne...]

raby, I'm digging that.

NEW NAME! OMGWTFBBQZ0RZ!

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/rokem.jpg
reads rokem.

[hazetheone]

Omgwtfbbqzors!!!!!!!!!!!

[trance9]

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/ATT00002.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j224/lefty_2006_/fullcolor.jpg
while ago.....

[JETPACK!!]

jetpack - yeah you'd have to play with the perspective to make it work I guess. Like if the bottoms of the letters got closer together and then the tops flaired out, so the overall composition was more or less an inverted pyramid / trapazoid.. if that makes sense.

any thoughts on bolero? I google imaged it and found it was some type of shrug for women.. haha. but when I thought of it I was thinking of the bolero of fire from zelda. anyway
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/bolero1.jpg
not really feeling either of these. crits appreciated

haaaaaaaaaahhhhh bolero of fire. i was just playing that game this morning, word to zelda. personally i couldnt write that name, too curvy for me, like the B and O's. but thats just me an im not writing it haha. if you like it and you enjoy writing it, then do it up.

and word on the inverted pyramid, you do a good job of describing shit. i understood that perfectly. but im not sure how that would look, lately ive been on the angle tip, a nice slight slope downwards with my letters. your idea would probably end up with more of a chinese hand fan/rainbow shape.

im not really feelin that bolero though, your bars vary in sizes and your flow is inconsistant. circle up your O's a bit, straighten the backbone of your R and take that dip outta the top bar on your E. also, for now, take off the hinges on the end of your bars. keep workin with it though, the name has potentional if you work on it.

trance, id use simples for your next sketch if i were you. focus more on the actual letters and your word rather than a pretty picture behind it.

[TRY'N]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c135/crappytheclown/img452Large-1.jpg
hey everyone. This is my first piece, just wondering what your thoughts are on it. Any negative or positive comments and feedback is appreciated.
WOOOOWWWW what duz that even say?? omg yea go way simpler jus throw together some CLEAR letters and uh..do it up!

simply tho.

[TRY'N]

hola everyone,Im "NoMas"MPR,(although Ive written lots of other things before now) pretty new here.always checked out the site but this is my first time posting.peace.get up stay up.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0023.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0020.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0022.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0024.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0019.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011.jpg
you have some crazy dawings goin on here haha. i mean the drawings aint bad (your pieces are i diff story), its jus way too much for the page. it seems like you jus got a ton goin through your head and youre tryna get it all out on the page but jus try to stay focused and try to do a piece and jus a piece nothing else. no burning hospitals or anything :rolleyes:

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoerss.jpg

bumph

[Nem]

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/ATT00001-1-1.jpg

strugglin...

[my.favorite.addiction]

haha,thanks for all the crits.
heh,yea my substitue screamed the whole KISS thing at my entire class like 2 weeks ago.
heh,to who said that I have too much on my mind,thats exact.its like I either dump my brain on the page or jus scribble.
aight keep it simple.Ill remember that.
I have one alright peace for my boy CANCER who moved waaaay up north.(from Cali to Canada) try an put it on...
yea,when I actually go painting I keep it waaay simple.jus outlines throws an tags.

...o wow,my letters at the bottom of the hospital piece do look like flames o_O

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0001.jpg

teh man in teh moon.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0016.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0014.jpg

crits plllleas...
tried to resize.sorry -_-

ps-Nem.start out with some 3d.





finish with cracked out nurses an bleeding letters ^_^.
jk.jk.

[atlok7]

yo nem, work on your letters, not those big titties.. ;)

just messin around with a newish style
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3638/caisogp4.jpg

[TRY'N]

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/ATT00001-1-1.jpg

strugglin...
yea id work on the letters some more and add some 3d u kno..

[Nem]

damn. ive been workin these letters for like a year now.

[TRY'N]

haha,thanks for all the crits.
heh,yea my substitue screamed the whole KISS thing at my entire class like 2 weeks ago.
heh,to who said that I have too much on my mind,thats exact.its like I either dump my brain on the page or jus scribble.
aight keep it simple.Ill remember that.
I have one alright peace for my boy CANCER who moved waaaay up north.(from Cali to Canada) try an put it on...
yea,when I actually go painting I keep it waaay simple.jus outlines throws an tags.

...o wow,my letters at the bottom of the hospital piece do look like flames o_O

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0001.jpg

teh man in teh moon.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0016.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0014.jpg

crits plllleas...
tried to resize.sorry -_-

ps-Nem.start out with some 3d.





finish with cracked out nurses an bleeding letters ^_^.
jk.jk.
yea i love your drawings cuz i love that gritty style. but your letters are a lil crazy. if you didnt tell us that you made that for your buddy cancer, i never would have known it said that. so work on the letters a lot more! pz

[Stonk]

my favorite addiction..dont write mpc..its a legendary 3 decade strong crew from NYC. cant really say much else about it...

[my.favorite.addiction]

oh yea,I found out about them recently an was like faaaaack my crew has to have a name change.we were Medicine Paint Clan.Now were Medicine Paint Revolutionaries-MPR.but that canvas is older.

[atlok7]

yo nem, work on your letters, not those big titties.. ;)

just messin around with a newish style
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3638/caisogp4.jpg

bottom page bump

[Nem]

extensions on the last letter (o?) dont flow. the rest is pretty sick. add more color.

[librelikespie]

lalalalala dope shit caiso

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf222.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf220.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf221.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf223.jpg

[Desipher]

just something quick dif style says dimr dont really know how i feel about it i dont like the m i like the di and r ill have a few other dimer/dimr sketchs up later no im dont writer dimr now just doin a few because of a late exchange
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture195.jpg

[letsgobombin]

if you saw my other fills you'd be thankful for this one. and what letters are wack?

your s just seems like it doesnt hav much structure, im not likin it

[letsgobombin]

http://a905.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/37/l_959425597b52f0d3ae68edf69e5c4888.jpg

it looks like the e off lessen in the sdk, other than that it looks pretty good

[letsgobombin]

this almost looks painted at first glance.
i used paint pens, apart from the black i had to go over it like 3 times to get the black to show
sorry for triple posting i was just replying to the others and i dont know how to get multiple quotes

[Cin123]

dope page guys keepit up and stay up!

[unreal180]

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/faker279/DSCN1244.jpg
crits?

[my.favorite.addiction]

yo ,unreal180,your F looks to big compared to the other letters.and I cant really read the letter between A an E.jus keep workin it.try to make them a lil more connected/closer.also arrows get played out fast so Id say use em when your better an they look real clean.

[unreal180]

cheers blud

[my.favorite.addiction]

so what does it say?
faier?
no offense,no one can read my work >_>
o an nice sig XP

[Chronicology]

looks pretty dope wit.
reminds me of abstract art.


will post some sketches and recent bombs thrown up at neighborhood schools soon.

good luck to all h-town writers!
grab a can spread tha love.

[Chronicology]

and lay off the fuckin etch....pussies

[kore]

FAKER: Stick to simples for now.
CAISO: That shit is dope. I like it.
LIBER: I'm diggin your style. Nice and unique.

http://i30.tinypic.com/b6swp3.jpg
Lemme get some crits on this. I know it definitely needs some work...

[NAIK_SHOES]

unreal : keep it more simple you don't need arrow anywhere
keso : its a good begining throw

comments please, NIC, again some quick sketch
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4057/img0033av2.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0033av2.jpg)
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1151/img0034na5.th.jpg (http://img405.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0034na5.jpg)
i really like my second

COMMENTS PLEASE...

[hellomynameisftc]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1373/sohoesketchvp8.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/982/toyoyto001na9.jpg
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/9384/toyoyto002ba5.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9398/toyoyto003yz9.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1484/nazi003dx8.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9004/nazi004pp7.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6324/nazi008ae1.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/6370/nazi006ow3.jpg
whatever

[JETPACK!!]

i inked it up a bit, added some cracks, although there fucking wack.

an raby, your shits hot. im diggin the steeze a lot

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9184/tank3mo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump

keso, your K needs the most work. it looks like an H.
unreal, watch the width of your bars. there all over the place. dont add any erxtensions, just nice simple block letters

[neza]

hey hey all ive been away for a while i aint posted on here in ages seems alot has changed scince i was last here

just a single letter an E

crits would be nice i think ive improved alot if you ask me this was draw free hand with a biro (couldnt find a pencil lol) so ignore the little lines here and there coz i would normally rub them out but i cant

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3376/random128zz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-neza

[kore]

ftc: That shits dope as hell.
TANK2: I'm feelin it. I dunno about those cracks though.
neza: I'm not really a fan of wildstyle and all that complex stuff so I can't really give you any good crits on that. I'd say its good though.

More throws, fucked with the E and K a bit.
http://i31.tinypic.com/ayn7s1.jpg

[KNOWONE303]

pretty standard shit.

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture228.jpg
white was a Pearlescent Paint marker that got FUCKED up.

Keso- nice fix, good start

JET- I like it a lot but maybe make the T thicker and a tad longer and it's bring everything together better, maybe chamfer the edges of the 2?

[Casual7ie]

vois-the white did get fucked up, but other then that it looks pretty good. the s is a lil warped tho. but its still aight
keso-i like the top throw the most. the e is a lil messed up. a great start if you just fix the e. i like it
neza-im liking it. but cause its a single letter ya cant tell if its got enough flow or anything. but i like what i see so far
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/throwie.jpg

crits? dont mind the dark ass colouring

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoersss.jpg
vois- id go back to the squared edges, the rounded shit makes it look toy unless the letters are skinny. other than that, fatten up the s a little bit and you've got a decent simple.
keso- thats a nice throw you got going, just keep working on it.
neza- i like the e alot, but those extentions im not so sure about. it all depends if you can pull it off with the whole piece and make it look good. post the whole thing up.
tanky- nothing to complain about, you're simples are lookin good bruva. i just dont like the 2.
sohoe- (top picture) you ruined a perfect simple with those connections! get rid of that shit and you'll be good to go. the throws are lookin good tho man, keep it up.
libre- i like where youre going with your style, keep it up homey.

[renz198]

just something quick dif style says dimr dont really know how i feel about it i dont like the m i like the di and r ill have a few other dimer/dimr sketchs up later no im dont writer dimr now just doin a few because of a late exchange
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture195.jpg

i really like this theres just something about it i like this style you should work with it :D

[Teez-EmM!!!]

unreal drop the arrows and just do simps
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0563.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0556.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0554.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0555.jpg
for some reason i havent been able to sketcha piece lately

[merm1sf]

STEW- fix the s in that first piece
desipher- loving it, add some colors
hoers- work on the s and thats will be a nice bomb

i was doing some new style but it came out kinda wack
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9031/0408081801sk0.th.jpg (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0408081801sk0.jpg)

[Desipher]

i really like this theres just something about it i like this style you should work with it :D
thanks man ya im doing a couple more sketchs like that just with diff letters n shit tryin out new things its really different from my old style but then again i dont really have a style

[TaskOne]

hey guys, i havent had my book for a while, just got it back so i decided to make up for it.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/005-1.jpg
crits?
merm - not feeling it at all man. get funky
tezm - nice simple! looks nice!
garbage - cool throw, but everyone has that style :(

[NAIK_SHOES]

unreal : keep it more simple you don't need arrow anywhere
keso : its a good begining throw

comments please, NIC, again some quick sketch
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4057/img0033av2.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0033av2.jpg)
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1151/img0034na5.th.jpg (http://img405.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0034na5.jpg)
i really like my second

COMMENTS PLEASE...

no crits....
please

[atlok7]

naik- they look pretty good, just dont shade them in for color, use markers

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5706/caisyellowstripelx2.jpg
just finished this: cais

[Desipher]

nice i like the S the piece reminds me of note not a bite tho just the jagged extensions i think

[TaskOne]

atlok for some reason i always feel like ur style is whack.

[atlok7]

im not gonna take it to personal coming from you

[SAID]

im liking the fill.
your i looks like a t allot thoughh.
i'd try and change your 3d.

[play with matches]

Taskone - I think it'd look better without the arrows or the two thousand eight in the middle, maybe move it to one side it looks like it was forced in there
Naik - i'd say do it in marker to make it stand out a bit better, and sperate the dot from your i from the bar a wee bit
Atlok - all i can think of is maybe moving the bottom right quotation marks closer to the bottom corner, like around the exclamation mark or something

other than the above crits looking good guys, here's a simple sketch i did earlier today

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i201/Joe-_2006/toki2.jpg

[blunttokes]

a lot of shit and a lot of good keep it up guys!

[Casual7ie]

make the bars the same with for everything. and dont go that simple add some flare to it. at least more colour and an outline. no offense. but a 5th grader could do that. make it more original.

[DankNC]

i havent been on here in a minute

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/joymonsta003.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/joymonsta002.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/joymonsta001.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Monkeyking5791/joymonsta.jpg

crits?

[atlok7]

naik- they look pretty good, just dont shade them in for color, use markers

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5706/caisyellowstripelx2.jpg
just finished this: cais

bottom page bumparoo

[silentchaos14]

cais- likin the colour scheme. not feelin the I though, maybe try making the S not so scrunches up either.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneCheech.jpg
nothin really new, just flared it out at the top and bottom (horrible job but its rushed). fuck white paint pens, the shine isnt as bad as it looks.
crits?

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Atlok - I aint feelin it as much as ur old style
Silent - Ur finally progressing and its lookin good
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01058.jpg
started as an e and just kept goin
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00973.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00970.jpg
shoes im doin for a friend. crits?

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/511cca36.jpg

First sketch in oh so very long :/
DankNc-Not really feelin' any of it.
Cais-I like that simpler style you're doing, a lot better than that other one.
Morne-Nice to see you actually do graff ;)
Evasion-Ehh, not a fan.

[ReBuilt]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y169/xyoxvietsterx/kacie.gif

Piece I did for my girl a while ago. I don't like the arrow out the K and the scanner washed out the colors. I don't post my shit up though since I don't have a scanner. D:

Anyways, first piece posted on BS out of the months of lurking! :)

[nemzone]

i like this more than your other stuff b/c of teh actual attention to letter structure . . kinda hard to explain but you got have a real dominant up down flow to your letters, i would suggest finding areas where you can throw in a haorizontal bar in there . .like the top part of the N (which is too long up there imo), you could have a long horizontal bar/extension shot left of it . .

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/11/1303073li1.jpg

^^ like i did in this sketch on the top right bar of my N, if you got alot of vertical/up n down flow/bars, i like to look for areas i can throw in a long haorizontal bar to compliment the flow . .


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2187/img3159aq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6275/img3167te4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2016/img3157oy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fube - you know how it goes, money hoes and clothes all a white boy knows . . . good stuff MAR

edit - the real skimo needs to put some work in on his letters


yup practice makes perfect k jag, stick on here for a year and youll get good . . thats what i did

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9379/img3148fi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

gonna catch a burn from my man kens cigarette . . .


fube, diggin ur flix man
uber, like tht shiz, likin how its not all perfectly colored etc.. it worx
garbage, love that too lol

cant reli crit much cuz they all nice in my eyez


http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4050001.jpg
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk105/nemz55/P4060019.jpg



welll god damn, i searched sky 5 and seen ths big dramatic exit and was quite pissed.. love seein ur shit bro. knew it was urs as soon as i caught a glimpse... how ya keepin m8??

lil morale bump :D

rebuilt = its not the worst piece i seen, but try concentrate on gettin the letter construction all the same width, and the extensions are pretty lame... try simple piece??

ilikepie - i like it man, quite uniqe, nice ot see it painted i ekon..

silentchaos - focus more on letterin than colouring

dank NC - i like ur characters head, would be good in a throw

toki - good that ur doin simple, but look the O is thhe only letter with no sharp edges, try make all the letters look similar then it will start to flow maybe

taskone - i like it overall, but i think maybe the coulours take away from the letter structre a lil??

teez - love nice str8 forward simples done well. any you sir can do em well, paintable

[Mr.Poosk]

Rebuilt- I like the colors, but I'm not a fan of those letters at all man.
Ilikepie- Feelin' that sketch man, looks good so far.
Invation- I think for shoes its better to make the lines nice and crisp and your color's opaque, cuz right now the shoe just looks dirty.
Cais- I like the style in this one, but I prefer your older style.


New Woes from taday, not super happy,
Crits please.

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2858/graff014ph7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sInk.dIs.]

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7389/hpim0057dj6.jpg
lil somethin in a friends book.

[IlikePie]

Settle it down....

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2000/dscn0457tw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2000/dscn0457tw2.676ca96821.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=502&i=dscn0457tw2.jpg)

first thing n awhile, just a simple

[atlok7]

sink dis- illin

[letsgobombin]

the e looked alot better on my pen sketch
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1094.jpg
tare- keep doin simples your getting better, but your e doesnt have 3d
sink- thats so crazy i cant decide whether its good or bad
woes- i love it all you need to do is thicken out the bottom of the o and maybe make the background a light colour
atlok- nice, its not as crazy as your last one and its actually legible

[rsakens]

shin exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/SHIN.jpg?t=1207765980
painted version
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00028-5.jpg?t=1207766003

note exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00029-5.jpg?t=1207766033
painted version
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00030-4.jpg?t=1207766110

abet exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/hausabet.jpg?t=1207766137
think i am gona paint this tonight

[WiseCracker]

a lil' something i was dicking around in class with. i know they aren't the best but crits would help
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3129/2401676316_559cfa3513.jpg

[ESKiMO2]

Rsakens, on the exchange I don't like the top part.

[MarOne...]

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7389/hpim0057dj6.jpg
lil somethin in a friends book.

looks like a grimy rip-off of Kasps style.

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoersss.jpg

because nobody loves me.

[MarOne...]

^^I really like that. You still in KFC, right?

New shit, was going for a more euro-ish style-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke.jpg

[Teez-EmM!!!]

thats reall dope man stick with it

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/511cca36.jpg

First sketch in oh so very long :/
DankNc-Not really feelin' any of it.
Cais-I like that simpler style you're doing, a lot better than that other one.
Morne-Nice to see you actually do graff ;)
Evasion-Ehh, not a fan.

Whoring my first piece in forever :)
I like that a lot Mar, definitely a fan of your fills too.

[WiseCracker]

bumpbumpbump

a lil' something i was dicking around in class with. i know they aren't the best but crits would help
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3129/2401676316_559cfa3513.jpg

I like that eurostyle, a bit different. keep it up.

[hazetheone]

thats way too square
go look at some of siezes stuff to get an dea of a good simple man

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

marone- what does that say roke? I like it for the style
ilikepie- nice n clean

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/3875/dscn0460ib9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[hazetheone]

that t looks like a c and the spine bar on the r is way too fat

[atlok7]

mar- i love euro styles! have you watched the stockholm subway stories on youtube? all dope euro train bombing

[IlikePie]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoersss.jpg


Don't worry, I love you, I like your throws oh so very much ;)

[MarOne...]

mar- i love euro styles! have you watched the stockholm subway stories on youtube? all dope euro train bombing

NOOOOOOOOO! I about to though. :)

and yes, it does say ROKE(!).

Pie, thanks. I really like your style as well. DOOPE. :D

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/4c24509e.jpg

Getting back into a groove. Pen freestyle.
Tare, that T is workable, but I'm not feelin' how the A and R are curving that far over.
Wise, don't worry, we all had that square-with-letter-cut-into-it style, just keep working.
Thanks mar.

[MUSEone]

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2743/0409081339ahq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3902/0409080953ash8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits?

Mar-feelin that shit man keep it up.
Cyto-Change the legs on the A and R
Garbage-sick throw man. always dope.
ILiekPie-Feelin it, just make sure u get a good fill in there and it be dope.

[-Leski]

Playing with a new throw style... Critz are always welcome.
(the line on the bottom of the k that makes it a k isnt bolded... it should be, woops.)
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2157/geski4jh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Muse; really like the S in the second one, its structure doesnt fit in with the other letters though.

Garbage; I like it, maybe take the indent out of the top of the R, keeping the top portion of the R in one peice rather then two.

ILikePie; You might get harped on for the teeth, but its just a little influence.
It looks good all the same.

[sex without condoms]

shitty 10 minute piece for round robin.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/203625.jpg

[MarOne...]

I haven't seen you in a minute! :P

forgot crits, haha

sex, I always like your stuff, wish it wasnt so hurried, but nice nonetheless.

Pie- dope freestyle.

[Bazer]

^^I really like that. You still in KFC, right?

New shit, was going for a more euro-ish style-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke.jpg

holy freshness! this looks dope dude!

[*sgh*]

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff185/kostonskater888/legit002.jpg

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff185/kostonskater888/legit001.jpg

my bad. had to resize these pictures.
but as i said there toy, but i just tried to advance from simples.
so crit me.

[MarOne...]

holy freshness! this looks dope dude!

Cope2... Is saying this... About my work?!?!?!!!! OMGILUVSOMUCHCOPE2!!!























but fo reals, cope2. Thanks. :)

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bigupz.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bus.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/last.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/yo.jpg

Crits?

[hazetheone]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2hoitfd.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/25qg1h0.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/b3nzad.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/1z1w8kj.jpg
mar-love that fill but next time try not filling in the negative space with green just outline the letters
hoers-reaaaaaly dope throw
leski-you shouldn't be painting so dont worry about throws right now
juice-give crits to get them don't just ask

[atlok7]

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/9330/caisonepurplestrypeorantq8.jpg
cais

[hazetheone]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2hoitfd.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/25qg1h0.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/b3nzad.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/1z1w8kj.jpg
mar-love that fill but next time try not filling in the negative space with green just outline the letters
hoers-reaaaaaly dope throw
leski-you shouldn't be painting so dont worry about throws right now
juice-give crits to get them don't just ask

sigh bottom page
atlok-that a is bugging me for some reason but the other letters are just fine
1 and a half thumbs up

[MarOne...]

Atlok, reminds me of note. I really like this style that youre working with, tho. NIIICE.

Hazebabay those are dope! COLOR THEM!

[atlok7]

aww really? i thought the a was hot

[hazetheone]

haha
I CAN"T FIND MY FUCKING FINE TIP SHARPIEEE!!!!!!!!!
i think if you softened up the edges is what it is

[atlok7]

yeah thanks dude. everyone keeps saying i remind them of note, i guess thats a good thing, cause i looked him up n i think its only the sharp angles

[hazetheone]

nnnoooooo i don't like his stuff
he is skilled but deff not my style dude
fuck everyone i liked that stuff you couldn't read too its like a maze

[Bazer]

Cope2... Is saying this... About my work?!?!?!!!! OMGILUVSOMUCHCOPE2!!!























but fo reals, cope2. Thanks. :)

no problem kiddo. just keep up the quality coloring/letter structure.

[Animal]

haze i like your first one thats more rounded.
i really wanna see that first one colored.

[hazetheone]

some one help me make a dope tag so i can go to my school an crush the bathroom

[atlok7]

nnnoooooo i don't like his stuff
he is skilled but deff not my style dude
fuck everyone i liked that stuff you couldn't read too its like a maze

ha your like the only one, yeah i liked that style too but i think im progressing with structure more on this style

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/0c8a1b11.jpg

For a battle elsewhere, ran out of room like usual so yeah :(

Camer, I really wish you had more variation to your letters, they're solid, but I keep on seeing carbon copies :(
SGH, can't really crit throws, but keep working
Sex, <3 your style
Maso, on the second piece, square off the tops of your letters instead of that tip since the S is squared off, so it all flows right.

*Edit*
Aww, I critted the last page :(

[hazetheone]

well take this new found structure and apply it in the other style and create the brown note of graffiti
it will have everyone who sees it shit themselves imideately
hail satan
post 666

[hazetheone]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/0c8a1b11.jpg

For a battle elsewhere, ran out of room like usual so yeah :(

Camer, I really wish you had more variation to your letters, they're solid, but I keep on seeing carbon copies :(
SGH, can't really crit throws, but keep working
Sex, <3 your style
Maso, on the second piece, square off the tops of your letters instead of that tip since the S is squared off, so it all flows right.

i totally agree with you dude
ive been stuck in a rut lately
and i cant get out

[atlok7]

haha yeah itll develop, yo when r we doing that kfc piece?

NOTE: EERRUY BUDY EN KFC pm me a dope piece sketch of your name and ill puzzle together a colab piece

[hazetheone]

anytime man but i have to get to michaels tomorrow and grab a few sharpies
i cant find this shit for my life

[ReBuilt]

looking good haze. I like that second one.

[garbage down tha way]

Don't worry, I love you, I like your throws oh so very much ;)
aw thanks bud =]

[JETPACK!!]

cais, i can honestly say im really glad your working on letter structure than visual appearance. you have a great amount of potential, but everytime i saw one of your illegible pieces, it aggitated me. big ups.

hoers, thats a nice throwie, im not feeling the E or the R as much as the rest of it, but i still like it. keep it up

pieboy, i dont like that K, but im really diggin that A and the S too. keep it up, if your down for an exhchange in the near future that'd be ill. i just wanna see my name in your steeze:)

camer, drink and bunn a lot. if that cant get you outta your rut. then that just fucking sucks haha. your shits good, but like pie was saying, its pretty much carbon copies. i fucking love your throwie though, it just tickles my soft spot.

annnnddddddddddddd im out, one

[Sumoe]

some one help me make a dope tag so i can go to my school an crush the bathroom

Sarcasm?

[atlok7]

dude school graff its stupid but if you are serious i can do a handstyle exchange if u want

[IlikePie]

pieboy, i dont like that K, but im really diggin that A and the S too. keep it up, if your down for an exhchange in the near future that'd be ill. i just wanna see my name in your steeze:)


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/0c8a1b11.jpg

For a battle elsewhere, ran out of room like usual so yeah :(

Camer, I really wish you had more variation to your letters, they're solid, but I keep on seeing carbon copies :(
SGH, can't really crit throws, but keep working
Sex, <3 your style
Maso, on the second piece, square off the tops of your letters instead of that tip since the S is squared off, so it all flows right.

*Edit*
Aww, I critted the last page :(

Bump...

And yeah, I'd be down for an exchange. :( I know my K sucks, it was like a 15 minute effort, and I haven't really done this style before. But whatevuh, no excuses.



And no, he's not serious about the tag thingy....

[Keke]

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/4720/jestazo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3665/jestauneditedos3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/1255/dezjq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I've been working on just making my letters, ive only been sketching (i was focusing mainly on taging before) for like a month

[JETPACK!!]

learn to draw a straight line first. look at where your bringing your pencil, dont look at the tip. i find if i look at the tip of my pencil i cant draw a straight line for shit.

an yeah, pieboy, ill prolly have your's up tomorrow or the day after. whats your word? mines tank2

kay ill just do a RAB one. im fadin fast an im not waitin for a respone. one

[IlikePie]

Haha, yeah, Rab.

[Saeo1]

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/PIC_0025.jpg
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/PIC_0023.jpg
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/PIC_0024.jpg

(Sorry tried resizing but didnt work).

[IlikePie]

Give crits to get 'em.

[Saeo1]

Okay, ur letter sturcture is actually pretty good, just need some more funk to it like a one shot, 3-D , shadow. anything.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/100_0434.jpg
- Was on a computer desk( so kinda sketchy + marker was dieing), nothing but the peice was my doin- was just at a party n other stupid people wanted to join in on the fun.

[Keke]

^^ you talking about me?
anyway i like your letters , i dont know why they just stand out , the way you used the markers to shade is cool but i think the shadows are ugly for some reason, they are kinda killin it rest is good though

[MarOne...]

saeo- New to graffiti thread.

NNNEWEWEWEWW, I'm off to bed after this. Tireddd.

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/rokem2.jpg

[Saeo1]

Noo lol im taking about Pie's SKA te one. yours just need to much work. i dont wanna be like everyone who says go to simples. but learn to make a straight line with proper 3-D or shadow. I mean i hate when people tell me to switch my style but with u theres not a style there. so yah. Just try straight letters with a even 3-D or shadow.

and new to graffiti lol? I think not. You shud talk for yourself. Not only does ur M need so much work but hate to include your E's and K.

[ReBuilt]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y169/xyoxvietsterx/kacie.gif

Piece I did for my girl a while ago. I don't like the arrow out the K and the scanner washed out the colors. I don't post my shit up though since I don't have a scanner. D:

Anyways, first piece posted on BS out of the months of lurking! :)

bump.

[Saeo1]

Its alright. the only thing is ide loose the top park of the E and K and C that fold over and pop out. I like the I. and if the second letters a A, id say make it more obvious that thats what it is.

[IlikePie]

Not only does ur M need so much work but hate to include your E's and K.


Hush, Mar's ish is much better than yours. And my piece reads skate, just ran out of room.

[sketch3]

yo mar the orange/red sketch is fire,
but this new one is hyper generic

[Snew]

Esic... sick style and your 3-d is right on.
Rebuilt... your peice is awesome but that arrow does def. stand out.. all the other extensions look great tho.
MarOne... your peice makes a great composition. i dig all the e's in a row.. ha steezy
portus... you def have drawing skills just work on them letters.. good work..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo21.jpg

Ehh.. i dont know how i feel about this.. i dig the colors.. but let me know how the style is... im trying to get a nice simple down so any crits would rock...

[IlikePie]

Don't let your letters overlap themselves for now

[Snew]

you mean overlap each other or like individual letters.. like the n and the s?

[rsakens]

shin exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/SHIN.jpg?t=1207765980
painted version
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00028-5.jpg?t=1207766003

note exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00029-5.jpg?t=1207766033
painted version
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00030-4.jpg?t=1207766110

abet exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/hausabet.jpg?t=1207766137
think i am gona paint this tonight

bumb any more crits ?


Rsakens, on the exchange I don't like the top part.
witch one do you mean there are all exchanges

[rsakens]

^^I really like that. You still in KFC, right?

New shit, was going for a more euro-ish style-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke.jpg

bump
that shit is fresh man

[rsakens]

here you go dont think posted this one bevore
reks bugs exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00003-6.jpg?t=1202930196

[rave316]

Did this while i was bored at work a couple days ago


http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3313/hpim0310is8.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hpim0310is8.jpg)

[sKeeLo]

welll god damn, i searched sky 5 and seen ths big dramatic exit and was quite pissed.. love seein ur shit bro. knew it was urs as soon as i caught a glimpse... how ya keepin m8??



ayo lifes been good big nemz, got a new pup, place right in the heart of baltimore but still cant drag my ass into work everyday. u probaly noticed all the people in our lil group of posters like niccsacc, inkbits, sumoe, tricks, shamee, alive n them other bastards dont post too much anymore :(:(:( after you left i tried to organize a NEMZ battle but i flaked and only big el did something which was real nice, dont know where u would find it thoo on here but its posted somewhere . . .

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/1108/1313107bd7or1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

exchnage with mr kens, thanks fro that BUGS exchangaroo man

[opte one]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4345/8040pr3.th.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=8040pr3.jpg)
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/538/8031cp0.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=8031cp0.jpg)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/361/01042008007km5.th.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=01042008007km5.jpg)
hope there the right size... Crits and comments welcome

[opte one]

sorry for teh double post but how do you get them too teh correct size ?

[rsakens]

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/1108/1313107bd7or1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

exchnage with mr kens, thanks fro that BUGS exchangaroo man

a 2nd one :) thankx man i like that a lot
i am gonna work on a new one for you

[WiseCracker]

rsakens - great work, i always like your stuff keep it up
opte one- i like your style, i'd like to see some painted stuff.

My shit is beat. I'm soooo lost. please help! also if there are any 716 writers that wanna help a toy plz give me a pm
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2240/2402884439_d55b199398_o.jpg

[Reason To-Shine]

...I just cannot drop the name...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/004-1.jpg
I like this one... but I hate how you still see the background...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/005-1.jpg
O's messed up...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/006-1.jpg
Screwd the 3D
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/007-1.jpg
this was for the Percs battle way back when... I never posted it though...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/008-1.jpg


crits?
...by the way... I like blue... ...heh...

[WiseCracker]

sos - i like the last one, too bad it's not your throwie. keep going!

yo am i even going in the right direction?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3221/2403784804_66df4bcaf6.jpg

[...AMOK...]

wise- i'm probably not the best person to tell you this but try to make your bars composed enough to create flow and not just shit... i mean keep the bars the same size and try to create some sort of flow with the letters... i'm trying my hardest not to be mean about it so just roll with me... check out ways other people so W's I's S's and E's and then make a style of your own idk what else to tell you but that post right there... dude nvmnd i wont go there

some quick ish i did for my friend when we were blazin

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/DJTHRILL.jpg

[WiseCracker]

amok - it's straight dude, that's exactly what i was looking for. i'm trying bombin, i'm mostly a street artist but this bombin stuff is real tough.

[Snew]

Esic... sick style and your 3-d is right on.
Rebuilt... your peice is awesome but that arrow does def. stand out.. all the other extensions look great tho.
MarOne... your peice makes a great composition. i dig all the e's in a row.. ha steezy
portus... you def have drawing skills just work on them letters.. good work..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo21.jpg

Ehh.. i dont know how i feel about this.. i dig the colors.. but let me know how the style is... im trying to get a nice simple down so any crits would rock...

bump new page

[rsakens]

still have to sort out the fill on this one

people
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00040-3.jpg?t=1207851819

[JETPACK!!]

skeelo, thats fucking hot, but the N seems king of small compared to the other letters, especially the K and your E kind of looks like an S, but im really diggin the 3D.

an exchange for mr rab. but i fucked it up and it sucks:( i like the R, but i hate the rest. i may do another later on rab

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/165/rabdm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-ShAmEE-]

ayo lifes been good big nemz, got a new pup, place right in the heart of baltimore but still cant drag my ass into work everyday. u probaly noticed all the people in our lil group of posters like niccsacc, inkbits, sumoe, tricks, shamee, alive n them other bastards dont post too much anymore :(:(:( after you left i tried to organize a NEMZ battle but i flaked and only big el did something which was real nice, dont know where u would find it thoo on here but its posted somewhere . . .

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/1108/1313107bd7or1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

exchnage with mr kens, thanks fro that BUGS exchangaroo man


still rocking ur amazing style. yeah, i aint on here, telling to sort out my life like u...hahaaa. old times nemz, army any good?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/14.jpg
one for you guys! old times!

[Mr.Poosk]

Shame, that sketch is fire man, nice work.

Jet Pack, Yeah I like that R But that B needs to have the midle part that makes the B not a point unless you put points in the rest of the piece it just looks out of place.

Rsakens, loving that sketch man, hot shit. The only thing I dont like is the first e it is lying too far forward and the extention off it just doesnt flow.


New ish from taday, Crits would be appriciated.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/282/graff015vc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[*cept*]

bumb any more crits ?


witch one do you mean there are all exchanges
all of your shit is BOMB, i even made a folder on my comp just for your stuff. keep it up man

[-ShAmEE-]

umm. some of the lets are really workin. i would go and look at artists an find out why there letters work then apply it to your style and then they will be very much improved!

[RFI. SPit]

still rocking ur amazing style. yeah, i aint on here, telling to sort out my life like u...hahaaa. old times nemz, army any good?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/14.jpg
one for you guys! old times!

holy shit dude, this kills. go back to this style!

[-ShAmEE-]

slowly making it better. not really liking it at the moment.

[RFI. SPit]

trying out something new

http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/5599/photo364va1.jpg

[IlikePie]

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/165/rabdm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks man
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/acfb7e23.jpg

Not too happy with it, and N's aren't my strongpoint :(

Everyone on this page is beautiful, and I'm just here to ugly it up :)




*edit*
Zof, your O is covering the F so much :(

[Mass Appeal]

i like that ^...really like that

[opte one]

shame,rsakens and pank...all nice sketches...an thanks for the comment wiser:)

[kroc_oner]

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB040222.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB040223.jpg
crits and comments please
and
ilikepie its pretty cool ill like your letters there nice and clean
zof thts pretty sick i like your style alot alot of addons though but still looks good
shameee thts fucking dope as hell

[IlikePie]

Aww, it's a T :( And thanks, what is it now? Amkah? Your sig says Apfer, damnit man, I don't ever know what to call you :(

[Mr.Poosk]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/282/graff015vc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bump for some crits.

Ilikepie, Im feelin that sketch, the only thing is that n, or what i think might be an N?

Kroc, I like your stuff, but that extention off the k is kinda funky, and its the only one with an extention just throws off the flow imo.

Spit, Like your styles man but the f, o, and N are too scrunched in there.

[kroc_oner]

thnks woes thts pretty dope i like how your letters seem like there going to the left

[Blitz411]

Here's some shit with my new name, seize. Crits?
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l230/bamfan2/SEIZEtag.jpg
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l230/bamfan2/SEIZEthrow.jpg
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l230/bamfan2/NSWthrow.jpg

[kroc_oner]

seize give crits to get them and the handstyles pretty good and so is se the other thing is umm weird

[SCIEnce802]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/14.jpg
Ill ill.

no need for crits.. just a quick sketch of my old word...
http://i32.tinypic.com/2knexf.jpg

[kroc_oner]

ctso those are ok the simples are good and the rem one is ok with the 2 a;s and b i like the middle a and the b
science u dont really need crits your shit is blazin hot its sick man keep tht up

[Stim]

Hey, cool stuff on this page.

Piece I did:
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6057/pic1250fj6.jpg
Crits please

[Raccoon]

Kroc, I'd say try some bolder lines next time, thicken up that black outlining, see how that works, because the big letters, thin outline doesn't make it stand out that well, y'know? That's what I would do differently.

[Mass Appeal]

iv been wirintg AMK for 1 year and 2 months now ahah.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rggrrgrgr.jpg

Apfer.
doing the new school look now...bored of that generic LA style shit now...starting something a lil different and more Enlglishy
the E is in need of a lil tweekin

[Blitz411]

Nice shit there bro. Although, I'm not diggin your e, but whatever.

Crits on mine please? Someone?

[Mass Appeal]

blitz...try toy tags mate !

Stim baby...nice simple and scrathcy fill...but the Rkicker is kinda to fat...its the hardest part of the letter thta kicker on the R :@

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rfr.jpg

[HëRbN]

Blitz the handstyle is decent keep it up and just try out a few different flare styles, the SE is ok but kinda plain, Maybe try out some different "e"s theres so much you can do with that letter. and that last thing is oooooogly in my opinion :(

Heres a few different styles ive been workin with lemme know what you guys think. Crit em up:

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3181/herbndm2.jpg

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3525/herbn2og6.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

Thanks man
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/acfb7e23.jpg

Not too happy with it, and N's aren't my strongpoint :(

Everyone on this page is beautiful, and I'm just here to ugly it up :)




*edit*
Zof, your O is covering the F so much :(

hahahah i <3 you. worst exchange on both parts. haha. im diggin the K a lot though. its shmexy

P.S. your N looks like an an 8ball blade

[IlikePie]

That's why I really never do exchanges :( I suck at other people's letters >_<

[Reason To-Shine]

...I just cannot drop the name...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/004-1.jpg
I like this one... but I hate how you still see the background...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/005-1.jpg
O's messed up...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/006-1.jpg
Screwd the 3D
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/007-1.jpg
this was for the Percs battle way back when... I never posted it though...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/008-1.jpg


crits?
...by the way... I like blue... ...heh...

bump... crits?

[smooth_nuts]

blitz...try toy tags mate !

Stim baby...nice simple and scrathcy fill...but the Rkicker is kinda to fat...its the hardest part of the letter thta kicker on the R :@

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rfr.jpg
bumpers
i love it amk haha :)

[JETPACK!!]

im gonna do another one for you, cuz i like the letters. ill prolly have it up later tonight. but dont get excited.. im really lazy

[atlok7]

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2816/caisyellowblueorangescaad8.jpg
caisone

[Blitz411]

Ha ha, thanks Herben. I'm really felling that second one, shit's hot.

[kroc_oner]

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB040222.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB040223.jpg
crits and comments please
and
ilikepie its pretty cool ill like your letters there nice and clean
zof thts pretty sick i like your style alot alot of addons though but still looks good
shameee thts fucking dope as hell

bump
cais pretty dope
amk dope and clean shit as usual
reason stay simple
and herben idk wht to say lol

[Blitz411]

Damn kroc, that shit's dope!

[hazetheone]

WOW!!! cais dope
but im really surprised noone noticd the graffiti generator bite on herbn
and that no one has bitched at blitz for writing sieze now

[b SQUARED 08]

Herb: I'm not feelin' the first one at all. You may be onto something with that style, but it doesn't seem like it can be pulled off quite yet. I like the second one much more- it seems a lot more "polished" if you will...

atlok: I like this one a lot except for a couple things: its a little left-heavy with the arrow and other extensions on that side and not on the right side. I like the variation of color in the extensions a lot, but it seems like these could be placed a bit better, but you're onto something with that idea for sure. I'd roll with that idea if I were you.

kroc: I like the lettering on both of these, however the fill on the first one really takes away from it. In my opinion its a bit too dark for the thin lines that make up the letters. I like the second one better for the simple fact that I can pick out the structure very easily, but I'm not really feelin' the "cracks" on the outside of the letters although I don't think you were aiming for a whole lot with that idea from the looks of it.

Here's a sketch I did today during school... bored lol. It's unfinished, but I was just looking for some crits on what I've got so far. Thanks in advance.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_4658.jpg

[mosezone]

sos-reminds me of shit i did when i first started. try to get some simple bar letters down.
amk-not really feeling the Z, but it's got a hella funky feel to it, i dig it.
atlok-left arrow is kind of fucked, but i'm feeling the overall style a lot.
kroc-2nd one is alright, but try to get better structure in your letters (..bars, possibly?)
bsquared-loooose the arrows, and try to make the letters all one size

haven't been sketching much lately, but here's some random scraps from school. the O on the 2nd is wackkk.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo002-2.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo001-2.jpg

[7thIncision]

Hazetheone - Man.. people havent noticed that cause not everyone is on B.S. just to bitch at other people...
If he is ignorant enought o write Seize, let him.
and if Herbn looks to a graffitigen for an idea... who the fuck cares?
Dont spend all your time ripping people down.

[kroc_oner]

lol i tryed bars im not good with them i might try again but i suck at fill and im working still on the structure moes thts pretty dope
scuared i like the fill but simpler

[hazetheone]

Hazetheone - Man.. people havent noticed that cause not everyone is on B.S. just to bitch at other people...
If he is ignorant enought o write Seize, let him.
and if Herbn looks to a graffitigen for an idea... who the fuck cares?
Dont spend all your time ripping people down.

i wasn't ripping anyone down idiot i fucking said i was surprised noone(aka people who are friends with sieze) hasn't said anything to him
not that he shouldn't wright it
i also pointed out that no one called him on his bite because he needs to stop becauseif he wants to progress he never will stealing someone elses work
dont try and sound mature and all idiot
fucking check yourself and examine what i said before you come at me

[JETPACK!!]

WOW!!! cais dope
but im really surprised noone noticd the graffiti generator bite on herbn
and that no one has bitched at blitz for writing sieze now

its hard to notice a graff generator bite when he cant even draw a straight line. thats what i was gonna crit him for. oh well, get a straight line going bro. if you cant do that then you shouldnt be writing.

and blitz thought krocs work was dope. nuff said

mose, make the E capital, i find it killing the overall appearance and flow of it. your M is hella fresh. i like your O as well. but S could use a bit of work. but its mainly your E (first sketch)

b squared, simples man, thats hard to read. do block letters for now and slowly add style to your letters from there.

HAZE, KEEP RIPPIN EM. you gotta weed out the weak, spoon feeding dosent make anyone better. tearing peoples shit up is what makes them better. if he takes offense to it, he shouldnt be writing. graff is a world with no love. and he's not gonna get love from many people

iunno about this one, i think its wack. i havent been feelin it tonight. need to bunn a head. its been too long.

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8120/tank4tj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)