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Techkanuck
04-13-2008, 11:26 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture254.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture255.jpg

FRN- definitely watch some video's, INFAMY is pretty good, I like the simp too, maybe a little shorter and fatter would be nice

Mass- NICE, feelin the lightbulb, SHIT

atlok7
04-13-2008, 11:30 AM
mass- i dont like you. and im not going to pretend that i do and try to make friends. but i understand what you are saying and i drew up a simple.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9451/simplecaisia7.jpg

Teez-EmM!!!
04-13-2008, 11:42 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0004-4.jpg idk

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0003-4.jpg isdk
these r rellly dope

mosezone
04-13-2008, 12:07 PM
cais-no crits, i dig it.
soboe-not feeling the K or E, but i'm definately feeling the S and N
tride-dope simples, and the throw looks like it has some potential, just keep practicing it

an exchange. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo-5.jpg

bizump

LittleWeapon
04-13-2008, 12:15 PM
anyone on an intermediate level wanna exchange with me im havin alittl ebitof trouble with my T

Mass Appeal
04-13-2008, 01:04 PM
little weapon...thats such a dope song...isit after Lupe Fiasco's song ?..right ?
if you askin for an exchange cos of your T..then dont...cos i garuntee youll take the T the guy did for you...find you own way man..its the best thing i ever did haha..when i couldnt do letters i used to replace em for characters..but that was baaadd..

and Casir whatever....i dont give a damn if you like me or not...and thats simple you drew up is a prime example of why i think your shit...look at it...its all wonky..uneven...all the bar lenghts are uneven to fuck..and its sloppy as hell...dude...do what the fuck you want i dont care....but at the end of the day..you keep busting these semi wildstyle things whilst people below you think its dope cos they see arrows and crazy extensions...mind you...you did actually doo something i did like awhile back..it was filled ALL red....repost if you think you know what im talking about.

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 01:27 PM
word mass, atlok that is pretty sloppy

AZTEKA
04-13-2008, 01:51 PM
Props to the flix above, some of them are fuckin dope. I ain't posted on here in a minute so here's some recent sktches.
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/7818/03251kz9.jpg
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/9960/04131nu2.jpg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-13-2008, 01:57 PM
Atlok is one of the best writers on bombingscience, if I remember correctly

Capo Izi
04-13-2008, 02:05 PM
Atlok-its an ok simple, and really I suck so my opinion doesn't count much, but the 3D...idk, it seems really weird and off, and the I and A are wobbly like...

Mass-Nice stuff, I don't really understand Euro letters, but your stuff is REALLY nice and just solid structures..

Azteka-...my god man those are insanely nice...you from Cali or LA area?...because your stuff looks like that, kind of Biker-gangish-tribal shit...Love it dude...

Vois-the simples are coming along nice dude...

FRN-It's ok dude, you're just stuck look on google for writers and just look at the styles, don't bite, but just look at how stuff flows and whatnot, and try to incorporate it. Maybe some extensions would help...who knows, it's still pretty good though...just maybe more solid coloring.



New stuff...

http://a985.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/5/l_0343e0b6d651570619f5f70724cb43a0.jpg

http://a696.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/107/l_e69be976608c4cb4823ba5af40b81f87.jpg

Techkanuck
04-13-2008, 02:09 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook018.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture255.jpg

FRN- definitely watch some video's, INFAMY is pretty good, I like the simp too, maybe a little shorter and fatter would be nice

Mass- NICE, feelin the lightbulb, SHIT

bump for better pic, one first one

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-13-2008, 02:13 PM
Capo. it looks like you're trying to use belio's style, or at least his O on the last one. But, for the first one, don't lap your letters so much (P over the O) If a letter laps an entire bar on a letter, it's too much. The top bar of your C is also unneeded, as well as the top bar of the A. Those random extensions. It would look better without them. The downjet on the bottom of the top bar on your Z would look better gone, too. Just make that extension straight. Annnd remove the extension on the bottom of the Z that's npt connected to it. The E's fine, jutst move the bottom a lil closer to the Z

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 02:28 PM
rots that Gutr/Guts shit is so hot man, keep those sketches flowin through-out bs please

Capo Izi
04-13-2008, 02:33 PM
^Thanks majorly dude, and about the O on the last one, It was just something I thought of, I don't even know who Belio is(sorry I'm not on here THAT much), but if I'm biting it's completely coincidental.

But yeah I'll work on NOT adding so many extentions, I was just fooling around a lot....but the "extension that is not connected to the Z"...are you referring to the I? Cause its CAPOZIE, (pronounced Cap-O-Zee)...so yeah.


Atlok-its an ok simple, and really I suck so my opinion doesn't count much, but the 3D...idk, it seems really weird and off, and the I and A are wobbly like...

Mass-Nice stuff, I don't really understand Euro letters, but your stuff is REALLY nice and just solid structures..

Azteka-...my god man those are insanely nice...you from Cali or LA area?...because your stuff looks like that, kind of Biker-gangish-tribal shit...Love it dude...

Vois-the simples are coming along nice dude...

FRN-It's ok dude, you're just stuck look on google for writers and just look at the styles, don't bite, but just look at how stuff flows and whatnot, and try to incorporate it. Maybe some extensions would help...who knows, it's still pretty good though...just maybe more solid coloring.



New stuff...

http://a985.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/5/l_0343e0b6d651570619f5f70724cb43a0.jpg

http://a696.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/107/l_e69be976608c4cb4823ba5af40b81f87.jpg


Bumpage

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 02:35 PM
terrible letter structure, hit the new to graff thread

drunkenshits_one
04-13-2008, 02:41 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0004-4.jpg idk

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0003-4.jpg isdk
those are ill

we have a gutr here in reno so these really popped out for me

shit's fresh, rots.

atlok7
04-13-2008, 02:48 PM
mass- you are such a faggot, first you call me ignorant cause i dont draw simples. second, after i draw a simple you say its shit. and third, you dont tell me how to progress, you just tell me how much you think i suck.
its either one of these two that your talking about.
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/3678/caisredyellowlp2.jpg
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/4619/caisonepinkygt2.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-13-2008, 02:54 PM
kk u calm down alittle bit on the bars, yeah! i think ur top one is better on letter structure and i think that if u mesh all the bar together u will have some sexy letters. do that mesh them together. dont ink just do it in pencil, no need to waste ur ink yet. so go, get on with that sketch,

RAS!! dont even reply to he comment, mods say ur the beef eater, so dont fight back, just forget about it, just sketch, and post. no need to this trouble

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 02:58 PM
atloks new shit is sicker then all the shit in here and i seriously think he should get outta the toy thread, he progressed really fast so stop beefin with him

the end
04-13-2008, 03:05 PM
Some shit from yesterday
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/9655/412testens2.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3900/412teste2nx3.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7752/412testergg3.jpg
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8665/413testerar0.jpg

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 03:07 PM
tester, shits dope but im not feelin the last one at all

the end
04-13-2008, 03:08 PM
lol thats my favorite one

Bah Humbug
04-13-2008, 03:10 PM
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj113/Bahirone/DCP02028.jpg
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj113/Bahirone/DCP02031.jpg
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj113/Bahirone/DCP02030.jpg
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj113/Bahirone/DCP02025.jpg

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 03:16 PM
color that second one

seywhat
04-13-2008, 03:22 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/calorzexchange.jpg
calorz exchange
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/esolee.jpg
new style, gonna fix the second e before i ink it

bah humbug- lose the extensions
tester - feelin all those. exchange?
atlok- i dig ur styles, do what shame said and just keep sketchin
rots- shits fresh as fuck
cais- listen to rots and just sketch in pencil, dont worry about colors
vois- maybe try using straighter bars and try to get shit crisp
kspr- nice style, really feelin the handies also
moes- you've progressed alot, really feelin that asen. wanna exchange?
mass- i like your shit because its original, but i really like some of your older styles better

Animal
04-13-2008, 03:22 PM
sick shit atlok.
Tester- Im with soboe, that last one gave me a softy.
bah humbug- im not feelin' any of them except for the second one. work with that one.

Bah Humbug
04-13-2008, 03:31 PM
thanks for the feedback, the second one is my fave too
i went overboard with the squiggly swirly things as you can see

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 03:41 PM
yea its a dope steez, hard to see though

Bah Humbug
04-13-2008, 03:49 PM
yeah, hard to see because my wack camera has an uncontrollable flash

the end
04-13-2008, 03:57 PM
exchange with Esole
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/1939/413esolexi4.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 04:31 PM
the end, i like that esole piece, but maybe you should have connected the bar on the E or made it capital.

esole. i dont like the L on your piecem it looks kinna like a lowercase E without the back bar connected

something i did earlier, i dont like it, i fucked it up with the shadow. but ill post it anyways
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/847/tank7pc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thrice
04-13-2008, 04:36 PM
getting real good jetpack, i gotta step it up a bit, haven't had much of a chance to practice much. I see you are bending all your verticals, you missed the 2nd stroke on the N. I'd bend that one more.

emel
04-13-2008, 05:20 PM
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/7735/tsfdsjb5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

piece i did last week

dont do much coloring so this is as well as i could do as far as cracks and coloring goes...but im satisfied at the moment :)


cais throw away your colors and just sketch with pencil or pen for a while, you spend too much time coloring and less time sketching right now...

ghost city
04-13-2008, 05:22 PM
poop. poop. poop. POOP

drunkenshits_one
04-13-2008, 05:40 PM
mass- you are such a faggot, first you call me ignorant cause i dont draw simples. second, after i draw a simple you say its shit. and third, you dont tell me how to progress, you just tell me how much you think i suck.
its either one of these two that your talking about.
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/3678/caisredyellowlp2.jpg
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/4619/caisonepinkygt2.jpg

i don't care what anybody else says, these are fresh. don't need anything changed, they look ill nonetheless. although, the only thing i see needing change in the second one is just change that little "e" into a letter with the rest. cais's shit is dope.

sKeeLo
04-13-2008, 05:50 PM
atlok - i think what ras is sayin is that if u cant draw a kinda stylish simple then you cant paint a solid simple so therefore doing wildstyles in a bbook will never actually help you when you go out n paint because u gotta start paintin throws and simples before you can paint a wild style joint . . how can you paint a solid simple if you cant draw one?. . . unless you wanna just be a bbook person

nice stuff rots

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/63/img3205po2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

example of stylish simples

HRbN
04-13-2008, 06:01 PM
skeelo i dunno if ide call that a simple....
Atlok your shits fresh as hell keep up the good work. and he was right that little e on the end of the second one is silly but i assume you ran outta room.

Anyway heres a silly one guys haha its blurry as hell but it was a quick doodle anyway
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/792/pacmangn1.jpg

drunkenshits_one
04-13-2008, 06:13 PM
or get even simpler;

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m150/ketel2/850A0054-1.jpg
this is for those who like to bang dey domes against the concrete

atlok7
04-13-2008, 07:14 PM
skeelo- i can paint most of my sketches. why do u assume i dont paint? but i get what your saying and i am going to go simpler for now on. it just started to get above freezing here and i havnt gotten a chance to go out latley. but ill have some pictures up within the next couple weeks to show you where im at.

fr3gna
04-13-2008, 07:28 PM
drunkenshits- i likes

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/fregnanewstyle.jpg

so this morning i was in a depression of graffiti, but i gave it a little thought
look at some sketches, and built a little of my own style
btw, the Irk and the shadow is kinda sketch just because i hurt my arm biking and its shakin life a mofo

HRbN
04-13-2008, 07:50 PM
any potential? even alittle maybe? haha
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2082/sketch2er2.jpg

Originally the H was lower case but i thought it mite look better upper case you can see the line in the curve that differentiates the two.... thats why thats there

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 07:54 PM
i think its got potential dont know how to improve it tho somethin just dont look right

HRbN
04-13-2008, 07:55 PM
that must mean something coming from the guy that wants to slap me haha. I dont like the H i think thats the problem.... any ideas on improving it? And maybe if the R and the B were alittle tighter together

ghost city
04-13-2008, 08:00 PM
hmm, maybe try making it a bit more symetrical with a bit more form?

HRbN
04-13-2008, 08:02 PM
ahhh.... ohhh k as in the whole thing or what do you mean ghost?

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:05 PM
Herbn reason i want to slap u is u remind me of me (artistically speaking) wont lie i started by bitin wiggles shit but thats wut some of my graff used to look like (ur last post) ill try to find some examples P.S make the H lower case again dont flow right as a capital

HRbN
04-13-2008, 08:13 PM
oh well that makes sense, i gotcha i bit wigglez' stuff cause i wanted a base to experiment throwin some of my own add ins in. but it didnt work, i can actually draw on my own beleive it or not. Anywho i made it upper before i read that last post. I just think theres something missin when its lower lemme know what you think of this one. i think it looks more balanced... The curve in the middle would have to be tamed down tho if i went upper case
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/1299/sketch3xn4.jpg

And any of you other cats wanna crit it. go for it dont be shy haha

drunkenshits_one
04-13-2008, 08:14 PM
fr3gna - thanks, you're is fresh too, i like the blockiness yet still round feel of it... keep chippin' at it.

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:22 PM
the end, i like that esole piece, but maybe you should have connected the bar on the E or made it capital.

esole. i dont like the L on your piecem it looks kinna like a lowercase E without the back bar connected

something i did earlier, i dont like it, i fucked it up with the shadow. but ill post it anyways
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/847/tank7pc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mad dope!!!

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:23 PM
name change!!!

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:25 PM
yeah dont write wasted or anything remotly close to the word waste

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:26 PM
i was afraid of this day! seriously dont write WASTED your gunna get mad beef
there was once the loved and dopest WASTER

RIP Waster12 we miss you so much your name will never die

ghost city
04-13-2008, 08:28 PM
herbn, i mean like instead of having the lines be all wiggly and going everywhere make them a bit more uniform with the other side or the ones before them and stuff. if that makes sense

SWIV3Lone
04-13-2008, 08:30 PM
wasted u have the shakiest hands this world has ever seen

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:30 PM
what?ive been writin wasted for quite a bit now.maybe a year and a half.i know its close to waster 12 but come on.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:31 PM
man seriously we aint fuckin around just dont

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:31 PM
no seriously change is, all the mods where the dearest friends to them and will ban you if you refuse to change it
some dude cracked a joke about waster and got baned in 2 secs flat

atlok7
04-13-2008, 08:32 PM
yeah too close to waster.

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:32 PM
wasted u have the shakiest hands this world has ever seen

haha look who it is!!justin werssdx.man i screwed the pixels resizing it or somethin like that.

Noddles912300
04-13-2008, 08:34 PM
Oh god.. here comes the hurt
Don't write wasted, especially when you write like that.

Herbn- havent really seen a style like that but i would make the bars thicker.

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:35 PM
whoa i dont want any trouble or anything like that.ill change it.u got any old tag names or anything like that i can hav?

kore
04-13-2008, 08:36 PM
just rearrange the letter or some shit, just don't write WASTED.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 08:36 PM
think of one yourself

Noddles912300
04-13-2008, 08:37 PM
Yea i wouldn't just rearrange the letters, id come up with a brand new word.
Oh and if you want to know if a word is already in use, google it. But pretty much every word has been taken.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:38 PM
MY FIRST EVER ATTEMPT AT GRAFF WONT LIE!!!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01099.jpg
Latest Graff Sketch
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01061.jpg

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:39 PM
i noted Gesus on this wasted guy and i hope he'll talk to him about it

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:40 PM
damn. i really didnt know waster 12 when i started graff..sorry if i offened any of the mods or anybody.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 08:41 PM
he already said he'd change it, no use pushing the point further

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:42 PM
wasted dont worry he wont ban you or anything he'll just tell you about waster. its alright you didnt know who he was but we all miss him so much

ill die before wasters name does

atlok7
04-13-2008, 08:45 PM
wasted- just some names that ive never heard of that you could use...elaps, kemo, cets, yet, yeti, brok, brane

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:45 PM
other then the fact uve nearly shit ur pants id like to welcome you to BS:P btw to avoid further problems might wanna get a dif username and start fresh

wasted
04-13-2008, 08:48 PM
^^hahahaha thanks man.

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:51 PM
Cais(atlok)
got any newer pieces?

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:52 PM
so now that that ordeal is over lets all concentrate on what we all love most... ME!!!!

MY FIRST EVER ATTEMPT AT GRAFF WONT LIE!!!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01099.jpg
Latest Graff Sketch
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01061.jpg

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:54 PM
evade, i love you!

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:55 PM
I love me to! If I didnt doubt id touch myself as much as i do

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 08:57 PM
like my sig?

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 08:59 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Kool-AidMan.jpg

wasted
04-13-2008, 09:00 PM
Cais(atlok)
got any newer pieces?

yeh i do but theyre all in wasted and there is no way im posting them.lol

SWIV3Lone
04-13-2008, 09:01 PM
i think he was asking atlok

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:01 PM
i think i was too haha

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:02 PM
funny shit. Anywho, I was hoping for some crits, tell me what you think.
by the way, they say avone

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0003.jpg

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002.jpg
I fucked up the drop shadow on the E, don't do drugs.

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 09:03 PM
Soboe! could we spam this thread any worse? I feel like when ppl leave shit on their plates put it in the sink then when u pill the plug after ur done the dishes it cloggs the sink and makes it drain UBER slow
Ghost city - Ur Pics didnt work

Animal
04-13-2008, 09:04 PM
Don't have too much fun with that. ^^
he's new.

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:04 PM
Soboe! could we spam this thread any worse? I feel like when ppl leave shit on their plates put it in the sink then when u pill the plug after ur done the dishes it cloggs the sink and makes it drain UBER slow
Ghost city - Ur Pics didnt work

well, it guess its cause we both live in the same fucked up city, what do you think?

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 09:05 PM
herbn, try it without those silly connections at each point in your bar

fregna, i dont know what it is, but i like it. watch the shadow though, it kinna widens randomly.

soboe, to be honest bro, i hate that piece you bumped. i dont know what it is, it looked a lot better without the shadow.

something else i sketched up. ive been in a name rut, cant really find something i like. i like this sketch, the R and E especially. i fucked up the G, i may redo the whole sketch to make it better.
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9017/reignzf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 09:06 PM
I just noticed i havent showered in 3 days...

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:07 PM
herbn, try it without those silly connections at each point in your bar

fregna, i dont know what it is, but i like it. watch the shadow though, it kinna widens randomly.

soboe, to be honest bro, i hate that piece you bumped. i dont know what it is, it looked a lot better without the shadow.

something else i sketched up. ive been in a name rut, cant really find something i like. i like this sketch, the R and E especially. i fucked up the G, i may redo the whole sketch to make it better.
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9017/reignzf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i bumped it cause one of the most up writer in my town writes tank, Evade knows who im talkin about!

Animal
04-13-2008, 09:07 PM
well get on it invasion. you can take a break from BS. but now that I think about it, 4 days wouldn't hurt.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:08 PM
damn. fuck this confusing ass image posting. im awesome. take my word for it. alright

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:09 PM
lmfao i love you ghost city

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 09:09 PM
yeah, theres a bunch of cats that write tank. its hard to get a name thats ill to write and not used... actually its near impossible.:(

yo not to be a herb, but shut up and take it to good afternoon. you guys dropped like 15 comments while i critted and posted my pic

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:10 PM
good, cause you know, everyone loves people who kick ass at everything like i do

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 09:11 PM
herbn, try it without those silly connections at each point in your bar

fregna, i dont know what it is, but i like it. watch the shadow though, it kinna widens randomly.

soboe, to be honest bro, i hate that piece you bumped. i dont know what it is, it looked a lot better without the shadow.

something else i sketched up. ive been in a name rut, cant really find something i like. i like this sketch, the R and E especially. i fucked up the G, i may redo the whole sketch to make it better.
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9017/reignzf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump over the bullshit.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-13-2008, 09:15 PM
FUCK YOU MY COMMENTS ARE GOLD!!! the R E & N are ok scrap the rest

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:16 PM
what bullshit? im more important then you wish you were

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:19 PM
ghost your all talk, teach your fume infested brain how to post flicks

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 09:20 PM
he cant have a fume infested brain if he dosen't paint...

unless your talking about glue fumes

hahahha yeah ctso, i intentionally put my letters in a bubble bath... thanks for pointing that out

drunkenshits_one
04-13-2008, 09:23 PM
wasted- just some names that ive never heard of that you could use...elaps, kemo, cets, yet, yeti, brok, brane

already an elaps...

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:23 PM
pff what about both, who says I cant paint and huff glue too? its called multitasking. and I been trying like no tomorrow, theyre just not showing up

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:24 PM
pff what about both, who says I cant paint and huff glue too? its called multitasking. and I been trying like no tomorrow, theyre just not showing up

use photobucket son

ghost city
04-13-2008, 09:28 PM
alright here goes. some motherfucking flicks that better work or some douchebags head is gonna roll.
says avone by the way, and I'm here for crits, not "you suck"
http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0003.jpg

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002.jpg
fucked up the drop shadow on the E, too many fumes I guess

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001.jpg

atlok7
04-13-2008, 09:31 PM
soboe- i just finished my giant sketch for the battle. but im not gonna post it cause homos are just gonna hate, just wait for the battle

sketch3
04-13-2008, 09:36 PM
you that insecure?
all ppl said was work on ur basics...
u do wat you do very well but i cant read a single sketch from you,
and that simps hurtin...everyone needs to reminde themslvs of the basics now an then

exhale
04-13-2008, 09:40 PM
Jetpack, that R is nice. Try a sketch making all the letters the same width as the R. Fix the G and the i, the bottom right of the G is really weird and the i's dot doesn't fit in

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 09:45 PM
k, i forgot what a G looked like... im not lying either. i was drawing a blank for the I as well. ill have another up in a bit

seywhat
04-13-2008, 09:46 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/calorzexchange.jpg
calorz exchange
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/esolee.jpg
new style, gonna fix the second e before i ink it

bah humbug- lose the extensions
tester - feelin all those. exchange?
atlok- i dig ur styles, do what shame said and just keep sketchin
rots- shits fresh as fuck
cais- listen to rots and just sketch in pencil, dont worry about colors
vois- maybe try using straighter bars and try to get shit crisp
kspr- nice style, really feelin the handies also
moes- you've progressed alot, really feelin that asen. wanna exchange?
mass- i like your shit because its original, but i really like some of your older styles better

bump, guess i got overlooked
jetpack- that simp is lookin good
nothin else to crit, mods need to delete this talkin bullshit

sketch3
04-13-2008, 09:47 PM
then i guese that makes you a fuckin halfwit,
i bet even mascara kid knows wat a G looks like.

the rounf part on ur r is to phat,
the middle bit on then isto skinny but g improvment, keep it u

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 09:49 PM
fella's i havent been postin flicks cause i dont know a name i can write, through mad ideas at me in pms
EVERYONE

sketch3
04-13-2008, 09:52 PM
how about ass geko?
u do spend alot of time inside atlok

ghost city
04-13-2008, 10:09 PM
heres some stuff I drew, says avone,

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0003.jpg

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002.jpg fucked up the drop shadow on the E

http://http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001.jpg

and crits or suggestions?

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 10:10 PM
yea ghost i got one, learn to post flicks those dont work

Animal
04-13-2008, 10:11 PM
at least we know what it says
and that you fucked up on the drop shadow on your E

ghost city
04-13-2008, 10:11 PM
soboe-haha I just pee'd. thanks, you're hilarious

Soboe!
04-13-2008, 10:24 PM
no not really, did you make a photobucket account?

HRbN
04-13-2008, 10:25 PM
Oh god.. here comes the hurt
Don't write wasted, especially when you write like that.

Herbn- havent really seen a style like that but i would make the bars thicker.


Well thats a good thing, ill do one thicker tomorrow and see how it looks. Thanks for the crits.

xAWOKE.925
04-13-2008, 10:30 PM
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5808/awokesss1hw1.jpg
been awhile.

IlikePie
04-13-2008, 10:33 PM
No.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 10:34 PM
no not really, did you make a photobucket account?
yeah i did, i read all the stuff on posting and shit too. its just raining shit on mee:(

xAWOKE.925
04-13-2008, 10:36 PM
No.
give real crits or go skiing u boulder faggot.

IlikePie
04-13-2008, 10:39 PM
Now, now, no need to take the internet so seriously. And I don't even live close to Boulder, guess again. :)
And Mexicans are afraid of the snow.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 10:44 PM
awright got my resize on, says avone blah blah blah

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002.jpg uhh so yeah fucked up the drop shadow on the E

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0003.jpg

crits or suggestions?

IlikePie
04-13-2008, 10:54 PM
Looks like ANME, AXMNE and AMNE. Work on individual letters.

ghost city
04-13-2008, 10:57 PM
Looks like ANME, AXMNE and AMNE. Work on individual letters.

i see the amne in the first, but not axmne or amne in the others, where'd you see the x in the second one?

Maste
04-13-2008, 11:03 PM
thye line goin throuh the A's leg makes an x... try seperating your letters (haha im totally not doing what i say but w/e) and try to make all the bars the same size and awoke does that say haste or maste (jw) and i cant really crit it cause its wicked blurry
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6860/sivlizednew001sd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? and i know ive got a shitty color selection... it looked better in my head haha and this is kinda funky/wierd but i had some time on my hands and wanted to do something different oh and the d got cut by the scanner

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 11:03 PM
make each letter seperate. it makes it look better and easier to read.
awoke, do some simple letters man, i can't read your piece
maste, i have no idea what your first letter is. it looks decent, but get rid of the loopy things and make them more bar-ish.

this any better from the first? i think it is.
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5830/reign1dl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nemzone
04-13-2008, 11:04 PM
atlock, i like ur shiz chief, just think u should move away from doin so many seperate bar in a piece. try make single letters with the same style... get me??

tank i like that 2, tried cracks yet??

JETPACK!!
04-13-2008, 11:07 PM
i tried cracks on another piece, but i didnt post it.. didn't come out as well as i liked. but it was better than the one you saw. i went overkill on the holes and cracks haha. my next sketch will have cracks for ya buddy

b SQUARED 08
04-13-2008, 11:10 PM
make each letter seperate. it makes it look better and easier to read.
awoke, do some simple letters man, i can't read your piece
maste, i have no idea what your first letter is. it looks decent, but get rid of the loopy things and make them more bar-ish.

this any better from the first? i think it is.
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5830/reign1dl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I like the simples.

NoCanControl
04-13-2008, 11:22 PM
quiet the old style.


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture002.jpg

calculating infinity
04-14-2008, 12:13 AM
avone is a big writer from nyc

Reason To-Shine
04-14-2008, 12:20 AM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/Perks.jpg

how do we feel about the 'k'?
I think it works...

Desipher
04-14-2008, 12:29 AM
did this for a battle with aker says break
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture208.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture209.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture210.jpg

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 12:42 AM
why r u posting in the toy thread?

thats sicc

Desipher
04-14-2008, 12:56 AM
cuz im not that good
ya i still got alot to learn

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 12:59 AM
i think ur good

TricksForKids
04-14-2008, 01:09 AM
awoke...thats pimp, maybe just settle it down a bit on the colours..or go even funkier.

ghost, separate your letters, it looks like popsicle sticks laid together by a 3 year old.

same thing goes for you maste, right simple idea, just need some separation from your letters

Jetpacks got the right idea, nice and simple, just make sure your letters are the same width

nocan, lost the arrow, nice grungy style though.

and just to show yall bawk aint dead...

a sketch for my boy 2time...says time...word, crits? keep sketchin

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4008/img017uv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TricksForKids
04-14-2008, 01:10 AM
oh and Desipher thats pretty hype....maybe youre trying to do to much? i think i critted everyones work on like 3 pages back...or im just tripping..fuck it

sir.one
04-14-2008, 01:26 AM
its...not...

the letters are clouded, the addons are misplaced and sloopy that ruin the flow of the piece.

-Leski
04-14-2008, 01:28 AM
Next time... I use a ruler... Its rough, its kinda lopsided but what ever. I'll take another swing at it tomorrow afternoon with a pencil and ruler.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7972/geski7am9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Tricks; Colour scheme is amazing, really pops well.
Decipher; Your too hard on yourself, but I can see you going really far because of that.
Jetpack; Love where that simple is going.

TricksForKids
04-14-2008, 01:28 AM
upon closer inspection i would have to agree...either way its a start

Desipher
04-14-2008, 01:39 AM
its...not...

the letters are clouded, the addons are misplaced and sloopy that ruin the flow of the piece.
was that directed to me?

nemzone
04-14-2008, 03:16 AM
kids need to stop asking why we post in this thread, grips my shit. these are kids who think they can post here, get good, then every1 at skool will think there awesome.. fuckin annoys me

neway

leski never use a ruler. u wont if u ever paint so dont get into bad habits. i like it just try define ur L more, also add a vertical in ur I

bawk glad to ssee ur still around dude, i think the TI has 2 much goin on in it mate, makes the ME look like they on a diet or sum shit.. or theres not enough goin on in the ME so it sorta looks odd if ya get me??

desipher, not a big fan on this at all homie, sorry

wasted
04-14-2008, 05:30 AM
well iv been thinkin of a new tag name,howz phat for a tag.ive got a few of pieces which id done when i got bored.should i post em?

and sorry again to anyone i offened before.

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 06:03 AM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5830/reign1dl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is great Jetpack..but to make it even better...make sure ALL bar widths are exactly the same..then itll look dope...look at the E .. its kinda thin...fat it up and whoa nice simple..then keep doing it !


tricks..you know i love your stuff and i miss seeing it less often !..but what Nemz said is right but it still shows off your style and it looks great..are you still writing Bawk ?...either way good work.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/uiyuik.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fff-1.jpg

bump these 2 never really got any comments apart from Sketchy Babe....but yeah Jetpack..keep up that shit..do me a APFER :D huhaha

and i actually like that Desipher stuff..but who am i to say..you can read it i suppose.

atlok7
04-14-2008, 07:23 AM
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5808/awokesss1hw1.jpg
been awhile.

not readable but i like the style

Soboe!
04-14-2008, 08:10 AM
i can read it cais,
sir.one - this is a fuckin first to see you crit someones work with out a big insult in it, im so proud of you haha

rsakens
04-14-2008, 08:20 AM
cuz im not that good
ya i still got alot to learn

you have sick style of course everybody can learn something on top
you should come up with some convenience XD
if you fix a few parts in that sketch your ready for the experience thread

rsakens
04-14-2008, 08:22 AM
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5808/awokesss1hw1.jpg
been awhile.

looks dope
you should calm down a bit and make it more readable

rsakens
04-14-2008, 08:27 AM
cais
nice concept man the coloring is dope
dont like the top part of the Y work on that
the rest is sweet man =}

nemzone
04-14-2008, 08:40 AM
you have sick style of course everybody can learn something on top
you should come up with some convenience XD
if you fix a few parts in that sketch your ready for the experience thread

now see this is what grips my shit. you are in no place to tell any1 when they are good enough to post in the proper bbs thread. its not for an toy to decide when sum1 isnt toy... stop fuckin dickriding and focus on ur own shiz unless u got something constructive to say.

and learn to use multiquote

mass i never liked ur shiz, even wayyy back when u did mad crazy charac pieces.. but gotta say man its growin on me a lot startin to like it... get a painted flick up m8

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 08:50 AM
im painting this week

Jamoya Designs
04-14-2008, 09:18 AM
mass apeal- i rly like tha reign its real clean
desipher- i lk that balck and pink one
atlok - thatrs great
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2148/1004081737mg1.th.jpg (http://img72.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1004081737mg1.jpg)


http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6708/1404081751bp5.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1404081751bp5.jpg)


http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6086/mohitsa8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mohitsa8.jpg)

help please:P

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 09:29 AM
now see this is what grips my shit. you are in no place to tell any1 when they are good enough to post in the proper bbs thread. its not for an toy to decide when sum1 isnt toy... stop fuckin dickriding and focus on ur own shiz unless u got something constructive to say.

bump this, spoon feeding and compliments dont help you improve, im tired of the dick riding in this thread.

im really sick of everyone jockin atlok and everyone else whose approaching it from the right direction gets overlooked.

atlok, son, do simples. a lot. until they look really really good. then add your fancy wildstyle shit things.


im painting this week

good, i've seen one thing painted from you, and i know you could do better.


mass apeal- i rly like tha reign its real clean
desipher- i lk that balck and pink one
atlok - thatrs great
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2148/1004081737mg1.th.jpg (http://img72.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1004081737mg1.jpg)


http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6708/1404081751bp5.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1404081751bp5.jpg)


http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6086/mohitsa8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mohitsa8.jpg)

help please:P

these arn't too too bad, keep sketching them, your lines, bars and overall style will progress a bit each time you draw it out.

dont overlap your I in the last sketch, if your gonna have the right side overlapped by the next letter, do it for all of them, your kinna squeezing your I in between your H and T. and if thats an S on the end... its wack. put it next to the T and the same blockish style.

watch your lines, keep the straight, and make sure your bars dont widen and thinnen for no apparent reason

before you start, take a rule and draw a very faint line on top and underneath, that way you can keep your whole piece the same height.

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 09:32 AM
good, i've seen one thing painted from you, and i know you could do better.


because i dont flick it. He said i should paint it which im going to do this week. Jus because you dont see my painted work doesnt mean i dont paint..its rediculous....i know tons of people on this site who paint but dont post it.

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 09:37 AM
no doubt, im the same way. but if you dont post pictures i can only assume you dont paint. y'know?

kay, well, here's this mornings simples

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5250/reign2ro8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nemzone
04-14-2008, 11:12 AM
thats the other problem, ppl care too much about what others think. im done preaching for today

hazetheone
04-14-2008, 12:02 PM
so all i got out of these last six pages was like four pictures,DONT WRITE WASTED,and evade + soboe talking
comeon guys that shit is just unnecisary
he wants to write it he will have to handle the baggage beef
evade and soboe -you shouldnt just talk to talk in here it makes you look realy stupid espicially if you live down the street from each other or whatever.you never see me and esteoner just talking on here because he ives up the road
we need to clean up all the bullshit and run this shit better
http://i30.tinypic.com/2iqxvrk.jpg
bumper pool

Mr Tasty
04-14-2008, 12:15 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture669.jpg
crits?

hazetheone
04-14-2008, 12:17 PM
shouldn't you give crits to get them
i pitty the fool that doesn't follow the bs rules

Mr Tasty
04-14-2008, 12:22 PM
fine then no crits..let it just sit ther

seywhat
04-14-2008, 12:34 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/calorzexchange.jpg
calorz exchange
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/esolee.jpg
new style, gonna fix the second e before i ink it

one more bump for crits

camer- fresh as always, i just dont like that box part in the a
reign- nice simp
desipher- im always diggin ur style

hazetheone
04-14-2008, 12:39 PM
i think in the calorz one
it would look better if the c was a little taller than the a it just looks like one line with a black line through it

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 01:06 PM
tasty, personally i think the corners are too sharp and its all over the place. the S seems too low and im not feeling the A. the whole thing seems too crowded to me.

haze, you really need to break outta this mental rut bro. thicken up your bars a bit, and connect the two bars on your M without that extra bar, i feel it's un-needed(sp) your C looks similar to atloks... only better.

wanna do an exhange hazy? maybe that'll break you outta your rut.. it looks like you dont have a choice, ive already started your piece.. you dont need to do one for me though

Spark391
04-14-2008, 01:13 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/uiyuik.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fff-1.jpg


This shiiet is wicked! Thanks man! :p

TricksForKids
04-14-2008, 01:26 PM
i want to

A) bump my own shit with a little bit of yellow and get crits cuz im selfish and needy
B) give props to nemz and Jetpack for keeping a solid head on their shoulders, and props to the G in Jetpacks sketch, its simple and fresh
C) give big daps to ras (yes i still call you ras) due to the fact that ive watched you grow into a mini-beast of a writer lately
D) say wuttup to Haze for a fresh R and a simple nice style to start with, i think your using too many long vertical bars, trying bending everything a bit more, throwin some doo-dads in and shit..i dunno
E) say mr tasty is still keepin it real...although id love tos ee a coloured finished sketch
and F) fuck yalllllllllllll

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8324/timeexchangesketchbybawga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 01:46 PM
tricksforkids, imo you have too much between your T and I, maybe add a larger dot to your I to make it more legible. the point above your I kinda kills your flow. it looks good though. i like the background.

something for camer, nothing fancy
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4153/camertm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 01:53 PM
Nice simps Jetpack. Im not much for wild shit yet so im all for simps.

U down for an exchange? Pm me if ur up.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8964/0409080953axg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Simps from tha other day.

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 02:03 PM
imo, simples are sexier than wildstyles. unless you actually know how to do it. but the majority of toy wildstyles... suck.

simples FTW.

rsakens
04-14-2008, 02:04 PM
now see this is what grips my shit. you are in no place to tell any1 when they are good enough to post in the proper bbs thread. its not for an toy to decide when sum1 isnt toy... stop fuckin dickriding and focus on ur own shiz unless u got something constructive to say.

and learn to use multiquote

mass i never liked ur shiz, even wayyy back when u did mad crazy charac pieces.. but gotta say man its growin on me a lot startin to like it... get a painted flick up m8

you good it all wrong
calm down man and dont start another weak internet beef
first off all your just as toy as i am one so thats why we posting here right?
so keep calling me toy i dont care i know my place but it looks like you dont your few mounts ahead of me and coming up with shit -your in no pace to tell any one who is good or bad -
lol i am doing this shit for a few years now not saying that because that let me look better it whold be the oposive
i am still toy
on here its because to show you that i know about graffiti i can teel whats good or bad believe it or not
i know were i am standing in here & know that you and a few others are alot better but this is not what matters all i was telling you is that i like your style and if you keep working on it
and clean up some shit your will be about to post in to experience section soon
if you don't like complements fuck of than

Chump
04-14-2008, 02:09 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/w0nmnymf3mgfqdo7afbp.jpg
New name...... one of the first sketches...crits?
Jetpack- your simples are sick... you paint any yet?
Maso- the simple looks good but the 3D in the M is way more dramatic than in the rest of the letters...

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 02:15 PM
yeah, if i can draw it, i can paint it. but im not gonna post any pics until i have ZERO drips. im nearly there, but i havent gotten out recently. i wanted to get out today, but i cant decide between my practice wall nowish, or a yard of school buses tonight. i havent painted that name or those simples yet. so im thinking the practice wall, but i need weed for the walk.

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 02:29 PM
i want to
C) give big daps to ras (yes i still call you ras) due to the fact that ive watched you grow into a mini-beast of a writer lately


http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8324/timeexchangesketchbybawga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Awww..mini beast hehe...thanks Tricks and a bump.

rsakens
04-14-2008, 02:31 PM
yeah, if i can draw it, i can paint it. but im not gonna post any pics until i have ZERO drips. im nearly there, but i havent gotten out recently. i wanted to get out today, but i cant decide between my practice wall nowish, or a yard of school buses tonight. i havent painted that name or those simples yet. so im thinking the practice wall, but i need weed for the walk.

ha ha just do it ;)

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 02:51 PM
sokeh, im not feeling the K, fix the kick on it, it looks too small. also, bring back the top of your S a bit, so its little bubble on big bubble. looks better porportion wise.

exchange for maso

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/2133/masofd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-14-2008, 03:09 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0005-2.jpg

scanner fucks EVERYTHING up

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 03:14 PM
that is soooo nice ! ^

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fver.jpg

Exchange with LUMOS..has to be the hardest word iv ever wrote.

-Leski
04-14-2008, 03:45 PM
leski never use a ruler. u wont if u ever paint so dont get into bad habits. i like it just try define ur L more, also add a vertical in ur I


Didnt think about that, I'll just pound away at it without a ruler.
The first letter is actually a G, I write Geski, the I without a vertical does look a bit out of place.

Thanks for the advice. I'll keep working on it.

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 03:50 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1033/0414081643aca1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Baer One
04-14-2008, 04:03 PM
maso smooth out your lines and i like the M but the #'s are kinda toy-ish
and make your 3d go all one way you have some going up and some going down

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 04:07 PM
Tha lines dont really look that rough, its my shitty camera phone. Yea they look toy-ish but isnt this tha "toy" bb thread? o.O

And i see wat u mean, but my 3d is coming from tha top right. Which forces the 3b to tha bottom left.

Ill try and get a better pic w. my scanner but ittl probably fuck it up to. I hate scanners.

RFI. SPit
04-14-2008, 04:11 PM
I'll get around to colouring this stuff eventually
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2403/2414685212_bd68d5ccff_o.jpg

Animal
04-14-2008, 04:13 PM
maso- IMO it would make it look better if the letters were the same size, I like the way your letters looks individually tho.

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 04:13 PM
Heres a better pic....

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6625/002me0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

And heres my 2 letter...

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1939/003bb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Zof-I want to see that ish colored haha

Bah Humbug
04-14-2008, 04:57 PM
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj113/Bahirone/DCP02047.jpg

Animal
04-14-2008, 05:11 PM
bah- don't connect your letters in any way yet, start simpler, work on individual letters and drop those green blobs.

ghost city
04-14-2008, 05:22 PM
hows this
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0004.jpg
i know my lines suck but other then that hows it look

Stego
04-14-2008, 05:29 PM
looks like star trek to me

Mass Appeal
04-14-2008, 06:00 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t534.jpg

Wall plan
really low on supplies
might pull it off.

avone..its alright..but leave colours and leave the connections..STRAIGHT SHIT LIKE THIS

Bah Humbug
04-14-2008, 06:31 PM
bah- don't connect your letters in any way yet, start simpler, work on individual letters and drop those green blobs.
:confused:aww, i just did that sketch and thought it was real good...lol guess not

fOrSaQeN
04-14-2008, 06:41 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2ld9edi.jpg

crits?

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 07:10 PM
u need to build up ur letters with bars forsaquen not really feelin that style

BEFORE:
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/04120815261.jpg

AFTER:
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/04140816341.jpg

and somthing i did for school
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/0414080109a1.jpg

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 07:41 PM
forgot to add.....

ne crits?

-Leski
04-14-2008, 07:51 PM
Well justin, I think you made a serious mistake.

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 07:55 PM
on wut

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 07:55 PM
ahahhahahah word, who does shit like that for school. your teacher probably photocopied it and gave it to your principle.

what your last name? dwllon? thats dumb

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 08:02 PM
it doesnt even look like graffiti its just regular ass letters with some style the teacher doesnt care its not like i painted it on her desk and said "heres my poster"............. but now real critz on my letters

-Leski
04-14-2008, 08:06 PM
You know any pig worth his salt would jot down your name and what you tag, right?

Anyways... you need to simplify your bars, your letters dont have as much structure as bars could provide them.

n_noodles
04-14-2008, 08:19 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dawsSketch.jpg

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 08:24 PM
You know any pig worth his salt would jot down your name and what you tag, right?

Anyways... you need to simplify your bars, your letters dont have as much structure as bars could provide them.

he wouldnt kno wut i write........


and ite

atlok7
04-14-2008, 08:30 PM
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8071/cais1redpurpwhitehk1.jpg

HRbN
04-14-2008, 08:56 PM
atlok i really like that one, but i think it would look cleaner if you didnt have the light green stripes on those few parts. Like i think it would look better if they were just white like the other parts, but its tight none the less.

justin its still dumb to post your real name on here

Noodles thats pretty tight i would make the first letter alittle bigger like the last one tho

atlok7
04-14-2008, 08:58 PM
thanks man

kore
04-14-2008, 09:00 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/27wrt45.jpg
bored, tried something new. too lazy to color anything.
CAIS: i'm feelin that.
DAWS: that's dooppe!
SWIV: hm...something just looks weird to me. it's iight, but i dunno..the W looks kinda strange to me, work on that, and i guess the V too.
ARMER: i ain't feelin that at all, do some simples or something.

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 09:00 PM
i cant get arrested fer drawing and even if i could im sure theres a million ppl with my exact same name........ and if there jst happend to be a cop on here who wanted to arrest me fer drawing they dont even kno wut country i live in

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 09:08 PM
your never gonna paint on a wall? they can trace your IP address smartass

keso, not bad, keep your letters similar sizes, your K is too small compared to the rest.

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 09:13 PM
i doubt ne 1 will ever actually get arrested off a graffiti forum

and if they can trace the ip address y dont they just do it to every1???

end.

JETPACK!!
04-14-2008, 09:16 PM
your new to a graff forum, you should listen to others, were just tryin to look out for you, jackass.

if you dont wanna do that your gonna be in for a long, painful, court date filled journey my friend.

keso, also, watch your 3d, you missed a bit on your S and your putting it were you dont need it.

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 09:17 PM
wow u r the most paronoid person ever.

dim
04-14-2008, 09:18 PM
dope shit daws
dope shit caiser
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1043.jpg
havnt sketched in a bit so w.e.

atlok7
04-14-2008, 09:26 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7982/caisonegreenpannelow5.jpg
just a quick box car panel

fonone
04-14-2008, 09:31 PM
keso - i think you should try using bars, i see alot of potential with that simple.
atlok - thats real nice just not liking that arrow or star.
daws - thats sexy just the bottom of the S looks real fucked up.
dim - all your letters seem as if they are seperate they dont really flow together if you know what i mean.

anywho, some shit i did over my holiday on the plane etc. first one is an exchange for esole

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6060/apr15137cp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6060/apr15137cp6.6bbb02b432.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=505&i=apr15137cp6.jpg)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5664/apr15138xp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1949/apr15139kf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9317/apr15140qq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5465/apr15141cd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5465/apr15141cd9.ad7e4f8e4a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=apr15141cd9.jpg)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9066/apr15142tz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8721/apr15143ty7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8721/apr15143ty7.3b0a245750.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=apr15143ty7.jpg)

mosezone
04-14-2008, 09:32 PM
keso-other than the K, i'm feeling it
dim-i dig it, it flows pretty well.
cais-i'm really feeling that, imo it's way doper than the style you usually rock

crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/poo-6.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-14-2008, 09:34 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2ld9edi.jpg

crits?

atlok7
04-14-2008, 09:38 PM
forsaqen- if i were you i would use straight bars and not have the right leg on each hang like that, try a flat bottomed one for now or atleast all the same length.

NoCanControl
04-14-2008, 09:50 PM
what the fuck is up with you guys haveing good drawing ablitlies with bombs and fills, but you fucking reek of handstyles? doesn't make sense?

capitol
04-14-2008, 09:50 PM
im still learnin
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7462/picture1309le1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1337/picture1311ck5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5017/picture1364dp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2128/picture1368lk2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/5487/picture1373sb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Forsaken:Try to work smaller..its hard startin out giantlike.
Moes:Cool style fix the space between the E and the S looks kinda goofy.

atlok7
04-14-2008, 10:08 PM
what the fuck is up with you guys haveing good drawing ablitlies with bombs and fills, but you fucking reek of handstyles? doesn't make sense?

haha was this directed at me? cais is a relitivley new name for me, and i cant really think of any good handie styles. heres my old name atlok7
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9008/throwsatlokmoress007ty1.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-14-2008, 10:30 PM
heres a sample of mine..

http://i29.tinypic.com/2jcgbjo.jpg

SWIV3Lone
04-14-2008, 10:34 PM
cant really see it its very blurry

IlikePie
04-14-2008, 10:36 PM
i doubt ne 1 will ever actually get arrested off a graffiti forum

and if they can trace the ip address y dont they just do it to every1???

end.

Hahahaha, I know your name, and where you live now :p


Moes, I really like your M, like oh so very much, but your E keeps killin' the whole piece :(

Evasion Of Invasion
04-14-2008, 11:05 PM
capitol - only one i find good is the blue mosh piece
Moes - i dig the M aint feelin the E maybe try droppin it lower and pushin it more to the right
Atlok - i love that tag looks like its got a bit of arabian flair
Armer - simples
Irekn - dope simples
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01136.jpg
crits?

the end
04-14-2008, 11:35 PM
from lastnight
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/9610/413reekgy0.jpg
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8375/413mrcfg8.jpg

jersOneTIC
04-14-2008, 11:39 PM
evasion - if thats a piece...the letter are too spaced out.
the end - nice fills but i'd work on those e's
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8861/byulu0.jpg
did this last week.

Baer One
04-15-2008, 12:58 AM
i got bored in class
crits?

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7955/berstbinderki5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fOrSaQeN
04-15-2008, 01:02 AM
even up them bars...

IlikePie
04-15-2008, 01:04 AM
Baer is a big Co head and beast is used so often it's funny.

fonone
04-15-2008, 02:14 AM
lucky that says berst then right?

HRbN
04-15-2008, 02:19 AM
Atlok your in wisconsin right?? i have a suprise haha Took this in dallas last week:

http://a323.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/118/l_0eceaabb53a9bcdc72221ed24932aa3a.jpg



......?

HRbN
04-15-2008, 02:32 AM
dude i think your shits usually pretty fresh but those colors look like puke to me like literally vomit....

fOrSaQeN
04-15-2008, 02:37 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/25kj0nt.jpg


bump for new page 3518 ftmfw!!
crits?

IlikePie
04-15-2008, 03:01 AM
lucky that says berst then right?


My PSP only loaded half the flick :( Could only see the throw...

Fors, I thought you were a lot better than that. Are you on drugs?

fOrSaQeN
04-15-2008, 03:05 AM
actually yeah.... http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/rasta2bigsmoke0gf.gif

IlikePie
04-15-2008, 03:09 AM
Ahhhh! Stoppit! Or at least don't sketch for now, I almost lost respect for you, that's like 11 steps back :(

ShIfTeD
04-15-2008, 04:25 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/25kj0nt.jpg


bump for new page 3518 ftmfw!!
crits?

letter structure, letter structure, letter structure

start on simples bro........

dont try 3D until youve mastered simples...i wouldnt even mess with fills yet

Xyk
04-15-2008, 05:55 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00032.jpg

^ Just some characs i've been fooling around with.

Mass Appeal
04-15-2008, 06:21 AM
i actually think that forsaquen peice is decent...its real old school looking and Mark Bode-ish ha. nice.

Xyk..boring and unoriginal..." dropping bombs " so played out..come up with something new..and try the char thread for starters.



this is the 2nd time iv posted 2 flicks and not gotten comments ha.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fver.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t534.jpg

no fair.i give crits i want em back.

Xyk
04-15-2008, 06:34 AM
The lumos sketch is sick, like how you did the L as opposed to the other letters. The other sketch is just as good. I love how you always use so little space on the paper, making the piece stadn out even more.

The dropping bombs thing up there was just something i wrote, ive seen it written tima and time again, and that really wasn't what i was looking for crits on. As for the characters, you said they seemed unoriginal. Could you elaborate, maybe link? cos i havent seen much anything that looks very similar to those.

dim
04-15-2008, 06:34 AM
dope shit daws
dope shit caiser
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1043.jpg
havnt sketched in a bit so w.e.
bumping this cause i got a shitty post placement
ras dope shit my friend

atlok7
04-15-2008, 07:54 AM
Atlok your in wisconsin right?? i have a suprise haha Took this in dallas last week:

http://a323.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/118/l_0eceaabb53a9bcdc72221ed24932aa3a.jpg



......?

i sent these to sezr

Evasion Of Invasion
04-15-2008, 07:58 AM
capitol - only one i find good is the blue mosh piece
Moes - i dig the M aint feelin the E maybe try droppin it lower and pushin it more to the right
Atlok - i love that tag looks like its got a bit of arabian flair
Armer - simples
Irekn - dope simples
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01136.jpg
crits?
Bump

Mass - love the way u color shit man it makes it look smooth and shiney i love it new letters are pretty savage to. wanna do an exchange?

xyk - im feelin most of those lil guys other then the one with the ave i say u pet em around a piece doin shit

Dim - aint feelin the R where the letf leg kicks i guees u could say above the "knee" straighten it out

Baer One
04-15-2008, 09:06 AM
dude i think your shits usually pretty fresh but those colors look like puke to me like literally vomit....

me?
well its a brown notebook so it was supposed to be like bright green and bright pink but it turned out as puke brown and pukeish greenish boogers haha

and yeah its berst

Mass Appeal
04-15-2008, 09:33 AM
xyk...i didnt mean the chars where unoriginal..i meant the dropping bombs thing..but whatevers...keep doin your thing.

-ShAmEE-
04-15-2008, 10:25 AM
ello people.

i was thinking that we should have a toy battle, not just anyone like the weekly battle.

this one is easier.

it can be what ever you guys want to write,

colour included

no karaks?

what u guys think? ohh yeah anyone can be init.

Ras. nice shit up there.
dim u kno i hate ur shit. do stuctured simples.

fonone
04-15-2008, 10:49 AM
keso - i think you should try using bars, i see alot of potential with that simple.
atlok - thats real nice just not liking that arrow or star.
daws - thats sexy just the bottom of the S looks real fucked up.
dim - all your letters seem as if they are seperate they dont really flow together if you know what i mean.

anywho, some shit i did over my holiday on the plane etc. first one is an exchange for esole

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6060/apr15137cp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6060/apr15137cp6.6bbb02b432.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=505&i=apr15137cp6.jpg)
bumb
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5664/apr15138xp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1949/apr15139kf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9317/apr15140qq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5465/apr15141cd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5465/apr15141cd9.ad7e4f8e4a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=apr15141cd9.jpg)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9066/apr15142tz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8721/apr15143ty7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8721/apr15143ty7.3b0a245750.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=apr15143ty7.jpg)

bumpyea

NoCanControl
04-15-2008, 12:02 PM
haha was this directed at me? cais is a relitivley new name for me, and i cant really think of any good handie styles. heres my old name atlok7
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9008/throwsatlokmoress007ty1.jpg

i wasn't derecting it to you, but yea you are a good example.

Soboe!
04-15-2008, 12:11 PM
NoCanControl- you sig looks like a handicap 3 year old got ahold of photoshop when ya wernt lookin son!

NoCanControl
04-15-2008, 12:25 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0008-1.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-15-2008, 12:30 PM
letter structure, letter structure, letter structure

start on simples bro........

dont try 3D until youve mastered simples...i wouldnt even mess with fills yet
everyone always tells me letter structure......how do i improve on that?

i actually think that forsaquen peice is decent...its real old school looking and Mark Bode-ish ha. nice.
Xyk..boring and unoriginal..." dropping bombs " so played out..come up with something new..and try the char thread for starters.



this is the 2nd time iv posted 2 flicks and not gotten comments ha.

no fair.i give crits i want em back.

http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/thumb.gif

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t534.jpg
i think if you evened up the top horizontal bars to even out with each other i think it might look cleaner

NoCanControl
04-15-2008, 12:34 PM
NoCanControl- you sig looks like a handicap 3 year old got ahold of photoshop when ya wernt lookin son!

work on your letter struckure, befor your fuck with my shit, hahahahaha, your a joke.



thats like last years hand. btw.