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Kre8
04-23-2008, 09:53 PM
thanks to all, i'm going to revamp and try to keep my letters in check.

MarOne...
04-23-2008, 11:24 PM
last post for the night... I'm tired.

Leski- That's looking good. Keep it up.

The End- those letters have SEVERE potential. Make sure they are a little more clean next time. It will bring out the dopeness.

Not finished-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke7.jpg

Dubya Bush
04-23-2008, 11:56 PM
sick but to much going on

sank.
04-24-2008, 12:21 AM
any decent toy wanna exchange, get at me....

my.favorite.addiction
04-24-2008, 12:26 AM
everyone seems to be workin hard,big ups.
Atlok...how do you do it man?o an what marks you use??
Marone...clean an original,big ups.
Tame...no personal offense meant but...its garbage.go to the new to graff thread.practice bars.use 3D.'blocky letters' doesnt = graffiti.it equals lazyiness.make the letters YOUR letters.
The End...liken yo style!
Leski...especially lovin them i's!!



hows this for a bomb?
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018-1.jpg

an these?
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0017.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0005.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0014-1.jpg

simp?
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0015.jpg

crits please,thanks.

HRbN
04-24-2008, 12:50 AM
Alright i realize this is pretty wack so you dont even have to tell me, but i wanna finish it anyway but i need some ideas for what do make the E look like , cause ive done like 4 or 5 different ones in there and there all balls ugly. If you hate the piece i dont care. Just gimme an idea what to do with the E. and maybe how to tweak the Z. Cause i actually kinda like the first 3 letters PHA but then it just falls apart. so i figure ill finish it anyway and then make a better ending next time around. Thanks Oh and dont worry bout the little shit everywhere itll get erased.

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3449/phazer3ge9.jpg

Addict, the throwies arent bad i like the top one the best make a bigger clean one and post it up to let us see it better. And im not feeling that bottom picture at all. The others are lost somewhere inbetween i guess im just not feeling a prominent stlye out of them.

my.favorite.addiction
04-24-2008, 01:00 AM
thanks for the crits.
Have you tried tweakin a lower case e?
also try addin somethin to balance it out on the sides.bubbles drips etc,somethin like that.

HRbN
04-24-2008, 01:05 AM
hmm no hadnt tries lower case haha that is a good idea though. And i have a further plan for the R so i think itll balance out alil more cause the left side is alittle heavy at the moment.

Samp1e
04-24-2008, 01:14 AM
both above me need to simplify their shit.

herb -- specifically what you need to work on is figuring out how to make your bars work together to flow. like... the origins and insertions of them.

HRbN
04-24-2008, 01:18 AM
i know my shits needs to be simplified. And im new to that style. but im tryin to learn slowly. Any tips on origin and insertion lol Thats why i openly admited the peice was wack... cause it is i realize this. i was just lookin for a good E idea

Apel-MH
04-24-2008, 03:08 AM
Crits apreciated... im 3 months new i havent started bombing just yet i wanted to get my style going first.

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/samboy7777/Strutbombbb.jpg

rsakens
04-24-2008, 04:18 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00003-9.jpg?t=1208959629

e practis i know that the 3d on the right on is off so give me crits on the left one :)
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00006-5.jpg?t=1208971541
thankx for the feedback guys
any more tips coments....?

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1047.jpg
teezm look at who this sketch is dedicatd to :D

dim is looks dope
the ar is a bit fucked especial the bar on the r work on that \why
dont you use a pencil first and clean up then ?
and what are you hiding under the cap :)

atlok7
04-24-2008, 08:05 AM
last post for the night... I'm tired.

Leski- That's looking good. Keep it up.

The End- those letters have SEVERE potential. Make sure they are a little more clean next time. It will bring out the dopeness.

Not finished-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke7.jpg

nice

seywhat
04-24-2008, 09:16 AM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/balckandsilver-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/sareexchange2-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/astroexchange-1.jpg
new shizzzzz

roke- dope, but maybe try to do a lowercase e thats the only thing i see wrong
dim- like everyone else said just fix the r, but i think its still dope overall
rsakens- fresh, i love your e's
apel- give crits to get crits
herbn- i really have no clue what that says
tame- its gettin there, fix the top of the m
the end- hot, but once u start gettin clean, that shit will be fire

"Riot"
04-24-2008, 10:56 AM
capo- try rounding out the letters.
geski-gettin better. fix that k!
atlok- we both know thats dope.
ante-fresshh.

its been a loonnnggg time since ive posted.
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT008-4.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT006-3.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT001-9.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT002-10.jpg


bump.
no crits:(

my.favorite.addiction
04-24-2008, 11:39 AM
yo riot-the clue an silver one is pretty sick but the F could be mistaken for a T
somethin about the arrow commin off the B doesnt quuuuite flow.but close.keep workin.

the background of the city is ill but the letters dont do it justice.

-Leski
04-24-2008, 12:05 PM
My bad Riot. Last one, minus the arrows, would look dope and simple.
Bumpity.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-24-2008, 12:51 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0011.jpg i dunno about this, trying to work a new style, rough around the edges, to say the least. Any ideas? (Newest guts sketch/ Very small for some reason

sketch3
04-24-2008, 12:55 PM
its not working,
i know ur experimenting but id say next sketch keep the concept but retsrain it a lil

glyce
04-24-2008, 01:52 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank005-1.jpg
ofb-the 3rd one down looks real clean, and the last one would look good but its got those arrows

Panda Jerk
04-24-2008, 02:25 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0011.jpg i dunno about this, trying to work a new style, rough around the edges, to say the least. Any ideas? (Newest guts sketch/ Very small for some reason

i am actually feeling it its got potential

Bizzaro
04-24-2008, 02:58 PM
its been a while
few sketches
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar1.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/44.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/14.jpg
old

Capo Izi
04-24-2008, 03:09 PM
New stuff finally....I've been working on it all day trying to get it just good...

http://a204.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_5096c2cd600c106af0790ae43658936b.jpg

Mar-your stuff is pretty steeze, has a tribal-like look, dope man.

Nomas-the throw is nice, maybe fix the o, but the wood thing needs lots of work

Dim-that shit is DOPE

Rots-always beautiful lol...

Hey Atlok, are you and Jetpack gonna do the heat battle or not?

-ShAmEE-
04-24-2008, 03:11 PM
ive already been thru the simple game man iwas doing thos for mad time why should i go backwards
T-Bur i no my r's are weak but im working on them still no excuse for u to be a prick

dont care if u have done simples for a long time. still need to do them, becuase ur letters lacks HARDCORE in stucture! and no it not 'dope'

Backalley Abortion Doctor
04-24-2008, 03:11 PM
On the plus side, my S makes a cool R if you flip it upside down

MarOne...
04-24-2008, 03:12 PM
Rots, I'm really feeling that, those letters have severe potential.

Besar, I feel that if you'd been gone so long, your style would increase... but I feel that its backslidden a little. :( Nice simples, though.

Finished, I feel like I fucked it up with the color scheme:(-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke8.jpg

SCIEnce802
04-24-2008, 03:23 PM
Liking that mar1.. totally different style then err one else.
riot- i like the last ofb
bizz- looks good, clean it up a little and it will be some hot shit.


Still workin on it.
http://i26.tinypic.com/104qg4n.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/1zcg12q.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/6pyfk8.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/11me48x.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/2u54z2w.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2yx5c8n.jpg

Capo Izi
04-24-2008, 03:44 PM
New stuff finally....I've been working on it all day trying to get it just good...

http://a204.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_5096c2cd600c106af0790ae43658936b.jpg

Mar-your stuff is pretty steeze, has a tribal-like look, dope man.

Nomas-the throw is nice, maybe fix the o, but the wood thing needs lots of work

Dim-that shit is DOPE

Rots-always beautiful lol...

Hey Atlok, are you and Jetpack gonna do the heat battle or not?

Damnit, bottom page bump....

SCIEnce802
04-24-2008, 03:49 PM
uhhhhmm... i dont like it but i kinda do.. it looks kool and has Great flow

seywhat
04-24-2008, 04:18 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/balckandsilver-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/sareexchange2-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/astroexchange-1.jpg
new shizzzzz

roke- dope, but maybe try to do a lowercase e thats the only thing i see wrong
dim- like everyone else said just fix the r, but i think its still dope overall
rsakens- fresh, i love your e's
apel- give crits to get crits
herbn- i really have no clue what that says
tame- its gettin there, fix the top of the m
the end- hot, but once u start gettin clean, that shit will be fire
no fuckin crits at all

capo- dont worry about all the bubbles and shit, try overlappin and gettin more flow in your letters
scie- i like the s in the fifth one, but the rest is kinda weak. if you can get the other letters down with that style it could look dope
roke- ill, the only thing i think that might make it look better would be an outline around the letters. but that shits really clean
besar- work with the bottom one, make your letters taller and wider
rots- fresh
soank- instead of cutting your letters off, you should try to round them off

SCIEnce802
04-24-2008, 04:50 PM
Yooo. thnks i was working on that style today.

Mr Tasty
04-24-2008, 05:05 PM
sry fr wrong thread...but need quick crits plz...
painting this for me and my gf 1 year...
suposed to be us hugging as a tree...
any crits plz
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/RREPROG-1.jpg

remos
04-24-2008, 05:10 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/013.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/010.jpg

SCIEnce802
04-24-2008, 05:50 PM
remos- make it look more solid. make the rest of the letters like the second R

Panda Jerk
04-24-2008, 06:39 PM
sry fr wrong thread...but need quick crits plz...
painting this for me and my gf 1 year...
suposed to be us hugging as a tree...
any crits plz
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/RREPROG-1.jpg

dude thats too sick

Apel-MH
04-24-2008, 06:48 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/balckandsilver-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/sareexchange2-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/astroexchange-1.jpg
new shizzzzz

roke- dope, but maybe try to do a lowercase e thats the only thing i see wrong
dim- like everyone else said just fix the r, but i think its still dope overall
rsakens- fresh, i love your e's
apel- give crits to get crits
herbn- i really have no clue what that says
tame- its gettin there, fix the top of the m
the end- hot, but once u start gettin clean, that shit will be fire


I would but im like so new to this i dnt really have any clue on complecated shit. you know but yea i will try.

Bazer
04-24-2008, 06:57 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/6pyfk8.jpg

you should do this one over but drop the weird thing coming out the top of the S and make the arrow in the E disappear. and try one solid color..... cuz the thing you did looks kida weird...

Apel-MH
04-24-2008, 07:05 PM
sry fr wrong thread...but need quick crits plz...
painting this for me and my gf 1 year...
suposed to be us hugging as a tree...
any crits plz
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/RREPROG-1.jpg

Deep bro. You should make it more defining, thicker lines to make out the bodys. its hard to see the bodyt with the back ground if you know what i mean.

session-one
04-24-2008, 07:22 PM
new stuff
some okay some not
one work in progress
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1362.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1356.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1357.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1359.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1355.jpg

Apel-MH
04-24-2008, 07:26 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/013.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/010.jpg

i like dat but the colours are wack. i would put more of a black shading around the letter then a red outline around the black.

and like i would put more patern into the colours.

oakstr1
04-24-2008, 07:27 PM
session - way chill^^^ the last one looks like work in progress but still fire

saywhat - that astro throw is dope.

remos - make the E a little fatter

atlok7
04-24-2008, 07:52 PM
session- just chill out with your INTENSE letters. just make it more mellow

exchange wiff ROKE

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1934/rokerbs0.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-24-2008, 07:53 PM
session...at first glance most of those look dope.
but then when you stare at it for like a second...
i can't even make out your letters.
handstyles are pretty bonk too...
simplify homie...

*cept*
04-24-2008, 08:01 PM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4026/caisyelloworangeel0.jpg
word on what they said.

you definitely got the artistic talent. like that char you did for the monster battle was awesome and same with that throw a couple weeks back. but your shit just gets wierd wild sometimes. id like to see ya just do one simple one real quick and throw it up. and put your talent into the fill or somethin

*cept*
04-24-2008, 08:02 PM
session- just chill out with your INTENSE letters. just make it more mellow

exchange wiff ROKE

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1934/rokerbs0.jpg diggin THE FUCK outta this, the only thing i dont like is the arrow over the O kinda disrupts it for me.

atlok7
04-24-2008, 08:09 PM
ha thanks man, i just put that arrow there to kinda represent the opening of the O that really isnt there. yeah ill put up a simple cause your the first person that wasnt a douche about it

*cept*
04-24-2008, 08:20 PM
ha thanks man, i just put that arrow there to kinda represent the opening of the O that really isnt there. yeah ill put up a simple cause your the first person that wasnt a douche about it yeah, thats what i figured. Rad, people like rots and shit love to rip on you but i honestly feel you got the talent. and at only 16? shiiiit son.

WoeInfinite
04-24-2008, 08:25 PM
just fuckked around during photography class cuz the darkroom was full and i had nothing to do....
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/042408_19211.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/042408_20151.jpg

Capo Izi
04-24-2008, 08:27 PM
capo- dont worry about all the bubbles and shit, try overlappin and gettin more flow in your letters


more overlapping, you sure usually people hate on me when I do that?

Evasion Of Invasion
04-24-2008, 08:32 PM
Woeinfinite first ones ok not rly feelin the second one top of the E levels are weird and uneven try to keep it consistent
Atlok i dig the E in that style thats it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01202-1.jpg
got bored and geeky

session-one
04-24-2008, 08:59 PM
so i took the advice and knocked out a simpler piece
so tell me what you think
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1363.jpg
hope it didnt suck too bad, i been writin for while but my progression is just now satrtin to sorta kick off and all
crits plz?

sketch3
04-24-2008, 09:05 PM
they arnt letters..i can just make out a c
goe REALLY simple, like boring simple

atlok7
04-24-2008, 09:09 PM
much better, but yeah go a little simpler. try block letters

session-one
04-24-2008, 09:20 PM
k thx

Evasion Of Invasion
04-24-2008, 09:21 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01200.jpg
i concur with the above crits

hazetheone
04-24-2008, 09:23 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/avlkw6.jpg

no one else gave crits on this page so i guess everyone can just tell me how ''dope'' this is or how ''amazing'' it is
edit; i stole that missing poster thing from easy in the other bb thread

sketch3
04-24-2008, 09:37 PM
thats really weak, the c is nice but the other letters are not as good as ur other shit,
try and make every extention look like the ones on the c

session-one
04-24-2008, 09:38 PM
i like the E on that haze
anyways
even simpler:
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n232/nathan103092/DSCN1364.jpg
i like the a
the r is ok
but im not likin the e and o

hazetheone
04-24-2008, 09:47 PM
so you only like the a?

session-one
04-24-2008, 09:50 PM
yeah pretty much
maybe htinkin bout not seperating the parts of the r so much

hazetheone
04-24-2008, 09:52 PM
imo the r is the best letter there
but thats not saying much
you need to hit up the keyboard letters

Evasion Of Invasion
04-24-2008, 09:53 PM
Haze I personally think the leg of the R is at to much of an incline i think it u kept it goin straight to the right it would have looked better

-Leski
04-24-2008, 10:14 PM
I had a epiphany in G... I dunno...
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5623/experimentingyu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Haze; Your A just doesnt sit well, I dunno what it is or how to fix it though.
Maybe it needs to be a bit lower... the E is too small, If it were as tall as the A its would be perfect.

Your C is dope.

Session; Should drop down to keyboard letters for a little bit, I have a bunch of them all over further back. Letters made of super simple bars, in a ridiculously simple style like those on your keyboard.

Do two or three straight simples for each time you reach out and experiment.
Finishing those sketchs will help you steady your hands and practice colouring while also giving you a better understanding of bars.

MarOne...
04-24-2008, 10:23 PM
session- just chill out with your INTENSE letters. just make it more mellow

exchange wiff ROKE

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1934/rokerbs0.jpg

Bawlin'.



new sketch-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke9.jpg

WoeInfinite
04-24-2008, 11:01 PM
Woeinfinite first ones ok not rly feelin the second one top of the E levels are weird and uneven try to keep it consistent
Atlok i dig the E in that style thats it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01202-1.jpg
got bored and geeky

yeah dude, im not feelin the second one either haha, but whatever, it was just witha highlighter and a sharpie haha, ill get some actual black book pics up in here soon.

MarOne...
04-24-2008, 11:06 PM
Bawlin'.



new sketch-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke9.jpg

ARG. HUMPAGE.

-Leski
04-24-2008, 11:17 PM
I had a epiphany in G... I dunno...
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5623/experimentingyu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Haze; Your A just doesnt sit well, I dunno what it is or how to fix it though.
Maybe it needs to be a bit lower... the E is too small, If it were as tall as the A its would be perfect.

Your C is dope.

Session; Should drop down to keyboard letters for a little bit, I have a bunch of them all over further back. Letters made of super simple bars, in a ridiculously simple style like those on your keyboard.

Do two or three straight simples for each time you reach out and experiment.
Finishing those sketchs will help you steady your hands and practice colouring while also giving you a better understanding of bars.

G is for Generic. B is for Bump.

Mar; Fatten up the Bar that has your R's eye. The half moon bar on your K might look better with the fatter side inwards. The upper arm of the K.
I cant explain it. :(

Panda Jerk
04-24-2008, 11:29 PM
ARG. HUMPAGE.

i do not like it at all im not shure y i like all yur other stuff but this one bugs me

fOrSaQeN
04-24-2008, 11:57 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/300zkfk.jpg

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 12:10 AM
http://a204.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_5096c2cd600c106af0790ae43658936b.jpg

Only got 1 crit....want to know how it really is..


and new one..

http://a171.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/3/l_cee9a835d8812de6163872eefbba3712.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-25-2008, 12:13 AM
your letters look mushed...try spreading them out more :)

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 12:23 AM
^haha so many people have SO MANY DIFFERENT IDEAS...lol "push together" "pull apart" "mush together" "un mush" "overlap" "don't overlap"

AHHHH I CAN'T PLEASE YOU ALL.....

fOrSaQeN
04-25-2008, 12:38 AM
put it this way..keep it simple

theklopsfather
04-25-2008, 12:43 AM
78uyhj

fOrSaQeN
04-25-2008, 12:45 AM
good advice =D

Desipher
04-25-2008, 12:52 AM
fuckin nice evasion that looks tripped or maybe im really stoned

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 01:26 AM
i have some advice: dont try pleasing evryone, do what u think will help u improve. look at other peices that are better and look for what it is that u are or aren't doing that makes the peice look beter. look for inspiration, ideas, etc. Try a style and stick with it, make it your own and see where it takes you. thats what i think


Yeah thanks, yeah I've been trying to do that now looking for a style, because I've done so many simples n' stuff I thought it was time to change it up...

I've been experimenting with a few styles its just I don't know where to go when I've got 40 different writers telling me 40 different opposite things to do....so like I try one out then it just seems I don't know how to improve it so much, but yeah I'll keep trying.

-Leski
04-25-2008, 02:04 AM
Yah capo, find a simple that you know you can replicate.
Round simples or straight simples, blocks or bubbles.
Learn how to do ONE of these styles, then move onto another one.
Learn your bars, its to graffiti what knowing the alphabet is to reading.

Then do your own thing, ask us how it looks now and then and just keep going with it.

Klops; Best advice ever. ;)

rsakens
04-25-2008, 05:02 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00009-7.jpg?t=1209116605
exchange

rsakens
04-25-2008, 05:13 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0011.jpg i dunno about this, trying to work a new style, rough around the edges, to say the least. Any ideas? (Newest guts sketch/ Very small for some reason

bumb thats dope man like the way you drooped the highlights

Rots, I'm really feeling that, those letters have severe potential.

Besar, I feel that if you'd been gone so long, your style would increase... but I feel that its backslidden a little. :( Nice simples, though.

Finished, I feel like I fucked it up with the color scheme:(-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke8.jpg

dope color scheme and leters i am feling the R alot

freakeenyc
04-25-2008, 05:25 AM
havent posted here in a while..critsarealwaswelcome
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7073/cimg7575ea6.jpg
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7023/comicfreakpr4.jpg
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6016/freaknotepg3.jpg
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9137/freakouts2rx9.jpg
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2174/japanzy7.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7606/stylesav0.jpg
rsakens thta reallly pops out dude...is it the grey that does that?
and mar one..ill color schemin
and capo i dunno abt them dude..the extensions and letters are wierd...i wud say do simples..but u already posted that u are..so umm..the best thing u can do is look at ill flics and develop ur own style. but keep it simple

rsakens
04-25-2008, 06:17 AM
sakens thta reallly pops out dude...is it the grey that does that?


sorry dude dont get you what is the grey doing ?

freakeenyc
04-25-2008, 06:32 AM
the shadows on the 3d really make it pop out..its a cool effect

remos
04-25-2008, 06:39 AM
[QUOTE=Capo Izi;1079955]http://a204.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_5096c2cd600c106af0790ae43658936b.jpg
QUOTE]

i count 94 bubbles :D

Evasion Of Invasion
04-25-2008, 07:53 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6016/freaknotepg3.jpg
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9137/freakouts2rx9.jpg

old NY style is hot the A dont look right tho mught wanna make the top not bend to match the rest of the letters and give it better flow overall, on ur simples jut the top of ur E out to the right more letter looks kinda weak if the second arm of the E is the same length as the first

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01202-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01200.jpg
BUMP

NEZ89
04-25-2008, 08:12 AM
i got 92
freak- the fill is kinda ugly on the first, the colors anyway, and the K needs work on the second

tasty
04-25-2008, 10:13 AM
wow theres actually 92 bubbles on that page.. impressive?
as for some crits i don't think I'm feeling that diagonal thing you have going there invasion
and freak could work on colouring maybe?

as for me
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo21.jpg
crits?

rsakens
04-25-2008, 11:26 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00009-7.jpg?t=1209116605
exchange
bumb

and a new one =]
keane backwards
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/ffawdjwdskjwlie.jpg?t=1209139951

rsakens
04-25-2008, 11:50 AM
stick to simples man
like that pink throw

Mass Appeal
04-25-2008, 12:50 PM
love you Freak

some work in progress aint been able to post much latley

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ggg.jpg

peace

SCIEnce802
04-25-2008, 12:57 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2v0bvrk.jpg

RFI. SPit
04-25-2008, 01:31 PM
Nice sniper rifle Amk : D

I gotta work on the flow of my N... it leaves an awkward looking gap.. :(
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9325/photo373ev0.jpg

tasty
04-25-2008, 01:44 PM
^^ thats pretty sweet man the 3d loks little off at the middle bottom though

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo22.jpg

South-Pole
04-25-2008, 01:55 PM
Nice awp mass lol..(its an awp right?)or w.e looks good
Zoef nice style,kinda original
rsakens-not liking the s on the one you bumped
esco-simples simples
tasty-work on that O (its an o?)or the letter thats between the b and p,it looks weird

I <3 My City
done on a broken wood board
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42133.jpg

yes i know that S is bigger than the other letters i just realised that
crits?

edit:forgot to post this

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42135.jpg

SCIEnce802
04-25-2008, 02:27 PM
rfi- i like ur style its so different. the 3-d is nice but it looks a little off. sum one might have already said that.

RFI. SPit
04-25-2008, 02:48 PM
Yea, thanks for pointing out the flaw in the 3d.. fixed it decently now-

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3992/photo373ko5.jpg
Still not perfect.. but meh.

Evasion Of Invasion
04-25-2008, 02:49 PM
Rfi Gives Me Massive Boners!!!

GimmieGotShot
04-25-2008, 02:51 PM
word up evade!

tasty
04-25-2008, 02:59 PM
lol my shits really that bad eh.. i thought i had been improving

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo20-1.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo21.jpg

GimmieGotShot
04-25-2008, 03:01 PM
your r's suck. all of them look like Ps. dont connect them, and if you are, make it an uppercase and give it another leg. and im not a big fan of the diamond shape

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 03:39 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190236.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190235.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190234.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190233.jpg
tasty go to new to graff thread and start simples
zof nice style i like it
ill comment more when people post
comment and crits please

Bizzaro
04-25-2008, 03:53 PM
kroc id say go simpler until youve got them down pat then u can start adding extensions n shit
Tasty-fuck colours and 3D get your leters down dont bend them or nuttn keep em straight until they got steez then u can bend em
zof dope
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar2.jpg
my tags shit ye i know im workin on it

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 04:01 PM
ya ive been doing tht style for only like a week im still cleaning it up and stuff
besar looks good nice simples

*cept*
04-25-2008, 04:07 PM
its been a while


http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/44.jpg

old SEX.

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-25-2008, 04:29 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2rm0flu.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-25-2008, 04:35 PM
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/563/52524d7c9080vn9.th.jpg (http://img116.imageshack.us/my.php?image=52524d7c9080vn9.jpg)
BESAR THATS SHITS PRETTY DOPE

Bazer
04-25-2008, 04:36 PM
naaaaaawwwwwwwwww homie....

siko3
04-25-2008, 05:06 PM
heres some of my shit its pretty bad :)
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/siko2.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/siko6.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/kfc.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/siko.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/burnerdone.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/siko3.jpg

legal name idea

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/echoburner1.jpg

some old names and some random stuff

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/freshbattle.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/natopecicecharac.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/notapaintedburner.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/natopeice.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/natopeice3.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/natopeice2.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/soaburner.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/soapeice.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/redandorange.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/4.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t244/phelan_03/blow.jpg

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 06:22 PM
do bars and simples

atlok7
04-25-2008, 06:37 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2715/purplecharacterandthrowdx4.jpg

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 06:48 PM
I'm probably doing something way above my skill level but eh I'm in my experimenting zone right now..

http://a231.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/20/l_4363703e813531428b146067c0f011ee.jpg

And something a little more simpler..

http://a509.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/112/l_d4944e5f76b8f458bad4ef8d276cfe54.jpg

sketch3
04-25-2008, 06:55 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2715/purplecharacterandthrowdx4.jpg

i actualy like this, kareks nice

sickoim no ego maniac but that one with the yellows spots looks like u bit my throw up

NEZ89
04-25-2008, 06:56 PM
i wonder how many times "do simples" and "use bars" are given per page as a crit
Copo- stick to the basics, and please, no color
siko- that fresh is the only one that's actually decent, except for the r, just keep doin that but keep ya bars the same width

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 07:02 PM
yes i said that because people try to do somting sick and it doesnt pull its called crits and usually when people say it they say it to people who need it

South-Pole
04-25-2008, 07:12 PM
Nice awp mass lol..(its an awp right?)or w.e looks good
Zoef nice style,kinda original
rsakens-not liking the s on the one you bumped
esco-simples simples
tasty-work on that O (its an o?)or the letter thats between the b and p,it looks weird

I <3 My City
done on a broken wood board
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42133.jpg

yes i know that S is bigger than the other letters i just realised that
crits?

edit:forgot to post this
messing arount with letters,
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42135.jpg
Bump before going to sleep,its like 2 am where i live lolz

atlok-very dope
siko-hit simples man but im actually feeling that 4th pic
besar-nice simples
capo- not liking the first one at all sorry,+loose the colors

im out now,good night

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 07:28 PM
capo - i would skip the arrows. the clouds are looking like... some kind of flourishing mold/bacteria. your letters are improving but i don't like how your bars tend to have random kinks in the middle of them. doesn't quite flow right. on the second one the bars don't look good sticking out all over the place. experimenting is great to get better though keep it up.

Yeah right now I'm just trying out all types of things, just to expand my knowledge and whatnot...

Yeah I usually don't do arrows, actually never, but I thought it would work in this one. And yeah the clouds after I finished I hated I was trying to do like a misty kind of thing.


I'll keep working, and seriously everyone just saying keep it to simples, honestly watch the thread, because I've done tons in here and I'm finally trying to experiment, and this is for everyone, just because someone does an experiment and it goes wrong, they don't have to suddenly go back to simples. The "stick to simples" comment is so overplayed now.....

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 07:33 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0290.jpg
CRITSSSS

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 07:37 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190236.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190235.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190234.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PB190233.jpg
tasty go to new to graff thread and start simples
zof nice style i like it
ill comment more when people post
comment and crits please
capo simples
nato simples and bars

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 07:42 PM
capo simples
nato simples and bars


Perfect example...

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 07:43 PM
lol sorry capo for one word ill draw your name in simple so u understand wht we mean

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 07:45 PM
howza bout mah crits please:(

JETPACK!!
04-25-2008, 07:46 PM
kroc, i dont know what it is about your sketches. but they really piss me off. do block letters man. cuz that steeze aint workin for ya.

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 07:49 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0290.jpg
CRITSSSS

bump diddly ump

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-25-2008, 07:50 PM
lol sorry capo for one word ill draw your name in simple so u understand wht we mean

i dont understand why ur trying to dis or make fun of other people when u suck ass

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 07:56 PM
umm actually im not i just said ill do his name in simples so he understands wht they mean bout simples
and jetpack im not gonna do blocks but im gonna go simpler

JETPACK!!
04-25-2008, 07:59 PM
you cant even do simples well yourself. he's just gonna mix his steeze in with yours. then he's got the worst of both worlds...

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 08:02 PM
ok girls stop post pictures or crit mine:D

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 08:05 PM
jet i can do simples i did those for a while then got to this i dunno if your trying to be an ass hole or just help but ok
panda its dope i really like your style

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 08:08 PM
thanks

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 08:08 PM
lol sorry capo for one word ill draw your name in simple so u understand wht we mean

Did you not read what I said?

I just said I've done tons of simples and post many on here and people said it was ok, NOW I'm experimenting, I still do simples all the time to just better structure I just don't post them, I'm experimenting to learn what to do and what not to do and to find a style I can improve on....

I'm saying that the whole "Stick to Simples" or whatever comment is so overplayed now because people don't now the history of the writers(like if they just started experimenting and have done thousands of simples), and it seems they only do it so that they are giving out crits, so that in return they receive crits.

Like cheating the system, they just say stick to simples, or thats dope to everyone so that they in return get some crits.


And dude...I KNOW WHAT SIMPLES ARE....

Look back at my posts in this thread I have about 10 posted colored simples, the rest of my 100 to 200 odd simples I've done are in pencils and maybe pen, but I don't color cause they're just for practice.

Here are two..

http://a135.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/59/l_dfa027ae2a9437d44f2618bd5f8fe386.jpg

(This is simple, has a few little stuff but still simple)

http://a108.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/82/l_a4a3088ebff60fd1f26bbd4e9af5b23b.jpg


And if you meant a throw up bubble letter thing then here..

http://a90.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/80/l_131ede549d767c4a1f98cabeb0092819.jpg

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 08:14 PM
csto i commented your already
and ya capo i understand i get it alot now tht i read tht i understand wht u mean and wht your doin
and ive only been writing for 3 and a half months so i think im doin pretty good or going at a good pace

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 08:14 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0660.jpg
a throw my buddy did in my bbook CRITS

JETPACK!!
04-25-2008, 08:14 PM
ctso, im diggin the top. just make all your bars the same width. the bars on the P and R are smaller than they should be. i like that O, it flows well with that steeze youve got going on

Capo Izi
04-25-2008, 08:20 PM
Yeah ctso you got some good flow starting up, with all that wavy shit that will work better later on, I'd say though just work on your 3D you're missing a few lines, and some are a littel wobbly, also the bottoms of all the pieces should all be on the same level

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 08:21 PM
its pretty dope imo panda i like the k and r they flow good

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 08:27 PM
i didnt do it my friend KROWER did hes pretty much has the sickest throw ive eva seen

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 08:27 PM
ctso if u mean bars i did them for a while then i started doin sum other stuff like i said though im gonna go simpler


edit i guess not well i will now looks ok just clean it up a little

atlok7
04-25-2008, 08:35 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/905/caisoneyelloworangeredbur3.jpg

kroc_oner
04-25-2008, 08:40 PM
cais im not feelin it i like the colors thoughs just dunno sumthing off bout it

atlok7
04-25-2008, 08:44 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/905/caisoneyelloworangeredbur3.jpg

bottom page bump

JETPACK!!
04-25-2008, 08:50 PM
its too circily in my opinion, try stretching your letters out so the piece is longer.

Bazer
04-25-2008, 08:57 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/905/caisoneyelloworangeredbur3.jpg

dude atlok, you always make your Cs too small dude. make em bigger. try doing all your letters just about the same exact height.

here's some chit from day before yesterday...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/bazer.jpg

Apel-MH
04-25-2008, 09:01 PM
bottom page bump

Thats dope as fuck bro, but i agree make the C a bit bigger. and i would make the I look less like a T and more like a I, but thats me.

What brand pen did u use for that?

Apel-MH
04-25-2008, 09:04 PM
dude atlok, you always make your Cs too small dude. make em bigger. try doing all your letters just about the same exact height.

here's some chit from day before yesterday...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/bazer.jpg

your first two are defined perfectly and spaced evenly, Your last two letter look a bit squished, and way less defining. would look good i it was consistantly one way. but having them both looks liek you got lazy towards the end. (lol maybe you did i dont know)

Apel-MH
04-25-2008, 09:11 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/samboy7777/Strutbombbb.jpg


All crits apriciated. As you can tell im very new to graff.
:P

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 09:24 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0290.jpg
bump one last time only got one crit:(

Bazer
04-25-2008, 09:30 PM
its a throwie dude. i dont think hes using bars... but uhm.. yeah, alo loose the black lines you did where it should like the litte "shine"? thingss...

ok did it over.
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0660.jpg

lordloss
04-25-2008, 09:35 PM
i feel REALLY toy after looking at all of these :(

atlok7
04-25-2008, 10:16 PM
dude atlok, you always make your Cs too small dude. make em bigger. try doing all your letters just about the same exact height.

here's some chit from day before yesterday...
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/bazer.jpg

alright cool ill try that next sketch, has my structure gotten better? ive been really trying to tone my letters down a lot

La Coka Nostra
04-25-2008, 10:24 PM
Baaaaaaazzzzeeeeeeee Paint It Nugga!

Bazer
04-25-2008, 10:46 PM
alright cool ill try that next sketch, has my structure gotten better? ive been really trying to tone my letters down a lot
yeah. and specially since you stopped doing that style where youre just stacking your bars. lol


Baaaaaaazzzzeeeeeeee Paint It Nugga!

next week maybe. i hope. i really want to.

atlok7
04-25-2008, 11:00 PM
ha dont hate man, that style was illin, and freshly original

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 11:25 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0661.jpg

i hate it but working on it and new name and style i can do wayyy better im just a pile at drawing right now just lazy but crits please

Captain
04-25-2008, 11:27 PM
bottom page bump
I really like this. The letters could use some overall development (comes with practicing a style) but I think there's serious potential there.

sometime in the next week I'll go through and do one of my massive crit-posts, possibly post a couple sketches if I get my camera working.

IlikePie
04-25-2008, 11:28 PM
Kill all the extensions, and don't make your S drop like that. I like that a lot more than your usual style.

Panda Jerk
04-25-2008, 11:30 PM
sick thanks im tryin to go simpler thanks for the crits

AnteUp
04-26-2008, 12:09 AM
fuck this.

ViskOneR
04-26-2008, 12:44 AM
What up, so unlike some I dont mind being here on the tot dock....critique all you want. What I really want to know is which style to stick with. some are old and would be hard to bring back, but im up for suggestions.

Mom bought me a pencil crayon set for christmas that year used it once lol thanks mom. For the record I asked for a prisma set.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00062-copy.jpg
Newest style, thought i was going to stick with it as i like it but you guys tell me what you think
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00063-copy.jpg
Borrowed my homies markers for a weekend out of 30 those were the only colours that still had ink.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00065-copy.jpg
was thinking about writing vision, still am actually...I guess I just can't let go of visk, maybe once i develop my one true style I will switch it up between the two.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00066-copy.jpg
Style before my newest one, i like this style but not this piece I have better letters for this style pics are further down.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00067-copy.jpg
Square style definitely influenced by causr and nixon, before any of you start the whole bite debate oh yeah and the character is from the boondocks cartoon. Aaron Mcgruder style is soo sick.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00068-copy.jpg
Some simple shit I wanted to turn into a stencil but never got around to it
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00069-copy.jpg
I always liked the concept of letters going up and down and at the edge of the wall...my first and best attempt at it.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00070-copy.jpg
Kane influence no lies I loved his style like i loved my mothers milk as a baby, I already got madd hated on for this so no need to remind me of it
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00071-copy.jpg
Painted this and it looked way better, once I get all my pics off my other comp I will show you for your own comparisons.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00072-copy.jpg
2004 seems like it was just the other day
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00073-copy.jpg
Not sure where I got this style, I am kind of feeling it the more I look at it, meh let me know if it is growing on you guys like it is growing on me.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00075-copy.jpg
So this is the style I am feeling the most....I came about this after watching that movie they sell in the store called the Future of Graffiti, pretty interesting stuff. My problem is i still to this day cannot put the letters together meh.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00076-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00077-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00078-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00079-copy.jpg
Sorry for the blotches stupid me was doing some handstyles in sharpies and didnt realize that sketch was underneath.
Thats all folks...

-Leski
04-26-2008, 12:55 AM
imageshack.us
Resize image [y] 640xsomething
Remove resolution bar [y]

fOrSaQeN
04-26-2008, 01:33 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/11rxf21.jpg

because e-thuggin is cool

Capo Izi
04-26-2008, 01:39 AM
Newest experiment from me lab...

http://a164.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/119/l_8c522ef7ada7d8a2b68ff051fd940bd3.jpg

fOrSaQeN
04-26-2008, 01:44 AM
try to even up them bars to be more consistent... but thats just my opinion cap

Capo Izi
04-26-2008, 02:12 AM
^Yeah I got to make my stuff a little more the same size, but yeah good though?

HRbN
04-26-2008, 03:18 AM
visk - the second one down is my favorite simple and clean, much like me you have no idea where to put extentions quite yet.

Capo- not feelin that one, its alittle to crazy and just bleh

Apel-MH
04-26-2008, 04:53 AM
ViskOneR: Some of em were good some wernt. its wierd to give crits when therees like 10 drawings the are all conciderbly diffrent. can i sugest next time to just pick your fav. you'll prob get more crits back.

Anyway your forth is by far the best imo. But some of those pencil sketches would be good in they were down in marker.

South-Pole
04-26-2008, 04:59 AM
Bump before going to sleep,its like 2 am where i live lolz

atlok-very dope
siko-hit simples man but im actually feeling that 4th pic
besar-nice simples
capo- not liking the first one at all sorry,+loose the colors

im out now,good night

bump got no crits

South-Pole
04-26-2008, 05:03 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42133.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42135.jpg


bump got no crits

capo-not gonna tell you to go simple but im not liking the arrows and add-ons,looks too rushed

visk-some of them look good some don't

baze-niice

edit-sorry for double post

fonone
04-26-2008, 06:33 AM
Visk - i think you have way too many arrows and extensions, some of your S's are pretty hot but some other letters like that last K look real ugly. i think if you went a bit easier and toned down the extensions some of them could look pretty good. your 3d on the 4th one is really off aswell.....

rabis - irekn if you fixed up that first R it would be a pretty nice simple.

baze - not liking those letters i think ive seen much better stuff from you

capo - well, i cant be bothered telling you the same thing everyone else has because obviously you dont listen.

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3173/apr26152oy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3173/apr26152oy3.521d6a300c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=401&i=apr26152oy3.jpg)
yea, fuck forsaqen
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1786/apr26151vj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

atlok7
04-26-2008, 09:31 AM
visk- the fifth one down is dope. youve got some potential.

Bizzaro
04-26-2008, 11:30 AM
irekn-your rounded sketch is the best of em all
southpole-your R sketch reminds me of skien or klor i forget which one i duno why
capo-simps
visk-the fourth one is pretty good but lose some of the arrows and connections n shit and keep just the letters n itll loook bomb
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar3.jpg

glyce
04-26-2008, 11:36 AM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank002-1.jpg

capo- that looks cool but i dont like that one arrow coming out of the top of the p and some of the extentions

visk- those are looking sick

atlok7
04-26-2008, 11:40 AM
glyce- try and move the n out from the a, cause rignt now it kinda looks like a u

JETPACK!!
04-26-2008, 11:43 AM
visk, im really feelin your steeze, it warms my heart. unlike someone said, i actually like your extentions. they feel right on many of your pieces. i was looking at your painted piece too, it's done pretty well. looks a bit rushed, but thats only to be expected.

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 11:52 AM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0661.jpg

i hate it but working on it and new name and style i can do wayyy better im just a pile at drawing right now just lazy but crits please


bump

La Coka Nostra
04-26-2008, 11:56 AM
irekn, the green throw on the right of the top picture is dope.

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-26-2008, 12:16 PM
I NEED SOME CRITS PLEASE
http://i31.tinypic.com/6p44rs.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/ae39kk.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/furpqv.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/zswx79.jpg

Bizzaro
04-26-2008, 12:19 PM
theres already a base http://artcrimes.com/base/index.html

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-26-2008, 12:20 PM
Panda Jerk That Shits Pretty Dope I Think The Letters Would Look Better If They Were Jus Outlined Ina Thicker Line Good Shit Tho Keep At It

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 12:21 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0661.jpg

i hate it but working on it and new name and style i can do wayyy better im just a pile at drawing right now just lazy but crits please


bump



again bottom of page

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-26-2008, 12:22 PM
theres already a base http://artcrimes.com/base/index.html

YA DUDE I KNO W/E THO I MEAN THERE IS MORE THEN ONE OF EVERYTAH IT JUST NECESARELY DONT HAVE TO BE ON THE NET

atlok7
04-26-2008, 12:28 PM
yeah but if hes old school dope, just add a different number to your name

glyce
04-26-2008, 12:32 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank002-1.jpg

capo- that looks cool but i dont like that one arrow coming out of the top of the p and some of the extentions

visk- those are looking sick
bumpin

fOrSaQeN
04-26-2008, 12:45 PM
just bombing over peices i did for people in my black book cause i ran outta room :(


http://i28.tinypic.com/24p9ma8.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/176ys7.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
04-26-2008, 02:20 PM
Forsaqen - not feelin ur throw just dont seem consistant an try makin the bottom of ur S heavier its to top heavy and sets it off balance
Glyce - work on ut handstyle lil to loopy
Panda - not feelin the S seems to thin i say simple it up a bit with no sharp curves and thinkin it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01204.jpg
crits?

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 02:24 PM
ok im gettin no love in ther battle forum does anyone wanta battle


word KEMS

Evasion Of Invasion
04-26-2008, 02:25 PM
im down i need a challenge

Atomik
04-26-2008, 02:45 PM
nice shit evasion of invasion
seipuk
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/04-24-08_1539.jpg

rsakens
04-26-2008, 03:12 PM
keane backwards
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/ffawdjwdskjwlie.jpg?t=1209139951
bump any more critick on this one ^
& the new stuff
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00018-6.jpg?t=1209239671
few quick sketches
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00019-5.jpg?t=1209240269
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00020-5.jpg?t=1209240323
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00023-2.jpg?t=1209240350

rsakens
04-26-2008, 03:17 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/905/caisoneyelloworangeredbur3.jpg


http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2715/purplecharacterandthrowdx4.jpg

bump there preaty dope nice work man

JETPACK!!
04-26-2008, 04:05 PM
ok im gettin no love in ther battle forum does anyone wanta battle


word KEMS


im down i need a challenge

if its a painted piece battle. im down. if its a sketch, ignore me.

evade, thats startin to look good, i like how you brought your letters closer, your piece needed that. the char is meh though

Evasion Of Invasion
04-26-2008, 04:16 PM
its a sketch one... i dont have any paint except some black:(

Samp1e
04-26-2008, 04:41 PM
colored in ps:

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2246/against2copyrd3.png (http://imageshack.us)

rsakens -- love the simple style. 1st train sketch is hot, specially the A and N. K should be a little bigger though

atomik -- letters are too jagged and disjointed. simplify.

love the char atlok, and the blue pen piece.

MarOne...
04-26-2008, 04:46 PM
Samp- Thats dope, man.


I'm in on that KEMS battle!

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 05:40 PM
aieet just send the pics to meeeee pm me befor u do it


black book or canvas either way crits please

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0664.jpg

Bizzaro
04-26-2008, 06:06 PM
knows-dope
base and soank-use bars and keep em straight
nice throws forsaken
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar4.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar5.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar6.jpg
crits

soraflair
04-26-2008, 06:07 PM
Ignore the stuff on the top of the page:

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5313/041508114404gp4.jpg

I'm still learning I used to write in just boxes. Now I tried to change it a little bit.

Capo Izi
04-26-2008, 06:19 PM
Some simpler stuff

http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_45363972bee940161722e0a1e6f9f4fd.jpg

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 06:24 PM
aieet just send the pics to meeeee pm me befor u do it


black book or canvas either way crits please

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0664.jpg

bumpppyyy

and buuzzzarrr looks oh so fresh

Panda Jerk
04-26-2008, 06:25 PM
Some simpler stuff

http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_45363972bee940161722e0a1e6f9f4fd.jpg

keep workin on it u can for shure get somthing going with yur steez

La Coka Nostra
04-26-2008, 08:14 PM
probly the best stuff i seen yet from you capo.
don't get me wrong though, you aren't at paint level yet
keep fucking with it.
especially the P

Capo Izi
04-26-2008, 09:29 PM
..I have painted though..?

Well throws...but still...

La Coka Nostra
04-26-2008, 09:35 PM
just because you've painted doesnt mean you should
na mean?
no disrespect.

Capo Izi
04-26-2008, 09:41 PM
well yeah I understand that, but the simple I did above I don't think is my best work, and I think I do have enough talent to bomb at least...

Definitely not to piece, but I have ok throws I think...but yeah...I will still work on my stuff.

Fl3m 1
04-26-2008, 09:45 PM
dude u dont have to have talent to paint bro...dont listen to that fool
just gotta have a creative outlook...just becuase people dont like your shit dont mean shit
you do it for you...thats it

wafflecakee
04-26-2008, 09:46 PM
practice practice practice. its gettingn better though capo

atlok7
04-26-2008, 09:59 PM
Some simpler stuff

http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_45363972bee940161722e0a1e6f9f4fd.jpg

nice improvement man

-Leski
04-26-2008, 10:23 PM
^word.
Capo thats the shit right there. keep wit that. No more trying to go crazy, crazy should just come along naturally once you get it down.

Teez-EmM!!!
04-26-2008, 10:40 PM
What up, so unlike some I dont mind being here on the tot dock....critique all you want. What I really want to know is which style to stick with. some are old and would be hard to bring back, but im up for suggestions.

Mom bought me a pencil crayon set for christmas that year used it once lol thanks mom. For the record I asked for a prisma set.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00062-copy.jpg
Newest style, thought i was going to stick with it as i like it but you guys tell me what you think
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00063-copy.jpg
Borrowed my homies markers for a weekend out of 30 those were the only colours that still had ink.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00065-copy.jpg
was thinking about writing vision, still am actually...I guess I just can't let go of visk, maybe once i develop my one true style I will switch it up between the two.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00066-copy.jpg
Style before my newest one, i like this style but not this piece I have better letters for this style pics are further down.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00067-copy.jpg
Square style definitely influenced by causr and nixon, before any of you start the whole bite debate oh yeah and the character is from the boondocks cartoon. Aaron Mcgruder style is soo sick.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00068-copy.jpg
Some simple shit I wanted to turn into a stencil but never got around to it
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00069-copy.jpg
I always liked the concept of letters going up and down and at the edge of the wall...my first and best attempt at it.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00070-copy.jpg
Kane influence no lies I loved his style like i loved my mothers milk as a baby, I already got madd hated on for this so no need to remind me of it
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00071-copy.jpg
Painted this and it looked way better, once I get all my pics off my other comp I will show you for your own comparisons.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00072-copy.jpg
2004 seems like it was just the other day
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00073-copy.jpg
Not sure where I got this style, I am kind of feeling it the more I look at it, meh let me know if it is growing on you guys like it is growing on me.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00075-copy.jpg
So this is the style I am feeling the most....I came about this after watching that movie they sell in the store called the Future of Graffiti, pretty interesting stuff. My problem is i still to this day cannot put the letters together meh.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00076-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00077-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00078-copy.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00079-copy.jpg
Sorry for the blotches stupid me was doing some handstyles in sharpies and didnt realize that sketch was underneath.
Thats all folks...

all this would be ill with out al the extentions

Apel-MH
04-26-2008, 11:18 PM
Capo,i disagree with most of these people, your good enoghf to paint, as long as you keep it simple. i loveyour other shit. but i agree gt the simple down then go for what you were doing before. Also painting is so diffrent to drawing, some people go the other way, my paints are 100 times better then my pen work.tho neither is good enoghf for me to do my own work you know.

Keep doing what ur doing its fun to see people get better :P

-Leski
04-26-2008, 11:44 PM
Simples simples simples.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7671/geski8za7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

La Coka Nostra
04-26-2008, 11:55 PM
dude u dont have to have talent to paint bro...dont listen to that fool
just gotta have a creative outlook...just becuase people dont like your shit dont mean shit
you do it for you...thats it


think about what you just said.
you dont have to have talent to paint?
you would say something like that. i've seen your shit.
you shouldn't paint either.
and if you're doing it for you, then paint in your room where nobody has to look at your ugly fucking "bombzzzzzz yo"
lawl...

fOrSaQeN
04-27-2008, 12:03 AM
yea, fuck forsaqen
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1786/apr26151vj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://i31.tinypic.com/23l1ouf.jpg

Apel-MH
04-27-2008, 12:11 AM
think about what you just said.
you dont have to have talent to paint?
you would say something like that. i've seen your shit.
you shouldn't paint either.
and if you're doing it for you, then paint in your room where nobody has to look at your ugly fucking "bombzzzzzz yo"
lawl...

comon man keep it clean. dont turn this thread into a abusing freenzy

What he's saying is you dont need to be a king to paint on walls. You still need a certain amount of tallent. but look at 70% of all graf is ethier tags or qucik ugly throwies.

Any coloured bomb looks better then that imo, so unless you dont do throwies or tags there is no way you can tell someone else not to wright coz they YOU think its ugly.

HOWEVER.

If you go painting on walls with no tallent you'll look liek a cock and it will be hard to gain respect (amoungst the right people, not the fully sick fags that wright on evereything with there ugly tags, and respecty quanity not qulaty) even when you get good.

(so you know this is sams friend not him)

Apel-MH
04-27-2008, 12:13 AM
Simples simples simples.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7671/geski8za7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I love that.

-Leski
04-27-2008, 12:38 AM
Thanks, I love how this style is turning out.
The e is a little off, the K's bottom is too 90 degreeish, and the I is a little mishapen...
but hey, If I could pull it off perfect I wouldnt be posting here..

freakeenyc
04-27-2008, 01:03 AM
capo big improvemnet from the other thing u posted..dude..the3ds off..and teh letters arent consistent in thickness...the loop in the P is funny, so is the bend in the lower right of the A...the hole in the o is not centered(this one doesnt matter as much)..

Desipher
04-27-2008, 01:06 AM
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freakeenyc
04-27-2008, 01:08 AM
thats pretty cool dude..it wud look better inked...and even better in color..

Desipher
04-27-2008, 01:17 AM
.

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-27-2008, 11:03 AM
that shits pretty ill^ but i think the bubbles fucked it up

Bizzaro
04-27-2008, 11:49 AM
knows-dope
base and soank-use bars and keep em straight
nice throws forsaken
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar4.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar5.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar6.jpg
crits

bump for crits bottom of the page

JustKoolinB
04-27-2008, 12:08 PM
The first and second bisar is dopee.
the last one, fix the E and maybe, dont curve the e so much up and make the top bar of the e thicker.
&& in my opinion i personally don't like the thing pokin out the A at the bottom , it just like comes out of no where.

but yeahh great job! ;D
looks good.


and fredom writer.
That looks so bomb.
your letters flow nicely together and the colors were well picked.
nice style ;D
<3

SCIEnce802
04-27-2008, 12:14 PM
uh wow this page is fukin Fresh.
no one ruin it.

kroc_oner
04-27-2008, 12:23 PM
free dom i like your stlyle and color scheme

kroc_oner
04-27-2008, 01:06 PM
its probaly cause there used to seeing burners and shit

rsakens
04-27-2008, 01:30 PM
bump any more critick on this one ^
& the new stuff
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00018-6.jpg?t=1209239671
few quick sketches
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00019-5.jpg?t=1209240269
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00020-5.jpg?t=1209240323
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00023-2.jpg?t=1209240350

bump any crits on that 238 ?

Proper
04-27-2008, 02:01 PM
Your numbers are better than your letters, haha.

Even your colouring is must better with the numbers.
Just write 238 from now on, haha.

rsakens
04-27-2008, 02:04 PM
Your numbers are better than your letters, haha.

Even your colouring is must better with the numbers.
Just write 238 from now on, haha.
lol thankx
=]this was for a battle so i put more time in to it then usually

Proper
04-27-2008, 02:09 PM
PROPERGEISTO says:
lol thankx
=]this was for a battle so i put more time in to it then usually
__________________
PROPERGEISTO says:
wouldn't you put the same effort into your own name? lmfao.
XCile Style says:
tell him to spend more time on his shit lol
XCile Style says:
hahahaha youd put more into your own name lol
XCile Style says:
tell him to fix his priorities lol
_____________________________

Cile is a silly girl so he says "lol" a lot

oakstr1
04-27-2008, 02:31 PM
fredom-writer = i think your style is fresh..could you paint that?
bizzaro - those simples are DOPE.

b0gus
04-27-2008, 02:46 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus007.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus008.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-27-2008, 02:49 PM
second one would be dope if painted.
i find simple shit looks ass loads better on walls than on paper

just graffiti
04-27-2008, 03:40 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2iragxf.jpg

i was gonna write astro but i only felt like doing an A haha..sorry for the size of it.. i have nothing on my computer that will make it smaller lol

Bizzaro
04-27-2008, 03:56 PM
just graffiti u need to do simples cus it looks lame. keep your bars the same width and make the A <<<<like that then after u can start bending the bars slowly and shit or make some shorter n longer and blow it outa proportions after a while but it starts with simps :D
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar7.jpg
no tag yet gota work on the handy steez
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar8.jpg

kroc_oner
04-27-2008, 04:18 PM
BESAR LOOKS nice just your paper is mad dirty

Bizzaro
04-27-2008, 04:21 PM
just graffiti u need to do simples cus it looks lame. keep your bars the same width and make the A <<<<like that then after u can start bending the bars slowly and shit or make some shorter n longer and blow it outa proportions after a while but it starts with simps :D
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar7.jpg
no tag yet gota work on the handy steez
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisar8.jpg

bump bottem of the page. yeah i know the papers dirty fuck erasers lol

La Coka Nostra
04-27-2008, 04:55 PM
people refuse to believe that really simple letters look insanely ill when pulled off right.
and it's not like its hard.
just draw regular letters, round out the corners, and bam...NYC king status lol...
but really. do that.

not you besar...i like the first one
the e on the second one seems out of place.

Desipher
04-27-2008, 05:05 PM
.

"Riot"
04-27-2008, 05:45 PM
666?
uhhh dude.

Desipher
04-27-2008, 05:48 PM
ya i dont care has nothing to do with gesus or any of em

Panda Jerk
04-27-2008, 05:49 PM
i dont like satan

"Riot"
04-27-2008, 05:49 PM
hah they might get pissed.

Desipher
04-27-2008, 05:51 PM
o well if they get pissed they get pissed what can ya do
and i dont care about satan im not religious

Panda Jerk
04-27-2008, 05:53 PM
i like God

ESKiMO2
04-27-2008, 06:06 PM
Fuck god.

kroc_oner
04-27-2008, 06:17 PM
well here goes three pages of religious beef just cause u had to say fuck god

MarOne...
04-27-2008, 06:26 PM
fuck god. I worship Raptor Jesus.

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/raptorjesus.jpg

TronMzero
04-27-2008, 06:33 PM
Fuck god.


well here goes three pages of religious beef just cause u had to say fuck god


fuck god. I worship Raptor Jesus.

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/raptorjesus.jpg


hahahahahahaha.

kroc_oner
04-27-2008, 06:34 PM
lmfao
so im not particaipating in spam
tht looks sick desipher

edit damn i though i was in a sig lol

SWIV3Lone
04-27-2008, 07:09 PM
god sucks my cock every night