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JETPACK!!
04-30-2008, 08:35 PM
The top one is pretty sick
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1306.jpg

you live in the 613? we should meet up at HOP one day. ayo, you paint with gero?

ill have a sketch up in a bit.

NAIK_SHOES
04-30-2008, 08:37 PM
c.n.k: niiiiiiiiiiiice sketch

simple K

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4886/img0100le5.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0100le5.jpg)

atlok7
04-30-2008, 08:45 PM
yo cnk- what grey marker is that

atlok7
04-30-2008, 08:47 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2150/caisorangepinkyellowgs1.jpg
yo rots- i used your advice on the c and the s. i got a little carried away with the funky colors

Haz-E
04-30-2008, 08:50 PM
NAIK that is a real dope K for reals

NEURO ur fucking dope if u ever down for a exchange im down

atlok i wanna se that painted style is cream as fuck dude dope ish

havnt posted in nuff times so wat yall think

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9237/0000531vj9.jpg

atlok7
04-30-2008, 08:56 PM
haz-e- thanks dude. yeah i have no paint right now. but when i do another piece flicks will b up. i like that style dude, real old school feeling to it. only one problem, between the L and the second E theres that opening. my advice is to put like a star there or an arrow

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 09:00 PM
:( I'm neglected

c.n.k
04-30-2008, 09:01 PM
I used a grey prisma, and Haz-E i'll rock an exchange.What you write?

Haz-E
04-30-2008, 09:31 PM
yo CNK i write elect from mob crew i might not be able to get urs done right away but it will happen were just working on a mixtape right now n i got a couple of copllabs to do this weekend

c.n.k
04-30-2008, 09:35 PM
yeah dont sweat it man..just send it to me wenever.

RezOner..
04-30-2008, 09:45 PM
haze thats fresh to death right there.

MarOne...
04-30-2008, 09:52 PM
c.n.k: niiiiiiiiiiiice sketch

simple K

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4886/img0100le5.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0100le5.jpg)

shiiiit. Kid, you kidding me? :| You can't make a little change here and there to make it your K. Quit chomping.

kroc_oner
04-30-2008, 09:56 PM
roke looks nuthing like yours lol

JETPACK!!
04-30-2008, 09:58 PM
ive been stuck in a fucking rut lately. i cant seem to get any extensions on my simples i like. i think im gonna get the fuck up like mad until something comes up.

woot for simples? in the mean time im gonna find some funky fills to do for my simples

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 10:21 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00842.jpg

Finished. Clowney, not really feeling any of 'em.

I really wish you guys would just hate on my work one of these times >_<
Bump.

La Coka Nostra
04-30-2008, 10:24 PM
YOUR SHIT SUCKS *****!



nah, but that R has serious flavahh

joshthesk8ter5
04-30-2008, 10:35 PM
Crits?

http://i28.tinypic.com/wqq2cp.jpg

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 10:40 PM
Give 'em first...

AZTEKA
04-30-2008, 10:48 PM
that astro sketch has flow to it i like it, and pie that r is nice and clean homie, here's some sketch i did a few days ago.
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5968/04300xk0.jpg

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 10:51 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/atlokhelp.jpg
i couldn't really help the A. The bars didn't line up

i can understand the balance for the c but i don't know why the a?

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 10:57 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0045.jpg

crits?

some uncessary extentionz.

CZAR-[PWC]
04-30-2008, 11:00 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/14dmv5u.jpg

bad pic but crits

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 11:02 PM
Give crits to get 'em you assholes.

TagsRover
04-30-2008, 11:15 PM
Ilikepie - i can't really read it, but i think you could turn that last letter into a tight char
Joshthesk8 - the diagnol astro is sweet, but the SDNE letters are too angled and look like maybe they could be structurally sounder
Azteka - looks cool, maybe a little wider letters, my preference only though
nocancontrol - the white and black is nice
czar - the style is kind of weird and undeveloped, letters aren't really there

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/TagsRover/scan0001.jpg

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 11:18 PM
It says RA...

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:20 PM
;1084851']http://i26.tinypic.com/14dmv5u.jpg

bad pic but crits

fucking lettor skructure, fucking make blocks aand not bits.

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:21 PM
Ilikepie - i can't really read it, but i think you could turn that last letter into a tight char
Joshthesk8 - the diagnol astro is sweet, but the SDNE letters are too angled and look like maybe they could be structurally sounder
Azteka - looks cool, maybe a little wider letters, my preference only though
nocancontrol - the white and black is nice
czar - the style is kind of weird and undeveloped, letters aren't really there

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/TagsRover/scan0001.jpg

extention on the e got to go. nice r and k tho.

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:22 PM
that astro sketch has flow to it i like it, and pie that r is nice and clean homie, here's some sketch i did a few days ago.
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5968/04300xk0.jpg

the letters look crowded cuz of the nembus cloud.

Trestoner707
04-30-2008, 11:25 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/009.jpg

crits

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:28 PM
NAIK that is a real dope K for reals

NEURO ur fucking dope if u ever down for a exchange im down

atlok i wanna se that painted style is cream as fuck dude dope ish

havnt posted in nuff times so wat yall think

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9237/0000531vj9.jpg

background is kinda of a dondi bite, but i personally don't give a fuck... emmm, make your base colors lighter so your outline is more defined, not the right word, but whatever.


make the el, and the other word closer together, not so far apart.

most people just stack the words on eachother to have balance.

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:30 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/009.jpg

crits

i see that you understand the concept of blocks somewhat, but go back to simples. it looks goofy, no diss intended.

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:33 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00842.jpg

Finished. Clowney, not really feeling any of 'em.

nice elephant, but don't fallow the internet trends, *hints the teef*

TagsRover
04-30-2008, 11:34 PM
Nocancontrol which extension? the bottom one or the middle one? thats close to the e i used to use in my tag and it just doesn't really match, and now that i'm looking at it i should have made the top of the e longer

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 11:36 PM
Elephant? Ok? And I like my teeth...


Nice triple post, lets follow the internet trends and throw what you have to say into one post ;P

IlikePie
04-30-2008, 11:48 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00844.jpg

<3 Crayolas for fills, they come out so solid, and beautiful. Basically impossible for them to streak, and never really run out... >_>

Really too lazy to try too much experimenting today.

NoCanControl
04-30-2008, 11:56 PM
Nocancontrol which extension? the bottom one or the middle one? thats close to the e i used to use in my tag and it just doesn't really match, and now that i'm looking at it i should have made the top of the e longer

both of em, it would pretty tight if you had neither.

i LIKEPIE- your seckound lettor (a?) looks like an elephant. but its tight. they do that shit in mexico, make their letters look like an animal.

Trestoner707
05-01-2008, 12:00 AM
last summer
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/015.jpg

more recent
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/002.jpg

crits

TagsRover
05-01-2008, 12:07 AM
Alright, awesome, thanks, i'll drop both of them and try bringing in the k closer to the e and post something tomorrow

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 12:09 AM
Oh, ok, never really checked Meskin graff, but I'm a bean, so its all good. And yes, it's an a

Chump
05-01-2008, 12:09 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2zp8274.jpg
workin on a throwie... crits?
Pie- like it... pretty much what the rest of your stuff looks like... ive never seen your painted stuff.
REK- you got the idea of bars just keep working with the structure of the letters...and take out the extra bars in the middle and bottom of your E
Trestoner- to many extensions...clean them up makem alil but more simple and smooth

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 12:14 AM
I don't really paint as much as I'd like to :( Gotta hold down a job, pass school, probation and be in 3 programs for probation. Not much time to do much, so I've been just putting up stickers until life gets a bit easier, you know?

And I don't think I'm good enough to hit the streets in such a manner right now.

Chump
05-01-2008, 12:19 AM
yea i hear ya....i got a job and college... but classes end next week... so getting up this summer...i need to work on my stickers...

Trestoner707
05-01-2008, 12:21 AM
ill see what i can do

Chump
05-01-2008, 12:23 AM
well pie.. theres only one way to get and painting and thats by painting... but it takes some time getting use to getting something from paper to wall

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 12:24 AM
But who knows, I should be getting paint from a friend this weekend, and some more from my parents sooner or later. Just gotta set this shit up right :)

TagsRover
05-01-2008, 12:30 AM
yea i hear ya....i got a job and college... but classes end next week... so getting up this summer...i need to work on my stickers...

Dude, can i get a hell yeah for finals finally being over and no more BS school all summer. College is sweet but it's time for summer

Ilikepie, for some reason it reminds me of a whale, like moby dick, no, it's the whale from pinocchio
http://www.gibsonbooks.com/shop_image/product/44097.jpg

Chump
05-01-2008, 12:36 AM
i hate exams... but glad there here

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 01:06 AM
Monstro!!!

TagsRover
05-01-2008, 02:03 AM
Yeah, it seemed so familar to me everytime i saw it, too bad thats way too obscure of a reference if you started adding pinocchio's to your pieces lol

fonone
05-01-2008, 03:54 AM
a new style im working with, only really just started experimenting with it

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1511/may01159ih1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1511/may01159ih1.4e9ad50bc7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=may01159ih1.jpg)

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.dbd9a52b9b.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01160pw1.jpg)

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3255/may01157ef5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3255/may01157ef5.6c46ab6897.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01157ef5.jpg)

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.c8e886a8a4.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=apr26151pu6.jpg)
and a simple
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3462/may01158cq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3462/may01158cq6.46465fc8ff.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01158cq6.jpg)

rsakens
05-01-2008, 06:06 AM
that yellow E in the simple looks alright
work on that
the bar on the r and k is a bit to far out in my opinion

SCIEnce802
05-01-2008, 06:10 AM
Not my character... This page has some nice stuff.

http://i31.tinypic.com/i6b3hk.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/2nbznec.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/2eam5as.jpg

atlok7
05-01-2008, 07:07 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2150/caisorangepinkyellowgs1.jpg
yo rots- i used your advice on the c and the s. i got a little carried away with the funky colors

i dont really think any one saw this
holy shit, there are so many kids that are in college on this site. i wanna b in college. i have two more years left untill..:(

JETPACK!!
05-01-2008, 07:30 AM
honest to god. i wanna stab so many people in this thread in the eye. give crits if you want them you donkey dick sucking half a testicle baseheads.

atlok. i like that. the bigger C looks better. i dont like your stars though. the points on em are uneven an sloppy. i know its intentional.. but i still dont like em.

pie, start putting a B on your sketches, doing 2/3rds of your name is kinna annoying. nice letters though.

Evasion Of Invasion
05-01-2008, 08:00 AM
[QUOTE=fonone;1084960]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.c8e886a8a4.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=apr26151pu6.jpg)
atleast forsaqen gives crits

Evasion Of Invasion
05-01-2008, 08:04 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.c8e886a8a4.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=apr26151pu6.jpg)
atleast forsaqen gives crits

fonone
05-01-2008, 08:26 AM
a new style im working with, only really just started experimenting with it

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1511/may01159ih1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1511/may01159ih1.4e9ad50bc7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=may01159ih1.jpg)

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.dbd9a52b9b.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01160pw1.jpg)

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3255/may01157ef5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3255/may01157ef5.6c46ab6897.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01157ef5.jpg)

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/240/apr26151pu6.c8e886a8a4.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=146&i=apr26151pu6.jpg)
and a simple
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3462/may01158cq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3462/may01158cq6.46465fc8ff.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01158cq6.jpg)

bump,

atlok thats pretty sexy just dont like the right top part of the I, i like your A though, has a goofy looking appearance and in my eyes it works.

and evasion i didnt think i could say anything constructive in regards to the previous posts.... i dont want to give shit crits like "thats dope" theres no fucking point...

Chump
05-01-2008, 09:02 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2zp8274.jpg
workin on a throwie... crits?
Pie- like it... pretty much what the rest of your stuff looks like... ive never seen your painted stuff.
REK- you got the idea of bars just keep working with the structure of the letters...and take out the extra bars in the middle and bottom of your E
Trestoner- to many extensions...clean them up makem alil but more simple and smooth

didnt get any critz

TagsRover
05-01-2008, 09:38 AM
Fonone - i don't really like the crazy ones, the simple is the best, and the fourth one looks pretty good but your E doesn't have a lot of structue, work on simpler letters and once they have more structue come back to this style
SCIEnce802 - i like the first one, but the letters are kind of hard to make out, and that char is sick even if it's not yours
Atlok - that one's looking really good, the C is definently much better, and i agree with jetpack that if those stars were sharp it would really pop off. And you've got some sick coloring skills, also have you tried making the horizontal line in the s fatter? i feel like it would flow better.
Chump - it's decent, the S is a little wide and i don't really like the e, but thats just personal preference

-Those are my opinions only, obviously i'm not a graffiti legend so feel free to ignore

So here is a simple i've been working on, thinking about trying to add some 3-D and ink, what do you all think?

Edit: added 3-d

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/TagsRover/Rek-3D.jpg

Drakula
05-01-2008, 11:36 AM
The throwup I'm currently rocking:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/Picture2-1.png

Rek don't have the R kicker in two parts.Just have one leg coming out of it and don't bend it yet.Same with the K.Also make all the edges straight and not really sharp.

NoCanControl
05-01-2008, 11:54 AM
Fonone - i don't really like the crazy ones, the simple is the best, and the fourth one looks pretty good but your E doesn't have a lot of structue, work on simpler letters and once they have more structue come back to this style
SCIEnce802 - i like the first one, but the letters are kind of hard to make out, and that char is sick even if it's not yours
Atlok - that one's looking really good, the C is definently much better, and i agree with jetpack that if those stars were sharp it would really pop off. And you've got some sick coloring skills, also have you tried making the horizontal line in the s fatter? i feel like it would flow better.
Chump - it's decent, the S is a little wide and i don't really like the e, but thats just personal preference

-Those are my opinions only, obviously i'm not a graffiti legend so feel free to ignore

So here is a simple i've been working on, thinking about trying to add some 3-D and ink, what do you all think?

Edit: added 3-d

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/TagsRover/Rek-3D.jpg

NICE, see it looks bettor. now consentrate on teh flow, and your shit is so legit. i take that back, but you could cut off some of those sharp edges. and you'll be good.

NoCanControl
05-01-2008, 12:01 PM
Oh, ok, never really checked Meskin graff, but I'm a bean, so its all good. And yes, it's an a

yea, i'm a bean too, but more of a washed out of the culture, but not too much. i still know what wetta' means, lol.

Mass Appeal
05-01-2008, 01:58 PM
Sup guys...how is everyone....i have so much shit on at this time im probably gonna be putting graffiti on hold....ill be back writing fully again in like 3 months...ill obviously pop in with the odd thing but nothing major like i normally post eh....so....keep up all the GREAT work and be good !

MarOne...
05-01-2008, 03:22 PM
^^^probably 'cause he's playing GTA4. Lmao.

Raby, that throw is really dope man.

letsgobombin
05-01-2008, 03:27 PM
few pen freestyles
hazard
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1176.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1178.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1179.jpg
should i continue with this style?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1169.jpg

rek- your startin simple take off the add ons and blunt it a bit,then now start experimenting
sokeh- i like that throwie, your s looks like its wearin a hat and on the e make the horizantal bit overlap not the vertical if you get what i mean
irekn- iv seen a lot better stuff from you, your pieces have alot of little bits stickin out
raby- im lovin that throw

SCIEnce802
05-01-2008, 03:32 PM
Tags- Take the left extension off the R and make it flow a little bit more. It will look a lot better.

Desipher
05-01-2008, 03:47 PM
.

Teez-EmM!!!
05-01-2008, 04:31 PM
foneone that deffinity has an ill style to it you just need to fix it up a bit and keep working at it.
raby that trowy up is sooooooooo illlllllll. get that up every were man.

SAID
05-01-2008, 04:38 PM
ahaha desipher, i thought you stopped man..
id fill that in with black and purple.

Bizzaro
05-01-2008, 05:00 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/bisarthrow.jpg

NoCanControl
05-01-2008, 05:07 PM
not done just doodles n shit
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture267.jpg

don't connect the r and the e, it's wierd. i used to do that all the time liike, two years ago.

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 05:14 PM
pie, start putting a B on your sketches, doing 2/3rds of your name is kinna annoying. nice letters though.


Might just keep it as RA, I don't like the symmetry the R and A have.

NAIK_SHOES
05-01-2008, 05:17 PM
swore: Nice R dude
bizaro: nice throw
letsgobombing: i like the red pocs
drakula:damn nice throw

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/4852/img0114vv3.th.jpg (http://img260.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0114vv3.jpg)

comments please

shiva - the destroyer
05-01-2008, 05:49 PM
naik, i like it, but the bottom doesn't add someting to the letters, try to make it a part of the letter, not just an underscore or something.

sanrtizer
05-01-2008, 05:56 PM
irekn- the letters look alright but the style your goin for isnt workin imo i dont like how theyre soooo close together
raby- dope throw
letsgobombin- keep sketchin
swore- nice peice but im not really feelin those throws or hands
naik- i like that style alot......DOPE
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9615/img0205mm4.jpg
crits

MarOne...
05-01-2008, 06:21 PM
Sanr! <333

Soboe!
05-01-2008, 06:22 PM
Al Roker, post more pics please :)

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 07:39 PM
From this....

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00584.jpg


To this.....
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00842.jpg

In a few months. I think it's funny :p

AnteUp
05-01-2008, 07:44 PM
pie- i miss that old style :(...
nasr-damn bro. you've gotten so much better,

IlikePie
05-01-2008, 07:46 PM
I'm too wishy washy on graffiti, I like to change things up as much as I can :P I'm likin' that Ante, I don't have the willpower to do something like that :P

NoCanControl
05-01-2008, 07:46 PM
irekn- the letters look alright but the style your goin for isnt workin imo i dont like how theyre soooo close together
raby- dope throw
letsgobombin- keep sketchin
swore- nice peice but im not really feelin those throws or hands
naik- i like that style alot......DOPE
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9615/img0205mm4.jpg
crits

TIGHT, nice idea about the dots, and that bit thinggy above the leg of the R is a little too far out. but besides that it looks tight.

oakstr1
05-01-2008, 07:47 PM
chump - i like the simples a lot. the s is dope. i would take out the quote things at the end
sanrtizer - that looks nice. not feelin the leg of the
letsgobombin - if you cleand it up. i think it would look good. fix the d.

fuckin with a new name akoner..dont know if someone already writes it
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8720/ak1zl5.jpg
did them really fast. just to see what people think.

atlok7
05-01-2008, 07:59 PM
TIGHT, nice idea about the dots, and that bit thinggy above the leg of the R is a little too far out. but besides that it looks tight.

its a nice sketch, but hes wayy not the first one to think of the xray dots

-GEKS-
05-01-2008, 08:21 PM
oak- i cant tell what the 2nd letter is work on that its like a blob
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1641.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1644.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1645.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1642.jpg

AnteUp
05-01-2008, 08:45 PM
haha sorry. i deleted it.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/05-01-08_1818-1.jpg
sorry. not very good pic.
geks. simples... like me :)

seywhat
05-01-2008, 09:21 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage68.jpg
tryin new shit, couldnt think of a y. exchanges tomorrow :)
ante- i dont think u should have done the outline and the backround the same color, other than thats its pretty straight
geks- dont bring your s up so high on the top simp, thats the best one imo keep workin with that
oak- i like the a but try to make the k more like the a like all rounded off
nasr- fuckin ill, thats all i can say man.
pie- both styles are dope, u sould try to work them together some how

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-01-2008, 09:25 PM
can any of u pls teach me to graffitu pls

atlok7
05-01-2008, 09:37 PM
yo roten check out the last page first post, it was my latest sketch.
and i watched your new signature for a good 2 mins

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-01-2008, 09:40 PM
I dig the C a lot better, and you lined up the bars on your A way better, the bar in the middle should still be a lil more connected and not just floating there so much though, also a bit smaller, it blocks too much of the letters. Your I is still wonky, it's smaller and more connected which is better, but the bar on the top doesn't look like a bar, it's not consistant at all. And I think I've heard something similar to that (About my sig) at least 8 times in the last hour.

fonone
05-01-2008, 09:48 PM
a new style im working with, only really just started experimenting with it


http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7339/may01160pw1.dbd9a52b9b.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=may01160pw1.jpg)

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yea so i have a few different crits for this some saying i should keep at the style and some saying i should try a different approach, any more views?

sor - i think that blue simple and the last one have potential, with that second one lose the brown shit inside the letters and the white/silver lines in the shadow imo. after that if you cleaned it up itd look alright irekn.

nasr - the only thing i dont like about it is the extension at the end of the S, kinda kills the flow,

oak - i think you really have to fix up that N... i dont know any advice to fix it up maybe try a capital idk.

seyar - thats pretty good i just dont like the leg on the R. maybe have it coming out further up thepointy bit (idk what to call it) im not sure.

AnteUp
05-01-2008, 10:12 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0004-1.jpg
nother simple... aesop.
seyar-make the top part of the loop straight.

Panda Jerk
05-01-2008, 10:32 PM
i gotta sick new style im workin on i like it a lot its got potential imo i will post pics in a few days wen i get my comp to work im on my friends ps3;)

ghost city
05-01-2008, 10:40 PM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002-1.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001-1.jpg

aesop- looking good, nice and simple, some of the 3ds weird though, like on the A and E
fonone- I cant even read that, I'm thinking go for a style change up, those colours are kinda sketchy too, oranges and blues sometimes look weird cause theyre complementary colours. try some simple stuff and dont work too hard on extensions and connections yet
seyar- thats dope, I'm not enjoying the little y in the middle, but other then that its hot

AnteUp
05-01-2008, 10:44 PM
its not 3d bro. its a drop shadow aiming towards the left... i dunno why i did it... i'll just make it 3d.
but rock simples. thats the neverending crit. everyone will say that also.

ghost city
05-01-2008, 10:47 PM
drop shadow, 3d, its all behind the letters to me. so true about the simples though haha but yeah looking dope

fonone
05-01-2008, 11:09 PM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002-1.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001-1.jpg

aesop- looking good, nice and simple, some of the 3ds weird though, like on the A and E
fonone- I cant even read that, I'm thinking go for a style change up, those colours are kinda sketchy too, oranges and blues sometimes look weird cause theyre complementary colours. try some simple stuff and dont work too hard on extensions and connections yet
seyar- thats dope, I'm not enjoying the little y in the middle, but other then that its hot

i have like 3 extensions on the whole thing... and what do you mean by "connections"

blue.steel
05-01-2008, 11:14 PM
i kinda messed up on the u
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3627/73536786ex2.png (http://imageshack.us)

ne crits

avone keep ur bars the same thickness
irekn the letters are good but i dont relly like how they overlap

TagsRover
05-01-2008, 11:14 PM
Ante - Aesop rock is sick dude, and i like the simple with the cursive inside especially, the a seems a little out of proportion to me, kinda like an o
Backdoralley - I also agree, one of the most mesmerizing sigs ever, like how does that all fit in there???

*cept*
05-01-2008, 11:38 PM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0002-1.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm168/drokter/scan0001-1.jpg

aesop- looking good, nice and simple, some of the 3ds weird though, like on the A and E
fonone- I cant even read that, I'm thinking go for a style change up, those colours are kinda sketchy too, oranges and blues sometimes look weird cause theyre complementary colours. try some simple stuff and dont work too hard on extensions and connections yet
seyar- thats dope, I'm not enjoying the little y in the middle, but other then that its hot
theres a pretty big writer for GRL in NYC that writes avone, and that fool is up everywhere. just sayin

AnteUp
05-02-2008, 12:28 AM
thanks for the crits guys.
last one for tonnite... just thought of it...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0005-1.jpg
whats.
I KNOW THE S IS FUCKED UP... I ADDED IT AT THE END... :(
blue-i can't make out the letters bro.

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 02:05 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6787/newrdx8.jpg


doo doo!
trying to come up with a new R.
ignore the sloppyness.

squider
05-02-2008, 02:28 AM
Throw the R's foot the other way maybe, it almost looks like an A, and make the leg of it closer to the body of the R.

Seti
05-02-2008, 03:41 AM
best tip for comin up with new letter shapes man, is to write a hole page of them by hand and beefing them up simply, itll let u find hole new structure and will set the basic shapes in your head so you can just throw em out...and be more creative...heres a new digital, concrete insanity, what ya'll think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insanegrey.jpg

and one in colour, a bit over the top tho i think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image010-1.jpg

squider
05-02-2008, 05:57 AM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/l_2d6c67ed244796e2286da2d40b47a943.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=l_2d6c67ed244796e2286da2d40b47a943.j pg)

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/l_a83b26275298d6809c7a76599e126e41.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=l_a83b26275298d6809c7a76599e126e41.j pg)

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/l_e435b0161faa5cf66f7cae4ec087738c.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=l_e435b0161faa5cf66f7cae4ec087738c.j pg)

the past few days with a new style

bump for crits

that shit is do-o-ope seti, i think the colors could flow better on the color one, but it doesn't take too much away from it the way they are

Seti
05-02-2008, 07:27 AM
cheers dude, i like those^ ide say the first ones the best tho, although i like the fill uv got on the side bits on the last one, uv got a good overall shape/flow to the pieces, just do some more id say...try putting them into photoshop or something and stretching them different ways to find a different flow then redraw em, believe me ull come up with some more abstract but flowing pieces....

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 09:29 AM
ante! your T looks like an F. i honestly thought it said WHAFS.. i lolled.

seti, thats ill, theres a bit of deadspace in the middle that i feel would look better filled with something. but thats still ill son. good job

oakstr1
05-02-2008, 01:27 PM
squider - your tag is flame. n your pieces are pretty chill. like the second one the best.
AnteUp - i wouldnt put the extensions on the bottom part of the w. it makes it a little confusing. n the t does look like an f

akoner. new name. n new style A
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8672/akakthrowieju6.jpg
crits?

letsgobombin
05-02-2008, 01:33 PM
few pen freestyles
hazard
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1176.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1178.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1179.jpg
should i continue with this style?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1169.jpg


bump
ak- i like it but try doing something to the left leg of the k its weird
squider- looks good i gotta admit i cant read it but it stil looks good
seti- that is insane, now try drawing it
recon- hella sloppy, change the leg of the r and keep it the same length
i know its probably a result of the sloppiness but its off putting
ante- i dont mind the style its ok but some letters are better like the w & h,
make your t distinctive
avone- dont do backgrounds for now and keyboard letters then bend bars curve it,
straight it and do whatever you want to do until you have something that looks good
, i know you mightbe tired of hearing it but you WILL look back and be thankful
crits?

Trestoner707
05-02-2008, 02:04 PM
infame
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/Ifame.jpg
selina. not to happy with the a
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/Selina.jpg

anyways. let me get some crits

morningflow
05-02-2008, 03:03 PM
Backalley Abortion Doctor
i love ur sig lmao shit thats a tight ass

LittleWeapon
05-02-2008, 03:23 PM
infame- im def. feelin your style keep going at it and it will develop nicely

http://i31.tinypic.com/25hhaue.jpg

sketch3
05-02-2008, 04:01 PM
best tip for comin up with new letter shapes man, is to write a hole page of them by hand and beefing them up simply, itll let u find hole new structure and will set the basic shapes in your head so you can just throw em out...and be more creative...heres a new digital, concrete insanity, what ya'll think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insanegrey.jpg

and one in colour, a bit over the top tho i think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image010-1.jpg
good to see u gettin back to the structer shit

seywhat
05-02-2008, 04:50 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage68.jpg

ante- i dont think u should have done the outline and the backround the same color, other than thats its pretty straight
geks- dont bring your s up so high on the top simp, thats the best one imo keep workin with that
oak- i like the a but try to make the k more like the a like all rounded off
nasr- fuckin ill, thats all i can say man.
pie- both styles are dope, u sould try to work them together some how

seti- really ill
trest- i like the top one
pocs- the red one is pretty dope, just fix the bars in the loop of the p
ak- i like your more rounded style better

IlikePie
05-02-2008, 04:52 PM
best tip for comin up with new letter shapes man, is to write a hole page of them by hand and beefing them up simply, itll let u find hole new structure and will set the basic shapes in your head so you can just throw em out...and be more creative...heres a new digital, concrete insanity, what ya'll think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insanegrey.jpg

and one in colour, a bit over the top tho i think?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image010-1.jpg

Feelin' this a lot more than you other stuff :)

letsgobombin
05-02-2008, 05:00 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1180.jpg
birthday piece
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1185.jpg
seywhat- put in a real y, i like the balance but not your a the bars seem strange and what do you mean by fix the loop on the p

Mean Mr.Mustard
05-02-2008, 05:01 PM
infame
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/Ifame.jpg
selina. not to happy with the a
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/Selina.jpg

anyways. let me get some crits

pretty dope, work on you handstyle a little more

garbage down tha way
05-02-2008, 05:06 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer4.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer5.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer6.jpg
yes, theres eggs in a pan under my throw.

insane- that shits wild.
SEYAR- that simples ill, id just work on that R, it doesnt have to have perfect symmetry with the s, id fuck with that right leg some more.
littleweapon- go simpler and have fun being in the national guard.
infame- the top one is better than the bottom, on some old school ish, id get a new E though. the curve in the middle looks ugly imo. just use the E from your bottom sketch or something.
pocs- its good that youre using bars, but lose the extentions and just focus on your letters. extentions wont make the letter look better if the actual letter itself isnt good. try skinnyer bars too.
ak- keep working at it.
Reco- DOOPPE simple son.

EDIT: HAHA COPE IS IN GTA4.

Mass Appeal
05-02-2008, 05:12 PM
ahah yeah no shit he is....have you seen Five Points NYC aswell ?....^^

"Riot"
05-02-2008, 05:13 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF008.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF003.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF002.jpg

Bump.
no crits.

garbage down tha way
05-02-2008, 05:15 PM
ahah yeah no shit he is....have you seen Five Points NYC aswell ?....^^

haha shit naw, my brother plays it, i just walked past and was like...hold up!

Mean Mr.Mustard
05-02-2008, 05:18 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF008.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF006.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF004.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF003.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/STUFF002.jpg

few pages in my book.

HOER-i love that style. keep it up
SEYR-Looks good. just the Y is the only thing id fix.

crits?

dope work, work on the last e of the last picture

"Riot"
05-02-2008, 05:19 PM
thanks.

and yeaahhh i know its completely fucked. kinda ran out of room. hhah.

Mean Mr.Mustard
05-02-2008, 05:22 PM
^^^^^
true

seywhat
05-02-2008, 06:22 PM
yo pocs, i meant that your bar in the loop get thinner, keep it all the same size

letsgobombin
05-02-2008, 06:27 PM
it was supposed to be thinner but ill try it without

seywhat
05-02-2008, 06:38 PM
oh i see. if u do that though u gotta do it with all your letters if u know what i mean

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 08:11 PM
Reco- DOOPPE simple son.




good lookin. your shit is ill.

atlok7
05-02-2008, 08:21 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2419/caisblueyellowiu2.jpg
just finished this

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-02-2008, 08:37 PM
Finally, I've been wanting to crit someone, but you've all been dicking around

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-02-2008, 08:38 PM
...Your I, the top of it...Still too fat.....That's it. Other than that, it's fine. You've gotten a lot better in like, the last week.

atlok7
05-02-2008, 08:43 PM
...Your I, the top of it...Still too fat.....That's it. Other than that, it's fine. You've gotten a lot better in like, the last week.

WOOT WOOT FINALLY , it brings a tear to my eye...
yo can i post in the big boy thread yet?

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-02-2008, 08:44 PM
I don't run bombingscience.

atlok7
05-02-2008, 08:45 PM
sooo is that a yes

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 08:50 PM
some boredom at work.
flipped the leg on the R around.
tried a different E.
cliche bomb for the O cause i hate o's.
white outline on white paper...bad idea.
again..sloppy. i dont take my time.

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/725/blackwhitezf1.jpg

atlok7
05-02-2008, 08:52 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2419/caisblueyellowiu2.jpg
just finished this

bottom bump

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 09:01 PM
coka nostra, thats the exact same as my E... but its mad generic so i cant get upset.
its (E)asily your best letter.. oooo haha.

keep your lines straight, there wobbly. and i wouldnt put that bomb for your O, dosent look right to me.. id also curve your R because that dosent fit the steeze you got going at all

atlok, loose the god damned crown. for gods sakes, its beyond played out and it only makes you look like a egotistical overwhelming self confident douchebag if you painted that. at least in my eyes. it looks good though man, keep it up

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 09:06 PM
word...i was drawing on like a cushion, so my lines were all fucked up.
and yeah i wouldnt paint the bomb like that...i just didnt feel like drawing an o.
good looks :)

EST2007
05-02-2008, 09:07 PM
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/pics/SP_A0232_lowres.jpg

yah i know the letters are disproportional, but oh well

atlok7
05-02-2008, 09:08 PM
coka nostra, thats the exact same as my E... but its mad generic so i cant get upset.
its (E)asily your best letter.. oooo haha.

keep your lines straight, there wobbly. and i wouldnt put that bomb for your O, dosent look right to me.. id also curve your R because that dosent fit the steeze you got going at all

atlok, loose the god damned crown. for gods sakes, its beyond played out and it only makes you look like a egotistical overwhelming self confident douchebag if you painted that. at least in my eyes. it looks good though man, keep it up

ha why? crowns just add dope steeze. plus there not overplayed at all.

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 09:12 PM
ok.. because your not a king. thats why, i thought you knew that. but i guess i was wrong.

iunno about other writers, but when i see some shit in the streets that has a crown. unless ive seen there name 1000 times all over, i get really pissed off

atlok7
05-02-2008, 09:14 PM
psh yeah king at drawing crowns, i thought u should of known that jetpack GOD

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 09:16 PM
not to be an asshole.. but thats not even a good crown. it looks like a pointed wart on your I.

keep it if you want man, it aint my sketches or my name. im just sayin what i feel

atlok7
05-02-2008, 09:20 PM
you know its beautiful. and yes i am going to keep it (eventhough i put it on one sketch like every 7)

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 09:26 PM
yeah, it's good man. cant front. but i fucking hate self-proclaimed kings.

i feel that unless your on the front page of your towns paper then you cant crown yourself.... unless you live in a town of 20,000

squider
05-02-2008, 09:30 PM
letsgobombin- that third piece is pretty good, the O looks like it's leanin though, and the first ones real dirty, but looks like it could have potential

seywhat- something looks wrong with the A but i can't figure out what, and the R's tail looks janky where it goes back up, but overall that shit's pretty symetrical

est2007- you pretty much called it yourself, keep working on it though, practice makes perfect

AnteUp
05-02-2008, 09:44 PM
cais- the 3d isn't quite doing it for me, other than that its purty
hooked-simples
coka-make it cleaner bro. ditch the bomb.

fuckin with new styles...
G
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/05-02-08_2127.jpg
might do a peice... crits?
shitty phone pic... the scan isn't workin... :(

EST2007
05-02-2008, 09:50 PM
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/pics/SP_A0233_lowres.jpg
just gettin back into sketching. haha i keep running out of room

EST2007
05-02-2008, 09:56 PM
some boredom at work.
flipped the leg on the R around.
tried a different E.
cliche bomb for the O cause i hate o's.
white outline on white paper...bad idea.
again..sloppy. i dont take my time.

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/725/blackwhitezf1.jpg

you gotta change that "C" and lose the dollar signs.

AnteUp
05-02-2008, 09:58 PM
ok. cleaner pic.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0006-1.jpg
i'll clean the sketch up later.

hooked- give crits to get crits...

EST2007
05-02-2008, 10:02 PM
no beef but i never asked for crits, i was just posting to post.


regardless, i gave crit to recon prior to your post, so you happy now?

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 10:06 PM
est, you wouldnt be posting pics if you didnt want crits. thats like droolin over a blunt but then sayin you dont want a drag.

ante, i like that G man. take out that indent in the right side of it though, see how it looks

EST2007
05-02-2008, 10:10 PM
i can't post to just share? whatever man

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 10:11 PM
you gotta change that "C" and lose the dollar signs.

what's wrong with my dollar sign? :(

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 10:12 PM
your shits not worth sharing.

show your mom if you wanna share. a graff forum is to get crits to get better. you need those crits

heres mine to you, crit often and you'll get several back. and you'll improve fast

nosta, dollar signs are more of a bomb thing. if your gonna do simples, you gotta add the hole in the R an all.

atlok7
05-02-2008, 10:14 PM
well idk graffs not really about money.
but i have to say. i have used money signs in one of my throws before and it was damn fun

fOrSaQeN
05-02-2008, 10:15 PM
bump

EST2007
05-02-2008, 10:17 PM
chill out man. you may use the graff forum for crits and to get better, but i use it to share w/ other writers. you don't know me, i never asked for your opinion, so why do you care? i don't even know why this even became any sort of issue.

AnteUp
05-02-2008, 10:19 PM
jet-which indention bro?

JETPACK!!
05-02-2008, 10:30 PM
these are points i think you should work on. the indent i was saying is the top circle.

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/8940/19378298jc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AnteUp
05-02-2008, 10:35 PM
oooohhh. ok :) all the parts that are indented are bars i added to the outside of the original. :) thanks, i'll work on that for sure.

smooth_nuts
05-02-2008, 10:44 PM
just a d-oh webcam throw black bookie flick nothing special
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture008.jpg
hooked-simples and bars bro
recon-i like the dollar sing if any thing its the bomb for the o that you need to drop haha
atlok-the shadow on the pink extention from the the a makes your c kinda look like a cap. e but other then that im digging the shit
ante-all i have to say is im glad you got out that 3d shit haha

garbage down tha way
05-02-2008, 11:02 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer4.jpg


dump.

La Coka Nostra
05-02-2008, 11:22 PM
your shits not worth sharing.

show your mom if you wanna share. a graff forum is to get crits to get better. you need those crits

heres mine to you, crit often and you'll get several back. and you'll improve fast

nosta, dollar signs are more of a bomb thing. if your gonna do simples, you gotta add the hole in the R an all.


simples are my "bombs"
when i paint...i paint simples.
they are my throws. i paint them fast enough.
i think when i put the holes in my letters it just makes them look fucked up.
so in my o's and r's i use like...# $ or @

fonone
05-02-2008, 11:32 PM
i think saying stuff like you cant use dollar signs and shit in a simple is stupid... graffiti is about creativity and if everyone did what they were "supposed" to do the art wouldnt progress. its about doing what you think looks good. but w/e. just my view.

krave
05-03-2008, 12:21 AM
http://g.photos.cx/Picture7-a3.jpg

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 12:33 AM
HOER, that E is fucking gangster.

squider
05-03-2008, 03:17 AM
http://g.photos.cx/Picture7-a3.jpg

it's hard to see but the r,a and v look tight, not sure about the k and something weird's goin on with your e


smooth nuts- that shit's on point man.

EST2007
05-03-2008, 05:30 AM
i think saying stuff like you cant use dollar signs and shit in a simple is stupid... graffiti is about creativity and if everyone did what they were "supposed" to do the art wouldnt progress. its about doing what you think looks good. but w/e. just my view.

i agree, it's not that he can't use them, but i just don't think the dollar signs look good, that's all

hypergraphia
05-03-2008, 06:43 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8199/picture146sm5.jpg

osnapizzel
05-03-2008, 10:50 AM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1249/picture192rp9.jpg

MarOne...
05-03-2008, 10:54 AM
^^^reminds me of VENSR. Looks good though, I like it. Its different.

TO ANYONE IN KFC, A BIG COLLAB IS UNDER WAY! DROP ME A PM FOR DETAILS.

ilikekicks
05-03-2008, 10:58 AM
ohsnapsizzle - make it simpler
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_1474.jpg?t=1209830090

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 10:58 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00851.jpg

Quick early morning exchange for La Coca Nostra, sorry, I ran out of room and did the N all shitty :(

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 10:58 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00851.jpg

Quick early morning exchange for La Coca Nostra, sorry, I ran out of room and did the N all shitty :(

Bump, last on page.

MarOne...
05-03-2008, 11:00 AM
^^^reminds me of VENSR. Looks good though, I like it. Its different.

TO ANYONE IN KFC, A BIG COLLAB IS UNDER WAY! DROP ME A PM FOR DETAILS.

had to bump this one for the KFC.

PIE! GET BACK INTO YOUR OLD STEEZ NOW! <3

Soboe!
05-03-2008, 11:01 AM
keep the O normal sized because it makes it look like REC.N
and im not gunna say anything about the N cause you know what you did wrong lol

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 11:02 AM
Which old steez? I have too much old steez :P

And the O had to be tiny 'cuz I was running out of room, you can see my desk right next to the N :(

hypergraphia
05-03-2008, 11:04 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8199/picture146sm5.jpg

bump

Soboe!
05-03-2008, 11:11 AM
recent shit Done for class, says my name Vince and no i dont give a shit if you know my name,
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080503_2-1.jpg

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 11:17 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00852.jpg

That's really sexy Soboe, me likey.
Done in like 2 minutes, is that the type of old steez you want?

MarOne...
05-03-2008, 11:20 AM
pie- the one steez that you posted about how you went from that steez... to your current.

NoCanControl
05-03-2008, 11:23 AM
had to bump this one for the KFC.

PIE! GET BACK INTO YOUR OLD STEEZ NOW! <3

what is kfc, is it an online crew or something?

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-03-2008, 11:27 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0001-7.jpg

Fucked up the 3d and the T........

Soboe!
05-03-2008, 11:32 AM
Holy Shit Rots

I GOT CLOUT
05-03-2008, 11:33 AM
Kicks, thats fuckin ill son. Im diggin it fo sho.

MarOne...
05-03-2008, 11:34 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0001-7.jpg

Fucked up the 3d and the T........

What the fuck! Rots, exchange me. I beg of you.

I GOT CLOUT
05-03-2008, 12:04 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/420ish013.jpg
I fucked the "A" up...
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/420ish018.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf002.jpg
Eh...any crits?

Bazer
05-03-2008, 12:06 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/420ish013.jpg

hahahaha oh my god!! dope!

Evasion Of Invasion
05-03-2008, 12:34 PM
Ilikepie - feelin the RA sketch but not the Recon one ur other letters arent as evolved try workin on them and not ur RA's unless RA is wut u rly write.
EASE- keep on those simples and dont get ahead of urself
Rots - mad fuckin sexy but not feelin the T seems off balance
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01210.jpg
crits?

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 12:36 PM
ilikepie, thats dope, ill do yours tonight after work.
that ninja turtles shit is ill hahah
and roten, always dope.

Mean Mr.Mustard
05-03-2008, 12:37 PM
^^^^
dope but get rid of the stars

AnteUp
05-03-2008, 12:38 PM
i agree with baze, ease that ones sick.
pie- i like that style :D not your new one though... :(
rotten- do something with the N, its too normal for the other letters.
evade-those e's don't match the peice.
Dump...

reads, "so what?! i don't have simples down, who gives an cares? i personally don't give an ish, brought to you by whats two."
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/05-01-08_1818-1.jpg
aesop (i know i fucked up the drop.)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0004-1.jpg
random G
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0006-1.jpg
crits.

Mean Mr.Mustard
05-03-2008, 12:40 PM
^^^^^^^^^
practise, your handstyle sucks

ENOC
05-03-2008, 12:42 PM
did it last night.
i was too lazy to completely color it in. lol.
crits?

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/graff/IMG_9231.jpg

AnteUp
05-03-2008, 12:44 PM
^^^^^^^^^
practise, your handstyle sucks
haha... thanks. :) i haven't worked on my handy in about half a year. kinda went in the shitter.

osnapizzel
05-03-2008, 12:50 PM
^^^reminds me of VENSR. Looks good though, I like it. Its different.

TO ANYONE IN KFC, A BIG COLLAB IS UNDER WAY! DROP ME A PM FOR DETAILS.

thanks dude that can only be a good thing lol vensr is dope.

I GOT CLOUT
05-03-2008, 12:52 PM
Haha Gracie.

Evade, im feelin it fo reals.

krave
05-03-2008, 12:53 PM
it's hard to see but the r,a and v look tight, not sure about the k and something weird's goin on with your e


smooth nuts- that shit's on point man.

Ah,, do you like this E better? http://g.photos.cx/Picture2-21.jpg i wrote this for my friend

osnapizzel im feeling it, i'd say break it down a bit more so its simpler.
hypergrouphra everything looks pretty clean, but that I, im not feeling it
ilikekicks, nice character man shit looks insane
ilikepie, work on that R and O

Bazer
05-03-2008, 12:53 PM
ante, al you izm looks to forced dude... have you ever even tried having a simple style?

osnapizzel
05-03-2008, 12:59 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7130/picture189gq7.jpg

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8272/picture184pa0.jpg

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/3366/picture183qp8.jpg


http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4903/picture181ej4.jpg

just for snap heres my throwie over my toy throwie which still looks nothing like what you posted
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2179/picture186hx0.jpg

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9343/hpim1200uw5.jpg

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5481/picture190jf3.jpg

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1249/picture192rp9.jpg

snap i burn you kid stfu and sit down

oakstr1
05-03-2008, 01:01 PM
^^ the OH SNAP. is simple in fresh as fuck. just looks like you got lazy n rushed towards the end of it.

AnteUp
05-03-2008, 01:01 PM
izm? what? if your talking about my handy, then yes, i tried something simple.. but i didn't like it... :(

atlok7
05-03-2008, 01:02 PM
ha your name is ohsnap? haha i cant decide if its awesome or retarded ha but i like it

I GOT CLOUT
05-03-2008, 01:06 PM
Snap ya got some ill flicks. Keep it comin.

osnapizzel
05-03-2008, 01:10 PM
^^ the OH SNAP. is simple in fresh as fuck. just looks like you got lazy n rushed towards the end of it.



you almost had me there, i didnt get lazy lol i got too shitfaced to finish.



atlok lol i used to think that it was the shit until i met snap on here...anyway im not gonna get into shit talking but the name stuck to me so i dont mind it much anymore

atlok7
05-03-2008, 01:12 PM
ha yeah its cool, everyone questions their name once or twice

I GOT CLOUT
05-03-2008, 01:20 PM
I don't really know where else to put this so...
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/july13028.jpg

It wasnt finished, but the only flick I got of em right now.

squider
05-03-2008, 02:06 PM
Ah,, do you like this E better? http://g.photos.cx/Picture2-21.jpg i wrote this for my friend

osnapizzel im feeling it, i'd say break it down a bit more so its simpler.
hypergrouphra everything looks pretty clean, but that I, im not feeling it
ilikekicks, nice character man shit looks insane
ilikepie, work on that R and O

if you put the bottom of your other e on that one i think it would look good and not make the top part loop so far down

smooth_nuts
05-03-2008, 02:30 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture017-1.jpg
enoc-simples!
ohsnap-im digging the simples but not really the other shit

osnapizzel
05-03-2008, 02:42 PM
thanks man, i ve just been doing a lot of experimenting looking for a style i like you know, its trial and error

silentchaos14
05-03-2008, 02:47 PM
doap- absolutely sick. id love to see that on a freight.

Atomik
05-03-2008, 03:15 PM
doap nice and simple cant get better than than love it.
reads sriketshor
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/sriketshor.jpg

Drakula
05-03-2008, 03:25 PM
That letter style is common as muck and all of of the letters are pretty disproportionate.At least take away some of the extensions.

Atomik
05-03-2008, 03:27 PM
just trying something new and thanks ill give it a try.

smooth_nuts
05-03-2008, 03:44 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture017-1.jpg
enoc-simples!
ohsnap-im digging the simples but not really the other shit
bizumpers!

calisk8er1620
05-03-2008, 03:59 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8126/1041912mf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry for the flash/blurr. im tryin out a new name.
any thoughts?

COLOR192
05-03-2008, 04:04 PM
use bars. if u're already using bars, u have to learn u're letter structure

Raket.LHM
05-03-2008, 04:09 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5608/72242017tl0.jpg

smooth_nuts
05-03-2008, 04:15 PM
i dont see any letters :(

sex without condoms
05-03-2008, 04:20 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140546.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/155227.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/171344.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/171412.jpg

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 04:23 PM
He's back!

PureArt420
05-03-2008, 04:45 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/05030814191.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/05030814181.jpg

just throwie and handstyle


condoms- use bars and do simples
raquet- i loove it.... it says dives fer that kid who said he cant read it
trek-use bars
smooth nuts- its pretty good i like it

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 04:46 PM
You're telling Condoms to do simples? Hahahaha, go die.

atlok7
05-03-2008, 04:47 PM
yeah sex where have you been

sex without condoms
05-03-2008, 04:48 PM
babies.

PureArt420
05-03-2008, 04:49 PM
You're telling Condoms to do simples? Hahahaha, go die.

yes i am cuz i hate his shit

he cant even draw a proper heart
EDIT: no beef condoms

atlok7
05-03-2008, 04:51 PM
dude you cant even draw proper any thing

PureArt420
05-03-2008, 04:53 PM
all uve seen of mine is a throwie and a handstyle..... damn

u kno y my name is pure art

cuz my art teacher said "amazing... pure art" about my shit and hes a hard guy to impress

sex without condoms
05-03-2008, 04:55 PM
he has a method to his madness guys, watch the fuck out!

atlok7
05-03-2008, 05:10 PM
all uve seen of mine is a throwie and a handstyle..... damn

u kno y my name is pure art

cuz my art teacher said "amazing... pure art" about my shit and hes a hard guy to impress

thats all i needed to see but yeah dude no beef

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-03-2008, 05:15 PM
all uve seen of mine is a throwie and a handstyle..... damn

u kno y my name is pure art

cuz my art teacher said "amazing... pure art" about my shit and hes a hard guy to impress

Congradulations, you've earned a place in Rots' sig to live on for generations.

Far better than any artfag compliments, I assure you.

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/scan0001-7.jpg

Bump/repost

AnteUp
05-03-2008, 05:49 PM
rots- your the only one i've seen do cards right...
cali-keep the simples up
pure-thats not a throw
doap-nice shit
sex- that black peice is dope...

fucked up.... GE like i said i'll clean it up later...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0007-1.jpg
experimenting (crits)

PureArt420
05-03-2008, 05:52 PM
no im pretty sur it is a throw;)

TaskOne
05-03-2008, 06:09 PM
Some Recent Sketches.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/NWP001.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/May2nd002.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word010.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Word015.jpg
Crits on Any?
AnteUp - Nice Structure on the G, maybe try a captial E instead of an e.
PureArt420 - Decent handstyle, get simpler with the bombs/peices.
Sex - Always a fan! very fresh!
Raket - Love the shading and 3D man, hot!

PureArt420
05-03-2008, 06:11 PM
this is NOT mine it is sum swivle kids that emailed me and said to post it
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/05030814201.jpg

m.ziggy
05-03-2008, 06:50 PM
your a queer man, you were banned for a reason.....

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/allover.jpg

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/802.jpg

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo169.jpg

Soboe!
05-03-2008, 06:51 PM
who swiv?

m.ziggy
05-03-2008, 06:55 PM
yea swiv

task i like your simples, the throw and the karak but not feeling the other 3 pieces

shiva - the destroyer
05-03-2008, 07:01 PM
ziggy, don't yo get bored of green, yellow and red?

joshthesk8ter5
05-03-2008, 07:09 PM
haha hes a rosta man till death ;p

m.ziggy
05-03-2008, 07:13 PM
haha those are my only 2 rastas, i just dont have pictures of my other shit

shiva - the destroyer
05-03-2008, 07:17 PM
haha those are my only 2 rastas, i just dont have pictures of my other shit

o, haha ok
rasta can be pretty cool when you use the 3 colours in 1 letter (like green fill with yellow accents and a red outline)

"Louis XIV"
05-03-2008, 07:41 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2340/2462293213_f8012b9d2e.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3143/2463127184_1c39e61821.jpg?v=0

trying out wild style. ne suggestions?

shiva - the destroyer
05-03-2008, 07:43 PM
fatter lines (the bars)

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-03-2008, 07:43 PM
You ruled france with an iron fist, sir.

-Leski
05-03-2008, 07:45 PM
Stop trying wildstyles?

"Louis XIV"
05-03-2008, 07:45 PM
fatter red or blue lines?

m.ziggy
05-03-2008, 07:50 PM
yea make your letters a lot fatter, they are way to thin right now

"Louis XIV"
05-03-2008, 07:53 PM
ok thanks man
this is my style now: should i stick with this?
http://webmail.aol.com/36240/aol/en-us/Mail/get-attachment.aspx?uid=1.17471746&folder=NewMail&partId=2

-Leski
05-03-2008, 08:01 PM
I dont think so, it doesn't seem to have any real structure to it.