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JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 10:22 PM
i like that, its fresh. the colors, the flow. it works bro. keep it up, if you dont mind, id like an exchange sometime

atlok7
04-20-2008, 10:22 PM
josh- i think thats kinda dope in its own special way. the style has potential foshow

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 10:25 PM
thanks both, yeah jetpack ill exchange with you ill do something right now... what do you write?

JETPACK!!
04-20-2008, 10:35 PM
reign. ill get crackin on an astro tomorrow morning.

"Bi2aR"
04-20-2008, 10:35 PM
some of my better stuff i guess

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0004-3.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0002-7.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0004.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0005-2.jpg
(missed some 3d on this one)

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 10:37 PM
dude, that first bizar is pretty sick, it wouldve been perfect if some of your lines werent wobbily

Soboe!
04-20-2008, 10:42 PM
no, that first one of bizar's is bunk. those add ons are horrible. make my eyes bleed... sorry man dont ever do those add ons again
also, dont do backwards B's...

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 10:45 PM
haha why you dissin his shit wheres yours?

Soboe!
04-20-2008, 10:46 PM
all over bs :)

Soboe!
04-20-2008, 10:48 PM
for some reason Proper the mod and Cile (account: BORG) really like this one. i hate it
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080316_1.jpg
its also old

joshthesk8ter5
04-20-2008, 10:54 PM
damn thats dope, real unique, most people have the same style as each other

Soboe!
04-20-2008, 10:59 PM
your the same man, its unique and has potential, well im off to edmonton in the morning. so piece fellaz i hope to come back with some sexfull sketches!

-Leski
04-20-2008, 11:06 PM
^AB?

-nvm, It's really not any of my buisness anyways. :P

Allthegoodnamesaretaken
04-20-2008, 11:18 PM
Bizar you arent the first one to think of the name Bizarre theres a writer here that writes it.
Some of it is dated back to 01 I think, something like that.
I bet theres also a whole bunch of other cats who write bizar too.. So Lay off the Ones.. in fact, everybody lay of the ones I'm sick of seeing those stupid 'ONE ONER 1 WON' its getting pretty gay imo

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 11:19 PM
Woah jump off Zephyr's teste's dude.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-20-2008, 11:21 PM
That was directed at Herbn. It looks 'old school' because it's a complete zeph jock.

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 12:22 AM
^I was gonna say something like that too....honestly HUGE Zeph bite...Zeph like invented that old school kinda cali feel(even tho he was NYC)..mans a god, so don't chomp him...

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 01:01 AM
New piece...

http://a207.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/102/l_578b0dffa5e550f2dc2bd55a0f6c98a6.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-21-2008, 01:33 AM
3d's cool

HRbN
04-21-2008, 02:27 AM
honestly i wasnt going for a zephyr bite but now that you mention it, it does look alot like some of his stuff minus the bubble work. Eh i didnt have his shit in mind while i was doing it so... maybe some tweaks to make it look alittle different but that one was not a purposeful bite by any means. Old school look yes but zeph no. I dig his shit alot so maybe in the back of my mind but it wasnt on purpose, that was done sketchin in my room with none of his shit anywhere near so... hate all you want, influenced maybe but bite no.

NoCanControl
04-21-2008, 11:08 AM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0015.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0024.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0025.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
04-21-2008, 11:31 AM
I only like the stick... the rest were a let down while i was scrolling

The stick is nice.. but can't really tell the letters and you went to town a lil to much with the silver

La Coka Nostra
04-21-2008, 11:32 AM
i dig the highlights on the third one

Mass Appeal
04-21-2008, 12:02 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture-3.jpg

Chump
04-21-2008, 01:06 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/vqe0uj7m3hwy9aby5mw4.jpg
new name... new throw..
crits?
Mass- Love the style...
"Bi2aR" - keep with the simple... your on your way...

evolbcw
04-21-2008, 01:09 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v405/afropimp/1six.jpg

sketch3
04-21-2008, 01:16 PM
i dont know wats worse that sketch or the fact ur a jew







actually nothings worse than bing a jew

evolbcw
04-21-2008, 01:17 PM
and who exactly is a jew???

Mader
04-21-2008, 01:23 PM
hey im new at this forum theres some dope writters here
what do you people think about this piece i complicated a lot more of my style
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/804/rfffqb1.jpg
sorry about my bad english
crits please

sketch3
04-21-2008, 01:24 PM
evol read the jew to grff thread,
it'll teach u the basics

mader calm it dwn

Chump
04-21-2008, 01:25 PM
give crits to get crits

evolbcw
04-21-2008, 01:26 PM
nah ill learn on my own ... dnt need a wack as website to teach me shit

Chump
04-21-2008, 01:27 PM
then why are you posting your shit...

JETPACK!!
04-21-2008, 01:27 PM
enjoy being wack for life.

-Leski
04-21-2008, 01:29 PM
Wow, your wack as hell and rejected any advice before you even took the time to find out whats in it.

Enjoy your short failure of a graffiti career.

-ShAmEE-
04-21-2008, 01:37 PM
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/525/reign11ne2.jpghttp://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8762/reign13oh9.jpg

notice the improvement!

Chump
04-21-2008, 01:39 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/vqe0uj7m3hwy9aby5mw4.jpg
new name... new throw..
crits?
Mass- Love the style...
"Bi2aR" - keep with the simple... your on your way...
bumb over all the jew talk...

Fube
04-21-2008, 01:53 PM
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/525/reign11ne2.jpghttp://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8762/reign13oh9.jpg

notice the improvement!

yes he made his letters thicker and there is less curves. WHO TOLD U TO DO THAT?!

muhahaha.;)

Atomik
04-21-2008, 01:57 PM
any crits on these 2
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-21-08_1137.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-21-08_1128.jpg

NoCanControl
04-21-2008, 02:13 PM
nah ill learn on my own ... dnt need a wack as website to teach me shit

hahahaha, and i like how you put 'toys get up.'

B-A

Mass Appeal
04-21-2008, 02:17 PM
evol read the jew to grff thread,


HAHhahHAHhHHAAHAHAHHA

-ShAmEE-
04-21-2008, 02:23 PM
nah ill learn on my own ... dnt need a wack as website to teach me shit

THIS SITE DOSENT WANT TO TEACH U

GO FUCK UR SELF SIDE WAYS BY UR MOTHER!

Atomik
04-21-2008, 03:24 PM
reign i like that its clean and simple
bump for crits

any crits on these 2
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-21-08_1137.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-21-08_1128.jpg

Chump
04-21-2008, 03:28 PM
give crits to get crits...

Mader
04-21-2008, 03:39 PM
shamee-take out does arrows and keep up thosse simples
Atomik-dope shit
chump-work on your H i think its looks wack the drips at the end
here some new shit BUMP for CRITS the name "spot" is a nightclub that im allwais going
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8509/spotld5.jpg

Bah Humbug
04-21-2008, 03:43 PM
ya atomic the blue & purple one is my fave
i like the T in that spot piece

Atomik
04-21-2008, 03:48 PM
thanks and mader try going for a more simple look.

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 04:11 PM
New piece...

http://a207.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/102/l_578b0dffa5e550f2dc2bd55a0f6c98a6.jpg

Bump

Madar-umm...get some markers, and work on the 3d...and yeah use some bars, go SIMPLE..

Chump-nice throw, just I don't like the drippy things on the H, otherwise not bad.

Atomik-all that stuff is pretty damn killer, love it, maybe just work on structure a little more, but the 3D is nice on all of them.

Jetpack-your stuff is getting so good and clean.

Mader
04-21-2008, 04:32 PM
nice shit Capo like the characters
i use bars the markers i dont no how to find good ones here in portugal

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 04:43 PM
I just have some crayola shit for now till I get some decos or prismas, don't you have crayola...you can get a 50 pack for like $9 here....

HRbN
04-21-2008, 04:50 PM
haha jew to graff that shit cracked me up.

Mader that S is no bueno. the t has some tightness ponetial but the little extensions on the s kill the whole peice

Im all about my sharpies, apperently they come in all sorts of colors.

Mader
04-21-2008, 06:00 PM
yhea but there are so expensive here in portugal its like 4 euros a pen
i prefere work on the letters you lost many time coloring the piece
and i do most of my pieces in school its rar i color my piece most of my sketches are only using a pencil

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 07:08 PM
2 things wrong with that, you really only need black and silver sharpies, crayola shit works and is a lot cheaper, color makes your stuff pop, and you need to learn color use too...

and also, practicing at school is bad, unless you are just doing chars or other stuff, never do your name...

HRbN
04-21-2008, 07:12 PM
sharpies are cheap, permanant and come in cool colors, and are way better than those bic mark its

Crit it up, its finished. And if all your going to say is it looks way to much like zeph's shit then i get it, it does look similiar but ill tweak it more so it doesnt next sketch. So just crit the color work if thats how you feel.

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2293/phazerfillea5.jpg
Threw in a vato handie haha

Teez-EmM!!!
04-21-2008, 07:13 PM
i dont know wats worse that sketch or the fact ur a jew








actually nothings worse than bing a jew
this is bull shit. go to hell faggot

Teez-EmM!!!
04-21-2008, 07:25 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1001.jpg
dont even know what i was thinking with this colour sceme

yo phazer its preatyy dope but the extention on ur r should look more like the one on the back of ur h
this preatty much got ignord any crits??

HRbN
04-21-2008, 07:27 PM
WAY to much going on inside your letters. and the backwards S is no bueno. You said it yourself you dont know what you were thinking with that color scheme. that somes it up

"Bi2aR"
04-21-2008, 07:29 PM
no, that first one of bizar's is bunk. those add ons are horrible. make my eyes bleed... sorry man dont ever do those add ons again
also, dont do backwards B's...
i'll take the whole don't do them add-ons thing, but i'm not sure about about the backwords b. I like doing those.

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 07:34 PM
sharpies are cheap, permanant and come in cool colors, and are way better than those bic mark its

Crit it up, its finished. And if all your going to say is it looks way to much like zeph's shit then i get it, it does look similiar but ill tweak it more so it doesnt next sketch. So just crit the color work if thats how you feel.

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2293/phazerfillea5.jpg
Threw in a vato handie haha

Well yeah I support Sharpies ten times more than Bic Mark its, but I meant for a WIDE range of colors use Crayola super tips, they have like 100 colors, sharpies I only use the white, black, and silver one cause they are permanent and are bold, but they only have about 35 colors, its not as wide a range.

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 08:22 PM
http://a207.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/102/l_578b0dffa5e550f2dc2bd55a0f6c98a6.jpg

Madar-umm...get some markers, and work on the 3d...and yeah use some bars, go SIMPLE..

Chump-nice throw, just I don't like the drippy things on the H, otherwise not bad.

Atomik-all that stuff is pretty damn killer, love it, maybe just work on structure a little more, but the 3D is nice on all of them.

Jetpack-your stuff is getting so good and clean.

Bump, got no crits....

Also another new one..

http://a135.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/59/l_dfa027ae2a9437d44f2618bd5f8fe386.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-21-2008, 08:22 PM
dude, get off the crayolas.
steal some prismas.

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 08:27 PM
^I know man I need them like hell, but I've said it in a few threads, theres one Micheals an hour away, and they only sell a 58, and 160 pack, and a complete 200 something pack...and it's only the boxes, you have to bring it to the counter and they get the actual pack, so theres no way to get shit....sucks ass. So I need $70, $120, or $210....which I DON'T have...

atlok7
04-21-2008, 08:30 PM
dude that sucks! our michaels is so simple to rack shit

TaskOne
04-21-2008, 08:36 PM
Some Recent Sketches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word017.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word014.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word015.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word010.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word005.jpg

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 08:56 PM
dude that sucks! our michaels is so simple to rack shit


Yeah man, the only way I can get them, is exchanges(I have like nothing anyway), donations(anyone?), or saving up a shit load of cash.

SWIV3Lone
04-21-2008, 09:05 PM
ive been 2 a site and prismas r like 1/2 off... ill tryn find it fer u

La Coka Nostra
04-21-2008, 09:25 PM
task, 1st one kinda looks like it says masn

Evasion Of Invasion
04-21-2008, 09:39 PM
Cap - thats alot better ur simples are lookin cooler
TASK - HOT
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01171.jpg
crits?

joshthesk8ter5
04-21-2008, 09:44 PM
some exchanges...lemme now what you think.

http://i26.tinypic.com/fz13ki.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/mszuau.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/qohnaq.jpg

Fl3m 1
04-21-2008, 09:56 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210396.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210397.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210398.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210399.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210400.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c212/mleighty/P4210401.jpg

SALLY
ASMA
FLEM
ASPECT

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 10:00 PM
so yeah what do you guys think of these two...only got one crit total on both..

http://a207.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/102/l_578b0dffa5e550f2dc2bd55a0f6c98a6.jpg

http://a135.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/59/l_dfa027ae2a9437d44f2618bd5f8fe386.jpg

Crits PLEASE

josh-that shits all tight, the bottom one especially

Task-shits awesome, that throw is dope, and the second one down I love how you used the slaps, love 'em, and of course the last one

Teez-calm that shit down, cool on the inside, and do it a little more simple

Phazer-I do like it, but honestly it does look almost exactly like a Zeph piece I saw once....

JETPACK!!
04-21-2008, 10:03 PM
astro, i like that reign, although it would look a lot better if the E was lowercase, looks good though man. did i do one for you? or did i forget about you?

not bad flem, although several of your pieces dont flow too well. the letter structure seems to be there, good job. keep sketching

evade, i like your steeze. except i dont like the deadspace between your letters. your pieces ALWAYS have too much space between the letters.

capo, the first one is alright, but loose the add ons, like the qoutes and the star. for the second, i wouldnt bring the bar of the P so far down, and i would have put the O beside, the same size.

new sketch. my next sketch, im gonna lower the right bar of the N a bit and bring the left bar under the G a bit, like the kick of the R.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7240/reign14ou4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hazetheone
04-21-2008, 10:08 PM
IM NOT HATING
but that looks exactly like all the other ones except for the three dee
change it up a bit now start moving letters around
yor good enough now

JETPACK!!
04-21-2008, 10:23 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


HAZE!!

you fucking hater!










nah, i kid. yeah, it was a quick sketch. but i cant seem to get good add ons an do-dads. they always seem to take away from the sketch.

atlok7
04-21-2008, 10:26 PM
who cares man. just take some "risks" . its just paper. experiment with letter shapes and extensions. i think your at that level now

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 10:32 PM
^Just practice with shit, also maybe try to go with straight stuff instead of curves, that way addons are easier, or tip your bars, or yeah, look at the big boy blackbook thread, and get ideas, don't bite just take in and incorporate, thats what I do...or yeah...TRY to do lol...

JETPACK!!
04-21-2008, 10:34 PM
yee, im gonna have to steeze up my letters, no doubt. but im not much of an add on/extension guy. but im gonna have to learn to love it. word is bond

i dont bite, i try not to use others for inspiration either. i wanna get my own steeze down.

atlok7
04-21-2008, 10:38 PM
yeah everyone looks at others for inspiration, thats how graff is what it is today. each persons individual style is based off a bunch of role model styles that they carried with them with or without knowing it

SWIV3Lone
04-21-2008, 10:55 PM
yee, im gonna have to steeze up my letters, no doubt. but im not much of an add on/extension guy. but im gonna have to learn to love it. word is bond

i dont bite, i try not to use others for inspiration either. i wanna get my own steeze down.

u dont need them its called old school aka the best school

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 11:02 PM
^lol, well you don't NEED them, but he is already pretty steeze without them, and so to go on develop shit with addons would be crazy.

I mean now a days Old School isn't what keeps the streets....

IlikePie
04-21-2008, 11:07 PM
Old school is for the bandwagon.

SWIV3Lone
04-21-2008, 11:14 PM
oldschool is fer the fuckin g's.... i mean seriously letters come with time but a sick ass fill is fer only the straight killas born with the knowledge

IlikePie
04-21-2008, 11:23 PM
-.- Leave oldschool for the actual oldschool cats....

Capo Izi
04-21-2008, 11:53 PM
Yeah but no idiot can do a wildstyle 3D burner....

or something like this...

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/139/324586788_4abeda3ec6.jpg

(Yes Saber is technically an old school writer, but this isn't old school, and yes this is the biggest graffiti piece ever done, its almost as big as an entire football field...

SWIV3Lone
04-21-2008, 11:58 PM
actually sum1 covered that la river piece up with an mta roller about 10x bigger

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 12:02 AM
holy shit when?...pics please.


and honestly if its just a straight roller piece I'm gonna be pissed cause the LA River piece is epic and huge....

SWIV3Lone
04-22-2008, 12:10 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/2005494886_09e3053e70_o1.jpg

(just press zoom on the bottom right of ur screen if u cant see it.)
ya its a straight....i wonder wut saber wuz thinking seeing as his piece took 1 1/2 years... i mean they couldve done it in a diff spot

im wondering if ja had nething to do with this....

evade
04-22-2008, 12:17 AM
that mta spot is on the other side of the freeway man.....it doesn't cover the saber peice

IlikePie
04-22-2008, 12:20 AM
I was about to say that. You're an idiot Justin. Look at the buildings in the back ffs....

SWIV3Lone
04-22-2008, 12:22 AM
nah it cant be... dont u see the train tracks how both pieces r facing the same way and theres 2 tracks on each of the pics

Evasion Of Invasion
04-22-2008, 12:38 AM
^^^I hate you on so many fuckin levels... theres two sets of tracks on either side of the river look for ur self u dumb ass theres a train above his piece

La Coka Nostra
04-22-2008, 12:43 AM
who cares...so many people have dissed that saber piece anyways...
JA for example...

evade
04-22-2008, 12:45 AM
yeah swivel i dont think ur gettin it.... and yeah it's been dissed

Evasion Of Invasion
04-22-2008, 01:06 AM
^^^you battle for our name lets go

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 01:14 AM
woot it's not covered, I noticed it before I read the posts anyway its not covering it...but umm....why would people diss it?

Damn I love both writers too JA and Saber...I couldn't pick a side.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-22-2008, 01:19 AM
O GOD!!! U JUST OPENED THE BIGGEST CAN OF BEEF OF UR LIFE SON!! btw get rid of that sig u make urself look like a damn fool

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 03:01 AM
^lol, and yeah shit I was drunk, I don't know what I was doing, bad pic is gone........

Mader
04-22-2008, 08:28 AM
2 things wrong with that, you really only need black and silver sharpies, crayola shit works and is a lot cheaper, color makes your stuff pop, and you need to learn color use too...

and also, practicing at school is bad, unless you are just doing chars or other stuff, never do your name...

whats is the problem doing my name in school??

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 09:05 AM
school is like prison, would you tag your prison cell? i dont think so. its too easy to get caught in school. plus theres too many snitches. when the $500 reward goes out on your head. your gonna be sold out before the days though. plus you could get expelled, fines, charges.

its just not worth the trouble.

Mass Appeal
04-22-2008, 09:07 AM
great to see mazive conversations on JA and Saber...if i had a quid for the amount of times iv read about those two and that damn river peice id be a millionaire with my own 50000 ft river bank with a huge BEAT THIS SABER onit...:D haha just joking guys....

reign your gettting mega good man keep it up ! :D

ForGiven
04-22-2008, 10:29 AM
still tryin to keep it simple and get better wit colors. crits?
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk289/odieboy91/0416082032.jpg
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk289/odieboy91/0416082013.jpg

ForGiven
04-22-2008, 10:30 AM
how do you resize? for future refereence?

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 10:36 AM
open paint, put your picture on paint, resize it from there. upload it.

i'd loose the faces on the first piece. make your V more V-ish. and try to keep them on a line.

rsakens
04-22-2008, 10:36 AM
thats more like it ^ keep doing them simples forgiven

couple of quickies
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00086-1.jpg?t=1208877696
painted version
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/keanerestpaint.jpg?t=1208878546
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00088-2.jpg?t=1208878475
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00089-4.jpg?t=1208878497
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00041-3.jpg?t=1208878520
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00002-6.jpg?t=1208878571

ForGiven
04-22-2008, 10:42 AM
that last one is truly nice(in my opinion). it kills!! fo sho.

ForGiven
04-22-2008, 10:43 AM
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk289/odieboy91/0416082034.jpg

South-Pole
04-22-2008, 10:43 AM
^click on edit next to the picture on photobucket
i prefer the first one not feeling the second
edit:this was for Forgiven

rsakens:those simples are mad dope

I <3 CHROME:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image179.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image182.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/1842.jpg

reposts
Mute:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image178.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/004.jpg

throw up:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/005.jpg

LittleWeapon
04-22-2008, 11:14 AM
forgiven- go back to keyboard font simples
rsaken-try to write lighter with your pencil so wen you color you dont see the ugly lines u used to form your bars

my "simples"
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ugymug.jpg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-22-2008, 11:24 AM
If I wasn't so lazy, I would find a picture of Theme.

rsakens
04-22-2008, 11:32 AM
forgiven- go back to keyboard font simples
rsaken-try to write lighter with your pencil so wen you color you dont see the ugly lines u used to form your bars

my "simples"
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ugymug.jpg

lol does were pencil lines were i was to lazy to clean them up before the fill =]
like that red one you posted
E looks alright


^click on edit next to the picture on photobucket
i prefer the first one not feeling the second
edit:this was for Forgiven

rsakens:those simples are mad dope


thankx man
also like 1 of yours that
TRN simple here is cool
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image182.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-22-2008, 11:49 AM
^ Lol
Trane!

South-Pole
04-22-2008, 12:22 PM
^Lol
Torn!
i take off the O sometimes,when i don't feel doing my whole name

Mewter
04-22-2008, 01:58 PM
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm10/Mewter_one/DSC_0651.jpg
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm10/Mewter_one/DSC_0648.jpg
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm10/Mewter_one/DSC_0653.jpg


hi im new here at bs i noticed ther was a toy thread. i was wondering if im fit for the big boy thread

i write Mewter one

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-22-2008, 02:02 PM
We already have two REALLY good mewts.

Mewter
04-22-2008, 02:06 PM
so what does that mean where are the from im in socal

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-22-2008, 02:07 PM
Well one is from LA and paints all over south Cali so you're fucked on many many levels.

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/193/mewtbowserbaattlekj1.jpg

Top piece.

just sayin', people are gonna clown you on here. A lot.

Mewter
04-22-2008, 02:09 PM
wow shitty well i dont paint very often i usually do canvas and just drawings but does he paint like cardiff and solana beach area

Mewter
04-22-2008, 02:31 PM
well besides that how do my sketces look

c.n.k
04-22-2008, 02:46 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1248.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1254.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1253.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1251.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1249.jpg

milfhunter
04-22-2008, 02:46 PM
means u need o change up

Evasion Of Invasion
04-22-2008, 03:48 PM
Cap - thats alot better ur simples are lookin cooler
TASK - HOT
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01171.jpg
crits?
BUMP!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01192.jpg

Neuro I like ur stuff it all looks really good except the E's dont seen to flow in ur pieces other then in the first one

SAID
04-22-2008, 04:13 PM
wow shitty well i dont paint very often i usually do canvas and just drawings but does he paint like cardiff and solana beach area
just save yourselves the trouble and change your name kid.

Mewter
04-22-2008, 04:25 PM
thats gay tho i love wat i write

ForGiven
04-22-2008, 04:26 PM
whether its ur name or not i think ur stuff is dope.
new mewt that is.

Mewter
04-22-2008, 04:29 PM
thanks

does anyone know if some one writes fewr or fewer

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 04:30 PM
but it isnt
he lacks every bit of flow
his letters are week
and he is trying to hard to make it look like a wildstyle burner or something

Mewter
04-22-2008, 04:32 PM
yeah faget thats why im in the toy forum

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 04:42 PM
good one
sorry that i told you what was wrong after you asked
i didnt mean to hurt your feelings man

p.s. you spelled fagot wrong

South-Pole
04-22-2008, 04:46 PM
^click on edit next to the picture on photobucket
i prefer the first one not feeling the second
edit:this was for Forgiven

rsakens:those simples are mad dope

I <3 CHROME:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image179.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image182.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/1842.jpg

reposts
Mute:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image178.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/004.jpg

throw up:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/005.jpg

err,BUMP


evasion-get rid of the arrows

Mewter
04-22-2008, 04:47 PM
so did you faggot

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 04:51 PM
forgiven- go back to keyboard font simples
rsaken-try to write lighter with your pencil so wen you color you dont see the ugly lines u used to form your bars

my "simples"
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ugymug.jpg


If I wasn't so lazy, I would find a picture of Theme.


http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o207/askone44/IMGP0259.jpg


found it rots

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 04:51 PM
so did you faggot

battle me please i need it

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 04:54 PM
Both of you stop, especially you new Mewt, your structure is ok, but change your damn name, you have someone who is already up in your area writing the same name, and if no one in your area rights Fewr or Fewer then go for it, learn your areas history if you know someone who writes it stay away from it...

.Miles.
04-22-2008, 04:58 PM
crittsss
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2733/bokuyx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2733/bokuyx6.9630e1d510.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=bokuyx6.jpg)

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 04:58 PM
no matter what you write mewtr
you will always be a fagot
i rest my case

Mewter
04-22-2008, 04:59 PM
ive never seeen mewt so i thought it would work and im near the coast so he prolly writes inland san diego and i dont paint and i rarely ever tag so i usually do blackbook work and canvases and stuff but does someone know where i could pm him

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:03 PM
he will want to battle you
just leave it alone and write what you want
face the consequences
and battle me in the meantime

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 05:08 PM
me too, painted pieces. heat battle. that way i can win:D

AnteUp
04-22-2008, 05:09 PM
nevro, ditch the E. it doesnt flow, maybe novr?
south-i don't like like any of them. sorry.
miles-ditch the addons.
i hate all my shit lately...

H
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-21-08_2312-1.jpg
wha 2
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-22-08_1516-1.jpg
3d W
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-18-08_2305-1.jpg

CRITS PLEASE...

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:11 PM
the last one is hot but all the other shit is to plain

Jet
04-22-2008, 05:18 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image182.jpg





really like this one, not so much the others...

Mewter
04-22-2008, 05:29 PM
he will want to battle you
just leave it alone and write what you want
face the consequences
and battle me in the meantime

well uve seen my sketches im not great thers no point

Mewter
04-22-2008, 05:35 PM
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm10/Mewter_one/DSC_0654.jpg
says fewr trying out new names

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:38 PM
have you seen what i do
you should believe in yourself man dont just say no point cuz youre scared to loose

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 05:43 PM
dude its not just that he'd be scared, but theres the fact that Mewt is up all over Socal....so theres no point to start the name up...It'd like be trying to battle Zeph or Cope2....there up so much theres no point.

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:46 PM
no i was saying battle me
http://i25.tinypic.com/xxko.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/vrt2c1.jpg
trying to get intune with the simpler side of things

Mewter
04-22-2008, 05:50 PM
how do i know thats yur best work tho

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:53 PM
its not
and i never said it was
http://i29.tinypic.com/2vuilpc.jpg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-22-2008, 05:55 PM
found it rots

Thanks, glad one of us isn't lazy.

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 05:58 PM
i wasnt even looking for it
i was going through the pages i missed in toronto or something

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 06:04 PM
New junk..

Crits please.

http://a826.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/78/l_6ff7644ce016d988535c6f2225565c61.jpg

http://a728.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/8/l_27bcf07292b5f227557781aa57c0765f.jpg

Camer-nice shit there, good n simple..I like how you did the E in the last one.

Ante-that W thing at the bottom is really cool looking, color would make it dope.

atlok7
04-22-2008, 06:17 PM
capo- i can tell your improving, but try not to make your letters so abstract. tone it down a little

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-22-2008, 06:19 PM
Capo, remove all the random curves and extensions

NoCanControl
04-22-2008, 06:34 PM
haze, your 'r's rip.

NoCanControl
04-22-2008, 06:55 PM
I only like the stick... the rest were a let down while i was scrolling

The stick is nice.. but can't really tell the letters and you went to town a lil to much with the silver

understandable, the silver looks fucked on teh photos, it looks mor like lightning or something.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/read.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/readable.jpg

yea, do you think i should just work on letter structure more, am i going to abstract or...?

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 07:00 PM
work on your letter structure man, it took me a second to read the first one even WITH your red lines.

your making the lines in your second sketch too short. its hard to tell where the bars are. your N kinna looks like a block with cracks.

IWriteTame
04-22-2008, 07:20 PM
I'm just letting you all know that I'm very new, so I'm just giving my opinions on your sketches. I'm sorry if I hurt any feelings or anything and if you don't like what I said then you can ignore me. I'm totally new to this and I know that you have to critique to get some critique of your own work. Well here goes. I'll post my sketch after my comments.

Ante, you have some nice letters, but in the Wha2 sketch you seemed to do the same thing in each letter. Maybe you could change it up a little bit? The 3d "W" is just a little weird looking to me, no offense.

Camer, I really like the last sketch you posted with the "cock roach" at the bottom. That one looks good and I like the "E" in it. I like your color choice too.

Capo, I like your style, but it doesn't flow so much. Maybe you could try working on that a little. The color blending in the second isn't working out too great either, no offense.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/=%22http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00044.jpghttp://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00044.jpg

Here is mine, if you have any comments please let me know. I just started, so I would appreciate any criticism.

hazetheone
04-22-2008, 07:29 PM
dont worry about 3d yet
just do straight letters

NoCanControl
04-22-2008, 07:42 PM
nevro, ditch the E. it doesnt flow, maybe novr?
south-i don't like like any of them. sorry.
miles-ditch the addons.
i hate all my shit lately...

H
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-21-08_2312-1.jpg
wha 2
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-22-08_1516-1.jpg
3d W
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/04-18-08_2305-1.jpg

CRITS PLEASE...

shit is too warped, and i don't mean shit shit. but yea, its almsot like lit should be three dee, its wierd looking. the top one.

NoCanControl
04-22-2008, 07:47 PM
thanks for the crits by the way.

Fewer
04-22-2008, 08:01 PM
ok no longer mewter now fewer

IWriteTame
04-22-2008, 08:25 PM
Okay, thank you for the critique. I tried to do straight letters with nothing added. Here is my newest sketch.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00045.jpg

renegade185
04-22-2008, 08:26 PM
tame use bars to make your letters.

IWriteTame
04-22-2008, 08:38 PM
Could you explain bars please? Do you mean like overlaying the letters?

SWIV3Lone
04-22-2008, 08:51 PM
make ur letters the same size

IlikePie
04-22-2008, 08:52 PM
I always like that kind of style on the second flick. Just make your lines a bit less wobbly.

atlok7
04-22-2008, 09:00 PM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/8352/caisctconeblueorangesj6.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 09:22 PM
im not feelin it as much as your other one. looks too rushed compared to your other izm. dont make the bar on your A so bar-ish. loose the lines that make it look rectangular. the horizontal bars on your I dont flow with the rest of your letters. i wouldnt put the "one" inbetween your I and S. it looks like CAIoneS. an im definatly not feelin those arrows. they seem too outta place. point the edges a bit. having your arrow a bar, seems wack.

the only improvement i noticed is that you actually made the bottom half of your S.. S like, i never liked it before.

atlok7
04-22-2008, 09:28 PM
i disagree with the CAIoneS part. no one would b dumb enough to read it like that. i was just filling space.

La Coka Nostra
04-22-2008, 09:29 PM
i love the shadow and the glares

-Leski
04-22-2008, 10:25 PM
Fucked up the forcefield and the handies... but I want critz on the letters.
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4360/geski7bs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Atlok; I like it. I agree that the "one" doesnt mess with it, the I does kinda break it up a bit.

ctso; I think that portobello one would look really good cleaned up and coloured simply.

Tame; Draw two parallel straight lines. Link the ends of these lines to make a rectangle. This is a simple bar. Use this to build your letters and a "Straight simple".
It should look a bit like computer font so... tame, Tame or TAME.

Capo Izi
04-22-2008, 10:41 PM
Newww junnnnnnnnkkk

http://a108.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/82/l_a4a3088ebff60fd1f26bbd4e9af5b23b.jpg

Crits please?

Ctso-eh, top one is blah, bottom one is ok, just needs to be more clean

Atlok-always like it man

Ante-love that W thing, major props

JETPACK!!
04-22-2008, 11:06 PM
capo, your P looks like a D and your C kills the flows.

yeah atlok, your right. but you never know, theres a lot of morons in this planet.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-22-2008, 11:12 PM
BUMP!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01192.jpg

Neuro I like ur stuff it all looks really good except the E's dont seen to flow in ur pieces other then in the first one

Capo - ur P looks like a D
Geski - aint feelin any flow on that try changin up ur ESK
Cais fuckin suck it up not everybody had to love ur shit so stop being so narsisistic

Jetpack, Cais Simples battle 3 ON 3 N*GGAS!!

-Leski
04-22-2008, 11:32 PM
^^ I see what you mean looking back on it, I'll redo it.

I'll get it this time, i can feel it in my bones. ;)



edit;
Make all the letters closer in size evasion. The R is way, way to big.
Make it the size of the P or the E and A.

La Coka Nostra
04-22-2008, 11:58 PM
not enough arrows!

the end
04-23-2008, 12:14 AM
shroomin' it with my girl on thursday for 1 year anniversary :D

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1737/422marcieez8.jpg

Elegal
04-23-2008, 12:17 AM
uhhh...wat does it say? you need to wor on making ur letters looking like letters bro

the end
04-23-2008, 12:26 AM
lol

yea its kinda sloppy only bc i colored it all stoned out. the original pen outline was really clean though

Desipher
04-23-2008, 12:45 AM
for my community service at this college i know i fucked up the hand
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture242.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture241.jpg

*cept*
04-23-2008, 01:19 AM
for my community service at this college i know i fucked up the hand
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture242.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture241.jpg
like the first one, just bring the sleeve down on the sweater so you dont gotta fuck around with the wierd angle of the hand


http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/Snapshot_20080422.jpg
didnt realize how haggard the right side of the "M" was until i flicked it.

Desipher
04-23-2008, 01:20 AM
its gonna be all black

rsakens
04-23-2008, 05:22 AM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1248.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1254.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1253.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1251.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1249.jpg

bump that shit is mad fresh nice work neuro

atlok7
04-23-2008, 07:12 AM
Cais fuckin suck it up not everybody had to love ur shit so stop being so narsisistic
Jetpack, Cais Simples battle 3 ON 3 N*GGAS!!

please, PLEASE tell me how my comment was narcissistic. learn how to spell also.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-23-2008, 08:05 AM
its not that ur comment was narcissistic. I just find that uve got a pretty massive ego cuz u seem to hold urself in to high regard to ever take crits and apply them to what u do

rsakens
04-23-2008, 09:20 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00003-9.jpg?t=1208959629

JETPACK!!
04-23-2008, 09:44 AM
evade, its not really worth the argument. he's just gonna wanna battle. spend two days doing a piece on a piece of wood, said he did it in an hour an a half. then everyone on this forum votes for him anyways because kids dont care between a nice spot and proper letter porprortions compared to pretty colors and shades

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-23-2008, 09:48 AM
Why don't you guys do another battle. Black and white, no shades. That would certainly bring out your letters. ;)

atlok7
04-23-2008, 09:57 AM
evade, its not really worth the argument. he's just gonna wanna battle. spend two days doing a piece on a piece of wood, said he did it in an hour an a half. then everyone on this forum votes for him anyways because kids dont care between a nice spot and proper letter porprortions compared to pretty colors and shades

dude. i beat you none the less. plus piece battles arnt for spots. their for the fucking piece. and the quality of it. so stop being such a douche. and evade, i have been taking alot of crits into consideration. why do u think my style changes as much as it does. and yes if you wanna battle black and white like rots says i will be glad to. paint or paper.

Capo Izi
04-23-2008, 10:06 AM
I say do a heat battle, that way the true best writer will be known.

Also something to add, whoever writes Evade on here, unless you are the famous writer, are you sure you should be writing Evade...you have style, but honestly the old school freight writer Evade is far better.....

atlok7
04-23-2008, 10:14 AM
having a heated spot doesnt make you a good writer capo.

Capo Izi
04-23-2008, 10:31 AM
^I know, but it means you get up better, and that way there'd be two battles

JETPACK!!
04-23-2008, 10:42 AM
haha atlok, im not being a douche, im just speaking the truth. im down for another battle. pieces, heat spots. you say your a good writer, you say you got the juice. then fire your shit off under pressure.

tasty
04-23-2008, 11:12 AM
k stop the fighting thats my crits..

heres what i drew up last night.. crits?

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo20-1.jpg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-23-2008, 11:21 AM
Is that a breast-cancer awareness ribbon

tasty
04-23-2008, 11:24 AM
k stop the fighting thats my crits..

heres what i drew up last night.. crits?

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo20-1.jpg

bum for being last post :(
and. are you talking to me?

rsakens
04-23-2008, 12:27 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00003-9.jpg?t=1208959629

bump it went loss in the beff on the past page =/

e practis i know that the 3d on the right on is off so give me crits on the left one :)
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00006-5.jpg?t=1208971541

Thrice
04-23-2008, 12:37 PM
Tasty-not bad, but keep your structure and i'd bend it some or mix it up a bit.
rsake-so sick man, great letters and fill
Crits please
http://i30.tinypic.com/xbcntk.jpg

Atomik
04-23-2008, 01:58 PM
nice use of colors i like it nice and simple good shit.
crits on these last 2 did
cries
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-23-08_0904.jpg
seiko
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-23-08_1053.jpg

Thrice
04-23-2008, 02:00 PM
Nice shit man. Great colors and that 3D is intense.

GimmieGotShot
04-23-2008, 02:40 PM
Resm; nice. wuvin the fill
Ahem; bend the straight vertical bars with the rest of them like the E and stuff
Atomik; idk what to say :/

http://a787.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/82/l_325b0df59c283ac9b24934e29f9577da.jpg

Atomik
04-23-2008, 02:42 PM
is that a bad thing or a good thing :P
nice shit tho maybe fix that N and K

GimmieGotShot
04-23-2008, 02:43 PM
its a good thing lol.
and yeah, i know i kinda messed up on the N and K

-Leski
04-23-2008, 04:16 PM
Alright, I really like this throw... but no one will crit it for me, or comment on it at all.
Should I start painting this? [y/n]
If (n) why?
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6835/geski6za1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thrice; I dont think its a good idea to just lean the top half of the letters.
Nice and clean though.

GimmieGotShot; Cant read whats in between the T and the NK.
It looks like ISLS, or something... maybe tis just me. :confused:

NoCanControl
04-23-2008, 04:23 PM
im not feelin it as much as your other one. looks too rushed compared to your other izm. dont make the bar on your A so bar-ish. loose the lines that make it look rectangular. the horizontal bars on your I dont flow with the rest of your letters. i wouldnt put the "one" inbetween your I and S. it looks like CAIoneS. an im definatly not feelin those arrows. they seem too outta place. point the edges a bit. having your arrow a bar, seems wack.

the only improvement i noticed is that you actually made the bottom half of your S.. S like, i never liked it before.

i personally liked the a. i do my a's like that quiet often.

Teez-EmM!!!
04-23-2008, 04:32 PM
resm im felling that
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1024.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1020.jpg

scoot
04-23-2008, 04:50 PM
bro. ur M is so out of place

Fewer
04-23-2008, 04:54 PM
Teez i like yur style

dim
04-23-2008, 04:58 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1047.jpg
teezm look at who this sketch is dedicatd to :D

Teez-EmM!!!
04-23-2008, 05:03 PM
yo dimer i fucking love that man you should deff paint it

t-bur
04-23-2008, 05:08 PM
Wow dim, its not often you see an R as wack as that.

Tezm- the Z needs to be sharper, and that M has the same effect as Dimrs R.

sketch3
04-23-2008, 05:11 PM
i kow your not talking shit,


dim i wanna see u experiment...go crazy do the oposite of wat everyone tells new toys

Cin123
04-23-2008, 05:13 PM
rsakens - dope ass colour skeem
leski- i dont no wat 2 say besides the fact that its just weird lol
gimm- take better flicks
tezm- agreed with scoot the M is like in another country, but the bottom one is dope
atomik- weird style but u got potential
dimr- i like the A and how the M is all up in ur face :P ur D's are always dope (im not sayn anthing about the R cuz i fuckin hate R's)

t-bur
04-23-2008, 05:20 PM
shroomin' it with my girl on thursday for 1 year anniversary :D

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1737/422marcieez8.jpg

Biting morph didnt work to well for you, handstyle is fire though.

Big ups to rsakens and neuro, got shit on lockup.

-ShAmEE-
04-23-2008, 05:26 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1047.jpg
teezm look at who this sketch is dedicatd to :D

fuckin do simples!

atlok7
04-23-2008, 05:34 PM
i think its dope^ just the R is a little iffy

dim
04-23-2008, 05:35 PM
ive already been thru the simple game man iwas doing thos for mad time why should i go backwards
T-Bur i no my r's are weak but im working on them still no excuse for u to be a prick

Thrice
04-23-2008, 05:36 PM
tbur....you suck. Don't talk trash. Also didn't you get caught for biting???

IlikePie
04-23-2008, 05:36 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1047.jpg
teezm look at who this sketch is dedicatd to :D

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/7342/ohwerdqp7.png

Little guide on R's by Kaer.

dim
04-23-2008, 05:43 PM
thank you ^^^

Cin123
04-23-2008, 05:50 PM
now thats how u show respects^^

Teez-EmM!!!
04-23-2008, 05:52 PM
bro. ur M is so out of place

when u say the m is out of place do u mean the letter of just the colour of it on the first one

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 05:53 PM
Dimer/dimar, I would really go back to simples if I were you, All of your letters need help man.

Kre8
04-23-2008, 05:55 PM
dim,the structure was nice. i liked it.

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll298/kre8paint/chiselmark.jpg

pretty much what my handstyle looks like,.. but it changes every time i write it.

crits?

Teez-EmM!!!
04-23-2008, 06:09 PM
i love how u droped ur handie and then just out lined it in black and green. u should deff do block letters

yo dimr what throse ur pice off is that the m is a slut. i mean it needs to close its legs a bit. also its wierd how the leg of the r comes outfrom the rest of the letter. def dont go back to simps ive seen them. there dope. and yo the top of the m seen empty to man

scoot
04-23-2008, 06:47 PM
when u say the m is out of place do u mean the letter of just the colour of it on the first one
the letter itself all your letters are all clost and tight and then the M is just "HEY IM A M LOOK AT ME" and has its legs spread wider then dim's

haha but im diggin ur shit non the less

Kre8
04-23-2008, 07:17 PM
thanks,teez.

this is the best of the block sketch ive done.. a word battle with my friend.
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll298/kre8paint/traceblock-1.jpg

JETPACK!!
04-23-2008, 07:24 PM
yo t-bur, slit your throat ear to ear. and once your done doing that, hang over the bathtub so your moms dont have to clean up the mess. fucking crooked ass clown.

trace, make your T bigger, and keep your letters the same size, unless you were trying to make it bigger as it progressed, in which case you didnt do a good job at it. keep your bars the same width, i notice your A and R need mad work, loose the hook on the kick of your R.

kre8, that say chisel? dont have a bar going through half your letters. make it go through JUST the H. add some 3D on it too, itll cover up a lot of the deadspace in between the letters.

t-bur, gouge your eyes out with a screwdriver

dim, im diggin your steeze. but i fucking hate that R. i trust you know how to fix it:)

HRbN
04-23-2008, 07:35 PM
dim even with the M as wide as it is at the top i think with the R cleaned up it would be pretty sick

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 07:37 PM
yo t-bur, slit your throat ear to ear. and once your done doing that, hang over the bathtub so your moms dont have to clean up the mess. fucking crooked ass clown.


t-bur, gouge your eyes out with a screwdriver


Two crits for T-bur in ONE post?!

You should be grateful.

dim
04-23-2008, 07:39 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1048.jpg
see i feel that i have a good handle on simples why should i go back wards shame.

JETPACK!!
04-23-2008, 07:40 PM
same days i just feel generous, y'know?

dim, i can understand that you rushed it. but your straight lines.. arnt very straight.

dim
04-23-2008, 07:43 PM
ye i have a shakey hand another thing im working on just trying to understand why people hate u no

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 08:04 PM
Nobody hates you, haha. Its just crits.

You don't really have simples down as good as you think. Get all the bars the same width.


New shit-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke6.jpg

atlok7
04-23-2008, 08:06 PM
ohh sheeit son ma name!

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 08:09 PM
Nobody hates you, haha. Its just crits.

You don't really have simples down as good as you think. Get all the bars the same width.


New shit-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke6.jpg

Yeah, I saw your painted ish Cais. Mad respect for that, it was cleeeeeeean.

Bottom page HUMP

Desipher
04-23-2008, 08:09 PM
yes i know i fucked up the hand i dont care its for my community service
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture245.jpg

"Riot"
04-23-2008, 08:11 PM
capo- try rounding out the letters.
geski-gettin better. fix that k!
atlok- we both know thats dope.
ante-fresshh.

its been a loonnnggg time since ive posted.
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT008-4.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT006-3.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT001-9.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT002-10.jpg

atlok7
04-23-2008, 08:34 PM
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/1910/esoleyr9.jpg
for an exchangeee

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 08:34 PM
wanna hook up an exchange Cais?

b0gus
04-23-2008, 08:35 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus004.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus002.jpg

atlok7
04-23-2008, 08:38 PM
ha bogus? thats a funny name. i like your simples shits hot. just the B's in all of them look kinda shifty. yo mar- sure thing pretty lady... you know what i write..

Samp1e
04-23-2008, 08:41 PM
design kinda thing i'm workin:

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2008/againstcopyma2.png

-Leski
04-23-2008, 08:45 PM
Went to fill and used the wrong purple... so I outlined it with not black.
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/4272/geski8xh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Samp1e; Really diggin your D's.

Bogus; Feeling your simples, not feeling the B's.

the end
04-23-2008, 08:46 PM
Im always very sorry for my sloppiness... one day though, i will be doing this shit clean as fuck

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6676/423marcieaz1.jpg

here's 2 others from today as well..

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1388/423skumzc3.jpg

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/640/423makeruq8.jpg

"Riot"
04-23-2008, 08:47 PM
i like how everyone skips me when i crit...

bitches.

-Leski
04-23-2008, 08:49 PM
My bad Riot. Last one, minus the arrows, would look dope and simple.

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 09:16 PM
Exchange with Cais (the one with a purrty mouth)-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/caisexchange.jpg

IWriteTame
04-23-2008, 09:27 PM
Okay, here are all of my crits. Remember, I'm new here, so this is my opinion and you don't need to even listen to it if you don't like it.

Kre8, I like the TRACE sketch. I don't like how it gets bigger as it goes along, so maybe keep it the same size. Also, the "T" looks a little off, but I'm really liking your "E." Overall I think that was pretty good.

Dim, the simple looks good. I like the color choice. I'm not sure if it is just me, but some letters seem a little crooked. There are a couple lines that could be more straight.

Roke, I like yours too. The coloring and bubbles look good. You're drop shadow is also done well. Maybe you could try working on the far left side of the "R" a little? The little loopty loop looks a little weird to me. Your "E" is also a little weird looking. The top bar of it seems out of place. Again, this is just my opinion. Overall it looks good.

Atlok7, I like your exchange piece. The colors are simple, but they look great. I like the effects at the bottom of the letters with the red. Overall I don't really see anything wrong with it. Good job.

Bogus, your first sketch has a lot of crooked lines. The "B" looks kind of off because of the curve. Maybe you could fix that? Maybe you could go a little simpler? Your second sketch is a lot like the first, try fixing your "B." Your third sketch still has a crooked "B," which looks weird in that placement, because the rest of the letters are in line. You could try working on the forcefield a little more too? Try working on the "S" too, it seems off. I don't like the overall look of the "S." Try working more on the top part of the "S."

-Leski, I like how yours is pretty simple. I think you should try making some of the lines more straight. I like your handstyle though, at least that's what I think you call it (sorry.) I think it says Geski and if that is the case you should try working on the "K." I see how it is curving with the other letters to fit along with the style, but I'm not liking that too much. Overall it was nice though.

The End, I think you should go work on simples. No offence, but that is really sloppy. Work on simples to get more clean. I'm not sure if it is me being new to writing, but I can't really read any of those unless I look at them for a while longer.

Here is my sketch, let me know if I'm getting any closer to anything.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00046.jpg

atlok7
04-23-2008, 09:36 PM
ohh baby! thats dope mar. im printing it an putting it in my book ill have yours tomorrow! im all drawed out.