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Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 05:18 PM
Nah capo is improving, it looks like steyr because he does one color schemes like that( the whole thjing is different shades of blue) But capo's improving with each sketch

TRY'N
04-18-2008, 05:23 PM
I made the letters different sizes on purpose.
he was pretty much saying dont do that.

and i agree it would look much better if it was a bunch of even letters.

PabloESKObar
04-18-2008, 05:25 PM
he was pretty much saying dont do that.

and i agree it would look much better if it was a bunch of even letters.

Yeah I guess :( I just liked how the S kinda fit into the E n shit.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-18-2008, 05:27 PM
o yeah dont worry i aint callin bite or nothin
and yeah esko that is what i mean only im tryin to be nice about it

ANY CRITS?

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 05:42 PM
Rots why the fuck do you post in here? we all know you school us all and belong in the big boy blackbook thread so please stop teasing us thats you rule us all :)
EDIT: Are you using prismas for the fills on those pieces? yes this is for you rots

Rots takes your Daughters
04-18-2008, 06:11 PM
The regular black book thread is dead and I'm not even very good

and yeah them's prismas, i got about a hundred of em for 25cents each recently.

Thank shit for bombingscience.

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 06:21 PM
^WTF HOW, I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR THEM!!

All I get is like prismas if I cough up like $100 or $200....

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 06:24 PM
yea i might get my self a 142 set or which ever ones around there, but its like $239 and i cant rack them cause the cases are empty and you have to bring it to the counter so they can go in the back and get you the full one, and the color selection for the ones on there own are bunk as fuck so i dont bother rackin them

Rots takes your Daughters
04-18-2008, 06:26 PM
Order them individually online, access to all the colors

I got mine in a trade

Mass Appeal
04-18-2008, 06:28 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/cvbdbdfbdf.gif

bump
my nagga SouthPole doing dope shit...Paris represent yeawhhh

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 06:28 PM
^Same, and thats the ONLY box they have(along with another big case, the 52 one I think) so I can't rack prismas EVER...sucks ass.

(Anyone have any they want to donate or trade(I warn you though I have almost nothing)....

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 06:33 PM
Straight up new shit...I'm trying out this "euro style"....It's my first try, and I themed it of course(RASTA!)...

anyway yeah...

http://a738.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/33/l_5fc17b25b6eb7738bc7d7f4be00b6cc1.jpg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 06:34 PM
Do not do that ever again ever

nemzone
04-18-2008, 06:36 PM
big resemblence of ras shit there chief..

european - rasta?? howd that come about?

Mass Appeal
04-18-2008, 06:46 PM
can people stop doin this " euro shit " .. your just taking what other " euro " writers do lol...come up with your own " euro " ..not someone esles perspective of it. and Nemz...can we exchange its been a very long time :(...i hear your off into Afgahnistan...man im off in the Navy when i leave school..MIGHT even try for the Marines..might see you there :P hah

n so i aint picless..

a really quick peice for BRAINS VCR..i missed out the " I " ahahahahhaha..so ima redo it tomorrow and change up the lettering for the I placment

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ewfew.jpg

ignore the doodles.

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 06:46 PM
Do not do that ever again ever

agreed, dont try euro unless you live in europe or are full blown european.

nemzone
04-18-2008, 06:47 PM
i would mate but this is my last post until 1st of may.. and then im on a 5 day paint bender around germany.. flicks will follow. pm me if u feel the need :P

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 06:49 PM
LAST POST!!! :'( but i love nemz! ♥

Mass Appeal
04-18-2008, 06:52 PM
peace Nemz

sketch3
04-18-2008, 06:53 PM
agreed, dont try euro unless you live in europe or are full blown european.
your a moron.

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 06:57 PM
well you know its always good to hear it, but yea i realized that was a patheticly stupid post :)

for a battle im doin, word: resm
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080418_13.jpg
pretty bunk but other then that i would appriciate some crits

Mass Appeal
04-18-2008, 07:00 PM
agreed, dont try euro unless you live in europe or are full blown european.

i actually agree with this..
yet who am i to say haha.

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 07:00 PM
I'm actually full blown Italian, but ok I was just trying it out, sorry...back to normal.

nemzone
04-18-2008, 07:02 PM
ok this is my last post..

how cum the R is the only 1 with an addon? i like it overall, dont feel the M fits in tho chiief
cracks could be bigger, and the ar of the M thru the S isnt straight

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 07:04 PM
ok this is my last post..

how cum the R is the only 1 with an addon? i like it overall, dont feel the M fits in tho chiief

it was 2 in the morning and i hadent slept the night before, give me a break:p
EDIT: SHIT!! i just noticed, id normaly fix it but im sick right now and drained of energy

Evasion Of Invasion
04-18-2008, 07:17 PM
Rots the rage throw is straight fuckin fire man
cap ur styles alot like steyrs not the letters but it just feels like one of his try makin ur letters not so lanky
GUBE -<----- make ur letters look more like that
esko make ur letters all the same size
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01149.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01148.jpg
crits?

BUMP!

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 07:20 PM
Stick to the old steez evade, but then again i see progression about to take place in the 3D piece
now do me do me!!! (crits not sex)

PabloESKObar
04-18-2008, 07:26 PM
soboe: That shit is dope as fuck son. That S is fuckin ill. But yeah, the M ain't fittin in homie.

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 07:34 PM
i major in S's son hahaha been sketchin them since i started writen. ill come up with some sex full ones if you ever have a writers block just PM me when needed,

littlerocky
04-18-2008, 07:44 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/0418081528.jpg
blues there cus purple ran out..
bump..soboe i like it..accept for bottom of the E and the M is bunk..
evasion not really feelin either sry..other shit was better

atlok7
04-18-2008, 08:02 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7872/caisoneyelloworangeredpw8.jpg
cais

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 08:03 PM
oh my lord Cais, post that in the big boy thread and see if they will except you

Rots takes your Daughters
04-18-2008, 08:05 PM
nope

atlok7
04-18-2008, 08:07 PM
i did but i dont think they will though

Soboe!
04-18-2008, 08:09 PM
lmao, rots, i love how you flat out say "nope" and nothing else. you always make my day

Desipher
04-18-2008, 08:28 PM
.

Mass Appeal
04-18-2008, 08:29 PM
oh my lord Cais, post that in the big boy thread and see if they will except you

please edit this post.

Duct Tape & Death Threats
04-18-2008, 08:37 PM
Okay, for people saying I can't draw when I post something of a NEW STYLE ATTEMPT;
Quick simple New York style;
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/5044/image0123he4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9445/image0019mn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New style attempt. When I post these ones I'd like crits on what to move around, not patronizing comments. ;)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/429/image0141xs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(Obviously very rough freestyle, I'll post cleaner ones later.)



CRITS;
littlerocky- Leave out unnecessary extensions for now, but I can see it going somewhere.
Atlok7- I like it, I can find the letters and they look good, and the colours are nice. Keep doing that shit.
Desipher- Looks good, and from the other finished piece it should turn out sweet!

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 08:40 PM
Why doesn't anyone ever crit me anyway

atlok7
04-18-2008, 08:45 PM
no one cares

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 08:46 PM
Tusche'.

Duct Tape & Death Threats
04-18-2008, 08:49 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0007-1.jpg
cile
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0009-1.jpg
guts
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0006-2.jpg
lumos
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0010-1.jpg
rage


I would have before but it was 2 pages back and I needed to shit.
The letters in the Cile are sweet, but the Guts takes the cake. Those colour change squares go great, but the outline gets mad thin in the boxes.
The lumos is fresh, as is the rage throw. Only thing there is the G kinda looks like an S on the first peep. Maybe just put some dots where the inner part of the G breaks off.
It's all fresh though.

Panda Jerk
04-18-2008, 08:51 PM
hahahaha

Duct Tape & Death Threats
04-18-2008, 08:52 PM
=/

atlok7
04-18-2008, 08:56 PM
ha you would just jump on the opportunity to jerk off rots

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 08:58 PM
Really? I think if I remember correctly I was a total dick to duct tape like 3 days ago and bitched at him until he changed his name. I don't think I'm reeeeally his favorite person in the world but thanks for the crits. I thought the same thing of the g

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 08:59 PM
You're the best writer on bs anyway, atlok, remember.

Duct Tape & Death Threats
04-18-2008, 09:01 PM
Exactly what rots said bro. I gave you crits, and I was trying to get to everyone but only did this page.
I'm just trying to get along with everyone on this forum but I guess soon I'm gunna have to take sides.
AHHHH WELL..

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:04 PM
haha rots if you keep telling me that pretty soon all the littler ones will start to believe it

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 09:04 PM
i was quoting someone else.

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:05 PM
ha yeah i remember that. i dont even know who it was

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 09:10 PM
Some jew

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:14 PM
dude not cool im jewish

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 09:15 PM
Don't worry, I couldn't possibly hate you anymore already.

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:16 PM
haha just joshin im not really a jew

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:17 PM
but it means alot that you cant hate me more than you do,

PabloESKObar
04-18-2008, 09:23 PM
Lol, who says joshin anymore?

Oh and I just seen that movie, Quality of Life (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=5528186104004815919&q=graff&ei=nCYJSMjQBpHk-AGA6NXyDg).
It was pretty fuckin dumb. It kinda seems like they makin graff look bad, but like, subliminally. They don't just come out and say it, but they make these two writers' lives look all fucked up and shit. I dunno, maybe I'm just dumb. I'll shut up now.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 09:26 PM
the first time i saw that, i saw it with like 5 people and everyone said I was going to end up like vain. the crackhead white boy with anger issues.

atlok7
04-18-2008, 09:30 PM
ha the actors in that movie suck

PabloESKObar
04-18-2008, 09:40 PM
Yeah they do. I dunno why I actually sat through the whole thing. I'm gonna go watch Style Wars or Infamy to even out the suck to good ratio of graff movies I've recently seen.

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 10:55 PM
ugg fucking markers...

anyway yeah here..

http://a752.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/16/l_03acfc470770c692e798e3116310679f.jpg


and another one, which actually I DO like this one..

http://a726.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/85/l_9dca4373ce32e628668a3143c9bd4ffd.jpg

silentchaos14
04-18-2008, 10:59 PM
new to graff thread NOW!

Capo Izi
04-18-2008, 11:09 PM
...why..?

The first one eh I fucked it up, but the second one is a little bubbly, but umm...yeah still looks fine...


Why is it that EVERY time someone screws up a piece they say "NEW TO GRAFF THREAD NOW", like honestly I have read that front to back, and almost every other tutorial on this site, and I've posted stuff that is quite well I think, one blunder and you try to push me back to square one, fucks with that....whatever yeah.

my.favorite.addiction
04-18-2008, 11:24 PM
my bad,cant figure how to make this shit smaller.
racked some new marks.Lumcolors an Prismacolor Premiers.lovin em so far.
Been up late in the lab.
fucked the N but like the rest.read NoMas.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010-1.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0007.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0009.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-18-2008, 11:35 PM
dont mind my i love vagina sticker in the backround lol

http://i31.tinypic.com/2wpi2yt.jpg

my.favorite.addiction
04-18-2008, 11:49 PM
fOrSaQeN-
haha,yo nice sticker >_>
umm,too many colors in my opinion.
its good but the colors are a bit much.
the S looks a lil to squiggly.
keep it up.

Capo Izi-
get yourself some new markers.got a staples near by?the one in my city is easy as fuck to rack from.you can get some better markers free.first one is kinda wack,2nd would be good with better colors,jus my opinion.practice your As an Ps.thought it said CHP at first.keep it up.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-18-2008, 11:51 PM
Addiction and Forsaquen, new to graf thread

my.favorite.addiction
04-18-2008, 11:57 PM
can we get some REAL crits?everyone always says that shit,"new to graf thread" fuck man be precise.Ill check the thread but show that you know what your talking about.

Duct Tape & Death Threats
04-19-2008, 12:01 AM
Look at the page before and you'll see.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 12:01 AM
Addiction and Forsaquen, new to graf thread

great advice.... keep up the good work...

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 12:04 AM
can we get some REAL crits?everyone always says that shit,"new to graf thread" fuck man be precise.Ill check the thread but show that you know what your talking about.

yeah seriously....great input they got..every one that crits my shit tells me letter structure....but fails to point out what exactly i should be improving on so i could be working at it.. simply 'new to graff' doesnt say shit..

AnteUp
04-19-2008, 12:14 AM
BARS... TO EVERYONE ON THIS PAGE.... except capo... make all you letters the same height bars same length and width...

CRITS...
new dubba yew.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-18-08_2305-1.jpg

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 12:24 AM
I doubt I woulda figured out it was a W on my own.
maybe if it was a more head on angle?
interesting work to peep any way you cut it though.

sketch3
04-19-2008, 12:31 AM
have either of fairys actually read the new to graff thread,
cuss if u did then why aeu sayin u dont get advice

fonone
04-19-2008, 12:41 AM
yeah seriously....great input they got..every one that crits my shit tells me letter structure....but fails to point out what exactly i should be improving on so i could be working at it.. simply 'new to graff' doesnt say shit..

no need to be smart son. it says alot. it says you need to COMPLETELY START OVER, your colours are whack, your letters are shit. your lines are all shaky. you have shitty random extensions jumping off random parts of your lettters. the back ground is ugly as fuck. you are missing several highlights.

there you go. some nice crits for you. im sure you would have preffered to have heard "new to graff thread"

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-19-2008, 12:42 AM
can we get some REAL crits?everyone always says that shit,"new to graf thread" fuck man be precise.Ill check the thread but show that you know what your talking about.


You're right faggot, try not getting so asshurt and consider someone telling you to go to the 'new to graf' thread as giving you all the crits in that thread because you actually suck SO bad you can't play in the TOY thread.

Same for you forsaqen.


But I was actually being nice and directed you to the proper thread.

Capo Izi
04-19-2008, 12:59 AM
I realize this now after I finish that ir probably is a REALLY bad Atlok bite....probably just because I see his stuff so much it just inspired me, and yeah if this is so bad I'll stop it and go back to normal, otherwise is this ok, or good?

http://a831.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_83d030314e38cdf365b712a2d4564d9e.jpg

Crits pleassssseeeeeeee???

addiciton-clean that shit up, and make the letters more like bars, its all too much at once.

forsaqen-cool bubble effect and ok look, but straighten 'em up more, and make them more to flow and fit together

littlerockey-thats NICCEEE and clean, good straight letters awesome colors and mad flow, love it

atlok-well what can I say, your shit is pretty advance, why you still in here?

desipher-thats pretty nice sketch there, I do like it, the cracks are just the right amount, and it has a nice morbid creepy look, some neutral colors would look badass in it

duct tape-the first two are pretty nice, except don't do that random extension between W and A, the bottom one, it's just too random and unnessesary(sp?). The last one isn't a freestyle, just a cool little throw, clean it up and it'll be much more liked and pure looking

backdoor-the top 3 are fucking steeze, especially the guts, thats just dope man, keep doing your thing dude. The last one is ok, but eh...

AnteUp
04-19-2008, 01:08 AM
post fucking crits... we need a fucking mod to clean up this chit-chat.

fonone
04-19-2008, 01:44 AM
how does that resemble atloks shit... infact how does that resemble anythign. seriously youd be doing us all a big favour if you went to the new to graff thread. it will save us telling you to go there and tbh doing shit like that your doing yourself more harm than good.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 01:51 AM
how does that resemble atloks shit... infact how does that resemble anythign. seriously youd be doing us all a big favour if you went to the new to graff thread. it will save us telling you to go there and tbh doing shit like that your doing yourself more harm than good.

i think you should do the same there tiger.... if theres anything worse..is a toy critiquing another toy.....YOU HAVE NO SKILLS TO BEGIN WITH, rots on another hand does so he can get away with it... :rolleyes:

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showpost.php?p=1070442&postcount=72

FABLE IR CRU
04-19-2008, 01:58 AM
i think you should do the same there tiger.... if theres anything worse..is a toy critiquing another toy.....YOU HAVE NO SKILLS TO BEGIN WITH, rots on another hand does so he can get away with it... :rolleyes:

true that

Capo Izi
04-19-2008, 02:07 AM
how does that resemble atloks shit... infact how does that resemble anythign. seriously youd be doing us all a big favour if you went to the new to graff thread. it will save us telling you to go there and tbh doing shit like that your doing yourself more harm than good.

ACTUALLY I've read it from front to back basically and I know it, I'm trying new shit out right now cause its 2 am on Friday night, and I know its not like Atloks, but it does resemble his stuff, and I'd rather be sorry for biting, than get jumped on for something I did intentionally. Don't call my shit out because you are just as bad.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 02:31 AM
/edit with garbage like this http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showpost.php?p=1070442&postcount=72

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 02:40 AM
if it was useful i would ;)

fonone
04-19-2008, 03:43 AM
hahaha are you fucking serious YOUR calling me bad? wow. do any of those sketches even look complete? do they look like i did them to show off my best work? haha. no i did them all quickly. jesus christ. i will post up some more recent stuff later, you are fucking incredible. Oh and by the way im pretty sure any of the doodles you linked shit all over your feeble attempts.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 03:53 AM
hahaha are you fucking serious YOUR calling me bad? wow. do any of those sketches even look complete? do they look like i did them to show off my best work? haha. no i did them all quickly. jesus christ. i will post up some more recent stuff later, you are fucking incredible. Oh and by the way im pretty sure any of the doodles you linked shit all over your feeble attempts.

you sure?

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showpost.php?p=872797&postcount=57178


ive been accepting the fact i suck for quite some time now...and i honestly thought i was getting better....well i guess graffiti/sketching aint for me.

explain this...

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2369/img003zl9.th.png (http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img003zl9.png)

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4796/astrq5.th.png (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=astrq5.png)

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/1392/img007xo8.th.png (http://img235.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img007xo8.png)
i think this ones kinda shitty....then again maybe they all are, lol

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2254/sdgyoa5.th.png (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sdgyoa5.png)

letsgobombin
04-19-2008, 03:58 AM
capo- there's nothin wrong with experimenting, but i dont think iv seen any simples from you (i havent really looked) post some up. then we will judge you

fonone
04-19-2008, 04:04 AM
umm hahaha, you do realise that was what last year? nice find son. MAX PROPS RIGHT THERRRR. funny thing is they are still better than yours.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 04:08 AM
umm hahaha, you do realise that was what last year? nice find son. MAX PROPS RIGHT THERRRR. funny thing is they are still better than yours.

well just F.Y.I look at your work.....the jokes on you man... if it took you one year to improve that much just figure by the next 60years may be you'll get some style

fonone
04-19-2008, 04:13 AM
lol what? i wasnt consistetly writing since last year, and that was only september or something last year... i started writing again like january this year, and its funny how you over looked all the half decent shit i posted, and like i said my first shit is still better than yours GRATS.

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 04:18 AM
http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/coffee.gif

sure son you keep telling yourself that.... im out for the night holla!@#$

fonone
04-19-2008, 04:25 AM
here we go. this is my recent entry for the giant battle

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/989/apr03132ov5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

been getting my simple on, perhaps something you should do
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7097/apr19144fk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5370/apr19145oq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3605/apr19146fz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/4981/apr19147bh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/4981/apr19147bh1.c0a82ac3c5.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=501&i=apr19147bh1.jpg)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/3716/apr19148zv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/3716/apr19148zv6.ce9ff54ce7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=507&i=apr19148zv6.jpg)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/474/apr19150ek4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/474/apr19150ek4.5bf02c880f.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=507&i=apr19150ek4.jpg)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2228/apr19149nx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2228/apr19149nx3.68bdc765b7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=501&i=apr19149nx3.jpg)
and then an irekn sketch from a while ago you obviously decided not to bring up http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3786/mar0599le5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and a reck sketch i did ages ago,
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/1108/ghui1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/1108/ghui1.1b80812d0d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=501&i=ghui1.png)
have fun

SWIV3Lone
04-19-2008, 04:34 AM
ey u got into the better giant battle..... forsaqen: u lose

letsgobombin
04-19-2008, 04:37 AM
forsaqen: u lose
lol thats exactly what i was thinkin

fonone
04-19-2008, 04:43 AM
what a convienient time for him to go to beddy bies.

letsgobombin
04-19-2008, 04:56 AM
never mind, hes gonna wake up to defeat;)

fonone
04-19-2008, 05:24 AM
haha yeah im sure he'll come up with some more shit to say though

letsgobombin
04-19-2008, 05:30 AM
guaranteed

Mass Appeal
04-19-2008, 06:50 AM
irekn..really nice simples..but i jus aint feelin the peices man...but great simples..and original name nice work.

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 09:10 AM
i wanna shoot everyone in the last two pages in the fucking face. beef is dumb enough. but stupid pointless toy beef over whose more toy is just really really fucking stupid.. you both fucking suck. accept it.

fonone
04-19-2008, 09:27 AM
rofl coming from jetpack, you cannot talk. the shittest of the shit.

atlok7
04-19-2008, 09:32 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7872/caisoneyelloworangeredpw8.jpg
cais

yo

emel
04-19-2008, 09:34 AM
jetpack you need to spend less time on the internet you joined 4/5 months ago and you have 1192 posts...

maybe thats why you suck incredibly badly...

atlok7
04-19-2008, 09:39 AM
hahaha no he just talks alot of shit, but i never said he was good

SAID
04-19-2008, 09:50 AM
fube man, you've improved a fuckload.
wow.
fucken dope.

South-Pole
04-19-2008, 09:56 AM
beef,beef always beef.im sick of this post pics and post crits instead damnit,thats more useful
atlok-very good but im not realy feeling some add-ons
irekn-you'v improved well now stop arguing over this already


i'm reposting those for more crits,thanks for the crit though ras
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/005.jpg


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image178.jpg


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/004.jpg



http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image177.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 10:04 AM
hahaha all you can suck my nuts, you cant even do simples an you say im wack? hahaha, especially you atlok. with your wack wildstyles, i honestly dont know why these kids jock your steeze son.

and emel, its a fucking forum. its meant for posting comments, your insults receive a failing grade.

oakstr1
04-19-2008, 10:14 AM
mass appeal smashes euro style. so until its like that i wouldnt even fuck with it.
Soboe! - like the S a shit load.

Thrice
04-19-2008, 11:33 AM
atlok- you are sick as hell man, and I can't imagine where you'll be by the time your 20. Nice shit now get out of this toy forum now.

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 11:45 AM
irekn, your simples are nice, but when your doing your piece right to left, make your letters backwards too, that way it's got a mirrored image look to it. i bet it would look better.
atlok, im glad your using a different color, its a pleasent change. and its good to see you using more of a simple approach than your previous wildstyle shit.

your works good, but you seem like you would be a douchebag in person. thankfully it's the internet.

here's some shit from this morning
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2643/reign7wy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Teez-EmM!!!
04-19-2008, 12:09 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1001.jpg
dont even know what i was thinking with this colour sceme

Mass Appeal
04-19-2008, 12:51 PM
beef,beef always beef.im sick of this post pics and post crits instead damnit,thats more useful
atlok-very good but im not realy feeling some add-ons
irekn-you'v improved well now stop arguing over this already


i'm reposting those for more crits,thanks for the crit though ras
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/005.jpg


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image178.jpg


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/004.jpg



http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image177.jpg

its cool nagger

beatmaker
04-19-2008, 01:21 PM
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/2802/sc0024e95ave6.jpg

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8779/sc0025745bqm7.jpg

just some quick sketches....

Thrice
04-19-2008, 01:22 PM
Go simple beat

Mass Appeal
04-19-2008, 01:52 PM
bleh for BRAINS VCR

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dvgsdf.jpg

:d

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 02:10 PM
rofl coming from jetpack, you cannot talk. the shittest of the shit.


jetpack you need to spend less time on the internet you joined 4/5 months ago and you have 1192 posts...

maybe thats why you suck incredibly badly...


hahaha all you can suck my nuts, you cant even do simples an you say im wack? hahaha, especially you atlok. with your wack wildstyles, i honestly dont know why these kids jock your steeze son.

and emel, its a fucking forum. its meant for posting comments, your insults receive a failing grade.

http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/rotfl.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/rotfl.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/rotfl.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/rotfl.gif

oh and irekn it still doesnt change my opinion on you.. http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/coffee.gif

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 02:30 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/o02kcp.jpg

crits?

fonone
04-19-2008, 02:32 PM
i couldnt care what you think of me... an opinion from someone who has no idea doesnt bother me. quit clogging up the topic with your beef with me. keep your thoughts bottled up inside please.

astra? that looks alright, the S looks like a Y though.. if its mean to be an S.. idk.

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 02:33 PM
please ignore the molotov character at the top >_<

aside from the letter structure what do you think of the style?

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0002-3.jpg

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 02:50 PM
it says astro but the o is fucked up

addict styles cool but the black outline is the only thing i dont like

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 03:09 PM
thanks for the crits,yea I kinda fucked the outline in a few spots.
yo astro,try not to put anything goin through the center of the O or it looks like an A
the filler is pretty clean,I like the letters (work on your S)
like the direction of the 3D,jus would look nicer with somethin in it.
good job overall,keep it up.

Mass Appeal
04-19-2008, 03:22 PM
everyone just shut the fuck up..get along with each other your ALL in the same boat...if i was a mod id ban you all..esp. Forsaquan wtf his name is.

seywhat
04-19-2008, 03:33 PM
astro- i really dig that shit, the s looks like a y, but i think aytro would be pretty dope lol

HRbN
04-19-2008, 03:33 PM
astra? that looks alright, the S looks like a Y though.. if its mean to be an S.. idk.

Word


Haha you tell em Mass.

NoCanControl
04-19-2008, 03:40 PM
Atlokkkk don't listen to him. your shit is legit. AND I LOVE TO JOCK YO STEEZE SUN.

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 03:40 PM
thanks all im gonna put up a new one in a lil bit, waiting for my markers

NoCanControl
04-19-2008, 03:46 PM
please ignore the molotov character at the top >_<

aside from the letter structure what do you think of the style?

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0002-3.jpg

nice blood, may i bite?

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 03:54 PM
fuuc,go for it NoCan
jus if anyone asks,it was bled by me.jus get creative with that shit.
put up your take on it.

kroc_oner
04-19-2008, 04:02 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB130228.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB130227.jpg
my fav addiction do simples
jetpack its a nice simple
aytra i like the silver out line its nice
teez i dunno i liek the E and M work on the other letters
mass its nice as usual
mesa i really like it looks good imo

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 04:04 PM
kroc like the letters, nice style, but not the colors

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 04:10 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2643/reign7wy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kroc, its looking good, try making your lines smoother and try not to have some of the lines sticking out on your outline. and i dont know what the thing at the end of your first sketch is, but i dont like it. you should take that off. your second one is a lot better. i dont like the dot on your A in the second one though.

astro, fix up your S and your O, your S looks like a Y or a lowercase G. and rather than having your bar coming through your O have it coming off the side of your bar.

mass your sketch is looking good, try a new backround though, ive never really felt the one you rock.

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 04:20 PM
thanks jet, yours is so nice and clean only thing i can think of is the arrows they look like they don't belong

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 04:27 PM
yo Krok1er google color theory or somethin cuz yer colors are hurtin man.no offense,jus sayin it.try not to leave apart of your piece blank either.its not bad,but I dont see very much personal style,look at other writers an try to develop your own.test what colors look good next to each other.

ObeyTheMustard
04-19-2008, 04:48 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/35d2814.jpg
crits?

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 04:52 PM
i like it, but the outline should have been a different color too close to the orange fill, oh and try not to put so much white highlight

kroc_oner
04-19-2008, 05:36 PM
thnks for the crits ya i suck with colors
arode the 3d is good and i like your color scheme

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 05:38 PM
Some more :p

http://i30.tinypic.com/qz3x2v.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/119ynhu.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-19-2008, 05:45 PM
the O kinda looks like a Q in my opinion try not to make it go from the middle... try bringing it across from the top more

seywhat
04-19-2008, 06:27 PM
astro got some hot s's

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 06:41 PM
yo astro that blue piece is bangin.
on the second one some parts look all sketched style (bottom of the As legs)I think its look cool if you went with that a lil more throughout.
Arode-lookin good.try puttin somethin more original than a dollor sign in the hole of the A
feel like a purple outline woulda looked sick.overall pretty clean.

atlok7
04-19-2008, 06:49 PM
hahaha all you can suck my nuts, you cant even do simples an you say im wack? hahaha, especially you atlok. with your wack wildstyles, i honestly dont know why these kids jock your steeze son.

and emel, its a fucking forum. its meant for posting comments, your insults receive a failing grade.

haha i bet i can do better simps than you. just the one time mass called me out i did it in 10 mins and he called it sloppy. plus your like 20 and i would still rape the shit out of you in a battle. im not trying to be cocky, but just speaking the truth.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-19-2008, 06:53 PM
Glad you're not being cocky

my.favorite.addiction
04-19-2008, 06:54 PM
damn chill out the both of you!
atlok has better style BECAUSE hes prolly put in more work.so work hard THEN show someone up,not the reverse.

atlok7
04-19-2008, 06:56 PM
Glad you're not being cocky

dude i called him out for a battle a little while ago but he wouldnt

joshthesk8ter5
04-19-2008, 07:00 PM
wow atlok i just peeped those nikes on your space omg so dope...

p.s. jetpack atlok would destroy you, have you seen his work? lol

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 07:03 PM
the fuck is wrong with you? i said one thing and you get all butt hurt? haha an your tellin me to get a life. like i said before bro, get the fuck off my tip, keep my name out your mouth, it aint a dick.

ill give crits once im done eating. wanna get that in my stomach before its cold
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5404/reign9ic5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

atlok7
04-19-2008, 07:14 PM
wow atlok i just peeped those nikes on your space omg so dope...


yo thanks dude

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 07:22 PM
arode, im feelin it man. the only thing i dont like is the $ in the A. try making it a hole, like your O or D

astro, the S is a lot better, but the O, like forsaqen said, looks like a Q. keep working with it. it looks good.

and atlok, if battling me is gonna make you slelep better. than painted pieces

emel
04-19-2008, 07:23 PM
you both suck at simples stop arguing over whos better becuase even if your better than the other in the end no matter what, your both pretty bad..

atlok7
04-19-2008, 07:25 PM
ok thats fine with me. whens the dead line?

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 07:27 PM
monday. just in case in you feel like bunnin heavy instead of painting tomorrow.. names or specific word?

La Coka Nostra
04-19-2008, 07:33 PM
tons of pictures coming up.
just got ahold of a camera.
here's everything in my book worth posting.
all from 07-08
i dont particularly need or want crits
i develop on my own
just sharing with the world :D
let me know what you think






http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture229.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture230.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture231.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture232.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture235.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture236.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture237.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture238.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm148/reco_suave/Picture239.jpg

Mass Appeal
04-19-2008, 07:36 PM
please guys...will you just both shut up..your both between you wasting pages..the last 5 pages have been dedicated to atlok , jetpack , forsqauen , joshlikestoskatboard and myfavouriteaddiction...seriously...just shut the FUCK up and QUIT arguing..ATLOK your such a shit steerer its unbeliveable....just quit replying to everything bad thing that is said to you...just ignore it if you dont think its right

all of you stop wasting pages and get on with what your here for..graffiti..if you want to argue and act hard...go do it in REAL life...yes because some of you seem to have forgotten this whole forum world is entirely fictional as none of you know whom each other is...you could be Hitler and peeps wouldnt know...ATLOK would be Bin Laden i must say.

but yah..shut up.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/dvgsdf.jpg

and bump over your remarkabley boring posts.
reign..ill do a new background on this next peice..you doin good shit..but remeber..bar widths HAVE to be ALL the SAME WIDTH

WROK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/sdfeeweew.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/eee.jpg

oakstr1
04-19-2008, 08:22 PM
dope ^^ second one be so fresh.

La Coka Nostra - not feelin your R n E's

Capo Izi
04-19-2008, 08:22 PM
capo- there's nothin wrong with experimenting, but i dont think iv seen any simples from you (i havent really looked) post some up. then we will judge you


My most simple simples are right here..

One is 3 weeks old, the other one is 1 week old, I haven't done any in a while, but yeah here...

http://a363.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_b2037107ed02ddb91614eda6509aa742.jpg


http://a20.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_f98e9da4ec154273ddc8fcf4c8b2557b.jpg

seywhat
04-19-2008, 08:25 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/caisexchange.jpg
cais exchange
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/esoleeee.jpg
finally colored
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/kaspexchange.jpg
kasp exchange

capo- keep bars the same width
mass- dope, i really dig your throwie style
reign- your gettin alot better, lose the arrows and keep sketchin
astro- i like your style, real clean
arode- use bars, keep everything the same height

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 08:39 PM
WROK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/sdfeeweew.jpg

im really feelin this mass, nice job on the background. im diggin the two coor scheme. we should do an exhange sometime.

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/6158/reign0rv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

wesos
04-19-2008, 09:18 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/sherly.jpg
any tips on what should or not change?

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-19-2008, 09:21 PM
Needs more arrows.

PabloESKObar
04-19-2008, 09:41 PM
Needs more cowbell.

sketch3
04-19-2008, 09:45 PM
Not Enuf Do Dads An Ur Letters Are To Structerd, Experiment

Fube
04-19-2008, 09:56 PM
Needs more cowbell.

http://soundboard.com/sb/christopherwalken.aspx

COLOR192
04-19-2008, 10:49 PM
been out for a while...

La Coka Nostra: not feelin u're Os nor u're Rs
Mass: SWEET! lovin u're style
Capo: i dont like u're chars
Caisone: 1st and last are cool, but the 2nd could be better
Reign: Simple but so sweet!
Wesos: not feelin that at all

simple stuff i did today:
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5229/semttulo00100001ip3.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 11:01 PM
tazer, its not bad at all. decent letter structure. some of your lines arn't straight and your E would probably look better with a larger hole in it, same with the A, rather than those black dots. but it looks good man

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2228/reign10vq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jersOneTIC
04-19-2008, 11:11 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9762/terfyh1.jpg

Roolete
04-19-2008, 11:12 PM
jers very nice. we should do another sticker trade im all out of yours

SAID
04-19-2008, 11:13 PM
jetpack: not feelin the arrows brotha.
jers: looks good except for those stars in your letters and the character looks outta place and needs some work.

La Coka Nostra
04-19-2008, 11:28 PM
jers, your shits been nice for a while
the r kinda looks like a K though
a couple more

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7595/picture226am5.jpg
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4268/picture227ru2.jpg
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9026/picture228xz1.jpg

new style im trying to work on
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3179/picture233px1.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 11:32 PM
tazer, its not bad at all. decent letter structure. some of your lines arn't straight and your E would probably look better with a larger hole in it, same with the A, rather than those black dots. but it looks good man

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2228/reign10vq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

recon, the first one is good. but the rest are kinna meh. the third has potentional if you made the R bigger. i like the E and C on it. keep sketching, you got the idea.

jers, it looks ill, but i agree with coka nostra, your R looks a lot like a K.

Cin123
04-19-2008, 11:37 PM
La Coka Nostra- im not feelin the style, tryn 2 work on the simps but dope character
jers- this is the toy section, wrong post thread :P
jetpack- im feelin that a lot keep it up

kroc_oner
04-19-2008, 11:37 PM
recon stay with the first one if u dont wanan do simples just saying reign its nice getting better constantly

La Coka Nostra
04-19-2008, 11:41 PM
the first one is my least fav out of all of em lol
i'm more of a throw up kinda guy than pieces
wasn't expecting that much negative criticism
but im not gonna take it like a bitch like some people in here
back to the drawing board

oh, and reign.
i would try a capital E instead of lowercase to match the rest of your letters.

JETPACK!!
04-19-2008, 11:45 PM
ive been trying it with a capital E, for some reason it always ruins my flow. iunno why. personally i think the lowercase E flows better with the G because of the round bottoms, and where there placed i find it flows better.

thanks though

atlok7
04-19-2008, 11:51 PM
ok jetpack, own names 3 colors minimum, pieces

-GEKS-
04-19-2008, 11:56 PM
coka- diggin the 2nd one, and the charac to go with it

dont really like the other 2

and reign- that actually has really good flow didnt notice till u said that about the g and e but now i see the r and n are similar and the g and e are similar and the i is symetrical so it flows mad nice props

La Coka Nostra
04-20-2008, 12:09 AM
damn jetpack..i wish i had my camera still...i'd show you what im thinking
like...a capital E with like a round bottom
idk
props tho.
do you.
thanks geks

garbage down tha way
04-20-2008, 12:36 AM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9026/picture228xz1.jpg

this is dope, this nugga aint gettin the respect he deserves. i think its dope you're developing on your own, its different than all these internet graff writers popping up with the same letters.

fonone
04-20-2008, 12:40 AM
the second wan is real nice hidden.

cant wait to see the atlok/jetpack battle haha. i think we all know whos going to get their ass kicked.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 12:43 AM
Jetpack has better letters, atlok is a jew. so it will be close

La Coka Nostra
04-20-2008, 12:46 AM
good lookin garbage.
i try.
hidden technique, your fill is dope

atlok7
04-20-2008, 01:00 AM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/801/laurensimpleds7.jpg
for my girl

-GEKS-
04-20-2008, 01:01 AM
teknike- u improved a lot, second piece is illy except the squiggles not feelin them

other person above me- seems to be more extensions on the left then the right, balance that out
course the girly wont notice the nittygritty ish like that hahaha she'll be on yo dick fo sho!

atlok7
04-20-2008, 01:05 AM
haha yeah and the u is a bit to short, but i guess only rots and jetpack are gonna give me shit for that. she will have no clue

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 01:10 AM
Woah don't put a fucking jewcurse on me

atlok7
04-20-2008, 01:27 AM
yo rots what should i improve on in my simple

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 01:32 AM
if i was at home i would paint it out for you.

the bars on your L and E dont line up, the R is just crippled, put the poor deformed bastard child out of its misery. The left side of your U is slightly thinner and lazier than the right, your letters could stand to be much taller, the overlap on the top of your A looks funky and you have the dragonballs as a 3D fill. And overall, it's just boring

AnteUp
04-20-2008, 01:37 AM
women seem to like more boring peices. dont ask me why. but i think its dandy for the girl. ;)

atlok7
04-20-2008, 01:39 AM
yeah you might need to paint that out when you get home

useDone
04-20-2008, 02:31 AM
new throw style on a new name, used.
http://inlinethumb40.webshots.com/38823/2191881040103341352S600x600Q85.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2191881040103341352goURmA)
Du character throw, for recent/old name Dusk
http://inlinethumb60.webshots.com/39675/2642949960103341352S600x600Q85.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2642949960103341352lBBwqY)
used simple. workin with bars/ d is a litte jacked i know.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk320/devotionmedia/0411081354-2.jpg

COLOR192
04-20-2008, 04:49 AM
Used: 1st and 2nd aren't bad. on the last one, change u're E and D.

jsut finished this one http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6775/semttulo00130001wu4.jpg

crappy quality cause I had to take a pic w/ my web

useDone
04-20-2008, 11:05 AM
Used: 1st and 2nd aren't bad. on the last one, change u're E and D.

jsut finished this one http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6775/semttulo00130001wu4.jpg

crappy quality cause I had to take a pic w/ my web

bars homie. make all the letters the same depth. stay simple.
and thnks.

MarOne...
04-20-2008, 11:29 AM
Used- Don't extend the middle bar in your 'e' like that. Make sure all of your letters are the same size as well. Keep it up.

new-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke4.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke5.jpg

any ideas on what I can do with my E? I hate it.

oakstr1
04-20-2008, 11:31 AM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/801/laurensimpleds7.jpg
for my girl

his girl aint gonna care about the little details. but it looks pretty dope.

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 12:08 PM
yo atlok, i like the orange. its got a nice feel to it. try making the N an actual letter rather than putting it in the bubble. i was tryin to pronounce her name an was like... laure?? took me a third look to see the N. make the E a bit shorter, so it lines up with the L and U. that way youve got a kinna small, big, small, big, small steeze going. the bar on your E gets thinner towards the top. and bring the star in your R a bit more up, that way it looks like the bar of the kick on your R fits under it. if you get what what im sayin. looks good. im lookin forward to the battle yo

mar, i like the E, but try bringing the back bar up a bit so its parallel with the spine on your K, i know it flows with the O. but next to the K it leaves a bit of dead space.

sKetCh_0092
04-20-2008, 12:24 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture016-1.jpg

tell me what you think

just graffiti
04-20-2008, 12:37 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/120mgdz.jpg

pretty shitty. i was high when i drew it. its a dark pic and some pretty shitty pen sketching lol

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 12:42 PM
sketch, take off at least half those extenions, if not all of them, they look wack. just do simple letters with no extentions for a bit. keep your bars the same width. the bar on your K is too thin, it could be mistaken for an extension. the cleanest letter in there is your E.. the rest are pretty much hidden by your extensions.

chel, its not bad, thicken up your bars, you have more deadspace than you need. and take off those spike things on your C and L

sKetCh_0092
04-20-2008, 12:50 PM
Hey thanks JETpack for the crits... here are some more i got
some are old

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture028.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture027.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture026.jpg
This is in japanese

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture025.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture024.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture023.jpg

Tell me what you think...

Bah Humbug
04-20-2008, 12:53 PM
sketch-they all look pretty dope

sKetCh_0092
04-20-2008, 12:59 PM
thanks bah humbug

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 01:13 PM
the last ones the best. the first couple are too overkill. too many loops, curves, whatever. keep it as simple as you can get for a while, build up some steeze with letters. than put extensions on. the better letter structure you have with simple letters the better they will look with extensions and add-ons when you finally add them. do a sketch thats just plain, block letters. and build up from there. it may sound boring and gay. but unfortunatly, its what you gotta do.

they all look good. but many are hard to find the actual letters. like your first, second and third

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 01:37 PM
sketch the blue one u first posted was dope just to many chizzels it looks like its drippin i like it

Mader
04-20-2008, 02:30 PM
hey im new at this forum theres some dope writters here
what do you people think about this piece i complicated a lot more of my style
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/804/rfffqb1.jpg
sorry about my bad english

sketch3
04-20-2008, 02:33 PM
sketch, take off at least half those extenions, if not all of them, they look wack. just do simple letters with no extentions for a bit. keep your bars the same width. the bar on your K is too thin, it could be mistaken for an extension. the cleanest letter in there is your E.. the rest are pretty much hidden by your extensions.

chel, its not bad, thicken up your bars, you have more deadspace than you need. and take off those spike things on your C and L

the fuck you talkin about i didnt even post anythin

IlikePie
04-20-2008, 02:49 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a339/death0092/Picture016-1.jpg

tell me what you think

He's talking about this guy.

SCIEnce802
04-20-2008, 02:59 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2792/pieceeeeee002ut8.jpg
the extensions should be a little different...
it would look good painted for sure.

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 03:01 PM
mader, the M and A are decent. but the rest just looks liks scribles, i can see a D and E. but its crowded, ugly and sloppy. dont run bars through your letters either.

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/525/reign11ne2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2008, 04:52 PM
should curve ur r and E not straighten them!

Allthegoodnamesaretaken
04-20-2008, 04:55 PM
mader, the M and A are decent. but the rest just looks liks scribles, i can see a D and E. but its crowded, ugly and sloppy. dont run bars through your letters either.

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/525/reign11ne2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

You're on the right track man! keep it up... You should start hitting up freights

Capo Izi
04-20-2008, 05:01 PM
Just some simpler stuff...
http://a288.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/8/l_9ed9ad0c7e71d832557e135072a0eea7.jpg

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2008, 05:03 PM
maybe simple but yet u do not kno the stucture of ur letters!

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 05:25 PM
Kill the green bubbles

Capo Izi
04-20-2008, 05:32 PM
^K


maybe simple but yet u do not kno the stucture of ur letters!

..umm, what the fuck? Its almost perfect bars, theres no addons or extensions, except the A.....how is that not structured?

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 06:28 PM
lol capo your bars suck use the tutorial in new to graff it helps

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 06:31 PM
capo, keep your letters consistant, you dont need seperate bars to make one letter.


should curve ur r and E not straighten them!

hows this?

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1060/reign12mu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-ShAmEE-
04-20-2008, 06:37 PM
yeah baby! maybe u should take the conextion off the arrows and just have the arrows facing outwards.

Capo Izi
04-20-2008, 06:46 PM
lol capo your bars suck use the tutorial in new to graff it helps


how many damn times do I have to say I've read it front to back...how do my bars suck?...they are bent almost the same width all the way threw...


capo, keep your letters consistant, you dont need seperate bars to make one letter.

I know I don't...but I've done tons of basic ones, I've seen people do stuff like this, so why can't I?

honestly, I'm confused on how my bars are that terrible?

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 07:02 PM
capo cause i dunno how to explain it but bars dont need to be seperate they can be conected yours look like there bout to break off

Capo Izi
04-20-2008, 07:10 PM
dude...i know they can be connected...but there are hundreds of thousands of styles, and I saw someone do something like this, and was like hey wtf why not....so I did....trust me go into the graffiti world theres loads of non-connected bars...actually most pieces and burners are like this....I mean obviously mine is shit compared to them, but you know what I mean.

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 07:37 PM
ya im just saying it doesnt look good the way u do it try and do sum connected ones

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 07:44 PM
good Reign..improving fast...just drop those arrows..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rer.jpg

APHER..
ill do a sketch for whoever guesses what Pistol that is first ^ !

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 07:49 PM
mac 10. although it looks like a desert eagle with a short barrel

capo, do whatever you want man, im just saying what i think would look better.

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 07:51 PM
Jet pack is so close....if he switched around what he thinks and what he knows hes got it..but will someone get the EXACT answer before him ! ...

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 07:53 PM
your desert eagle sucks the barrells are much longer

BIGel
04-20-2008, 07:59 PM
good Reign..improving fast...just drop those arrows..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rer.jpg

APHER..
ill do a sketch for whoever guesses what Pistol that is first ^ !

i dont really like how the second half of all your letters are thin, it just doesnt seem to flow to me. i liked that more uniform shit you were doing awhile back.

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 08:05 PM
ha thanks BigEl..ill work onit man..
and Jetpack..fuck you bitch....i WAS gonn do you a sketch but NO ! HOE BAG haha

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 08:11 PM
ok then since your doin mine on another forum im not gonan ask here lol

HRbN
04-20-2008, 08:20 PM
Technically it could be a desert eagle they come in both 44mag and a 50cal the 50 is the longer more triangular barrel that you speak of. So it infact resembles a 44 mag Desert eagle..... :)

They also were produced as i .357 which allowed a higher capacity magazine holding 9 rounds instead of the 50's 7 or the 44's 8. It was also introduced back in 1987 i beleive as a .41 caliber and was made by magnum research inc. and Isreali militant industries. Later a new frame would be made in some time in the 90's that would be used for all the different calibers differing from the early models that each used a different frame. So really it could be any number of desert eagles haha there alittle history lesson fo ya

That and it was a good reason to be a smart ass i love those guns


http://www.stupidbeaver.com/wp-content/images/bestpistols/desert-eagle.JPG

Desipher
04-20-2008, 08:26 PM
.

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 08:34 PM
not feelin the colors bro, but lets see it once its done.

mass.. suck my giant p3n0rz.. figuritivly(sP):)

im not feeling the arrows as much without the extenions shame

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8762/reign13oh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Allthegoodnamesaretaken
04-20-2008, 08:38 PM
not feelin the colors bro, but lets see it once its done.

mass.. suck my giant p3n0rz.. figuritivly(sP):)

im not feeling the arrows as much without the extenions shame

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8762/reign13oh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

try making the R extend over the I, the N extend under the G and the arrows should face each other by going in 3 parallel loops you should make the I alot thicker, and give it some swirls.

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 08:53 PM
ha yeah..Desert Eagles are crazy..so powerfull..but they have mega recoil !...they nearly break your wrist..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/4r234.jpg

guess that gun then ^ ...whoever guesses first ill do their name
and Kroc i was joking about the whole name thing hahah...i was expecting people to get it..this one i think is a wee bit harder........

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 08:55 PM
F90, or P90, people call em different things. im diggin the forcefield rather than a background. shoot a DE one handed and it probably will break your wrist if youve never fired a gun before.

Allthegoodnamesaretaken
04-20-2008, 08:55 PM
I'll take a guess that its the P90 with a silencer and a scope

Allthegoodnamesaretaken
04-20-2008, 08:55 PM
damn jetpack!

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 08:56 PM
if this was the old west. you've be dead... cuz im one second faster

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 08:56 PM
ahah i suppose ill do a REIGN...I's G's and N's are wank i hate them

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 08:58 PM
awww damn lmfao then wanna do an exchange

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 09:00 PM
sure man..ill do both asap...aight thats enough post whoring for tonight peace yall !

Desipher
04-20-2008, 09:19 PM
probly a red dot never heard of p90's havin scopes

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 09:26 PM
ofcourse they can have scopes..its what the top rail is for...ACOG scopes are alwaysed used on them among many other scopes.

Desipher
04-20-2008, 09:45 PM
o cool ya i knew some came with a built in red dot but ya ddidnt think :P

PabloESKObar
04-20-2008, 09:57 PM
It's a P90!
(I don't care if I'm late, I want a sketch :( )

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 10:02 PM
Mass apeal i f**king love your style, the guns and shit are so dope

HRbN
04-20-2008, 10:34 PM
aight this is just stage one and theres alot i dont like about it but i think itll come together better with some color. Lemme know how much you guys hate it haha says PHAZER in a new style im TOYing with :)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6981/phazerxd9.jpg

The E definately has to go lol

Mass Appeal
04-20-2008, 10:37 PM
that has a real old school feel to it..the R could use work..but i love that Z

La Coka Nostra
04-20-2008, 10:37 PM
only letter i like is the p

-Leski
04-20-2008, 10:43 PM
Still rocking straight simples but I tried fattening up my handstyle letters.
Think I'll keep playing with it.
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3929/geski5jt1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

HRbN: (Phaser?) The H looks weird with it being cut in half, E needs work, take off the backwards extension off the bottom of the R.
Otherwise I looks pretty sweet, kinda 60's album sleeve cover style. Keep it up.

Mass; Looks good just rocking a simple outline, I do like your other stuff too though.

kroc_oner
04-20-2008, 11:01 PM
herbn i think u should stay with tht style

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 11:20 PM
this is a thing i did for an exchange with swiv3lone, let me know what you think

http://i30.tinypic.com/2wbursz.jpg